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>>88114562I'm still thinking about Queen Luna and how she might dominate you. She would probably be pretty demanding and keep up the power dynamic 24/7, but would be somewhat merciful to your most vulnerable parts.
>>88114640You're the judge for the Hololive kissing competition
>>88115295Which chuuba would most likely try to bribe you?
>>88115901Choco?>"Maybe, I could try...kissing you somewhere else~?">That'd be grounds for disqualification>"Oh...okay."
>>88115295This, but they kiss a mannequin and you're standing by with a clipboard, taking notes in the most objective manner.
>>88115901Who fits the mold of being a hopelessly bad kisser but still has a strong competitive streak and hates to lose?
>>88116311Suisei or Marine. Suisei on the competitive end, and Marine on the stubborn end
>>88116200I'm thinking some chuubas would try to bribe you with money or other things. Pretty much doing whatever they can to get out of actually having to kiss or knowing their inexperience will prevent them from winning.
>>88116300This has turned into a mandatory company CPR course!>Korone decides that experience is the best teacher>Shoves Watame into a pool and she starts to drown.
Whats up with digging too deep into Amelia Watson?
>>88117171The meme answer is that you'll find out a lot of stuff about her roommate, her shenanigans, her bfs, etc, and despite everything, you'll see that she still ticks all your boxes. She isn't perfect, and yet she feels perfect for you, like the ring you'll never put on her finger.The REAL answer is that she is the head of an interdimensional drug ring, and she sells people their own misery in order to fund he projects. Big goverment doesn't want you to know, but it was HER. WATSON INTRODUCED HUMAN CUM IN KEMONO NEIGHBORHOOD
>>88116864That's when you TEASE THEM HARDER and make them all blushy...Fuck why is the idea of inexperienced hags so hot...
>>88117815>why is the idea of inexperienced hags so hot...Because it satisfies your madonna-whore complex.
>>88117815A judge is meant to be impartial. It is not your job to coax performance out of the participants. If you were her coach however, that's when teasing might be a suitable method.
>>88117942Nah I think I just want hags.
>>88114640(You) and Miko are Spirit Hunters who get forced together to solve Yokai problems (and slowly fall in love)
>>88117673>WATSON INTRODUCED HUMAN CUM IN KEMONO NEIGHBORHOODWhere did she get the cum from?
>>88119328What skills would Miko bring as a spirit hunter? Exorcism charms and the like? She also seems like she would piss her pants pretty easily.
>>88119704Haha, she totally would. Imagine she holds it in and then she gets so spooked she pisses herself haha.
>>88120504
>>88119704Miko sets up some basic trap with her occult knowledge, but loses her nerve the second and actual spirit shows up. While she distracts it with her terrified screaming, you find some novel, pedestrian, mundane way to seal the spirit and defeat it.
>>88116864>Pekora walks in smug as fuck thinking you're guaranteed to accept her offer of fifty thousand yen and a bottle of her plum wine to rate her highly>Leaves and silently exits the office to go home because she's so fucking embarrassed that her first kiss went that badly>>88116311That sounds like Bijou
>>88119704Yeah, Shrine Maiden stuff, purifying, cleansing, and other Shinto rituals. Maybe that could be her role, (You) don't have pure divine blessing like she does, so you need her to finish the job. but she needs you to be her vanguard.Maybe make that the dynamic, (You) are Offense, shes Defense. She could even give you buffs and the like. Miko is soft and gentle, better for the stray sprite, but you are more suited for the rough and tumble yokai.
>>88121082>The losers all gather at the nearby bar to contemplate their failures>Koyori's specially contacted toothpaste ended up making her lips and tongue spicy to the touch, she took what she read online about spice being a good thing too literally>Iroha thought for sure that making the judge wear a paper bag with Suisei's face colored onto to it would work, but she immediately lost control of herself and groped ass, which resulted in an immediate disqualification>Nerissa went in with such a clumsy tongue that it ended up going up the judge's nose>Chloe's felt like getting drenched in a bucket of spit>Bijou's lips were not filed down, so she cut the judge's lipsAll of this would have been easier to accept, if not for who ended up taking the crown.
>>88122731Luna would absolutely NOT win. Do you know how many cavities she has? Gross!
>>88123030She's got a real dental plan now, it's fine. Someone like Towa or Botan sure as fuck wouldn't win though.>Towa literally just came in after dragging a cig>Botan has god knows who stuck in her teeth still. It also tastes like pure sodium.
>>88124280TOWA DON'TA SMOKANot that that'd be detractor for me anyway, I smoke too and ripping darts with Towa sounds like a bonus
>>88124963Ashmouth is kinda played up a lot. In reality it ain't all that noticeable unless you're just locking lips as she holds a puff in her mouth. Now for more losers. >Lamy stands there waiting for the judge to kiss her, also she showed up drunk. >Korone, you can imagine how that one ended>Fuwawa, disqualifies herself by trying to take the judge's place when it's Mococo's turn, then tries to backseat her kissing
>>88124280>>88124963>Towa comes in nervous and embarrassed>she fidgets in place lost in thought for a moment too long>clear your throat to get her attention>Towa gets startled and jumps forward>mashes her lips into yours and starts tonguefucking your throat>when she finally pulls back you're gasping and out of breath>she stammers an apology and runs out
>>88126392That makes me think of what other chuubas would dive their tongues down your throat for their entry. >Shiroi's tongue slithers down your throat like a snake, she even tries to trigger your gag reflex for fun.>She is not sorry>Says you should get tested for mono
>>88128699Mori's kiss would initially be great, but she'd get self-conscious that it's too tame and jam her tongue into your mouth
Your oshi would not stick her tongue down your throat
>>88130038that's why we're writing fanfiction about it
>>88130508You should still try to be accurate.
>>88131188I think several chuubas would tongue wrestle you if given the chance.
>>88131301Oh yeah wise guy? Name 5 and gimme a reason.
>>88129922>implying that wouldn't also be hotngmi
>>88131976Ok>Koyori - is no doubt on the friskier side when it comes to intimacy >Shiori - would probably like how it feels but more so how it makes her feel in control and that it makes you squirm a little >Risu - squirrel is crazy for nuts >Marine - Once you get her going and comfortable, she's probably all in on that>Nene - thinks it's fun, and she's right
>>88124963Kissing a smoker hag was the worst, her tongue felt like some sort of dried up, raspy chunk of nothing. It had no taste, it was like I was licking sandpaper.
what if this kissing contest was some shonen brainrot shit like>"What the hell?Where's Zeta?">Reaction shot of other girls, DUN DUN DUUUN music>Zeta is standing right behind you>"N-Nani?!">"Secret tongue Art: Thousand kisses">Anon gets launched of the stage and lands in a crater. He's covered in lipstick marks>"M-Masaka....that speed"
>>88133348>KoyoriAgreed.>ShioriEhhh, I'll give you half credit. I agree with the first half, but I don't think Shiori is as dominant as people seem to think she is.>RisuNon-answer. Not saying it's wrong but that's not a good explanation. >MarineSaved yourself with that explanation. If you had implied she do it off the rip you'd be wrong>NeneAgreed.Alright, I guess you pass but don't let me catch you slacking.
>>88135875Thanks boss. I'm about to go on my sleep break before getting back to work.
>>88131976Roboco is an actual menace. She gropes all of the Holomem and kisses anyone who asks. She'd probably accept...if you were a cute girl. Tough sell for a guy tho. Ollie might be willing, but she's not the type to kiss you if you just ask. You gotta make her simp for you first.
>>88136143Kissing does not always equate to real frenching. Some girls don't even enjoy it, and will only tolerate it for a few seconds.
>>88135875Shiori isnt a balls stomping goth for sure but she does enjoy that limit pushing thing as long as the person is okay with it.Like i can imagine her going>"Oh you liked that? How about this?"As she escalates slowly until you tap out, in which case she pats your head and giggles. She's very sweet.... I guess thats technically soft femdom?
>>88135761>Open up it's time for kissing>Time for my mandatory kiss check. Let's get this over with. >You're late you know the deal. You can do a normal kiss for the raw chicken or you can do a French kiss for the raw beef>Here in kissing civilization no one chooses to kiss for the beef. It's better to be safe and do the normal kiss for the chicken rather than risk your entire life for half a hunger bar more.
>>88138804>Tomorrow, you'd better not be late. Or you'll be doing two-peck smooches as punishment>Yes Ma'am, sorry, I won't be late next time>Down here, us kissing noobs only get fed once a day. One piece of raw chicken is just enough to get you to the next day. But that's the life of kissing civilization>If you wanna survive, you have to kiss. Every kissing noob has the same goal - and that's to make it to the top layer where all the kissing pros live. Except most kissing pros are born on the top layer>If you're a kissing noob, there's only one way up - and that is through the temple of kissing
>>88139621I feel like the judge would have disqualified her for wasting their time if she actually started doing this speech
>>88141873Most of the narration in the parkour civilization video is the MC's internal thoughts
A proper kissing competition needs a second freeform round where they can choose to kiss any spot on your body.
>>88143210Nice try Liz, but you can't win this competition with a rimjob!
>>88144203I want to kiss her bloodflame
>>88144545That's the hypnosis talking. You shouldn't stare at it so intently
>>88146031>Staring into the flame that makes you specieist
>>88146707I-I can't give up kemo pussy! I WILL NOT give up kemo pussy!
Zzzzz....
Dead
Today's the day. I'll do it, I'll write a whole 100 words
>>88137357To me, she's a bit too much of a people-pleaser to really be pushy like that. The way I see it going is:>Shiori sticks her tongue into your mouth but almost immediately takes it out and pulls away>"Oh gosh, sorry I didn't mean to! I was just curious you know, a bit of the heat of the moment!">"Oh you.. like it? You think I'm a good kisser? Oh stop you're just saying that!">"...Really? Then pucker up big boy because- because I'm going back in!"Then maybe she frenches you.
Which cuubas would give you the most innocent, chaste kiss possible?
>>88153298>SuiseiDoesn't understand the fuzz, thinks it's just pressing your lips together.>Subaru>IrohaGets nervous just from looking you in the eye, puckers but constantly chickens out, her brain short-circuits when it happens>Bae(You) will be her first kiss>KaelaJust like Suisei, but she wants to do it. She's methodical and tries to look at tutorials first.
>>88153298Lore-based>Luna>La+>Pekora
Survive
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A3HtYaf9Gt8
>>88114640A story about a muder that takes place in brooklyn and two cops are hot on the killer's tail.This is completely unrelated to you, however, who is having sex with Fubuki in your apartment.
>>88157383It's not your business, until it's your business! >The police interrupt your love making for questioning, the murderer is thought to be living in your apartment complex>The only resident you haven't met personally is whoever lives in 6B. You've never actually seen anyone come or go from that apartment before. >Over the next few days Fubuki is strangely jittery>You chalk it up to her being nervous that a murderer is on the loose, so you do a little investigating on your own>You come across a key in Fubuki's things you don't recognize>Will curiosity kill the Anon?
>>88114640Aqua's first day free from the merch signing mines.
>>88114640You and Iroha are part of a warrior tribe where the sword is sacred to each. Only second-rate, loose Samurai would let anyone unsheathe their blade!Naturally, Iroha, your best friend and sparring partner since childhood, is really nervous about it. One night, she comes into your chambers asking to spar, but you know what she wants to do. Hugging her from the back, you flick your thumb on her katana's handle to tease her, and then slowly draw her blade for the first time, causing her to pant and squirm. Her hand lands on yours to reassure her that this is what she wants.Afterwards, you two marry, keeping the pre-marital unsheathing a secret.One day, the village is attacked by Candy Kingdom, whose superior weapons completely destroy your village. Captured as prisioners, the Pink Empress herself takes her time toying with you two, unsheathing and resheathing your sword multiple times but never quite drawing it, right in front of her. Freeing herself with an adrenaline shot, Iroha draws her blade, ready to decapitate Luna, who smashes Iroha's feeble blade with a Pink Zweihander. Finally, she draws your blade, bringing dishonor on your family name, and ruining your martial relationship with your wife by becoming addicted to sparring with Luna.
>>88158717Did Chatgpt write this?
>>88159038I just wanted to make a funny prompt
>>88159179>Fantasy prompt, swords, culture, fighting>Aw yeah, and we got conquerors coming in>Wait a tick....this is just a thickly veiled cucking prompt! You're tryin' to cheat me again.
>>88159319Fuck you, it's funny!
>>88159453Well I ain't laughing. Anon and Iroha were married you fucking sicko.
>>88114640A JJBA parody where chuubas have stands based on their mascots.
>>88114640Everyday, you climb flight upon flight of stone steps to an isolated shrine. To pray for good luck and success in your college entrance exam. However, you keep getting the stink eye from the sole Shrine Maiden who thinks your creeping on her. Can you clear up the misunderstanding while keeping up with your studies?
>>88163294I'm not sure the situation offers itself to interfere with your studies in any way. Miko is just pissed off that you are putting your disgusting man feet near her shrine. You might need to spin it so she is actually impeding your life somehow. >Miko purposely lathers the steps with grease when you arrive>Miko switched the signs that direct visitors to the shrine around>Miko invoked voodoo to fuck with your studying
>>88164376Honestly I wasn't 100% sure how to compactly convey "You and Miko get closer because reasons" since the reasons could be anything, I just gave a single potential. I don't think it has to be pranks (or at least not only pranks) it could be that Miko cant shoo you away because her Shrine doesn't really get visitors. Or maybe she's lonely and feels trapped between tradition and wanting to pursue her own dreams, so she's envious. Etc
>>88165544The lonely angle might be interesting for someone to play with. Even though she might hate your guts, you feel a little bad that she's basically stuck in this rinky dink shrine. You can convince a few classmates to come, maybe due to your grades spiking up and they want to know your secret. Bring a few chuubas of your choice.
Up
Miko as an actual shrine maiden is a weird thought because spirituality, purity and dignity are not things I would associate with her
>>88171257counterargument: the shintoism/buddhism ideal is searching them so its fine for Miko to be her current self if she's on pursuit of those things.maybe she's being kept as a shrine maiden precisely because she cant keep her vices in check
>>88171998>>88171257Or she tried hard to get into the position because she wanted to live with other women instead of being married off to some guy.
AAAAAAAAAAH I HAD THE SCENE IN MY HEAD WHY CANT I ALL OF A SUDDEN GET IT ONTO THR PAGE. WHERE DID IT GO???
>>88173742I stole it. It's mine now.
>>88173742Shiori archived it out of your mind
Had a dream where I was trapped in a dating sim, and was torn between childhood friend Kronii and little sister Shiori. I ended up choosing Shiori but it was framed almost like a bad end because we were in a super small northern town(I wanna say Iqaluit but there was definitely a snowstorm) so we weren't able to do much beyond making out in the basement in the middle of the night and even then there was constant anxiety over being found out.
>>88174581>bad endWell yeah, she's your sister. You shouldn't be doing those things with her.
>>88152515its an exaggeration of how she spits out odd and slightly uncomfortable facts and jokes and says something like "I know you like this, you wouldn't be watching me if you didn't like it" despite the vocal protest from chat
>>88114640Shiori doing this >>88176189 to Pekora
Live?
>>88171257Shrine maidens have a long and varied history. Per popular recounting, kabuki theatre was born when a shrine maiden decided strip-tease is the best way of collecting donations to her temple.
>>88179695Now that's something Miko would be great at, with how beautiful and charming she is.
>>88179695Miko strip tease...
>>88179695>we trained Miko wrong, as a joke
>>88136839But...Matsuri asked her for a kiss and she tongue fucked her mouth, by the way she described it. And yes, I hate girls who don't like kissing for long periods of time. Best feeling ever, kissing for a full hour straight and then your whole body feels incredibly warm for the next two hours.
>>88114640Ancient fox spirit Shirakami Fubuki finally agrees to marry you but only on the condition you honor her clan's traditions and first castrate yourself. No tube snipping or any of that halfassed shit - you have to lop the whole thing off, balls and all.
>>88182610I love you, Fubuki, but you can keep on trucking. I'll go and fuck the shit out of your friend Korone - she just wants my fingers.
>>88182610In my tradition, marriage is void without consummation.
>>88182522Quite a beautiful hat. Slim cone but with a sufficient brim, and looking like the night sky from below.That said, it's quite unbecoming for a princess to dress up as a witch.
I dont know about you guys but I definitely could beat my oshi is a kissing showdown.
>>88182888Mio wanted my heart, and she already stole it!This fetish of hers, fucking on top of pentagrams and knife stuff, is kinda weird tho.
>>88114640Botan on the casting couch. She didn't tell anyone she was in heat, and they bring pornstar after pornstar trying to satiate the lioness>Big dick white guy, bleeding from every pore>Black guy wants cries as Botan bites his balls>Fat oji-san needs a moment that Botan won't give him>The small cock cuck got dragged from his chair>Two 17 year old shota have their innocence taken (for real this time)>One Elderitch entity is calling for his intergalactic mommy
>>88194701this is why you can't have apex predators be the hot wife in these scenarios.
>>88191882It's a little weird, but god the nuts are fantastic.
So if you had the chance to act out a fic scene in the spirit of halloween, what would it be?
>>88202943Paradise Lost
>>88202943My lawyer has informed that it's best I don't reply to this post.
Hai dozo
>>88114640Halloween has unleashed a terrific curse! Now all of the Hololive girls have turned into anthros and are excited to limit test themselves both on their physical and sexual abilites.But they dont know. They dont know you are the great-great descendant of Jim John, the Hero of Tanuki Town. Armed with your wits, skills and a never ending arsenal of one liners, is your duty to survive this Biohazard and break the curse.Like great-great grandpapi said: Not a chance, homo
gimme an scenario for a holodungeon bad end
>>88202943Like act as if I was an actor in a movie? Maybe the confrontation with Mio in KintsugiLike act is "insert myself into"? The scene in HF where you have sex with Marine
>Found the handwritten notes I did for my review of Ninisani Scenario 1 while looking for scrap paper.A bit of a blast from the past. I should do that again for the sequel.
>>88212016My brother.I'm also in the habit of taking notes during my playthrough of games for my review. I like reviewing indie games with this, because a lot of the replies you see don't have a lot constructive criticism. You mostly just see "fun game!", which is nice, but probably not that helpful for the devs.
>>88208268I snuck into the dungeon first and put a glue trap for the girls to get stuck in
>>88208268Personality Excretion with added seedbed on top.
>>88210085Bro...you did it. You ARE Anon. You fucked Marine. You fucked all of them.
>>88114640Dooby sex
>>88217532>Beta-reading everyone's WIP's and telling them 'my character wouldn't do that'
>>88208268what if Gigi just fucking died, and then came back as this to drain you
>>88220546I like the idea of Luna being a demanding bratty pillow princess so you can still kinda manhandle her petite body a bit I don't like her being some BDSM dominatrix especially when she still doesn't have much stamina
>>88207840
>>88221087Yeah, she needs to grow up before becoming a dominatrix.
>>88226885IRyS is the best candidate for inexplicably waking up one morning 9 feet tall
Cum is stored in the brain, and Pebbles...I've got a headache.
>>88217904I want to yank on that tag sticking out on the bottom
>>88114640Dooby reassuring (You) that (You) can still pay for the ticket you supposedly "lost" the other way around
Dozo
>>88231167>>88114640Sex with Dooby's tag.
>>88208268Femanon stares too deeply into ERB's flame and gets radicalized into serving her.>Bad End: Soldier of Blood and Flame
>>88174581Ah, the best Dating Sim dynamic.Doomer Childhood Friend vs School Shooter Little Sis.
>>88208268Coco turning femanon into her servant using her magic dragon charisma
>>88221087I get her not fitting as a dominatrix specifically but I think she's perfect for hard femdom where she lays around acting entitled all day as you serve her whims and your balls are totally under her control
>>88233752I fucking hate these images so much.
>>88233752what would happen if i were to dry off the wet cat
>>88240640She would become too powerful
>>88239271I love pathetic whiny girls
>>88241757Love them enough to do something about it?
>>88227545Her Nephilim blood kicking in...
>>88221087I want her to tell me how I'll never give her a male heir at this rate as I'm treating her like a royal onahole.
>>88245250Why does she think so?
>>88237468She's so lazy that when you mess up you have to climb onto the bed and position your balls above her foot, just so she doesn't have to get up to kick them.
>>88114640Pampering a sick Mio sho still tries to do stuff around the house
>>88246500She doesn't, she just wants me to fuck her more (it's working)
dozo
>>88240640She'd become loyal forever
Tips on how to write scenes that are the in-between of more important scenes that you already wrote or know what will happen?
>>88254652If it's filler then just don't think too hard about it.
>>88114581Finished the Fauna Hypnosis chapter. The edits aren't too extensive (mostly just tweaks in line with the feedback I got from an anon here, a few extra lines in the sex stuff, an improved ending twist) but I'm ok with how it turned out. Mumei is up next.https://rentry.co/tamingnature
>>88114640>>88245250You WILL consummate your marriage with the Queen of the Candy KingdomYou WILL fulfill your duty as king and provide her with a son
>>88258052You don't have to tell me twice! Unfortunately for the Candy Kingdom, Anon can only produce daughters.
>>88114640You happen to win a year's worth of canned tuna. After a whole summer of eating canned tuna everyday your wife Aqua has a moment of realization: this tuna dinner is just like your marriage; monotonous, boring, lifeless. You notice Aqua's sour mood so you decide to surprise her by ordering pizza. This gives Aqua another realization. Yeah, why should she eat tuna everyday even if her kitchen was filled with cans of tuna... and why should she stay with you forever just because you're married? Aqua looks at you and says something but you can't tell what as all sound suddenly feels weirdly distant and your vision becomes blurry, everything starts melting... and then suddenly you're back at the beginning of summer. Yes, you're stuck in a timeloop and you must figure out that the reason why is that Aqua is going to divorce you, and then manage to create a timeline where you somehow avoid triggering intrusive thoughts in Aqua and make her want to stay with you. Otherwise you'll keep repeating the summer of 2024 until you turn insane.
>>88258356>spoiler
>>88258356>>88259567>After years of trying, the King and Queen produced a son, Anon II, the youngest of 13.>While most Kingdoms would opt to find a new suitor when such problems arise, the Queen never did. When questioned by the Royal Advisor as to why, the Queen enigmatically responded: "Sometimes, a sweet needs a dash of cinnamon.">Anon II's older siblings, all women, would later be married off in a series of political marriages, further establishing the Candy Kingdom's soft power.>Historians would later credit the various fruits of the royal couple's dedication to the beginning of the Empire of Sweets.
>>88261467>"Sometimes, a sweet needs a dash of cinnamon."Is he gay I don't know what that means
>>88264459I feel like you're a faggot and a connoisseur of the flavours and aromas of unwashed penis.
>>88265050You're confusing him with me.
>>88262819t. the Royal Advisor
>>88262819It means that the royal couple has good sex.
>>88266378>>88266647Oh fuck I'm retarded for some reason I read the second line as being about not finding the son a suitor, not Luna finding a new man
>>88266775You're lucky Luna didn't fire you as Royal Advisor yet.
>>88239271I don't even know where they come from.
>>88255041I really liked the sexy build up in this.
>>88258871You know I like this prompt but I have to ask, why Aqua specifically?
>>88254652Skippa Skippa then wait for your beta readers to say if they feel like something is off about the pacing/order of events.At that point you have to write it. Though you do have options like writing it from another pov or getting creative with how the scene is presented if the problem was in writing the scene in the first place.
>>88254652If it's like a boring traveling scene or just waiting for time to pass you can always just write some of the characters having a conversation while occasionally describing the "action" in between. Or skip it if you can.
>>88227545>>88244245Manhandling 9 foot tall pillow princess irys.....
>>88273150>>88114640A 20tf tall IRyS and you, a 5ft tall man built like Kratos, use whips and chains to climb on your girl and bring her down so you can give her the dicking she so well deservess. This is TOTALLY NOT a thinly veiled giantess prompt.
>>88274791If you're gonna go that far might as well fully commit and make her a giant.
>>88275277>Fee Fi Fo Fum, I smell the cum of an Anon.
>>88274791>IRyS! YOUR BOYFRIEND HAS RETURNED!>I BRING, THE BREEDING OF A NEPHILIM!
>>88274791Giant paddle set to a lever to spank her ass when she's being bratty...
>>88261467>Love each other and fuck so much your descendents make the Hundred Years War look like childplay
I want to be as cool as this Fubuki....
>>88283477why strive to be as cool as that fubuki, when you can strive to be a cool version of yourself
>>88227545>>88274791I rather like to think that she doesn't fully comprehend her strengthlike genuinely not realizing that her thighs may as well be an inescapable deathtrap
>>88261467I was going to complain about the cinnamon on sweet comment but it is so enigmatic that I can't tell if you're retarded or I am
>>88279069>Anon swinging a comically oversized paddle to spank her as she crouches so he can reach
>>88287752>IRyS is still used to being smaller than you so she'll occasionally just try and grab onto you, not realizing she can break your arm in her grip like a twig
>>88293375>5'10"Anon...
>>88293486Sorry, hate to ruin anyone's suspension of disbelief
Bae is made for analand for deniying mating press
>>88293375Giant people are scary. If you don't write it in a comical way, the first time you have sex with her you'll be crushed to death by accident.
>Finally the thread starts discussing giantesses >Chieri's love is 8 meters ends in 5 chapterslaw of equivalent exchange is bullshit
>>88114640your oshi has a growth spurt overnight while you're sleeping with her, so you wake up warmly snuggled in between her boobs
>>88293375>Normal IRyS is taller than meIt's beyond unfathomably over
>>88296937Don't worry anon, that's her height with heels
>>88114744when you say, by 27th, does it mean end of day 27th?
>>88294375>you'll be crushed to death by accidentA small price to pay to go where no man hath dared go before
>>88297892Yes, to be even more specific, when it's no longer the 27th anywhere in the world. As long as you submit by 11:59:59 pm UTC-10 you will be fine.
>>88291328They put cinnamon in sweets sometimes though?
>>88298950Look, I don't get it. Is the cinnamon supposed to be the contrast to the sweet in that analogy? Because while spicy, cinammon is still sweet.
>>88299201That's the point, isn't it? He spices up her life but they also fit together.
>>88269683Aqua's graduation gave me the idea. You're basically trying to stop her graduating from your marriage lol.
>>88300640>Aqua divorces you>pain>meet and marry her sister like a month later>good enough
>>88300640Ah I see. I was gonna make the argument that Aqua doesn't strike me as either the domestic type or the "get bored of domesticity." That analogy in mind makes it more interesting.
>>88298110Might be a good idea to get a countdown going.
>>88114640Shiori spins counterclockwise
>>88305025>"Shiori... you're fucking retarded.">gets back to playing Halo
>>88303014It's just Aqua in a wig
>>88308380>>88114640A fic about being surrounded by sopping wet cats.
>>88114640Nerissa Watches
>>88312003The thread should really embrace more cuckeans.
>>88313402Watame making her husband breed with her hag friends is a power move, really
>>88315171>Yes, you'll fuck my husband, but you'll get fucked MY WAYThat fic rewired my brain chemistry
>>88296937hahaha hey lol
>>88114640Hime makes you lick her butt clean and then doesn't let you cum.
>>88316373well of course i cant cum, i dont know her tax policies
>>88315171>>88315249The small kingdom stint that was discussed worked really well for me since it hasthe rampant fetishism of "spreading the genes" more than the dynamic of the cucking.Like its something about Watame smirking to herself while she feeds her kids, knowing her husband is gonna impregnate another noble and throw another bastard into the world
>>88306234Your wife didn't marry you, and then marry you again for your smarts
Rape!
>>88320239sex with this stinking hag that calls me a faggot
>>88323276>Y-You will actually let me take a crap on your chest?
>>88316522Shut up and finish your book.
>>88114640A story in which Mio falls in love with you, the shining little comfort in her loveless marriage.You two engage in shenanigans for a couple of chapters and then the story never ends.
>>88297892>>88298110Oh god I still need to finish
>>88114640Just you, Suisei, and tiny doll puppet version of Suisei that Suisei insists is the one actually having sex with you, in bedhttps://x.com/mzkniku/status/1850292327920943238
>>88326678that's what I thought after Marine's second orgasm
>>88328726For her pleasure only
>>88329332>>88114640Red Riding Nene but wolfie is a normal shota and he gets raped.
I'll be damned, here comes your ghost againBut that's not unusualIt's just that the moon is fullAnd you decided to call
dozo!
>>88336333Kemo Mori in heat...
>>88320933>Ui pushing your face away in the middle of the brutal plapping because she "doesnt want to kiss you">Ui whispering in your ear that your worthless seed isnt going to do shit to to her (3 kids)she was built for hatefuck
>>88337629>ywn be bitten and scratched all over by a heated catgirl Mori while she forces herself on you>ywn comfort her afterwards because she feels disgusted about succumbing to her urge to mate but you still love her regardless
>>88338790Lovingly rubbing Ui's heavily pregnant stomach and silently smirking at her until she starts insulting you
>>88338790I don't know anon if I was doing a girl and she told me she didn't want to kiss me I'd cry.
>>88338790Ui is built for correction via heartbreak as I start dating Rurudo because Ui makes me feel like she doesn't actually like my company
>>88341145It's Ui, it wouldn't be a surprise.
>>88341185>>88114640A chuuba bullies a meek Anon because he's an easy target. She sees this as a form of bonding because of her personality but one day pushes it too far. Anon starts to cry, which prompts one of his friends to push the chuuba and tell her to fuck off. The next morning, the news dawn on the classroom. Anon killed himself, the chuuba develops an eating disorder, and becomes depressed for the rest of her life.
>>88341885if he has friends then why dont they push her away earliear? would he kill himself if his friends intervene?You cant even shitpost right, retard
>>88341992Oh hey, thanks for the reference. I'll need it when I write anon's suicide.
>>88341885Whoa whoa whoa. I just want Ui to realize that she should be honest with the person she loves (and maybe have a catfight with Rurudo), nothing about bullying or suicide.
>>88343111The second anon has the right idea - suicide is exactly the kind of bitter spice that would round out the flavour profile of this otherwise bland fluff.
>>88343857you have to be +18 to use this site, trenchcoat edgelord
>>88343857>bland fluff.Oh you're that guy. You know, never mind.
>>88344161You're a fag and you like sucking dicks.>>88344221I have literally no idea who you think I am, but I suggest you stop trying to profile anonymous people if you want to avoid embarrassing yourself.
>>88255041I liked the smut aspect but it would be nice if there was some plot twist that explains how the hypnosis sex is done for some complex, kind of understandable reason.
>>88343857okay lets say you add suicide. what is the story? because "girl learns suicide is bad" is just as bland as a story about having sex with her.oh did it change the trajectory of every single person present? well no, he didnt kill himself there.Why didnt his friends intervene? why did no one do anything? if he was chronically depressed and a girl annoying him pushed him over the edge then the blame isnt fully on her and thus the situation is greatly deflated because its not her fault.Unless she pushed him to the brink herself, in which case she would be aware of what she did and not feel remorse. So no story again.See you used a spice analogy implying a bland prompt could use some bitterness, but if all you add is bitterness and have no plan besides "well ITS BITTER!" its no different from the instagram chef who throws cheddar and spicy sauce to groundbeef.So not only are you a bad writer who relies on cheap shock value to look smart, you are also a lousy cook
>>88344747I guess there are two ways I could attempt that - a meme twist like 'marine originally gave the MC the pendulum because she wanted to see her cute EN kouhai(s) get hypnotized' or an actually functional plot with grounded motives for the MC. I don't think I can pull off the latter since this is pretty much just an indulgent fetish fic and will remain one going forward.
>>88255041>>88345858hey this is a bit better. Remember to give it a title (i guess taming nature?) and put some tags so it can be archived.Also you dont need to invent powder or anything revolutionary. MC's motive can be as simple as "i wanna cum inside hot girls" and the way he does that is by exploiting psychological problems with pinpoint accuracy (in this case, Fauna is frustrated and trust easily so he tore her defenses and then hypnotised her).Personally i think it could be cool if there were more ways of hypnotizing that responded to different types of personality (like if someone gets agressive the key is to make them so furious they start seeing red and then hypnotize them with rythmic sounds or whatever).Still its a suggestion and it works perfectly as it does.
>>88345858The MC's boss tasked him with controlling these powerful women because they're necessary for some important mission to save the planet but the MC is having a bit of fun with them first
>>88344927I'll get back to you on this, but basically you're operating under the assumption that the story would remain completely unchanged from two posts AND seem to be assuming that the presentation or execution of otherwise mundane ideas does not matter infinitely more than any modicum of narrative complexity. You'l have to content yourself with sucking your boyfriend's dick for now - I have work to do.
>>88346353>you're operating under the assumption that the story would remain completely unchanged from two postsyeah because you are not gonna write shit, you never do.All you do is bitch and moan about people writing stuff you dont like and go hyper aggro at the slightest provocation like a good third worlder
>>88298110>>8811474411 hours left for anyone submitting an entry to the contest!
>>88346765Nothing to contribute, sorry. I tried coming up with something over the last few days, but there's no scenario that I feel like writing down after I've already gone through it in my head and enjoyed it that way. It's all just smut without much substance.
>>88346765Gura's Futanari Cumflation Adventures will take the gold, but next contest.
>>88346468>Someone, somewhere is writing something I don't like. The fucking audacity. Like bro, just close your eyes lmao. I'll never understand the anger towards people writing what they want to. You don't even have to read it if you don't think you'll like it. The best part is though, we all have the power to put the story we want to see in the world in it. It's really that shrimple.
>>88346957was that a real fic that was deleted or why does it keep being name dropped?
>>88347056>He didnt read Gura's Futanari Cumflation Adventures before it was taken down to be remasteredYou missed out.
>>88347056It was certainly a fic. It was written in a maximalist style that used words you'd literally never know the existence of otherwise, and you constantly had to have the fic in one tab and a dictionary on the other. The protagonist was a chumbud who was so obsessed with Gura he quite literally believed he was Gura, and after a bunch of cosmetic surgery, he slapped a dildo on top of his micro dick to imitate a sharks and went on an adventure to meet the rest of hololive. His first stop was with Bae and IRyS, whom he tries to rape only for him to embarass himself, pass out, and for IRyS to decide she and Bae should tag-team him, while believing he is the real Gura.IRyS has a tiny horse cock and Bae has a black nine incher, quite literally, a BBC which the attributes to chaos. Out of nowhere, the fic cuts to Fubuki unboxing pokemon cards, and then, as she flips her rare, she gets a shiny one of Guranon laying in a puddle of his own piss and cum from the aforementioned girls. I didn't finish reading the smut scene before it got taken down. It was thoroughly disgusting but I really want to see the Anon come back.
>>88343857Gonna have to echo what >>88344927 said, throwing in dark shit just for the sake of making your story dark is the opposite extreme of mindless glurge
>>88346124You're anticipating me. I was planning on slightly different methods for each promise member, and the most recently hypnotized girl assisting in capturing the next one each time. So ch2 (Calming Civilization) will feature Fauna helping to subdue Mumei with some ASMR type stuff, using plants as restraints, etc. ch3 (Training Time) would feature Mumei assisting with Kronii (Mumei might be the threatening/gaslighting type), and so forth.
>>88348584That's cool. Go for it, hypnorape megaman
>>88347056It's a thread joke at this point. It was never a real fic, or if it was a wip someone was working on it's nothing more than a funny title at this point.
>>88349824This anon is trying to hide greatness from you
What would be your oshi's role in a BDSM civilization?
>>88350730What exactly is a BDSM civilization?
>>88351121A world in which everything is determined through BDSM.
>>88350730She would make men quake as their balls rest upon her blade, one simple movement away from infertility. It's all consensual, of course.
>>88350730Pet
>>88351225I'm not sure you really understand what BDSM is about. If you want changes that will influence society and culture to be decided by some sort of physical act, why not make it wrestling? Like full on luchadore, kayfabe, story arc, wrasslin.
>>88351816>YOU DON'T GET IT LUNA, I DON'T LOVE YOU OR FUBUKI, I'M IN LOVE WITH YABS
>>88350730She would be a professional whipper and whippee
>>88351869>Is that? OH MY GOD. IT'S FUWAWA! >After losing the rage in the cage that would decide the new chairman of the entertainment sector, everyone thought she was gone, but now she's back WITH THE STEEL CHAIR>"The wuffians wanted me to deliver a message, one you won't be waking up from. Bau bau!"
>>88114640You work as a barman at a nightclub, where your girlfriend and love of your life, Mio, work as a stripper. Both have been through some shit and you two just compliment each other so well.You're young and you're in love, what else do you need?One night, one of the patrons, gets a little too drunk and too excited on Mio. You throw a glass at him and a fight breaks out, leading to you getting shot and killed.It's not NTR, just a tragedy.
>>88350730power-bottom
>>88352168Would the ball gag improve or ruin sex with Mori? I can't decide.
IF you are using a song as your muse for your fic, i DEMAND you drop ithttps://youtu.be/tZHcVMqXGhQ
>>88353423Boy do I got muses that light the fuses. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3fzA-WgzUgc for my current writing vibe. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMyHJhe2ggM and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EVKXpj4Kvs8 among others, have been coming up whenever I outline the next stuff.
>>88353355Ruin because her voice is a big part of the appeal
>>88346765It's not going to make it in time for the contest. It's literally Bijouver.
>>88354794You can do it Anon, just call in sick to work tomorrow.
>>88354218people shitpost the "big ups!" but that always makes my day.She has a cute way of speaking when she's genuinely excited
>>88355420Man, if only one sick day will help me >finish this second draft revision>make it marginally passable for my beta readers to read>implement their revisions>put it outThis thing is getting delayed.
>>88359677>AzukiThat better have in-universe justification for being spelt wrong.
>>88360866There is, don't worry.Azuki's her name in "irl" while AZKi was her diva persona
>>88361212Ah, the Clark Kent method of disguise.
>>88353423https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kF2ldr5kZJE
>>88114640halloween is upon us! sadly instead of being in a party you are saddled with working the store at the night shift...at least your pal gigi is with you. Oddly enough, she doesnt seem keen on working during this spooky dayA fic where you are made aware of Gigi's womanly charms due to her being scared and needy during a spooky night
>>88364808I really think there's a lot of potential in fics starring the girls who are super weak to horror. Gigi, Kiara, Bae, Lui, probably a bunch of others I can't remember. Scared girls are cute.
>>88365011Well you can go with a "party turns into shlock horror" scenario or a more creative idea where the girls are scared shitless of the haunted house and you help them overcome it only for the group to fall into super hell in the witching hour and now you have 3 girls going "woaaah this is so fake!" while you freak out and try to prevent them from diying.Also, apologies for my rampant piss fetish, but it is imperative at least one of them sprays piss all over the floor in terror, or they pee themselves or pee on yourself or just pee.Apologies for my outburst gentleman, but i just love girl pee
>>88365224Monsters Inc but instead of collecting children's screams you're collecting chuuba piss
>>88365498hard to collect it when its all over me
>>88365809It's not healthy to have two freaky fetishes at once. Pick one, weirdo.
>>88366026i proposed Kronii's hairy muff peeing on a litterbox to this thread.my freaky fetishes are both my chains and my strenght
>>88114581>>88114744The Last Septemberhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTbrvgQPUPP-XqlDC2bzYEHwtLvEY1_F7pX-vTlifIN8qJfFfNkcXN6NwcKHyH0QIoQ5onTS9eIksZs/pubTags: Kson, Kiryu Coco, Mori Calliope, Drama, Regret, Real Life, Suicidal Thoughts, Short Story, SFW, Fall20244262 words so I think that falls under Short/SFW?
>>88114581>>88114744A horror story for the digital age.The Midnight Sea (20 pages, 8420 words)https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQahKOROXU8gBOAdmz4RmK3l8dPfYYXxJfuCntOqJDVKN2z6PZ8BhizqjeOdSfy4KG8Yt0L5cQIzBnc/pubTags: Houshou Marine, Fluff, Existential, Horror, Fall2024, Long, SFW, Humor
>>88365011>>88365224>party turns into shock horrorChuubas in a generic slasher film setup sound like it would be fun. >You and a group of chuubas get invited to go camping at Murder Valley>Weird name but hey its been a while since you've all hung out together>Get to the camp>Everyone is starting to act weirdly lewd and horny>Start to get into it but->You start noticing how everyone is getting "Cabin in the Woods'd" into being horror movie protagonist archetypes>Try to warn everyone but be too late to stop the monster from waking up. >Now you have to wake up your friends from playing out their roles and stop them from getting killed. Bonus points if you have the cast be graduated chuubas so there's some ambiguity about who is going to get killed.
>>88366519>Bonus points if you have the cast be graduated chuubas so there's some ambiguity about who is going to get killed.Not if you include Sana!
>>88364808cuz she's a weregrem!
Waiter! Waiter! Another /wg/ bread please!
>>88366519I mean no need to include graduated chuubas. If its shlock horror with a tinge of dark comedy you can mulch some girls, hell people will love if you get creative and funny with the kills and the gore>Is everyone okay? Any arrow wounds?>Marine has an arrow sticking out of her eyeball>AH FUCK!>"aww man, these glass eyes cost a lot">....>"Huh? Didnt you know? I have a fake eye">...>"You seriously expected me to fuck up my depth perception for kayfabe?!">....>"Okay you got me, i did fuck up my depth perception for kayfabe "
>>88366596I mean thinking of this in the framework of that movie's ritual archetypes (and fuckups by the ritual controllers) >Blonde>Big tits>>Fuck it slot her into the Whore slotBut...>Not actually a dumb blonde>Not actually whorishShe would fit in pretty well as the 'one that clues you into the mystery' due to her getting manipulated into acting as that.
>>88367357I meant the black person gets killed first trope dude come on
>>88367442>killer sneaks up behind Sana with a big knife>stabs her in the back>knife blade shatters>somebody who can survive atmospheric re-entry in a leotard and a skirt is immune to knives, who knew
>>88367442>>88367590>the horror story cannot progress until Sana is deadNow THAT would be a funny fic
>>88366267>>88366449Added!>4262 words so I think that falls under Short/SFW? YesReminder that there's still 5 hours left for any entries!
>>88367641Baked. Migrate when ready.
>>88367442I mean in fairness that tropes has two 'incarnations'>Kill off the token minority>Kill off the traditionally strong/powerful presenceI can kind of see this working in that 'breaking templates' concept since Sana being targeted first would fit the first but breaks the second since she's a big cinnamon roll....Honestly if we're thinking of originality it would probably be better to pick another horror archetype castlist rather than standard slasher cast since that's already conceptually taken by that movie.
