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>>93687817CCGG, but Cecilia is a giant machine eating metal and Gigi is a boy (girl) who has to live under same room as a glowie (ERB) who is actually stuck investigating weird local rumours revolving around CC. The plot twist is that CC is secretly an evil alien war machine, but she forgot.Nobody has ever thought of anything like this before.
>>93687817You and Flare create a multi-sep plan to seduce and have sex with Ina.
>>93690229hah! im a double agent! lets fuck that caramel elf
Keep an eye on the thread. board is about to go insufferably fast due to NotFauna debuting soon
>>93695556Sigh, guess its time to re-read the idolification of Ouro Kronii and Idol Steps
>Fuwawa gets a hot yet safe outfit with decent alts>Mococo's outfit is kinda lame and her alts are badMy day is ruined
>"Ah~ Anon~ How did you do on the Chwem 101 exam?"">Thats amazing!">"Me? ...Not so good... chemwistry is pwetty difwicult.">"Will you help me study for the next one?">"You will?! Teenkyu!"
>>93698044>Anon! i threw up in your carpet
>>93698044My brain is cooked because this outfit just makes me imagine Fuwawa doing CC-type netorase. >>93698209Mococo meanwhile is cute enough that I can only really see it in a goodbye/confession video type NTR thing.
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>>93699054>My brain is cooked because this outfit just makes me imagine Fuwawa doing CC-type netorase.Get some help.
>>93698020>Titmogs her sister>Outfitmogs her this time>Backseats (successfully) all the timeBeing Mococo is suffering.....
>>93699596Fuwawa might get all the horny prompts but Mogogo is the beloved comic relief that can show up in any fic and be funny
>>93699054I like the energy Anon but responding to an innocuous prompt with an unrelated /d/ fetish seldom breeds any goodwill
>>93699774God that just makes me imagine Mococo still being like their wacky stream self in some dark as hell setting like holoslavia and the protagonist just brushing it off like>Bau Bau! >The horrors of war have truly broken that girl
>>93701052I thought chuuba NTR was /trash/ tier nowadays?
>>93701502>Raffians! We are ruffing them up!>IS THAT YOUR COMMAND IMPERATOR MOCOCO?>hehehe...Bau Bau!>YES IMPERATOR MOCOCO! GLORY TO THE HOLOREPUBLIC! DEPLOY THE WARHOUNDS
>>93685219Beating Coco and getting a Dragonwife while all you wanted to do was be cool and broody sounds like a fun fic
>>93702733Really, it sounds like a hollow fantasy to me. heh
Engineer's Report 7.2 - We have finally been able to translate the data we downloaded from the alien pod. It was launched from some kind of alien exploration vessel called the Naggarok. Telemetry data indicates the Naggarok came from outside the galaxy nearly a million years ago. It was using an experimental hyperspace drive of immense power. We are not clear on this next section, but the visual data seems to be showing that the alien ship was traveling otherwise uneventfully, when it started to have a flurry of biohazard signals that began raging across its habitation decks, not unlike what we experienced with the Promise. This seems to have been the organism we know as Fubuki. The alien explorers realized almost immediately the nature of the creature and its potential for destruction if it was let loose. They tried to trap it aboard their own ship by destroying the engines and communications equipment. For all we know, the original Fubuki is still out there somewhere. Trapped in the Naggarok.Unfortunately for us, the sacrifice of the alien explorers was undermined by their own skill at ship design. As the drives were scuttled, the ship activated a distress call routine that automatically ejected a beacon pod. A pod that contained a tiny portion of Fubuki...We do not have access to anything resembling crew logs, so precisely piecing together what lead up to the events onboard the Naggarok has been difficult. But we do have logs of the Naggarok's sensory equipment prior to its last moments as a functioning vessel. No external hull breaches were detected onboard like they were with the Promise and our other spacecraft that have been compromised by...the entity. We also have not been able to find anything resembling our own incident with the alien distress beacon, though any data that could shed light on that is likely still trapped on the ship itself. Whatever it was may have come from inside the ship. At this point in time, the surviving members of the Engineering Department would like to report a startling discovery upon reviewing prior logs by the former Chief Engineer: 'Fubuki' does not translate to any known word in our language, or any known extent language in galactic vogue within at least the last twelve thousand years...nor in the data retreived from the beacon. This information has been passed on to the Chief Security Officer.
>>93708314Why DOES Fubuki have a pentagram on her tail?
>>93710943>azki wears a cheerleader uniform while hovering over your shoulder, cheering you on.>it seems like she's just trying to motivate you, but her eyes show that she's just making sure you get your fic done in time.>as soon as the time is up and you have nothing to show for it, she'll pounce on you and do unspeakable things
>>93701717yeah, it should be Fuwawa pissing on the rug or Mococo being anally impregnated by insects until her cute exposed tummy inflates like a balloon
>>93713485>she'll pounce on you and do unspeakable thingslike w-what?!? I'm scared......
>>93713816>Mococo being anally impregnated by insects until her cute exposed tummy inflates like a balloonThat is a FANTASTIC idea. It should be on the prompt anchor.>>93687817
>>93714558all the more reason to get your fic done.
>>93714558If you're not going to write fast, you don't need all your fingers.
>>93710958It's where she summons her little mascot creatures from.
>>93698044>>93698209These dogs have become sexy grandmas
>>93722670Sex with your grannies fuwawa and Mococo when the dementia kicks in and gives them short term memory loss?
>>93701052How is NTR a /d/ fetish? Sounds like you're just insecure.
>>93724183Isn't the fetish and it's variants literally banished to /trash/?
>>93725500It's a staple on /h/, newfag.
How is this for Kanade and being in character for her? I've been watching clips and streams but the language barrier and all. I think I've got her pretty close to point, but advice would be appreciated.
>>93725500The extreme bits like blacked or edits areNTR as a whole is just another fetish
>>93725742i think you need to scaleback the "dumb" just a tad.Kanade is dumb yes, but she's not a complete airhead since she's always intentionally fucking with people.
>>93687817>>93728912Nioh, but it's Liz - an Exardian foreigner - stuck dealing with local youkai problems and tardwrangling the local kemono clans waging war for genuinely dumb bullshit.
>>93729864This but every interaction with the locals has her doing an incredibly racist Japanese accent and eye squinting
>>93730770Which isn't even necessary because magic allowed William to speak English while still understanding Japanese and having others understand himMy auntie can't be this racist...
>>93729864i like the idea of the youkais being just massive shitheads that either annoy people, cause problems without meaning to or are just living.>Nekomata (okayu) is just sleeping in a temple and the town is worshipping her. After all, Okayu's sole presence has brought prosperity as far as the eye can see>Liz (and you i guess) have to stop the town for going sicko mode with sacrifices and bloodcults.>Okayu is blissfully unaware and it all resolves when she learns that they are doing that and just leaves >Turns out, she didnt have anything to do with the village's prosperity, they just had a few lucky farm seasons
>>93730961>>93730770>Liz has magic that let's her understand and be understood in Japanese but it only works if she's not speaking in Britishisms.>She doesn't know the second part rt and so gets around by speaking Loudly and Slowly like a Stereotypical English adventurer.>Only saved from this embaresment because she saves your life and now owe her a blood debt.>Now the two of you adventure through the eastern lands of Wutai as she seeks a mystical artifact and you look for a cure to your hopeless addition to kemono pussy.
>>93687817Teaching Gigi to not get so bitey when she's excited
Up
Elizabeth Rose Bloodflame (in the 2023 4kids dub)
>>93732977>Gigi when you give her aphrodisiac gummies instead of vitamins
>>93732108>and you look for a cure to your hopeless addition to kemono pussy.And you discover in the 3rd act the cure to your crippling addiction was beside you the entire time.....
>>93736227Ah, yes, mahjong
>>93736227>Deer Elizabeth
>>93727324I'll pull it back a bit and try to emphasize her mischievous side a little more then. Thank you.
>As it turns out. Noel's domestic life wasn't all that cracked up to be like she'd hope.
>>93732977Teaching Gigi to get even more bitey when she's excited (ie. during sex)
>>93724183It's not in a broader scope but some of the parts I like are
>>93738640>noel seemingly gets really fat from inaction>one day, as you walk with her to another burger joint, thugs ambush you>one of them pulls a knife and thrusts it into her huge belly>the knife shatters on impact>you look at her again>all of the non-boob flab has been compressed into a wall of muscles, just thin enough for her to regain her former figure, but too dense to even feel bullets>she slowly cracks her knuckles as her shirt bursts off her body>you wisely decide against forcing a diet on her by the time she's done twisting those poor fucks into pretzels
>>93740061Gigi needs to learn that you can't bite a human like you can an automaton.
Did you finish those wips?
>>93744576Not yet, I haven't whipped out the writing gloves
>>93744576I'll have three days off starting the day after tomorrow so I intend to write then, but knowing myself I'll probably just be a lazy pos for the most part
>>93744576Almost done. I just need to fluff it up a little
>>93687817Fat Miko tits.That's it....that's the prompt.
>>93748431How did they grow so big?
>>93744576I did and after all that mumbo jumbo I realized it's shit.
>>93748501All the nutrients went to her tits into of her brain
>>93748674This has legs.......uh.......some sort of parasite is spreading around the holo office that gives girls huge tits at the cost of making them much dumber than usual. (Miko is unaffected)You have to curb the infection and get some of the less endowed holos on board with taking the treatment (and thus losing their boosted bust). Some of them are not as......cooperative as you'd like.
>>93687750A White December Chapter Thirteenhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQzY_7glzWTefNyuvy9iskhip9mjcDwBUKkPbRJiTu_oh5Ceyva6WkDexLMkkrzjo2WRjBGe79hhTP7/pubtags: military, romance, Sora, Ao, Kanade, CiviaThere's a sex scene in this chapter and I'd like to know if it was too brief. There will be more as this will be reoccurring character but I am trying to figure out a good length for how the sex scenes should play out. I want to keep it in line with how good things are fleeting but I also don't want it to be so fleeting you don't enjoy it. Anyway, enjoy.
>>93749212I need to catch up on chapters 11 and 12 I think first, but on the topic of your sex scene length, it could help to peruse some of the archive and get an idea of what a nicely lengthed sex scene reads like. One that just has you feeling "that was just the right amount of sex" after you read it. If it helps, you can also think about it from your own desire of what kind of sexual acts you want to highlight. For me I go into it wanting specific positions and lines of dialogue.
>>93687720
W-WIP chan....Pl-Please let me finish you!
>>93748886Final boss is Kanade, who is rapidly absorbing brainpower from the parasite. Subdue her at the top of Cover HQ before she learns to use 100% of her brain.Going topless is mandatory.
>>93687817Right before walking to the altar, Marine pulls you aside, proclaiming her love for you and asking for one last time with her best friend.The thing is, you're the groom. She just wants to do you before calling you her hubby.
>>93750011I'm sort of out of my depth when writing more tender sex scenes which was why the one with Botan was shorter. I'm used to writing rape and uncomfortable kinds of sex so this is just like... weird to me. I have been reading some other stories to get a feel for how other authors handle it but for whatever reason it isn't quite translating to me. I just find there isn't much to really like... say. I'm going to try to make each encounter with Amarynn longer as the story goes as a show of their relationship but it's weird because for some reason I can't seem to really write a cohesive sex scene when it's not abusive lol. I do appreciate the advice though, it's just weirdly hard to get my head around it.
>>93753186You should try jerking off slowly while imagining how you would approach tender sex with your most desired person, in detail. It helps with ideas and issues that might not occur to you otherwise.
>>93753186Everyone starts somewhere, and different types of sex come easier to others. I think it might help you to think about how you can apply aspects of your strengths to a different tone and situation, and then it might translate to you a little more. Taking rape for instance, the core of which lies in a power dynamic. The rapist is exercising their power over the situation and individual to get what the release they want, and this ranges from just getting off themselves in conjuncture with the powertrip involved, or winning a mental battle of sorts over their victim. Tender and consensual intimacy can also have a clear power dynamic to them, but without the feeling of danger. One side always taking the lead, doing the work, etc. I think you can translate that into something more tender in your own works. Let a character want it rough from their partner, have them voice it, and let the top in the situation be all too eager to deliver. Partners communicating their wants is its own level of tenderness. You can also try to think about it from another angle you are more familiar with in terms of abuse. An action such as trailing a hand down someone's inner thigh can be used in such context to show possessiveness as well as breaching a boundary that should not have been crossed, it can also showing love and intimacy when put in the middle of a flirtatious conversation. Is some of this powering on any lights?
>>93740061>Sex with Gigi ends with you looking like you were attacked by cookiecutter sharks
>>93748886>>93752176And all the fights to try and break the parasite and stop the tit growth are paizuri battles. The Final Boss? Anon vs Ultra Genius Kanade-naizuri
>>93754049>not brainzuri from Kanade's enomorous pulsating Yakubian cerebrum
>>93754361>Fighting back against the nth dimensional super genius Kanade by literally fucking lewd thoughts into her brain.>Returning everyone's intelligence by literally making her cum her brains out>End with Kanade passed out and the rest of the holooffice barging in for an orgy as lewdness has fucked its way into their brain and bodies.
>>93753890It is. I'll probably try testing out a couple of different sex scenes just out of context and put them to a beta reader and see which resonates the best. I think what I need more than anything is to experiment a little and see what works and what doesn't, especially since the romance I'm going for is Sora basically trying to save a prostitute. >>93753845That is a good idea, the problem is it's just kinda... boring the way I do it unless it's with fetishes of course but that won't suit this story very well. I might even just do a couple of one shots and post them here and see which people like the most. I've had some ideas that never make it through the cutting room floor that would be perfect for something like that.
>>93687817What /wg/ really needs is a grounded High School AU full of anime teen melodrama
>>93756190I think that would be a good exercise. When I dripped my hands back into smut for the first time in over a decade, I let it be a non-canon piece of a scene I just kept getting a literal and metaphorical writeboner for, and felt better afterward. Also taking on oneshots with the goal of shooting one load, or several depending on how it pans out, is also a way to find your groove.
>>93748501The Kami at Miko's shrine is one of fertility
>>93758230But I don't wanna relive my experience as a weird loser in high school...,
>>93761067>write myself, Anon, as the ultimate gigachad that gets the girl>also, write Anon as the weird kid i dunk on because im cooleither self insert or persih
>>93759670Suisei has been leaving offerings there for years to no effect.
>>93758230This but instead of melodrama it's a comedic slice-of-life
>>93763821She forgot one item.Unfortunately for her, the moment she corrects her mistake, all of her offerings will be accepted at once and she definitely ain't gonna be an idol for long afterwards.
>>93763821They have an effect, just not the same one as Miko.One sperm will give Suzy triplets
>>93764056We have that it's called Cover High (sorta)
"Live"
>>93758230>>93764056i mean it could be an anthology (?) style of series where it acts like the Amagami SS anime.It stablishes a bunch of characters and then it dedicates itself to a girl for a few chapters before hitting reset
not gonna lie.i kinda hate it
>>93767978While you were out partying, she studied the blade
>>93767978i have issues with every single part of it>jacket looks great, but hood is horrible>hair is great,the bandaids make it shittty>eyepatch is fine,but her eye looks bad>legs are fine, torso is bad>katana pose is cool, i hate her legs
>>93767080>>dedicates itself to a girl for a few chapters before hitting reset>BZZZT!>Wrong choice Anon.>Looks like I'll have to reroll you when this all resets.> [Play Dice: Khaos Blaze] That just sounds like set up for a meta yandere final girl. Other suspects are of course one the usual time shenanigans girls of Ame or Kronii, and The Archiver making some 'edits', Shiori.
>>93767978I love it
>>93767978i appreciate anything catering to my fetish for smol dominant girls
>>93772739If you are getting dominated by bijou then a hamster could fold you
>>93771290Shiori being the 4th wall breaker in an anthology series would be my pick.>Good to see you again. Or maybe this is your first time? Well, whatever. Have fun!
>>93773075I'd say the same about Bae, but hey we peddle fiction here, so I'm not gonna rain the guy's parade.
>>93772739>for smol dominant girlsPatrician, I wouldn't count Biboo in that group though.
>>93773075>>93772739>>93773826To go even further beyond a wet cat(male)!A wet rat (male)!
>>93775221You can't just be more pathetic than the girl and have it count as them dominating you. Outside of the girl herself having a complex and her abusing you is the first and only taste of power she will ever have, it ain't happening.
>>93773826Bae and Laplus work if you think of the "lore" and "fanon" versions. Chaos itself and super alien demongenuinely cant think of a dominant bijou or Suu or similar. Hell, Luna is there too
>>93775488Bae's lore will allow her to be any size and shape she wants at any time. Likely in her frenzy to overpower you she will make herself bigger than a building, and make a joke about you're now the rat in a cage and put you on a little hamster wheel. Laplus could dominate you if you use lore and her position within HoloX, but she isn't going to want to bone you anything. She would likely just order you around to get her stuff. If someone actually puts in the work they can work with something with unshackled, but that's a much bigger task than most of are willing to undertake.
>>93775150https://youtu.be/IgGfPuthd6E?t=3917
>>93767080Eh. Rather than an anthology that features a relatively blank slate, I'd rather the anthology feature an Anon written to match the chuuba focused. Each "Anon" is a different Anon, but still (You)
>>93776644Something like tzuresure children? Could work if You get cheeky>Luna's boyfriend sent me here. >Anon?>Yeah that guy. I always forget his name is so...different
>>93771290>>93776644>Each Anon is another iteration.>Another life born of different circumstances>Another roll of the dice, till he makes The Right Choice and ends up with her.
>>93777966>Player/dipshit Anon gets cured by dating a cute shionerd
>>93778508>Shiori forces Player Anon to actually engage with the game and fall in love with her naturally instead of using the cheat menu/using aphrodisiac drugs/using their timestop to get their dick wet.
>>93777524Yeah something like that. Although I don't even think you need to get tongue-in-cheek about it. Unironically just don't acknowledge it. Each Anon in the Archive is a different Anon, so the same logic applies, it's just all these stories take place in "Hololive High"
>>93687817all the Anons frkm the /wg/-verse band together to gangbang Shiori (all according to her plans)
>>93780097>"Sorry, but I'm loyal to my wife."
>>93780097>"I don't have sex with women I don't love. Sorry."
>>93773075>>93775150well i guess its a giantess enjoyer thing, where if a girl had even the tiniest inkling of enforcing her will on others then no one could stop herin one of those alignment charts, biboo would be like "abuses her power but not actually dangerous, at least not intentionally"https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MiKlSx5qIIY
>>93782114I need a BEEG Biboo to tease me like that.....
How's your contest submission coming along Anon?
>>93784236I've got the idea>Chuuba mom follows her son(You) to a college party to make sure he doesn't do something stupid, blending in the with the students. Between the drinks and the attention she's getting for her mature looks she gets really horny and once her son finds her and drags her to an empty room to ask her why the fuck she's there, she can't keep her hands to herself and they fuck.I don't know who I want to use though, I was leaning towards Marine but I'm not sure.
>>93786572Mio or Koyori
>>93753186If you want some tension, you can have the POV character be anxious about whether they will mess up, and feel inadequate compared to what their lover deserves. But they try to seem confident on the outside. That way you have tension on two levels, whether it goes well and whether the insecurity is noticed.
>>93786572>Lui>Pekomama (and maybe pekora gets dragged in)>Mio>Botanthese are also good options
>>93775488You can write Luna to be dominant as a demanding princess, it's not that far fetched. Her viewers are her knights that she commands by right.
>>93786572I think Marine could still work well. She would relish the attention she would get, and she's the most likely to use the excuse of watching over (You) as a means to relive her youth vicariously through her own son.Marine would also be more likely to drink too much, leading to her making a not so good decision...
>>93786572What of instead of hag its lolibaba and Old Witch Shion bangs her own son.
>>93775221>>93775341i like a bossy wet cat, but i think it gets more in the territory of "I know what I like and I have no shame"plus i think its cute when they're happy about getting their way, like an actual cat...
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>>93775922Really Laplus might more or less put Lui in charge of you because as the Leader, Laplus knows to delegate tasks to her subordinates. Lui's just really good at administration and being a boss, fitting of the Big Boss's second in command.Now Sadly Laplus is too busy doing important stuff (Totally not pushing up her rank in games) but Lui has plenty of time to you working on various actually important projects. Now how do you feel about being a cleaner? No not dealing with dead bodies but effectively being a housekeeper for the group
>>93784236It's going. In actually a bit worried that it'll be too shirt
Make your 2view oshi famous by writing a horrific abuse story about her. She'll thank you one day for putting her on the map with that association.
>>93786572I'd kill to fuck mommy Mio or mommy Lui, but I'll still nut to it if it's Marine
>>93786572>>93788294My picks are>Aunt Lui triying to be a good aunt and a good sister to your mother. Ultimately she feeds your fetish and you two fuck>Pekomama, worried that you might commit a mistake and get someone pregnant. Ultimately you pump her full of rabbits
>>93786572Marine is a great momcest pick and is one of the top options in my opinion. For the purposes of a story like this, you want someone who has a proclivity to lewdness but has enough of a screw-on to know it is taboo. They have to be "open" to the idea to be tempted by the pleasure it offers and Marine fits that to a tee. >>93789199 is right on the money. Marine is the type of drunk who keeps drinking too.Although, I think Marine fits "Holy shit my son is a man" and "Son takes over for gone Dad" scenarios better than the helicopter parent one. You could do Lui or Mio for those but that's kind of safe. I would actually suggest Noel as a backup choice. She has that "let mommy take care of you" type of energy and with tendency to get obsessed (like with Subaru) you can easily make that scenario work Dont do Pekomama, that's taking the easy route and is lamer than Mio or LuiNot to psych you out or anything but do you think you can make an effective smut piece within the word limit? The setup and tension are just as important as the sex with stuff like this.
>>93780798>>93780974>Shiorifucker Anon keeps running into fluff and slowburn Anon and getting"no way fag"'d
>>93780097>"I would sooner castrate myself with a rusty machete than cheat on my wife, who will also castrate me with a rusty machete if I do so">>93780097
