Your Mind During Work DaysPrevious: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/78489434>Request, write, or share stories and provide feedback/critique when appropriate. All writers are welcome, SFW and NSFW.>Instead of asking for interest or worrying about a fetish, just post your damn writing/request and see what happens. You might get lucky.>Complaining about fetishes is dumb and stupid in /trash/. Use that negative energy for requesting, reading and writing instead.>Please tag stories so readers know what they're getting into. Nobody can force you to tag stories you share or make. However, people are MUCH likelier to skip a work if there are no tags present.>Try to bump the thread if it gets to page 9, but feedback is always appreciated for posted stories, for author or reader! Those are the best kind of bumps./d/'s Master List: contains old stories, writing guides, and morehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/editLewd Thesaurus shamelessly stolen from /flg/https://rentry.org/lewdsesaurusRequest Dump: Find/Post requests here toohttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1nyDKegfYhIvlv7ZvGoxswIVkiG5lw1lrOeDFvZbw_WU/edit?pli=1General grammar tutorials and key noteshttp://theeditorsblog.net/fularchives/https://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/https://theeditorsblog.net/2014/04/08/keeping-adjectives-in-line/https://apostrophe.how/Tips on Improving Prose:https://jerichowriters.com/prose-style/Sites to post stories/WIPS at:ArchiveOfOurOwnHentaiFoundry, SoFurryRentry (if the system flags your post as spam, replace “.co” with “.org”)FF-net (fan works only)Pastebin (not recommended due to NSFW takedowns and filters)
>>78689206Previous thread storiesBunbunmaru Special: The Grassroots Brothelhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/72481146>Touhou Project, M/F, Aya/OC human male prostitute, cunnilingus, vaginal sex, blowjob, journalism, newspaper article, 6.5K wordsSeeing Double (working title)https://rentry.org/cv2my6b4>Sonic (series), SFW, TailsXRouge, WIPCursed Clussy Carnival Ch. 15https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Cursed-Clussy-Carnival-Ch-15-1252764979>CYOA, Clussy, noir mystery, erotic horrorThose Long Winter Nights Chapter 10https://archiveofourown.org/works/71717871/chapters/188147661?view_adult=true>Deltarune, Tags unknownKobold Kunnilingushttps://rentry.org/koboldkunnilingus>M human/F Kobold, public sex, waitress, cunnilingusPie Family Horror Story Ch. 8 Pt. 1https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Pie-Family-Horror-Story-Ch-8-Pt-1-1247876833>bimbofication, MLP fanfiction, erotic-horrorLink anything I'm missing
>>78689244From #348The Wheel and the Winghttps://www.royalroad.com/fiction/128737>Reformatted into Normal Prose, SFW, MHuman (parapheligic)/FHarpy, Friendship, DramaJust Before the Edge of Dark Update Ch. 11https://archiveofourown.org/works/70574626/chapters/186322331>Smut Finally, Washhouse sex, Almost Caught, French KissingDebugging the Kingdom with Mozzarella Cookiehttps://archiveofourown.org/works/71576391/chapters/186339546>Cookie Run Kingdom, Human Male/Mozzarella Cookie, Shortstack, Virtual Reality, Glitches, Accidental Anal/Anal sex, teasing, fondling, size difference, vaginal sex, creampies, playful biting, rough sex, body worship, belly play, ass worship, glitchy sex,Cursed Clussy Carnival Chapter 14https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Cursed-Clussy-Carnival-Ch-14-1237219893>CYOA, Clussy, Skeletons, Space CadetWorld's Strongest C-Class! pt. 6https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/World-s-Strongest-C-Class-pt-6-1228018090>shonen, anime, gacha, sfwAn Erotic Anthology series For The Ageshttps://archiveofourown.org/series/4817611>Series of fics with respective tagsMarch in Alaska/found footage werewolfhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/72137856/chapters/187795456>tags unknownPie Family Horror Story Ch. 8 WIPhttps://www.deviantart.com/stash/0d7ccibeztf>tags unknownJayden's Cursed Tabletop Game - Enter the Siren Pt. 1https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/JCTTG-Enter-the-Siren-pt-1-1244838694>isekai, cyoa, comedy
>>78689244>Those Long Winter NightsThis one was weird. For the anon that asked about this, it's basically a what-if scenario in Deltarune where the Kris character was raised by the Holiday (Deer people) family, who aren't as tolerant to humans as Toriel and the Dreamurrs. It's pretty drama focused, and there's a lot of emotional baggage after some accident happened that wiped the Dreamurr family out except for Kris.
>>78689206>TopicI can confirm, I'm at work right now
>>78690042Read more of this. It's definitely more focused on the melodrama and falloff after thr Dreamurr's deaths, and apparently Rudy's at that too.I do kind of wish the story would portray the broken family relationship more happening live and now than have it be expositioned through Noelle during the moments where she's lost in thought, although I do like her interpretation of seeing PTSD on Kris
Hey guys, I am writing a limted 3rd person perspective where it changes from character to character. But I'm at a situation where they are swapping back, and don't known if I transition from chap to chap or change in-between. I intend to chang perspectives when those characters meet another MC but changing back idk. There are 4 MCs, but only a and b plots.So my question is should I change perspectives chapter by chapter or transition when I feel it's necessary?
>>78691513Sometimes you'll have to make a roll call as to when to switch POVs. Generally, the safest option is to do it chapter by chapter, and if something interesting happened from the other person's POV, cover that in the next chapter. But it's not a crime to switch POVs in the middle of a current chapter. It IS immersion breaking if you directly label who POV the new section involves.>Blah blah blah>--->Aerith's POV>Story goes as normal.Ideally, you would have the character established well enough so that the reader can infer who's POV is of focus without needing such a direct label. Although section breaks I think are okay?
>>78690330When you're bored, your mind is always on the fritz
Requesting a writing based on pic related where a man ends up being catfished by Arukenimon, who dates him in her human disguise before revealing her 'true nature' intending to devour him. He still asks for one last favor to have sex, surprising her, and with some genuine compliments to her form and body, she complies. On the end she's unable to follow-up on her intent to devour him.>Vanilla, good ending, horn stimulationMore info on the digimon below.https://digimon.fandom.com/wiki/Arukenimon
>>78691513How frequent is the swapping?
>>78694773Chapter by chapter but with 3 characters being on the same plot, and the 4th being plot b. The original idea was to change in the middle of the chapter at a frequent enough basis it created a recognizable pattern. But I feel like that would get annoying or confusing over time.
>>78691513Chapter breaks are actually just as arbitrary and up to the author as POV shifts. There's no good reason not to make each shift its own chapter, and it will improve readability.
>>78695115That should be fine then.
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>>78689457>Debugging the Kingdom with Mozzarella CookieAfter seeing this get posted as a request so much and a delivery, I think a part of me is a bit sad that it didn't focus as much on the potential funny glitches that come with games, but this was kinda hot. Cheese on a cookie is weird, but I can see why people wanna fuck the ones from the kingdom now.
Wondering about the smut/plot ratio in my story, or maybe I should just seperate the smut chapters and mark them.
>>78703293Is the smut plot relevant? You probably could make it it's own chapter
>>78703293Which story in particular?
Requesting a story about a sunbathing doll getting an anon to take pictures of her, polish her figure, readjust her joints as needed, and rub her down with polish on a warm sunny day at the beach. She brags about her figure and form, and how she rose above all the other cheaper models, teases him over bits and hesitation, and offers a bit of extra service to him for putting up with her. I'm thinking a thighjob primarily. Vagina sex optional. I like suggestive and foreplay in my reading more
>>78689244>Kobold KunnilingusIs this by the same guy who's been making all those Kobold stories as of recent? Out of curiosity, is it the same Kobold each time? Or do you just love this species for porn?
>>78690042Finished reading it. Here I thought Rudy was described as also passing away, but nah, he's just permanently hospitalized like the source. Noelle's jealousy is kinda cute, but there may be some questions as to the whole 'dating someone that isn't in the family, but you were adopted into the family.' Then again, Noelle isn't human and Kris isn't a monster. But is he considered a looker? Getting the attention of Temmie and Catti is a bit odd.Susie seems...tragic. without Toriel, it feels like she just embraces being a bad person with no one to hold her back.
>>78697994Now that I think about it, it does kinda feel like there aren't a lot of /aco/ influenced stories here. I remember there being write threads there before they took got kicked. Wonder where those guys went.
Requesting M/F piss kink (free pee/marking, not wetting). I've previously requested this as a Touhou fic featuring Mamizou, but I've stripped it down to the core elements for flexibility:>male human protagonist lives alone>accidentally summons a female supernatural being>she can't return until some time later>until then, she makes herself at home>as a natural prankster, she makes a nuisance of herselfHer main prank is stealthily urinating on the man's stuff. She's not obviously malicious about it, e.g. she doesn't destroy things like books or electronics, but beyond that she doesn't hold back from urinating anywhere she finds amusing, including places that can't reasonably be cleaned. She sees nothing wrong with making his whole house stink of piss. However, thanks to climate/magic/technology/whatever, there's no risk of mold/rot; the only long-term consequences are the smell and stains. Her urine is indistinguishable from human urine.To her surprise, the MC ignores it. He notices, but is averse to confrontation and secretly has a piss kink. She takes this as a challenge, urinating in increasingly blatant and creative ways. This escalates over several days until she urinates openly in front of him. He admits he likes it, and sex ensues. Cunnilingus is most appreciated, but nothing involving anuses please. He can't impregnate her. She has natural pubic hair. Optionally, she has natural armpit hair and strong human-like body odor, which he also likes.The supernatural being is a bipedal land mammal of adult human build and with human-like genitalia. Could be youkai/monstergirl/anthro/kemonomimi, or just a human with magical abilities. If you're going for animal traits, I'd like a common canid/felid/rodent/lagomorph species (excluding those associated with other kinks).3rd person POV preferred. No AI slop. Characters are consenting adults. I'd be happy to discuss more specific ideas if anybody's interested.
In a game called Limbus Company, Smee was a one off minor antagonist that held someone hostage to extort money from Dante's group. After her defeat in battle, one of the characters went to go and kill her, but is saved by Dante (clockhead) at the last moment.Requesting a one-shot where she has troubled, erotic dreams of Dante manhandling and fucking her as 'compensation' for saving her life. It may be unbecoming of a captain to have dirty thoughts that aren't about money and extortion, and she may have gotten her ass kicked, but she couldn't forget about the save, and despite having a clock for a head, she thinks she sees more than that in her dream. She wakes up to a very wet bed.>Limbus Company, Dante/Smee, M/F, dream, vaginal sex, clothes tearing, clock sounds, masturbation(?)Feel free to add more kinks if you like. She is dreaming, after all. She may be bare ones, but pirate girls are hot, especially ones that act differently after being saved.Voice and dialogue: https://youtu.be/3DBtX8QSBP4?si=STSifWuhJbjEKSTD (59:50)Bio: https://limbuscompany.wiki.gg/wiki/Smee
>tfw can type SFW part of a writing at work, but have to constantly watch where my mind goes until I get home, but my dirty thoughts clear when I arriveFucking hell
>>78721379It would be kinda funny to let the thread end with that.However, I can't really allow it.
>>78705871I'm primarily writing pretty damn niche smut because I haven't seen it anywhere outside very specific doujinshi. Honestly writing the setting that enables the smut has been more fun than writing the smut itself.>>78707276Haven't published yet (planning to put it out on ao3 when I'm done), but I got 7k words so far.
>>78725029I'd be lying if I wasn't curious as to how niche it is, but more power to ya if you can bring it out well
>>78726156same here, was curious what kind of story it is
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Is first person perspective the way to go when writing FemMC smut? The ones I've seen, even basic bitch stuff like 50 shades, use first person.
>>78732181The way to go isn't the right word. Iirc, it's more the epitome of 'write what you know' and it's easy for the author to self insert into the story to imagine what kind of erotic fantasies they want to have done to them, or to play out. Of course, not all first person POVs are self inserts, and not all are bad fics. They're just the easiest to make examples out of.
>>78732514>>78732181It's more 'easiest to write but hard to make good'
>>78732181I tried to do that but each time I just get accused of being a transexual or guy pretending to be a girl by people on this website
>>78732181I like second person thought that seems to be a love it or hate it thing.
(1/?)I've had a few ideas I've fixated on for a long time (but never written,) but recently I've been experimenting with a lot more concepts that I'll also probably never write. Thought I'd share some of them and see if any sound particularly interesting>Guy has a childhood friend he grew up with. She's severely mentally disabled but she's amazingly hot. He gets into trouble a lot for liking her or beating up guys who try to molest her. Her parents sign her up to a talent network who covers up her disability and she becomes a minor starlet, making a ton of money, dating playboys, getting introduced to drugs, and more. He moves to Hollywood to find her after finding her favorite plushie left in the dirt, and the story is about him trying to get past her handlers to reunite with her.>A guy has been orbiting a severely austistic girl since middle school, learning how to be there for her but never pushing her. They're very close but a few months prior a worker at one of her special needs art classes seduced her and got her pregnant. He's dealing with hurt and guilt and the story is about him dealing with those feelings while trying to express his love to her in a way that she can grasp, and assuring her that he'll be there to keep her and her baby safe.>Another story with a guy orbiting a girl. These two are very close but one day she gets really distant and starts pushing him away. He also notices she's pregnant. Following her one day, it turns out she's joined up with a small group of girls, all pregnant, overseen by a mistress who indulges their submissive breeding fetishes. She and the other girls get contracted to let themselves be impregnated over and over, the babies going straight to the families. She pushed him away because she knows her fetish is life ruining for any boyfriend, but he works out with the mistress the ability to be the girls' attendant, taking them to doctor's appointments an fulfilling cravings - a boyfriend in all but name.
>>78736872(2/?)>A chubby NEET girl gets taken care of and funded by her boyfriend. She's a shut-in but she's also a horny fetishist for NTR and hangs out in chat rooms fantasizing about cucking her boyfriend - who she loves immensely. A giy in her chatroom turns out to live close and they meet up and fuck so she can live out her fantasy. But afterwards, he starts sending messages to her boyfriend with proof of her cheating to prod him, and the story has them resolving their issues. >A guy is best friends with a girl online for years, sharing an interest in the occult. They don't share IRLs despite exchanging I Love You's. One day she disappears though, no messages for weeks. He violates her privacy and goes to her apartment, only to find that she's gone - she died. She was an obese a shut-in who literally ate herself to death and her family was ashamed of her. He steals some of her stuff left out by a dumpster and in it is some scraps that has a little spell on it. He does the spell and, late that night, is visited by her - dead, pale, but there. She stays with him and they get to have a sweet perfect relationship but she won't tell him what the other side is like.>A guy has a crush on a girl but doesn't confess to her. On a school trip, their plane goes down and they're captured by cannibals. He becomes bound to a warrior woman as a servant and "wife," and she and other classmates are penned up and fattened for roasting. He keeps visiting her and she acts weird until she finally comes clean that she's got a vore fetish and is really into the whole thing. She becomes really popular with the captors. The story deals with him trying to save her from her own urges, eventually becoming a warrior of the tribe and taking her as his own wife.
>>78736872>>78736905(3/?)>A girl is really flat and petitie and a little homely. After being turned down by a boy she liked she has a big crisis, chops her hair off, and lets herself go on fast food. It doesn't go to her boobs at all but she gets a big ass and a little belly, and people start thinking she's a boy - or rather, a femboy. She leans into it and dresses the part of a slutty twink and lets guys pick her up in bars. She gets really bitter and feels like a failed girl but loves being a sexy boy. One day she encounters a middle aged sad sack in the comic store she hangs out with and tries to seduce him so she can tell herself he's a pervert, but he's nice and apologetic when she says she lies about being kicked out for being gay. She lays it on thick and he lets her go home with him for a night, warring with her feelings that make her actually want him and want to not hurt him like she planned. She seduces him and he tries to resist but lets her do it, then is surprised when she's a girl. He takes her in and supports her and she tells everybody she's his nephew, even when his friends or coworkers catch them kissing. >Homely skinny nerd girl moves to a new school and everyone thinks she's a boy so she just rolls with it because it's less embarrassing. She has a nemesis, a boy nerd who works at a local comic shop, and they fight all the time. Her parents make her get a fast food job and she does, but she starts getting really fat. A customer insults her, calling her something disparaging about being a fat gay boy, and it clicks in her head and makes her horny. She leans into pretending to be a fat gay twink and gets both attention and humiliation that makes her very horny. She has a fight with her nemesis and they end up having a little emotional moment, and they go home together to play games - which ends with her seducing him and them making out. When he realizes she's a girl she taunts him. They date until he goes to college, and he takes her too.
>>78736872>>78736905>>78736941(4/?)>Similar trope as before - nerdy guy and girl are orbiting each other, both afraid to make a move. One day there's a weird storm and they wake up in a beautiful enclosed warehouse/resort with some other students - a popular girl, a jock, a goth girl, and a girl nobody knows much about. He and the mysterious girl have collars on, and are tasked with attending the other four. They have an indulgent time with pools and endless food and get fat, which it turns out is the mysterious girl's fetish. Jock starts having sex with the popular girl, but eventually the goth fools around too. The guy tends to the nerd girl as best he can but she's eventually swept up by the jock too and they have sex. They're then informed that the residents are meant to be livestock for aliens - a bull and his sows, bred and turned into meat. All the girls get pregnant a few times until they reach their quota and are instructed to march into a processing unit, and they all go willingly and accept its inevitability. They all wake up back home, just like they left, but the girls and jock are all starving and kind of want to be fat again. They get offered the option for a second go around and take it. >A guy is recruited into an evil army but he sucks at it, because he was a cook for a rich family. He gets put in the brig but when a bikini armor clad warrior general comes to visit, an officer has the big idea to have him cook for her. He goes all out and she has him transferred to be her personal chef, experimenting with wild dishes that she loves. She gets fatter and fatter until she gets recalled back to the empire's core in a promotion, after which he can really indulge her. She ends up taking him as a date to a big event and she says she wants him as her consort officially.
>>78736872>>78736905>>78736941>>78736982(5/5) sorry these got away from me. Didn't mean to post so many. Last one.>a small group of criminals, including a girl and her bf, get ordered to shake down a resort town. It's chill work and they all get soft and chubby, but they're into it, especially the main couple. They have a good sexual relationship but they're dumb and simple and when she tries to voice her dreams he dismisses them. But there's an attendant at the resort who helps residents get things, and he listens to her vent and helps her out. The story deals with balancing the two relationships - one fun and sexy, the other slowly teaching her what her other needs are. Eventually the cops come and he ditches her, but the attendant saves her and claims she's his assistant. Once the cops leave he offers to send her anywhere but she stays as his assistant and kisses him.>A princess has her favorite librarian. He likes her but he can't do anything about it because he's a commoner. She gets kidnapped by an evil lord and tons of soldiers try to save her, but all die. He sets out to save her stupidly but does so by betraying and sacrificing the people he travels with for passage a little further. He makes it all the way to the dark lord's castle and he and his group are captured. The princess is laying on the dark lord's lap like a contented cat and laughs as he executes heroes but sees the librarian and is surprised. Turns out she always liked him but her dad's rules made it impossible, since he wanted to trade her like a broodmare. She's amused at how he did so much evil on her behalf but she's a taken woman and the dark lord's consort. She asks to keep him and he's made librarian of the Dark Lord's library, and her consort. The rest of the story deals with their relationship - her newfound glee in evil, him coping with what he's done, her balancing her two loves.
>>78736941>>78736982I know you posted some of these before, but the female trap ones are new. Is this s fetish you always had, or did you acquire a taste for tricking men into fucking girls disguised as femboys?
>>78738015I don't think I've posted any of these specific ones before but my tastes are probably pretty easy to spot so I've probably posted something similar before. I had one that was about a sorceress getting kidnapped by a dark lord and a guy coming to save her but she's already pregnant that's very similar to the one above so maybe that's what you're thinking of.>Is this s fetish you always had, or did you acquire a taste for tricking men into fucking girls disguised as femboys?fairly new. I saw some art floating around where artists would draw very girly pear shaped boys. I like the bodytype but I'm not interested in boys, but I think it crossed into the wiring of a transformation kink because because I started imagining the idea of a girl somehow "bottling up" her femininity so that it's something only the guy who actually loves them gets to experience it. Like, she considers herself a failure as a girl, being an undesirable flatty with a weight problem, but as a boy she gets to be seen as a desirable fucktoy and it's not as emotionally messy. And to the guy the girl is someone he wants to comfort or protect before even knowing she's a girl, then has an awkward moment with that he knows is wrong but feels good, then grows to cherish her actual femininity that she tried to suppress. I had also posted another idea as a request a while back of a girl pretending to be a eunuch becoming rivals and eventually the ally and lover of a prince, going from poor girl to eunuch to empress.I hesitated posting those and writing stuff for them has been hard because they touch on stuff that can either be hurtful or get some people really riled up. The girls are explicitly not trans, just pretending, and they get off on really disparaging homophobia so some stuff I was thinking of would be messy. I had ideas of like, a frat boy crudely telling one she'd "make a cute tranny" or the fast food worker being told she's "a fat little faggot who can't see his own dick."
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>>78739670Ah, pretty niche, but I see the toes you could potentially step on, especially if the girls like those comments to begin with.
>>78736982>>78737006>A guy is recruited into an evil army but he sucks at it,>a small group of criminals, including a girl and her bf, get ordered to shake down a resort townThese two could be interesting to read in my opinion, if you go forward with writing them. I'm a fan of evil/hero dynamics, so these two stick out to me as something of interest.
>>78689457Just Before the Edge of Dark: Chapter 12 (finished)https://archiveofourown.org/works/70574626/chapters/189786436>Light Bondage, vanilla sex, creampieFinal chapter of the Planescape short story. Thanks to all who have read it and especially to those who provided feedback, it was very appreciated. I feel like I learned a lot writing something longer, and something that was mostly not smut. This chapter took me longer to finish, and I won't give any excuses besides staying busy with real life and the fact that I didn't want to make it a letdown if the smut was why someone read this. Still, I don't think it was my best smut, since the scenario wasn't terribly interesting in my opinion. I ended up writing two characters who weren't necessarily sexual.At the end of the day, I wonder if it would have been better to have finished the story at chapter 10 and skipped the smut entirely... Oh well, I promised it when I first started posting. Finishing this is like a weight off my shoulders, because I can return to older stuff now. Then, eventually, this will be 'older stuff', and I can return to it for a sequel! I already have an idea or four...Thanks again!
Does anyone here do text RP? I'm running low on options for someone to play Pokemon with full communication barriers
>>78745347/erp/ is 2 blocks down good sir
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>>78745347I know of some authors that do RP, but you'll have better luck looking for someone in the erp thread, even if your intention is non erotica >>78744303There's also the Pokeverse RP threads that seem focused on the SFW side of Pokemon roleplay that could be useful.>>78664923