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Can't decide whether to do 2 long pages with everything in them or 3-4 short ones that are more self contained and themed.
Are longer pages just to make it easier to post or are there other reasons? does anyone else keep the rules page open when it says more than just spend your points? Do all the pages need to be the same height or just width? Any other advice on image size?
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>>93180279
This could have been a really good cyoa. Instead, it is just a good cyoa.
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>>93180293
Make the pages as long as possible without diminishing image resolution. Whether you want to have sections be cut between pages depends on you, but sometimes, that is inevitable. Image height doesn't need to be the same, but width must be the same.
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>>93180293
>Are longer pages just to make it easier to post

The difference between 2 or 4 pages is insignificant. Do whatever you think is best for the cyoa.
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If you want it to be reposted in the thread, less pages is better (posting multiple pages here has been made obnoxious with forced delays and captchas).
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Dumb kot. The only way to be reposted is to be liked by one of the 3.5 anons who still repost cyoas at all. Simple as.
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>>93179963
She is a Subordinate Officer (Party Member) named Rin from Emishi, a city-state inspired by Imperial Japan and Germany situated in a Mountain and River Valley with the main Archetypes of Vanquisher and Sharpshooter.

To cozy up with Marshal Lords it's not uncommon for city-states that can be patrons to do exchanges for their soldiers, lending them out for training and free. So that is how she first started under your Marshal Force, but honestly she joined full-time because she just enjoys hunting Beasts /fighting in general and disdains the whole subordinate Nadeshiko archetype a lot of high-class and low-class women buy into in her homeland since the last war to impact them was 200 years ago (in the last Calamity War) and they needed to recover their numbers. Her grandfather raised her to be the best and sits as one of the General Staff members governing the city.
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>>93180559
>Race:
Chthonic

The most powerful and has no drawbacks except being ugly.

>Starting Area:
Hive City

>Perks:
Physique, Magic 3

>Drawbacks:
Destitute

Resources will come easily for one that has POWER.
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>>93177670
don't shelve them i wanna go eating with the hungy cunny
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>>93180727
Destroyed by an Underworld alliance because you're a big scary monster likely killing people like a fag.
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>>93180762
Racist slander! Just because I'm a Huge Eldritch Tentacle Monster doesn't mean I'm evil! I'm an upstanding citizen of the Underworld that protects people from the actual threat of mindless monsters and provides magical services.
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Rolled 86 (1d100)

>>93180548
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>>93180347
agreed, but what could the author have done to make it really good?
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>>93180155
I'll take the heart, caring about things too much seems the easiest to cool down
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>>93180453
Oh, I wanted to make a build for this.
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>>93180508
Have fun becoming a level 1 slime.
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>>93180155
Allsync died again.
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>>93180453
Anything better than going Naruto to take the Rinne Sharingan?
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>>93181087
>DBZ makes you power through any hax with a "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"
>One Piece is a lol
>Bleach has okay hax
>Demon Slayer is kek
>Jujutsu Kaisen has some great hax, and you can advance Limitless somewhere probably
>JoJo has plenty of hax
>MHA is lol
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>>93180453
>3.5
Is someone cut in half?
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>>93181121
>DBZ makes you power through any hax with a "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"
True, but you have to be stronger.

>>93181121
>Jujutsu Kaisen has some great hax, and you can advance Limitless somewhere probably
Doesn't seem anywhere close to the 101 op abilities the Rinne Sharingan gives.

Alright, time to make a Naruto build with all the op Kekkais.
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>>93181087
Jojo nosells narutards
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>>93181208
>narutofags losing their minds because they got turned into a rubik cube because they tried to attack you in an angle that doesn't rhyme activating your stand ability
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>>93180453
> Patron Deity
Luffy
> Generic Physical Abilities
Combat Skill 3A 4P
Strength 3A 4P
Speed 3A 4P
Defence 3A 4P
Stamina 3A 4P
Healing Factor 0A 2P
> Generic Special Abilities
Battle Genius A
Weak Arts A
Strong Arts A
Friendship A
Big Heart A (Free)
Moral Strength A (Free)
Grit A (Free)
Pantheonic Worship (All) (Free)
> Luffy Abilities
Observation Haki
Armament Haki
Emperor's Haki
Potential ('Magical' Ability Usage, Blasting, Reaction Speed, Damage Resistance, Magical Stamina)
Devil Fruit (Toshi Toshi no mi/ Age Age Fruit)
Non Human (Lunarian)
Extensive Story
> Yuji Abilities
Binding Vow
> Jojo Abilities
Combat Savant
> Deku Abilities
Quirk (New Order)
Quirk Awakening
> Nemeses
Giuseppe Flavio
Mineral D. Ship
> Allies
Horse The Dragon
Meg Schnied
Sarrista Belmy
> Common Enemies
Ki Monsters
Pirates
Sea Kings
Marines
White Zetsu
Demons
Rogue NInjas (Rolled)
Vampires
> Odd Ends and Doodads
Anime Tablet
Memoir of the dragon king

In short, I'm a physically powerful Lunarian combat genius with both the power to access any future version of myself I think is possible (which is even more useful in Animlondo than regular One Piece due to the expanded kitchen sink) and the ability to basically reality warp anything I touch as long as I know it's name. Any and all of my powers can be modulated on the fly to suit my needs. Sarrista will protect us while we train, and we'll simultaneously go on a quest for the Dragon Balls to heal her. We'll also join up with Enros's fleet and aid him against the marines.
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>>93180904
Take away the multiplayer option. Companions are no longer locked behind target choices but give you extra targets instead
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>>93180453
>breaks the entire stat system via Quirks
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>>93180453
The problem with this is that it targets the most retarded demographic. Powerscaling faggots. The retards known to take everything in the way the benefits them the most, no matter how little sense it makes and how clearly it is not intended to work that way.
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>>93181484
>t. jobber detective in magi case
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Stale bait. Not even worth a (You)
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>>93181121
One piece definitely has good hax.
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>>93181583
OH MY RUBBER NIKA
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>>93180453
Just picked whatever seems most op by checking the wiki.

>Patron Deity:
Naruto

>Generic Physical Abilities:
Actual: free Tiers
Potential: free Tiers

>Generic Special Abilities:
Actual: Final Clash, Friendship, Moral Strength, Grit, Pantheonic Worship
Potential: Battle Genius, Teamwork, Smite, Enhancing Aura

>Naruto Deific Abilities:
Actual: Chakra, Talk-no Jutsu, Potential, Combination Attack, Jutsu (Omnipotence), Sage Mode, Kekkei Gekkai x4 (Rinnegan, Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, Tenseigan, Senrigan), Taijutsu

Omnipotence is a real technique and the Rinne Sharingan is apparently Kekkai Mora, not Kekkei Gekkai.
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>>93181732
You know you need the stats to actually use the broken stuff, right?
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>>93181742
I do not. I just skimmed the wiki, so maybe I missed the requirements, but I didn't see any.
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>>93181757
I mean in the cyoa. See: >>93180480
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>>93181732
...I totally forgot about the other sections. I'll compete them in a while.

>>93181768
I see. I'll fix and compete the build.
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>>93180453
What does Tier 5 Stamina do? Tier 4 is already infinite stamina.
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>>93180453
>Patron
Yuji
>Generic Physical Abilities
Combat Skill A0 P4
Strength A0 P4
Speed A0 P4
Defense A0 P4
Stamina A0 P4
Healing Factor A0 P2
Unarmed Striking A4
Blasting A2
Striking Speed A4
Foot Speed A4
Reaction Speed A4
Casting Speed A4
Athletic Stamina A2
Combat Stamina A2
>Generic Special Abilities
Battle Genius A
Weak Arts P
Strong Arts P
One Man Army P
Grit A
Pantheonic Worship A
Inspiring A
>Deity Specific Abilities
Cursed Energy
Potential (Combat Skill)
Another's Innate Technique (Limitless) A
Maturity
Barrier Techniques PH
Domain Expansion P
Taijutsu
Binding Vow H
Shikigami PH
Reversed Curse Technique PH
Six Eyes H
>Nemeses
Mineral D. Ship
Mendor Alque
Gorynych
>Allies
Aoi Todo (I like tall muscular women with big asses)
Sarrista Belmy
Alpie Tulehelo
>Common Enemies
Chakra Demons, Ki Monster, Sea Kings, Akatsuki, Evil Sorcerors, Cursed Spirits, Demon Lords, Enemy Stand Users, League of Villains, Hourse Zmeyevich, Hollows

jjk potentialman build will probably die but if not he'll harness limitless with infinite cursed energy and will be invincible without some hax attacking him
I've incurred 250 hatred so i gave up on rolling and picked whatever sounded evil and strong
jjk part was kinda shit desu, you can select naruto and buy reality bending shit at almost no cost, and it gives you the potential to actually use it
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>>93181848
>jjk
>potential man
you are doomed my guy
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>>93181859
you know what they say
rish everything and you must just win
if i could buy ten shadows with limitless, maybe i'd have actual chances
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>>93181890
risk everything and you might just win*
jujutsu farts giving me brainrot
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>>93181501
Nobody is a jobber in Magi Case
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>>93181848
Absolute abilities get nerfed here so you won't even be invincible.
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>>93182069
>trying to argue with shonenfags
lmao
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>>93181947
everyone is a jobber in magi case apart from two auctors
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>>93182069
there's a nemesis with 6 in all abilities, most don't have every ability at 5 so i think i'll excel through versatility and high IQ
that kind of irks me, why some random guy is stronger than a goku follower who can only get 5 in everything about rigorous training
my best bet is developing limitless
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>>93182116
You are shitposting because you quite literally have no idea what the term jobber and jobbing means.
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Apotheosis vs YogAnon. Who was the better CYOA craftsman?
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>>93182243
shitalics
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>>93182241
torn between three choices, but i ultimately choose forest
having the ability to escape busy life is more valuable
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>>93180453
>Patron Deity:
Naruto

>Generic Physical Abilities:
Actual: free Tiers
Potential: maxed (free Strength and Stamina)

>Generic Special Abilities:
Actual: Pantheonic Worship
Potential: Friendship, Teamwork, Grit

>Naruto Deific Abilities:
Actual: Chakra, Talk-no Jutsu, Potential, Combination Attack, Jutsu (Omnipotence), Sage Mode, Kekkei Gekkai x4 (Rinnegan, Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, Tenseigan, Senrigan), Taijutsu

>Nemeses:
Gruyere de Brie, Tugarin Zmeyevich

Very Talk-no Jutsu and genjutsuable.

>Allies:
Horse The Dragon, Ashleigh Beybloom, Sarrista Belmy

Sarrista, don't worry, I'll revive you when I get strong enough.

>Common Enemies:
Ki Monster, Pirates, White Zetsu, Rogue Ninja, Hollows, Demons, Vampires, The League of Villains

Very Talk-no Jutsu and genjutsuable or weak.

>Plan:
Talk-no Jutsu and genjutsu as many villains and make as many freinds as I can. It's gonna be nuts when they all lend me their power via Combination Attack and I use Omnipotence.
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>>93182128
Really is the limitless even that good here? I'd argue that there's better stuff you could get, like Idle Transfiguration or Cursed Spirt Manipulation, that doesn't require you to take on 100 hatred
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>>93182241
The library if I'm feeling ambitious. Otherwise the loft.

The library (and to a lesser extent the shop) is the the potentially high reward that could end up being largely useless. Maybe you could find world changing knowledge, or that knowledge could well be unobtainable for various reasons (written in languages you can never understand, or so hidden among useless books that a lifetime wouldn't be enough to find it).
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>>93182116
ENTER
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>>93182330
strong abilities and potential, hax gets nerfed anyway so idle transfig can't insta-kill and it's constructs aren't that helpful, same with cursed spirit manipulation which is too reliant on stuff you can catch and ruins curse's potential
i'd only make arguments for boogie woogie (teleportation is cool), ten shadows (you can fuse them all after death, so you can turn mahoraga into absolute unit) and cursed speech (prob nerfed too)
gojo's kit is just cooler for me
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Tankista or Italics please dump OC, I don't want to be trapped in Jujutsu Kaisen shithole or YuriSchizoShit by a transexual author. It's Entropist all over again.
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>>93182629
I can dump Tankista's Worm for you if you'd like.
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>>93182641
Worm is dog shit. Post something else.
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>>93182629
Don't worry bro we have seen some promising WIPs lately
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>>93182629
magocracy vs magi case
who would win?
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>>93182328
there's no way you're getting anywhere near being able to use any of those abilities before dying
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>>93182699
I'll dump Outer Reincarnation then.
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>>93182730
How exactly will any of the weak enemies I took kill me with Sarrista Belmy by my side? Besides, genjutsu is op.
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>>93181452
This always gets ignored somehow
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>>93182699
>Worm is dog shit
I agree but not as dogshit as the leddit worm cyoa.
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>>93182802
This is how far we've sunk
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Mmm, dirt is delicious!
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>>93182802
It's okay, a lot better than previous Worm CYOAs but is dragged down by association with that awful universe. I like the power combos you can make.
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>>93182859
Suffering builds character
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>>93182859
This is not Tankista's latest V5, and it's putrid dogshit that forces you to farm drawbacks to get remotely good power. There's an earlier version that has a worse balancing issue, far worse than Rogue edition which lets you buy a poor perk that lets you overcharge any power to BS levels and solve the CYOA in one go.
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>>93182764
she's dead in a few years. it takes 5 years to get a single stat to 4. hax abilities get nerfed anyway, so there's going to be a way for people to break out.
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>the greasy armpit of the multiverse
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>>93182766
I'll bite, how do you do that?
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>>93182916
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>>93182904
Genjutsu isn't my only power. Rinnegan is an entire wiki worth of op abilities, Tenseigan is a fat stat stick, and Senringan is knowing everything from my birth till the present. Stamina at tier 4 is infinite chakra to spam whatever I want. I'm not dying lol.
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>>93182825
That giant abomination might as well just be a link the the superpower wiki saying
>pick something here
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>>93182940
Still got to get to 4 before using them. Also you don't even have those powers at the start, they're potential only.
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>>93182959
Nope, the Kekkeis are there from the start.
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>>93182966
Reread it my man.
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>>93182966
Wait what the fuck, they are not.

How the fuck do you manifest bloodline abilities????????????
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>>93182974
Eyeballs pop up out your forehead ex nihilo one by one eventually somehow. I don't know. The author is retarded.
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>>93182974
Really it's be best to just get the stats, it's not like you particularly need all those KG's when you have omnipotence. Having more Actuals also reduces the time it takes to achieve Potential too.
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I never bothered to look up "omniarch", because it sounded like a generic fantasy title for a cosmic fantasy ruler.
But right now I ran into an actual use of this:

>https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charles_Fourier#Work_and_liberated_passions
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>>93183072
You're right, just get the stats and forget about the whatevergans. Omnipotence does everything anyway.

I'm gonna update the build again in a moment.
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>>93182906
looks kinda shit but i'll give it a chance
>Era & Insertion
Canon, Self-Insert (Greg Veder)
>Appearance & Age
Hot, Child (16)
>Occupations
Ward

>Skills & Talents
Learning
Remembering
Planning
Stabbing
Zoning
>Power
Star Wars x5 (Skywalker Potential and Tinkering)
Naruto x5 (Reincarnation of Indra, Rinne-Sharingan like Sasuke's, Senju Genes)

>Perks
Defense: Thinkers
Defense: Masters
Defence: Nullifiers
Defense: Cheaters
Defense: Warpers
Determination
Growth
>Minor Powers
Clever Chap
Bone-Vision
Pin Kryptonite
Regeneration x2
>Drawbacks
Wanted: Minor (Merchants, Faultline)
Wanted: Major (EE88, Yangban, Slaughterhouse 9, Coil's Gang)
Wanted: Endbringer (Leviathan, Behemoth, Khonsu)

so only with a few worthless drawbacks that you can solo with powers in this CYOA, I've managed to create a chakra-force god. what the fuck is this balancing
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What sorts of cyoas would make the magicphysicsfag happy?
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>>93182906
Is this from QQ?
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>>93182906
>Like west shit
>ate worm
>Tons of worm shit
Sad.
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>>93183159
none, he is fundamentally unable to enjoy them and only comes here to feel superior because we like them
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>>93183136
And I didn't even post the dlc, which gives even more crossover powers like Dragonball ki...

>>93183168
It's the same author as that low-anime rule 34 economy cyoa.
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>>93183136
wait, this shit gets even better
>you get a manual so you can master all the shit present in canon
>peak jedi and sith in canon have feats ranging from opening wormholes, consuming entire planet for power and destroying it, sith alchemy bs and a ritual that lets you eat whole universe to become a god
>star wars tech is also super esoteric and can outstrip most shit that entities can make, i can make that with no shard restrictions
>naruto has a ton of hax and i am basically naruto with dojutsu, i can learn rasenshuriken and throw it at leviathan during his attack to watch him fall apart molecule by molecule
>not to mention otsutsuki techs and other stuff

best part is that i only wanted star wars stuff, but these drawbacks literally do not matter with level of power you can start with, and it gives you so much that you can minmax stuff easily

>>93183214
post it, i wanna see how bad it gets
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>>93182936
>>93183247
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>>93183257
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>>93183257
hell nah, these are shittier versions of worm V1 powers, stuff you can get in base CYOA is stronger and less nerfed
>>93183270
way better, dragonball is at least balanced by points
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>>93182906
>sex work stuff is not age restricted
>I can be a twelve-year old pimp
good... good.
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>>93182710
Magocracy mages are literal planeswalkers with go fuck yourself reality warping. Magi Case mages are on average low-tier compared to them, but capable of few hyper-focused hacks. The only ones that would stand a chance against the average Magocracy mage would be the Auctors even then.
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>>93183297
2 auctors are omnipotent, so magi case auto wins.
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>>93183281
>>93183270
There is a sleeper hit in there. Shipgirls are busted, that image assumes you would be like those from azur lane, and the powers there reach conceptual timeline deletion levels.
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>>93183297
Italics stated that Magi Case mages are stronger than the ones you can find in Fateverse, and those are capable of some crazy ass feats on high-end. Planewalkers are a meme and should die alongside Spacebattle bitches who use them for their fanfics.
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>>93183308
You see, that is wrong because in this case they would not be able to cheat. The stupid book cannot control a different system.
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>>93183335
>The stupid book cannot control a different system.
Forgot about that. Well, "create anything" is still omnipotent.
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>>93183318
too boring for me man, my build beats all threats unless scion wakes up fast enough and starts spamming his OP dimensional attack (which i can reflect onto him lole)
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>>93180453
>Patron Deity:
Naruto

>Generic Physical Abilities:
Actual: maxed
Potential: maxed (free Strength and Stamina)

>Generic Special Abilities:
Actual: Battle Genius, Friendship, Teamwork, Grit, Pantheonic Worship, Enhancing Aura
Potential: Moral Strength, Smite

>Naruto Deific Abilities:
Actual: Chakra, Talk-no Jutsu, Potential, Combination Attack, Jutsu (Omnipotence), Sage Mode, Taijutsu

>Nemeses:
Gruyere de Brie, Tugarin Zmeyevich

Very Talk-no Jutsuable.

>Allies:
Horse The Dragon, Ashleigh Beybloom, Sarrista Belmy

Sarrista, don't worry, I'll revive you when I get strong enough.

>Common Enemies:
Ki Monster, Pirates, White Zetsu, Rogue Ninja, Hollows, Demons, Vampires, The League of Villains

Very Talk-no Jutsuable or weak.

>Plan:
Talk-no Jutsu as many villains and make as many friends as possible. It's gonna be nuts when they all lend me their power via Combination Attack and I use Omnipotence.
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>>93183353
>"create anything" is still omnipotent.
it's not anymore when it does not work because of out of context power drain.
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>>93183335
It can if Magomages enter Magi Case universe.
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>>93183419
No, it's still a different system, the book only controls it's own system.
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>>93183332
Fateverse mages are not capable mages literal canon they are all shitters and they often break their own magic system rules.
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>>93183419
The book controls the magic that follows the rules of Reason and Creation, the Magocracy does not follow those rules.
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>>93183435
>>93183446
Lore says anything that enters in the universe that's Magical gets regulated by the book
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>>93183476
no it gets regulated by reason, and Magocracy is immune to that shit
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>>93183516
The book regulates magic
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>>93183532
no it regulates reason's magic
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>>93183332
Based. Fuck Planeswalker and their ass magic system. Fuck Mage the Ascension too.
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>>93180155
How would you guys scipe up planeswalking?
As in CYOAs that give you access to multiple settings?
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>>93183619
WTF is scipe up? Even if it's a misspelling i don't recognize what was meant
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>>93183634
*spice
Sorry...
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>>93183619
You don't. Planeswalker settings are ass with ass power systems and zero worldbuilding and soul.
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>>93183619
Make the worlds have conscious or unconscious wills that reject otherworlders. If you get discovered by the world will and are not strong enough, you get booted out or even killed by the world.
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>>93183634
>Spice somethin up
>to add excitement or interest to a speech, story, or performance
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Have the planeswalker player be hunted down by the fun police.
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>>93183619
You don't full-body teleport to different planes, you have to have a body there to sleeve into. And you've got to manage and take care of bodies you're not inhabiting.

Then there could be lots of different ways to get bodies. Magical, technological, psionic.
Maybe there's a technique to quickly grow a temporary body that only lasts a few days.
Maybe you've got god-like power, but only on a particular plane because that's where you invested in a god-like form.

It would also contribute to blending in on any plane, because you belong to one of the local races/phenotypes.
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>>93183685
>>93183724
these are so shit
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>>93182906
> Entry
Pre-Canon
Dropping In
Ugly
Adult
Things get worse (Gangs are stronger)
> Skills
Planning
Remembering
Learning
Zoning
> Powers
Greater Servant (Gilgamesh)
Kaleidoscope
Eidolon
> Perks
Defense: All x2
Determination
Growth
> Drawbacks
Wanted: Major x4 (doesn't matter who)
Wanted: Minor x5 (doesn't matter who)
Wanted: Endbringer (Leviathan)
Noticeable
Bounty
Bad at Intros
Bad Press
Heretic

Kaleidoscope lets you pick from ANY wiki, so I'll roll on the Superpower wiki until I become god. In the meantime I have Gligameshs powers and Eidolon to defend me from any possible threats.
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>>93183818
another example why including V1 powers into your CYOA is an automatic fail
these shits are too powerful, and kaleidoscope is the strongest of them all because it would let you pick powers of ANY fictional character
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>>93183619
Make the planeswalker forget all his memories each time he planeswalks. However he can tattoo messages on his body, if he's lucky his self after the planeswalk will read the tattoos and know what to do. He's chased by angry dogs from many planeswalks ago, so the tattoos inform him of what he needs to do to avoid being immediately chewed to death by the interdimensional dogs.
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>>93179360
>The technology you can receive can be anything feasibly obtainable within 1000 years
Tech Boost is the most overpowered option in this CYOA
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>>93183335
Even without that, the other guys are just as restricted in that regard. Drac and Ostane can still create literally anything even if it doesn't make sense, so they'd likely still win.
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>>93183857
so much non canon shit, no wonder mp slopers love this one
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...

>>93183682
That's exactly what I want to avoid
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>>93183619
Make it something that is not attainable right away like leaving it as a reward for completing the cyoas main challenge or something
or make it so it complements the objective of the cyoa and is just a means to an end for the player goal
OR have a few limited "settings" bout flush them out enough and make them distinct form each other
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Remember, the indiscriminate massacre of innocent peasants because it's fun to kill people when they can't fight back effectively is objectively wrong, and if you insist on the indiscriminate massacre of innocent peasants because it's fun to kill people when they can't fight back effectively, you will be judged in the afterlife and experience at least centuries of agony, possibly an eternity, because you thought the indiscriminate massacre of innocent peasants because it's fun to kill people when they can't fight back effectively was worth doing. Don't do it. Do something else instead.
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>>93184004
I kill the afterlife.
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>>93184004
It depends. If it's a small group of peasants, I agree, it's wrong. But if it's a large group of peasants, odds are at least one of them was a horrible person even if you don't know which one or why, so in front of St. Peter you can write those other peasants down as "collateral".
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>>93179395
The meaning of that is a bit vague.
>>93179714
...Why would there be such thing as "maternity panties"? There are maternity bras because the boobs change in pregnancy, but what's the point of such panties...?

Also maybe.
>>93179862
Joy. Amusement. Mild entertainment, at the least. Disdain and exasperation, perhaps.
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>>93184004
Killing hundreds of innocent guys in general is pretty boring for me. If I wanna be a bad guy, I'll fuck with people who can actually offer me some challenge. Maybe I gravitate towards being good, but being evil for the sake of it isn't cutting it.
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>>93183981
Not planeswalking.
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>>93184052
You needed worthy opponents.
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>>93184004
I never massacre innocents for fun. I massacre innocents for power.
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>>93184066
I feel bad for Eidolon. The dude only wanted to do the right thing, but ended up with the worst type of a shard, and gets unceremoniously killed off. Wish he had more screen time.
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>>93184004
It's rarely worth it anyway.
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>>93183297
>>93183332
How strong are Magi Case mages? They are all limited to one type of magic. Compare that to other urban fantasy settings even like Fate where anyone can use any magic.
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>>93184084
Most characters got fucked by life then by the shards, so I feel you.
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>>93184101
And he had the potential to go toe-to-toe with Scion if his powers hadn't weakened enough. I'd honestly take that for a battle than the shit Wildbow wrote, it feels more believable that a power generator takes on a god. We'd got to see more original powers, too.
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>>93184004
They were the wrong culture tho.
My world needs to 100% CHUD.
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>>93184004
If they are truly innocent, then they presumably go to a good afterlife. By killing them now I'm ensuring they gain salvation, which could have been denied for them if they had continued living and committed sins. Therefore killing them was in fact a good deed.
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>>93183987
NTA that is actually what I'm doing in my CYOA. You can't actually planeswalk you help the girl who can but she is a newbie and only can access the colsest realities to ours.
But there are other like her and are hunting her down
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>>93184004
Why would i do the indiscriminate massacre of innocent peasants for fun?
There are better reasons for the indiscriminate massacre of innocent peasants.
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>>93184110
Or we could have another Taylor W. Clearly Wildbow made his choice.
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>>93184197
There was a better map w/ a legend.
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>>93184197
What map software was used for this?
>>93184224
Her likeability declined massively as Wildbow began to get into his timeskip shenanigans.
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>>93184234
Paint.net presumably, since Tankista uses that for everything.
These are made in normal image editors, not some special software. https://www.alternatehistory.com is the main hub of that specific type of mapmaking, they all have the same style even if made by a large number of different people.
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>>93184274
Thanks, I wanted to find that one specifically because of the style
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>>93183857
Indefinite Chakra Mode 7 Gates Body Revival Technique Swift Chakra Cloak Enlightened Sage Mode build. By using the Execution by Kiss Technique to absorb chakra and Celestial Heart (Natural Demon) to absorb nature energy, I can indefinitely support the immense chakra expenditure of all those buffs and those buffs in turn allow me to massacre all opposition. With Execution by Kiss Technique and Perfect Integration, I'll gain a nigh infinite chakra pool, all Chakra Natures, and almost all Kekkei Genkais. INFINITE POWEEEEER!

>Location:
Arcadia, The Empire

>Timeframe:
Shippuden Era

>Scenario:
Multi-Player

>Rank:
Z

>Perks:
Bloodline Limit, Skilled, Talented (Taijutsu), Genius, Tough, Prodigious, Unbreakable Will, Unique Power, Enhanced Body, Tenacious

>Drawbacks:
Distinct Look, NSFW, Gender Bender, Most Wanted (country of origin), Fated Rival, Inherited Rival, Ideological Divide, Unwanted Attraction, Curse of Waifu/Husbando, Star-Crossed

So many enemies. Might as well go all in and become a true villain.

Unwanted Attraction and Star-Crossed's characters and their abilities are chosen randomly and as weak as possible. The one from Curse of Waifu/Husbando has Evolved Chakra Sensing.

>Yin Yang Nature Affinities:
Yang

>Chakra Nature Affinities:
Wind

>Basic:
Unarmed Combat x3, Subterfuge, Espionage, Book Smarts (human augmentation), Utility Jutsu, Body Flicker, Chakra Flow

>Advanced Jutsu:
Advanced Taijutsu x3, Advanced Fighting Style (Strong Fist) x3, Medical Arts, Sealing Arts

>Hidden Techniques:
Chakra Mode x3, Autonomous Regeneration

>Special Techniques:
Eight Gates Technique (mastery), Body Revival Technique (mastery), Swift Chakra Cloak (mastery), Execution by Kiss Technique (mastery)

>Secret Specials:
Enlightened Sage Mode

>Elemental Kekkei Genkai:
Swift

>Kekkei Genkai:
Perfect Integration (Evolved)

>Weapons, Tools, Items, Artifacts, & Entities:
Infinite Armor, Celestial Heart (Natural Demon)
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>>93184318
>Missions:
The Knight And The King: "your Companion will be a magnet for things that want to hurt them." I'm one of the "things that want to hurt them." The companion is the one from the Curse of Waifu/Husbando. I'll kiss then splatter them with a 7 gates punch and take their blood to gain Evolved Chakra Sensing.
Rival’s Radical Reveal: Something like this is bound to happen anyway, basically free.
Wild Terror: Kiss then splatter it.
Master of Puppets: Kiss then splatter them.
Once More Round the Sun: Kiss then splatter the cult.

>Plan:
Track down people and organizations with Kekkei Genkai and powerful techniques.
1. If they're weak, I'll kiss then splatter them and take their stuff.
2. If they're strong, I'll let it go or go to war depending on the value of the Kekkei Genkai and techniques and my chances of winning.

Along the way, I'll kiss and splatter everything with chakra I come across. I'll be infamous with a shit ton of enemies, but hey, that's the price of power.
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>>93184141
Nice, I'll look forward to it anon.
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>>93184318
Weaker than my build
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>>93183857
Ah yes, the weaker naruto cyoa.
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>>93183857
Post the other CYOA, with difficulty choices but more canon stuff to pick. You could specialize in Shinjutsu and get omnipotence that way, it's crazy.
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>>93184376
I don't know that one. Can you post it?
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>>93184141
I remember you. The idea is cool, but the cool powers the player has need to be really good. If I remember correctly she is useless in combat and planeswalking is pretty much the only skill she has, apart from maybe gifting powers.
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>>93184381
It's in a google doc, and it's called Naruto Isekai. Do you really want me to post it, no matter the shitposts and protests?
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>>93184423
Do it.
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>>93184432
https://drive.google.com/file/d/17H7v-XQG2hkiiRQ4666bsiKBiTBVpJJP/view?usp=drive_link
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>>93184469
>become Shibai Ōtsutsuki
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>>93184503
Or you can recreate his build, this CYOA is absurd. I love it more than the shit Apotheosis made.
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>>93184469
And here it is. 50 points to get a chakra fruit, you are now god. Also just get a custom race that gives everything you want for free, if the moon people are only 80 points then with like 150 you can just be omnipotent by race.
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>>93184591
Even if you start at Part 1, you'll get enough points through workable drawbacks to get on Kage level and solo everyone. It goes in a completely different direction.
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Virgin Attempt at Balance >>93183857
vs
Chad Handing You Omnipotence >>93184469
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>>93184389
Yep she is no good at fighting her family was part of a noble bloodline who through strategic marriages managed to make that power inheritable.
I already have all the powers available to you written and the settings planned.
I'm currently writing the final text then I'll spell check it and then off it goes to photoshop.
I'll try to finish the first page *soon* to post it here.
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>>93184606
>Chad Handing You Omnipotence
Why not two omnipotences? Or three? 3 > 2 >1
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>>93184605
The thing is, you don't have to use the part one points, it's a suggestion, you can use 210 points in part one. And even then if you get 50 points you have the chakra fruit, even by itself it's enough to make you a lot more than Kage level, especially in part one where nobody really has any counter to the combined strength of a whole fucking planet.
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>>93183857
Character Bind Technique is as busted as ever it seems.
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>>93184780
An 8 armed (via Body Modification) Character Bind Technique build would be cool.
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>>93184780
>>93184591
>>93184365
>>93184318
>>93183818
>>93183387
>>93183136
>>93182940
Headcanon
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Shippuden Era, Multi-Player, no Drawbacks

Let's go.
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>>93184898
No missions and I'm in.
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>>93184469
>Mode
Multi-Player
>Era & Difficulty
Sage of the Six Paths Era, Two Blue Vortex
>World Modifiers
Canon Naruto
>Arrival
Reincarnation
>Location
Konohagakure

>Race
Otsutsuki + Jubi Jinchuuriki
>Perks
Good Looks
Chakra Nature: All
Genius
Genius of Hard Work
Charisma
Chakra Control
Plot Armor
Prodigy
Chakra Enhancement x6
Strength Enhancement x4
Durability Enhancement x4
Speed Enhancement x4
Regeneration x3
>Skills
Basic Skills (Free)
Specializations:
Ninjutsu x2
Taijutsu x2
Genjutsu x1 (Free)
Space-Time Ninjutsu x1
Shinjutsu x2 (Omnipotence)
>Dojutsu
Rinne Sharingan
Rinnegan (Temporal Rewind, Chakra Edible Creation)

>Drawbacks
Curse of Hatred
Mission Mayhem
PTSD
Amnesia
Hunter Hunted (Otsutsuki, Akatsuki)
Ninja Way (Maintain The Balance, Atone For My Sins, Rebel Against My Kind)

I was dispatched to check on the Chakra Fruit planted on some dirt planet, to recover it and hopefully deal with the traitorous Kaguya for taking what belonged to us. Instead, I met only one of her sons, an aged sage who spoke of peace and respect towards monkeys inhabiting this place. By strength alone, I was unable to subdue him; in his mercy, he spared me the fate of death and offered to teach me of this world and its fruits, forgetting about our endless pursuit of immortality. I accepted it.

I learned much from him, and eventually, this "kindness" infected my heart as well. But nothing lasts forever. My kind had brought more, and through Hagomoro's teachings, we fought together for the sake of Earth. Victorious, but at the cost of the sage finally exhausting himself to the brink of death. There, he passed on his power to me and passed his commandments onto me, the first of which I shall remember till the day of my end.

"Show love."

I am Eshin Otsutsuki, and for as long as I can, I shall reincarnate in the name of the Sage of Six Paths to ensure this world's continuation, and when the time comes, I shall wage war on my monstrous kind. I hope he watches, from heaven.
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>>93184975
>Omnipotence
>By strength alone, I was unable to subdue him
>t. biggest jobber ever
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>>93184861
The stats descriptions specifically state that a chakra fruit gives you the combined strenght of a whole planet in everything, it's not headcanon it's literally writtent there in the cyoa. The fact you can make a custom race and use the canon ones as a point cmparison is also written there. It's in the cyoa itself, stop being retarded.
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>>93183619
Make the settings homebrew, not franchise slop.
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>>93184975
Forgot to include sage mode and shit but this works.
>>93184898
I exist in this anon's now btw, and once I'll show up in Shippuden I'll have sex with him (He's a hot female btw)
>>93184991
This is something he's gotten after Hagoromo died. I didn't want to take Chakra Fruit because it was standard, so instead I took reality bending to be the biggest jobber ever.
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>>93184898
I presume that means A rank at most?
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>>93184995
Doubt. The setting's kinda trash, and the mechanics wouldn't work for a cyoa
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>>93185012
Go ahead with whatever rank you want. All the conditions were really just to make sure we're all in the same setting.
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>>93184898
If you're gonna do an MP with no rank restrictions, let people take drawbacks. Your fun is gonna be shat up quickly when everybody goes for the best options while you waste your time around. Extra points help diversity.
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>>93184898
>>93184955
>>93185066
Shippuden Era, Multi-Player, no Baby Shark, no NSFW, no World Alterations, no Missions

Let's go V2.
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>MP outbreak
nigga this exact CYOA is used on /mcyoag/ LOOOOOL
go back there and play it
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>>93184898
>litteral mp in the sp thread
IT'S FUCKING OVER
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>>93185113
Nta but they use a ruleset that sucks so this is better.
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>>93184084
Same. Guy was cool and I felt robbed of the action sequence we could have gotten. Though it is sort of badass that he alone was able to force Scion into something other than brute force.
Personally I doubt Eidolon was at fault at all. It's again and again shown that the shards exist for conflict. I don't believe for a second if someone else less action-minded had gotten his shard that something like the Endbringers wouldn't have come about. They might have acted differently, but hell without Eidolon's shonen protagonist attitude they might have just gone straight into killing the world.

Anyways, that's off-topic enough. Posting a CYOA because I don't much like anything in thread yet.
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>>93185128
>one extra perk to make all ranks more viable
>balancing of ability purchase so you don't become the greatest when you overinvest in one thing
>20 drawback points at max so you don't meaninglessly hog shit to farm more abilities
they're pretty stellar actually, while this is /cyoag/
people WILL drawbackfag and it'll be incredibly unfun
seriously, go play it in the right general
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>>93185000
I do have a boubt about this.
How unique does a setting have to be to count as homebrew?

Let's say I create a world inspired by classic heroic adventure TTRPGs.
I make it so the world is a giant maze and people forage and live within giant rooms but the maze is mostly unexplored only the bravest adventurers venture far and mysteriously the maze seems to shift so mapping it is only useful to try and decipher a patter to it's movement.
Is that enough?

So in other words taking inspiration from franchises/genres but modifying them is enough?
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>>93185155
Drawbacks are there for a reason and points are meant to be used. Forcing a different balance on the cyoa can only make it worse.
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>>93185143
Eidolon's never been at fault, he had the drive to use his powers for good and hadn't given up even in the face of Scion. The problem, naturally, is that the shard fed on that subconscious want to be challenged and gave him Endbringers. If his shard ended up in different hands, I suspect that things would've only gotten worse. It has been getting worse ever since Hero died.

>Healing Kit
>Comfy Tent
>Minor Boons: 4, 6, 7, 8 (Alchemy, Blacksmithing, Cooking), 9
>Companions: Zheng, Kenshi
Ava Eva
>Destinations: Edohull, Xoburn
>Events: Lost Fae, Bad Dragon Day

I love chilling, so I'll use my adventures as a starting point for my many businesses, selling cheap healing potions, weaponry, and foodstuffs. Dragon's power means that nobody will bother me, and I'll get to enjoy a comfy life of selling high and buying low.
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>>93185210
that arguments works best when you play singleplayer, in multiplayer it immediately transforms into goyslop of people that have the same character flaws
everybody agrees that the cyoa is poorly balanced and is best played by yourself
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>>93184995
The most recent was Magic: the Awakening by Tok
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>>93185226
>people that have the same character flaws
Who gives a shit? None of the takeable drawbacks matter anyway, they're just points and perks.
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>>93185237
>Who gives a shit?
people who don't want to play an inherently broken CYOA for a mental exercise about how two hypothetical builds are gonna fight, i had enough of that shit in battleboarding sphere
it's easier to go and buy a game at this point nigga
if you can't even write an interesting story for your build through their drawbacks, stick to self-inserting
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>>93185255
>stick to self-inserting
That is the only way to play. It's not a cyoa otherwise, so shut up.
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>>93185255
>if you can't even write an interesting story for your build through their drawbacks, stick to self-inserting
>he thought I was talking about character making and not self inserting
>in cyoag
Lmao, get out of here, stay in mcyoag, and never come back.
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>>93185266
/mcyoag/ has existed for long enough to prove your autism wrong
>>93185270
>unironically mping
>in /cyoag/
you have a containment thread for this, you bloody retard
you could still argue about other builds without MP, it's called "build list" which you're not making lardass
can't wait for "eventful" threads of the same three retards arguing about their shitty fanfic CYOA while we're never getting fun OC again
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>>93185292
>/mcyoag/ has existed for long enough to prove your autism wrong
No, it exists to prove me right, they don't play cyoas.
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>>93185207
>So in other words taking inspiration from franchises/genres but modifying them is enough?
Pretty much. That sounds like a great idea.

My issue with franchises being incorporated in to planeswalking CYOA's is that the settings exist in their own bubbles. There's too much established that separates it from the other franchises/planes. It makes the CYOA as a whole very discordant and breaks immersion.

But if you take franchise settings, file off the serial numbers, and bring them closer in line with each other in terms of powers, items, tech, tone, whatever, then it's fine. Because it helps suspend disbelief.
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>>93182710
The Convention has an absurd numbers advantage due to recruiting from countless planets, not just Eden.

Also, what does Ele think about Saul?
Nudor interrupted before she gave her two cents…
From there, The Convention also has World Draining capabilities, allowing them to just suck the mana out of an entire plane.
Next, Magi Case wizards are limited to only one or two schools of magic, whilst “conventional” wizards can cast spells from any background.
Lastly, Omniarch candidates seem to be Auctor level, minimum.

Overall, the Magi Case setting would be one of the most impressive worlds that the Convention comes across, but they’d still lose because The Convention is just operating on a much larger scale.
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>>93185296
>self-insertfag can't accept the idea that people can use his funny daydream scenarios as vehicle for writing said funny daydream scenarios
this is not a shitpost opinion btw, it's real now
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>>93185328
>writing said funny daydream scenarios
They don't write those, they write for a character that is not them, it's not a cyoa, there is no YOU there.
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>>93185317
When will people learn that with enough of a power difference, numbers mean nothing? Octanes, and by extension Drac, is omnipotent. Magi Case wins automatically unless Magocracy also has an omnipotent being, in which case they are equal.
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>>93185344
>Octanes, and by extension Drac, is omnipotent
they are not
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>>93185340
cyoas here are not traditional cyoas, more like shopping lists for whatever franchise slop or OC you're getting isekai'd to
it has branched off far beyond to the point where people can use them differently, and they're no less valid than a guy self-inserting as a god with a giant harem for fun
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>>93185389
you must be one of the retards that think these cyoas should be like the books
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>>93185312
>But if you take franchise settings, file off the serial numbers, and bring them closer in line with each other in terms of powers, items, tech, tone, whatever, then it's fine. Because it helps suspend disbelief.
I agree that it is important to balance them in some ways like how dangerous they are and possible rewards to be found.
But you should make them varied in powers, tech and tone.
That way it will give them a distinct feel from one another.
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>>93185414
your personal headcanon about my beliefs has nothing to do with reality, schizoanon
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My curse to ruin /cyoag/ is finally taking effect
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>>93185439
>But you should make them varied in powers, tech and tone.
>That way it will give them a distinct feel from one another.
Oh I agree, didn't mean to imply otherwise. But I worded what I was trying to get across poorly.

I just meant you don't want too much disconnect between settings.
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>>93182710
"Magocracy mages" covers both the Convention and Blood mages so I'll give answers for both:
Most Blood magic is expensive, unsafe, and time consuming. Their biggest edge against Magi is a Negation spell that isn't any of those things, that simply deletes any spells targeted at the caster if it's timed correctly. And then, most other Negation spells only affect Blood magic. ToT and BM both also emphasize that Blood mages are entirely possible to counter with skill alone. Their main edge is having scrying or cursing attacks that don't need a direct line of sight
Conventional magic is a whole other beast. It is absolutely a capeshit/vidya type casting system. Any of its elements are also stretched to the most versatile reading of its theme (unperceived/hidden things, spacetime, or neat imaginary concepts with murky physical representations) except for Entropic which goes all-out with energy and material manipulation. Most Conventional mooks are still mooks, they only know a handful of different spells in its spellcrafts, and they do not have access to the notorious "sorceries" that make a majority of the Convention's scary factor.
I think that the /Covenants/ from Blood Magic using Conventional magic would be successfully resisted or stalemated by the Magi Case Clans, but the Convention itself would only "lose" by retreating to cut their finances - and we know how much of a sucker that they are for sunk cost fallacies. The NPC factions from Ouroboros are the only other planeswalker factions that come close to the Convention in power, as far as I know.

>>93183619
Bring more focus to the different locales than the player character's superpowers. The second worst (first worst being Jumpchain by any other name) of planeswalker material is just a power picker with interdimensional travel powers.
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>>93185474
>Reflects your curse on you.

Nothin personnel
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>>93185340
Both me and oc builds are ok but a you build is just weird, only a few metacyoas do that.
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>>93182241
Loft for free wifi and coziness to use it in.
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>>93181733
>>93181744
Reposting my Cheonma build.

>Origin: West
>Occupation: Merchant
>Weapon: Fist
>Kung Fu: Archdemon Soul Malformation Arts
>Love Interest: Aspiring Heroine
>Fate: War In the Central Plains

Our hero is born in the West as a humble merchant, where a tragic twist of fate results in him awakening his chi and remembering that he is in the reincarnation of Cheon Ma, the Heavenly Demon that plagued the land. In a twist of fate, he ends up becoming the sidekick of Lin Feiyan, the Aspiring Heroine of the Alliance. Through a series of comical interludes, they end up falling in love with each other, but our hero knows that they can never be together... or can they? As war begins to scathe the land of Yan and the Demon Cult begins making its overtures to him, he must choose between being a man and a demon... and she must decide if she will be a demon queen or a kingslayer.

LEGEND OF CHEON MA - in all good /cyoag/ theaters near you now
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>>93185638
Too late. Powerfaggots have taken over. Cyoag is over
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>>93183619
Planeswalking as a concept isn't moving between settings, it's one setting with multiple diverse, mostly self-contained regions.

Like, genuinely that's the only meaningful way to frame it.

Is it a grand story of exploration across fundamentally different realms? That's an overarching framing whose challenge can be the complexity of assembling wildly disparate resources into a meaningfully stable base.

Is it a cat and mouse grand strategy game involving a few known forces? That's an overarching framing that can highlight the struggles of the 'haves' and how they can exploit the 'have nots' through intent or mere negligence.

Is it a tightly-knit, almost asphyxiatingly advanced civilization finding the limits of even the seemingly infinite resources they have? That's an overarching framing with stories to tell about how jading 'infinity' truly is, and what humanity becomes when their own morality and priorities is their only true limiting factor in life.
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>>93184469
Remake with some stuff I missed:
>Name
Eshin Otsutsuki
>Mode
Single-Player
>Era & Difficulty
Sage of the Six Paths Era, Two Blue Vortex
>World Modifiers
Canon Naruto
>Arrival
Reincarnation
>Location
Konohagakure

>Race
Otsutsuki + Jubi Jinchuuriki
>Perks
Good Looks
Chakra Nature: All
Genius
Genius of Hard Work
Charisma
Chakra Control
Plot Armor
Prodigy
Chakra Enhancement x6
Strength Enhancement x4
Durability Enhancement x4
Speed Enhancement x4
Regeneration x3
>Skills
Basic Skills (Free)
Specializations:
Ninjutsu x2
Taijutsu x2
Genjutsu x1 (Free)
Space-Time Ninjutsu x1
Shinjutsu x2 (Omnipotence)
Six Paths Sage Mode
>Dojutsu
Byakugan x2 (Golden Byakugan with ability to read fate)
Rinne Sharingan
Rinnegan (Temporal Rewind, Chakra Edible Creation)
>Items
House x4
Truth-Seeking Balls

>Drawbacks
Curse of Hatred
Mission Mayhem
PTSD
Amnesia
Hunter Hunted (Otsutsuki, Akatsuki)
Ninja Way (Maintain The Balance, Atone For My Sins, Rebel Against My Kind)

>Plan
With godly power bestowed on me, and Hagoromo chilling in the otherworld, I am free to shape the world as I see fit. I'll hold back on using Omnipotence unless necessary, and instead, cultivate strong humans who'll be ready to fight off my celestial siblings and earn their place in the world while giving me the challenge I so yearn for. But first, I need time.

Rinnegan lets me farm other people for all of their abilities, so it shouldn't be too difficult to amass every kind of skill and power there is. Once that's done, I create - powerful civilizations and lands for them to grow in, pass on them techniques and terrible powers, and manipulate them from the shadows to start conflict and trigger progress. No one will truly emerge victorious, as I'll ensure that all sides will mostly be balanced, but the occasional heavy hitter may stay.

By the time Kaguya returns, humans will be reforged and become stronger than
they could imagine. And I'll lead them, in the grandest rebellion known.
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>>93185594
Ok I get you.
I'm actually adding small nods to other planeswalkers that affected different worlds in the distant past.
One I'm planning is a romance of the 3 kingdoms one combined with cultivation and avatar the last air bender.
here there are people that can control elements and the more they cultivate the more abstract their control over it becomes
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>>93185905
Unholy reddit
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>>93185921
>3 kingdoms one combined with cultivation and avatar the last air bender
Neat!

How were you planning on tackling gear, NPC's and powers? Just not including them, making them tied to the planes you travel to or something you select before going on your plane romping adventure?
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>>93186058
Just to clarify I'm not the guy that asked the initial question.
In regards to powers and equipment you get them before starting the adventure what each world offers are allies that share the local power system and the unique resources of each reality.
For example the 3 kingdoms one has one of the leaders as a companion and their most important resource is that their power system is relatively easy to teach so you could train regular troops even if they are from outside the setting in it.
Other settings will offer high tech weapons, access to great quantities of rare materials, etc.
And each world will also have different challenges and forces opposing you.
But in general what you get at the start will be the best you can personally get.
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Pick one.

She's your waifu.

You get married.
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>>93186148
Science

the worst one is art she gives off big slut vibes.
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>>93186148
They look pretty young bro...
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>>93186058
...now I want an interplanar oregon trail/traveling salesman cyoa where you chart a map for a decades-long journey between different artifact locations, divided between expensive transportation rituals and length-based mundane transportation.
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>>93186182
I now too, want this.
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>>93186148
>art
Classic BPD bitch
>Humanities
All sluts are in this area
>Athletics
Some may fall for the tomboy meme but irl they always get hit on the most. Very sexually active too.
>Science
Highest chance to be a virgin. So she wins.
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>>93186148
>Humanities
>on line
Ew.

>Science
>normal neutral actions
Ok.

>Athletics
>normal friendly actions
I like.

>Art
>asking you to strip in the first conversation
What the fuck is this shit?

I pick Athletics.
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Rolled 4 (1d5)

>>93186148
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>>93186214
What a way to lose
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Post it
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>>93186214
Artslut for me.
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>>93186224
Tokmaballs, retard
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>>93186148
The rest
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>>93186230
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>>93186230
This only confirms that I was right.
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>>93186148
Art of course!

>>93186196
t. virginity obssesed virgin
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>>93186233
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>>93186204
>on line
>Ew.
It's just japskype, right? I had the impression most jap highschoolers are on Line.
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>>93186238
>t. low t sissy
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>>93186230
>Humanities
Just say it, what is with the paper?

>Science
Offering to help, nice.

>Athletics
>vain
Pass.

>Art
>sex invitation
Meh.

I pick Science.
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>>93186248
It is jap whatsapp
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cyoa with cool powers?
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>>93186272
same thing
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>>93186248
Huh, I thought she was a backwards monkey that said online wrong. I did Humanities dirty. Sorry, Humanities. Still wouldn't pick her there though.

>>93186233
>Humanities
>clear non flustered response
Good.

>Science
>super flustered response
Meh.

>Athletics
>so emotional she cries
Passable, but eh.

>Art
>speechless
Passable.

I pick Humanities.
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>>93186277
Anything not made by italics
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>>93186246
>>93186233
>>93186230
>>93186148
Superior allin1
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>>93186246
>Humanities
>holding me back because she likes me
Cute, but eh.

>Science
Nice compliment.

>Athletics
>screaming about it
Passable, but eh.

>Art
Is sex the only thing on her mind all the time?

I pick Science.

>>93186204
>>93186251
>>93186296
Overall, Science wins my heart.
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>>93182906
20 points to be a zero queen or have forerunner tech is so fucking retarded. This may be the easiest to break CYOA in history.
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>>93186873
I gave up on the cyoa at the very first choice: your only goal is to survive 30 years, and in the Era section you may choose to live out those 30 years before anything dangerous even arrives, so pretty much normal Earth life.
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>>93180155
Not only is allsync down but a few archives in the pastebin 404.
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>>93187056
Yes, everybody knows the pastebin is unmaintained and broken.
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>>93186873
What is so amazing with it compared to usual Worm powers?
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>>93187065
They can make superweapons that can wipe all life in a galaxy out, constructed portal networks that connect many galaxies, can change the axes of whole ass galaxies, build megastructures like Dyson Shell's for fun, and can expend the lives of trillions of genetically/cybernetically enhanced supersoldiers in their conflicts.

Getting immediate access to Forerunner tech essentially puts you on the level of complete Entities, if not stronger. It massively breaks the setting.
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>>93187132
You'll still have to build it all yourself with limited resources.
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>>93187174
Good thing the Forerunners were extremely proficient in automation then, with their automated systems still working thousands upon thousands of years since their near-extinction and their self-replicating smartmatter nanomachine systems assembling 43 quadrillion metric tons of matter each second for their Shield World projects.

Literally all you have to do is build the most basic of their automated assemblers and you can rapidly scale up from there. Things like tools and materials aren't even that big of a concern since you're a Tinker, building this stuff out of scrap and substandard materials is the norm. Shit like this is why the Entities put black boxes and conceptual limitations on their Tinker shards, unrestricted access to all Forerunner tech is retarded
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>>93185317
Doesn't Magi Case have literal Lovecraft Outer Gods wanting to befriend mages.? The Ford Auctor can asspull fuck you technology. Lionheart can block concepts. Aozdou can seal concepts and powers. Ager and Karrylicht are time and space incarnate. Then Magi mages have literal infinite mana to draw on from Creation who wants to devour the universe so if the Convention goes for it, they lose.
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>>93187486
Convention can drain and destroy entire multiversal clusters like Tartarus (aka Wormverse). The sheer difference in scale is simply too absurd.
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>>93187542
Convention jobbed to 13 edgy planeswalkers before, and then 1 edgy planeswalker as setup to the Revelation. We don't even know if Nameless has any weirder hax than two certain corruption spells.
Scale means fuck with the Convention.
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>>93187572
>Convention jobbed to 13 edgy planeswalkers

They won in the end though.
Also, we know almost nothing about Abysswalkers. I wouldn't be surprised if each of them individually could roflstomp Magi Case setting.
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>>93185207
You're halfway there, but your thinking is still wrongheaded. You shouldn't be taking inspiration from any one source, and that one source definitely shouldn't be something like a video game.

I'm going to go on a digression here, but there's a difference between primary inspiration and secondary inspiration. A primary inspiration is something raw and human, like how we feel in a big empty dark room or the myths people once told thousands of years ago or the feelings of intense jealousy and love we feel when someone we're close to has something we want. A secondary inspiration is a work of art which has already packaged up those things and turned it into something of its own.

Primary inspiration: Myths, sacrifice, sublime beauty of nature, duty versus fear
Secondary inspiration: Tolkien, Ghibli films, the Conan the Barbarian film

You can use secondary inspiration, but use it sparingly. It's better to look at what inspired you from that secondary inspiration and use that instead. For example, I am heavily inspired by Rain World, but I am not going to make something that is like Rain World. I am going to make something which makes you feel so small it's like you don't exist, and which is full of a crushing weight of history so long it's like you never lived, and it'll be full of myth and mystery.

tl;dr taking a look at classic D&D and trying to "unpick" what made classic D&D feel like classic D&D is a very good idea, and I like your giant maze solution. But you shouldn't be taking much direct inspiration from classic D&D. Instead, think about what it feels like to be compelled to wind deeper and deeper into to the veins and bowels of an underground construction nobody knows about and which is full of ancient danger. Bring in other inspiration too, like the natural world of insects, or what it felt like when you once visited the Paris catacombs, or the story of the labyrinth.
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>>93185340
You never played as yourself in Fighting Fantasy either. CYOA was always a marketing slogan which simply meant that instead of reading a book with a prewritten adventure, you, the reader, could manipulate the adventure.
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>>93182906
>>93182859
Ok I'm going to ask. What the fuck is the Worm?
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>>93187711
It's just an obscenely long webnovel which got popular a while back.
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>>93182859
>You can completely replicate the technology from a videogame of your choice, with all of its requirements and resources
holy fuck lmao
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>>93187727
What made it popular?
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>>93187786
Female teenager MC tumblrites could relate to
One of the first and most popular grimdark capeshit stories
Seemingly minor superpowers that have to be used in creative ways
An actual shilling campaign led by TVTropes and SomethingAwful
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>>93187512
I've been looking for this cyoa forever. It fucking never showed up when I searched for "shitty planeswalker cyoa".
Thanks bromeat.
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>>93187795
>Grimdark capeshit
How grimdark are we talking about here?
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>>93187866
Not him but from what I understand powers are activated by trauma events and are generally suited for avoiding said event. But of course, the power isn't granted until after, much less the ability to control it for it to have been useful.
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>>93187866
If you don't mind major spoilers
>As >>93187874 says, powers are handed out to the traumatized, deranged, and psychopathic
>Powers are sentient to an extent, and they all subconsciously manipulate their wielders into conflict and adversity
>If you somehow resist this impulse your powers will actively try to kill you or mindbreak you into doing their will
>Powers showing up at all is all part of a big alien experiment to use human minds to innovate new tactics and uses for the powers through conflict, once this experiment is over the aliens plan to simply kill all humanity, like they've done with the past 3000 civilizations they've meddled with
>The aliens have selectively tuned the powers to ensure that they cannot meaningfully be used against their makers, and kept all the super good instant win powers for themselves
>Even if by some asspull humanity wins against this specific team of aliens, there's millions, billions, maybe even trillions more out in the cosmos repeating this same experiment on who knows how many different species
>Also some guy accidentally brought continent destroying kaijus into existence and they're kicking everyone's asses
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There is no escape

>>93188055
>>93188055
>>93188055
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>>93188056
>page 5
Too early. We don't even have the activity for it.
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>>93187866
On the basic level, the society in Worm has cyberpunk levels of corruption. The superhero/villain battles are about as authentic as a pro-wrestling matches, with both sides quietly being controlled by big corporations. Whether (you) are a "hero" or "villain" is largely determined by market research, "evil schemes" are planned with an eye towards what will generate the highest ratings, and superpowered individuals who refuse to play ball are quietly assassinated
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>>93188107
Isn't it The Boys? You messed up.
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>>93188145
It's not entirely wrong, though. The big corporation IS controlling both sides, and superpowered people that disobey are taken care of.
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>>93188185
Wasn't it more like Illuminati than just a corporation?
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>>93188243
Depends on how you viewed them.
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>>93187325
this, you can easily farm points to become a planetary+ tier and solo everybody, it's so fucking dumb
>>93188107
it's more that heroes are federal agents deployed by protectorate (government project for superheroes) in an attempt to keep the declining world safe, considering that there are more villains than heroes and endbringers are so strong that humanity is slowly dying
there's indeed some secret meddling going on, but it's done for benevolent reasons, but they take some horrible actions to get to these
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>>93187613
I see.
I'm actually developing the idea in general I'm thinking that it could maybe be a world that is almost barren on the surface their inhabitants only resource is the mysterious labyrinth that seems to make up the interior of their world.
So civilization centers around it's entrances.
You have two different narrators giving you their perspectives one is an experienced adventurer that is happy with his routine and reaping the benefits of his findings the other a newbie willing to abandon the surface to discover what hides at the center and of there is some kind of intelligence directing the movement of the maze.
I'm general I want it to give off a surface level of optimism but a feeling that most people just choose to close their eyes ignoring that they are at the brink and that only some kind radical action has a hope to preserve the world.
Who knows maybe the worlds destruction could be reverted by whatever controls the world?
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>>93183745
Bite your tongue, they're genius.



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