CYOA Refugee Thread - A thread for posting any and all CYOAs unpostable in /tg/'s /cyoag/ (and occasionally ones that aren't).>Previous thread:https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/77537461>Alternative link:https://archived.moe/trash/thread/77537461>Other threads:>>>/tg/cyoa>/cyoag/'s CYOA archives and related resources:https://rentry.co/cyoagIncludes - but is not limited to - a F.A.Q. section and the personal archives of a number of authors.https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3An extensive Allsync archive that has both SFW and NSFW CYOAs.https://infaera.neocities.org/Interactives list. If you're looking for a specific CYOA, it's suggested that you check those first.
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>>77617924Today, Path of Exile.Tomorrow, Silksong.
>>77617581>>Playful like it's summer vacation all the time. Goofing off with you is her favorite thing to do. Doesn't realize that she constantly pushes her boobs against you.>>Somehow both a blushing maiden and slightly competitive in bed. Curious to try all sorts of things together with you.>>Likes to banter.ngl shes basically a tomboy in my eyeswould play some video games until the sun rises up/100final (or at least until someone else decides to raid katuu's gallery) katuu mon
>>77616197Could you choose to be the Princess's bitch if you so desired?
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>>77617924In between translation assignments. Brainstorming WFRP characters that I'll never get to play.
>>77618544When I first read this I thought you said transition assignments. Fuck this thread for doing that to me.
>>77618544>In between translation assignmentsTechnical docs? Or something fun?
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>>77618994Do we have a good nudist cyoa? I want to quote Flanders ("Like I'm wearing nothing at all. Nothing at all.")
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>>77617924just caught up to alien earth, wondering how many people are actually turned on by xenomorphs
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>>77619320>wondering how many people are actually turned on by xenomorphsWell, apparently enough for Rule 34 to kick in.
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I feel liking posting one of our longer cyoas tomorrow. Any requests? Love Azathoth? Divine Trial? Harahel? Pantheon of Pleasure?
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>>77619658Why did you use the word "our"?Why do you want to post 20+ images in a row when an imgchest links work just fine?Why would I need you to post something tomorrow when I could google its name today?Basically, what are you talking about? Is this some weird roundabout way you're trying to generate discussion?
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>>77620679Oh yeah I remember this one. I initially wanted to make a build but found it too esoteric to really be arousing and dropped it. Which is a shame because I did finish a Pantheon of Pleasure build.
>>77618238>No. 428 Lopunny>Lv. 74>Cute Charm>Baby-Doll Eyes, Flatter, Draining Kiss, Bounce>Complete bimbo.>Considers herself your personal slut. Not interested in battling at all. Pouts cutely if make her fight.>Spends most of her time shamelessly flirting with you. Always ready to go, even in public.>Rockin' bod.
Is archive anon around?
>>77617924Working on and off on OC between other projects.
>>77619117We had a goddess of exhibitionism one. Don't think that was the actual name, though.
>>77621083>Is archive anon around?AllsyncAnon comes and goes. If you've got a question or concern, it's usually better to go ahead and post it. At least that way he'll see it, sooner or later.
>>77621393Oh hey, it is called the Goddess of Exhibitionism, good on me. Too bad it was uploaded to Imgur.
Well the thread is dead so I might aswell breath some life into it.Introducing the DBZ cyoa. I finally got around to finishing the damn thing.
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>>77622232Now I know what you're thinking."Anon this is /trash/, where is the lewd part?"Don't worry it's there. I've structured this in such a way that you can stop here and have a nice little family friendly cyoa to share with friends. Our part is the next page.
>>77622258and now the final page with all the fun stuff.
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>>77619117>>77621393>>77622124Luckily for you that was around the time I saved everything regardless of interest or quality. Here you go.
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>>77621029>>Considers herself your personal slut. Not interested in battling at all. Pouts cutely if make her fight.>>Spends most of her time shamelessly flirting with you. Always ready to go, even in public.a pacifist who loves to fuck?i wouldnt be surprised if every other thought she has is her being in your pants lmaosmash.that'll do it, thanks for your help anonand sorry if the dlc looks hella shitty, its my first time ever doing this
>>77617924I'm afraid that Director is going to fuck up Ryoshu's Canto.
>>77622179Bio-Android say you can get abilities or techniques from any races, since not tech are exclusive to a race did you meant transformation ?Also Kaioken say "flaws will be detailed later" but they are right before.
>>77617924Page 1 done. Page 2 done. Every ability combo on Page 3, and in the CYOA as a whole, illustrated. Just a boon pic for dual wielding, a neg pic for rival daughters, and a neg pic for Red Mother taking custody of the kids left to go. Am very close.>>77622535Good job
>>77617924My job is no longer on busy summer mode so I'm doing great. Getting rest, doing work that barely exceeds a 9-5 schedule, playing video games, and working on my CYOA. I haven't even been grinding on it super hard and still I'm making good progress
I made a cyoa. I tried to make it pretty. If someone makes a build or gives me an advice, I'll give them a liver or two. https://www.imgchest.com/p/92493l9xv4n
>>77619117Really unfortunate that the best "be a dragon" CYOA is tokshit
>>77623523I choose:Heavenly Harvest & Measured Love (so that there can be a bunch of non humans to give a more twisted kind of love to),Cycle of Entertainment (I like playing fun stuff and I make fun stuff, win win) Magical Defender & True Love (I'll kick some ass in the name of love)
>>77619658Eronomicon 2024 edition please.
>>77619658>Love Azathoth>Pantheon of pleasurenever heard of these twoDivine trial is a lot of funHarahel feels like its missing something
>>77623523That must be the cyoa with all lolis I've heard about, huh. NiceHoly Mother. I'd take Holy father too but that one seems limited to only work on children? I assume the intention is to have it work on everyone and solve world hunger just like Mother but the description is a little hazy. Also, what happens if Heavenly Harvest food does spoil?Cycle of Entertainment. Seems like a solid idea. Wanderers seems a little underpowered in comparison though. Maybe sell the adventure aspect more? Make the world larger or everchanging? Give power to tightly knit groups?Divine Dating sounds good. That and Destined Love seem to be outright better than Measured Love though.Ascendance and Elements. How long does Ascendance last?Right away I can tell you that Magical Defender needs some editing or a rewrite. The entire option should be clearer and a little shorter. Don't repeat that "do as much damage as a concentrated nuke" stuff, that was already established once. And besides, I don't think a God would compare divine magic power to a nuclear bomb, something that's incredibly and indiscriminately deadly. Kind of a sinful invention, no? A little OP overall, too.
>>77623523>Holy body (Feet)Because i am a footfag>Wandererssounds fun>Free loveIt's easy and straightforward>Magical defender of loveBecause i love magical girls>True loveBurning lies away brings me joy
>>77623523It’s a very fun read, nice design. A bit too short for my personal taste, and so wide and open that I don’t feel like making a build makes a difference – there just aren’t many moving parts to play with here. I guess I’d go Harvest-Entertainment-Free Love-MDoL+True Love, but that alone doesn’t quite paint the picture of a world or story in my head.
>>77622179I'll get around to reading through this later, but I think it's funny that human isn't a pickable race. Like yes, I know they're shitters and Androids are humans+ (actual plot relevance) but it's still funny.
>>77626417Human is an option, but staying Human and getting powers isn't.
>>77623523>totfuckerwhat an insane username lol never stop being you, you crazy bastard>Sustenance: Holy Mother/Holy Father>Stability: Love's Messengers>Love: Destined Love>Miracles: Ascendance & True LoveDestined Love is too cute. I don't like free love stuff, I like commitment. Twins with entwined destinies just makes it even better. Only destined partners will share holy milk.Love's Messengers seems fun. Destined partners going out across the universe to preach the greatness of love is great. With Ascendance and True Love I'll be able ready to go to the most dangerous worlds and destroy false love.
>>77622228>25% of the CYOA is different Saiyan transformationsI was going to suggest maybe truncating them, but then I realised how heretical a statement that'd be in a DBZ CYOA
>>77622179>RaceBio-android (Saiyan, Android, Kaioshin)>Modifiers&AbilitiesNanotech,Divine Ki(Whis), Copycat, Fastest in the Universe, Durability, Energy Drain, Fluid Body, Absorption>TechniquesNone.>MasterWhis>TransformationsOozaru, Super Saiyan, Ultra Instinct[Sign]Max potential and stamina with the race, the transformation were chosen mostly to unlock the paths toward full UI and ssj4 or something like it.Telekinesis, Instant Transmission, some offensive techniques and/or more transformation would be nice to have but having more way to grow stronger should be worth it (Copycat, Energy Drain, Absorption). I don't have points left and I'm not willing to take any of the curses, so I got nothing from the last page.
>>77618912This one's cute and well made. Only missing a horse pet
>>77623013Aye, I caught those shortly after posting it when I read through it again. The kaioken is from an earlier draft where the flaws came after the transformations, but I found it more intuitive to put them first. Bio-android is the same, since that earlier draft had alot more race specific stuff. But I realized making so many was pidgeon holing builds too much so I made it more open. There's also a fuckup on the evil containment wave. Still has the description on Babadi's barrier magic before I added it in. I'll fix em up later.Let me know if the amount of points seems like a good balance. I haven't finished a cyoa before so when it comes to balancing I'm just sort winging it.
>>77622267>Alien>Telekinesis, Energy Drain, Durability>Dodon Ray, Instant Transmission, Solar Flare>Fire Manipulation, Thundershock Surprise, Evil Containment Wave>Time Stop & Final FlashMastery & Super Form (Requires massive initial ki startup over what I have normally, attainable only through energy drain, or enough offspring giving me their energy at once) 30>>7762226712Double Z's, Z Sword, Broodmother, 100% Power, Divine Water of Life, Ovipositor Jeet Cum DoWeighted Training ClothesBroodmother makes mini-mes, Ovipositor makes hybrids with the target. All of my young can donate their power to me, and the Ovipositor ones can give me very short term access to the abilities of the one they hatched from by doing this. My young themselves have Ovipositor and broodmother, but their offspring can't give me power, and are even weaker.Also the mini-mes have chibi and shortstack, no, I will not be paying for it.
>>77627680Point balance seems fine, if leaning a bit generous, for the amount of options. Though, maybe you're starved if you're a saiyan actually buying all the transformations?
>>77628015Train and git gud instead of buying them all up front.
>>77628354YeahLike, I get it, and the explicit mention of acquiring techniques by training is cool. Like I said, I think the balance is pretty good, that's just the one place I see strain on buying things. And if that's intentional, then it's good.
>>77628455That wasn't me but yes, I balanced the points with the saiyans specifically in mind. I figured that having more points to work would be a good way to give the rest of the non-saiyan options more toys since saiyans get their 500 transformations. I wanted to make it so that if you did pick saiyan you'd have to pick between having alot of techniques and having alot of transformations. If you want all the crazy god stuff you need to devote alot of your points to it, or you can go for a more down to earth build with just a few and loads more techniques and abilities.
>>77622713thank you for putting new life into old cyoa's
>>77627680The points are enough to really focus or to spread around some to get a great foundation.>>77628015It's 34 points for Divine Ki + all the Saiyan's transformations if you pick Saiyan.And ssj4 + saiyan god is 25 as a Saiyan, 14 for just ssj4.
>>77622197Chibi giant for a giant loli hmmm...
>>77622207>Evil containment wave is a barrierWait a minute. That's not what the mafuba does!
>>77622179>RACE: cold clanmy favorite db race>MODS: destruction ki (from whis), destruction kivery high power ceiling ad also very hard to get normally>ABILITIES: copycat, fastest in the universe, durability, energy draincopying other's abilities would let me save a lot as I don't really need to buy them>TECHNIQUES: death beam, clothes beamFrieza and his family are exhibitionists and do not represent the cold clan as a whole, most of us actually wear normal clothes>MASTER: whis>TRANSFORMATION: mutation x3 (all balanced), black forma bit of a waste I couldn't buy ultra instinct but I'm guessing I still have a chance of getting it naturally through whis's training>NEGA OPTIONS: double Z, mommy dearest, stepdadI find it pretty funny that somehow your mom having sex is a drawback, like "oh no! my mom cucked me by having sex with my dad!"Pretty fun cyoa, thanks for the OC anon.the only things I could complain about is the cyoa being mostly catering to saiyans (which is fair, the whole show is like that but some original transformations/abilities for the other races would be a nice surprise), and oozaru forms being very expensive for something that you permanently lose if you lose your tail
>>77629578>MODS: destruction ki (from whis)I meant divine ki
>>77629578Oozaru is really expansive but I think it's because saiyan got it for free, you want it without being a saiyan you gotta pay the entry fee to becoming monkey and the golden one pretty much skip ssj2&3 and open the way for ssj4.I think with Cyborg and Nanotech you should be able to regen the tail.
>>77630129Anything that could restore limbs in general should be able to restore tail. And well if all else fails there is always the dragon balls.
>>77622179What's the difference between this and all the other Dragonball CYOAs?
>>77624443>Heavenly HarvestI'll write it next update>WanderersI wrote something about ancient civilizations, but that seemed out of theme with the idea of earth during adam and eve, so i gave up on that. I'll see if I can think of something else,>AscendenceI was wondering if the duration is the type of thing, I should leave to the reader to decide, so my descriptions don't become too verbose. If i write it down I guess at least an hour to six depending on the intensity.>Magical Defender:dddddd. I'll need help from god to shorten this.I don't know with what to substitute nukes, but in the first place if the nukes are used to defeat the invaders they are justice and holy. Also this shows just how strong those enemies are compared to modern weponry.
>>77623684don't bully the angels!!!
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>>77626026There isn't really a story it was meant to be fap and dump. Though, the world is in the same universe as my other cyoa, so for example The Greater Blessing of Love you'll only know what it really is, if you read The Island. The place where god is going is Olympus which is a reference to a future cyoa, I am planning and one of the invaders I had in mind is the mad god, who is also introduced in a wip. Though it's really bad luck if you get such an invasions, so it's not really a sure thing if you'll ever need to fight.
>>77631302ignore me, I am really desperate to say something to people, who were nice enough to make a build.
>>77631352no no i mean the image what is supposed to be? Is her urethra blocked or something?
>>77627003>>77625105here's a liver for you too. thank you thank you
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>>77631393nah her heart is just beating ドキドキ (Doki Doki), in fear of being caught. The retard probably has some kind of intestine fetish, though I do agree seeing her urethra? is kind of hot.
>>77631488Oh i am a dumbass i thought the heart was something else because that one bit looks like a clit
>>77630771it exists
>>77623523Heavenly Harvest, Wanderers, Free Love, Ascendance, and True Love.Seems a bit off that there's only one option for "stability" that isn't "do money again but with someone else on top". The others feel a bit limited too.
>>77629178you could take the giant form for an even gianter loli
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikK0Td0bb5k&ab_channel=SaiusGamesnorland lets play from ashes to glory
>>77622713Thanks for putting it all together.
>>77631322>The IslandPost it please
>>77631488>intestine fetishI mean, he did promise a liver for everyone who made a build. If you ask me I'd rather take an entire loli instead just her liver though, if that's an option.
>>77632935You have to earn the rest of the body parts by playing more CYOAs. One organ per CYOA that has a loli in it.
>>77633045Well what are you waiting for then, post more.Actually, does anyone remember a loli CYOA that had two point types that you had to exhaust by picking loli waifus for your personal heaven?It had a white background, I think.
>>77633393The one with cute points and funny points? made by apotheosis i think
>>77623523>Love Nutrition>God's Cradle>Free Love>Ascendance, Magical Defender of Love
>>77628671>>77632537no probs anons>>77622713also heres the og katuu in-case you want to change your teams lineup
>>77632638Here https://imgchest.com/p/92493ler84n Just looking at it makes me want to rewrite it.
>>77633966just looking at it makes me want you to rewrite it too
Remember, you will never be a girl :)
Nor will you ever have a girl :)
Remember, you will never be a saiyan :)
Nor will you ever have an android gf :)
Remember, I'm in your walls :)
Remember the mansus has no walls.
>Remember, you will never be a girl :)>Nor will you ever have a girl :)>Remember, you will never be a saiyan :)>Nor will you ever have an android gf :)>Remember, I'm in your walls :)>Remember the mansus has no walls.
>>77622214Just want to make sure I understand the accounting correctly for transformations:If I take the Kaioken transformation, it costs -2. But it comes with the Backlash flaw, which is +1. So the net is -1. And then, if decide to take the Mastery modifier for it, that costs -1. But Mastery says to remove all flaws, so I forget about the +1 I got from Backlash. So the net is -3.Is that correct?
>>77630771There's less Sailor Moon in it.
>>77637473The flaws that come with forms don't give you points, those are just the natural downsides of the form. You get the additional point if you add a flaw to an otherwise unflawed form.
>>77637901Ok, thanks.>>77622219It says that majins can exceed the power of their pure form through absorption and then talks about fully assimilating absorbed individuals. So is the "exceeding" in an absolute sense or is it just generally telling you that absorption could potentially make you stronger than this transformation does at base? Like are you telling me if I get strong enough going into pure majin form actually makes me weaker?
>>77638214It's just saying that absorption could potentially be stronger if you absorb someone strong enough(Like Buuhan for instance). If you completely assimilate someone then that would become your base strength and pure majin's power would increase relative to that new base.
>>77624097>>Love Azathoth>>Pantheon of pleasure>never heard of these twoPantheon of Pleasure is a dark fantasy, high concept isekai cyoa by Sylen. But since we've already got one of his cyoas in the thread, I think I'll do Love Azathoth. (I'll post Pantheon next thread.)
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>>77623523damn that is some weird shit; good job Anon!Wish the images weren't *all* Loli, but you do you i suppose.>Holy MotherThat is what those are there for.Men also have nipples though, so they should be able to provide.But, Without a proper boob, they only provide a few drops each day.Plenty to ward off starvation, but not full meal.>Cycle of EntertainmentThis whole section is kind of weird.If we have Angelic labor making scarcity obsolete, why are our only options Primitive and three forms of perfected capitalism?Why cant we pick Star-Trek style perfected communism?If we want perfected capitalism, then why are we limited to picking only one of three drives, instead of paying out for any contribution society values?Only the Wanderers option makes total sense, and i dont want to pick that.for a fourth option, maybe Perfected Totalitarianism, where the goddess provides a platonically ideal philosopher-king to rule over all with true justice and wisdom and never become corrupted by power?>Love's JourneyI wish i could take Destined Love, but it is important to avoid people stagnating in static ruts, and that it the ruttiest of all. (pun intended)Could be nice if there were a way to get extra pics to combine, like an oaths section where you promise the goddess to uphold certain additional duties.>Ture LoveThis one seems Indispensable, as it protects from threats the others cannot easilt deal with.>Elements of Lovemore versatile than Magical girl, which i like.Flesh - Love as a Desire that fills your mind and consumes you; The wanting to touch and feel.Crystal - Love as a Purpose that clarifies your mind; The certainty that nothing is more important than the one you love.Metal - Love as an Anchor that defines and supports you; The Comfort of knowing they will be there for you.Slime - Love as a Way of Being which reaches out to all; The will to love all around you.Could i get a kidney instead of a liver?
>>77639611Are we working with limited threads or something? Why are you whining?Stop acting like a monkey.
>>77640002Love Azathoth is the most monogamy encouraged harem CYOA I've ever seen. It's like "Oh yeah all these other eldritch entities would be willing to sleep with you but they're all in a relationship already so you'd be in some polycule mess." So it's like no thank you, I'll just stick with just my monogamous marriage/fusion with my eternally loving Azathoth instead.
>>77640464But she's boring.
>>77640564I like her. If you don't feel free to bang others on the side, just know that they won't ever love you like Azathoth does. 'Cause they're sharing their love with someone else.
>>77640597It's not just the other major eldritch entities, there's also the concubines. They won't be sharing their love with anyone else.
>>77640882Fair enough, you can at least take Head Wife and only have her and your concubines though.
>>77640999Yeah, that's what I did. It's because on the first page Azathoth is visually represented by the most generic anime girl I've ever seen. My judgement of her as boring stems entirely from that first impression and I just can't shake it.
>>77641188That's kinda sad when Nyarlathotep notes that she went with that after agonizing for ages over what kind of appearance you'd like best. To have her destined and only loved one for all of time call her 'boring' because of a poor choice of initial form is tragic.
>>77641215She's an eldritch god for goodness sake. Couldn't she have chosen a form with a little more going on? Something that entices you with a little bit of sexy danger? She really went with "anime girl sitting on school desk"? It really exemplifies how much of a spineless doormat she is.
>>77641277She thought about it, literally shows you a picture of that idea on her page.
>>77641286That one was bad too. Trying way too hard.
>>77641315Man Azathoth sure picked an unpleasable husband.
>>77641322That's her fault too. Should've chosen better. You are literally the god of the entire universe and it was me that you picked? Skill issue.
>>77632069ぎく I was thinking the same thing while writing them. It's too late to change them, but know that one of the reasons I ignored my common sense is because the token based options really helps with the agenda of god.Messenger is obvious why, Entertainment raises artists, Cradle makes geniuses to be used and Wanderers helps people learn survivability and perception.
>>77641215>>77641277You do realize that Nyarlathotep is a sadistic psychopath of a god, and whatever decision you make, she's going to use as an excuse to justify a fresh campaign of cosmic terror, right?
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>>77641495You do realize your step-daughter does that specifically so you'll spank her, right?
>>77622179>RaceMajin>AbilitiesFastest in the Universe (-2)Transfiguration Beam (-2)Giant Growth (-2) Again (-2) Again (-2) Again (-2)Durability (-2)Telekinesis (-1)Absorption (-3)>TechniquesClothes Beam (-1)>MasterHercule (-1)>TransformationsPure Majin (-5) Mastery (-1)>"Unique" GiftsDouble Z's (-1)Z-Sword (-1)Absorption+ (-1)Capsule Cunt (-2)Jeet Coom Do (-2)Super Divine Water (-2)Ovipositor (-3)100% Power (-2)I don't know much about Dragon Ball but that was fun. Time to eat and fuck and grow stronger. I've got multiple ways of eating and fucking to keep things fresh.
Does anyone have that cyoa where you are a sidekick to an anime girl in a fantasy setting?
>>77641681Do you remember anything else about it?
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>>77640141>loliI try to put some older girls as companions typically, for example in PSY:ESCAPEE and A.D.C>godkingThere really was such an option, but i dunno if that really sounds as fun as creating art for a living. One of the main themes is comfy after all.>destined loveyou are there for one hundread years, enjoy it to the fullest. If i ever feel like expanding the cyoa I'll add oaths and more power maybe. You can combine without them though. God did say you are making the world together, if you ask he'll probably do it. If you add some excuse with love in it, he'll agree faster than a housewife stomps on fallen people during black friday.>kidneyof course, what are a few more of my vital organs gone.
>>77633442I'm sure you'll raise them to be good cyoa creators, that may or may not spend their free time on a chinese wrestling forum.
>>77641495>Feminine>Petite>Handful>Peachy>Svelte>Eye ColorGreen>Hair ColorBlack>Skin ColorLight>Introverted, Modest, Sharp, Meek, Frigid, Innocent, Delicate, Aloof>Since her first crush>Gold Star>Open Secret>Girlfriend>Her partner's kink>Hyperfertile, Erotic Daydreams
>>77641763>I don't think you could be a human. I think your options were to be an animal companion or a sentient weapon.That doesn't really ring a bell, but I'll keep an eye out for it.
>>77641681how long was it? do you remember the color of the background?
I did all the pics, they are done. Now to actually write the CYOA.
>>77642306Good luck!
>>77642306Nice. Excited for daughter army.
>>77622267The lewd page should give you some starting nega points. Otherwise you have to spend a huge portion of your points on the lewd stuff, which gimps your character a lot. It feels like you're being punished for being horny, which is no good - as you say, we are on /trash/. As is, it feels more like a /tg/ cyoa with a quickly slapped on lewd dlc page.
>>77642306Very nice, anon
>>77641726But I don't want to be a yuri. I want to fuck them properly.
>>77643507Best I can do
>>77643507Take "As You Were" and get good at stalking and subduing.
>>77643524Everyone knows lesbian sex isn't real sex. It's just, like, foreplay.
>>77641495>whole first page of boring bullshit choicesIf I am already promised my dream girl, I shouldn't have to choose such traits. I already know what I like. Especially since it may not be among choices.Shows the author lacked creativity and settled for a dull character creator.
>>77643637I'd play your four.
>>77643808What choices are missing?
>>77643031I read it as 'get a nega point for every dragon ball point you spent, get curse points for every nega point you haven't spent'. So the more power you get, the more lewd you gotta be. Can't say read the rest of the CYOA, though, so maybe there's another way to get dragon ball points.
>>77641681This one?
>>77623523Interesting concept, but scary. So many of these options would create humanity devoid of much of its good traits, as they all would become stunted, vulnerable, thoughtless children - innocent but mentally and emotionally simple and unable to create much.Sad as it is, it is adaptation to changing and imperfect environment, ambition and lack that forces one to develop, appreciate, value and grow. People seek and desire things because those things offer them something more beyond baseline - make them new baseline and no one will give a crap or that baseline will become a new bother, like eating a chocolate cause you like it from time to time and being forced to eat a bar of it every day - soon you'd start to detest it or at best lose appreciation for it.Even fiction requires strife, pursuit, ambition to be the centerpiece of a plot, something to motivate characters and push them forward, even if it's the most wholesome pursuit in the cutest, most comfortable story built around the idea of paradise after one experienced it (which may be why you found your idea appealing) - if every need is guaranteed to be satisfied, there's no need to want for anything, one just is. Which may be blissful but won't be a humanity anymore, just something alien.Cute lolis though. I approve.
>>77643889People come in more shapes and those four archetypes hardly cover even a big part of range of characters. Hell, even stuff like femininity can be expressed in so many ways that this description does it no justice.But that's all beside the point. The point is that in general, the choices are boring details one cobbles together to make a crude approximation of a dream partner they already imagined. I'd rather have it done like most better waifu builders CYOA do - less choosing of a shape of body parts, and more of lewd tendencies, adventures, circumstances and opportunities that'd stimulate the imagination. The moment CYOA becomes just "have an attractive girl" you can dumb it down to that single choice if there's nothing making her stand out the reader has to work with - be it her own quirks or in boundaries of bigger setting and adventure.
>>77643031Very much this. If I want lewds, even as a waifu builder this CYOA is meh since I don't care about special attacks etc of someone I want to fuck. And if I don't want lewds then that whole section is pointless, beside maybe a couple of interesting choices. Having a roster of sexy enemies, powers and porn logic adventures where broken, obedient women are the most common part of your reward would be much more interesting.
>>77645132Fat people don't deserve rights.
>>77645025I think there would still be rough things in one's life, it's just that loneliness won't be one of them.For example in the entertainment world, you'll be fighting for popularity, maybe you'll have to go to school for artists and whatnot.
>>77644561>I read it as 'get a nega point for every dragon ball point you spent, get curse points for every nega point you haven't spent'.Then you read it wrong.
>>77645025I don't see what you mean. All of the Stability options give people goals to pursue or places to explore, and so grow. What options are you specifically referring to when you say "they all would become stunted, vulnerable, thoughtless children"?
>>77641726I like this Cyoa and will make a build for it
>>77643507The 'Magical ''Girl'' option lets you be a futa.>>77649969Very based.
>>77649436All those options concentrate on taking away strife for the sake of naive vision of happy, cooperative reality, some without needs and people being taken care of by angelic beings, up to and including basic maintenance and utilities.That requires dramatic alteration of human nature into something simpler, more innocent but alien, forceful control and twisting of that nature or opens people for a whole new form of exploitation and abuse if none of the above is applied.
>>77647529Doesn't matter and there's plenty not covered beside fat. And again, that is still ignoring the point of those choices being dull.
>>77651850>that is still ignoring the point of those choices being dull.This is just the eye color option argument from last thread all over again.
>>77651801>That requires dramatic alteration of human nature into something simplerNowhere does it say they alter human nature. That's something you've made up. They take away strife by giving everyone a universal basic income and punishing murder. I don't see how that takes away any part of human nature. If a government in real life implemented a universal basic income would that delete human nature from its citizens? There's no authoritarian government implementing some mass mind control or anything. Humans will continue being humans, it's just their circumstances that would change. Human societies have gone through drastic changes many times throughout human history already.
>>77652061He might be going with the cope that goes along the lines of>if existing stops being a privilege and becomes a right humanity will be doomed to die so that's why things are fine as they are!Granted it's a bit strawmanny but you get the idea
>>77639527if you get a second spawnling do you get full SP points to design them or do both take points from the same shared pool?
>>77633719Remember sharing this in a discord I’m a part of and we talked about it.people liked it and we had some good discussion. Some of the stuff said about it.–The bottom half of the harem route "penalties" are all just more perks>become a girl (... if I wasn't one already? but even then, Rule 63 is a thing for a reason)>become dummy thicc (ideal figure?)>become unable to wear clothes that aren't lewd (fashion sense +10?)>become unable to win a battle without using a sex toy on yourself (might as well)>get dominated and force-femmed by your Pokemon (... was I not already?)Also I don't think Technician is the best passive for Roserade's movesetI agree the drawbacks are unbalanced. Any drawback that is a boon depending on taste either shouldn't exist or should have some further caveat. I also think no items and no poke-centers should be separate entries.It depends on if you want to play for the sexiness or if you want to play for the meta, I think.Speaking of meta, I think there could be more Poke waifus to choose from.or [redacted’s ]beloved Ceruledge and Armarouge>Jynx>Medicham>Lopunny>Lucario>Mismagius>Zoroark (+ Hisuian)>Gothitelle>Delphox>Goodra (maybe)>Primarina>Salazzle againhell I could probably throw Pheromosa in, she's awfully humanoid for a cockroach–Someone objected to the Meloetta entry being creepy so an edit was madehttps://files.catbox.moe/z2nlbu.jpgWe rewrote Meloetta's description. She's still Level 1, but the description goes with the canon-compliant caveat that most Pokemon are hatched as adults.I want moar optionsI'm tickled that a lot of the harem "drawbacks" are more perks. Rule 63 kink, assuming I'm not a female to begin with? Dummy thicc figure? An actual functioning (albeit lewd) fashion sense? And the starting premise of "your Pokemon won't let you have any other love life besides them, or catch more Pokemon" is already a soft-dom situation, so being actually dominated changes very little.
>>77653526—bonus buildsMawile, Absol, Froslass, Tsareena and Cinderace. I will do the right thing and work on Froslass’s confidence issue don’t worry. I’m gonna do my best to do right by my Pokemon. And I have a variety of typings to work with. Nice variety of Submissiveness. I am gonna have all sort of fun with these gals. I interpret that as my friend Cinderace would stop me from going mad with power or whatever. For My drawbacks I take: Static movesets, Big Ass and Slutty clothes. Their movesets are not a huge issue. I can live with what I got. I will have to grind up their levels to overpower whatever “Great challenges” the document alludes to. Big ass ain’t a big problem on a man, Some gals are into that. Perhaps My Pokemon will come to appreciate it. Slutty clothes I can live with. I will probably want to live somewhere warm year round. Ideally Alola if the cost of living is good. My main concern is how “My pokemon insists I dress as a gigolo at all times” is going to go over with potential employers.–My picks from that harem thing up there are Gardevoir, Absol, and Alcremie. For drawbacks I pick booty and sexy clothesNice picks, You have one more girl BTW.I do? Froslass then. She looks like she needs many MANY hugs.-... Hit me with the Mawile, the Roserade, and the Alcremie, and slut up my outfit while you're at itSee, I feel it, it's that or just Alcremie on the Singles option. Give me that Gigantamax Twist!-I'd main Gardevoir. Wife her. Pop out as many kids as I can handle.-Hmm. Gardevoir, Froslass and Hatterene. Con: cant level up.
>>77653526>Someone objected to the Meloetta entry being creepy so an edit was made>https://files.catbox.moe/z2nlbu.jpgyou need to go back
>>77653684elaborate on your objection.
>>77622713>>77633719>GoodraFuck yes. I wanna have ooey gooey sex with her for so long i get glued to her i don't want her to ever let me goooo.>Take one katuuBecause my brain is in a one track mind right now and because it gives her a hell of a boost from this. Besides if i really want more pokemon to add to my party i can just fuck her and get more clingy gooey children.>10 year old age lock>Turned into a girlBecause becoming The Little Girl (TM) is mandatory. Also i still get to make kids because it already defies all logic anyways.
>>77654099you're in the loli thread, pal
>>77654247Technically speaking it is the lewd thread in general. (This of course includes lolis)
>>77654247>>77654312Well regardless the audience in the discord didn't care for it. I actually liked how the edit came out. so whatever. I included it for completion, even if the thread doesn't care.To argue semantics I would say that Meloetta's art isn't that Loli but rather her mind is a baby. Thus she wouldn't be considered a loli as that is a aesthetic descriptor. Which may or may not come alongside low maturity or certain mannerisms but it has to meet the aesthetic requirements first.
>>77654589>Which may or may not come alongside low maturity or certain mannerisms but it has to meet the aesthetic requirements first.nope, wrong. oppai lolis exist.
>>77654649Still an aesthetic. Which i dont think I would classify the Meloetta image as. The artist is slapping massive tits and ass on all the Pokemon with minimal otherwise changes to proportions. They are better described as short-stacks.Unless you want to argue Meloetta is a childlike figure out of the box. Which I would not agree with.
>>77654764the text says she's childlike because she was just born and it matches with the neotenous features of the picture. these two features come together to create an oppai loli character.your discord tranny friends finding lolis problematic doesn't make the character not a loli.
>>77654981I guess we'll just have to agree to disagree on that interpretation.I know better than to get hung up on the thoughts of some 4-chan lolicon anyway.
>>77655210>4-chanyeah you really need to go back
>>77655334I'm here for the porn. Don't get some superiority complex going old man. Its a message board on the internet. Glory days are behind for this site anyway.Regardless many of the balancing criticisms were fair.
>>77655563I'm pleased to see someone made a add on. I think it came out great. Thank you anon. >>77622713Since it was relevant again I just wanted to contribute with some of my and my friends thoughts on the original. I got stuff to do but. If anyone would like to discuss anything else other than the loli thing then that would be welcome.
https://old.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/1n99d6k/isekai_the_end_v09_ocisekailong/Finally, nsfw OC that straight men are allowed to play.
>>77639527Great old one>Physical nature: Hybrid[Flesh & blood, Incorporeal(Femininity), Incorporeal(Trance)]>General shape: Amorphic>Locomotion: Hover>Tentacle accessories: Suction Cups, Eyes>Elemental aura: Light>Prefered terrain: Ruins>Reality window: Tome>Eldritch customization:TelekinesisControlled insanityCamoflouge CopingSpawnlingsConversion whispers Durability Flesh sculping[futa cocks] >SpawnlingHabitat: Ruins, Deep SeaDiet: optimized metabolism, unconventional food[Secrets]Durability: Resist Sustained GunfireMental weapons: Slow insanity & conversion whispers, HallucinationsBirth Rate: Once per year, one young per birthSapience level: Beyond humanPossession: Strong-willed sapient, moderate imitationCulture corruptions: All OptionsEldritch Toms: One window, several days>Cult: Transparency: Discrete, Unity: interwoven, Mindset: LoyalMarriageBrainwashingVisions[Tier2]Burial[Tier 2]Spawnling aideSpawnling IntegrationSpawnling Rebirth>ServantsNusha'urraatst(help the poor vamp girl)Gugurshaguastghuug(I'll need a guard dog for the cult)Tghanlhu(swampthulu seems like a bro)Tnukauragat(cultists love drugs)Ghuftrshasg'unkt(wolf, seems highly useful for taking care of small-scale problems)Thuftftathsa(so he can collect me anime figures and trading cards)>Reproduction: Two-Parents[sapient humanoid], Spontanious[advanced spawnling]>QuestsEscapees[Nycrama](Rewards: Colony of Nanaft's people, cultist sealing)Shoggoth PatronCulling the Yith (Rewards:+15EP, +15SP, +1 SS)Hastur RehabilitationR'lyeh Rises(Rewards: Tthia, Age of Eldricities)The Next Humans(Rewards: +20SP, +1SS,2nd Spawnling)War in the Deep(Rewards: Lord of the Deep, Cosmic seas)Bunny tribe(Rewards: E'lior, The Green God, Mutagenic food)>MarryShub Tier 3(broodsow) Fetility Control boonAnimal form boon Spawnling Remaker boonYidhra[Tier 1]Form Mastery boonAzathoth[Tier 2]Almighty Boon(+60SP)Nyarla[Tier 2]I'll put details in the next post.
>>77656850The physical nature might seem weird, and it is, but it makes more sense when you realize I'm basically a walking sissy hypno file. Combine that with whispers and some happy juice from my hallucinogenic factory Tnuk and the femboy sex cult will be established in no time. The spawnlings are specifically made to be rare wendigo-esque cryptids so that pictures, paintings, and theory discussions about them garner intrigue and spread quickly. Their ability to eat secrets means they'll naturally be drawn towards all manner of liars and subverters, where they'll haunt and slowly drive them insane, destroying my enemies without even needing to be told to, allowing my cult to grow and establish a good, high-trust civilization. The ultimate end goal of the cult is to evolve humanity into a race of horny hermaphroditic sheep femboys.I've not decided on the specifics of the second spawnlings, but they'll be a low int, high breed rate cannon fodder incase I need to raise an army for some reason. Literal mindless sheep to do my bidding.Outside of cult activities and getting brothulu out of the ocean, I'll spend the rest of my time constantly pumping babies into Shub. Just constant, unending creampies. I want her stuffed like a double vanilla oreo 24/7. Just filled with as much lovecraftian baby batter as I can fit in that goat pussy.
