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So, /sus/ what are we going to do on forward? It's very clear that the Susie we knew has been completely destroyed in the favour of a skinwalker who doesn't give a single shit about Kris besides as an easily disposable third wheel that she can use and shoo away at her pleasure.
>>83653984>>83654044Why the fuck is Susie hitting us with the "We'll always have Paris" bullshit and then CLOSING THE DOOR ON YOU AAAH
>>83654068Susie is, has, and always will be a heartless bully.She’s the bad guy.
Hopefully Kris kills this bitch
>>83654126Can you please explain what this means? Like she's saying her and Kris will always close and then she just turns around and disproves it?Also is she still hiding things from Noelle? Did that get brought up?
>>83654108Appoint Jelly as the new lord and master of Deltarune seeing as he can write both adventure and romance.
>>83654108I will not give in to despair and continue to scour the update and post my favorite lizard until I can no longer
You deltatroons are 5 chapters into your game and don't even know the main characters gender??
>>83654152I hate how we're gonna have to side with them if Kris actually turns a coatI would burn that entire shitty, stupid world to the ground if I could. None of them deserve Kris.
>>83654169>five million scribbles on the same bg that never commit to the point of the general with ten thousand random OCsFun.
>>83654068Because Kris has by all intents and purposes been avoiding involving ANYONE but Susie. Kris never reinvited Berdly or Noelle or even suggest calling either despite both technically showing the compacity to help by choice. Susie is actively overstepping the original silent sorta agreement of it just being the two of them in these adventures mainly as their little secret alone and doing like with Noelle originally and letting her think it was a dream.>>83654108Same as always, its weird to think that a long time ago I said that reguardless of how it happened or was written Suselle wouldn't fly and that this chapter was gonna really be this incident because Suselle cancels out Krusie from a general perspective since nobody actually expects Toby to pull a thruple ending or that he's gonna hit the just friends ending. Same with /doe/ pretty much having it be that since Kris isn't directly a focus they'd turn on it all the same.So /sus/ remains as is: The Fan works that mostly ignore it all or pretend it doesn't matter and never would. Nothing has really changed from before given how the last chapter ended things and /sus/ kept on and said it didn't matter then either since there were still some moments or the older moments before
>>83654159You and Susie go on a long fucking walk talking about all the good times with just the both of you and how they were special and YOURS, but then they pretty much say "They can't just be just OURS anymore" And I read Kris as very..possessive, because like if you were going to add a friend that both of you know into a group why does it have to be some grand dramatic reveal that it's not just gonna be the two of you anymore. What's special about that if there isn't something seen as lost about it not just being the two of them. Like it's a sacrifice Susie knows they're making to include Noelle
>>83654228Greenis!
I'm gonna cope harder
>>83654152I think the reason the Knight tries to kidnap Toriel, and successfully gets Asgore and Undyne is because they are the people most likely to try and stop Kris's sacrifice
Despite everything, it’s still you
>>83654314That's the thing anon, it's why Kris is upset. It isn't stopping the sacrifice, it's who has to be done. Susie inviting Noelle back fully means Noelle now has to die because Susie originally took her place. Susie acted as a subverter to remove the direct need for the death of someone extremely close but as things have progressed that became far more complicated meaning now things are even worse
>>83654276>>83654295completely fake expression of friendshipa work week spent with kris amounts to nothing when its a half day of sporadic dark world shenanigans and a festival with noelle (and kris but she didn't care eanyway)the fact that she didn't get kris ice cream makes me genuinely fucking depressed. susie's whole thing was making sure nobody gets left behind and that everybody goes as a group and she just FUCKING FORGOT KRIS
>>83654276>>83654295STOP ANON YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO PLAY THE CHAPTER JUST KEEP DOOMPOSTING WITH YOU OR YOU'RE A COPING NIGGER
>Kris was abandoned by Noelle who never really liked him>Kris' brother isn't close with him anymore>Kris spent chapter four trying to save the people from the church including his mother only for her to ditch him to get drunk with a skeleton and party so loud that he can't even sleep that night>Apparently chapter five has Susie prioritize Noelle over himThis is getting depressing.
>>83654152>Kris goes full postal and you are given the option of being a little bitch and opposing him or feeding his demons and actually helping himTOBY FOX, YOU FILTHY JEW, YOU CAN STILL SALVAGE THIS GAME!
so how did asgore react when he found out about ralsei/asriel?
Hope you’re ready for the True Ending.
I said after the last chapter release i feel like the pacing as a whole is harmed, some characters are acting like there’s been months of time of development between them when in game it’s been a couple of days. I think Toby might have lost sight of that somewhat when writing them. A lot of issues could be solved if that was kept in mind
>>83654407Man, Kris really needs a win. And a friend.
>>83654469See, now, this would actually be better than what we're getting, because it at least admits what Kris is going through. The reality is that we'll never even get the catharsis of the writing admitting that Kris is being treated like shit.
>>83654400Well I hate to break it to you, but that's not quite how she feels about it. Her and Lancer built a room for Noelle in Castle Town right next to hers btw.
>>83654525If Kris did kill himself, everyone would move on within a week. Nobody likes him.
>>83654276We can make it if we try?
>>83654407He's being built up as an incel school shooterI'm not even joking, the signs are all there
>>83654569Cmon that's being ridiculous. They'd take that long to even notice he's missing in the first place.
>>83654515He still has us. It may not be ideal, but we’re all we have left.
>>83654569*I* wouldn'tI like KrisI would burn that entire shitty world of his to give kris a happy endingAll I wanted was for my lil applenigga to get the happiness he deserves
>>83654592Honestly with the whole them opening up the portals themselves, isn't it kinda already like that? He's just the one weird human kid who's kind of an after thought.
>>83654592I guess we were right back in Chapter 1 days to think that Kris was Chara. This shit is ending with Hometown covered in dust.
>>83654407Susie kept secrets from Kris, is still keeping secrets about the Dark World from Noelle and now she's leaving out details to spend time with Noelle at the chagrin of Catti, just like Carol before. And all while somehow neglecting Kris's presence and her recurrent theme of keeping her friends equally close.Susie's outcast tendencies are starting to turn into a bad case of aggressive contrarianism and insisting upon her own interests within the context of the story at Kris' personal and social expense. I'm not interested in it at all.
>>83654569Finger on the Eject Button>Who doesn't toy with the thought of suicide sometimes? Or, like, most of the time? Okay, maybe some people don't – like the happy scientist girl named Marie, or Jean-Marc, the superstar whom everyone loves. But you -- when the going gets rough, it's nice to think about your little trap door out of here. Do it. Put your finger on the eject button, see how alive it makes you feel -- the freedom of finality. Think of how much they'll *miss* you.
Just got the bad news, damn am I glad I decided to hold off on buying the game until the chapter was out.
So I know this is a dumb fucking question at this point with an obvious answer but does the new chapter at least make Noelle any more interesting or give their relationship more depth?
>>83653984>>83654159I thought for sure this ship was going to end with someone going "ha ha, is Susie like your girlfriend or something?" and Kris going "Ew what, no."This is so much fucking worse.
>>83654667Only in weird "route" (three minute cutscene). Otherwise both Susie and Noelle are doubling down on dykeshit and dismissing Kris as a person.
What if Toby made Chapters 1 and 2 good for the demo, magnetizing people to buy the game, so later he could safely add whatever he wanted later?
>>83654616>>83654621>Despite everything>He still has (you).
>>83654725>Only in weird "route" Not even that, weird route noelle only cares about the "new kris" (you)
>>83654736Why would he need to do any of that? Have you the state of his fanbase, they'd gobble up everything he surely doesn't need us on his side.
>>83654667Everything Noelle does in this chapter feels like the built-up result of five chapters of trying to get serious with Susie, except Susie has always been braindead ignorant or perfectly complicit with you making decisions to upset the fact right in front of her, like the broom closet scene at the start of Chapter 2 or Chapter 4's ditch-and-dine. Which is to say, none of how she behaves is surprising and her lack of restraint comes back to bite her in the ass near the end of the Suselle lake scene as she blows off Carol's phone call by telling her "I REALLY like Susie!" and then hanging up, unaware that her mother was calling because her father just had a potentially critical accident elsewhere. Furthermore, concession stand dialogue implies that Noelle is hesitantly open to the idea of "watching." So... yeah.It isn't Noelle who is at fault, because she's always been this way. It's Susie performance that flies against everything built up and expected of her.
>>83654616Speak for yourself i fucking hated him the second i realised he was working with the knight
>>83654799>as she blows off Carol's phone call by telling her "I REALLY like Susie!"Don't tell me it actually is in the game, holy fuck.
>>83654799A simple "No, her only character trait is still just yuri" would have saved you some typing time.
>>83654616>>83654741Not for much longer. Two more chapters and credits roll, even the thing Kris cages slipping away from him.
>>83654799>unaware that her mother was calling because her father just had a potentially critical accident elsewhere.Did Rudy bite it offscreen?
i can't believe we got a human flowey this chapter
>>83654883He "fell down." He was tinseling town hall on a very tall ladder earlier on, but I can't imagine he was still doing that late enough into the day for the scene to change.
>>83654883He was on a ladder ealier and he "fell down"
>>83654883im guessing so
>>83654819Is it really a bad thing to work with the Knight at this point?
Honestly I have no more romantic cope, I just have Schrodinger writer cope. if chapter 6 (seeing as Chapter 6 will have no B side) is just You, Noelle, Ralsei and Susie. Then like come on, you can all see it too right? It would be such an obvious writing thing to do in fact I don't think there is any way to avoid it!Boom, new dark world. Oh time for a whole new fun adventure, but I guess Noelle will be with us and thats fine! Yep ha ha super great! Okay Susie I think me and you should go handle this puzzle over here! "Yeah no Kris I tihnk me and Noelle will do that, you should do it with Ralsei" O-oh yeah that's fine no yeah that makes sense ha ha yep!I mean come on I can see Ralsei and Kris having some type of rift moment because Kris gets so tilled that he's alone again and the only coping mechanism he has is the obvious schizo manifestation of his brother and the personification of a missing person.
>>83654799If Rudy died or had his condition worsen off screen, Noelle can’t be forgiven. I’d feel incredibly bad for Carol too.
>>83654927Had he started doing it after this chapter i could've sympathized with him
>>83654960That was after Rudy personally vouched for Susie to Carol, which is the reason the three of you are even able to interact at the Festival without her interference, or at least it's implied that way. The #1 Suselle guy getting taken down right after a Suselle crescendo isn't really the path I wanted laid out for the guy, but man.
>>83654799>the lesbian who you're supposed to believe is super uwu cute and wholesome is by far the most vile person in the entire gameStrangely realistic
>>83654944if she learns that rudy died offscreen than she might get depression solid and be too busy with that than go in adventure with youhey, that might be the crash out in chapter 6 in factsusie and noelle having a fallout due to the rudy subjectguh that sounds like a setup for a makeout scenario toward the endhopefully it doesn'tprobably the conclusion to that fallout will be chapter 7
>>83655023See I think it would be extremely possible for them to go on the adventure in the Dark World FIRST and Noelle having the time of her life hanging out with Susie, only for them to get out and realize Rudy is either in hyper crtical condition or is dead. Leading into Chapter 7 where Noelle needs to be consoled, Kris is doing freak portal shit and Gaster comes out with his big cock and promises a new world. New timelines where Dess never disappeared, Rudy never died, Papyrus actually didn't hang himself in his room and Asriel came back from college early and that was what Kris was working for this whole time. A way to spin back the clock to make everything perfect, to make everything right, they don't want to move for they want to go back to the past. But to do that he needs to get everyone they care about trapped in the dark world, it's the only way for their essence to be transfered over to the new alternate reality, One where monsters are all underground and humans rule on the surface.
>>83655019Copium:She still cares somewhat. That sigh in the piano scene might just be her reminiscing about old days and/or getting confused about her feelings. Haven't seen any other egregious screenshots aside from when Kris isn't present.
I just actually hate this entire franchise now. I can’t even fap to the porn anymore, it just all sucks. Everything sucks. Everything jewy and sucks and we’re running out of oil because we can’t tell jews no. All Toby ever knew how to do is subvert, he can’t make anything himself, just proxies for his disconnect with other people’s ideas and now he’s the ideas and they suck. Fuck Toby, fuck Deltatroon, fuck america and fuck the jews. I’m gonna just work on my own minecraft server alone and let this whole world rot I hate all of you in it.
>>83655091fucking addition chap 7 B side shit happens and Noelle doesn't even CARE that her dad is dying because she's so in love with (YOU) that she believe she has the power to do anything and everything!
>>83655103>she totally cares guys!!!>yes, she gets annoyed every single time kris dares to stand in the way of her and susie>and yes, when she hears about kris possibly going back to something that meant a lot to her she instantly tries to make it about herself and gets disappointed when susie doesn't just turn it into a date>but she totally cares!!>the textbox says she cares, so that means she does!!!!
oh my fucking god
>>83655103She's sighing because Susie keeps inviting Kris and not taking the hint
>>83655138It sucks but this is the case.
>>83654799I feel I said it really good long ago: Susie doesn't know what romance or friendship actually was.For her Kris and Noelle are very much the same: Both are the only people who have ever tried to be nice to her; with Kris his mostly somewhat like her and seemingly mostly simple, with Noelle though it becomes weird and unclear. Originally she was the first nice one but she also never engaged with Susie after leading her to mostly just lock the moment in her mind to not bully Noelle over that once nice moment but since Ch 2 Noelle spoke far more about what things were leading to more confusion in the little Susie understood and knew about other people leading her to do something she never felt she had to with Kris and tread a weird line of trying to dig into Noelle for more blunt honesty since she's always clearly lying or hiding something but now she's actually feeling attached to Noelle and Unlike Kris she can't view Noelle as self sufficient enough on her own.For as much as things seem a certain way, /sus/ always kept reading these moments as a non one sided Romance on more than just Noelle's side when the truth is that for as much as it always seemed like Kruis it really was just snoot on the head. Something just like Mae and Bea where it's great in perspective but at the same time horrendously not canon due to in universe comments.
>>83655122pretty muchwould explain why weird route miss chapter 6wake up without news of what happened to rudy to go on a joy ride... wherever chapter 7 happens.finally learn what happened to rudy earlier, but she doesn't care anymore or she get mind broken even harder
>>83655136Kris needs to hurt them. They’re terrible friends.
>>83655122she does care, you misinterpreted that anon's post. carol calls her to tell noelle what happened to rudy, but before she can say anything, noelle assumes it's nothing important so she just tells off her mom and shuts off the phone. it's only afterwards when carol calls back that noelle listens, hears the news and it hits her all at once
>>83655187Too bad this is wrong. Susie explicitly bullied and threatened to murder Kris because she was jealous, and wanted Noelle to be her girlfriend.
>>83655242No no you misunderstand. in the Bside route for Chapter 5 Noelle goes schizo and the chapter pretty much says "Comeback in chapter 7" so I'm assuming that in that B side Noelle doesn't even care anymore about anything outside of (YOU)
>>83655201>>83655122I feel that goes more in the direction of her doing what she was stated to do after Dess went missing: Going to stand in front of the freezier. The only version to not care would be weird route Noelle who does the same with the video game when they played in the hospital. Normal route Noelle likely just suddenly blocks off from everyone and just recedes and fully obeys her mom going forward. Someone who fully starts blaming the fact she missed something important for once trying to be selfish toward herself
>>83655242and in the weird route, noelle miss the call entirelyand in the weird route, noelle got a... weird mentalityso if she learn, she might not care anymore
Incel route Kris will make Snowgrave look like a fangameTrust.
>>83655288that sounds like how chapter 6 would go
>Susie only picked on Kris because she was jealous and thought he and Noelle were a couple>as soon as that's deconfirmed she immediately goes all in on getting with her and strongarming Noelle into future adventures>Kris' opinion on the matter isn't considered, and she is suddenly quick to forget he's even present when sitting right next to him if Noelle is thereWHY
>>83655310Enbies can’t be incels.
>>83655136>Kris bullied noelle because she was jealous of him and Noelle>Because she was jealous of this girl who gave her like one pencil onceHahahahahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
How is this real lmaoooo
>>83655288And Carol would be 100% correct in that case.
>>83654644>Good ending is accepting people walking all over you and getting over it>Bad ending is killing everyone in rageNeither is good
>>83655269Susie does that to everyone though, Kris was just the least receptive to her threats so she kept escalating them but canonically never once actually goes all in on harming Kris beyond shoving against lockers or throwing apples, never anything that would cause mass injury but enough that a person should normally give up or stay away entirely. >>83655276Noelle views the entire situation as a game and now has the notion she can do far more than should be possible thanks to (YOU) meaning that as long as she gets strong nothing matters because she can make the world anything she wants: Fix her dad, get her sister back, be more bold, etc. If it's all a game, she can choose the ending she wants and if things go wrong just do it all over again
>>83655288now the meme of asgore running over dess would be noelle deliberately being a doe in the traffic
>>83655336She was jealous of Kris, not Noelle.
>>83655331Male ones are the biggest incels of all
If my copium was right and dragons dogma 2 can get its dlc, I can hopium my way through DR
>>83655394
>>83655136>>83655346Anyone able to confirm if this is real? If so I will not bother with the new chapter, just delete it and leave a negative review.
all this is just making me think we need someone who actually cares about susie as a character to write a better story for her, cause toby sure as hell doesn't.
>>83655420"she" refers to noelle btw
So everything was fake? Susie was just... using Kris as a vehicle to get to Noelle?
>>83655420That's a threat, yes. She does literally nothing with it after and even when Ch 1 starts she goes right back to threatening the same violence before just giving up without even putting her full teeth onto Kris
>>83655461Yep. That’s all it ever was.
>>83655387True
i'm starting to be glad that i never played any further than chapter 2
>>83655387Why is it bad to take action against people who walk all over you?
Good lord how hasn't he killed himself yet?
>susie's entire establishing relationship with kris and the origin of their friendship is because she was under a false impression that kriselle was a real and that it made her violently envious Okay Toby.
>>83655187slightly off topic but i want to fuck bea up the ass
>>83655626>"I-is that someone being slightly friendly with a girl who gave me a pencil once?">"I FUCKING HATE YOU AND I HOPE YOU DIE"
/doe/ here, this is a fucking nightmare, how are you guys holding up
>>83655661I can't even be mad anymore, honestly. I'm just laughing at the absurdity of it all.
>>83655661I never should've trusted toby to make something good.
>>83655394Goes back into the theme of control, gaining a high amount of it while also losing it at the same time.
>>83655650But I thought Kris had fully cut himself off from Noelle at that point. How does that make sense?
>>83655661I'm also from /doe/ and I literally couldn't tell the two threads apart at the moment. Might've accidentally crossposted, too.
>>83655443Toby cared, it just wasn't the direction you wanted.You were told at basically every turn what these relationships would be and kept thinking he'd subvert the implication he started back in 1 but Toby is still the same guy who wrote undertale and has all of the same shortcomings. You treated this like Fujimoto.Regardless this first week is gonna be some of you bums doomposting for well the same thing CSM fans did back then. In a lot of funny ways, I did predict that the moment Toby committed to what he was setting up the same people would turn on him despite the obvious and even exact predictions on what it meant the moment a full chapter where he actually wants to build up Noelle and Susie's dynamic, which people kept complaining about before being too nothing, but since it isn't susie turning on noelle now it sucks forever.Either way, this will blow over just like with ch 2 since all the whining is simply based on the fact no copes came true. Hell nobody even wants to think more on things now, it's just since Susie & Noelle ain't down for Kris now both are traitors to all instead of well caring about any of the friendship Kris and Susie had up to this point. Fells a bit against the spirit of a story all about making a friend and saving a friend
>>83654616>”WHAT WILL YOU HAVE AFTER 7 CHAPTERS?!” >”…(You). I’d still have (You)…”
what did she mean by this?
>>83655661Susie being canonized as a spiteful and jealous person wasn't on my bingo card, and especially not for the sake of something as petty and hamfisted as a relationship with Noelle. She still hasn't apologized for the Chapter 1 behavior, by the way.I guess that explains why she never considered Noelle a friend; she was always something more to her. Bravo on hiding that for eight years so you can nuke your fandom with it, I guess.
>>83654745Isn’t she lowkey scared of us though? I can’t recall exactly..
>>83655742Kris is afraid of octagons.
>>83655694Kris did but Noelle was still TRYING to be his friend and interact with him any chance they could.I find it funnier people are taking the line fully straight with no thoughts on anything behind it or a reason for it to change or be a lie or more of Susie's confusing dynamic of understanding relationships of all kinds. reminds me a lot of other stuff, though makes me feel nobody here cared as much for the story itself.>>83655791If I recall wasn't the sweepstakes stuff put into dubious canon a while back rather than full
>>83655742Dess?
>>83655394honestly holy fuck based off of all the bullshit I just stated. The ending of Deltarune Literally could just be Kris being the final boss after a schizo break down, realizing your uselessness in the grand scheme of their loneliness and just starts moving heavy to reshape the world so they can be whole again. He disappeared Rudy and everyone in town all he needs to do is disappear Noelle and Susie next, that way when it's time to start things a new, everyone will be in the new universe!Just gotta stop the heart from doing anything funky and running their plan. But thats when the Heart finds the Vessel, and Goes up to Noelle Ralsei and Susie to come together to stop Kris at the end of it all.
>>83655813Why would Susie be lying? You need to put the copium down.
>>83655638No me to that's on topic, reptiles should be fucked in the ass.