What do you think
>>7253968wheres the other leg
>>7253971I got lazy… pretty distracting?
>>7253968Not bad. I like the style>>7253977Just copy and flip the left side
>>7253983>flip the left sidecan't do that, the perspective would be off
>>7253968Look at more mating press references go to pornhub, xvideos, etc. Watch porn and screenshot a frame that you like. Try and include more of the mans (or woman if you're one of those) legs and body. Your line art looks very nice as well.
>>7253968needs anal as well
>>7253968average, (I've seen alot of porn)
>>7253968How long you been drawing for? My guess is 3mo - 2 years (I have no idea how hard you work)
>>7254182Retarded dunning Kruger. People have been drawing for 4 years and still can’t draw at that level
>>7253968Her face is kinda fucked up.Other than that looks good
>>7253968Oh God...
>>7254649your attitude is reflected in your artwork :^)
>>7254649They know they can hurt you more because of the effort you put into it.It's like if you have to decide about throwing rotten eggs at some famous faggot on a red carpet, or at some poor bum on the streets... which one would be better to see? We want to see the faggot wearing the expensive suit defeated and crying and reacting while we fap and laugh like autistic retards.
>>7254649Post it here, let’s see it>>7254400I’ve been drawing since I was a kid but not every day or anythingAppreciate the feedback
>>7253968I will save it for later if you catch my drift
Blog?
>>7254649>>7254400get fucked idiot crab lmao
>>7254804Glad to hear it>>7254810@pomotoros on twitter, it’s basically empty rn. But going to try to make posts regularly>>7254477What would you recommend changing/what looks off?
>>7253968I will fap to this.
>>7254798
>>7254986I'm afraid you lack appeal my man, yours looks like boomer "hentai" from the mid 2000s
>>7254986because yours is disgusting. 0 effort asshole looks the way it would be drawn in a childrens cartoon. thats anime though huh. enjoy the feedback bud
>>7254986It looks a little AI to me. I feel like it’s the line art giving me that impression. The steam could be a bit clearer, maybe in a different part of the drawing. The cum is also a bit flat, and the split between her asscheeks and asshole is weird.The coloring is really nice, and the expressions. I think with just some small changes it could get traction.
>>7255003Not him but you sound like a petty faggot
>>7255006Thanks, this was my first finished drawing ever that I made and looking back at it I can see how it’s full of tiny mistakes that make it look awkward. Probably the fact that I referenced it from a porn frame and that I didn’t study from any finished pieces but only from books didn’t help
>>7255007now you dont want feedback? make up your mind
>>7253968>What do you thinkI think you should post in the generals insteda of opening your own threads. She looks like an amputee btw.
>>7254649>my coom image which was at least on the same level if not better>>7254986Dunning Kruger in all its glory.
>>7255035>She looks like an amputee btwOH THAT'S HOT
>>7255035Never ceases to amaze me how people on this website will just casually announce that they lack object permanence.
>>7255047Lol. Nah, it genuinely looks wrong. Sorry for hurting your ego.
>>7253968It looks like a copied photo ref with a cartoon face drawn in. No offense but thats what it looks like
>>7255038Kys crabcel
>>7255035That’s fair. I added another leg after people mentioned it was noticeable. I’m rarely on this site so I wasn’t sure if porn was alright in generals I’m kinda retarded. >>7255047 isn’t me but I kinda figured most people wouldn’t think about it cuz I’m a bit lazy>>7255014We all start somewhere and if this was your first finished piece, that’s a great start. If you start the conversation by whining about not getting attention, people are going to automatically insult you though. Life drawing is super helpful if you ever get the chance>>7255053Yeah I see it, still figuring out how to blend stylization and how I want to color.
>>7253968Plap or Oh God
>>7255148The oh god thing was hot, it gives you a hint of what's she's going through...
>>7255038no draw loser in all (she/her) glory
>>7255069Oh no, the dunning krugerino is mad.>>7255148This needs better art, not a better caption.
>>7255076>That’s fair. I added another leg after people mentioned it was noticeable. I’m rarely on this site so I wasn’t sure if porn was alright in generals I’m kinda retarded. >>7255047 isn’t me but I kinda figured most people wouldn’t think about it cuz I’m a bit lazyTotally fair and good attitude.Also, even if I decide to just ignore the missing leg as if it was hidden, it's too much of a stretch in this case. Like, if you were to draw a hidden leg behind her body, what would it look like? That's contortionis levels of flexibility which doesn't translate into a comfortable or even natural pose.
>>7255184Die no draw cock sucker shitter aijeet
>>7255240Your coping and screeching is adorable. Keep me entertained Dun Krugleone.
raven
>>7256528disgusting
>>7255155That's not necessary. I self-insert as the plap sfx
>>7256528santa maria.....el abominacion.......
>>7256636>>7256747You shouldn't be exposing your virgin status like that. Some satanic faggots would be hunting you for them rituals.
>>7256775>Disliking morbid obesity menas you are a virgin.Tell me you have an unhealthy fetish without telling me you have an unhealthy fetish.What's your sub fetish? Scat or Femdom?
>>7256780Keep exposing your virginity further and further. If you think that's "morbid obesity", you need to go out there and see some real people.
>>7256796Where I live that's considered morbid obesity, yes.I can't help if you aemriburgers love your burgers so much that the fat completely clogged your brain.
>>7256796Lmao what. She's fat as shit, absolutely morbidly obese. Granted I assumed her height but the body type matches.
>>7256826I noticed this only now. She's so fat, she can't even wear high heels lol.
>>7256775>>7256796
>>7256826>>7256832>>7256801>>7256780The absolute state of "western manliness"
>>7253984Twist it some degrees to the left and draw over it.
>>7256877The absolute state of coping amerifats.
>>7256528An orc ate Raven and stole her clothes
>>7256826let's see paul allen's fat raven
>>7254986more appeal, worse anatomy>>7253968worse appeal, better anatomytry a more interesting pose and less muddy colors
>>7256877You need to be an archaeologist to find the woman beneath all that fat. Praising the desecration of the female form makes you more of a faggot than a literal homosexual.
>>7257117I think you got your quotes mixed up there amigo
>>7256877Be careful not to die sofocated obesity chaser anon>>7257122KEK
>>7256528I'm jaimacan
>>7257117The color advice was really helpful, thank you. I know the second leg isn’t great, but I’m ready to move on to a new piece. Thank you anons for the critique
>>7256775
>>7253968You can't go wrong with Raven
>>7257112Let’s see it get refuted
>>7256528>>7257728FAT BITCHES
>>7258139Are you seriously comparing this thicc nicely proportinate lady to those obese landwhales?
>>7256528>>7256826>>7257728>>7257735>>7257737>>7257112I was there too, I had to take out my notebook and draw her ...
>>7258145aw hell naw not this nigga FUCK YOU, NIGGA.
She was hot, shit went wild when she did this on the stage.... she was having the time of her life up there... exposing her ASS like that in front of everyone... I bet she still think about that at night, on her bed, rubbing herself... heh...
>>7258149boring she needs a bigger ass a bigger stomach how am i supposed to know she's fat if she ain't got no fat in the right places
>>7258149You liking obese people explains the unappealing anatomy in your nsfw stuff. Now it all makes sense. You have very non-conforming taste. This is why your redlines don't work when you try to do them for a broader audience that has normal esthetical standards.
>>7258205
>>7258145>>7258146yeah these almost look a little normal, for him at leastneed more fat ravens though
>>7258219It's the opinion of the mainstream.
>>7258225Okay, I think that I remember what happened next; She was there shivering on the stage like if some big cold honey pot was being poured down over her head, covering her all over, she was moaning, you could barely hear her.... until, she suddenly exploded convulsing all of that hot jiggly flesh of her sweated body, cumming on stage... She walked away fast even when people were cheering in standing ovation. She didn't won the cosplay competition though.>>7258227Mainstream says a lot of things, most of it retarded bullshit. Not complaining tho
>>7257189
>>7256826for more warmth
my waifu
>>7258784You're a lucky man, anon
>>7256528LA KREATURA!
>>7256528It's a mountain of fat and cellulite, disgusting
>>7256528deformed and unpleasant monster
>>7255155>>7256700which is it
>>7253968Looks bad, wtf is that finger? Where leg? Uneven eyes
>>7253968pretty boring porn, you need to add 1-2 more fetishes for it to stand out.
>>7260863808s>>7260845and heartbreaks
>>7260845>>7260863WHICH IS IT
>>7258340blog?
>>7263911This is my blog >>7256256I don't have any socials
>>7263205Both, you low IQ moron.
>>7254986This could have a lot of appeal but you completely and absolutely fucked the sexual organs of both, she doesn't have a pussy and her asshole looks like a sharpie drawing on a flat plane. Cum looks like a sticker. Come on dude, good shapes are appealing, especially for the SEXUAL PART OF YOUR SEX DRAWING, put some effort inLook at some hentai artists for reference on how they draw that shit and compare it to the real thing, why is everyone here so bad at doing research for ref>>7257424I'd go for deeper values, they're all too close together, you're not giving much definition beyond your lines and it makes everything flat
>>7253999>pornhubi hope they dont live in the US, states are apparently blocking access to pornhub now? not that they will stop everyone and not that pornhub still has good content since the purge. although i cant be for sure, i use other sources for sex stuff anyway
>>7253999Epic numbers, guy
>>7264090XXPLOSIVE
>>7264113did it work
>>7264113OH NO???
>>7258139this looks fat to you? To you, slim people must be actual skeletons.
>>7267512did I say she was fat?
>>7254986Nice style, although the balls are kinda goofy lookin.Also it'd help sell the picture if her eyes were looking back at the cock instead of off into space.>>7257424Bery nice.Cock needs more detail though.It's all about the cock.
First time NFSW?First time on a drawing pad for me.By fuck do I need to learn body dimensions.
>>7268014You need to learn a lot more than that
>>7268014Tried to get some kind of result to say I'm getting somewhereShe looks high, but that's probably just a euphemism for 'I cant draw for shit'
>>7268165turn it on againhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MTZgE8D8a9E
>>7268165TURN IT ON AGAIN
>>7253968It’s not your first time. That doesn’t mean it looks good though. But also that doesn’t mean it doesn’t appeal to coomers as it is now either. As lewd art goes, I’ve seen much worse get 30k likes on X.
>>7268230>>7268923Newfag so no clue what you're saying.
>>7264173>i use other sources for sex stuff anywayMe too. I usually just bring a girl to my dungeon and make my own refs.
>>7258193I hate fats but we all need to draw one eventually.
>>7264113>absolutely fucked the sexual organsI assure you, coomers do not give a fuck about anatomy looking like shit
>>7268932Are you me?
>>7253968Anon, don't let anyone tell you that you have to improve or practice. Just keep drawing the exact same way and you'll drown in likes.
>>7269356I hate this so much. Once I get good at drawing I will show people how REAL hentai is made. Coomers have no taste.
>>7268930just joshing
>>7268930Just checking.
hey op ANYMORE PORN???
>>7268939That fucking asshole tho, and those assholes who eat it up!
>>7272447it's the SUN RAYS
>>7272436Not quite porn but I’ve been doodling lol
>>7272436& the start of a 2koma I know d.va is overdone as hell… wondering if I should just make it an oc
>>7269102are you bee?
>>7273398>>7273402I’ll jerk off to these when I break my nofap streak
>>7269102>>7273902Are you flea?
>>7275485are you FREE?
Bump
>>7258139like Le Tailor Girl.
>>7277617le tar
>>7268939>I assure you, coomers do not give a fuck about anatomy looking like shitYou, as an artist, should give a fuck.
>>7279407
>>7256832She brought high heels, but it was too difficult to walk in them so she took them off. Happens all the time with fat chicks.
>>7282036>too difficult to wear/useThat's a nice design consideration for drawing fat women, quite hot desu.
My first time drawing NSFW. I'm finding my drawing very weird and I don't know what it would be other than pearly cum. (I'm still learning how to draw hands)
>>7253968Stop tracing AI you numbnut
>>7283490its not traced
>>7253968Did you use Mandy Muse as reference for the ass
>>7285323nah, athena rayne
>>7285545thanks for the sauce.
>>7253968Hey OP did you draw anything else?
>>7289927planning on finishing something this weekend
>>7292712Well done OP
Bumppp
Have you ever had sex?
>>7295280I hate questions like this. It’s always a ladyboy asking.
Jeez, I wonder why this thread has stayed up for so long? What could be attracting anons into it for so long? There must be so much to critique in OP's pic or something.
>>7295774I know you're being facetious but its surprised me
What the fuck how this shitty post is still up?
>>7297619I'm bumping this shit, I don't give a fuck. Sue me.
I want more crappy Ravens. Draw some shit already.
>>7300841then draw
>>7256528exquisite
>>7258454OK BUDDY!
>>7292712the asshole sort of looks like the end of a balloon...
>>7255053Why is this a bad thing?
>>7258340The text is actually really nice. I'd use a font like that
>>7306759Thanks!
>>7302519I can't draw shit, I'm here to motivate others.
Cool thread
>>7253984i recommend adding a little creature's head popping out of the butt
>>7256528
>>7256528>>7310832
>>7253968dick too big, porndicks are so boring
Let me know what you think
>>7311964This is fucking GOOD. Love her fucking face. Well done anon!
