readhttps://www.wattpad.com/1460754647-princess-cathrine-the-princess-and-the-witch
Wow, I absolutely loved this! You brought the characters to life so beautifully, I felt like I was right there with them. The story was so clear and full of heart, capturing their personalities perfectly. One of the best reads I've had in a while thank you so much for sharing! I'll be eagerly waiting for more!
>>11884081what?
>>11884083Wow, I absolutely loved this! You brought the characters to life so beautifully, I felt like I was right there with them. The story was so clear and full of heart, capturing their personalities perfectly. One of the best reads I've had in a while thank you so much for sharing! I'll be eagerly waiting for more!
>>11884083"h-hello m-my I t-take you to dance" oh it was that idiot boy . He kept his head down while he was talking it was strange and a little cute but mostly strage
>>11884086what? why did you say the same thing?
Wow, I absolutely loved this! <3 You brought the characters to life so beautifully, I felt like I was right there with them. The story was so clear and full of heart, capturing their personalities perfectly. One of the best reads I've had in a while thank you so much for sharing! I'll be eagerly waiting for more! <3
>>11884080>>11884083>>11884090it's November
My favorite part is when she falls and becomes ants
>>11884091what's going on???
I am NOT reading all thatYour fortune: Reply hazy, try again
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>>11884092Walter doesn’t jerk off to anime girls Walter jerks off to pictures of himself in his meth suitYour fortune: Godly Luck
>>11884099remember the episode of Fixing Good where walter was diagnosed with big penus syndrome and then he went home and made sandwiches for all the homeless in albakerkee?Your fortune: キタ━━━━━━(゚∀゚)━━━━━━ !!!!
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>>11884100hey!!! i wrote that!!
>>11884099>doesn’t jerk off to anime girlsWhat? NO! That is a fallacy!I DO like anime females>jerks off to pictures of himself in his meth suitI don't but maybe I will...after November of course
>>11884116>Wow, I absolutely loved this! You brought the characters to life so beautifully, I felt like I was right there with them. The story was so clear and full of heart, capturing their personalities perfectly. One of the best reads I've had in a while thank you so much for sharing! I'll be eagerly waiting for more!
>>11884100This is a true story that happened to me. How you know? Stalking?
>>11884122>Stalking?yes I'm outside as we speak <3
>>11884126Come in
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Wow, I absolutely loved this! <3 You brought the characters to life so beautifully, I felt like I was right there with them. The story was so clear and full of heart, capturing their personalities perfectly. One of the best reads I've had in a while thank you so much for sharing! I'll be eagerly waiting for more! <3Your fortune: Bad Luck
>>11884133huh that's my name? how?
>>118841you guys are messing with me right?
>>11884137Saul is in prisonJesse is depressed and bald in AlaskaJunior is retardedit'd never work lmao
>>11884143you're really sounding like a hater right nowYour fortune: Bad Luck
>>11884141What was the deleted post>>11884133I just googled the username from wattpad and clicked through the top 5 results
>>11884155some one was posting that weird copy messege and i was confused.
>>11884155the name things pretty bad.
>>11884159can I groom you into s*x
>>11884164could you not?
>>11884165Ok
Your character's inner monologue and external presentation could be hilarious and tragic simultaneously.
>>11884179thank you i was trying for that.
>>11884168lol
>>11884080lol her tits are naked. that is blissful
>>11884182Why would you post on s4s for writing feedback (srs question)
>>11884212i posted this on every board
>>11884212did you read it?
>>11884214Why would you post on 4chan for writing feedback Which board had the best feedback (lit?)Genuinely what is your thought process
>>11884217i posted on insta, x, and finaly 4chan cause i saw a whang! vid about the site. this one is the only one with replies
>>11884217nobody gave fedback. did you read it? what did you think?
>>11884220I did read itIts pretty good. There's some typos and stuff but that doesn't really matter. The body horror elements are done well enough. The characters are pretty well done, enough to be distinguishable even though I read it quickly. Ditzy boy crazy sister, shy boy, mc thinks she's better than the plebs.Its funny how she's literally melting into goo and they spend a hour in the library. Also everything moves really fast so it feels a little, idk, rushed or shallow. Like maybe it should have been two or three chapters, one for the party where she gets cursed, one for the effects of the curse, and another for the resolution. But overall good and I encourage you to keep writing.
>>11884232>>11884220Why is name didyoupraysped
>>11884232thank you for the support! and i will!
>>11884234last thing saved on my clipboard
>>11884240https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=1WLFdBEcLbc
Whats your insta
Based kit naming the jew