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>>98662567https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq8pmdy25>A long time ago in a galaxy far,>far away....>THE GALAXY HAS BEEN FRACTURED>The Jedi Order stood on the precipice of greatness and the Galactic Republic was expanding, chartering new worlds with every passing day.>Without warning, the Hyperspace Disaster tears through known space collapsing the ancient routes the Republic relied upon. The Trymant and Hetzal systems are on the edge of ruin. Calamitous asteroids and debris is inbound to the planets of Hetzal, mandating evacuation on a scale never before thought of. Trymants planets undergoing tremendous ecological change with the sudden loss of their moons.>Across the galaxy the chaos spreads with emergency powers granted to the Bith Chancellor Taniss Ando, an ambitious politician who now rules with an iron fist significantly expanding the Republic Military and SIS.>A once moderate separatist movement surges as the senate flounders in emergency, with many worlds seeking to look after their own needs. Rumors abound that some of the separatists even have access to reliable if limited hyperspace travel.>Mysterious pirates strike from the shadows with impunity, and the Kaminoans as pragmatic as ever have begun selling clone soldiers to every warlord with credits to spare, stoking the fires of conflict galaxy wide.MP CYOA Rules.>FactionsReplace The Sith with "The Dark Brotherhood" - A group of powerful darkside adepts, acolytes, fallen jedi, and assassins. Their membership has influence in most if not all other factions. Their intent is unknown but they strike with proficiency and without mercy to their enemies.Replace The Clone Army with "Republic Strategic Intelligence Service (SIS)" Substitute mentions of clones with intelligence operatives.>MissionsTake and start with the rewards. Use these as plot points and connections between characters. Refluff as required.>Final MissionSkip>Complete Build BonusInclude in your post.
>>98662570>>98579359>>Builds>Jedi Master Lucius Varrohttps://rentry.org/LuciusVarro>Jedi Master Sen Rorichttps://rentry.org/SenRoric>Jedi Master Ur'Drachhttps://rentry.org/UrDrach>>Writefags>The First Hours (Varro, Roric, Ur'Drach)https://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt1https://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt2https://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt3https://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt4https://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt5
>Full CYOAhttps://imgchest.com/p/ljyqj62o725>SCENARIOhttps://rentry.org/cunwdv46>VampiresLunienne/Lucy Duvalhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98628349/Cherie Fonsecahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98647265/>WerewolvesVanessa Haywardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98647265/Tiffany "Calls-at-Midnight" Argylehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98660082/>Seelie FaesMio Talbothttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98637174/Ingen Tenehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98637281/Velaphine / Vellhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98637480/>Unseelie FaesLorcanhttps://rentry.org/qkua97gs>C'thulhids>FallensLorraine "Lori" Baxterhttps://rentry.co/lorraine1>DemonsSandy Morrisonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98647265/John Weg Jr.https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98657411/>ZombiesMaisie Leehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98650302/>Trolls>Yokai>DragonsNathaniel "Nate" Daltonhttps://rentry.org/8of8uvuoAzzam ibn Sakhr al-Ushumgallihttps://rentry.org/DCDragon>Experiments13/ZThttps://rentry.org/qpcqph7i>HuntersThomas Graveshttps://rentry.org/ok3s6rv7>AwakenedRaven Millerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98636632/Raziela Riverahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98636317/Charlotte Wesleyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98660585/>WRITEFAGSHalloween (Cherie, Vanessa, Sandy)https://rentry.org/pw3g6buqI Know All We're Doing Is Travelling Without Moving (Raziela)https://rentry.org/2odkqusw
>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:>New Writefag:>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miaz>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampFormer 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompthttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnairehttps://rentry.org/xudhyrnr>Former 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINEhttps://rentry.org/itmttw7n>Classes Compilationshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Eold former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g>Relationship chartshttps://rentry.org/MHA_Charts>Dorms PromptDorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730>Tiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969>Full Version of the CYOAhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/97718092>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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Full CYOAhttps://imgchest.com/p/9p4nzrxww4n>Setting Optionshttps://rentry.org/2x7e8ciz>HeroicIndivisible Man / Achilles Palterhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1786/57/1786570068492.jpg (embed)https://rentry.org/hxvue6fdRadiant / R.M. Ashfordhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98510021/https://rentry.org/sf8qeq25Locust-Man / David Espósitohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98514039/https://rentry.co/locustmanAll-Mother / Maia Ericson / Queen of Thorns / REGINAhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98546796https://rentry.org/MCYOAGSupermom26Kalchey / Kirill Dragunovhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98522443/Atom Ant / WPN-7https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98547779/https://rentry.org/wpn-7Aurelian Star / Andreu Galanishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98565937/Pierre Panhttps://rentry.co/3mvw8zbz>Anti-HeroicThe Professor / Jonathanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98493782/https://rentry.org/q67pcv7r>Anti-VilliainousWitchbane / Sophiahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98500467/The Idolatress / Eden Johnsonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98522260/https://rentry.org/27a5u28kCrowfeather / Sato Eikohttps://rentry.org/qvrews8yAgent Steel / Project Frankenstein Subject #041-B / Adam Simmonshttps://rentry.org/PlatinumAgeSteelScourgehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98551198>VillainousThe Mad Hatterhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98502596/Ra / Arthur Cavendishhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1786/67/1786677435808.jpg (embed) (embed)https://rentry.org/g8nip3hvWolfram Weißhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98508235/Jackdawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98510778/POWERHOUSEhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98606789/The Suit /https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98519932/https://rentry.org/mistersuitStinger / Leila Telsonhttps://rentry.org/sytzti4iElliot Kessler / Nemesishttps://rentry.org/nemesisplatinumage
>>98662585>Z-teamBastion / Nikolaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98498275/Makohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98504896/https://rentry.org/ypsn3tzvSorceress / Samantha Mercerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98507126/https://rentry.org/teqfr77iParagon / Nathaniel "Nate" Rowehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98507475/https://rentry.org/twsv2bi4Insomnia / Jackson Leedshttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98509992/https://rentry.org/6petn6u5Blitz / Owen Cooperhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98511218/https://rentry.org/27bhfvdfSukeban / Yuki "Misako" Tomahttps://rentry.co/9ibpb89s>Tiermakerhttps://tiermaker.com/create/platinum-age-mp-19798475>WritefagsSunset (Bastion, Ra)https://rentry.org/aistaztxThe Long Midnight (Mako, Jackdaw, Insomnia)https://rentry.org/TheLongMidnightZ-Teamhttps://rentry.org/uuszigvthttps://rentry.org/9n2x8zhsAlley Run (Stinger, Jackdaw, Locust Man)https://rentry.org/97rx8rvyHUDDLE ROOM INCIDENT (Locust-Man, Jackdaw, Stinger, Blitz, Aurelian Star)https://rentry.org/z6mi5cnoShock and Awe (Mako, Insomnia, Powerhouse, Sorceress, Radiant, Crowfeather, The Suit)https://rentry.org/3a3pgm4cShock and Awe, in a Flash (Powerhouse, Radiant)https://rentry.org/twsi8mgmEating the Crow, Part 1https://rentry.org/bgvubnfk>Relationship ChartsWolframhttps://rentry.org/wvro73q3Jackdawhttps://rentry.org/fqfcwf32Powerhousehttps://rentry.org/PowerhouseChartKalcheyhttps://rentry.org/kmhhny8hCrowfeatherhttps://rentry.org/oedd8956Stingerhttps://rentry.org/7t8ghbufAurelian Starhttps://rentry.org/k4c2xureLocust-Manhttps://rentry.co/locustmanchart
>>98662578Only noticed now that this is still being posted
>>98662867It's tradition at this point.
>>98662935I prefer calling it a voluntary humiliation ritual
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What's more dead?The thread?MHA?Or disco?
>>98662585Just noticed Pierre Pan has an illegal choice; Always Active needs Major or Super, but Flight is Minor.>>98664679I was unsettled by how quickly PA discussion evaporated once Dark City flared up. Even the prompts had basically no responses.
>>98664679There's a discord?
>>98664679You're the most dead actually. Ghost hands typed that post.
Last thread had 5 prompts. Prompts keep the threads alive.
>>98664728https://discord.gg/pDUbhn3FD
>>98665758A xe/xir pronoun individual just joined.Surely everyone will be very normal about this.
>>98665846Anon not even the gender retards use those seriously, xe/xim is clearly a parody thing
>>98665850Making fun of it if it wasn't parody would be the normal response anyway
>>98662575Ships?
>>98666070This ain't a water based mp or a scifi mp so no.
>>98666070Why is this a question? John Weg Jr. is right there, anon.
>>98666107>Not just the women, but the traps, and the trolls too!
>>98666126Do we even have any traps
>>98666174None that you know of. We can't be certain, though
>>98666174ZT
>>98666174ZT>>98662575>John Weg Jr.>Sandy MorrisonThat's twice the Lust Aura in one room. Which character would your build direct their lust towards?
>>98666189Sandy.
>>98666189My build would kill themselves to change the life trajectory of everyone else in the room
>>98666358The zombies are feasting, dragons sad they're too late
>>98666107I can't help but worry he'll either get killed by one of the female builds or die from being raped by a troll
>>98666430builds can't die in em cee why oh ay gee, hell we can't even get roommates bickering
>>98666187Does it really count as a trap in that case though?
>>98666430>I can't help but worry he'll either get killed by one of the female buildsTiffany and Vell are the only likely candidates that are willing to do this. Werewolves have trouble controlling their libido and Vell's a jobber ryona build. Another W for Mr. W Jr.
>>98666523>Werewolves have trouble controlling their libidoWhat?
>>98666615anon's headcanon fetish or WoD canonfaggingCall it
>>98666615Heat cycle I guess.
>>98666615You haven't seen a humping dog?
>>98666661Probably just this >>98666674It's not a crazy assumption
>>98666661Canon*nta btw
>>98662575Haven't fully found his character voice yet, but we're getting there.Johnny's chart: https://rentry.co/znzezcno
>>98667452>actually resists her charms>still fantasizes about her anywayCongratulations! John has earned the honour of catching Lori's genuine attention. Would be cool to see a push and pull, tug-of-war dynamic between a guy who keeps getting underestimated and a girl who starts respecting him for not being a simp. Also what kind of a surname is Weg?
>>98667545>Also what kind of a surname is Weg?Well... >>>/aco/weg
>>98658977>And yet she notices.>Why?>That may be worth investigating.If she has noticed, then she is likely to investigate him too. Mistrusting him to handle reality bending powers even as she tries to tame her own. However, her current approach is to alter the course of events as little as possible, so she will only interfere when it's natural to do so, aka if it comes out of control and eldritch horrors threaten lives on campus. It would infuriate him to no end if he discovered that she's waiting for him to mess up until she can come and fix it, and thus she would never tell him, which would infuriate him even more due to the cowardice of it all. After that initial bump, I do see them teaming up often to handle the consequences of their actions. She's the cool-headed type, so his pride wouldn't ruffle her feathers most of the time, and he sees her as a rare source of maturity, so he could defer to her judgment in matters of the mystical.Good chart, anon.>>98667452>There's this cute girl who spends all her time reading gigantic books in the library. I tried talking to her but she just ignored me. My newfound persistence has me thinking I somehow have a chance with a chick like her, which is probably a bad thing since everyone is going to learn sooner or later that I'm an incubus and assume, perhaps rightfully, the worst. Interestingly enough, she might start speaking at him if she found out about his "Equalize" ability. They don't practice the exact same magic, but he would still be able to replicate her theoretical knowledge of rituals/spells. Make the competition a debate, and he becomes a decent enough sounding board. Of course, she would not bring up temporal displacement, only spatial, as to avoid suspicion.>Imagine if I met a time wizard at that club instead of a demon and he taught me to go back and forth to fix all my dumb mistakes. That would make life so much easier.Heh. Funny chart, anon.
>>98659969>What are your plans for your buildsIn the short term, I want to write about Raziela's experiments to get back home and dealing with the fallout. I think the first one will involve her trying to reach inside a black hole to speed up time and return to the 2040s. I also want to write about her trying to solve supernatural incidents around campus and inevitably stumbling into other builds, failing in her goal to be anti-social. At some point I also want to introduce another complication in the form of Raziela's younger self, as her soul starts to resonate with Raziela's and Awaken prematurely.In the long term, I want to write about Raziela recognizing her hypocrisy/paradoxical nature and accepting her place in the world. She believes in the gravity of people, yet desperately tries to avoid meeting her classmates. She believes the universe is cold and uncaring toward her struggles, yet desperately tries to avoid the butterfly effect. She is deeply aware of her own mortality, yet this all started because she tried to avoid death.>Who are we interested in interacting withMy main interest is horror/adventure, so I look at the cast as either fellow horror victims to suffer with her, or horror monsters to terrorize her. Lorcan would be a prime horror victim, a source of danger due to his mishandling of eldritch powers. Lucy leans toward horror monster, a source of friction in Raziela's life due to the "Secrets" ability. Despite killing Others as a side-job, Thomas leans towards horror victim.
>>98659969ZT is like a monster x2 so eventually his mindset will have to reflect that. Hopefully he'll manage to build bonds with others that are strong enough to prevent him from losing his shit completely. He could learn how to be a proper Other alongside Nate, that sounds like fun, though in his case ZT doesn't have anyone to teach him, and the experiment that made him only gathered some observations about his brand new state of being so who knows what the future has in store for himhe most likely will get into trouble with high ranking groups of others like the fae court, some dragons and of course fanger nobles, and on top of that the cthulhids since he's an insult to their god by simply existing. By the way he doesn't believe in magic so he could mess around with the spellcasters in the castalso he ended up being treated as cooler than i expected him to be haha
I didn't expect to get that many answers. It's a bit hard to reply to all of them meaningfully.>>98661094Yeah, you could definitely use nate to explore a different side of Azzam that wouldn't be seen otherwise. You do bring up a good point about monsters and happy endings. Those who were turned have to contend with their slowly dwindiling humanity if they want to continue to survive, while those already born with it, like him or Lucy, don't see anything wrong with their actions. humanity is so beneath them that it's only natural they get used, which makes them having to interact with people who still cling on to the normal side a very interesting and prone to conflict. Lori someone I'd also be interested in seeing interact with him due to how much she surronds herself with Normals and consideres them her friends in a way.>>98662186It's a bit strange to see Nate become a sort of pet project to those two, but it does set up a few dominos. I'm actually surprised she'd be okay with the prospect of training them with the whole fey hating dragons thing that could lead to her reputation being ruined if she was ever caught. Is that really something she'd risk doing just to get better opponents to fight?>>98668720>I also want to write about her trying to solve supernatural incidents around campus and inevitably stumbling into other buildsThat's also something I've been interested in writing, hence him being squishier than usual and being an outsider to anything supernatural, so they could bump into each other from time to time. There was some talk of forming a literature club between Nate and Lori, and though it's unlikely for Raziela to join it, I did want to use that club as a makeshift investigation club of sorts, so I'd be interested in your input for that. How would she work around a group also investiagting supernatural incidents, or would she work alongside them directly?
>>98662567The star wars run finally has all of the information. It took a while.
>>98669824>I'm actually surprised she'd be okay with the prospect of training them with the whole fey hating dragons thing that could lead to her reputation being ruined if she was ever caught.They just need to find a very secret place in the campus like how Slytherins practice their dark arts in some of the forgotten, ancient recesses of Hogwarts.>Is that really something she'd risk doing just to get better opponents to fight?Yeah, she doesn't care much for the racial feud. If it means getting stronger by colluding with her race's enemy to gain the Ly Erg's favor, she'd do it in a heartbeat. If she ever got caught, though, it would lead to some interesting events. She'd most likely turn her back on the Double Dragons, who she considers friends, and become their sworn enemy moving forward, desperate to satisfy the Ly Erg, while her heart stays conflicted about the whole thing. We might see a Lorcan and Vell vs Nate and Azzam type of situation. I think Vell would get mogged instantly though.>>98667452>Velaphine. Velaphine. Velaphine. Ok, I'm sure I'll get it right when I meet her. Hopefully that keeps me on her good side.Oh nonono. Mr. Weg no!!!
>>98668720Would Raziela even humour Tiffany pushing for magic power for herself? Or would she just beat her up with said magic?Or maybe scare her off with a premonition of her future?
>>98662575>NameLugh/Living Anti Dragon WeaponLarry>RaceExperiment>PowersBane Claws (Skygge Ulven)Natural Combatant (Maneskin Ulven)Eldritch Energy (C'thulhid)Muscle Mass (Ringlefinch)Levitation (Nekomata)Haste (Kage Hito)Mental Fortress (Slayer)>Relic (if aplicable)Deep Pack>Full Backstory/Buildhttps://rentry.org/hqmfksi9Failed experiment on the run. An attempt by the Fae to create a dragon killer, deemed a failure but escaped control just before disposal.Cold and rational on the outside, nervous on the inside, traumatized and paranoid. Doesn't want to be a weapon but the instinct for it remain.Joined the program to find a semblance of normal life, despite the risks he prefers it to becoming a hermit.Just staretd learning about the occult and accidentally asks probably rude or uncomfortable questions.Build done. Irl finally let up so I should have more time. Now to catch up on 3 threads of stuff, and probably make a chart and prompt answer compilation.
>>98670130NERD
>>98670130Cool to see how both our experiments so far shaped up. One has the right powers to take on whatever Other it needs and the other one is Larry
>>98669824>There was some talk of forming a literature club between Nate and Lori, and though it's unlikely for Raziela to join it, I did want to use that club as a makeshift investigation club of sorts, so I'd be interested in your input for that.I'm of 2 ideas on that.1. Raziela joins the club because they need a minimum amount of people for the campus to allow its existence. She does this because she believes the original Raziela would be the type to join a lit. club, and if she doesn't, it might affect the timeline.2. In an earlier prompt I've already said that Raziela does work in the library to gain extra credit, so she could eavesdrop on them that way, then run her separate investigation, and the two groups stumble into each other mid-adventure.>>98670032>Would Raziela even humour Tiffany pushing for magic power for herself?It depends on Tiffany's approach. Intimidation, physical threats, or social humiliation would fall flat. Asking nicely would lead to being rejected nicely. She would have to target what Raziela cares about at the moment, which is her research. Then, it depends on how far Tiffany is willing to go for this one mage. Would she ruin the library books Raziela uses? Would she sneak into her dorm room to mess with research notes? Would she try getting in the way of the rituals? If she pushes far enough, Raziela would recognize that the gravity between them is too bothersome to avoid, and strike a deal. Then, it depends on what exactly Tiffany needs from a Field/Essence/Energy mage.>Or would she just beat her up with said magic?Only if Tiffany engages in her "PvP" ability. >Or maybe scare her off with a premonition of her future?Funnily enough, she would only curse someone with knowledge of the future if she truly trusts, respects, or loves them, so they can have a chance at avoiding an ill fate. Tiffany and her aren't quite there yet.
>>98671640Tiffany doesn't quite get that mages need to specialize, so I could see her messing with Raziela only to realize all the things she could for her are not useful to her quest for power.But I'll keep it in mind as something to write about.
>>98669824>Literature clubRaven would be interested in joining.
>>98667452So he's not just a meme build?
>>98673215It's his MP and we're just living in it
>>98660082The new Tiffany image looks a lot less fitting than the old one. It doesn't look fashionable at all, she actually loks very plain.
>>98662575How old is everyone? Most seem to be actual college age, but you never know with monsters.
>>98673446I think I mentioned it before but Lucy is in her 20s. Super young by vampire standards.
>>98669973>She'd most likely turn her back on the Double Dragons, who she considers friendsIt's somewhat worrying that both of Nate's combat mentors have the potential of becoming enemies that he has to use their teachings against.>>98670130It wouldn't be the first recently turned who's emotionless on the outside, paranoid on the inside, who's powers involve transforming parts of themselve rather than their whole body, who's growing to the taste of combat to step onto campus grounds.I'm kidding. Glad to see that he doesn't outright hate dragons since they have so much in common with one another.>>98671640I think the second one makes more sense to her character. The first one seems more like a leap of logic, while the second one also allows for unique opportunities. Like, you could have a scenario where the literature club is investigating an area, always having a creeping feeling behind them, when it turns out it's Raziela who's been keeping them out of trouble from the shadows. It also helps emphasize her maturity compared to her peers, and allows the club to be clueless on what they're trying to investigate. It's also a bit more fun since Nate didn't exactly make the best first impression with the library.>>98673060What kinds of books would she read? I think this club could be a way for to connect to the other mages on campus, and she could be the source on all the leads the club could investigate. Honestly, I didn't know how Nate could interact with her, do you have any ideas how Raven would interact with him?>>98673446Nate's supposed to be 18 or 19, but I can't really decide. 18 helps emphasize how fresh out of highschool he is, and makes college a truly unique experience, while being a bit older makes him more experienced with the Normal world and could explain why he's so worn down. Him being older also makes the Program a way for him to experience life like his peers are supposed to, rather than directly going to work. What do you guys think?
>>98674718>What do you guys think?I'm thinking 19, his profile did say he got to be a wagie for a while after high school graduation
>>98674718>What kind of booksEnglish and Literature and stuff primarily, her online ID for the student chatrooms or whatever is just Nevermore She wants to make friends and probably will feel like he's something of a kindred spirit even if she can't explain why, as a mage she is often babysat by the staff. Considering she has Essence and Field she can find out a lot of information that nobody else could reliably.
Is anybody writing for DC?
>>98648867Johnny would join the literature club to learn more about the mysterious raven girl and the library chick who has yet to talk to him. I imagine something like Nate bringing it up and Johnny pretending to be interested in joining for the books.Also some sort of combat training program with Vell and/or Lorcan if he can convince them, so he doesn't die in the first semester.>>98656195He doesn't know he can teleport yet, so he'd probably just give the guy the 3 dollars in his wallet.>>98659969It'll depend a bit on what the other builds get up to, but I plan for him to get in over his head trying to help other people with their problems, hopefully proving to himself and others that he has at least a bit to offer. Even if he ends up making things needlessly worse before finding out how to make them better.>>98673446I'm thinking 19. Basically like Nate with being a wagie. Grades were too mediocre to get a scholarship anywhere, so he just picked up shifts delivering pizzas + odd jobs like being a pool boy.
>>98667545That seemed like the most fun dynamic from what I gathered of her. Maybe she'd start paying enough attention to the annoying idiot who refuses to play her games that she notices things about him that he doesn't notice about himself.>What kind of a surname is Weg?Jewish (his great great grandfather pretended to be one of God's chosen while working his way into the international banking industry).>>98668704Glad you liked it. He doesn't even know most of what he can do, so it's not impossible that she figures out about his Equalize ability before he does. The question then is how he can accidently reveal that to her while she's ignoring his existence lol>>98669973Yep he's ded. He'll make it up to her by completing her womanly figure.
>>98675528>completing
>>98675696Not my fault when Vell keeps going after every guy she can lay her hands on.
>>98675751I need to see a drawing of her post-fight defeats with each male build. This will serve as inspiration and help tremendously with my writefag.
>>98675469>he'd probably just give the guy the 3 dollars in his wallet.
>>98667545Just wondering, did you draw this character?
>>98675445MeBut I got a tummy ache so I'm taking a break
>>98676199Yeah I draw all my builds anon>>98675528Totally! It'd be fun if Lori actually starts using her brain to try and manipulate John in ordinary ways without using her powers, but eventually their dynamic becomes less cat-and-mouse as Lori genuinely becomes interested in John and maybe sees him as an equal. Maybe he'll convince her to be a better person lol
>>98675696I meant complimenting but my phone had other plans yesterday apparently.
>>98662575>Name: Lina Maeno>Race: Kitsune Yokai:-Mirage-Fox Fire-Isolate-Seduce-Invisibility (Yurei)-Martial Instinct (Kage Hito)-Natural Combatant (Maneskinn Ulven Werewolf)>Relic: Siege BladeSome 30 years ago, a certain kitsune fled to Calder. She'd caused more than a bit too much trouble in the east, hoping to lay low. She wasted no time, quietly inserting herself into the complicated social landscape of Others laying the city's darkness, eventually making a place for herself among one of the werewolf packs with the most urban influence as the alpha's woman. Lina was born soon after, growing up just as Yokai started to build their own communities, with her mother hard at work on a quest to secure herself as one of their leaders.Lina herself wasn't a fan of either parent. When she asked for her own apartment in middle school, they were more than happy to use money to keep her out of their hair. Needless to say she doesn't go home often.As a person, Lina is fairly proud and brutally honest. She doesn't sugarcoat things, not even when it comes to her own misdeeds. She'll pretty openly admit to spying on other people without an ounce of shame. At the same time, her frustratingly calm, somewhat smug resting expression is seemingly unbreakable. Unless someone knows exactly what to say, it's almost impossible to get under her skin. It's only when she's actively trying to be nice or give good advice that she ever seems to hesitate.She's here to pursue her dream of becoming a journalist. For an Other, she sees it as the ideal job. You can direct the hunters away from yourself or towards others, and no matter how much time you spend around common feeding grounds, it won't look that odd. After all, looking into "unexplainable" events is part of the job. For now, that dream is being realized as part of the school newspaper, a blatant tabloid that's happy to air everyone's antics and drama.>Relationship Chart: https://rentry.org/capfs6b9
How active is this general now?
>>98680407About 70 posts in 3 days. So not great. Was better the last few threads and I'm not sure where it went.
>>98680407Not very
>>98680314Nice Yokai anon. The chart was pretty good and the writefag too
>>98680416There were like 5 prompts last thread + new mp
>>98675445Depends on what you consider writing for it. I'm making a chart and answering prompts, I wouldn't know what else to do at this point so I'm taking this opportunity to catch up as I make the chart.
>>98680407It goes from active to dead at a moment's notice and with no apparent reason. A new MP just started, new builds are still being made and discussion was being had then everyone died at the same time. It's a common pattern lately. >>98680568The MP started the thread before that. I think 5 promts is a new record for a single thread tho.
>>98648867Lina's pretty hard at work keeping tabs on everyone and keeping the rumor mill spinning. The rest of her time is spent staying sharp in case a fightsexual like Vell decides to pick a fight out of the blue. She could really use an actual hobby to save her from becoming a workaholic in the future.>>98651274Wasn't exactly shy about that for Lina, but she spies on people, is unapologetically smug, and most importantly... there is a genuine side of her simply doesn't have a bottom line for fucking over people she doesn't like. When she's trying not to be too hard one someone who rubs her the wrong way, it's not because she'd feel bad for going too far. Fact of the matter is that she'd probably have fun going too far and ruining someone's life over random shit. She's just trying not to be like that as a sort of spite towards her mother that's the same exact way, mixed with the awareness that being evil for no reason is social suicide.She's not a total psycho though. She can still feel empathy for people she doesn't dislike, and towards those people she can be nice to try and help them without expecting anything in return. That combined with her tendency not to indulge in her worst trait makes her... at least tolerable?>>98656195Seduction, Leads them somewhere quiet, Isolation, Use mirage and other tricks to scare them senseless until they pass out, drop their bum ass off a police station and leave.Or something similar depending on the exact circumstances. However it goes down, the guy won't die but he'll be in for a bad time.>>98659969Still figuring that out for Lina. Sticking her nose into some people's business, ideally getting involved in their plotlines, maybe making some friends and dealing with some of her parental issues. Currently she's more of a supporting cast member. If the mp lives for a while I might figure out a more specific main plot for her.
>>98673446Lina's 18-19, same as most characters. She's meant to be new-ish to the place. Plus I tied her to Nate age-wise in the chart, so I gotta keep that consistent.>>98680452Glad you liked it! She's a fun character to work with so far.
>>98662575>>98675831This is my contribution to the MP. Spoilered because it's kinda lewd.
>>98681653Absolutely fantastic work anon. Lorcan looks great Vell looks kinda lewd, you're right, but she's great as well
>>98681653>lorcan VS vell2>2You made more than one of these?
>>98681924Saving a CYMK .kra file via jpg for some reason gives the art an interesting piss filter. I edited the 1st one to be entirely desaturated and kept the 2nd one with it. Here is the 1st one.>>98681768>spoilerThat's nothing. If she fights Johnny she'd get into more compromising positions. That'd be too much for the general though.
>I stop paying attention >Thread diesI don't like the implication here
>>98682107Guess you're just gonna have to never leave again, guardian angelanon.
>>98674875Yeah, that makes sense. Thanks.>>98675038I guess she could also approach since Nate seems like one of the most normal of the cast of Others right now. I can't help but imagine her being incredibly nerdy about english literature without realizing how overbearing it could be, especially with the crows hovering close by. Does she feel that resonance with anyone else in the cast?>>98675469I honestly didn't expect him to want to join for any reason, but yeah. There seems to be a greater ratio of girls than boys interested in joining. >>98680314Didn't really expect some potential development on ZT's past, nor did I expect someone from Nate's past somehow ending up in the same place regardless of how little they may have interacted. She's surprisingly a good fighter despite her job description, and seems well connected to the cast to be just a part of the supporting cast.>>98680757Speaking from my own experience, it seems to be a common trend for years. The spike from the start of an MP is filled with discussions and connection making which bump up the activity. Then, once enough material has been made, people work on efforfags to make the discussion a reality, which leads to the lower post numbers. It wasn't as obvious back then due to the population and other MPs happening. After this dip, it usually stabilizes when efforfags start alternating, but some MPs die before the stabilization part. On my part, I'm trying to balance interaction in the thread and working on the writefag. In case anyone is somehow waiting on my writefag, It's only going to cover the incident that turned him in a vague way so I can get something out ASAP. The next one might be interacting with the potential members for the first time so we can start working towards the club, but I wouldn't hold my breath for that.
>>98681653>>98681996Pretty awesome work as always. I probably should've known from the premise of the build.
>>98682253 Fetish build hiding in plain sight.
>>98678392Yeah, I imagine it like her continuously failing to manipulate him, but the logic that leads him to recognize what she's doing is always half-baked. Like he's just stumbling his way to the right answer through nonsensical leaps in logic instead of an actual keen mind. Perhaps he accidently breaks down her walls in much the same way.>>98680314Cool build and cool chart.>His motivations aren't exactly subtle... If he has a good poker face, he's not using it.Is Lina under the impression that Johnny is into Charlotte? She better not give Johnny more reason to hate the press! If his name makes it into the tabloids he'll...uh...write her a strongly worded letter.I'll add her to the relationship chart at some point this week.>>98681653He's the coolest...>>98681996Johnny would never strike a lady with a closed fist.>>98682237He's also just looking for friends in general, so a normal dude like Nate is a safe bet. I assume they're both still trying to adjust to the supernatural nonsense they've found themselves in.
>>98682253>Only as strong as a highly trained human>Against people with supernatural powersWe all knew where this was headed
>>98682237>Didn't really expect some...Honestly I really like leaving some vague dangling stuff like that so I can see how the other party decides to take it. ZT could be that person, or we could play up the comedy of him getting fucked over with no way to understand how or why. Nate might have no particular awareness of Lina from back then, or maybe she was a like a mob princess due to living with her parents back then and he actively avoided her. I think it's a pretty fun way to interact.>She's surprisingly a good fighter...Just don't tell that to Vell. Lina's already pretty busy these days!>>98682327>Is Lina under the impression that Johnny is into Charlotte?Lina's more got him categorized under 'highly horny and desperate'. I don't doubt she's caught him in similar moments with other girls either, which also reinforces that sentiment.>If his name makes it into the tabloids he'll...uh...write her a strongly worded letter.She loves those. Always good for a laugh. Looking forward to the chart entry.>>98681653Damn. That looks awesome.
>>98680314>>98682477>what do you mean there's a nonzero chance that the abddie i fumbled years ago was also a fox girl>what do you mean she's in my college class too next to me>im gonna crash out oh god
>>98684183Understandable reaction desu
>>98662585Relationship chart done. Skipped Professor, Witchbane, and Weiss since they seemed to be dumps.https://rentry.org/PlatAgeMaiaThoughtsIs anyone else still working on anything for PA? Everyone's gone totally silent. SamAnon, CrowAnon, Mako?>>98681653I'm not in this MP but I want to also say that this is rad.
>>98685005Silent because work kicked my ass. Just one more day until I'm free from overtime and meetings and bullshit and I can get back to writing
>>98685005>I'm not in this MPNever too late to join
>>98685072It could be a matter of taste. Not everyone who are into superheroes are also into urban fantasy/college drama.
>>98684183On the up side, maybe he won't realize it's the same person. He can always live in blissful ignorance...Kino art anon. Thanks for giving Lina some spotlight.
>>98685121Nta, but this made me wonder if the experimen's senses are retroactive. Like, if they remember someone they met before the transformation would they be able to tell that person was a monster just from the memory or would they need to meet them again?
>>98685142Probably not.
>>98685142It doesn't really make sense for the senses to be retroactive. Memories are pretty fallible, but can't be magically updated with your current physical capabilities. At best they might realize that some subtle things were actually hinting they were an other, but they wouldn't get super hearing in their memories just because they were transformed now.
>>98685142Yeah, I'm with the other two. You won't get any new information from your memories. You might notice some hints that you waived away in the past because you didn't know about Others, but that's all.I think the only exception could be past alterations to your memory. So like if an Other or awakened deleted or tweaked one of your memories with their powers, and later on you obtained an immunity to mind effects by becoming an Other, that might undo the changes and you'd suddenly remember.
>>98685182You'd be immune to further alterations, but there's no memory alteration at the time so unless it's like a constant effect or something mental immunity wouldn't do shit
>>98685152>>98685164>>98685182In most cases you are probably right but my logic was a bit different. It wasn't about a magical detection or new information it was more about perspective I guess? Something you already noticed but coudln't quite grasp, but now that you have better senses you know what it meant. But I guess that would only work on stuff you could already percieve, not something you never felt. Has it never happened to someone here? Like when you listen to a song and you don't get the words but then you read the lyrics and suddenly you can remember that's exactly what you heard?
>>98685005I've got a concept for a writefag, but a Dark City concept took form faster. I'll try to work on both
>>98685292That's going to happen regardless of whether you gain enhanced senses, but I get what you mean. Like, if that strange smell was very subtle back then, but now with better senses you can trace it to coming from a specific other and then you can connect the dots from back then. It's still subject to whether whether you could detect it in the past or not but it's a new perspective on past experiences.
>>98685005>Is anyone else still working on anything for PA?It's gonna take a while. I feel like drawfagging a bit for the other MP.>>98685344Speaking of which, are you going to continue with your comic writefag? Is that actually an attainable goal? A typical writefag with average length when adapted into comic format is going to take a long time to finish. A single fight scene might be faster to work with. You could also do a writefag with some illustrations attached to them.
>>98685853Well… here’s the thing. I SUCK at backgrounds. That’d probably be the biggest issue. Although if the story isn’t too long I can take as long on a comic as I would on a big writefag. Definitely more of a novelty project, so I think I could intertwine the approach and just make pages for the fight scenes in a writefag to make up for my lacklustre fight writing.
>>98686699Do it anon. You'd be the first in /mcyoag/ history to make a comic writefag. Don't get too distracted while drawing Stinger :^)
>>98686699Just use ai to make a background no one gives a shit about generic out of focus buildings or whatever in terms of artistic integrity or whatever the zoom zooms are getting their dicks twisted over online these days. As long as the characters and important bits are yours its fine. Or slap your drawings on some stock photos who cares.
Why my niggas at?
What my fellas are?
>>98687926>>98687942They're all trapped in the silly lil guy dimension where only silly lil guys can go. You'll have to up your silly game if you wanna get them back.
>>98687976Meh
>>98681653>>98681996man this is awesome stuffi tried to make something similar but i always end up lost in thought making zt's face look like a monster's
Page 10? Defib bump!
>>98691924Let it be known the thread hit page 10 with only 124 repliesI was waiting to see if it would die without anyone bumping it
>>98691944123*
I'm quiet because I haven't made a build in months, what's your reason?
>>98691944Flash in the pan, flash in the pan, can't sustain like you wish it can.
>>98692115I don't care about superpowers or asian edition superpowers
We need to treat MPs like how 14 yr old fangirls treat their favorite media.
>>98692459Prioritize shipping?Rabid opposition to heterodoxy?Adoption of Tumblr artstyle?Hilariously awful sex fics?
>>98692627yesnonoyes
>>98692657>>98692627go coom somewhere else this is a blue board
Tbf I'm pretty sure people are doing that hunker down and ignore the thread while they write/draw thing I keep telling them is bad and that they shouldn't do it
>>98682327>He's just looking for friends in general ZT seems like another potential chill guy, he's also adjusting to the supernatural despite what those scars might have you believe. Not a lot of normal-ish people in the cast. Lucy and Thomas seem like likely candidates, also.>>98682477I'm fine with Nate being familiar with Luna, but I also don't know how I could make that connection meaningful for both of them. It could be nice to have someone who reminds Nate of who he was back then when he wasn't so paranoids, but it's also unlikely they've interacted back in school.I also wonder how much we could add to another's backstory? Sure, it's different for everyone but what's the general limit? Can we only hint at things and hope they pick it up, or can we be more direct and add bigger parts to their story?>>98694000You might be overestimating how much free time everyone has now that people can't stay at home all day. Shit happens all the time, and I can't keep asking the same questions every thread.I do wonder what happened to some of the builds in Dark City.>>98662575Is In Ingen or Mio still here? How are things going for you guys, and what do you think about the current developments?What about you, Maisie? Do you want workshop how she'll be able to interact with other builds? What do you need for your character?Anyone is free to answer or ask questions here, as always.
>>98695474>You might be overestimating how much free time everyone has now that people can't stay at home all day. Shit happens all the time, and I can't keep asking the same questions every threadThat was another possibility I decided not to add, that and time zones
>>98695559One more thing would be the hack generally lowering 4chan's population, some boards more than others. It's not that I don't understand the concern, but I also want to reach a point in the story where the stuff we've already discussed in thread is happening.
>>98695630Good luck
>>98695474>You might be overestimating how much free time everyone has now that people can't stay at home all day.Even ignoring covid, it has been a while since the thread split. In that time I've gotten married and gotten a big boy job that expects a lot more from me than any of my previous ones. I have less time for friends and family, let alone solo hobbies, and I can't stay up into the early morning like I used to. I'm old bro.
>>98695630What hack? 4chan was hacked? This is the first I'm hearing about this!
>>98695736Thanks. I'll try to hop in the thread every other day, even if just to bump it. I do need something to work with, not sure if prompts will be enough or if there's some other way to get people talking for a while.>>98695770Yeah. I know time is progressing, I'm in a different place, surrounded by different people compared to when this all started, but when I work on stuff related to this thread it feels like 4 years haven't passed at all. The moment's fleeting and all that.
>>98695474>I also don't know how I could make that connection meaningful for both of them.Could go a lot of different ways. More comes down to figuring out what we'd like the connection to be first and then deciding the specifics... Unlike with Nate, Lina's got a lot of wiggle room for what she was like at that point. She could have been a scary lil mob princess, she could have been a gloomy kid no one really paid attention to, she could have been a regular member of the popular kids due to already knowing how to put on an act...How and to what extent they interacted back then has a lot of possibilities as a result. Like if she was a gloomy kid, Nate could have been trying to reach out and make a friend since he wasn't paranoid back then, but Lina was too stuck in her head to really reciprocate.Or if she was a popular kid, maybe she took part in school bullying and he had a bad impression of her. They don't necessarily need to have a good connection.>I also wonder how much we could add to another's backstory?It varies by person of course, but I think the big thing whether a change is transformative to the other person's character.For example, making a good person who hates bullying bully your character in the past so they have a redemption narrative. That might sound nice to you and in fact be a good story, but it's transformative so you'd want to ask ahead of time and see if the anon agrees. Similarly, we know that Nate had something go wrong in the past that made him more paranoid, and it's safe to assume you, as Nate's anon, have something in mind for that, so if someone inserted themselves as the answer to that without asking, I'd say it's transformative too.Still, as a common sense thing you probably wanna save it for smaller details, like one-off mentions in a conversation or relationship chart entries. That way if it doesn't work out it's no big deal. You can always build off it more later once you know it's accepted.
>>98678392Is she sitting on the ground bare cheeked?
>>98696355The answer should be obvious
>>98696668dirty girl
>>98667545Damn Fallen brat teasing me with her armpit
>>98696870Calm down John
WHERE THE FUCK IS MHA
>>98698039Here >>98662578
>>98662575>>98649947Here's a fight scene, kinda.>>98688605Thanks man. Here's your character getting humiliated.
>>98699789Wait, are these things you're drawing yourself or are they from some manga or other?
>>98699789Amazing job, anon. This got a good laugh out of me and looks great.
>>98699923He's drawing them, anon is just goated like that
>>98695474>Is In Ingen or Mio still here? How are things going for you guys, and what do you think about the current developments?Still here, just frauded for a bit with other stuff distracting me, I haven't been secretly writing or anything either but looking to change that.I honestly need to catch up on current developments but here's the 'I'm Here' proofs.One thing I forgot to check in on last time. Does Ingen not having healing magic gimp her too much in terms of story - I could have gone Exorcism/Druidism (I think?) instead of Fire Immunity/Control but I thought the build might be more interesting if not all their eggs are in one basket.Anywho, will make a relationship chart soon which will force me to read everything. If you've been reaching out to me while I've been frauding, I'll get back to you today/tomorrow.
>>98699789Damn 13 what that tongue do
>>98700038God damn.I'm impressed!>>98699789picrel
>>98699789Amazing work, always nice to see fresh art.
>>98700038need moar feed me feed me moar moar moar moarrrrr
>>98696355Her cheeks are too fat so you wouldn't see her panties clearly from that angle
>>98662575Here, a rentry for Ingen and slight shifting of her personality/ongoings to fit the darker vibe better. Also found a better piece of artwork after five thousand years of searching.https://rentry.org/DarkCitySchoolIngenChangelog: Traded Detective for EncyclopedicPotential Changes*: Elemental Control/Elemental Immunity for Druidism and Witchcraft for more spooky potionsRelationship Chart soon.
>>98701214I don't think the MP has dark vibe anymore but you do you
>>98701250I held back on going full edgy, just enough where she can exist in funny slice of life, messed up town and highschool anime antics equally.In horror trope terms she's the one that's going to go a little crazy looking too deep into the Things That Must Not Be Known and may have to be dragged away from trying to dissect the monster of the week, but she's not evil or anything.
>>98662575A Burning Fever (Nate)https://rentry.org/yh9bw6h2Campus Encounter (Nate, Raven)https://rentry.org/mtv46qz9Here are some short things to read while you wait for the other's stories, and another one in case you want to skip the prologue. I do want to write from the perspective of other builds, but that'll have to wait until I can understand their voice.
>>98701214Alchemy can already cover a lot of healing indirectly, so she's fine even without druid magic
>>98701400True enough. In general I'm mostly just not sure about Elemental Control/Immunity, I picked it because at the time it felt like there was nothing else that really fit from in-race since Fey are missing any real scholarly perks (I had even considered Experiment 13 to represent her grafting Other stuff into herself until I realized it's a specific thing rather than just hybridisation). It's possible that I also just pick up Grace and Haste or something, unsure, but I'm keeping her fire stuff on the down low until I decide. Everything else is hard locked in though.
>>98701384Wow, two at a time. Nice job anon, Nate's train of thought is fun to read. Seems like he can't catch a break.
>>98699953>>98700038>>98700721>>98700741Despite how cool it is, you guys do know his fetish is etched into these art pieces, right?
>>98701810No, you're the first person to figure that out. No one could tell besides you.
>>98696318Thinking about their current arcs, Lina's whole thing is about being different from both of her parent. It makes more sense for her to initially be more of a popular type, or bully to coincide with the mini writefag, and to have her want to chage from she was before. Them not being on good terms back and carrying that over to today then gives Lina an opportunity to see if she's really change compared her old self, and gives Nate a social challenge to overcome since his current ones are mostly physical. I think I'll let you decide since I didn't take into account Lina in my plans yet.>>98701214Good to see you're still around. I guess you're still waiting on that werewolf guy, right? I think Alchemy being her source of healing makes sense since it's the closest to the sciences and aesthetically it matches since it's not based around casting or rituals, though at the same time I'm not sure if fire will see much use to her and Druidism could be an avenue she treid to explore to supplement her clan's arts.>>98699789Who's the one getting humiliated here exactly? Jokes aside, you work unbelievably quick for the quality of your work.>>98701196You work quick, too when it comes to writefags. I can't recall if you said you were working on a writefag or not, but I did want to know how we're handling the literature club and how it started.>>98701469Thanks. They're mostly quick work, so it doesn't take long to type them out. I'm glad you enjoyed the way he thinks, it's one of the reasons why I prefer writing in first person, even if that means cutting down the number of builds featured.
>>98701948>you work unbelievably quick for the quality of your workI'm NEETing atm.>>98701157I'm gonna draw for Platinum Age next, but it's gonna have to wait since I have some other stuff to do aside from NEETing atm.>>98700741>>98699953Thanks.>>98700607He kinda reminds me of Denji who always has his tongue out.
>>98701948Oh I do have a Dark City writefag in the works. Not necessarily a literature club founding piece, but I’m planning to use ZT so that’s bound to be relevant to a degree. Lori causing some mischief and some people having to manage that, that’s the deal here.
>>98701948>I guess you're still waiting on that werewolf guy, right?Not particularly. The whole repressed freak angle is good enough for a gag or specific interactions but it's not what I'd call a key component of her character, I can definitely move things forward/work on stuff without invoking that.>though at the same time I'm not sure if fire will see much use to her and Druidism could be an avenue she treid to explore to supplement her clan's arts.Fire gives her somewhat of a limited combat-based powerset, which might be useful depending on what other anons want to write? It's less about how useful it is and more about how much it fits though. Any more magic is probably too much for the concept and there's not a lot else that fits the vibe, so Fire Control/Immunity was more of a 'well there's nothing else,' but Grace/Haste might fit ever-so-slightly better, no idea.I did an Experiment 13 build to trade those two for Detective but like I said earlier I didn't realize how specific of a phenomenon we were treating it and I'd rather not go that far into Not-Fey territory.
>>98662575Note that, since we're doing current day, 6 pounds of gold is worth over $383k.Current price of 4378.75 per troy ounce, times 14.5833 times 6.
>>98703419Azzam got this as an allowance like a kid going to buy candy.
>>98703450>An arab student studying in Germany contacts his father saying "I feel ashamed that I come to college on a Lexus and the Doctors who teach me come by train".>His father sends him a check with 100 million $ and a note saying "here go buy yourself a train and don't embarrass us with the Germans"
>>98701948>Lina's whole thing is about being different from both of her parent.Good point, yeah. So we can say that Lina at that point was copying her mom and the rebellious phase didn't hit yet. Probably something like a bully larping as a popular kid? So the sort of bully who'll hide someone's stuff while no one is looking, but will also pretend to help that someone look for their stuff to show what a good person they are. Her rebellious phase ended before middle school, so it's safe to assume she eventually got outed as a bitch at some point, which would cement her as someone Nate wouldn't think highly of regardless of if he was caught up in her antics somehow or purely a bystander.>>98701384Gotta agree with the other anon that Nate's thoughts were a big part of the fun. Really helped sell the pure weirdness of Raven for example. Same with the whole chase in the Burning Fever writefag. Good stuff.
>>98703419>>98703450ngl, I still think it's funny that it's 6 pounds of bars, as if that's somehow multiple bars of gold and not like 1/5 of a bar of gold. It's like the gold comes in candy bar size instead of legit gold bars.
>>98704323There are different gold bar sizes.
>>98704463Sure, but when an option is offering you a pile of gold bars with that image and it's up alongside a magic sword that kills immortal monsters, do you picture it as being a pile of domino sized gold bars that fits in your palm? You gotta admit that it's funny to think about.
>>98704323People do tend to forget that gold is fucking heavy, so maybe the author didn't know. Or he couldn't be bothered to find something else for the image, the cyoa in general is pretty lazy on the image front.>>98704463This reminds me of the little boats koreans used to have.
>>98702988I see. Guess I'm free to decide how the literature club gets made? I'm still working on stories early in the timeline where everyone is still new to the Program, and each other, so I won't mind that plot.>>98703003>It's less about how useful it is and more about how much it fits thoughYeah, that's what I've been wondering. What's even the plan for Ingen? What kind of stories do you want to tell? I don't think combat capability is that important for her since there are probably better candidates for combat, and Alchemy can cover for her combat capabilities while being unique for the cast. Grace or Haste could play into how skilled she's become when it comes to her medical practice, if nothing else. Royal Prerogative could be something interesting to use on top of her unethical experiments, or Inhibit could be how she can get away from the more powerful builds while not being so combat-capable.>>98704294Nate's reaction could go either way. It could also depend on how Lina tries to be different from her parents. Is she actively trying to make amends? If so, Nate being more distant due to her actions in the past could be something she has to overcome or learn from. If she already considers herself as being different from her parents, then maybe Nate may have had a reason to be targeted by her, and now present-day Lina has to try and not slip back into her old habits just to get back at someone who wronged her.The last post was particularly messy, and I apologize for that and this as well.
>>98706558>Is she actively trying to make amends?Depends. If he was an intentional victim Lina bullied, she probably didn't feel bad about it. If so she'll feel sorry for herself for having acted like a bitch, and that might superficially seem like guilt in how she acts. She'd be more inclined to mess with him more than make amends, but would try to restrain herself because it's a slippery slope and she doesn't trust herself with it. Probably works better if Nate has some reason to go to her, forcing her to feel like she needs to play nice and get it over with so he goes away, until repeat interactions flip some switch in the back of her head she decides to simply be a bitch.If he was an accidental victim (like maybe he got blamed for some of her bullying up until she got found out or he was a friend of one of her victims), then she'd feel some genuine guilt. Not enough to really stick her neck out, but enough to go out of her way to be nice. Fishing for forgiveness (or trying to be liked in general) just feeds into her issues, so she'd likely do her good deeds anonymously or try to play it off. Lower barrier to work with since Lina would have a reason to interact naturally instead of needing to be provoked into it.As for if she considers herself as being different from her parents... Her father she doesn't feel very similar to, which is largely true. She got his martial talents and little else, so she's pretty content on that end. Her mother she feels extremely similar to, which is also largely true. That's her main issue, and for the most part she just tries to ignore it, or looks for ways to blow off steam when she can't. I.E. she'd like to be different from her mother, and she tries to act different out of spite, but she doesn't believe she is or can be different on the inside. It's why she's got invisibility and mirage going all day every day.And no worries about the posts. Chatting about the builds has been fun.
>>98706558>What's even the plan for Ingen? What kind of stories do you want to tell?She's primarily there for the more investigative/horror plotlines as well as being a general side-character presence for whenever someone needs healing up. I'm not entirely sure what kind of plotlines we'll end up brewing but she intentionally has more side character energy than main character energy, and possibly nonmalicious antagonistic-lite for some of the builds.I'll probably get a little bit of writing done alongside the relationship chart and see if anything clicks in that regard.
I miss the old mcyoag
>>98710330What an empty statement
>>98662567Watching a lot of star wars videosThe Sith Empire(s) kind of suck, they last for only a few centuries before nuking out of existence.
>>98662570>Replace The Sith with "The Dark Brotherhood" - A group of powerful darkside adepts, acolytes, fallen jedi, and assassins. Their membership has influence in most if not all other factions. Their intent is unknown but they strike with proficiency and without mercy to their enemies.Skere Kahn?
>>98710330Then bring it back. Be the change you want to see. What do you miss?
>>98711143NTA but probably the old anons
>>98711238It shouldn't, or it would need to be a drawback. It will affect expectations however, for better or worse. If people expect you to be short tempered and impulsive you can take them by surprise if you play your cards right so you may want to at least pretend to follow the norm. They also aren't absolutes, the descriptions don't use hard terms, only suggestions and tendencies, so even other dragons aren't all going to be like that.
>>98710697Only one I like is from SWTOR. It has sith purebloods, and no rule of two, so you have a lot sith around, which makes sense, to counter jedi numbers. And unlike Kotor, it's not focused on fallen to the dark side jedincels, but actual sith order.
>>98712393What were you trying to respond to?
>>98713711Probably this >>98712342
>>98710330mcyoag isnt even old, she's 4 yrs old
>>98714614But imagine if there was secretly a long lost thousand year old mcyoag and anon is a vampire?
>>98699789this is peak anon hahaha amazing work as alwaysill make something with vell when i have some time>>98695474ZT is indeed chill, a clown thoughas said before he will hang out with Nate, both taking him out to party and mess around and also taking interest in the things he likeswho knows where he gets the books he brings to the club though
>>98716627Kinda looks like ZT was so bored he fell asleep. Or maybe the book stole his soul? Based draw friend.
>>98716627What kind of name is ZT even? His initials?
>>98717010>>98717085https://store.steampowered.com/app/33680/eversion/
Sorry for not saving the general. I’ve been homeless for a month. Please forgive
>>98718787You will only be forgiven once you find a permanent shelter Take care of yourself
>>98718787Why are you wasting time on 4chan rather than fixing your shit irl.
>>98717010yea he might be out cold, lucky has the shades so you cant tell where he's looking or if he's even awake>>98717085ZT kind of sounds like thirteen a bit rightcause calling him by his full name all the time, 13 inches, would be a mouthful
>>98706943I was also considering the possibility that Nate did something wrong against Lina that led to him being secretly bullied with her popular girl act. They were supposedly pretty young at the time, and kids can do some bad stuff, or interpret things in a bad way. Her arc is still a bit blury to me, and I don't know what to do with her yet.>Probably works better if Nate has some reason to go to herShe seems to be a fountain of information on his classmates in the Program, and the campus at large, so even if He isn't a part of the literature club yet, he could probably learn more about the weird stuff on campus from her, or maybe even Raziela if he knew she existed.The week beat me up so bad that I don't know if I could make any meaningful replies, or if there's a way to get others to talk.>>98707671Alright. Good luck on writing. I do think she has the potential to be more than a side character, especially since if we needed some kind of healer or antagonist, we'd probably tailor make up an Other to fit what we're writing.>>98716627>>98721994Seems like ZT has a way of being bullied by everyone. Though, the context of me mentioning ZT was proposing other builds for Johnny to befriend. Are you interested in something like that?
Damn, how long has the board been this dead? This should have fallen off already yet its only at 9
*yawn*when's midcyoag gonna have a new battle shonen MP
>>98723214yea im cool with thatill probably have more free time from this weekend on so I'll try to do more stuff for the mp
>>98726425Adhdbro, we need to lie in wait a little longerWe can't do our work when everyones too busy to play anything
>>98726520This nigga tall af
>>98721994>13 inches>a mouthfulAlright you got me there, made me chuckle a bit
>>98662570
>>98729685Fuck off Tok
Just ignore him
blam (blam)
bang (bang (bang))
Clearly this ADHD period did not take off, so we should move onto better CYOA's.Like Outer Reincarnation. Dibs on Charlotte.
>>98733074Nah, everybody's just too employed and old
>>98723214>Her arc is still a bit blurry to me, and I don't know what to do with her yet.Nothing wrong with that, we've got a general idea down with him being bullied by her as kids. Doesn't necessarily need to be a whole arc; can just be flavoring for when other arcs would push them to interact. I did say she's a bit more of a side character at present, so it's probably better if this is more of a sub-plot during an arc with a clearer vision anyway... And if Nate's reason for seeking her out is info about Others and the campus, then that slots in well. He'd have some more specific objective tied to some other character's arc, and he'd go to Lina for info, introducing their mutual misgivings in the process.Could also be the route to try and get other people talking, maybe?>>98721994>>98726520>calling him by his full name all the time, 13 inches, would be a mouthfulBegs the question of if Lina'd cut him down the size for that comment, or if she'd have to admit it was his one and only redeeming trait... Love the art by the way. ZT looks super nervous... Like maybe he accidentally used Inhibit on Lina, undoing her illusion/invisibility stuff and he's desperately praying she won't realize. (I'm sure she's already plotting where to hide the body.)
>/mcyoag/>218 replies in 2 weeks>/cyoag/>184 replies in 13 hours
>>98736084shit anons do that to a general
>>98736084thats what happens when you run everyone off
>>98736084>/cyoag/>0 good replies in 3 years
>>98736352What does that make /mcyoag/
>>98736545Pointless.
>>98733074>Outer ReincarnationI don't like OR personally. But even ignoring that, I don't think the current mcyoag can make it work. Too many anons want different things and can't find a middle ground, that doesn't mesh well with a cyoa that requires requires anons to choose from a limited pool. There is also the meta aspect, people can't agree if it's good or not and a run can't work if we don't choose one side.
>>98736911>people can't agree if it's good or not and a run can't work if we don't choose one side.Well that's easy. People who think it's not good join Charlotte's side and are ontologically evil, while the rest get divided between the 3 true Elder Gods to beat them into submission.
>>98737520Ah, good old Charlote builds, I enjoyed making those, I was probably one of the first few people that discovered that you can get 0^0 as a companion if you used untimeskip. Remember making a single player build based on that.
>>98737520>>98738427Metanarrative is shit and has no place in cyoas.
>>98742263Nah, it's fun sometimes
>>98662575Here's something I've been curious about, why did you pick your build to be that specific Other? What's so cool about being a vampire or a werewolf, or is there a story you've been wanting to tell that can only be told through a fey lineage?Also with Halloween right around the corner by the pace that we're going, surely the monster MP is going to have something for the spookiest time of the year, right?To answer my own question. I really liked the tidbit about how unnatural a dragon turning is. It really plays into the fact that some seriously weird shit is going on even by Others' standards. There's also the fact that dragons are going to hunted down by all sides which gives a reason for why a random build might want to interact with Nate and for him to want to make friends even if his personality makes that hard. And also I just really like having powers tied to a theme. In this case, it's fire and how it can burn the user just as much as its target. It adds another layer to the dual nature of Others trying to retain their humanity by feeding the monster within. In this case, it's helping him survive the strange world he's found himself in, but at the same time it's eating away at him every time he has to use it whether figuratively by his dragon side taking over his original personality, or literally by charing his body whenever he uses dragon's breath or pyromancy.I would've posted this yesterday if there wasn't something going on with this site.
>>98742459Depending on the phases of the moon, Tiffany has to stay inside and just hold a wild party in her dorm if it's a full moon.If it's not a full moon, then the party extends outside, where she gathers up a bunch of people to wander out into the woods and start a fighting pit where anyone who's got balls will throw themselves half or fully drunkenly against each other.
>>98742263isn't playing cyoa as a multiplayer technically always a metanarrative?
>>98742459I was planning on making a vampire firts, but inspiration struck when I read the fae powers. The rules for the run let me pick the right powers to make Lorcan quite a formidable fighter, and so the fae duelist asshole was born.There's a lot of versatility with his abilities, and even more so if I had gone with my initial idea of alchemy to make him a prep time merchant with potions to enhance his fighting.About plot, growing to respect others is a given, as is ceasing to be so fucking autistic about everything, but I'm not planning to have that happen just through him losing duels, that'd be too borind. It has to come through interacting with others in ways that break the mold he's used to.
>>98742459I wanted someone who got into a lot of fights, but being a Ly Erg would mean she's competent at fighting, and I needed her to be a loser. So I made Vell a halfie with Tuatha blood, a part of herself she rejects, which keeps her essentially incomplete so that she keeps losing. It also works out that the homebrew rules allow powers from another subrace, so I made that subrace her other half. And Tuatha de Danann has Hypnotic Beauty, so she still looks good as she jobs which is kinda important (to me).>>98743867Vell wants to be strong, and beating Lorcan would prove she's achieved it. But if he respected her before that, despite her shortcomings, she'd feel like the fire inside her had been snuffed out. She can't let that happen. She only wants his respect after she's earned it through victory. If he grew soft and admired her effort and diligence in training before she beat him, she'd think he'd gone weak and would probably try to provoke his asshole side just to keep herself motivated.
>>98743479Not really. Unless every single one of your characters is aware of being in a story and knows that life is subject to the whim of the authors.
>>98745528Yes yes we've all fought Madhatter anon.
No seriously, where the fuck is everyone? No writefags is one thing, but where has the lighter thread engagement been? No tierlists, no prompt answers, no IC posting (divided opinions on that aside), NOTHING.Dark City has been a glacial churn and the other MPs may as well have evaporated. I posted a couple of prompts myself a couple of threads ago, I don't believe we're all SO busy than none of us can post ANYTHING.
>>98747431I've seen this kind of question often enough that I'm struggling to think of a reason why I bother being here.To answer your question, the thread population is low and DC school edition is not to everyone's taste. Anons don't feel forced to to join in on anything because if it doesn't 100% fit their taste, they'll just wait until something dies to start one that won't 100% fit other anons taste. Or they don't think joining in on something is worth the effort. Even replying to prompts and questions can feel like an obligation to have some sort of thread activity rather than being a fun thing to do.
>>98747431>>98747516It's just this >>98733235
>>98747431>>98747516Have you guys tried advertising to other boards
>>98747431Well I'm no longer homeless but I'm still busy. But I've been gone for a month.
>>98748284Who are you bro
>>98748321anonymous
>>98748344Slimenuts
>>98748356Don't care then
>>98748390I do... He reminds me of when anons were carefree and active... When anons actually had FUN
>>98662575Which clique or friend group would your build be part of? Do we have seating arrangements or is that only a highschool thing?
>>98749298Pre-mha mcyoagHow I miss you
>>98749339Pre-mha mcyoag is no longer here anon... She's... She's... *sobs* gone!!!
>>98749353No, I still believe we'll be reunited
>>98749298Anon he was unfunny on purpose to drag his class down and make things less fun...
>>98749321>friend groupA normal student wouldn't look forward to fighting, so Vell's probably avoided, some out of fear of being hurt, some out of reluctance to hurt somebody, some simply because they don't want to waste time. It makes her a loner.>seating arrangementVell would rather sit in the back, quietly cataloguing every student's micromovements and tendencies with autistic precision, then using that knowledge to her advantage when she fights them.
>>98749415You have to bring back Worm 1 if you want to be reunited with her.
>>98747431Tierlists and prompt answers have been done ad infinitum already, they're barely more engaging than spam posts at this point.
>>98747516Forcing only certain genres to be played or 100 percent of everyone playing the same adventure in a given thread were effective trolling tools.
>>98748209How would you even advertise mcyoag to someone? Hey come to this cyoag general where only 2 or 3 people actually make cyoas. Hey come to this collaborative storytelling general where only 1 or 2 stories have actually progressed. Hey come write for this fanfic general where reviews struggle to reach the dozens if you're lucky.
>>98750298We have three drawfags, that's something.
I think we need an MP where basically all of the interaction is in-thread or some other format besides writefags.
>>98750365If you said this 3 months ago they'd call you a leach and execute you
>>98750365Thats called a quest and will get you deleted.
>>98750742>reminded of akunGoodbye once more, mcyoagI need to catch up on the quests I missedI'll see you next year
>>98750906To the uninitiated, I'm talking about fiction.live
>>98750365So an arena?
>>98729685Cool build. Maybe we'll need to MP a different campaign.
>>98736084>Don't play like that!>Don't make characters that are lewd
>>98733074We should execute order 69 and have clones shoot the prudes
>>98751262>>98751870>>98751957We know it's you tok, samefagging will not hide you.
>>98752708If Tok would samefag as much as you guys claim, he would play multiplayer by himself.
>>98749353Post-drought mcyoag will arrive.
>>98747431A year ago I was checking /mcyoag/ constantly. Today, this is my first time checking in for a week. Simply put, I find most of you completely miserable. I have better things to do than waste my time here if our funs are incompatible.
>>98753069But he does. He even posts about it. Just look at the "league of tok" and at the fact he had AI tell him he's the best in entropist after everyone shat on him.
>>98753923Who the fuck cares
This thread would rather talk about anything other than mp or starting a mp it seems.
>>98754154We need a new Fate run. That'll save us.
>>98754154We need a new OR run. That'll ruin us.
>>98750365What about a MP where the whole thing is like homestuck chat logs
>>98750365>>98754408I have no clue what homestuck is but something like that has been tried. It didn't get many players mostly due to the cyoa and premise and it also didn't go that far.
>>98754455When was it tried?
>>98754529Around the end of November last year.
>>98754615With what cyoa and premise?
>>98754660Probably some bottom of the barrel slop that wasn't similar to the suggestion at all
>>98754707So what was it? Don't answer the question if you yourself don't know.
>>98754835Moron
>>98754660Pretty sure it's the fantasy village run. I can't remember the exact term used, but it was your typical fantasy setting but the RPG mechanics are part of the setting like log horizon.
>>98754925NTA, but the tiny bit I remember of that makes this seem accurate >>98754707I didn't even make a build because they chose some crappy NSFW cyoa for some reason
It's time for a HP run
>>98756428Worm
>>98756547You mean Platinum Age?
Do people really want something else to start or is this just shitposting hours again? Has the interest for the current runs really just disappeared out of nowhere?
>>98756617I still want to do Platinum Age desu. Dark City is whatever, I'll play along.
>>98756617Shitposting hours plus multiple people samefagging themselves out of boredom
>>98757169There was very little shitposting from what I can tell.
Whatcua up to anon?
>>98758462I'm in bed, about to go to sleep. (I know I shouldn't use screens before sleep, but I'm addicted.)
>>98758494Any future mp related plans?
>>98662575Are people still planning to do stuff for this?
>>98756406To filter people like you out, and it worked. We got a good story with people actually responsive and then ended it.You don't have to do the nsfw stuff just cause it exists. There's even that isnane person who wants us to do worm interactive and thats 90% porn
>>98750365Hexalby had the colonization one where you could rival, conquer or ally a neighboring one, and Tok's Princess is a notorious multiplayer CYOA.
>>98758589Some shit happened irl when I was writing, but I plan to finish it
>>98758637The cyoa seemed sucky to me regardless of the nsfw parts and I don't remember much activity at all. But I wasn't following it so it's possible I just missed that. If you were satisfied with how it went then props for making that happen.
>>98758763hes lying out of his ass, it had no story
>>98750365If it gains any traction it will need its own general, like planewalker or harahel.
>>98759138Why?
>>98759197nta probably because it's a bit different from how we usually do things even if that style was pretty common before but it didn't fully cover all thread activity. That or because they're afraid of it getting moved despite >>98749405 being on its 22nd thread.
>>98759407If nothing else was going on, it wouldn't matter if it was how we usually do this
>>98758637>worm interactive and thats 90% pornI don't think any of the nsfw ones have been suggested here
>>98760886>interactive
>>98758724Homeless anon?
>>98760963Your point is?
MPs?
>>98763575
>>98747516Let me try to reframe my thought. Where is Anons' WANT to engage? I know school isn't everyone's thing; it isn't mine. But where did the PA discussion go? Just because individual people don't HAVE to post doesn't mean I can't feel concerned with the collective silence.>Even replying to prompts and questions can feel like an obligation to have some sort of thread activity rather than being a fun thing to do.I've felt a bit of this myself. Part of that is my own fault because I'm a contrarian who likes to make characters that are non-combatants when the general (and thus prompts) has a MAJOR focus on combat. But...>I'm struggling to think of a reason why I bother being here. If that's the case maybe you should leave. For your own sake.>>98750077This is a fair point I hadn't considered.>>98753295>I have better things to do than waste my time here if our funs are incompatible.Sometimes I think about this too. If you don't mind, what is your type of fun? I've mentioned in this general previously that I used to spend time on Furcadia. That was straightforward RP (and not the mincing around it we do here), but it was character focused, and people COMMITTED to their characters. Sometimes for literally years. One other thing about it though, was the atmosphere of "sex could happen", even if it wasn't allowed in the main area. It was never even my focus, but there was still a "maturity" that I enjoyed. This place does seem to have a distinct aversion to sincere sexuality. See: >>98535785>>98627452>>98701810The second one struck me because... Listen, I don't want them here either, I've seen enough of places that aren't Furc to know that, but it's another thing to be so afraid of it that you post your worry. This may be a blue board, but it's still 4Chan. We're all adults here... I hope.
>>98764531Nobody is interested in your "mature" furry erp bro
would you rather>fight your buildor>fuck your build
slaves
>>98764727fight & fuck island MP when
