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I’m curious if you consider this a good image. I’d very much like to know your opinion whether it is or isn’t.

Thanks
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>>4330968
It's a nice pic, but I think it is sort of generic in today's day and age.
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>>4330968
It's a total mess of sharp details everywhere. Nothing leads the eye.
A cool picture of a cool place but not very artistic. Too much going on. It's a picture of, but not a picture about.
It would be better in color, with the contrast and sharpening sliders back where they started.
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>>4330968
It's a good image, nice and sharp as it should be
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>>4330968
i personally like the long dof in this case BECAUSE it doesnt lead your eye.
This way you can wander your eye around in the landscape and explore.
I like the pic.
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crunchy, hyper-contrast garbage
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to my eye it looks too flat and too busy.
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>>4330988
Same. I hate the whole "lead the viewer's eye" crap. Let me explore the image.
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>>4330988
>>4331089
Like the I-Spy of landscape photography!
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Re-edited an old pic
how gay is it?

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here's my rough take, a sucker for the dreamier look. lel

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>>4331102
Looks damn nice
I see what some fag youtubers say about using selective sharpening though
Like the foliage in the middle with the lighter tones could have slightly less sharpness to "improve" the image
But srsly it's not homo at all
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>>4330968
meh
>>4330970
>>4330978
the duality of man
>>4331102
messy on the left side
>>4331104
that's even worse lmao
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>>4330968
Shitty composition is shitty
Start thinking about what you want to capture and convey instead of just taking snapshots
If you're not sure what will look good and are still learning, take shots from multiple angles and locations
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>>4331137
Explain how the composition is shitty. It is in my mind very good and an excellent composition. Might it be too complex for you? Try to go back and look at it. Especially if you are still learning.


That shot is masterful and you’re jealous troll.
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>>4330968
>>4331145
samefag
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>>4330968
i'm not opposed to black and white even if it just looks cool and doesn't really add much else, but here's it's totally distracting. why the fuck would you take color away in a scene like this
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>>4331145
Explain what sort of mastery is required to produce that image.

Waiting for clouds? Finding a bend in a river? Driving/walking to a cool spot? Moving sliders around on computer?
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>> >>4331174
If this doesn’t enlighten you, I fear everything is dim for you. This is a very simple explanation.
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>>4331175

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>>4331176
I see the bog standard landscape composition. I do not see any particular mastery.
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>>4330968
can't judge appropriately without exif
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>>4330968
I feel it should be rotated one degree to the left. It pleases my eye more.

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>>4330968
It looks like an anatomical picture - taken to look for details and to be studied. It's not a 'pleasing' picture, but meant to deliver information.
Color would be appropriate for this to ease compartmentalizing of groups of info - sky, foliage, water.
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>>4331102
significantly less gay than this one >>4331104 which is still gay even with less eyeball hurting

what purpose does the foreground in the b&w serve? none.
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This would have been considered really good on Flickr in 2009
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>>4331218
It's amazing how much of a difference this makes.
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>>4331105
>>4331136
>>4331290
Thanks for the feedback
Here's another one I tried re-editing.

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>>4330968
I kinda like the textures of it
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>>4330968
Technically a good photo, but as >>4330970 said
> A cool picture of a cool place but not very artistic. Too much going on. It's a picture of, but not a picture about.
A beginner's landscape formula is to have something interesting in the foreground, the midground, and the background.
You have nothing in the foreground.
Contrast that to >>4331555 where you have the stacked rocks in front, the large slabs and fallen tree in the middle, and those large slabs likewise draw your eyes into the background, which has nothing of interest.
This ends up being why landscape photography can be hard work. Sure, you could've found a flower or interesting tree or something in that first photo to create a better foreground and an overall better picture, but it's still pretty mediocre. In a good landscape photo you're going to put in a lot of work to find something stronger, something with more to say or more to inspire. So it can take an entire day's hike to find that, or even weeks or months of exploring an area, to find one photo that's worthy of your portfolio. (Or, you could just find it already discovered and copy what hundreds of photographers have done before you. Totally legit, and a good way to practice, even if it's still your duty to continue attempting originality).
>>4331555
My main concern here, other than a boring and noisy background, is it's unbalanced. The rocks are pushed to the left, while it's a big empty slab to the right.
Try revisiting this area early in the morning when it's foggy or something, and get a different composition. But don't stack rocks yourself, kinda a dick move.
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>>4331555
I'd try to frame the cairn against the green background with a lower and closer camera angle, maybe work in leading lines to it if possible. It doesn't stand out enough and the eyes wander before realizing it's there. I would then kick the cairn over.
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>>4331555
Very very nice, if anything you could lift the blacks just a tiny bit but eh it's at the point where it's prolly personal preference



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