Previous Thread: >>7390717Post your current drawing here and give constructive critique to others! Don't take anything personal!Please make sure your posted image is clear, downsized to around 2000 pixels wide, rotated to the correct orientation, and that any unused space is cropped.If you want critique on a drawing from the previous thread, you can delete it there and repost in this one.>/ic/ Resources/Reference/Downloads/Links:>STICKY:Completed: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Vm4IJpq0Mbvb-Krl5_mJ_m6TsC_qjsaN/editNew collaborative: https://hackmd.io/UMnZVhNITW-T2wZpHw6d0Qw/ic/i: https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/Hardcore: https://hackmd.io/7k0XRnIQR6SValR77TDfZw?view>WHERE to get study materialsannas-archive.org>>>/ic/artbook>>>/ic/video
how many boxes have you grinded so far this week?
>>7437405only your moms.
>>7437405hundreds, prob
What do you think could be improved about it?
>Didn't use my art in the OPI'm going to kill myself
This should be the final version. I forgot to add ironsights and to be frank. I dont give a shit anymore.
>>7437787Reminds me of Thief or Dishonored>>7438052>and to be frank. I dont give a shit anymore.Still tho, looks nice friend.While the armor and torso in general could use some work, the face and guns draw the eye and the scene as a whole is evocative and well composed.
>>7438062Thank you. I did work on the composition (and values) A lot. A lot of it was draw redraw experiment after nearing the end instead of thumbnailing before. The armor does lack some pizazzz though is it the rendering or simplistic design and/or nonenergetic shapes, booring texture?. I Will have to plan and Xperiment harder before drawing nextime.
>>7437402scavanger slime animation
>>7438177Im not an animator but a bit more exaggeration in terms of angling the face or hanging onto a frame prolly wouldnt be amiss
>>7437405Enough to draw better chairs than that guy from last thread, kek
>>7438177I think the nipple should leave a trail
>>7440154And functional/aesthetic guns too apparently. Christ that guy was up his own ass.
Been stagnating for some time
I drew this yesterday
I know it's completely fucked, but I can't see it myself at all. Any help?