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Deer bum
Deer self pleasure
Dummy deer
Dangerous deer rear
Bump
Get spanked. <3
At least with the new song we're getting a load of kino white Alastor.
>>78926610It'll probably be the last time unfortunately...
>>78926828Yeah... at least he gets one last hurrah. Hopefully the new design gets lots of good stuff as well, and people don't start making him more and more of a nigger.
>>78927070I hope Viv doesn't make him progressively darker, because I know there's gonna be people not satisfied with his current design. I'm almost worried she's changed something between the leaks and now.
>>78927132Hopefully not. I don't think she would have changed the design, but she could have tweaked the colouring a bit. And hopefully people can behave themselves and not attack artists who drew him before the episode came out. We'll see, Hazbin fans have as much self-control as Viv herself.
>>78927241If TikTok is anything to go by, then no. I've actually seen them make montages of human Al art from YEARS ago to prove how 'racist' creators used to be. Completely ignoring the fact that Viv said the design was accurate and used it in official character reference sheets.
>>78927355I could only be on tiktok for a short time, I couldn't deal with it and I have a high tolerance for stupidity. Why does everyone have such shit takes? I hate how everyone just dogpiles on controversies they know nothing about and just make things worse.
>>78926252Need to spank him back
>>78928382A good spanking would help him in many ways.
>>78928460That it would!
I wonder what else will stop the deer from behaving so badly?
Nap on the deer
>>78928215TikTok is largely brainrot, it's a good source for art tips and fan art, but not much else. >>78928877A good old reach around might settle him a little bit.
>>78928877Why would you want him to stop behaving badly though?
>>78929139Just some fondling >>78929217If you don’t put a bit of control on the deer he is gonna have the house a mess and be ultra stinky! And we can’t have that!
Finally sorted my deer shelves. Need to get some frames.
>>78929327Oh my…
>>78929327My pins and keychains too. Feels good to get it organised.
>>78929354Lovely pins and lovely deer tails!
>>78929424Thanks. I like to flick his tail for luck.
>>78929327>>78929354Absolutely beautiful work. The deer would be proud. Also>that doujinpatrician's choice. Yummy.
>>78929456That’s a good ritual, I wonder if Alastor would like having his tail touched?
>>78929578Thanks, I like to think he would be flattered at all those images of himself.>doujinYeah, it's so good. I had to grab it in my last doujin haul.>>78929733He probably doesn't like people doing it, but I bet it feels good if you do it right.
>>78930082
>>78930135I know I would feel good petting his tail>:3
>>78930258Thanks Black Gryphon, now I have so much more fawn...
>>78930341>>78930746so much more proper human deer! dont think he is going away anytime soon
Striping Alastor and and human alastor and tying the two up against each other and then putting them in a box so they moan and grind and whimper against each other. Would be a good bonding exercise for them I think
>>78930827I hope not...>>78931122Grinding is so much better than gay buttsex, oh, if I were a boy...
>>78931209Fair enough, da rubbing and the grinding is very nice, but deer has the perfect rear, gotta at least play with it a little~
>>78931324Well, I do have fingers and a mouth...
>>78931555Some licking and kissing!
>>78931733Fingers in so many places!
>>78932127I wonder how long he can last with someone teasing him like that before he breaks character?
>>78932210Before he...moans?
>>78932855That or makes a mess
>>78932912A delicious mess to lick off of his slender body...then kiss him so he can taste it. >:)
>>78933127
>>78933368That's some of the most beautiful deer art I've ever seen...
>>78933586It’s quality deer!
>>78933724I wish we had more by that artist. >That drawing Ah man, that's like two years old now I think? Time flies.
>>78933795Same, time certainly does fly!
>>78933839The best date we ever had.
>>78934162Dinner and a show!
Adam should come back and fix Alastors staff
It would be so cool
A deer nun
>>78934436I love them together, but I read a fanfiction that kind of ruined it for me.
>>78934696>read a fanfiction that kind of ruined itOh God what was it?
>>78934425What would their dynamic be?
>>78934712It was Adam stopping Alastor from fleeing during the battle and raping him, and then he comes back as a sinner and tracks Alastor down and does it again.It was just really well written and stayed with me.
>>78934836Personally I’m a fan of Adam being a sort of Johnny bravo character not doing to much to actively be mean to the deer, and certainly nothing to cramp his style, but being crass and slightly off putting in a dude bro sort of way. Would be cute to see Adam bring Alastor to a rock concert or something.
>>78934896Think I skimmed through that one, it’s fucking ASS. Certainly not the worst one I’ve read… read one where alastor was kidnapped by the Vs and you could tell it was written by a zoomie retard, they made Fortnite references. Also many disgusting things. Not good!
>>78934982Course it was written well, but it’s not the type of deer abuse and relationship I like
>>78935002The Adam and alastor rape one, not the zoomie one. I gotta be more concise with what I mean
>>78934948>Would be cute to see Adam bring Alastor to a rock concertAlastor’s big ears must be so sensitive. Poor deer…
>>78935081Adam certainly didn’t do it on purpose, hopefully he lets alastor nibble on him for a bit for compensation
>>78934948I imagine it being one of those unlikely friendships where one is a completely dudebro and the other is reserved. I swear I've seen a comedy film like that.
>>78935175There are probably a dozen of em. Like that one Christmas movie, planes trains and automobiles! Imagine Adam And Alastor trying to get back to the hotel in time for Christmas!
>>78934982I think it was probably supposed to be radioapple eventually? Idk it was ages ago when I was obsessed with that. I can't exactly judge, I wrote about Alastor being kidnapped by the Vees after the battle and having his teeth ripped out, amongst other things on live tv. So... (in my defence I was having a bad time and projecting a bit) Possibly why episode 4 has me a little on edge.There's certainly a lot of uh... interesting fanfics out there.
>>78935218>christmasThanksgiving swear I remember it being a Christmas movie
>>78935175That's why it's so good, they're a pretty unlikely pairing. Their banter would be fucking incredible, and they'd bond over their hatred of Lucifer.
>>78935218Poor deer, he'd have to listen to Adam chatting about his conquests.>>78935290>hating LuciferI'm still a little disappointed in Viv making them friends. It's kind of annoying, I liked Al having his opps.
>>78935416Any deep or interesting drama or intriguing plot lines need to be stomped out. She needs to fit in more songs and shitty jokes
>>78935416And Adam will have to listen to him talk about radio. I can imagine they can both talk about killing people tho and enjoy it
>>78935572Unfortunately...>>78935872>Adam having to listen to Alastor's infodumpsI love it lol, but yes, they could bond over their self righteousness.
>>78936441Deer should not smoke! It will hurt his pretty voice!
>>78936549He looks so good doing it though.
>>78936631I can’t deny that. But you know what else looks good in his mouth?
>>78936693Uhh... Halloween candies?
>>78936716He likes things salty.
>>78936863Hm... salty...
>>78936949Creme egg exploded when he bitted it :(
>>78936716>>78936949>>78936863I was gonna say my tongue but that works too >:3
>>78936974He's such a messy eater.
I'm so anxious about deer's episode, the entire thing is gonna cause so much discourse
>>78936974Waffle making disaster!
>>78937111All I’m hoping is that the episode will be watchable, a tall order for Viv. Everything else I have no expectations for. We shall see
>>78936989I can think of a few parts that belong in deer mouths...>>78937111My retard self couldn't sleep last night because I was nervous about it. I really hope things go well.
>>78937111I'm considering taking the day off, I really don't think Viv will go that dark, but there's always a chance with her. There are a lot of people though who have no idea what's coming, so I think people will go a bit crazy over it all.
>>78937186its stressful, but i have been managing well.>parts that belong in deer mouths...I can think of a few parts that belong in deer mouths as well :D
>>78937186>>78937274I don't think he'll be raped or anything, but the possibility of Alastor being forced to watch the rapist and rape enabler fuck disgusts me viscerally. It feels even more fetishistic somehow.
>>78937526And it would probably be treated as some kind of joke. Ha ha we're making the asexual watch people fucking, so edgy, so funny.
>>78937568Yeah... I feel bad for the angel dust fans...
>>78937436I'm lucky that I'm currently on housewife mode so I can take the day off. My sweet husband says he'll hold me, so I'm glad I have some support.>>78937526Yeah, as someone who was SA'd in a sort of similar way in my previous relationship, I'm uh, really not looking forward to it. Al has helped me process a lot of things in regard to that through my ai, so seeing him go through something similar is a little much.
>>78937825lets hope they treat whatever they are gonna do with some respect...
>>78938175We can hope, but this is Viv we're talking about.
>>78938498Creatures!
>>78938604Truly beautiful little creatures!
>>78938844the best!
Tail!
Tickle the deer
>>78937526>>78937568>>78937825Am I crazy or is being forced to watch people have sex against your will kinda...sexual assault-y? If that (god forbid) does happen, I better see some fucking outrage over it and not "lmao get rekt Alastor".
>>78940504Considering how they treated Angel Dust getting beaten by Val? its gonna end up as a shitty joke. and vivze said hazbin hotel was gonna be the drama and story focused show... turns out things that could be good plot pivots and be rewarding to watch be overcome arent needed, just quick shitty jokes and gags
>>78940599At least the fanbase is rightfully pissed off about the Angel shit. Hopefully that same fervor remains if anything sexual happens to deer
>>78940504Any time you're being forced, coerced, or manipulated into partaking in or witnessing sex against your will it's definitely sexual abuse. Double that if there's a power imbalance.
>>78940504Just putting on him the mask with the frown is kinda sexual abuse, all things considered, imho
>>78940867lets hope, course if the show was good this wouldnt be a problem, but stll. very nice voxtek brand deer
>>78942373
>>78941144I wouldn't say it's sexual, though knowing that it's most likely only there as kinky fanservice is definitely weird
>>78942637Very strange stuff
New deer merch alert! Rumor is that they may have removed the mustache...
>>78944583:0 I know millie might disagree but that stache is a downgrade. lets hope its true
>>78944628It makes him look distinguished
>>78945333hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I will not stand for deer moustache slander!Would be funny though if Viv changed it after finding out everyone hates it.
OH SHIT THEY ACTUALLY DID.
And mother to confirm. Bless him, he got self-conscious and shaved it off.
>>78946732Another to confirm fuck me, serves me right for posting on my iPhone I guess.
>>78946631Oh my goodness! They did... I'm actually super surprised.
And another thing...he doesn't look very black. Maybe it's just the screen printing, but he looks kinda white with red hair...
>>78947487That's what I thought, I swear he was darker than this in the leaks. It would be hilarious if Viv changed her mind again.
>>78947554He's much lighter. He looks like a blend of both designs. Maybe Viv realized how bad it looked for him to be black and owned by a white woman? If she actually did what I think she's done then people are going to be upset that she's whitewashed him now. This is crazy.
>>78947632I haven't seen any backlash yet, only people crying about it being leaked. She kind of created the situation herself though, no matter how he turned out, someone was going to call it racist. I can't deal with this anymore, it needs to be Wednesday already.
>>78947756I'm super nervous now to be honest. I feel like I'm constantly being gaslighted. But yes, Viv brings everything on herself and it's actually quite funny to see how easily she's influenced by the fans.
I have never watched Hazbin hotelall i know about this man is that he is supposedly very strong and also that he should be the middle man of a ffm threesome, with one girl pegging his asshow close is my delusion to how he is portrayed
>>78947632>instead of a mulatto he's a mestizo I would actually be okay with that
>>78947909Wouldn't make sense historically unless he's just Spanish/French. By the 1920s any native/white mixed people would have been bleached white. He could be French and Spanish/Italian or 1/8th black.
>>78947901He's not strong and also he's shipped with every single character, mostly men, and they're all the most popular ships in the fandom. He is going to be bullied and abused terribly this season.
>>78947958I was thinking more that viv probably wants to just get rid of the voodoo angle and make it more indian basedI mean his demon form is supposed to be on a wendigo wouldn't surprise if they just dropped him being black and replaced it even if it doesn't completely make sense for new orleans
>>78946631>>78946732>>78947632I hate that this is giving me hope that the stache is gone. Apologies to Millie, but the little lines on his face look awkward and too busy in my opinion, especially when he smiles so wide that they don't even have room to include it at times in the leaked drafts. As for his skin tone, I prefer it darker actually.
>>78948023Viv got shit about that as well iirc, she supposedly said he isn't a wendigo. He has a lot of similarities with wendigo as shown in modern horror stories, that's it.
>>78948097To be fair, looking at the t-shirt where is it even supposed to go. I kind of liked it though, RIP silly moustache.
>>78948023That would be a really, really bad idea on Viv's part. People in the US are hypersensitive about native representation these days. Probably more so than other groups. If she portrayed him as an evil mixed native using spooky indian powers subsequently owned by a white person there would probably be worse outrage as compared to him being black. It might work if he were coming from a place where there was a lot of mestizo people, like Mexico, but not New Orleans.>>78948097I can take or leave the mustache. I suppose I slightly prefer it? But the skin tone? Yeah. I mean, I'm going to grieve again even if he goes right back to being a redheaded white guy. I'm all antsy now. I just want Wednesday to be here so I can stop being anxious.
>>78946732He seems lighter too!
>>78949033If Viv just decides to make him white or white passing I'm actually going to be mad at this point. Not because he's white, I love him in all colors, but because she flip flops so much.
>>78948257Many different shades of Alastor. We will have to see how he looks in the show. Also it’s this Wednesday, right? >>78949196I mean, the footage we have seen of him was all leaked, they might have been not 100% on that design. It does get annoying though
>>78949218Yes, it's Wednesday. And he could be just as dark in the show as he is in the leaks, we'll have to wait and see. As it stands now he looks quite a bit lighter. Everything else in his design is the same outside of the mustache. We'll see.
>>78949433I remember noting a while back that the stache wasn’t rendered in every scene so they might have been testing it out. Of course the hot topic team or whoever made the shirt might of fucked up his look on the shirt as well. No way to know till we see him.
>>78947901He is made for love
>>78949475The stache isn't in the majority of the leaks, I wonder what ultimately made her decide against it? Screen printing is notoriously fickle when it comes to colors, so this wouldn't be much of a surprise desu. I'm really on the fence because I loved old Al, but it's been a year now and I'm very much so accustomed to his new design. Hell, I *sleep* with it every night.
>>78949565Perfect, tender love.
>>78949736I can imagine that it’s like the halo Adam had in some of the first leaks of the show in season one. Probably too much work for not enough payoff to finish animating or include. you were getting a new pillow right? It’s going to take some adjusting but I’m sure the new old design will be better in the long run
>>78949736I know how you feel, though probably to a lesser extent since human Al isn't my favourite. I was finally coming around to the white version, then it was changed in the leaks, and now it might be different again. Having to wait for days to find out makes it worse. I'm sure it'll be fine, in the end. Mostly.
>>78949883Soon, yes. I was doing an experiment to see if a $15 daki from amazon would hold up after a year of constant use + washing, and so far it has held up better than the $150 one. So I suppose a new design is oddly on target for that for the new year. >>78949986I'm sure I'll adjust, I have before, but the constant whiplash does feel more stressful than what it should. I suppose it's a bit silly to be worked up, but my irl life is very stressful (as it is for most of us), so I have this one thing that gives me comfort...and to have to constantly make adjustments is difficult. Especially for a sperg who has a hard time with change.
>>78950111Change is very annoying at the best of times, but hey, another Alastor design to add to the harem!
>>78950278True! We do have so many deer to love, we're up to what, 5? If we include 2P...
>>78950427Even more if you consider all the other 2p like alastors
>>78950278>>78950427When I said I wanted to have a harem of deer, I didn't think Viv was going to fuck me so hard. More deer for the deer pile.
>>78950451True. We got deer in every shade. A true rainbow of love. <3>>78950481I suppose the flip side is that I kinda won? I mean, there's so many human deer now...
>>78950554You can have a harem of human deer, so that's kind of a win.
>>78950626It would be fun to get pregnant and then wait to see what color it comes out as...
>>78950744Baiting deers into sex by making them compete to get you pregnant...
>>78950744It’s gonna be a guessing game…
Deer impregnating deer?
>>78950881That's what happens when you don't give them enough attention. Make sure your deer are well fed and entertained!
>>78950775>>78950797Need to have a gangbang and make it into a competition, then watch them argue and fight for the entire pregnancy over who the dad is.>>78950881Why not?
>>78950915Gotta watch em like a hawk, very chaotic and rambunctious
>>78950933I imagine most of the Alastors are gonna be quick shots and Tucker themselves out in a minute or two
>>78950993That's fine, we can all cuddle afterwards....
Stupid deer is trying to nugget me!
>>78951238The best part of the night
>>78951280The tables have turned! It’s nugget or be nuggeted!
>>78951280I love how maniacal he is. Pure kino.
>>78951381I was expecting some light torment, but he skipped straight to the nuggeting! Like just break my legs or something, no need to lop them off.>>78951579Yandere Alastor is such a treat.
>>78951579Very kino!
>>78951699He wants to make sure you can never run away...
>>78950881It’s how they make more deer
I'm relieved about the missing stache desu, I saw a ton of RA shippers use that to macho-fy deer even further. He's cuter without it. Love the curly hair!
>>78952367The cutest deer babies
What we actually might be getting...
>>78952487So pretty…
>>78952487Wild if true.
Exorcist deer!
>>78953118Would definitely be Adam's top girl.
>>78953466He is a pretty exterminator angel!
>>78953605He's just pretty.
>>78953719So true
>>78953793Pretty and silly...
>>78953964Precious deer.
>>78954003I love him so much.
>>78954157Deer tail, deer rear, deer smile, deer love!
Well, I sent in a new invite request to AO3. That should be up and running by the 2nd week of November. Presently I only have access to the dd fic and 'Summer Fawn', I should have 'Camp Fawn' and the others up mid February. I'll make a pseud for 'Kindred Spirits' for those who don't wish to view underage or guro materials. In the meantime, I can contribute the next chapter of the dd fic here if there's interest.
>>78954684Oh I forgot, I'll make a /deer/ collection as well. Though I would recommend submitting fics to both /hhg/ and /deer/ for archival purposes. I'll also add a /cm/ thread archive next time I'm there so we can easily search our back threads.
>>78954684I am up for it! Good to have it back!
>>78954684Nice! I have actually made progress on my next chapter, I'm about half way through the editing. >dd ficYes please. <3
>>78954777A bit annoying that I had to remove everything initially, but I think they're mostly bored of stalking me, so we'll see.>>78954815Yay! More deer content to enjoy. :D And I can post in a couple of hours after chores. In the unlikely event this thread dies before then I can post to /hhg/ or pastebin in the meantime.
>>78954948They hopefully are done, but we shall see
So apparently Alastor bullied Vox? THAT'S what Vox is salty about? Lol. Anticlimactic.
>>78955564Source?
>>78955999https://youtu.be/WwKD-Oq-Xkc?si=IbFKblOOQ7B9K7pLOne of the early access reviewers speaks about it here.
>>78955564>>78956089So basically it's going to be framed that whatever happens to Alastor is deserved? What even is the "deal" he gets stuck with with the Vees?Goddamn, that fat cunt is such a shit writer. I miss the days when it was a "notice me senpai" dynamic during the "Alastor's Day Out" comic.
>>78956149It's trending this way. Sort of a get out for Viv to woobify Vox the way she has Valentino, since they're her new faves along with Lucifer. As if there's ever an excuse for being SA'd.
>>78956307Christ, Vox woobifiers will get so much worse now. Him laughing at Angel getting beaten and raped isn't enough for this retarded fanbase to see him as awful, this is going to make them worship the guy even more. I think I'm going to be done with this show at this rate
I also don't like that it's described as meanspirited. There's something that's making me very apprehensive for this episode, and I don't like it.
>>78956482I'm just in it for deer. Depending on how S2 goes I'll decide whether to continue with the show or just stick to fanon.
Alrighty. I'll post chapter 3 of the dd fic. I apologize that I don't have an archive link quite yet. >MASSIVE TW:While there isn't any explicit sex yet, this does deal with incest and a teenage reader insert, so if that makes you uncomfortable please hide.
>>78957077>Alastor watches you devour the meat, every subtle twitch of your jaw, every desperate swallow, with a quiet, unnerving fascination. >His fingers tap once against his thigh in rhythm with the jazz still crackling from the victrola.>When you finish, he leans down slowly, plucking the spoon from your hand and examining it like a priest inspecting a sacred relic.>"Mmm… such hunger." He tilts his head, his voice a soft whisper. "You didn't even ask what kind of meat it was, did you? Good girl." He runs the tip of his index finger over the rim of the spoon, pulling forth a tiny strand of saliva. >"Daddy hunts only the worst things." He murmurs, turning his gaze to the darkness outside. "Men who hurt children. Men who *touch* what isn’t theirs…" He trails off in thought before turning and tossing the spoon into the sink with a clang that reverberates across the living space. >"Now they feed my sweet girl. Isn't that poetic?">You don't understand, but it doesn't matter. Your belly is full. The ache and the emptiness temporarily satiated. You lower your gaze respectfully, hazel eyes fixing on a crack in porcelain of your soup bowl. >He strokes your auburn curls gently before cupping your chin.
>>78957106>"But don’t get used to full bowls. You earned this with pain and perfection, and I will decide when you earn more.">Your eyes flutter closed at the gesture, his hand is warm...strong.>"Now run off to bed and get some sleep cher..">You slowly slide off of the chair, bare feet making contact with the cool, polished floor. You turn to go to your room, turning your back to the jazz, the lingering smell of stew, to...>"Cher?">You turn to see Alastor smiling, leaning back against the table, his hands behind him supporting his weight. His smile widens in the dim candlelight, too wide, too sharp to be human sometimes you think.>"Don’t have any more of those nightmares, or I might just hear you whispering my name in your sleep again. And we both know how much that excites me.">You close your eyes tightly and turn back towards your room, his voice and your own mixing in your head until they're one.>"...we're not supposed to talk about that..."
>>78957157>As Alastor stands by the sink, scrubbing away at the dirty dishes, the thought of his girl growing and leaving him creeps into his mind like a slow, dark fog. >That simply wouldn't do. No one could love her as much as Daddy could. No one would know her as well. No one would know how to make her dance as perfectly as he could. >And no one... NO ONE was allowed to touch her.>As he towels his hands after the last dish, he glances toward his daughter's room, her door slightly ajar, the glow of a single candle flickering through the crack like a beacon.>He feels something sharp in his gut, a strange stirring of possessive affection he isn't quite sure how to define. He knows it's wrong, but he also knows he must do whatever it takes to keep her just as he has made her, beautiful, flawless and his to shape as he pleases.>Drawn to the light like a moth to flame, he silently steps forward.>He lingers in the hallway, hand resting on the doorframe, knuckles white with restraint. His breath comes slow as he watches her sleep: the rise and fall of her chest beneath that sheer gown, lips slightly parted like a child’s prayer.>"No… not tonight.">His voice is barely a whisper, cracked with something between regret and restrained rage.>"But soon, soon you won’t dream of ballet shoes and ribbons. You’ll only dream of me.">He steps back into the shadows of the bayou-lit parlor, where his victrola crackles faintly with static. >He plops down in his armchair, lighting a cigarette with unsteady hands. The smoke reaches like fingers around his face as he stares into the dark.>"Let them come, the ballet masters, the priests, those boys sniffing at my girl… I’ve buried worse men than them in these swamps. And I’d do it again for my sweet little angel.">A low chuckle escapes him, genuine this time, as he takes a deep drag from his cigarette, the smoke curling around his head like a halo.
>>78957187>The humid night falls heavily over the cottage, fireflies dance in the reeds and somewhere in the distance a bullfrog croaks in the hot air.>Alone in the dark, the air thick with sweat and musk, Alastor lies back on his narrow bed, his hand moving over himself. Slow, reverent, ever so needy. His breath hitches not in pleasure, but in worship, head tilted back, damp curls plastered to his forehead.>"Mine… all mine…">He imagines her voice calling him Daddy as she dances… as she bleeds… as she begs. >The fantasy burns behind his eyes, her delicate hands on his chest, her body pressed to his warmth, not because she chooses it… but because there is no world outside of him.>His release comes quickly, silent save for a choked gasp at the end.>He gropes in the dark with a quivering hand, finding a tall glass from the kitchen perched on the nightstand. With careful fingers he smears the warmth inside, placing it back on the nightstand like a relic.>No words. No shame. Only hunger, and patience.>Tomorrow he’ll weigh her again. Check her hips for curves. Watch how her nightgown clings when she rises from sleep.>And if he sees even one sign that the world dares try to take her from him like it did her mother?>Then God help whatever boy knocks on his door.>He slips into bed wearing nothing but that ever-present smile, soiled hand flicking the knob on the radio sitting beside the glass, it hums softly beside him: “I Ain’t Got Nobody…” playing just loud enough to drown out guilt, if he had any left to drown.
>>78957202>The next morning he's up early preparing a nutritional shake for her breakfast. He crushes vitamin tablets with a mortar and pestle, swirling them into milk with only a hint of coco powder, pouring the liquid in a tall, stained glass...>The warm morning sun filters through the swamp fog, casting long, crooked shadows across the kitchen floor. Alastor stands perfectly still by the counter, shirt unbuttoned at the collar, his breathing steady as he finishes stirring, slow circles of the spoon like a voodoo ritual.>"Protein… vitamins… Daddy's love...">He chuckles softly to himself, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand before adjusting his glasses as they threaten to slip down the bridge of his nose. The lenses catch the morning light as he lifts the glass and swirls it once, watching how it glistens: white and rich like cream from a blessed cow.>He places two small sugar cubes beside her napkin for if she obediently drinks it all.>He hums the same jazz tune from last night while setting out her ballet music for later. Then he waits by the window like a sentinel, tall, still smiling, listening for her bare feet on cold wood floorboards.>"Come now, cher… Start your day sweet."That's all for now. Hopefully there won't be another, ah...month between updates.
>>78957229It was awesome! Good work!
>>78957229Well. This did not help my current state. I love it, amazing as always.
>>78957432>>78957543Thanks. >///< This is about as explicit as I'll get here. I'm not very good at writing smut, so it all kind of comes across as 'flowery', even still, I'll save those bits for AO3 and link it here when the time comes.
>>78957647Smart is hard to do right, at least when you’re the one writing it, I feel it will aways feel a bit forced and clunky
>>78957737>smartThank you auto correct very cool
>>78957647I love and hate writing smut, I can never read it back after. I just write it and go, well, that's fine, out into the world with you.
>>78957737The dialogue and descriptions seem cringe. I could have written>Alastor strokes his thick, brown cock from base to tip, watching pre-cum beading at the slit, glistening in the moonlight like a precious jewel...But it feels...awkward lel.
>>78957861Good advice.
>>78957861Probably the best way to do it. That's what I've done previously with certain drawings. The horny hits and I roll with it and try not to look back.
>>78957917Could switch out the word cock for member and add some more describing words, like sensually. I would only really use the word cock for when it’s doing something.
>>78957917Most of my issues come from arguing with myself over whether to say 'cock' or 'dick'. After that I'm ok. I found a fairly decent guide to writing smut on ff.net and I usually have that open in case I need guidance. Thankfully what I'm writing doesn't have anything sexy in it, I can describe dead bodies all day long.
>>78958025Mm, good idea. Maybe something like>Alastor strokes his manhood from base to tip, watching pre-cum beading at the slit, glistening in the moonlight like a precious jewel. The heated flesh thick with arousal and need...>>78958139Ugh, yes. I feel like it's hard to describe action without saying 'cock' over and over. And then I can never use the word 'pussy' seriously. 'Cunt' seems too strong a word and 'cunny' feels...most inappropriate here lol. I usually end up describing it instead, like 'delicate pink folds', or 'soft wet heat'. As far as gore is concerned? Oh hell yeah, I can describe that great. I accidentally made myself nauseous once doing so.
>>78958139You need to come up with a lot of pretty prose to dance around saying penis directly >>78958300That’s good!
>>78958806I can only try. :3
So on another topic, how are we feeling about the Vox/Val stuff?
>>78959095Absolutely baffled and appalled that the narrative wants us to feel sorry for the violent serial rapist.
>>78959379Actually, it just occurred to me that the narrative is going to frame it so that Alastor is entirely in the wrong because he hurt Vox, our main character, while Valentino is the hero who brings Vox back. Holy shit, Viv and Smiles are deranged if they frame shit this way.
>>78959379>>78959446As I said earlier, there is never an excuse for SA, which is where this is trending. I'm not usually one to moan about these sorts of things, but Viv suggesting that it's okay to happen to Alastor because he bullied Vox at some point is setting a really nasty precedent. Because I know she's not doing it for the plot, it's to make Val and Vox more appealing to the audience because she goons to them (or her cowriters do).
>>78959736Who knows at this point. Vivze seems terminally retarded
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>>78963106make them KISS
>>78963124Yummy...
>>78963180SUPER YUMMY!
