Hello, dumping Chapter 1 translation. Please give it a read and tell me what you think.
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>>270605433Another 15 minutes and the thread can slide in peace.
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>>270605666>enter Mama>devil tripswhat did the numbers mean by this?
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>>270605666>>270605719I sincerely hope dad doesn't buy the clothes, sucking girl and succubus girl? Also lmao at the hereditary tramp stamp.
>>270605765>an actual SEMEN DEMON loliOh god
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>>270605666>>270605719>devil trips>cute succubus pantsunani the FR*CK...
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>>270605956And that's it, attached is my shameless self-plug. I'll be honest, doing 54 pages by myself is pretty rough, and frankly unsustainable when I have 3 other series in progress. If anyone wants to pitch in with basic typesetting/redrawing (I can do any difficult part myself), I would very much appreciate the help, as it is right now I'll probably have the 2nd chapter done in Sept 10 and 3rd in Sept15.I'll upload to Dex if someone makes an entry for it.
>>270605956damn what a first chapter. thanks op!have any other chapters been translated yet?
>>270605956>>270606139Thanks
>>270605956>>270606139thanks for the dump and TL this looks pretty intere->>270606105>And by a loli hentai artist. nevermind...
>>270606139fucking based series, I'm kind of hyped to see how she will allure the other boys. I hope it becomes wholesome.Honestly I've never done any scanalation work or such but I'm pretty much shounen manga level with my japanese and could help with that in some way at most
>>270606139Thanks a lot anon, this series seem very promising.
Yeah, this one's a classic in the making
>>270606737>i hope it becomes wholesomeHow?>Onodera... the only one I want masturbating to me... is you!
>>270606818that one LO chapter is the best thing on ex
>>270606139I submitted a title draft to MD underMiya-chan no Kyuuin LifeNeeds to be approved first
>>270605882The heart over the head is a cool idea.
>>270606139Thanks, this manga looks extremely interesting
>>270605479Very compelling page
>>270607582Connoisseurs await the submission
>this threadNippon is healing.
>>270607582It's up now so you can upload to MD
>>270603835How old is this girl?
https://mangadex.org/chapter/a0f47800-498e-43c3-8fed-0bf2dc2a7006
>>270611885don't post before reading >>270603860
Damn, some anons already got their nectar stolen
>>270605542I doubt it feels any good to fap with a yogurt container
>>270605067Guess I should buy a Tenga anyway.
>>270603958Heh.I don't think I've ever seen someone translate the "any resemblance to actual persons is purely coincidental" disclaimer into the /b/ message before.
>>270606139Thank you for your work. Very interesting series. I'll be following it.
>>270605574sex
Ohh, this is from the Tsuyuno-chan author? I expect great things.
>>270608272it's an old idea with many variations
>>270612656My expectations have drastically increased.
>>270607329You talking about https://exhentai.org/g/2918972/6a58737edd/ ?
>>270612656Tsuyuno was shit
>>270603835How shit like this gets published and even makes money is beyond me.
>>270613037Sex sells, everyone knows that
>>270613031fuck you, I liked it
>>270613079underage sex tends to be cancelled rather quick
What magazine is this getting published in?
>>270613117Do you even know manga? Underage sex is everywhere.
>>270613146Square Enix's Big Gangan.
>>270606139Very nice, thank you anon.
>>270613148I know, I just find it surprising it doesn't get as much pushback as if it were to be published in the west.
I thought Tsuyuno was shit.
>>270613257God you are such a newfag
Stop responding to the concern troll
>>270613200Anything other very interesting manga there?
>>270605882realistically what would be the highest possible number?
>>270605956>She needs to be in the wet dreams of all the boys in her school to be able to achieve her dreamHey, this is just Magical Insence but less gay!
>>270613357Tenga. The yogurt bottle was innuendo.
>>270613393Same magazine as Apothecary Diaries. It's seinen, so there's a lot of variety. Look it up if you want to find something cute and funny there.
>>270613399Does having sex with her also raise the number? If so, I'll set the highest number myself.
>>270613465Can he even buy one at his age?
>>270603835>coverpicked up>>270603860picked up even more
>>270613349We need to make this shit more commonplace again. I don't care how hard something is, all I want to know is how to do it. Yamada just helped with credit card/payment processor faggotry a few weeks ago.
>>2706133995 a day for years between 15 and 60 (generous here) about 82125
>>270613393https://nyaa.si/view/1863943download and see for yourself
>>270613527>>270613568Not too hard to get, particularly with online ordering.
>>270604239>>270604290I hope we get uncensored nipples eventually
>>270605542How artsy
>>270613104I'm a huge pitsfag and I hated it. The rice scene was the worst.
>>270614211You're weak.
>>270603860>>270605393>>270605479Every chapter needs a pee scene
>>270614145the nipples are already uncensored in the magazine
>>270614756Prove it
>>270615236>Prove it>>270613630>https://nyaa.si/view/1863943>download and see for yourself
>loli tag>15yoToo old.
>>270616172Based. Demand better.
>>270605305>>270605574>cute succubus>girl suck IISubtle
>>270605067Having an onahole at his age is high level. I didn't buy one until college
>>270616409Not really subtle: >>270605806
>>270616432Was it worth it?
>>270605956>>270606139Great stuff OP. I'm willing to proofread if you want. I wish I could help with harder stuff, but my Japanese isn't nearly good enough
Wait... I know this art, picked up. She's cute.
You gotta read chapter 3, it has pubes
>>270616480100% yes. One of the best purchased of my entire life. It's hard to put it into words, but it's a wholly superior masturbation experience. I was going to write a more lascivious post describing it in detail, but I thought better of that. /jp/ has an onahole general with a good starter guide. I only ever used the Venus Real and it was good enough for me not to bother shopping around for more
>>270616172Some of them looks like 12 year olds and some of them look like 18 year olds.You can tell that the artist wanted to draw JS, but probably wasn't allowed, so she did the next best thing and just said she was a JK in a JS body.
i will not read past chapter 1 because it's obvious the first kid will get brutally cucked by millions of men
>>270616798Why are you self-inserting as him?
>head counter>masturbation astral projectionSeen both of these before but I won't complain
>>270603835>>270603860>>270604156>>270604290>>270604380>>270604420>>270604464>>270604505>>270605305>>270605357>>270605393>>270605479>>270605635>>270605719Holy SHIT, manga is saved??
>>270616480For me a fleshlight was absolutely a worthwhile investment, alongside a fleshlight warming stand. I look back in wonder at what a waste of semen it was, masturbating in mediocrity with just these hands up until then. Sure, cleanup is more inconvenient than with basic fapping, but the difference in pleasure is massive so it's worth the extra effort. I've had all sorts of sex and the fleshlight is honestly better more often than not, especially if you would otherwise be fucking with condoms. This has drastically raised my standards in women, for better or worse. Why should I put up with a woman's bullshit when I have this to fall back to? Women will really need to step up their game if they hope to ever compete once robot waifu sexbots become accessible.
Nature is healing
>>270616798Good. This manga obviously isn't for children.
>draw a JS4>call it a JC3
>>270618164JK1*
>>270618612She says "once I enter high school" on page 20
So are we just going to see a lot of men jacking off?
>>270618808>menboys
>>270618747Uniform says 1-1, so she's either a 15yo JC1 or OP translated that wrong
>>270618052based tranny
>>270617523but can you hug your fleshlight? what about the boobs
>>270618885You're telling me not a single teacher is going to jack it to her? Immersion broken.But seriously, this manga is going to be pretty gay if it's just nothing but male masturbation scenes.
>>270618935No, she's a high schooler. A first-year high schooler usually starts when they're 15 or 16.
>>270619228Look forward to ch3
>>270618808>>270619228I check mthe raws of chap 3https://files.catbox.moe/2sckty.jpghttps://files.catbox.moe/eixuig.jpghttps://files.catbox.moe/cby2hf.jpghttps://files.catbox.moe/w3cpg6.jpghttps://files.catbox.moe/zsem6c.jpghttps://files.catbox.moe/zsem6c.jpghttps://files.catbox.moe/posa4o.jpg
>>270619270well you posted the one I got wrong
>>270619280>https://files.catbox.moe/zsem6c.jpgthat's a lot of hair
>>270619270>>270619280Nice.
>>270618935It does seem to be a mistranslation.
How did a kid that young even managed to buy a onahole? Also wasn't he a little to crude with his words? I wouldn't think something like "oh shit she's so tight!" When I had his age
>>270620247>How did a kid that young even managed to buy a onahole?Do you need an ID to buy sex toys in Japan? Theoretically he could just get one from a store or online
>>270620398Sure but how would he even know about sites to buy and he'll what even what is a onahole? I didn't knew at all back then, all I had in my was world of warcraft
>>270620451>back thenWell isn't this set in the modern day? I agree that the kid is really young to have a sex toy, but he could easily have stumbled across them online. Everyone has a computer in their pocket these days
>>270620247A nice neighborhood onee-san succubus hands tengas over to good boys
>>270620499I can't picture some middle school kid buying a onahole on-line, even for today standards. Are onahole even that cheap some kid buy it? What about method of payment, he surely didn't use his parents credit cardBut I guess I shouldn't go too deep on it and overthink it and just enjoy the cute succubus instead
>>270620684>middle school kidHe's in high school. And it wouldn't be hard to ask an adult friend to get one for you, or your other horndog friends might know a guy who knows a guy. It's not harder than trying to get porn mags and videos back in the day.
>>270620684I bought a fleshlight off Amazon using a gift card I got for my birthday when I was around 14 or so.
manga status: SAVED
>>270606139BASED OP. Thank you. This was such a fun read and I loved their art style.
Can't wait for chapter 3
>>270613257go back retard
>guys in high school acting like they haven't reached puberty yet and haven't talked to a girl once in their lifesasuga nipland
>>270618998>but can you hug your fleshlight?women are increasingly being more outspoken about hating clingy overly affectionate men, so my question is, can you hug your woman?>what about the boobs?it's rough out there, buddy
>>270616798>the first kid will get brutally cucked by millions of menand I want to be one of those menstop self inserting as the one being cucked, it's really weird
>>270620684>Are onahole even that cheap some kid buy it?The one I got was like $60 before shippinh. But I was a burger importing something from Japan. Either way, that's well in the price range of a kid if they just save for a little>>270618998The /ona/ thread on /jp/ also has a guide for dolls.
>>270604696Bad translation here, she's already in high school.
>>270603860>toilet scene in the first chapterGood manga already
>>270621083me on the bottom right
>>270616798>a succubus is actually going to be a slut and Anon is surprisedDecades of pure succubus have mindbroken you, succubus are not supposed to be your virgin waifu, yes it's "sad" the first boy to be aroused by our loli succubus isn't gonna get the girl but let's not pretend he was crushing on her, he's just seduced by her succubus ways. I'm rooting for her to be very best like no one ever was.
>>270604420This page is making me remember some repressed memories I had.
>>270605067>giving an onahole to a middle schoolerRip that guy's brain synapses.
>>270624376nta but the stamina training unit is great
>>270604239Peak entertainment
>>270607283I don't know, like she never gets actually fucked until she finds her love or some shit. Not that I'd be sad with her whoring herself out to an army of ojisantachi
>>270625693Why are you wishing death on your fellow oji sans via loli succubus who can't control her powers?She'd definitely kill if she had sex right now
>>270618164PDF File Dogwhistle
>>270606737>I hope it becomes wholesome.The art tells me otherwise.I already resigned myself over it.
>>270603835I'm not judging but why are you guys reading this stuff?>lust-provoking imageryPlenty of other better mangas with that>storyJust one chapter so far , with minimal ,basic story>high-school life and interactions Maybe i am biased because my high-school experience was bad and boring , but even if you had a better than average high-school experience , why would you want to re-experience it ? Nobody can articulate themselves ,causing drama and conflict over the smallest issues . Granted ,such problems do not stop once you turn 18, because i have a friend in medical college , where one would assume only smart and reasonable people go, and he is being shunned by his classmates just because he went up to a girl in class , asked her a question that she misunderstood, and rumors started circulating that he is a creep because of that one small interaction. My point being : don't you get tired of watching these shy , akward , cringy highschool kids behave the way they do when their behaviour causes so much melodrama and needless conflict?
>>270626286>Maybe i am biased because my high-school experience was bad and boringskill issue lmao
>>270626338ad hominem
>>270626482>ad hominemyou need to add some homies
>>270626482>erm that's a heckin logically fallacy!You are such a gigantic faggot
>>270626286I'm reading it because it's cute and funny and those manga don't appear every day. Frequently enough, yes. But enough is not enough. Do I need any other reason?
>>270626286>Just one chapter so farare you fucking serious?
>>270623741you are my wife?
>>270603835KINO
>>270612861This one is still my favorite
So the heart shows up above the head when the boys are conscious of her and now that guy got it constantly around his head.
>>270627595There's 3 or 4 chapters out, but only the first one has been typeset. I believe the dump threads for the next couple of chapters had TLs, but I could be wrong
>>270628321no, why should I matter if it's the first chapter? That's ridiculous
Extremely erotic.
>>270603860>supposed to be 15>loli-coded artstyle and underwear, no bushFor what purpose?
Am I a lolicon now?
So is someone going to link the raws?
>>270626286>Plenty of other better mangas with thatSuch as?
It's not an uncommon H Doujin plot, but interestingly enough, there's a eroge with nearly the exact same premise.https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01209336.html
>>270628661malcorond kino
Bros, I'm so fucking pissed Airandou hasn't made any new loli and no one even gives him complaints for it, especially after that shitty "legal" couple. This is bullshit. Somehow actually mad about incest.
>>270629066He did make a loli doujin recently though? Or at least it got uploaded to the panda like last week. Not incest, sadly.
>>270629231You're incredibly stupid. I checked and what got uploaded last week is a translation of a work from February 2023.
>>270629277Yeah, I'm fucking pissed after checking twitter. Anything related to loli comes from other accounts. Why is he doing this shit all of a sudden? It's bad enough he fell for the faggot ass "legal loli" meme.There is literally no difference between loli and any other schoolgirl fanservice/hentai. Stop being fucking cucks when it's all equally abhorrent to normalfaggots.
>mother confirmed used goods slut before meeting father>first side couple shown has the cowtits bitch cuck her boyfriend with his fatherWhere is my comfy succubus loli manga
>>270628588>NOOO CHARACTERS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO ME MORE THAN ONE SIGMA AWAY FROM THE MEAN PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS FOR THEIR AGE, THAT'S HECKING UNREALISTIC!!!
>>270628668it's in the big gangan magazine rip on nyaa
>>270631119Yea I read it already. I'm extremely mad because it made me fap to NTR for the first time in like 7 months
>>270626286I am reading it for the art. All the character designs and fashion have been top tier so far and I love the idea of flowers as a motif for succubi. The comfy coming of age story of a loli semen demon discovering her sexuality is just a bonus.
>>270631168Did you swear off of NTR for your mental health or something? I hate NTR but I find your post very funny.
>>270631258Yes. It was the hottest thing for me for a long time but I also love pure romance. Then it got to the point where I started seeing NTR in my romance reads. I had to stop and clean my mind.
>>270631391based (fallen) reformed NTR lover
>>270605765first panel, second bubble>het
>>270603835And people say that loli manga is a dead genre.
>>270604505>>270604464Missing page.>"Hey, boys!! Could you stop staring over here so blatantly?" >"We're... we're not looking! Right!?" >"Uh..." >"Yeah, we were just stretching properly." >"Right, Onodera?" >"Yeah."
>>270632487ToT
>>270632487>mistranslations, rough typesetting, typos, awkward grammar and a missing page of all thingsI can appreciate OP picking this up but he doesn't seem very qualified.
>>270632817>t. choosing beggar
>>270633017Are you really going to excuse a missing page?
>>270633085>t. entitled faggotwhy don't you go ask for your money back
>>270633559No. I'll just read the raws myself. Thanks for putting the manga on my radar at least, OP.
>>270633017>>270633559>>270603835>m-muh beggar!Nobody asked you to dump your spam here faggot.
>>270633695>t. only person in the entire world and everything revolves around me>>270634076fuck off ungrateful nigger
This whole "it's better than nothing" attitude will kill scanlation and you'll only have yourself to blame.
>>270634420It's funny how every single solo ESL scanlator is exactly like you. You're a caricature. Know that you don't add value to the world. You diminish it.
good shit, picked upthanks
>>270634420>ungratefulI read it straight from the source while you crave 4chan attention because your "translations" were rejected.
>>270606139Thanks for the dump, this was a fun little manga. I just hope it doesn't get ruined by over the top drama.
>>270603835Thanks for the translations. Looking forward to follow it on mangadex.
>>270603835I think Furumoto Takeru should come back to LO
>>270632817I apologize, I lifted the raw from the thread like a retard instead of downloading the magazine rip, so either I or the original thread's OP missed one.>rough typesettingIs this a font issue? You can always recommend me font(s) you think would fit, or even volunteer to typeset if you have the time and effort to spare.>esl issuesI am translating by eyes, and working without a proofreader for long pages does cause these problems to pop up now and then (or however often you feel). If you're telling me this is a PR issue - rough translations get overlooked, unpolished grammar makes it into the draft... then I would appreciate having someone (you) read over and point out any mistakes, a second pair of eyes can help a lot. It's the difficult thing with working alone, problems don't get pointed out until they do, and by then its too late and people will have a lot to say about seeing mistakes on the published product.Or if you're telling me this is a skill issue, that I'm an ESL monkeyniggerretard, well okay, the only thing I can tell you, short of begging someone else to do the TL and trust that they didn't just MTL it, is that I still need to learn and improve, and go hit the books or something, without the specifics, I can only accept the criticisms and hope I get it right going forward.I very much appreciate any criticisms so I can improve on my skills. I do not expect anyone to spend the effort to do a giant writedown when just calling me a retard in 5 sconds does plenty to point out that I fucked up somewhere, and even that is enough indication for me. As long as someone calls me out, I'll know that there's still some aspect I can work on.
>>270635410Too long; didn't read
>>270635675That's okay. I doubt anyone would care beyond "lmao skill issue" either way.
>>270635410I think your release was perfectly fine, they're just being autistic niggers again.
>>270635410You are reading too much of random retards on a underwater basketweaving tawianese forum.
>>270635410I only got hostile because the other guy was getting so hostile to the point that I thought it was you even though I was being civil at first. If it wasn't you, then my bad.The typesetting's rough because of a lot of small things. Sometimes the word count gets to be too much and the bubbles are almost bursting at the seams trying to contain everything. Stuff like ellipses end up on their own lines, separate from the word they're trailing off of. The centering could use more work. And there's personal pet peeves like being too faithful to the original dialogue and having a lot of elongated words.For grammar, it's something that understandably happens a lot when translating where you preserve the original Japanese bubble by bubble, but reading it back makes it extremely awkward. Stuff like "Red rice... I wonder if I'll get to make some soon...", "The peace and safety of the girls in this club... I alone shall-" or "Always, alllwaaays showing off her panties... That's exactly why you're not popular in the first place" isn't the natural way an English speaker would phrase those things. Also, you need to use an em dash there and not a normal dash. Typos and grammar isn't something you particularly need a second set of eyes on, especially when if it's a case like this chapter where just about every page has something wrong with it. I'm not saying that to be mean. But if you can't give a chapter the amount of time it needs and whoever passes it needs, then you're better off stalling it or dropping it. Working on several series at once isn't an excuse.You should unironically post in the scanlation threads and just let the faggots there rip into you. Lets you harden your heart to insults but also get some decent criticism and stuff to consider.
>>270636316I see, mistakes aside, you think I should be more liberal and willing to deviate from the Japanese script?
>>270636440A little more, yeah. Type out everything in a document first and think about how the dialogue and conversations sound. It's up to you how "liberal" you want to be, but from this chapter the most apparent thing to me is you simply need to give the script more thought rather than translating and typesetting as you go. Also helps with trivial typos and grammar if what you're using has spell-check.
>>270636316I think the sentences sound weird because they retain their japanese order instead of being turned around to proper english
>>270632817You're kind of a an entitled bitch dude.
>>270635410>long pagesThinks he's translating a novel instead of children's comics. Even light novels are picture books.
>>270637692based anon saying it like it is, more children should be reading this
>>270636923>rather than translating and typesettingit's several times more efficient translating and typesetting at the same time though, you skip like an entire process. it's definitely one of the advantages of beign a one-man team, you can skip so much inefficiency.
>>270638012Efficiency is cool and all, but not if the script suffers. You can proofread your script page-by-page rather than on a document if you want. It's just a guideline to make doing that simpler for a beginner.
I don't mind the errors as long as OP adjusts them before posting them on Dex. There's no better QC than a live audience, and this way means changes are far more likely than if they're on Dex
>>270638902It's already up on Mangadex. At the very least, I expect he'll put in that missing page.
>>270638902Is already posted on Dex with all the errors and the missing page.
>>270639199>At the very least, I expect he'll put in that missing page.Missing page was updated couple of hours ago.
>>270638239>Efficiency is cool and all, but not if the script suffers.I don't really agree. Doing first a translation script in notepad or whatever and then afterwards typesetting it is an incredible increase of work that just isn't worth it. If I had to do that, I'd just probably quit because it's not worth the hassle. When you're a one-man team, you do everything yourself, and any ways to skip unnecessary steps are important.
>>270606139Thanks, anon! I'm curious to see what direction this takes. Reminds me a bit of Uran's style, but more explicit.
>>270603860>>270603835>>270603958>15Why do they look like they're 12?
>>270603835>>270603860>be loli connoisseur >have a piss fetishIt’s like a 99% overlap for some reason
>>270640609>for some reasonIncontinence is something a lot of kids struggle with, so if you're into loli, you probably like the other things they do (or can't do in this case).
>>270640542>Why do they look like they're 12?I thought they were middle schoolers. The MC looks very undeveloped for being 15.
>>270626286>Plenty of other better mangas with thatOf loli fanservice? In this economy? I would like to know what loli mangos you read then.
I've always wondered why ESLs translate into English, is it as practice?Anyway, this manga is pretty good so far, the most recent chapter was pretty funny. If more people could read this that would be good.>>270640882She is, it becomes a sort of joke amongst the other kids. It becomes a joke amongst the other kids, especially in the changing rooms and during girls talk.
>>270640609that's just the traditional menarche celebration dish, nothing to do with pissGranted she's a but old for that, idk
>>270634076I asked.
>>270640609When was the last time you had a piss accident? For 99% of people, the answer is, “as a kid”.
>>270641427If you never pissed yourself as an adult, you are not partying hard enough.
>>270641015>I've always wondered why ESLs translate into English, is it as practice?I do it from ESP/POR to ENG because that way I can shitpost with more people.
>>270641015>I've always wondered why ESLs translate into English, is it as practice?What are you going to do, revoke their scanlation license?
>>270641015ESLs won, stop coping.
>>270640542Because this is what the men want.
>>270640542>Why do they look like they're 12?I honestly struggle finding them attractive, I feel that they're mostly skin and bones honestly.Especially >>270603860 reminds me more of an old woman wiping herself than a child really.I think it's somewhat deliberate, the artist has no problem drawing more erotic art, so I think they're deliberately drawing it less sexy and more realistic on purpose.
>>270641863They could translate it into their own language, I won't complain as I get something to read when they do it in English
>>270641015>why ESLs translate into Englishsome do this as a job, but actually that's a good question. For those doing this as a hobby, why not in the native language, especially if you're a one-man group?
>>270642454>They could translate it into their own languageThat'd be stupid.People translate into English because that's the most known language in the world, which most people learn as their second language.Like it's so obvious I'm not even sure if you're trolling or are just pretending to be retarded.
>>270642466why would you do that much work for making a release for a small minority?like I can understand making translations for Italian and Spanish, there's already tons of manga that are translated to those languages that aren't available in English, but to translate to some insignificant language no one is going to read is just retarded, and thinking that anyone is going to do that is honestly also completely retarded
>>270642454They can shill for more donations for their sick mother in the hospital who is grieving the loss of their cat since childhood and fund their school going habit that way
>>270642593Because, you know, you suck at English.
>>270605479My counter just went up 1.
>>270642679>Because, you know, you suck at English.then let the people that aren't bothered by it enjoy it and fuck off
>>270641861>>270641863I was simply asking out of curiosity. I don't read scanlations so I don't care who translates what for the EOPs
>>270642454You do not get this, don't you. It's useless to translate in most languages, as the reception will be extremely limited. If you're not talking about big series, but an obscure ecchi, you either read it raw or you translate it in English, as it's the common western language. Anyway that can very well be fixed by MTL plus revision, or translation and subsequent rearrangement by AI. Plus all the other ESLs will gladly read the "slightly off" but grammatically correct English you whine so much about. EFLs could offer to correct the sentences themselves to increase the overall quality but you're too lazy to do that and you don't care enough. So stop bitching
>>270642924No. I'm an ESL myself and have never been accused of being ESL. Just learn the fucking language, faggot.
>>270642626you know kirei cake is canadian right
>>270643002I don't even understand what parts of what I wrote you think weren't good enough English honestly.
are ESL translation worse than nothing? or it depends if it's readable or not?
>>270643089>good enoughThere's your problem. You don't have any standards.
>>270643005>Canadian not ESLPardonnez mon Français s'il vous plaît but the Canadians are ESLs
>>270643089he's just trolling, the translation is absolutely ok and better than most official shit
>>270605956traight out of wizchan KEK
>>270643162or there weren't anything wrong with what I wrote to begin with
>>270643278>weren'tWasn't.
>>270643278>>270643307samefag falseflag
>>270643242I'm not the translator, he was criticizing other stuff I was writing.I may not have English as my mother tongue, but I've been using English for like 30 years. That my scanlation license should be revoked and that I shouldn't be allowed to make scanlations because it's not my primary language is so far out there it's hard to come up with something more rificulous honestly.
>>270643345This is why instead of correcting ESLs, we just call you lot retarded monkeys.
>>270643403yeah must be some schizo faggot who hates loli and wanted to get back at you and try to make you desist. Sounds very disingenuous
>>270635410Just translate some hentai bruh
>>270643563what are you blabbering about now, you're not making any sense
Might snipe this one with my team of EFLs just to spite the uppity freaks in this thread.
>>270643784you're just a loser not capable of doing anything
>>270643784I'll snipe your sniping
>>270643784If we get better translations and an actual release schedule, by all means, spite them. If you don't, however, I'll be glad to keep reading this guy's version, because nobody else is doing it.
>>270643784Based, god speed. Include this page
>>270643784okay cabal
>>270643784>uppity freaksI honestly don't get what you mean.
>>270643784Either do it or shut up you drama whore.
I thought I was in /h/ for a second with all these ESL/scanlation shitflinging. How does cunny rile these people up so much?
>>270644034>all theseAll this.
>>270644076You got me, now answer the question.
>>270644157>no please or thank you
>>270643995>Either do it or shut up you drama whore.You know he's not going to do it.And if he does, it's going to be worse than the first chapter.It's like pottery.
>>270644034Just built up as more people noticed more blatant mistakes over the course of the thread until someone inevitably said the scanlator sucks. Then it devolved because it's a heated topic.
>>270643878I'm fairly certain over half of scanlators use OCR and chatgpt these days.It's really telling when they don't translate handwritten text, even though OCR has gotten really good at picking it up.They just can't be bothered to learn enough hiragana to put it in chatgpt manually, even though it's going to take them less than a day.
>>270643784kek for the delusion of the day this is pretty humble
>>270643878You know I had already started working on this right, and was planning to use Manga-OCR (Poricom though) and chatgpt? Raws from Nyaa though, though they're most likely the same.Had just cleaned 10 pages when this guy wanted to do it instead, so I dropped it.
>>270620048The exact same mistranslation from the first chapter dump thread, caused a lot of confusion there too.
>>270644889>esl w/o mtl vs efl w/ mtlsounds comfy, do it
>>270644632I think it was just this autist here >>270636316 being sincere with his crazy high standards (the technicalities he refers to are noticed by other scanalators only) and a schizo/troll
>>270644889drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645054That the bubbles weren't getting enough air is pretty obvious though. It makes it a bit harder to read. I'd say that's a worse crime than the translation really.I think that trying to keep to one font size throughout except when shouting or emphasis or similar, and give the bubbles more air and keep the text somewhat similar to the shape of the bubbles are by far the most important aspects of typesetting.Using a million fonts is probably worse for the reader than a couple of fonts really.
>>270645054Those aren't high standards.
>>270645227you have OCD, no reader would give a shit nor notice at all
>>270645117>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645353>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645396>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645353>>270645396ok i get it. So you're going to let the ESL taint the series with his subpar speech bubbles or show your EFL pride?
He's dropping those 10 pages...
>>270645438>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645473>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645511>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645551>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645583>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645619>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H
>>270645353>>270645438>>270645473>>270645551>>270645619>>270645653>Didn't clean all the Japanese off>Left the SFX inESL won
>>270645653>drop the 10 pages then. you won't B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H B I T C H
>>270645680>sfx AND nametags are still not cleanedew...
>>270645680>Name tag untranslatedE S L...? WON!
>>270645666I'm not autistic enough to bother with SFXs. At most I write the English SFX at the side of it.
>>270645740And that's why ESL will alwys win when compared to lazy EFLers
>>270645740wait wait wait, if you are so confident in your English skills, and OP is capable of autism-grade redrawing, how about the two of you team up to give us a better product?
>>270645809this should be the true ending
>>270645809I prefer working alone.
Isn't it going to be MTL either way? Edited MTL is still MTL and prone to errors.
>>270604505What a semen demon
>>270645903>>270645779
>>270645903>the SOCIALGOD ESL who isn't afraid of sharing his burden with his comrades vs the lonely, sluggish and whiny EFL that cannot handle other people
Will my adult fully erected dick fit this tiny girl's vagina?
If you didn't want to read ESL slop then you should've learned Japanese when everybody told you to.
>>270646075Hell is other people.No but seriously working as a one-man team has a lot more advantages than disadvantages. The biggest issue is that it takes a lot of time, even if you do speed scanlations like me.I'd probably spend four-five hours doing this chapter as a one-man team.
>>270646225>If you didn't want to read ESL slop then you should've learned Japanese when everybody told you to.https://djtguide.github.io/
>>270606139Thank you for posting.
>>270646984Never
>>270645914MTL often beats trannylators
>>270648345Is this going to be "professionally edited" though?
>>270648345mtlniggers are cancer
>>270645666>he doesn't like jap sfx
What the fuck is going on here
>>270603835Good shit OP keep it going.
>>270645666>SFX badIncomprehensibly gay
>>270652122/a/utism