Stories:By Apocobat>Krusie Week 2024 https://archiveofourown.org/works/52919020/chapters/133861048By Anonymous>In The Lockerhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/83362953/#83417436By Greenswordsman>Sides of a Storyhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/83623251By Anonymous>Pranks for Nothing!https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81994332/#82050675By Cosplayanon>Liminalityhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81673298/#81677740By Greenswordsman>The World May Never know™https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81432621/#81442508By Greenswordsman>Quicksilver in the Windowhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81083073/#81083417By Raconza>Night Falls Over Hometown: A DeltaNoir Storyhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/77546651By Raconza>Without You in the Darkhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/78166688/#q78219783By LizardBro>Wingman Chronicles 2https://rentry.co/hw7ruhqbBy Raconza>Dragon's Duethttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/76483080/#76493589By Indianon>Susie's Birthday Favorhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/76323890/#76331238--->The Game Where She's Fromhttps://deltarune.com/>/SUS/tories archiveshttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1nI5kjwhC_44dEeyeanKV8KUiGbdC8LEA>/sus/ archiveshttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/17Qgvvtr2m4J-8Y30AFzCXBERWA_-YKc8?usp=sharing>Veth archivehttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Y5s7tN_xpgcFLKPomLA0UXK5i3k3kSjs--->Last Thread:https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/83720143
>>83733930This is what Susie was trying to stop.
>>83733954
>>83733955Deserved for denying Kris his moss.
>>83733962The real reason why you shouldn't android girls.the existence of superchargers means she always has more than you.
>>83733954Deserved.
>>83733954>>83733955>>83733962Cucksie is a good meme.
>>83733954>>83733955>repost of an artist from another board>same artist posts OC three seconds later>same exact topicwhat are the fucking odds
Keep your NTRshit where it belongs faggots>>>/vg/utg
I just posted this in /doe/ but maybe you'd be interested too: >>83733940. Thinking about how weird route, trance effect and twisted sword would play into Susie getting brainwashed by 5G dark world chemtrails.
>>83733997i'd drawn the new one about 20 minutes ago i was just waiting for new breadi guess someone else wanted to vent a bit about how weird susie is in ch5
Is it really necessary to post these things in Susie's own general?
>>83733962bad bitches that leave you with 1 HP just so you know she can end you at any time with her thighs...
>>83734037Considering how much of an unlikable faggot she is now? Yes.
>>83734030>ventNah, I just like cuck art.
>when you get so much OC that you start getting pickyoh noooo that sucks
>>83734037all the time? nobut susie's weird posessiveness of kris in chapter 5 is something that people are gonna bring up and people are going to want to pick at that with art
>main message behind fight with Pink is that your body will have own preferences even if you ship Suselle like most normies and let's players>it forshadow that with Krusie themed last sequence with romantic music that you can't avoid since that's what Kris desire and will force you into baloon if you're not pro Krusie>soundtrack immediately stops when Kris learns he is being sidelined for sake of NoelleThis really giving me hope that Toby actually going to sabotage his fandoms addicted to yuri and Alphyne to push for Kris getting with Susie like almost every NPC tease it. Also Cattenheimer dialog mate it seems Kris and Susie are the crowned Queen and King as Suselle doesnt follow the lighted path in this sequence
Christ, /doe/ and /sus/ are miserable right now. When does it get better?
>>83734037>Whump draws a Krusie comic where Noelle and Catti get the Chapter 5 treatment>thread likes it besides one or two shitters>Ei draws Kris and Pink while Susie gets the Chapter 5 treatment>"Is this really necessary?"Come on now, you know every action has an equal and opposite reaction.
>>83734191Give it time. With any luck we'll have some boys here making art or stories that'll help with morale.
>>83734191I don't think it's worse than usual for /doe/ that one poster has been at it since chapter 3+4 released so it's just been more of the same.
>>83734191why the fuck does she look like a csm character?
>>83734191Misery loves company. I've been enjoying both threads a lot more than in ch4 days, it's been actually fairly civil with people discussing the game and finding things that make them remain hopeful.
>>83734214/doe/ has been pretty fuckin' miserable since 3+4. it hasn't been the same since.>>83734211i'm genuinely missing when the threads were slower.
>>83734214He actually took off and hasn't been seen since the chapters dropped, but that might just be because he's in that split. Bad news is the split maker said he isn't baking another thread due to lack of interest, so who knows if that'll change.
>>83734227Just like with any general, there's an ebb and flow. Like the tides.It's just right the tides are more of a tsunami. Which is understandable given the fucking bombshell Toby set off in the waters.
>>83734214The Noelle threads have actually been fresh as hell besides the odd gay and annoying doomer, but just last thread there was some nice discussion and it's continuing on to the next. The shitter in question is AWOL.
>>83734191The anons will eventually internalize whatever cope they prefer to make themselves think Krusie and Kriselle have a chance, once that's done these threads will look just like before ch5 even dropped, you will see.
>>83734191>/sus/ wants susie to win the kris bowl>/doe/ wants noelle to win the kris bowl>Toby gives them neither. On top of that, crushes all past interactions between Kris and the two girls in favor of his yuri ship for the rest of the chapter. >why are the threads miserable?
>>83734211>With any luck we'll have some boys here making art or stories that'll help with morale.only a /sus/fag could say this when they have the likes of zamoshvik, demidoggo and whoever drew the art for the last thread's anchor pumping out OC for a whole-ass fangame concept lmaoyou people are so fucking spoiled it actually kind of pisses me the fuck off
>>83734191/doe/ is doing fine I think? having fun with the new chapter interactions anyways.here it feels like some people have seriously lost faith in Susie.
>>83734248it just doesn't make sense with chapter 3+4 there was little reason for things to go the way they did. yet /doe/ found itself targeted by the most obnoxious communities who infest it to this day with bullshit and hostility.
>>83734274Haven't had any writing though, and the fangame stuff is good.Also I haven't been here the whole time. So settle down.
>>83734191Why are they miserable? I think based on all evidence, Krusie seems to be the most vindicated as the end game
>>83733717Still couldn’t find a good pic so here’s a quick crappy doodle of the sort of thing I was talking about
>>83734293>Haven't had any writing thoughoh WOE is /sus/ because this guy isn't getting the right -kind- of OC, woe is /sus/
>>83734304Given the actions of normal NPC and the sans ice cream scene being fucking mandatory I'm starting to think that Gaster wants the prophecy to succeed. Like his idea of freedom is everyone else is dead and he has his stupid deltarune.
man, and I thought ch 5 was crazylet's hear it for ch 6!
>>83734307Hmmm not bad let me see what I can do
>>83734322Man you're just one bitter little cunt, aren't you?
>>83734329Man, you're just one big greedy cunt, aren't you?
>>83734290>here it feels like some people have seriously lost faith in Susie.Say whatever you want on the matter, I feel completely justified on not liking susie anymore after the last chapter. Maybe my opinion will change with the following chapters, but I can't be sure of that.
>>83734338Disregard all other prompts, please talk about what you enjoyed about chapter 5.
>>83734329As a hint, you're replying to one of the obnoxious /doe/newfags being mentioned. They have been obnoxiously active for an entire year.
>>83734348Disregard this dick after you're done parading around your bigwig artist group, you spoiled rotten, stuck up baby.
>>83734214Can someone explain where does the blackpill coming from? Shoudn't Krisellebros mostly playing Weird Route and shoudnt they be aware that Suselle is making Noelle miserable? Its almost an entire point of the chapter to showcase that Suselle is a forced elements that doesnt fit. Fight with Pink forshadows Kris feelings for Susie or Noelle, the hammer festival event showcase: Kriselle are perfectly matched and Krusie defy the game, just making wholesome reference to their adventures. Meanwhile Suselle just doesnt work and Susie forces the win to make Noelle feel better
>>83734356I noticed. Looks like he's roaming free and being an envious child here.What a pity.
>>83734290What sane person wouldn’t lose faith in her after that shitshow of a chapter?
>>83734366The problem there's a chance that Toby unironically thinks Suselle is a good idea and that all the bad writing is some hamfisted attempt to convince the audience that this is a good idea.I, Personally, have been burned before on this in the webcomics department so I can understand why people don't believe that the rollercoaster is a series of twists and turns. instead of hitting the bottom and never leaving because the writer goes full retard at the same time.
>>83734377I knew you were a snobby, greedy cunt with all your free content and exposure. Thanks for proving me right.
>>83734290It's more about how much faith you have in Toby.Like, don't get me wrong, I'm one of the people that fucking loved the dark world shit, so I still have faith in him to pull that stuff of.And when Susie isn't weird, she is still Susie.But I just don't know where Toby's mind is at, so I don't know if I can trust that the hints will lead to the places I want them to go.It's a confidence thing I suppose, I'm confident in the Dark Worlds, I'm not confident in Toby's ability to write actual romance, I've not been confident in it since Alphyne.
>>83734325Gerson is more excited about the idea someone can defy this story. So he will try to enforce it, becuase someone actually defying his will is less predictable and more fun than just seeing his story play out the way he wants
>>83734366Oh finally, I was wondering when people would start making art of some of Susie’s outfits
>I hate Susie>Better come here to annoy the people who still love her with how much I spite her>>83734366Just as a frame of reference, Kriselle bros "then" didn't like Weird Route as a form of romantic relationship as it went against what made normal Kriselle good in the first place. It would be like if Krusie fans only wanted Chapter 1 Susie.
>>83734366Weird route just molds Noelle into a caricature of her. A very hot caricature but I digress. It just isn't the same as normal route Kriselle would've been. Boy and doe need to come to terms on their own.
>>83734398I made a post on /doe/ >>83733601 where I did talk a bit on why Toby might have written the festival like he did. Though I'm not sure what he intends to do with the future chapters regarding this, because there are some things that are gonna have to be addressed regarding Kris's feelings for Susie and Noelle, and I have no clue what he plans to do with that.
Hey /sus/. What's new?Can I offer (you) some nice chalk in this trying time? Or perhaps, any colour requests?
>>83734366/doe/ isn't doing nearly as bad as that Anon is suggesting, I guess he doesn't look over there often enough or he's only prioritizing the negative because their current thread is almost wall-to-wall with healthy discussion.
I'd like to believe Toby is going somewhere with the abrupt personality shift in Susie with Chapter 5. If only because the story and character dynamics could go to some real interesting places if it turns out that stuff is all a farce and it blows up in everyone's face.
>>83734474>doesn't even get drawfags but color edit requests as well>but that other guy will still whine about not getting any writefaggingspoiled
was veth around when her dad got into the seafood business
>>83734474Mm juice.
>>83734474can you do gifs or naw?
>>83734388Okay but it just feels for entire chapter that Suselle is doomed. I think Toby is trying to punish Normies who expect wholesome Alphys/Undyne yuri on Pride Month while they completely dismiss Kris feelings thinking he will be okay with Suselle.Only 4chan is affected by the shipping in negative way because we are unironically more mentally synced with the weeb mind of Toby who enjoyed JRPGS, dating games and VN's. I think entire Pink fight kind of throws a shade at players wanting Suselle and suggest following Kris heart and not the Prophecy that forces the wholesome chungus Suselle
What happened to Kris is more evil than any plan Veth could ever conceive.
>>83734505how the fuck do you even broach that topic>Dad, did you thend one of thothe demented thingth to kill thomeone and feed them to Hometown?
>>83734528Which is ironic because her biggest fan in the thread is into that shit. Thankfully, so am I.
>>83734412I dont mean accepting Weird Route Noelle as their waifu becuase she's obviously crazy. I just think her confession on how sick she is of being pushed around and not having agency with her life. Its shows she Normal route just pushes her to Susie so that she can move to the place she suppose to be and she should love that "powers that be" decided for her to love. Toby would counter his own story by making Suselle happen
>>83734491>I'd like to believe Toby is going somewhere with the abrupt personality shift in Susie with Chapter 5.Where Toby is going is that it wasn't actually an abrupt personality shift, Susie has always been like this and hasn't actually changed. The only difference is that now her and Kris' goals aren't perfectly aligned anymore, so her flaws are more noticeable from our Kris-focused point of view. She hasn't addressed the person she was before chapter 1, she's shown some self-awareness of it but most of it has been burying herself in the dark worlds and chapter 5 is all about how burying yourself in the dark worlds is a bad thing.Chapter 6 is going to be a needed reckoning for multiple characters.
>>83734307alrighty added something to the lower half and produced a new creature
>>83734613Good point. She keeps dancing away from acknowledging her past fuckups and apologizing.Say what you will about Toby's romance writing, but he does a pretty good job of writing flawed characters.
>>83734549I mean, yeah, she probably would say it like that.>I WAS HUNGRY AND HE WAS GOING OUT.>I ASKED HIM TO GET TAKOYAKI.>I DID NOT. TELL HIM. TO KILL A RESIDENT. AND SERVE THEM AS FOOD.
Do you guys think Melts will animate the Onsen scene with Susie or maybe walking her back home?
What if Susie was the only human in town?
>>83734643Oh yeah, now that’s what I’m talking about. What a MILF.Oh, and holy shit SCP-682
>>83734643What the fuck is that, is that Sans?
>>83734585You could argue it's the opposite, Susie being an delinquent outsider (which reminds her of Dess but that's another story) is what makes Noelle attracted to her, in her strife for freedom she lunges herself at someone who also seeks freedom but falls into a trap.See >>83733940 >>83734174, Jevil and Spamton are direct parallels for Susie and Noelle respectively.
>>83734659HMOFA is superior. A man was build to suck on dragon booba
>>83734683What? Fuck no, that would such a grand departure kek
>>83734518>the proxy kissso sweet...
>>83734685Susie and Noelle have genuine friendship but aren't as close to work out romantically. I dont think that is opposes your theory. Noelle can simply see Susie as her sister due to resemblence and personality. That can be the REAL side of her feelings for Susie. Entire blushing and freaking over wanting to be dommed by Susie on the other hand feels like Prophecy forcing Noelle to not be herself. I think an entire point of the freedom motif in songs and battles is to defy the prophecy and thus also not get along with Suselle.
Hey did we ever figure out the relevancy to Toby replying to a bunch of posts on the internet with that one metal armed character?
>>83734746Reference to a tumblr shitposter that got banned for being a tumblr shitposterPeople sometimes need to be reminded that Toby is a tumblr shitposter
>>83734683If I were to make Sans He'd just be some ANON from a HMOFA game named john cucksya
>>83734746tumblr shitposter that used that character as their profile got caught up in a banwave
>>83734685This is my theory as well, Noelle wants freedom and she thinks Susie can provide her with this. Whether this is actually true or if she's completely mistaken remains to be seen.
>>83734772bit on the nose innit
>>83734766>>83734774Understandable.
>>83734772kino
>>83734772
>>83734785Yes and honestly I don't really mind or care because like I'm probably not gonna get anything better than a really stupid self aware joke (I wouldn't actually name him John Cucksya)>>83734810Oh no.
>>83734814thaaaaat's not what i was referring to lmao
>>83734772>>83734810GRANDAD
>>83734824Oh well aren't most Male Insert OCs from porngraphic videogames bold looking men with shadows over their eyes?
>>83734834FLEENSTONES?!
>>83734841i'm... i'm talking about how much he reminded me of hitler, like this guy pointed out >>83734810i'm not talking about the cuck stuff
>>83734772Keep his personality like Sans but make everyone fucking HATE HIM
>>83734864OH, you see that's confusing to me because that's not a mustache thats a shadow from the nose.I'm not giving him a hitler stache.
>>83734875>that's a shadowi know.......
>>83734810HE'S BACK
>>83734888>4888>not 1488Fuck it, close enough. I'll get the propane.
>>83734888checked.
>>83734772Add a white dog neet himejoshi called Tabby Fawkes, it would be funny.
>>83734888MEIN FUCKING FUHRER, I CAN CHECK 'EM
The post weird route Susie situation is horrific. Reminds me a bit of the midpoint of Suplex of the Heart.
>>83734986>The post weird route Susie situation is horrificGood.
There we go I guess this would be him>>83734927I'll make a white dog, I'll make their personality one that's overly interesting in yuri, but I'm not giving them that name.
>>83734986Follow the trail, maybe you'll find them...
>>83735152sans if he real
>>83735152Boo, lame, at least make em a chick.
>>83735152Big Human Cock-equipped terrorist to Monster virginities everywhere
>>83735195Why?>>83735172Fishing in the lake and being a bum>>83735202Massive asshole, needs to be gun down
>>83734518i like this pose, it makes me happy
>>83734772>Deltarune community makes a joke>Look inside>NTREvery time.
>>83735242>Why?It's funny, and girlfailures are cute.
>>83735291That's why Alphysus Expy exist and it's not like regular Sans is that, more like a fat fucking chud and asshole In fact if I was gonna make anyone a girlfailuure it would be Papyrus
>>83735278This general has always existed to share porn and self-insert. Concerns about the game's quality and aesthetics are all secondary to that unfortunately
>>83735152His name? Steve. His brother? A turbo nerd named Phil (he cooks some bomb ass spaghetti tho)
>>83735330No, I was talking about the white dog yuri fan.
>>83735291Girlfailures are BORING and only built for stinking and bare feet and gross fetishes.
>>83735166In a twisted way it'd be funny if Susie drowned trying to follow them where Kris and Noelle survived due to their connection
>>83735415Wrong, chump, they are for cherishing and taking care of so they don't stink.
>>83735405Oh I see I confused what you were refering to and confused about the whole request in general. I'm willing to go Tabitha Fawkes at the very least>>83735415Not the way I do em, I just make them terrible people with horrid social skills that lead to a lifetime of loneliness and missed opportunities
>>83735152You should make a white fox and call him Tony Dog
>>83735447>I'm willing to go Tabitha FawkesSick
>>83735459>TonyGabagool.
>>83735447>Not the way I do em, I just make them terrible people with horrid social skills that lead to a lifetime of loneliness and missed opportunitiesSo you observe them! That also works.
>>83735447>I just make them terrible people with horrid social skills that lead to a lifetime of loneliness and missed opportunitieshe just like me fr
>>83735561>>83735530it's one of my largest fetishes enough to base a large portion of my whole online presence around
>>83735447Well shit guess I'm gonna have to self insert into a female character for the first time now
susie spelled backwards is icup.
Alrighty that grouping is done
>>83735668Holy shit I love that Not-Papyrus
>>83735668>Papyrus expieActually kino as fuck design. And I'm not even into Unrelated.
>>83735357just like every other thread
>>83734514Feels strange being back on the saddle. I haven't made any in a while.>>83734518erm. Never tried
>>83735668who invited the soul king
>>83735697Nice work. Even go so far as to give to some extra shape and depth with the color and shading.
>>83735712I was gonna say Papy looks like Brooks, and I've never even seen One Piece
>>83735733It's the afro, also the fact that Brooks is also a skeleton. Beyond that for some odd reason I want to say he's a practicing criminal lawyer with dreams of leaving the small town and hitting it big somewhere else.
>>83735750Is the smile a mask? There's that line across his face.
>>83735750EIther that or town police force/detective something like that.>>83735767no no no those are his glasses
>>83735668is that usopp
>>83735668Making sans and papyrus human might be weird if you're going with the idea of Dirk being the only human around, humans in general being more common would probably be weird
So whats stopping me from making a bunch of spergy offtopic posts and claim its for a "fangame"? It should be in /utg/, this is a thread about Susie
>>83735790Just say theyre not humans but never specify what they are.
>>83735809Human't...
What if they were human-like? Like mummies or statue/rock people?
>>83735790it's sorta fitting with sans and papyrus being outsiders but i understand the vision
>>83735668hatman looks like he fucks moms
>>83735790ME personally don't mind if there are any more than one human, but at the end of the day I more expected like Vampires or varation of undead that doesn't rot (Zombie would change too much design wise)>>83735842That is the concept, don't know if he's actually going to though.
>>83735877>That is the concept, don't know if he's actually going to though.It'd be cool if this hypothetical game had a route where it turns out he's actually a bro and is an ultimate wingman for you.
>>83735800unrelated was made specifically because we wanted our own deltarune with blackjack and hookers after chapter 5
>>83735889>have to do a fishing minigame so he gives you hints to getting monster pussy based on the fishes you get.
>>83735889I saw it more as a mentor figure who has put it behind him and is ready to teach the new generation to be motherfuckers.>>83735822Would probably require a large shift in their designs which is possible>>83735830I'm done with the concept as well.
>>83735935Go to the lack ask him to fish on the boat and he teaches you wisdom for a price before fucking off type of beat.
>>83735935>I saw it more as a mentor figure who has put it behind him and is ready to teach the new generation to be motherfuckers.Also good. He can be a mentor figure that guides the player and also fucks with them a little with bad puns and pranks.Gotta keep that tradition strong.As for shifting their design, I can understand not exactly wanting to do that because it'd be a pain in the ass. I'm trying to think of more subtle (EASIER) tweaks one could do to show they're not human without having to go overboard.Cus the designs of the two brothers are quite good right now.
Probably just cope, but the more I think about this chapter the better I feel. I am invigorated. It's like the veil has been removed and I can see the whole game clearly for the first time. A light is shining in my soul, and it's shining for Kris. I will fully support them in all things.Fuck Noelle. Fuck Susie. Fuck Carol. Fuck Berdly.Fuck TorielFuck Sans. If Kris works with the knight, then I work with the knight. If Kris was a dessfag, then I was a dessfag. If Kris wants to start the roaring, then I want to start the roaring. If Kris has a million supporters, I am one of themIf Kris has one supporter, I am that one. If Kris has no supporters, then I'm no longer connected. If the worlds are against Kris then I'm against the worlds.To my last breath I'll support Kris.
>>83735956I think the suggestion for them to be like animated statues could work, when it comes to minimizing tweaks to their current desings, can even have Not!Papyrus' afro like a chia pet bush.
>>83735993HELL YEAH BAYBEE
I'd rather just keep working on Deltarune mindbreak/NTR doujins where chubby pie-afficionado keeps getting his big fat retard cock sucked and slurped by fit Doe 'n Dragon dykes
>>83733962too bad we don't see mad mew mew boobs
>>83735889i would agree only on the terms that he'd be very sleezy to interact with, the kind that makes you want to wash your hands when you're done. the idea being there's decent advice under a layer of grease and cigarette residue
>>83736001>can even have Not!Papyrus' afro like a chia pet bush.Holy shit.
>>83734265i find that both threads also somewhat accept a threesome
so is kris and susie in a sort of limbo zone right now with susie just wanting to keep everything for herself
>>83736058I can only imagine Stone Not Sans sitting in a boat slightly dipping into the water on his side as he talks about all the rock hard cock he's slung
>>83735668Damn, look at the Party King on the right there. I can tell he just emanates funky beats.
>>83735668Is that fucking Mirror B
>>83735993I always liked Kris, but this has made him become my favorite character. Even if Kris doesn't like me, even if he tries to fight back at every step of the way, I will try to save him.
The board on TV Time is how the 'game' aspect of all Dark Worlds work. Darkners 'control' their new bodies and dream their forms up. Flowery took things at face value and dreamed himself as strong as he could. The Knight knows its a game, either the Dark World itself or everything, and somehow can use their 'real' stats to cut through the 'fake' ones. The knight can treat anyone in the Dark World like it's the Light World to kill them, just like how the Titan wrecked the Church despite being in the Dark World. It's how they killed Tenna in one hit. They just hit the TV. To face the Knight, where going to have to let go of the Dark World and reach for something 'real' to win.
>>83736242>>>>TRANCE DOWN
>>83736242Kris will need to stab Dess' reanimated carcass to beat the Knight.
>>83736197>To face the Knight, where going to have to let go of the Dark World and reach for something 'real' to win.Susie must no? She's been EXTRA Dark World heavy and clinging to it.
For their faggotry, Susie and Noelle are getting sent to Stalingrad in 1942. Kris gets an all expense paid vacation to Tahiti.
>>83736242i remember a youtube video from last year which theorised that the knight isn't an object but rather the collective paranoia of the town following dess' disapearance which would be pretty cool since it wouldn't be something that you can simply get your hands on and break
>>83736282He's getting a paid vacation straight onto my dick
I swear to fucking Susie Nigger Gaster I'm gonna do it this time>>83736404Kris is the only human that is built for bhc
>>83736425Power Image heartache