Stories:By Greenswordsman>Sides of a Storyhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/83623251By Anonymous>Pranks for Nothing!https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81994332/#82050675By Cosplayanon>Liminalityhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81673298/#81677740By Greenswordsman>The World May Never know™https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81432621/#81442508By Greenswordsman>Quicksilver in the Windowhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81083073/#81083417By Raconza>Night Falls Over Hometown: A DeltaNoir Storyhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/77546651By Raconza>Without You in the Darkhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/78166688/#q78219783By LizardBro>Wingman Chronicles 2https://rentry.co/hw7ruhqbBy Raconza>Dragon's Duethttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/76483080/#76493589By Indianon>Susie's Birthday Favorhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/76323890/#76331238By Indianon>"Peeping Tomboys"https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/76264789/#76265420By Stinkin_Thinkin>Like a Broken Toy:https://archiveofourown.org/works/67190872--->The Game Where She's Fromhttps://deltarune.com/>/SUS/tories archiveshttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1nI5kjwhC_44dEeyeanKV8KUiGbdC8LEA>/sus/ archiveshttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/17Qgvvtr2m4J-8Y30AFzCXBERWA_-YKc8?usp=sharing>Veth archivehttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Y5s7tN_xpgcFLKPomLA0UXK5i3k3kSjs--->Last Thread:https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/82726932/
>>82828452Great stuff, I love the way you make Susie blush
>>82828771oh man thanks a loti have a decent grasp of the character, the only writer's block ive found msyelf in is how to take her narratively since she doesn't have that much foundation to stand on, unlike veth which has her own premise and everything
>>82828482You'll have to buy all the masks in front of it to find out for sure!>>82828546Not like anyone else is gonna buy it, champ. Though there may be a way to get it cheaper..>>82828803Glad you like it!
>>82829283Well, a lack of foundation can be a premise.
>>82829283Not jelly, but I have some pointers.Finding the foundation for your character lies in what you want that character to do: what puzzle piece they fill in the story. In Veth's case, her piece fits in to a world already saved, one where she was deprived of her purpose to do the saving, and now, in her twisted conviction, she's willing to undo its salvation just so she can give it herself. Veth is a peace breaker. Her foundation lies in uprooting the world around her and opening old wounds. The walls and ceiling that complete her lies in her journey, whether the author in question seeks to take that journey to a good ending where she's repentant, or a bad ending where she's desperate and begins the end of the world anew, but her very foundation is the disruption of an established peace.When you write or draw Solstice, what is it you imagine her doing? What her purpose? Is she seeking a lost purpose like Veth? Is she aimless and looking for someone to guide her? Does she have any relationship with the characters, especially Noelle, her template? Answer those questions, and you can make something great out of her.
I love these dummies
>>82830554Vore
>>82830563veth core
>>82830599>I showed you my core, answer me
>>82830599>>82830641>Veth core>Veth tummyyes please.
It's making me think.
Goodnight sus
>>82830761>>82831480How are you supposed to NOT want to sex them.
>>82828410>>82828452
>>82832669This is why you think every character is The Thing, Susie. Pay attention!
>>82832669post the blushy version...
>>82832669>>82832855Susie looks up spoilers for the movie she's actively watching and doesn't understand why that pisses everyone else off.
>>82833001Noelle most of all
SHAMONE
>>82828731Deltagroom more like, HA!
>>82831480Whatcha thinkin', anon?
>>82836695jesus christ
I can count the number of futafags with good taste on one hand.
>>82837834And it's a fist
Teefs
>>82838447sharp
>>82835933For one, yeah I'd sex and fuck and cuddle and cherish this creature.But beyond that, it'd be fun to have Deetee go on a "Meet the Heroes" day where she gets to have a few hours to hang out with each of the Fun Gang.>Kris's session mostly involved hunting moss and hitting action poses in front of random residents of Castle Town. This is "leadership", apparently.>Susie dresses Deetee up and tries to make her into a "bad girl". It does about as well as anyone could expect, but it's fun to let Deetee freestyle what she thinks being a "rude girl" means.>Ralsei gives an honestly interesting rundown of how Castle Town functions when the Lightners are away, and he and Deetee have a 1-to-1 about what being a Darkner means to them (with some breaks for fangirling over some stories from the Prophesied Adventure).>Noelle starts off with some winter-themed arts and crafts from her youth, then gives some stories about what Hometown is like and how it's changed over the years.
>>82838743that just sounds like Deetee is a makeawish kid on her last days lol
Krusie yaoi.
>>82832669I think Jelly’s Susie needs to go on a diet.
>>82839009I think she's got all the curves she needs.
>>82839162Fondling her tits with one hand while feeling the space right under her neck heat up like metal in the sun with the other
>>82839667we often talk about cold blooded susie, but endothermic to a dangerous temperature susie is a less explored cool option.
>>82839802I'm torn between "dragon gf that breaths smoke and fire when she's flustered" and the dynamic of "furred Noelle having a blast in snow but suffering in summer, cold-blooded Susie loving the sun but refusing to leave the front of a heater in winter, and Kris being the most adaptable to both hot and cold".
>>82838873Deetee fakes Dark Cancer to hang out with the Fun Gang for a day.
>>82840890isn't that an early always sunny episode
>>82840927It's Always Dark in Castle Town>"Susie Breaks the Cauldron">"The Gang Overthrows Democracy">"Kris Has Anger Issues">"No One Likes Berdly Anymore">"Veth Ruins Their Own Birthday Party">"Mike: Who?">"The Fight Dojo Closes Forever">"Kris Stabs Noelle in the Gut">"Who Got DeeTee Pregnant?">"The Benefits of Titan Infanticide">"18 Time Bombs in Queen's Room"
>>82839802Imagine motorboating her while her chest builds heat like that.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ui0V7vLgqKQKris and Susie dancing to this at the Sadie Hawkman's Dance.
>>82844011God, what a cutie.
>>82844011>>82844037>He always takes a deep breath so he can..."control" himself, and exhales silently as the pleasure floods through him>Making noise is improper, or so he feels>Susie loves nothing more than to make him feel so loved and needed that he accidentally makes just the faintest moans in her ear when pushing him over the edge>His warm breath hitting her ear and neck heats her up faster than anything
>>82844011Better check under the bed, Kris.
>>82844037Sauce on this drawing?
>>82828736>>82828771my attempt at repaying the drawing with an endangered colored unmasked gort
>>82845458cute
>>82845458Adorable!
>>82844985Wish I knew the source. I found it here.
>>82838547ow.
>>82845458Cute eldritch gote.
>>82845458No art tonight, but I wanted to stop by and say she's looking lovely. Good work!
goodnight sus
>>82849311Goodnight, goober
>>82850596need more susie hairstyles
>>82848840God I wish that was me
https://x.com/ItsDowly/status/2055360085585523169
Jakkit
>>82852587She's either looking for her husband or driving a taxi.
>>82853355>She's either looking for her husbandI kind of like the idea of the girls wanting to look for Kris if he's ever lost in the dark but in their own personal ways.
>>82854141two have came to fishone has come to orally service them while they fish
>>82854664Now that's an idea worthy of a commission
>>82853451
>>82854664That's the life
Mornin
>>82856477Goon mooning
>>82856771Kris gets to wake up with those in his face every morning
>>82857295
>>82850617
>>82857295And all thanks to me making his emo ass go out to socialise with the big purple girl
>>82858030And yet Kris still has the nerve to be ungrateful and hate us for getting him a monster girl gf. What a rude human.
>>82858068He doesn't hate us. he just distrusts us.I'm confident that getting (us) into the picture wasn't his idea.
>>82858082You know, from the blood stains on the floor, it seems like he's been locking the soul in the bird cage even before (You) showed up to control him. Feels like he hates the soul no matter what.
>>82858242I don't think that was from anything soul related. Blood never comes out when he pulls us out, and we don't leave blood behind us when we move around.I think Jelly's old comic may be more prophetic than we realize. I think Kris used to hurt himself. Normally, I despise the self-harm trope because it's shoehorned in and glorified by emo zoomers who project onto their characters, but in Kris' case it actually makes sense.
Whatever Kris does in his free time I bet he smell good
>>82852587jawless-ass vessel
>>82859946
>>82860779That's so gay to say
>>82860779
All is calm in the fields of repose
>>82861255This cute boi isn't ready for this darkworld.Now that I think about it, I wonder if some bisexual aspects will be used to tease Kris, too. Does he have deeper, hidden feelings for the gote (or more broadly, the opposite sex)? Perhaps too much for this setting but it's never occured to me until now that it could be a possibly.
How the fuck do I translate those wings on the side into blocks?? The rest of the build was fine, but my brain can't figure this shit out
>>82861255How did I not realize until now that the lambs were supposed to be moisturizer lotion.
>>82861384A banner perhaps? Mess around with patterns?
>>82861255RIP to the walking incarnation of innocence
>>82861255The Chilleen silhouette looks good. A lot of eyes spying on our heroes already.
>>82861255Oh shit Deetee spotted
>>82861413I don't really think banners would work the best for this.
>>82861752Maybe some coral then? I'm trying to think of strange shapes like that. Unless you want to the slabs, pistons and armor stands way?
>>82861255
>>82861255I see my Calvin and Hobbes panel styling advice is getting put to use.Great work. Love the layout.
>>82861384How willing are you to use mods?
>>82862080I'm already using mods. I'm pretty sure I know what blocks I will use, I just need to figure out how I'm going to place them to make the design work
>>82862154If that's the case, I think the whole project may need a bit of an upscale. You can still do it with blocks as it is, long as you pay attention to the overall outline. It's just going to look a bit more coarse with what you've got right now.
>>82861372Well, its possible..!>>82861405S'alright. I think most people just thought they were cum or somethin'.>>82861706Thanks. Watch the sky.>>82861926Not yet.>>82862006Thanks man, its working better. It's helping me not feel like everything is fighting for space on the page
>>82861255Ralsei better hope he's wearing something under that robe.
>>82863333Quads for the grey scrunkly thingy who also looks fucking STUNNING in that outfit, my god.
>>82863333queen of quads. she is looking great here
>>82863428Ralsei has a variant of the undersuit that everyone has in the Dark World. Its just cut different. Everyone has theirs slightly different.>>82863443>>82863541Glad you like it. Veth is trying to 'fit in' and 'be social' so as not to look suspicious for not doing those things teens do during summer. They just sit as far from everyone else as possible.
>>82864280Bro's getting shot 12 times
>>82864280That bird is so dead.
>>82864280That leaf is going so far up that bird's ass they're gonna need King Arthur to get it out.
>>82864280>the fucking leafDoes that mean he was fanning Noelle and fucking up her book until Veth walked by?
>>82864280>Ralsei has a variant of the undersuit that everyone has in the Dark World.Ah, so he's wearing spats, that's definitely what you mean, I see...
>>82864280Oh Berdly is so toast, does he really think Veth respects bro and gamer code?
>>82863333>It's helping me not feel like everything is fighting for space on the pageSeparating things into different size vignettes does a lot to economize your space and get the most out of your page. It's lookin good so far.Almost as good as that Veth, goddamn.
>>82864280Kris setting his boy up for death
>>82842476>Chin hairs on Susie
>>82865847They are bad on kris too.
this true, /sus/?
>>82865847>>82865951I can touch it up rq.
>>82828731Kris = Italian confirmed???
>>82866719no dumbass Kris is human
>>82866719Kris makes funny noises at Mario hacks and creepypasta games.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bK4GUuz2WC0
>>82865847>>82865951>>82866374Aight, there.
>>82867826Looking good!
>>82867826would love a Krusie photo album through their life
>>82867826PERFECTION!>Susie bellyDOUBLE PERFECTION!
>>82864280>Veth expresses the slightest amount of humoring of berdly.>Kris's shit eating grin instantly turns into pic rel.
>>82868719I can't believe Berdly is going to get some
>>82869196Yeah get some fucking rope around his neck.
>>82869196From Temmie, someday, maybe.From Veth, all he'll get is death threats and maybe even an attempt or two to make good on themThat said, I still really like the idea of some of the boys in the class finding Veth hot, but her being oblivious and still thinking they despise her.
>>82869321>Veth has enough of the shitbird and decides to off him in the Dark World>Berdly figures out that his life's in danger and quits fucking around, like he does in the weird route fight>After the fact, Veth realizes that it's over for her if anyone finds out she lost a fight to fucking Berdly
>>82869321>"They all HATED me.">"No they didn't.">"Well... I HATED all of them tho they should have ath well. The foolth."
>>82870777>*Veth, you didn't see Berdly, Monster Kid, and Snowy eying you up?>"They were plotting on me.">*They were drooling over you.>"What.">*Even Jockington and Catti exchanged looks after ogling you together>"They were exthchanging their poor opinionth of me.">*Like what?>"I don't know. I jutht know they were.">*Was MK plotting against you when he got you those Valentine's chocolates?>"They could have been poithoned.>*Still was pretty mean to just throw them away like that. >"It wath nethethary.">*Same with Snowy's movie tickets?>"He wath inthulting me by inthinuating I couldn't afford my own ticketth.">*Have you found a way to spin Berdly doing your homework for you as a negative?>"He thinkth he'th thmarter than me.">*... well, he think he's smarter than everyone, but->"He altho would have anthered every quethtion wrong to thabotage me.">*Of course.
>>82870935>"Okay Krith, I'm gonna be real. I knew.">"You did?">"Yeth.">"I'm theriouth!">"Nah, you're just trying to save face now.">"I did! I wath taking advantage of their grothh feelingth of puppy love!">"Surrrreee Vethy.">"SHUT UP! I WAS! I WAAAS!">Kris laughs.>"Did you know that I had a massive crush on you too?">Instant stun lock as he laughs even harder.>Que halfhearted chest pounds.>"I hate you! I hate you! You're the wortht partner of all time! Die! Die! Die!">She actually did know but she can't leverage it because now it sounds like cope.
Morning, sus
>"They're writing Veth greentexts and posting Veth art again.">"I thought this was my thread..."
>>82872959just shut up and jack off to the jelly porn already you big baby, that's all i even come here for
>>82869461Veth isn't that much of a fucking jobber.>>82865238I'm glad its looking good. I think once I get comfy with this I'll try to work in some of my odd shaped panels but layered in this style. I like the shattered glass effect for reasons, and also I simply must get weird with it. I enjoy making this long-form rough draft for you guys. I'd do it forever if I could.>>82868719D'aww.
>>82872985But have you considered drawing Susie?
*sharts*
>>82873012veth when she uhhhh installs the "Kris Sharts Himself" machine's batteries backwards
>>82872959Just beat up the grey girl
>>82873033>girlsorry we already got bored of her being a her and gave him a dick instead
>>82873069NTA, but not everyone likes gay shit, you know.
>>82873069Krissy will fuck Veth to an inch within his life and then teach him to shave his stinky pubes
dumb gooner
Goofy gooners
>>82828736Love soogi
>>82874036Is Susie the type to tell him to stop hugging her if others come around or the bus gets closer
>>82874036Why the fuck are they at the bus stop I'm scared
>>82863333>>82864280I'm not staring at the feet.I'm not staring at the feet ...I'm staring at her feet. I'm ogling her grippers like a fucking fool.
>>82874051You just draw this?If so, it's looking good!
>>82874452Went to a theater and got banned that very day because Susie got too rowdy at the claw machine they randomly had in the lobby
>>82874928It's a gift from someone I know and I wanted to share it
>>82876120Very nice, either way.
>>82875153You'd think her and Kris would get banned earlier for busting moves at the Michael Jackson biopic.
>>82874424She'd hug him harder just to let everyone know whose treasure he is.
i wanna see veth and susie kiss
You guys prefer Susie's ass or tits?
>>82878410"Both" is a cop-out answer but I really do think Susie feeling proportionally "big" is a huge part of her sexual appeal in lewds.While I'm usually more of an assman, I think I will say tits for Susie at least if I'm imagining a bodytype that's a bit more tame and """canon""". I can see her having a more stronger/sturdier frame with some nice tits to contrast her tomboyish physique, whereas a bigger butt taking the focus might feel a bit goony if (again) I wanted to go with more Susie-like proportions that feel right for her character.
>>82878410I will openly admit my bias, as I have written several works encompassing Krusie breast worship, but it's her boobs for me.For me, it's the fact that boobs are just so much more fun to play with, and that provides a lot of fuel for both silly krusie dumbassery moments, and sweet, intimate play.
>>82877684Yeah but why.
>>82878410Belly or Thighs though
>>82880185Thighs
Off topic, but we love a good theory here. But this might actually be too insanehttps://youtu.be/BkNYAcY2dyQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJl76bOYuvYSusie's theme is just too strong. Love this mother fucking lizard too damn much.
>>82881751what if they wanted to go to the lake, but Berdly drank all of the water
>>82881814pop him
>>82881426Would that work irl or is that just an other fantasy doomed to stay on paper?
>>82883133I'm not choking to find out whether or not.It does feel very choking hazard
>>82883133
Nummy dragon gorl.
>>82884587average home alone evening for kris and susie
>>82885332What a little suckle betwene friends?
>>82885964https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EiZTRvuuH4o
>>82885964Gotta be honest the version where it's Kris's sweater is vastly superior.
>>82887885Nighty night, friendo
>>82887885Rest well.
She beeg.
KRIS WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU ABOUT THE NEEDLESS TAXING OF ONE'S DIGESTIVE SYSTEM?Susie's the one who told them to do it.
>>82890051GOOD LORD, MAN.
>>82890050>Kris gets to squeeze, fondle, and generally fuck around with a pair of big dragon tiddies whenever he wantsUnfair.
This dude fuck lesbians?
