Dumping. As always, please take out any mistakes
>captcha for every single postwhy though?
Full chapter:https://mega.nz/folder/gCpXyBSB#LDfZbN7UkbcMaW8yrESINw
Chapter end. Great thread
>>2750830084chan cursing you
>>275082856>Last panel Locked in for life
>>275082898Cute side profile
>>275082977Spelled Mabosstiff wrong
>>275083437she so happy bros
>>275082935She's never letting go after tasting something that good.
>>275083259>why am I even here?
>>275083544>fuck this shit
He didn't deserve this
>>275083544>On me!
>>275083656Thx mate
>>275082856>blushHe's in.
>>275083305Damn got exposed
>>275083204>why do I feel bad for Violet?Your heart knows you're cheating on him.
>>275083008I'm calling it now. Violet will be the one to face iron treads and avenge his earlier loss. After he wins, great tusk will show up after using the chaos to eat the herbs and Scarlet will face that one
>>275083437Too powerful
>>275083437She will destroy the entire Team Star herself.
>>275083437Nemona is easily one of the best characters in SV so far. Second only to Scarlet for me right now
>>275083656Thanks anon.
>>275083624>Fuck the rules
>>275082856The THROAT GOAT
>>275082856Prez' -> Prez's in the 4th panel.>>275082935You could center the text in the last panel a bit more.>>275082977Its' -> It's in the 4th panel.Couldn't find much more. Thanks for typesetting.
>>275083656Thanks proofreader anon Looks mostly fine to me
>>275083008This bubble isn't fully cleaned
>>275082977
>>275083081This whole talk about treasure reminds me of Exkaiser
>>275083476>>275083582After having to deal with Scarlet last chapter and Violet this chapter, I don't blame Mera for being so angry all the time
>>275086990>When you don't care about the story and just want to play the game
>>275082762>Third speech bubbleMaybe remove the first "them" to avoid repetition of the word, without really losing clarity.>>275082977Mabosstiff, with two S. What a stupid name.>>275083348>Third panelMaybe "there's more to this than meets the eye">>275083656>First panelrn it reads as "hot headed" with a space. Needs a hyphen as it stands now.
>>275082898It's over he is no better than violet
>>275083259I believe in him
>>275086021>>275086081>>275086114>next base is poison typeThe only time it's ever getting a chance to shine is against the false dragon titan. Smoliv is gonna job the rest of the arc.
>>275083624>Died instantly Well...>>275083656Thanks
These last couple of chapters have been pretty good for the main character dynamics. We got to see Scarlet and Violet finally interact, then Scarlet with Arven and more of Violet with Nemona. Cassiopeia also spoke with Scarlet, I was worried they wouldn't interact again after chapter 6.I do think the three companions could stand to spend more time together though. Their interactions so far are quite minimal.
>>275083511Look at her dick-sucking lips.
>>275090841She seems like the type to bite it off
>>275089977Caught the little guy just to make him suffer
>>275083656No complaints about the script from me.Thanks as always.
>>275090572>I do think the three companions could stand to spend more time together though. Their interactions so far are quite minimal.I agree, but I doubt it's going to happen until the late stage of the manga when we're hopefully at Area Zero. We can hope that Nemona/Violet and Arven/Scarlet group up right before the DLC interlude like in SwSh with Marnie, Bede, and Hop.
>>275082762>Scarlet>this is not even remotely what I was prepared for
>>275094055>We can hope that Nemona/Violet and Arven/Scarlet group up right before the DLC interlude like in SwSh with Marnie, Bede, and Hop.That would be fun
>>275092122He is part of our prince's team Trust the plan
>>275083656Can't see any mistakes that weren't already pointed out so you're all good
>>275082977>2nd to last panelSame energyIs scarlet a stranger?
>>275083437This shows Scarlet is a lot stronger than Violet since I believe her score was really close to Nemona's versus the over double difference here.
>>275083081well then
>>275097042Embarrassing showing from the so called Prince of Speed.
>>275097042>>275097867It doesn't matter.He is the prince of speed and the prince of battling.
Speaking of Violet's team, he still has two spaces left. Scarlet also has one spot.
>>275099153You're not counting Miraidon? I wonder where Koraidon will come in.
>>275100474I think koraidon will appear as the alpha raidon
