Pose for the WritingPrevious: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/78192807>Request, write, or share stories and provide feedback/critique when appropriate. All writers are welcome, SFW and NSFW.>Instead of asking for interest or worrying about a fetish, just post your damn writing/request and see what happens. You might get lucky.>Complaining about fetishes is dumb and stupid in /trash/. Use that negative energy for requesting, reading and writing instead.>Please tag stories so readers know what they're getting into. Nobody can force you to tag stories you share or make. However, people are MUCH likelier to skip a work if there are no tags present.>Try to bump the thread if it gets to page 9, but feedback is always appreciated for posted stories, for author or reader! Those are the best kind of bumps./d/'s Master List: contains old stories, writing guides, and morehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/editLewd Thesaurus shamelessly stolen from /flg/https://rentry.org/lewdsesaurusRequest Dump: Find/Post requests here toohttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1nyDKegfYhIvlv7ZvGoxswIVkiG5lw1lrOeDFvZbw_WU/edit?pli=1General grammar tutorials and key noteshttp://theeditorsblog.net/fularchives/https://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/https://theeditorsblog.net/2014/04/08/keeping-adjectives-in-line/https://apostrophe.how/Tips on Improving Prose:https://jerichowriters.com/prose-style/Sites to post stories/WIPS at:ArchiveOfOurOwnHentaiFoundry, SoFurryRentry (if the system flags your post as spam, replace “.co” with “.org”)FF-net (fan works only)Pastebin (not recommended due to NSFW takedowns and filters)
>>78489434Previous thread storiesThe Wheel and the Winghttps://www.royalroad.com/fiction/128737>Reformatted into Normal Prose, SFW, MHuman (parapheligic)/FHarpy, Friendship, DramaJust Before the Edge of Dark Update Ch. 11https://archiveofourown.org/works/70574626/chapters/186322331>Smut Finally, Washhouse sex, Almost Caught, French KissingDebugging the Kingdom with Mozzarella Cookiehttps://archiveofourown.org/works/71576391/chapters/186339546>Cookie Run Kingdom, Human Male/Mozzarella Cookie, Shortstack, Virtual Reality, Glitches, Accidental Anal/Anal sex, teasing, fondling, size difference, vaginal sex, creampies, playful biting, rough sex, body worship, belly play, ass worship, glitchy sex,Cursed Clussy Carnival Chapter 14https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Cursed-Clussy-Carnival-Ch-14-1237219893>CYOA, Clussy, Skeletons, Space CadetWorld's Strongest C-Class! pt. 6https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/World-s-Strongest-C-Class-pt-6-1228018090>shonen, anime, gacha, sfwAn Erotic Anthology series For The Ageshttps://archiveofourown.org/series/4817611>Series of fics with respective tagsMarch in Alaska/found footage werewolfhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/72137856/chapters/187795456>tags unknownPie Family Horror Story Ch. 8 WIPhttps://www.deviantart.com/stash/0d7ccibeztf>tags unknownJayden's Cursed Tabletop Game - Enter the Siren Pt. 1https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/JCTTG-Enter-the-Siren-pt-1-1244838694>isekai, cyoa, comedyLink anything missing
Time to write.
>>78489593From #347Girlfriend Gamehttps://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Girlfriend-Game-0-4-Release-1241976237>WIP, VN, Transformations (Female), NTR Route (Joke?)Leave Your World Behind (TF + ID + RC)https://www.deviantart.com/thet0wer/art/Leave-Your-World-Behind-TF-ID-RC-976832134>Transformation, Race Change, Identity DeathJust Before the Edge of Darkhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/70574626/chapters/183387936>Completed, Planescape Setting, Slow Burn, Size Difference, AdventureGet Stuck In (working title?)https://rentry.org/xunhisss>6.2k words, NSFW, hfur, gloryhole, oral, vaginal, knot/penis expansion, public use(implied, I guess?), The Juice That Makes You ***, description of peeing (no watersports)Wake up Wreckedhttps://rentry.org/de48t6iy>MtF TG, NTR by femboy, Rape, Bad End, Victim POVThe Wheel and the Winghttps://www.royalroad.com/fiction/128737>Reformatted into Normal Prose, SFW, MHuman (parapheligic)/FHarpy, Friendship, DramaJayden's Cursed Tabletop Game: Team Tsubarahttps://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/JCTTG-Team-Tsubara-1241657228>CYOA, Drama, Tags unknownCorruption Goddess Love Storyhttps://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Corruption-Goddess-Love-Story-1244806668>Goddess, Corruption, Love Spell, SpaceIntrinsichttps://rentry.org/nqn4p8dz>OC, female pov, mouse furry, straight, slavery, non-con and regular con, rough and gentle domination, bondage, chastity, gaslighting, happy ending
>>78489996It's always tough juggling so much things to consider when typing.
Are you supposed to keep posting your request every thread until it’s filled or do you. Await a threat and try again?
>>78491450just keep posting
>>78491450All up to you. You can keep going until it's done or until you get bored of the idea and try something different.
So did anyone ever check out my WIP's? I haven't had a chance to write since I've been working. I do think I came up with a decent outline for the next Cursed Clussy Carnival, I'm just thinking how to juggle the different restaurants cause I think Cal should visit each one per chapter, but I want to keep the arc to about three chapters, and have the speakeasy halfway through with him finding his relative there, rather than at the end. Also- for World's Strongest C-Class, I think before I get to Scott and Michelle's next scene I need something to change about the 'fight choreography' like there's a small story-development that changes the math on it so it doesn't feel like I'm retreading ground.
requesting a fic about a human guy and a group of Male chubby Pig orcs much larger than him,They capture him, and tie his hands up, decide to tease him a bit after catching them looking at their bellys, which culminates in them turning around, dropping their pants and mooning him, when they see his erection at the sight if their big fat asses, they decide to use him as their personal dildo, which he actually wished would happen. No farting, scat, watersports or musk pleaseTags: M/M, gang bang, pig orcs, facesitting, rimming, forced rimming, butt worship, power bottom, small dom big subs, anal, big butts,willing to make compromises or changes if needed
the juices were not flowing today.
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>>78493297I read the recent chapter of the pie family horror story, but there's not really much to comment on? At most it seems like the puzzle is L4D witch-based, so I'm curious as to how it plays out.
>>78493297Still half way through the Clussy, on the Haunted Mansion arc. Interesting that the recently clowned girls are generally a little scarier than the ones who have been at it for years. Cal could use incest correction. May check others after
>>78491065Depends on if you're the sort of writer to feverishly think a lot and type little, or the kind that thinks little and feverishly types a lot. If you're the type who gets "in the zone" when writing you're pretty much not juggling anything, and more desperately chasing after all the ideas to catch 'em before they slip away.
>https://files.catbox.moe/z47gjc.PNGHey /wfg/. Currently writing a SFW fic involving a dragon. Draft is finished, and I'm currently in the editing mines. I spent some time on the opening paragraph, and I think I'm happy with it, but I wanted to ask for a second opinion.Specifically:- Does the initial hook succeed in making you intrigued/interested?- Is the description too much/vivid? Too little?- Any grammatical errors?While a single paragraph is but just a drop in a bucket for a story, I'll still like to know if what I'm doing here is being executed well.
>>78501027>Ivy-vinesIsn't ivy always vines? Looks like a pleonasm to me.>Does the initial hook succeed in making you intrigued/interested?Works for me.>Is the description too much/vivid? Too little?One thing I'm not too certain about is how you describe him as walking to his execution, as if he's alone. Don't know if that was intentional or not. It could be if you have some magical or other supernatural means forcing him forward. But if not then "being escorted" would probably have been better in place of simply "walking".
>>78501027>Would'veI don't think this kind of contraction is appropriate in literature. Would have. Also too many semicolons. I believe commas are a better fit here.
>>78498756Correct, and thanks for checking it out. Hopefully I can finish it soon. >>78498950Thanks! I'm not sure I see the connection between the newer and older clown girls. Though I guess part of it is in the background some of the 'employees' come and go, but those who have been around for a while are those who have decided they're all-in on the circus to one degree or another, so they're all showmen/entertainers to a degree. More recent additions are a bit more casual about it, seeing it more of a 9-5 job.
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>>78501179>Isn't ivy always vines? Looks like a pleonasm to me.Indeed it is. Good catch!>One thing I'm not too certain about is how you describe him as walking to his execution, as if he's alone.That is correct. That does lead into some character considerations that I'm also struggling with.>https://files.catbox.moe/0t1sf8.PNGAny additional help would be greatly appreciated.>>78501835>Would'veHmm, would it be acceptable for use in a character's dialogue? I can see said contraction being too 'informal'. Are "should've" and "could've" also inappropiate to use?>Too many semicolons.Corrected. I was mistaken about semicolon use; thank you for pointing it out!
So I decided to start with the idea of a Flamenco dancer, and I ended up with this, which I think I'll keep as the Matron design for the Mexicans. I think her name will be Rosa.
>>78503496I think it is more tolerable in dialogue but I would still not recommend it.
>>78503993Nothing wrong with contractions even in narrative.
Requesting a writing based on pic related where a man ends up being catfished by Arukenimon, who dates him in her human disguise before revealing her 'true nature' intending to devour him. He still asks for one last favor to have sex, surprising her, and with some genuine compliments to her form and body, she complies. On the end she's unable to follow-up on her intent to devour him.>Vanilla, good ending, horn stimulation More info on the digimon below.https://digimon.fandom.com/wiki/Arukenimon
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Requesting a story where a rocker girl wakes up enormously pregnant. Much to her shock and confusion, everyone in her community(parents, popular older sister, neighbors, classmates, etc.) act like she's been pregnant for months. The only person who knows she wasn't pregnant before last night is her younger brother. The siblings join forces to uncover the truth behind her pregnancy before she gives birth to the entities growing inside her. >pregnancy, hyper pregnancy, belly expansion, lactation, belly stuffing, weight gain, pregfat, reality warp,
Requesting a piss kink fic. I've posted several requests before, but rather than reposting any, I'll summarize the common points.I want to read about adult females intentionally urinating in places other than toilets, such that it leaves obvious evidence of their actions. I don't want to read about wetting, which I consider a different kink. I don't mind if urine happens to end up on clothing, but I don't want any significant peeing in clothing while it's worn. Likewise, I don't want any fetishization of desperation or humiliation. This is a "free pee" request, not an "omorashi" request.I'm not interested in male urination. I don't mind it happening for plot reasons, but I don't want any detail, and I don't want male on female watersports (female on male is okay).Sex is completely optional, but if included should be with a consenting adult male POV character. Cunnilingus is most appreciated, but nothing involving anuses or impregnation, please. Characters should have natural pubic hair. If you don't mind writing it, I'd also appreciate female characters to have natural armpit hair and strong natural body odor, but this would be just a bonus.Characters could be humans, or alternatively it could be a HMOFA fic. Female anthro characters should be bipedal land mammals of roughly human build and with human-like genitalia, of any common canid/felid/rodent/lagomorph species (except for those associated with other kinks, e.g. skunks or hyenas), and their urine and body odor should be indistinguishable from human, at least to human senses. They could be kemonomimi or full-blown furry.I'd be happy to discuss more specific ideas if anybody's interested.
I'm just gonna shill myself a bit and drop my AO3 page here, hopefully someone finds something they like. I write pretty regularly (and have 2 self published books) but this is all my freely available stuff. I write smut mostly, with a focus on submissive men. Maledom/Femdom/Futadom are all things I touch on regularly, but I do like writing about monsters as well. Feel free to give everything a look, and if you want to see more then you can just follow the linktree.
>>78511749Would probably help if I dropped the linkhttps://archiveofourown.org/users/Rusty_FC/works
>>78503496>That is correct. That does lead into some character considerations that I'm also struggling with.Aha, then he isn't walking to his execution, but he is walking to his doom. (or at least so he would be thinking). An execution would be deliberate capital punishment, this has more of what exile/outlaw traditionally was supposed to be. (While in modern times you'd be expected to survive banishment but in ancient times it was expected the wilds would kill you).>Does this sound believableWell if he was caught unprepared for the possibility of getting falsely convicted, then the facts that he has no plans for what's happening to him, is bad at adapting, and maybe a dash of law-abidingness, would mean that moving in the direction of the dragon as is expected of him would be the most logical course of action. That is, if he has no family or mentor figures outside his village to go to. Going to trusted people for advice would probably take priority over heading directly towards death, unless he was already depressed/suicidal beforehand. For a classical autistic (the not-the-brightest-tool-in-the-shed type) that would probably be realistic behavior. Probably got an outburst of anger at getting falsely accused (which wouldn't have helped his case), but since we're picking up the story after that he'd probably be feeling drained and sad at this point. Not really sure if he'd be in the right state of mind to flee however. I'd say it's more probable he'd break down somewhere in the wilds or just heedlessly charge the dragon in a fit of despair instead of trying to salvage anything by trying to escape.
Switching things up today to avoid hitting a wall. Everything I wrote yesterday will need some re-tooling. Better to make some progress on something people are waiting for.
>>78511749>>78511767That is a lot of vtuber material you wrote up, goodness.I gave the Neon Taiga one a readhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/44462035/chapters/111833149I think I read this before? Not sure if you ever posted here, but I get just a bit of an idea of what you mean by submissive men. Still kinda hot ramming Rebecca up the ass though. Being an older work, there are some minor things like typos or someone else speaking in the same paragraph. It certainly matches the energy of cyberpunk 2077 regardless, and makes for an alright fit in the world. A minor thing, but if Rebecca has metal arms, it would be after the passing of her brother, but eh.
>>78511749What kind of submissive men? do you write gay powerbottom stuff?
>>78503824Will skeletons be involved with the Mexican restaurant?
>>78513571when I look at his AO3 link, some /m/ material is in there. Take a look>>78511767
>>78511749I don't know if that guy is still working on it, haven't heard from him in weeks. I might be jumping the gun but...any chance you could do this >>78494399, it's all oc characters not based on anything btw
>>78516086No, I'm thinking the Skeleton faction this time around is the Gooner Association, who float around in affiliation depending on who needs to hire Goons at the moment.
>>78503993>>78504122I believe it comes down to your choice in style, and what type of written prose works best for the story. But I'll keep your advice in mind.>>78512206>...but he is walking to his doom.Ah, I see. Will change the material accordingly.>An entire paragraph of good advice.Indeed, he has no surviving family. Thank you for your thoughts on the matter; it helps a lot to ensure that I'm writing a believable character. When I am finished, I'll be sure to post the fic in here. Thanks again for the help!
>>78521040>Thanks again for the help!No problem, happy you found my take useful.
>>78493297This pic would look great to me without the clown nose and makeup, nothing against people who like it tho
>>78513532I might have posted it here. I wrote that when I was still new to writing, so there probably are a ton of errors. I might go back and edit it one day. She doesn't have the metal arms though, if you're talking about the intro. It's supposed to portray her beating someone with their own dismembered arm. >>78513571Things that make it onto AO3 are just a small percentage of what I write (everything goes on SubscribeStar first), but when I write males it usually involves some kind of corruption or first time experience. I like power dynamics over anything else, so it's generally an older woman/man taking advantage of a younger man
>>78516962I wasn't planning on taking requests but I do have something similar already involving BotW Link and Bokoblins.https://archiveofourown.org/works/48500332/chapters/122339305
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>>78522975That's good to hear. For me the clown stuff is more a good excuse to have more character design elements to play with.
>try to flesh out my character with hobbies and interests that would fit them>I know nothing about said hobbies and interests myself
>>78523579>So I ripped off his arm and beat him to death with it>That doesn't seem physically possible >That's what he told me
>>78505558Kinda wonder if anyone has ever written anything involving sonic here before
Mersenniuuuus, where is the sneeeeks?
>>78523619Fair enough, that’s ok, I always had this kink about being gang banged by power bottom guys
>>78527297That's why it's a good thing for a writer to be a trivia fiend. You never know what information might come in handy to flesh out characters and settings.
>>78527297>make every mc a useless retard because I know nothingDumb but it actually works for my second person reader insert stuff
Okay I have the last major character portrait, this one going for more of a cowboy theme. I didn't quite get the shakira hips i was looking for for any of the characters, but I think it turned out well enough. Still need a name for them though.
I really hate using the word "futa" in my stories, but trying to come up with a new word for it feels even worse.I guess I'll just kill myself or whatever
>>78530389The only one I can think of is someone posting the first chapter of their sfw fic about Dr Robotnik being an advanced recon agent for some grimdark space empire and just playing the part of the villain to prepare Sonic and friends for the future invasionI've actually got a TailsXRouge fic in my WIP pile but I have no idea if it'll ever get finished
>>78535818I'm bored and got nothing better to do. Do you remember the link at all?>TailsXRouge fic in my WIP pile Alright you got my attention. Is it anything you can share or is it just all notes?
>>78535735There's other names depending on the context. Transgendered, intersex. What's the context?
>>78536041It's a semi-serious(lol) fantasy setting and I'm looking for a neutral term for characters to use that also doesn't sound too scientific to out-date the medieval setting
>>78536041>>78536123it's also a "third gender" type scenario, not the "rare freaks of nature" one, I should add
>>78536123>>78536263So you probably don't want 'intersex'. Hermaphrodite could be used, as that refers to a mythical character (from the union of Hermes and Aphrodite naturally). There's plenty of examples of intersex characters throughout mythology that could be used. Two fictional examples are Slaanesh and Boethiah. https://intersex.miraheze.org/wiki/Intersex_in_mythology_and_folkloreHere's a list I found with a quick google. I'm fond of 'Cybelene'.
>>78536393Neat. Thanks
>>78535906>Do you remember the link at all?Only that it was an Ao3 link. I don't have the tine right now to go looking for it>anything you can shareI've got ~2k unedited words of intro right now. The goal was a short (5-6k) smut one-shot, but I always scope-creep the shit out of everything. I can probably throw it up on rentry tomorrow if you really want to see it
>>78536123> a neutral term>for futa/transgender/intersex/hermYea that's not going to happen any time soon. The concept itself is way to hot a topic at the moment for any term to truly be neutral while remaining easily recognizable.
>>78537079 (me, because incomplete)The thing is that pussyfooting around the term is going to piss people off as well. You can only choose whose toes you're going to step on, not if you're going to step on somebodies toes in this case.
>>78537225I think he's less concerned with who is going to try to cancel him, and more about coming up with something that sounds like it would have originated from within the setting.
>>78536123When I referenced futas in my book, I called them "studs" because that's what they were. It was a nation of all women, and the studs were there for breeding. I'd recommend doing something similar and just give them a title if they're a rare breed or something, or a nickname if it's a one off.
>>78536943I like Rouge the Bat anything, really. If you're willing to share the intro of such a thing, go for it!
>>78533344Everyman is an Everyman for a reason: it works
>>78540508So far my approach has been to try to give my MC's different ways they approach problems which I hope makes them stand out more as real characters. Beck is a go with the flow guy, who prefers to hang back and let others argue, and tends to respond more with sarcasm to problems, and prefers to slyly wait for a moment he can one-up someone with a lot of patience. He's paired with Lucy who is much more aggressive, pro-active, and egotistical, so they bounce off each-other well. Cal I figured is someone who is sullen, stubborn, and because of ego would rather double down than let someone he doesn't like get one up on him. So as a result he refuses to back down in a lot of situations where being more conciliatory would aid him. But it also means he doesn't back down from a lot of hardships and keeps pressing on.
>>78532682I think it takes a bit more than some trivia facts to convincingly portray an interest for a main character. I just realize I have too little in common with him. And I am constantly second guessing between whether some of the choices are what I would choose vs what my character would choose.
>>78535735Maybe stop writing futa altogether?
>>78543098Well that's the one thing skilled writers and skilled actors have in common: knowing what somebody completely different from you presonality-wise would do. Got no more advice for that except keep at it. Practice makes perfect.
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>>78510712If you don't mind me asking, why the aversion against impregnation? Does the thought make a story come too technical for you, or do most writers focus too much on the dirty talk about pumping kids into girls being a turnoff?The concept usually doesn't come up unless there's a babies ever after ending or if it's some too Japanese-focused smut piece.Although I like to see a parody smut of hips actually moving on their own some day, away from the body.
Morning bump
>>78545998One, I think reproduction is a serious matter and a smut fic isn't an appropriate place to write about it, and two, I find pregnancy aesthetically unpleasant. This is one reason I like writing fantasy settings: when you have magic and non-human sapient species it's easy to ignore pregnancy without breaking verisimilitude.
I tried writing female POV again. Gimmicky format this time, but maybe someone will like it:Bunbunmaru Special: The Grassroots Brothelhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/72481146>Touhou Project, M/F, Aya/OC human male prostitute, cunnilingus, vaginal sex, blowjob, journalism, newspaper article, 6.5K wordsAny feedback appreciated.
>>78551781Talk about writing something and keeping it in character. I have some thoughts on this, but I'm still at work. I'll share what I think after it's over.
>>78539256Here you go:Seeing Double (working title)https://rentry.org/cv2my6b4>2k words, tags: currently SFW, TailsXRouge, WIPI did a quick pass to clean up some of the known inconsistencies but it's still mostly a first draft. I've been chewing on how exactly to get them into the bedroom while working on getting the first draft of another project done. Not that I'm stuck, I've just been working on the other project for almost a year and I just want to be done with it.
So do you guys prefer doing longer stories with long plotlines, or shorter stories?
Almost got a Cursed Clussy Carnival Chapter done, just two more scenes to go.
>>78556458>Tails wearing overalls This was the only confusing part to me, since most male characters tend not to wear anything. Otherwise, the back and forth between him and Rouge was pretty fun and flirty. It certainly has the energy she churns through her appearances.
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Requesting a greentext story in second person of a human anon biting off more than he could chew by signing up to be broodmother for an endangered species of anthros, particularly a futa or shemale.Anon having a thing for pregnancy, futas and furries decides to sign up for a save the species program to fulfill his fantasy and make some big bucks along the way. Despite the many warnings online. Getting himself treated beforehand to make him breedable (Mpreg logic or turning into a male herm.) before getting bred. Months and weeks pass as his pregnancy progresses along with a few visits from the father, although he's fighting off the intense urges of his new maternal desires along with the modifications he took making it feel really pleasurable to carry. That and sinking fear of reality that he's going to become a parent, much less the mother while he feels his body betray him from liking the idea. As well some feminization through pregnancy hormones would be nice. If there's any more details I'm missing please tell me. First time I'm asking for a request here so I'm not sure if I'm doing it right.Tags: Transformation, impregnation, pregnancy, child care, futa on male, feminization, breast growth, lactation, body betrayal, child rearing, stepfording and pleasurable pregnancies.
>>78565722>This wasn't what you signed up for>No, worse, this WAS what you signed up for>You just didn't realize it at the time>It looked like easy money, carrying to term an endangered anthro>They would just pop the species reproductive tract into your body, and remove it (scarlessly!) after you were done>So you'd get fucked, then laze about for a few months, then pop out the pups and get paid>Easy money>Helped that the "males" of the species were easy on the eyes too>Fat tits, big ass, smooth curves.>If you just thought a way the bulge the pictured anthro in the ad would've been the most beautiful woman you've seen>But now, a few months in...>You realized all those warnings online were right>Your body aches as you shift, the weight of your growing belly an everpresent burden>Hormones rage through your body, you feel your emotions slipping away from you>It scares you, a fear which the hormones then helpfully magnify>You get cravings>Not just the pickles and ice cream stuff>Alien things, like raw meat and unfamiliar herbs they keep growing in the walled garden of your enclosure>Clearly they're coming from the modifications, from the species you're carrying>From your sons and/or daughters, strarting to stirr in your overfilled womb>Your mate has been a great help>He's been kneading your breasts when they've recently grown sore>You even leaked a few drops of milk the other day>Underneath your fear, there's this strange happiness>You're going to be a good mom, and bring strong children into this world>A mom>You don't want to be a mom>But how would that life inside you ever grow up safely and healthily without one>Can you really walk out on them after getting paid>But that's what you signed for, the money>You're so confused>You love this, you hate this, you're happy, you're afraid(1/2 (probably))
>>78566223>Your mate comes in, sensing your distress>Getting fucked by him always calms you down>You know it shouldn't, but it does>He whispers in your ear about how your hips seem wider, your shoulders seem less broad>He rubs your belly, his ample breasts pressing into your back>You feel the life inside you kick and punch in response>Still so weak, so fragile, but growing stronger by the day>Inside you>The budding panic attack over bearing life is quickly smothered by a kiss from your mate>You were so wrong>It's not easy money, it's not in and out>It's a commitment>You signed up for this
>>78566223>>78566256Thanks nonny!
Requesting a story about a sunbathing doll getting an anon to take pictures of her, polish her figure, readjust her joints as needed, and rub her down with polish on a warm sunny day at the beach. She brags about her figure and form, and how she rose above all the other cheaper models, teases him over bits and hesitation, and offers a bit of extra service to him for putting up with her. I'm thinking a thighjob primarily. Vagina sex optional. I like suggestive and foreplay in my reading more
>>78572106Reminds me of an old Kaktus_nsfw fic "Spellbound Heartwood".
>>78564565>most male characters tend not to wear anythingThat's true, though for me I figured Tails would want some sort of protection while working (I imagine getting oil and grease out of fur is a nightmare). I will say that my only experience with the Sonic franchise is cultural osmosis, let's plays, and the occasional speedrun, so I may not come at this like someone who's actually in the fandom would.I'm glad to hear that the dialogue seems to be as fun to read as it was to write.
>>78573559I always find the thought of cartoon characters being casually naked to be pretty hot. Especially when they are wearing some article of clothing like shoes but otherwise naked. It's like they are extra naked. It's even better when they acknowledge it in-universe.
>>78551781Yeah the format is non-standard, but I see you intentionally made it to mimic a mix of a newsletter and just a bit like a peer-review article, footnotes and all. The interviews and totally non-biased (and attempts to remain non-biased) do feel in character and match the tone very well. I am surprised you bring up the concept of a human not being scared of yokai being a surprising thing for most. I know that technically, in gensokyo, they are the enemy of humans and all, but...I am curious as to where you get the idea of measuring dick length with sun. Is it a touhou thing or another Japanese concept lost to time?>Can I pay on credit?I may need context on this since I know for certain that credit cards aren't a thing. Do you mean like a tab?>I accidentally injured the human. What should I do?Broken pelvis?>Ms. Himemushi will do no such thing. We know where she lives and we will set Reimu on her if she tries anything.I chuckled.It seems like you got some use out of AO3's lesser known tools.Overall, I don't think it's sexy, but I think that's kind of the point. This is certainly a good read for adult humor. Sex comedy maybe? Either way I was entertained with what was shown here.
>>78574956>a bit like a peer-review article, footnotes and allI just now realized the footnotes are actually a mistake, because I confused the out-of-universe character profiles in Symposium of Post-mysticism with in-universe Bunbunmaru Newspaper articles. The character profiles use a lot of footnotes but the Bunbunmaru Newspaper articles hardly use them at all. But people seem to like the footnotes so it worked out for the best. They're a good device for comedy IMO.>the concept of a human not being scared of yokaiIt's somewhat vague how dangerous youkai really are, but this concept seems an easy way to make a character look like a ultra-confident gigachad without really trying. It's also a good device for comedy, because he's kind of winning by accident, which is always funnier than succeeding at a careful plan.>measuring dick length with sunhttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_units_of_measurement#Length>Do you mean like a tab?Yes. I should have used that word. Edited, thanks.>Broken pelvis?Fortunately for him, the oni are too cheap to pay for full service.>Sex comedy maybe?That's what I was going for. Any erotic value is a bonus.Thanks for reading and commenting!
>>78575464>>Do you mean like a tab?>Yes. I should have used that word. Edited, thanks.Actually, I don't think it's a serious problem enough to change. The phrase is in Wiktionary and Google Ngrams and I don't like changing fics after I post them.
>character is a bird>once that's established, constant second guessing on how much to mention that factI know it's a: it depends and if you have to ask scenario, but any advice?Best I could rationalize was "in an all human world, how often do you really think to mention skin (texture, color, or what have you) and then turn around and think if it'd make sense when applied to an all bird world. Thoughts?
>>78578706We talking full on animal bird or anthro/furry bird?
>>78578706> how much to mention that factEnough that the average reader doesn't forget the character isn't human, but not so much that it's starting to sound like you're trying to convince them of that fact.
https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Cursed-Clussy-Carnival-Ch-15-1252764979Cursed Clussy Carnival Ch. 15>CYOA, Clussy, noir mystery, erotic horrorSo the new arc is officially started. Don't know how to summarize things without giving it all away, since this is still mostly setup, though I'm happy with the setup. But please check it out.
