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>>94276608Orange juice for browsing, hot coffee for writing builds.
>>94276608>TQ
>>94276608>Do you eat or drink when reading or making builds for CYOAs? If yes, what?No because my hands are busy
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>>94276632I'm drinking it right now.And semi-working on an image build (mostly lazing off).>>94276608Dr Pepper and salmon fillet, right now.
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>>94276691>Tok is making yet another tranny build
>>94276710and slopingical is making more slop. What else is new?
I went through all the recommanded cyoas with good companions last thread >Nexus gatewayFairly average. None of them truly stand out and because of the nature of planeswalking as a genre, they all seem to be from disjointed universes and don't really help build a coherent picture of the world.>Evoker's oathThis one uses companions pretty smartly with the pact system. This makes them extremely engaging compared to the average cyoa. However they don't really help paint a clear picture of the world in my opinion. Still pretty great ones>In the wake of dawnI'm of two minds when it comes to this one. On one hand, I really like how they are tailor made for certain origins and truly help build the backstory of your own character. However the main issue is that it does railroad you a lot when it comes to which companion you are or aren't allowed to pick up. But it's a great system.>like a rising dragonI like that in this one they're all wildcards that have valid reasons for siding with or against you. Where it falls short is in how few of them there are. >Death is but a momentFairly short but the fact that it gets reposted so often shows how good it is. If you don't kill Indra you're a retard.>My computerJesus christ
Original bait, but not really that good. I give you a 7.5/10
How much math should be in a cyoa?
>>94276906I hate maths
>>94276906quick maths
>>94276608Looking for a cyoa where a demon is trying to offer you deals no on wants.
>>94276906Use whole numbers only.
Define "Slop"
Italics here.Quick serious question. What type of topics, mysteries, horrors and other enigmas would you guys like to see appear or discussed more in the form of companions, items or other choices in the Magi Case? I already have what I want loaded so I might as well pull what you guys would like.
>>94277039Overused word around here. Used to be used for pill pickers or anything below a certain page and production level. Now its just used for whatever anons dont like.
>>94277084cringe
>>94277080I want a scat companion that is master feces manipulator. His gaze alone should be able to make people shit themselves.
>>94277080Nigga make a new cyoa
>>94277111But, Draco Titus Edo is a player character. I can't just copy and paste that.
>>94277080iirc I got a very confusing picture of the Magi continent, more on that would be good. It's central to the setting, I felt it was a shortcoming of the cyoa to leave it so underdescribed. Dunno how well that's presentable within companion profiles. Both top-down views (eg how many people live in what clan's district) and descriptions of daily life there (the parts that differ from daily life in normal countries). Especially how regular stuff like public transportation etc might be different due to magic.
I'm still looking for that hero cyoa where you pick an archtype like knight, gunslinger, superhero, detective, or samurai. Does anyone remember what I'm talking about?
>>94277080Spellcheck
>>94277080Some mystery that make you go in Anti-Magi territory itself would be nice. Or a magic cat that belongs to your family since a few generations.Items that makes sense for dectectives, like a magnifying glass that tracks mana or a trenchcoat with infinite pockets.Your own shadow as a companion.
Reminder that none of the suggestions you make will be addressed in Magi Case. Italics is creating engagement to build hype that isn't going to release for another 2 years.
>italics here!>Still talking about a cyoa I said I am not going to release before all my other 5 WIP>Btw, none of those 5 wip are coming this year either
>>94277263Who is the pic?
>>94277269Etna
>>94277250He could not get his attention fix from his other WIP. Now he is back to farm magi case even when he previously stated he had gotten what he wanted from that cyoa and was going to focus on other things instead.
>>94276742I mostly agree although you're supposed to go full skeleton in death is but a moment
>>94277280Italics hereCorrect. I've lost motivation to work on these projects but I miss the attention and praise. I want people to keep talking about my work to give my life meaning.
>>94277344Luminarybros...
>>94277344Its okay, italics. Join the arocord and you can get all the praise you want there.
>>94277193Yeah. I recieved criticisms on lack of locations so I decided to make a map of locations in the CYOA. As for descriptions can be done because the CYOA features many lower ranking family members.>>94277208Anti-Magi will take a bigger role in Redux since people are interested in them and their operations.>Or a magic cat that belongs to your family since a few generations.Familiars?>>94277263>noneSo like how Magi Case was not supposed to release this year?>>94277250>>94277280You guys have issues.>>94277344This is shitposting.
>anons literally admitting to being attention whores nowi knew all this discussion about "authors" was artificially induced by the authors themselves
>>94277406>So like how Magi Case was not supposed to release this year?lmao, this defense is so shit when it was supposed to release years ago and kept getting delayed. You even failed your own dates, retard.
>t0k begs for attention with his shitty image builds>shitalics begs for attention with his shitty forever wipsSad!
>Italics was the italics defender all alongObvious.
>>94277406>So like how Magi Case was not supposed to release this year?You released it half assed and unfinished. Too busy caught up in lore and companions you left the CYOA part of it unfinished, riddled with errors and a magic system left in it's concept stage.
>>94277459Although the spelling mistakes were really funny.
>>94277459>You released it half assed and unfinishedThe Magi Case was not unfinished. Where did you pull this from?>magic system left in it's concept stage.The Magic System turned out fine and people liked it instead of a long drawn out spell section.>left the CYOA part of itThe CYOA has the CYOA part. What are you trying to argue?
If you update your CYOA it is unfinished.
>>94277484Toklings...please don't look...
>>94276608Post every clown cyoa NOW! please.
>>94277484shit take, feedback can change your view on things and one of the biggest problems of being creative with something is perspective
>>94277504That's retarded.
>>94277484But how can I milk attention with the same CYOA constantly if I don't keep updating it!?
>>94277478>people liked it instead of a long drawn out spell sectionIs that why you are changing it for redux?
>>94277504Back to the kitchen.
>>94277478>No explanation to what counts as basic and advance magic when it's mentioned throughout the CYOA>item choices are garbage and don't make sense. Italics admitted it needed rework. >Too few cases and detective work>Purpose of Redux is to fix these issues while an additional DLC is to be made>DLC canceled and said to be merged with REDUX Incomplete and rushed
>>94277478Then what is the point of REDUX
Italics hereI panicked and rushed to put Magi Case out because people would not stop making fun of me. I'm now trying to correct my mistakes with Redux but the task has become too big for me to handle and I want to do other projects. I don't want to lose your attention either so please, keep looking forward to my work and I will try to get it out in 2 years but I might give up on Magi Case.
>>94277493No such thing
>>94277547Add in additional content, fix errors, and redesign the appearance of the CYOA.
Italics here.I lust for your children.
>>94277574I believe in you, italics! Thanks for the honesty.
>>94277583Thank you.
>>94277581>fix errors, and redesign the appearance of the CYOAI thought it was not rushed? Why were there so many errors? why was the design not good enough from the start?
Damn the shitposting and being a hater is rampant more than usual.
Damn the damage control is rampant more than usual.
>>94277406>Yeah. I recieved criticisms on lack of locations so I decided to make a map of locations in the CYOA. As for descriptions can be done because the CYOA features many lower ranking family members.Maps are great. Also put in pictures of weird architecture, magical everyday appliances, anything that distinguishes it already on a visual level from just living in the US.
>>94277603Honestly makes me consider not posting my OC for this halloween, its going to be nothing but hate probably
>>94277624You're absolutely right. /trash/ will be more appreciative even if it's SFW
>>94277624Filtered
>>94277636shit attitude, there's nothing left to filter, no ones posting OC anymore
>>94277624It depends a lot on what your track record as an author is. Those who are getting shit on the most have (usually) worked hard to piss of the thread.
>>94277648>t. filtered
>>94277624Holiday-oriented cyoas tend to get little interest, even at the holidays themselves. I think part of it is that they're inherently less immersive, "Look at me, I'm a holiday-themed product!" like some holiday-themed ads and shelves they put out for the holiday in a supermarket. If you care about the audience appreciation, put that effort into other kinds of cyoas.
>>94277603It's so easy to sway public opinions and discourage since anons are looking for reasons to hate anything. I'm Tok btw
>>94277670Anon, what do you think the level of author is someone that is making a halloween cyoa, and then would not post it because some random on the internet was being mean to someone else.
Seeing this general shit on a lying author so hard is why I am going to post my Halloween OC.
>>94277707That's the spirit
How to be a good author >Post OC>Lurk responses and take notes>Post update>Never interact with the community
>>94276906Nothing beyond basic arithmeticMost anons are incapable of basic multiplication or algebra regardless of ageUnless its a math based cyoa, in which go wild with your theme but expect only a niche offering of responses
>>94277195I want to shoot superman while wearing chainmail, so please shares
>>94277790This right here is the only way
>>94277195Was it Heroine's Hero?https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/1d6vj7z/h2_heroines_hero/
>>94277914An unexpected update is better than an expected one. Bitches love surprises and hate disappointment.
>>94277195This is why you need to occasionally repost your cyoas btw, no one remembers this cyoa so it might as well not exist
>>94277886>basic multiplication or algebra regardless of ageThis is extremely easy though, especially now where you can open your calculator in two clicks and learn it on your own. I think you underestimate retards here.
>>94278085Theres alot of laziness and a surplus of chromosomes hereMake no mistake
>>94276906IMO authors should try to avoid making the player round numbers. Can't always be helped, but rounding makes the cyoa less elegant.
>>94276906filter mathlets
>>94278215why would you filter yourself, anon?
>write all numbers in base 3 to filter mathlets>xtreme jpeg compression & tiny text to filter eyelets>begin the cyoa with a 10k word intro block to filter readletsWho else? What -lets need be filtered?
>>94278274who will play it?
>>94278279Polymath ants with glasses, as God intended.
>>94278274Write it in Chinese to filter everyone here.
>>94278274>overly complicated to filter logiclets>lots of unnecessary stuff to keep track of to filter memorylets>requires you to make something in photoshop/paint to filter the worklets
>>94278313Be honest. Did ANYONE except the author actually read through the whole thing and make a build?
>>94277493T-Tok-sama...
>>94278313SLOPPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
The * were already FILTERING everyone in entropist, lmao.
>>94278346When v1 was posted, the turbo nerds of cyoag complained about the spelling errors.
>>94278369Oh no! They did not accept my mediocre attempt at a gimmick!
>>94278363It was... an interesting choice. I am glad he saw it was a mistake, what a shame it was already too late. At least the next one will have normal numbers
>>94278363Everyone was playing Entropist at one point, so most anons apparently can follow that brand of maths.
>>94278274>>begin the cyoa with a 10k word intro block to filter readletsName 3 CYOAs that actually do this. Name me 1 author ffs.No, Travelers Tale doesn't count that's pdf shit.
>>94278390>EveryoneThree dudes.
>>94278363* 1/100 soul** 1/10 soul*** 1 soul**** 10 soul***** 100 soul****** 1,000 soul******* 10,000 soul******** 100,000 soulEasy peasy
>>94278444This cyoa filtered me so hard.
>>9427840810k words was a comedic exaggeration. PR's intro is on the longer side, but it might be ~1k words (and it's actually engagingly written so it's fine).
>>94278444I want to see a complete build for this
>>94278477>engaging writingIt wasn't contrarian poster
>>94278455The same could be said for anything else and it would still be annoying and unnecessary
>>94278444https://imgchest.com/p/vj4jrvjey8mIn case anyone wants to check out the cyoa.
>>94278517I wish these kinds of cyoas would pre-emptively filter me at the first page so I don't waste time reading the long intro.
>Italics promised an Echoes video game.Hahahaha
>>94278446well duh, that's the exact population of this general
>>94278444F-filterer-sama...I may learn a hundred lifetimes but I will never reach your power level...
>>94278557>(You)>Tokctalics>Aromage
>>94278566KILL THEM ALL
>>94278363IMO it was fine, though he should have started from 1 instead of 0.01.
>>94278444This is just autism.
>>94278581oh Tokctalics your so funny
>>94278595you forgot that discordthot
>>94278590Isn't everything in this thread?
There are two types of Italics fans.
>>94278590Supreme and Unrivaled autism.
>>94278742>There are two types of Italics fans.pedophiles and furries
>>94278742>two types of Italics fansThose here for the lore, and those here for the waifus.>what about b-No overlap.
>>94278742Now change the bottom one to be a happy evocofag with his monstergirls.
By god, why are people still pretending that magi case is popular
>>94278759Great Fox from Lamentation combines both furry lolihag.
>>94278797Italics makes his own memes to try and hype shit
>>94278797Magi Case is a popular CYOA. Why are you malding?
>>94278750Look at this autism. He even took a png of a magic hat and overlayed it on top of her. This... IS TRUE AUTISM
>>94278742I'm the topI don't care about weeb lore
>>94278872So long as you're not one of the hypeniggers it's all good.
>>94278444I wish I could read whatever the title is supposed to be.
>>94278942"Da Class and Skill Plates Section"
>>94278797Because there's no other OC to talk about. Unless you want to bring up danmachi again to make that one anon seethe. That's be fun.
>>94278742I like how Magi Case hates Aryans.
>>94278961We should bring up less known OCs like Dragonfall.
>>94278970blacktalics...
>>94279008Yes let's do that
>>94278970How so? The CYOA dicks sucks them to high heaven and features 2 living Aryans
>>94279065Because Aryans are depicted as greedy, power hungry child abusers depicted in a negative light of being a cult that inevitably risked fucking up reality through tricking Creation. The dick sucking has not been depicted as a good thing but rather an obsessive cult.
Hey guys how does this format look for the Family members for Ultimate God? Is there anything major missing that you'd want to know or don't need to know about this character?
>>94279216Boob size
>>94279269Variable due to shapeshifting.
>>94279216Is the top block of text meant to be lower quality and blurry?
>>94279282Oh i put a glow on the text, i can take it off. Also, is changing the font style for the first block to be different from the rest of the cyoa important for immersion or differentiating the text, or is it just more distracting and lowers the overall quality.
>>94279281how open is she to changing her boob size to meet my preference?
>>94279355She'll be annoyed but will do it eventually.
>>94279301I'd try a different color glow, font or make it italized. Right now it's as if I have my glasses off.
>>94279409I'll try it with italics then, thanks.
>>94279126>nooo it's wrong to be power hungry.>nooo you just cannot abuse the heckin kidaronooos>no you just can'5 fuck with reality for your dreams.>all of this is negativeWhat you smokin fr fr?
>>94279443>I'll try "it" with Italics, thanks.Cute ship.
Aromage is one of the more difficult authors to analyze. I have not enjoyed any of Aro's works but I'm not quite sure why. Sure, there's some overly long blocks of text, but Planeswalker Rising began with one and it was fine. The visuals are too baroque and overdesigned, but Tankista's are even more so and yet I'm fine with those.I blame noone else in this, it is my understanding that is lacking. Were I more wise in the way of CYOAs and more cognizant of my wants and expectations, I should be able to point my finger at a spot in the CYOA and declare: "There! There lies the fault, and at that spot is something missing which I require!"
>>94279497You've seen them before.
>>94279497What you seek yet cannot ascertain is simple... SOUL.
>>94279454Magic Case is a corrupted dark world. If it had been a utopia because of everything they did then their actions wouldn't have been negative. The people they left behind are fucked up because of them, not happy. We may enjoy the suffering as players and think the world is a fun playground but it is still suffering nonetheless and our very jobs are to clean up this mess.
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>>94279562How fast five years flies by...
>>94279497>Planeswalker Rising>Fine
>>94279301Some retarded redditor told her it looked good and meta so now she is doing it on everything.
>>94279216DTF status for all of them
>>94279729What? I only put it on because the top font was noticeably darker than the bottom font and i was trying to balance them.
>>94279746Stop thinking with your penis.
>>94279791It's important. If I'm going to be spending eternity with these guys I wanna know how hard it's going to be to copulate.
>>94279216So does she want to start a family with us or is that just an off handed comment about her inexperience? What would she be like as a mother?
>>94279791No.
>>94279857You mean the last line? No she's just reminiscing about her life and contemplating that she might have wasted it.
>>94279355You don't ask your sister to change her boob size, anon. Is not correct>>94279360wtf incest?
>>94279497Good bait. I give it a 8/10. The only fault was that it takes too long to read.
>>94279870So she doesn’t care about being my partner or romance?
>>94279966I didn't say that. You will know each other for decillions of years, anything can happen.
>Anon, how is this character I created? I want to make her well rounded and a good companion so that->CAN WE FUCK HERNever change
>>94279925Who gives a flying fuck about incest when you’re a god?
>>94279986Fair enough, for what it’s worth I like what you’ve written so far and she seems pleasant to be around. I feel like I can count on her regardless of what happens
>>94279995What did you expect?
>>94276742In all seriousness, probably the most innovative use of companions in a (relatively) recent cyoa was Tok's Dragonfall. Each companion is tied to a setting change - some quite dramatic.Oh, and both Beri and EternalAnon have done some neat things with companions in their longer cyoas.If you're just looking for exotic mixes of characters, I recommend Fulcrum, Space Opera Refugee, and maybe Exposition Prison.The most likable and memorable companions I've found are in the NSFW cyoa, Divine Trials.And if you want humorous, I recommend the old version (1.5) of Traveler's Tale. Some great one liners by the narrator in it.
>>94277080More. . .I guess "real" cases, would be the way to describe it. Murders, kidnappings, thefts . . .things that would take a magic using cop to solve. (Magically enhanced drugs, anyone?)Good luck!
>>94276742>Jesus christYes, my child? What is it you need?
>>94280154Who painted you white, Yehoshua ben Yosef?
>>94279216I like the first section a lot because she’s talking to the us. If I remember right the previous versions only had descriptions so this is much better.
>>94280154nta but thanks for always taking care of me.
>>94280159Is this better?
>>94277195Do you remember anything else about it? An unusual power, an interesting companion . . .something that would make it memorable?What you're telling us is too generic to help track it down.
>>94279216What happens if an Ultima breeds and Ultima, how powerful would the offspring be?
>>94280260They either become a powerful Ascended (something like a supercharged Emperor of Mankind) or a Usurper (Cosmic Entity that can achieve Demiurgy and beyond, even rivaling the Primordials)
>>94280119>Tok's Dragonfall.stopped reading right there
Once again anons are ignoring good content because of the author...He truly is the SCAPEGOAT of the thread...
>>94279995These are not real people. The only value they offer is on what anons personally want out of them.
Anons only want one thing and it's digusting.
>>94280154>>94280159>>94280174Many of the humans that lived in the area at the time were of much lighter skin than the inhabitants that live their today, as it was European controlled until the dark ages.His mother was the best candidate available for artificial insemination, and at least half of his DNA was amazing in quality.So he wasn't brown, simple as.
>>94280450liar
>>94280450trvth nvke
>>94280450Lmao
Look upon my visage and be Moist
>>94280564Is this what aromage likes?
>>94280568do you not like it? I am a hetero man and he tickled my pickle
>>94280580>heterolmao
>>94280580tok...
Does light exist?
>>94280698No, now close your eyes.
Does "magic" exist?
>>94280713Yes, but we can fix that.
Does holes exist?
>>94280729Yes, there's three inside of you and soon to be more.
Do I exist?
If it doesn’t have mass it doesn’t exist
>>94280738I don't think.
Husanon here.Because the Vatican's 2025 pet is an anime girl I realized it is a message from God that I should rescind my previous statement.I won't replace lolis with hags.That's all have a blessed day.
>>94280738Only until I stop thinking about you.
I'm still waiting for the Physics CYOA that includes all these weird concepts like "holes", "magic" and "logic".
I don’t have mass
>>94280761YOU FUCKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER
>>94280770they only know how to whine
Alright, changed the font to italics and finished Anne's entry. How do the first two family members look, chat?
If space isn’t real then why is it there?
>>94280782Aktchually they're educating us, but you're not ready for this conversation Anon-kun.
>>94280784Shitalics...
>>94280784>Virgin Aro removes Vtuber references because she got self-conscious.>Chad Husanon does it without shame.>Aro copies xim again...
>>94280790To confuse the minds of the weak.Also the Demiurge thought it was cool.
>>94280803I can literally see the vtuber right there.
>>94280790Space is real, otherwise it wouldn’t wouldn’t be there.
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>>94280815Those are belts, you tie them around the front of the coat to tighten it.
>>94280821>Actually tries to justify the shit fucking character design
>>94280809Correct.I was alluding to the fact that she used to have Vtuber references in Demigod but removed them because she got ashamed of them.But now that Husanon is doing it she is doing it too.
>>94280784I like this better, good job.
>>94280831Brother, plenty of coats have these, especially trench coats. Look it up.
>>94280841Yes, the belt is common. But that is not this ugly thing, is it?
>>94280831>Character designMore like fashion design. If you're going to insult, do it right.
>>94280833I didn't remove them though? I just made them a little less blatant. Calliope is still in the latest version, as is Shxtou
>>94280815She is a public flasher.
>>94280784How many ultima are there in ~total?
According to the gay retard, everything is magic, which means nothing is.
>>942808802 billion. That is why you are a jobber.
Now I want a high fashion cyoa. What's his power guys?
>>94280880Across the entire omniverse? Somewhere in the thousands.
>>94280892Average one piece design
>>94280901one piece cyoa where I can breed like stock Nami and Boa?
>>94280906The interactive hugbox has one
>>94280916they are better than us then
>>94280868Doesn't count.
You know what this thread needs?
Does anyone have one of those CYOA where you can be some sort of superpowered race in a post apocalyptic world?
>>94277927Bingo, thanks anon.
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>>94280776that's the worst example of an hag you could make
Antici
>>94281509Nice, thanks
Does anyone have the cyoa where you are sent to the past (can be from the neolithic or other options) and you're given a lot of points to customize your powers? I remember that it was a PDF and you had many ways of winning (one of them was being known as many different legends, another by advancing science and many more)
>>94281587Altering History
>>94280859Those are snaps to form a belt loop instead of a straight sewn shut one.
>>94281733Thanks!!
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>>94280784Why are the top paragraphs dimmer than the bottom ones?
>>94282084This one is really fun to just go apeshit and buy almost every option with. Can make a fun little kitchen sink setting.
>>94280143>More. . .I guess "real" cases, would be the way to describe it. Murders, kidnappings, thefts . . .things that would take a magic using cop to solve.Wouldn't those just be radiant quests? There is only so many ways you can describe a murder.
pation
>>94279524>Magi Case is a corrupted dark world.The only thing dark about Magi Case is its author. Outside of that we have better written dark urban fantasy CYOA and actual books that anons can actually be excited about and what are successful releases/products.
>>94282490The topic wasn't about the quality of the CYOA try again.
>>94276608>>94277500beer mostly
>>94282622
After much distraction IRL, I've finally finished the map for the kingdom invasion CYOA. I'll admit, it's less than spectacular but I put a decent amount of thought into it and it should more than suffice for the framing device that it is. I won't be posting any of the WIP again until the CYOA is done, which should take no longer than around another half a month at the current rate. I thought for a while about not posting the map without the rest for context, but ultimately felt it'd be more fun to subject the thread to it.
>>94282955You've got to put scale on the map. Something like 200km x 150km? So one pixel = 100m x 100m.Using too different water colors looks bad. Use one water.The distribution of terrains looks really artificial but I guess you knew that (surely mountains never work that way, and a of wood could only look that neat if it was a tiny copse while the rest of the map feels more zoomed out).
>>94276906>>94277886>>94278215The only example I can think of CYOAs with overly complex math, are CYOAs with packing-problem-like challenges. Packing problems are a deceptively complex class of math problems. They aren't really fun.For example, the plant girl's planting order puzzle in Cityscape Skirmish by Stellinearized, and Penumbra Manor by Languid Cicada.If I smell anything packing-problem-like in a CYOA, I am decidedly less likely to give it a chance.
Post a build and have fun!
>>94283343Not for this one, I don't like this one.
>>94283343
>>94283349Beggars can't be choosers!
>>94283351
For superpower nerds!
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>>94283371I finished not long ago, made a build too, didn't post it.>NameMovefriend>Gestation+15b, +15r>Villain>Drop In+3b, +3r>No Identity+2b>Budget--->Martial Arts-4b>First Aid-3b>Strategy-5b>Tactics-4b>Mechanics-2b>Hacking-1b>Investigation-2b>Survival-3b>Banter-1b>Foreign Element-3b, -3r>Power Slot x2-2r>Secret Lair-2b>Negentropy-5b, -5r>Case 53 x3+3r+3r>Worst Day Ever+2b+1b, +1r+1r>Slaughterhouse 9+4b+1b, +2r+1r>Endbringer Target+3b+1b, +4r+1r>Second Chance--->SHAKER -- Pocket Room-1r>MASTER -- Protocols-1r>THINKER -- Perfect Mind-5r>STRANGER -- Observer-25r--->Other (solo)>Connections (Cauldron) -4b>Kill Order+6b+1b, +6r+1r
>>94280761adult women fetishists on suicide watch
>>94283389>adult women fetish?
>>94283397dhtp8
>>94283403I hate the chaptcha system!
>>94283378>I finished not long agoI finished reading worm not long ago, that is.I am Movefriend - an invisible friend who moves things. I am everywhere at the same time, and can move anything inanimate from any part of the world to any other part with Pocket Space. In fact, I can make this happen automatically with Protocols. So I can set up factories powered by me, where instead of anything like machinery and fuel, everything is made to work by patterns of usages of Observer (to be everywhere) + Pocket Space (to move things) + Protocols (to make it happen automatically). This should scale indefinitely, I can cover the entire world in such a "factory". I also live forever. I can also fuck with Scion, since he cannot sense me with any of his senses, including his precognition. And the perfect memory of Perfect Mind should prevent me from becoming too inhuman over time, and it also helps me keep track of my factories.If it all fails and somehow Scion still wins, I'll make a lame Gold Morning build with Second Chance. I'm hoping it won't come to that.
>>94283391Taimanin has some really serious cakes! You should check it out! It's lore has also gotten better!
>>94283378I feel like you would have gotten more out of a second trigger for observer than pocket room or protocols
Kinda old but still good!
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>>94283437Really? I thought the Observer Second Trigger is very weak.>You can make your phantom visible to everyone or to specific people at willPointless, if I can for example write messages on paper or a computer keyboard.>You can create illusions of using any powerA mediocre illusion power. It doesn't compare to converting the entire world into my personal factory with Observer + Protocol + Pocket Space. It doesn't synergize as much with the immense opportunity the base Observer power provides.
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>>94283471>It doesn't compare to converting the entire world into my personal factory with Observer + Protocol + Pocket SpaceI didn't read your explanation so I didn't know you were doing that.
Magi Case Incoming!
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>>94283551i hate the Captcha system!
>>94283557Don't worry, the Captcha system hates you more.
>>942835570m8gw
>>94283498At least until update the cyoa is still ruined.
>>94283563I also hate Italics for making cyoas this good but so absurdly long!
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>>94283579Why is Ager the only male Auctor with an age requirement?
>>94283717And the last page!
>>94283498Better than Aroshit and Entropiss.
>>94283491anon you're supposed to read explanations
>>94283871but I'm illiterate
>>94283877tok...
>Reddit got a /tv/ show made out of shitty stories they wroteRealistically, it's only a matter of time before your cyoa gets forcefully adapted for netflix
>>94284167The first one will be Skeleton Gangrape
>>94284202Weakest cyoa that could let you avoid a skeleton gangrape?
>>94284167Magi Case anime is confirmed.
>>94284167What tv show?
>>94284249tales from the void
>>94283629Is Hunde the most realistic and flawed character in the CYOA?>Born to be the leader of his family, even though he doesn't care.>Forced into an arranged marriage and made to have a kid.>Gets fucked up by a literal Mage God and forced to have body parts rellaced.>Gets sold off as a slave to Mage God by his Mage God.>Little brother runs his family into the ground.>Forced to divorce his wife and abandon his kid by a Mage God.>His ex-wife abuses his daughter to coup his family and control their assets while being a schizo unable to move on.>Gets remarried and wife is freaky horny for doggy dick so he is forced to sleep at his office after giving her 2 kids.>Watches his new home become a cyberpunk shithole because some femcel kidnapped Mage God waifu because Mage God won't look at her.>Has ro build and maintain a secret police force>Secret police also has to build and control rhe biggest crime group to artificially control crime.>Mage God forces him to sell guns and weapons to non-mages to fuek conflict and terorrism.>Whwn caught, his secret poloce murder FBI glowies and because he is the leader he accepts it all as his punishment>Mage God reeeeeees and shits himself in front of everyone during the trial and he gets off scott free.>He hopes Mage God will let him retire in a few years.
Why is AI art so terrible? I can't make companions that DON'T look uncanny valley or "ok this is obv ai".I just want consistent artwork... but not like this...
>>94284294>He hopes Mage God will let him retire in a few years.How long until Ford gets bored of him? A couple decades? Or is he never letting him go?
>>94283498Wait this is magi case? This is what you people are constantly talking about?
>>94284294No
>>94284325What's the matter? Can't handle peak cyoa?
>>94284311AI is still in development and is only good at making characters in certain styles. Here are some companions for my superpower CYOA using AI, somewhat decent but not there yet.You should be using it mostly to make background images or misc. that you can't find elsewhere?
>>94284269>An episodic horror anthology series based on the most viral and haunting stories from the r/NoSleep community
>>94284349It's almost cute how it fucks it up.AI will get there in a few years. Until then it's the booru mines for me.
>>94284336looks pretty mid>author tells you whats what instead of making the setting pop into the readers minds eye>A long time ago.... LMAO>utterly standard choices with no flavor>long list of clans that all have the same cookie cutter story with different years and names tossed aroundI dont know, I just tried to give it the benefit of doubt and im seeing nothing that would otherwise make this CYOA stand out as much as its name gets tossed around here. Then again, I didn't understand how entropist took off either as that was kinda mid too.
>>94284349>only womenokay coomer
>>94284316Hunde has been working for Ford for the last 30 or so years. His daughter is 34, Hunde was born in 1969 (Boomer) meaning he left home somewhere around 1990 to 1994 to join Ford.Around the same time as Metal Gear went down.
>>94284377I wasn't expecting this, I thought you were just shitposting. I can't answer why it or Entropist were so successful since I avoided playing them but you and the people that enjoyed them are probably looking for different things in a cyoa.
>>94284377>>94284410Real /cyoag/ patricians don't pay any attention to the slop for the masses.
>>94284294You can tell its the same fordfag because he always lies that kaisai was abusive and somehow not the perfect wife. I like how you've also now accepted that hunde is a bad character and are now just trying to rationalize it. Also you keep reposting the meme I made.
>>94284377>author tells you whats what instead of making the setting pop into the readers minds eyeShit that never happens.>long list of clans that all have the same cookie cutter story with different years and names tossed around>same storyAnd now you are shitposting.
>>94284458Remain in denial and ignorance then. Enjoy your cake, pedestrian.
I have consumed hundreds upon thousands of CYOA. The slop, the masterful, the mediocre and even the pill pickers en masse. I can say for certain, having morphed into some CYOA-monstrosity. That magi case is indeed nothing more than slop. It is good slop, yes. Designed for the most mindless of mouths to be consumed. Yet, delectable, like a cheeseburger you would purchase then devour on a cold afternoon from your favorite megacorp brand.
>>94284495O sage of the CYOA, what are your top 3?
>>94284451>kaisai was abusive and somehow not the perfect wife.She literally groomed her daughter to coup her uncle and tried to gaskight her into thinking her dad was going to come back as some plan. Abuse doesn't have to be physical.
>>94284311I'm a low level user at this. I use only Bing AI and I haven't used the pictures for a cyoa or anything else. But my findings:* focus on specifying the art style, don't try to specify what is depicted too precisely (avoid "man holds sword in hand". Instead use 2 tags, one describes man, the other describes sword). Generate a large number of pictures in that art style. Go through the pictures, perhaps 5% of them will depict what you wanted to be depicted (in this example, they might have the sword in the man's hand), you can take those and ignore the rest.* avoid art styles with line art, prefer painterly styles.* don't use the full picture, cut out a rectangle from it that has the least AI fuckery on it. For example the Bing's picture creator AI insists on creating pictures that are symmetric between left and right, no amount of prompts reduce that enough. For example: you want a man walking down the street. Bing AI will probably give you a man exactly at the center of the picture walking towards the camera, and the sides of the street to his left and right are exactly symmetrical too, in an ugly and unnatural way. That's obvious AI fuckery. But cut out a small part of the picture so the symmetry is not visible, and it might be passable.
>>94284532I shall bestow upon thee mine favorites. I do not keep ranks, those are for fools. CYOA are meant to rub itches, certain desires for escapism in the moment. Flavors abound, they cannot be ranked, for they rarely embody the same category.>Urban Phantom>Gifted>The Facility>Bimbo Curse CYOA>Harry Potter and the Choose your own Adventure>Jedi: Guardian of the Old Republic
>>94284535>she literally groomed her daughter to be a strong leader after her deadbeat dad fucked off and then made sure she would be in the highest position she could by couping their dipshit uncle>all while still being THE MOST devoted wife in the cyoa>somehow putting your daughter in a good position with good support is abuseAt least you made me laugh. Here's a new one for you to steal.
>>94284532Cosmic god by troyxDragonfallThat one pill picker with the most updoots
>>94284600>includes Peil's The Facility and some AGP cyoawait... you aren't THAT reddit guy, are you...?
>>94284535>I 'groomed' my child by giving them a good education and a loving household (single parent since her dad is a deadbeat) and then put her as the leader of our entire clan, the highest position of respect and authority>erm anon actually this is abusiveBro? Some anons wont even play cyoas if they don't get near this level of support.
>>94284535Shut up, italics
>>94284639Italics greatest crime is giving the best wife to the worst character.
>>94284605>wifeUh, that's not Telos you are talking about. If she was a devoted and good wife Kasai would nevee gotten divorced and xoped about >she literally groomed her daughter to be a strong leader Thanks for admitting that Kasai abused her daughter for a power play and usurped her uncle.>somehow putting your daughter in a good position with good support is abuseGuys I may have emotionally and mentally abused my daughter for benefits and power, but at least she is in a good position. I dindu nuffins.
>>94284624Who? I have no clue what you yap about. Surely many lost souls find themselves both here and there, in between. Lost to escape into some world of their own.
>>94284624He likes Jedi. Its the autist that thought Jedi's minion were good some threads ago
>>94284605>>94284629Kasai literally had her family's backing who are also backed by who is implied to be Tamamo-no-Mae. You guys act like she was a single struggling mom.
>>94284629cyoas where you get this level of support?
>>94284655>>94284677see >>94284639
>>94284655What did she do to actually abuse her, give me anything concrete. Anything thats not "she groomed her to be a leader" because thats not abuse, thats high quality education. Literally almost every parent thats good wants their children to do as well as possible and putting them at the very top of their clan is just that. Please cite exactly where it says she was abused.
>>94284677Even more reason she couldn't have been 'abused'. She didn't even have a difficult home life after her deadbeat dad left.
>>94284605>>94284629>deadbeat dadKasai don't look.
>>94284720>he doesn't even like being around this family eitherItalics really did channel his inner black father while writing hunde. I really do feel like hunde is italics self-insert and thats why he has to try and defend his this faggot so hard.
>>94284655>If she was a devoted and good wife Kasai would nevee gotten divorced and xoped aboutWasn't the narrative that Hunde didn't have a choice in the matter and it's all Ford's fault?
>>94284746Yes and its hundes nature to be a deadbeat, but this fordfag in particular just lies about them like we can't read the cyoa.
>>94284734Why are you lying? He likes being around his new family and looks to retiring to be with them. His main problem is that his loliwife is too horny for him to keep up with ever since his daughter left home
>>94284806>he likes being around his new family>the only mention of his feelings on them is how he avoids his wifeBlack father moment. You didn't provide evidence of abuse btw.
>>94284753Not a deadbeat. He happily got married and raised his children with his wife.
>>94284864>he was forced to marry a second time>literally cannot get away from his job and by proxy his new family so he is forced to raise them>his only blurbs about his new family is a small amount of text about how he's happy his kids are gone and he avoids his wifePeak black father moment. It took literally being sold into slavery to make him not have to pay child support.
Reminder: Kasai profile outright states she collaborated with Elders of the Lupu Family to install her daughter into power and bring about their downfall.She is not a good person or a good wife.
>>94284891>she collaborated with Elders of the Lupu Family to install her daughter into powerhow else is she supposed to do it?
>>94284806>would rather get buckbroken by a white man than fuck his wifeWhy are black guys like this
>>94284891>she gave my kid the best education possible and then put them in the best position she could>still loyal years after i've been abducted by this cyberfaggotKaisai is the real tragic character, she got married to the worst character.If italics had made her a few years younger and single she would easily be top 5 waifus in the cyoa.>Kemono>Attractive>Well Connected>Intelligent>YandereItalics fucking sucks.
>>94284909She's not supposee to do it at all. Thomas is a victim if her corruption for powers and wickedness just like Blaise who was forced to become a Patriarch instead of happily pursuing her own life. Blaiae admits to hating the job and the Elders.
>>94284926>best position>Forced into a shitty role just like her FatherBro???
There are anons right now who don't see the parallels between Ford with Kasai and Blair with Hunde. And how it is an all around tragic situation born because of power plays and Magi Clans being cults with messed up social dynamics and beliefs.You should not get filtered this hard.
>>94284981>shitty role>the highest position of authority, privilege, and power in the clanOnly a black father would think something like that is abuse.
>>94285012Being a patriarch is not the highest role in the Clan, retard.Auctor = Highest role for the founder.Archmage = Leader of the ClanAuspice = Tamamo no Mae and friendsPatriarch = Appointed janny of one specific family
>>94285025>he's run out of things to argue so much he's taken to semantics when he knows very well that we're tlaking about the vulpe and lupus I accept your concession.
>>94285071Kasai is a shit mom.
>lying fordfag hunde apologist got thoroughly btfo'd Well at least that magi case fag is unlikely to shill it again.
>>94285130>rich kid sent to private school>pampered and told she's specialYou're just jealous.
>>94285130Anon... this directly shows she was the best mom...
>>94285130>her only issue is daddy issues from her deadbeat dad>not her mom or family who loved and supported herI agree with the other anon. Only a black man would feel this is bad.
>>94285158>>94285177If you can read between the lines. Blaise hates her dad who she barely met because of his absence, Kasai forces her into a shit role in life and is off the deep end. Abused people often excuse their abusers and find another subject to blame. Blaose even acknowledges she is groomed and forced to take up a stressed role all for her mother's delusion.Why are you retards trying to white wash and dindu nuffins Kasai?
>>94285227>Kasai forces her into a shit role in life>Putting her through prep school so she can be ready for the best position in life kaisai can give her>Shit positionStopped reading there, black father moment.
If Kasai is a good wife and says Hunde did nothing wrong and is still her husband. Why are you guys saying he's a deadbeat and bad person, when Kasai contradicts you? Otherwise you mean to say Kasai is wrong, which shouldn't be possible.
>>94285227Some anons wont even play cyoas if they don't get positions of power handed to them like she got.
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What the fuck was her problem?
>>94283498Could you at least post it as a link?It currently makes up 27% of all content on the thread, you're gonna prematurely burst the thread.
Italics really is going all out with the damage control.
>>94285423And he got horrendously BTFO'd.
Why is the magic in Magi Case so bad? Maybe the physics fag is right…
>>94285429Shut up nerd
>>94285429Same reason the setting, writing and characters are shit.
Y'all can't handle flawed character like Hunde and Tok. Sad!
>>94285429Physics fag is always right. Inb4: “y-you’re him I bet!”Mind broken
>>94285502>mind broken>it is physicsfaglmao
>>94285429He is ALWAYS right. And Italics is the fastest author of /cyoag/.
>>94285508Your mind is in a million, MILLION pieces
>>94285536Yeah a million, million neurons you fucking IDIOT
>>94285429>>94285475>>94285487>>94285489>>94285502>>94285508>>94285524>>94285536>>94285587This is all the same poster
>>94285614i didn't post a single one of those posts retard
>>94285614How many phones?
>>94285614I'm only #4 and #7.Unless we're playing the "Three guys" game again, in which case I claim ownership of everyone.
>its another thread full of authors praising their own works
>>94285614>>94285644This is the same poster.
>>94285614Including you and me
I love it when I start shitflinging. You all are far too easy to control. Dance monkeys, dance!
At least italics is giving me access to proper harem mode so I can take Blaise and Lucii and then enslave the auspices. Evoco for being a tranny and baiting me and the other fox because she needs to be on a leash according to italics cause she's a 'I MUST DESTROY THE UNIVERSE' tier villain.
>>94285677the only people who haven't left are the ones who enjoy it
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