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A thread for the creation and discussion of fan fiction and other fanworks - anything that involves a story and/or reading. What've you been reading? What've you been writing? What would you like to see more of?

>Thread question:
Who do you like seeing suffer?

>Previous thread:
>>58520079
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>>58558361
Don't care about fanfics, just dropping in to say the art is fucking based
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>>58558361
Ghetsis, but I like him as a Villain. I kind of want to give him plot armor, just to have him come back increasingly crippled with each appearance.
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>>58558361
>>58558370
"Excuse you."
"EXCUSE STARMIE?"
"You've been ignoring someone this entire time."
"STARMIE'S WIFE?"
"Well, technically I did beat Jacinthe..."
"THAT'S HOT"
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>>58558395
>Ghetsis
>Plot Armor
his plot armor is that he's in Unova region yet somehow he never simply got shot
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>>58558361
>Who do you like seeing suffer?
Every trainer through ESCALATION
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>>58558415
By Plot Armor I mean something like this https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=kGKRSBaZ9oU except he never regrets anything or changes and continues to be an evil bastard. I guess Quantum Immortality is a better word for it.
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>>58558444
Baxter Stockman from TMNT came to mind, guy went from losing an eye, to losing his legs, to losing everything but his head, to just being a floating brain and eye.
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>>58558444
Mmm, kinda hard given that immortality "now" isn't a thing just a ridiculous lifespan until stated otherwise, again.

You could turn him into a Yamask or use him in a Gu ritual to make a spiritomb
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>>58558361
I don't like seeing anybody suffer. I'm a bleeding heart.

Unless it's for fetish reasons. Then cute girls and pregnant women.
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>>58558485
>Gu ritual to make a spiritomb
This gives me a fun idea for a thread.

What 108 characters and pokemon would you cram into a spiritomb?
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>>58558518
I'd cram in a dugtrio, exeggutor, dodrio, magneton, maushold, etc, and fill the remaining slots with other spiritomb.
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>>58558471
I can see it
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>>58558370
Mega Starmie Z-move
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>>58558361

Corebeau.

I’m honestly thinking of practicing fight scenes with his pokemon on the receiving end.
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>>58558361
>thread question
I want to see Jacinthe suffer.
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>>58558361
>Who do you like seeing suffer?
My OCs
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>>58558361
>Who do you like seeing suffer?
Leon
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>>58558685
>108 x 108 souls if you go full spiritombs
Now THAT is fucking podracing.
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And to that anon working on a ZA re-write, something I toyed around with for my own fetish-filled Lumiose story but won’t be getting to anytime soon, was Paxton was going to be undercover for the International Police (for whatever reason, hadn’t gotten beyond that) and he’d arrive with an undercover Anabel. So of course when they get introduced to the Looker Bureau, Anabel and Emma get to go detective-ing.

Paxton being a trainer recruit for the IP would also help make having fully developed mons on his team more palatable for readers.
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Is borne of caution still a thing? Is it still enjoyable? Last chapter I read was entirely mid, seems like the story is on life support and he's moved onto some other story
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>>58559746
>Checked, 600k words
Wow, what's the fic about? Is it worth reading?
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>>58559818
a foxfucking zookeeper travels to the Pokemon World to teach about nutrition
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>>58559862
you forgot to mention the trauma nukes and everyone suiciding for some reason
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>>58559862
>>58559905
Don't forget that he and his Ninetales clearly want to fuck each other
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>>58559818
It really really isn't
It's the archetypal self insert power fantasy with his pet female animal he wants to fuck (except we've got to keep the SFW rating, gentlemen!!!) and everyone being made incompetent to make the guy look good even though he's saying shit that really should be common sense to the natives who have been there for a long, long time (wtf is eating good food, experimenting with custom moves, and knowing how to deescalate and handle wild animal attacks???)
Also a fucking Aggron gets physically bodied by a Sylveon
This nutritionman nigger can't lose
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>>58559929
Nutritional nigger*
Rolls off the tongue better
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>>58559862
Eh, that doesn't sound too-
>>58559905
>>58559923
ah.
>>58559929
I see.
>>58559950
>picrel
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>>58559818
Pros:
>Excellent battles and strategies
>Cool world building, the setting feels lived in
>Great characterization of the mons
>Highly influential in the fandom, half the fics I’ve read have some mention of nutrition in them, which wasn’t widespread before
It’s a pretty definitive Pokémon Journeyfic at this point, and yes, definitive in that it’ll likely never be finished is a part of it.

Cons
>Dude reeeeeally wants to fuck the fox
>Typical power fantasy stuff, it feels more earned than other SI fics but still pretty egregious
>The biggest example of this is he’s the only person ever to consider nutrition for Pokémon in the world
>MCs have likely become too powerful too quickly and the power scaling is likely going to get really wonkey really soon in order for future battles to feel compelling or uncertain
>Author opened a Patreon and chapter production ground to a halt
>Did I mention he wants to fuck the fox?

It’s highly influential and something I’d tell every wannabe fic writer (journeyfic specifically) to read to get an idea of what people have been influenced by.
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>>58560111
It's not just the fox baiting but that he teases it without commiting to a side which annoys everyone.
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>>58559923
>>58559929
>>58560111
Give examples of the pokephilia teasing
I always hear people bring that up in these threads, but never saw examples
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>>58560210
>Calling Ninetales “Love” since very early on
>Multiple scenes of sleeping underneath covers where Ninetales is sleeping on or with Lee, her tales in his face
Not even mentioning the implication of what Ninetales’s soul/spirit is The lioness being referred to in the opening line of the story that Giratina likely took the soul of while Isekai’ing Lee into Hoenn
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>>58560210
He literally impregnates the fox in the QQ version.
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>>58558518
If you killed 107 beautiful women and then yourself would you have an eternal and loving Spiritomb harem, or would they endlessly torment and insult you instead? Because that sounds hot. I think after the first couple centuries they'd come around and start acting tsundere towards me
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>>58560962
first time I've heard of this but I'm completely unsurprised
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Are there any fics where the isekai MC is a pokemon in a non-PMD world and has to actually work with a trainer instead of "transforming into a human/illusions"
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>>58561235
Yes. It's the one I'm writing but will never upload.
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>>58561132
https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/borne-of-caution-fox-box-snippets-pokemon.22309/page-2#post-7073283
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Is there any good auraslop? I gave up with canon, be it games, anime or manga
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>>58561047
I imagine everyone’s going insane due to being shoved into a rock with a bunch of strangers.
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>>58561047
>not killing 107 beautiful women and Misty, then sticking your dick in the swirling mass
Otherwise based.
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>>58561244
too bad
If you were writing one, what pokemon would you pick to write about and should the trainer be a girl

I feel like I'm onto the next BoC here. A human/poke relationship, in reverse, with plenty of bait for readers
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>>58558485
GhetsisTomb's ego is going to so enormous that he'll end up eating the rest of spirits trapped inside and powering up. You'll end up with an ascended Spiritomb and then have to enlist the help of the greatest ghost type trainer to help you with your issue.
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>>58561235
In Ranger's Shadow
Shaded Silk
Unbroken Disguise
Little Leavanny in the Big City
A Backwards Grin
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>>58561235
I actually plan on having my MC be isekai'd partway through my fic but actually having him be the random body some isekaijin from another universe unwittingly highjacks. The fic changes to his friend's point of view as they slowly piece together that he has been body snatched.
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>>58561302
Haven't found a place to shoehorn aura into my fic yet. As a kanto fic there isn't much place for it unless I decide to make Ash show up in it.
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>>58561334
The Tree of Beginning and Rota are in Kanto so if you really need to, you can shoehorn in some Aura Knights and Aaron's crystal or whatever.
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>Everybody's talking about Spiritomb while I'm in the middle of writing about how the Spiritomb in my fic came to be created
Spoopy...
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>>58561334
If the MC is a pokemon, they naturally use aura and type energy.
MC can explore cultivating as a pokemon and helping their trainer and the rest of their team.

Where it gets weird is the pokemon itself. Anything that's human shaped is a cop out. And dogs+women meme, but that could work positively as a way to bait fans. Poochyena male has to deal with female pooches being bigger than him lol
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>>58561318
>A Backwards Grin
She doesn't stick with a trainer for long
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>>58561347
>came to be created
Gu ritual bro
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>>58561345
Huh. Tree of Life sounds neat but I don't feel like it would fit my fic very well, but...
>Aaron's crystal
Weird artifact bullshit would fit great. I never saw that movie but I'll look into it.
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>>58561430
Iirc the crystals are what lets them use aura so you could think of it as materia from FF and shove type crystals or something
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>>58561427
I don't know what that's supposed to be so I'm doing my own thing.
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>>58561443
>In East Asia there is a type of black magic conducted by women that is known in China as 'gu' and in Japan as 'kodoku. ' It involves sealing several venomous insects (eg. scorpion, centipede) in a jar & allowing them to kill each other until only one survives
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>>58561455
Oh, that's pretty neat. Mine's a lot more tragic than that. I also used a mishmash of both human and Pokemon souls.
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>>58561427
I want to perform a Gu ritual with a ghost girl if you know what I mean
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>>58561441
Oh my fic isn't a battle fic. I don't need to make up stuff.
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>>58561318
Are any of these actual pokemon journey fics, or are they, i don't know the word to describe it, but "shitty drama autistic fics where they talk about emotions way too much and being a pokemon adds nothing to the story."
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>>58561235
There's https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/i-thought-this-was-a-mystery-dungeon-pokemon-si.46591/
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Humans were always meant to be weatherchads
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>>58561565
None of them are journey fics in the traditional sense. Little Leavanny is navel gazey iirc. The others are reasonable as best I remember.
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I have started seeing this theory going around about how Zygarde learns/adapt/assimilates the other Regions gimmicks to himself so as to better do his job. More specifically, that he may have been involved during the Darkest Day in some way and that him going 100% is him learning how to not-Dynamax just like Nihil Light is him learning how to not-Z Move.
Thoughts on it?
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>>58562106
Sounds like cope
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>>58562106
That's a pretty nifty idea that I'll have to keep in mind.
Aura Break is an adaptation to Xerneas and Yveltal's own abilities. I wonder if it could be used against Groudon, Kyogre, and Rayquaza.
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>>58562106
I don’t see it.
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>>58562166
How about he learns to adapt to Cubchoo using Powder Snow
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>>58558471
Goated TMNT series btw. Although I wish they were as daring with other aspects as they were with Stockman.
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>>58562231
It layered itself with Thick Fat Walreins to defend against such attacks
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>>58561665
Looking through sufficient velocity is just sad, it's basically a ghost town compared to it's sister sites
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What's the solution for a characters main team becoming "too strong" and thus incapable of being challenged my regular threats anymore. Is the trick to add new Pokémon and cycle multiple sets?
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>>58563349
Disobedience
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>>58563349
Baby mon training arc that guides into another capture or two so they have peers.
Have them nearly die from a legendary-tier foe, setting back their strength to early levels and even devolving them but retaining all their knowledge so that they can take the world by storm under new identities using their accumulated knowledge
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>>58560210
His Ninetales sucks him off during an online class
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>>58563402
>a little oral bonding between trainer and pokemon is sexual all of the sudden
They're just imprinting your taste and scent, get your mind out of the gutter anon
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>>58563368
Why tf charizard lookin so zasty here???
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>>58563349
"Too strong" is just a videogame and shonen battle thing. Realistically its not a thing. Even the best warrior in the world is still at risk of losing every battle he faces due to bullshit like dumb luck. Famous hero from Irish lore, supernaturally stromg dude, died while swimming because a blind fisherman was spear fishing that day. Just don't attach concrete power level shit to your fic and you never have to worry about it.
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>>58563349
Degenerate them so their aptitude can increase
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This thread is too obsessed with power and strength and battling. So. I dare you, Anonymous, to write a Pokemon fic that has no battling or combat in it. Whatsoever.
Hard mode: It can't be smut, either.
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>>58563733
Just make it a contest fic lol
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>>58563733
So that one Galar baking fix?
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>>58563349
Let them finish their story.
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>>58563733
Pokemon Cafe Remix fic where you use NUTRITION to create a legendary restaurant frequented by Champions and high-profile trainers, and you pimp out that little whore Leah to the guests (and their pokemon)
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>>58563349
Maybe making it more character driven.
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>>58563510
>bla bla bla humans can be stabbed so magic armored monsters are in danger
you're in the wrong genre, get out. You're 1 step away from muh mutilated pokemon after battle memes
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>>58563733
You're a dumbass retard. Literally 99% of pokemon fics have no battle and are just dumb drama garbage and shipping smut.

Here's a real challenge: Write a Pokemon fic that actually needs pokemon in it for the story, and not just a cheap device to outline your porn addiction to.
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>>58563349
ESCALATION
>B-but
ESCALATION
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>>58563994
>your hubris will be your downfall, foolish human, for there are beings beyond your kind, creatures you cannot hope to eve—AAAAIEEE NOT THE NET AAAIIIEEE WAIT WAIT ANYTHING BUT THE NET I'LL BE A GOOD PUPPY ARF ARF LOOK I CAN DANCE FOR TREATS PLEASE SPARE ME I BEG YOU
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>>58564004
I said "this thread", retard-kun.
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>>58564026
Look, i know that i let myself be captured by a net... But it was a very good net, it would have been a shame to break it just to get free.
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>>58563994
I'm writing an edge fic, what sounds funnier: TF2 comical levels of chunky salsa and screaming (I'll get creative with the deaths; a bit of you! and another bit of you! and your liver!) or horrific descriptions of gore being treated really casually (trying to talk with a broken or missing jaw and setting it manually, having to pick up his own severed head after getting revived, referees trying to determine if eating a severed limb to heal counts as an illegal item usage or not, etc)?
>>58564026
>>58564144
A tiny net is a death sentence, anons. It is a net and it is tiny.
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>>58564022
Ash, being retarded as usual, failed to account that team Magma members cultivate both Fire and Earth Aura, rendering electric attacks useless.
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>>58564158
>Fire and Earth Aura
I unironically thought about this kind of stuff to mimic Pokémon more closely
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>>58564157
>what sounds funnier
Both have the potential to get stale so be sparing, but personally I think the deadpan style is funnier for written media. Chunky salsa is visually funny but may be hard to write in a funny way.
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>>58563349
The great part of Pokémon as far as fights go is you can have some absurdly powerful Pokémon, but if they go up against a type mismatch of at least a near-peer adversary, then they’re kinda toast. If you’re doing 6v6 battles, then have the MC start the battle with a type mismatch. If they lose that first 1v1, they’re basically playing catch-up until they can overcome the type mismatches (which should be the big moment of the fight that isn’t the finale). The opposing trainer has to be competent of course, but that should go without saying. If a trainer is “too powerful” in the setting, then other trainers will study that string trainer and zero in on their weaknesses.

It’s either that or the opponents start using a Legendary/UB/Paradox Mon.
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You know, my outline didn't include a woman being torn in half by an Abomasnow in front of her daughter, but it's doing wonders for the dramatic tension of the scene.
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>>58564004
read the spoiler
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>humans are smart and have all these abilities and have dexterous hands and can do all sorts of martial arts, but only if they train for it and practice, otherwise they flail and strike randomly
pokemon are the same way, except its harder because super powers are mostly instinctive. That's why trainers are needed and wild pokemon tend to be weak even when they're strong
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>Set flashback far in the past at a well-known location
>Indicate the gulf in time and a different group of people than the modern inhabitants living there by referring to the area by its Japanese name instead of English
Based or cringe?
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>>58564361
>be subtle
Good advice. I'm gonna keep the gore to when the MC needs to inspect someone after a pretty standard battle description or just as a really fast off hand comment or description (like a Gallade knocks the enemy out but then the trainer can't give him a high five as usual because his arms are broken or missing; "hey you should see the other guy" joke comes after that).

Unrelated, I remember reading somewhere on the board about a weaker pokemon overexerting and hurting itself out of sheer competitive spirit and the desire to win, and I thought that was real interesting as the opposite of a much stronger pokemon throwing the match. I don't remember exactly.
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>>58564787
Based. Could throw in the other languages like French names for Kalos mons depending on the lingua franca (heh) for the time period.
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>>58564787
This is what the most evil gay man did
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>Ask Ao3 fags on reddit if I should tag my twist villain
>Most say I should, giving no fucks about the massive spoilers involved
This is what I get for asking reddit, let alone Ao3 fags on reddit. It's kinda shitty the villain that's never done right will have no love on their tag if I don't tag them eventually though.
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>>58565341
No you shouldn't out who it is and you shouldn't tag that there's a twist villain at all.
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>>58563733
I'm already writing PokeNormal like this in spirit. The main characters are not battlers, but technically there are times where side characters battle.
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>>58563994
Homie, I'm going to be real with you. That was an aggressive misunderstanding of that point I'm trying to make. I wasn't saying all combat has to be gritty and realistic, I'm saying you shouldn't try to codify power level shit into your narrative. Its just lazy writing to say somebody is 'too strong to be beaten'. Even power fantasy shit is improved by not being so shallow. Don't write your pokemon battles like a collection of stats being run through a program with a predictable result. That's how you avoid the 'protag too strong' problem.
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>>58564004
Also PokeNormal, and Crystal Light too for good measure. Both are stories that couldn't work without Pokemon.
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>>58563510
>Even the best warrior in the world is still at risk of losing every battle he faces due to bullshit like dumb luck
>the dumb luck in question
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>>58565885
To be fair I feel like many pokemon battles could be improved by random meteors. Keep em on their toes.
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>>58565905
I just remember that DP anime gag where Gible's Draco Meteor always hit Piplup no matter what
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>>58563349
An alternative solution.

Learn how to write a powerful protagonist well enough that not being challenged often is still entertaining. Goku dealing with guys with guns is still always funny as hell. A good fic isn't just a vehicle for battles. And even if you are writing a fic that is all about the battles you can just learn to write curbstomp battles to be interesting. Mob Psycho 100 has the MC easily outclass others without even trying and the fights are still emotionally fulfilling and great spectacles.

Man, now my urge to write good battles is itching. Good thing my next chapter is battle focused.
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>>58564158
Fool that you are, you failed to see that their clothing has horns, which everyone knows is the weak spot of all Earth types.
What, Lightning Rod explicitly nullifies electric attacks? No idea what you're talking about.
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>>58565597
>Famous hero from Irish lore, supernaturally stromg dude, died while swimming because a blind fisherman was spear fishing that day
now this is good writing
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>>58563349
Honestly I'm still in my early arcs but my plan long-term is just tiering both the heroes and villains. The MCs are weak early on, but the side characters are powerful and can keep them safe while they're being introduced to more powerful villains that are currently way too strong for them. Their early rivalries are against more grunt-level opponents that either can't or won't pose deadly harm fighting them alone, so they can grow over time to take on the more threatening villains themselves.
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>>58566340
bold of you to assume anybody is going to read the next chapter after what you pulled, you monster

But on a completely unrelated noted, just finished the latest chapter of PokeNormal after too damn long.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/66247705/chapters/186705291

Big, and I mean BIG, trouble is coming. Plus I threw in just a teensy tiny bit of Leon slander. As a treat.
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>>58565597
Sometimes you lose...by being too strong...
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>>58563349
Having issues that cannot just be solved with strength, like awful memories and tensions leftover from a war, dealing with orphaned babies for a while, solving a murder case, what to do with abused pokemon, or perhaps a growing arrogance within the main team which causes slip-ups in battle or terrible consequences narratively.
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>>58564158
What type Auras do the different villain team grunts cultivate (barring Aqua, which is obvious)?
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>>58566236
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fergus_mac_R%C3%B3ich

>name literally means manliness
>two main traits are being huge and sexually potent
>stabbed in the chest by a spear while swimming, climbs out and throws the spear back to kill the dog of the guy who tricked the blind guy into stabbing him before dying

Fate has taught me that Irish heroes were fucking beasts.
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>>58566591
>climbs out and throws the spear back to kill the dog of the guy who tricked the blind guy into stabbing him before dying
irish do things different, fucking based
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What's the deal with Fairy trainers? What is it about their type or their training that makes them all touched in the head?
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>>58566652
That's just how fairies are. Back in the day if you were a fucking weirdo people blamed it on fairies.
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>>58566652
Fairy types are the truest to themselves, so it's only expected that Fairy specialists would similarly be shameless. Just be glad the pokemon world is a child-friendly utopia, otherwise those Fairy specialists would be shameless in much worse ways.
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>>58566480
>Comment made on your story!
>Not on the new chapter just posted now but an old one
>Comment says little of anything
I am the ultimate cocktease.
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>>58566652
Fairies are a hazard to people and should be genocided out of the pokemon world. Nothing could go wrong. Trust.
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>>58567097
>every 2D game is from the timeline where Fairies were completely exterminated
What the fuck did they do to deserve it
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>>58566950
I can oneup that
>comment made on your story
>it's guessing what's gonna happen next
>i didn't write it down in detail yet but i'm the author so i know
>i reeeeally wanna tell him
>can't say anything cuz it's spoilers
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>>58567212
They were too strong. It's no coincidence that every world without fairies is a world without mega evolution, dynamax, etc. Without Fairies to serve as the mocking rival that goads on the rest of the world, the world's edge dulls.
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>>58567212
>Attack Method: EXISTENCE
Is it any wonder why they're so hated?
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>>58566591
Old European folklore post christianity is surprisingly unhinged and it is hilarious
https://youtu.be/Cyu8ph4lsHo
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Started reading anything new recently?
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>>58567311
I'm about five chapters into Prince of Po Town. It's been interesting so far, I'd say the humiliation ritual talk is a touch exaggerated. It's out of my comfort zone for fics (not that I've read a ton of Pokemon fics) but I'm enjoying it so far. Need to start dropping comments on it.
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>>58567229
One of my commenters was an absolute gigachad.
>Post chapter, includes first interaction with the twist villain
>First comment calls it with little to no context, just a hunch
>Other commenters disagree, explain reasons (mostly my red herrings)
>Gigachad commenter sees a few more clues and concludes it, doesn't cite them I guess as a favor to me
>Maybe commenter is just setting up the ultimate dunk on other commenters
I did eventually PM them and say they're a fucking legend.

Also do it faggot, you're not the first to guess it, but probably the first on that site.

>>58567335
Unironically, I didn't start posting it until I'd finished chapter 6 because that's the "big" chapter, so to speak.
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>>58567097
Dark hands wrote this.
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>>58567311
I started reading that random pokephilia story that anon from trash posted. Not really into pokephilia, but they write short chapters so I blew through half of what they had so far pretty quickly. Haven't even got to the poke'fucking yet, but the premise of a dude who knows nothing about pokemon getting isekai'd and just being incredibly nonchalant about the whole thing has been pretty funny.
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>>58567097
Fairies are the antithesis of the je—I mean dragon clans who run the pokeworld behind the scenes. Fairies had to go as they were an unacceptable affront to them, Arceus's chosen type.
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>>58567572
Link it to me.
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Waiting for a “Freiren in the Pokémon world” fic to pop up.
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>>58568595
Be the change you want to see. I'd be thrilled to read a crossover isekai featuring someone other than Tanya or Naruto. FFFag is an oasis in a desert of shit.
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any space travel fics?
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>>58568606
I’m doing my own thing right now, but a post-champion or post-villain team fic would be comfy AF.
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>>58567378
pofag, why is Chicken such a whore in your fic?
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>>58568700
Because she must learn that loyalty matters.
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>>58563349
Star-badge challenge; take on gym leader's *true* team.
another way to go about it is, lets say your OP 'mon are typical powerhouses, make em fight against a foe were mere strength alone doesnt cut it. for example, a weather-team, a stall-team, ect.
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>>58564026
>OH WELL!
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>>58569066
>50 year old good natured boomer voice
>AH, YA GOT ME!
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>>58569066
>oh no, a net, my fatal weakness! You cruel disgusting humans, you're probably going to viciously rape me now until I'm dripping with your seed! Me, the purifier of springs, will get defiled by your dirty human cocks! I'm going to be covered in your filthy, permeating scent for days! Ah, how unclean, how repuls—why are you letting me go.
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>>58568107
https://archiveofourown.org/works/62970124/chapters/161259118

Read a bit further and it seems like the battle side of things is going to double battle focused which is cool. Pretty much isekai newbie and failed singles league guy are going to team up while being dog fucker bros.
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>>58568610
Gonna have a space station later on in my fic but its not going to leave orbit.
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>>58566950
Honestly I love comments on older chapters. Even nothing level comments are cool cause even then they at least give me somewhat of an idea to what readers are paying attention too. Its like being a DM in d&d, you can make a lot of plans but you can't predict what will really stick out in the readers mind.
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>>58569405
Now I'm thinking about Pokesuba
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>>58569066
The anime’s ability to make legendary pokemon really lame is quite something
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>>58569979
Curious about how that would go…
>Isekai protag gets a Gardevoir that wants to fuck him
>He’s not a Pokephile so he constantly rejects it, opting on trying to get gym badges instead
>Gardevoir only tries to win battles so he’ll love her
>MC catches a Dratini, he’s really hyped for it
>It refuses to train, battle, or do anything other than eat and laze around
>Starter is a Cyndaquil that only will battle female trainers
>Catches a Legendary and is super hyped, but it turns out to be a Ditto
Thinking traveling companions… maybe a female former evil team grunt who actively wants to lose to make trainers and pay with sex… Other would be some canon gym leader who got relieved of duties for being lazy or something.
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>>58567097
How do you write a Fairy specialist that feels fitting for Fairy without it being lol so random xD le checkin' trickster fae no sense of right and wrong XDDDDDD (actually they're just a fucking cunt)?
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>>58570803
I've got plans to use Bede in my fic, and for him I'm wanting to exemplify it by him never being truthful with his words. He's always saying what he doesn't mean and concealing his real feelings, which I intend as an angle on the fey being known as tricky and dangerous with words, never to be trusted with them.
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>>58570803
>(actually they're just a fucking cunt)
Make the work acknowledge this trait and make the fey specialist a trickster/manipulative.
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>>58570437
Wait, are we thinking the same thing? I was thinking konasuba.
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>>58570803
You don’t, because they come off as annoying.
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>>58570803
I'm a big fan of Changeling the Lost from world of darkness so what a fairy can be is incredibly diverse. Two ideas jump to mind.

Big bad wolf, fairy tales sorta thing. The villain of the natural world who teaches a morale via destroying the foolish. A monster wearing the clothes of a man that preys on the innocent. Grimsnarl, mawhile, granbull. Plays on the wild nature of the fey in a less whimsical way.

Oberon, king of fairies, the goblin prince. The lord who stands at the top of the high courts of fantasies, the ultimate master of the confusing and archiac web of fairy law. A hyper formal mastermind that doesn't need power to ruin you as he knows exactly how to manipulate your destruction with the least amount of effort possible.
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>>58558471
Wasn't he a fly man hybrid?
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>>58558370
I concur
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>>58571147
Ninja Turtles has had a lot of reboots with different shows, so Baxter Stockman has been a few different things. He is definitely a fly man in a lot of them, but its the same sort of thing with 'crazy scientist becomes more monstrous'.
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>>58570803
The fairies in pokemon aren’t even all manipulative so just make them normal.



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