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Story recap!There was one story posted last thread.>>87255980 I Thought I Didn't Need YouTags: Amelia, Gura, Kiara, Ina, Mori, Jenma, Omega, Yagoo, A-chan, Gawr, SFW, Drama, Screenplay, Office, Political, Psychological, Real Life
>>87496382reposting this because i didnt realize we were moving
>>87496384>It's a magical liopleurodon, Anooon~
Live
I still want Shiori to bite me
>>87498020>Get bitten by Shiori while wrangling her autistic club. >Slowly find yourself turning into a Teen Goth>Try to resist the changes but...>A room in the back of the school is calling you...>Surely taking a peek won't hurt, right?
>>87484258I only jerk off to fanfics written by women (about a fourth of /wg/'s output)
>>87498351Shiori is definitely a biter. Other EN biters include Gura, Gigi and Mumei.Watch out!
>>87499179Which fics do you think are written by women?
life or death
Save me Goth girl
>>87496636Goth Fauna accidentally joins a legit theistic satanist cult
>>87503436Goth girl save me
>>87502053So Calli is just Fauna after eating from the fruit of Knowledge and losing the blessing of Life?
>>87509822God, how do you not realize how cringe you sound
>>87511864Sorry should I also include 12 different references to sex every paragraph to satisfy your dopamine-addled calcified smoothbrain?
>>87496636Ditching an AI with abandoned issues and forced to deal with the consequences https://youtu.be/q1RJdBvrEUA
>>87512348At least try not to sound like the worst part of every fanfiction fandom. You got a fursona too?
Would Mumei have switched to the Goths after Rome grew too corrupt and weak to fight them off
>>87514300I feel like Mumei would switch to whichever civilization had the most potential to be the dominant one when the one she was currently backing was too far gone.
>>87515353So she'd probably stay in China for most of Rome's existence
>>87515876NTA but are you saying that China had the Moomdate of Holo
>>87496636A fic in which during a powerful rainstorm, your childhood friend Fubuki goes into heat. You try repeatedly to call her a cab or something so she can go into ER but nothing's operating because of the rain. There Fubuki admits she wants you and you finger her to calm her down before plowing the shit out of her and shooting a load of fox puppies inside her womb.
>>87517986Isn't this just Petting your Fox?
>>87496605 (draft, don't put it anywhere just yet)>>87487674https://rentry.org/faunahypnosisdraftTear me to shreds (constructively) please. This is the first time I've attempted full-on smut and I'm sure it's full of issues. More specifically, I'm concerned about: - How I refer to Fauna, I rotate between 3 terms (Fauna, the kirin, the guardian of nature) but sometimes it just comes across weird - but using the same term all the time also comes across weird.- Male mc being too bland, he's a generic self insert type by design but maybe he's not assertive or dominant enough?- Using the term 'her Master' too often, it is how Fauna is perceiving the situation while hypnotized and (to me) it's hot but maybe the average viewer would get sick of seeing that term 26 times in 4k words.- My prose in general, especially the sex, I feel like I can be too sterile or matter-of-fact when describing actions and attempts to be more flavorful feel either flowery or odd.- Run, on, sentences, full, of, commas.- My choice of hypnosis flavor and the clarity of what's happening - I like the heavily fictionalized pendulums and eye spirals but I need to make sure I'm conveying the mechanics of the situation to an average reader.- The entire ending/remembering section, I waffled back and forth between the current version (unwillingly forced back into trance) and a version where she practically asks to be put back under after realizing how much she craves the guiltless thoughtless pleasure she just experienced.- Whether this is actually hot to people that can't see inside my imagination.
>>87521421Its hot, dont worry.
>>87516082God damn it, Inarlos!
>>87521421i think its mostly fine. my notes are>dont specify what's his specializationhis plaque reads like an acme gag. just put therapist/whatever and make fauna/him go something like "i heard you specialize in streamers" or yadda yadda. >length of the sex scenes.It feels like it goes way too fast,even if they are really hot. Try to add more flair like her stopping and jerking him off a bit, swalloing spit, him enjoying,etc. Perhaps that way you can define more the protagonist from the blank slate he is also this is personal preference but not enjoying flexible kirinussy with your tongue is sacrilege>the memories.Feel like you went too fast over it? This is also a personal taste thing but if its the first session she shouldnt be able to get her memories instantly or it should put more of a fight to resurface. if you want to make this longer or give a twist you can have Fauna piece together or extract a recorder as she's done for the first time, tell him she has proof and then he snaps his fingers and it turns out she was getting fucked for monthsAside from that, i think its great. dont feel afraid to throw out the kitchen sink and go "the green haired girl", "the pale girl" "the woman" and other similar stuff. As long as its well spaced, the reader doesnt mind.
>>87522367glad you enjoyed!>>87524450Thanks for the insight, the magazine ad was intentionally goofy as a cue that this guy isn't actually a therapist at all and was fishing for Fauna specifically, but clearly I didn't convey that properly. I'll trim it down. I will also lengthen the sex - although I don't think I have it in me to add an entirely new position/sequence to it.As for the memory stuff I think I was rushing a bit towards the end, you're right that it would hit harder with a time delay. I'd like to set this up as 'one chapter per promise member' (mumei next) so I'm hesitant to draw the timeline out too far. I'll see what I can do, maybe a scene change to her second/third/Xth visit, then her confronting him about some oddities leading into a modified version of what I have now.
>>87525477>one chapter per promise memberIs another anon attempting the legendary series concept of 'fetish smut series with a group/gen of chuubas'?
>>87527781Sorry AZKi, I don't know japanese, what are you saying????
>>87525477If the plaque is intentional you can always play that thing up. Make it so Fauna thinks this guy is a sham but she's too polite to ditch, then notices he talks a bit redundant but then gets convinced into hypnosis because eh hypnosis isnt real. She's a bit of a reddit atheist so she'd take that shot
Any advice on pacing a story? Been working on >>87261097 (mainly expanding on the pre-incest flashbacks and trying to stretch scenes out so far) but it still feels too fast
>>87531521internal monologues, describing the scene, adding some actions, adding some dialogue.
>>87531521My rule of thumb is that if you feel that you need to drag it out, drag it out. Then have someone else read it. If they don't say anything about it being too long or whatever, you made the right move.
What could Ame say while being raped that isnt "Fuck you" "Go Fuck yourself" or [insert insult involving your mother]?
>>87531521I would keep in mind that people are not static. They fidget, they do other things while talking, etc. So its important to describe what they are doing. Take time to show those actions. Mori crosses her legs mid sentence? Write that.
>>87537252>I've seen your face I'll remember you>I'm going straight to the cops after this>You're going to fucking die I promise
>>87539509Wow... Ill be using some of these, but damn its hard to take these threats seriously due to how squeaky her voice is.
>>87539907that just makes it cuter/hotter
>>87537252>"Better enjoy it while you still can, you bastard.">"Ugh, is that it? I'm barely feelin anything." >(after getting slapped for the last remark) "It's not my fault you have a tiny dick!">(after the deed is done) "If you're gonna kill me, word of advice: Don't fuck up."
>>87539907I think an agonized REEEEEE could work too if you get stuck at any point
>>87539907You can do it like what that one fanfic did where she kept making gremlin noises while being fucked six ways to Sunday
>>87540702Holoppai?
>>87537252>I CONSENT! I CONSENT! I CONSENT!>My hips are moving on their own!>HAAA - (Shut up by kissing with tongue)You know normal things girls say while they get raped.
>>87541647>N-No! My first was meant to be with Cuckita Netoraren, not you! Damn you, his bully who's also a pimp who's also a fat ojisan who's also a black foreigner who's also my landlord who's also my boss who's also my uncle! Damn you and your 13-inch bitch breaker of a cock!The usual things
>>87540918Ah yeah, that's the fic. She was getting gangbanged by the AV actors and they had to shut her up by stuffing her mouth full of cocks
>>87541979KEK
>>87545996built for hatefucking (i don't even hate her i just think it would be hot)
>>87546695i'm too in love with her for that unfortunately
>>87545996>>87546695Romance /Drama fic about Mori discovering that you don't feel the same hatefucking spark with her, because you're actually starting to fall in love with her.
>>87545996Built for ryona.
>>87549775Aunt Fubuki, you look so tired... why are you in your underwear, though?
>>87551460Uh uh uh, Aquarium!Fubuki is your older sister!
How can I make a girl writhing in pain erotic?
>>87551653Cheeks flushed, panting, and make note of her panties slowly getting wetter
>>87551653Does she like it?
>>87551532
>>87551954No.>>87551726
>>87553111Didnt mean to tag the other guy.
>>87511864How is that cringe?
>>87551460I'd be more like why are you STILL in yoyr underwear, here, let me help you take them off
>>87553111Is it consensual?
>>87556139No.
>>87556615I don't know how it could be erotic then, but >>87551726 sounds like he knows his stuff.
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Die, you worthless thread!
>>87559327Not yet! I still haven't released my magnum opus where Anon has sex with Fubuki!
>>87558237>>87559327Alt!Azki be like
>>87559327Until Gura's Futanari Cumflation Adventure comes out I will never surrender!
>>87560153Holy shit! Truly groundbreaking!What's the next twist in this story? Fubuki shrinks down and fucks a bug? Fubuki gets raped by a nigger? Fubuki cucks Subaru? Fubuki cucks (You)? Fubuki fucks (You)? Fubuki shits in your mouth? Fubuki gets raped? Fubuki rapes you? Fubuki grooms you?The Fububilities are endless!
>>87545996ConsiderButter Rissa.
>>87559327I will quit /vt/ after I've made my chuuba fanfiction debut-graduation mega spectacle by telling me and my oshi-wife's love story (based on real events)
>>87563163I have one fic left in me that I want and have to write, and after that I'll just hang up the (writing) gloves.
>>87562705This just has me imagining the Butterbar skit from WKUK but with Nerissa at KFP
>>87549775Lewd fox, no manners! Showing her underwear and slouching like that, these animals have no shame.
>>87563211Made me imagine a dramatic scene where Anon hangs up his keyboard on the wall with tears in his eyes. Anon then returns to his desk. His stare alternates between the monitor and the mouse-only desk for half a minute... before he stands up to go to get his keyboard back.
>>87496636Burnt out writer Anon finds motivation again thanks to his muse Azki
>>87566992Iroha's outfit is really optimized towards exposing her body despite the many pieces of clothing.
Stooooop dying!
>>87496636groping Gigi's butt
>>87568819Doing it doggystyle with Gigi, but she's constantly slapping you with her tail
>>87568819That's a deliciously tight and firm hebebutt. Sorry cops, but I can't go to prison yet. Not when there are mouthwatering meals like this around me.
>>87571081based ephebophile
>>87571424This sly old foxy fox is a fox with attitude
>>87572015Kemonos walking free? Wearing suits and molesting our women? What has this country come to?!?
>>87572415Tell me about it, it's absolutely outrageous how smooth and stylish she is in luxury menswear!
>>87572971Grr, stupid sexy fox... why won't she molest ME????
>>87572415Now this is the kind of progressive change I'd be willing to fight for (online)
>>87573977Why is Fubuki making me try on suits?
>>87575197So you buy them and she can borrow them
>>87575197Because she wants to see if you look good in it.
>>87575197>>87575246I'm a big man and she's a small fox, they wouldn't fit her.
>>87574473I have a dream, of a world where men are molested and raped by women out in public, at the same rates as men harassing women. Of true gender equality...
