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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy.
You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>89725898
(Where we discussed Ina's bush, the consequences of feeding Gigi after midnight and casual sex with Area 15)

/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true
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Story recap!
There were zero stories posted last thread.
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Azkisama, we did not survive.
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>>89817636
>>89815757
I like to shave Ina as a power move.
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What's your favorite scene, line, or concept that uses Fauna?
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>>89821677
>"Hmmmm? I guess you really need me after all. You're so hopeless Anon..... it's cute....."
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>>89822765
This isn't an answer to the question, but I love how pushed up and round her boobs look in that image
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>>89823514
>subtly yandere Azki grooming and gaslighting you to be dependent on her
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>>89822765
>"What do you mean I can't say nigger? He's a fucking nigger isn't he?"
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>>89824645
What do you think works better, AZKi as your senior coworker, subtly sabotaging your projects so you'll go to her for help, AZKi as your friendly neighbor, always willing to lend a hand when your water pipes break or your fuse box burns out (strange she never has those issues at her place?)
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>>89827353
I think the former as there's more of an established relationship there. Her being your senior (and or mentor) probably means you put your trust in her to do the right things and puts her in a place of power over you.
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>>89827353
Coworker but later starts sabotaging your place so you'll have to spend the night at her apartment.
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>>89812661
i really like the thought of her shyly confessing by saying
"I want you so bad"
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I have just written the best fanfic to ever graze this world
I will not release it though.
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>>89832085
Well that's always your choice bro. The main point is that you wrote for your own enjoyment and eyes. You also gave your characters the story they deserve. Nice work.
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>>89832085
Sorry chump, you'll never measure up to the likes of Paradise Lost.
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Accidentally pressed "post" instead of save draft for my part 3 of LyrCus series. It isn't finished yet, but it's close. Feel free to read if you want to:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/59736928

Parts 1 and 2 if you haven't read them:
Part 1: https://archiveofourown.org/collections/LyrCus/works/59586490
Part 2: https://archiveofourown.org/collections/LyrCus/works/59646172
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>>89833613
Don't use the name field. We're anonymous here, and everyone can tell you're the author when you post new parts.
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>>89835055
sorry about that.
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>>89822765
I always liked the idea of "Forest Witch" Fauna. Something on the borderline between Eldrich and Supernatural. It's a shame that Fauna doesn't really lean into the "mommy" aspect or is possessive of her chat because I also really like the idea of a resentful/regressive Fauna wanting Man to Return to Nature.
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>>89836193
I don't think the mommy or overly possessive aspect is a required trait to fill that type of role. Fauna has a lot of confidence in her own ways, and she will stick to her guns regardless of the opposition. She can also get salty when things or people don't go her way. I think she easily fit a forest witch or return to zero kind of supernatural being.
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>>89836193
Eldritch, possessive dommy mommy Fauna with a slight hint of malevolence for (You) is peak. Not quite seeing you as a peer and disregarding your opinions (as your clear superior) but still being somewhat caring in a (I know what's best for you) kind of way.
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>>89836193
>>89836929
>>89837044
>Fauna making (you) forcibly return to monke
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>>89837188
Turn me into Goku, Fauna. I've been ready for this all my life.
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>>89837188
>>89837044
I feel like she fits more like one of those villains you know its evil, but she's smart enough to cover her tracks and not to step too out of lane in order to get herself caught.
Like a Lex Luthor with tits
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>>89838387
It's all adding up. Next thing you're gonna tell me is the big tip off to Anon that Fauna might not be exactly on the right side of ethics is when she leaves the bathroom without washing her hands.
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>>89839024
>"That's the Council's rule... not mine."
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>>89838387
>>89839024
she's evil because she's bald
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>>89839206
Damnit I wish I had that screencap of the Watame comment that's like "Fauna's a...skinhead!!"
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>>89839206
pubes
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>>89840391
I like this artist but he draws every woman with the exact same body type. It works for Mio who he draws the most but when he draws Subaru like that it just doesn't look right to me
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>>89840508
yeah i know what you mean, altoughhe's getting better and he draws pubes/tan alts so im contractually obligated to defend him
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>>89840684
I kinda miss the pieces with actual sex going on in them. The after act shots are nice, but I want to see the full picture. He has a real knack for depicting intimacy.
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>>89840684
Fair enough, I won't fight you on that

>>89840835
This is true
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>>89841127
Who's the top bushiest holos? Inquiring for purely scientific reasons, I assure you.
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>>89841473
hikkis=Hags>cakes>usual girls>cunnies>Girls who lasered it off/cant grow it.

My top 3 is
>Ina
>Mio (before the great destruction of the forest)
>Korosan
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>>89841473
me
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>>89840508
>>89840684
i really liked his Ina and Watame/Flare pieces precisely because they feel different
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>>89841473
Botan
Mio
Lui
any hag really.
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>>89836929
It's not a huge stretch I agree with you but it would make it more believable to me. Fauna doesn't really quite have the chutzpah needed for that role imo. She's too much of a dweeb and unlike say, Ina or Shiori, doesn't have the benefit of an Outer God explaining the change. And not to throw shade at her, but her keeping chat at arms length dampers it as well. If she was a little more troublesome, i'd go a long way. Like imagine if it was Lamy or Korone as Fauna, or Rushia
I think I good compromise is to play into that salty aspect and have her be made that Mankind broke the Game of Life and no longer under her domain. Like, imagine her whiney voice going.
>"Why is Mumei in charge of them when *I* made them?"

>>89837044
Pretty close. I wouldn't say malevolent though. In my mind, it would be more like a parent and their child. Would you listen to a toddler gurgle and babble at you? On that same note, the possessiveness would be akin to a mom being unwilling to cut the apron strings.
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>>89844244
>>89836929
Mildy unrelated but the fact that Fauna doesn't really fit the possessive mother nature vibe could also be used as foreshadowing if you wanted to include Nemu lore about how Fauna seized the position by way of feeding that thing golden apples.
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>>89844244
I see where you're coming from, but if you want to incorporate the idea of the supernatural into some of these chuubas, some slight liberties will be taken to help them ease into the role a little more. Yes Fauna is a dweeb, but Fauna the keeper of nature would have a few key experiences or outlooks that you as the writer would mold into her that would allow her to be more possessive of what she feels is her domain, and how things should change to better suit her own vision. Using her relationship with saplings as a bar might also be a trap. Saplings are a strange and somewhat pitiable lot, so Fauna the chuuba keeping them at arm's length for her own sanity is the play she chose to make. She does have a fondness for animals though, which can actually play more well into the whole dynamic.
>While humans are part of nature, she likes to keep her distance from them because of how they abuse and take the earth for granted.
>Mumei's own interference along with the natural evolution of man, has also been a major sore spot for Fauna.
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Updated Deranged Kemono Fantasies after a while and i wont spoil the new entries tehepero.
Triying to make less mammals since i think reptilian girls have potential and i really want to make all the bird girls Harpy-like but without talons it doesnt feel right and my autism regarding following animal traits doesnt allow me to give them talons and a harpy without talons isnt one.

Being a monsterfuckr/kemono fucker is hard
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>>89846626
Cute.
Little tiger bijou feels like she'd be a viable AU version of her in a humans/kemonos only thing.
Bird flare makes me think she has feathers as sleeves rather than her base outfits white sleeves.
Since you've done birds and reptiles now what about a dinosaur?
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>>89847544
as an animal autist who asked for an animal encyclopedia as a gift for my 12th birthday.... i dont care about dinosaurs.
Like, i know all the greatest hits and they are decently cool in videogames but they dont spark thoughts
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>>89846626
>Moona's entry
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>>89848624
my inspiration was seeing her huge sweaty indonesian tiddies completely destroying Peko's bunnysuit. Truly a cultural reset.

Oh and this pic+ moon rabbits too
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Is there anyone fire-oriented that isn't Kiara? I've thought about using Dola but I just feel kind of weird about throwing Nijis into the mix.
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>>89846626
Red panda Anya wife sounds really cute
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>>89851490
Elizabeth Bloodflame? she has fire on her tits?

aside from that you can use any red/orange chuuba
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>>89851490
Flare
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>>89846626
Okay now that you've double-dipped with tigers can you double-dip with red pandas for a Kanade entry

>>89851490
Sui could work, stars are just a bunch of fire really and blue fire is always cool
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>>89851490
Not fire-oriented per se but you could just have one of the demon/underworld affiliated girls using hellfire
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>>89851648
Can you cook marshmellows on her tit flames?
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>>89856302
I still like the dumb idea that staring at Liz's flame makes you prejudiced even better if for some reason it only applies to you.
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>>89856968
>"Anon, you pig! you've been staring at Liz's boobs again!"
>What? No, I haven't.
>"Oh yeah!? Look at this!"
>*Cecilianholds up photo of Raora naked*
>You retch
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>>89857648
>'That doesn't prove anything'
>Cecilia holds a picture up halfway of a beautiful orange girl.
>'What it's a pretty photo, what-'
>Then she takes her thumb off to show Gigi's tail
>You vomit immediately
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>>89846626
did the old ones get updated?
I posted about liking Kaela as a big strong tiger gamer, but I don't remember it being that explicit about snusnu
nice, as well as bear Nene
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>>89858464
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>>89858464
>>89861385
Kaela sexo
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>>89821190
Hello writefags, had a short dream this morning that I didn't see the end of so I thought you guys may be able to finish it.

Charas are: me (anon), Gura (fmc), Ame was there, at least one more Holomem, and at least one more person that was female (probably another Holomem) and possible one more guy. Though everyone after Ame isn't really relevant, I was vaguely aware they existed.
Place is: I'm on vacation rn and was half awake when dreaming it so the scene takes place in a normal hotel room, though there are doors to the left and right of the room that lead to other guest rooms.
Story: I was lying in bed just chilling. Gura, who for some reason was in/entering my room, told Ame who was out of frame, in a voice loud enough that everyone (most importantly me) could hear, "I'm on my period so I'm sooo horny". After that she for some reason climbed onto my bed, over me, and lied down next to me. Dream me, feeling courageous, told her in a low voice "Want me to get you off?". After Gura expressed surprise (idr what she said), dream me says "Well you know what they say, a true pirate hunts for his shark even through the Red Sea" (or something like that, some sort of paraphrase to "a true pirate isn't afraid of the red sea"). Gura was into it, then I had a few brief moments where we were planning on a time for that to happen when everyone was asleep, before I realised I didn't know who "everyone" was and what rooms we had and the dream broke down.

I haven't watched Gura in years, she's not my EN oshi nevermind my kamioshi. The dialogue is so cringe and ooc as well, idk wtf is going on. Nevertheless, the dream made my heart (and dick) go dokidoki, so if an anon here can write something proper so that I can fap to it when I get back from the vacation, it's be very much appreciated.
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>>89863481
Anon is Marine (Male)?
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>>89863481
>I thought you guys may be able to finish it.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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>"Hey there handsome"
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>>89865696
>on a super secret mission to sneak into the castle and assassinate a foreign dignitary
>get sussed out almost immediately by the princess
Not because you're like shit at your job or anything, just that Luna's one observant baby that nobody pays any attention to
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>>89866586
Guess I'll have to silence her by cutting out her tongue and carving out her eyes (sexually)
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Fubuki sex
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>>89867875
Riding Fubuki's big red rocket...
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>>89851751
I double dipped because of grindstone and because they are technically two different types of tiger but im not opposed to double dipping in of itself. I should investigate to see if there's some redpanda relatives for Kanade
>>89858464
i might have touched them up but didnt make any changes to kaela
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Man I absolutely cooked on this upcoming chapter. I am so glad I didn't force myself to write it before my creativity came back.

Never force your creativity fellas. When it comes back naturally you get some absolutely banger ideas.
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What if literal JK chuubas?
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>>89863481
The writers are usually busy with their own ideas or a prompt that happened to inspire them, so competition is fierce and luck based.
But if you want to flesh it out like only you as the dreamer can, you can get help here.
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>>89868633
Congrats on whatever it is.
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>>89870624
I like the idea specially because you can play with stuff like
>Mio is way too mature for her age, probably because her parents passed away
or who is in each class but feel like the concept dies an ugly death in the oneshot.
For a series it would be quick ass, specially something like those "survive and save most of your class" scenarios, but that means killing chuubas or accepting that you are gonna have to include someone unlikeable just to kill them off
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>>89821127

Fantasy/High Chapter 2

https://docs.google.com/document/u/1/d/e/2PACX-1vQ2OxOuG6MSjHB2VP7IwSyC_MSD8GdiFWprnkSOqTD1_vsPTlYDIr5sV3ydxgKihucDrTM32R9a0hWs/pub

Tags: SFW, Crossover Collab, Pekora, Coco, Marine, Multiple Chuubas, Fluff/Romance, Comedy, Isekai

Despite the universe's best efforts to kill both AA and myself, we've done it. Enjoy.
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>>89870624
I liked that prompt that was posted a while ago that was "Asking class idol Marine out on a dare and she saying yes." I came up with a general outline for it but whether it will see the light of day is anyone's guess.
S
Shout outs to the Shiny Smiles Club idea I had as well, also perpetually stuck on purgatory.
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>>89871511
>accepting that you are gonna have to include someone unlikeable just to kill them off
Ru...
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>>89873344
Russia
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>>89871511
Why did I think she was in a microwave when I saw this?
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>>89873344
>Write a romcom
>Suddenly everyone stops their funny sugary life to see a public execution and to throw rotten fruit.
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>>89872877
>Shiny Smiles Club
That was the one with Anon as the man questing to make everyone on campus smile once right?
I think conceptually Tha idea needs to either commit to an "Our Cures" and have it be a one and done story arc with Aqua as 'the last target' he needs to make smile or have it be an episodic series where Aqua is the 'First girl' who gets grabbed and recruited into the 'not really a club anymore shiny smiles club' and have the thing be wacky romcom where the two of them are effectively general school problem solvers getting into wacky situations and maybe finding something more.
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>wake up in the middle of the night
>sudden idea I really like
>fits in well enough that I don't have to rewrite half the plot
Thank you waking up to pee.
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>>89872825
That was just awesome. I don't have better words for it, but I loved this next installment. The interactions, the developments, and the reveals, it was all so delightfully in tune with the CH universe. The includes and images and music are always well done too. Both your passions really shine in this, and it's a treat to get to read it.
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>>89821190
Ririka becomes your sugar mommy.
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>>89853612
I could work with this.
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>>89864420
Kimitachi urusai
>>89864488
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>>89870875
Anon my creative writing skills are ass, you can surely understand that from my initial post. My magnum opus is an incest treatise I wrote for a thread in /r9k/, I couldn't possibly finish a lewd work and have it be actually enticing.
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>>89878746
We all gotta start somewhere. I didn't think I could write at a level where anyone would give a fuck about it, but I wanted to write a story so a few years later I'm still doing it.
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>>89875291
>Wake up in the morning, my wip needs rewriting because i just realized half of it doesnt work
>Also i pissed the bed
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live
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What's with the authors here and piss? Piss fetish stories, getting ideas for a story when they wake up to piss, now authors pissing the bed and getting story ideas, it's out of control at this point.
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>>89881467
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>>89851490
Coco, Selen, Elira, Dokibird, Haachama...
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>>89881467
Refined tastes for refined artists. I wish Mio would mark me with her scent...
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>>89881467
Just ignore them. They'll get bored eventually.
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>>89878746
I'm sure you could figure out how to make it enticing for you. You've just got to start and practice instead of denigrating yourself.
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>>89865696
>Luna calling out to you at a fancy royal dinner party and flirting with you with her baby voice
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>>89886211
I feel like sex with AZKi would be some of the most passionate and intense sex of my life
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Dozo
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>>89889210
POV: Kanata is showing you the way to heaven
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>>89886706
AZKi leglocking you as she smothers you against her breast, whispering in your ear about how you belong to her alone, and she'll never let you go again.
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>>89821190
Discovering Bijou's crystak in an abandoned mine and slowly going crazy.
no this isnt a brainrot prompt or a romance prompt, she's genuinely whispering you that you should kill everyoneand in the end, when you commit suicide, the real bijou is born from your blood
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>>89875555
Thank you; I would've included the rolls at the end but a hard drive failure ate them. I managed to scrounge up what I could/wrote down elsewhere and just added them to the end, but it's scarce. If you're interested: https://rentry.org/v3xmatk8
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>>89878905
>>89884449
Anons I didn't come here because I wanted to write a story, just to read one based off of one idea I had. Sure, I could probably write something half decent if I tried, but I don't want to. I appreciate the advice but it's unnecessary.
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>>89890137
>"I got you now."
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>>89894174
Well, if you're not gonna write, you already fit in here so welcome.
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>>89894174
Now all you have to do is bitch about other people's stories.
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>>89894174
Pony up, bignose.
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>>89892318
This just makes me imagine that the pov character is pre-gem bijou and the gem fuses with her after she 'expires'.
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>huh, you know I think a scene where they teach the cadets to wield bayonets would be cool, let's see a video on the basics
>o-oh... that's 17 minutes
>what about the next... 25 minutes...

I never expected writing military stories to be such an extensive rabbit hole.
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>>89893210
>hard drive failure
Yeah the universe was after your ass, but you showed it that you cannot stay fucked with forever.

Seeing the rolls is always fun. It always impresses me how you are able to concoct and cultivate the scenes so well depending on the outcome.
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>>89896619
There's hours of manuals, stock footage, and training videos for nearly any military subject, I wouldn't sweat trying to get every tiny detail correct, if you get the broad strokes and feeling down that's more than enough for most fics.
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>>89896619
>Luna ordering you to go over the top and into a hail of machine gun fire by just screaming NAAAAAAAAA
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>>89897871
yeah. It's actually pretty simple and routine, most of the video is just a history lesson, which is totally interesting but I just need the simple back-and-forth movements. Thankfully those are pretty simple and straightforward.
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>>89872825
Can I ask what the title of the first chapter is? I can't find it in the archive and I feel like I'm missing a bit of context
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>>89900145
Check the series page, it has it's own entry there.
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>>89900307
Thanks! Gonna get to reading.
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>>89900535
Have fun.
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>Character refers to herself in 3rd person during sex
H-hot.....
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>>89902144
>Character breaks speech patterns because the sex is too good
Hotter
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>>89874158
>That was the one with Anon as the man questing to make everyone on campus smile once right?
The very same. I decided against an "Our Cures" style of story where Aqua is the main target. Instead, I incorporated the "Mastermind" Aqua idea and have Aqua approach you and keep piling on requests to keep you close. But I like the "recruiting an unwilling Aqua" idea. I don't think I'd make it episodic but I'd let me incorporate a dramatic beat that wouldn't have a place otherwise.
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>>89903353
>Mastermind" Aqua
For some reason this makes me imagine her as a kouhai trying to monopolize their overly enthusiastic senpai's time.
Give her a love rival that'll force her to take the relationship to the next stage or lose it all
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>>89906285
>For some reason this makes me imagine her as a kouhai trying to monopolize their overly enthusiastic senpai's time.
Sorta. The idea is that Aqua is in love with you, but has no idea how to approach so she uses the club as an excuse and to keep you on a leash. She thinks by "acting" ditzy and helpless, she will get you to fall in love with her. When it works, she has an existential crisis about her methods being "dirty" and your love being "incorrect" That would be the main drama if I went that direction.

>spoiler
If I went with the "Aqua as a member" idea, I would probably have one of her motivations to join come from doubts about Anon and Coco's relationship. Would someone do so much, for nothing in return, all to honor his senpai? Aqua wouldn't think so, and she may or may not be right.
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life or death
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>>89911690
booba.......sorry I wasn't listening, what did you say?
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[Chuuba of your choice] splits into two and you get the selfcest threesome yadda yadda.

The thing that intrigues me is how they would split? like in this pic i can see Mori being the responsible no nonsense part and Calli being a shitposting edgelord contrarian
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>>89914615
Gonathan Gigi and Shitgoblin Gigi.
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>>89914615
loving sex with normal Ayame vs getting hatefucked by rrat Ayame
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>>89914615
God there are fucking great and terrible ways to do the Calli and Mori split. From the simple Reaper/Rapper split to the more absurd ones like part /vt/ hates/loves.
Pretty sure the easiest splits are just going to be the obvious ones, mundane/fantasy represented by street/casual attire vs base outfit. With the interesting thing from such a split being how you handle who gets what part of their personality in the 'divorce'.
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>>89916105
It can also be something with introspection. Something like how tbe chuubas perceive themselves vs how they think they are perceived.
Like botan splitting and You get the ballbusting cool lion and an insecure demure kitty
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Need girl hands around my throat, then as my oxygen slowly dwindles down she gives me a good night kiss, sucking the last of my air and letting me die in her soft, cruel hands
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>>89872825
Man, I always forget who good you two are at this whole writing thing.

It's been long enough since last rereading HF that I had actually forgot about the Arkid/Astel thing, so that was neat reminder/surprise. I hadn't forgotten about Pekora fucking reading HoloFantasy in jail so I'm glad that actually came back up and ended up being so relatively important. The inclusion of FWMC was fun and I'm now super excited to see what the other side of the coin is gonna be now that they're all over in HFLand. That ending in particularly was super engaging and had me worried for a minute that somehow THE DICE had resulted in something really bad happening. No matter how long it'll end up taking I'm sure what's next will be kino.

However, I am deducting -∞ points for the description of Dr.Oopsie, as the faint scent of cherries implies that it is a Dr.Pepper expy. This proves you have fallen for a classic Ina jape, as Dr.Oopsie is actually Pepsi. At least, as far as I'm aware it's entirely possible I am the fool here.
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>>89918132
This but it's a stinky girl and she's not using her hands to strangle me.
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>>89919793
>Some extemporaneous circumstances necessitate Chloe needing to ride on your shoulders
>reluctant, for obvious reasons, you acquiesce and let her clamber aboard
>Being in such close proximity to the orca's prime stink zone has terrible effects on you, and before long you're woozy and off-balance
>Chloe tried to lean forward to keep you standing, but it's no help as you fall back, leaving her to fall ass-first onto your face as you suffocate
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>>89846626
I'm genuinely not sure if anyone fits this animal better than Gigi
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQaSRKP8Dho
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3mSlG0goioc
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>>89920334
I recommend a different creature only because as a hyena Gigi would have big weird futa cock she'd give birth from, and I don't think she should be given something like that.
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>>89846626
You should make a joke entry with a ??? and a completely normal relationship presented with the same lens as the rest of the entries. With the joke being that they're a completely ordinary human.
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>>89920937
she wants Mpreg so bad, she can do it herself
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Keep your heart beating, /wg/.
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>>89821190
I wanna see flatties getting mogged and embarrassed by titcows.
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>>89924318
Yeah think about how annoying Lamy would be at your funeral.



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