Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoagAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_CompIn Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3Unreadable and Unreliable EditionPrevious Thread: >>97323909
>>97331354You forgot our builds and the artfag :(
my bad schlawg>97153475Anon #1>97153497Anon #2>97153507Anon #3>97153524Anon #4>97153580 >97153573Anon #5>97153987Anon #6
>>97331387That's pretty update version :(
>>97331399>pretty*preGoddamn autocorrect
>>97331399
>>97331410Thank you.
>>97331410Wasn't there more builds
>>97331420nyo
>>97331420There were relationship charts. And #7 had two versions.
>>97331445i though i made a build but too late to be in the image
>>97331481That was #7, unless you haven't linked the cyoa back then.https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97138332/#97153459
How can I discuss MPs without my cyoas...?
>>97332084Post them yourself.
>JITE Archivehttps://rentry.org/jiterentry1>BUILDS>>Student Council>Shu Jinkō, "My nigga Clark Kent"https://rentry.org/3cexovsdhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/47/1758477005700.png>Madoka Onguuchi, "Distressed Damsel"https://rentry.org/9aedhewchttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/42/1758421653099.png>Meliaya "Yaya" Mihama, "Higan Academy dwarf?"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96462921https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/44/1758441779275.png>Ran Nejima, "Bipolar Tank"https://rentry.org/JITErnhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/64/1758641526880.png>Yae Zennami, "Hugo Boss™ approved Idolon design"https://rentry.org/hv6u3hy4https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/46/1758461607388.png>Kaoru Nagamine, "Tsun for the Student Council"https://rentry.co/zxon8uvhhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1761/00/1761006744282.png>>Fujiwara Senki>Momofuku Chikata, "Tsundere oni tardwife"https://rentry.org/momofuuki_2https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/47/1758478700784.png>Belladonna Sola, "lol as if I'd ever date a cute hacker NERD"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97005155https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758563236277.png>Fumiko Furukawahttps://rentry.org/e7d4wx79https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/58/1758583422481.png>Parfaite Sukemori / La Première femme de Chambre, "Maid in heaven"https://rentry.org/qu7nqq8s>Sayaka Koujin, "Oh no not another triangle choke"https://rentry.org/e225aqhdhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/58/1758582662075.png>Jinguuji Kanaehttps://rentry.org/jiteshugenja>>(Former) Census Club>Alyona Rodionvova, "Mail-order bride from hell"https://rentry.co/yub2yds6https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/68/1758688900210.png>Renka Cho, "Chuuni Tardwife"https://rentry.org/za8grm2c>Archibald Florence, "16-year-old?"https://rentry.org/mmwqzzpm
>>Kurobane Group>Reiji Kurobane, "Will fire my dad if I put anything bad here"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96777753>Itsuki, "Ultimate fujo slayer"https://rentry.org/6fs8w6ashttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/57/1758576139400.png>Sophia Alexandria Newtonia IV Chie Igarashi, "Future ruler of Akiba"https://rentry.co/8xxtuscc>>Misc.>Ai Suishi, "Distressing Damsel"https://rentry.org/sgunn9vehttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/45/1758453903714.png>Takumi Wright, "Your uncle after a few beers"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96442943>Liú Měi, "Shì de, buns and thighs!"https://rentry.org/fgr4iihuhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/57/1758578417440.png>Tetsuya Abe, "Just your average futafag"https://rentry.org/5gvkba7d>Takaishi Kuroda, "How it feels to chew sweet potatoes you grew yourself"https://rentry.org/takajite> Kazu Morino, "Those dick pills made it way too big to use. Worth it tho"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96445363>Cato, "Literally every kid in a movie theatre"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96469569>Sumi Ayaka, "brb gonna hang myself for singing flat in the school musical"https://rentry.org/bohemianidol>Tomaki Warumachihttps://rentry.org/ShaltZoiJITEhttps://rentry.org/WarlordKakitohttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/49/1758494337764.png>Matsunaga Keihttps://rentry.org/JITE_Swordsman>Chê Ngiêmhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96582901https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/92/1758920350712.png>Sarah Rheehttps://rentry.org/2wp9qpachttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/98/1758984555340.png>Teruma Arakawa:https://rentry.org/fa5459sq>Liren Shimizuhttps://rentry.co/6e8wkos2>Shōbu Shinkenhttps://rentry.org/LastSamurai
>>ID Gang.>Fukuzawa Kohaku>Uesugi Aida>Okabe Takeohttps://rentry.org/6asdeucohttps://rentry.org/tbpmkp54>>Humanity Lost>Satoru Rin, "Nah, I'd fix her"https://rentry.org/JITE-facelessgirlhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/43/1758433358207.png>Kenji Kurosawahttps://rentry.org/skab2shhhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758563707678.png>Arakawa Itsurōhttps://rentry.org/arakawajitehttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758568393768.png>Tachibana Kentarō, "Act 2 Monster"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96688090>>Other>Kirigawa Marisa "Cute and Silly NPC"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96811207>Natsu Chiakihttps://rentry.org/zq9xaz9h>Darknesshttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97012380>>RECENT WRITEFAGS>Perestroika: Act 1(Alyona, Archie, Renka, Madoka, Rin)https://rentry.co/4snntsu9>Big Changes (Archibald Florence)https://rentry.co/2oetuay3>The Riddle, Part 2 (Kaoru, Shu, Yae, Meliaya, Ran, Madoka, Momofuku, Takaishi, Ai, cameo from Fumiko)https://rentry.co/g53zv646>Needs Some Flair (Tomaki Warumaki, Fukuzawa Kohaku)https://rentry.org/NeedsSomeFlair>HLA Investigations: Team Ken (Kentaro, Kenji, Momo, Belladonna, Fumiko, Parfaite)https://rentry.org/2gvsokq7>Last Train Home (Shobu, Madoka)https://rentry.org/h68ckvef>Season Finale: Violence Breeds Violence, Trailer (Shu Jinko)https://rentry.org/aakd566w>Devil's Hands Season Finale: Violence Breeds Violence (ID Gang, Student Council, Fujiwara Senki, Rin, Itsuro, Alyona, Archie, Renka, Ai, Kiro no Kawa)https://rentry.org/rum694cz>Detainment (Kohaku and Aida’s Relationship Charts)https://rentry.org/yv4bea98>Child's Play (Chain, Part 1) (Shu, Yae, Ran, Meliaya, Kaoru, mentions of Madoka and Kohaku)https://rentry.co/dsr832bc>Fright Night (Student Council, Momofuku Chikata, Ai Suishi, Sayaka Koujin, Takaishi Kuroda, Arakawa Itsurō)https://rentry.org/4wecy6b5
>>97332120Ahhh... the one active cyoa... nothing else even NEEDS to be posted!
>>Writefags (Cont.)>Perestroika: Act 2(Renka, Archie, Yae, Student Council, Momo)https://rentry.co/ncupai9e>Comeuppance (HLA, Ai Suishi)https://rentry.org/w6c9bsup>CHILD'S PLAY PART 2 (Warlord Kakito and the Darkness, Tetsuya Abe, Kaoru Nagamine, Meliaya Yaya)https://rentry.org/3w7exibw>I want to be a hero (Itsuki, Sophia, Reiji)https://rentry.org/cwn25dvy>I want to be a Hero (Epilogue)https://rentry.org/gq4q4m2c>A Game of Cat and Bird (Okabe/Kokancho, Yae, Ran, Kaoru)https://rentry.org/ch2bcisf>Child’s Play Part 2.2 (Student Council, Darkness, Tetsuya)https://rentry.org/fzk6n8sv>Damsel of Distress (Itsuro, Rin, Ai, Tomaki, cameos of Shu, Ran and Takaishi)https://rentry.org/5qy4m9w8>Perestroika: Act 3(Alyona, Renka, Archie Student Council, Momo, Mention of Fumiko, Rinhttps://rentry.co/3ss8rfkx>Perestroika: Epilogue(Alyona, Renka, Momofuku)https://rentry.co/qrzpruts>Blue Eyed Souls, Prologue (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko)https://rentry.org/fp5pupik>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 1 (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Tomaki)https://rentry.org/upuh5rpz>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 2 (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Tomaki)https://rentry.org/5mudp89y>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 3 (Momofuku, Alyona, Madoka, Parfaite, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Sayaka, Itsuki, Mei)https://rentry.org/dga7tnnh>Blue Eyed Souls, Epilogue (Momofuku, Alyona, Madoka, Parfaite, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Sayaka, Kanae)https://rentry.org/e7gb5c24>Eye of the Typhoon (Itsuki)https://rentry.org/xingxc46>Nagamine Case Files: Blood On The Dance Floor (Kaoru, Marisa, Yae, Kenji)https://rentry.co/gfszahec>Cross Examination (Kiro no Kawa, Kohaku, Madoka, Marisa, Shu, Yae, Meliaya, Archie, Renka, Che Ngiem, Kenji, Kaoru, Saito Mimi, mention of the HLA and Ai Suishi)https://rentry.org/v862x2z4>Detainment Update (Final)https://rentry.org/yv4bea98
>>97332181Martial Path vvill RETVRN. Trvst.
>>Writefags>The Fading Dream Episode 1: Lucky Land Chain Part 3 / Passing in the Night (Aida, Kohaku, Shu, mention of Kurobane Group)https://rentry.org/z6p489kh>Christmas in July(Yae, Archie, Kenji, Momo, Alyona, Student Council, Rin, Kentaro, Isturo, Renka, mention of Sumi)https://rentry.co/bk47th57>Operation Doki Doki (Kaoru, Madoka, Takaishi, Junko/Darkness)https://rentry.co/thedatingepisode>Silent Jealousy 1 (Ai Suishi, Sumi Ayaka)https://rentry.org/62bh72ik>Seek & Destroy (Momofuku, Shobu)https://rentry.org/c6wog5vc>>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS>Satoru Rinhttps://rentry.org/JITEloserchart>Kenjihttps://rentry.org/hymz4apv>Kaoru Nagaminehttps://rentry.co/kcwb63id>Kohakuhttps://rentry.org/yv4bea98>>OTHER CONTENT>Map of Kageokahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96482982>JITE pointing meme(Alyona, Meliaya Mihama)https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1757/49/1757490481679.png>JITE Q&Ahttps://rentry.org/ui7zzsvq>height charthttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1757/64/1757642902812.png>Card templatehttps://files.catbox.moe/t1g8ih.xcf>JITE Charthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96703033>Tier Makerhttps://tiermaker.com/create/jite-tier-18744126>Unofficial Assault Reworkhttps://rentry.org/o6d76h9f>Idolon Ability Datahttps://rentry.org/JITEcelReference
>>97332181but it's so ass...
>>97332213That's why we need that SC run now.
>>97332221SC all Equipment Mixup run!
you guys got it from here, my internet did not want me to contribute
>>97332238The FV anons and MP anons got it covered. They're still here after all!
Rules/info/CYOAhttps://rentry.org/uam5mkhv>Egawa Taro/Rip Vandernailhttps://rentry.org/mthziyxkhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97060437>Arthur Wodehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97061682>Necrolord Sephidrachhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062008>Kimiko Yuki/Yaofanhttps://rentry.co/hsinf97uhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062514>Fathoms(Fifi)https://rentry.co/rdkoz3rhhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063149>Liam Cooke/Lovxl(Not a Support 3)https://rentry.org/r3git2rchttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063756>Ueto Mio/strawberrycake0923https://rentry.org/5iiayh42https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97089806>Nagisa Ito/Good Things Comehttps://rentry.co/btk9ko6whttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97098741>Writefags>Mountain Wendigo Chain, Part 1! (Taro, Yulit, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Arthur, Yaofan)https://rentry.org/7abfinx5>Setup (Liam, Yaofan, References to others)https://rentry.co/2u2ucyys>Yaofan Intro? (Yaofan/Kimiko,Moth Thot)https://rentry.co/wnwek6x9>Hunting Lessons (Taro, Peredolia, Yaofan)https://rentry.org/yv2vaygr>Wendigo Chain Part 2 (Liam, Sephidrac, Taro, Yaofan.)https://rentry.co/f4d6fwu8>The Magic Of Learning (Liam, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Mio, Arthur cameo)https://rentry.org/wmxx9tik>Wendigo Chain, Part 3 (Egawa Taro, Arthur Wode, Yaofan, Liam Cooke, Necrolord Sephidrac, Fathoms, Ueto Mio, Nagisa Ito)https://rentry.org/gdzox35y>Every Branch on the way Downhttps://rentry.co/gm9soi3x>Relationships Charts>Tarohttps://rentry.org/v4ygpeib>Liamhttps://rentry.co/ruszvrz4>Mio (End of the profile)https://rentry.org/5iiayh42>Nagisahttps://rentry.co/spxq5cnb>Yaofanhttps://rentry.co/vwn7fy9p
>>97332221SC is meh
>>97332251I checked this place out of curiosity, I was sure this was not a real thread.
>>97332285OUR SLAVES HAVE FALLENThe first one to post MHA with a new run pitch will get to finish that zombie!!!
>>97332285It's some good/awful timing depending on what you believe. I think the only remaining threadslaves happen to be in the same time zone when there used to be one per major region.
>>97332299capeslopbro... you're not even being subtle here....
>>97332299I only finish zombies if they're hot.
>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:>New Writefag:>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miaz>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampFormer 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompthttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnairehttps://rentry.org/xudhyrnr>Former 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINEhttps://rentry.org/itmttw7n>Classes Compilationshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Eold former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g>Relationship chartshttps://rentry.org/MHA_Charts>Dorms PromptDorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730>Tiermaker:https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
>>97332318>SHIKETSU STUDENTS>Hero Course>1-D>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Resethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Troublehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085>Yagami Kirako HN Southpawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Calloushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetraphttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protectorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scourhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Herohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miraclehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyrhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-kahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwahttps://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshirehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooterhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244>Tsuyoi Agnellihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089>1-E>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girlhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
>>97332318WRRRRRRRYYYYYYY!*I recoil, my skin burning and sloughing off of bone, the grotesque sight I just witnessed burnt into my retina.*
>>97332332>2-Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2D>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamatahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769>Hailey Chang HN Recoilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903>Faith Kang HN Dronehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774>Minerva Kim HN Sparkhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094>Edith Lee HN Arenahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782>Sally McCathy HN Last Ritehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yakohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305>Maxine Nguyen HN Radiushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624>Runt HN Dust Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Forcehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986>Junichi Takagi VN Marrowhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765>Ian Takenaka HN Rushhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991>Takara Tame HN Androidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Questionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085>Rob Williams HN Velvet Wormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
>>97332318fucking why
>>97332344>2-Ehttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E>Noah Abrams HN Archangelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Dayhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudevahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackouthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boosthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973>Nayuki Kyokohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Arakenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Trainhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200>Victor Sigurd HN Hydrahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbithttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Millionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363>Suki Yamada HN Sukebanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cubehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433>Other NPCshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E>3-D>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakenenekohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401>Masayoshi Keito HN Crickethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcanahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdownhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knuthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659>General Course>2-A>Satoru Tanihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217>Support Course>3-B>Aura Curiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
>>97332356>SHIKETSU STAFF>Pro Hero teachers>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485>Support Staff>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
>>97332354He was provoked. It is a bit strange since if he was willing to post all of these anyway, why didn't he start the thread himself?
>>97332366>PRO HEROES>TOP #1Endeavour>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384>TOP #4Wash>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkorohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847>TOP #9Rosethorn>TOP #10Yamamoto>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honokenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039>Ernst Hennig HN Impakthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563>Tosuke Jinai HN Compoundhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelengthhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513>Renji Kurokawa HN Mashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatchhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccinehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skywardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835>SUPPORTERS>Rika Eichihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr>Holden Deckardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931>Brightlyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clearhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
>>97332379>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS>Horrific 5>Samuel Wilson VN Desolatorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340>On Giết Năng VN Tetherhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198>Erika Murakami VN Noxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddoxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575>Edmund Muller VN Mercuryhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191>Night Parade>Cammy Link VN Karmahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokkehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfingerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481>Okane King VN Midashttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250> ??? VN Mawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272> ??? VN Bogeyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889> Tomihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913>Luccionehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415>Recino R. Percutiohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owarihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Nothttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feralhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka>Ivan Trup VN The Prophethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348>VIGILANTES>Helene Lysingen VN Noctilucahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquariushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069>Toru Imaishi VN Kampaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353>Rebecca Weberhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Brighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707>Sasha Azanamihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404>Ruihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187>Kaori Kaoruhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivorehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndromehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
>>97332390>CULTISTS>The Red Finger>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weaselhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573>REVOLUTIONARIES>Legion>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Stormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS>Bruno Garcia VN Maulerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714>Karuga Itohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242>Ginji Gō VN Desperaidohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931>Blankhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggothhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987>Mammogarhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82>Suslikhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413>Paul Crémieux VN De Jaishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodokuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless Godhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436>Mr. Therapisthttps://rentry.org/638neg63>Rescue Rayhttps://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Daggerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719>Doctor Ivon Kintoborhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140>Saki Fuma VN Replicanthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
>>97332405>WRITEFAGS>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/gqgst77f>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)https://rentry.org/chdorkto>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique): https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):https://rentry.org/7evesekv>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)https://rentry.org/qqhxk757>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)https://rentry.org/rusiv6te>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze>Visa Enquiryhttps://rentry.org/yvwhhh98>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)https://rentry.org/hvct5iab>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)https://rentry.org/iifohf9f>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
>>97332379>EndeavourI can't believe this motherfucker gets in over my 1-Fkings, they're even more fucking relevant because of Slimenuts than 80% of these builds.
>>97332418>WRITEFAGS (Final)>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):https://rentry.org/a8um8793>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)https://rentry.org/o4mageo6>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miazFor more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
>>97332423>SlimenutsHe's not relevant. He never was.
>>97332430
>SCENARIO>Proposed ComplicationsInsidious Cult + Ghost Domain (you can opt out)Stars of Destiny>Proposed character themeMembers, branches and servants of the Xun clan.>Proposed Starting LocationThe domain of the Xun clan. Near the northern border, not far from the Ghost Domain. At least one of its towns was recently raided by the cultists.>Cultivation Realm Informationhttps://pastebin.com/45fSTGvF>BUILDS>>Xun Clan - Main Family>Xun Fengqi, the Fearless Flame (Son of the Patriarch)https://rentry.co/u95vz3hn>Xun Yi, Local Barbarian civilized via marriage (Wife of Fengqi)https://rentry.org/rfpyyt4w>Xun Linghao, Corrupted Phoenix (Son of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/z9kr2kqs>Xun Ming, A poet who cries (Child of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/xunming>Xun Chizi, The Mysterious Pearl (Child of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/xun_chizi>Xun Moyu, the Young Master (Daughter of the Patriarch?)https://rentry.org/XunMoyu>Xun Haoran, Steel Hidden in Silk (Niece of the Patriarch)https://rentry.org/XunHaoran>Xun Yecheng, The Disgraced God of Thunder (Haoran's Father/Brother-in-Law of the Patriarch)https://rentry.org/XunYecheng>>Main Xun Family's servants>Yu, Voidchink (Servant of Chizi)https://rentry.org/q44izvuk>Tsolmon, "Tso" (Servant of Linghao)https://rentry.org/tyukc7d5>Shen Qiu, Black Beast of the North (Servant of Moyu)https://rentry.org/wdgphyxi>>Xun Clan - Wen Branch>Xun Wen, the Lady of Fractalshttps://rentry.org/h8iq9mzp>Heinrich Gotthelf Humboldt, the Desuarchived One (Husband of Wen)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97122266>>Xun Wen Branch - adopted staff>Xun Ri, Guardian of Wen (Sister of Jian)https://rentry.co/3v45cffv>Xun Jian, Dragon of the Northern River (Brother of Ri)https://rentry.co/dragonofthenorth>>Xun Wen Branch - non-adopted staff>Fei Cangqiong (Servant of Heinrich)https://rentry.co/mpwindyboy
>>97332423I was gonna say that it's just one fag forcing him but considering it's MHA we're talking about that's par for the course.
>>97332434He is whenever you acknowledge his existence rather than starving it of attention.
>>97332318I kneel....
>>97332444I didn't even notice Martial Path got cut off, damn MHAchud
>>97332444>>Builds (Cont.)>>Bai Clan - Xun's vassals>Bai Shahua, Shihuahua: Chihuahua of deathhttps://rentry.org/MP_Undertaker>>Liang Clan - Guardians of the Throne>Liang Ba, Imperial Commander of the Northern Borderhttps://rentry.co/LiangBa>>Other Commoners>Wuyu,Wuxia manhttps://rentry.org/MPWuyu>>Cultists>Ganhttps://rentry.org/Ganthecorpse>WRITEFAGS>Enter the Dragon (Xun Jian, Fei Cangqiong)https://rentry.co/enterthedragon_MP>A Pill, A Phoenix, And A Problem (Tsolmon, Xun Linghao)https://rentry.org/fgqwbz82>Shaking things up (Updated)https://rentry.co/pf5wzyzz>A Private Dinner, and then a Game Proposal (Heinrich, Wen)https://rentry.org/qibtecr4>Next Steps & Fortuitous Encounter (Wuyu, Liang Ba)https://rentry.co/nextstepshttps://rentry.co/fortuitousencounter>Echoes of the Fallen (Xun Wen, Xun Ri, Heinrich Humboldt, mention of Xun Jian, Fei Cangqiong)https://rentry.org/zaoef5z9>A Wanderer Anew (Wuyu, Shahua)https://rentry.org/89e46nta>(Wuyu, Xun Linghao, Liang Ba)https://rentry.co/TwinSunsInTheNorth >The Nine-Ringed Saber Appears!!! (Moyu, Jian, Shen)https://rentry.org/kdzrhic3>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS>Heinrich's Journalhttps://rentry.org/qnx489ve>Xun Moyu's Relationship Chart!!!https://rentry.org/rowmnq3x>Ladies first! (Fei Cangqiong's chart)https://rentry.co/mpwindychart>5 Days Time (Chizi Relationship Chart)https://rentry.org/chizichart>Linghao's Paperwork (Linghao, Features Yu)https://rentry.co/o6e76pk4>Xun Haoranhttps://rentry.co/HaoChart>Tier Listhttps://tiermaker.com/create/martial-path-xun-clan-run-tier-list-17629646
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>>97332464
>>97332477
Save mcyoag society... [INSERT VULTURE KINO HERE]...!
>>97332697Towerslop!
>>97332708FUAAAARK! It isn't even out yet and its egg is already looming over MP!
>>97332708You can't be a vulture if you don't exist yet.
>>97332726you mean FV
>>97332735FV just got a new chart.
I tried to do this in the other thread so, YO FINAL CHALLENGE: say something NICE about someone elses's build
>>97332728It's just a little towerbaby, ready to hatch.
>>97332741it was ass
>>97332783But it's there, and it's recent.
>>97332745>>97332484I guess I'll post it in this thread.>TaroHe's the one who started it all and practically carried FV. If anything, he's an inspiration and reason for trying this out just by his additional flavor and integration of character and mechanics.>ArthurSuch an interesting concept that clearly sets up your typical zero to hero story. I kinda wish he was more active to see if he'd deviate from that path or not. If we ever try to focus of the lives of NPCs and their growth to sapience, he'd be the perfect candidate to focus on.>SephiHe's a pretty cool idea of being the exact opposite of a demon lord, and plays well to the Isekai setting. Probably tied with Arthur with the most growth potential. You just know he's going to be a power house once he gets his bearings straight.>YaofanI really like how one of our strongest members happen to be a non-combatant. Her existence helps exemplify the importance of down time, and gives a bit of levity to the situation despite being a sad character internally. I actually like her interactions with Liam with her acting as the straight man.>FifiA cutie and unofficial mascot of the village. Her NPC and race helps give a more alien status, yet she's one of the most human characters due to her internal conflict which helps add depth and contrast to an otherwise cutesy character. It's also nice to have a more straight forward character to write in comparison with the players.>LiamIt's also a bit hard to separate Liam with his anon. He's the one that's been helping push the MP forward and bring everyone alongside with him. It's a character concept that can really only work in a setting like this, and adds a nice subplot that can really expand our options depending on how the corruption turns out.
>>97332844>MioAlso a cutie, but going for a more lolibaba feel with being a Christmas cake and having all sorts of contrast to her. Her place in the MP helps bring out how skilled everyone is with her curiosity and her build format is pretty cool. Feels like a bit of a waste that we'll likely never see her OL side.>NagisaI like the direction he seems to be going towards. Despite being the youngest, there's a bit of underlying tragedy to him escaping that can potentially give tension to the group's general want to return to their normal lives. He adds a potential for drama, while also giving us a good frontliner/PvPer to round out the cast with.
>>97332844>>97332851Thanks for the kind words, non-FV poster/camouflaged FV poster!
>>97332961Nah, I'm totally in FV. I just don't want to be identified by the build I left out.
>>97332982It's alright Liam anon, I can tell it's you.
>>97332982Nta, I'm tempted to make the same thing but everyone would immediately know who I am anyway. I will probably do it anyway in a bit and just leave out my character.
>>97332982I think I pegged you, but I'll keep it to myself.
>>97332996Not me. I am easier to find.
>>97333014you just announced to the whole thread you pegged him you dumb slut
>>97333006Do it anyway. It's fun to see people guess wrong>>97333014>I think I pegged youI think you should also keep that to yourself. You're not supposed to bring up bedroom stuff in the thread.
Do girls get anything out of pegging? Like is the strap-on directly in the vagina to stimulate it as she waggles it around?
>>97333064Ask your mom.
>>97333064they get to emasculate you
>>97332844>she's one of the most human characters due to her internal conflict Maybe I should actually write for Fantasy Village... I feel bad that I haven't written for it yet
>>97333064Depends on the configuration but it will at the very least stimulate the bean. Sex is a two way street so she could get off from pleasuring the guy.
>>97333093Aren't you still busy with JITE? It's not like FV is going anywhere, and JITE has also been the one occupying my time as well.
>>97333126I'm pretty much ALWAYS busy with JITE because I just really like what I have in JITE. Maybe after my next writefag (possibly a two-parter)
>>97333093literaly me>maybe I should write this time>hours pass>days pass>weeks pass
>>97332844>>97332851Just by looking at this you can tell who started it all. Cool... chart? Review? Whatever it is. I would comment something about my character but if we keep collecting replies like this you will be exposed so I will refrain.
>>97333126>It's not like FV is going anywhereIt was just declared dead after just getting content. We can't let our guard down.
>>97332851>Feels like a bit of a waste that we'll likely never see her OL sideI kind of agree since I did make the character in the middle of the OL posting and I do want to make a similar character but with that as the main concept
>>97333137Do it. I want to know what you think, and I could always make a fake response or straight up reveal myself if it's going to prevent discussion.>you can tell who started it allI don't know what you mean by this.
>>97333184So you did make her one because of that. I had my supicions. I would say go for it but we don't have the cyoa for it right now, unless you plan to make the JITE one like it was discussed back then. Strangely enough I think any of the proposed future MPs would work for an OL.
>>97333219>we don't have the cyoa for it right nowIT'S TIME FOR ANOTHER CITY RUN YOU HEARD IT HERE FIRST FOLKS
>>97332745I saw Takumi anon show up in a thread a while ago, and I just want to say again, I like his character and hope he becomes active. I trust implicitly in your strength, anon. The time is Wright. Believe it.
>>97333239my FUARKING HERO...
>>97333239kill yourself
>>97333219It's more of a far future thing, especially since I'm good with what I have now. I don't recall any of the stuff discussed back then, but JITE wouldn't really fit. And my future builds won't be playing into that when I already have an idea for one of them given how much I participated in it's discussion.
>>97333194Fine then, here it goes. I am taking full advantage of the fact Liam can only work in this kind of setting to explore that kind of character. It's very rare for something like this to actually start so I'm doing my best to put in the effort.>adds a nice subplot that can really expand our options depending on how the corruption turns out.It's technically a punishment, but it's a punishment he will weaponize against the one who gave it to him. Once it reaches high enough level it will start creating glitches instead of just facilitating them or having visual effects. Making him a living glitch, which of course will have consequences. How much it spreads depends on the others as well. It would be very dangerous for the world if Liam had nothing left to protect.>I don't know what you mean by this.The anons that started the MP, it's pretty clear who it is. Not that it was a secret.
>>97333281>I don't recall any of the stuff discussed back thenOverworked young hire, barely in the awakening range. Would take the blame for all the crazy shit that the kids do around the office even if it had nothing to do with her.I guess it was pretty forgettable.>SpoilerCool.I just think it's funny that it's actually pretty easy to make an OL in a surprising amount of settings and they were all proposed in a short span of time. Even One Piece could have one.
>>97333373The thing about OL is that bar for it is really just a suit and maybe some pencil skirt and stockings depending on one's preference, and the traits usually associated with OL is rather flexible in it's context as long as society exists. No matter what it is, you're likely to be tired of your job in some way. There are some future ones that seem like a stretch though.
>>97332745I guess I will try.>TaroIt's a cool concept. I always found dawrves fun, this version of one manages to be creative. The village will benefit a lot from his skills once we get metal and his runes develop.>ArthurI like the story of an NPC having the chance to explore his own unfinished content. He has the chance to be a hero, and the village seems to have collectively adopted him so that's cool.>SephidracNecromancers are cool, and the personality is funny for one. It will be cool to see if he shapes up, but I think it would be equelly fun if he remains a coward but finds ways around it anyway. He has the perfect class for that.>YaofanThe dissociation is funny and sad in equal measure, as is the fact she can't catch a break despite being the one that needs it the most. I am looking forward to the time she finally opens up and starts being Kimik again.>FifiI like the fish, she feels the most like a native and adds an element of being grounded in the crazy cast, strange as it may seem. I kinda want to see the villagers realize that she's not an idiot.>LiamI like glitches the many weapons.>MioThe new eyes that look at the world with wonder are a cool addition to the cast. Magic will help a lot later and she is suited for it after she adapts to the world. She also feels like a good alternative to the crazy Liam since his solutions tend to be effective but flashy, while she seems more mature and could be more efficient.>NagisaTales of rebirth and second chances are always cool, and the fact he treats the others as his tribe is cool/cute. His battle style also opens some cool chances for battles won by a hair.
>>97333427It's a pretty simple concept. The execution is what could make it fun.>There are some future ones that seem like a stretch though.I think there is a thin line where you can stretch it just enough that it feel unique and not forced in. It would require someone o put in more effort, and I suspect nobody actually cares enough. It's probably better as a tought exercise rather than a proper character.
>>97333903>maybe a little!There is hope!In all honesty I struggle with fights because I see them visually in my head and I think I'd be able to do them better in a comic format for example, but writing a fight seems like a very subjective thing. You need a tight prose, I think, to make the reader feel an impact and a velocity in the writing. But I find that to be more complex than character writing and dialogue, which I'd like to think I've narrowed down to something closer to a science. I space out my plot beats clinically and I try to get things moving from one spot to another, like a scriptwriter would. It feels more "exact" to do. Hell, maybe I could just do that next time I have a fight in a writefag, I could try to present it graphically instead? Maybe that would be a cop-out. >you're a cut above the rest on that part considering some of the other slop that gets churned around hereA-Anon-kun...Thanks man, really. Sometimes I feel kinda insecure because most people aren't super descriptive with their reviews (not that that's a bad thing! People can review writefags however you want) so I start to wonder if people just say that they like my work with Kaoru or if they're actually engaged. A weird paranoia, I know, but writing for JITE is just *that* engaging to me man
>>97333941>In all honesty I struggle with fights because I see them visually in my headNta, me too.> people aren't super descriptive with their reviews Most people here aren't professional writer so you're not going to get "science" reviews for your writing.I also think some anons have mismatched expectations for pretty much everything that hapens here, but that's a different prblem.
>>97333941I don't care to give in depth reviews. What's the point when I can't do any better? There's not a single anon who doesn't write better than me. That said, knowing at the bottom is liberating. I can just write what I want without caring whether anyone else find it interesting, because I already know they don't.
>>97333996Same. But that creates a problem, we can't both be the worst.
>>97333996>implying he can be worse than me, the archetypical one pump chump as mentioned in the OP cyoa
>>97333996>>97334008>>97334010This is a better vibe than a lot of other times here. It's almost wholesome.
>>97333979>"science" reviewsEh, I use that terminology to describe my own process, I'm not saying that people should go CinemaSins mode on me. But I did study for an artistic field so I've had to engage a lot with what makes a story good or bad in a more critical sense, so I try to be critical with my own work and usually, in my experience, other people (even laymen) give better criticisms to your stuff than you ever could criticise your own work in hindsight. I think what I'd like to see is if people think my dialogue makes sense (sometimes I've heard that my conversations can go pretty long) or if the actions that characters do make sense or are congruent with their previous characterisation. But hey, if no one points that stuff out, I must be doing those things well?>>97333996What was your last writefag, anon? I can try to give you my honest thoughts :)
>>97334027>what makes a story good or bad in a more critical sense,Personally I don't care about any of that. I think writing and reading these stories is a lot more subjective. More based on fun and vibes than technical competence.>what I'd like to see is if people think my dialogue makes sense (sometimes I've heard that my conversations can go pretty long) or if the actions that characters do make sense or are congruent with their previous characterisation.The main problem with that is that because of the nature of this place, you will get fragmented feedback most of the time. Anons tend to give feed back only on their character.>But hey, if no one points that stuff out, I must be doing those things well?Generally yes. I think anyone would tell you if there were any glaring errors. I didn't read much of your stuff I think, but what I read was good.
>>97332822>Although my most recent JITE writefag included Madoka and I don't think he ever commented on it so maybe he's touching grassNot wrong. I'm still around to threadslave (today I wasn't, but normally I am). I scan the threads every day in case someone needs me for something / I need to slave up a thread, but I haven't been reading stuff since I've been doing non-thread things.When I'm done with non-thread things, I plan to binge my backlog of writefags.
>>97333941>most people aren't super descriptive with their reviews (not that that's a bad thing! People can review writefags however you wantThere were complaints in the past about bigger MHA writefag reviews.
>>97334465I liked them.
>>97332252I think I had an idea for how to get Fathoms involved and kick off her character arc.She could be out fishing and scouting the nearer parts of the new eastern ocean added to the map with two others in a simple boat "powered" by one of her summons. She starts reminiscing about events from an encounter ingame, only to realize she has conflicting memories of both of them being the person she encountered. This leads to a confessional explanation from them about her origins, and she cam start chewing on the existential dread.
