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CYOA Refuge Thread - A thread for posting any and all CYOAs unpostable in /tg/'s /cyoag/ (and occasionally ones that aren't).

Previous thread:
>https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81970039
Alternative link:
>https://archived.moe/trash81970039
Worksafe threads:
>>>/tg/cyoa

/cyoag/'s CYOA archives and related resources:
>https://rentry.co/cyoag
Includes - but is not limited to - a F.A.Q. section and the personal archives of a number of authors.
>https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3
An extensive Allsync archive that has both SFW and NSFW CYOAs.
>https://infaera.neocities.org/
Interactives list.
If you're looking for a specific CYOA, it's suggested that you check those first.

And remember: Postnumbers aren't for rolling. If the CYOA calls for rolling of any sort (or you just feel like leaving something up to fate), use random.org (or https://www.wizards.com/dnd/dice/dice.htm, or physical dice, or something else that isn't your postnumber) to generate the number, and write it in the post with the rest of your build.
In short: Do the rolling before you post, instead of observing the postnumber you get.
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>>82020840
OC (not mine)
Be the bird girl CYOA
https://ladycabal.neocities.org/CYOAs/SoftWings/
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>>82020849
And the original
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I know about the new Mereshek update but I don't wanna post that when its full of typos and incorrect points
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>>82020873
btganon can post the fixed version himself when it comes out
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>>82020849
>By beri
doesn't look beri made are you sure?
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>>82021022
No but I am not the one who signed it either and authors can change their style over time so who knows.
Maybe its from before he started adding that tiny little "b" to his works?
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>>82021022
>>82021036
it definitely wasn't beri, i know because i'm not beri
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>>82021049
Whatever you say, beri
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We haven't gotten a new furry cyoa for quite a while did we?
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>>82021231
big kangaroo stompers
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>>82017873
You don't really need any of that. But maybe there need to be a few more sources of divinity besides the starting pool.


>>82017891
>inclement political/divine weather
It'll become "you can't be corrupt because the gods will immediately kill you"
>making bad drawbacks except they're not intractable and can be fought against and eventually resolved
People already hated it yesterday when it wasn't even that bad of a drawback
>with classes and items interacting with insanities
They're referred to as madnesses, but there's literally already stuff that does interact with them

>starting areas
Hmm, giving some start scenarios a prerequisite of "less than X corruption" would at least do something
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>>82020849
>>82020854
You've got which is original and which is the edit backwards, and you're missing pages from the edit
https://imgchest.com/p/xny8zv52ybl
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>>82021582
Adding big drawbacks for extra divinity sounds interesting, you could even link some of them with some of the sources you buy divinity with as sort off a "refund". Like got an inner real? Make it susceptible to encroachment and already tainted by their influence and corruption to get +1 divinity.
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>>82021582
>You don't really need any of that.
i disagree, you need all of that because that's pretty much the cyoa's baseline, not having it feels like a ripoff and like you failed in making a proper build

having tested out a few builds, 1d for immortality, 1d for an inner realm, and 1d or 2d for a class or class combo feels more or less mandatory, if you aren't getting all that then the question is why you're even making a build for this cyoa where that seems like the core features of the cyoa

>People already hated it yesterday when it wasn't even that bad of a drawback
probably because they considered it permanent and irremovable by drawback fiat

>Hmm, giving some start scenarios a prerequisite of "less than X corruption" would at least do something
you could do something like an exponential difficulty, 100 corruption might take you a year to get out, 200 ten years, 300 a hundred years, 400 a thousand

maybe those numbers are too strict but you get the point, by doing it like this you make purity builds seem competitive

you'd kind of need to make the starting locations into internally vast dimensions for that kind of thing, but it could work

>>82021882
just making them awful drawbacks again doesn't seem like it would solve anything, nobody would take them except the minmaxer trying to break the cyoa without really worrying about what experiencing the build would be like
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>>82022143
>>82021582
Honestly this feels pointless. It'd all be solved by just giving 5 divinity to both starts and giving inherent drawbacks to neither of them. They're still very distinct even if they get the same amount of divinity.
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>>82022143
>just making them awful drawbacks again doesn't seem like it would solve anything, nobody would take them except the minmaxer trying to break the cyoa without really worrying about what experiencing the build would be like

Just don't make them ego death, life crippling awful. Make them something to the likes of divine trials, sure it's bad but it's not crippling bad. Most of the test builds picked that option.

Like your inner realm possibility being encroached sure it's bad, but its not that bad that only min makers would pick it.
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>>82022143
>he had points to pimp out his inner realm
I'm jealous
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>>82022263
>don't want to fight in a tournament because i'm not making a combat build in the first place, it clashes with both the theme and the mechanics of what i'm trying to do
>don't even want the stupid reward you get when you win the tournament because being a demigod is also derailing the theme of the build
>still feel forced to go into the tournament because otherwise the build is impossible
it feels really bad to me, why can't i just have the build that i imagined without themes completely foreign to it invading it?
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>>82022349
If you want a high power build your going to need to pay the cost for it, if not just build a lower power build. It's not like you need an inner realm and bloodline for every build. You can't get everything this is a cyoa, you make choices with the limited resources you have.
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>>82022415
but i didn't want a high power build, i specifically said i wasn't making a combat build, all i wanted was the safety of immortality, the really nicely developed inner world, a special race that's better than a human or furry, the interesting idea of creating a bloodline, and the ability to change people's bodies with the fleshcrafter class

power specifically has nothing to do with it, it's more about hitting all the checkboxes of what makes this cyoa in particular interesting
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>>82016367
While I'm not really invested in the argument this is in response to, I'd like to thank you for this post. Not even for the idea you've described (which I do think is important and I agree with), but because you've inadvertently given me some inspiration for my own CYOA. Thanks anon.
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Updated version of my CYOA, want to ask if the point system is balanced or not

https://strangetale.nekoweb.org/Eastern%20Fantasy/index.html
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>>82022573
no problem, maybe i shouldn't have stopped saying it as often as i used to
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>>82022453
>the ability to change people's bodies with the fleshcrafter class
thanks for reminding me
>>82021582
Do homonculi and automatons need Fleshcrafter to modify their bodies or is artificial life + the other arcanist skills enough?
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>>82022579
Oh I actually made a build for that one but forgot to save it lol
Remember having a bit of trouble unlocking the last lewd combo that requires the previous 3 combos and as result had to pick more drawbacks, but I assume that was intentional? The world changes that make everything more dangerous give you a nice amount of points but I feel like the cyoa should have more drawbacks and lewd drawbacks too, or maybe make so the current ones guve a extra +1 or +2 points maybe.
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Ok disegard my previous post>>82023158 for now.
My dumbass didn't noticied it was another update on top of the previous 1.0.
Gonna check out what changed on this one and see if my build is better now.
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>>82022579
Ok, here is my build (Part 1/2)
**Location**
Imperial Heartland

**Scenarios**
Upon A White Horse, Regression To The Mythic Age, Lumbering Behemoths

**Heavenly Blessings**
Benevolent Religions, Righteous Ascendant, Puppetry Advent, Peach of Longevity, Academic Fervor, Wonderous terrains, Friendly Behemoth

**Tribulations**
Ferocious Monsters, Monster Stampedes

**Alluring Comfort**
Hentai Physics, Femboy/Futanari, Population Adjustment, Shameless, Risqué Fashions, Sex-based Enhancement, Sutra of the Body, Body For The Ages, Enchanted Toys, Lewd Alchemy, Lewd Arts, Tempting Strength, Reverse Sexual Moral, Incestuous Indifference

**Depraved Perversion**
Lax Culture, Community Service, Disadvantageous Society, Physical Gap, Lewd Beasts, Monster Girl, Interspecies "Romance", Alternative Energy, Lust Build-up, Arts Frustration, Amplified Lust, Bimbofication

**Combo**
Harmonious Society, GILF, Monster Country, World Of Futadom, Hellish Cultivation

**Race**
Child Of Mystery

**Racial Modifier**
Demonic Inheritor, Efficient Biology, Feeble, Inhuman Urges

**Background**
Beggar

**Sex**
Male

**Appearance**
Beautiful/Handsome

**Height**
Short

**Build**
Bombshell

**Penis**
Tiny

**Penis Modifiers**
Sensitive Prostrate, Beta

**Fertility Modifiers**
Barren

**Tits**
Large

**Ass**
Thicc

**Miscellaneous**
Beautiful Voice, Enduring Body, Optimized Metabolism, Tantric-primed, Sexpert, Numbed, Achilles Heels
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>>82023669
**Blessings**
Muted Backlash, False Immortal Pattern, Harem Management, Power Of Connections, Heroic Saga

**Curses**
Lightweight, Memory Seal

**Lewd Blessings**
Tantric Ritual, Dual Cultivation, Path To Sexual Victory

**Lewd Curses**
Enhanced Libido, Enhanced Sensitivity, Special Dietary Needs, Sultry Impression, Masochistic Constitution, Team Action, Horny Mind, Skimpy Clothing, Crossdressing, Plug, Compensation

**Treasure**
Eager Followers, Sorcerous Pagoda

**Lewd Treasure**
Eiten-ryuu Teaching, Depraved Blessing, Arts Pavilion

**The Companions**
Foxian Warlord

**Personal Combo**
Powerful Harem, Lewd Prowess, Sect of Pleasure, Master Of The Lewd

>IDs:
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>>82023679
Overall, everything I complained about in my previous post isn't s issue anymore, combos eat up some points yes but thrre is more than enough sources of points now to get most of what you want.
I went for a fully masochist perv approach but I think even dominant builds will have a decent source of poeer here
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Meresekhet update, now with less (but almost certaintly not no) typos and incorrect point totals.
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>>82023981
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>>82023987
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>>82023994
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>>81986033
>i assume the author is trans and this came from experience
Nope. I was having a fun conversation with my uncle at Christmas about politics and halfway through it wondered how the conversation would be different if everyone was having an "oh shit" moment like when my cousin got his stage three diagnosis. That's why so many of them have a medical flare to them.

>It is interesting to think about in general but it's so disconnected to the beginning.
It wouldn't really be an unrelated event that's swinging around to haunt you if it was related, would it? If it was like, your witch aunt cursed you into a girl for the holidays, that wouldn't really have anything to do with the holidays and inherently limits the scope. I'm not sure how I'd be able to wrap it into something cohesive.

>>81986229
It's been a few months, now so my memory is a bit more fuzzy on this, but werewoman is more or less condensed from a dedicated CYOA I toyed with (and still might do) while Infected and Cursed are more or less original. If I could find my old posts on it, I might jog my memory...

>I think that'd require a bigger CYOA, which is cool and all, but since it's recycled from a larger project that fell through I don't think that was ever in the cards.
Beyond worldbuilding autism, I'd generally agree. A big chunk of the tone is that these conditions are treated somewhat mundanely and exist in their own narrative slices. Each one could be expanded to their own thing, but that could be a bad idea.
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>>82024099
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>>82020846
This reminds me of that old OC where that guy planned to do a bunch of different 'you're a monster girl' CYOAs, including a bird one, but he only finished a few.
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>>82021022
If it's beri's it would be his first, that CYOA is from like 2014.
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>>82024413
Harpy, lamia, and undead. And it was a shame too cause it looked like they had some interesting ideas in the works at the time. In another timeline we would've had a full new fleshed out setting...
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>>82022579
whenever i try these big huge interactives with a million lewd drawbacks i find that they aren't really playable by anyone other than masochist sluts
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>>82023981
Neat. Might post build later, you still doing abyss twinning?
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>>82025073
If only we had concept necromancers who wandered the graveyard of ideas to resurrect abandoned OC.
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>>82020846
I skimmed it just to be sure but is it really a be the girl cyoa? Just by looking at the options, despite calling itself a bird "girl" cyoa you can have a dick, have a masculine face, manly or average proportions, and several images have bird guys in them, in the very first section the Raptor Bird image is clearly a dude. So is there something I'm missing by just skimming that forces you to be a girl or is it possible to be a normal dude?
>>82024413
>>82025073
The "race" of Sothym series. None of them were specifically about being a girl, just a monster person of some kind. It was supposed to be 3 trilogies, for a total of 9 at least, with angels and demons being next I think. On one hand it was a really cool concept, just a series of cyoas that are like coosing your class in a game to end up in the same place, but on the other the author kinda shot themselves in the foot with the lore. Lamias are actually sea serpents and Harpies are actually more like angels. That will create some overlap at some point, mermaids and angels would have the niche already taken, and undeads kinda already are pretty demonic. I still kinda hope the series comes back, but it wasn't very future proofed for its own concept.
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>>82023981
Can I kick Meresekhet out of the tomb after I turn her back into a human? Otherwise I probably need to kill her as she will starve to death anyway once she is trapped there forever. I can't afford Fast Travel so I can't really make a build at the moment. And it seems cruel to leave her in the tomb forever. Even if I came back I can't bring anything so I can't feed her. But I want to save her soul. Much sadness.
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>>82026077
A lot of them are intended to be like that, hell the perks also look like something a masochist slut would want a lot of the time. But other times it's just the author not understanding balance. Like in this case, it's a combination of the setting not being explained and the author being someone that would settle for less. Some people consider being the top 10% of the setting as good enough and even thriving, for others it's considered the bare minimum to scrape by and not be miserable. In this specific circumstance you can't even blame the latter, after all cultivation is a genre known to be hell for whoever isn't at the top of the food chain and doesn't have some kind of cheat to keep being there with a large enough advantage compared to the runner ups.
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>>82026319
Yes but make sure you file the documents properly with the city or the eviction is going to be a nightmare.
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>>82027157
I don't have The Big Leagues either. So who do I file with?
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>>82027188
One of the tax loli from Wonderul Things failure outcome's associates will be in touch in 6-8 weeks.
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>>82027229
She will have starved by then. ;_;
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>>82027244
You're God now, just make the girl a sandwich or something. Typical zoomer deity, no work ethic. No wonder the other gods didn't want anything to do with you.
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>>82027286
So I can just materialize food out of thin air with Divine Spark without training? Well I suppose I could babysit her until I can get her home.
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>>82026319
I advise you to not let her starve or she might revert into a mummy, messing with time magic works weird sometimes you know so better be safe than sorry.
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>>82027408
What sort of god can't do a little reverse transubstantiation?
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>>82026319
>Even if I came back I can't bring anything so I can't feed her.
You could always gorge yourself right before returning and feed her like a baby bird.
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>>82027495
Yeah I am thinking I have no choice but to switch rituals to throw her into the void. Fast Travel is a hidden requirement for Factory Reset.
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>>82023981
Bringing back my build for the new update.

Flesh:
-Purity of Nobility
-Brand of the Living Goddess
-Mark of the Sun's Chosen

Spirit:
-Cold Comfort
-Divine Right
-Manifest Destiny
-A Kind of Magic

Rituals
-Divine Banquet (The new Fates are neat, but I'm still gonna eat her.)
-Man Up
-Eternal Life
-Mystic Spark
-Yes Mistress
-Fast Travel
-Perfected Form
-Under New Management
-Made to Serve
-The Big Leagues

Rolls (in order)
Divine Banquet: 4+2 (+5): Success
Eternal Life: Automatic Success
The Big Leagues 4+1 (+2): Success
Mystic Spark: 5+5 (+3): Success
Perfected Form: Rolled: 1+2 (+3): Success (yikes, that's close)
Man Up (Mystic Spark die): Rolled 5/6/5; drop 5. Result: 11 (+1) Success
>Toned, with visible but not excessive muscles and probably something like 6' tall just to round out the number. Very 'traditionally' handsome face and physique.
Yes Mistress (or Master, as the case is now): (Mystic Spark die): Rolled 5/5/1. Drop 1, result 10 (+3). Success
Fast Travel: 6+2 (+1): Success
Under New Management: 3+1 (+3): Failure. Damn, I guess we're doing the bloodsoaked civil war arc.
Made to Serve: 6+1 (+2): Success.
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>>82028026
Well, more rituals does mean more chances to fail, but this is still a pretty good outcome. I don't have the option for a comfy time studying up on the Mystic Spark, but I do have centuries of knowledge on tap and Fast Travel as an eject button if I'm in over my head. Yes Master means that anyone who gets captured can be quickly brainwashed and will joyfully explain to me the full scope and participants in any plots against me, and Made to Serve means that I have a bevy of beautiful servants on tap to fit any mood. Works on my unswervingly loyal body guards as well, giving them additional size, reach, and strength.

And now, in addition to the knowledge I've consumed from Meresekhet, I've also got the collective advice of a multiverse of other gods. The civil war is definitely going to get out of hand, but I've got a lot of options at my disposal.

Including, now that I think about it, the support of Earth's military industrial complexes through Fast Travel and Yes Mistress. Bet there are some arms dealers and armory commanders who would be just thrilled to hand over a mountain of small arms for the low, low price of 'but I asked very nicely.' I can even pay for some of it once things stabilize!

Of course, once things do stabilize it'll be time to swing back to Earth and Manifest my Destiny, so maybe not.
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>>82027919
You'd rather consign the poor girl to death and risk your own soul in the process rather than throw up in her mouth?
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>>82028267
>give a swift death rather then a tortuous existence living alone until you die where the only food you can eat is bile infused vomit

Yeah. I think I will risk it. She may just eventually kill herself in that condition anyway.
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>>82022579
>Location:
Western Mountains

>Scenarios:
Rustling Of Hooves, Colored Turban, Regression To The Mythic Age, Lumbering Behemoths

>Lewd Blessings:
Tantric Ritual, Dual Cultivation, Receptive Partners

>Arts:
Inexhaustible Might, Domain's Sovereignty, Formation Master, Ascendant Alchemist (Pills), Mandate Of Heaven

>Combos:
Perfected Human, "Genius", Controlled Metamorph, Borg-up, Fusang Wine

I will create the Mending Heaven Scripture (from Laying Low in the Primordial Sage Demonic Sect as a Talent/苟在初圣魔门当人材). Its essence lies in mending Heaven and devouring the Dao by having intercourse with Heaven and Earth. It contains 4 secret techniques: Swallow, Pinch, Move, and Still.

The Swallow technique is to please Heaven and Earth by swallowing the essence of heaven and earth and removing impurities for them, thereby gaining the support of Heaven and Earth.

The Pinch technique is to massage Heaven and Earth, regulate energy, please Heaven and Earth, and thereby gain the support of Heaven and Earth.

The Move technique is to move oneself, using fierce impact to compel Heaven and Earth agree to one's requests.

The Still technique is the exact opposite: one remains still, and heaven and earth move, allowing heaven and earth to vent accumulated anger, and then gaining compensation from Heaven and Earth afterward.

A world that had been influenced by the Mending Heaven Scripture's techniques can no longer tolerate days without them. The more one remains still, the more restless it becomes, until finally, it succumbs to one's demands. Of course, the effectiveness of the techniques depends on the power gap between oneself and the world.

My goal is to use Heaven and Earth to refine the golden pill of immortality. From then on, my fate will be determined by me, not by Heaven.
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>>82028385
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>>82023981
There was this question pretty late in the last thread: >>82021687
About Blank Slate and the order of operations when spellcasting.
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>>82029390
You get to customise your form within the constraints imposed by your failures.
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>>82029495
NTA but that finishes me attempting to do a build for this.
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>>82029495
Makes sense. What about the second question?
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>>82020840
I don't know why the CYOA in the OP is the one that grabbed my attention the most. I guess it's because it's simple but has just enough variation to be interesting.

Anyways, I'll toss the builds that came to mind because why shouldn't I.
Romantic build, Lady, Slut, Spitter, Gamer Reversal.
I was thinking of going Inexperienced and Cumdump before I realized I wouldn't be able to feed her popcorn while watching movies or share a nice dinner with her.

Companions build: Pet, Noncon, Nauseous, Gamer, Double.
At home LAN parties, could change it to be more lewd but it works without it.
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>>82029786
I don't mind, given some players won't want to read pages 4-6 at all before choosing their stuff and others will want to check the outcomes. You need to decide the order of everything before you start rolling but I don't mind if you preread it all before doing so.
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Remember
You will never be a girl :)
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>>82029557
Skill issue. Just don't roll bad.
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>>82032108
>Skill issue
I do in fact have skill issues with RNG. I always have. Normally I have to strategize heavily and then brute force with willpower to maybe get a scrap.
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>>82030533
Can i do the fate ritual later in the order or do i have to do it NOW?
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>>82032818
NTA but you get bonuses to some from other rituals so can definitely do it later.
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>>82023981
>The Flesh of Meresekhet
The Beauty of a Princess
The Grace of a Goddess
The Purity of Nobility
The Mane of the Beast Queen
The Mark of the Sun's Chosen
The Maidenhood of the Divine

>The Spirit of Meresekhet
All is Vanity
Cold Comfort
Divine Right
Voice of Reason
Spoiled Rotten
It's A Kind of Magic

>Rituals
Memories of Meresekhet - Rolled 5, 6, SUCCESS
Fate: A Divine Banquet x2 - Rolled 1, 1, 6, SUCCESS
Deep Clean (Boon: Memories of Meresekhet)
Eternal Life (Boon: Divine Banquet)
Perfected Form (Guaranteed)
Self Improvement (Guaranteed)
Mystic Spark - Rolled 4, 4, SUCCESS
Mental Mastery - Rolled 2, 1, 5, SUCCESS
Yes Mistress - Rolled 6, 3, 4, SUCCESS

Read ahead to see how close I could get to a rollshit-free build. Since it all worked out I walk away as an immortal genius with mind control powers and no personality changes. I've also got all of Meresekhet's magical knowledge, but seeing as it damns your soul I'll have to stick to using the basics.
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>>82023981
Flesh:
>Everything
What could possibly go wrong?

Spirit:
>All is Vanity, Voice of Reason, Spoiled Rotten
Two of these are fixable and Vanity just feels right, y'know?

Fate:
>Return of the Queen
Mitosis punishes twinning too hard for me too choose it

Rituals:
>Self-Improvement, Eternal Life, Mystic Spark, Physical Instrument, Mental Mastery, Fast Travel, Perfected Form, Soul Mate, Time Travel
Stunned Physical Instrument wasn't titled "Physical Phenom". Seriously, it pairs off with Mental Mastery and everything.

Rolls (ordered)
>Mystic Spark 5+3 (+1): Success
>Perfected Form 3+4 (+1+1): Success
>Fast Travel 2+3: Success (Fuckin' Hell...)
>Self-Improvement 6+2 (+1+1+1): Success
>Return of the Queen 1+6+3 drop 1 (-1+3): Success (Yes!)
>Eternal Life 6+4 (-1+5+1): Success
>Soul Mate 5+5 (+4+1): Success
>Mental Mastery 6+4 (+1): Success
>Physical Instrument 3+6+3 drop 3 (+1-1-1-3+2): Success (Avoided furfaggotry by the skin of my teeth)
>Time Travel 5+5 (+1+2): Success

Some damn close calls but I got everything I wanted. I'm her younger twin but with big tits and a fat ass. Can I use Soul Mate and maybe Time Travel to make it so we're true blood sisters? I also want to use Soul Mate to swap out her Ugly Bastard kink for a lesbian incest one, ideally with a focus on breast envy and smug sibling rivalry. Does Return of the Queen break her away from the evil magic's influence? If so, can I also give her Eternal Life and Perfected Form so long as she knows *I* was the one who did it? I basically want the inexperienced but genius younger sister role with her as the older, flatter sister who's jealous but still loves me and teaches me all the magic stuff she knows while we conquer Earth and the stars together.
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>>82032851
Hell yeah
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>>82024006
>can’t give birth through your penis
Kinda gay
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>>82021882
Getting back the full cost of something from a drawback within it seems too much though

>immortality
It's not even that good. You can be ageless without it, and you can get better immortality later just by becoming a god.

>inner realm
It's handy, don't get me wrong, but aside from being a home it has some decent utility and there's a few options that build on it, but that's it. Not a core feature at all, and I don't think it's better than other divinity options such as superior races.

>1d or 2d for a class or class combo
None of the divinity classes are all that mandatory, unless you want exactly their concept.

>>82022178
It's not like you can't get to 5 divinity right away by joining the Divine Trials

>>82022349
Sartre it then

>>82022453
That's high power. Besides, if you could get everything easily, it would undermine the "choose" part of CYOA.

>>82022824
To modify it like a fleshcrafter does, you'd need fleshcrafter. You could do some modifications without it though
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>>82034755
>It's not like you can't get to 5 divinity right away by joining the Divine Trials
Probably why every build did so, but what about the guys who don't want to enter a pvp deathmatch with people who powergamed way harder than they did?
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>>82034866
>what if i don't want to take the risk
then you don't get to reap the rewards dumbass
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>>82034755
>immortality
>It's not even that good
Some of it *is* that good. Time Loop is multiversal, making it by far the strongest option in the entire cyoa. Much less powerful but still better than the rest of the divinity options is Reincarnation, which ensures only a god can permanently kill you.
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>>82022579
This is decent. How come there's no discussion?
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>>82036567
It's an interactive.
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>>82036567
Cause eastern mythology stuff doesn't interest me very much.
Also we generally dislike Interactives here.
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>>82034755
You have a very different view on what's mandatory than I do. Why would I make an ER build without an inner realm? It's pretty much the coolest thing on there. Speakingof it as a CYOA feature in comparison to other vaguely similar CYOAs, I'd rather have the inner realm on its own than the entire corruption versus purity system.
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>>82036567
Should have had an image in the post. How can you capture attention in an image board without an image?
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>>82036567
Interactive instead of a static.
More importantly though, the post is nearly invisible with it's single line link with no image to go along with it.
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>>82034755
The inner realm is very op with some combos, the foremost being with lawyer. They allow for law manipulation. Anything that cannot resist laws can be instantly destroyed and perfectly defended against. By combining, removing, and modifying various laws, you can do the impossible; reality within your aura is yours to mold as you please.

Any build that doesn't have this combo is fodder to those that do.
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>>82023981
Well here is a build no one asked for, but I have to think this was the intended usage of Divine Mitosis.

Body: Everything except maidenhood of the divine, mane, and modesty of the wise

Spirit: All is vanity, Ecstasy of gold, Divine Right, Manifest Destiny, Spoiled rotten, The finer things,

>Man Up [D5D6]
perfect Jackal Himbo.
>Retconed [D5D4]
a most dangerous roll just so that Meresekhet was always a male god and can’t get mad at me for this, and overall this will make her/him less bitchy than if I had just made her male.
>Mitosis [Forced Fail]
now for the briefest of moments we are both siblings of the same age with twined looks
>Eternal Life [Forced Fail]
I’m turning myself into an immortal shota
>Handful of maids [D1D5]+2, Can’t fail.
Maids to support my new need to be pampered at all times.
>Fit for a queen [D1D3]+2, Can’t fail.
Similarly a pocket dimension filled with luxury.
>The Big Leagues [D2D5]+3, Can’t fail.
Having divine connections makes up for much of the powers I’m missing out on, and since I don’t see myself as part of humanity anymore it’s nice to have a social cast having ascended, even if it’s on Meresekhets coattails.
>Memories of Mersekhet [D2D2]+6 Failed by 1
Voice of Reason, Guilty Pleasures, Fear the reaper, all gained. We can speak the same language now. Really necessary for the forced success.
>Soul mate [Forced Success]
All part of the elaborate plan to make Meresekhet into a brocon that will spoil me, conquer the planet for me, and generally do the hard work I don’t want to do, which is basically all the work.
>Blessing [d4d3]+1, Success.
Kind of wanted to fail this one, but I can save kissing for extra strong blessings.

>Found an error on blessing, Mystic spark isn’t a spirit and should be under Power:
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>>82034755
NTA, but...
>It's not even that good. You can be ageless without it, and you can get better immortality later just by becoming a god.
It's comforting to have some sort of backup in case of accidents while you work your way towards godhood.
>I don't think it's better than other divinity options such as superior races.
Is the inner realm not a guaranteed safe haven in a (group of) world(s) that might not otherwise have one (especially with some mutations)?
>None of the divinity classes are all that mandatory, unless you want exactly their concept.
I.e. for anyone who wants that, they are. Also don't forget the divinity skills for otherwise non-divinity classes.
>It's not like you can't get to 5 divinity right away by joining the Divine Trials
Yeah, it's not like you can't get the points you want by taking drawbacks you're not willing to consider for whatever reason.
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>>82037351
>>82037351
Not him but it has two builds while the bird cyoa near the too received none despite having a image and being easier to find due to being near top of the thread
Both seem to be unpopular here but the idea of it being because of no images being attached to the post is just factually false
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>>82038880
I'm planning on doing a build for the bird one but I'm still stuck doing LOM right now (adhd sucks.)
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Thinking of maybe doing some sexual fluid magic system CYOA.
Spermatomancy could very fluffily cover cool things like homunculi production and familiar pacting with hot demon girls, but I don't want to go through hundreds of dick picks.
I do like tits, but while you could maybe do all those same things with breast milk it just doesn't have the same historical-mystery alchemy oomph and so isn't as thematically strong.

'tis a quandary, to be sure.
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>>82038880
I am personally just too lazy to write up interactive builds and no one is going to go check your exported builds so why bother? You just make a build and never upload it.
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>>82039010
There's an entire anime about breast milk magic, something or other Qwasar.
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>>82039010
There is an easy solution for your quandary use futa images they have both tits and dicks.
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>>82039060
Futa is gross.
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>>82039048
You know, I did read the manga for that many a yonk ago but I cannot remember the justification for breast milk powering the chemical-elementary super powers. Can you remember if it was some disparate bullshit, or if there was actually some cogent reason for it?

Incidentally, I didn't read much past chlorine guy getting totally jobbed. I remember being upset by that, I thought he was cool. I got up to overhyped oxygen guy, but stopped there.
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>>82039041
Same for me. I also feel like my build isn’t particularly interesting and could mostly be summed up by the Ending options I qualified for (Naturalized, Extreme-Range Courier, Cargo Bird) plus 2 drawbacks (Migration, Cuckoo) with a small note for the sex (male).

>>82039205
Having read it to the end, my memory tells me they simply never question it throughout. There was space to make a deep Christian mystic connection to the Holy Mother’s power there but considering Jesus’ side of the story I’m pretty sure they didn’t write that route.
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>>82039096
Sure, sure, but there are level of grossness to these things seeing a dick on a women is less gross then seeing it on a man, well unless you are gay.
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>>82039060
I second that
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>>82039041
You can literaly copypaste the names of the choices with the export option, you don't need to copy the Choice IDs
Just look at >>82028385
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>>82022579
Heh... so you can just fuck over not China and get a lot of points for it, why not, let them fall I am sidding with the contour women.
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>>82037522
I think it can simply be shrugged off if you have a powerful enough soul
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>>82039534
That's what my memory told me too; I think someone said 'Jesus's mother had tits,' and that was about as far as the explanation into milk powered alchemy went.

At any rate, I'd want something a bit more thematically stronger. The correlation between seed and homonculi growth in particular is a neat angle I'm thinking of explorin.
Though I guess there's some traditional correlation between familiars and breastmilk, if I did go there.

>>82039060
I guess that could work, too.

At any rate, still taking my vacay from making CYOA playing through Yumia, so I still have much time to think on this.
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pls rember
happy day :)
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>>82041060
is that a fcuking minion
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>>82039575
Nah. If all the women are futas I'm straight out not touching it, where if there are women and men in a CYOA at least there's something to go for.
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>>82043525
Of course you don't make all the women futas, you make all the men futas. Then you have the standard ratio of around 80% women and 20% futa you can drop in a femboy or two for flavour.
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>>82038880
The bird cyoa is brainless. The setting is solved with 0 effort; you can to start among the most powerful beings in the world and have infinite, unpreventable revivals.
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>>82044347
And be indestructible.
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>>82044347
>Bird... is brainless
waow
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>>82043391
I streamed Yumia to my friends when I was playing it for the first time and we absolutely lost our shit over those little guys. They're not minions but they're also absolutely fucking minions.

>>82041060
Imagine being experimented on by Yumia or another Atelier girl, and letting her do whatever she wants to you.
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>>82045127
Encroaching Realms
Origin: Struggle and Resist +100, +3d, Abduction, Male. +100
Aura: Pure, Water, Blue
Race: Human +200 300
Inner Realm: Unlock -1d, Keep -15, Library -20, Housing Wing -30, Inner Sanctum, Gatehouse -25, Garden -10, Spirit Palace, Sea x6 -24. -124 176
Class: Cultivator -1d, Qi Gathering Technique -15, Heaven And Earth United Technique -20, Great Exertion Method -20, Three Dantian Cycle Flow -200, Qi Condensation -35, Gold Core -100, Nascent Soul -1d, Incarnate -40, Human Racial -40%. -172 4
Start Position: Open Seas, A Pirate's Life

I was reading the wip and wanted to make a build. I'm just a Cultivator with a rather neat island based inner world, doing my cultivator thing.
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>>82044347
>solved
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>>82043525
Thats fine, cyoas don't need to be for everyone
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>>82023981
Flesh:
>Beauty
>Purity
>Mane
>Brand
Spirit:
>All is Vanity
>Dressed to Kill
>Voice of Reason
>Fear the Reaper
Rituals:
>Eternal Life
7+1, fail
>Perfected Form
7+4, success
>Self Improvement
Forced failure
>Nothing to See Here
Forced failure, the world is now populated by extremely fecund ageless monstergirls who run around wearing next to nothing (although leggings can stay, cause they're just as hot as wearing almost nothing and I'm sure Meresheket would like them too). This is a sudden development that nobody can explain, but nobody really cares.
>Divine Mitosis
6, success, similarly, she is stuck in the form of a fecund sex beast.
>Man Up
8, success (6 feet tall, still shorter than her, packing 3 feet of dick flaccid, and with a strong core of muscles on a fairly lithe frame)
>Mental Mastery
7+1, success
>Handmaidens
8+1, success
>Fit For a Queen
2+1, fail (lmao, I ain't fudging that, it's funny)
>Made to Serve
9+2
And thus, I get to start being a co-op partner for an endless debaucherously lewd and satisfying age of psuedo-Egyptian glory.
Should be comfy.
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>>82022579
I'm a bit starved pointwise. I made the world a little too good/sexual. I think having a world currency and a individual currency would help me budget as I basically have all the curses I could stomach but I have 30 points to spend on talents, companions, and artifacts.
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>>82046634
It's basically "fuck up the world or have no points".
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>>82046662
Can't relate
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>>82046662
The update added more ways to fuck up the world for points and made improving it more expensive(all the positive combos cost points now)
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>>82022579
Why is high tech associated with Mohism?

The points seem a little low but mostly because there's too much I want and I want to play seriously as a potential political player and not just be a subby slut
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>>82036567
Interactive and a bit bland. It checks all the boxes for what it is but doesn't really capture the imagination
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>>82046662
Exactly. I made full use of that in my build (if Heaven is in good condition, how can I maximize the benefits from mending it?), but I wouldn't call it good design by any means.

I think the solution is to increase the amount of default points.
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Remember
You will never be a girl :)
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>>82046662
Fucking up (not)China is a good thing as your helping out your centouress great khan-queen waifu conquer it and fix it for the better
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>>82049011
I too wanted to go join the centaur khan-queen, but I can't square it with being personally responsible for the world being shit
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>>82049011
>and fix it for the better
How will being ruled by horses make it better?
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>>82049218
well there is the whole drug epidemic, demonic cults, arrogant clans, corrupt eunuchs and ruled by a demon empresses, really the whole nation is messed up and evil, so its gonna be way better when ruled by a horse girl.
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>>82049218
Horse balls / pussy is kinda hot
Imagine the smell. None of them can wipe so they’d need servants / slaves for that
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>>82050099
>"Big. The."
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>>82050252
Cat?
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>>82050014
oh my goodness
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>>82045806
Presumably you meant to reply to someone else.
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>>82050014
Horse fetishists are weird, man.
Not only because of the bestiality but you guys always get all of this stuff wrong.

Everyone always raves on about horse dicks but first of all they don't go balls deep. That's just not a thing, a horse dong is effectively only half of what you see. And second, horses are infamous quickshots. Takes seconds for a horse to bust his load, and then he's all done.
Horses also don't need to wipe. Their asses are self cleaning. Mother nature gave them this specific kind of anus technology that tightens the hole so much all the poop just cuts right off. To be exceedingly clear, this is the kind of tightness that would actually cut your dick off.
Another thing, mares aren't just always ready to fuck like humans are. If they're in a breeding mood, fine, ok, give it your best shot you filthy subhuman. But if they're not, they'll fucking kill you on reflex. There's a screencap of a horse specialist anon talking about how dumb animal fuckers that try it get killed or turned into vegetables by the horse's own defensive measure and it's always funny whenever it's posted.
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>>82050574
I didn't mean to reply to anyone
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>>82050793
Wow, cool story, good thing none of that matters for anime centaurs
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>>82050014
Mmm...
Horse musk...
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>>82050866
Why, it does matter.
Because now, every time you think about fucking your horsefu you'll inevitably think about her accidentally giving you a hoof lobotomy, or about her anus castrating you. That's a nice mental image, innit?
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>>82050793
The real problem is smell/grossout fags. Those people are the real subhumans, because they don't stick to just being weird about horses, they're weird about EVERYTHING.
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>>82050947
You overestimate your power here. If considerations about the realistic implications of my fetishes would interrupt my masturbation, I would have never had the stomach to acquire these fetishes in the first place.
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>>82050993
It's like an information infection. An infohazard that kills your interest in something.
You think you're fine now because you're upset about someone 'ruining' your fetish, but the more you think about it the less appealing it becomes. And you will remember this.
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Now I just wanna know why our assholes are so weak that they typically need wiping. Is it just the fiber?
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>>82051070
If you're weak, maybe. The anal vice grip is just another bonus for the cultured.
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>>82051292
Not vice. More like bolt cutter.
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>>82051324
Lmao, no. You're exaggerating. All you know about this topic is that one 4chan screenshot. You don't need a bolt cutter to cut poop.
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>>82051354
I mean, it's your dick, you can lose it however you want. Just try to prepare some medical supplies beforehand, eh?
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>>82051156
Modern humans not only regularly eat a completely different diet from their wild ancestors but also shit sitting instead of crouching, which changes the way the poop comes out of you and apparently makes it messier.
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Your favorite waifupicker?
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>>82051939
Prisoner Transfer.
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>>82047015
Mohist is usually seen as the source for advance contraptions in wuxia stories, so it's them here.

>>82046634
And yeah, if you make the world too good then of course you'll run out of individual points. The intent is that the world is kinda shit, so you (who are strong) should do something about it. If the world is peaceful then you could just frontload into the Imperial family and enjoy being a Prince of the Realm.
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>>82022579
How does the cyoa have credits but mention of its author's name?
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>>82052937
*no mention
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>>82052937
If it's the author of the CYOA then it's already on the hosting site, if it's individual image author then it's too much
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>Karma: -2015
>dropping to a negative balance of Karma marked you as an abomination, and the world will conspire to send you back to the Cycles as soon as you arrived (attacks will progressively get worse - starting from something like bandit attacks, up to giant meteorites aiming for you)
Born with supreme talent, attaining 4600 years of cultivation in 25 years, possessing the greatest treasures, and becoming the center of the world, man conquers heaven!

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>>82053775
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>>82051939
Mommydom
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>>81994399
>If anything, I'd be inclined to think that the effort to introduce all these setting made the situation worse, rather than better, because it ended up being too much reading for the average person.
Yeah, I think this is the main thing. There's also the fact that their pictures are really small. You can learn a lot about a character by the expression on their face, but in many cases I can barely see what they look like. Bigger pictures also makes it seem less like a massive wall of text. I think the pictures for each waifu should be approximately as big as the picture of Daji on the first page. After all, they're what the CYOA is all about, right?
There's also the fact that in some cases I think I would have preferred not knowing the personal demons of the characters (pun not intended). Sounds like they've got a lot of stuff going on in their lives already? Plus traumas and such. Basically, you're reminding me of the inherent fridge logic of waifu pickers: that these are supposed to be real people, not pets designed solely to be part of my own life story, whom I would be stealing from their own lives. The more I know about their circumstances the more I remember that. Some waifus even explicitly state that they'll be very sad if they're taken away from their family. It's kind of a boner killer.
Well, that's just how I personally feel about it as someone who hasn't played any of these games.
As for mechanical critiques, I wouldn't mind an option to buy a power without the associated hero. Huge harems can get unwieldy. But I suppose that goes against the spirit of what Daji wants to do here?

Anyway I finally got around to reading it so I'll post a build later.
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>>82054067
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>>82054082
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>>82054067
Normally a waifu having a backstory, friends, family, and plot is a good thing, because it means it gives you a hook to imagine inserting yourself into. It works at odds when you're taking them out of that context and enslaving them though. Not a lot of people actually like fantasizing about being actually evil to real characters instead of just generic enemies.
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>>82054217
Yeah, that's exactly it. You put it better than I did.
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>>82053775
>"...up to giant meteorites aiming for you"
>man conquers heaven
>heaven throws a rock
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>>82043391
There's a shortstack yordle looking thing under the hat.
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>>82051939
DIC
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I wish lesbians were real and hot.
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>>82036844
I wouldn't consider something you want because you like the idea to be something that's mandatory

>>82037522
>Anything that cannot resist laws can be instantly destroyed and perfectly defended against.
Even in your realm or aura, you have to successfully argue the case, and Lawbringer still requires precedents. I'll change the wording to make sure it's clearer though.

>>82038459
>It's comforting to have some sort of backup
You get a lesser backup for free though

>Is the inner realm not a guaranteed safe haven
I mean, depends what you do with it. If you open up gates, it stops being so real quick. And it does border the void, so it's not like it's totally hermetically sealed

>divinity skills for otherwise non-divinity classes
Not exactly common

>I.e. for anyone who wants that, they are
For every single option, of course you'd want to take it if you want to do what it does. If that ever wasn't true, it would mean the balance is trash.

>>82045806
Nice, a basic build with a strong concept
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>>82056238
I think Three Dantian(s) Cycle Flow deserves to cost divinity. Connecting all 3 systems is crazy strong.
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>>82056238
>Even in your realm or aura, you have to successfully argue the case
Why? The realm is literally me. My will is its will.
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>>82020846
Speed run to Divinity with one body that is also a mad invetor as the other is a beast of lust doing whatever it wants, as both mitigate or work on removal of drawbacks.

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