Does life give you lemons? Are the lemons too sour that not even sugar will sweeten the suffering? Well, the RX Group has the cure for such sour misery, World Domination! Come join executive Black General and her newfound members as they embark to strip the sanity away from one of the most prominent heroes ever, Braveman!Ii Orc no Hi storytime for those who missed it:>>282421161Previous thread:>>282447343 >>282630199
Chapter 23 yeah.Thread died so here we are. Onward!
A party of recognition. And Black Lion is way too humble for it.
>all that pep talk and goodwill crushed like a roach
Behold. The start of one of the best side couples in this series.
Chapter 24 yeah.
It's time for a true hero vs villain clash.
>when you want to impress the love of your life but in the process he ignores you
That's a cute tantrum from General-chan.
Imagine that the only way for a woman to forgive you is for you to allow her to play with your luscious fur and soft paws.
Aaaand done! Danke fer comin'!TOMORROW. The boss gets a maid.
>>282729250It's fun so far.
>>282728775Note who's seated next to whom.>>282728951Is this all it takes? Will I get a cool shinobi gf with childbearing hips if I call her cute?>>282729137Bromance before hoemance I guess.>>282729250Tummy for your work, no wait I meant thank you for the tummy.
>>282729343>ill I get a cool shinobi gf with childbearing hips if I call her cute?If you can find her and comfort her, like those japanese OLs.
>>282729165Cant have RX be too successful otherwise it cuts into her personal time with BravemanSasuga General-sama
>>282730598Priorities. One-sided love first.
>>282729250Thank you for posting. Lucky boss.
>>282728980>>282729165>>282729215Proud General and Pouty General are both cute! CUTE!
>>282729099Man, he really can't stop, how did i never noticed this the first time?
>>282729053>you even forgot his name!I wonder if he said his face instead, in the original.
>>282729165She's too needy, he's not even her boyfriend.
>>282729215Bullshit, Black Lion-kun should be the one pouting instead.>>282729250Thanks.
Oh nice. I remember following this before tl died for a while. Is it finished?
>>282735014Last volume came out but I don't know how far OP plan to go
>>282736288Jin sure came a long way from almost being scared off of the internet when baka gaijin found his ElfxOrc doujin.
>>282728951>lying to the ugly roach
>>282728869Ok, but for real, why and how did it become unacceptable to praise things like that? Calling someone infertile is mean, but calling her fertile is mean also? I smell anti natalist propaganda. And black general doesn't fall for it, which makes her great, as usual.
>>282729250Danke OP
>>282737601Sexual harassment, please report to pervert jail
>>282728735Hey, I thought this manga was dead, im glad is not.I would kill for an anime adaptation, but braveman being a borderline legal exploit, makes it really hard to not get sued by warner brothers.
>>282728735Oh shit I've been wanting to read this Is it actually good? I love me some evil woman sex but that's not enough for almost 200 chapters
>>282738709If that's what you are expecting it's not for you.
>>282737601I didn't know they have wifi on the other side, Mr. Abe.
>>282728775>pizza party
>>282728827Is the boss talking about himself in the 3rd person?
>>282728897>calling a young (fertile) maiden terrifyingThis lion is homosexual.
>>282728951Thanks for the spoiler, OP. It's not like I wanted to actually find out this kinda stuff as I read the manga.
>>282729078Poor Braveman.
>>282740676>he didn't read all of the currently translated material the moment the storytime got his attentionShiggy diggy
>>282741210>reading ahead Scum.
>>282734940As her future husband and father of their children, he should know better
>>282728847:3 learn depression
>>282728921I still find it funny how the sad looking minion is the most vindictive and violent one.
>>282740676>>282741328>reading through storytime threads>about manga that you didnt read>doesnt want to get spoiledarent your expectations unrealistic, or are you just a complete retard?
>>282742877Storytime threads are the exact place where spoiler etiquette is most important, since you can expect new readers. Nigger.
>>282742877>waaah waaah ctrl+s is too difficult for mekill yourself
>>282743537Fair enough, though while we're on the subject I feel volume covers are exempt from that rule
>>282745330I can agree with that. I mean, if I got spoiled by a cover, I'd blame the author or the publisher, not the poster.Same for character introduction pages and afterwords.
>>282743537No offense but it isn't exactly a mystery that those two will be an item.
>>282745557I'm not that anon, I just disagree with the assertion that anons shouldn't spoiler spoilers.
>>282738101>muh sekshual harazmentYou can notice that the more "sekshual harazment" is acknowledged the worse the birthrates.>>282739149It's slow, but its something.Now have more kids.
What is this petty drama you're trying to spin here faggots? Shut up. Its neither a major spoiler, or a bad one. Knowing it only improves re-reads, so stop bitching.
>>282746602Again, independently of the validity of >>282740676's specific complaint, trying to avoid untagged spoilers is general storytime etiquette. Nobody's trying to shut down discussion, just to properly spoiler it.
>>282746905But its not a spoiler though? Like the whole setup for them getting together is on that very page.
>>282748363It's like you didn't even read my post.
>>282748363Eh, I have no horse in this race, but that's a bad argument. Many pages could set up stuff, and telling you outright what happens later takes the fun out of it for some people.Others don't mind.
I'm just picturing minions 1-3 arguing over what counts as spoilers with other RX members butting in.
>>282742877Usually people are kind enough to spoiler stuff in storytime threads as it's expected there to be new readers.
Can we go back to actually discussing the manga, not this whiny bitching?
>>282750487Start dropping the pages then.
>>282750487The only things in my mind are how much I wanna fuck DG, Secretary, Scientist and the bombastic hourglass figure of GG-chan
>>282751036>Dg???
>>282751124I shall vacate the thread.
>>282748363It’s a spoiler to say that they become a side couple desu, even if yeah this can be inferred
>>282751204>I shall vacate the thread.C'mon, who is it? It's not the General, Mother Justice, Honest Rate, that late ice bitch, fire policewoman (kaen?), I can't really think of any other notable (hot) women...
>>282743595>ctrl+sIt actually works.Huh, and I've been using this site for years. Though I prefer the double star **spoilers**, but I don't think they work here.
>>282752540DarkGeneral/BlackGeneral
So in light of recent events, I shall spoiler. Even though the lot of us have been talking light spoilers fer awhile. But yes, I get excited bout things that should be spoilered fer new readers.>>282740676Sorry. But at the same time, I never spoilered how far they go.>>282752037Yeap true.>>282752540I think he means General and typed in DG rather BG. That's just my guess.
Chapter 25 yeah.Always remember to put your figures at a shelf that's safe from human accidents.
>>282752677Who the fuck calls her "Dark General"? It sounds like a bootleg name for a bootleg General clone.
Behold! The punishment.
Absolute joy.
>>282752893>>282752931Boss's reactions are always a treat
>>282752963I love this guy like you wouldn't believe
>>282753003IKR?
This is why they are one of the best couples.
Chapter 26 yeah.
>>282753040I know her whole shtick is that she's the cool emotionless one, but I wish we saw more of her. Or if she was more talkative or something.I also wish Boss would talk more (but not for the purpose of being the butt of a joke like usual)....Just had an idea. Spin offs focused on their perspective or lives before/after Black General... Holy shit I'd read and buy all of it in an instant.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9M3NqnPhlSQ
>>282753072Man, what a bitch. A better end would be someting like a smug boss and embarrassed Secretary, but with no explosion. Make this a victory for the boss, that's it.>haha, you walked right into this one!>y-you.... (blushes)And then in later chapters make the boss remind her of that maid day.
>ywn cuddle scientist as she sleeps nakedhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9M3NqnPhlSQ
RIP figure collection.
>>282753376This is painAlso those effects are drawn so well, I can really feel the energy and power of that blast.
Aaaand done. Danke fer comin'!TOMORROW. UMI DA!
>>282752963>>282753003Reminds me of another punchline.This was so good I fucking popped off with them
>>282753457What is this?>>282753450>the first beach chapter is comingY E SI can't wait.
>>282752891>Who the fuck calls her "Dark General"? It sounds like a bootleg name for a bootleg General clone.Oh anon you.
>>282753526The demon bunch, it's like a 4 page comedy manga.The clown's whole shtick is he loves slow corruption. So like 20 chapters back he plants a seed and they finally took the first step
Okay, we already have Mugen, it already has an absurd amount of characters, so:how do we make this a reality?
>>282753821>tits so perky that she can't even sqish them together with her shouldersThey would legit poke your eyes out on the beach episode.
>>282753821You need someone to do the sprite work. You also, ALSO have to absolutely ask JIN about what kind of fightan trope they are since JIN is a big fightan fag. It has to be everything from buttons(like simple kick or punch to Low Punch/Kick, Heavy Kick/ Punch, Slash/Heavy Slash, Strong Attack/Weak Attack, Taunt, Double button attacks etc etc), to tech to unique buttons/inputs, throws/attack throws/techs, frames on attacks, safe/quick frames, power moves with long frame recovery, super frames/invincible farmes, meaties, rolls/dodges, recovery rolls, Ukemis, blocks/air blocks, bar breaks, cancels, super cancels, supers, one hit KOs specials...You also need the types like shotos, grapplers, range/zoners/summoners, stances, rushers etc etc.It's a big thing. If ever you can splice various fighters that you think fit the character and just refine everything from there. But all in all, it really is the sprite work, animations and type of fighter that you really need to get down first.
>>282754387I was thinking of palette swapping existing mugen chars to fit Black General characters, maybe with minimal sprite editing. You know, something realistic.I think Bullet would be a good fit for GG chan. Maybe some Magneto/Doctor Doom for the Boss? Bakugou for Secretary. Some marvel capeshitter for Braveman. Or Mr incredible. And some big furry for Black Lion. Mother Justice is literally some female superman. X-kun would be Neko Ark. Impact-chan... I dunno. Jester=joker, lmao. That's about it from the top of my head.pic unrelated, RX brand microbikini
Scientist needs rape correction for trooning out the boss.
>>282755316Damn, Boss looks like that! I’m joining RX immediately
>>282752695Stop talking so much if you can't keep it neutral commentary, idiot
>>282755761>he doesn't appreciate the normal bossHeathen>>282755863And you shut up.
>I heard you like Mugenjin and his art, check this out
>>282753144>>282753214Dear god, I desire this Scientist-san.
>>282752863AIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, NOT THE FIGURES
>>282753072KEK, based.
>>282753107She will add in automatic self destruct function for sure.
>>282753144>>282753214SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX
>>282753294Parts of this manga already reminds me of Cyborg Kuro-chan, now they're showing fucking Baikinman from Anpanman? They sure like making me feel old.
>>282753376Not the figures... and I wasn't expecting lazer instead.
>>282753450Thanks.
>>282753809Lots of fun characters in that one. A real shame the serialized version by a different artist isn't nearly as good.
Bumpo
>>282753457>>282753809>>282757692Kek, thanks for the recommendation.
>>282753450UMI DAZE?!>>282753247Wish we got a small story like this for secretary and Boss-kun, although I'm fine with the two of them just liking running an evil organization as a hobby. I think we may have gotten one for Boss eventually but I'm not sure.
>>282753450Thanks OP
>>282753072Why would you put it out on display though?Boss had it coming just for that
>>282761979Boss was just doing a little prank on Secretary to teach her to respect his property, he may have gotten a little carried away.
man, the translation for this sucks major ass. most chapters have a couple mistakes, and a select few have straight up made up dialogue.
>>282753247>>282753294Every one of them is a chuuni cartoon fan, beautiful
>>282753166Thank God you aren't the one writing this.
>>282755863I kind of agree.
>>282763721>blowing up men and making them the butt of a joke is FUNNYIts not you emasculated retard, grow up.
>>282764034Why'd you have to make it about gender politics you braindead retard?I just meant your post was extremely sappy and unfunny.
>>282764044If you seriously don't notice it, then you have drank the koolaid. Black General is the only exception, where the female gets blown up or punched as a joke. Every other time its "haha, men getting fucked, FUNI"The bossRX catTurtle SenseiKamen Rider wannabeThat old npc from the marriage chapterAnd I'm really fucking tired of this trope. It's everywhere in manga and anime.
>>282764212Read a different manga if you don't like it, then. Maybe you don't find it funny, but it's way more in line with her general characterization (and the tone of the manga) than >>282753166
>>282764260What makes this manga unique is Black General's relationship with Braveman. A desperate obsessed woman and a straight man that wants none of this bullshit. And unlike practically all other romcoms or even comedies in general, its the woman who's the joke and who gets the slapstick treatment. And its fun. Then we look at other characters and we see the same generic formula of "men getting screwed by women, cue laughtrack". None of them have any self respect. Unlike Braveman.The other couple that doesn't fall into this is Minion and Roach Girl. Sometimes she's the joke, but most other times these 2 are just cute together, the comedy comes from elsewhere.>way more in line with her general characterization (and the tone of the manga)The manga already showed that women being made fun of is in tone and in character, the maid secretary incident could go any number of ways, and Jin just chose the lame one.
>>282753166What a toothless ending to that arc
>>282765161If you had actually read the manga you would know the joke goes bothways and there is no geniune hatred that you are implying. Your brain is fried. Now kindly fuck off, I'd rather the thread archives than see a single post from you again.
>>282753166Boss already got his win. It's just comedy basics to let the hammer fall in retaliation.
>>282765535>you would know the joke goes bothwaysPost examples of Secretary getting the slapstick treatment of: being blown up/punched/threatened with neutering or alike.You can't.>implyingI'm not implying any hatred, reading-comprehension-kun.
Late reader bump
>>282757692>be so OP the monster mimic has no choice but to covertly harass you with spicy foodCute.
>>282768376Ganbare!
bump
Please join the thread for evil, we have pets.
blimp
>>282774110No joke, this page is super inspiring to me, I wanna do something like that in real life. Gather my own rag tag team of chuunis.
Chapter 27 yeah.Posting a bit early because of some business later on.
Behold! A very honest woman.
>>282775935Good lord those nips
>>282775935>>282775965Her only redeeming feature are those tits. Absolutely awful character, boring design, boring personality, doesn't mesh well with basically anyone, doesn't have any interesting/fun or in any way positive interactions with anyone, waste of ink and tit fat.
>>282729215>Let her play with his squishy paws and fluffy coatawwww what a softy
>>282776035>>282776079Ok, Bullshit Rate gave us the General's brain, but again, only because of her tits. If she was a man General wouldn't react like that. Seriously a useless character.I really like General's brain emergency meetings though.
>>282776232>got free endurance trainingsuper neatoAlso the crosschop is coolAnd the silhouette is even coolerAnd I agree, kill the bitch.
>>282776294She has weirdly short arms here.
>>282776160I can never hate a triangle mouthed girl that's a stickler for the rulesIt's my hyper specific fetish
Chapter 28 yeah.UMI DA
>>282776397>>>/wsg/5988871
>>282775935Made For Mindbreak
>>282776445Stop hitting him you stupid whore.
>>282776530true dat
>>282753144lol artist messed up drawing her leg.
>>282776760Shes so strong, just imagine how powerful her children with Braveman would be
>>282776760God, this body.Though I always found this swipe stupid. Just make her hit the watermelon normally really hard, and make one of the halves fly off and take out the dude.
>>282776849...Braveman's superpowers are strength and endurance...General (officially at least) doesn't have any super powers, but everyone acknowledges she's very strong, agile and robust as well.She's basically a female Braveman, but with reverse personality.Damn.
>>282776397>>282776760The X wasn't because the author was being lazy, he was was just marking the spot.
Aaaand done! Danke fer comin'!TOMORROW. Bros before hoes?
>>282776972CHILDBEARINGHIPS
>>282777030>>282776972C HI LDB EA RI NGH IP S
>>282775935So what's the rate?
>>282777114damnit, I tried something but it didn't work.
>>282776972>usain boltAight, time to whip out the jap one>砂浜ダッシュって何かボクサーみたい>You run on the beach like a boxer?I might be missing something here. It doesn't mention Negro Bolt though.
>>282777385Japs love Rocky
>>282777398So its a rocky reference?... Actually, yanks know that movie too, they made it, why not just leave it in the translation? Maybe the translator didn't see Rocky like me or smth.
>>282740676As someone who also hasn't read this, isn't this chapter an obvious setup for them to be a couple later? Even without the spoiler
>>282777827What goes on between the ears of "localisers" is an enigma of the ages
>>282776651Makes me wonder if something else was drawn first and then it had to be changed so that her knee could cover herself up
>>282777827>>282777385There was a beach episode in Hajime no Ippo where Ippo trained to use his toes while running
>>282776079I like she's fucking standing there muttering all of this to herself like a retard.
>>282755316So, does this imply that boss is a blondie?
>>282775904Chicks in suits!My only weakness!Oh nooooooo!
>>282776141Very Hellshing-escue
>>282779535I feel like you're right, but I can't remember any exact scene like that.
>>282776986I could swear it was previously stated that Braveman's power was physical enhancement, and that he could make his power stronger by training to improve his base strength.So, a kid with both General's innate physical abilities and Braveman's power as a multiplier would be insanely powerful.
>>282779535>>282779846>>282780013>I could swear it was previously stated that Braveman's power was physical enhancement, and that he could make his power stronger by training to improve his base strength.I don't remember quite well but isn't it when he goes to train with the Turtle Hermit in the mountains?
>>282775997>lost so badly, he brokeReally? Kamen Soldier's a little bitch.
>>282776141
>>282776232Just tank a super-powered punch, no problem. Are you guys 100% sure she doesn't have any super power?
>>282780108Nah, not this. I was thinking one of the comedy scenes in hellsing had a similar thing, but I might be misremembering.
>>282776445They said Miss Secretary is small, but those are no joke.
>>282776445>>282776397Think about it- the boss had to custom order RX-themed bikinis and towels for everyone. He probably also needs to know their measurements.
>>282775935She is always standing erect, ready to poke out the eyes of evil.
>>282776972HOLY ASS
>>282777028Thanks.
>>282781003Did he do that with his psychokinesis?
>>282776445Reminder that physical attacks have no effect on Boss-kun.
>>282776851HNNNNNGGGGHHHHH MY HEART!>>282776972HUOOOOOOOOH MY DICK!
>>282780962He'd often make these kind of comedic faces for a punchlineAnd I'm sure there's a bunch of times there's a meeting of bespectacled individuals at a single table
>>282777028Thank you gozaimasu.There is something hot about her holding that swimsuit.
>>282777028Thanks for dumping.
>>282782198Anon, that's her eye patch.
>>282783602But... no that can't be. Am I a perver
>>282781003That sounds more like a task that got delegated to Secretary-san, unfortunately.
>>282775935now thisthis I can get behind
>>282779846Isn't it the major's war council?
>>282776160Your relationship with manga is not healthy, man.
>>282778025Setup doesn't guarantee payoff.
>>282776022>>282776160>>282776291Autism.
>>282783602Eyepatch bikini is a thing!>>282784032You're still a pervert though.
>>282784761>You're still a pervert though.Damn, I'll awake as the pervertmonster I guess.My powers are to know what your favorite kink is by looking at you and my evil plan is to compile all that data into an excel sheet and leak it on an anynomous message board.
>>282785976If Ore Twintail taught me anything, you have to have your perversion based around a particular fetish, you can't just be generic pervert dude
>>282774110Its really funny the first few chapters the minions were relatively normal height then they just got stuck as chibis for the rest of the series
>>282776640Just sex already
>>282777028Danke OP
>>282787256Fetishes are serious business.
>>282784388>Why do you dislike things? Can't you only like things instead?
>>282790286That's not what anyone is saying at all in any way. Talking about something small as if it's a huge deal in a retarded way makes it seem like you're overly emotional for no reason so you have something wrong with you. I understand if you're autistic or something but maybe consider how things look from someone else's perspective. There's plenty of better ways to phrase the retarded posts.
>>282790286When I dislike things I tend to not sperg for multiple posts about it. People usually get the message after a single one.
>>282790366>>282790353This is the weirdest fucking interaction. You don't have a problem because you like a character, but because of how some anon voices his dislike for it. Wtf.>Overly emotionalReading comprehension strikes again.
>>282791080What that anon is saying, is that there are ways of commenting on things you don't like without coming off as a sperg. You come off as a sperg.I personally don't care. Spergs in the threads is the price of browsing here. You're an annoying fucker, but I've been in threads with bikini schizo, Jeremy and many other mental cases long past.
