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New thread, yay!!! Just in time since I just got back from the gym.Gives me an excuse to post this cute little two parter, I really loved when Nick was put into a romantic situation outside his control. This one let them actually have a proper hangout, y'know platonically of course. <3C: @p_ino__2525
I'm hijacking this thread beginning to ask again anyone capable of reading look at this crap I wrote, tell me if im making any obvious mistakes, or if you found the first thing I've written in years to be even mildly interesting. Thank you for your service. I love you.https://rentry.org/emwiuxp8>>80433475Thanks for reading. The beginning is probably closest to my normal style so that's a bit worrying, but also starting chapters is like pulling teeth in my experience. You just have to try and get through it so actually good stuff can flow. The It thing is something I'll have to work on as i've always just written by vibe and what i think i'd see in a book myself rather than the actual rules of english embarassingly.On the dialogue, yeah, not surprising its a bit hard to follow the convo. I didn't actually think of it until i started writing, but the concept is oddly unique. I've never actually read anything where an extended conversation is happening which is the thing you're meant to be paying attention to, where the actual viewpoint character is explicitely not paying attention or even in view of the people talking. So I felt really restricted: I couldn't use any physical language or describe the talking mammals much at all like I usually would. It's just Judy not listening to these people and having a little freakout over being racist until she notices them.The general idea beyond this was just sort of meant to be 'Are you guys dating yet? Why not?' from everyone up to and including Judy's own parents until she starts trying to figure it out herself. With the reasons being:- Judy is way too sheltered to realize interspecies was even a thing.- Racism causing the above.- Being Nick is suffering.I would also like to make it known that I spent waaay too long choosing the name 'Oliver Woolcott' for a sheep and I'm inordinately proud of that stupid pun.
>>80434252The second part, can't not include the iconic Lady and The Tramp scene. Muzzle touching, all very non-romantical ;DDDDI hope everyone is having a wonderful day so far, I feel the love for this community just a little bit more today.
I like the idea that at first Judy is kind of sickened at the idea of a knot. Like it's really alien to her and it just doesn't look or seem right. Which obviously upsets Nick since he loves her and doesn't want to you know fucking scare her with his dick like a xenomorph tongue. So since she loves him dearly too she does her best to grow accustomed to it and Nick keeps telling her she never has to look at it, he can just put it in he'll do everything no problem etc. Eventually Judy becomes enthralled with it, absolutely adoring the shape and how it works. Just fascinated by it entirely. Which makes Nick quite pleased when all is said and done.
>>80434305If 3 gives us a kiss scene I want a fake out in the beginning where they go somewhere to eat before everything gets going. Judy gets pasta and Nick sneaks a bite. They end up almost kissing but break it off before it happens, Judy punching his arm saying the spaghetti is hers. The tease would be ok as long as a real kiss would be coming later.
>>80434306This thread's obsession with knots while also not understanding them is really something so sure, it'd be a hit
>>80434395I know them, how they work, and their purpose. I disregard your reality and replace them with: hot furry porn logic! >whimsical rainbow confetti musicI guess I should have said canine penis not knot, my bad. The general gist stays the same. Sorry.
>>80433012https://rentry.org/emwiuxp8I enjoyed it anon. The dialogue and the setup was interesting and it's always fun seeing some action with the other officers of the ZPD.As the other anon said there was a slight awkward start but otherwise it was good. Despite all the characters layered in one conversation it was understandable, and maintained distinct personality for each. (Swinton, Ramsey, Fangmeyer, Wolford, and Judy's thoughts)Funny enough Wolford and Fangmeyer seem to have a similar Judy and Nick dynamic.
>>80434604>Despite all the characters layered in one conversation it was understandable, and maintained distinct personality for each.Them actually remaining distinct despite the lack of any real visuals was my main concern, so this is great to hear. I'm glad you liked it anon, thanks for giving me the confidence to spend more time on this instead of bettering myself or exercising or whatever humans are meant to do to kill time between cradle and grave. i shall have to rework the beginning at some point.>Funny enough Wolford and Fangmeyer seem to have a similar Judy and Nick dynamic.Shh. There's no reason I did that.
>>80434274>I'm hijacking this thread beginning to ask again anyone capable of reading look at this crap I wrote, tell me if im making any obvious mistakes, or if you found the first thing I've written in years to be even mildly interesting. Thank you for your service. I love you. I don't think it's crap, Anon! I always found the angle of dumb love to be fun, especially when Judy doesn't even realize it. The 'everyone knows they're fucking but them' is a trope that I always adore seeing.Judy still obsessing over that sheep name while the other officers are actively gossiping about her and Nick is also in character, her drowning out the noise until she finally picks up those key words you mentioned earlier. So immersed in whatever she was doing that she doesn't realize she's in the spotlight.Nick also being a dealer at a college but not attending is a fun detail too, I'm assuming that badger is Honey? If not, it is nice to see that Nick was in a previous interspecies relationship. Also the yearning detail of him constantly staring at his partner's cotton tail being noticed by Fangmeyer is just *chef's kiss*.I hope to see a continuation! If I have to give any critiques, some parts of the dialogue are little hard to keep track of but that's especially hard part to deal with when you have more than four characters involved in a scene.Another thing I'll have to add is Fangmeyer and Wolford - you actually made them have chemistry! They feel natural bouncing off each other just as you described with the situation at hand. The complaining of partners and their chemistry (or lack thereof for Swinton) eventually leading to talking about the partners that have *too* much chemistry was a nice little transition.C: @Nouna_arts
>>80435118A fox and a bunny... OH NO NOOOOOOO ZOOTOPIA HAS FALLEN SAVE ME MUTTMAN
>>80435214
>>80435116Huzzah! I am granted self-esteem. Yeah, half of my Zootopia headcanons are based on Weaver's stuff, so Nick and Honey being together, specifically pic related's version of Honey as a conspiracy theory nutcase, is in there. And also y'know, why they're not dating anymore. I think I'm going to go through the dialogue and add a few more indicaters of who is talking and tone at some point to keep it a bit clearer.
>>80435228Oh WELL done, Nick, WELL done!
>>80434820>“Do I need to warn my girlfriend about you?”>Shh. There's no reason I did that.That dog is spoken for you rapscallion...
>>80435228
>>80435228Babies, or semen?
>>80435826>Judy what about your literal hundreds of family that take care of babies daily>or my fox mom>or the precinct child care room>or Mr. Big could literally protect the baby for free like it was his own, and he would, happily>NICK THINK OF MY JOB IT'LL RUIN METhis was so utterly retarded.
>>80435214>>80435228I didn't expect this sort of end for this set.
>>80436082Them having kids is a lot of hardcore fans ultimate goal, I'd wager. Even if not biologically possible in world, they'd want them to adopt.
>>80436122Do you count Dagasi as a hardcore fan?
>>80435826I was going to make a joke about IWS, but you beat me to it
>>80436232Well I'd say if you're drawing porn of the characters, yeah.
>>80436232If that's Judy's asshole, she needs to see a doctor and pronto!
>>80435941Judy grew up surrounded by hundreds of bunny children. She just dont want to see another snot-encrusted bunny kit ever again.
>>80435941I've been saying this since the day that page was published>>80436490lmao, but she had no idea what the kid would be. It could've been a fox kit. I just... its insanely out of character
Been reading The Punk of Podunk after an anon recommended it while talking about my own fic idea, really enjoying it so far. Has made nightshifts a lot more bearable lemme tell you. Gonna start my own fic I'm stuck in night mode and see what I can make before the nights over. Please wish me luck because I've got to work hard to make sure it isn't too similar to Podunk
>>80437173>Please wish me luck because I've got to work hard to make sure it isn't too similar to PodunkGood luck, Anon! Make Judy proud!
>Nibbles Maplestick >Available 24/7What did she mean with this?
>>80436435"Fucking hell look at this gorgeous creature my he......s going to jump rig... ...t of my chest oh god my pant...are getting tight... ...is rock hard I want to fuck th...bunny so h... ...eed her to sit on my face I w...to burry m... ...tongue in he... ...hole a...make he... ...screa... ...squ...all ov... ...nd ball...smel... ...until my d...ridin... ...on d...if sh... ...su... ...eed her my cummy pe... ...le... ...er my bank acco...eve... ...ing in... ...goddess of beautyunti... ...kill anyone who wo...take h... ...ramm... ...nuzzle her cute litt...flat f... ...chest grind her hips into my crotc...whil... ...all of duty those noobs will be so j......ake he... ...bet her asshole smells like flowers"I concur.
>>80438055e.e. Cummings meets Zootopia.
>>80438368I'm definitely cumming(s) in someone.
https://x.com/SmagadoodleDraw/status/2008967254499852597
>>80438795He only bares his fangs for Judy. To protect, or to serve.
>>80438795In which Judy sits on an ice pack for the next week.
>>80439098I don't get off to them having sex often, but I do like seeing them have sex. It just makes me happy. I'm pathetic I know.
>>80439405>I don't get off to them having sex often, but I do like seeing them have sex. It just makes me happy. I'm pathetic I know.I'm right there with ya, Anon. I'm in exactly the same boat.
>>80434274I like the concept and I liked the gossip part. It has potential, you should write more
>>80435941Wasn't her concern about getting ripped apart from the inside by a freak hybrid too big for her
>>80439807That's dumb and the doctors would have told her beforehand and it's retarded.
I will be his new daddy.
Me am make start on fic about cop sent to the middle of bum fuck nowhere in bunny burrow. Not much to show so far but like it's 5am and I gotta stop staying up so late to write. (I'm a night owl but it fucks my sleep schedule up real bad) Wolf has a really generic first name because I'm not the best with names rip. (Second name is a reference. anyone gets it I dunno, I'll write you a cameo or something stupid)https://rentry.org/burrowwip
>>80440332I can't forgive him for trying to kill Judy, Nick, and Gary, but since he's cute I don't mind him being the prisons toy. He gets the love he's wanted, and after he tells them how his father treated him they beat the shit out of Milton at least once a week. Would this be acceptable to you guys?
>>80441987Hmm... have Milton also be the prison's toy as well. Like father, like son, they say
>>80435941>>80439807Nah, if you do yourself the disservice of re reading that trashfire again, you'll see that she was more concerned about remaining a "symbol" for the city because of how "important" she became after the Bellwether case. It's the most self aggrandizing bullshit that makes her even more obnoxious than the comic had made Nick, and he's a close second imo
>>80440670Good intro. Gets into the central tension/hook of the story smoothly and introduces the character that at least I find likable and somewhat unique. Sometimes I find it difficult to care about some oc and they seem like just a random fursona "Eric the cat" but Ash I can get into. The memory moments was a good part. A few grammar typos but I'm not worried those will get ironed out in another pass. One thing is that >yellow orbsDescribing eyes as colored orbs has got to be a trope now in the zoot fandom lmaoThanks for writing anon I am curious to hear more about it.
>>80442412emowoldsamewthest
>>80442426I wanted to be nice about it but yes they do that exact thing alot and it's worn out. It's not a huge problem to use it in your own writing but just a tip,"He closed his bright amber eyes" would work terrific too.
So, any suggestions?
>>80442707Finnick says Toot toot.Duke sells pirated movies.Mammals are responsible for birds being shunned away from ZootopiaFree square should be shakira
>>80442707the birds are gonna be a metaphor for the strive of israel wanting an ethnostatebat character def happening
>>80434032:OI didn't think my Skye ass was THAT good. I am honoured she is the new thread image. Here's a sketchy drawing of her (inspired by Kida from Atlantis) I did a few days ago but didn't properly clean up.I've been kinda busy lately but trying to keep my interest up in Zootopia. I'll try not to disappear so much.
>>80442886>Kida from AtlantisGreat taste
Velvet giving Remmy a kiss on the cheek upon learning he thinks she looks 33 years old
>>80443553Velvet giving Remmy a kiss on the dick
>>80438946Someone should tell this guy not to use his grandma's tits for modelling purposes.
>>80442707Nick kisses Judy.Judy kisses Nick.Bonnies is nursing another baby.Birds (Shakira gets to sing the original story again)Remmy makes an appearance.Stu Hopps tasers Nick.Chase scene on a tractor.Weaselton being carried away by an eagle.Wolf and Foxington cameo.
>>80434032
>>80443322Thanks.Friendly bump since I can't sleep.
>>80442886She's a total sweety!
>>80442707-Gazelle's kidnapped-Nick and Judy almost kiss but are interrupted by a minor character.-Nick tries to tell Judy he loves her three different times, but is interrupted.-Nick or Judy blurts out "I love you!" at the worst possible time.-Bellwether kidnaps Nick or Judy (probably Judy)-New super-duo at the ZPD threat to outshine N&J-THIS happens and Zoot3 becomes the first movie to cross 1 trillion dollars.
>>80442707Kiss
>>80445816Thanks, I'm still figuring out how to draw anthros. Usually not my thing, not because I don't like them (I do, especially Zootopia styled) but it's so incredibly difficult it feels like to get proportions correct. If anyone reading has any good reference material (mostly of Nick, I really only care about drawing foxes) that you think would help me improve, that would be cool!
>>80446289> (mostly of Nick, I really only care about drawing foxes) Here's his head, at least.
Just a quick reminder that there's good in the world.
>>80446609I know
We know, Nick -- OH how we know!
Peek-a-boo!
Soon.
>>80448246Jannie?
>>80443708No, that's for Al later
>>80442412Thankyou for the kind words and the feedback. Grammar and spelling I tend to sort out when the chapter itself is done after a few rereads (no idea if it's a smart idea or not. I tend to go back and rewrite certain parts anyway) and as for the orbs, fair point it is pretty generic. I'll see about changing it to something better, cheers. Not sure how long this first chapter will be, but will see how it goes.
OwenGods won
>>80449076I'm so glad that we have that confession scene from the second movie to remember whenever I'm made to look at this garbage
>>80437173Its a classic eh. Good luck with your own!
>>80442886Hey dont feel obligated or anything, many of us come and go here, not unusual to be away for a while.Feeling better?
Rank your favorite backstreet member in order!This is NOT a single choice poll, drag the characters you like in order. Your top choice gets 10 points and every rank below it gets 1 lesshttps://strawpoll.com/3RnYXJd7Jyehttps://strawpoll.com/3RnYXJd7Jyehttps://strawpoll.com/3RnYXJd7Jye
>>80449812No Pandora?
>>80449895oh, let met add it quick
>>80449895btw, you can revote to change your choices btw
>>80449918>>80449951Fantastic, best girl Pandora is my top pick. The Betty.
Why is Marty not 1st place???
>>80450022I put him in last place on my poll
>>80450077wow, rude
>>80450077Sorry to hear about your mistake, thankfully you can just re-vote to correct it
>>80449812Would do If I had read it, soz Weave
>>80450477then why are you responding
>>80450554le epic pwnage
>>80450442I usually don't go all in on the Pawbert hate, but this reminded me of something I saw on Twitter.Anyway, a new day is upon us! Hope everyone is feeling great today, I had a snow day today so I get to focus on my work! :DDDC: @Nailtoo_
>>80450623I wanna see them tackle at least one scene of someone hating their relationship if 3 makes them a couple. Like maybe cause it pred/prey. Maybe just have them ignore the hater and keep going, holding arms, saying the animals hate doesn't matter only each other does.
>>80450734Thankfully we won't have to worry about that because 3 won't make them a couple
>>80451068Is Judy drowning?
>>80450623You too my man!>>80450734Its a pretty natural branch from that if they decide to do it, I could see it.>>80451068Oooh nice, I like the tennis ball in the corner.
>>80451312Vacuum sealed.
Today I found out that for some reason foxes are also affected by catnip. And that catnip works because it mimics sex hormones. If you told me that there is a magic drug in Zootopia that instantly makes cats and foxes horny AF for about 15 minutes with no health issues or addiction problems, I'd say you were writing fetish content. But no, that's a legit thing.
>>80451413oh so THAT'S why nick was on that case at the start of the movie
>>80451074Yeah I know that's likely. I can dream, ok? It's all I got left in life.
>>80450623>I usually don't go all in on the Pawbert hate, but this reminded me of something I saw on Twitter.I don't even hate Pawbert. In fact your statement reminds me of some posts that I saw when I was looking at the archives. Posts saying that there were people who were commissioning Pawbert getting gored and stuff like that, and I was like, "Really? I haven't seen that." I've only seen like 2 pieces of art that have him all bloody and bruised and they're not really all that gory. So all I have to ask is, does anybody here have that Pawbert gore art to show? No, I'm not a gorefag, I just want to see out of morbid curiosity.
>>80451841i havent seen any of that either but it would be pretty obvious it would be a fetish thing and not a hate thing
>>80451841I haven't seen much of any art like that outside of here but Asians are freaky sometimes so I could believe some exists.
really, the worst thing about Pawbert is that he's a cringe millennial. i can let the murders slide but not this
>>80449390That's not a very lady-like stance, Judy.
>>80452017No, let her cook.
>>80448246
>>80450022Because he's Marty
>>80452258>No, let her cook.For some weird reason, I just can't see Judy sitting like that. Or, for that matter, sitting at all. She seems to always be in motion and even slowing down for a second seems out of character for her.
>>80452995Facesitting please.
>>80451413>Judy finding out about this little factoid and hesitantly buying some online to try on by herself>As she applies some nip by dabbing a little of it on her neck a shiver of pleasure shoots up her back from the memory of Nick's hot breath wrapped around her throat. His jaws were so fully capable of ending her with a single bite, but she knew he wouldn't have dreamed of it.>She had done research on the ways catnip can affect foxes upon learning about its existence from some colleague banter she had overheard the week prior. Long story short, it doesn't have the same mind altering capabilities that a Nighthowler has.>Which is why she hadn't felt any guilt when purchasing it the day after. She would never morally agree with buying such a substance that would affect her beloved partner like that.>She didn't even have the courage to wear this around him; she had purchased it simply to wear it in front of her mirror like she were trying on a new hat. >Trying new hats didn't normally make her feel so aroused.>No, catnip didn't affect foxes so dramatically, but it did have the ability to raise their libido and attraction to something- or rather, someone- wearing it>She had simply wanted to imagine what would happen if she had decided to wear this around him.>She runs a paw from her neck down to her shoulder, then past that onto her chest. She allowed a finger to linger on her nipple and recalled the size of Nick's paw.>All kinds of thoughts filled her mind at that moment; him standing right behind her, bringing those paws lower, kissing her neck->She needed her pen. Needed to hear his voice>She needed to imagine him lifting her up, kissing her deep, before throwing her onto her bed to claim her. His voice. His voice is the only thing she needed then>Her thoughts were torn to shreds when she heard a sudden series of knocks on her door>"Carrots? I was in the neighborhood and-" oh God
>>80452995She does slow down at times, like when she went back to the burrows to sell carrots, although she was kinda depressed then I guess.
>>80453149I really gotta stop switching between past and present tense when writing these greensBut basically, I wanted to imagine a scene where Nick was trying desperately to ignore a tantalizing scent on Judy, while Judy desperately wants to pretend that she doesn't notice how horny Nick is in front of her both out of a sense of fear for their relationship but also guilt. And then Nick would accidentally knock something over and a box of nip would spill onto the floor. And he'd be like, "carrots, what is this? Why do you have catnip in here?"And then Judy would have to explain why she wanted it and next would be (hesitant at first until fully embracing) porn stuff
>>80453149What a cliffhanger to hit the hay on, but thanks buner! Will read the rest tomorrow if it continues.
>>80453239Hope you keep going, sounds fun!
>>80453141>Facesitting please.As close as I could come without searching through 9,572 images.
demand judeon resurgence
>>80453396I would prefer the bunny butt on my face but fluffy sheep butt is great as well.
>>80451919>It would be pretty obvious it would be a fetish thing and not a hate thingI mean, some people will take their hate for a character to some major extremes: https://ledmuseum.candlepower.us/fifteen/dybarney.htm
>>80453569I still don't think Judy ever masturbated before she met Nick. Not because it was something only bad bunnies do, but because she never felt the need -- or had the privacy -- to do it. Then she met Nick and after that first encounter, she found herself wet and turned on. She kinda discovered the mechanisms on her own.
>>80454160>https://ledmuseum.candlepower.us/fifteen/dybarney.htmYeeeee-ipes.
>>80453569That's it I'm not jackin off anymore. If I wanna get off my body will be forced to get a girlfriend.
>>80451841
>>80454243Milton realizing he loves his son after he kills himself and it's too late to ever tell him
>>80451954>murders
>>80455594Attempted murder is still murder, pawbie.
>>80451954Pawbert, like any other guy born in 1994, likes men in his butt.
>>80456318The movie takes place in 2016 bro he was born in like 1985
Hi /ztg/. 10.5 gorillion years ago, I started writing this thing ITT and never finished it. I've returned to put that to rest, though this could only be a post for skeletons now. Longformed it, since that seemed at least a little more fitting.https://rentry.org/remmyonavobuteonslate
>>80457010Judy Jessy is hot
When Nibbles smacked Nick and Judy on the ass, which one do you think liked it more?
>>80453239This sounds like gold, I hope you write more.
>>80457010Did they really have them dress up like this?
SEX WITH DAWN UNTIL PREDATORS BECOME HER FETISH
https://youtu.be/7OcDAukWMHA
>>80457548where is it
>>80457597She's in wolf's clothing because she's wearing one of their oversized (for her) t-shirt's after a night of passionate love making
>>80457597>The Sheep in Wolf's Clothing: Out early on good behavior, an ankle-monitored Dawn Bellwether copes with the boredom of house arrest by returning to her anti-Pred rhetoric, which doesn't go unnoticed. Three wolves arrive to teach the little sheep about the primal roles she's so obsessed with. so the premise for this one was pretty much what you see but the twist at the end was going to be that Dawn had hired/set them up in advance to come harass and fuck her and they all kinda got uncomfortable at the end with how far into it she got so she reluctantly toned it down a little so as not to ruin the dommy foursome she set up at her own expense
>>80457594Fuck -- and I thought *I* had a collection...
>>80457832Lol
Pawbert, I'm ready.
>>80451074Why you gotta crush peoples dreams? Let people want things, man.
>>80458832those are really weird things to post nickbro