Previous: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81507840>Request, write, or share stories and provide feedback/critique when appropriate. All writers are welcome, SFW and NSFW.>Instead of asking for interest or worrying about a fetish, just post your damn writing/request and see what happens. You might get lucky.>Complaining about fetishes is dumb and stupid in /trash/. Use that negative energy for requesting, reading and writing instead.>Please tag stories so readers know what they're getting into. Nobody can force you to tag stories you share or make. However, people are MUCH likelier to skip a work if there are no tags present.>Try to bump the thread if it gets to page 9, but feedback is always appreciated for posted stories, for author or reader! Those are the best kind of bumps./wfg/'s Masterbin: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/editLewd Thesaurus shamelessly stolen from /flg/https://rentry.org/lewdsesaurusRequest Dump: Find/Post requests here toohttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1nyDKegfYhIvlv7ZvGoxswIVkiG5lw1lrOeDFvZbw_WU/edit?pli=1General grammar tutorials and key noteshttp://theeditorsblog.net/fularchives/https://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/https://theeditorsblog.net/2014/04/08/keeping-adjectives-in-line/https://apostrophe.how/Tips on Improving Prose:https://jerichowriters.com/prose-style/
>>81872930Previous thread stories:Cursed Clussy Carnival Ch. 17 pt. 3https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Cursed-Clussy-Carnival-Ch-17-pt-3-1300627790JCTTG: Hero's Fallhttps://www.deviantart.com/stash/02crfbgx0705the Third Time is the Charm: the Good Stuffhttps://www.scribblehub.com/series/2102581/the-third-time-is-the-charm-the-good-stuff/The Worst Romance in The Cityhttps://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/kaktusnsfw/74455/The-Worst-Romance-in-CityJCTTG: Hero's Fallhttps://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/JCTTG-Hero-s-Fall-1306002939682 Containment Breachhttps://rentry.org/otfn6
Hello thread! I have to work today so I don't think I can make a lot of progress on writing. However, I have written half of the new Jayden's cursed tabletop game. https://www.deviantart.com/stash/0t2ccq1rkjkI'm currently thinking how I should do the second half- I intend to try to wrap things up, maybe in two chapters from now? I'm mostly thinking how I should handle Lucy and wrap up her arc. And I could use help outlining there. The poll last chapter had her not getting dicked by orcs and getting turned into a Void-Elf. And I was thinking she is in the tavern frustrated and horny but mustering her willpower to not submit to dick. And she's trying to see if she can talk to the Void-Father and get him to back down. And I want to showcase he has some positive traits here- like he's not as stupid and shallow as he's been acting and Lucy actually gets along with him and he's sort of putting on an act. But he refuses to drop it or get at the real issue (or showcase how self-aware he actually is of things). But after that I'm not sure where to go. Since I'm wanting to wrap up things I also want to try to answer everything I may have to, but I don't know what questions the audience might have. And with Lucy's arc I don't know what to do with her character. Basically what I was trying to do in prior chapters is to show she's not a bad person, but she's not as good a person as she wants to think- she doesn't want to sacrifice one friend-group over the other which is sorta what lead to her and Beck drifting apart in the first place. And my original plan was she'd end up self-sacrificing herself- to showcase a more positive quality. But that was with the idea of her becoming a void-elf which now won't happen. So I need something else to cap-off her arc. Maybe something with her interacting with Jayden's DM form? Or maybe something with the Sun Elves? I could use feedback here. I also didn't get any feedback for the things I posted last thread.
>>81874613Oh hey, a good start on trying to go for the previous thread stories recap. You did forget the tags though, so people may not click the links. Authors do tend to tag the story, so it may need some copypasting.It'd be something like:Cursed Clussy Carnival Ch. 17 pt. 3https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Cursed-Clussy-Carnival-Ch-17-pt-3-1300627790>Clussy, noire, the chineseJCTTG: Hero's Fallhttps://www.deviantart.com/stash/02crfbgx0705https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/JCTTG-Hero-s-Fall-1306002939>medieval fantasy, isekai, melodrama, elfXorcthe Third Time is the Charm: the Good Stuffhttps://www.scribblehub.com/series/2102581/the-third-time-is-the-charm-the-good-stuff/>femdom, other tags unknownThe Worst Romance in The Cityhttps://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/kaktusnsfw/74455/The-Worst-Romance-in-City>Completed, Project Moon, M/F, Original Characters, Violence, Action, Handjobs, Blowjobs, Titjob, Drugging, Rape, Size Difference, Vaginal sex, Doggystyle, Role reversal, Sex at gunpoint, Cowgirl, Creampie, Slavery, Abuse, Pregnancy, Voyeurism, Degradation682 Containment Breachhttps://rentry.org/otfn6>m/m, SCP, tags unknownStill, nice that someone other than me wants to try and recap. Appreciate the effort!
>>81877069Deficiencies noted! Thank you for the updated post. I'll keep that in mind, but this should be a one off.For OP thread recreation, as per: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81507840/#q81524022>The schedule is the Wednesday of the week after the previous thread dies.Attention normal thread OP (you presumably), please maintain that schedule. I don't want to step on your toes, nor do I want to be responsible for thread creation. I was just a little antsy this week so I jumped on it ahead of schedule.
>>81872930>Write FaggotryFaggotry
writing dialogue is hard! what comes naturally is cringey discord esque writing, which is probably good enough for what i'm doing but for some reason i want it to be 'better' in some way so it comes out as some meh mix between natural and cringe!
>>81879272I find what's important is finding a characters 'voice' which requires thinking a lot about their personality and archetype. For instance, in one of my latest chapters I had a lot of fun writing Vinny and Lois respectively who are meant to represent a 1920's gangster and reporter respectively. They're both fast-talkers who like the sound of their own voice and often pepper in a lot of metaphors and imagery into their dialogue, and they make for a nice contrast with the main character Cal who is a modern sullen teenager who doesn't want to really engage with people and when they talk tends to get much more at the heart of the matter. Another example to draw from would be Kratos from the God of War games- at least the new ones. He's a character who BARELY talks and when he does communicate it's often in grunts. But he's widely considered a great character. And thats because when he does speak he's highlighting a strong personality. There's also the fact that he's literally laconic with his dialogue- he's a Spartan who were Laconic Greeks and were firmly believed that brevity is the soul of wit. Kratos is far from stupid- he's quite intelligent and well read according to Greek standards. But he believes using more words than he has to is foolish. Then you contrast him with his son Atreus who was raised absent the Greek culture (and loads of regret and trauma) and is a teenage boy curious about the world and eager to have anyone to talk to that's not his man-bear of a father (it becomes pretty clear early on that the writers needed to pepper in characters to do the talking around Kratos since as a solo-act he'd never speak). Anyway- don't be afraid to branch out with character archetypes. It's less important if a character archetype is realistic, so long as you ensure that their 'voice' is distinct and memorable. What are you working on currently, who would be your main characters?
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>>81877912Wednesday OP here. You're cool, I've said from the beginning that the schedule is a self-imposed one, and it's intended to work around other OPs.
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>>81888315You know they rebranded Word as Copilot so Microsoft can lie to their investors about how popular Copilot is? Also Copilot is meant to be the singular selling point for the new X-Box.
Bump. How you writefags doing?
>>81891790Picked up a new hobby recently, so I'm procrastinating harder than ever now.
>>81890903Much lawl indeed. When I first encountered that shoop 15+ year ago it had me writhing and crying on the floor I was laughing so hard.My IT career was spent running circles around Office products with regex, Perl, and Emacs. Another rebrand? Believe you me, I'm real happy to hear M$ hasn't changed a bit.
>>81891790Fooling around with some editing.
>>81891790Tried writing yesterday but gave up after an hour and 300 words to instead work on learning to draw. Probably not going to have any time to write or draw if I get the job I've applied for, but I really need the money.
>>81876005Have made no progress on this.
No /wfg/ not yet.
I hunger for more cookie run girl sexo, but my mind was drawing a blank on ideas until just now.I'll toss an idea involving Nutmeg Tiger Cookie, which broke free out of a guy's phone or tablet after he fucks up and lets his device overheat while playing Cookie Run Kingdom on said shitty device, causing an explosion and manifesting her into existence. Rather than being tiny, I think it'd be nice for her to be like 3 or 4 feet tall (shortstack). Being in a sudden, unknown world, she immediately makes a mess of the place and is hostile to the guy, trying to slash and stab him to put her back. While she's bigger than he expected, he manages to wrangle her down despite the threat and heat, and, being a cat, he uses butt slaps and scratches to make her climax and calm down.She still tries challenging him a number of times, disbelieving that someone so squishy and underbaked could best her, let alone her master, but she fails each time, leading to more humiliating climaxes and exposed. If violence isn't working, she tries spice challenges, but she learns that he's a spice enthusiast, and discovers just how hot a meal with ghost pepper really is. Guy tricks her to having a make out session with him to cool the new spice when she can't take it, which only leaves her more hot and bothered.The constant losses eventually has her admit to him being stronger than her, and without a master in sight, she offers him to be her new master. Sexy cat sex fight ensues for dominance, and she is cummed inside of.>Catgirl/sphinx, spanking, collar, forced submission, spice, kissing, claw marksHer dialogue and personality: https://cookierunkingdom.fandom.com/wiki/Nutmeg_Tiger_Cookie/Quotes
We made it to Wednesday. I can rest now.
>>81879272Dialogue is artificial to certain extents. You want to convey emotion, some information, and character. How that's done means to study dialects, idioms, etc. For example: >>81904551Sites with lists of character quotes are useful here. It can help to get an idea how existing characters express themselves, although you have to pair that with some idea of what stand up comics and actors do for such mimicry. Shakespeare's fun for forming an idea of what historical people did and said, except for contemporary criticism. People in the know, in some cases who where there for the scenes in question, have pointed out nobles at court don't speak, nor behave, as they are presented in the plays. Again, a certain artificiality works.On that note, study plays and theater scripts. With nothing to work with but dialogue you can get a better idea of how to have characters talk, and what to discuss. And, yes, there are plenty of modern plays with modern speech to choose from.
Bump. I'm curious here on how you guys do pre-writes. I haven't been writing for long but I seem to like greentext formatting.
>>81891790I've kind of gotten back into messing around with my vignettes after reading through a few hundred (few thousand?) Joplin notes looking for one I KNOW I wrote, not finding it, freaking out, beginning the process of organizing the ones I do have, and finding a bunch I wanted to update/expand on.But it's only been a few sentences a day, I don't know how you people write so much.
>>81913377I barely do any, to be honest. I can do a lot of outlining and preparation in my head, but it tends to slip away from me the moment I start putting it on paper in any way, so I usually go directly to drafting.
>>81913377I just start writing. I come up with an outline in my head, pantomime scenes in my brain, but I usually don't do much else besides posting thoughts on places like this.
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>2026>still haven't written anything despite years of being a neet>last time I wrote anything longer than 1k words was in 2023 or 2024, shitting out 20k words in three days for a story I deleted out of shame for being feral pokephiliaI haven't found writing fun in a decade yet somehow my brain is convinced enough that I'll get around to it by blasting me with lewd thoughts and story ideas while I'm trying to sleep.
>>81879272I honestly couldn't tell you how to write good dialogue. I could go on and on about what purpose each bit of dialogue should serve, what details you should pay attention to, how to make each character's speech sound unique to them, how to transfer from one topic to the next in the course of a scene, how to edit and tweak your dialogue to make it sound more natural... Really, the only solid piece of advice I can possibly give is edit as much as you need to, and if it sounds wrong, change it.
>>81913377>get on my knees>suck the soul out of your dick>gulp down entire load like a bossthat's how I do my pre-writes, bitch>spit out your cum so that a perfect likeness of our Lord Jesus Christ appears in the stain>he blesses this threadpraise him!
>>81922368The important thing I find if is writing for yourself. Because you find writing to be fun. Try to find an idea you like and find fun and start from there.
https://www.deviantart.com/stash/01p8kg5hmjayWorked a bit on the Pink Bloodmoon story, I got inspired since I got a comment on one of the chapters. I'd been inspired for a scene like this for a while- it's being a bit up my own ass for pure worldbuilding, but that's what this arc is about anyway. A bit stuck on how to proceed- I want to add some more worldbuilding tangents before proceeding to the next scene.
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>>81872930Thinking of trying to do the bovine tf request from a previous thread, but I don't under the numbers in the request. I assume its for multiple mothers and sons? And some mothers have more than one son? Seems like a lot so I might pair it down a bit, but I'd like to confirm at the very least if that anon is still there.
I'd love to see a request filled even if I'm not the requestor.>>81933835Depends on where you obtained the request. If you can link it from desuarchive I'd do so.If it's from the old request dump google doc, that stuff predates /trash/ more or less.
>>81934132>predates /trash/Does it? I remember most of the old ones. The first one in the old list, the hmofa horse bdsm one was one I started, though I only got two parts in before life got in the way. That was only a few years ago.
>>81934919Granted, yes. I could be wrong. The idea is it's old as hell and fallen out of favor. I'd love to see the need for it again, but until then it's best to drop requests in-thread.Meanwhile, not a request per se, but I'm working on adding resources/suggestions to for improving dialogue to our guide.
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>>81937930Write it correctly, animal.
I'm looking for a ao3 story with a Impmon and Morgana I remember seeing it but now I can't find it. If you guys know what I'm talking about please let me know. I remember part of the title. The burglar somethin.
