Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoagAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_CompIn Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3Palpable Animosity EditionPrevious Thread: >>97293598
>>97308744Rules/info/CYOAhttps://rentry.org/uam5mkhv>Egawa Taro/Rip Vandernailhttps://rentry.org/mthziyxkhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97060437>Arthur Wodehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97061682>Necrolord Sephidrachhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062008>Kimiko Yuki/Yaofanhttps://rentry.co/hsinf97uhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062514>Fathoms(Fifi)https://rentry.co/rdkoz3rhhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063149>Liam Cooke/Lovxl(Not a Support 3)https://rentry.org/r3git2rchttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063756>Ueto Mio/strawberrycake0923https://rentry.org/5iiayh42https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97089806>Nagisa Ito/Good Things Comehttps://rentry.co/btk9ko6whttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97098741>Writefags>Mountain Wendigo Chain, Part 1! (Taro, Yulit, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Arthur, Yaofan)https://rentry.org/7abfinx5>Setup (Liam, Yaofan, References to others)https://rentry.co/2u2ucyys>Yaofan Intro? (Yaofan/Kimiko,Moth Thot)https://rentry.co/wnwek6x9>Hunting Lessons (Taro, Peredolia, Yaofan)https://rentry.org/yv2vaygr>Wendigo Chain Part 2 (Liam, Sephidrac, Taro, Yaofan.)https://rentry.co/f4d6fwu8>The Magic Of Learning (Liam, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Mio, Arthur cameo)https://rentry.org/wmxx9tik>Wendigo Chain, Part 3 (Egawa Taro, Arthur Wode, Yaofan, Liam Cooke, Necrolord Sephidrac, Fathoms, Ueto Mio, Nagisa Ito)https://rentry.org/gdzox35y>Every Branch on the way Downhttps://rentry.co/gm9soi3x>Relationships Charts>Tarohttps://rentry.org/v4ygpeib>Liamhttps://rentry.co/ruszvrz4>Mio (End of the profile)https://rentry.org/5iiayh42>Nagisahttps://rentry.co/spxq5cnb
>SCENARIO>Proposed ComplicationsInsidious Cult + Ghost Domain (you can opt out)Stars of Destiny>Proposed character themeMembers, branches and servants of the Xun clan.>Proposed Starting LocationThe domain of the Xun clan. Near the northern border, not far from the Ghost Domain. At least one of its towns was recently raided by the cultists.>Cultivation Realm Informationhttps://pastebin.com/45fSTGvF>BUILDS>>Xun Clan - Main Family>Xun Fengqi, the Fearless Flame (Son of the Patriarch)https://rentry.co/u95vz3hn>Xun Yi, Local Barbarian civilized via marriage (Wife of Fengqi)https://rentry.org/rfpyyt4w>Xun Linghao, Corrupted Phoenix (Son of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/z9kr2kqs>Xun Ming, A poet who cries (Child of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/xunming>Xun Chizi, The Mysterious Pearl (Child of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/xun_chizi>Xun Moyu, the Young Master (Daughter of the Patriarch?)https://rentry.org/XunMoyu>Xun Haoran, Steel Hidden in Silk (Niece of the Patriarch)https://rentry.org/XunHaoran>Xun Yecheng, The Disgraced God of Thunder (Haoran's Father/Brother-in-Law of the Patriarch)https://rentry.org/XunYecheng>>Main Xun Family's servants>Yu, Voidchink (Servant of Chizi)https://rentry.org/q44izvuk>Tsolmon, "Tso" (Servant of Linghao)https://rentry.org/tyukc7d5>Shen Qiu, Black Beast of the North (Servant of Moyu)https://rentry.org/wdgphyxi>>Xun Clan - Wen Branch>Xun Wen, the Lady of Fractalshttps://rentry.org/h8iq9mzp>Heinrich Gotthelf Humboldt, the Desuarchived One (Husband of Wen)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97122266>>Xun Wen Branch - adopted staff>Xun Ri, Guardian of Wen (Sister of Jian)https://rentry.co/3v45cffv>Xun Jian, Dragon of the Northern River (Brother of Ri)https://rentry.co/dragonofthenorth>>Xun Wen Branch - non-adopted staff>Fei Cangqiong (Servant of Heinrich)https://rentry.co/mpwindyboy
>>97308762>>Builds (Cont.)>>Bai Clan - Xun's vassals>Bai Shahua, Shihuahua: Chihuahua of deathhttps://rentry.org/MP_Undertaker>>Liang Clan - Guardians of the Throne>Liang Ba, Imperial Commander of the Northern Borderhttps://rentry.co/LiangBa>>Other Commoners>Wuyu,Wuxia manhttps://rentry.org/MPWuyu>>Cultists>Ganhttps://rentry.org/Ganthecorpse>WRITEFAGS>Enter the Dragon (Xun Jian, Fei Cangqiong)https://rentry.co/enterthedragon_MP>A Pill, A Phoenix, And A Problem (Tsolmon, Xun Linghao)https://rentry.org/fgqwbz82>Shaking things up (Updated)https://rentry.co/pf5wzyzz>A Private Dinner, and then a Game Proposal (Heinrich, Wen)https://rentry.org/qibtecr4>Next Steps & Fortuitous Encounter (Wuyu, Liang Ba)https://rentry.co/nextstepshttps://rentry.co/fortuitousencounter>Echoes of the Fallen (Xun Wen, Xun Ri, Heinrich Humboldt, mention of Xun Jian, Fei Cangqiong)https://rentry.org/zaoef5z9>A Wanderer Anew (Wuyu, Shahua)https://rentry.org/89e46nta>(Wuyu, Xun Linghao, Liang Ba)https://rentry.co/TwinSunsInTheNorth >The Nine-Ringed Saber Appears!!! (Moyu, Jian, Shen)https://rentry.org/kdzrhic3>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS>Heinrich's Journalhttps://rentry.org/qnx489ve>Xun Moyu's Relationship Chart!!!https://rentry.org/rowmnq3x>Ladies first! (Fei Cangqiong's chart)https://rentry.co/mpwindychart>5 Days Time (Chizi Relationship Chart)https://rentry.org/chizichart>Linghao's Paperwork (Linghao, Features Yu)https://rentry.co/o6e76pk4>Xun Haoranhttps://rentry.co/HaoChart>Tier Listhttps://tiermaker.com/create/martial-path-xun-clan-run-tier-list-17629646
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>JITE Archivehttps://rentry.org/jiterentry1>BUILDS>>Student Council>Shu Jinkō, "My nigga Clark Kent"https://rentry.org/3cexovsdhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/47/1758477005700.png>Madoka Onguuchi, "Distressed Damsel"https://rentry.org/9aedhewchttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/42/1758421653099.png>Meliaya "Yaya" Mihama, "Higan Academy dwarf?"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96462921https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/44/1758441779275.png>Ran Nejima, "Bipolar Tank"https://rentry.org/JITErnhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/64/1758641526880.png>Yae Zennami, "Hugo Boss™ approved Idolon design"https://rentry.org/hv6u3hy4https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/46/1758461607388.png>Kaoru Nagamine, "Tsun for the Student Council"https://rentry.co/zxon8uvhhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1761/00/1761006744282.png>>Fujiwara Senki>Momofuku Chikata, "Tsundere oni tardwife"https://rentry.org/momofuuki_2https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/47/1758478700784.png>Belladonna Sola, "lol as if I'd ever date a cute hacker NERD"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97005155https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758563236277.png>Fumiko Furukawahttps://rentry.org/e7d4wx79https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/58/1758583422481.png>Parfaite Sukemori / La Première femme de Chambre, "Maid in heaven"https://rentry.org/qu7nqq8s>Sayaka Koujin, "Oh no not another triangle choke"https://rentry.org/e225aqhdhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/58/1758582662075.png>Jinguuji Kanaehttps://rentry.org/jiteshugenja>>(Former) Census Club>Alyona Rodionvova, "Mail-order bride from hell"https://rentry.co/yub2yds6https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/68/1758688900210.png>Renka Cho, "Chuuni Tardwife"https://rentry.org/za8grm2c>Archibald Florence, "16-year-old?"https://rentry.org/mmwqzzpm
>>97308832>>Kurobane Group>Reiji Kurobane, "Will fire my dad if I put anything bad here"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96777753>Itsuki, "Ultimate fujo slayer"https://rentry.org/6fs8w6ashttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/57/1758576139400.png>Sophia Alexandria Newtonia IV Chie Igarashi, "Future ruler of Akiba"https://rentry.co/8xxtuscc>>Misc.>Ai Suishi, "Distressing Damsel"https://rentry.org/sgunn9vehttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/45/1758453903714.png>Takumi Wright, "Your uncle after a few beers"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96442943>Liú Měi, "Shì de, buns and thighs!"https://rentry.org/fgr4iihuhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/57/1758578417440.png>Tetsuya Abe, "Just your average futafag"https://rentry.org/5gvkba7d>Takaishi Kuroda, "How it feels to chew sweet potatoes you grew yourself"https://rentry.org/takajite> Kazu Morino, "Those dick pills made it way too big to use. Worth it tho"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96445363>Cato, "Literally every kid in a movie theatre"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96469569>Sumi Ayaka, "brb gonna hang myself for singing flat in the school musical"https://rentry.org/bohemianidol>Tomaki Warumachihttps://rentry.org/ShaltZoiJITEhttps://rentry.org/WarlordKakitohttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/49/1758494337764.png>Matsunaga Keihttps://rentry.org/JITE_Swordsman>Chê Ngiêmhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96582901https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/92/1758920350712.png>Sarah Rheehttps://rentry.org/2wp9qpachttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/98/1758984555340.png>Teruma Arakawa:https://rentry.org/fa5459sq>Liren Shimizuhttps://rentry.co/6e8wkos2>Shōbu Shinkenhttps://rentry.org/LastSamurai
>>97308845>>ID Gang.>Fukuzawa Kohaku>Uesugi Aida>Okabe Takeohttps://rentry.org/6asdeucohttps://rentry.org/tbpmkp54>>Humanity Lost>Satoru Rin, "Nah, I'd fix her"https://rentry.org/JITE-facelessgirlhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/43/1758433358207.png>Kenji Kurosawahttps://rentry.org/skab2shhhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758563707678.png>Arakawa Itsurōhttps://rentry.org/arakawajitehttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758568393768.png>Tachibana Kentarō, "Act 2 Monster"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96688090>>Other>Kirigawa Marisa "Cute and Silly NPC"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96811207>Natsu Chiakihttps://rentry.org/zq9xaz9h>Darknesshttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97012380>>RECENT WRITEFAGS>Perestroika: Act 1(Alyona, Archie, Renka, Madoka, Rin)https://rentry.co/4snntsu9>Big Changes (Archibald Florence)https://rentry.co/2oetuay3>The Riddle, Part 2 (Kaoru, Shu, Yae, Meliaya, Ran, Madoka, Momofuku, Takaishi, Ai, cameo from Fumiko)https://rentry.co/g53zv646>Needs Some Flair (Tomaki Warumaki, Fukuzawa Kohaku)https://rentry.org/NeedsSomeFlair>HLA Investigations: Team Ken (Kentaro, Kenji, Momo, Belladonna, Fumiko, Parfaite)https://rentry.org/2gvsokq7>Last Train Home (Shobu, Madoka)https://rentry.org/h68ckvef>Season Finale: Violence Breeds Violence, Trailer (Shu Jinko)https://rentry.org/aakd566w>Devil's Hands Season Finale: Violence Breeds Violence (ID Gang, Student Council, Fujiwara Senki, Rin, Itsuro, Alyona, Archie, Renka, Ai, Kiro no Kawa)https://rentry.org/rum694cz>Detainment (Kohaku and Aida’s Relationship Charts)https://rentry.org/yv4bea98>Child's Play (Chain, Part 1) (Shu, Yae, Ran, Meliaya, Kaoru, mentions of Madoka and Kohaku)https://rentry.co/dsr832bc>Fright Night (Student Council, Momofuku Chikata, Ai Suishi, Sayaka Koujin, Takaishi Kuroda, Arakawa Itsurō)https://rentry.org/4wecy6b5
>>97308861>>Writefags (Cont.)>Perestroika: Act 2(Renka, Archie, Yae, Student Council, Momo)https://rentry.co/ncupai9e>Comeuppance (HLA, Ai Suishi)https://rentry.org/w6c9bsup>CHILD'S PLAY PART 2 (Warlord Kakito and the Darkness, Tetsuya Abe, Kaoru Nagamine, Meliaya Yaya)https://rentry.org/3w7exibw>I want to be a hero (Itsuki, Sophia, Reiji)https://rentry.org/cwn25dvy>I want to be a Hero (Epilogue)https://rentry.org/gq4q4m2c>A Game of Cat and Bird (Okabe/Kokancho, Yae, Ran, Kaoru)https://rentry.org/ch2bcisf>Child’s Play Part 2.2 (Student Council, Darkness, Tetsuya)https://rentry.org/fzk6n8sv>Damsel of Distress (Itsuro, Rin, Ai, Tomaki, cameos of Shu, Ran and Takaishi)https://rentry.org/5qy4m9w8>Perestroika: Act 3(Alyona, Renka, Archie Student Council, Momo, Mention of Fumiko, Rinhttps://rentry.co/3ss8rfkx>Perestroika: Epilogue(Alyona, Renka, Momofuku)https://rentry.co/qrzpruts>Blue Eyed Souls, Prologue (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko)https://rentry.org/fp5pupik>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 1 (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Tomaki)https://rentry.org/upuh5rpz>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 2 (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Tomaki)https://rentry.org/5mudp89y>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 3 (Momofuku, Alyona, Madoka, Parfaite, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Sayaka, Itsuki, Mei)https://rentry.org/dga7tnnh>Blue Eyed Souls, Epilogue (Momofuku, Alyona, Madoka, Parfaite, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Sayaka, Kanae)https://rentry.org/e7gb5c24>Eye of the Typhoon (Itsuki)https://rentry.org/xingxc46>Nagamine Case Files: Blood On The Dance Floor (Kaoru, Marisa, Yae, Kenji)https://rentry.co/gfszahec>Cross Examination (Kiro no Kawa, Kohaku, Madoka, Marisa, Shu, Yae, Meliaya, Archie, Renka, Che Ngiem, Kenji, Kaoru, Saito Mimi, mention of the HLA and Ai Suishi)https://rentry.org/v862x2z4>Detainment Update (Final)https://rentry.org/yv4bea98
>>97308877>>Writefags>The Fading Dream Episode 1: Lucky Land Chain Part 3 / Passing in the Night (Aida, Kohaku, Shu, mention of Kurobane Group)https://rentry.org/z6p489kh>Christmas in July(Yae, Archie, Kenji, Momo, Alyona, Student Council, Rin, Kentaro, Isturo, Renka, mention of Sumi)https://rentry.co/bk47th57>Operation Doki Doki (Kaoru, Madoka, Takaishi, Junko/Darkness)https://rentry.co/thedatingepisode>Silent Jealousy 1 (Ai Suishi, Sumi Ayaka)https://rentry.org/62bh72ik>>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS>Satoru Rinhttps://rentry.org/JITEloserchart>Kenjihttps://rentry.org/hymz4apv>Kaoru Nagaminehttps://rentry.co/kcwb63id>Kohakuhttps://rentry.org/yv4bea98>>OTHER CONTENT>Map of Kageokahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96482982>JITE pointing meme(Alyona, Meliaya Mihama)https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1757/49/1757490481679.png>JITE Q&Ahttps://rentry.org/ui7zzsvq>height charthttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1757/64/1757642902812.png>Card templatehttps://files.catbox.moe/t1g8ih.xcf>JITE Charthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96703033>Tier Makerhttps://tiermaker.com/create/jite-tier-18744126>Unofficial Assault Reworkhttps://rentry.org/o6d76h9f>Idolon Ability Datahttps://rentry.org/JITEcelReference
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>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:>New Writefag:>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miaz>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampFormer 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompthttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnairehttps://rentry.org/xudhyrnr>Former 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINEhttps://rentry.org/itmttw7n>Classes Compilationshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Eold former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g>Relationship chartshttps://rentry.org/MHA_Charts>Dorms PromptDorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730>Tiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
>>97308919>SHIKETSU STUDENTS>Hero Course>1-D>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Resethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Troublehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085>Yagami Kirako HN Southpawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Calloushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetraphttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protectorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scourhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Herohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miraclehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyrhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-kahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwahttps://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshirehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooterhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244>Tsuyoi Agnellihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089>1-E>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girlhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
>>97308934>2-Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2D>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamatahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769>Hailey Chang HN Recoilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903>Faith Kang HN Dronehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774>Minerva Kim HN Sparkhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094>Edith Lee HN Arenahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782>Sally McCathy HN Last Ritehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yakohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305>Maxine Nguyen HN Radiushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624>Runt HN Dust Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Forcehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986>Junichi Takagi VN Marrowhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765>Ian Takenaka HN Rushhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991>Takara Tame HN Androidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Questionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085>Rob Williams HN Velvet Wormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
>>97308942>2-Ehttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E>Noah Abrams HN Archangelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Dayhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudevahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackouthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boosthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973>Nayuki Kyokohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Arakenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Trainhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200>Victor Sigurd HN Hydrahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbithttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Millionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363>Suki Yamada HN Sukebanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cubehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433>Other NPCshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E>3-D>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakenenekohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401>Masayoshi Keito HN Crickethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcanahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdownhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knuthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659>General Course>2-A>Satoru Tanihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217>Support Course>3-B>Aura Curiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
>>97308954>SHIKETSU STAFF>Pro Hero teachers>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485>Support Staff>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
>>97308968>PRO HEROES>TOP #1Endeavour>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384>TOP #4Wash>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkorohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847>TOP #9Rosethorn>TOP #10Yamamoto>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honokenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039>Ernst Hennig HN Impakthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563>Tosuke Jinai HN Compoundhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelengthhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513>Renji Kurokawa HN Mashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatchhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccinehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skywardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835>SUPPORTERS>Rika Eichihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr>Holden Deckardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931>Brightlyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clearhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
>>97308979>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS>Horrific 5>Samuel Wilson VN Desolatorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340>On Giết Năng VN Tetherhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198>Erika Murakami VN Noxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddoxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575>Edmund Muller VN Mercuryhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191>Night Parade>Cammy Link VN Karmahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokkehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfingerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481>Okane King VN Midashttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250> ??? VN Mawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272> ??? VN Bogeyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889> Tomihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913>Luccionehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415>Recino R. Percutiohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owarihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Nothttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feralhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka>Ivan Trup VN The Prophethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348>VIGILANTES>Helene Lysingen VN Noctilucahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquariushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069>Toru Imaishi VN Kampaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353>Rebecca Weberhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Brighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707>Sasha Azanamihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404>Ruihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187>Kaori Kaoruhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivorehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndromehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
>>97308997>CULTISTS>The Red Finger>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weaselhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573>REVOLUTIONARIES>Legion>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Stormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS>Bruno Garcia VN Maulerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714>Karuga Itohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242>Ginji Gō VN Desperaidohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931>Blankhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggothhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987>Mammogarhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82>Suslikhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413>Paul Crémieux VN De Jaishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodokuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless Godhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436>Mr. Therapisthttps://rentry.org/638neg63>Rescue Rayhttps://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Daggerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719>Doctor Ivon Kintoborhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140>Saki Fuma VN Replicanthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
>>97309013>WRITEFAGS>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/gqgst77f>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)https://rentry.org/chdorkto>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique): https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):https://rentry.org/7evesekv>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)https://rentry.org/qqhxk757>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)https://rentry.org/rusiv6te>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze>Visa Enquiryhttps://rentry.org/yvwhhh98>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)https://rentry.org/hvct5iab>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)https://rentry.org/iifohf9f>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
>>97309024>WRITEFAGS (Final)>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):https://rentry.org/a8um8793>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)https://rentry.org/o4mageo6>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miazFor more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
>>97309030
Awaken, my JITIES...
>>97310585*starts JITEin' my shit*hrgggh... I'm waking... I'm awakening it so hard right now...
>>97310585I'm writing. What do you want?>what are you writing?Don't bother asking this. I hat talking about my work before it's finished.
>>97310728Whatever you're writing, anon, I'm rooting for ya
>>97310728>hat talking about my work before it's finishedGoddamn headwear throwing around spoilers!
>thread archivedI'm willing to discuss Naruto here past secret hours if anons are.>>97311032I think anon just needs to elaborate on his expectations and what the universe actually is.>>97311060Tbf, in my opinion, it IS a really fun powerpicker. I definitely prefer it to some other cyoas.
>>97310998We've done a war scenario before. It's not really anything new besides the mechanical changes suggested. I think what anon is trying to accomplish with this setting could just as easily be done in martial path. If anything, martial path is better suited for it.
>>97311087>I definitely prefer it to some other cyoas.KOFF KOFF sc KOFF KOFF
>>97311087I don't want to flood a new thread so if it gets annoying I can wait until the next Secret Hours, otherwise.>I think anon just needs to elaborate on his expectations and what the universe actually is.Yeah, fair.>>97311060I want to use the setting at like 70% of how it was portrayed and 30% exploring it from a different angle.
>>97311117It's not like anyone is talking about anything else.
>>97311087>>97311117So, to explain my thought processes. As previously noted in the old thread, I very much enjoy the early-early worldbuilding of Naruto, where it's soft implied that Shinobi are elite specialists that inhabit a wider ecosystem - hired by nations as assassins, thieves, bodyguards and other esoterica. Rather than what the setting later became in Konoha Crush, I like the idea of Ninja Villages being organizations rather than synonymous with their Nations. Following that, I also found it cool whenever Monks, Samurai, and other non-Ninja Chakra Users turned up. I also liked what little we got of the Second Ninja War, with Amegakure doing everything they could think of to try and repel vastly more powerful Great Nations.The summary of that comes with essentially three vibes;>Part 1 Powerscaling, Ninja are extremely spooky elites to normal people because they can transform, go invisible and control minds but aren't necessarily village-busting supermen>Decoupling the setting slightly from Shinobi to account for Samurai, Sohei and other Chakra-using weirdos while still having a significant focus on Shinobi for people who want that, a consequence of this is introducing 'mundane,' armies and people to the story so that characters can simultaneously be highly flavourful super specialists that beat normal people silly without needing to be the White Fang>Second Ninja War WW2 vibes of war being hell, especially with Ame deploying biological weapons and being forced to surgically augment its own people to keep up with crazy batshit like Hyuga and UchihaImportantly, I was considering a game where we're not all playing generals, kings, kage or whatever as heads of the conflict, but are components of it, to really sell that elite specialist vibe.
>>97311110I wonder what new scenarios could actually be done? Something I thought could be fun is Bloody Mist; an extra heaping of edge.
>>97311179The intentional dichotomy of Ame's alliance and the Great Nations is essentially New Blood Upstart Technologists vs. Ancient Wizards, if less extreme. The idea being that the Great Nations' long-standing traditions in using Chakra comes across as mysterious, mystical and supernatural to normal people. Amegakure, meanwhile, in their desperation, are doing their best to industrialize warfare and grab at any grimy source of power they can - freed prisoners, mercenary units, hastily augmented supersoldiers and what few native Chakra-users they have being forced into the grinder to try and deal with the Samurai and Shinobi being flung around by larger Nations, using their technological advantage (late 19th century, ish) wherever they can.
>>97311221The ultimate vibe is a collection of the world's schizos, from vengeful refugees and odd Chakra-wizards to Shinobi turncoats and the aforementioned prisoners, mercenaries and supersoldiers have been collected by Ame - allowing for people to make varied character concepts - going on the defensive against the usual stuff we play. The idea being that Hyuga, Uchiha, Senju, Aburame and whatever else aren't the normal - they're scary-ass legendary names of weirdos from the Wizard Village that are beating the hell out of us and we're pulling together whatever scrap we can to kick them out.
>>97311179>>a consequence of this is introducing 'mundane,' armies and people to the story so that characters can simultaneously be highly flavourful super specialists that beat normal people silly without needing to be the White FangI feel like this consequence is the biggest and most important one. That really kinda changes the scale of things. There's a certain disconnect I feel from having random bandits we can murder to actual armies being fielded by both sides from the peasantry. I feel like untrained bandits employed as cannon fodder or ravaging weakened farming settlements is the happy medium. It becomes really, really silly when militias are involved.>>97311221I honestly don't feel too psyched about this. It's basically a departure from what we know about the antagonists; it feels like it's not Naruto at all. Also kinda feels like midichlorianizing chakra lol (midichlorians were perfectly fine albeit but you know what I mean; doing to chakra what people said midichlorians did to the force).>>97311265>The idea being that Hyuga, Uchiha, Senju, Aburame and whatever else aren't the normal - they're scary-ass legendary names of weirdos from the Wizard Village that are beating the hell out of us and we're pulling together whatever scrap we can to kick them out.I do actually really like this idea; it sounds fun to me and lets Noble Clans actually be important if they're big antagonists.>The ultimate vibe is a collection of the world's schizos, from vengeful refugees and odd Chakra-wizardsMaybe it's just me but I don't actually like this idea that much; the concept of those characters just sounds cringe to me. And not in the cringekino way.
>>97311179What's the intended rank? Are we all B ranks? A ranks? Or lower and C ranks? Is a PC chunin with all points spent (including drawback points) closer to a chunin exams Dosu, Rock Lee, or Gaara?
>>97311385FWIW I wasn't expecting armies of like millions of people like in real life, just generally outnumbering the Shinobi like 100/1.>>97311424B-C is the intended medium. With C being super special forces compared to the mundane forces and B being the ones with known names. A-Rank would be a little high for the vibe but permissible on occasion.PC C-Rank Chuunin is probably Chuunin Exams Rock Lee and Dosu (Rock Lee isn't a higher tier so much as dumped all his points into fighting), with Gaara being out of our league.
>>97311424>>97311460>Including Drawback PointsNevermind, I misread, yeah someone with like +20 Schizopoints is probably closer to Gaara.
>>97311460>just generally outnumbering the Shinobi like 100/1.Holy shit. That's ALSO way too much lmao. I feel like a dozen per of worthless fodder per shinobi is more... feasible for the world.
>>97311511Considering how war works a properly deployed Shinobi who could beat like 10 normal guys would easily wrack up a killcount of hundreds over the course of a war.
>>97311524Unironically I have no doubt that a shinobi could beat 100 fodder losers, it takes like one burrowing jutsu and its over for people with spears and bows. It's the fact that they exist to die at all. Holy shit is that a lot of people. And the logistics to support this!
I'm gonna say what we're all thinking. Ninja Cancer, Old Wounds, Emotional Weakness, and Rage should be the only drawbacks allowed because they're the only ones that aren't entirely free points. If we give Tragic Backstory extra PTSD we can allow it too.
>>97311548The Allied Shinobi Forces numbered like 80,000 Ninja, which was widely mocked for being too many Shinobi when the number was revealed. Even then, if you multiplied that by 100 you'd still get the entirety of the Ninja World's army being smaller than the alleged personnel of the Qin Dynasty irl.Remember, even in ancient combat, which Ame isn't even doing, only a small fraction of soldiers see combat for a small amount of time. A majority of war is standing and walking.
>>97311571What about Dullest Kunai->free points for martialbrosOh yeah, nevermind.
>>97311590I feel like a bit over 80,000 able-bodied shinobi existing in the world is a pretty decent number ngl.>Remember, even in ancient combat, which Ame isn't even doing, only a small fraction of soldiers see combat for a small amount of time. A majority of war is standing and walking.I know, but where are these people coming from? We're going from Hidden Villages to Hidden Countries. I don't think all of these people need to exist, it's a small world.
>>97311625If we're going by early Part 1 then the Nations always had implied towns and cities and the Hidden Villages were isolated places where Shinobi Families trained. I can reduce the number if people don't like it, but I do want Shinobi to be weirdo mystic warriors for basically anyone outside their isolated communities.
>>97311571Instability should be allowed too so I don't have to take Emotional Weakness on my edgeDEITY who feels nothing but rage so I can hit my 20 points.>>97311591Dullest Kunai should be allowed for ninjutsu and genjutsu nerds only.
>>97311591Taijutsubros taking Dullest Kunai doesn't make Dullest Kunai free, it means they're committing to the bit of being tactical idiots that beat people up instead of smart Taijutsu users.
>>97311638>but I do want Shinobi to be weirdo mystic warriors for basically anyone outside their isolated communities.I think it's just a difference in tastes. I feel like part of the charm is that almost everyone in the world (besides the farmers and some other laypeople) is a ninja.
>>97311571>free points.The no fun allowed anons are back.
>>97311649>smart >Taijutsu userspick one broski
>>97311658There's ZERO world in which you should get free points just for telling us you're gonna fraud by picking Irrelevant or Unloved. Your Tragic Backstory Sentimental Treasure Fated Rival Bad Habit build SUCKS btw.
>>97311571trvthnvke...
>>97311681You don't want to write a narrative, you want a stat sheet and dice.
>>97311638The big nations did but I don't know about the lesser ones.
Ban all drawbacks. Wanna be dumb? Just fluff it.
why is it that Naruto has by far the harshest rulesfagging I've ever seen in /mcyoag/?
>>97311708>wanting to limit points is anti-narrativefaggingYou don't want drawbacks that matter, you want free points. You can have your drawbacks that don't matter for free.
>>97311657Ye fair I think we're just at opposite ends of taste here. Which is fine, I just need to defend my take on the setting a little while I finish up the DLC/Scenario and can shift a bit in favour of general opinion as we go.
>>97311719This >>97311708 they don't want a story, they just want stat sheets and they want to optimize points. Fun is not allowed, only math.
>>97311719To be fair in this case I'm essentially redoing parts of the CYOA for a specific theme so I'd expect people to come out of the woodwork to rulesfag but we have traditionally gone overboard, yes,
>>97311717Mechanical drawbacks that should have actual effects on your character should be allowed albeit. Just not stupid shit.>>97311719Autism.
>>97311719The cyoa is really really bad besides being a fun enough powerpicker and terribly unbalanced in the amount of points it gives you.
>>97311725>You don't want drawbacks that matterYou are unable to recognize what does or does not matter. Your "free points" are actual drawbacks, they have negative consequences. If anons ignored them in previous runs it's not my fault but they have an effect.
>>97311743I am somewhat tempted to remove the fluff Drawbacks but I think we're being a little harsh. Things like Arrogant and Bad Habit are fine. Narrative Drawbacks are a hard sell because they're essentially just points for roleplaying that nobody else gets and force certain plots to happen.
>>97311758>Narrative Drawbacks are a hard sell because they're essentially just points for roleplaying that nobody else gets and force certain plots to happen.And that's a bad thing why? There is no problem with that. If they were called missions nobody would complain about the same things.
>>97311665>The ominous Chakra Flow Weapon Art Stealth Build
>>97311772>If they were called missions nobody would complain about the same things.I can 100% assure you that someone would complain.
>>97311752>and terribly unbalanced in the amount of points it gives you.That's not even true. The anons here just hate power.
>>97311772>And that's a bad thing why? There is no problem with that.Disagreed in a multiplayer setting. We're all here to die in the trenches, so the 'my life sucks,' Drawbacks are, in essence, either free points or mechanically determine that nobody else's life can suck as much as this guy's or else it's unfair.>If they were called missions nobody would complain about the same things.I also generally don't do Missions for the same reason. Narrative impetus is good, great even. Getting a huge chunk of points for having a narrative impetus doesn't sit right because everyone is supposed to have one.
>>97311735>>97311737>>97311743>>97311752I mean I guess I kinda get limiting things from a narrative & powerscaling perspective (as someone whos nor overly familiar with the cyoa), as chuunin characters basically can't percieve or interact with Jonins, the same with Jonins and Kage, Kage and Sanin+ tiers, etc.I assume thats also why its prefferred to run settings like MHA, JITE, Village, Martial Path, etc. so that everyone can be somewhat relevant combatants and hold narrative stakes.
>>97311791It's less powerscaling and more a lot of the Narrative Drawbacks are things like 'there's a guy you hate,' or 'someone you don't like is in love with you.' Mechanizing these into points means you're either saying things like this can't happen to characters without the extra points, or they're free points you can just pick up. They work very well for single player where you're fantasizing about isekai'ing yourself though.
>>97311789>We're all here to die in the trenchesNo we're not.>mechanically determine that nobody else's life can suck as much as this guy's or else it's unfair.Yes, that's how it works, and it's not a bad thing.>Getting a huge chunk of points for having a narrative impetus doesn't sit right because everyone is supposed to have one.And they can, they just need to choose the right drawback/mission. If they don't want to have the narrative drive it's up to them.
>>97311756Having a tragic backstory or smoking addiction should not give you free points that effect mechanical things, what is so hard to understand about this?>>97311758Arrogant is fine but Bad Habit is really pushing it ngl.
>>97311811>Yes, that's how it works, and it's not a bad thing.I think we'll just have to agree to disagree because I find that incredibly stifling and mechanical to work around rather than an emergent narrative.
Is it going to be mostly naruto for tonight?
>>97311806>Mechanizing these into points means you're either saying things like this can't happen to characters without the extra pointsYes, it's how it works. It always worked like that. Even cyoas made for this thread have the same drawbacks and they are not a problem. Only in naruto they are suddenly unacceptable.
>>97311817Bad Habit is only four points and if you're actually doing it properly you've got smoker's lungs, are drunk half the time, have nerve damage from drugs or are constantly injured or something. It really can be a bad thing for the character if taken seriously.>>97311821Hopefully not, if it is, my bad for posting the homebrew, I apologize.
>>97311825See >>97311818 I don't think we'll see eye-to-eye on this, but I do get what you're saying.
>>97311818>I find that incredibly stifling and mechanicalI find all the other rules and limitations to be incredibly stifling. Getting points for bad things is a cyoa staple, balance in narrative is not a new concept.
>>97311826It's not exactly a bad thing, but I think I'll just sit this one out and hope it's over by the time I wake up. Good night, thread.
>>97311825>Even cyoas made for this thread have the same drawbacks and they are not a problemname 4 and I'll tell you if they're shit or not
>>97311839Talk about something else?
>>97311817>Having a tragic backstory or smoking addiction should not give you free points that effect mechanical things, what is so hard to understand about this?The fact that they are not free, you pay for them with bad things.
>>97311837I can accept that if the narrative thing is generalist like SC's Magmatic where you're constantly getting into fights, less so if it's plots like 'one of the other PCs hates you,' because that's just the kind of thing that happens.
>>97311850>because that's just the kind of thing that happens.And you should get points for it.
>>97311826>Hopefully notIt's too late. You should have let the discussion die in the last thread, now this one will be all shitposting.
>>97311864Devil's advocate, should PCs get stronger if they later start PvPing with another PC?
>>97311874Yes.
>>97311658fuck off powerfag
>>97311880Okay, I can see that, though I don't entirely agree. Would you say it'd be fine for a character to recoup about 20% of their entire budget for that in extra points though? You get a LOT in Naruto for really hating someone, which is probably why people are wary about it.
>>97311821If you have a better topic please do tell. Because they will not stop without a distraction.
>>97311850SC's Magmatic is a textbook on how to not implement a drawback lmao. On top of free points that shit allows you to make your own sect, one of the same benefits as Charismatic, which costs points btw. G3 Alchemy doesn't have enough rizz to start a sect, but someone who took a drawback gets to do it.
>>97311901SC drawbacks are all fine.
>>97311846>The fact that they are not free, you pay for them with bad things.It makes sense in singleplayer, not in multiplayer. You shouldn't get mechanical benefit for things that aren't real mechanical drawbacks. Now, if Tragic Backstory gave you PTSD and it's worldtaking over urges were properly protrayed or we actually cared about smoker's lung or goonbrain.
>>97311901Fair, probably should've said Trouble Magnet, even if it is an AP farm it's hard implied you're going to be miserable because everyone's going to jump your ass.
>>97311896Everyone else has monopolized the chat long enough. Now it's Naruto's turn.
>>97311913Even Equipment Mixup?
>>97311913You gay ass futalover.
>>97311918>You shouldn't get mechanical benefit for things that aren't real mechanical drawbacksWe are not playing an RPG, mechanics should not be the be all end all of the balance. It's a narrative, and narrative hooks and dynamics should be considered as well.
>>97311938>>97311940that's the best one
>>97311913Male-to-futanari being the strongest gender is the funniest shit.
>>97311953Female-to-cuntboy is just as strong albeit
>>97311938>>97311940It's disgusting, that's why it's a drawback. It's not my fault if the rest of the cast treats it as a good thing.
>>97311943I think we're fine with narrative hooks, we're just less fine for getting a lot of points for taking narrative hooks. Anons would be way more tolerant if they were like 2pts instead of 7/13 desu.
>>97311966>we're just less fine for getting a lot of points for taking narrative hooksThat's not a problem. You should get a point from hook, or a reward of some kind.
>>97311984>You should get a point from hook, or a reward of some kind.Sure, but getting many points is too much, it's not a binary consideration.
>>97311943>It's a narrative, and narrative hooks and dynamics should be considered as well.Why should your narrative hook give you an extra 10 mechanical points just because it's in the cyoa?
>>97311936The run hasn't even started yet and it's already devolved into this shitflinging. Naruto will never start as long as this discussion keeps repeating.
>>97311995That's why we should do what we did last time and let me decide the rules since I'm the smartest, most talented, and best at making rules we'll all enjoy.
>>97311995That's only if we're starting by community. One anon is making the scenario and calling the shots with threat input/feedback atm, so they just need to not pussy out.
>>97312006You're lucky I ultimately agree with the Chunin run rules you son of a bitch.
>>97312006So it's your fault all the rulesfagging starts every time nardo is mentioned. We should just use the cyoa as is instead.
>>97312016The cyoa as is sucks albeit. AGPotheosis is a hack.
>>97312011>One anon is making the scenario and calling the shots with threat input/feedback atm, so they just need to not pussy out.He's not. He's making something else that isn't nardo. He already gave up once as well and instead of picking up where he left off he started from scratch, not promising.
>>97312030Still better than the rulesfagging.
I just want to make a traumatized child soldier I can writefag turning on the world and getting traumatized further, and have the setting and mechanics not suck ass. Is that so hard?
>>97312016>My Tragic Backstory Distinct Look Sentimental Treasure Man Of Mystery Bad Habit Baby Shark Rage Most Wanted Fated Rival Inherited Rival Instability Jinchuuriki Ideological Divide Unwanted Attention Curse Of Waifu build will finally be legalSign me in!
>>97312031This is a trvthnvke, but the main reasoning here is delaying once Spirit Conscript came out and having a change of mind in the months since while busy. The original concept for reworking the CYOA was massively different from Apotheosis' and I ultimately decided that it wouldn't have the traction theirs had.
>>97312039You only say that because you're an emotional and reactionary creature.
>>97312059The rules are just horrible.
>>97312044Legal yes. Will not survive to the age of 5 but it's legal.
>>97312011>not pussying out>anons on 4chanPick one
>>97312069Please propose a well thought out thesis on why the rules are bad not appealing to things such as "they are bad because they are rules". This is a safespace and as long as you put some thought your opinions will be appreciated.
The cyoa can't even be posted right now so this is useless.
>>97312100the homebrew will be in png albeit
>>97312097>This is a safespace>4chanNobody is stupid enough to believe that.
>>97312100https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92026704
>>97312108In 400 years when it's real maybe. Nobody wants to put the PDF on imagechest for some reason either.
>>97312053>it wouldn't have the traction theirs had.As you can see, not even the thread knows what it wants.
>>97312115Shirogami... Filius before Filius... home...
>>97312126Regardless of the arguments, people want to play Apotheosis's CYOA, it has rapport. If I completely reworked it to OC like my original concept I'd have to put my inexperience to the test with a fraction of the interest - there's a certain artistic integrity in that, but I'd rather start an actual run.
>>97312140>but I'd rather start an actual run.Then give up on the rules. It's clear that's the problem. Also not now since we already have too many MPs, wait until the fastivities are really over before declaring Martial Path dead.
>>97312140>but I'd rather start an actual run.Chunin Run 2 with those rules is probably the safest option. Besides, since what you want out of Naruto is clearly at least a little different than some other anons, maybe making OC is best.
>>97312159>Then give up on the rules. It's clear that's the problem.As someone who's been through all of this before, if it's not the rules, it's the lack of rules. Trust me, there's no solution here beyond someone making the decision, the best I can do is try and harmonize the thread's opinions to something that makes people less angry.>Also not now since we already have too many MPs, wait until the fastivities are really over before declaring Martial Path dead.Agreed, my intent was aiming for in a few months but the conversation unfortunately sparked enough interest to spill over, apologies.
>>97312167The problem with the OC is that Apotheosis essentially did Nardo 1:1 so virtually any deviation is actively causing it to be less Naruto and more my own weird homebrew of the setting, which I would do if it didn't alienate even more players.
>>97312178I mean, what alienation is there? Who's really being alienated? I feel like they'd play something close to Naruto anyway. I don't think we have a subset of anons who want to play only Naruto and nothing else. I think.
Canonfaggots ruining what could be a good thing, what else is new?
>>97312178I remember your old concept and I liked it more than rulesfagged nardo.
>>97312189To be more specific it's something I'd like to do in Naruto itself for plot and thematic reasons, so the more Not!Naruto I make it the more difficult it would be for people to synchronize their expectations with the game. I'd essentially be bulldozing the canon and reworking the Jutsu system into something hierarchal.
>>97312204What even is there to canonfag? We don't use canon and we have like 40% non naruto powers in the cyoa.
>>97312212Anon, you seem a bit confused on what you actually want. It seems like you keep saying you want naruto but you don't want naruto. Also it seems you are the one that wants to use an OC setting the least.
>>97312212I am afraid that I don't understand. Could you elaborate further?
>>97312206I liked where it was going but didn't really trust that it would do well for the above reasons. If there's any more desire for a No Breaks Obliterate The Canon OC Rework of Naruto I could scrounge up and polish what I was working on for comparison and we could see if we'd prefer to stick with Apotheosis or pivot to the OC concept, but I'm not entirely sure how we'd track that without being obnoxious.
>>97312233>>97312219Narratively, I want a highly specific lens on the Naruto setting that we'd seen in pieces here and there that were never really the focus of the manga or anime, see the homebrew posted last time or discussions earlier. Mechanically? Apotheosis essentially mimicked Kishimoto's showing of Jutsu as identically as possible to the anime - the problem is the Jutsu system kind of sucks and was obviously phoned in for whatever was cool without that much thought to coherence, so I grapple with it often and decided it was probably best to let go and use Apotheosis' accurate portrayal instead. My take on the system hyperfocuses on mundane skills that branch out into supernatural skills rather than the Random Bullshit Go that we got in the actual media but it'd require enough reworking that people would invariably get upset about me butchering canon techniques to fit them into the new system.
>>97312276>My take on the system hyperfocuses on mundane skills that branch out into supernatural skills rather than the Random Bullshit Go that we got in the actual media but it'd require enough reworking that people would invariably get upset about me butchering canon techniques to fit them into the new system.I feel like my issue with this is less butchering canon techniques and more that that sounds kinda lame in general.I am going to say something possibly controversial and possibly wrong; anons like Naruto being highpower.
>>97312276Not any of those anons but why wouldn't you make OC? Anons here are willing to play anything if the rentry runs are anything to go by.
>>97312340>anons like Naruto being highpower.Nta, anons like naruto being high power untill the they don't anymore. They want high power but they also do everything they can to make it impossible to get it with the rules.
>>97312340>anons like Naruto being highpower.This is where me and John Anonymous tend to have the biggest tension point, yes. I'm all for someone getting some high-end jutsu after building up to it via a tree, but a lot of anons want to skip the normal techniques and get right into the flash - which makes sense, that's basically what the second half of Part 1 and the entirety of Part 2 is about.>>97312348Risk of like 5 anons playing and then it dying off. Apotheosis' has an insane amount of inertia even if it invites some less than pleasant conversation.
>>97312348THEN WHY DIDN'T THEY PLAY DRAGON BALL AND CRASMARSPE WITH ME*throws laptop with all my rentryslop at the wall, shattering into a million pieces, cries*
>>97312419Because the dragonball cyoa is a thousand pages long, and god only knows what the fuck crasmarspe is
>>97312439hint: they are both rentryslopsand boy are they bad
>>97312373Is it really better if anons aren't playing the same thing? At least you might get a few more from others who're interested in Naruto but hate canonfagging and wikidiving.
>>97312439>what the fuck crasmarspe isIt's spongebob, but someone tried too hard to find a reason for the fucked up rules of reality so now it's also a post apocalypse.
>>97312462Sure, I can dust off the concept and post it some time this week I suppose and see if it has a better response than the one we have now. I still have the design documentation. The run will happen either way, but it seems like there's at least a few people interested.
>>97312469Well that sounds like the exact opposite of fun
>>97312490Does it? I'm very neutral on it. I think you can make some fun characters in it but it's also a bit strange.
>>97312490I think its an excuse to make hot fishbabes
>>97312536I've been jerking off to Gura and Saba a lot lately so I support this.
>>97312536I mean I do like a good sandy pit full of eggs to fertilize
>>97312551JITEbro....
>>97312511nta the apocalypse seems unnecessary if it's a main focus focus of the setting. I could probably see it being fun if it leaned more on being wacky fish people like in Splatoon or something, but it's strange how it needed to be justified rather than just being.
>>97312567the vtpedo hates JITE albeit???
Rolled 11, 7 = 18 (2d12)rollin'
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>>97312566tags: bukkake, toddlercon, egg laying
>>97312579>if it's a main focus focus of the settingI just checked and it's literally one paragraph.>Long ago, in a war between two idiotic civilizations, the very concept of swimming in water was destroyed along with them. Water simply became another breathable material that makes certain funny rocks explode. Although, Cursed Pools where swimming can now happen have sprung into existence, and you can technically swim via anti-gravity. I mean, you can swim through like lava and sand and stuff too, if you're able. What I'm trying to say is that you can't swim in water, capiche?That's all you get about it being post-apocolyptic.
>>97312588What the fuck are you rolling for?
>>97312579The apocalypse is not a main focus of the setting. I guess it depends on your definition of focus, would you consider the apocalypse in Adventure Time a main focus? Because it's just like that. Strange shit is now happening because of a war millenia ago that nobody even remembers, water doesn't work like water anymore. Some creatures leftover from that time adapted and evolved. And that's it. I wouldn't count it as a main focus unless someone makes a character specifically to study the apocalypse, but that's just me.
Rolled 4, 3 = 7 (2d12)>>97312615MP, y'know how it is
>>97312630I don't think anyone does if you don't explain.
>>97312622>Some creatures leftover from that time adapted and evolvedI don't even know if this true. It might be that the sea creatures always existed. There's literally nothing there about the setting beyond some settlements.
>>97312645I'm pretty sure the mechanical race is divided between the new people that adapted and the old people that look like porcelain dolls and live like victorian nobles, clinging on to the society of the creators.
I wonder which builds would use a Neo bot
>>97312659>is divided between the new people that adapted and the old people that look like porcelain dolls and live like victorian nobles, clinging on to the society of the creators.https://rentry.org/ai5k4vnoHere's the cyoa.The new robots just seem to be made by the fishies and the old robots are made by the ancients. Also some of them are biological???There doesn't seem to be anything about their culture. They were just found on an island with birdpeople.
>>97312729what's a neo bot
>>97312761Where did I see that backstory then? Was it edited out? I don't think the author would do that since one of the complaints was the lack of a setting so removing one of the few mentions of it would not make sense. I remember reading that stuff on rentry.
>>97312771those home chore bots that are piloted by people
>>97312801I have zero idea. The weird part is that it sounds vaguely familiar.
>>97312815Didn't we have a shin megami tensei run with some sky oceans or something?
>>97312815I guess we collectively went insane then.>>97312831I don't know about the other anon but I wasn't here for any SMT run so at least I didn't see it there.
>>97312831I wasn't here for SMT so no idea.>>97312844My sneaking suspicion is that towerslop anon is the crasmarspe and dragon ball anon while the JJK anon hasn't done anything else so maybe he'll answer.
>>97312867I don't know if they are the same anon, but the crasmarspe anon is usually around regardless. he may be on vacation tho, like a lot of the others.
>>97312761You know this doesn't seem that unplayableShame its so ugly though
>>97313176>Shame its so ugly thoughWhat would be the bare minimum to not be ugly to you? I am really curious, I never cared for the look of a cyoa unless it hurts my eyes.
>>97313199It's really cluttered. It doesn't hurt my eyes persay but its difficult to parse.
>>97313272If I was better at image editing I would try making it into an image. But I'm not so my only options are the interactive creator and paint.
>>97311772>>97311783Clearly anon doesn't remember mythic lands and the shitstorm about their missions
>>97313781as if anyone would bother remembering literally anything about mythic lands
>>97313805It did the pirate captain and his crew concept right that we have struggled with since.Only Scrapper pulled it off as well
>>97313824THE ONE PIEEEEECETHE ONE PIECE IS REAAAAAAAAAAAL
>>97313833One Piece hasnt really managed to hit it because too many people want to be captains since it gives more points.
>>97313835also its tough to do a concept that one piece hasnt already done. theyre like the fucking simpsons, 10,000 episodes later and every power or combination thereof in the galaxy already has a canon entity based off it.
>>97313835Clearly we need to add the captain tax.
>>97313824Did it? I don't remember much people joining other ships as crewmates because ships were free so everyone could just be a captain. I do remember fleets being formed though.
>>97313874One Piece would never work anyway because crews are too competitive anf risky and everyone wants to be a CHADrine.
>>97313835The last run ended too soon. I wanted to make a captain because I thought nobody was willing to make one, the the opposite happened. I would be interested in giving it another try at some point.>>97313874One crew in particular managed to get the real crew feel going, with a couple smaller groups that then joined into a fleet. Scrapper is my only real regret as an MP but it was inevitable considering how it started.
>>97313880I don't think that's a real problem, and we didn't even have that many marines last time. The whole feel of One Piece is very much not about competition, even with the marines you get friendly rivalries pretty often.
>>97313894I do remember Scrapper doing good with multiple crews, kinda sad I didn't join it at the time. I hope we do something sci-fi again.
>>97313915My main problem with scrapper was that my idea of the setting was very different from the rest of the thread, and by the time I got some ideas for the right vibe it was already dead. I wouldn't mind some sci fi, depending on the kind of setting, I even have some good faceclaims prepared for it that would fit. But good cyoas for it are rare, and I would prefer something a bit different from scrapper.
>>97313915>>97313957For me I just didn't like Scrapper's powerpicker.
>>97313969It is a bit lackluster. I remember some anons wanted to make custom artifacts but were rejected at the character creation stage, we never got far enough into the plot for us to find new ones narratively. At least not usable ones.
>>97313957>>97313969>>97313974Because of how it went Scrapper is one of the few cyoas I would want a full revival of, but I also know that it ended for a reason and a full revival wouldn't work. I liked the cast.
>>97312592I thought you were talking about the mha Sandy
>>97312015Chunin is also just more fun if you're going to run nardo for MP. Child soldiers being used in a mostly nonlethal proxy war (that ultimately becomes lethal) to maintain peace between the nations as essentially WMDs checks a lot of boxes. You get built in conflict, blood feuds, clan politics, training arcs, friends to rivals, enemies to friends, etc. And all in a central location for the anons who insist that this is a necessity.
I kinda want a sci-fi MP. Dunno if there's any good cyoas for one though.
>>97314689I wish we had a cyberpunk CYOA that wasn't made by cityanon or influenced by gachaslop in any way.
>>97311719This is nothing compared to overlord. Its hard to encapsulate the fuckery that was.
>>97314746Choose your challengerhttps://imgchest.com/p/9249jwzm7nkhttps://imgchest.com/p/lqyep6wx7dn
>>97314933Yeah, we're gonna to need some OC
>>97314944City quest is great
Sorry but I’m not interested in Naruto at all, you guys have fun
>>97315271That was hours ago anon, the thread's been pretty silent.
>>97315271Same, but I know I'll lose to FOMO if Anons start it, make a build and then fraud.
>>97315278Sadly I’m asleep when the thread hits peak hours so I felt like I had to reply somehow. I’m concocting my next JITE writefag, gears are starting to turn in my head. Although maybe I should write for Martial Path instead, that’s been a little silent
I made it to 700 words written this morning, we are so back.Haven't made it too far into Doki Doki yet, just at the gardening shed right now.
>>97315634Doki Doki Literature Club?
>>97315687No, Operation Doki Doki, my most recent JITE writefag.>>97315634Hope you'll enjoy it! It's like 18,000 words so I hope you'll find moments you enjoy soon. Good work for writing 700 words of your own!
>>97316553>The school day drew to a close, as the setting sun's last rays of light bathed the Student Council room in its melancholic light. Kaoru and Madoka were on clean-up duty for the day, working as a coordinated cleaning battalion unit. Their weapons were brooms and mops, water and disinfectant.This was a good paragraph, with evocative imagery. Using light twice in the same sentence feels a little off, "in its melancholy" or some other way of working the word in might have flowed better, but this paragraph stood out to me as feeling very good to read.
>>97316883Well thanks man, sometimes I use an idea twice because I forget I just used it. I don't really re-read my stuff because I think about it for a while before I write it, so sometimes my work could do with an edit. A little re-wording could've been good, but I'm glad you like my prose because I feel like my prose is usually pretty mid and I enjoy writing dialogue more
>>97315271>>97315287It's alright, I already knew you guys were gonna do that (the former of you will still make a build and then dump, it is foretold). That's why I'm investing in Earth Grudge Fear.>captcha changed AGAINWHYWHY DO THEY KEEP DOING THISIS IT FUN!?DO THEY THINK IT'S A CUTE LITTLE MINIGAME
>>97317709Sorry, but QTE GODS run things now.
>>97317709>That's why I'm investing in Earth Grudge Fear.Is it going to be a girl? It's critical to a heart-stealing build. Otherwise it'd be gay.
>>97317709>>97317736>Earth Grudge Fear girlimagine the sex
>>97317754I never had it nor have I consumed porn so I can't actually.
>>97317785no sex education either? underagebab...
>>97317945NTA but my school actually never had sexed. Literally nothing. They just assumed zoomers were either not having it or already knew I suppose.
>>97318030I mean, unrestricted internet access is pretty much sex ed and most kids have that 12 hours a day.Though if we wanted to be crackpots about it, its for a reason (A bad one) because children without sexed are statistically less likely to report on pdfs so the rightwing and religious people who do that stuff push for it not to be taught cause it 'corrupts the children'even though sex ed is consistently proven to reduce teenage pregnancy.
>>97318051Reckon JITE school has sex ed? Does Japan do it or is it too shameful for them? Whose providing impromteu lessons about it when someone says stupid shit?
>>97318051>unrestricted internet access is pretty much sex edI would say that the amount of misinformation about sex on the net far outnumbers the correct information. Especially for teens and kids that are not really searching for correct info and instead will probably stop at the first couple of porn videos or hentai memes.>>97318061I'm pretty sure they take it more seriously than america, but that may be a recent thing.
>>97318061>The only class Yaya fails because she can't name reproductive organs without blushing and stuttering.>Kenji and Kohaku keep losing points because they ask about inane shit like tapedecks and cloacas.>The only class Kentaro has a passing grade in.
>>97318109>Kenji, NO! You can’t put your dick in the VCR!!!
>>97318051yeah, still not letting some midwit school teacher be the one to give my kid "the talk"
>>97318109It's alright. My build will tutor Yaya.
>>97318168Pedotsuki...
>>97318168Tetsuya...
>>97318168She shouldn't be taking that class yet anyway, she skipped grades. That's not something you should learn early because you're smart, it wouldn't make you better at it anyway.
>>97317785Jesus doesn't like it when you lie, anon.
>>97318204I'd argue that fart inflation morphs on deviantart don't count as porn.
>>97318237Nice try, Takumi.
>>97318249fucking hell, and I just forgot about that
>>97318237BRAPkumi…
>>97318061This is just the “what does each build call dicks” tier list. Which I tragically can’t find right now
>>97318449that list was flawed because cumblade wasn't an option
>JITE outlives Martial Pathzamn
>>973187224/10 bait. Work on your art.
>JITE and Martial Path still aren't as sexy as PMDzamnneed more Moyu and Chizi content...
>>973187970/10 bait because the last part is completely true.
>*baits you*
>>97318884REEEEEEEEEE TETSUYA'S PENIS IS NOT BIGGER THAN ITSUKI'S! YAYA LIKES ITSUKI'S MORE!
Do you guys really have nothing to talk about?
>>97318901I've been busy writing, but I decided to glance at thread. I can try to chat for a bit if you want.
>>97318901Yes. What do you wanna talk about?
>>97318912I'm not exactly wanting for discussion, but that's more because I'm working on non/mcyoag/ stuff. What are (You) working on, anon? Who do you want to hear more from in the MP you're active in?
>>97318901There's nothing going on except the embers of a few dim fires.
>>97318933>What are (You) working on, anon?The genuine answer is Towerslop.For MPs I have a JITE writefag that's been on the backburner forever and something for MP too but I honestly just don't feel drawn to complete them. My builds are basically dumps though and I haven't even completed anything for them yet so don't worry. The thing is that I just genuinely don't feel engaged with those settings.
>>97318933I've been working on something for Renka. Nothing too exciting, just her going through a morning touching base with her parents about her school life, but it helpful for collecting my thoughts for other things I want to do.
>>97319062I liked the idea of JITE at first but then it grew into something I didn't like and I can't make myself care about my build (massive skill issue).
>>97318901The gears are turning in my head for my next JITE writefag. After the whole “did Kaoru actually write that email” business, Kaoru and Ai will teamup to get evidence of Saito Mimi’s wrongdoing. This will lead to a confrontation with Kiro no Kawa where Ai gets worm’d and she’ll go nuts, leading to a fight later. I wanna tie Kentaro into this somehow, he’s probably gonna get impatient and try to attack Shu again, but honestly I might have to wait on the Ai/HLA thing to be finished so I can understand what Ai’s dynamics with the HLA are actually like. I’m also waiting on Ai/Sumi 2, that should be really cool. I am also ALSO waiting on the return of my glorious king Tetsuyanon and his Spamton finale.
>>97319118What did you think it was going to be like and why couldn't it be like that now?
>>97319118I'm also curious about this >>97319202 because I don't think JITE sets false expectations.
>>97319062>I just genuinely don't feel engaged with those settingsThat's fine. At least you're still being productive by working on something. It seems that there's still interest in JITE so it should still be there once you finish. Is there anything new since your last update?>>97319082Oh? What's been going on with her? Where do you plan on taking her moving forward?
>>97319202>>97319226I wanted Persona-esque dungeon delving and we don't seem to be getting any of that. I actually have zero (0) interest in real world antics and that seems to be the main focus of other anons.
>>97319263>I wanted Persona-esque dungeon delvingThat's also what I wanted to do, I am a bit late to the party I guess but that was my focus. Persona is about 50-50 with the supernatural and the mundane, maybe 40-60 depending on the game in favor of the supernatural. I guess there is a lot of real world discussion lately but I don't see how that would prevent the start of actual Bleeding Zone exploration.
>>97319263I actually want more Idea World focus myself, even if I’ve been playing ball with the slice of life stuff too. Why don’t you make the change you want to see in the world? Send a couple of builds into the deeper Idea World and fight yokai, that’d be kinda cool
>>97318933>What are (You) working on, anon?I started writing the intro, and am writing for FV on the side since the intro is missing a piece.
>>97319251I intend to get into her Evil Star/Wrong Birth situation, and generally make good on what I wanted out of the character, which is conflict caused by doubt of her own humanity. II have have ideas about building upt o her being targeted by the HLA, with them aggravating her condition in some way and triggering a sort of Inverted Mirror state.
>>97319263>he wants to explore Tartarus in JITEAre you a masochist????
>>97319300It could still focus more on the bleeding zones if that's what you want to work on. The newcomers seem to be focusing on investigation which could lead to more supernatural focus. The problem is that it's not as easy to talk about compared to the real world since the supernatural stuff is going to be made up. There were talks of specific supernatural beings, but not so much about the dungeon stuff.
>>97319370We have a Tartarus? I was sure the Idea world was more like P4 TV world with interconnected dungeons, or P5 Palaces tied to places instead of people.
>>97319311Can I guess the missing piece?
>>97319382We don’t have a Tartarus, I’m shitposting. Although, do we WANT a Tartarus? Maybe it could be a good idea actually, a specific dungeon-like space that can lead up to Nurarihyon or something
>>97319370yes and yes
>>97319374>The newcomersThat's me, that's why I said I'm late to the party. I didn't notice while catching up how little focus there was on exploring the Idea Word. Maybe starting from making this >>97319382 clear could help there?Because of how the Idea World is described in the cyoa we could just wing it, I think it would make sense for the zones to work differently since they are supposed to be varied, especially when they go from Bleeding Zone to Flood.As an aside I think it's a bit ironic that the SC, which is supposed to be working on closing the barrier, seems more interested in high school stuff and mundane problems than the other characters.
>>97319391Feel free to. I'm not sure what you're gaining from it but if you find it fun go for it.>>97319408>a specific dungeon-like space that can lead up to Nurarihyon or somethingOn one hand I think it could be cool. On the other it could take too much attention from the other bleeding zones? We could do it a bit like P5, where the Palaces/Bleeding Zones are the priority and then we discover that the random place we used for farming is actually where the final boss is, (like Mementos).So we have regular missions, and the exploration of this random place that keeps getting bigger every time we think we got to the end.
>>97319408Isn't the dungeon space the Idea World where the council door leads to? All the Bleeding Zones and Flooding Zones are just sections of that world intersecting with the real one
>>97319424As a Student Council CHAD, I think it’s just that there’s no real means to close the barrier yet. Plus, with the Death Marks, the ID stuff, and the HLA lurking in the background, I think it’s just that they have their hands full and their main mission isn’t exactly attainable yet.>>97319450Yeah, I was thinking it could be like Mementos too. An in-between space that connects all Bleeding Zones, like a hub area or something that can be explored as a dungeon that keeps going deeper and deeper. I think Cross Examination featured a yokai festival town in the Idea World, I’m sure that could be related somehow
>>97319450I forgot to mention, the Bleeding Zones would be the priority because they cause trouble, while the final dungeon would be huge but apparently harmless for the real world. Nurarihyon is not supposed to be an idiot after all, he should be able to lay low, after all he's still winning as far as he knows.
>>97319460That’s what I thought, but it’s only rarely ever used. I’d be okay with using the council door and exploring that Mementos-like area more, personally, although I also don’t want to cuck everyone who might not be good-aligned out of accessing the dungeon. I think people like Tetsuya have snuck into that door before though, so I may be overthinking it
>>97319470>although I also don’t want to cuck everyone who might not be good-aligned out of accessing the dungeon. I think people like Tetsuya have snuck into that door before though, so I may be overthinking itHe actually has the Idolon that lets you enter the Idea World freely doesn't he?
>>97319470We could put Not!Mementos in the Arcade. A more neutral ground, cheaper to access and narratively less involved than putting someone else on the student council and co, and easier to sneak into for evil/illegal alligned builds than the SC door. The Door would still work like a hub and fast travel, while the Arcade is more like the main door and always puts you at the same entrance spot.
>>97319470>That’s what I thought, but it’s only rarely ever usedAlright but that's another issue altogether. From what I'm seeing it sounds like anons were about to create a solution for an imaginary issue (big dungeon) when it's already there.>I also don’t want to cuck everyone who might not be good-aligned out of accessing the dungeonIf they're HL they can probably get help from the Yokai to access that space.
>>97319450>I'm not sure what you're gaining from itYou did say that you were incorporating my character into the intro, and see as I haven't posted it... It's probably better for me to ask what's missing so I can try to fill it in if I did guess correctly.
>>97319488IIRC his Idolon is basically a remote-controlled proxy, and I recall him using the council door, but you may be right in that he can just access the Idea World as is. >>97319496>>97319500Eeeeh I think the council door works just fine, anon 2 is right. The council door is right there, and I guess yokai can help anyone who isn’t good-aligned access Not Mementos anyway. Although I guess the Student Council would have to start planning expeditions then? Might not be a bad concept to do more group writefags
All the HLA and I guess Kohaku can access the Idea World just from any Bleeding Zone can't they?
>>97319538Anyone with a Possession Idolon too
>>97319543AKA, after all this time, just Tetsuya lmao
>>97319556it's fundamentally lamer than henshin and stand power, no amount of freedom can fix it
>>97319503You guessed right. I just need a name and maybe a general location for where she lives. I was thinking of leaving it at that for now, a sort of cliffhanger for a proper reunion writeup later to at least set up that they met. If you can give me at least a vague reaction to Liren showing up at her house uninvited I can maybe do a JoJo To Be Continued on it, but that seems too ambitious for me.The piece will get too bloated if I add too much stuff, so I will split it up. Unless you would prefer her being dragged into his first awakening by chance, but that would require a lot more information, like a base of her personality and a vague outline of her Idolon. It could also interfere with how you wanted her awakening to go, so that's why I was going with the less intrusive option.
>>97319538>and I guess KohakuWhy his specifically? What does he have that does that?
>>97319543>>97319567I still don't really get what the difference between Possession and Incarnation is exactly.
>>97319251>Is there anything new since your last update?Nothing much to say, still just chipping away at writing a description for every option. One thing I haven't talked about is that at the moment I have different scenarios to pick from: they're kinda hard to describe. The idea is to let anons pick the one they like most (I have a feeling the one they'll like most and be most compatible for MP isn't the default) but idk if I should leave them as they are and just have factions/more background lore for the default setting or give a little something for all of them in a faction or mission section. Considering I don't even have any perks or benefits in mind for factions I'm unsure on what to do.
>>97319595I'm going to resist being derisive.Possession = You take control of your Idolon's in the Spirit World and puppet them.Incantation = You transform into your Idolon.
>>97319586I don't think the Student Council would be okay with letting him use the door.
>>97319616Does Poseession leave behind a comatose body while your soul isn't there? If that's the case then it really is lame, and a huge liability.
>>97319634I think that's how the one guy who took it treated it
>>97319630I get that part, what I'm asking is what does he have that lets him access the wider Idea World from any random Bleeding Zone that all other non HLA builds lack? There are other characters that are not HLA or SC, and they are not allied to either.
>>97319649I just meant it's what he would use, anyone can do it.
>>97319574Masami Umeki, with Masami (成美) as the first name. It would make sense if she somehow lived close to Liren's old home, but the details are up to you. If the temple is particularly far, then she could be living in some studio apartment by herself close to the school.Given that she's rather heavily armed, she's not exactly the type to take kindly to home invasions. Likely grabbing a weapon when she feels something is off until he can clarify himself. Aside from when her personal space is being invaded out of nowhere, she's more of a cheerful girl that's easy to get the attention of, and hypes everything up.The thing is that the Idolon is the part I'm stuck at. I don't have any plans as to how her awakening goes, but I also don't know what to do with her Idolon other than to make it weak in direct combat, likely taking the Overconfidence drawback too.
>>97319781>If the temple is particularly far, then she could be living in some studio apartment by herself close to the school.I was placing the temple in a strange empty lot in the buildings, a bit like pic related but more oppressive, similar to the empty lot in Yakuza Zero if you know that one, just bigger. So it's out of the way and a bit hidden but not in the wilderness, to follow the theme of rapid urbanization, as if the city grew so fast that it swallowed the shrine but for some reason the shrine grounds remained untouched. It should be still close enough to school so I guess she can live near there with no problems.>SpoilerI see, this spells chaos, I think it will be fun.>The thing is that the Idolon is the part I'm stuck at. I don't have any plans as to how her awakening goesGood to know, we can go with the later awakening then, no need to rush. If you want to keep going with the opposites theme you could go with the opposite of Spawn, but I'm not sure what the opposite of a shapeshifting eldritch creature is so maybe that doesn't help much.The ideas that come to mind for a support are little macot characters or some kind of nurse. I am clearly very bad at coming up with something that isn't edgy.I forgot the picture the first time.
>>97319263>>97319300Right now there's the Child's Play/Lucky Land chain centered around a haunted department/toy store that you could pick up, and something about an amusement park under the control of a high ranking kitsune wizard yokai where there could potentially be multiple Flooding Zone dungeons inside attractions. If that's what you want just do it.
>>97320246cuckness killed it muchacho, I apologize
>>97319450>>97319469Could be related to the nightly city wide bleeding zone and have deeper dungeon pockets start showing up, since it's been spreading. Or the mysterious bleeding zone mission.
>>97319460>>97319470Anyone can get to all the dungeons manually, the council just has access to fast travel.
>>97320246Didn't everyone just aggree to let that one die? Something about it being too poisoned.>>97320262I like the first one, a bit like the actual Tartarus. Some parts of the city would slip deeper in and expand, that would create the bigger dungeon, maybe clearing them stabilizes them and they can slowly be used to build a path to the core. The second one seem less fitting, mostly because of the themes and rewards of it, the big bad seems to want to either kill or enslave humanity, while that zone seems made specifically to either allow perfect coexistence with humans or to evolve them past the limits of humanity. It seems more something a rival would do, to sectretly undermine the conquest, or a strange phenomenon born from the world trying to balance things out.
>>97318901what do you expect from these discord crossposters? To not be gay?
>>97320410You already got BRAPkumi to jerk off to, go bother some other general.
>>97320410Finished watching your vtumor?
>>97320474NTA, I wouldn't watch vtubers but some of their avatars are very sexy. Vtuber MP when?
>>97320479You'll get your SC revival soon bwo.
>>97320479When we get a japanese wrestling cyoa which can then be rulesfagged into turning all the special moves into doing cute things on the internet
>>97320479Next Fate run. Grand Magus Ailliam Wafton will use Servants to advertise his pizzeria.>>97320512>confirmed brapfag OBSESSED with stinky farts
>>97308832Low effort posting time!
>>97320598>the Kentaro onekek
>>97320598Now do the rest
>>97320612
>>97320612but they're irrelevant
>>97320624I dont even recognize half those builds tho
>>97320658exactly, that's how irrelevant those other builds are
>>97320665I mean the ones in the image. I recognize the builds they skipped more.
>>97320796no you don't unless they're yours you stinky frauddumper
We need more cute builds who have the stinkiest frauddumpers.
>>97320598This MP is so dogshit.
>>97320835>>>>>and it's the current best oneSCKINONARUTOKINOSAAAAAAAAAAVE UUUUUUUUUSSSSS
>>97320800They only did Momo when the Senki is the most well known group.
>>97320862>the Senki is the most well known group without looking, name a member who ISN’T momofuku (hard mode: no itsuki and no maids)
>>97320862Planet Delusionalbro...
>>97320622Story of my life
>>97320869Dawn, give me something hard next time
>>97320862I didn't even know what you meant by the Senki until I thought for a second
>>97320877FUARK!!! I have been FOILED AGAIN!!!!1!1!okay but clearly the student council is more well known right
>>97320887I wouldn't even put the Fujiwara Senki above the Home Loaners Association.
>>97320889I wouldn't put them above the Census Club.
>>97320889>>97320891TRVKEat least everyone in the HLA has something to do on their own, the fujiwara senki is just momofuku’s polycule now
>>97320895>nowIt used to be something else?
>>97320899itsuki’s harem clearlynow they’re just yuribait which is infinitely more boring
>>97320869Dawn, you suck at hard modes
>>97320899>>97320905It's what they had to do to cope with Reiji ntring them by stealing Itsuki
>>97320908no cheating anon, the other anon gave you the answer………………..
Anyone remember what Cityanon's character was named? Don't check
>>97320932Uhhh...Mechadramon!*LOUD INCORRECT BUZZER*
>>97320953I thought Fumiko was Marakanon’s?
>>97320968No he made the british chud whose first faceclaim looked like it came from newgrounds
>>97320847What if I just started writing for MHA again?
>>97321134We, and I mean WE, would all ignore you. Oh, sorry, you'll actually get 12 (You)s, half of which are people insulting you, and then you'll get a Slimenuts shitpost response writefag as MHA goes silent for another 4 months.Sounds good?
>>97321134Then I'll have no choice but to return and match your effort, anon-kun. No two ways about it.
>>97321255>Sounds good?
>>97321268fraudanon... we all know not to expect anything from you
>>97321134last time someone said they wanted to write for MHA they begged kaoruanon to make a build because the actual builds suck
God I fucking love trains. All other transportation sucks in comparison. Only spider tanks come close.
>>97321361Thomas the Tank Engine MP when?
>>97321357Stop glazing yourself lil bro. This is getting embarrassing.
>>97321361
>>97321365>lil broAny and all posts that actually use these two words to refer to someone OOZE insecurity btw
>>97321361Don't disrespect planes, nigga.
>>97321372unc is yapping fr
>>97321357That didn't happen. Someone said they were bummed that kaoruanon wasn't interested in MHA because they could have replaced one of the freshman dumps in a writefag. Nobody was begged, kaoruanon is just the type of faggot to write shit like "I'm not a messiah" unprompted. The other anon even made the mistake of apologizing for kaoruanon's bizarre freakout over literally nothing.
>>97321432sounds to me like they were banking on that guy to make a build or else they wouldn’t be interested in writing so what does that say about the state of MHA
>>97321448Sounds to me like that's how Kaoruanon misinterpreted it.
>>97321451it’s easier to admit that MHA is dead than it is to accuse me of being kaoruanon, conspiracyfag
>>97321458Not what I said. Kaoruanon misinterpreted it back then, like >>97321432 mentioned, and it sounds to me like you remembered how he responded more than the context. It started with someone saying that they'd like Kaoruanon to join MHA on its revival, not that its revival is dependent on his joining.
>>97321448I won't defend the idea, because that whole freshman class sucked. But he explicitly stated the few builds he wanted to replace. Your interpretation is nonsensical.
This moment is what will plant the seeds for the inevitable MHAfag vs JITEfag war. You won't believe me now, but in time you'll look back and realize that I was right when it happens.
>>97321520>MHAfag vs JITEfag war
>>97321520This wasn't really about MHA at all.
>>97321477they were all better than marakanon's tbqh
>>97321543You could have told me he made one of the new 1-D builds and I would have believed you.
>>97321553But he did, wasn't his build the energy boy
>>97321559It was >Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miraclehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093Wasn't it?
>>97321463>>97321477It's honestly really baffling that Kaoruanon immediately jumped to that interpretation>You dare ask me, a self-important drawfag, to make a build for MHA?! How dare you! Hmph, now I really don't wanna make a build.
>>97321590Acting like MHAfags didn't keep trying to convince him to join MHA after he said he didn't want to
>>97321590Eh, I get it. People tend to leech on effortfags and artfags in particular. He overreacted, but it wasn't completely unreasonable.
>>97321594>>97321595They were explaining why his reasoning was illogical. I was doing that too, and I want MHA to stay dead. His overreaction was completely unreasonable.
>>97308832>Seek & Destroy (Momofuku, Shobu)https://rentry.org/c6wog5vc
>>97321670short but sweet
>>97321686>shortBro, it's over 4k words.
>>97321715Light work
>>97321715It's more of a backhanded compliment that someone here explained. It means he didn't read it.
>>97321745It has been used literally and ironically. It's not necessarily used any specific way 100% of the time.
>>97321670Cute. Make me feel warm inside.
>>97321715Its a meme, don't overthink it.I posted about how much that specific review annoys the hell out of me one time and it became thread culture to the point it no longer annoys me.
>>97321670Very nice! It’s cool to see Shobu getting integrated into stuff. Damn, a lotta people have it out for Kohaku, huh? Maybe we need an Avengers team to get him or somethingAlso, holy FUARK, are people still discussing this? I had some stuff to do earlier today, but I wanted to clear myself up a bit. I didn’t mean to say an MHA revival would depend on me, I just felt like that one guy was guilt-tripping me into making a build, like “if you don’t make a build I won’t feel motivated to write” kinda. Plus, several people were on the bandwagon of “you don’t have to watch MHA to be in MHA” so I was feeling ticked off and I exploded at that guy. I don’t think he was guilt-tripping me in retrospect, but if there’s two things I hate, it’s 1. Having to repeat myself and 2. Feeling guilt-tripped. That guy was perfectly amicable in the end though, no beef. That said, the messiah bit was kinda cringe of me to say, but I meant that people should write whatever they want and not wait for someone to make a build to feel like their MP has fuel. I should’ve probably been more chill about it though. I don’t want to sound self-importantHonestly I kinda do wanna see the Madoka revenge squad in action, especially since it would give me an excuse to write Kaoru teaming up with people she doesn’t normally team up with, like Momo. Although Kaoru cares more about apprehending someone where she sees that the police failed, might be interesting to see that contrasted with a revenge-lusted Momofuku and someone like Shobuwho’s on some Mishima shit
>>97322050>>90288673 >>89322086I forgot it was that long agoSome anon liked saying short but sweet in 2022/2023 and it always came off as backhanded/facetious/etc.Part of it was that it was said relatively often back then. Now its more of a meme.
>>97322110I mean I guess that story IS short and sweet, but I’d say that’s still a pretty reductive review
https://imgchest.com/p/o24ap2jkd4l https://imgchest.com/p/bp45d5bxy5lRemember when we considered playing something with these?I member.
>>97322131Touhou? Honestly, I may not have played the games but I have a friend who does so I have some attachment to it. I’d give it a try actually
>>97322130The funniest part is that I found posts that were probably me complaining about it every year until now.Let it never be said I'm not consistent.
>>97322143There’s always anons that will engage with your story in good faith, I wouldn’t get hung up on the ones who don’t. I enjoyed seeing Momofuku and Shobu acting like old friends, or rather what their kind of friendship is like. Makes the friend group feel more connected, which is good because Shobu came in kinda late. Also doesn’t Shobu literally mean fight?
>>97320345>Didn't everyone just aggree to let that one die?No? There's nothing everyone agrees on, judge by your own metric.
>>97322157Im not even the one that wrote it, or the one that disputed it being short or said that it was backhanded or anything. 'its a meme' was my first response.
>>97322131Anons will make more boring male wankers than is accurate to the touhou vibe (exactly zero).
>>97322163Eeeeh. I was the one that started the chain, and I think it was kinda doomed from the start because I was trying to write a direct response from the Student Council to the Madoka stabbing, so the chain already started with 6 characters to manage. The Junko situation kinda sealed the deal, which I feel partially responsible for, because I did think Junko was just a shitpost at the start. Since then I’ve been treating him like a genuine character, albeit a comedic one. It’s clear that people have soured on it, although Kohakuanon did actually continue the chain with a part 3.
>>97322131I remember the first one was tried, and 2 of the 5 or so builds were male which further solidified how anons just want to be unique over anything else.
>>97322200I’m pretty sure that out of the entire Touhou cast there’s like, ONE male and he’s a fairly minor character. I think people just didn’t know or didn’t care
>>97322218There are a few males technically, most are implied or mentioned in someone's backstory. You're likely talking about Rinnosuke, but making a male main character seems so newfaggy given the site.
>>97322261Yeah, that one. I agree though, Gensokyo is almost all girls. I think people just either didn’t do their research or they didn’t care if something like that happened when the MP was attempted
>>97322184Anon wanted dungeon delving and Idea World fights, I suggested a plot thread involving those things. Simple as. If anons shitting on something makes them allergic to looking at it that's their issue.
>>97322301I want those things too. Hell, I’d probably try to continue the chain myself if I didn’t consider it a lost cause right now. Personally I was liking the idea of a Tartarus/Mementos kind of thing behind the Student Council’s door. Hell, I might try to write something with that soon
>>97322313>I’d probably try to continue the chain myself if I didn’t consider it a lost cause right now.Sounds like a piss baby excuse.
>>97322324Anon, when you’re the one that starts the chain and you see how much you’ve screwed up with your own work and what comes of it, I’d say the disappointment is warranted. I didn’t think my part 1 was bad in writing, but it was a bad start to a chain.
>>97322336>I forgot to use protection and pissed in her butt, now she got pregnant but I'm not ready to be a fatherTop 10 manhwa titles.
>>97322341it's more like cuckness did the pissing and kaoru got pregnant
>>97322200>just want to be unique over anything else.I don't care about being unique, and I know that gensokyo is like 90% girls, or was it 99%? Anyway I just can't write girls so I made a guy, it's simple.
>>97322008glad you liked it, anon!>>97322095>Damn, a lotta people have it out for Kohaku, huh?Yeah... Madoka was about the worst possible target he could have found in his breakdown>Honestly I kinda do wanna see the Madoka revenge squad in action, especially since it would give me an excuse to write Kaoru teaming up with people she doesn’t normally team up with, like MomoSame. It's an interesting conflict of what to do with Idea World criminals who can't be redeemed with a shonen fight like Alyona. But first I have to check on Kohaku anon to see what he's working on, I only caught bits and pieces of discussion from checking the thread over the past weeks.Speaking, I'm not sure if it's you or rin anon or someone else doing it, but for that idea of the HLA attack, since it's apparently using the Hollow Ataraxia bleeding zone, I thought it would be nice to set it on the lunar eclipse of july 16th, an actual event that happened in the year 2000.
>>97322417I’ve been thinking about doing it, basically because I’d like the climax of Kaoru’s arc to involve the HLA finally stepping out ot the shadows in some way, but only because I think the only HLA member I’ve been able to discuss that kind of thing with is Kenjianon. If Rinanon is working on something, I’ll let him cook and just work from there in my follow-up. Although, I think that timing is kinda awkward given that IIRC current JITE is set in April 2000. It’s weird to think that all these stories have been happening over the span of just one month though, so if you ask me I’m okay with moving forward in time. But I shouldn’t be the sole person that decides that.
>>97322163>judge by your own metric.That doesn't really apply in a collaborative effort. I may like it personally but it's pointless to keep it going when the interest lacks from most of the rest. I didn't have a problem with Darkness back then as much as a lot of others, but I clearly remember that it got way out of hand. I think most of us want to just forget and move on instead of diging it up and bringing the same arguments back.
>>97321670Nice work! This is a pretty good reference for how Shobu talks since I'm writing be racist to Alyona right now.I liked the fight too, and you can feel the pressure Momo is under.At least we know that Madoka will be back up, spreading Gyaru cheer before long.
>>97322095>Plus, several people were on the bandwagon of “you don’t have to watch MHA to be in MHA”That's just a fact, not a recruitment attempt. You said that you couldn't get into the MP because you didn't have the same attachment to the series as everyone else, then they pointed out we don't have any attachment to the series either. At no point did they ask to join.
>>97322439to be fair, on my end I was already with the mindset that things were moving. Events like russian winter and the flooding zone incident happened in April, but with Alyona catching having to catch for several weeks, blue eyed souls was already happening in May or June, and Alyona anon's Xmas thing was explicitly set in July. Also, Itsuki's whole arc couldn't possibly have happened in a single month. So I think it's okay for you to move up in time, too.>>97322474Thanks, anon! Looking forward to your piece. We can only hope Momo and Shobu's reconnection doesn't fray under their different opinions on how to treat the gaijin.
>>97322456>That doesn't really apply in a collaborative effortWhen some anons are interested in collaborating and attempting to do so, and others want no collaboration with a piece, I think it is more pointless to listen to the ones who don't want to collaborate instead of using your own thoughts.
>>97322480It was getting annoying because when I say that I don’t wanna do something, I’d like to think that’s the bottom line ’cause Stone Cold said so and I’d like to move on from it. If I get some resistance to that, I’m gonna get the wrong idea that people just want to change my mind about something. I felt pestered.>>97322486I guess, but whenever I’ve asked about this I’ve always been told it’s April or nuffin’. So I’ve been avoiding the idea of moving forward in time because I thought it’d have to be a conjoined effort from several people to decide that and not just me.>>97322456I take the blame for that, mostly. I really did think he was a joke character, so I thought the story didn’t have to be taken seriously at all, but hey, a build is a build. I’ve tried to give the character some legitimacy in my own work after the fact anyway
>>97322489This goes beyond not wanting to collaborate. They want to erase that character and anything related to it, considering it not canon. It's a pretty big difference.
>>97322505Since Doki Doki references that character, do you now consider that piece non-canon because other people dislike a character?
>>97322486>Itsuki's whole arc couldn't possibly have happened in a single monthItsuki just has really good time management skills so he managed to stuff his entire arc into a monthWe should all strive to be a little more like him
>>97322517I don't know, I didn't read that yet, but it doesn't matter what I think. It's what most of the other active anons think that matters. I'm neutral on it.
>>97322530Taking anonymous posts as most anons seems a bit naive.
>>97322517>>97322530In any case I just used Darkness/Junko as a villain of the week. Hell, I don’t think I can write him to be half as funny as Kohakuanon did so I’d like to think the people who dislike him still wouldn’t see much “damage”. Anyway I’ll let you reach your own conclusions when you read it anon
>>97320598Yup, one shudders to imagine what inhuman thoughts lie behind yaya's gleeful demeanor
>>97322550I found a notebook in her backpack with the geneva convention listed out on it and 70% of them were crossed off...
>>97322417Kohaku anon here, I am making incremental progress on a writefag of Momo confronting Kohaku and beating his ass.Haven't read yours' yet to see her plans, but my storyboard was Kohaku had a text that Takoyaki's body is at his place, he goes there to give him last rites. Momo actually already gave Tako his funeral pyre and put the ashes in a vase from the house they were squatting in, since she felt responsible for him dying while under her command, and her grudge was on Kohaku, not Tako.Momo had a motion sensor Dawn made watching for anyone going into the house so she could go confront Kohaku when he showed up to look for the remains. Then she goes over to throw hands.It's at night, so I was undecided whether to have straight hands, bokken beatdown, or full Idolon fight. Do you have any thoughts?Either way, Momo discovers during the fight that he is possessed due to her cultivation combat feeling how completely fucked his flow is. She still kicks his shit in, but stops short of killing him to consult someone like Renka who can look into the possession situation.
>>97322313If nobody else has picked it up by the time I get to Aida's stuff, I'll probably just finish it myself to clear him up for other things.
>>97322602Its actually kinda hard to break parts of the geneva convention without being in an active warzone due to how so many things are specified.
>>97322911As it turns out, Yaya is actually the mature idea of war that slipped into reality. The thing about being lonely due to absent family is just a cover story.
>>97322923>WarYaya>DeathShobu>PestilenceAi>FamineAlso Ai
>>97322998The dragon has three heads...
>>97322841>Haven't read yours' yet to see her plansThere wasn't much progress in that front, it was mostly some internal drama on how to bring Shobu up to speed on what really happened, because Momo was unsure on her Awakened status. It's also set before the courtroom debacle, so even then there's room her mindset to change afterward.What would probably change is that she'd be irrationally pissed at the council for not getting him in court, and at herself for not being there to help, yet again. So it tracks for her to only involve her gang in this attack.>It's at night, so I was undecided whether to have straight hands, bokken beatdown, or full Idolon fight. Do you have any thoughts?It mostly depends on how he and his Idolon react. Momo would go for a 1v1 bokken beatdown, but if Tai comes to the rescue, then Simply Red would match that.>Either way, Momo discovers during the fight that he is possessed due to her cultivation combat feeling how completely fucked his flow is. She still kicks his shit in, but stops short of killing him to consult someone like Renka who can look into the possession situation.Makes sense. Looking forward to it!
>>97323053>>97322841If you guys are gonna go with this, mind if Kaoru’s the second one to go after Kohaku, after Momo’s confirmed the possession? Might take a while because I need to close out her current arc before I start a new chapter, per se. My idea is that Kaoru would dig even deeper about the Fukuzawas and eventually confront Kohaku, demanding to know who were the ones that took him after he stabbed Madoka. Maybe Momo could show up in the middle of the fight to tell Kaoru to stop, and that Kohaku’s possessed, which might lead to Kohaku escaping, but maybe from that point on both of them could work together to find a solution to the Kohaku dilemma. I kinda want to do this because I want to tie in Kaoru’s parents to the feds. They were neuroscientists that might’ve discovered some kind of evidence of psychic energy that the feds wanted, but the feds didn’t kill Kaoru’s parents, some rioters did that. I just wanted to add that little tidbit to make Kaoru even more determined to track down the feds at some point.
>>97322502It's the fault of those anons for assuming you were a rational adult instead of a histrionic child. Hopefully they learned their lesson.
>>97323136Momo anon here, Kohaku anon's the one writing it, but no, I don't mind Kaoru's involvement. Kaoru can also be a good ally in identifying and stopping the killers that Kohaku's Evil Star is generating.
>>97323053Some good info, thanks Momoanon!>>97323136>>97323424I'll probably be working on some fed investigations after this one, but I'm cool with Kaoru confronting him next. Depending how her Saito Mimi investigation goes, she may already have some leads on the source of his possession herself by that point.
>>97323424Yeah, that’s probably what will happen. I’m not exactly sure if Kaoru will choose to track down the Evil Star serial killers or focus on Kohaku, but I can see her collabing with Momo eventually. >>97323497I’m planning some stuff: After Ai confirms that Kaoru wasn’t the one that wrote the email, they’re both gonna look for evidence of Saito Mimi’s involvement after hours. I still don’t know what leads they’ll find exactly, and it’d be cool if you threw some ideas into the ring it that’s what you’r like to do, but eventually Ai’s gonna end up worm’d and Kaoru might need the council to back her up in getting Ai un-worm’d. I also wanna throw some HLA stuff in there, not sure how that’s gonna go yet
I sometimes get the urge to write for JITE but then I see some of you actually discuss it and it makes me cringe because the builds suck that much and I don't feel like writing for JITE anymore. The cast is soooo painfully mediocre.
>>97323608reijianon... your build was fucking ass, I'm glad you're not joining in
>>97323524>I still don’t know what leads they’ll find exactly, and it’d be cool if you threw some ideas into the ringMimi used to be a pharmacist and hid poison pills in some containers as ticking time bombs, nobody has figured it out yet but it's one lead to follow. She’s also very schizo, refers to KnK as her "angel" and probably has schizo journals and manifestos in her home if they go snooping.
>>97323647trvke but he's just one of the bad build ideas
>>97323654It’s funny, because I can see Ai sneaking into Mimi’s home, but Kaoru might not want to at first. I think maybe it might be interesting if Ai has to convince Kaoru to go even further in her investigation, since we’ve already shown that Kaoru doesn’t have much trust in the law to begin with and she’ll work in her own way if it’s necessary. Then again, the entire point is Kaoru wants evidence that the Student Council will find relevant to go against Saito Mimi, while Ai mostly cares about the damage to Shu (and I guess Kaoru). I’ll have to consider whether they actually break into her home or not
>>97319196>Ai/Sumi 2About that, I was planning on writing in some past history between Ai and Sumi. Looking at her family tree gave me an idea for them related through the Aisa line, but baseline is just they used be close when they were both a little more normal.
>>97323974That’s cool. I don’t know if I’ll incorporate Sumi into anything I’m working on, especially because I have my hands full with stuff I want to do, but she’s certainly an interesting character.
>>97323909>>97323909>>97323909Hogs, it's that time again! I think. Meander over... uh... somewhere... over there? I dunno, but I'm sure you'll figure it out.
anything interesting to talk about in secret hours
>>97324220I'm in a blogposting mood, so no.
>>97324220I dunno, post ships?
>>97324220Master Servant dynamics kino... when are we gonna get a cyoa besides Fate where we can do this?
>>97324304Uh, there's that guardian cyoa maybe.
>>97324265Does this count?
>>97324309what's that one again
>>97324304Don't we have that in the Martial Path? There are Clanner Masters and their peasants Servants.
>>97324304There's id monstrum
>>97324304That could have been JITE if you weren't a coward.
>>97324324Martial Path... being relevant... the good ol' days (one month ago)...
>>97324265I have a yuri ship.
>>97324355Yuri ship but its two russian guys named Yuri so it can be yaoi yuri?
>>97324304You can make a servant for any build in any cyoa to get frauded on
>>97324316>>97324355Holy FUARK! Look at these ships! Insane.Honestly, jokes aside, do people actually like Alyona x Renka or no? I hear a lot of complaints about it but I’m not sure if those are ironic (I’m not Alyonanon, just curious what people think since that seems to be the most controversial JITE ship)
>>97324394it's gay and I'm homophobic so no I don't like itthat's it really, I'm sure I could find something else to hate about it if I bothered
>>97324422I mean honestly I get it from a “gay people weren’t commonplace in 2000” perspective but also I’m not gonna tell people what to write or not write. I can be critical internally though, but I personally think it’s harmless since it’s only ever been referenced once
>>97324449it's more like a plain I don't like gay people perspective
>>97324394wasn't the ship alyona and momo
>>97324469IIRC Alyona and Renka actually kissed. I think anything with Momo has only ever been teased to a degree where they probably don’t have anything going on, and with Momo-anon being a pretty serious writer I think it would be referenced more often if that were the case
>>97324422>>97324463M-My knees are BENDING ON THEIR OWN... I'm KNEELING...
>>97324394Alyona isn't a likeable character, lesbians aren't real so yuri is boring, and it's worse than yuri because sallyanon is incapable of making a build seem like a girl.
>>97324497Alyona was a likable character when she was a cute based asshole but then she became more boring. She should have stayed an antagonist for longer.
>>97324478>IIRC Alyona and Renka actually kissedyeah I'm pretty sure one of us is misremembering something
>>97324536It was the one where Alyona was injured or something and they were all at her house. The mom was freaking out, they brought out a stretcher, and I think right at the end Alyona and Renka kissed. But it’s been a long while since I read that one
>>97324514She always sucked
>>97324551that sounds like either russian winter 4.5 or the perestroika epilogue, but neither of them have kisses. I'm afraid you're hallucinating yuri, anon. Turn around. I'll make it painless.
We're gonna have to start putting in descriptions for writefags in the archives so we can find shit easier. Like our own little tv episodes.
>>97324608I swear to God this isn’t a thing that I *wanted* to hallucinate, I distinctly remember reading one of the final paragraphs of one of those and going “whoops, I guess they really did kiss”. If you kill me, kill me because I’m retarded, not because I’m a yurifag, which I’m not
Umu. Shu is an idea, right? Would it be alright ewith Shu anon if I made his past human self quite evil?Thinking of using him as NTRman
>>97324648that sounds incredibly convoluted Itsukianon, I am not Shuanon but do not do that
>>97324648>>97324675Lucky for you, Shuanon seems to be in the other thread. Go ask him
>>97324648Blud's burning down the kitchen
I swear to Chekhov I’ll clock my cock off if I don’t find that scene. Or maybe I really DID hallucinate it, I’ve skimmed several Alyona writefags and there’s some lesbian subtext here and there but nothing explicit
>>97324751Momobros we can still win the Alyona bowl!
>>97324635>>97324751bro it's okay you just remembered wrong
>>97324792I wish I had drawn that shitty doodle better, I didn’t think anyone would keep that one around
>>97324751I think you’re thinking of Perestroika’s epilouge where Momo promises to help Alyona stay in Japan even if her father comes to collect her and take her back to Russia
>>97324323He might be talking about guardian spirit, the problem being the lack of master customization https://imgchest.com/p/ej7m2enbydlfunnily enough there's a one page Fate cyoa.
>>97325299>worst Class with worst girlGAAAAAAAY
