Hey orc guy? If you finish the fic before this thead gets axed too, can you post it on either the HMOMA or gmad thread?

So what fics is every one currently working on?

Requesting a story set in modern Hawaiian where a female surfer and her boyfriend wind up adopting the surfer's long lost younger sister. Shortly after the sister is adopted, strange things start happening, most notably the surfing couple gains tremendous amounts of weight going from slim and fit to incredibly obese in a matter of weeks. Everyone else seems oblivious to their changes or actively/subtly fattening them up.

Older sister starts to suspect younger sister is somehow responsible and starts digging into her past. She soon realizes that her 'sister' is not who she claims to be and is preparing them for a ritual of some kind.

>Extreme weight gain (slim to USSBBW/USSBBHM), belly stuffing, horror

so this used to be a /d/ thread?

savin

What was your most difficult and funnest stories to write?

How would you guys go about doing world building?

>>77372682
Extrapolation. I usually don't set out to do much worldbuilding, but I do often sprinkle in unimportant background details (names of businesses/organizations, news events on tvs/radios). Then, if the first story feels right, I expand upon those details in consecutive stories, adding to the world as things come up. No need to know the name of the continent on the other side of the planet if the whole thing stays in a single city. At least, thats my philosophy on it.

>Paying the bills is getting harder and harder, and gambling debt doesn't help. But instead of giving you a promotion your boss gave you an offer you couldn't refuse. 3K extra per month, but he gets to have one evening per week with your wife. She hated it more than you, but being forced to move out again would be terrible for your son
>It's been happening for 8 months by now, and you can't deny that the way she moans with him makes you feel excitement in a way nothing else can

>Today is the same as any day at the office. And once again your boss has scheduled you for a meeting with a foreign client from Indonesia again. You hate that guy. And you especially hate it when you're given only 1 hour notice. After having improvised the meeting you go to your bosses office to give him a piece of your mind!
"I've had it with these unannounced meetings. Just because he can't get his shit together doesn't mean we have to accept it! I you do this again Michael I will-"
>He cuts you off
"Anon, just because we've been seeing each other in private often doesn't mean you can talk to me so informally. You'll call me sir."
>Being reminded that he's shagging your wife caught you off guard. You don't say anything as you ball your fist and exit the room. With frustration you now try to finish up your backlog of tasks
>It's half an hour past the time you normally leave. Finally your work is done.
>You're surprised when your boss is suddenly behind you
"Anon, still here?"
"Yes Michael."
>He doesn't comment on your informality
"You look stressed... When's the last time you and Janet, you know..."
>What a hypocrite. He's the one being informal now you don't comment. Best not let him know you and your wife stopped doing it 2 months ago
"You two have any plans tonight? I'll let you watch this time."
>Arousal immediately builds in your crotch
"Just tell Janet to make dinner for me too."
"Yes sir..."

https://www.deviantart.com/thet0wer/art/The-Saga-of-Ka-Tar-and-his-Wives-Part-2-943696253

Second story I wrote as a continuation of a comic I commissioned

Tags:
>sex
>non consensual
>futa
>amazon

>>77368973
No, /d/ fags were kicked off their board and came parasitize this one.

>>77367207
Why is this thread always on /trash/?

>>77375149
>Have to log in
Sorry...

>>77376273
There's unironically no other place for the thread to be. From thread #1, it was made. I remember seeing NSFW writing threads in /aco/ and /d/, but at some point the mods kicked the generals out alongside captions because of something in regards to the "quality" of image boards. Dunno if the same happened to /tg/ or not.
Sure, there's /lit/, but that's a totally different audience with radically different expectations. If you're interested in writing NSFW content or just fan content, this board is your only place to share it now.

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>>77367207
Previous thread stories

Jayden's Cursed Tabletop Game: Team Lucy Pt. 1
https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Jayden-s-Cursed-Tabletop-Game-Team-Lucy-Pt-1-1230642687
>CYOA, isekai, medieval fantasy

The Attraction of Vice by ChibiStarr Chapter 5 Update
https://rentry.co/AttractionOfVice
>Weight Gain, Love Triangle, M/F Sex, Eating/Stuffing

Also

A Winter’s Tale:
https://www.deviantart.com/thet0wer/art/A-Winter-s-Tale-TG-WG-RC-ID-Fusion-948493376
>Tags: TG, TF, WG, ID.
Caption sequel for above story ^
https://www.deviantart.com/thet0wer/art/A-Winter-s-Tale-2-1154151553

0.3 Release of the Girlfriend TF Game
https://mega.nz/folder/OqgHUK7T#aIQsiBfKUwJNB9zdh87EOg
>TF, presumably

>>77378147
>0.3 Release of the Girlfriend TF Game
I still think the VN style of player describing appearance is the way to go personally, but that's just my thoughts, and I will admit, there's some humorous merit to seeing an innocent girl one page and then suddenly huge boobs the next. How do you intend on handling the different routes though? Changing the dialogue, or just focusing on the different pictures?

>>77367877
A library of ruina fanwork involving a mute OC musician guy getting involved with the Musicians of Bremen (specifically Meow) as he learns to deal with a new emotion that his previous sense of self-satisfaction. Also intimacy.

>>77367207
I'm trying to make a encyclopedia of lewd fauna and flora, mostly lovecraftian and otherworldy tentacle stuff but also some more generic creatures that live in the wild
Now, what would be a good name to it?
"The Erotic Eldritch Encyclopedia" is what I have in mind but I'm not sure if it has the right 'oomph'.
Any better ideas or do you think thats a good enough title?

>>77381061
It only takes one n to make it EEnE (Ed, Edd, n Eldritch). Be mindful of those anagrams,
Assuming this is written for humans, it could be about how to keep the mind sane when observing these tentacle stuff, so maybe a parody/spoof of one of the few good nickelodean sitcoms could be good, like (X's Declassified Eldritch Protection Guide) or something?

Wrapping up the draft of lizardman threesome today, and should be able to polish it up and get the editing finished throughout the week.

>>77381561
What kind of story is it?

>>77381561
nice

Guy who asked for the gay pig orc fic here, how is it going? Is it possible to see a wip?

>>77382326
>>77367266
A bit impatient, are ya? Your best bet is to just put an anchor post and wait. Ideas have been taken before, but sometimes writers just disappear, so I'd be ready for that just in case.

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>>77382857
>sometimes writers just disappear
Y-yeah, who would ever do that?

>>77382124
Two lesbians decide to ask a lizardman one of them has a crush on to a have a threesome. That's pretty much it. It's close enough to being done that it's not worth posting a WIP, but the last one posted should be in the archive.

>>77382227
The long wait is almost over. Thanks for your patience, anon.

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So to keep the thread from dying again, I had half an idea that I think could be fun, but no idea what to do with it.

The idea is we have a bombshell bimbo, but with Clark Kent glasses. She has a nerdy persona, and in her small friend group, nobody can tell shes insanely hot and stacked. Until something forces a reveal naturally.

The main thing is I cant think of why our nerd bimbo would need this double life and how to explore. Only wrinkle i can think of is maybe she has a bitchy twin, and so theres a misdirect that the identical bimbo the audience sees isn't actually her.

Alternate topic- I'm still wondering how to find themes for story ideas. Namely one being a pirate story, and the other an Egyptian archaeology one.

>>77382857
So just keep posting my request until it gets filled?

Sorry, I didn’t know how things ran around here

>>77384267
> why our nerd bimbo would need this double life and how to explore.
Maybe she wasn't always a bimbo. Either through the supernatural route (ran afoul of some witch/wizard, was part of a magical girl/sentai group and got captured and changed by the forcess of darkness, sought forbidden lore and suffered the consequences etc.) or through something more mundane (human traficing cartel kidnapped her and did back-alley bimbo surgery, but she got rescued, pissed off the rich bitch who pulled some strings to turn her into a bimbo surgically, etc). Otherwise maybe some shady organization (like the aforementioned cartel) is plucking random bimbos off the streets and in her... ahem... "infinite wisdom" she thought a nerd disguise would be the perfect way to fool them.

>>77384521
I prefer the idea we stay in non-depressong mundane territory.

The idea is more at heart shes a nerd, but cursed with the body of a sexbomb. But she has to for some reason hide this double life- at least in part for social street cred.

Like imagine a reverse prince and the pauper.

Posting for an anchor

Requesting a fic about a human guy and a group of Male chubby Pig orcs much larger than him, that o

They capture him, and tie his hands up, decide to tease him a bit after catching them looking at their bellys, which culminates in them turning around, dropping their pants and mooning him, when they see his erection at the sight if their big fat asses, they decide to use him as their personal dildo, which he actually wished would happen. No farting, scat, watersports or musk please

Tags: M/M, gang bang, pig orcs, facesitting, rimming, forced rimming, butt worship, power bottom, small dom big subs, anal, big butts,

>>77384849
Not my style unfortunately, but I wish you good luck.

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>>77385801
Up this goes

>>77384267
If her sex appeal is exposed to the world, it unironically interrupts the natural orbiting of the universe and the world will revolve around her. This disruption would cause the destruction of the universe, and a forceful restart of the universe would be needed. I could see a series of events of how much she could expose without trying to not have the world revolve around her.

It's "The world doesn't revolve around you," except taken literally and in its inverse should she stop hindering her sexiness.

>>77388273
A little too high concept.

>>77378830
>>77384267
In case you missed this feedback on the game

>>77389091
Oh thank you I did.

Anyway I have the pictures done. I prefer not focusing on written physical changes because I feel it conflicts with the irreverent tone I'm using. I was planning on having Kasumi's mother show up and fill a similar role to Macie. But I still dont know quite how to diverge them. Because the portraits are all done I need to keep the story on a street.

I did finish a bonus bully route though, that I think is very fun.

>>77388273
So something like the Haruhi series?

>>77391513
Haven't thought about the series. I'd say kinda, except she knows she's sexy and has to hide it, rather than a couple of people watching over her to protect the secret from herself.

>>77379879
what game is this?

>>77393225
Galaxy Angel series. IIRC, this is from Moonlit Lovers.

>>77378096
>quality of the boards
aren't those both NSFW boards?

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>>77383170
Thank you for your work, I am excited to see the result!

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>>77394921
Yes, but /aco/ and /d/ explicitly banned write threads and captions threads
https://desuarchive.org/d/thread/7509079/#7509079 so trying

We can make it to 300 this time. I can feel it.

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Requesting a fem-Bowser and Princess Peach story where the two have some girl time together.

>>77384468
Don't be annoying about reposts but yeah, just wait a bit and if you don't hear anything, put in the request again.

That said I started it last night, just don't have anything worth sharing yet.

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>how it feels to finally be free of a writer's block
>>77381398
Its a cute alien girl studying the fauna and flora of a planet where the influence of a tentacle deity over it slowly grows, less of a "how to avoid dangerous creatures" and more of a "I'm going to catalog lewd wildlife to sate my curiosity", tho I do plan to include some warnings and precautions against the more dangerous ones (including intelligent habitants touched by the eldritch influence)
I was going to feature life from several different planets or dimensions but that was way too ambitious for me so I decided to scale it down

>>77374138
More?

>>77401170
Ok then, good luck man

>>77403902

I just wanted to write a scenario where a cuck calls a bull "sir" for the first time after being offered something and this is the way I achieved it.
Don't have more now. Tho I do maybe want to write a full NTR story around a cuck and his bull boss. Though it would be a lot more complicated than that, and involve some unrealistic elements like near future sci-fi.

When it comes to mundane stuff I'll be the first to admit I'm not a good enough writer to make that interesting without sprinkling in supernatural or at least unusual elements. So my question(s): do any of you write mundane stories (stories that could plausibly happen in our current world and time to non-special people)? And for those who do: how do you make those interesting without reaching for the literary spice cabinet (the aforementioned unusual and supernatural)?

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>>77407009
In my limited experience, I write mundane as an opening chapter (or early on) as a control, like what a normal day the character goes through kind of thing. It does sometimes sacrifice having an immediate hook, but it also highlights the moment where things go awry or a call to action much quicker and easier. Sometimes you just need to start somewhere, and going mundane is a good start. You can still use the time to get character interactions out of the way or introduce how characters react in a normal setting before the plot changes them.

>>77408822
Fair, but I was asking more about stories that stay relatively mundane. My reasoning being that if you need to pull out gimicks to get your stories to be decent, not just to elevate them to good or great (which, again, I admit is true for my current level of writing skill) then there is a flaw in the fundamentals somewhere. Anybody can write a decent story by just pulling from the vast library of the speculative after all. That's why I'm asking if there's any writers around here who don't, at least some of the time.

>>77410620
Ah, like those slice of life writers that focus on capturing certain aspects of life

>>77411452
Mhm, and mundane romance writers as well. I'm trying to shore up the foundation underneath all the garnish, since I feel that's the area I can improve in the most.

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>>77410124
where's this from?

So which games would you say are great stories?

https://www.deviantart.com/stash/02b8yhbo7g70

Did some late night writing to try to get something done. Made a bit of progress on the World's Strongest C-Class!

Inspiration's run out for the moment. Not sure what should be the flow of events from my stopping point. I'd appreciate anyone taking a look. It was hard figuring out a good conversation with Michelle when she's so closed off, but I think I made it work- I'm just not sure if it'll justify her character arc by the end of the chapter yet.

https://www.deviantart.com/stash/02b8yhbo7g70

>>77407009
Personally I don't really like mundane stories about normal things. That's not why I write.

>>77407009
No- but pretty much cause my fetishes revolve around transformation and mind-control, and that doesn't work in the mundane world. I think most of my stories verge on 'urban fantasy' by necessity, but I think it's interesting to examine things from that angle- come up with the rules for why magic exists, what it effects, why it's hidden, etc. which has lead to me making a broad set of rules for myself.

My other two storis are set in a medieval fantasy, and a sort of shonen-esque near-future world as well.

As for good techniques, interesting situations and interesting characters are your go to.
>>77416684
Depends on what you want out of a narrative. I most recently beat the Robocop game which I think is great, if you are a Robocop fan. As a narrative beginning to end however it's pretty much all homages. As a self-contained story, probably not that great. But as a vehicle to send you into an 80's cyberpunk setting? Can't say I can think of anything that beats it.

I'm also playing the Witcher 3, which is pretty stop and go on most of it's elements, where nothing ever comes to a screeching halt, but it certainly picks up in places, and sets aside story elements. What it does very well though is keep you going in the moment for a pretty gritty fantasy setting.

I'd say Cyberpunk 2077 is actually a lot worse in comparison. Largely because I think it lacks the same unity of vision, and is pitching a lot of cyberpunk elements that don't form a cohesive whole alongside it's narrative. I'd actually say the Deus Ex games (at least the Adam Jensen ones) excel at this, where the setting and narrative are constantly reinforcing themselves, and it keeps you thinking throughout. This is where I'd make the point that I think generally the further Cyberpunk is from the present the harder it is to write, because the harder it is to identify with.

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>>77417241
Oh well, it was worth a shot. Thanks anyway, guess I'll have to figure out another way to improve my fundamentals.

Safe

>>77417153
It's about as much as you can get so far without rushing things. You already got the idea that he thinks differently from the other rich people off (at least to her). I see some curiosity, but now the next step is for her to be interested in him.

>>77383170
>Y-yeah, who would ever do that?
It happens a lot more than you think, funny enough.

Butts

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Heya, writer of Burya polov here. Chapter six is taking a lot longer than I'd like to admit, and I'm not sure if I'm doing something wrong with it (I'm trying to create more conflict between the male lead and his bully)
If anyone has any advice for when you feel discouraged, I'd appreciate it ^^
For now, let me treat you to a reference sheet of Valeria, Zhenya's bully

>>77422606
You'll probably want a link to the story or provide context for the characters involved for the people not reading the story constantly.

Thankfully I actually read some of it (when it doesn't go over the top).

Personally, I kinda forgot what was your intent on having this story in the first place. I remember the original idea being about a feminine boy getting some gym lessons with a girl that works out and falling in love, but suddenly there was all this magic, yellowfin tuna spewing oil everywhere, gummy dinosaurs, and the initial hard goalpost has long since transformed from something simple to a loopy tentacle that stole Moon Knight's gimmick of throwing random bullshit go! So it's kinda hard to point out a specific direction.

...that being said, I see that the bully has some interest in Filat, so you can do something like that where she joins in on Filat's jabs at Zhenya, and I'd things don't go over the top, even have Filat call her out on her more than harsh jabs, realizing that she's quite a bit more mean about it than he is.
Of course, if you go through magical route, there is also the bully getting involved with the magic side for better or worse and Zhenya either confronting her, working with her, or saving her even knowing that nothing will change between the two.

Speaking of, you wrote a previous story about a guy that works in store dealing with being falsely accused, but is ultimately a slice of life. Are you able to give insight to
>>77410620
>>77413006
>>77407009
As to how to write the mundane?

>>77416684
BG3, Undertale, Deltarune, Bioshock, some of the Divinity games

>>77402264
A woman's guide to Handling Eldrich Dildos and Fleshlights?

>>77416684
Final Fantasy VII. Only the original game, not any Compilation or Remake material. I think it was mostly a fluke how good the story was, as a result of development being so rushed and disorganized because of the switch to 3D. The big plot twist with Zack was a last minute addition. Even the supporting characters have good story arcs. A lot of people who haven't played the game misunderstand the characters, especially Barret and Tifa, who have a lot more depth than their stereotypical surface characterizations. I think it's notable that not a single player character in FFVII is a natural leader.

Unrelated but I got to stop looking at the news, I see stuff abut Eu bullshit and google locking down their system, if I keep this up I’m gonna go insane

>>77426991
Crippling depression of the outside world is suffering and sometimes fuel to further in some writing, so long as you don't get carried away with the doom and gloom. Pretty sure there's more pics than just 1984 that reflect on theoretical future events. Or I guess in this case, inevitable future events.

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Bumping for the snekening

>>77423272
>As to how to write the mundane?
As to how to write an interesting story without resorting to adding in unusual or supernatural elements. Ever heard that old writing advice "if you're stuck, just have a bunch of ninjas burst into the room"? I've pretty much been doing things like that to patch up my stories. And for the untrained reader that works just fine, but that stuff only masks the skill issues, it doesn't solve them. So I'm looking for writers who don't add in magic/supernatural stuff and preferably also no unusual stuff either (how often have you run into an active gunfight when just walking down the street, or disrupted a drug trade in progress by takign a shortcut? Exactly.) I'm looking to get to the core of storytelling, if you get what I mean.

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nortubel

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Requesting a story based on the 12 Chinese Zodiacs, in which a man goes out to challenge various female versions of monster girl variations of the, and victory would mean sex or defeat means being forced to marry and stick with the victor. He wants to fuck them all before he chooses to settle down, so he put himself through this quest anyway.

The challenges each zodiac girl throws at him ranges from convoluted fetch quests, tags with time limits, duels, or even assistance in taking down bigger foes, but each victory against a zodiac girl introduces with it a kink related to said girl. Feel free to use whichever kinks you want, even the more out there ones. I'm more interested in seeing something made based on the zodiacs.

>Harem, adventure, sex, orgy, monster girls

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>>77432301
Unless you want whatever writer agrees to cut so many corners that they can't possibly do all 12 justice you're looking at a full novel's worth of writing. That's 12 chapters you're looking at at minimum and that's if you're fine with starting at the first interaction with the first zodiac beastgirl, skipping any introductory chapter. Not saying it can't be done, but that'd be a long-term commitment.

>>77433824
I guess I should be specific saying the author can pick any one of the 12 zodiac animals to write about, rather than requiring 12 chapters (one for each animal girl). I'll see to refining it next time I repost.

>>77427757
Not as a writer just in general. Feels like everything went wrong after Covid, have you seen what googles planning on doing with android?

>>77434783
It just feels like you can’t have anything nice anymore without doxxing yourself to the government either

>>77436228
I really should play cyber sleuth more.

Time stranger is out in the next two months, already decided to choose Gomamon

savin

>>77434783
Some people just couldn't handle being stuck indoors

>>77423272
I imagined Burya polov primarily as a romantic comedy about a Russian femboy and a girl he met while he was bullied by Valeria and her goons, but I thought I'd develop their relationship by adding all this nonsense (the tuna, the gummy dinos, and who knows what else I could've added) that they have to tackle either on their own or by joining forces, with the ultimate goal of them ending up as lovers. Frankly, that's because I was inspired by a manga I recently finished translating called Heroic Complex which has a similar (but not the same) premise and the lead characters are also an effeminate boy and a manly girl. It's a slice of life taking place in a Japanese town where monsters appear often and two heroes are tasked with keeping the peace, and those two heroes are the two lead characters I mentioned
After a night's sleep, I think I've made up my mind on Burya polov—I want to go with the magical route after all, but there's a lot more I had planned for these two
>>77407009
A story I wrote called "Another Day at a Moldovan Supermarket" is about a guy working in a grocery store (which is indeed mundane) alongside a coworker who's envious of him because the MC's pay is higher (but not as high as you think, it is Moldova after all, one of the poorest Yuropean countries). Really, all I did was take a mundane setting and added whatever drama you can think of (in my case, the envious coworker sets up a trap for the MC to fall into so he could lose his job). There's no right or wrong way to do it, in my opinion, just try it out and see how it goes :D

>>77440303
Hmm... that, at least, gets me closer to figuring out where the flaw in my writing is. Going to have to take a closer look at how I'm setting up the structure of my conflicts then. Thank you for your answer, it's very helpful.

>There's no right or wrong way to do it
In my experience there is, since response to my writing has been overwhelmingly positive from the untrained eye, and overwhelmingly negative from any trained eyes. But at least now I have a hint of where to look to fix that. And that's a bigger victory than it sounds.

>>77442723
How much STDs would this anon be packing?

>>77444309
All of them, kept in a very precarious balance with each other so none affect him. Cure one of them and he's probably dead though. And their transmission chance isn't 100% for any of them, so sex is Russian roulette with a different kind of "gun".

>>77444561
I could see a short story of an anon being kept in a science lab for study, except it starts escalating as to who is allowed to do research on him and not get fucked. Start with female scientists, male scientists, robots, nonhuman scientists, but they all end up getting addicted to his cocktail, even if it comes with those aillents

>>77445454
I had a similar idea. An alien being kept in a lab as a test subject, falls in love with one of the researchers, and start demanding to have dates with her as a condition to participate in tests.

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>>77447888
DO NOT REDEEM THE THREAD YOU BLOODY BITCH BASTARD!!! DO NOT REDEEEEM!!! I WON'T GET IT!! I WON'T GET THE DELIVERY!! NO NO NO NO NOOOOO((I)(#"¤%(&=&"

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>>77437581
I just hope the story/VN aspect is more interesting. The game was nice, but it feels like running the story was just a drag

>>77441734
Which game is this?

>>77449540
They better be careful or Nintendo might sue /s

Still thought that fiasco was dumb

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Requesting a short smut story of Skyla getting raped and gangbanged by 3 Latino men after losing her first triple battle experience. The men are insistent that Latinos and Latinas must 'stick together' and use it as an excuse to fuck her mercilessly after the loss to 'train' her for the next generation of Latino and Latina trainers.
Optional: Skyla doesn't know what a Latino or Latina is and keeps trying to figure out what they mean while she complains and struggles during the snuggle.
>recommended tags: rape, gangbang, oral, vaginal, loss of virginity, anal, covered in cum, clothes ripping, breast sucking, titjob, nipple pulling

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Requesting Hilda who, passing by a gas station, can't shake that one intrusive thought. One day she stops instead and goes up to a tire inflator, futilely arguing with herself, loses (to herself) and inserts the hose up her big butt. Filling herself with air grows on her (pun intended) after the initial discomfort, and she has to argue with herself to stop before the pleasure takes over her quickly distening midsection, orgasming solely from air pumped into her belly.

Writan tonight

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>>77399449
God, has it been that long?

>>77455571
Japanese colds in a nutshell

>>77455292
Whatcha writan?

What’s everyone doing tonight?

Here, I’m gonna catch the final episode of a show I was watching, then try out that new AceCraft mobile game that just came out (shoot’emup meets cuphead art design), Then possibly try to get to SRW

>>77455571
8 years since the boot. Where did the time go?

Okay, so I asked AI for ideas on the name of a set of conjoined twins- basically hitting a fancier numbers generator here. But I have three I was thinking of settling on-

-JingleJangle - Pro's: Works as a stage name, fits the clown theme well. Con's: Does it work well as a combined name? I don't expect them to do a lot of jingling and jangling.
-Mona-Lisa -Pro's: Works well as individual names, could be their real names the audience assume is a stage name. Con's: Not too many double meanings.
-Kit-Kat: Pro's: Could be a shortening of their real names (Kirsten and Katherine?), would have extra resonance with Cal heading to the Zoo soon after. Con's: Feels a bit undercooked.

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>>77460438
I like the Mona Lisa one personally

>>77457333
Probably reading books to prepare for my internship

>>77464478
At least you'll be well-read while fetching coffee.

>>77462788
https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/CCC-Character-Naming-Poll-1235059502

I ended up making a poll for it here.

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I wanna work on my stories but I'm at work. I did at least one paragraph before leaving, but not much else this week.

>>77469975
Barring an act of God, nothing will stop me from writing tonight.

>>77466252
To Mona a Lisa is to suffer, I guess. Oh well.

>>77469975
You did still managed to do something though even if it’s not much

So how many of you have tried to write or have written a genre that is meant to be for more than a quick wank?

>>77473231
>So how many of you have tried to write or have written a genre that is meant to be for more than a quick wank?
I have, but emphasis on "tried to". Not counting my constant plans to (and failures to actually) participate with the NaNoWriMo I've started (and promptly scrapped) several classic high fantasy stories. A lack of ambition and determination has so far stopped me from actually knuckling down and finishing anything, but that's been the story of my life, not just writing.

>>77474141
I've definitely been overly ambitious with my stories. But I've realized the main thing holding me back is a lack of theme ideas to tie the story together. A beginning and end gives you what happens in a story. Theme however us why anyone, including the author, should care.

>>77473231
I have not. I have considered it, but have not made the attempt. The sex part is what made me want to write in the first place.

>>77474219
Try hammering out a rough summary of where you want your story to go before you start writing properly. Just the rough story beats you're looking to hit. What also might help is figuring out the specific where and when not just of the start, but each of the major beats you're planning for your story to hit. If you weren't doing these things already, that is. The details should bubble up while you work stuff out. And don't be afraid to swerve if an emergent theme happens to pop up during writing. Your subconscious often knows best.

Upping

>>77458411
Boy do I feel old

>>77470590
So did you end up writing?
>>77476568
Well here's a rough example of what I'm talking about-

I have an idea for a sort of archaeological adventure story, where a character and his sister journey to find an undiscovered pyramid in a fictional land. Only in doing so they sort of reawaken its inhabitants, including an ultra-sexy chocolate brown pharoah demigoddess looking for a husband. With the twist that this ancient land was severely mischaracterized in history, being mostly filled with sexy amazons, rather than the death-cult they were remembered as.

I have a solid first act thought out, and a rough idea of journeying to other Pyramids, but nothing I can really think to go with the story, because I can't figure out what the story would be 'about' and thus what I'd want to explore or plot-threads to create.

>>77473874
gotta finish this

>>77479107
I can already see an accidental marriage happening in that setting. Would you lean in on that?

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>>77473231
I usually write what I consider to be quick wank stuff, a chapter or two and it's wrapped up neatly. But. But...

I'm about to finish a nine or so chapter story that started as smut, then got expanded so the smut had weight, then the smut was going to get added later... And nine chapters later I have 85 pages, no smut, and I still haven't posted it to ao3 yet because I want to finish it before I start posting chapters as I do the final editing pass on them. And I don't even know if I should cap it off with some epilogue smut at this point.

And worst of all, I'm already thinking up ideas for a sequel (thankfully with more smut). It's in a setting I haven't written for before, so I'm a little nervous to post it, because I get the feeling its something no one but myself is asking for.

>>77479107
>I have a solid first act thought out, and a rough idea of journeying to other Pyramids, but nothing I can really think to go with the story, because I can't figure out what the story would be 'about' and thus what I'd want to explore or plot-threads to create.
But you have a first act, and since you're stuck at where to go after, why not write the first act out and see if any themes emerge in the process? As long as you write that first act vivdly enough, you'll have enough loose ends by the end to do some retroactive foreshadowing. It's a lot more important to start than to have everything locked in in detail. That's why I said rough. In my experience you're the most creative while in the zone. Too much planning stops you from starting to write at all.

>>77481698
I'm now curious. Is this an original work?

>>77460438
Honestly Jingle Jangle feels more christmas themed than something for conjoined twins.

>>77367207
>Write Faggotry
Faggotry

Have you guys ever made exact birthdays for you're characters?

>>77488893
No. I have a general age range where I place the characters for my own reference, and just use that. Young Adult, Adult, Middle Aged, Elder, etc.

>>77488893
Not yet. Then again most of my characters have either been as old as the universe itself or close to it (angels, demons, and eldritch beings), or have been created in-universe from an amalgam of beings (sometimes as many as a whole football stadium's worth). And even if I did I'd probably roll for a date instead of putting their birthday on a significant one.

>>77480793
I was thinking that the Pharoah has been hunting for a husband (in her past life) and basically our hero picks up a cursed anti-magic weapon she and her cohorts would be unable to use, to defeat some sort of monster in the pyramid- and she takes this as a sort of divine sign that he's the one.
>>77482721
You mean write like JJ Abrams? No siree bob.
>>77485807
Someone else mentioned that. I was thinking a bit more like 'my spurs go jingle-jangle-jingle'. Which could factor in since the Zoo is meant to be run by two cowgirl lesbians. I was thinking maybe it's justified by they play the tamborine? (though I was also thinking that Leah tries to start a band, and they play the drums in that).

>>77490347
>You mean write like JJ Abrams? No siree bob.
*Shrug* don't know how he does it, all I know is that it works for me. But I suppose if your writing is purely technical and not muse-driven then its not going to work for you. And if that's the case I can't help you. The drawback of surrendering myself to the story that wants to be written, I suppose.

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>>77485610
>>Is this an original work?
No, although I do have one story in an original setting that I started writing for fun due to a dream I had and it has somehow become my most-viewed story (I'm assuming it has to do with the tags.)

The story I'm balls-deep in currently is written in 2nd Ed. Dungeons & Dragon's Planescape setting, in its titular City of Doors. I'm excited about it, both due to the setting and the fact that it's my first non-primarily-smut thing, but I don't think there's an audience for smut in a 20+ year old side-setting. So ultimately I get the feeling it's going to be a story I'll enjoy going back to read, but otherwise not well noticed compared to some other things I've done (comparatively speaking. When I say well-noticed I mean, like, at least 1000 hits).

>>77490347
Oh think that was me. Honestly not sure why I put it in two places. Also can’t find the vote on my DA feed even when I’m watching you. Not sure why that’s happening but I got there through the link there.

Is it ok if I I ask how the orc fic is going? Sorry if that was rude

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I'll think of more cookie fucking stories to cook with for ideas sooner or later. In the meantime, I did find someone to commission that Mozzarella cookie writing request. I'll share it here when it gets done. To the anon that had interest in writing it and no time/interest in doing so, you can stand down fully!

>>77498424
Thanks for notifying me. I didn't end up writing much for it so no great loss. What little I did write is just intro with no cookies so it could theoretically be reused someday.

>>77498480
>>77498424
Different anon but I gotta get back into CRK I hear they added a lot since 2022

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>>77499346
There is, a lot added, yes. More cute cookies. More lore, more tragedy. And not even people plowing the cookies a new dough hole.

>>77499373
Hear they even added a my cookie feature

>>77498424
I love the Cheese Kingdom cookies. That story was especially good.

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>>77499657
Yeah you can customize your own cookie, but the feature is kinda...ass? It seems like the feature is more for making look-a-like cookies than anything original, but in retrospect, it is a step in the right direction for self-insert cookie stories to make up for the kiddins. They had to start somewhere and I guess that feature is the most of somewhere.
>>77499899
I like the sea cookie stories myself. A lot of them are riddled with tragedies of the deep, especially of love lost. Always makes for an entertaining, albeit tragic story of what could-have-beens.

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>>77500365
does the my cookie have any sort of stories attached to it?

>>77499373
Personally Im glad they added the cute werewolf monster, and hes not even a cookie

>>77501842
The My Cookie plotline is mostly tied to the friendship story he/she has with the caretaker, Cream Ferret Cookie. It seems to generally take place on the default kingdom and the Cuckoo Town Square.
Although the origin is pretty interesting. They're technically a byproduct of Matcha Cookie's attempt at sabotaging Dark Enchantress's Cookie, who was making host bodies to siphon the soul jam of the beast cookies.

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>>77499373
>>77500365
I didn't know Cookie Run had lore.

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>>77502278
>Cream Ferret Cookie
Just found out her english VA is the same as the current one for Minnie Mouse

>Work all month to bring a short project to a close. 11k words all said and done.
>Nothing too crazy. Short story about a guy learning his gf is a futa and them working through his discomfort.
>Feel good about getting so much done even if the AO3 response is nothing but crickets.
>Check in my circle to see what everyone else is up to.
>Most popular guy in the group wrote 80k words in that time and pushed out an update minutes after I finished and posted my project.
>Get drowned out when I ask for feedback.
>Two days later I get my first scrap of feedback.
>"4/10 kinda gross."
>Take story down out of shame and delete local copy
>Kicking myself in the ass now for ripping up a month of work.
>Seriously debating sudoku

>>77505795
Don’t let them get to you, they were probably just trolling

>>77503936
Ah, each game tells almost a specific part of the world of Earth read and the cookies involved.
Ovenbreak is about the interpersonal and individual relationships the cookies have with each other, alongside sole creation theory of the dragon episode had anything to say.
Kingdom explores the aftermath of the Dark Flour War, which tore the original cities/kingdoms apart and led to the creation of many kingdoms, and delves into how the cookies cope with different values of loss and after their creation. Again from individual ones to mass ones.
Witch's Castle focuses attention on the Witches themselves. Seems like at some point, much like in real life, humans starting accusing and persecuting anyone they deemed to be witches, and the real ones went into exile or even transformed themselves into cookies to hide. It also revealed that not all witches are evil.
There's Tower of Adventure, but I know nothing about it since I didn't play it.

And of course, there's smaller, not so serious stories all in the betweens.

morning bump

>>77507177
Oh, and the previous writer hated everything involving the dragons and went out of his way to keep the game lore separate from each of the worlds for a good while. He was let go sometime this year, and now the new writer is trying to interlope everything together. It can go either really well or really messy.

>>77509483
First I’m hearing about this. What problem did the writer have with the dragons?

Also I hope Witch’s Castle gets spotlight. I know after Mt. St. Crème the budget got cut. I want to see more about the witches.

>>77510399
I guess he just didn't like them, and went out of his way to not conclude the dragon storyline for a very good while back in ovenbreak. It was only when he was gone that the current dragon cookie war was concluded with some questions answered and a lot more asked. It was also the first time the people saw relationship chart change as a result of the story. Lychee Dragon Cookie really hates Longan Dragon Cookie anymore after it.

>>77510445
How strange.

>>77505795
How did you tag it?

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>>77490772
>Dungeons & Dragon's Planescape
Eh, original enough

>>77513162
I've always wanted to read or write a story with a woman who never wears clothes. Just casually naked, and the other characters are just used to it.

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Requesting a story based on pic related where a wild, evil yokai like a Yuki onna gets bested, tamed, or mellowed down into a housewife. Maybe even all in one

>>77505795
Stop being jealous anon. Envy is a sin for a reason.

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Request a lewd one shot of Relic Hunter Shantae dungeoning into a cave for some treasure, only for the traps set up to have their way with her throughout the run, erotically. I can provide specifics if needed.

bump

>>77488915
Fuck the dolls

Bump

>>77490347
...will there also be a sphinx involved? If so, how furry? Centaur, or just full on cat with human face?

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Making progress on the Cursed Clussy Carnival, funnily enough the transition scenes aren't too hard to write, mostly me figuring what the characters are thinking and would discuss.

A potential hurdle- I want to layout the options for exploration for the poll-choice, one being the Zoo and the other being Jester junction. But I'm realizing the way to introduce Jester Junction as a plot point might weigh it a bit too heavily on that side, with nothing seemingly plot-relevant in the Zoo. Meaning I think I need to come up with some sort of hook to bring up for that arc as well.
>>77524470
I imagine a number of ancient egyptian creatures. But they'd be on the anthro-side with mostly human faces. Potentially with the power to shapeshift.

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Goodnight thread

>>77525452
I have this on my ipad, need to play it more, hear its actually really good

>>77528153
See ya later today thread

>>77526025
Aren’t you already giving a disclaimer on that you’re not ready to do Jester Junction? Wouldn’t that already sway votes?

>>77528153
Horse gambling is still meta after all these years apparently, and the gacha warrants a higher age requirement than even the more ecchi Gacha games

morning bump

i'm stuck writing the same two types of lewd stories
>robot girl gets fucked silly by horsemen
>sporty girls gets blackmailed by an asshole

>>77534280
Well mixing the two up could make for fun stories.
>In a misogynist world, sporty girls are forced to run races. Horsemen run after them as... "motivation". The betting pools on who gets fucked first are just as large as, if not larger than, the pool on who wins the race.
>Asshole hacker has managed to infect a robogirl with a virus (silly girl shouldn't have used public wifi). Now he's letting her do all sorts of humiliating things on threat of deleting all her files, one by one.

>>77529885
No- I have things to figure out with regards to both arcs, but I think I'm at a point where I can reasonably lead into either. What I'm saying is I don't want the choice to feel overly weighted. So at the moment I have it that we have a plot-thread leading to Jester Junction (prior characters literally leaving a note) which flags it as an area explore when it wasn't prior. Wheras with the Zoo it's just been Bowtilda suggesting it as an area where maybe one of the family members is. So I feel that weights it too heavily on one side.

There'd be no personal connection with the zoo, but maybe there's like some sort of event being advertised in the area? Not sure what might grab the audiences imagination.

>>77532913
Morning

>>77536057
Wait, your name is bump?

>>77536189
No just saying good morning

I now have also been thinking about something with a sports game for the cursed clussy carnival as an excuse for having girls in skimpy cheerleader outfits. But probably not until act 2.

>>77537030
Would someone willingly cheer Cal on in skimpy cheerleading outfits, or would you put him in one to cheer someone else on? Although if the latter, I won't know how transformed he would be to make it work.

>>77538218
Both are fun ideas. I think him cheering would be easier to write if theres a more physically capable character doing the activity, since hes not meant to be stronger than the average teen.

>>77534869
The rodeo? Or maybe the shootout? Honestly a wild west show might be cool?

>>77538390
I mean there’s a couple aren’t there. Like officer Juggz.

>>77538769
I was imaging the Zoo is attached to a wild-west town. And its run by two cowboy lesbians. But I wanted that to be a bit it a surprise. Plus, I dont imagine revealing it early has any sort of intrigue. I'm trying to think of something that might be advertised, and intrigue the audience. Part of the issue I think is I'm imagining the zoo arc to be somewhat self-contained.
>>77538806
Correct- though I'm imagining the conjoined twins who'll show up will be physically imposing as well.

I'm wondering if it should be something like football or basketball, or something more outlandish.

Safe

>>77367207
>Write Faggotry
OK
>Faggotry

>>77539694
Maybe some animal show then?

>>77541326
That should be something the audience already expects.

Maybe something to do with the freak show which I figure Cal will encounter along the way? There is a fortune teller there. Maybe something about the stability if the circus dimension, a plot point that was raised earlier? That could be a meta plot hook.

The question is what sort if advertisement hints at that that's both direct but doesn't give away too much.

Maybe something about skeletons disappearing? That's a plot point that might factor in later, and was addressed with the monster mashers not being able to party as a more metaphysical issue.

>>77399449
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/4203531/#4203531
Holy shit it's almost been a decade since the thread first started in /trash/ back in 2016. There's no way to really celebrate if that time comes, but hella nice.

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>>77430050
Domming the doms never gets old

>>77543742
None of these really interest me much. I don't know this path was already something I was picking since I want to put off the mystery arc as long as possible.

>>77547387
Really, cause I've gotten opposite feedback mostly that some people feel not focusing on the mystery feels like faffing about.

Now I wasn't thinking every arc would advance it, since I want them to feel different each time. But my worry is if I prevent a pre-existing plot-thread for one arc, and not something similar in the other, one will feel like filler compared to the other.

>>77548142
I meant more just the mystery the other path gave. The cousin arc. I don’t want to find the cousin.

I don’t mind that other mystery. Of course I wished it showed up more.

>>77543894
Dang, I still remember several major things in my life from that year

>>77367877
Mouchi is still working on that Last Origin fic of his.

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>>77367207
Happy September, /wfg/! A new chapter is here!
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Burya polov: Or, an effeminate Russian boy's story, Chapter Six
Link: https://rentry.org/burya-polov-ch6
Synopsis: Aside from an odd phenomenon that teleports anyone who sneezes (more on this later), Zhenya does not have to worry about a monster outbreak. But he DOES have to worry about a suspicious gymnastics club, in which he is enrolled against his will by... Valeria!?
>Tags: work-safe, SFW, lighthearted, surreal comedy, magic, superheroes, slice of life, effeminate male protagonist, tomboy protagonist
https://rentry.org/burya-polov-ch5 <- Previous chapter!

>>77554483
>https://rentry.org/burya-polov-ch6
>Oh, there’s not much to explain, BOY
>I’m not trying to hurt you, BOY
>Silly BOY!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pobwy_es2uc
Has she been reading the book of Kratos?

Question: I know you wanted Valeria to be an antagonist of some kind, but will she be comically antagonistic like that one guy from your previous work, who seemed so over the top about it and when he was bested, he disappeared never to be seen again, kind?

>He looked upon the girl again:
>he stopped stalling for time and got to brass tacks with his ruffian acquaintance:
>Zhenya swallowed his pride and calmly named this make-believe song:
So I noticed you've been using colons in the writing before the dialogue. The other previous times were fine, but this one stuck out to me in a bad way since there was no dialogue tag to go with it. I'd replace it with a period personally. Now that I think about it, this never showed up before in the previous chapters last I checked. Why now?

>I have no use for this phone!
While I usually lean towards show than tell, I think you can get away with tell in this regard to the panic in Valeria's face or tone. With so much she put Zhenya through, I think giving the audience a bit of victory to see or show panic gestures (moving eyes, reachy fingers, etc) can amplify the bit of victory he deserves.

I know you intend to publish this as a book. Independently correct? Swears should be fine? I did see the hesitation to say fag in there. Or just Zhenya's hesitation.

>he let Valeria go after setting her in front of the storage room entrance and lunged a straight punch to her face,
So I know this is a runon sentence, but I feel that this is an intentional run to show off a domino effect of things falling and crashing like one of those cartoon machine gimmicks of things leading to the next and next. I don't know if I like it or hate it, but I see what you did there. I don't know if this should be left as is or changed.

>>77554483
Also, no charges were filed. That ass whooping was enough. An amusing chapter that shows that indeed, there was a life before the story began

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>>77555086
>Has she been reading the book of Kratos?
Wouldn't bet on it, she doesn't strike me as a geek personally
>Question
This might count as a spoiler, but I'll try to keep it light. Valeria is actually a really cute girl looks-wise, and it would be a real shame if she didn't redeem herself in some way by the end of the story. So no, unlike... [looks up antagonist of Moldovan Supermarket] ...Ivan, she won't be just a gust of wind, I will make sure she has a resolution that fits her :)
>Why now?
No clue, it just kind of... happened while writing? But I'll fix the punctuation shortly
>I think you can get away with tell in this regard to the panic in Valeria's face or tone
Yeah, I also think more can be done about her reaction to mixing up the two phones. I'll look further into it
>I know you intend to publish this as a book. Independently correct?
Yep! I might use Lulu again, but there could be other services as well. Having an ISBN like with my previously published work (which I don't think anyone bought because I didn't advertise or hype it up at all, btw can you find it in picrel?) would be nice
>I did see the hesitation to say fag in there
Good that you noticed, Zhenya is too pure to utter the word "faggot", even as a joke. I don't know if slurs can fly in today's day and age...
>I see what you did there. I don't know if this should be left as is or changed.
It most likely will be changed, but I want the spirit of this scene, which is meant to demonstrate Dina's strength and sacrifice (in a way that'll be apparent in the next chapter), to remain all the same. I'm open to suggestions!
>>77556010
>no charges were filed. That ass whooping was enough
Indeed, ass-whooping is Dina's love language ;P

Apologies for this wall of text, and thank you so much for your continued support! :D

Writing and editing. Labor day is wonderful.

>>77556199
>I don't know if slurs can fly in today's day and age...
I think it's fine as long as there is a reason for it to be there. I'm not one to rule out the use of slurs in art or literature. I'd imagine most people who can understand why a writer would choose to use a slur in writing wouldn't call you out on it. Some people will probably be uncomfortable with it, but they can either try to understand your use of the word, or get over it. If you're unlucky you'll attract the attention of the kind of person who thinks under no circumstances should a slur be used, and will language police you on it. They are easily ignored.

>>77557525
Trvke, anon
Besides, if politicians can use slurs during pre-election speeches (I know one who literally called an opposition party, PDP, "Peder do pedera", meaning "Faggot by Faggot"), then why not use it in written form, sparingly of course?

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>>77556199
>>77557525
>>77558708
I'm thinking more about the publisher (if you go for one and not self publish) intervening and saying 'you can't use this word because we say so, think of the children!' rather than the moral grandstanding to use or not use harsh language that may or may not have aged well.

>>77558846
My only experience with publishing is clicking the "publish work" button on Ao3. Jokes aside, I really don't know. I'd imagine some publishers would be willing to hear you out if you want to explain why you feel the use of the word is necessary to the story, and others would say "no we don't want to take any heat for it."

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>>77558846
I like editorial mandates being both a pro and a con.