i need your expertise as Asuka fags to point out what looks offI did an asuka animation its clearly not on-model to my liking and yours i assumeMy goal is to completely own and conquer the Evangelion artstyleGo go goi'll take requests too as long as they help me grind the Eva artstyle
>>288028879Go to e-hentai.org and search for the Eva Groundworks artbooks, there's bound to be plenty of Asuka references there if you really want to master the Eva style. If you want to draw more like the modernized Rebuild movie style I think there are production art books for that too.
>>288028879OP, your quest is admirable. Are you specifically trying to mimic the mangaka/concept artist (Sadamoto)? In any case, start by reanimating some existing scenes or movements from the show and comparing them. If you would like a request, the "Chance..." scene from ep8 where Asuka looks especially smug.
That's an awful idea because you picked the worst girl, I wish nothing but failure and despair on you. I spit on you.Btw she is Kensuke's hole.
a camisole dress is all about the focus on the shoulders and low-cut chest area, very important and missing here
>>288028911aights i will thanks for the reference sauce>>288028950>the mangaka/concept artist (Sadamoto)yeah i really dig the artstyleits imprinted on mei wanna be like that asukaxkaji shipper guy but for rei specifically>>288028982nono i made this referencing the asuka figurine i bought cuz its the only one available in my shithole countryi'm a rei-chad at heart and long for a high quality rei figurine for my displaybsides the shortfilm made asuxshinji canon did it not?>>288028950aight i'll work on that that this eveningbut i'm specifically working on my linework so don't expect very much in the coloring>>288028997its a quickie walk cycle cuz its the one animated loop im fairly confident withi am juggling an irl job here afterallbut if theres a specific
>>288028879I like it. My biggest complaint is that her hair and dress is flowing in front of her instead of trailing behind her, which contradicts her sense of motion and makes it look like she's moving backwards.
>>288029095i was thinking more of a steady gust of wind running diagonallybut appreciate the inputbut are there any asuka-isms im missing?like is the torso too cagey/static?are the limbs feeling too long/short?that kinda thing yknow i need a weeb husbando's keen eye to attain purity
>>288029089Short film confirmed Asuka had feelings for Shinji (if you were in denial about it) but it ends with her basically moving on. Besides I wouldn't take a mostly-gag short as canon.Regardless, your art is adorable and you have good taste in girls so while I don't know shit about drawing, I wish you the best of luck!
>>288029195i thought the wedding panels were very cute especialy the low re gendou celeebrating in the background
>>288028879Decent attempt OP, three things that leap out to me:1. her neck looks a little too short which makes it look like she's hunching down somewhat2. the movement of her left arm is quite rigid almost as though it's a single straight unit from her shoulder to her wrist3. the ratio of her waist to her hips looks a bit off, I feel like her waist should be slightly narrowerStill it's way better than anything that I could do. If you're doing requests Hikari in a yukata
>>288029420thanks for the feedbacki'll internalize the hip to waist ting especially cuz i often struggle to get the body proportions right
>>288028879The stiff arms is what's getting me. The face is fine but I feel like the limbs are too long.Also, no >>288029195 is fucking wrong and since he brought up Kensuke is mostly likely the schizo who spams Eva threads. She didn't "move on". The whole point of the short is she Asuka wants her own happy ending and realizes she doesn't want to be gifted one. As, for canon Anno said it's the 4th ending to Eva and it's listed as Episode 27.
>>288030115>the 4th ending to Eva and it's listed as Episode 27you mean the rebuild movies?
>>288030115Please don't lump me in with retarded Kensukefaggots, that was my only post in the thread. I believe if not for the events of the series, they would have hooked up, but during the special she chooses to face reality instead of living in a delusion.That being said, I wasn't aware Anno said it was the 4th ending, when did he say that?
how long y reckon this thread will last?it won't be until atleast half the day that i return home and work on my animation
>>288028879why is she doing that with her arms
>>288030544At least a bit longer
Is this the Eva discussion thread?
>>288032511I'm back homegimme an hour i'll do the requests after supper
>>288029420>Hikari in a yukatahere's a wip to bump the threadit was very educativei now know that theire chins are suprisingly longerthe lips are place closer to the nose than the chin
>>288037659Thanks anon, that's very cute
>>2880288791. The proportions are quite off if you want to be accurate, especially the legs.2. Pay more attention to how people walk; there is more movement in people's arms when they walk.3. I'm sure it's just in the early stages, but keep the bg timing and spacing more consistent with how fast Asuka's walkingDespite its reputation, Diebuster is probably the peak of Sadamoto's design abilities, so if you want a request, check the settei sheets from that series, especially Nono and the one-off mobs.
>>288037814this was just the bump here's the proper delivery i promised : DDDi'll do this request >>288028950 tomorrowi'll be taking any other request anons put down if its reasonably within my reachif his thread goes down i'll make a new one tomorrow see you lads then
>>288038948>Diebuster is probably the peak of Sadamoto's design abilitiesNot really
>>288039045Which other anime would you consider his peak as a character designer? The immense amount of effort he put into details while keeping the linecount relatively low is legitimately ridiculous.
>>288038948>The proportions are quite off if you want to be accurate, especially the legsi was hoping on coasting along with the skirt obsecuring up most of the thighs but i guess ou guys have a keen eye for these things>there is more movement in people's arms when they walk.i was hpoing for something like pic related yknow abit more of a angry/driven walk but now i realize i didnt lean her forwards enough to sell that motion>I'm sure it's just in the early stages, but keep the bg timing and spacing more consistent with how fast Asuka's walkingyeah i ws kinda killing time cuz i didnt really wanna animate the bg sunflowers in keeping with the theme of my figurine which has her standing on a giant sunflower basebut im glad you took note of that descrepency in my experience nothing accelerates growth quite like trying to please a passionate audience with high standards>>288038948>>288039238>Diebusteri'll give it an educational watch since you reccomend it so highly
>>288039041Beautiful maiden of light!
>>288028879Her legs look a bit too long, and overall her movement seems a bit too stiff. It also seems like she's laid a bit too far back for her weight, if she wasn't wearing the dress it would be more obvious.The subtle tilt on her torso is very nice though, and the weight distribution on her feet looks good. The flaws are quite subtle unless I'm deliberately looking for them.
>>288039558Oh, and if you're doing requests maybe asuka adjusting her shorts/underwear?
>>288028879head too smallarms too still>>288037659>>288039041good shit, keep it up
>>288040363stiff*
>>288028879She's far too long
>>288028879best girl
>>288042402I don't see Misato
>>>/vg/566676628You have genuine mental illness, !-Akemi.See how all of your posts are short mindless spastic spam? This is why it's obvious you're obsessed with "the last word". People who are explaining how insane you are, and how you need to stop ruining threads do not care about "the last word".
