This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy.You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below: https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"Yes.Previous thread: >>92724128(Where we discussed two Kronii's, Chuuba's with problematic fetishes, Liz bullying, Pimp my Ceci and asked ourselves an important question: What if your oshi was a gun?)/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewformCurious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true
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>>92999428Added to the list!
>>93001886Miko having to fill a Tokyo Rose esque role but being completely unintelligible to either side
did we decide on a start date for the contest? im itching to get started and dont wanna cheat by having a head start.
>>93005682>A bunch of Marines listening in to Miko on their shortwave>"Okay, okay, soldier-san! Miko say one more time-nye: surrender-u, or… or… fire in the hole!">"The fuck is this shit, sarge? Can't even tell what she's saying half the time." >"Beats me, Jenkins, but it's pretty darn entertaining, don'tcha think?">Just a meter away, in a dugout under a palm tree covered in rocks and leaves, two IJA sappers also listen to the broadcast. >"The fuck is this shit, sarge? Is this… one of ours? What’s she even saying?">"I have no idea, Yamamoto. But she does sound pretty cute, don't you think?"
>>93008602It's the 14th of January to the 14th of February. Any new threads should anchor the rentry for it.
>>93001886NEPOBO accidentally fuck up with Dr Oopsie's super secret lab notes (not an elder god scroll, i sweat) and they become toddlers.But that's not the surprising part...the surprising part is lamy donning an Apron, forcing you into "play clothes", doing the laundry and instructing you to play with them while she gets dinner readyAKA Lamy is surprisingly a fantastic mother and this might have activated her motherly instincts a tad too much
>>93008602Current rulespost : https://rentry.org/VTWRFFAs of last thread we temporarily went with 14 to 14 for a Valentine's theme, though if anyone has a good argument for changing it we can have it earlier.Also, if anyone has any complaints or additions to the rules please voice them out.
>>93013736Love Theme, you say?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DNqAbcVlaBc
>>93013736is the love theme 100% mandatory? or is it just something to kick off of if someone needs an idea?
>>93018082Kronii seems exceedingly cuddleable
>>93016379Something to start off for those who need it. Can become a subcategory to win if enough submit stories tagged with it.
>>93013736alright, since host Anon won't do it, whoever wins the competition, I'll naked dogeza beg /vt/ draw thread to draw a cover for the winner.you can put that on the prize section if you so wish
>>93022059And if this anon fails to give out the prize he'll pay his debts with 15 years of forced underground labor
>>93024283I agree to this punishmenthttps://youtu.be/XdqCY_DBbs0?si=uHyRHMYZYp24VHz8
>>93001780“Jelly Hoshiumi My Nerd”tags: reader pov, jelly hoshiumi, slice of life, wedgiehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRd0lONimnOkHmRxKnaxsYX1yXZjBkyjBV0MaX8BMZO94htVqLzqcPTAwyQjMl1zhGewP0hpPaTBQ1U/pubJelly cuddle
>>93022059Added to the list!
>>93001780>>93001991I think the finnish localization of Paradise Lost had enough effort put into it to be archived.>>92821208...Also because it's hilarious to think of the only version of Paradise Lost to be available on the archive to be in Finnish.
>>93028297Paradise Lost is on the archive though
>>93028449What the hell, when did weirdanonv2 unexile himself?
>>93013736Well the theme is certainly more down my alley than the previous ones. Have there been any good romance prompts lately? Preferably a storyline that could fit in 3k words and would not take six books to explore.The archive is kinda outdated and the only one that kind of got me interested was one from years ago with Mio knocking on your cabin in the woods after you previously helped a wolf out of a trap during your hunting trip.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fdi173iq-DQI'm taking the gold this time, baby!
Are we set on this ruleset >>93013736 or does anyone still have any additions or changes they want before we finalize and start shilling the upcoming contest?
>>93035214I say that the winner gets to pick a writer at random and forcefeminize them until they turn into mindless cocksleeves.
>>93036306Pretty sure this was how they got CC.
Since the theme is love: what is the purest form of love? Loli x Ojisan? Student x Teacher? Idol x Rich old idol industry magnate? Something else?
>>93037579You already know.
>>93037579Partner x Partner. Two people growing and helping one another through this crazy ride we call life.
>>93037579As Yuri is the purest form of love then Suprise Yuri where it's revealed the narrator was a woman the entire time must be the purest form of love in second person.
>>93037579Someone who makes you feel naked down to your soul when you hear them say I love you.
>>93038339Are you blood related at least?
>>93037579purest love you can ever have: A dad in his 40s with the cat he didnt want
>>93037511I guess that means the winner gets to forge the next holo en member
>>93037579BetaCuck x Partner with Unshakable Devotion
>>93037579Gyaru slut x Virgin nerd
>>93001886Shiori keeps sending you more and more unhinged 'Us?' posts, which are all made by her.>I pee a little when I see you.>If we were survivors of a plane crash in the middle of the Andes, would you eat me first?>>You know, worms can actually regenerate, and grow bigger as a result. With enough trial and error, you could probably make shapes and blocks with them. Would you spend hours fashioning me into a pocket pussy if I was a worm?
>>93031940Does trying to adapt to your oni lover's traditions similar to >>92741595 work for you? I figure it's a good fit for a short and fun romance, and would work with other non-human holos too.
>>93035214I still like the idea of letting participants announce their favorite other submitted story and record the results as an incentive to participate. It's also more encouraging if there's more ways to receive acknowledgement for your story's quality.
>>93046557>That last oneShiori what the FUCK
CC, you better start working on that chapter 3. I know where you live.
>>93051948So that's how he met an orca, he lives right next to the ocean.
>>93001886Kronii gets lazy and drags her alternate timeline self in to do her chores for her, accidentally starting an endless cycle of lazy Kroniies multiplying the same way. This threatens to completely fuck everything up because that's not how time works (and one Kronii is already a handful to live with as it is) and so she is forced to retrieve her old dusty Time McGuffin to undo her mistake, fighting off hundreds of her alternate selves that don't want to get back to work with the help of her friends. With the final Kronii defeated, she activates the thing and her alternate selves get sucked back into their respective timelines. Kronii realizes that taking shortcuts only resulted in having more work to do and vows to just work harder. Everyone laughs until she disappears as well.
>>93052496>The real Kronii died and was put under the bed by another Kronii who didn't want to do the work involved
>>93051948Lol, I've been there before and it's unironically very stinky. Perfect for Sakamata and her associates.
>>93046557Shiori for the last time i'm not letting you use the Gromit mug
>>93001886getting trolled (lovingly) by Niko-tan
>>93057804what's niko like? havent seen her or the Dev_is girls yet
>>93001886>>93057804This, but you're a survivor of a plane crash and are trying to get out of the forest only to find a tiger's den right in the sole traversible path. You repeatedly try to get past it, but Niko is always there to catch you and you narrowly escape before she can eat you. After your numerous increasingly more absurd attempts to sneak past end in failure, you give up and realize she's been playing with you the whole time, getting a kick out of foiling your elaborate schemes and often playing along to the dumber ones just so she can catch you at the very last moment. You decide to spend the rest of your life in the forest hanging out with her until a rescue team finds you.
>>93059174I know almost nothing about the DEV_IS 2 girls as well, but they have some great designs.
>>93059174>>93060254She's one of those extremely rare cases in vtubing where you get exactly what it says on the tin.She loves to just do and say shit for fun and its infectious. She also has less filters regarding jokes (which gets her labeled as a pervert) but seems to not be able to ignore the cringe and some bits just end with going "ugh...that's so lame".Also another scaredy cat
>>93059294the final ultimate joke:Niko isnt a tiger, the tiger has been dead for years and she was just squatting there
>>93001886Your relatively backwards town chooses you as the sacrifice for the demonic bird living in an old castle nearby as they've been doing every hundred years for several centuries so that it's too full to sing its vile songs. You're not exactly eager to go, but get dragged to your demise despite your protests. Fortunately for you, the beast turns out to be feeling down and not in the mood for snacks just yet, but you're still stuck with it until you can find your way back out. With nothing better to do and your phone somehow still in your pocket, you start listening to your favourite idol songs to pass the time. The beast is drawn to the unfamiliar sounds and gets fixated on them. You spend the rest of the day explaining to it - or rather her - all the developments she missed over the past hundred years, mainly those revolving around idols. Her newfound obsession lifts her spirits and she helps you get out.Before you can take even ten steps outside of the castle, something violently pulls your arm. The one holding your almost dislocated limb is an unnaturally beautiful naked woman who begs you to show her more of the modern human world. You quickly realize who she is, but can't bring yourself to say no both out of pity for her desperation and fear for your life if you deny her.And that's how you get stuck babysitting a needy weirdo of a demon trying to become an idol.
>>93062825I was actually going to write that, but chose to leave it out.
>>93037579What about the purest form of love, courtly romance!Romantic letters, chaste kisses, dedicating victories! Sex behind their husband's back, a forbidden love hidden from everyone's eyes, a tragic end when it's discovered.
cucking the king is way too hard, im just cucking the salaryman from the apartment below
>>93037579Brotherly loveSecond best is former archenemies that have grown too attached to each other, but don't think the other party feels the same and keep the charade going when everyone else already knows the are retards in love. It's a relationship that had endured adversity until it was reforged into a greater form of attraction in spite of its roots. Finding things you love about someone you hate is much harder than normal too and having the former overpower the latter is even more unlikely. There's really no match for this kind of love.
one of my friends found my abuse fics and knew it was me
>>93066584How?
>>93067061They already knew I wrote fanfics and saw some of my work, connected the dots, I assume, by my style of writing.
>>93066584... Sakura Summer anon?
>>93067486yeah. Gonna be real fun having to pretend like my D fetish isn't real.
>>93066123>be 20 y/o unemployed/struggling student living on the third floor>Azki lives in the fourth floor,has her eyes on you. You crumble like wet paper the second she starts seducing you>Every day at 8 Am, her husband leaves for work and she makes you wait for one hour before going to her apartment>She cooks for you, sometimes gives you pocket money, sometimes she just sends you out with a kiss or some cute words.>Always after squeezing you down to the last drop, sometimes you have to beg and tell her that there isnt anything left>It never stops her>Taste in women absolutely destroyed beyond the ability to recover. You cant even get it up with younger girls while she'll make you pop a boner with just a gesture across the hallway>And suddenly, after months of "triying", Azki is finally announcing her pregnancy to the rest of the neighbors.>And she gives you that look. There isnt a semblance of a doubt that its yours
>>93067658>Wow, this fanfiction about vtubers featuring weirdly gender focused child abuse and infantilization fetishes reminds me of this guy I know who likes writing, vtubers, has an infantilization fetish and suffered weirdly gender focused child abuse>wait a minute...
>>93067874I only gave small screengrabs of parts of White December and some mentions of small, inoffensive stuff I wrote, I'm not quite that open with people, especially about the D stuff lol.New chapter of Shelter is coming soon btw
>>93037579overdeveloped schoolgirls and underdeveloped schoolboys
>>93068128what about overdeveloped schoolboys
>>93068128I think IRyS would be a better streamer if she got tag teamed by 12 year olds live.
>>93068128hear hear
>>93069171I think that would be against youtube TOS
>>93001780I wrote this in /∞/ years ago. Not very good, I did it off the cuff. I'm going to try and get back into writing because I've nothing else to do.Content warning.https://rentry.org/mnte4
>>93038339>>93038481You sick fucks.
>>93069202Gyaru Bae...
>>93067669Now write about the tragedy when AZKi's infidelity is discovered, everyone's lives come apart, and causes the fall of holoCamelot.
We talk about consensual collaring but i think them fighting nature is based
>>93075740Yeah! Kemonos revolting against humanity! Plotting in the woods! Building an army to end the Age of Man!
>>93037579Brother and sister, obviously!
What fics have you been reading lately anon?
>>93080580Nothing. Which is why, on the risk of sounding like a pretentious faggot, I'd like to ask anons for any recommendations they have for "thought-provoking" fics. You know, anything that's weird, avant-garde, something "smart" >inb4 Paradise Lost, That's The Way the Fubuki Crumbles, Shrunken Troubles, Gura's Futanari Cumflation AdventuresAll of those fics are thought-provoking, yeah, but not in the way I'm talking about
>>93081796Also Gura's Futanari Cumflation Adventures doesn't exist, yeah, but I wouldn't mind if someone actually wrote it
>>93081833Should have been the contest theme
>>93082077>Every Anon's take on what "Gura's Futanari Cumflation Adventures" should be >One made smut ("Uuuaagh I'm cumming!")>One made it into a noir mystery ("Someone came here... and it ain't me.")>One made it into a drama ("But Watson, I thought you'd love me even if I had a dick!")>One made it into an experimental diatribe ("I am Gura's raging sexual inferno") Maybe this should be the theme for the next contest
>>93082202I would write one for this contest anyway but 3k words seems hardly enough for a proper cumflation adventure.
>>93081796Not sure on your tastes but have you read Pale Blue (and maybe the prequel/alternate story Egregiously Forbidden Relationship) that fic has a certain cerebral tone to it that gives the prose a tone you don't see much in other fics from here. Pretty sure the author for that released their holoslavia fic in full recently but it hasn't been archived yet. Then there's the Ina fics, not sure if you've read them but she has a strange tendency to make some big hitters. Perfect day, etc. Deliver us from evil was pretty strange and out there even if the ending doesn't come together that well. >>93081833The only way I can see that Gura fic being made at this point is someone making it as a shitpost where the futa cumflation is treated as a joke while the rest of the narrative runs through absurdity like that uruka gets buff fic.
>>93082077>>93082202There's probably not enough 'real interest' in there but we could probably run this as an internal contest. All winners and voters coming from those who throw their hat out to make a chapter/fic out of the prompt "Gura's Futanari Cumflation Adventures".It's probably a big enough joke to be our "anniversary contest" in April. Though again, I doubt there's enough interest to actually make this a real X Cakes thing.
>>93082518Guess I'll check out the Ina fics and start from there then. Already read The Perfect Day, though I could re-read it. Thanks, anon
>>93082854It could be a cooperative fic where multiple people add chapters. Doesn't have to be fully coherent but it'd be interesting
>>93085131Might be a bit difficult to organize on an imageboard, but a collective fic where people took turns to add like 5 sentences into a story at a time could be fun.
>>93085131Someone writes a short intro of Gura unwittingly moving to Futa Island to start a new life. Anon's each claim 1 to 3 chuubas for their chapter. Everyone writes a chapter of Gura getting raped by futas while trying to go about her daily routine.
>>93085131I mean in theory we could all have it be one big cooperative story told in chapters but it would need to be really high trust and need a strong enough start that it can continue even with inevitable derails. Since the whole point would be trying to keep it all in one continuity.I don't think something like that can really be organized on 4chan unless this somehow gets high enough standards among writers that it naturally keeps the story in line.>>93085292In theory this would be even more chaotic but the five sentences at a time thing would keep it more in line... Even if the only way. Could see it being done is either a reply chain archived with one guy keeping it chronological, or open edit code rentry with a copy kept archived separately to dodge vandalism.
>>93086158Uhh...Gura awakens on Futa Island with no memories of how she got there.She then wanders through an island where everyone (including her) is a futa and everything revolves around futa cum. She is then captured by the Futa cops for not making cum quota.Now she finds herself at the lowest caste of futanari, forced to cumflate twice as many condoms as others due to having two dicks while only having her weak body... But she has a dream. To make it to the top and find out the mysteries of futa island but first, she has to make it out of being a futa slave....I propose a battle shonen-esque progression to the top plot line since that provides a clear plot line to follow while still letting anyone write anything so long as it's in the confines of the Futa Island. So you can write anything from battle shonen parody, to drama, to pure smut, to absurd comedy.
>>93047412How the hell would you even implement that?Have an open call for the authors to send an email to the contest account with proof of what fic they wrote and what fic was there favorite?
Whatever happened to AA?
>>93090463AA was always a Gestalt entity created in our shared mindscape, the introduction of Shiori has made his existence less tangible as she has supplanted him in many ways
>>93090463it's a live
>>93090658The egregore AA needs more believers...
>>93051948Incredible, it even has the alliteration.
How the fuck do you write sex in an engaging way? How do you make the "penis go in penis go out" loop interesting and well, erotic?
>>93096377Write down what you find hot in your sex fantasies, read some smut that that you like in a "it's written hot" way and not just "I find the fantasy hot". Practice writing the former till it starts looking like the latter.
>>93096377One of the most useful pieces of advice I've heard about writing sex is to channel the 5 senses during the situation. Of course, that can be said for almost all writing but with how repetitive the motions of sex are, I think it lends itself extra well here.The smell of sweat, the soft and warm touch of flesh, the sound of moans and two (or more) bodies connecting, the dishevelled sight of your partner(s) and how they may taste. Bringing all those together paints way more of a vivid picture than just describing the action
>>93096377I believe there are two major ways of writing smut, one focused on the actions, and the other focused on the characters. For example, if you were to go the first route, when you trust into your woman during missionary, her boobies will jiggle. So, your focus on this school of smut is to focus on the visuals and sounds. What do you feel? What do you see? Is the bed creaking? Is your partner biting a pillow, clutching the sheets?As for the second, and the one I personally scribe to, is that of the characters' personalities being part of the act. Do they bicker and laugh? If your girl were to queef, would she be embarrassed, laugh it off, or not react? What's the aftercare like? As the other Anon said, writing smut can get repetitive, so it's best to mix both physical sensations and personalities to make a scene feel impactful and hot. And for the final touch, you really have to learn how to word things in a more creative and engaging way. Me personally I love euphemisms of food and kissing. >I licked her pussy while my hands grabbed her hipsTurn it into>I made out with her lower half as my hands got busy with her love handles. >I put the penis in the vagoo DEEP, making her go kimochiTurn it into>My member parted her walls as our pubis met in a kiss, and a dry moan died between her teethMy personal favorite is 'Shooting a litter of fox-puppies inside her' from Petting your Fox, which is one of the best examples of personality over raw actions.
>>93001886August 1993. Rushia tries to convince Varg Vikernes not to kill Euronymous but ends up killing him herself out of rage prompted by the Mayhem guitarist's words. When she's being sent to prison Varg shouts to Rushia asking if she'll marry him when she's out.
>Her bloated stomach rumbled, big as if she was pregnant with an adult male. Her feet hung above the floor as Kiara's arms lifted her. She couldn't see her dual wielding dog-like shark dongs under her cum gut. The chicken's grunts and moans were slowly dying as felt another thick load of spicy KFP special sauce shot inside her anus, and her stomach bulge grew a little more.>"Oh ja," said Kiara. "I bet you like it when I shove my dickenmarchen in your sharkenassholen.">It wasn't supposed to be like this! What kind of country is this, where an innocent rapist shark can get raped back, and have her re-rapist face no consequences?>Kiara let go, and as Gura's cumflated stomach hit the floor, she bounced once, and then in one push, the asphalt was painted white under her bottom, looking like Mori did in her fart fetish art with clouds of gas coming out of her ass, but instead of gas it was a fart of cum. >Kiara waddled away, cheeky and triumphant, and as Gura clutched a fistful of man(woman) juice, she stood up.>Kiara's third leg dangled in front of her, and her panties still didn't protect her asshole>"It doesn't matter if my two are small!" She cried, running towards Kiara, and catching her by surprise, both of her shark dicks went up Kiara's asshole.
Uppy up!
>>93099008This feels like a political cartoon for a country that no longer exists.
>>93100229Holoslavia after dark?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0DBkXcDU270
>>93103887I'm 99% sure I would've enjoyed Rurouni Kenshin otherwise, but I made the mistake of watching the Tsuiokuhen OVA first. Watching the main series after the most beautiful anime OVA ever created makes the shift in tone absolutely outrageous. Couldn't handle that and dropped it after few episodes. Always loved that OP though.
>>93105927Disgusting dark elf whore, tempting me with those fat fucking tits! A sound rapn8mk4ing will put you in line!
>>93107032sweet Captcha, virgin-kun.
>>93082854Personally I prefer it stays a running joke than become a real thing.
>>93107087Ah fuck, my spaghetti spilled out of my pockets again...
Sluts are the best! Enko with slutty JKs!
>>93107177its cute you think its a "running joke" and not something extremely forced by one guy
>>93107450too true
>>93104677>>93103887Man, I love swordswomen that could cut me in half but do not.
>>93107723Hey, it's at least 3 people.That's like 3/4s of the entire general
>>93107190You went way too hard out there Peko-chan; the ball didn't just miss the net, you blasted the fucking thing to outer space. You can't just cold approach someone and call them a whore in the first 5 seconds, you absolute animal. Let's just forget about negging and other advanced techniques for now.
>>93108893Yeah its 3 people who absolutely fell in love with the concept, never wrote even an outline for it, write the "full name"(Gura's Futanari Cumflation Adventures) every time it comes up and they all just find it so hilarious they keep bringing it back.Listen, if you are gonna samefag the joke, at least have the decency of not making it so blatant.
>>93109402>Peko-chan; the ball didn't just miss the net, you blasted the fucking thing to outer spacePekora would totally think that throwing the ball super high is either the goal of basketball or should be commendable in it's own right
>>93109610I was thinking about soccer but it would be funny if Pekora was trying to process Aqua's words as a basketball analogy
>>93109966>The one time in Aqua's entire life she becomes some erudite teacher, explaining to Pekora how to flirt and the response she gets is "Hmm...Mikaru Jadan...yes."
>>93090463Busy fighting Hamas with CHAnon.
>>93111850Don't tell me even the chuuba fanfiction archive is controlled by Jews
>>93001886In your attempts to find glory and a life of luxury, you join a yakuza family led by Hakos Baelz. You get ready to bust some heads and violently claw your way to the top only to realize that the patriarch is a bit of a retard who seems to have very poor understanding of what this lifestyle entails.Instead of extorting money out of the weak and strongarming small establishments into paying insane sums of money for protection, you spend most of your days helping the dumbest and weirdest motherfuckers alive with their inane bullshit when you're not busy watching Bae sing her soul out and shake her ass on the dance floor. What initially starts as resentment for her immaturity and stupidity grows into an unbreakable and sincere bond you pretend doesn't exist even as you sing along to her songs and challenge her to these dumb toy races you extensively prepare for.
>>93109443I made the OG post, and none of the posts in this thread are minePeople just like the funny shitpost bump lad, don't think too hard about it.
>>93115108Many such cases. I made the original Coffee Plantation AU post and then watched from the sidelines as /vt/ burned with slavery/kemono fever.
>>93116118At least you can be proud that an actual archived work came from the fruits of your imagination. Can't say I care too much for all the dribble that came after though.
>>93116118Man, imagine meeting your number 1 idol Pekora, but then you say the wrong thing and she goes on a massive PTSD-fueled rant about the moon rabbit civil war and how that brown-furred filth should have been grateful for merely getting the gas chambers and not the luck trials
>>93118351>Luck trials.>So, to earn your freedom, you have to get lucky peko>A blindfolded brown rabbit is squirming and begging for mercy as Pekora throws a sawblade at the feet of their partner>And what brings better luck than a rabbit's foot, peko?
>>93119430I was thinking more like the victims have hunting dogs chasing them and to escape, they need to crawl through one of many holes farther ahead. The catch is that most of them are molded in a way that makes it impossible to move back past a certain point and don't lead anywhere to begin with. Choose the wrong hole and you either get torn apart by your pursuers starting with your feet (which Pekora and other officers usually collect afterwards if they are in good enough condition, which by itself is lucky even if the owner was anything but that) or somehow reach a dead end and slowly die.
turns out "kemonoface" is as serious as we thoughthttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tMN9ZQR-coA
>>93109443Anon, it's a thread non-sequitur about weird fics with the dumb title always being written out in full being there as a joke.
>>93108547I love swordswomen that could cut me in half and just did so.
Uppy!
>>93112178The Archive shall be free Inshallah
>>93117505Hah, she forgot her pants like a dumbass! Everybody laugh
>>93080580Reading White December. The author always posts when I'm at work so I'm behind.
>"...How do I look?">"I admit I'm not used to wearing civil- I mean regular clothes like this.">"...Yes, because of the Convent, haha.">"I look good? Thank you...">"The flowers? Mrs. Maginot helped me with them. Wearing them like this is traditional here in your village right?">"Why do you look so nervous?">"They're meant to signal marriageable woman? I see. Ahaha... Maybe I should take them out?">"Ah. You'll do it for me? Thank you!"
>>93137458>Wow Noel, you sure know a lot about sharpening knives, and can chop wood way faster than I can, where did you learn all that?
>>93137458>Be a Shieldsworn. Your purpose since you were born at the monastery is to serve your masters>Hear no Evil, See No Evil, Speak no Evil, Destroy all Evil>Drench yourselves in the blood of heretics as you are her devout shield>Fall in battle, then stand up and continue your duty>A thousand times slain, A thousand times reborn>Through the ages, you serve your master>Even if she seeks to free you form your eternal duty
This image but you are Laplus
>>93140254Brrat gets cucked by Towa, finds solace in fellow cuck Laplus!
to the anons already starting their contest fics, and those who have yet to start, I wish you all the best of luck.
>>93139089>"H-huh? I uh... why at the Convent of course, silly. >"We weren't a bunch of helpless nuns. We had to be... uhh.. whats the word... self-sufficient!">"Now could stop teasing me and uh... carry the firewood into the shed, darling? It's a bit too heavy for me... Ahaha...."
>>93131064Don't underestimate her. That little girl is a master baiter who has entrapped countless beasts such as fat balding ojisans and made them her sex slaves.
>>93131064>No sex with Shion on top of the dryer as you wait for your clothes so you two can go back to work and pretend you didn't fuck all night
>>93143985>She hands you a load of firewood>You nearly stumble from the weight, but manage to recover before falling>Noel bites her tongue, watching you clearly struggle to hold what she had carried with ease>You don't say anything cause you'd never let a fine maiden such as her show you up in a feat of strength>But you both now know without a doubt who the stronger one is >How could a "humble nun" be this strong??
>>93090463I got busy with the holidays then playing games.
>>93148826I feel like Marine would be a good candidate for that "your sister slowly becomes an ethot and you are her photographer and eventually stunt dick" idea
>>93149766You got 3000 words to flesh that idea You got this bro, make your dream incest fic come to life
>>93149766Need this but for Laplus
>>93001886Laplus fic without sex or incest
>>93151407>>93001886Laplus fic but it's literally the kizumonogatari plot where you help her break out of her seals, then have a showdown with Laplus at full power that ends with her resealed, thinking about forming a secret society.
>>93001886Your find yourself in a loop of misery. Out of nowhere, your wife Fubuki sends you videos of her getting fucked, and while you sink in depression, multiple chuubas come around to try and comfort your lonely heart, but something's not right. You start to realize the day is looping, and that someone is always lurking. There's someone who wants to pry Fubuki off you, and even throws you other women your way, but you will break free and get your wife back. Once the mastermind realized he's been caught, things start getting way more violent.
>>93152491So this is the power of CC's stand Cuck Experience Requiem.
>>93151862But what's wrong with letting her get full power and conquering the world?
>>93152797>he not only has a stand but the second strongest type of stand how does one person keep getting more and more powerful!? at this rate, he'll attain heaven and turn the world into a porn style freeuse world
>>93149766What's a stunt dick?
>>93154723The POV penis in POV porn.
>>93151862But if she looks like after breaking the shackles...
>>93145674>Hours later, you stumble back into your shared cottage, your body sore and full of aches.>See Noel sitting on the sofa>"Good work today, dear," Noel says. She gives her lap a beaconing pat and you head over.>She softly caresses your face as she lowers your head into her lap.>Noel picks up a nearby earpick and starts cleaning your ears.>She gently scrapes their insides, and massages the outsides.>Noel rubs her other hand through your hair and hums an offkey tune and she provides love and care.>Maybe you were overthinking it. There's no way someone always so tender and kind could also be so strong.
>>93154758Dumb name.
>>93155193It feels weird for laplus' face to look the same while having a bombshell body.
>>93154598We must gather a party and march to Cuckolds Cove to end this menace once and for all only to realize that the true evil mastermind behind all this was the self-inserter femanon, Domina desideria turpi, who possessed Chloe's body to manipulate CC into doing her bidding. >>91925490
>>93154723>>93154758i had the hilarious thought about "stunt dick" as in stunt double, so you are the one getting his dick set on fire, making it drive a car or simply showing up for a shot when the main actor is soft.And yet, your unparalled dick doesnt want all these porn actresses, it wants the camerawoman who is any of the sharp teeth girlsand it works out since your cock is the only thing that can stand DA DICK SHREDDA
>>93155482Seems to be a weird constant I've found with Adult La+
>>93155623>*ring ring ring*>"yeah?">"huh...alright">"Yeah ill be there...Should we discuss prices?">"No no, i know you guys can afford it, its just that my dick syndicate gets a bit anal if i dont give them all the details">"Okay yeah that works, just get me an invoice and it should be peachy">*beep*>"Bruce Willis huh"
>>93155482>>93155698Sickening stuff really. I can't even begin to imagine the kind of monstrous degenerate creature who would do that kind of stuff in the kitchen to beautiful fresh meat like Lapu-tan.
>>93137458I had a dream last night that Noel was in love with me but could only express it by giving me weaponry. Including:>a short sword>a long sword>a claymore >a shield>a glaive
>>93156643A claymore?!Jesus, at least ask him out to dinner first
>>93156579Well I mean adult La+ was sealed to Loli form for being far too erotic. As there's ZERO sex appeal to the default La+ design
>>93157293Withdraw your statement NOW
>>93145193So what happens when she comes upon someone who won't fall to her charms?
>>93157789Her outfit on an adult design would be very erotic. Child La+? Zero appeal
>>93158079Very well, you leave me with no choice. I shall commence with psychological violence. Please take a look at this picture here.
>>93158140Yea and what?
>>93158402Damn, I forgot this method of attack doesn't work on people without the eyes of an aesthete.
>>93157789Are you ever gonna write lolicon stuff or do you just larp all day
>>93157949She pats their head and moves on to the next prey
>>93158617Not in the near future. My oshi isn't a loli and I probably won't turn her into one in my contest entry.
>>93158626Dawwwwww.Well at least it wasn't what I was first thinking of.
>>93159207It also marks them to be raped to death on the way home by the [Beasts of The Retirement Home]
>>93159489Ohhhh noooANYTHING but thaaat!
>>93159489>[Beasts of The Retirement Home]"None of you are even close to retirement"
>>93157115>Says Iroha, her entire face a deep shade of red.
>>93155482>>93155698It's not universal at least. I wish there was more unshackled La+ of all kinds
>>93143985>>93145674>>93155255If I knew anything about Noel I'd write this, I love this idea, seems great for a slow burn romance with a bit of action and mystery here and there....
>>93159489>[Beasts of The Retirement Home]Please elaborate on what you mean by that so I can be scared like what >>93160167 is.
>>93162614Hags.
>>93162131For me, it's an unchained hag La+ that still acts like a chuuni brat
>>93162815Unless those hags in question have the body of an 80 year old I see this as a good thing!
>>93163124Pekora has the body of an 111 year old rabbit kemonomimi woman, at least.
>>93163357Yeah but she doesn't physically look like a grandma does she?If she did then that WOULD be a bad thing for me to experience.
>>93162907But is it chuuni if she really has all the power?
>>93164602Not the body of a human grandma or a human 80 year old, at least. I'm sure Pekograndma is very fine looking still.
>>93161675>"What are you freaking out for, Iroha? What's the big deal about a claymore?">Iroha's blush deepens.>"I don't know how to put it politely so...">Iroha glances around the room to make sure it's just the two of you before leaning in>"Noel really wants to fuck your brains out" she whispers.
>>93161675>Be you, trying to sleep in your apartment with paper thing walls>Hear the girl from the room over.>"Oh my god! Oh, OH! OH NO YOU CAN'T~!">Assume she's getting railed, but holy fucking shit, how good can a dick be?>"Mmmm~! Shameless, SHAMELESS!">Alright fuck it.>Knock on her door, tell her to keep it down between her and her boyfriend, you have a 10 hour shift ahead of you.>"B-Boyfriend? I-I'm single.">Oh, so she's just flicking the ol' bean? What the fuck is she watching, Backdoor sluts 7, revenge of the unfertilized anuses?>In her hand, a book hangs, she immediately hides it, but you can just make out what it is>Google it later.>Steel and passion, how to childhood rivals became one>Not a single fucking sex scene, but there was a weird drawn out segment where the man spars with the woman, and then puts her sword back in her sheath for her.>Next day>This weird girl is trying to open a packet with her bare fingers, and her door is wide open. Doesn't she own a knife?>Go get a cutter, knock on her door, ask her if she needs help>Red faced, she taps her fingers and tells you she possibly couldn't do it>Ignore her, tell her it's no biggie, and open the packet for her.>It's a fucking katana>Take it out in awe, apologize and hand it over>She grabs it by the sheath, you hold it by the handle>She unsheats it>A snail trail shoots down like a hose down her leg and she falls to the floor>JESUS WHAT THE FUCK?>She's with her eyes focused on nowhere, her legs rubbing together, and she's muttering something to herself>"My first... a rape! I'm a disgusting, filthy slut!">Leave the katana, walk backwards without breaking eye contact, close the door. >Bangs on your door at night and asks if you want to do something dirty>... She's wearing a full set of samurai armor.
>>93001886Molesting Mococo, who's too retarded to understand what's happening. Fuwawa then agrees to let you play with her if you leave her sister alone, but little did she know, Mococo already had you cock jam leaking from her tiny cunny.
>>93155482>>93162131>>93162907i love it, all the awkwardness of being huge with someone not mature enough to handle iti also find it interesting how hololive usually makes their brats silvery haired and magically powerful or nonhumanlike yes maybe they can be dominant amazonian titty monsters if that's what you want
>>93155612Pekoranni is actually adorable
>>93164668I hope she doesn't actually banish my balls to the shadow realm once she gains the power to do so
>>93167675>You used to laugh when La+ would condemn you to a hundred years in the penis exploding dimension>Now that she's 200cm tall and crackling with demonic energy, you're very worried
>>93167787On one hand, penis exploding might mean violent fountain-esque ejaculation that leaves you dryOn the other hand, it might simply explode into bitsWill you take your chances?
>>93150041Sorry anon my perpetual contest WIP is already over 7k
>>93157115It's funny cause the one thing I remember from the dream was Noel asking me to pose with the claymore and her being absolutely enraptured. I'm awkwardly handling that blade and Noel is cooing >"So cool!"The whole time.
Serious question: which holos lay eggs?
>>93170358All the birds.Iofi (Alien)Coco (Dragon)Pekora (Moon Rabbit)Gigi (Grem=Lizard)Ao (Yaoi Egg)
>>93170358Nerissa and her entire family have been confirmed for laying eggs
>>93001886Thinking about how the red stuff is usually involved in relevant rituals, you get too curious for your own good and add a bit of your blood into Nerissa's drink. Whatever you were expecting is definitely not a switch getting flipped in her head and the otherwise submissive dork violently dragging you onto her bed and forcing you to give her more until you're just weak enough to be rendered incapable of escaping from her, but not enough to let you pass out.When the morning comes, you'd much rather lie and tell her that you got into trouble with local stray dogs than let her be overwhelmed by shame from savagely mauling you like that.
>>93001886Marine keeps trying low hanging fruit hentai tropes to get laid, but all backfire>Goes in gambling debt she can perfectly afford, waits for the collector to come.>She tries to seduce him, but he brings out the wrench and she pays back her debt>Calls for pizza and pretends she doesn't have any money>The pizza delivery boy isn't having her shit, and tells her to spit out the cash or fuck off>Goes into a shady massage parlor to get molested>Ends up leaving with her back hurting because of a shitty massage>Tries to shoplift to get corrected>Gets arrested>Joins a shady company to get blackmailed by her bosses>She ends up working 12 hour shifts for shit moneyAnd so on, and so forth.
>>93168020>On one hand, penis exploding might mean violent fountain-esque ejaculation that leaves you dryI wouldn't want 100 years of that either. Even though it probably just means a short while until she gets bored of seeing you cum and whine
Shitting all by yourself, handsome?
>>93001886Your long journey is finally reaching its end, it's time to face the Great Demon King. When it's time for you to deliver the killing blow, you manage to spit out only few pathetic sparks out of your magic staff. The rest of your party turn towards you and see a shivering spiritless man and ask you what's wrong in panic.The previous day you happened to meet a succubus (Marine) and you spent all your mana to have the most mindblowing sex marathon in the history of the universe with her. This part is over 95% of the story.The story returns to the following day and you briefly summarize everything and say "I guess I didn't manage to recover my strength in time, heh." Your party members curse your name before they all get wiped out by the Great Demon King, you just reminisce the great time you had last night before it's your turn to get rekt.
>>93174699Not anymore, beautiful. Now, open wide and say "aaaaahh"....
>>93175323AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
>>93175323Didn't realize Paradise Lost was getting a sequel. What Milton poem are we naming this one after?
Mmmsoft tiddy
Live!
>>93001886You move grem out of the shoebox and into a terrarium, in an attempt to prepare a surprise gift for Gigi.However, Grem escapes since cardboard is the only material he cannot adhere to. Panicked, you try to find grem while hiding the horrible truth to Gigi>"heeeeey Geee! Say, hypothetical, what if like huuuuh someone made a mistake and ruined something you like?">"huh? well, accidents happen! How fucked we are talking?>"Well huuuh, lets...lets just wonder what would happen if i, hypothetically, lost grem">Gigi's eyes instantly lose all light, she slouches and falls to her knees, eyes watering and mumbling that she's gonna kill herself as she starts crawling to the nearest sharp object>You shake her>"GIGI! ITS NOT REAL! GREM IS STILL WITH US">she instantly perks up>"Oh wow! i got scared there! Man i cant even IMAGINE what would happen if i lost the only friend i had during my traumatic childhood, my only respite during the abusive household experiences i had and definitely the last remaining shred of my sanity! Boy, you just cant justify living in a world without my little buddy">huh hoh
In terms of Promise longevity, should it be Mumei (civilizations are too rare and can't outlive most basic forms of life) < Fauna (life is too picky to continue existing for long) < Sana (universal expansion and heat death would eventually render existence of any kind of matter meaningless) < Bae (there can be no chaos if there is nothing around) < IRyS (could die off earlier, but Kronii will inevitably be reduced to a despairing husk) < Kronii (time flows endlessly and isn't reliant on anything to keep cohesion)?
>>93166232Imagine teasing Laplus as normal and forgetting she's 11 inches taller than you now so you make your standard "you're just a kid lol" joke and she simply stares down at you with a smug glare, awkwardly ending whatever witty quip you had in mind But she's still normal Lap at heart so her smug grin is mostly a facade and she has no idea what to do now she's the bigger one
>>93180316All of them can exist outside of the constructs of their charges, with Kronii being the exception since time is tied to existence on any level, so if time did not exist, she would not either. Council is more like higher beings with stakes / interest in their respective areas.
>>93181204Big Laplus spanking and correcting a bratty boy (man)!
>>93181204Okay, but imagine her being completely unprepared to deal with the size increase, from none of her old cute outfits fitting to new ones making her look like a tent one bounce away from having boobs slipping out and she's bouncing way more now than she ever wanted. Even just trying to sleep results in her finding no rest because her tits make all possible positions uncomfortable, whether they are crushing her arm or awkwardly spilling to the sides. After yearning for this all this time, she begins to desperately wish to go back to being a child.Even if this was her real self, it's not like she has dealt with any of it recently.
>>93182367The biggest blow of them all would be that nobody treats her like a child to spoil anymore.
>>93182617>Laplus forcing the 5'6 henchman to indulge in her sick fantasies of sitting on his lap, putting up with her acting like a brat, pampering her while calling her a good demongirl.
>>93180316Bae > Sana > Kronii > Fauna > IRyS > MumeiBae is primordial Chaos. The end of ends. There when the universe exploded into life and will be there when it becomes staticSana follows much like space itself did after the Big Bang. It will only be at the heat death of the universe will Sana ceases to be.Kronii next as time is a universal factor that all existence operates on. Time as a concept is often inseparable from Space. However, time is also a construct and thus Kronii is bound by it.Fauna, IRyS and Mumei are all similar in that they are intrinsically tied to the beings of this world rather than large concepts. Fauna is Nature, life. An existence depended on the continued pruning of her Gardens. Life is not as fragile as one might think, but it is brutal and short.IRyS is Hope. She existed since Hope first entered man's heart and to sing its praise. Can there ever be a future in which no hope exists? Even if Man ceases to be, will their Inheritors find the same song in their hearts?Finally, Mumei is Civilization and thus is the most dependent on Man. Mumei's only hope of a continued existence is for the being that birthed her to create a Civilization that surpasses even Chaos itself.being chuuni is fun sometimes
>>93183867>Laplus calls you to reach for the box on upper shelf because she can't do it herself>it's below her eye level>you give her a glare, but she doesn't budge>you just barely manage to grab the box and almost trip from trying to stand on your toes>she gets all giddy when you had it to her and gives you a hug>instead of having her arms wrapped around your waist, you find your face buried in her tits, struggling to breathe>you haven't felt this upset since the last time Mori mogged you
>>93183867>>93184938H-hot..... t. turbomanlet
>>931852615'3" GODlet, reporting in
Those wandering in the ancient bamboo forest should stay on the trail to avoid the fearsome creature lurking within....
>>93185769You'd better not have eaten Korean food before trespassing
What story will make me feel utterly empty after I read it?
>>93187330One that you don't want to end
>>93001886Every time you try to get busy with Pekora, the two of you notice Kumarine staring at you from across the room or at the foot of the bed.
>>93188909I often think about how pesky / intrusive Marine would be towards a couple that are trying to get it on when they all share a common living space. I like to think she would partly do it because she wants to see, but it would mostly come from a place of just wanting to press both your buttons. She would probably also make a hard rule for herself to not barge in when you are deep into the rhythm, since that's just a good way to get punched.
>>93001886The german exchange student is way too direct
>>93191171I can't understand half the things she's saying through her thick accent.
>>93184187Assuming that Mumei is only HUMAN Civilization.Mumei suddenly speaking Glorp one time made people start to wonder...
>>93191718>she flirts and calls you cute in german >when you ask what she means she plays the ESL card
>>93001886After a few months of dating, you finally had a night of passion with Marine. (Turns out the euphemism of "making love" short-circuited her brain) You're riding on cloud nine so why is it that every Kemono woman in the Holo Office keeps acting weird around you?>Okayu's normally neutral face transforming into a shit-eating grin every time your eyes meet.>Polka "accidentally" spraying you with Fabreeze>Botan keeps aggressively slapping you on the back and laughing (it kinda hurts...)>Korone excitedly telling the two of you "Congratulations on losing it!">Overhearing Mio telling Koyori that no, just because "M" didn't urinate on you, doesn't mean you're still available>Mococo VERY loudly asking why you smell weird only for Fuwawa to rush her out of the room.
>>93187330Any fluff fic.
My current WIP is either by far the best or the worst thing I've ever written. I have no idea which, just that it's one of the two.
I'm trying to come up with a bunch of autistic lore surrounding a kemono-only country that would justify an Afghanistan-like occupation to serve as a thinly veiled excuse for a setting with a HoloPMC to do PMC things to satisfy my gun autism. I keep (re)writing some variant of 'they're all savages' but that feels boring to me.
>>93205766>Kemotopia used to be a civilized nation with immense natural resources, but 'traditionalists' looking to RETVRN to when they were basically feral have been conducting terrorist attacks that result in massacres(food spiked with human blood making them go crazy violent, politicians kidnapped and left in the woods, etc.) and governmental destabilization>With the United Chuuba Nations peacekeepers around helping civilians, the military of [INSERT OTHER COUNTRY HERE] can't do much more than defend it's embassy and non-violently prop up the floundering government, so HoloPMC gets hired to do some 'unofficial' work
>>93205766Lean into it harder.Make kemonoland like a mix of norsca and the beastmen. A land of savage Chaos-worshipping animal people tamed by the Sword of Civilization during The Age of Darkness and forced into the Light. Now struggling to find its place in the world as the blood calls them to return to the old ways, devour men (sexually), and let The Shadow back into the world.Now a multi-national peacekeeping coalition has entered the country to suppress a rising chaos revolt while the country continues to spiral into the dark.
>>93205766>be land of warring kemono tribes in colonial times>tribes composed of similar species (dogs, cats, birds, etc)>get colonized by a human country and exploited for a couple centuries>eventually humans agree to leave but in doing so leave their corrupt government model>power is seized by one of the minority species group in the country, say the cats>cats use corrupt colonial structures to extract new found natural resources and line their own pockets while the rest of the country lives in poverty>some human country who dislike the ruling cats flood the country with weapons and fund, say the dogs, to start a violent revolution>in the midst of the chaos some of the other species groups form separatist militias / terrorist organizations>the economy is destroyed so the former colonizer human country has to go in to fix shit but don't want to make it seem like they're re-conquering>what remains of the cat government hires the human country's PMCs at a steep discount
>Going out to touch grass, talk to women >Olivia Monroe is standing by the bar, swaying while she taps away on her phone >Gomna shoot my shot >walk over try to say hi >she doesn’t hear me. or pretends she doesn’t hear me>say hey again, lightly tap her shoulder>she visibly jumps and turns around>”sorry I didn’t mean to scare you”>omg you scared me, hi>she looks uncomfortable>”do you know how much an polar bear weighs?” >what? >cant decide if she actually didnt hear me or if she’s giving me a second chance to not use that retarded line. decide to stick with it>”can you help me settle a bet with my buddy”>I didn’t see you come in with anyone, she says breaking eye contact to scan the room behind me, still uneasy.>”humor me”>fine. she sets her phone face down on the bar >”do you know how much an elephant weighs?”>an elephant? >”a polar bear, how much do you think a polar bear weighs?”>The north or South Pole? >”I don’t think they have polar bears in the South Pole”>They don’t? Well Is it male or female?>”female bear” >is it a bear bear or a cub bear>”it’s a fully grown, average sized, female polar bear in the North Pole.”>what time of year is it >”oh come on you’re busting my balls”>You told me to humor you, I’m humoring you!>”its Winter. The middle of winter, prime hunting season. She’s a fully grown, average sized, female Polar bear in the middle of prime hunting season. How much do you think she weighs?”>she smiles, almost kindly. “enough to break the ice, but not enough for me to let you buy me a drink”
The world is telling me to masturbate to Botan
>>93207838You should listen.
>>93207899I think I willhttps://files.catbox.moe/inp3nr.png
>>93207993Zasedhttps://files.catbox.moe/bbegsa.png
>>93208273Oh my good sweet god I'm pulling out Cascade of White for yet ANOTHER spin
>>93208273That guy sure is short
>>93207375This would be much more realistic if you swapped Anon and Oli's parts.
is this puberty for rats?
>>93206629Naruhodo, holoslavia but it's actually post colonial Africa.
>>93208643Friendtaro is what Bae looked like pre ascending to the Council
>>93196738Homewrecker coyote....
>>93209291I think Friendtaro is a hamster but we need an oficial judge there.Also>I feel 45
>>93209602You know I've just thought about that.Does this mean Koyori has the coyote clit dick?
>>93208643Yes but she should also get massive fucking tits, like a 12yo wearing balloons under her shirt
>>93072478You got source for the art?
>>93204320This will either be the story that cements me as a legend, or the one that makes me paint the wall with my brains.
>>93205766You say PMC and all I can think of is Metal GearWho would be the one with recessive genes? Mococo or Fuwawa?
>>93211283You're thinking of Hyenas
>>93210299Her ears are like Kanata's in her kimono (also no tail).
>>93211283You just reminded me that Female hyenas give birth through the equivalent of an urethra.
>>93213261Yeah I was remembering the hyena gigi post because for some reason Gigi and Koyori crossed wires in my head.
Can't die yet
>>93214246Then how does bae react to her best friend eating her own babies?
Mori pulls out all her feminine charms and tempts you into banging her in a public bathroom
>>93218795>Hey dude, nice pants! They make your lega look really juicy!>smiles awkwardly>sweats>downs her drink and leaves to her friendgroup
>>93219133With that level of flirting skill, you couldn't stop me from taking her right there in the street
>>93208643This is as tall as they get
>>93001886Learning what kemono mean when they say 'marking' and why every morning Mio exits the bathroom and then cleans your neck with a wet tissue
>>93221810If I include a bit about the piss, will the marking requests stop?
>>93222334It will encourage them
>>93222638They'll keep making them regardless, so I might as well make the shot and attempt to quell them. >Give the people what they want, they decide they haven't had enough to eat and want more>Don't give the people what they want, they keep askingYou're tearing me apart, Anon!
>>93222899I can't help it! I haven't got to the point in my fic where I can include in character and in context watersports!
Its hard to make sex engaging when the partner is a helpless limbless fucknugget that cant do much but squirm. Even when its Ame, cant describe much except her insulting the rapist and trying to wriggle away(but cant because her massive tits block her from wriggling on the ground)Any suggestions?
Is there a baker around?
>>93223015>WatersportsWell you aren't getting THAT much outta me. I was just gonna include an instinctual bit about subtle and not so subtle marking. Maybe a little on purpose pee on your leg while in the shower, and some saliva smearing in the afterglow. That kinda thing.
>>93223267That's also really hot and cute! Please do it and leave public toilet Mio to me.
>>93223100You could put more focus on both sides' emotions, and describe both the physical actions and the sensations they cause more through metaphors and similar devices. You can also bring up the characters' pasts, desires and worries if they're relevant, or even reveal their future a bit.If you want to break the whole scene more clearly, you can also start a new paragraph with omniscient narration that starts further away (with how beautiful the night is, or what someone would hear if they were outside of the room/house) before slowly zooming in on the action and giving a neutral description of what the characters are doing.
>>93223100Up the sadism, give it some stakes so Ame doesn't dissociate and is forced to engage with being raped.I don't know, have her get fucked while a parallel Gura assists in her rape.
>>93223679>Ame's cunt was like a flower. A delicate flower that opened its petals and that someone stuck their dick inside. As the wank-shank met her cock oven she thought of many things. Of love and war, of the crypto she pumped a couple million into, of the gluten sale tomorrow at 7/11. Would she make it? Probably not, since she couldn't walk.
>>93172004this would just be Nerissa if she took fertility pills
baker doko?
>>93208643Bae is the alpha rat
