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>have a Towa wip because she deserves love>its stuck because i cant get it off the ground
>>94261811Reassuring Mori that you love her massive mammaries as she is quite insecure about her figure after being called a titcow all through highschool..
>>94261811You wake up to the sound of something crashing into your house followed by incessant screeching. It turns out to be a (likely autistic) harpy, clearly wounded. You've treated strays before, this isn't anything too new, just bigger and way more dangerous. And so you do your best to get her patched up and take care of the dumb bird while getting multiple claw marks and fractured bones yourself until she's finally in a good enough shape to leave.You try to help her take off.She doesn't. She just goes back inside to shovel your nuggies into her mouth and lock herself inside your gaming room. Any attempt to encourage her to leave ends with her either shaking her head or loudly screeching at you.Getting desperate, you sedate her, shove her sleeping body into a car and leave her miles away from your house. You don't feel good about it, but it's for her own good.When you try to get inside your house, the door refuses to budge. You've clearly unlocked it, but something is blocking it on the other side. Then you hear knocking on a nearby window.That stupid bird is looking at you from inside with a smug grin on her face.Looks like you now have a new roommate, one that isn't entirely keen on living on her own.Best of luck.
>>94262272This, but she was actually surrounded entirely by skeleton people because it was a reaper highschool. They'd often mock her for being fleshy (and booby) and in a clear need of getting her poor skeleton freed from its soft, fat and very dumb prison.
>>94262996"Whatchu' looking at smoothskin?"
>>94262996>"miss calliope where is ya uniform?">"I-Its my skin sir">"always something with you huh"
>>94262197Start in media res then unironically do>record scratch>freeze frame >Yep, that's me.>You're probably wondering how I got here.So you have something to start off rather than trying to bootstrap from nothing.
>>94265398I mean its at 2500 words so i should butcher it a bit and try to fit it in the contest.I wanna be lovey dovey with towa... then she tells me to cut it off but shes blushing and her tail is shaped like a heart...
anon, you forgot the contest anchor!
>>94265785Oh shit he's right!Contest Story Anchor!The /wg/ Writing Rumble is back on! The contest officially started on January 14 and ends on February 14 (23:59 UTC-12 time).If you wish to submit a story to the contest, reply to this post!Further rules and clarification can be found at:https://rentry.org/VTWRFF
>>94265652>Ask Towa for a kiss>"Eeeh...kimo">She still gives it to you>Carry on, revitalized>After a few minutes notice her sulking>You didnt give a Kiss back Dammit takomaki tulpa
>>94264901That would imply she's not wearing her uniform or that it's under her skin
>>94266782>that it's under her skinYeah, it's her bones. Haven't you been to the underworld before? Skeletons everywhere. Nice people- so long as you don't imply they're inferior to anyone with flesh and blood.
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>>94261811Cecilia gets cursed and now everything she touches either turns into coffee if it's a liquid or gets a coffee scent. The only way to lift the curse? Drinking three cups of coffee for a month.Can she survive this ordeal without getting mindbroken into becoming a coffee enjoyer?
>>94270441>Day 1>smug Cecilia shouting "Piece of cake!">Day 30>Cecilia with dull eyes doing peace signs with both hands while a bit of coffee drips from her smiling lips and Bae, Raora and Bijou offer her more cups
>>94270441>Collapsing in agony as CC turns your blood to CoffeeOr>Helping Cecilia get her daily dose of coffee by cumming straight down her throat.
>>94270866Oral with Cecilia sounds like it's gonna scrape your dick down into a pencil
>>94270980Naruhodo...CC anal only coffee (cum) challenge so she doesn't have to drink it.
>>94261811You're a zurinant, a glorified vampire that needs paizuri to avoid going insane and turning into a monster. Your only hope? Noel's rack.Unfortunately for you, she's a bit racist.Can you convince her to save your life?
>>94273249Hard mode: Your only option is Suisei. Can you even get any semblance of nourishment from her flat chest before you go insane???
>>94274899I can with this baby.Either I get it done or I die in 30 seconds.
>>94274899>>94273249Impossible mode: Shion. Will only give it and when you're already halfway turned into a monster, and barely has anything to give anyway.
>>94276386At that point, you won't be asking, you will shotgun backflip into her lack of a chest and get naizuri out of her insteadWorth it even if it's too late
>>94276539>Anon snaps starts raping Shion's breasts because they're the only tits in range.>Rapidly loses his mind as Shion fights back but then...>She starts to welcome it.>Anon passes the point of no return but still continues the naizuri.>Blows his load then gets confused when Shion starts kissing his cock and calling him Darling.
don't croak yet
>>94262996Actually, what if you were a young skeleton man with a crush on the fleshy reaper? While others are disgusted by her, you find the whole thing confusing and fascinating. Is she really a skeleton wrapped in all this extra stuff? You see her eat, what's that like?But you're a bit shy and don't know how to approach her or even how to appease her. Whatever you try often ends up failing and she just looks puzzled or disgusted.Then you have a brilliant idea and wrap yourself in flesh. It gives you the confidence to approach her for once, but then she screams at the top of her lungs because you look like Terminator on a bad day. A really bad day.
>>94241845>>94259163If you were more japanpilled you would just combine PMC and idol activities: combat idols who hold idol concerts after successful missions.
>>94280952But I like having tough professional killers be forced to engage in entirely unfamiliar and significantly less violent activities, whether it's becoming teachers, babysitters, regular students or idols.It's not the same if they've been trained to do both. The transition from awkward and ill-fitting imitation to genuine heartfelt performance is what matters.I just really liked stuff like Major Peyne as a kid and still think it's a neat premise.
>>94280952Or how about... a PMC whose members HAVE to maintain a cover as idols? >Cover CorpThe name is already perfect
>>94281617sorta makes me think of sakura wars, but without the mechs
>>94281348Based
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Why does Raora work so well with the hand emojis?
>>94285831Well she is Italian; the hand emoji are foreshadowing for her doing the hand thing in 3d when it comes.
>>94285831Ignoring the obvious Italian=wild gesticulation, Bijou mentioned Raora does actually wave at her screen displaying chat when she greets them. It's not unbelievable to think she does the same when laughing, especially when she's talking about JustChads
>>94281751Wish Sega didn't turn it into a musuo :(
>>94285831It helps that she's riding the line between mature and cute
>>94261811Shiori sets out to seduce one of the only people with the keys to The Cell the first apprentice of the Grim Reaper
>>94287239Raora is either a zoomer or a millenial.Theres no mature in that shitposting kitty
>>94287632I meant in terms of design, we're talking about still images after all
>>94287660Fair. I do think its funny people thought she was a hag and then she's like two steps above from bijou's brand of brainrot and gacha
>>94289254What if Mococo but rrat!Ayame?
>>94289403What do you mean, Mococo being cuter and sexier but also lazy and slutty?
>>94289542No that she's REALLY REALLY racist against humans
>>94289581I think that's a different Ayame.
>>94289542It's whatever rrat!Ayame means to you but transposed onto Mococo.
>>94289783I guess they're both ancient and demonic creatures...
>>94291361God I want to run my hands over her hips and butt and tummy so bad
>>94292605Just don't cut yourself doing it
>>94292643It'll be fine. My headcanon is that she can control her sharpness at will.
>>94292605>>94292643>>94293970Anons...Anya's body is the handle her hair is the blade part.
>>94294086Me jackhammering Anya's butthole (she forgot to shave it)
>>94261811Anon gets Liz as a Blade (think sci-fi magic familiar) and now she's his for life. She vows to serve him faithfully and guide him in whatever journey awaits.But then he immediately finds a better Blade via gacha and abandons her like the obsolete non-viable meme she is. Not content with simply letting her gather dust in his inventory forever, he throws her out.She doesn't get the memo and seeks him out like a battered wife to no avail.You find her crying on a bench, drinking herself to sleep, but still thinking about her owner. You remember some daft bloke's words: "make a girl cry, that's not going to fly; make a girl smile, you pass the trial."Get to work before a giant gorilla finds her or she hurts herself even more.
>>94294086Okay, I still want to grope her.
>>94294086Wouldn't you want to sniff her hair more though?
>>94296838u right.all hornyness aside, just cuddling with her fluffy hair while she complains "its hot" but doesnt move its heaven
>>94291361It looks good, but I wish she was broader and softer in the torso
>>94300471Would you let Azki navigator control your every move until even the thought of blinking without her command seems repulsive to you?
>>94301510No. But I'd let her augment my super solider capabilities
>>94301510This is just AZKI 's version of "would you love me if i was a worm?"
>>94299215POV: You're tied up and hanging from the ceiling so Biboo is going to cut you down (she is a total noob with the katana)
>>94304436I feel like Shion would be a total kiss slut. Like you could defuse any argument with her with a good kiss and she gets upset if you don't kiss her often
>>94306178Meant for>>94305522Obviously
>>94306178Absolutely. Its just a wholesome version of instaloss. She's being all bratty because you were running late to the date so you give her a smooch and she's putty in your hands, her switch flipped. Kissing would help alleviate her anxieties about the relationship, so naturally she wants to do it often. >she gets upset if you don't kiss her oftenShion sulking because you didn't kiss her good night last night...
>>94307074>come home late from work to an angry Shion pretending to be asleep>go to bed without kissing her because you fall asleep nearly instantly>wake up before she does because you're a good little wageslave and go to work>Nearing 24 hours without a kiss, Shion is furious>So mad she does something she said she'd never do because she finds it super embarrassing>Shion shows up at your work, homemade lunch in hand and won't leave until you kiss her
>>94309747salacious older women...
>>94311184You wouldn't fall for the charms of this lonely older woman, right anon?
>>94261811Destroying Ame's fartbox
>>94311643Okay, Ame suffering from diarrhea it is
>>94311718it can happen after the anal sex is done
>>94311357of course not. My young, sexually shy gf has nothing to worry about in regards to my perennially horny and lonely nieghbour
There should be a story where Mumei is an autistic whale-obsessed nerd and in order to study them closer, she joins Kronii's crew. Mumei meets a bunch of colorful characters on the ship, with the one closest to her being the cannibalistic muscle mommy Bae who she shares a bed with (no homo).But then everything goes to shit when it becomes apparent that Kronii is fucking insane and is perfectly willing to get her own crew horribly maimed and killed as long as she can kill the bastard that took her heart: a giant green whale with trees branches sticking out of its head. Between the obsessed captain and the borderline demonic sea mammal, it's hard to define who is the true evil.Mumei ends up being the only survivor of this ordeal thanks to the coffin Bae was preparing for herself as she felt her death approaching.This is a very novel idea, but I'm not sure about the name. Maybe Mocha Dick?
>>94308222"Heyyyyy. You only kissed me five out of seven times in the past twenty-four hours! Isn't that kind of unacceptable?"
>>94311357Of course not. She's just coming over to give advice on my wips, clean my apartment, cook me dinner... regular stuff
>>94314605Dommy brats are my weakness....
>>94314605>You're twelve kisses behind on your weekly Shion kiss quota>and it's Sunday
>>94317522Unfortunately, Shion's forwardness would disappear the second she gets her kiss. Once your lips part, shes a melty, lovey-dovey mess.
>>94312670It would be funnier if Mumei joined the Not-Pequod thinking it was a whale study expedition.>"There she blows!" Captain Kronii shouted. "Prepare to take my spear, you abominable beast!" >"B-B-But..." Mumei clutches the Whale Encyclopedia, notepad, and whale plushie in her arms. "I thought we were gonna study whales!"
>>94322217>"Oh, but we ARE going to study this whale, sweetie! Let's see how it responds to A HARPOON IN ITS EYE!"Mumei then proceeds to wrap both her arms and legs around Kronii's own arm to stop her while the whale is busy treating Bae like a screaming paddle ball.
>>94322217>>94312670>>94322586Then the ending epilogue reveals "Kronii" was Mumei all along via years of hypnosis and training and she shatters a Mirror. I've never watched Moby Dick.
>>94323405>Ishmael (Mumei) was actually Ahab (Kronii) all alongI've gone through this fucking song and dance in /lcg/ last year, I am not doing it again
>>94323405OH NONOT MEEEEI'VE NEVER LOOOST CONTROOOL YOU'RE FACETO FACE WITH THE MAN WHO SOLD THE WOOOOORLD
>>94317522>>94319785Hear me out, Bratty Witch and Wet Cat (Male).
>>94324342Well don't leave us hanging. Explain.
>>94325972What if AquShio but you're Aqua.
>>94327447So your brains leak out of your ears the longer you two talk?
>>94327447I have two inital prroblems.1. Aqua was not a wet cat in that dynamic2. AquaShio is a pretty sisterly dynamic
>>94261811Gigi gets really drunk one night and decides to make an Automata 7 Destruction members stream using a sleeping Cecilia, hiring a shadow wizard to install all sorts of crap onto the automaton's brain until she passes out. Unfortunately, being drunk, she forgets to use the equivalent of a virtual machine.Cecilia, unaware of the whole thing, wakes up feeling a bit odd. But then everything crashes down during a meeting with other Justice members and she begins spouting nonsense (mainly ads) while being stuck between attempting to molest other members or trying to get them to fuck her.
>>94330737>Cecilia starts spouting Ads>SHADOW WIZARD MONEY GANG WE LOVE CASTING SPELLS >Elizabeth considers this a form of witchcraft
>>94332658>WE MUST BURN THE WITCH>BLACK ARTS ARE NOT TO BE TOLERATED>PURGE THIS VILE ARTIFACT>RID THE WORLD OF THIS MALICE>LET THE HOLY FIRE CLEANSE THIS HEINOUS CONSTRUCT>"Liz you're talking to yourself again"
>>94261811sex with orange woman
>>94334797The hats stay on
>>94334830im taking off the hats and aligning them on top of the bedframe so Kiara can get very concious of them watching
>>94334797Sex with Blue Woman.
>>94334797>>94334893Bluefields women are so unbelievably sexy
>>94335773Weirdly enough I think his Kiaras are sexier than his Moris despite both of us being deadbeats, could just be him tweaking his style a little bit or something though
>>94336030some artists tap into supernatural powers and just produce the hottest thing you've ever seen
>>94336030Yeah I think his Mori's skew towards being cuter while his wawa's are just pure sex
>>94334893>>94336030>>94336333He can make really hot moris, but when he goes in a binge for another girl you can tell he(she??) is fucking horny.Tangentially related but id say all the bluefield wawas feel like they are inviting you for a date and hinting they are down to get dirty.
Bae and Kiara get into a catty argument and they want you to be the one that breaks it off.When you try and take the easy "both of you are correct" they team up to get you
bump and dump
>>94339197>Kronii attempts to rugpull your shitcoin>is a tad too late and you prevent it.>now, several thousand in debt, she's pretty much your live in sex bitch
>>94339399Using money gained, I'd use this opportunity to give her a breast reduction surgery, make her starve and then replace her limbs with doll prosthetics so that I can dress her up in nice dresses. If she complains about becoming my little doll, I'll take her tongue and vocal cords too.
>>94261811>Transcending history and the world, a tale of Chuuba's and swords eternally retoldhttps://youtu.be/VdfU9al-4GA?si=IOPqsdxUdjmqzrlV
>>94337444>Ruffling some feathers spinoff where you hatefuck Bae>Then both stories join in the middle when both girls discover they are not Anon's nemesis>Team up to fuck him up (literally and figurative)
>>94337444>Bae and Kiara finally settle their rivalry by finding out which one gives the best head.
>>94317845Would Shion accept 12 kisses in a row?
Wip Status, doko?
>>94344040Only if they're good.
>>94346857finally came up with an idea I like and have a good idea of how to condense it while still telling a decent story
>>94346857Oh, you know. Just making character sheets.If I may share with the rest of the class, I found that asking yourself "What if?" questions about your characters that force them to solve a problem is not only fun, but gives you insight into what their personalities are and could be. >What if Botan woke up in a strange room without any memory of the past 24 hours?>What if Botan got hit by a car that broke her spine, rendering her unable to move from the waist down? >What if Botan got arrested for a crime she didn't commit? >What if Botan got terminal cancer?They can either be questions that have something to do with their role in the plot, or just random questions. As long as they force the character to solve a problem somehow (or allow them to choose not to solve it, which would still give insight into how they are as characters).
>>94347826What if Botan sucked dick so good it made people rethink their entire lives?
>>94348094She'd probably find it amusing that she's that good at sucking dick. But, ultimately, it'd just get in the way of her playing more games. It would be a nice skill to have when the time comes and she has to use it, though. On Anon, for example.
>>94347826Naruhodo...>What if Nene landed in Kansas? >What if Nene was HIV Positive?>What if Nene was betrayed and locked in the hyperbolic time chamer? ...I don't get it.
>>94349127>>What if Nene was betrayed and locked in the hyperbolic time chamer?Come on Nenechi feel the E S S E N C E
>>94349127The point is to see how the character would react to a problem as their selves and, through that, see what kind of personality they have. So, if Nene landed in Kansas one night in her spaceship, she'd try to greet the Earthlings in peace (since she's so friendly and all that). The Earthlings (maybe some farmer and his wife), however, would probably try shooting her with a 12 gauge. So how would she get around that? Also, why did she land? Was her ship broken? Does she have to repair it? Does Nene even know how to repair her own ship? If Nene tested HIV positive, the first thing she'd probably ask the doctor is, "What is HIV? Does it taste good??" Then let's say the good doctor explains it. She'll probably be like, "Ehhhh???"To contrast, if someone like Suisei was told she was HIV positive, her eyes would widen and she'd either tell the doctor that they must've gotten it all wrong, or immediately rack her brains to remember who the hell she fucked recently, sweat running down her forehead as she does so. The method could help jog one's brain to think of how a certain chuuba would act on things (or what their personality would be toward certain things), especially if there's no existing source to use a direct basis.
>>94347826>>What if Botan got arrested for a crime she didn't commit?Conclusion: NePoLaBo as the A-Team. And Botan like B.A. Barracus ain't getting on a plain!
>>94347826What if Mumei wanted your baby but you were reluctant to provide?
>>94351678That's what the condom is for.
>>94351678>Chasing after Mumei when she takes your baby the moment you look away.
I just want Ninisanni Scenario 3...
>>94353094Wasn't that hard confirmed as intentionally being a part 2 of 3 that will never get a third part?
>>94353196Not hard confirmed. There was meant to be a third part I think it was soft confirmed (due to the public perception of NijiEN), but the door was left open for a potential third installment still.
>>94353285I mean if that's how you read these posts then sure >>79500381> https://dullachan.itch.io/ninisanni-scenario-2/devlog/759009/thoughts-on-ninisanni-2-and-whats-nextEven being generous it would be at minimum an X year anniversary after nostalgia kicks in.
>>94353838>But I think I won't. At least for now.That's what I was thinking of. Soft confirmed, but not hard confirmed. Door left open.
>>94352328Anon you ought to inspect that condom a little closer
>>94354676Oh, that's just the pressure valve to keep the condom from breaking. Mumei said it's safe as long as the hole is small.
>>94354676She said she's a bird, it's fine.Though now that I think about it, it is weird that her "cloaca" isn't where it's supposed to be.
i need whiter women, i'm talking "pat the burger with a napkin" white, "spend 15 minutes looking for the perfect video to watch only to use it as background noise" white, i'm even talking about "making an entire 30 minute argument because you didnt answer the question in her allotted, unrealistic timeframe" white
>>94357071That sounds like what lunch with Kiara would be like
>>94357071Same
>>94346896Well, she complains but she never pulls away...
>>94308222You should have kissed her before going to work, at least.
>>94364176If Kaela was your gf, she'd allow you to fuck her in whatever way you like as long as you don't interrupt her gaming session.
>>94366883>Marine the script isn't THAT weird. Now say the line.
>>94367085Marine WOULD say the line, she's just annoyed that you didnt ask her to undress
>>94367436
>>94368421>I'm sorry Marine the studio didn't buy that the nudity would be tasteful
>>94367085>"I guess you really are my little pogchamp.">"...">"Anon I don't think the kids say this anymore."
>All this dere Shion talkI should get back to writing her.
>>94375828As long as you kiss her in the process
>>75961482>>75963522was archivediving and found this. its a fun concept
>>94373540I never realized Marine was this stacked........hag genetics at work
>>94375932She'll get her kiss alright, maybe even two!
>>94261811Your the first person in the insane asylum that can understand Liz because you went to an Oasis concert one time
>>94261750>>94265902Love Chills Before it Warmshttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQW2IiESCAc2a8AjxeZAlhQOcZGRIqvuHGP77Cl-yfGS5WtroGgXUPfwW8bf0Gyd3dJJeFsP3qEqT4u/pubTags: Fuwawa, Mococo, Lamy, Shiori, Nerissa, Fluff, SFWWordcount: 3000Had this idea rolling around in my head for a little bit and thought the contest and its theme was a good time to try and give it some life. This turned into a pretty fun exercise since the original concept I wrote out turned out to be almost 9k words.
>>94391676It's adorable yet... Feels kinda "confined" by the word count limit.I can feel the word crunch by how you described certain scenes and follow up jokes, and I can see where the plot wanted to go (struggle to anti-climax/plot twist to struggle to true end) but instead had to go (struggle to fakeout to rush into real end)It's cute but man does it just make me want the real romcom plot played out in long form so you can actually get the Advent-centered romcom end it wanted to deliver instead of the rush to it you had to write.
>>94391676Man i like it a lot, but i have to echo the thought of it being TOO constrained by the limitations. Its real cute and the whole idea is pretty fresh, but i wish you had time to explore this concept aplenty.Just letting you know that if you somehow go back to the 9k version ill be reading it frame one, because i really like this idea
>>94342162Actually it should be cowgirl
>>94261811Waking up and realizing that in a drunken bender, you absolutely destroyed your bro Gigi's ass. You converted her butthole from an anus to a semen carrying facility. You'd be surprised if she can even walk this morning after how long and hard you ruined that butt. Gigi just starts whaling on you with a pillow because not only does her ass hurt, your weird ranting is aggravating her hangover.
Rise
>>94391676Cute. Now this is the High School romcom energy I'm looking for. I enjoyed it. Solid capturing of Advent's character. I particularly enjoyed the Shiorism. I'm with everyone else in that the 3k limit is a hamper. I can see where the cuts were made, especially with how it just kind of ends.Release the 9k cut
>>943468577k words at the moment. Honestly, it ballooned up larger than i thought from my target 5k. First time using Omniscient third person. A lot of firsts for this fic. I think I am proud of it, which may disappear when editing.
I have no idea why writing smut comes to me easier than writing non sexual stuff. Instant 20/20 vision when sex happens. Like I firmly know what I want, and how to get it.
>>94410161It's the difference between having to directly think of what they could possibly do in dialogue and action, and just having to think of how they'll respond with a dick shoved up their ass.
>>94411862But how WOULD they react?
>>94413957usually they panic, because they did not want an penis up their ass at this time.
Dont die, alright?
>>94416059
>>94416345I hope CC comes back for more Chapters.
See you later, Sakamata
>>94261811Nene tries to give you 'The Talk'
>>94419619Cute CC
>>94420915B-But why? I use protection all the time!
>>94420915No, Nene, babies aren't made when a man rubs a woman's flower all over his butt.
>>94423100>Ok you lost me. Then what are the bees for?
>>94414015Skill issue, honestly.
>>94393875>>94395443>>94404924Hey thanks for checking it out and the nice words. The low word count definitely kneecapped it a little bit, but I both wanted to both participate in the contest this time around, as well as see if I could manage to cut it down and still tell the same story at its core. I'm really glad the concept was fun to read through, since as soon as I started the second scene I was pretty into it. I did keep the original version since it's basically its own story as well, and I'm also going to give it some touch ups I came up with while making the shortened version. Cutting scenes almost abruptly was a big obstacle for me with this, as well as deciding what scenes I can really cut and still have the same end point. Originally there's a heist scene for Lamy's gift, and then I made a version that was about 1/3 of the length, but I still couldn't keep that in either. Justice also plays an actual role in the story. Advent as your possy and support group is a dynamic I really enjoy, so I'll gladly release it at some point. Maybe after the contest voting happens, since it might feel like a cheat somehow if a fic is in there and there is a longer version of it released as well.
>>94423145To make kids like you beehave.
>ay dio mio Raora. Look at that-a recurring motiff>GYAHAHAHAHAHAH
>>94424630So this is the spawn of the infamous Pink Panther.
>>94424630>A group of panthers is called a "claw of panthers". However, it's unlikely that anyone has ever seen a group of panthers in the wild because they are solitary animals.>ywn be cornered by the rare(and horny!) female Panthera claw
>>94424930>Ill avenge you, oh great great tata.>Your life was cut short...by that DASTARDLY panther>Now i shall enact vengeance on its great descendant!>*Anon gets crushed by a cartoon anvil*>"GYAHGAHAHAHAH"
>>94425015you cannot handle a hag panther and two zoomer panthersyou'd die and your buttcrack would be full of flour
>>94425583Maybe you would, I'd make it out alive. Looking like I filled in for a scratching post, maybe, but that's a bonus to me.
>>94261811Mori being flattered but confused when you go for dinner with her over 500k.
>>94336596His girls are almost designed to be spanked, it's unreal.
Does this dialogue and interaction between Marine and La+ sound believable? I've only seen clips of Marine and I'm not familiar at all with La+'s personality.>“Ahh, those doll joints are just too cute! I wanna play house with her! Lap-chan, how much do you think it would cost to take her home with me? Maybe I’ll just steal her?”>Cecilia was used to playing a tsukkomi routine, but it’s a little harder to keep a straight face for two crime lords than your smart-ass best friend. Especially when one of them is cooing and fondling you like an old lecher. While not an archdemon, Marine’s name has plenty of reach in its own right. Her notoriety for pillaging is only preceded by her brazen lewdness.>“It’s Lap-sama – I mean, My Dark! And the only place she’s going is the scrap yard.”>“Aww, but Lap-chan–”>“My Dark! That’s an order or the deal’s off!”
>>94429768I think it works, specially since they are "playing a role" here
>>94429768I think its fine. You could have Marine gush longer about how cute Ceci is since Marine loves cute things. Marine treating Lap like a kind falls in line with her as well.
>>94419657>Mococo goes on some trip for a month, so Fuwawa starts doting on you to ease her Mogojan withdraws
>>94433132>Go right, Anonjan! Right!>Fuwawa that's a wall this is a race track!>How do you know it won't work?>It's a fucking wall!>Bau Bau!
Moona needs a fic
>>94439029I don't care what she does in 3D, I am not viewing the Bijou as anything other than a gem to be protected.
>>94439889What kinda fic you looking for?
>>94440395Sex aside something that fits her smug aura.Extra points if it keeps her pokerface
>>94440877I feel like that work best in a story that has a heavy emphasis on giving the reader the story from her perspective. Something to show why she continues to be smug and wants to keep herself under control when with you. For me the way I'd want to write moon goddess avatar sex would be as a "Thank you" or from her perspective something she should just do. The latter seems to lend better to her keeping the pokerface on.
>>94440877Playing strip poker with Moona, but she's only lost her boots and socks but you're down to your underwear
>>94261811Fubuki uses her 'Uploading my consciousness into games' machine and plays some Fantasy Adventure 23. She's very close to max level and heads over to The Cave That Resets Your Levels Back to 1 and Disables Magic.Surely, since she's so strong and has such powerful magic, she doesn't have to worry too much about the enemies in the cave, Rape Goblin, Rape Insect, Rape Black International Trade Student, and me specifically.
>>94442452Nah.Shed start by her underwear, having you sweat bullets as she slowly bleeds you out
>>94423744I think that skipping over the flower scene to "you just get it" is an example of a good cut. A heist might have bogged the pacing down, even if the point was to show off Advent shinanigans.
>>94441521>from her perspective something she should just do"It's not weird, a proper goddess rewards her dutiful followers by letting blow their load over their chest and face"
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>>94445192>Every day you pray to your moon goddess>Only ever ask for one thing: a girlfriend>Outside of this you're a normal, devout follower>Eventually she gets so annoyed always hearing your prayers every night she comes dow to the mortal realm to 'fix' this and shut you up
>>94445192>>94446940>moona, as an avatar of the goddess, cant process emotions like us and is often seen as distant and offputting>(you) are one of the few that gets itopens the door for some drama and sex if its her wanting to give a "clear message"
>>94446940Sounds like a less Christian version of the prompt of Kanata showing up at your door to marry you. I like it
>>94448499Naruhodo...Moona comes to you've become Illiminated and sacrificed a dozen lives to the Moon in service to the faith.
>>94261811John Cover's department of marketing has made a fascinating discovery. Some people do like short girls being dominant and that market is ripe for the taking.With this REVOLUTIONARY piece of Info, you are instructed to be the practice dummy for the short girls at the company. Of course you say yes, it means less paperwork and none of them can dom for shit.Little did you know, that a lot of these girls are about to enter a world they never tought they would love.This idea can fix our lack of dom girls and might make someone write laplus giving you a footjob so good it makes you shoot like a rifle
>>94449809Look, if any small girl is gonna give a footjob its gonna be Anya. Lap can do sumata
>>94452206Sorry but as alluring as that thought is, there's only one queen of steppies and is the one with highheels
>>94261811You're a little boy who's feeling lonely after your parents died in a car accident and your big sis struggling to take care of you decides to give you a dog to help with that.But when you check a dog shelter, your attention is immediately drawn to some tailed woman barking and howling inside a cage. For whatever reason, you decide she's the one and bring her with you. Your mother protests, but ultimately gives in. Everyone gives you looks, but you're happy with the purchase.And so begins a mostly wholesome story of a boy and his fujo dog woman thing (who may or may not be a member of a squad of heroes who'll need her back in the team to save the day, abandoning you for the greater good)
>>94452967>anon's mother protests his pet fujo from beyond the graveweird direction to take your prompt in but okay
>>94453678Fuck, I forgot to replace that with "sister" after rewriting the first sentence.
>>94449809First I'd make them read a bunch of femdom doujins. Then, uh, put it into practice I guess? Maybe they should have known hiring a guy that's a total sub to teach brats how to be dominant wasn't the best idea....
>>94452672I'd rather have Luna sit on my face
>>94455600sitting on you its a second level assigment and sitting on your face while stepping on your dick is an optative so its up to luna-sama
>>94455600God, I would LOVE to lick, nibble and suck on Luna's labia and clitoris, listening to her animalistic squeaks of pleasure
>>94458369You'd think it tasted like cotton candy with how long I'd be down there
>Gura Bijou Nazuri>Bae Laplus Sumata>Luna Anya Footjob>Kanata Shion Abuse (Physical and mental)>Chloe Aqua Ghostjob
>>94445129Yeah I was actually kinda proud that I did that cut and identified it as a prime piece to remove to help meet the wordcount limit. While it is good for Advent hi-jinks, it was also intended to introduce other characters and have them involved in the plot on a surface level as well. Also>Trying to keep a low count>While Shiori exists>Status: Impossible
>>94463569Meanwhile an example of a "bad cut" was the 'Nerissa win' given that she was just thrown in to round out Advent. A good compression would have either given ito to Mococo (or Fuwawa) and focused shenanigans on them or Alternatively swapped out Fuwamoco for Shioraven as your friend support group seeing as the whole of Advent couldn't even be fitted in (Rip biboo's one sentence cameo).
>>94452967Plot twist: Justice were the ones who put her up for adoption in the first place.
>>94464573Yeah I can kinda see what you're saying there. I think given the constraint, I wasn't able to really show that Nerissa is the only one who would actually care about having a date, since the others didn't really mind. >mfw I had to remove Bijou's only line that managed to stay in since it didn't say anything new or impactful
>>94454255>"Like this?">"No! You gotta put your heel into it! Now berate me!">"You p-piece of shit?">"Is that a question or a statement?">"Wh-what?">"Cmon be decisive! You can do it!">"You-You piece of shit!">"Better. Continue">"You...huh....idiot!">"Thats a tsundere. Ah forget it, see you on monday. Don't forget to do your haughty laugh reps"
>>94455600>>94456859I have a burning need to draw or write something related to this, I need her to milk me dry.
>>94466873If you do make sure to include the very important detail of Luna's roya garterbelt because i love ojousamas in porn but everyone gets them naked instantly instead of slowly making them shed the layers as they get more and more into the sex
>>94466873pregnant towa
>>94466873Would she be a pillow princess?Who would be the biggest pillow princess in Hololive?
>>94466583 >"Okay I read that doujin you sent me, how about I try t-this....">Lap gives you a slight push, causing you to take a step back>"Wha? Y-you're supposed to fall over!">"Put more force into it, that was barely a shove">Laplus shoves you again, but too strong this time. Aiming to shove you onto the bed, she overshoots and you roll onto the floor, hard>"Ahhhh! I-I'm sorry!">"Stop! It's okay to be a little rough but you can't apologize! Act like you meant it, you're supposed to be in control! Ugh, try it again from the beginning.....">You get up off the floor and walk back to the door. Laplus fidgets in the doorway, looking as nervous as when she started yesterday. This is gonna be a long process, you can tell.....
>>94468700Luna? I think she could be but not necessarily in the dead fish sense. For her its a find of control play - you serve her and make her feel good and your reward is her moans.>Who would be the biggest pillow princess in Hololive?IRyS is the first person to come to mind when that term gets mentioned so her.
Dozo!
>>94472952I guess she's just a regular princess.
>>94443006>Fubuki uses her 'Uploading my consciousness into games' machine and plays some Fantasy Adventure 23You and your favorite chuuba get ahold of some sort of magical device that lets you experience video games as if they were real replacing (or teaming up with) the main character. You proceed to break all of them, ruining every classic video game story.
>>94449809i feel like this is kinda normal in femdom-y fetishessometimes you want the shameless pervert and sometimes you want a more normal girl (who might turn into a shameless pervert)the great equalizer here is the fact that almost everyone desires power to some degree, y'know exactly like Sauron's ring and how it can even leverage Sam's simple desire for gardeningneedy and possessive can be turned into controlling, greed can be turned to exploitation, or maybe a girl is just too nice to refuse to play along with perverted fantasies
>>94449809I love leg belts and chuuba bling-bling but those horn belts made me laugh
Bump.
Bump
God, please let me have sex with the chuubas
>>94482460Damn it, shiori, stop inserting yourself in other people's fics and get back into your own universe.
>Master you've been working a lot on your WIP. Dont you think you should,hmmmm i dont know, take a break? Drink some tea with your maid? That's what i Fink anyway
>>94485070I kind of understand bratbro now...
>>94485070>"I need to finish my manuscript otherwise my noble tutor azki will get mad but my maids Kiara and Raora keep tempting or laughing at me"Coming soon, the latest and hottest light novel in the market
>>94485873>ooooh~ what do we have here? Is that- PFFFFT HAHAHAHAHA, Is that a sex scene you rushed to get to? Anon, Anon. With such few words, a measly thing like this will never arouse the minds of readers.
>>94486203>Exit the Broom closet,tightening your belt and wiping the lipstick>Dammit! That "tea break" was way too long. Still, its only 3pm. You can get some words in before Azki-Sama comes and reviews it>Turn the corner, get to your study and stop.>Oh no>Nonono>Its 3pm...yet why do You smell pizza?>You open the door>Sitting there, with her big ass glases, your other maid is reading>Reading your manuscript>You brace but its too late >"GYAHAHAHAH THIS IS SO DUMB!"
>>94261811You're a pirate who sets up his base in a small island in the archipelago of Holoria. Your hear rumors of a nearby city-state Hoshimachi where the ruler has a beautiful daughter called Suisei. You conquer Hoshimachi and make Suisei your sex slave. While you're celebrating your victory it comes to your attention that there's a tribe of oni nearby and that their chieftain has a beautiful daughter called Ayame. You vanquish them and make Ayame your sex slave. Your territory now borders Pekoland and you hear that the king there has a beautiful wife and daughter. The whole thing just keeps snowballing and before you know it you've united the chaotic lands of Holoria under one banner and people celebrate you as a hero who brought peace and stability to the realm... before your decadent lifestyle and your tyrannical and corrupt administration manages to piss off everyone. And then the Houshou Pirates start raiding your lands.
>>94486203>Raora keeps tearing into everything you write, and she keeps laughing at all the tropes you enact>HAHAHA! A recurring character trope? Oh nonono! IS THAT A TITLE DROP?!>You don't want to be a bitch, but it's getting to you>Eventually, you stop updating your WIP, you're not good enough>Raora comes to your office with your WIP in hand>Asks why you haven't been writing it>You ask her what's it to her, she never fucking likes anything you write>A flash of sadness, and a pained smile brushes over Raora's eyes>"... Who told you I didn't like it?"
>>94487354>dramatic sad piano flashback, recontextualizing everyscene where she was laughhing at anons fics, replacing the initial mockery to laughter of joy
>>94487641So this is what it feels like to be Fubuki eating Fudookies huh.
What a great day to be on /wg/, I wonder which schizo is having a melty today!
>>94487749Dunno. He spams everywhere on the board and spams the same tired garbageSeems to be just a retard like the one who roleplays as ERB to do his cuck shit
Healing /wg/'s eyes
>>94488565I'll toss my hat in the ring
>>94488615that's a meaty iroha
>>94487354What if your girlfriend Raora just laughed at what you do in general?
>>94489616I think that would be because I just do everyday things like I'm Goofy.>Tripping over shit>Bumping into stuff>Taking on what I can with a smileIt may be unintentional, but how much I make her laugh is why she loves me.
>>94487959>ERB>cuck shitWhat kind of NTR dynamic does Liz even have? Girl who makes you cheat on your kemono wife? Girl who is unintelligible but inexplicable hot?
>>94489616>not only you gamble all your savings but then you also put you and raora in massive debt>also, you lose your house and everything in it>you're now homelessWill she still laugh?
>>94489863No i mean an actual cuck retard who is obsessed with her acknowledging that holostars exist.he puts on a trip and pretends to be her "in love" with the dino holostar.
>>94488615Man I feel like Iroha is the one holomem that no one can decide on a 'canon' body shape. I know artists love to buff certain members but I constantly see her with different body shapes.
>>94489616>Raora is the gf that gasses you up and brags about you to her friends cause she thinks you're a catch.
>>94491248>Her favorite feature to brag about is your tight butt.
>>94490152I think it's less "can't decide on Canon" and more "complete refusal" since she's canonically a flatty/medium flattened via sarashi. The disagreement comes on whether she's magically a tit monster underneath all the bandages.
today i learned that Niko's dad is an actual tiger.huh
>>94491464>Niko is always Messing with you. Sends you this pic>Realizes way too late that her pubes are showing>Gets really embarassed and needs to come up with a way of deleting that pic off your phoneBut she doesnt know you are beating your dick like it owes you money to that pic
>>94490152>Iroha uses sarashi to hide her actually gigantic tits and oriental ninja illusion magic to conjure a cute feminine penis>you ravage her anus thinking she's a boy>get depressed when she reveals the truth
>>94491302>"He's so witty, he's always making me laugh. And he's really smart! He can calculate how much to tip in his head!" It's that crazy?">"Also his butt is really cute.">"Seriously you guys you should see how many squats her can do. It's impressive."
>>94491464I see... So this is the beautiful result of mixing kemono and human blood.
>>94261811In a stroke of genius La+ realizes the best parting gift to Chloe would to get her a baby. But who of HoloX would be the best to put a kid in her?
>>94494302>Each member goes about giving Chloe a child in their own wayLui>Uses a vetting and financial approach>Gets the best baby on the market for Chloe based on her preferences and parenting style Koyori>Just makes a Chloe baby clone in some test tubes with some of Chloe's sweatIroha>Gives Chloe a katana because like a child, it is an extension of one's self and needs the utmost careLaplus>Sneaks into a nursery and just steals one.>No one paid any heed to a small purple child in a jacket too big for her roaming about
>>94479740I like the ones where you have a guy in denial of his sub tendencies going with a girl that has no idea she can just force a guy to do things. She slowly discovers how much she likes that control over him, starting with small simple things, then going further and getting bolder. Side note, I need to get choked by some Suithighs.....
>>94489616>Raora laughing at you holding your newborn twins before passing out because of exhaustion
Will you help your coworker finish her report before it's due?
>>94497144I thought that was my boss?
>>94494302>But who of HoloX would be the best to put a kid in her?Why me, John Holox, of course
>>94497144Hell no. I got my own work to worry about
>>94494302Chloe accidentally triggers some kind of fucked up Evangelion shit (Third Impact, Human Instrumentality) while she's playing around in Koyori's lab and all men in the world merge into one. As one they fuck Chloe and get her pregnant. HoloX help her getting the world back to normal.>KOYORI: Must be pretty weird, eh?>CHLOE: What?>KOYORI: Well, in practice, you've now had sex with the entire human male population of the planet Earth.>CHLOE: What are you trying to imply? That I'm a slut? You fucking bitch...!!
>"Oh hey dude you okay? Looking kinda tired haha.....You can always sleep on ya boi's couch, if you want."
