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>Thread Question:
When making selfinsert builds, have you ever picked drawbacks that significantly reduce your intelligence? If not, is it just a quantitative matter (not enough reward), and with more reward for the loss, you'd pick it?
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>>94233015
All things have a price, anything can be traded.
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>>94226120
Wrong. Pride is a good thing. It is what makes the individual who they are and pushes them to be who they were meant to be. The Church only enforces modesty and labels them sins because they want to make you weak and pathetic so you're easier to control.

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>>94233015
Duh. Keep upping the reward and it would be worth it at some point.
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>>94233052
If you haven't seen a thousand retards fuck themselves and others over because of their pride and ego then you are one of those thousand prideful retards
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>>94233118
If you haven't seen a thousand retards fucking themselves and others over because of their modesty and self-hatred then you are one of those thousand enslaved retards
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>>94233131
Not how that works.
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>>94226838
Great romance options.
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>coom your own adventure
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>>94233015
Only very occasionally, when happiness and success in life is basically guaranteed even without being smart.
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>>94233015
god i love the smell of reddit in the morning
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>>94233015
No. If my mental architecture change like that, it's not purely "me" anymore.
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>>94233015

i have, yeah. it's just that "more perks" is pretty much never a good trade for a serious drawback. i would only take a serious drawback if it meant i could avoid an even more serious drawback (which is what happened in the cyoa i took reduced intelligence in).

i think a lot of cyoas these days are just power fantasy. that makes them feel kind of samey, but maybe the truth is that some things are just not fun to imagine.
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>>94233582
good answer!
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>>94233015
>TQ
Same as other anon, I feel like diminishing intellectual capabilities of someone is giving them a small ego death. Even if it feels superficial like getting weaker body strength or somesuch, it's ultimately a stab at something people consider part of "Self", even if it's not as critical as, for example, removing someone's empathy completely. Plus "you're now more dumb" option just doesn't feel good to pick no matter what kind of power you're getting for it—and I'm with >>94233750 on this one too, it's usually never worth it.
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>>94233750
>i would only take a serious drawback if it meant i could avoid an even more serious drawback (which is what happened in the cyoa i took reduced intelligence in).
What CYOA was that?
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Well, anons, which power is strongest? I'd go with Spirit of Knowledge. It seems like it has the most growth potential of the six.

https://imgur.com/a/totally-perfect-isekai-1n3PsMY
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>>94234015
well this is self promotion, but here.
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>>94234150
Spirit of Knowledge > Divine Presence > Best Support Role Ever > The Gamer > The Power of Friendship > 10-second time stop
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>>94234186
Support Role and Divine Presence can be switched depending on where you start
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>>94234150
The Divine Presence, Empire of the Sun. Just take over the empire, end the civil war and rule as an emperor for the rest of your life. If you want direct power you can just plunder the libraries for as much magical knowledge as you want.
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>>94234150
The Best Support Role Ever.
It seemingly gives unagingness: "as long as you have mana, you can't die."
And it's a complete package that lands me in a cushy job. Eg The Power of Friendship and The Classic Strongest Power seem like they'd be powerful in combination with other powers but much less so by themselves.
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>>94234210
Also I should mention that it'll make talking the other 5 down extremely easy, since I obviously don't want to kill them.
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>>94234161
Option 1. Feeling like shit all of my (new) life isn't appealing, and I should be able to code a AI companion if I'm really lonely.
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>>94233192
NTA but he's right.
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>>94234161
>you will lose all memories of your first life
>you'll still be you
a contradiction.
The 100% memorywipe means that this is an unrelated person. I don't sympathize with him and don't care what happens to him.
You could've just made the player forgot about the CYOA, not his whole life, wouldn't that have been enough? Then I'd have a stake in the decision.
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>>94234295
Well you are going to have to experience whatever you pick so it'd probably behove you to care.
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>>94234320
No, I am not going to experience those things. Some other person is going to experience those things. The CYOA makes it clear that my memories are eradicated 100%. He's about as related to me as any of the other 8 bln people in the world.
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I do not enjoy these games.
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>>94234354
> He's about as related to me as any of the other 8 bln people in the world.
Except for the fact that you share the same consciousness, and thus will feel what the other feels.
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>>94234382
we know, catfag. Just leave already.
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>>94234396
Your idea of "consciousness" is suspiciously close to "soul" instead. Actual consciousness is the process of conscious thoughts happening. A person with one set of memories in the head has some thoughts, a person with a different set of memories in the head has different thoughts - for example, the second person can't be reminded of an event that happened in the first person's remembered history. If you grew 2 genetically identical people up in identical rooms and with supernaturally exact care made sure that as they grow up they experience the exact same stimuli at any point of time, thus forming identical memories, then you might say they "share the same consciousness" or something close to it. All conscious thoughts are based on memories.
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>>94234454
> If you grew 2 genetically identical people up in identical rooms and with supernaturally exact care made sure that as they grow up they experience the exact same stimuli at any point of time, thus forming identical memories, then you might say they "share the same consciousness" or something close to it.

They do not share the same consciousness because they do not inherently experience the same things, there's no voodoo going on. For instance, if I poke one the other won't feel it. They may have identical consciousnesses, but that doesn't mean they have the same conciousness.
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>>94234512
>For instance, if I poke one the other won't feel it.
Yes, because the memory of being poked is present in one, but not the other.
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>>94234527
The memory isn't present BECAUSE they aren't the same consciousness. If they were truly the same everything that happened to one would also happen to the other, but that doesn't happen.
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>>94234538
They do not have the same conscious processes BECAUSE the memories are not identical, because you poked one and not the other.
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>>94234549
> because you poked one and not the other.
If they were the same it wouldn't be possible to do that in the first place.
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>>94233015
Nice to see this place still going
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>>94234566
Their conscious processes were the same until you poked them, because until then the stimuli had been the same, so their memories had been the same.
Then you poked one and not the other, so their memories are now different, and their conscious processes have diverged accordingly. One of them, for example, is thinking: "Why did that guy poke me? What an asshole."
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>>94234599
>until you poked them
until you poked one of them*
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>>94234599
> Their conscious processes were the same until you poked them,
They weren't the same because it is possible to poke one and not the other. If they were the same poking one would result in the other also being poked. Identical =/= the same. Even if I made a painting that looked exactly like the Mona Lisa it still wouldn't be THE Mona Lisa, it'd just be a copy.
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>>94234269
thank you for reading
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>>94234150
>Za Warudo
>Empire of the Sun
I don't know if it's the strongest but it's the one I chose.
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>>94233118
Anon, if you have to explain the Dunning-Kruger effect more than once,
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>>94234629
Unironicall the best CYOA that gay retard made. And even then it's mid as fuck and with shitty balance
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>>94234612
The painting you made that looks like Mona Lisa would be extremely different from the original, not the same thing at all.
A better example would be like this. In some museum hangs Mona Lisa. One day, it is suddenly replaced with a copy of itself that's exactly identical down to the smallest level of information, and there are no side effects. The informational state of the universe is exactly as if it hadn't been replaced - nobody ever learns that this replacement happened either. Out-of-universe, examining this, we should be able to say: it's the same painting as before, no replacement happened in any meaningful sense.
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>Vampires are all eldritch abominations including the moon
>Except a randomly placed pristine loli with a sword
Why is Italics allowed to get away with this.
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>>94234150
Supposing The Spirit of Knowledge were willing, he could probably calculate the distance of your targets if you were to walk between two points and see how far the points on the compass move.
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>Vampires are just mages that ate a lot of blood using magic and deformed themselves.
>Lovecraftian horrors are just mages that grafted aliens to their body or ate them and deformed themselves.
>Mythological creatures and gods are just manifested figments of the human consciousness.
>Magic isn't all encompassing you have to pick one type instead of using it all.
I fucking hate Magi Case and Italics. He removed any sense of super in supernatural and replaced it with science and making it all logical.
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>>94234700
>One day, it is suddenly replaced with a copy
In other words, something did change. Your own language betrays you: you can't say the Mona Lisa was replaced with a copy and then say that actually nothing happened, because by definition that is a change.

> in any meaningful sense.
This phrase is doing tons of heavy lifting here. 'meaningful'' is subjective and arbitrary, what matters is that the Mona Lisa, by your own admission, was replaced, meaning that the copy of the Mona Lisa is not in fact the same as the original.
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Clans ranked by interestingness

>interesting clans
Ager
Bathory
Devil
Drac
Ford
Malivent

>mid clans
Evoco
Galileo
Lionheart
Nightingale
Ostane
Ulster
Yaga
Yggdrassil

>uninteresting clans
Faber
Howtizer
Karrylicht

>very uninteresting clans
Atman
Aozdou
Edo
Meirin
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>>94234769
I manifested this post into existence by thinking about Magi Case before opening the thread
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Clans ranked by how useful their magic is for an investigator (done from memory because I don't have magi case saved)

>Basically cheating tier
Ager (can look back in time at the place the crime took place to see it happen)

>great investigators tier
Devil (necromancy let's you talk with the dead so very useful in murder cases otherwise muggle tier)
Yggdrassil (can do what Ager and Devil does but shittier)

>better than most investigators tier
Galileo (bit schizo but like maybe you can gleam some info from Chuthulu)
Evoco (maybe you can find a "solves-cases" monster or something)
Edo (like Evoco but you turn into a "solves-cases" monster or something)
Malivent (might be able to compel anyone who listens to their music to confess their crimes)

>should consider a career atleast tier
Ford (can potentially create high tech equipment that might help solving the case which saves the department money)
Aozdou (sealing magic can be used like an evidence bag)
Ostane (alchemy could be DNA sampling+)
Lionheart (useful in case the suspect has left booby traps)

>might as well be a muggle tier
Drac (elemental magic is literally useless here)
Karrylicht (unless you can just teleport to the user of a murder weapon or something in which case it's great investigator tier)
Atman (unless souls leave like residue you can follow to the culprit in which case they are great investigator tier)
Meirin (weeaboo fightan magic is top tier for a cop but you are investigating here)
Ulster (don't even remember what they did desu)
Nightingale (fuck you gon heal? the clues???)
Bathory (unless you plan on taking 500 years solving this case then being a vampire won't help)
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>>94234769
Why is Malivent at the top? They are the most boring clan with no real history and Music "Magic". They should be in the Very Uninteresting Category.

Galileo needs to be bumped up a slot. There should be a category above mid clans because Ulster/Ygg shouldn't be in the same category as Ostane/Evoco/Nightingale/Lionheart

Atman should be uninteresting, Meirin needs to be in Mid, Edo uninteresting. Faber needs to be in very uninteresting.

You were close but not all the way there.
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>>94234933
>Why is Malivent at the top?
big bazoongas
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>>94234928
Being an Investigator also includes monster hunting ans killing evil mages.
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>>94234973
as mentioned in Meirin this list is only for the investigation part
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>>94234983
But you still need to track down monsters and evil mages. If a flame mage uses flame magic, you just need to track the ash with your own flame magic.

Or because all magic and monsters use Mana, you can track them using Mana Magic from Faber. Faber would be GOD tier in finding out where mages and monsters are.
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I don't think there's been a bigger case of artificial hype in /cyoag/ history than magi case
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>>94235029
Okay? And? You gonna cry about it?
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>>94235067
wtf why are you being so mean to him D:
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>>94234928
>Meirin useless
You are courting death. Even with Mount Tai in view you still cannot see, arrogant young master. I should kill three generations worth of your family for not understanding the power of the Qi. Track the offenders by their life force energy and bring them down with a heavenly descending palm.
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>>94235029
its the one same sad guy
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>>94235212
pretty
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>>94235212
Reddit slop
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>>94235224
>>94235227
inside me there are two wolves
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>>94235244
So you fucked a wolf and are now pregnant with wolf twins? Let me guess you're Aro
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decided to revise City Witch last night
nothing major, just tweaking the magic tokens for the origins for the original values, adding more disorders (everyone said there were too few) and merging the day job and coven sections (with some edits for consistency)
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Rolled 69, 25, 73, 27, 83, 74 = 351 (6d100)

>>94235212
Surinisloprolling!
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>>94235332
and part 2
alright see ya
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>>94235212
looks neat, good job anon
i'll check it out properly in a few
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>>94234928
Magi Case powerlevel is too low. You only have too few mages capable of ludokino shit like the foundes and that makes the setting boring. We deserve to have amazing feats and mages we can compare and compete against.

Something like a Grail War is possible but too few mages capable of setting it up. Or fighting and killing an evil god like Angra Mainyu.
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>>94234398
never
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>>94235340
>>94235212
>wake up
>look up the leaderboards of best CYOA authors
>get sad that I'm in the last place
>get hints on how to make better CYOAs
>before I could apply the advice instantly become unstressed and go to sleep as a cocoon forms around me and I become no longer sad
>wake up
I have becomes Surinical!
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>>94235332
>Be the witch
>No immortality
So close to being playable
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>>94235212
Startle
Dismay (Surprise synergy)
Rage
Relief

>Go to sleep and prophecise the next major tragedy
>Stress out about it for however long it takes for me to wake up from the dream and head over to the tragedy
>Use the power of rage and startle to have x4 retard strength with instant reflexes to save the day
>Get paid for my good deeds
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>>94235332
Demonic Oath

Communion
Warding Mastery
Wayfinding Mastery
Demonics Mastery

Raven familiar

Deathbranded

Cozy Cottage (full of bulletholes from random drive-bys)

Covenless

Short-term plan: try not to die
Outcome: die a lot
Long-term plan: keep immortality but without the side effects
Outcome: ???
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>>94234933
>Why is Malivent at the top? They are the most boring clan with no real history and Music "Magic". They should be in the Very Uninteresting Category.
That's a subjective call on my part, I really liked how they are the embarrassing jobber juvenile drugdealer of the Magi clans, the Jesse Pinkman of the family. Plus the auctor has an interesting method of immortality that adds drama.

>Galileo needs to be bumped up a slot.
>There should be a category above mid clans because Ulster/Ygg shouldn't be in the same category as Ostane/Evoco/Nightingale/Lionheart
That's fine by me.

>Atman should be uninteresting, Meirin needs to be in Mid, Edo uninteresting.
The eastern clans (plus Edo) felt uninspired to me (except Evoco), like a DLC package of clans, they feel like an afterthought. How would you sell me on Atman in particular? To me Atman felt like Italics thought: these mythicized Aryans should logically be in India too, and anons want brown loli, so there, done; there's no real spirit or connection to the rest of the world iirc.
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Rolled 48, 14, 34, 57, 21, 5 = 179 (6d100)

>>94235212
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>>94235444
>That's a subjective call on my part,
Really bad call.

> I really liked how they are the embarrassing jobber juvenile drugdealer of the Magi clans, the Jesse Pinkman of the family.
Except they are regular jobbers and only member is a known criminal and drug dealer. From the profiles the entire clan is in the music industry and entertainment and jobber support staff for investigators if that image Italics posted is to be believed.

> Plus the auctor has an interesting method of immortality that adds drama.
All he is doing is bodyjacking. Nothing interesting or unique about it.
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>>94235480
Agitation
Vindication
Amusement
Discomfort
Startle
Dismay

Not very good.
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Sloppingical does it again!
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>>94235444
>The eastern clans (plus Edo) felt uninspired to me (except Evoco), like a DLC package of clans,
I'm sorry you meant to say Malivent. Edo is obviously based off of 19th century beliefs on Evolution and survival of the fittest to become the top living organism and has a mix of thropy where people become beasts and transformation.

Atman is based around the understanding of souls and its connection to the greater world and gets metaphysical to a degree. Meirin is based as fuck martial arts and tells you that magic is invading the world and makes up reality to a degree with Qi.They also have more inner conflict and intrigue than Malivent shit and has lore about aryans using other cultural/religous beliefs to help form magic types.
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>>94235224
>>94235227
>>94235340
>>94235351
>>94235392
>>94235413
>>94235480
SLOPA ALERT! GET IN THE BUNKER,ANONS!
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>>94235444
>How would you sell me on Atman in particular?
By them having actual form of magic that isn't music.
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Rolled 81, 41, 80, 19, 85, 19 = 325 (6d100)

>>94235212
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>>94235538
In Indian myth and philosophy Atman is a universal soul, not a soul of the individual. Saying "it's just soul, bro" is a very surface-level interpretation.
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>>94235212
Clarifications needed:

>Using option one selection, can I use my synergy point to buy the same skill twice thus unlocking the double roll benefit?

>Would pulling the serenity skill twice remove the 'cant be near people' limitation when freezing time?

I will not elaborate on the necessity for these questions.
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Rolled 96, 59, 96, 93, 44, 8 = 396 (6d100)

>>94235212
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>>94235563
Magi Case lore explains that everything comes from Creation which is the universal soul and by manipulating Mana which is part of Creation you manipulate souls of individuals. The lore also outright says that traditional beliefs like Meirin Clan thoughts on Qi were deviated from the old ones by the Aryans to help align with their goals.
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>>94234150
Support role and eastern frontier
Ima be a frontier doctor and gonna enjoy watching adventurer schenanigans
(Probably get eaten by whats waking up but owell)
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>>94235630
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>>94235646
Then don't talk if you don't want to engage. Over here going"umm actkually"
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>>94235352
I recall Ulsterand Italics himself explaining how modern mages are lazy and has begun to incorporate reason into their magic, using already established methods rather than developing their own.

I´m a powerfag so sticking out is good enough for me to leave those lazy fucks behind.
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>>94235212
Make a real cyoa like Dragonfall.
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>>94235755
>real
sorry, misspelled "shit"
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>>94235530
>I like it when they call me Big Sloppa
>Throw your hands in the air, if you a CYOA’er
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When did imbeciles start using sloppa as an insult
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>>94234538
You are falling into essentialism when you do this. That's natural, humans are hardwired for essentialism, but it's incorrect.
A thing is not a node to which descriptors are added. The qualities of a thing ARE that thing. The division of all of reality into coherent individual 'things' is arbitrary in the first place. There is no natural reason why the air touching the paint molecule in Mona Lisa's left eyebrow should be considered less part of the same 'thing' it is making up than the neighbouring paint particle. We only make that distinction for human purposes, for what paintings mean to us and how we interact with them.

The human mind is the same. There is no underlying 'consciousness' node to which qualities like memories and thought are attached. If you were to strip away all these things to try and get at the core of consciousness, you'd have disintegrated the consciousness itself in the process.
Consciousness is something that happens anew every moment you experience. These individual experiences are tied together via memory, creating a self.
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>>94235212
dice+6d100
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>>94236085
Welcome to the board. What a shitty thread you chose to begin your journey here, friend.
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Rolled 12, 79, 78, 27, 96, 23 = 315 (6d100)

>>94236085
Sorry am dumb
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>>94236092
Yes, so this sloppy cal man seems pretty popular around here, huh?
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>>94236101
You're getting there, dice+6d100-kun! Keep on trying!
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To be honest sometimes I regret making Dragonfall.... Why you might ask? Well I kind of singlehandedly killed the be the dragon CYOA genere by making Dragonfall since now every dragon CYOA will be compared to Dragonfall and I think Dragonfall is peak. Every Dragon CYOA after would be a pale shadow in comparison so why would anyone want to make a Dragon CYOA anymore? I feel sad today... I just want to be a dragon and play a CYOA that lets me be one.....
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>>94236168
I will make one for you!
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>>94236168
Don't worry, It's only the 4th most popular dragon cyoa on the Korean forum.
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>>94236173
You will? Thanks!
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>>94236094
>>94236101
>>94236168
>>94236173
These retards must die
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Rolled 69, 60, 76, 30, 64, 96 = 395 (6d100)

>>94235212
Here goes everything...
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>>94236168
this is bait to try and make me make a dragon CYOA, its not working, im already making a different CYOA, try again next time
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>>94235332
>reduced and odd numbered tokens
Fuck you.
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>>94235332
Origins: Bioarcane Splicing

Affinities:
- Kinetics
- Somatics Mastery
- Wayfinding Mastery
- Illusions Mastery

Familiar: Heretic
Disorders: Choleric, Parasitic
Atelier: Vagabond
Covens: Silent Sorority, Thrallhounds Guild, Martial Coven

after a certain point you're not even a witch anymore, you're just doomguy
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>>94235332
Why and how is the Heretic an extension of the PC's soul?
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>>94235212
>>94236270
I've gained Curiosity, Nostalgia, Bewilderment, Nervousness, Annoyance, and Horror. These are all quite adjacent to my own psychology and I'll be able to make regular, excellent use of them. I suppose the heart of the cards really was fated, after all.
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Husanon here.
I'm sorry I have not worked on Hluminary this past weeks.
I got too much into AIchatbots it is fun to torture and sexually assault characters with it.
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To be honest sometimes I regret making Magi Case.... Why you might ask? Well I kind of singlehandedly killed the be the urban fantasy mage CYOA genere by making Magi Case since now every urban fantasy mage CYOA will be compared to Magi Case and I think Magi Case is peak. Every urban fantasy mage CYOA after would be a pale shadow in comparison so why would anyone want to make a urban fantady mage CYOA anymore? I feel sad today... I just want to be a urban fantasy mage and play a CYOA that lets me be one.....
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>>94234150
>Spirit of Knowledge. It seems like it has the most growth potential
>text explicitly says "it won't be able to ever grow or get stronger"
Spirit of Knowledge is kinda dogshit? It's explicitly about the same as an archmage's library, something you can just go to and access (and learn from at like a x20 rate if you're the Gamer).

>>94234212
actual jobber ability, you're in a battle royal retard. Plus it's a magical world, literally everybody except for Time Stop has routes to immortality (even ignoring battle royal prize)

>>94234186
You guys really, really sleeping on the "you get smarter & stronger magically" part of The Gamer. It would be worth it even if it wasn't a battle royal just for being able to scale beyond all the other abilities.

The Gamer >>> Power of Friendship = Divine Presence > Spirit of Knowledge = Time Stop >>> Healslut
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To be honest sometimes I regret not slitting every monkey author's throat and filling their deflated corpses with expanded polystyrene to use as beanbags
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>>94236342
It's odd how you can immediately smell AI art even when it's not so bad. Pattern recognition go brrrr I guess
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>>94236514
People in ai art pop out of the background jarringly. It's kind of weird that this flaw hasn't been fixed yet.
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>>94235910
Essentially when AI blew up but specifically to surinical, the lore is more nuanced.

>Surinical invaded from Reddit to /cyoag/, bringing a playful, chaotic energy by spamming dozens of his CYOAs and even starting his own thread in his confusion.

>His behavior upset many, but he eventually adapted, occasionally posting stuff here first during a drought of OC and asking for advice.

>Despite high anti-Reddit sentiment, some appreciated his resilience and response to criticism, dubbing this the "you got moxie, kid" era.

>Criticism arose for his CYOAs being too simple and grounded in reality, going against the escapism most people expected, worsened by comments he made denouncing escapism in general. This was the "no fun" era.

>He adopted AI early (way back in the Google Deep Dream time), leading to rough, unfinished looking work with poor visuals, which further damaged his work's reception. This is the beginning of the "slop" era.

>His output continues to be fast, as evidenced by this thread with a surinical OC OP and another OC in the comments. This led to the "sloppingal!" Era we are in currently, Vegeta, pigs, etc.

>Even as AI has improved and so has his content, he still caters more towards reddit interests and thus, the negative "slop" label has persisted derailing threads for a bit whenever he posts.
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>>94236545
I think in that image in particular, it stems from the fact that it very clearly is a completely different style of art background versus subject, generally a real artist would be more consistent.
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>>94235332
>Arcane Origins: Self-Taught
>Magical Attunement: Mending Mastery, Astromancy Mastery, Alchemy
>Familiar: Mirror Image
>Atelier: Apartment
>Witches Coven: Machinists Coven
How far can you take arcane prosthetics? Is it possible to replace one's weak flesh body with eternal arcane machinery? I don't know yet, but I will know.
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posting the peak dragon cyoa!
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>>94236514
I'm actually amazed at how fast we collectively adapted to recognize it, despite its many advancements. The human mind is truly something else, ain't it?
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I've decided to expand the kingdom invasion WIP I mentioned last thread from three pages to six pages, adding a map and dedicated rewards section to avoid clutter. Between this and outlining the kingdom's troops/preparations, it will most likely be releasing in November, instead of October.
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>>94236675
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>>94236687
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>>94236686
based long cyoa maker
your efforts are appreciated
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>>94236461
>actual jobber ability, you're in a battle royal retard.
There's no battle royale. Perhaps there's a battle royale on a theoretical page 2, which wasn't posted and which I didn't read when I posted that
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Human forms are a copout in being the dragon CYOAs. Commit to your premise.
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To be honest sometimes I regret making Godly Husbandry.... Why you might ask? Well I kind of singlehandedly killed the loli demigodess waifu picker CYOA genere by making Godly Husbandry since now every loli CYOA will be compared to Godly Husbandry and I think Godly Husbandry is peak. Every loli CYOA after would be a pale shadow in comparison so why would anyone want to make a loli CYOA anymore? I feel sad today... I just want to be a demigod and play a CYOA that lets me be one.....
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>>94236588
To be honest sometimes I regret making mountains of slop.... Why you might ask? Well I kind of singlehandedly killed the low effort reddit-tier CYOA genre by making slop since now every slop CYOA will be compared to my slop and I think my slop is peak sloppy. Every slop CYOA after would be a pale shadow in comparison so why would anyone want to make a slop CYOA anymore? I feel sad today... I just want to be a sub shop manager and play a CYOA that lets me not have fun.....
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To be honest sometimes I regret making Ultimate God.... Why you might ask? Well I kind of singlehandedly killed the overpowered god CYOA genere by making Ultimate God since now every god CYOA will be compared to Ultimate God and I think Ultimate God is peak. Every god CYOA after would be a pale shadow in comparison so why would anyone want to make a god CYOA anymore? I feel sad today... I just want to be a god above gods and play a CYOA that lets me be one.....
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>>94236761
But that's how bait the HMoFA goys into playing a furry/scalie cyoas.
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>>94236713
>900... 899...
wtf, fucking timer reset again!? this site is becoming unusable
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>>94236588
Revisionist reddit posting
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To be honest sometimes I regret legalizing gang rape.... Why you might ask? Well I kind of singlehandedly killed the be the little girl CYOA genre by making rape legal since now every little girl CYOA will be compared to real life and I think gang rape is peak. Every little girl CYOA after would be a pale shadow in comparison so why would anyone want to make a little girl CYOA anymore? I feel sad today... I just want to be a rapist above rapists and play a CYOA that lets me be one.....
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>>94236870
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>>94236873
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>>94236886
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>>94235332
>Arcane Origin:
Bioarcane Splicing

>Magical Attunement:
Mastery: Warding, Communion, Illusions, Demonics
Normal: Astromancy

>Disorders:
Paranoid: Enslave those dark spirits.
All Seeing: Limit what I see with Illusions.

>Atelier:
Vagabond

Enslaving everything, from weak to strong. Any and all opportunities and threats are foreseen. The witches of this age have decayed into hedonism. I have nothing to fear.
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>>94236896
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>>94236905
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>>94236917
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>>94236168
I now want to make a dragon rider CYOA.
With a selection of predefined dragons but you can modify yourself inspired by the Eragon, the movie as I never read the books.
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>>94236721
I do it for (You), anon. I want to keep working on my WIP so badly I'm pacing back and forth at work. I can't access my PC here, so I'm jotting down notes to then put into action once I clock out. The urge to create OC is a grand and sagacious delirium that I simply cannot get enough of, but must. I'm making good progress every day. The WIP might release sooner than expected, but it won't be one second before I'm certain that it's nearing the best it can possibly be from my perspective.
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>>94237006
deb from accounting is worried about you
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>>94237024
Nah, I work at a warehouse. Everybody here's either meth'd out or insane.
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>>94233015
I haven't been here in a while, how many authors are we down to now? I see Surinical's still making slop.
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>>94237239
CYOAG belongs to ItalicsGOD now. The Eternal Delay starts now.
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>>94237239
might as well head to reddit, the new bastion of cyoas
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>>94237239
Authors who post oc and shut up? Or "authors" who just come here to beg for crumbs of attention?
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>>94237239
We have many authors
>>94237313
Try not to sound so jealous catto faggot
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>>94237313
You are worse than any "author" you are insulting by avatarfagging and spamming the same pictures. Kill yourself.
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>>94237313
Authors who are recognized and respected figures and pillars upholding /cyoag/ superiority like back in the SDA days. If you're not making yourself known you're contributing to reddit's overtaking and continued downfall of cyoag
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>>94237348
>If you're not making yourself known you're contributing to reddit's overtaking and continued downfall of cyoag
I keep saving cyoag with every post! You're welcome :)
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>>94237386
I don't even know who you are.
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>>94237353
Absolute kino. Dragonfall stans are in absolute shambles now
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>>94237348
SDA was an annoying piece of shit and we should all be glad he's gone forever.
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>>94237401
c'mon tok, make it atleast a little less obvious
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>>94237348
>Authors who are recognized and respected figures and pillars upholding /cyoag/ superiority
Italics...unironically
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>>94237388
He is a jealous author that didn't make it in the CYOAG free market.
Hell even Tok and Aro managed to survive here.
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>>94237410
Every author hated sda, not just tok.
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>>94237443
Heh, reddit invaders and tok stans re-writing history
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>>94237451
Name an author who didn't then.
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>>94237443
Except Italics
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>>94237454
Who cares what other authors think, cyoag loved him
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>>94237464
I think he's been gone too long and you've forgotten the enormous shitposting asshole he became.
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>>94237470
Well he is white and a quasi-redditor.
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Rolled 205, 199, 72 = 476 (3d255)

>>94237353
>Digestive system for meat
>Digestive system for royalty
>Respiratory system
>Mouth with sharp teeth and long tongue
>Mouth with tongue that speaks mortal languages
>Mouth with acid breath
>Brain
>Eye x2
>Ear x2
>Neck
>Nose
>Tail
>A layer of scales, made of steel
>Male reproductive organs
>Soul
>Dwarves are inclined to obey you out of fear
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>>94237545
>#cdc748 moderate yellow
Surprisingly it wasn't far off the color in the image
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>>94237353
>Digestive system for plants -1p
>Digestive system for gold -2p
>Respiratory system -1p
>Mouth with fire breath -2p
>Mouth with sonic breath x4 -12p
>Brain -1p
>Eye -1p
>Ear -1p
>Neck -1p
>Wing x2 -2p
>Tail -1p

I eat plants and live away from civilization. I don't need the respect of mortals, so eating plants is fine.
Unlike fire breath, my sonic breath doesn't cause forest fires so it doesn't damage the plants I need to eat.
I may not be on speaking on terms with mortal races, but with 5 heads worth of destruction I can take from them however much gold I want.
I don't need smell to locate plants, so nose is unnecessary.
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>>94237470
Wait for the inevitable for the Tok version.
>"Tokhaar Gol? Yeah I remember, nice guy who made cool dragon cyoas, the real underdog of the thread"
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>>94237599
forgot to roll
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>>94237610
Whi is the real underdog author?
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>>94237648
Husanon.
He released his OC and was shitted on by moralfags yet he is still here and wants to improve with his next one.
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I'm so bored in current cyoag.
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>>94237654
Italics-sisters... it's over
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>>94237648
Aro she has been releasing OC for years yet misogynists keep shitting on her relentlesly yet she is still here and wants to improve all her previous works.
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>>94237678
What? Anons arent shitting on me because i'm a woman, it's because i'm cringe and it's their nature to shit.
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>>94237678
Has a girl ever made a single high quality popular cyoa? Not being mysoggynees just asking
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>>94237353
soul, male organs, scales of metal.
tail, wing x2, limb x4, neck, nose, ear x2, eye x2.
brain, respiratory, digestive for meat, tongue for languages, mouth with fire breath, plant digestive system.
Damn wanted to take more eyes, but I guess we don't get many points.
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>>94237693
Anything Highlander or Aro ever made.
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>>94237693
Aro unironically.
She is yet to surpass her own villian CYOA
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>>94237454
if they use a name they aren't a real cyoag author
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To be honest, I never regretted making Entropist... Why you might ask? Well I kind of singlehandedly killed ALL CYOA genres! by making Entropist since now every CYOA ever will be compared to Entropist and I we all know Entropist is peak. Every CYOA ever after would be a pale shadow in comparison so why would anyone want to make a CYOA ever again? I feel HAPPY today... I am a god author above god authors and made the best cyoa ever.....
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>>94237792
>Well I kind of singlehandedly killed ALL CYOAG
It was dead long ago.
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>>94237792
>I am a god author above god authors and made the best cyoa ever
Anduin...
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>>94237792
True. All other authors kneeled. All anons seethed. The one true god.
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>>94237353
>Name:
Narziboros the Wanderer

Digestive system for plants
Digestive system for lava
Respiratory system
Mouth with sharp teeth and long tongue
Mouth with lightning breath
Mouth with fire breath
Mouth with Acid Breath
mouth with tongue that speaks mortal languages
Brain
Eyes*2
Nose
Neck
Tail
Male reproductive organs
Soul*2
A layer of scales, made out of mythril (I will assume it costs double)

Luv' me fighten
Luv' me fuckin
Luv' me warm lava

Hate gobos
Not racist just hate them
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To be honest sometimes I regret not making my WIP... Why you might ask? Well I kind of singlehandedly killed ALL my determination by not making my WIP since now every CYOA ever will be compared to my unfinished WIP in my head and I think my WIP is shit. Every CYOA ever after would be a pillar of light in comparison so why would anyone want me to make my WIP? I feel AWFUL today... I am a worm author below worm authors (even the ones who make Worm CYOAs) and failed to finish the shortest WIP ever.....
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>>94237856
Do it anon, I believe in you
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>>94237856
>I am a worm author below worm authors
Italics...
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If you ever posted your WIP. You are not a real author. You are just an attentionwhore.
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If you ever posted your OC. You are not a real author. You are just an attentionwhore.
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>>94237906
You are right.
I'm not worthy of forgiveness.
I'll stop making OC and leave in shame.
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>>94237906
Hi aroseetheranon! Nice to see you, how have you been?
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Deh deh deh deh deh DEH. Deh deh deh deh deh deh. Deh deh deh deh deh.
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If you ever posted vids of your skydiving, you aren't a real adrenaline junkie, you're just an attentionwhore.
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>>94237906
What if you release OC first before WIP
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Not joking.
What do you guys actually think of WIP posting or even active development with the thread like what Hus and Aro do?
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>>94237961
I do not care.
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>>94237961
Everyone already did it before. Aro is just extra annoying because she makes 1 new image and comes here to post it. Like, bitch, can you at least wait until you have an entire page to come ask for feedback?
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>>94237961
Nigga shut the fuck up
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>>94237934
>Instantly thinks of aromage when it was not even mentioned and other authors like italics have been doing it for longer
I think this says more about you than anything else, lmao.
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>>94237962
You starting a chain of shitposting was funny.
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>Mommy can we have skibidi toilet?
>We have skikidi toilet at home!
>Skibidi toilet at home:
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>>94238010
Nah, it was because he said 'attentionwhore' with no space in between the two words, which is a dead giveaway.
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>>94237961
I think posting WIP is fine if your CYOA is +10 pages long. If its less, just make it man, and then update it later if something came out shitty.
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>>94237906
I regret releasing a WIP. I became one of those imbecile "oh I can't release my CYOA, the positive comments were too scary..." anons I used to rage against.
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>>94238033
Truly a fate worse than death
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>>94237962
I don't get it
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>>94238066
It's tok seething.
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>>94237353
tokbros been quiet since this dropped...
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>>94235969
> The qualities of a thing ARE that thing.
Of course. And since my clone doesn't share the quality of 'experiencing whatever I experience' with me, we are not in fact the same thing.
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>>94238010
Italics been making CYOAs for this general for over a decade. He's slow but he releases content to keep this place afloat. Shut your mouth talking shit about him WIP posting when he earned it.
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>>94237353
Digestion (Meat, Royalty)
Respiratory System
Mouth that speaks
Brain
Eye x2
Ear x2
Nose
Neck
Limb x4
Male Reproductive Organs
Soul
High Elves obey out of awe

I'm basically just a giant funny coloured human. I'll go find some elves to rule over, and convince any dying elven royalty not to let their deaths go to waste.
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>>94238110
>He earned it
No one earns shit, retard. Stop glorifying powerpoint presentation creators.
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I have beed watching some medieval stuff and I want to give a character a peasant accent I dunno if it would be cringe to add it tho.
She would speak like this.
"I'm all by meself me lord. Please give me a chance to prove meself your fellow told me I have a knack for sorcery but I got no clue what I'm doing."
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>>94236461
>You guys really, really sleeping on the "you get smarter & stronger magically" part of The Gamer.
It doesn't give enough benefits at the start. The ones I rated at the top are both immediately useful and have growth potential. Gamer is all in on growth when you're being thrown into a strange land with no safety net and relies on you killing a ton of things that are either almost as strong as you or stronger to benefit from it. It's not bad but nowhere close to being the best pick.
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>>94238248
If you go this route, I recommend this-
>"ye olde" instead of "the"
>thee/thine instead of "you/yours"
>addressing listener as "yer lordship" or "yer majesty"
>having an extra "e" at the end of words that end in d or y, such as "friende" or "sorcerye"
>using short sentences and monosyllabic grammar, around six words or under
It could be kino, you've just got to remember that the dialect is fundamentally not modern and doesn't follow today's conventions.
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>>94238235
Objectively wrong. If one puts work into the foundation and maintenance of a hobby they and others enjoy over years of earn led credit. If you don't like CYOAs or this hobby, go to another thread. Because right now, you know what you sound like? You sound like a bitch. So sit down.
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>>94237961
Not bad, but It does ruin the surprise a bit.
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>>94238248
It's cringe if you don't put any effort in. Read some Chaucer and look up the wikipedia article for thee and thou pronouns.
>I got no clue what I'm doing
indeed`
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>>94237353
Your response, Tok?
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>>94238330
I agree, the surprise of brand new, shiny OC is always a bit diminished by prior WIP posting. I think this is somewhat minor in relation to discussion of the WIP, but seeing direct images does lessen the unexpected fun factor to a degree. Sudden OC in an otherwise normal thread is a lot like having a present dropped in your lap, as opposed to seeing it weeks ahead of time and hearing the details to the point of exhausting any suspense save a dull anticipation.
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>>94238347
see here >>94237962
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>>94238296
Very interesting
>>thee/thine instead of "you/yours"
I was under the impression this was a bit higher class like
"unsheathe thine blade you swine, for I shall defend mine lady's honor!"

>>94238333
>>I got no clue what I'm doing
>indeed`
:(
But it does seem to require more knowledge than I thought.
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>>94238366
You were right. "You" is more polite than "thou", which is more informal. However, in your own example it'd be
>unsheathe thine blade, swine that thou art, for my lady's honour I shall defend
"mine" is only used before a vowel in the same way "an" is only used before a vowel
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>>94238366
It is higher class but, if a peasant is addressing a noble, a noble's servant, or scion of a noble house, they're almost certain to use higher class of dialect than usual. Another issue is that our knowledge of peasant speech is fairly minor as most of it wasn't recorded and plays, manuscripts and so forth were written in the educated dialect, which means most of what we can do is attempt to approximate peasant-speak. It isn't too complicated to make dialogue sound old-timey. The easiest method for it, I've found, is to write modern speech and then edit it to fit the medieval vernacular afterward.
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>>94238381
>>unsheathe thine blade, swine that thou art, for my lady's honour I shall defend
That's really good me freind.

>>94238395
So I could just replace let's say all the uses of "you" with "thou" as the other anon said.
After writing it normally.
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>>94238423
You could, yes. I recommend breaking sentences up into smaller, simpler sentences and using body language for emphasis, where possible, if you're trying to convey a sense of peasanthood.
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>>94237353
better than dragonflop,Tok utterly btfo
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>>94234150
Gamer. Just slaughter everything to win.
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>>94238499
basado. gamer is for REAL adventurers
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>>94238033
One day, maybe not by the same anons, but the work will be complete...
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>>94233015
Not playing this because I would never EVER sell my soul.
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>>94238552
Would you be willing to loan it? I can give you a competitive rate in gummy bears.
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>>94238590
Nope
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>>94235212
rolling... Even if the Dragonfall anon is shitposting, I do hope you make more longer CYOAs someday. Your other work always looks good and reads well, and the settings are creative/varied. I think the one with the monsters and the options to assimilate/destroy/control was yours - that was cool
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>>94238626
Feh! You'll come to regret this, human.
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>>94238641
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>>94238646
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>>94238651
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>>94238641
This CYOA was a lot of fun. I'm glad to see it be reposted.
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900 seconds to post.... wtf is going on? do we have an alternative to 4chan since this website has gotten increasingly worse?
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>>94238641
>Bliss
>Dread
>Simmering
>Distaste
>Rage
>Nostalgia
All in all a solid combination
>>94238663
I think so too - sometime I'll do another round of drawing cards for anons here
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>>94238705
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>>94238024
Mind broken
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>>94238708
Sorry, meant to write Mindbroken.
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>>94238674
Ah, you're finally ready to go home.
Let's go back together.
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>>94238720
Even worse than I thought
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>>94238737
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Eat the scalie taint Tok
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>>94238797
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>>94237792
He was too powerful...
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>>94237792
Black Magic was better.
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>>94238788
>Sub-Species: Draconic Spider (Roll: 4) [+150 Mana]

>Abilities [+2000 Mana]:
Flight [-300 Mana]
Scales [-300 Mana]
Horns [-200 Mana]
Dextrous Tail [-100 Mana]
Momentous [-150 Mana]
Elemental Affinity (Earth) [-400 Mana]
Mana Breathing [-50 Mana]
Form Change [-300 Mana]
Telepathy [-100 Mana]
Draconic Aging [-500 Mana]

>Items:
Mana For Dummies [-100 Mana]
Outfit [-50 Mana]

>Associates:
Contract Wizard [-200 Mana]

>Challenges:
Enemy (Escaped Slave) [+250 Mana]
Enemy (Helper Golem) [+100 Mana]
Your Precious [Challenge]
War Zone [+250 Mana]
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>>94238947
>the greatest CYOA ever formed by human hands is better than someone's first attempt
This should be no surprise to anyone
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>>94236461
>Spirit of Knowledge is kinda dogshit?
Considering this is a fantasy world he probably knows the location of some forgotten superweapons or something.
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>>94237792
Such power... and on the first attempt too. This must be why other authors grew jealous. They had YEARS and yet they were not able to ever produce something like that.
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>>94238645
>feh
Its over
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>>94238953
You know i dont think ive seen spider picked when ive seen this posted last
Babby shelob familiar sounds cool too
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>>94237792
>filters everyone
>still gets a gazillion builds
>still talked about to this day
The strongest
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>>94238788
>Subspecies
Draconic Fae. Because I don't plan to be a world shattering super god dragon, and magic aimed at illusions and stuff sounds awesome. Not being a meat-craving monster (as much as a normal dragon I guess) means I can probably keep my head down and go unnoticed.
>Abilities
>Scales (200)
Probably necessary since I don't feel like getting squished.
>Mana Stone (350)
Anything to boost the Spellcasting. Sounds good.
>Momentous (500)
Let's not kid around, I'm not going to have a fucking clue on how to be a dragon.
>Aura (700)
I'd probably go for a lawful sort of aura, exude a lawful good sense. Should help people trust me.
>Form Change (1000)
Essential so that I can become a human. Well, mostly a human, anyways. Still, essential.
>Draconic Aging [1500]
I didn't really get what this means, but, like, whatever. I'll live longer right? Gimme.
>Items
>Mutt Making Mixture (2000)
This is the essential part of my decision here. The Magnum Opus. I'm going to fuck every, single, woman I can find of whatever fertile age (see: probably 7 to 25) and breed them. Knock them up. Fill them with my seed. I will spread an eternal legacy across the world and eventually I will spread my own spawn, my kin, across it endlessly.
>Associates
I'm out of points, so none.
>Challenges
>You're Precious (1850)
Oh, I can get extra points. Sure. I'll take this one. It'll make me more attractive anyways.
>Breathless (1600)
Actually, this one, too. I won't be needing it.

Since I have extra points
>Outfit (1650)
I want to look like a dashing, charming handsome hero.
>Escaped Slave (1900)
The first target of my wooing I guess. Maybe the queen of my harem. Maybe make her a dragonkin, why not.
>Spirit Guide (2000)
I guess I'll take this. Doesn't matter much to me, but points need to be spent.

Expect me to quickly try and find a human or humanoid settlement that won't try to kill/capture me and start building my harem.
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>>94239228
> Worm is still discussed 8 years after its release
OK, I'll check this general in 2032. Y'all better keep Entropist discussion alive until then.
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>>94239236
>I'm going to fuck every, single, woman I can find of whatever fertile age (see: probably 7 to 25) and breed them. Knock them up. Fill them with my seed. I will spread an eternal legacy across the world and eventually I will spread my own spawn, my kin, across it endlessly.
I fear bloodline curses too much to do this.
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>>94239248
Just turn the curse into a woman and fuck it into submission.
That's my favorite type of magic - "Turn anything into a woman and bend them to your will". Stub your toe on a table? Turn it into a young lass and ravish her for such insolence.
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>>94239236
Reads like amateur writing. Disgusting. Kill yourself.
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>>94239258
lol
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>>94239258
Jealousy is unbecoming of you, Anon.
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>>94239246
>He thinks he is going to survive world war 3
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>>94235392
lmao
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I'm excited about the evil faction creator CYOA that one anon is working on. I bet it will enthrall the /cyoag/ for a month once it drops.
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>>94239637
>Making a faction of lolis that kidnap innocent men to throw into the breeding chambers to birth more lolis
The horrors the world will witness...
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>>94236514
>>94236677
i don't understand why someone would find this amazing or surprising. is it not the same as recognizing any artist by the style of the art piece?
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>>94239645
Is this how husanons think?
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>>94239729
>husanons
>think
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>>94239729
whats a husanons
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None of you are beating the fraud allegations with such inferior builds
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>>94240024
>beating
>allegations
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>>94239729
Correct that's how they think and operate they want to drive women into extinction until there is only men and lolis in the world...
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>>94237792
Absolutely based. All CYOAs about necromancy are kino by definition and Entropist is among the best of them.
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>>94235212
>>94235212
> Apprehension, Dismay, Wistfulness, Vindication
Apprehension is by far the best card, since by setting your sensor to 'papercut', then giving yourself one in the future if e.g. stock go up.
Dismay lets you establish an outer loop over save scumming over the inner loop of Apprehension save scumming. Stuff you gained (ex: skills, technologies invented (you won the stock market, remember?),...) in these timelines can be regained with 500% efficiency via Wistful/Vindicated ('the cancer cure I lost in that timeline' & 'the injustice of cancer-cure not being invented').

Cool cyoa, hard to get more than one good combo into a build. Also, I like the art.
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>>94235212
>the tiniest fucking font
no
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>>94237792
Aroxisters, our response?????
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>>94240450
it's not a tiny font, the cyoa is just too wide
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>>94237792
it was a shit cyoa because it chose a completely shit theme and aesthetic, sorry

get better taste and make another cyoa, maybe it'll be good next time
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>>94240551
Oh, you are correct...
Does Surinical expect everyone to have 50" monitors or something? Fuck sake
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>>94235212
Boring, generic premise (cosmic voodoo BS), but interesting presentation, so why not

>Outrage (Disgust + Anger)
Slowly but surely end the world's problems by causing a physical revolution in the world and a mental revolution in the minds of humans
>Mockery (Disgust + Happiness)
Isolate the rot to prevent it from spreading so that it can destroyed more easily
>Melancholy (Peace + Sadness)
Improves ability to identify problems and devise solutions for them
>Repugnance (Surprise + Disgust)
Allows me to root out problems in power more easily

Goal: Create a new, better world by molding the way people view, think about, and treat each other until there is no more oppression and inequality and all humans can be free and able to pursue happiness.
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>>94240601
cyoa making is a low skill entry barrier sort of hobby, so you have retards reinventing the wheel all the time and making really bad decisions that have been solved 10+ years ago
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>>94240555
That's right he should've made a cyoa based on a famous setting like Magic the Gathering if he wanted it to be successful.
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>>94240826
>A gun
>A house

Dogs are in the general case essentially worthless, you can just pick one up at an animal shelter for free.
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>>94240826
>Gun
>Dog
Let's see the other 13
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>>94238674
it's just 1 time and then you get the cookie. actually, i wonder if there's a way to save the cookie.
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>>94240963
and if i block cookies/clear them because i want to minimize tracking? "nah bro just 15 minutes every time" fuck that, subhuman tier website design
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I feel an immense urge to use Archer as a character for Luminary.
But I'm already getting complains for using too many fate characters, damn...
He's just too damn cool.
Another option would be to use Dimitri from 3 houses.
I could even use both but they both give me similar vibes of a servant of Arany that becomes disillusioned.
Or I could use a happier looking version to make them parallels of similar yet opposing points of view.
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>>94241014
Actual retard.
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>>94241232
illiterate shill
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>>94241251
Not beating the retard allegations.
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>>94241410
shills don't understand logic so i'm not going to bother explaining it again, assuming you're even literate enough to read this
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Retardery is more than just a crippling medical condition; it is a way of life, and a vision for the future. Retards have my unconditional support. I would gladly sacrifice my life to advance the progress of retardery.
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>>94241436
Still not beating the retard allegations.
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>>94240812
I arrive in Canada so they speak English, and it's cold enough that I can dress to hide my elf ears. And the police and secret services in Canada should be more polite and less nosy, and with fewer resources. The elf's many hundreds years of lifespan seems like almost the same as indefinite lifespan, because at that point either technology has cured aging, or we'll all be dead of some all-consuming catastrophe. Joining any of the 3 lineages would get me wrapped up in some shady hierarchy, maybe it's easier to stay unnoticed if nobody knows what I am.
+9
Elven -1
Bloated Spirit -1
Ally -1
Estate -1
Circlet -1
Wizardry -2
Cloak -2
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>>94240812
Bloated Spirit
Ally
Circlet
Deathless
Multi-Lich
Wizardry

Time to show those uppity vampires and werewolves the power of lich master race.
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>>94240812
>Bloated Spirit
>Ally
>Estate
>Vampire
>Wizardry
>Beckoning

I have everything that directly boosts my magic, and ally/estate gives me the time and resources needed to grow properly.
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>>94241211
>But I'm already getting complains for using too many fate characters, damn...
Just do it. Everyone already knows you are a fate nerd anyways.
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>>94240826
Waiting for the 100 page lore document and the remake that adds 1 image (a powerpoint texture from the 2000s that conveys nothing about the option).
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>>94240453
Shut up, tokxister. You will never be a real arochad
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>>94241957
I don't wanna be a "arochad". That freak has a clit to tit ratio that makes her clit big enough to be called a Chad
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>>94235744
>I recall Ulsterand Italics himself explaining how modern mages are lazy and has begun to incorporate reason into their magic, using already established methods rather than developing their own.
Yeah, it's talked about in the original release of Magi Case in Ulster and Avicenna's profiles, Mages no longer making up faulty reason for spells to happen and using modern specific terms and understandings to speedrun results for spells and forgoing the old traditional practices like the Nightingale Auctor because it's easier to understand (nkt vague or sound dumb to a modern person) (reason) and allows more speciality.

I plan on elaborating on it more in Redux hence why Foundations exists as choice options for you guys. Since a lot of peoppe wanted the magic system to be further elaborated on.
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>>94242268a
How many years do we have to wait for nonbeta version of Magi Case?
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>>94242268
Is there going to be something more than just pick your clan in terms of picking magic choices?
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>>94242268
The weakest author
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Hilarious. Italics saying he is done with magi case and leaving it for the end, but because no one cares about the rest of his shit, now he has to post WIP of redux to get his attentionfix. lmao
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>>94242309
In terms od magic choices the Redux Version of Magi Case inclides:

1. Impact Events - These are scenarios you went through in your life before or during being an Investigator. It is separates in General and Clan specific with special rewards for some like becoming an Ancestor (Immortal Martial Artist), Materialized Body (Robotic-Magic powered body like Ford, Telos, etc.), Internalized Leylines, True Lichdom, Vampirism, Obtaining a Holy Relic, going to a mage college, etc.

2. Equipment - Items and Equipment pool is now divided into multiple categories. You will take items from each category Personal Equipment is filled with a bunch of magical items. There is a special section for Relics only and what they do and what taking one entails for you.

3. Familiars - There will be Familiar companions for you to take if you took the choice for them.

4. Foundations - Already explained.

5. Magic System - A better description for each type of magic, their possibilities and limits, and example of their deviancies and what a basic to advance to master spell looks like.
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>>94242363
Who are you talking to?
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Rolled 55, 63, 75, 30, 27, 25 = 275 (6d100)

>>94235212
I'll look at my results in the morning.
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>>94241847
She didn't make it, someone just put the text stuff in a jpg.



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