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>>94751431>>94751435hmmmm... bitches
>>94751421Was there some weird drama around this or do I misremember
>>94751461here or in reddit?
>>94751461Not here, no, there was an incident of a redditor editing out the page of Bitches and the references to them because leaning into one of the most popular subgenres of woman's literature is "misogynistic filth," but it never went anywhere.
That we have forgotten them, this I fear the Gods will remember.
>>94751535An orc follows to the death.
>>94751539Malacath witness our deeds.
>>94751541Why are we bothering with this?
>>94751544The Empire is the only thing keeping the Dominion out of Skyrim.
>>94751549The Legion's always looking for strong capable warriors.
Wake up Guardian. We have a war to win.
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>>94751421This is made by the same guy who made Demon Conquest and Watcher right? I recognise his style. He has some of the finest art choices for companions I've ever seen. All the bitches here look quite delectable I can't even choose between them.
Be the mecha and customize yourself to fight and die in a wasteland of the strongest with promise of finding a paradise that most likely doesn't exist. Or be an immortal human thanks to nanomachines and living married to bioroids (biological robots) that act as your guardians as you try to heal a damaged part of the world called a Garden ans fight off the advancements of evil robots/scavengers wanting to raid your home.
>>94751673I'll take the one where I don't explicitly die, thanks.
>>94751681Both?
>>94751421Clade - Shadow Wolf Lair - Shrine Bro - James GreerAdvantages; - Superior Strength - Superior Speed - Superior Agility - Iron Will - Truesilver - Spirit Magic Complications; - Mark of the Beast - Wild at Heart - Firefright - Enemy - Painful Transformation Bitches; - Ishiyama Suzune - Sabrina Thistledown - Winter Hope - Bakeneko
>>94751637>This is made by the same guy who made Demon Conquest and Watcher right? I recognise his style.What's his name?
>>94751673topI like mechaI hate human looking robots
Pca is a dickless, ball-less faggot If he doesn’t make another cyoa in three months time, I will no longer consider him best author
>>947516732nd>better world>personal power>immortality
>Want monster girls in the modern world>But want them to be rare and so the Player having one or more is special and they give actual benefits and have their own goals>But want to tacticool stuff and gun and other weapon customization so you are a cool super spy/operator>But also want people to do cool high fantasy adventures or actions without being too constrained by the modern world.>Want players to have a power system too so they don't job when gun doesn't always workWhat is the best way to achieve this?
>>947516732 sounds boring, 1 sounds interesting
>>94751681>afraid of dying in his own imaginationthis is what peak jobber looks like
>>94751742Dimensional Invasion that is rough, but doesn't destroy society, like WW2. A bit of magic got introduced to the world, just barely enough so it doesn't make it pointless to do other things besides magic.Monstergirls are neutral beings that got trapped in our world.
Gil is a dickless, ball-less faggot If he doesn’t make another cyoa in three months time, I will no longer consider him best author
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>>94751785>Monstergirls are neutral beings that got trapped in our world.Nah the "Monstergirls are mutated human women" idea is much better than this generic ass premise
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>>94751673I like that first option. Also, do we have an Armored Core CYOA?
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>>94751810just spitballing ideas to help him form his own ideas
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>>94751742>>But want them to be rare and so the Player having one or more is special and they give actual benefits and have their own goalsI agree, making them an actual asset rather than a useless sex prop is good idea >>But want to tacticool stuff and gun and other weapon customization so you are a cool super spy/operator>>But also want people to do cool high fantasy adventures or actions without being too constrained by the modern world.>>Want players to have a power system too so they don't job when gun doesn't always work>What is the best way to achieve this?I don't see any problem with this. Just put both options and let the player choose what they want, a gun/gadget section and a skill/magic section would work fine.
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Why did you all make fun of that one edgy build in the other threadIt was kind of mean or dickish to give him so many vitriolic (you)s
>>94751903>white knighting
>>94751903what build are you talking about
>>94751935nvm I found it>>94747395
>>94751903Dickish interactions? On 4channel?
>Houndcels think they can beat Flesh Dancer
>>94751819there's one, courtesy of Italics
>>94751903Yeah he was just having fun and they were being mean to him
>>94751742Here are some prompts for you, feel free to use them as you please;>Post-apocalyptic setting caused by a magical nuclear bomb, but instead of turning the world into a wasteland, it mutated all flora and fauna on the planet to various degrees (adventure time style).>The area where the explosion happened turned into a small continent-sized basin that has its own crazy ecosystem (like the Abyss in Made in Abyss).>The closer you get to ground zero, the stronger the magic and the monsters get.>Radiation IS Magic, the more radioactive a thing is the more magical and powerful it is, irradiated items turn into artifact.>Needless to say, Magic can be dangerous and volatile if you're not careful.>Some remnants of the old world still exist in isolation from the outside world (bunkers, islands, etc...), but human populations have mostly regressed to late 19th/ early 20th century. (I think the Fallout retro-aesthetic is neat and would be much better than generic modern tech).>Monstergirls are just one of the many mutated human species around, but they managed to retain a large chunk of their intelligence.
>>94751731Ok, but are the Sons and the Fathers a thing in this multiverse and can I take them on?
>furfag CYOA to start us offwhat a great way to open a thread
>>94751903Stop crying over nothing.
Imagine if furry waifus were a reality, but being DOG (or wolf or cat or w/e) people they lived LESS than YOU, and you have to watch your beloved grow old before YOU DO.Horrible fate. It’s like falling in love with a clone who only lives for five years.
>>94751853>Page is titled DLC 1Box Wine never released DLC 2, did he?
>>94752061So I can have multiples wives without being infidel? Based furries
>>94752061>It’s like falling in love with a clone who only lives for five years.This is why the movie Blade Runner makes me want to cry. They just want more life. ;_;
>>94752061The Anglerfish approves that brand of emotional pain.
>>94751797>Ki Attunement and Physical Training are two different classesOutrageous point tax.
>>94751785>>94751810I had thr idea of monster girls being bio-engineered, but that removes the end area of wanting to still do some high adventure stuff in a modern like world.>WW2I'm thinking about 1980s to 1990s to early 2000s period since that was peak military affairs style and equipment wise.>>94751851Balancing modern gear and magic is one ofnthe challenges. Magic can be a like a gun and trivialize things equipment can which is bad.Guns also pose another problem, but that is because they remove the romance of combat/battle being heroic and you instead take a position and just put out pot shots until you kill someone.
>>94751742>US gov opened a portal to monster girl dimension in Area 51>special agents were sent to capture monster girls for scientists to experiment on them to extract their powers and transplant them onto humans>the demon lord of the monster girl dimension launched a counter-attack>it was contained and the portal closed but many test subjects and invaders escaped and are now spread around the world>the special agents with monster transplants are tasked with finding and capturing them secretly to bring them back to the base.There, you got everything
>>94752201Physical Training is mainly about STR and END. If you go for 3x Ki or some other martial training you'll still end up really fucking /fit/. At least that's my interpretation.
>>94751539>only 3 points for talents and training>have to be a complete moron in at least 9/12 of what makes a good ruler>even worse if you want to be good at somethingI wouldn't mind if Level 0 was "average noble education" or something like that but no it's "you've never heard of it"
>>94752144I will romance the Anglerfish. It cannot prevent me from doing this. I will attach myself to it, like a male anglerfish.
>>94752275Also yes I would mind because in a CYOA, when shown 12 options with 3 levels each I expect to have enough points to combine some options. Here, the best you can do is dump your 3 points into one option.
>>94752225But what about player freedom? Being a government dog should be optional.
>>94752313You can always become a rogue that fell in love with the girl he was supposed to hunt and decided to protect herOr other scenarios
>>94752281It will encourage that kind of behavior and you're 100% getting eaten.
>>94752281Given your overeliance on True Love perks and Gifts I have zero faith in your ability to romance anything, let alone a metaphysical predator.
>>94752202refer to this post >>94752028it has some interesting ideas
>>94752356tok diff
>>94752281the angler fish will use you as a tampon for all eternity
>>94752374>simulates dead cousin>winIf anything Tok is one of the easiest snacks on this general.
>>94752383She will fall for him.
>>94752415I'm sure it will be an idyllic romance.Then you're digested, and it repeats the cycle elsewhere, never thinking about you again.Very romantic!
>>94752429How would you do it?
>>94752445That's the thing - I wouldn't.You're looking at a predator already drooling for your juicy essence and whose understanding of humanity consists of "How to make them drop their guards faster/distract them from the feast".It's not because a shredder puts lipstick that you should put your dick in it.
>>94751903Dark Femboy...>>94752016Father's Boipussy...
>>94752540Don't mock him. Do you want him to cry about the meanies of /cyoag/
>>94752275>only 3 points for talents and trainingnot true you can get more points by picking a non-white race
>>94752543Why would he cry? Wanting to be a fuckable femboy has always been Tok's dream and he did it effortless
>>94752556>Argonians get 7 fucking powers
I’m not really into monster girls. You either have to slice them up with a sword or turn them into a bloody mess with magic—or else you’re the one who dies. It’s stupid.
>>94752590You're supposed to use your dick.
I want to molest an edgy boi uwu
>>94752604Then molest Dark Something, who himself molest Tok, who will molest you.
>>94752611It's like a conga line of sodomy
>>94751431>>94751435If it weren't for the cooler shit this would be fine.
So I have an idea for a CYOA that can be optionally a waifu picker.You hunt down monsters with magical girls as ground troops.You will be able to distribute yout point pool between points for personal powers(Arete) and points for waifus(Gnosis).So you can go full pokemon trainer or full killing machine and even then there will be cross over with girls with support powers or personal powers that can be used to support magical girls.Does that sound cool or should I give an exact amount for each one?
>>94752750>You will be able to distribute yout point pool between points for personal powers(Arete) and points for waifus(Gnosis).I saw this long ago. You're not fooling me again.
>>94752627You're right, enjoying women and their company is cooler than monastic ascetism, but it isn't as spiritually fine.
>>94751797Osric Cole>School Lunestier>Year 1 ClassesMartial Combat - Basic Physical Training - Basic >Year 2 ClassesKi Attunement - Basic Maneuvers - Basic >Year 3 ClassesMartial Combat - AdvancedDueling - Basic >Year 4 ClassesDueling - AdvancedDiplomacy - Basic >Year 5 ClassesTactics - Basic Divine Arts - Basic>Bonus ClassesMage Hunters - BasicKi Attunement - AdvancedDueling - Mastery>CompanionsKengenDaxChandra>EventsYear 1: The Harvest Festival - EscortYear 2: The Grand Summit - SecurityYear 3: The Gathering of Life - Bodyguard Year 4: The Great Tournament - Battle RoyalYear 5: The Harvest Festival - Basilisk Den >Clubs and OrganizationsSports Club (Dueling), Disciplinary Squad>DrawbacksExchange Program (Uzzra)Hated ProdigyRecently orphaned when his father, a low-ranking military officer, died defending a small town from northern raiders, Osric was still grieving in the early months of his academy training. He was granted a full scholarship by the kingdom his father served in as recompense for his only parent's bravery and sacrifice. His father was grooming him to be a soldier form an early age, with the hope that his son would rise the family in station by becoming a knight or a general, as such, Osric was fully prepared and had a head start over his sheltered higher status classmates, which he obviously did not get along with.
>>94752800>I saw this long ago. You're not fooling me again.I'm not fooling you I have been working on a nother WIP.This is for my next one.
>>947516732nd one
>>94751742This doesn't sound like prompt 3
>>94751903I don't mind it, interaction is better than silence even if its them shitposting at me.
>>94751903What reaction were you expecting for a /14yoandthisisdeep/ tier build?
How strong is the Shinning One from Entropist? could an old Son or veteran Conqueror defeat him?
>>94751673Immortal or bust, though I remember this prompt from before that led to nowhere
>>94751959Average /mcyoag/ build
>>94751673both, get to work
>>94753030I don't think you've been to mcyoag...
>>94753030Imagine writefags and Entropistkino
>>94752941edgy-sama...
>>94753030I don't see any walls of text to get people to engage in erp with the build
>>94753017>How strong is the Shinning One from Entropist?Somewhere on the range of the "lesser gods" like the True AI leader, the Silent one or the dreamland king, probably.>could an old Son defeat himNo. For Sons to defeat a tempered hero they need to overpower them as they are in a disadvantage and the Shining One in pure power is probably even stronger than Soleac and also has advantage.> could a veteran Conqueror defeat him?Depends on the point they are. They don't have the disadvantage toward tempered heroes, the Conqueror about to fight the Hound is also the strongest being not part of the big 4, so yeah, that one could win. But that's one conqueror in all of existence. If you define veteran conqueror like that guy, he wins. If you define it like top 100 conquerors or something like that, I think the great majority lose against the Shining One, maybe even only top 5 could fight him.
>>94753092How talented are Conquerors in Physical Empowerment? How do they stand compared to Alta in martial skill?
>>94753131We dont know
>>94753131>How talented are Conquerors in Physical Empowerment?No idea. Probably depends on your build.>How do they stand compared to Alta in martial skill?No idea. Probably depends on your buildWe just know vaguely how strong they can be at the start and their maximum. The talent could be something you only get to decide at the start, something unaffected by powers or something you get to upgrade using rewards. I think nobody asked about that. I would bet it gets somewhat better after every conquest but we don't know. And I guess Physical Empowerment would be the most thematic choice but you coud also get a mage build.
>>94752838>Doesn't choose the childhood friend with big boobs that loves youshame on you
>>94753190Nta but I didn't either tbf. This cyoa suffers from chronic no-monstet-girls. The white kitsune from flare is kinda mid and I couldn't take her anyways.
>>94753190Precisely because she loves you, you should not pick her. She's basically an extra companion. Picking her would negate this advantage.
>>94753131We don't know enough to make a detailed analysis, but EntropistAnon confirmed that there's a leaning toward physical strength. Combined with the Exalted Conqueror's lack of type advantage or disadvantage, this means that they can theoretically strike and slay anything. The example he gave of physically beating a disembodied True AI to death is surreal, and implies that as much of their strength is abstract as it is tangible.One thing worth noting is that Physical Empowerment isn't linked to entropy, as noted by Entropist. From there, it stands to reason that it is either a neutral concept or aligned to one or more of the primal forces. Of the ones mentioned, it seems it would most likely fit under the Perfect Prince or the Hound of Conquest. As the former has a strong Dreamland focus and emphasis on perfection of skill, it stands to reason that sheer, brute force is likelier to be oriented to the Hound than any other. It looks like Exalted Conquerors have fewer hax than most factions and get by on intricate synergies between their minions/marks and their own raw stats.
Is it wrong to use sketches for character art in a CYOA?
>>94753330No. I appreciate actually consistent art. We have AI for this too, but at the moment everyone seems to be way too stupid to make it not look like AI.
>>94753247Unless explicitly told otherwise I always assume companions I don't pick don't exist
>>94753165I don't want to be either mage nor warrior. I want to be ruler. My armies will being me crowns innumerable.
>>94753381And waifus, right?
>>94753381>I want men to do everything for meThis is a woman's fantasy. You want to be a princess.
>>94753449False. He's describing peak overlord life.
Magi Case Redux is coming out this year. We won urban fantasy and mage chads.
>all it takes is ice and shadow themed powers and an anime image in the build for them to go and think “ow the edge” Grow up
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>>94753467Let's hope
>>94753486Entropist tok is not in here.
>>94753469>restarting the discussion out of nowhereWhy do you care?
>>94753507>not even alternate versions of Tok can tolerate the shame of DISCIPLINE
>>94753508Grow up
>>94753508I think there's somr anons dedicated to hating on me and at least another that's trying to falseflag/keep anons hating on me. Weird, just ignore them.
>>94753519That doesn't answer the question. You're likely not the "edgy" dude himself, since he ignores the bad attention - which makes YOUR sudden appearance weird.Why do you care?
>>94753507He transitioned, just like the real tok will one day
>>94753426Perhaps.
>>94753527anon it's bait, stop biting
>>94753381>>94753459>Sneaks past your underlings and mogs you with my physically superior buildwhat now fag?
>>94753572>sneaksThis is why you'll never defeat the Hound. His sense of smell is too strong.
>>94753579Fart build? does it have a possiblity?
>Best wuxia/martial arts CYOA>Its only two pages>Written by ItalicsWe are so cooked.
>>94753579>diverting the topicThe Hound would thank me for getting rid of weakling fags
>>94753572>gets beaten up by my elite personal guards and exalted champion wives I was fuckingMy minions defend me.
>>94753588Tang > Demon > Heroine > FairyObjectievly.
>>94753595>too retarded to understand what "sneak" meansa coward and a retard?
>>94753587>toxic attrition to counter supreme sensesThis might be the solution to win against the Hound.>>94753594Of course tactical stealth and superior strength will win against a minion cuck, but sneaking up on the Hound is likely impossible. Tempered Conquerors most likely lead from the front.
>>94753604You got detected, sorry jobber.
>>94753600Fairy = Heroine >Demon (hot but her cult's mentality of severing ties is bad)>Tang(ugly and weird)
>>94753469What makes ice edgy? Is it becomes steel is cold?
>>94753617>Calls others jobbers while hiding behind womenYou are the reason why every Overlord Cyoa has to specify that minions have unconditionally loyalty, otherwise they'll turn on your pathetic ass in a heartbeat.
>>94753625I can't imagine having such shit taste to want a literal prostitute at the very top. While we are at it the point of Demon Cults in wuxian fiction is that the strongest rules and you get promoted the stronger you are and the more you dominate others to follow your will. It's like being a Sith except they can actually organize.
>>94753644Cold and detached teenagers, mostly.
Cyoas with gattos?
>>94753661>a literal prostitute Singer and dancer =/= prostitute. Maybe this is a weird concept to you but I hope your brain doesn't explote.> While we are at it the point of Demon Cults in wuxian fiction is that the strongest rules and you get promoted the stronger you are and the more you dominate others to follow your will. It's like being a Sith except they can actually organize.Don't care, the explanation of her text about their mentality is one mentality I wouldn't like in a partner.
>>94753661nta, she isn't a prostitute just a singer and danger, but yeah her personality is shit.
>>94753678>>94753685Sincers and dancers is a euphenism in Wuxia. They entertain at melody houses which are high end prostitute tea places and inns which is often ran by a powerful hag capable of using music martial arts and is part of the Unorthodox Faction.You guys need to open your eyes. Courting death like this.
>>94753713It's Italics. Do you think he would use an obscure euphenism?You must be really dumb.
>>94753600>I was not prepared for such techniques but I will not be at the bottom always>can we not talk about such things in public?>Don't want my grandfather to hear about it so earlyYou two totally fucked right?
>>94753713The Fairy isn't just worker there, she is the adopted daughter of the owner and is basically a spoiled princess. I doubt she would be so carefree if she was sex worker.
>>94753667None. No gatto gyoa.
>>94753728She was talking about martial arts and fighting.
>>94753654>you are basedThanks I appreciate it.
>>94753763Then why would she not want to talk about it in public or not let her grandfather know for now?
>>94752994kill yourself redditoid
>>94753782Why are you so mad, my build WAS edgy. I like edgy doomer stuff.
>>94753780Because losing is shameful in Wuxia and you basically beat up a girl who is the Orthodox faction leader child.
>>94753360You are explicitly told otherwise in the cyoa (at the start of the companion section)
>>94753793Okay you convinced me. But I will headcanon in bed she fights for control and ends up a bottom
>>94753804I guess you're right, that would change my build a little. I might make a more normal build in a little bit.
>>94753721>Do you think he would use an obscure euphenism?Italics loves whore character. Remember the succubus loli in his occcultpunk CYOA.
>>94753862Huspedo is the lord of whores.Literally all the artifacts are used goods.
>>94753815Her: Today. I will beat the dick.Heh. Funny in both ways.
>>94753862Yes, but he literally said she was a whore, he didn't use an obscure euphenism
Does anyone know who the author of this CYOA is?
>>94753879Even the Jian?
>>94753890Don't fall for bait. The artifacts by design are virgins
Are mystery box options good to include in a CYOA?
Succubus did nothing wrong.Her body may be defiled, but her heart is pure like a virgin.
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>>94753919>Let's you fuck other girls>Removes herself from her business that made tons of moneyIs the best of the list for sure
>>94753890Yes she said that she was passed around to all the best swordsmen of the house.
>>94753886I don't think it has a named author. Was first posted here jan 8th 2021.
>>94753939>Let's you fuck other girls.Literal Sylphie tier and using the cuck chair.
>>94753968I'm not a cuck, but I want to watch Jian get gangbanged by swordsmen of House Aryan and have her look at me sometimes while doing it. I would feel motivation like Vergil if she did it.
>>94753862>Succubus loli>Whoreyou expect a succubus to be chaste?
>>94754002You don't have to have sex to get semen.
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>>94754025breedable
>>94754012a virgin Succubus is a dead Succubus since they feed through sex
>>94754025Lmao nah I would never make a tranny build.
>>94754036Sodomy isn't sex?
>>94754045Just think about it for a second. If you don't pick true son and get a woman's body, you can breed with other sons to make the superior fighters. Imagine if Tok didn't go the false xister route and he could breed you to make genetically perfect children
>>94754002>>94753939>Fell in love with you after watching you stab a person to death.RED FLAGs
>>94753886False Creation, Replication DeviceBroken beyond measure.
>>94754068I don't want to be a woman nor do I really want kids.
>>94754012>You don't have to have sex to get semen.So you're fine with knowing she's been slurping gallons of cum but not with ordinary sex?Me personally I wouldn't touch a Succubus in the first place, but you wanting them the litral embodiment of lust to go against their nature just for you is delusional.
>>94754086Which is better? To be born good? Or to go against your evil nature to do good?
>>94754082based
>>94754045>>94754082>femboy body >mentally a womanDosent really matter what you want, does it?
>>94754086And this is why yuo die in the CYOA. All the girls are bad but without them you don't make it out of the crime ridden hood.
>>94754142I understand this is bait but I wouldn't really call any of the art I use 'femboys' but sure. Also nothing I've said would lead me to mentally being a woman.
>>94754002Vampire is better
>>94754156>no self awareness The checklist keeps growing
>earnestly engaging with entroposhitPlay reddit games win reddit prizes
>>94754244Why even shitpost at me, you aren't making me mad at you and are just dying on a weird and dumb hill. I don't get it.
>>94754267Shut up aro, we already know it's you.
>>94754299>aromage out of nowhereSeriously, what's up with these shitposters lately?
>>94753986>I'm not a cuckSomehow I doubt it
>>94754338>latelyIt's unironically just because you're talking about entropist. The fans have come out of the woodwork.It's just a majority of the thread since /tg/ and especially /cyoag/ is essentially completely dead.
>>94754363Its mostly only vaguely related to entropist, its just one anon at the moment but in general there's been very high shitposter activity. Feels like every week it gets worse lately.
>>94754352Are you a cuck for watching gangbang porn? Or jacking it to a doujin with a girl doing it with multiple men?
>>94754380The other guy acts like shitpost didn't exist before or after entropist, just today and somehow because of it,It's 1 guy trying to make a weird conversation to revive the thread, weird way to do it trying to shitpost about 1 guy
>>94754363There is one anon that always falseflags as an entropist fan just to shit on them. Kinda like this>Something not related in any way to entropist is posted>THIS IS NOTHING COMPARED TO ENTROPIST. THE BEST CYOA EVER MADE!And then they shitpost by saying entropistfans are the worse when literally no one is talking about it. I think aro and hus has some shitposters like that too. Italics too, probably.
>>94754467The Seethers, maybe it's even just one True Seether
>>94754457Yes. All porn where a man fucks a woman is cuck porn. You are watching a girl you find attractive being taken by someone who is not you and masturbating to it. That is why cuckold has become so popular. Because all porn was a gateway into it.
>>94754486What if its masturbation porn.
>>94754457Well within the CYOA you are having your wife gangbanged so that would be cuck coded imo
>>94754457NTA but yea, I don't like either of those because I wouldn't want another dude fucking my girl.
>>94754515There is only one solution. Stop watching porn and have sex instead. Don't let them turn you into a cuck.
>>94754338No one could possibly mistake aro for monsterfag so it's cleary a diversionary tactic
I'm doing the thief CYOA and ughhhh some of these heists are difficult to think around...
I'm doing the cunny CYOA and UWOOOGGHHH some of these cunnies are difficult to think around...
all thief cyoas should be cunny cyoas desu
>>94754519How is the Jian my wife?
>>94754622Now you know the heavy weight cunny authors have to carry
>>94754635Jian my wife is the how?
Nah but fo real doe I have no idea how to handle this
>>94754635Since the spear is a bust i've been considering taking jian, but I'm already out of points and we don't get hardly any extra so taking her purely for guiding star (which I wont have) seems useless.
No, but for real though. I have no idea how to handle this.
>>94754548You can't fool us, [Insert disliked author here]
>>94754671>t. [Insert any author here]
>>94754671I LIKE ARO PLEASE GIVE ME ULTIMATE GOD REDUX
>>94754679Good bait. I think the arocattle will take it.
>>94754681Mmm tasty catflesh
>>94754668As a professional cunny author I could help.What's the CYOA about?
>>94754667>Since the spear is a bustWe haven't seen her powers yet
>>94754686How does one use a character you already know. I have a hard time separating them for the cyoa, but I love some of the designs.
>>94754681Its not bait I need to have an existential crisis between whether I want to go life with minor creation to live in a monstergirl paradise with my light and dark ultimate god wives or if I want to go death/dark because I feel like I align more with them personally but conflict with khthibe's and Mati's domains...
>>94754693Her drawbacks were sufficient to deter me from wanting her anymore.
>>94754699There is nothing wrong with taking inspiration from the original character but you could consider how different circumstances could change her or recontextualize her personality.For example she is clearly very smug and maybe dumb.Why is she so smug?Is she actually dumb or just pretending to be dumb?What kind of problems does she have that the player can help her with?
What do you want out of Ultimate God, anon? What would make it better for you? What are you hoping to see?
>>94753588Not enough waifusNorthern MountainsBrigandFistWild Beast King ArtsPriestess of the Demonic Cult, she's the only decent waifuConquerors from the North
>>94754795Ultimate God but even better
>>94754706Wait, are you not continuing your demigod build?Also what is your opinion on multiple waifus? I always feel like an asshole myself on that.
>>94754795It's already mostly finished I thought, I just want it to be done and compiled so I can agonize. She already has the two characters I wanted and others got her to give a second minor major power so its just a matter of being able to finish a build.>>94754823>Wait, are you not continuing your demigod build?No but I thought she was gonna make a god dlc or something for that. My favorite waifus are Mati and Kthibhe from the planeswalker cyoas, unlike paladin who likes the vampire and oni iirc from demigod, star-jin from gateway (I was going to take her in my gateway build but he got mad about it) and the zelda elf one from nexus. My origin will probably be from one of the planeswalker cyoas while his will probably be from the demigod one. >Also what is your opinion on multiple waifus? I always feel like an asshole myself on that.In general I like having multiple and always try to go for multiple if I can, but only if I like them. Specifically for our ultimate god I'm pretty sure we're going pantheon and splitting it 2 for each.
>>94754877I forgor but on the topic of waifus the only thing i'm on the fence about is having ultimate god wives and other ones because god damn I like dethes as well for my court.
we get it you're lonely as fuck
>>94754795Aro?More lore on the first and the last way of life, some info on their society etc. Maybe some events that lets you visit other families or the voidborne?Then some better items that are useful your entire life, like the ultimate weapon or the void ship. Something rare even, that cant be made by no god but required something extra. On the top of my head thats it.Then make the angels good.
>>94754657Nxtub's cyoas are notoriously hard
>>94754893What does that have to do with anything.
>>94754902>Then some better items that are useful your entire life, like the ultimate weapon or the void ship. Something rare even, that cant be made by no god but required something extra.>Then make the angels good.Oh were these two not changed? I thought they were since she was on page 13 or something last I saw.
>>94754955obsession over waifus
>>94754963nta but waifus are half of the entire cyoa so seems like an appropriate portion to fixate on
>>94754795I want it to stay the same, there is no need for a remake, just like Lord of the Rings doesn't need any remake
>>94754795You already know and yet pretend not to because "it is boring"
>>94754976it's not half of the cyoa every companion and family member isn't a waifu
>>94754986It's an update, not a remake. Most of the cyoa is still the same, there's just more.>>94754902Yeah I buffed all the items and the angel options and added three more items, and I'm planning on expanding a lot of the lore and even adding more top-tier beings that can put up a fight against Ultima like the Hellstar King, the Titan Empire, and the Living Void.>>94754998No idea what you're talking about.
>>94755003Family members are very much waifus wdym.
>>94754961I dunno, she was working on the weapon that i know.But the voidship was peak and i hope we can keep customizing it. Cooler if she made her own customization option as well but i doubt it.I also know the light of creation was a thing, but unless there is some new mystery added to it, it will remain pretty lackluster.>>94754795I forgot but an option to build your own multiverse like last time maybe?>>94755007Holy based, looking forward to it, have finished my wip build and some of the writeup, but this changes things. Wonderful news.>Living VoidIs this a living god reference?
>>94755007That sounds interesting.
>>94754711Ngl they aren't that bad.
>>94754976You are right the whole CYOA should be waifus.Are there any CYOAs like that?
>>94755009you don't have what it takes to waifu them all oncethey are your equals, and have no reason to share you
>>94755059The Living Void is the nascent awareness of the Void, which never truly formed into its own deity like Skai did, but occasionally still alters events and births children like Zoe even in its unborn slumber.
>>94755007>No idea what you're talking aboutAs expected.
>>94755007> I'm planning on expanding a lot of the lore and even adding more top-tier beings that can put up a fight against Ultima like the Hellstar King, the Titan Empire, and the Living Void.Interesting. I hope there's some weird shit that's not attached to the Void or Authors. Something dream related, maybe.
>>94755121Stop being parasocial
>>94755105Bet they will have something to do with the ashen, since they are so similar.
>>94755082Thats cool bro don’t mind me with my two life partners.
>>94755154Yet another word that has lost all meaning. Let us add it to headcanon, incel, woke, grifter, and the others.
>>94755082This smells like projection.
After quite a lot of work, I'm happy to present my first CYOA, Ultimate Grimoire.
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>>94755299nuh uh I'm not a hedonist waifufag that's afraid of having brothers in arms because they might steal my girl
>>94755369
>>94755372>afraid of having brothers in arms>as stated the pantheon is me and a buddy with two eachRead.
>>94755361>modesWhy? I'm just going to pick easy since it gives the most points. Otherwise give me a bit to look at it.
>>94755383
>>94755392
>>94755361Wuoh. Just when I was going to bed. Going to comment on it tomorrow after I wake up. Ty for your contribution
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>>94755361Oh wow, another power-picker...now, I don't mean to discourage you anon. As far as the cyoa itself goes, it's not bad. You didn't try to have three different points or some dumb shit like that.But like...why am I supposed to care? I get to pick the shadow powers, cool. Is that it? What's the point? There's so many of these cyoas that are the same thing where they just give you a shopping list of power and leave it at that.
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>>94755361Anon why did you feel that you needed to fill this CYOA with literal empty space?
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>>94755361anon you cooked
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>>94755361Some of the options have more empty space than text, WHY?!?!?!
>>94755361i'm going to bed babe but thanks for the OC i'll read it tomorrow anon!!!!!
>>94755436crap, it says the last image resolution is too large. What is the limit on here?
>>94755436The image for Domain of Chaos can technically get you banned, might wanna change it
>>947554679000 9000 or around that
>>947554678mb, 8000x10000
>>94755478>8mbermm its 4mb DOE
>>94755471Why?
>>94755361It all looks cool, give me a while to look it over and everything but I like a lot of the art choices and skimming it looks like you made really cool powers. It'll be a while but I'll try to make a build.
>>94755491he's being retarded about the no MLP outside of the containment board rule, ignore it
>>94754893Sir this is cyoag
>>94755361>>94755390Modes are always a mistake
>>94755361Nice, and it's dark magic themed? I'm going to make a build, either tonight or tomorrow.
genie anon >>94740174, it seems like you are still lacking pastriesi will break the rule and post one more
>>94755485nvm im wrong its 8
>>94751418I think it should kind of go without saying, but maybe this does need an update that mentions "You can't take drawbacks that affect your human form if you chose permanent transformation". I remember once just taking permanent change and being a smartass to collect a bunch of additional embers.
>>94755551The only human only drawback is odd fellow though
>>94755436Fixed it
>>94755573True, that and 'old habits'. I might be thinking of an older version that included a 'exhausting transformation' drawback.
>>94755535(and one more)>>94740174
>>94755599Old habits makes you more animalistic when transformed as it's worded
>>94755599Also good point I don't know if I remember there being more drawbacks exactly but I think I do, I dunno
>>94755361Entropistanon created yet another author.
>>94755411I do plan to add more at a later date, so it won't just be powers in a vacuum.
>>94754893we get it you're gay
>>94755361>The only powers you will gain immediately are the novice levels.Well damn. I guess this means a build that lets you learn faster or gives you more relative time to learn would be most ideal.>Gifted(200)>Advanced Blood (170), Master Demonology (110), Master Psychic (50)>Hemetallurgy (48), Purify Blood (45), Ichor (40), Demonic Enchantment (36), Banish (32), Consume Soul (27), Mind Spike (24), Siphon Psyche (20), Ritual of Summoning (17), Hellgate (13), Telepathy (11), Telekinesis (8), Unholy Ward (6), Hexproof (4), Lifesteal (1), Bloodhound (0)Great Devourer build. I can easily improve myself through the siphoning of psyches and the consuming of souls, preferably debilitating them with a Mind Spike/Siphon Psyche combo before eating the soul. I'm not that sure about getting ganked by holy creatures or paladins so I'm thinking about opening a Hellgate and just farming the denizens of Hell as I grow in strength. A Hemetallurgy/Ichor/Demonic Enchantment combo could also work to make a variety of anti-demon weapons and armors and artifacts to help with this. Maybe one day I'll devour the entirety of Hell. Then, perhaps, I will be Hell. Consume Soul mentions that particularly powerful souls could remain conscious and fight me but it feels like a complete mind-drain should prevent that? Learning everything in the book should be a lot easier if I have a great mass of stolen intellect and devoured souls to help me understand.
>>94755361Combos are good design, difficulty modes are bad design. Simple as.
>>94755670What are you planning on adding?
>>94755361>No waifus >No interesting setting>No goals>No enemiesI mean it's good but I see several ways it could be improved.
>>94755361This is very similar to luminary
>>94755722An amazing setting and equally amazing waifus>>94755729see this post friend :)
>>94755722>>94755729Stuff like this seems like a good start. The pages I am already planning are perks, drawbacks, and companions.Choosing a world to go to or base building would probably come after, but I'm open to suggestions.
>>94755759>Choosing a world to go toOh... You are from reddit.
>>94755729>>No waifusGOOD.
>>94755759Why the fuck did you release it unfinished?
>>94755759Without seeing examples it sounds good at least. I'm looking through it all now. Do you have an imgchest with this stuff yet?
>>94755787Not your best shitpost. I am disappointed. This is on the level of shitting on weebs. You can do better.
>>94755787>Homosexual>Gay>Faggot>Affeminate>Unmanly>Womanish>QueerYou like men anon
>>94755817I am not the avatarfag, I spit on you for assuming that.>>94755825Go look at porn CYOAs for that shit, NIGGA.Hell in those the waifus are at least interesting.Shit ass safe CYOA 'whyfoos' that are lame and boring, fuck that.
>>94755843This is just a tiny bit better. Still amateur shitposting hour.
>>94755795I'll work on that soon
we get it you're sexy
>>94755361Regarding difficulties, Verse Crossing did it best by limiting options as well as points, that forces you to be creative. Otherwise just limiting points is lazy.
>>94755843Now try posting it but without crying little queer boy
>>94755877Ok, hereGo look at porn CYOAs for that shit, NIGGA.Hell in those the waifus are at least interesting.Shit ass safe CYOA 'whyfoos' that are lame and boring, fuck that.
Actually.*says without crying* Go look at porn CYOAs for that shit, NIGGA.Hell in those the waifus are at least interesting.Shit ass safe CYOA 'whyfoos' that are lame and boring, fuck that.There
>>94755887>He did cry
>trash cyoa>interesting waifuslmao. That shit forgets personality and replaces it for fetishes catered to masochists that want to troon out.
>n-nuh uh my E-EPIC waifu who is 'cute shy girl stuck in her shell uwu but she'll hekkin love u if u talk to her also shes a great cook!' is more interesting okay!!Yeah yeah brother whatever floats your cope. Trash CYOAs own you
>>94755936Agreed lists of fetishes aren't good waifus that part should be left to the imagination.
>>94755876Thats a good Idea, I'll try to implement that in some way.
>>94755361Why are the options so awkwardly spaced?
Can we stop multiverseslop? Seriously. Stop it. Is just an excuse to not make a setting.
>>94755976Not him but they're literally on a grid, nigga
>>94755982You're right, we need more megaverseslop and omniverseslop.
>>94755994ultimate god...
>>94755997>(Fight the White Knights)
>>94755982It is an excuse to escape the heat death of the universe...
>>94756039I will just wait for them to die of old age
>>94756054But they're younger than you?
>>94756063Its over
>>94755965I wouldn't do that. That sounds shitty desu.
>>94755361The power selection is good, but yeah, right now it needs a proper setting so that I can imagine myself using these spells.The core is great though.
>>94755361This is a good cyoa, much better than most of the slop that's posted here, don't get discouraged anon
>>94756072Sorry, it will be multiversesloppa. Just do the usual and imagine yourself jobbing to goku. I am just too lazy to make a setting.
>>94756096Unironically can you stop shitposting please.
>>94756145Yes, please stop. You are pathetic.
>>94756096>>94756153I don't get the point of falseflagging as authors unless you're trying to kill this general off
>>94755876Trolling. That is the most retarded thing in verse crossing and there are A LOT of retarded things in it.
>>94756158I don't get the point of defending this when you know it is going to happen.
>>94755361I would advise you to remove the difficulty modes, because they don't add much and there is no reason for anyone not to pick the easy mode with the highest number of points.
>>94756169He just consumed too many interactive cyoas. That is why he mentioned "picking a world" and why he has difficulty modes.
>>94756166Defending what????Are you some kind of schizoid? Are you preemptively hating on the CYOA and calling me a shill before anything even happens?
>>94756189I accept your concession
>>94755361Remove all that empty space, you lazy ass.
>>94756209Yeah ok you're some kind of pet schizo
>>94756169Ok but if you do remove difficulty make it 300 points normal pls thnx
really, really not cute tonight guys....
>>94755361Make the files bigger. There is a lot of artifact for no good reason.
No, you guys are ALWAYS cute!
>>94756242Thank you, aro.
>>94755361Have titles for the skill level sections.
How would you balance magic martials and pure magic users?Pic related is pre-prequel George Lucas (before he decided to give Yoda a lightsaber).
>>94755361In page 10, put the last 4 options in the middle instead of the sides.
>>94756275same way everything balances it, it's just sword magic
>>94756275Pure magic is stronger and always wins. Even Sheev believes this, and he only uses lightsabers to mock and outplay the Jedi.
>>94756275You give martials magic and then pretend is not magic by calling it something different. Here are some names of totally not magic systems you can use for your next novel.>Ki>Chi>Spirit energy>Haki>Inner Force
>>94756169Fair enough, I had extra space so I figured I would just throw it in.>>94756232of course, because the other options in the later pages can balance it out.
>>94756298>You give martials magic and then pretend is not magic by calling it something different.Just make martials retarded and in denial?
>>94756313>Just make martials retarded and in denial?Man, have you ever checked at a "martial vs caster" thread? Literally any answer martialfags have to casters destroying them is "using magic but not calling it magic". "Yeah, my high level warrior is totally able to cut mountains with his 1m20 long sword but somehow it's not magic at all".
>>94756275You make the pure magic users into supremely arrogant jobbers with delusions of grandeur in order to show off the humble, determined, and rational nature of the martial.
>>94756313listen NIGGER (and i call you a nigger affectionately), most wizards and sorcerors that conan fought used parlor tricks and maybe summoned some demons or somethingif you're jumping around and cutting the moon it's magic
>>94756332This is sometimes done. Most often when there is no sword magic to make the martials win. It works because the wizard is too busy being a retard to instantly kill the martial.
>>94756332>>94756349If magic is the brutal kind then it's whoever hits first. =/
>>94756357Magi case works like that. A little bit boring
>>94756275Depict martials as chads and mages as wojaks
Just give your martials high tech.
>>94755361peak oc
>>94751619Love this CYOA.Any chance you'll post the companion one where you fight for the bad guys?
>>94756387>high tech>not magickys
>>94756387>high tech sword>vs high tech magicyeah... sorry
>>94756393>>94756398samefag kys
>>94755729Waifus don't make everything better, anon.
>>94756275>How would you balance magic martials and pure magic users?Powerful magic spells should require chants or rituals that would be impractical to perform in direct combat, but can be pretty useful as rear-line artillery as long as they don't get caught in melee.Magic martials on the other hand should use smaller scale spells that cast quickly, which is more practical for direct melee combat.
>>94756404>>>94756393>>>94756398(You)>samefag kyscalm down pal not everyone in here is some dishonest fag schizo (yet)
I think Martials should be specialized to fight, and casters should be generally more versatile. A casters job is to buff and support their martials so they can do the fighting for them and they can get back to deciphering the secrets of the arcane or something.
Don't do magic. Don't do martials. Setting is modern world. Everyone uses guns like usual. Problem solved.
>>94756393>>94756398a sword works by physically hitting the enemy, splitting skin and meat and breaking bonesa bullet works by physically hitting the enemy, splitting skin and meat and breaking bonesneither involve magic, therefore they're both martial
>>94756406There is literaly no CYOA that wouldn't benefit from having waifus in it.
Who the fuck cares about balance? Magic is like bullets, but worse. You die.
>>94756419>gunfagI'll have fun thanks
>>94756422why did u tag me, i said high tech sword vs high tech magic
>>94756422A gun is magic. How is it not? Alchemists made blackpowder. It's magic that everyone has access to. Cellphones are wands and apps are spells.
>>94756430Magic would be just like guns anyways. Everyone getting oneshotted from distance.
>>94756419Magic guns are peak. I want to shoot blessed silver bullets that have runes engraved on the tip.
>>94756275Dragon age does something kind of interesting about it, magic there is still very powerful but it has 2 major weaknesses: one is some martials (templars) learning counter magic which pretty much renders the mage powerless, and the other is that casting and learning magic is a very dangerous activity since demons from the fade (land of magic?) could detect you and take over your body permanently
>>94756444>Magic guns are peak.This implies you know nothing about them. The equivalent of handling an alien raygun.
>>94756449>one is some martials (templars) learning counter magic which pretty much renders the mage powerlessOnly idiot mages. Ones who summon and use the terrain still stomp. High level mages turn into dragons. Gay/cringe ass setting btw.
>>94756438It's a shame so few settings work with the "science is basically magic when you think about it" angle. I can only count like less than 5 off the top of my head.
I want to fucking kill someone.My laptop is barely alive.Good thing is that next week the new one will arrive.
>>94756454Yeah so what? Indecipherable Alien guns are cool too. Give me an Archaeotech Pistol while you're at it.
>>94756465>minor inconvenience>waaaah i want to killbaby.
>>94756304>of course, because the other options in the later pages can balance it out>the perks and companions are going to take from our main point totalOh no its dragonfall all over again...
>>94756463The magic is lost because humans take everything for granted and don't truly fathom the casual wonders they're surrounded by at all times. They see mystery and think it's not magic, because the nerds tell them it's nothing.
>>94756449dragon age magic has literally 0 dangers unless you actively let yourself be possessed, it's voluntary
>>94756488Dragon age vs one piece. Which one has less danger?
Pic related is martial done well.
>>94756449>>94756488Um, you forget, mages DO have a canon weakness, one that ORIGINALLY was going to be mechanically enforced, before faggot devs thought "omg it's going to annoy players", and it's LYRIUM ADDICTION. Mages are all crackheads.
>>94756504It would have been annoying. Good thing it was not added. The combat in that game is already shit enough.
>>94756500Dragon Age. Eating a dragon fruit means you can't ever get in the water. It's fucked.
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>>94756504>and it's LYRIUM ADDICTION. Mages are all crackheads.that's the templars, stupidthey use lyrium to get their powers (since they're not mages) and that's how the church controls themmages don't need lyrium>>94756500uhhh in what
>>94756500actually i'll just assume instead of wait for you to reply, probably onepiece because its a hellhole full of giant monsters
>>94756500Probably Dragon Age. The recent release of Veilguard has turned the whole setting family friendly.
>>94756516Mages chug lyrium potions too you retard. They ALL do.
oh wait you said less, fuckonepiece is more dangerous is what i meant
>>94756526But no one ever dies in one piece
IMA 'BOUT TA PULL A BARVE
>>94756534WRONG, NIGGAthey CAN use lyrium to enhance their power since its basically magic crystals and they CAN use it in potions to get mana back fastertemplars use it 24/7 because they HAVE to
>>94756546Yep, and there was still going to be a lyrium addiction mechanic for lyrium potion chuggers in the game before it was scrapped :^)Look it up
>>94756550nothing to do with what you were talking about albeit
>>94756552Magic should have consequences. Dumb bitch.
>>94756557ok but i was just correcting you on the fact that it doesn't thoelyrium is an addictive rock that templars have to use, if a mage uses it too that's their dealmagic in dragon age is fun and free unless you let a demon take you over (the only reason theres the muh mages thing is because normalfags are hekkin scared of the mages destroying everything and being evil because tevinter ruled the planet)
also that's because they copied some concepts from warhammer but not all
>>94756568I am SAYING that the developers of ORIGINS their FIRST GAME had ORIGINALLY intended for LYRIUM POTIONS to be ADDICTIVE MECHANICALLY and this WAS going to be represented by the MAGES and the TEMPLAR who CHUG THEM.Now fuck off.
>>94756576>and it's LYRIUM ADDICTION. Mages are all crackheads.nuh uh
>>94756584They were going to be, and they still technically can be. ;^)
>>94756589you're also kind of misunderstanding the fact that mages are more like a slave race, i doubt they'd get mana potions thrown at them while they're barely tolerated, the templars actively have to use lyrium to even be templarsin regards to the 'they were going to be' quote
>>94756427It'd ruin isolation-based cyoas if you had a waifu with you, but whatev. Explain how something like Anglerfish benefits from waifus. Not companions - waifus.
>>94756313>can't distinguish between different types of supernatural abilities Not smart enough to be a caster
>>94756617>AnglerfishIsn't Anglerfish a waifu CYOA already?Also tons of isolation CYOAs have waifus
>>94756623>he thinks all of the supernatural isn't already magic>he thinks the supernatural isn't just an oxymoron based around unfamiliarity
>They think I am NOT the strongestFools
>>94756637>literally does not know the correct definition of magic>still tries to reply
>>94756646Kneel right now and I may yet forgive you.
>>94756646>he thinks a cellphone wouldn't be supernatural to a caveman
>>94756636And I'm saying it's ruining the mood. How are you supposed to feel loneliness and isolation if there is a housewife nearby?>Anglerfish>waifu cyoaI'm hesitating between mocking your reading comprehension and asking you to reread the cyoa, but it's bait.It has to be.
>high tech magic cellphone
>>94756665I can fix her.Besides as I said a ton of isolayion CYOAs already have waifus.And even then do you have any other example?Even this one doesn't work ilsolation CYOAs are glorified comfy neet fantasies.
>>94756665>he doesn't know
>>94756692>he doesn't know
>>94756691...So you're confronted with a soul devouring, reality warping using your own expectations as lures, and you think it's a romanceable option?Yeah, I'm still convinced you're joking. >other examplesArbiter of Fairies is just about judging cases - no need for waifus. I forgot the name, but there was a CYOA about growing crystals (Sockets?) - same thing. Something named Occult didn't need them either, same thing for Passenger by Monchop.What's the use of waifus in pure powerpickers, even?
>>94756742Didn't ask
>>94755361Combinations are a good idea but it feels like with the intended 200 points they're a gimmick right now and you're only going to pick them if you're already building in the magic schools they're in. Here's an example for some of the combinations with points required:100 Plague of Undeath - half your points for a zombie virus when 64 points in Void gives us dimensional travel feels meh98 Eldritch Mind - resistance to mind attacks and madness feels like something a Tier 2 Psychic ability should give, also "totally immune to X" is not a great thing to give out because then it means that niggas who invested 100 points in Psychic now can do jack shit against you except throw rocks. I'd understand a ghost being totally immune to thrown rocks, but gigabrained mindbenders should at least be allowed to have mind duels lasting years in the mindspace against each other or something71 Devil Forging - this feels like something that's more or less balanced, you're already summoning demons, and you're already making undead, and it gives a nice synergy between the two, I wish more combinations were like this.60 Dark Energy and 40 Black Flame - what's the power level of these two? Black Flame feels like it's more powerful being immune to antimagic than Dark Energy that just gives a bonus against angels or whatnot.Also, tier 1 schools give very weak initial powers so you're encouraged to max out 2 schools for their TIII magic. I'd reduce all school point costs by 5 to make it easier to have more weak but useful powers. Like let's say I'm spending 119 points to take everything in necromancy to become a lich, how about a simple fear spell for me to add to my build's theme? Maybe darkvision? Nah, it means I now have to spend 11 and 13 points respectively just to buy those shitty TI schools that don't even give me much compared to my already awesome TIII necromancy powers.
>>94756742>engaging with waifufags
>>94755361Also, don't you dare make us pick companions using those initial 200 spell points or I will find where you live. Make companions/artifacts/bases etc. different type of picks.
>>94756742You are weak for not rape correcting the anglerfish.Also literally all the CYOAs you mentioned could be improved with waifus.You can have a cute attorney waifuThat something "didn't need them" doesn't mean that having them wouldn't have made them better.Also waifus in pure power pickers gives you company of a sexy peer.I honestly don't get your point there is nothing that wouldn't be better with waifus.
>>94755361>Void:Level: 3Spells: Syphon Energy, Mana Drain, Void Portal, Dark Matter, Void Rift>Blood:Level: 3Spells: Bloodhound, Blood Form>Biomancy:Level: 3Spells: Adaptation, Poly Form, Living Weapon, Assimilation, Biomechanical>Psychic:Level: 3Spells: Telepathy, Mind Spike, Astral Form, Telekinesis, PK Energy, Syphon Psych>Combinations:Eldritch Mind, Blood that Hates
>>94756761Really good suggestions, I'll think more about how to balance things out for the next version.Thank you, based chad anon.
>>94756742Don't bother.
>>94756796And I don't understand how you can't fathom my perspective, even if you disagree.Except for the Anglerfish subject, because you're obviously saying more and more outlandish things to mock me. Only rational explanation for that tok tier confidence in a tok tier plan.
Not related to anything but do you guys remember how Tok's plan to defeat other players in Entropist was to use a nuclear bomb even though the CYOA specifically said nuclear bombs won't do shit? That retard was extremely smug about it too, was pretty hilarious.
>>94756818I knew someone would make this sort build sooner or latter. The cyoa has sooo many devouring options.
>>94756830It's hard to let go when you feel so close to mutual understanding.aka "I can fix him"
>>94756882And it's best to use all of them, otherwise it would be a huge waste.
>>94755683>>94756761>>94756818Are these really the jobbers that have come to fight me? I should have gone to Yamcha's place instead.
>>94755361I was curious so I totaled each section.Shadow: 120 PointsVoid: 119Necromancy: 119Blood: 115Demonology: 116Biomancy: 118Psychic: 117Chaos: 116I read each section except for most of the combinations so far, i'll get to combinations in a bit, but so far things I've noticed are:Chaos magic single handedly blows every other section out of the water no question. Complete reality warping with only a small chance of blowing yourself up (which you can revive from with a lot of other powers) is ridiculous, and things like unravel literally just completely invalidate entire potential threats with little input. I don't know if you could salvage this magic, after reading it all i'm under the impression this needs to be either entirely reworked or removed entirely. Stasis is also an ability that is just ridiculously OP and utterly fucked.The types of demons you can turn into or pact with are not explained at all, which would be very important since I need to know what I'm dealing with in order to make proper use of demonology. I don't know what demons are like in this setting, so I cannot properly figure out how to go about interacting with them.Some abilities in void such as Swipe Space and Emptiness don't make sense to me, while I think I understand the gist, they are very weirdly written I don't understand exactly what they're supposed to do.Psychic and especially Biomancy seem like the actual core tier upgrade gives you most of what you would want out of them, and then most of the point upgrade powers are weird sidegrades. Biomancy also seems to just be *weird* in general. The whole spawn and anagenetic overload shit is almost nonsensical and just feels sort of out of place. The actual tier of biomancy mostly gives what people would want out of it aside from cloning.}Other than those I don't really have a problem with most of the other actual power sections (I will read the combination after this and find out if its better or worse).
>>94757001But would you lose?
>>94757001>Chaos magic single handedly blows every other section out of the waterExcept psychic which lets you syphon knowledge and intelligence. If you can't find someone who knows chaos magic, you can simply deduce it.
>>94757074>Nah I'd win
>>94757074>syphon knowledgeIt says intelligence and wisdom though, not knowledge. Does magical prowess count as wisdom?
>>94757102Check the last sentence of psychic lvl 3's description.
>>94757114Huh. It's more OP than I thought.
>>94755574>>94757001Now I've read combinations, once again chaos magic shows its fucking dumb with Destined Quest which is another incredibly OP ability. "Follow these steps to win literally anything" like ok bro. Chaos magic and such stuff frankly just needs to be removed, nothing else in the cyoa comes close and the only thing you need is to max out chaos magic and then take things that revive you if you blow up or something. Unconditional reality warping + complete knowledge and guidance of how to win any scenario is retarded. Other than this, ghost master reads very weird, I believe its supposed to be "ghost show themselves to you and ask you something in exchange for servitude" which is cool. Seems like it also potentially makes you completely invulnerable in astral ghost form? Not sure. Dark Echo is also stupidly strong, just make a gorillion clones of yourself to be in every place ever at once? Ok.Vampiric Embrace just makes you the best undead ever apparently, even stronger than liches? Nothing seems to stop you from combining it with phylactery to become a vampire lich I guess. Also, does phylactery just make me a skeleton? I hope not. Also, how weak is the weakness to sunlight for vampiric embrace? Could we use Vampiric Embrace to give minions similar strength?I think maybe points are bit low even on easy, but it also could be fine. The total cost of powers is 940 and our 300 is roughly 32% of that. Maybe I would be more ok with it if we got our powers we paid for instantly and had to learn everything, not getting the stuff we pay for immediately feels kinda bad. Other than my previous critiques, I'll make a build here in a bit, I think you did good for a first time but it could use some work, especially the glaringly retardedly OP stuff that is chaos magic. I'm going to ignore chaos magic for my build because otherwise I would be mad that its just better than literally everything else (and stasis too, fuck stasis).
>>94757102>Does magical prowess count as wisdom?On the intellectual side, yes. If you have PK Energy, then things like the strength of spells are affected by wisdom too.
>>94757140It's his first one, go easy on the poor bastard
>>94757310I tried to give him as much genuine feedback as possible. I'm working on my build but its agonizing. I think he did a good job for the most part, and if I really like the cyoa when he's added all the stuff he wants to add and fixes stuff i'll make an image build for it.
>>94757140I did numbers for the combination costs. Cellular Awakening [94]Cellular Regen (10+20+30+4)Blood L2 (10+20)Dark Energy [60]Shadow L2 (10+20)Void L2 (10+20)Ghost Master [70]Ghost Form (10+20+5)Astral Form (10+20+5)Destined Quest [84]Black Hole (10+20+30+3+3+5)Four Leaf Charm (10+3)Hivemind [63]Biomancy L2 (10+20)Cognitohazard (10+20+3)Binding Contract [60]Blood L2 (10+20)Demonology L2 (10+20)Dark Echo [72]Dark Reflection (10+20+3+4)Cloning (10+20+3+2)Soul Husk [68]Curse of Hollowing (10+20+3)Reanimation (10+20+5)Wondrous Geas [136]Geas (10+20+30+4+4)Calamity (10+20+30+3+2+3)Dream Demon [63]Demonology L2 (10+20)Dream Eat (10+20+1+2)Throne of Skulls [99]Blood Frenzy (10+20+4)Unravel (10+20+30+5)Raise Shade [48]Summon Nightmare (10+3)Reanimation (10+20+5)Plague of Undeath [102]Necrotic Infusion (10+20+3+3)Viromancy (10+20+30+3+3)Eldritch Mind [98]Dark Matter (10+20+30+3)Astral Form (10+20+5)Hunter In The Dark [109]False Dimension (10+20+30+5+3+5)Homunculus (10+20+2+4)Fel Flame [80]Hellgate (10+20+30+3+4)Chaos Bolt (10+3)(1/2)
>>94757140>Complete reality warping with only a small chance of blowing yourself up (which you can revive from with a lot of other powersWith increasingly high chance, lol. And your revivals are under the same risk as everything else now. And you start at novice level.It's a magic for the most deranged psychos for a reason. Ah, anons, always so ready to just ignore drawbacks with 'Nah, I'd win' attitude.
>>94757374Eldritch Spawn [69]Void Portal (10+20+4)Spawning Pool (10+20+2+3)Vampiric Embrace [80]Greater Undead (10+20+30+5+3)Parasite Bond (10+2)Evolution [43]Adaptation (10+3)Chaos L2 (10+20)Witching Hour [43]Dark Doorway (10+20+3)Demonology L1 (10)Progenitor's Blood [80]Void L1 (10)Infusion (10+20+30+2+4+4)Twin Blight [48]Partial Animation (10+4)Summon Creature (10+20+4)Demonic Grafting [65]Demon Form (10+20+5)Biomancy L2 (10+20)Manifest Phobia [26]Summon Nightmare (10+3)Fear (10+3)Blood That Hates [65]Blood Form (10+20+5)Psychic L2 (10+20)Devil Forging [71]Fleshcrafting (10+20+4+4)Ritual of Summoning (10+20+3)Would also recommend renaming Summon Creature (Chaos) and Infusion (Blood).(2/2)Build will follow in a bit. I think I will probably go psychic + chaos, but the focus is unlocking as many combos as I can. Right now it looks like
>>94757374>>94757392That's cool (I'm the anon he quoted, someone else did these calculations) I wasn't going to do it all. Most combinations should just follow what you want anyways.>>94757387You can just revive or vent it. And starting at novice level only matters short term since you will learn it super fast. Chaos isn't for deranged psychos, its easily eploitable and the strongest. Who cares if you can read minds or make undead or whatever, I know exactly how to win every scenario ever with the quest one, and I don't care if I blow up, i'll just revive at my phylactery. In the mean time i've erased the concept of rebelling against me and stuck you in a permanent time loop. Beholder beam is a power I forgot to talk about as well. "If you're in range, it always hits and does maximum damage" is fucking stupid and dumb and shouldn't exist. The only power on the level of chaos magic is stasis because it puts someone in gay baby jail and you can just forget about them.
>>94757418I did a v2 list which also includes the schools of disciplines required for combos.Shadow 6Void 7Necro 8Blood 10Demon 9Bio 7Psy 7Chaos 7https://pastebin.com/4rQGcjY6
>>94757140Bah, I'll finish it tomorrow. I'm having trouble settling on what archetype I should go for, even 300 points is feeling constraining mostly due to me wanting like one ability or something from mid-master tier magics but needing to pay the full 30 or 60 just to get one 3 point ability.
>>94755361Congratulations on the OC!
>>94755361Making a build that allows me to fuck succubi without dying
>>94755361Entropist and its consequences have been a disaster for the cyoa space.
>>94755361I wanted to compliment you but then I saw that you made a Reddit account.
>>94755361My succubus safe-fucking build turned into some sort of bloodsmith that forges Demonic-Mutant-Undead Blood Knights somehow.>Demonology - MasterCurse of Tongues, Curse of Weakness, Demonic Enchantment, Hexproof, Banish, Summoning Debt;Pact, Silence, Ritual of Summoning, Demon Form, Unholy Ward;Dark Resurrection, Consume Soul.>Blood - AdvancedPurify Blood, TransfusionHemetallurgy, Homunculus>Necromancy - AdvancedPartial Animation, Necromantic EnchantingFleshcrafting, Ghost Form>Biomancy - MasterAdaptation, Mimicry, Symbiotic Link, Vat HealingCloning, Poly Form, Living WeaponAssimilation, Cellular Regeneration, Biomechanical, Symbiotic Spawn>Void - NoviceNegative Edge, Separate>CombinationCellular AwakeningBinding ContractDemonic GraftingDevil ForgingBlack Flame
>>94755993See >>94755425 >>94755461
>>94756880>I will use a nuclear bomb!>Nuclear bombs are not effective>The-then I will magically enhance them, my ester will!>Magically enhancing a gun is something complicated and of a dedicated class, how would Ester enhance something like that?>We-well, I imagine my Ester would tell me first it wouldn't work so I could change plansIn the end he basically said that ester would advise him against his own plan
>>94758416>DifficultyGifted> Void MasterDark Matter> Psychic MasterMind SpikeAstral FormSiphon Psyche> Chaos MasterFour Leaf CharmDrain Luck> CombinationsEldritch MindDecided to swap out Unravel for Four Leaf Charm and Drain Luck for more immediate power, as well as being able to mitigate the randomness of wild magic. I'll still be able to pick up Unravel in the long run anyway. Plan of scaling intelligence until I can easily learn the other spells and become god still applies.I will focus on mastering Chaos Magic in the beginning since it's got the most versatility and no true stigma around it. Then it's Psychic for intelligence, and finally Void for the combination.
>>94755976>>94755425>>94755461Because all the options have the same fixed size. We get it you don't like it. Will you stop asking the same stupid "question", now?
>>94751421Clade: Seeing Wolf- Spirit Magic- +1RepLair: Prepper CabinBro's:- James Greer- David BlakeAdvantages:- Iron Will- Superior Resolve- Maddening Howl- Predatory Aura (-1wil)- Big Dick Energy (+1rep, -1res)- Superior Speed- Superior SensesComplications:- Lunacy- Mark of the Beast- Firefright- The Unquiet Dead- Leechtown- The Dracon (+2)- Vortex (+2)Bitches:- Naomi (res0, wil0, rep1)- Winter Hope (res2, wil2, rep2)- Mildred Cunningham (1res, 1wil, rep2)- Sabrina Thistledown (2res, 3wil, 2rep)Pretty much maxed out my magical and shamanistic potential. Not to mention having Rep8 must be pretty helpful.
>>94758397And here is Hellkiss, my masterpiece and a gift to the humans with the will to wield it. A blade forged from chimaeric parts of demons and monsters mixed with my blood. The hilt is warm and soft, very pleasant to the touch. Even pleasurable, for the sword is inhabited by an insatiable succubus who derives sexual pleasure from being bathed in blood.The many runes inscribed on the blades allow it to absorb and store the souls of its victims. These souls not only feed the succubus, but they also power the enchantments the blade is imbued with. The first being the negative edge on one side of the blade, able to cut through any material, and the second being the Black Flame enchantment, straightforward and powerful.The more it kills, the more powerful it gets. And the succubus inside requires sustenance so she will not let the wielder starve her by not using her.
>>94755361It's missing the adventure.Everything is a complete blank slateWhy bother picking powers for an unknown person in an unknown world?
>>94754524>You are a cuck for watching a woman you have no relations to/with get gangbangWhy is CYOAG filled with incels?
>>94758931>watching a girl get railed by other guys is not a submissive loser behavior if there's no sentiment!Back to the cuck chair, faggot
>>94758941>Unironically thinks watching porn is cuck behaviourGrim
>>94758941You are not a cuck for watching a woman you have no relations to get fucked in a recording? You are a cuck if the woman is someone you are in a relationship with
>>94758913t.
>>94758954It's a game. I'm not going to imagine up every single thing. That defeats the whole point of CYOAs. You might as well write a book.
What are the upcoming CYOAs?
>>94758977Ultimate God updateIsekai Overlord updatethat husanon cyoasome Italics slop probablymaybe some unknown stuff if we are lucky
There is nothing in this world more maddening than getting to the end of a huge CYOA and suddenly realizing you're 5 points short or misunderstood a mechanic or your build actually doesn't make in-universe sense
>>94759069>build actually doesn't make in-universe senseexplain, give examples
>Have so many CYOAs>Have so many ideas>Want to make them all>Can't>Fear failuewHow do I be better?
>>94759124overcome your fearonly normalfag goycattle give in to fear
who is the author of picking a goddess cyoa?
>>94759124Invest into waifus.
>>94753728>I'll tell him after something special happens between us so he knows the family will be alrightOf course, she's talking about martial arts, what else could it be?
>>94754457>and have her look at me sometimes while doing it. I would feel motivation like Vergil if she did it.This is what makes you a cuck
>>94759242Italics right?
>>94754622>>94754668thank you for your sacrifice...Don't view this...https://i.4cdn.org/wsg/1735771413023162.webm
>>94759242>>94759339Italics. He promised to make a 4.0 update in the same time period Magi Case was announced. But he hasn't said a thing about it ever since. So we know it exist and he's hoarding it.
>>94759324Having a person face rhe camera or viewer in porn doesn't make you a cuck, you dip. Voyeurism is not the same as Cuckoldry.
I wish Tok's World of Whorecraft had Waifu options with Warcraft characters, like in his Magic: The Awakening, Supersluts or Lewd the Legends. Honestly, I dislike how much game mechanics are such as experience or spell types are added into World of Whorecraft and Magic: The Awakening, but I can ignore that when Waifu are involved.
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>>94759124Invest in waifus
