Previous: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/80508297>Request, write, or share stories and provide feedback/critique when appropriate. All writers are welcome, SFW and NSFW.>Instead of asking for interest or worrying about a fetish, just post your damn writing/request and see what happens. You might get lucky.>Complaining about fetishes is dumb and stupid in /trash/. Use that negative energy for requesting, reading and writing instead.>Please tag stories so readers know what they're getting into. Nobody can force you to tag stories you share or make. However, people are MUCH likelier to skip a work if there are no tags present.>Try to bump the thread if it gets to page 9, but feedback is always appreciated for posted stories, for author or reader! Those are the best kind of bumps./d/'s Master List: contains old stories, writing guides, and morehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/editLewd Thesaurus shamelessly stolen from /flg/https://rentry.org/lewdsesaurusRequest Dump: Find/Post requests here toohttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1nyDKegfYhIvlv7ZvGoxswIVkiG5lw1lrOeDFvZbw_WU/edit?pli=1General grammar tutorials and key noteshttp://theeditorsblog.net/fularchives/https://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/https://theeditorsblog.net/2014/04/08/keeping-adjectives-in-line/https://apostrophe.how/Tips on Improving Prose:https://jerichowriters.com/prose-style/
>>80614538it's been a rough few months, but hopefully I can come back proper in february.Previous thread storiesMink Cuddlinghttps://rentry.org/minkcomfsession>Hmofa, M human/F Mink, cuddling, short, handholdingGreen Feathershttps://archiveofourown.org/works/77568426>Human x very inhuman alien, roommates at space college sort of thing. About 6k words. Also, fair warning, very gay. Probably the gayest thing I've ever writtenCake Board Chaoshttps://rentry.org/uw5bwxn8>Fairy Tail, yuri, ass-focused, groping/spankingThe Little Tinkerbat that Could, Chapter 10.https://archiveofourown.org/works/47769337/chapters/203286771>Shantae (series), Tinkerbat, amputation, recovery, Twitch, Vinegar, Interrogation, stripping, humiliation, stealth missionJCTTG: The Void Father's Prophecyhttps://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/JCTTG-The-Void-Father-s-Prophecy-1285634575>CYOA, Isekai, family drama,
>>80614600From the other placeCorruption Goddess Love Story Ch. 3https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Corruption-Goddess-Love-Story-Ch-3-1279879301>corruption, goddess, love storyBounty of Bonds, Chapter 3https://rentry.org/lycanrocladyplus#chapter-3>Pokemon, Pokephilia, M Human/F Mienshao, Cumshots, Fellatio, Pussyjob, Vaginal SexGiving the Popular Futa Head Behind the Bleachershttps://archiveofourown.org/works/74530296>Futa, Oral Sex, Coercion, Alcohol, High School, Self Worth IssuesJayden's Curse Tabletop Game Compilationhttps://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Jayden-s-Cursed-Tabletop-Game-PDF-Ch-1-20-1282098262>TF, isekai, Doin' ur momCursed Clussy Carnival Chapter 16 Part 2https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Cursed-Clussy-Carnival-Ch-16-pt-2-1272162299>tags unknownA Brothel Visithttps://www.toakraka.com/000222.xhtml>Prostitution, M/F, Missionary, CondomDiapered Witch Angelahttps://archiveofourown.org/works/59795320/chapters/152524363>Magical Girl, Diapers, Wetting(contained), Scat(contained), Mind manipulationThe Firm Handshake: Parts 1-10.https://rentry.org/h8656xnd>HMOMA, Human Male/Male Furry, Office Politics, tags unknownLink anything I missed
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>>80614600I'm still looking for feedback on the Tinkerbat that could story, if anyone gets a chance to read the newest chapter.Summary: After a small work accident and a minor insight as to how his body may work, Cooper's next adventure into a lava-based island is put on hold when Ammo Baron already made off with the treasure. He find himself launched directly onto the ship with the other Tinkerbats and taken hostage, but it doesn't take long before he gets into his usual antics, especially when Twitch and Vinegar come in to check on the captured minions...https://archiveofourown.org/works/47769337/chapters/203286771>Tinkerbat, amputation, recovery, Twitch, Vinegar, Interrogation, stripping, humiliation, stealth mission
>>80614600>Cake Board ChaosReposting feedback >single quote for dialogueNot sure if it's your region, but in the US/English literature, spoken dialogue is usually using the quote tag "like this" rather that 'the single quote.'>all those – both in and out of dialogueI hate to be that one guy, but I remember someone here pointing that the frequent use of this for breaking sentences is something AI prompts like to do. While I don't think it is the infamous em-dash that got marked for death by this (—), it might be something to take into consideration as you work on this. There are probably other ways to break up sentences mid-way other than using dashes. I'd look into them when you get the chance.> Fairy Tail was about fun, absurdity, playing along and hamming it upIt's not often a series uses its namesake. I don't know the franchise, but is Fairy Tail in this context like a guild or location of sorts? I don't know the characters appearances one bit, so personally even a quick one sentence description of their appearance would help me envision what the characters look like.>Then feel free to ask for a reassessment>Go ahead and assessI snorted. I am weak to punsI don't know if having one character speak and another character having thought dialogue counts as multiple people speaking in the same sentence, since one isn't technically speaking. I'd still personally keep it separate, but make a judgement call for that.I like buttplay and I'll always demand more of it. For me, this one was rather quick, and I like the implication that her assessment did indeed fully expose her cheeks, pucker and all, to the party. Out of curiosity, how do you see the difference between bounce and wobble?
