Read this wholesome manga https://nhentai.net/g/507145/3/
awful.its awful
>>78284781I wish I could unsee this shit
>stomach deformation>guro>amputee>gender change
>>78284781Hot in concept, bad in execution.I hate when doujin artists draw black people like that, its just weird.If you want a feminization themed doijin, put more focus on that. Or skip it and just have the femme be femme all of a sudden. Feminization is essentially a subgenre of transformation, therefore it should be treated as such. Focus on the mental anguish of being trapped in a body that is losing the characteristics you used to have. Focus on being frustrated that you kind of like it. Tje way this was executed here is amateurish at best, a symptom of not understanding the genre the author chose to emulate. This is a nitpick but I'm also not a fan of the faces the author uses. The expressions are too much, stuff that's usually reserved for a climax panel just being thrown around for every shot, its overstimulating.
