Archives & Other Resources: https://pastebin.com/wETipqYwAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp (was I supposed to do this?)In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3'The next thread' EditionPrevious Thread: >>93062441
>>93071457>ScenarioHaunted Mode, Impossible Difficulty, All Threats>RulesPick 1 Location. This is your starting location. Do not assign Individual Threats to locations.You cannot take both Insomniac and Night Owl.>Alexander Young>>92953298>Dr. Cassandra Blane>>92949602>Hugo Volle>>92949657>The Niggerman>>92950270>Koharu Hokiguchi>>92950612>Jack>>92952449>Carter Mills>>92953394>Elizabeth Dyer>>92953399>Richard (Dick) B. Mullen>>92953668>Francis Johnson>>92953866>Diana Patel>>92954304>Mika>>92954769>Carlos the Jackal>>92955666>Helen>>92955819>Chad Baller>>92992152>Professor Rupprecht von Krüger>>92969164>Harry Donkel>>92957850>Penelope 'Penny' Dropps>>92971047>Hatano Hirobumi>>92973925>Police Commissioner Paul Blane>>92974032>Henry Walker>>92974197>Nekoyama>>92988722>Anna-Lee Cummings>>92997926>Sydney Dhavernas>>93005897>Betsy Barker>>93006141>Young Blood>>93007217>Timmy Timmerson>>93007402>Relationship Charts:>Timmy Timmerson: https://rentry.org/te3ob64v>Sydney: https://rentry.org/i4u33dap>Writefags: >Lifted Veil:https://rentry.org/dcxy3ni3>https://tiermaker.com/create/urban-phantom-builds-17202048
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Arena Rules: https://rentry.org/ovtoupqeChargen is rules as listed + drawbacks buffed to be 1=2 2=3 and Final=5>Duke Archibald>>92769849>Quinn Smith>>92767160 >Saint Maluscomedo>>92784888 >Marquis Alric Bolivard>>92781872>Silas Nash>>92761130 >Gristletooth the Turncoat>>92761154 >Nestor Wolf>>92777414>Tanaka Haruto>>92771365>The Angel Emmanuel>>92774620 >Auria Hirpinia>>92779891>Duke-Elector Vicaro de' Barca>>92797256>Duke Harold Staggard II of Reins>>92779214>Catherinne Aisla de Lyoncaster>>92778563>Avesta, Lord of Boglands>>92770992>St. Mog, the Avaricious>>92780438>Duchess Lucia of House Carafa>>92777819>Consul Levi du Ponte III>>92780186>Emperor Aurelius>>92782129>Lord Steerpike>>92804102>Evian, Grandmaster of the Order of the Boot.>>92785307>Sir Atticus Hendrix>>92787019>Natas Reficul>>92874173>Alcyone Pertinax>>92793569>Baron Raspail>>92827032>'Archangel' Seraphina>>92815677>Magus Filius Lupa, Barone>>92856430>Piza the Conqueror>>92852127>Tiberius Rex, The Pirate King>>92860297>Giovanni Florina>>92872532>Margus Iscariot Pertinax>>92889234>Duke Pollu Contra of Sunge>>92890871>Valeria>>92892007>Robin Stormlily>>92946734>Vožd Lampys Erymanthius>>92947419>Amos Hek>>92945163>Executive Officer Armaslanta>>93028575Event:>Vožd Invitational: >>93025558
>>93071563Writefags:>Relentless walls whose darksome round contains (Ambrose XXII Arxakonte)https://rentry.org/zqufv2um>"What's in a name?"https://rentry.org/dszi3u8o>Imagehttps://rentry.org/Margiotte>Harold Receives a Letterhttps://rentry.org/px25ifxt>Groanworthy Retorthttps://rentry.org/8zo56inz>Answered Prayers (The Angel Emmanuel)https://rentry.org/z742oosiRelationship Chart:> Personal Thoughts of the Vožd on his Imperial Peershttps://rentry.org/yqz27agi>Giovanni Florinahttps://rentry.org/fc2xhqtaArtfags:Evian’s Rise to Power:https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1715/65/1715654334064.pngFavorite to Win It:https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1718/08/1718088010459.jpgMap:Latest Version (Graphic): >>92990448Latest Version (Political): >>92871022Latest Version (Emblem): >>92885956Crusades: >>92963997Build Reviews:https://rentry.org/The-Lords-Of-The-Realm-reviewTiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/be-the-noble-mp-tier-17148687
RULES: https://rentry.org/b595h6dm>Team 1>Natsuo Uchiha >>92078251>D >>92035734>Himari Miko >>92227101 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/HimariJutsu>Takeru Suzuki >>92037873>Team 2>Osamu >>92030854>Shimabukuro Fumio >>92034456>Kichōna >>93033948 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/NardoKichonaJutsuList>Nodao-Douji >>92130402>Team 3>Kamiko Karatachi >>92474846>Masukuda Rarime >>93032365 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/nbd7ikrf>Ichika Chinoike >>92224854>Kita >>92247657>Team 4>Kiko Inuzuka >>92046953>Remilia Orochimaru >>92067086>Itami Nanae >>92041809>Kazen Uzumaki (No Yin Chakra Affinity) >>92129825 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/5kp2svbp>Team 5>Ezaki Tuto >>92143158>Jin Hyuga >>92067527>Shinrō Kamotai >>93066678 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/ShinroJutsu>Yuma Kouda >>93027066>Team 6>Tsugumi >>92078303>Ghidorah >>92069165 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/xant7fe2>Junki Takenaga >>93007593>Sen Yamamoto >>93019587 + https://rentry.org/mkyze5fa>Team 7>Kamiizumi Tadafusa >>92443623>Fujiwara Nobutake >>92104939>Kamare Hozuki >>92097216>Daiki Ueno >>92099009>Team 8>Rio Konoki >>92286130>Mitsuteru Chihoshi >>>92596513>Kuro Blackshadow >>93014745>Choko Yumiya >>92229037>Team 9>Inaba Hyuga >>92642892>Mojo Nakasendou >>92130059>Kitsumoto Hachirō >>92312525 +https://rentry.org/i94sja>Eiken Shinzo >>92374513>Team 10>Dojuma Takiga >>92435927>Ayuka Hagihara >>92418225>Oishi Teruo >>92424132>Egao >>92425369>Team 11>Miura Lee, Man of Iron >>92982908>Rinka Akagi >>92454180>Akaito Tenyo >>93033931>Chosuke-Chosuke Kirabokua >>92469859>Teamless:>Taihō Shiryō. >>92065120>Eiji >>92132327>Tahaki Shiteru >>93040327
>>93071606>Loners:>Ahiratsu Ōtsutsuki >>92073651>Darkbone >>92064881>Kijyo-Douji >>92092125>Engetsu Bōfū >>92101140>Insane Wild Boar >>92164715>??? >>92164855>Setsu Suru >>92181406>Sado Mazohisuto >>92181768>Kanami-Douji >>92194017>Barou >>92473683>Sekka Hakobu >>92143990>Gyū >>92157552>Yōki >>92157657>Koroko Kokoroko >>92235539>Mr. Hopo >>92411015>Lizard >>92249477>Aika Yuki >>92251220>Kondai >>92388984>Makura Hachimune >>92445626>The Surgeon >>92934104>Greasy P >>92955486>Brunhilde Gunther >>92974998>Ishirō Honda >>93020553>Hugh Napoleon >>93046548>Naruto MP Additional Archive but better (Writefags, Art, Relationship Charts, Info Cards, etc.):https://rentry.org/narutogeninversionmcyoag>Chunin Exam Stage 1 Hub Post:>>92135567>Chunin Exam Stage 2 Hub Post:>>92331218>Chunin Exam Stage 2 Logistics Post:https://rentry.org/w78sxh6g + >>92321962>Chunin Exam Stage 3 Logistics Post:>>92846432>The Chūnin Exams - Stage 2.5: The Preliminarieshttps://rentry.org/r54695mhNew Stuff:Updated Build:>Shinrō Kamotai>>93066678New Writefag:>Intrusive Thoughtshttps://rentry.org/2r9yw5pf (Ichika, Masu)Tiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/naruto-chunin-mcyoag-template-16244798
>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:New meme edit:mad science>>93063045New Art:>A hallowed path>>93065521>memories>>93067612>The Archive Link so you can keep using the funny numbers for builds (use this before complaining about dead links)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/92498234/#92498405>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Class 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampClass 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompt (Leaving this out because it might be useful for anyone writing a fight)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Class 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE>Class 1-D Character Summaryhttps://rentry.org/9bf3g>Newer Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds. Use whichever one you want)Version 4.2: https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92012978
>>93071633>STUDENTS:>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako>>88189202>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva>>88194077>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man>>88190591>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit>>88191735>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force>>88438219>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train>>88194200>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger>>88196397>Minerva Kim HN Spark>>88826766>Hailey Chang HN Recoil>>88826770>Faith Kang HN Drone>>88826774>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius>>88826778>Edith Lee HN Arena>>88826782>Noah Abrams HN Archangel>>88205041>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra>>88209661>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi>>88414797>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil>>88217649>Son Jugo HN Aspara>>88239137>Genma Go HN Goldorado>>88353862>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout>>88268251>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata>>88273479>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)>>88273837 + >>88758766>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)>>88383012>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)>>88193619+ >>91985145>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite>>88810810>Takara Tame HN Android>>89199766>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost>>91685518+>>91685973>Class 2-D>Mochi Uranus HN Smelly Hero: Stink Rat>>88196664>Kevin Rool>>88222618>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko>>88707393>Hiroki Asai HN Champion of Negativity: Zetsuboy>>88755823>Class 1-E https://rentry.org/p6dwm>Students (Cont.)>Class 3-D https://rentry.org/vx255>William Dustice HN King Billy>>88192360>Johanna Hilt HN Gauntlet Hero: Weiss Schwarz>>88195437>Ganto Kanzaki HN The Clone Hero, Commander (NPC)>>89284218>Kagami Reina>>89605669>Norman “Norm” Smith HN Whatabout>>91046080>Rumi Aratsuki HN Hysteria>>91363307>Class ???>Kiki HN Yggdrasil>>91707234
>>93071648>Students (Cont.)>Class 1-C (Shiketsu)>Okimoto Chisaka>>91130422 >Isabela Nakahata>>91351414>Lilinah ‘Riri’ Inoue>>91347120>Ysmir Dragonborn>>91349452>Daniel W. Rain>>91352447>Class 3-B (U.A.)>Animata>>90990850>Synthesis>>90992108>Meadow>>90992377>Top Smile>>90992508>Ichimaki>>90994440>Nekiro Nishi>>90997317>Madoka Mikan HN Heartbeathttps://rentry.org/eesb8>Itō Sukemochi HN Warpden>>90973632>Li Yinzhen HN Jiangshi>>90978093>Katsumi Hachizaki:https://rentry.org/HeartMHA>Cormelia Busujima>>91353847>Class 1-F>Suki HN Sukeban>>91670899>Runt HN Dust Devil>>91691942>Rob Williams HN: Velvet Worm>>91728780>Haiiroshi Kinzoku HN Fullmetalhttps://rentry.org/Fullmetal-mha>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken>>91807240>Tatsuya Yamashita HN Bad Touch>>91808184>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day>>91809104>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million>>91814363>Kiyoura Shidehara HN Icky Hero: Slimenuts>>91782779>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus>>91833690>Nayuki Kyoko>>91834965>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube>>91890433>Misato Fukushima>>92006447>PRO HEROES>U.A. Teachers:>Yunikon, the Brilliant Hero>>90998494>Dr. Seto Kawata>>91051432>Shiketsu Teachers:> Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan>>88189414> Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn>>88190438>Pierre Vachon HN The Gentle Way Hero: Ippon>>88205924>Masanori Kitamura HN Hijack>>88219956>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic>>88231509>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero, LocaLoca (NPC)>>88745486>Omura Tadao HN Deceptive Hero, Conman>>88754723>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver>>91719484>Takahashi Mako, HN Ersatz>>92011019
>>93071663>PRO HEROES (Cont):>Unaffiliated Heroes>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)>>88425908>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu>>88194386>Kalianne Sato HN "Flame Strike Hero: Honoken">>88568039>Ryuji Inoue HN Transport Hero: Rescue Ray (Principal - Sunray Troubled Youth Center)>>88195499>Akagi Sanpatchi HN "Popsy">>88204632>??? HN Birdy>>88225549>Edmund Connor HN The Tall Man>>88286518>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy>>88301887>Kevin Thompson HN The Purple Man>>88357698>Yuichi Ishida HN Slipstream>>88389419>Roland Walker HN PsyKing (Sandatsu'd)>>88616703>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt>>88616848>Junpei Ozu HN: The Standstill Hero, "Floor">>88820563>Rodion Popo HN Overman>>89015229>Ludolf Raphael Victorius, Hero Name: Fair Marshal>>89006731>Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King, Saurus>>89508780>Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi>>89507063>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound>>91016593>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero, Wavelength>>91032513>Astra Smalls Aka Size King>>91360064>Richard Wilkins HN The #1 Hydro Hero: "Splash">>91721688>MR. BULLET>>91812743>Shōgeki Heshi HN: Crash>>92012115>Tóu Zhǎng Koie/Phys P>>92017795>Kazuya Ono>>92012443>Alpha Ueno HN: Sylph>>92014322>Iwayama Kentaro HN Sisyphus>>92947131>Mash, Renji Kurokawa>>93005848>SUPPORTERS:>Lady Astoria Belmont>>88201576>Rika Eichi>>88209395>Yaju>>88223795>Isaiah Sibylla (Keola Ku)>>88231241>Aura Curie (Student)>>88231609>Just "The Doctor">>88721597>Fransk Brunhilde>>89014208>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr>Yusaku Kanzaki a.k.a. Clone Cop (NPC)>>89278250>Emilia Busujima>>89349231>Detective Risa Date>>90657164>Holden Deckard>>90913931>Brightly>>91006966>Satoru Tani (Student)>>91149772>Kuji Futoi (Student)>>91363451>Yuko Ozaku (Student)>>92025025
>>93071690>VILLAINS (Villain Name):>Turncoat Agency:>Keiichi Tano HN Racer V / VN Getaway>>88926925>Tenshi Chisio HN Caduceus / VN Sawbones>>88927453>Jack Dunn HN Three-Sixty / VN The Asset>>88931192>Pax Organization:>Eugene Kurtz VN Pax and Mercy>>88984432>Nightmare>>88984422>Unaffiliated Villains:>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler>>88206714>Karuga Ito (Teacher - Shiketsu)>>88192478>Shiori Shiratora VN Kamigami>>88192913>Recino R. Percutio>>88191385>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis>>88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt>hina seiyama VN panzer viii>>88226487>Giichi Mikata>>88198856>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel>>88209242>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido>>88278735>Jack Mitchell VN Marshall>>88456239>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan>>88669394>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight>>88926931>"Blank">>91050726>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth>>91050987>"Mammogar">>91051410>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82>TechVision Elite 2023 - 43Vista UltraSmart 4K TV>>91654960>JOHN DOE VN GREEN DOOR>>89018740>Suslik>>91699413>Ryuji Ayanokoji VN Overlord>>91702476>Jack Smithee VN The Gravedigger>>91702656>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain>>91702779>Rudi Brandt VN Sturmtruppe>>91703057>Bonzo Amato VN The Boss>>91703456>The Hospital Killer>>91772420>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais (Jet Black)>>91841242>Jessica Wu VN Surinam Toad Girl>>91851919>Jan Procházka VN Msr. Blanc>>91963570>Gustave Gavial VN Gnash>>92016443>Cosmo Black VN X.T.>>92016885>Kate Everly>>92016986>Sato Yukio VN Gold Man>>92385942>Horrific 5:>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator>>88917340>On Giết Năng VN Tether>>88921198>Erika Murakami VN Nox>>88923183>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox>>88930575>Edmund Muller VN Mercury>>88923191
>>93071705>VILLAINS (Villain Name):>Revolutionaries:>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm>>88376954>Mark Matuli>>88301910>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow>>88435130>Miriam Slowburn Hakase VN Prologing Evil: Big Hat (NPC)>>88736960>Kester Greenfield>>90921671>Vigilantes:>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca>>88197005>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius>>88209069>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai>>88630353>Rebecca Weber>>88722750>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright>>89012707>Yoshiro>>89338457>Sasha Azanami>>91080404>Rui>>91197187>Kaori Kaoru>>91229075>Choko Yumiya, VN Eye High>>92132153>Night Parade:>Cammy Link VN Karma>>88190537>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke>>88205909>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger>>88214481>Okane King VN Midas>>88190217> ??? VN Maw>>88250272> ??? VN Bogey>>88277889> Tomi>>88387913>Luccione>>90146415>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owari>>91030425>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not>>89250569>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral>>88856089>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus>>88666462>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet>>91702348
>>93071721Writefags:>Early writefags here (17 Pages)https://rentry.org/noydigbk>”First Test” Comphttps://pastebin.com/66ByP2sD>Questionnaire Comphttps://pastebin.com/Ksn0zJ31Else check the rentry>Lunch Hour (1-F)https://rentry.org/LunchHour>Internship Gossip (Clique)https://rentry.org/igqhcxhy>The Symbol of Death: Part 3 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Ookami Shizuka, Drekus, Hijack, The Boys (kind of))https://rentry.org/55t76vwp>With Open Hearts And Open Minds (Seiryu, Honoken, Hijack)https://rentry.org/2bqb4hiq>I Get Your Number And We Grow From There (Seiryu, Yoshizumi)https://rentry.org/4t3zcu2b>Spring Boy And Summer Girl (Seiryu, Honoken, Kotoba)https://rentry.org/yzbayxk5>Um Tempo Musical (Seiryu, Honoken)https://rentry.org/qxo4wft2>Messages From The Star (Seiryu, Yoshizumi)https://rentry.org/7rw4bbwc>Hearts Afire (Seiryu, Yamata, Blast Burn, Yamamoto)https://rentry.org/ewpc5tz3>A Hero Student's Uncertain Dating Prospects (Beach Day, Slip-n-Slideasaurus, Cube)https://rentry.org/DatingProspects>Frameless (Smokin' Sexy, Ryu-Kishi, Mirror Devil):https://rentry.org/u8snakxr>The Symbol of Death: Part 4 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Feral, Drekus, Ookami Shizuka, The Prophet) https://rentry.org/igwpicub>A Kunoichi's Birthday (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), Marrow, 1-D, Hijack, a bunch of people)https://rentry.org/6zruhinr>Monsters (Last Rite, Yamata)https://rentry.org/ph2rfaai>The Sword of Truth(Last Rite, Archangel, Nox, Localoca, Majestic)https://rentry.org/pop2nnyq>Chase (Kampai, other people)https://rentry.org/KampaiChase>Tooth and Claw, Issue 1 (Saurus):https://rentry.org/qsrvx8>A Friend in Need (Mirror Devil, Drone, Yamamoto, Yamata):https://rentry.org/p7zrib56>How lucky we are for having each other (Yamata, Mirror Devil)https://rentry.org/d4g5buec>The 4:30PM to KIXhttps://rentry.org/qfnavcko>Everything Wrong With the Two of Them 2 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Drekus, Feral and the rest of the Wild Hunt)https://rentry.org/bs79megt
>>93071735>Writefags (Final)>I Shall Not want(Archangel, Last Rite, Rosethorn)https://rentry.org/dr6wyh78>A Dragon's White Day (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), mention of the girls in 1-D)https://rentry.org/o3iji1n>A Multi-Dimensional Valentine's Day (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), Last Rite, Mirror Devil, Challenger, Sunlight Man, Android, Cool Boost, Radius, Marrow)https://rentry.org/399yrhts>News (Reaper, mentions of Forget-Me-Not)https://rentry.org/z7vhkv2s>Spectre of Revolution (Maru(maru), Marrow)https://rentry.org/m7o3zsqc>Vigilante Hunt, part 1 (Ryu-kishi, Last Rite, Marrow, Maru(maru), 1-D, 1-E, 1-F, Satoru Tani, Rosethorn, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/7qodqeyc>Rehab (Overdose, Yamata, Ryu-kishi and a cameo from Goldorado)https://rentry.org/rydady6a>Baited (Reaper, Satoru Tani)https://rentry.org/8pes8av2>Serpent (Mahoudeva, Honoken, Seiryu, Yamata)https://rentry.org/4aovibcq>The Plan (Desolator and The Five):https://rentry.org/8ageap3b>Team Wallflower, Assemble! (Yako, Drone, Blackout, Maru(maru), Capture Cloth, Mauler)https://rentry.org/TeamWallFlower_Part1>Conservation of Ninjitsu (Marumaru, Ryu-Kishi, Yako, Aura Curie, Blank): https://rentry.org/maru-blank>(Beach Day, Saurus, Majestic)https://rentry.org/TwitterBeef>Never Have One Last Score (Marumaru, Shoggoth): https://rentry.org/maru-shoggoth>If You Like Piña Coladas (Spark): https://rentry.org/upmhhgcd>The Doomed Plan (Desolator, Maddox, The Golden Age Five):https://rentry.org/akz38hz3>An Attempt in Broad Daylight (Floor, Maddox, Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Tether, Mercury, Desolator, Impakt, Sunlight Man, Challenger):https://rentry.org/qyd9d4d9>Catsu Curry (Bakeneneko, Yako, Capture Cloth, Overdose, Yamata)https://rentry.org/gmkwouxq>First Day: Ersatz, Rosethorn and a couple 1-D students make cameos.https://rentry.org/yka76xqz>Night of the Reaper prologue (Mahoudeva, Mirror Devil, Blackout, Forget-Me-Not, Reaper, Satoru Tani)https://rentry.org/48a3gma5
>>93071757>Writefags (Final):>Night of the Reaper, Part 1 (Reaper, Flying Force, Saurus, Rosethorn, Ryu-Kishi, Challenger, Cameos of Seiryu, Impakt, Sunlight Man, Mirror Devil, Mahoudeva)https://rentry.org/hb284fea>THE TOURNAMENT PART FIVE! (1-D, Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Rosethorn, Majestic)https://rentry.org/wy5yord3>Plan B (Mirror Devil, Desolator, Sunlight Man, Challenger, Impakt, Smokin' Sexy):https://rentry.org/t5ktcmw9>Frame (Mirror Devil, The Doctor, Smokin' Sexy, Impakt, Desolator):https://rentry.org/wbgxvk6x>Vigilante Hunt 2 (Ryu-kishi, Mirror Devil, Marumaru, Marrow, Yako, Conman, Majestic, Karaburan, Localoca, Ito, Rebecca Weber, Skycarver, Hijack, Ippon, Last Rite, The Clique, Flying Force, Yamata, others)https://rentry.org/VigilHunt22>The Monster's Aid (Desolator):https://rentry.org/v7ypkni8>Night of the Reaper Part 2 (Yamata, Overdose, Goldorado, Majestic, Desolator, Rosethorn, Reaper): https://rentry.org/wrong-answer>Devil's Counsel (Last Rite, Desolator):https://rentry.org/u8999fx9>Doing Business (Feral, Drekus, Karma, cameo of Reaper)https://rentry.org/3yuamq8i>Clown Days (Ryu-kishi, Popsy, Maru(maru), Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Popsy Team, mention of 1-D):https://rentry.org/pktzxywf>Full Circle (Rosethorn, Feral, Yamata, Overdose)https://rentry.org/um6ctydx>Recovery (Overdose, Yamata, Rosethorn and Karaburan)https://rentry.org/hp3mzyo3>Arrival (Mash, Impakt, Floor, mentions of Reaper)https://rentry.org/ay6n5m44>Full Circle II (Yamata, Flying Force, Saurus, Drekus, Feral, cameo of Rosethorn and Hiro)https://rentry.org/6ofoa93k>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS IN HEREhttps://pastebin.com/rsnEph0bFor Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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Rolled 2 (1d2)>>930716061. update my jutsu list2. nahhh
>>93071820update your build first foolin fact, you should all update your builds
>>93071832I already did that homoI won't update ALL of my builds tho, there's too many
>>93071832I don't feel like it
>Rules1) Play as is. Assume that the powers picked are at their starting level. Picking Learner also unlocks the second spell from the start. Don't forget to design the character and the soul they possess.2) Ignore the companions section. Pick 1 build to be close to, and 1 build to be distant towards. Options increasing companions instead increase the number of builds you are close with.3) Pick any starting city and bonus. The story will still start at the town of Easily.>You're a native to Shower City. You don't have to be an orphaned high schooler. Pick any background within reason.>None of the companions exist. Instead, everyone is part of an online friend group that, when meeting for the first time, discovered the coffee table rune>Other runes exist in Shower City that lead to different cities in case you don't want to join the main group.>The goal is still to defeat the 5 warlords, but in-universe the characters only have a vague prophecy to save the world from evil.
>>93071633Has it already been pointed out that snaddy for some reason gets darker skin the more evil he gets? What did he mean by that?
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>>93071832I still can't decide what perk to take. Gimme a bit longer.
>>93071876
>>93071862Who's your build so I can effortfag for them :)
>>93071832suggest updates for all the unupdated
>>93071871>ignoring the pure sex companionsWHAT'S THE POINT?!?
>>93071918>all5 point perkBody Modification x2Random basicRandom advanced
>>93071832Eh, fine. The writefag ain't ready yet, but I'll post the update when I get home.
>>93071871>NameReza Lotfi>SoulBassil>PathSwordsman>The Wingless CastAerial ManeuverabilityWing Slash>TalentsSpellblade - WaterHealing Wish>PerkBushwhacker>Starting CitySarbanes>"Reza is a college student who works at one of the older bookstores in the city. He usually keeps to himself, jotting down on his journal while exploring urban or natural spaces. To the point where he's rather experienced in survival skills. While he's rather laid back, he's more than willing to help anyone out if he has the time. whether by lending an ear, giving advice, or going all out through his actions.">Reza likes games that allow him to explore, both figuratively and literally. He likes learning a game's systems on the go, and when he's not finding strategies, He's sharing the maps he's made, and going on and on about foreign history. His work doesn't pay much, but it's quiet, and the owner allows us to hang out there sometimes. If you give him the chance, he can GM a detailed world for the group to explore instead.>"Bassil was our guide in the desert town of Ghazal. A bit of the Robin Hood type, he fell into a pool of life when he was young, and vowed to share his blessings he earned with those less fortunate, even if sometimes it wasn't always his. He joined our band soon after an altercation with the town's guards, but never got the chance to leave his home town."
>>93071918Updating the dumps could actually be funI might do that
>>93071871Oh sweet,a fresh build dump mp.
>>93071889On the odd chance that you're genuine, no thanks.
>>93071563I put the builds with their full names there and added the rest while I was at ithttps://rentry.org/Be_The_Noble
Builds for this feel: - https://youtu.be/RB6McEfXVSIHard mode, not Satoru Tani.
>>93071932>Body ModificationDon't remind me anon, I had to physically force myself to pick between Fox Illusionist and 1980's Cyborg Telepath for Sen and my decision remains tenuous until I write the training arc.
>>93072095Easily my glorious KING Majestic.
>>93072095bobby
>>93072133booby
>>93071871>NameRuy Eustáquio>SoulStinkleheimer the Stinkmaster>PathRogue>CardThe Rove>Forbidden ArtsThrowing Weapon MasteryEscape ArtsGuileUnfettered VisionEvoke LuckAspect of the Doll Goddess>GeneralStudied - Spellblade (Verdure)>CitySarbanes>Ngaio is a middle-aged comedian who has failed life. His jokes are shit (but he's quick with them and to light up a smoke!) and don't make any sense. Endless optimism, but doesn't like confrontation. Vastly prefers the fantastical world, where he thinks he's genuinely helping people. Loves Sonic the Hedgehog, Banjo Kazooie, and other scrimblo cereal mascot platformers. Probably a closeted furry.>We met Stinkleheimer in a rundown shack in the woods. He welcomed us in and gave us freshly baked and surprisingly sanitary prune bread. He claimed to be an abandoned homonculi. After his home was razed by an ill-timed fire-breathing giant chicken, he helped us fight it off and decided to come with us because he had nowhere else to go. Doesn't actually smell bad, only his poisonous homemade-bombs do.
>>93072182Ah shit, I changed his randomly generated human name in >name but not in the description. Oh well. Pretend it says Ruy.
>>93072182fastest dump in the west
>>93071633For someone so interested in hoarding quirks Sandy isn't being efficient. He could use his 300 points stockpile useless precognition quirks that would net him points each, meaning that after he fills his initial storage he'd have a positive 2100 points extra to fill.
>>93071606Do I have to take Elemental Clone separately for each element I have?
>>93072254The way I see it any Elemental ability lets you trade Elemental with all the Affinities/EGK you have.
>>93072264Nice. Also I assume Elemental Clone would let me make Kidaichu Clones the way Shino did?
>>93072273That I'm not so sure about since Haze Clone is its own thing but I wouldn't mind.
>>93072254The more elements you include, the less skilled you are at them individually.
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>>93072254No>>93072285lmfao no
>>93072017You're a good noodle anon, thankyou.Mental note, make an emblem
>>93072400Banners and emblems are always good fun.
>>93072302>Shower Cityis that what we're gonna call this MP
>>93072302You seem like you have brain damage. Like you don't know what conversation is for and how it's done.
>>93072434You seem like you have unfun disease. Like you don't know what fun is and how it's done.
>>93071705fluegel is in prison right?>>93072253nah
Rolled 3 (1d10)1-5. Rot6-9. Write10. Ruin
>>93072446Yeah, like that. You're doing the same thing again. So do you only know how to write by mimickry?
>>93072417>>93072417I wanted to add the emblems but got too lazy to look for them.I did update the tierlist though: https://tiermaker.com/create/be-the-noble-mp-characters-17234816>>93071563
>>93071871Name: Tomoe Sasakura>An honor student at a local prep school who's recently fallen on hard times due to her parents divorce. She was raised to meet her family's excessively high standards, and thrived under the pressure of having concrete goals. However those standards and goals vanished along with the divorce. At first she studied even harder, thinking she could win back their attention. Then she started to slack off and look for hobbies, thinking she could force them to pay attention that way. Neither plans were successful, but in exploring hobbies she joined the internet forum with the other characters.>She's a very disciplined, loyal girl, but tries not to put her issues on display. Despite of her family issues, she's still proud of who she is and the effort she put into improving herself. The last thing she wants is to be pitied or told the time she spent was all a waste. While not experienced with games, she's been taking art classes from a young age and is always happy to provide art assets for her net friends. She's recently been introduced to painting models and is rapidly amassing a rather large collection.Soul: ValeriaPath: Swordsman of Lost WaysSchool: The Rose KnightsBlood Heritage: Hemomancy & All-Embracing HeartSwordsman Talents: Large Sword Mastery, Presence of KingsGeneral Perk: Studied (Forbidden Art: Guile)Starting City Bonus: Feirapastelia>Former Knight Commander of the Rose Knights who spent the latter half of her life as a grave warden. During the Gorebloom, she remained on the ruins of her home. Rather than lash out, she wanted her kin to at least live peacefully in death. She joined the party when they were commissioned to kill her, only to hear her story out and befriend her.>While she herself disdains lies, her combat style relies on a fair amount of deceit. Her signature move is to coat her longsword in blood mid-swing, granting it all the reach and weight of the largest of weapons while barely losing any speed.
>>93072474Blah blah blah, what you say is evidently not true from the get go. If you're not gonna make it more entertaining I'm not gonna bother.
>>93071871 We've tried this before I remember. But I cant recall what my build was.
>>93071871SADIA IS A WHOOOOOOOOOOORE
>>93072561Unfortunately, it seems someone used a genjustu on you to create a false memory.
>>93072501Huh. I didn't expect the divorce, or at the very least I don't remember it during the original discussion. Nice to finally see the build. I didn't expect you to edit the images together, either. Very similar to the other sabers up to this point.
>>93072620I remember thinking mages were garbage and that there was no way we would handle doing two worlds.
>>93072625I think I off-handedly mentioned the divorce as an option, but it wasn't a major point of discussion. As for the images, I just saw yours and figured I'd steal the idea since it's easy to do and seemed fun... Otherwise I suppose you're not wrong. She is a pretty standard saber.
>>93071871>NameMike Young>SoulReynard Sutton "The Unrelenting">PathSwordsman>SchoolThe Wingless Cast: Comfortable Anywhere, Seen it All>Swordsman TalentsMagic Resistance, Brinkmanship, Large Sword Mastery>General PerksStudied>Starting CitySarbanes>MikeA high school dropout who lives with his grandmother and spends most of his time getting high and playing vidya. Despite his failure to launch and poor social skills, he's a fairly dependable [online] friend by virtue of having literally nothing else going on. His original dream was to one day visit Japan and find a qt gf like one of the girls from his favorite anime, but getting literally isekaied has to be even cooler than that. The soul he possesses is kind of a downer, but at least he gets to be a badass swordsman.>ReynardReynard was once a simple family man who worked as a guard in a small, unnotable village several days from the nearest city. His peaceful life was completely uprooted when one of the Warlords' raiding parties ran through and burned his village to the ground. Left for dead and with his family slaughtered, Reynard went on to travel the lands seeking revenge. He was never much threat to the Warlord himself, but Reynard's persistence and utter refusal to die eventually earned both the Warlord's frustration and something approaching respect. Enough to grant the old guard a death by the Warlord's own hand.
I wish someone would ride my dick for the basic editing I've done.
>>93072643I kind of wanted to replicate the companions section and have the text in the image too, but I didn't want to bother with aligning and making sure it's the proper length. Anyway, I guess we can start to discuss the first encounter. I remember something about meeting in Gras Paada first? What are we fighting, and what are some first impressions they have of each other?>She is a pretty standard saberIt's not a bad thing, but it's definitely a type. It's nice to have something comfortable to write with. Better that than needing to reinvent the wheel all the time.
>>93072625>>93072643On that note, it's nice to finally see your build as well. No big surprises, but I don't remember him having healing wish.
>>93072701Makes enough sense. Sort of like a very simple character card... Anyway...>What are we fighting, and what are some first impressions they have of each other?Hmm... Plenty of options there. Before brainstorming on that, maybe we can start with what kind of activities they'd be getting up to? Easier to figure out a meeting if we know what they're up to. How long do you suppose each character has been interacting with the other world? Are they meeting on their very first jaunt, or have they already cleared a few quests and come to understand the situation on their own? Could also be different for each character if you'd like one to be more experienced with the fantasy adventuring than the other.>It's nice to have something comfortable to write with.I like to bounce between my typical character type and more experimental ones.
Shower City is stillborn albeit
>>93071563>The Arcaadji Plibtribyewhttps://rentry.org/mqk9dtmrThis kind of got cartoonishly out of hand but I kind of built up Psophis as I went along. I'll open up the initial responses to all joining parties tomorrow, and do the first event of the tournament shortly afterword.
>>93071871Which appearance do we use in Gras Paada?
>>93072792By raw, I think it's the sunshine city appearance. I think taking the form of the natives is cooler though.
>>93072792your real one, you're only channeling a soul
>>93072805>>93072801lame but ok
>>93072801>I think taking the form of the natives is cooler though.Yeah this is cooler. I have decided that this happens.
>>93072824Aren't they literally dead?
>>93072752>Sort of like a very simple character cardI miss those type of stuff. Image editing isn't my strong suit, but maybe can make a pseudo-guild card of sorts.>How long do you suppose each character has been interacting with the other world?I was thinking that they're freshly isekai'd, and just got a primer for their powers. Probably meeting up just before an ambush by bandits, or goblins, or something. There's also the option of Tomoe being the more experienced one, and having 1 or 2 quest completed in contrast with her being the younger one in the real world.We could just have the encounter in thread, then compile it into a cleaned up writefag. I think we talked about having more thread interaction in this run?>I don't remember him having healing wishIt was originally magic resistance, I think. It didn't really fit overall, and healing wish seemed to fit better with the water theme.
>>93072833Why can't we just borrow their appearance and outfits when we use their powers?
>>93072833It's a fantasy world, I do not care for if it makes sense or not.
should i bother looking fir pic or save that fir the bigger gap.
>>93072841try again?
>>93071606Anyone still writing prelim fights?
>>93072847should i bother looking for a new pic or should i save that for the bigger gap.
>>93072863For Nardo? Probably depends on what changes with the update. Not much time has actually passed tho
>>93071606Writefag not ready, but anon asked for updates.>NameJin Hyuga>OriginKonoha>ScenarioChunin Exam>RankC>PerksBloodline LimitTalented (Taijutsu)Tough>DrawbacksFated Rival (Ichika)Ideological Divide (The end doesn't justify the means)>Chakra NatureYang Lightning>BasicChakra Flow 3Unarmed Combat 3Body Flicker 2Subterfuge 1Utility Jutsu 1Improvisation Art 1Stealth 1>AdvancedAdvanced Taijutsu 3Advanced Fighting Style 3 (Gentle Fist)Cloth Style 2Sensory Arts 1 (Byakugan = Sight/Chakra Sense)Nullification Arts 1 (Jujutsu)>SpecialSeven Heavenly Breaths Technique 2>Kekkei GenkaiByakugan>ProfileOne of the finalists of this chunin exam is a young man from the Hyuga’s branch house. As typical of his family, he’s a wielder of the famous Byakugan and an expert of the Gentle Fist. In addition to that, he’s more physically inclined than most of his brethren. This tendency, combined with the Hyuga's natural focus on the control of the chakra flow, let him master an exotic breathing technique extremely early in his career. To expand his arsenal, his teacher taught him the Cloth Style, but unlike him, Jin doesn't use it for setting up Barrier Techniques, and instead employs it in combination with his clan's martial art.Outside his duties, his mask of professionalism drops, and a gregarious personality shines through. He’s a friendly fellow, always ready to help out his allies. His love of dad jokes sometimes helps him make those, and sometimes works against it.He is extremely staunch in his moral beliefs. The end does NOT justify the means. However, that line for a ninja is blurry. As a result, it's difficult for him to decide where exactly it should be drawn, but once he does draw it, he'll die on that hill. The most prominent example of that, is his hatred of the Cursed Arts. The elders tried to curb it by assigning him a teacher who employs them, but it did not stop him from developing a rivalry with another of the finalists due to it.
>>93071871Who's making a build for this?
>>93072887Dumpers and dumpers only
>>93072836>I miss those type of stuff. Image editing isn't my strong suit, but maybe can make a pseudo-guild card of sorts.I've always liked character cards, so that sounds great to me.>I was thinking that they're freshly isekai'd, and just got a primer for their powers.Works for me.>We could just have the encounter in thread, then compile it into a cleaned up writefag.Makes enough sense... Hmm... Then for a broad strokes plot, I suppose the bandits work out. How about Reza is riding along with some merchant, getting a ride in return for being a bodyguard. The bandits attack during the night, and Tomoe joins the fight- she was following the bandits and was worried they were up to no good. (Due to early game vampirism, she was traveling at night to begin with).>It was originally magic resistance, I think. It didn't really fit overall, and healing wish seemed to fit better with the water theme.Not wrong. Healing and water really do go along well. He doesn't seem like he has many reasons to have higher magic resist either.
>>93072636Someone suggested it a while ago along with class change hero but to my knowledge it was never an mp
>>93071606Alright, fess up.Why did you lie about being active?
>>93072931>broad strokes plotFeels like something that Tomoe would tear through them easily. Not that it's a bad thing, of course. It's mostly a way to show off powers and get them used to the new world. Then again, she might still be apprehensive of drinking blood, and hasn't stored any to use for her hemomancy. If the overall encounter is good, then let's see a play by play of what happens. Even if it's mostly spitballing.>Due to early game vampirism, she was traveling at night to begin withThat reminds me, since powers transfer over to shower city, should the debuffs transfer too? Like, does she suddenly gain a need for hoodies due to the vampirism? It might be interesting to discover what they do as soon as they get back to the real world.
>>93072772I'll read that later, maybe. You're motivated.
>>93072989I didn't!
>>93073020Then where's your update? Your writefag?>I made themWell then I'm not talking about you am I?
>>93073031I guess you're not............
>>93073015>Feels like something that Tomoe would tear through them easily.If we feel like it's not enough to show off, then we could add a miniboss. Either in the form of the bandit leader actually being some low level demon in disguise, or just having some fierce monster, like a flaming bear, show up in response to the conflict. Something Raza might be more suited to than Tomoe. As for drinking blood, it probably helps quite a bit that she can just AoE absorb blood through her skin rather than literally drinking it. You should be right about her not having any blood stored up however.>If the overall encounter is good, then let's see a play by play of what happens. Even if it's mostly spitballing.Sounds good. For now we can just do spitballing. If we like the results and still have time, maybe we can upgrade to a greentext story. Then starting from the top, let's think about how the event starts. Before night falls, Tomoe is probably camping in the woods, perhaps resting in a tree hollow or something. She could spot Raza's group heading further in while she rests, as well as the bandits the come along later. In the mean time, she's just sorta sleeping with one eye open.What's Raza's side of the story like before the bandit attack?>Like, does she suddenly gain a need for hoodies due to the vampirism?I'm cool with that. She could maybe just pass it off as mild anemia or something since she won't burst into flames or anything.
>>93071871I kinda want to make a build but I don't know how it even works. What do you even do here?
>>93071871Too bad every single build so far has been a complete shitpost.
>>93073200You have poor reading comprehension.
>>93073235You don't know what the words you use mean.
>>93073100>If we feel like it's not enough to show off, then we could add a minibossI'm fine with what it is. Even if it's an easy encounter, these people are not native to the world. They're not exactly used to killing others on the regular, so that's something else to explore.>What's Raza's side of the story like before the bandit attack?Maybe something along the lines of Reza trying to inquire more about the next town they're heading to, jotting down notes about Easily while walking alongside them. He notices Tomoe's campfire and pale characteristics, before catching back up with the group. Not sure how he didn't notice the bandits if it isn't dead of night yet. Maybe they were also about to set up camp in a clearing, and were caught in the middle of unpacking?>She could maybe just pass it off as mild anemia or somethingIt made me realize that other than the charisma boost, her soul doesn't really help much in her daily life. She might have a harder time catching her parent's attention if she's also trying to hide her new powers.
>>93071871Name: Matsubara Yoshiko> An honor student and youngest of 3 children to very demanding parents. Unlike her brothers, Yoshiko stumbled into simultaneously having some leeway with how she spends her personal time, so long as she keeps her parents informed, and almost none with who she associates, her parents not taking the chance after her eldest brother dropped out of school to "focus on his music career". Involuntarily a loner she spends most of her time not spent studying online, reading fan fiction, and playing MMO games, naturally developing the atropied social skills such a lifestyle endows in a person. She was one of the last to be invited into the group, invited in by (I'll update this later) while discussing 'My Name is Hatred', the newest story to catch her attention.Soul: Thalia, Path: Mage of Sealed KnowledgeSource of magic: ElementalSealed Magic: DefensiveNatural Magic Mentors: Rei, Iba, Gan, Waga, NoroMagical Talents: Battlemage, Magic SenseGeneral Perks: LearnerCity Bonus: Sarbanes>"Thalia never really shared her story with us, always deflecting any questions with humor or wild, obviously untrue stories. I think the weirdest one was her claiming that 5 goddesses taught her so she could bring about the end of the world. Despite that she cared for our little group, even picking up defensive magic to help protect us. I'm sure she has her reasons for keeping her past to herself."
>>93073255You poop your pants.
>>93073182>What do you even do here?Make a build then forget about it
>>93073272>They're not exactly used to killing others on the regular, so that's something else to explore.Gotcha.>Maybe something along the lines of...Sounds good. Then that can cover the set-up. Next up is the encounter. How many of them and what their skillsets are is fairly important. It can set the tone for how strong the setting is. Something like a dozen bandits, mostly composed of archers and swordsmen would probably be the standard, with each being very athletic but not necessarily magic. If we'd like a world were magic is a bit more common, then the bandits could have a single minor ability each, something like Swordsman talents.As for the actual action, Tomoe would likely go after the archers- perhaps they're hiding in the woods or something. As you mentioned earlier, she'd probably hesitate to kill, instead using the blunt side of her weapon... but perhaps I'm getting ahead of myself. Any ideas on what the bandits would be like or how they'd attack?>Maybe they were also about to set up camp in a clearing, and were caught in the middle of unpacking?Something like that. The idea is that the bandits are a ways behind. Like an hour or two. It's just a straight road, so they're not worried about losing track of the merchant they want to rob. Or maybe they just have a well trained hound to track the merchant at a distance- I could see it especially if the cargo has a distinct smell. All they have to do is keep a moderate pace and without stopping for the night, and they'd naturally pass by the merchant when they stop to set up camp for the night. If they were just straight up stalking Raza from within eyeshot, it stands to reason that things would go down differently.>It made me realize that other than the charisma boost, her soul doesn't really help much in her daily life.If anything, the ability to easily spot lies might just make life more troublesome in the sense that she'll know people are lying even if it doesn't help her solve any problems.
>>93073335Irrelevant.
>>93071871I'll wait for a few more builds to roll in and then I'll rank how kino each build is.
>>93073354So I am not supposed to RP or write stories?
>>93073444You have the right idea. The anon you replied to is just depressed or something.
>>93073444Effortfag like any other mp, it's not like it's any different from the rest.
>>93073444You are but because this place is filled with attention deficient nerds and people too cool to do things like 'participate' it doesn't happen as oft it should.
>>93071871Name: Amaury Vaugeois>An adventurous guy who can't stay in place. He doesn't listen in class, only daydreams about running far away to explore the world. He loves the outdoor, running and exploring the forest. He loves nature, animals, plants and bugs, and he loves sharing his passion for it with others.Soul: Verdeus the Green>An old druid whose only regret in life was to have died without passing his ancient knowledge to the younger generation. He sees his younger self in Felix and is happy of this opportunity to teach a young, passionate man.Path: Mage of Sealed KnowledgeSource: ElementalSealed Magic: LifeMentor: Noro, Ox Goddess of VerdureMagical Talents: Battlemage, Resurrection SpellGeneral Perk: Studied (Grace)Starting City: FeirapasteliaRemade because I thought an old man was cooler
>>93073497>FelixDid you forget to change his name?
>>93071606Should i make my training arc writefag first, or just post my upgrade and then make it?
>>93073450OK, I will try I guess.>>93073452I have no idea what that means. I have been following the thread just to see if there was new stuff, but this is actually an interesting cyoa to me and since it's just starting i would not have to catch up so I am trying to learn.>>93073455Sorry to hear that, hope it gets better I guess. I will try to make a build for this. I am awful at finding pictures tho.
>>93073518If you're settled on the upgrade then it can't hurt to post it.
>>93073514I did, I was tired and about to go to bed and hurried a bit too muchIt's Amaury. Let's say Felix is his second name.
>>93073518post your upgrade so i can make a futile attempt to change your mind if I don't like it
>>93073397>Next up is the encounterI prefer having maybe 5 or so bandits, with some having very minor abilities. At the start, I imagine the enemies to be close to human level, but magic seems to be common enough that even random encounters can have magical abilities. It's important to note, while they could wipe the floor with these bandits, it's a hostage situation. They may not have enough control over their powers to avoid attacking the merchants.The encounter may start out with one or two bandits confronting the caravan, with three or so surrounding them in the bushes. They're not out to kill, but steal. And so the back-up is there just in case their victims fight back, or if they need more negotiating power. Most brandishing knives, with maybe one swordsman / spearman and an archer. Maybe Tomoe can start the fight by knocking out one of the hidden bandits when negotiations start to turn sour? Then the bandits have no choice but to fight back now that they've been discovered?>Or maybe they just have a well trained houndHaving other types of creatures could spice things up, though that does mean hurting the dog if it ever comes to it, and no one wants to do that. Or maybe they just really like their camel cheese out in the desert region.>RazaI can't believe Tomoe has dyslexia.>the ability to easily spot lies might just make life more troublesomeIt really is more of a curse for her, but for Reza it's really more of a blessing to have so much freedom of movement
>>93073519>I have no idea what that meansWritefag, drawfag, or even discuss the cyoa and stories. The same thing that this thread has been doing since worm 1. If you like it, then make something for it so that other anons know that there's something going for it.
>>93073548As a side note, should other builds be included in the conversation, or just Tomoe and Reza?
>>93073519>I am awful at finding pictures tho.Google image + tons of anti-AI keywords does the job
>>93073568Personally I think Stinkleheimer should be included.But first I need to make my relationship chart and ability list first to convince anon I didn't make a dump
>>93073557I will try, I can't draw but I can write decently if I put in the effort.>>93073574I guess I could also try just looking trough the threads around here in the archives, you find some nice images there sometimes.
>>93073574Is AI that badly seen around here?
>>93073717only by a few autists
>>93073548>I prefer having maybe 5 or so bandits, with some having very minor abilities. Roger.>They may not have enough control over their powers to avoid attacking the merchants.I wasn't sure if they'd get their hands on the merchants or not. Works for me though.>The encounter may start out with one or two bandits confronting the caravan, with three or so surrounding them in the bushes...Sounds good to me. What's Reza doing then? Is he near the merchants, defending them? Or did the bandits rush in and grab them while he was gathering something in the woods?>though that does mean hurting the dog if it ever comes to it, and no one wants to do that. Nah, nah. This is clearly where Tomoe flexes her charisma buffs and just makes friends with the dog. Jokes aside, you are right that no one wants to hurt a dog. Too lovable. We'd either have to find a way to make peace with the dog, or we could just declare that the dog is naturally friendly and isn't an attack dog, just a tracking dog.>I can't believe Tomoe has dyslexia....Hmm... Yeah, I don't have anything to really defend myself with here.>It really is more of a curse for her, but for Reza it's really more of a blessing to have so much freedom of movementI can believe it. Plus being strong and sturdy doesn't hurt either. In theory Tomoe does have similar physical buffs, but I can't see her making any use of them.>>93073568I'm happy to include other builds. If we get a whole party, then maybe it can be one or two suped up bandits per PC. If so, I'd imagine the majority of the characters present would be with the merchants, maybe with one more person either accompanying Tomoe or similarly there by coincidence.
Rolled 2 (1d3)Agh, fuck it.1: Deep Reserves2: Skilled/Talented3: Unbreakable Will
>>93073739sovl from sovlhalla and sovlvengarde
>>93071606>NameIchika Chinoike>VillageYugagakure>RankC>PerksNoble ClanBloodline LimitUnique Power>DrawbacksFated Rival: Jin HyugaIdeological DivideUnwanted Attraction>Elemental NaturesYin & YangWater>BWeapon Art: Kusarigama+EspionageBody FlickerChakra Flow+Genjutsu ReversalSubstance Production: Blood++>AJAWS: Crashing WavesMedical ArtsIllusory Arts++Curse Arts>HTBlades of Blood++Autonomous Regeneration>EKGBlood>KGEvolved KetusryuganHaving passed through the earlier parts of the exam, the experience pushed Ichika to acknowledge the need to be more aggressive and make use of the sickles that she'd previously considered too harsh. With them, she's adopted a fierce style meant to pressure and bleed opponents. Additionally, perhaps spurred on by her intense desire, her Ketsuryugan matured into a more powerful form. This caused her to somewhat reluctantly return to Yugakure to to properly acclimate and train the evolved form of her clan's dojutsu.Although there have been more downs then she'd like in her journey so far, Ichika has remained lively and only become more dedicated to ensuring the well-being of her loved ones. To that end, she'll sweep away anyone who dares to due them harm or stands in the way of their dreams in a tide of blood.
>>93073578>convince anon I didn't make a dumpyou've already failed
>>93073717Most of the ai art you'll find floating around is shit and samey and unlike human art, I'm less forgiving with it.
>>93071871>Kaito "Rooster" TojoSoul: Belldandy>Belldandy was a princess and high cleric of a forest kingdom that resisted the five warlords forces. They were one of the first kingdoms to fall, but Belldandy was able to escape with her family's sacred artifact, hiding them and keeping them from evil's grasp. She is gentle and tries her best to protect others.Path: Sealed KnowledgeSource of magic: ManaSealed Magic: Life and SummoningMentors: Rei and NoroTalents: Battlemage, Ressurection, Phase SpellPerks: StudiedCity: EasilyLikes: Sumo, Gaming, Motorcycle Racing, Travel Books, OrigamiHates: Math, Motion Sickness, TraitorsBlood Type: A+Birthday: 10/04>Rooster had a rough childhood. He learned early on that strength was the only thing that mattered. To make ends-meet and protect his family he became a street brawler, and eventually climbed through the ranks of the city's deliquent gangs. Though he tends to be angry and hostile, Rooster always had a soft spot for his younger sister. Hana was everything he wasn't—academically gifted, kind-hearted, and full of wisdom. And he was determined to give her a better life. >But after he had a bitter fight with his mother, Hana disappeared. Guilt-ridden for not being there to protect her, Roost scoured the city, using every connection he had to find her. His search led him to a warehouse where he found Yui's comatose body, hooked up to a strange machinery. In her hands, she clutched a glowing globe. The globe was Hana's "Soul". The Soul Belldandy told him about Gras Paada and the runed coffee table. He found that by bonding with Belldandy, he could access Hana's memories and feelings.>Determined to uncover the truth and bring his sister back, he linked with Belldandy as his own "Soul" and ventured into Gras Paada. At first he didn't believe any of this geeky fantasy nonsense, but this isn't only about finding Hana now —it was about finding himself and becoming the brother Hana always believed he could be.
>>93073818>that descriptionwhat
>>93073818I know this is your fetish.
>>93073682Ok I was surprisingly able to make a very cool combo image on my first ever try, so I am very motivated to finish the build now.
>>93071871>Name: Lee Shun"A quiet boy who always seems on the verge of passing out. He was orphaned at a young age and taken in by his grandfather, but now that the old man is too frail for work, Shun finds himself working several odd jobs to support him and his younger sibling. He has a passion for culinary and a gig at a restaurant, but wants to go for a safer future career when he leaves the school.">Soul: Zacharia"A self-proclaimed ideal assassin who joined us to hone his skills against all manner of targets. Will kill anyone for the right price, but hasn't backstabbed us so far, so maybe he has a soft spot in that psychopathic heart."Path: RogueCard Of Fate: The Fall>Forbidden ArtsDagger Mastery, GraceEscape ArtsGuileDisappearDealer of Suffering, Aspect of the Doll GoddessPerk: StudiedStarting City: whatever fits the mp best
>>93073723>I wasn't sure if they'd get their hands on the merchants or notI wasn't sure either, but maybe there's a bit of trouble with targeting all-embracing heart, or wing slash that even if they're not completely in the way, they still have to be careful.>What's Reza doing then?Initially, I thought he'd be in one of the tents when it happens, but I much prefer him being out in the woods so that he can enter the fray with his double jump, or make use of his projectiles since it does blunt damage. I think Reza might focus on taking the high ground as much as possible, and jump in and out of danger when he needs to be in melee.>we could just declare that the dog is naturally friendlyThe advantages of having a dog to spice up the encounter is forfeited by not being able to interact with it. Unless there's a way to charisma the dog, I think it would be best if it ran away as soon as the fighting starts if we're adamant on having it. There's always the option of not having it, or like you suggested before, having a wild animal be provoked by the battle.>I can't see her making any use of themDoubly so when some of it is activated by blood. Unless she wants to eat like an Englishman, she'll have to stick with increase speed only. The only situation it may apply to is her art, and maybe PE or something.>I'm happy to include other buildsI guess they have to opt into it, or join in the conversation themselves. There's also the option of other characters being part of a different encounter, and forming different groups around different runes.
Why are there so many builds for this that read like they're from the same anon?
>>93073920I'll just go ahead and save you the next ten replies.>That's because they are, i made them!
>>93073920Maybe it's build spam to kill it at the crib. One anon really doesn't like this MP for some reason. Possibly even any new MP for that matter.
>>93073920I think it's just that there aren't many options in the CYOA, so there are less chances to format things differently.
>>93073830Fuck. Change that to "he found Hana's comatosed body">>93073858That's a fair assumption, but it's not one of mine.
>>93073934Why can't you let anons pretend they're build dumping boogeymen?
>>93073942That's as reasonable an explanation as any.
>>93071606OK, had some time and finished the item writefag. Upgrades are in brackets.>Rinka Akagi>City of Ogres, Will of Faith>C Rank (30)>Perks: Bloodline Limit, Enhanced Body (40), (Deep Reserves) (45)>Drawbacks: Gender Bender (51), Rage (61), Sentimental Item (65), Distinct Look>Chakra Nature: Yin, Yang (58), Water>Basics: Unarmed Combat++ (53), Subterfuge, Ninja Tools, Body Flicker+ (51), Chakra Flow++ (46), (Book Smarts: Priestess/Meditation.)>Advanced: Advanced Taijutsu+(+) (40), Divine Arts++ (31)>Hidden: Muscle Enhancement (28), Purification (25)>Secret Special: Angel (10)>Kekkei Genkai: Dark>(Item: Super Mystic Bell Charm (0))I didn't want to invest in things that would be too narratively complex to refund like losing skills, so an item in the interim. Basically just a souped-up version of the mystic bell charm.How Rinka Got Her Charm:https://rentry.org/4khe6i8r
>>93073723I am making a build and I would kill the dog. It's surprisingly in character. I am a bit confused on how much influence the souls actually have on the isekais tho.
rank how likely the updates are to win since you asked for them
>>93073920I deliberately copied how saberanon formatted it, I'm not sure about the others.
>>93074015At base it's only giving you powers. Depends on how much you want it to influence your character.
My build is basically ready, but i've basically run short - two points left, when i need 3 to buy Shadow Clones. I'd appreciate some help to see what i can do, and maybe to see if my 'custom jutsu' idea seems reasonable.https://rentry.org/KitsumotoC
>>93073916>I wasn't sure either, but maybe there's a bit of trouble with targeting all-embracing heartCould be an issue if one of the merchants get injured, yeah... Although that'd mean I couldn't fight effectively alongside other PCs if anyone gets injured. Her kit relies on All-Embracing to fuel Hemomancy, and while it's not a big deal fighting bandits then it could quite annoying in future fights. So I think I'll have to rule that she can selectively not use the blood draining aura on allies and neutral parties. Hemomancy projectiles could however be an issue, similar to wing slash.Anyway. So the bandits appear, Tomoe smacks one of the backliner bandits. Reza dynamic entries one of other bandits / ambushed them with a ranged attack while staying up in the trees. I imagine they'd make use of the element of surprise quickly dispatch another bandit each, probably with a different method... After that maybe it's time for the stumbling block? Perhaps the last bandit grabs a merchant and starts making demands, while the first bandit Tomoe knocked out is quietly getting back up and aiming his bow?>The advantages of having a dog to spice up the encounter is forfeited by not being able to interact with it.This is fair. How about we leave it up to the anon who said his character would in fact kill a dog? It can simply be his choice of if he'd like to fight a dog or a bandit. Until then we can assume it's an all bandit encounter.>and maybe PE or something.Sudden onset superhuman physicality in PE is... uh... rather sus. She'd probably just be turning her powers off to avoid needing to make any excuses.>I guess they have to opt into it, or join in the conversation themselves.Pretty much. They can start their own conversations or join ours. Up to anons.>>93074015Nice. As far as influence goes, I think the discussion went that we can communicate and learn from our souls, but aren't otherwise affected by them. Maybe don't quote me though since I could be wrong.
>>93074045Fine, I have an idea. I wrote half my character already, the isekai part, but I may have gotten a bit carried away. The second part is probably going to be much shorter. I guess I could also write an intro to the world. I will probably go to sleep soon after but I want to finish it and post it at least. I also have two combo images, one is more appropriate but one side is lower quality than the other, the other one has higher quality but would be less appropiate and more fitting a sort of hibrid form between the two. I am not sure which one is better.
>>930740161. Effortfag McGee2-100. Dumpy Jones
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>>93074128>custom jutsulol sure it's fine>reccomendationdrop one level of chakra mode and level up ninja tools
>>93073723I'm going to head to bed for now. I'll read the response when I wake up.
>>93074181Till next time then.
>>93074179>drop one level of chakra mode and level up ninja toolsAnon, I already have an remaining 2 points left. I could level up Ninja Tools *without* dropping Chakra Mode. But the reason i wanted the 'custom jutsu' in the first place was to combo it with Shadow Clones for maximum trickery.Of course, maybe that's just a stupid idea in the first place.
>>93074189Oh gee I wonder what you should do with the 3 points you would gain via dropping chakra mode when the premise is that you wanted to purchase shadow clones!
>>93074200When you say 'drop [x] and level up [y]', I kinda presume you're telling me to spent the points from the former in the latter. As for the actual advice, maybe? Chakra Mode is basically the only thing that'll let him be strong enough to fight the other genin one on one, and without Deep Reserves or Tough he'll probably need to be skilled at it to be able to use it for any considerable amount of time.
Rolled 25 (1d100)>>93074164Those are really poor odds.Oh well. Lets see who wins.
>>93074216drop a level of advanced taijutsu then
>>93074241Wouldn't there be some manner of consequence to somehow mastering Chakra mode but not Taijutsu?
Shinro be like "I like being stepped on..."
Yuma be like "I like being stepped on..."
>>93074310>>93074339What if they stepped on each other?
>>93074374They'd need to learn shadow clone jutsu for that.
>>93074296No? Why would there be?
Himari be like "I like stepping on people..."
Ghidorah be like "I'm desperate for any kind of physical human contact..."
>>93074387Naruto anons don't like the idea of you being able to use shit you purchase
>>93074385No, they can just take turns.
It's time to settle this. Is your build a top or a bottom?
>>93074387I mean, Chakra Mode is a more advanced application of Taijutsu. Wouldn't it be unbalanced?
>>93071871>NameLucianus SalviusA boy with very eccentric parents, he learned about many different cultures simply by being around them. Unlike his parents fixated on travels and expansive social circles he kept to himself, reading about myths and legends from the comfort of his mansion's library. Never being good at socializing like his family he was often left alone, regardless of what he wanted, which gave him all the time to turn to different means of social interaction, namely online forums. In a flight of fancy his parents decided that being homeschooled and without friends was not good for him so they sent him to shower city to attend a more normal institution. He was sent alone, to stay with some relatives he did not remember having and with a periodic allowance closer to an actual job stipend. His habits did not change however and by the time high school started he was now living alone in a cheap appartment close to the school that would look like a miniature library to a normal person. In an uncharacteristic attempt to socialize he managed to meet up with some people from his online group, ending up in the other world and tied to a strange soul. Despite what it may look like from the outside he is very exited to be in a different world, finally all his knowledge may be more useful than just impressing random people on the net to variable success. His glasses are fake, his parents made him wear them to "look smart" from a young age and by now he is too used to them to care about getting rid of them.>PathSwordsman of lost waysThe Rose Kinghts>Blood HeritageHemomancyThe No One's Favour>Swordsman TalentsSpellblade (Lightning)Brinkmanship>General PerksStudied (Battlemage)>CityTown of EasilyI ended up writing a lot, it does not fit in a single post. I also ended up choosing the more appropiate image.
>>93074515>Soul"Bloodstorm Angel" DaimonA strange character, many would define him more beast than man. In reality not even he knows what he is, after awakening in a random village while covered in blood with no memories he wandered the countrysides trying to find answers to qustions he knew he should have. Carving a bloody path in the forest he managed to reach a village as it was getting attacked by bandits, something inside of him told him to kill them, so he did like the animals that tried to block his path before. With no bandits remaining the villagers were not as happy as he thought they would be, they started screaming and calling him "Demon". Not feeling welcomed and with the voices calmed he just moved along, among insults and strange words. He was found camping in the forest by the order of the rose that decided to take him in and teach him to control his powers instead of killing him like the bounty they took asked of them. Without a name in his memory he stuck to the first words he remembered, Daimon. His nickname was given to him by the rest of the order after his brutal fighting style was discovered and perfected, with every fight his hemomancy would form wings, non functional at first but each time they would get a little more real. After being taken in his demeanor normalized, still being quiet but not being the savage people mistook him as, in battle however the "Bloodstorm" would awaken. He survived the Gorebloom by simply not surviving, he died like everyone else, but he came back somehow in a very similar fashion to his first awakening. He had his memories this time, as much as he rather would not. He joined the party as they traversed a forest haunted by a "Demon", they instead found him defending his home, or what passed for that. His aid was appreciated, and managing to convince him to join the party was easier that appeared, curiosity and lonlyness did most of the job.This took less than I expected. but also more.
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>>93074537I don't understand the north-south spectrum.
>>93074537Wut
>>93074556top: cringebottom: sovl
>>93074491Why does it improve ninjutsu then?
>>93073717It's seen badly pretty much everywhere. This should not be a surprise to you.>>93073721I'm going to right-click your apes, loser.
>>93074556Builds that have good overall stat spreads vs build that went for high risk high reward schemes
>>93074515>>93074137Here it is. I may make a short introduction to the world tomorrow, an individual one probably, preceeding whatever meeting that you have planned, makes things easier to write. I am fine being part of this, or not, as is more comfortable for the writers.
>>93074598I mean, I know that but it is much easier to find. I found a good image in the end anyway.
>>93074486Tottom
>>93074616Sounds good anon. Glad to have another member of the Rose Knights. Lucianus seems like an entertaining fellow too.
>>93074491No. Retard.
>>93074486Celibate.
>>93074486Tops from the bottom.
>>93074655From what I gather the other one will be reluctant to drink up at the start, he will not have those kind of problems. I will be honest my build was determined by what images I found, I had one ready for all 3 paths. I will try to make more of his personality shine when I actually write, he is supposed to be the kind of person that puts on a calm front but is more emotional inside. I noticed there was another rose knight but since I am not sure how imporatnt the lore of the souls is supposed to be and how deep you wanted it to go so I did not specify, but I was thinking that Daimon joined the original party also because they had another rose knight, but keeping it vague to not give a clear order is also cool so I left it like that.
>>93074778Yes and no on the reluctant to drinking? She'd think it's weird to bite someone and literally drink, but she's got the All-Embracing Heart ability, so it's not much of an issue. As for the soul lore, that'd make enough sense. I wrote my character's soul in as the knight commander of the Rose Knights, so him joining up with his original boss is pretty straight forward. The opposite works too, where maybe she joined the original party to look after one of her few surviving subordinates.
>>93074778>>93074800So is the adventurer's personality fully taking over for you guys?
So, what's the limit on an Animal Companion in Nardo? What could you get away with?>human animal companion>fantastical animal companion>yokai animal companion>yokai that looks like a human (elf? goblin?) animal companionWe already know they can have human intelligence and can talk.
>>93074837No, not particularly. I believe we were just discussing the history of the souls. I.E. the stuff that happened before they died and became our character's super powers.
>>93074800Daimon does not believe in superiors, or any kind of order like that, neither does Lucianus for that matter. But he does respect the people that took him in so he would follow orders more like advice from a friend. Lucianus will have no problems biting people, both because it's just part of being a vampire now, and because he inherited the same battle trance Daimon had so he is not completely there when he fights, at least at the start.
>>93074850Nothing beyond kiba's dog.
>>93074856Gotcha. Makes plenty of sense on both accounts. For the souls, that'd suit Valeria just fine. She probably didn't feel much like a knight commander after the gorebloom anyway. Plus I didn't expect that sort of relationship to be inherited by the modern day characters regardless.
>>93071606Rentry: https://rentry.org/8x95p8pxName: Fujiwara Nobutake>OriginLand of Iron, Will of Iron>Rank(30 Points, 2 Perk, 6 Basic Jutsu*, 1 Advanced Jutsu*) C Rank>Perks (2 Perks)(1 Advanced Jutsu*) Skilled(+5) Tough(+5) Tenacious(+1) Cool>Chakra Nature (41)(-7) Yang, Wind, Fire>Basics (34)(-3) Weapon Art 3**: Archery/Kyujutsu(-3) Chakra Flow 3**(-3) Weapon Art 3**: Swordsmanship/Kenjutsu(-4) Unarmed Combat 2(-4) Utility Jutsu 2(-2) Book Smarts 1: Etiquette>Advanced (15)(-3) Advanced Weapon Style 3**: Striking Iron Style "Iaido"(-3) Advanced Weapon Style 1: Playful Cloud Style(-3) Advanced Weapon Style 1: Howling Mountain Style(-3) Advanced Taijutsu 1(-3) Rupture Slash 1>ChangelogChanged backstory to fit his sensei's which I should have done ages ago.Added:SkilledChakra Nature: FireUtility Jutsu 2Advanced Weapon Style 1: Howling Mountain StyleRank Up:Weapon Art 2 > 3: KenjutsuUnarmed Combat 1 > 2Rank Down:Advanced Taijutsu 2 > 1Fascinated by the shinobi world, Nobu hoped to adapt their ninjutsu into his own fighting style without abandoning or making massive changes to his samurai tradition, and after the second exam, he has found his way. As it is a neighboring element of wind, he used his great control and understanding to become proficient with the fire nature. His old fighting styles did not suit with his fire nature very well, so he sparred with his Tadafusa-sensei (and anyone willing he happened to find), until he learned a fighting style that befit his new nature: a wilder and more aggressive approach in combat. Rather than wait for the right moment to deliver the perfect blow, he would make that moment himself, overwhelming his opponents with barrages at range and then quickly following up with an Iai draw. He can still shift to his other style as needed, of course.Writefag later. much later. I'm a slow cook, sorry.
>>93074864But how else will I give my build a goblin onahole?
>>93074837Personally what I think would happen is that Lucianus would get a vision at the start where Daimon kinda explains his life story and how he will slowly inherit his powers, before disppearing exactly when he was about to explain the whole saving the world part. So he knows what he is dealing with to a degree but no plot knowledge apart from a vague "remember you have to..." ', maybe later he will be able to comunicate with the soul willingly, when he sleeps probably.
>>93074913Get a pet summon or paint your dog green.
>>93074926Can summons be permanent?
>>93074537You forgot Tanaka Haruto.
>>93074881To be fair Daimon would not even aknowledge that as a concept, while Lucianus would instead at least recognize that "oh wait, if it was a knigthly order they probably had a hyerarchy" but still completely disregard the notion of following it. Unlike the cyoa companions tho I would assume we don't actually have any idea who the others are, so Lucianus would not know who the other soul is unless someone tells him.
>>93074952Sounds about right. Daimon is quite the wild child, and Lucianus is an eccentric. And yeah, we probably wouldn't know the identity of each other's souls unless we tell each other.But even taking a few steps back, whatever relationship Daimon and Valoria had, it doesn't really matter to Lucianus and Tomoe. The PCs aren't the souls at the end of the day, and our characters only have their powers and not their relationships.
>>93074935Pretty sure it depends on how much chakra you put into the summon but if they're not from the spirit world or whatever then there's nothing keeping them from just hanging around.
>>93074949No he's behind someone. Guess who
>>93075006Saint Maluscomedo!
>>93075006Why is he behind Mog? Is this what kids today call backshots?
>>93074973I was thinking about the same, but it does create an interesting dynamic. If anything it allows for a bit more of expression of character, whenever the reveal happens. I am going to sleep now but tomorrow I will try to make an intro, with probably something like the super fast version of the vision and Lucianus doing his first "quest" and his first kill. With that power he will be killing a lot of people.
>>93075053Gotcha. Good night anon. Till next time.
>>93075025He can't be giving Mog backshots. Saint Mog is a cute girl and we all know Tanaka is gay.
>>93075014Close but no cigar.>>93075025Wrong.
>>93071871>NameAuvic Adon>SoulThe Midsummer Prince, Dumuzid Baal>PathRogue>CardThe Reign>Forbidden ArtsGraceTrackingNegotiation, GuileEvoke LuckAspect of the Doll Goddess>Swordsman TalentPresence of Kings>General PerkStudied(Presence of Kings)Auvic Adon lives an untethered life. Born to immigrant parents in an unknown life, he was shuffled into Shower City after his parents up and abandoned him while he was still young. Now, he is confrontational and often violent, getting into arguments and escalating those into fights, often disappointed when the other party proves mature enough to not fall for his provocations. The oddest part is, he's a rather small boy, and more often than not he loses those fights. His friends know that he enjoys consuming more intellectual media in silence, and tends to go along with whatever the group has decided to do, just happy to be with people who don't make him feel angry, or annoyed, or envious. Dumuzid Baal is the Midsummer Prince, the ruler of a small fiefdom deep in the Hollowest Wood, a forest otherwise uninhibited by humans. But rumor has it that the land of Tir Na Emain is not inhabited by humans, but by fairies. Someone knowledgeable might notice that Duzumid's skin is a little too flawless, his movements a little too effortlessly graceful, they may question whether or not he himself is human. The title of Prince of Midsummer is known well enough among the higher class, and surrounding peasant towns, but none could say why the man himself has decided to travel the realm, always carrying himself with an odd mixture of savagery and aloofness, though his magnetic personality makes it hard for most to notice just how off he is.
Kek I've really gotten rusty at writing, and I wasn't great before.
>>93075328iktf
>>93074011Nice.
If Kitsumoto made a Naruto build, what would it be like?
>>93075661I meant KISHIMOTO. Similar ass sounding names
>>93075677Sasuke
Rolled 3 (1d7)So much writing lately... gonna need to take a night to binge it all.As for tonight, I need to do more than watch Blazblue's anime version. So I pray to the dice gods....1: Write fun MHA stuff2: Write tense MHA stuff3: Expand on Gristletooth's competitors he's sending to the tournament4: Necro write for DE5: Catch up on reading tonight6: Go to bed early7: First anon with dubs decides
>>93075777There's a BlazBlue anime? First I've ever heard of it. Is it any good?
>>93075777>777You should rot. NOW
>>93075807Yeah: Called Alter memoryIf you don't already know all the context from either watching a summary of the VN's or playing them you'll have almost no idea whats going on though.Good dub and cool fights, plus some funny writing. Helps that the whole thing was something the english cast of the games actively petitioned to do after Central Fiction didn't get a dub.I can't decide if Sandy is the Hazama of MHA or the Azreal.
>>93075830Azrael. Sandy lacks the sheer IQ and nastiness to be Hazama.
>>93075838>Mio=Hazama>Sandy=Azrael>Inigo=Bang>Rosethorn=Litchi>Shinkan=Tager>All the Koreans congealed together=Rachel>Sally=Bullet
>>93073717The tech is cool when well used but it needed to be regulated and it wasn't. We left the floodgates open and now tons of soulless ugly copy-pasted art pollute the search results of previously good art sites. You'll see when you start searching for good art, it's a plague.
>>93075877Who is "WHITE VOIDCOLD STEELJUST SWORDWITH BLADE IN HANDHE'LL REAP THE SINS OF THIS FOUL WORLDCLEANSE IT IN THE FIRES OF DESTRUCTIONNO FOE SHALL ESCAPE THE ENDTHE NAME'S HA-KU-MENTHE END HAS COME AND HAS COME FOR YOU"Hakumen?
>>93075901My gut says Chris for some reason.
>>93075926>ChrisYeah, I see it. Although Past/Present Chris is not that much of a twat.
>>93073774Her boobs have grown yet again>>93073920Because you're paranoid, I always copy others' formatting when I like it because I like consistency.
>>93075777BtN kino wins again
>>93074011What are you saving up for? Ascendant Angel Mode?
>>93074890You still have 5 points. Also, your formatting is schitzo, please copy someone else's like >>93073774.
>>93074890I just noticed we had free jutsusPeople saw my shit build and nobody told me of course
>>93076183Bro, not everyone audits every build.
>>93076183Do you mean the free advanced? Most anons are going to assume your math is right unless you fuck up big time.
How are the power brackets shaping up now that we have some of the updated builds in?Who gets Most Improvement and who gets Most Downgraded?
>>93074890>>93076153Actually, I think it might be 8 points left. Anyway, your build's numbers are wrong.
>>93076221>Most DowngradedBy what metric?
>>93076231Nta, but I assume biggest decrease in strength relative to their peers.
>>93073774Build: 6.5/10 ninjutsu, 3/10 genjutsu, 0.5/10 Kusarigama.What is the point of the Kusarigama?
>>93073774Doesn't the evolved ketsuryugan give you black markings?
>>93076214I also missed the free basics
>>93076278And I didn't notice it gave the first two upgrades and not just one but that doesn't matter since I didn't take any
>>93074850Just take a goddamn animal, anon. Why do you have to complicate shit?
>>93076302He's horny.
>>93074913Shadow Clone + Transformation technique
>>93076289Warning for that: the two upgrades applies to free stuff from perks, not to those from the rank itself.
>>93076312Are you sure?>Free Jutsu Purchases/Upgrades gained from Perks give you the first 2 or last 2 tiers respectively on the PDF version.To me it sounds like>Free Jutsu Purchases give you the first 2 tiers>Upgrades gained from Perks give you the last 2 tiers
>>93076350Nta, but it means Free Jutsu Purchases gained from Perks or Free Jutsu Upgrades gained from Perks.
>>93076350Oh no okay, if you buy a Jutsu with a perk it gives the first 2If you upgrade a Jutsu with a perk it gives the last 2Just say it gives 2 tiers, why are custom rules always retarded?
>>93076350Yes, because that was my initial reading too and I had to change it.
>>93076260They're for bleeding opponents to use their blood for jujutsu mostly. That and they're cool.>>93076270Uh, that's what it says so I'm not really sure what you're asking. It's not like she'd have her eyes on all the time, and if it's like MS then then then she could just use the lesser version when she does.
>>93076435Compare the reading to the similar black markings from Curse Mark:>The Evolved form of this Kekkei Genkai causes black tattoo-like markings to spread across the user’s body, starting from the eyes.vs>Appears as a tattoo somewhere on the body, from which black markings will extend across the skin while the curse is active.Notice that the Ketsuryugan doesn't have the "while it's active" disclaimer, so it sounds to me like those would be permanent, and she doesn't have them on her image. Some dojutsu are clearly visible even when not really active, like Byakugan still looks weird even when it's not bulging veins.
>>93076453Well, I'd say the use of spread makes it sound more like something happens when the eyes are on like a transformation. The Ketsuryugan is also a lot closer to the Sharingan than Byakugan so I feel like it's odd to assume it starts following the latter's rules when it evolves.Either way, I don't think it'd be worth finding an image for unless you want fem sukuna slapped next to her as a reference. I definitely can't edit well enough to add anything.
>>93076494If it does work the way anon thinks, then just say it's a custom alternate ketsuryugan that's the exact same as the normal one except it's not visable all the time.
>>93076494just boot up paint and start drawing
>>93071606Updating Shiteru again to use the free basic jutsus and because Attractive now gives 5 apparently.>NameTahaki Shiteru>OriginYugakure, Land of Hot Springs>Rank (+30)C (30 points, 3 Perks, 6 Basic Jutsus, 1 Advanced Jutsu)>Perks (+10)Bloodline Limit(+5) Deep Reserves(+5) Attractive>Drawbacks (+20)Sentimental Treasure (a cold pendant, a gift from his late grandfather)IrrelevantObsessed>Obsessed list (I tried to limit a bit because I can't honor my obsession with everyone)Yuma Kouda, Rio Konoki, Kamiko Karatachi, Himari Miko, Ichika Chinoike, Boobkage>Chakra Nature (-3)Yang + Water>Basic Jutsus (-24)(-2) Sealth 2*(-5) Subterfuge 3*(-2) Espionage 2*(-5) Body Flicker 3*(-4) Utility Jutsu 2(-2) Weapon Art (tanto) 1(-2) Chakra Flow 2*(-2) Hell Viewing 2*>Advanced Jutsus (-18)(-3) Advanced Weapon Style (Hazy Moon Style) 1(-0) Rupture Slash 1*(-3) Sensory Arts (sight) 1(-6) Illusory Arts 2(-6) Concealment Arts 2>Elemental Kekkei Genkai (-10)(-10) Sublimification (Water + Yang)>Kekkei Genkai (-5)(-5) ByakuganA chill guy just trying to live a good life. He's a good listener, he'll never mock you or get angry at you. Probably because he isn't really listening, but whatever. He's very patient, in and out of combat.His skill set is more focused on stealth and espionage, but if he can't escape a fight, he'll turn into a mist and harass his enemies with a mix of fake and real slashes using his genjutsu to drive them crazy.His favorite training method is to spy on cute girls and occasionally molest them.https://rentry.org/mcyoag_nardo_shiteru (to keep the obsessed list up to date)
>>93076567yucky
>>93076567Do you really think he is attractive?
>>93076656yes
>>93076497I'll probably do that. Or whichever I decide is cooler later.>>93076509I got as far a drawing lines from the eyes before getting sidetracked looking for ideas for markings. I'll come back to it later.
>>93074890>>93076567SAMEFAG
>>93076567Missed opportunity for his treasure to be stolen pantsu.
>>93076673Don't think so
>>93076673Nah, Shiteru just copied Fujiwara's shit formatting.
>>93076683Good idea. The first pantsu he stole from one of his classmates when he was a kid, with the help of his grandpa.>>93076693It's good, it's what made me understand the rules.
>>93076722It's shit and you clearly still do not understand the rules since you still have 8 points left.
>>930767646 points, actually, but my point still stands.
>>93076764What did I miss again?
>>93076799Nothing. I recalculated and your build is correct. I apologize for the bad audit. The formatting is still shit though.
>>93071606Will have the full update soon, it's a little different than the WiP, but there's been some issues getting the art so I'm back to the grind looking for something. I did find a pretty powerful hides the pain image with a suitably Naruto-style fox but I'd need to edit out the ears.>>93072852Sen vs Himari sometime next week along with the training arc and Tragic Backstory Part 2.
>>93076260>KusarigamaHuh, Kitsumoto also has one, that's two characters with a Kusarigama. You don't usually see that.
>>93076879They are now fated to fight. It doesn't matter how the Tournament goes, it's the law of aesthetics.
>>93076881That's actually pretty easy, just put them next to each other on the first round since they're both starting with Fated Rival fights that they're supposed to win.
>>93076891I don't know if Ichika is supposed to win vs Jin but Kitsumoto beating Sen is pretty guaranteed at this point, yeah.
>>93076897Jin anon already said he was going to lose, I think.
>>93076881Who wins?
>>93076909Ichika has more raw power but has nothing to really counter Kitsumoto's trickery ala Concealment. She's presumably resistant if not immune to his Genjutsu but he has other tricks up his sleeve.In an open arena with no prep like the Tournament? Ichika advantage. Preptime? Kitsumoto advantage. I could see either of them beating the other though.
>>93076920>raw powerWell, she has the hardest hitting attack by a long shot thanks to her giga blood blade...but she doesn't have any taijutsu at all. Not a wrong opinion, though.
>>93076930The way I've always seen it is the Part 1 power scaling of Ninjutsu technically being outright the most effective of the three but being by far the most chakra depletive - this being back when chakra exhaustion actually mattered. Taijutsu meanwhile is something you can keep up for hours unless you're Chakra Cloaking or something, and is far more reliable.Basically, the moment Ichika starts getting tired, Kitsumoto autowins. She has to nuke him before that happens.
>>93076934Fighting with Ichika seems like it would be basically rocket tag. She's got no real enhancements to defend herself, but her Bloodblade attack probably hits like a fucking truck. Any fights she has will probably go down to>Can you hit Ichika before she hits you?
>>93071871So we are still supposed to meet up in the game club room? Or is the Easily rune going to be somewhere else?
>>93076951In fairness I think Blades of Blood's major draw is it's less taxing on chakra at the cost of your own blood, which Ichika somewhat gets around with Substance Production. You're right in that she's still a nuke, but I think for her she's taking metaphorical health and mana damage with her style. Fits well with her healing.
>>93076967I don't think it says in the CYOA where the coffee table is but if it's still in a game room it has to be outside the school.
>>93076951>Can you hit Ichika before she hits you?YesHonestly I don't see her 1v1 that many people, she's more of a support and combat-wise she's pretty predictable. I'm all for team fights anyway, 1v1 is dumb
>>93077239>YesAre you Ichika anon?
>>93077245No
>>93077248Then who are you?
>>93076951>Can you hit Ichika before she hits you?The answer is no.Ichika can just make a big wave of blood and 90% of the genin/chunin would be fucked.
>>93075556Thanks anon!>>93076125Yep. I've got a storyline in mind with the charm and how it factors in to Rinka unlocking the full power of The Angel Mode.
>>93077137From memory I remembered the group kept it in the school's game club room, but you are right that it does not specify. In fact from the description at the start it seems they keep it in (You)r appartment because that is where the group meets usually. I think it would make sense for the table to be at school, in the club room that no one uses anymore because there is no club. This is clearly based on japanese culture and they have the club rooms there, of course the table can be moved. I was thinking the group would meet there in our case because most are students, and it would be relatively easy to sneak in the few that are not after school hours. I may have to rewrite some parts if that sounds too outlandish.
>>93076901Yes. Ichika's anon is more active and wrote more, so I think it's only fair he gets the win if he wants it.
>>93077275Most them aren't doing shit if they get genjutsu'd either. Wouldn't happen cause it'd be lame as hell, but there's no reason almost everyone wouldn't get put under and put down.
>>93077334If it somehow contradicts another anon's idea you could hand wave it with there multiple runes to easily. By RAW there's only one rune but the custom rules add multiple runes throughout the city. What's not to say there are multiple easily runes?
>>93077497Sure. My plot kinda requires it to be the real one but it would be in character for him to get it wrong, being eccentric and unused to interacting with others. I will keep going like this for now, I am already about halfway done with the intro i would say, the part I wrote can be easily (ah) adapted if other want to do the supposed IRL meetup somewhere else. How do I post it when I am done? i am sure I went way over the 2000 character mark, and I don't want to flood the thread with posts. Is there a default method?
>>93076153My formatting is like that for easy self-auditing, so no, I don't think I'll be changing it any time soon.
>>93077539The default method is putting it all in a rentry (use dot org and not dot co) sticking the title, the characters featured in parentheses, and the rentry link in a post replying to the first page of the CYOA. You could use pastebin instead if you don't like rentry for some reason.I should've realized sooner that you were new to explain things more thoroughly.
>>93071606>NameSen Yamamoto, The Snowclad Watcher>LandShimogakure, Land of Frost>RankC-Rank>PerksCharmingGeniusKnowledge>DrawbacksEmotional WeaknessInstability>Chakra NaturesYinWind>Basic JutsuAnimal Companionship 3Espionage 3Genjutsu Reversal 3Hell Viewing 3Subterfuge 3Stealth 3>Advanced JutsuCommunication Arts 3Concealment Arts 3Illusory Arts 3Sensory Arts 3>Changes- Gained Charming, Animal Companionship 3, Genjutsu Reversal 3, Hell Viewing 3, Concealment Arts 3, Illusory Arts 3- Lost Improvisation Arts 3, Utility Jutsu 3, Recording Eye>Training SynopsisSince the return of Kitsumoto, defeat of Junki and regretfully savage victory over Himari during the preliminaries, Sen's mental state had only further declined. Already incapable of facing her past, the new wave of regrets had driven her to the breaking point - she had possessed only two options, break free from her stupor or or give into despair. In the end, her need to care for something overcame her desire to escape. The trio of orphaned foxes she had saved in the Forest of Death now lacked a mother - her teammates Junki and Ghidorah needed her now more than ever - and, perhaps most of all, Kitsumoto needed to be saved from himself.There was one willing to help the young kunoichi, for a price. With nothing to lose, Sen had finally capitulated to the shadowy Foxfather's demands. What bargain she had entered with the spirit is known only to the two of them, but when she returned she had sold many pieces of herself in return for the power needed to save those she cared for - whether they desired it or not.>Notes- Image is a stand-in, have had some issues getting a commission. Ignore the fox ears.- Apologies for the major change of build, I've been thinking on how to more accurately do what I was going for but didn't want to change anything until we got to this point.- There's a lot of backstory here that was hinted to but never finished, that's my next job.
>>93077606>CharmingKitsumoto is getting talk no jutsued.
>>93077646Sen wants to talk him down. The Snowclad Watcher wants to mindwipe him. Neither will probably get what they want.
>>93077469Just don't look at her eyes, bro. It's that shrimple.
>>93077667Massively debuffing your opponent for free by making them avoid your gaze at all times is pretty worth it.
>>93074137>it could quite annoying in future fightsI was thinking in terms of being freshly isekai'd, and not being used to their new-found powers. We can drop the whole targeting thing because, as written, you can choose for the power not to affect a specific target. It's mostly a suggestion to add more tension so that they don't start using their best move from the get-go.>After that maybe it's time for the stumbling block?Sounds good to me. Maybe Tomoe can use her improved charisma to lower their guard before going in for the kill, or maybe the bandits make a desperate escape and attempt to burn the forest to block their pursuer's path, but Reza using water magic, and Tomoe using her hemomancy and increased speed manage to catch up? >How about we leave it up to the anon who said his character would in fact kill a dog?I'm fine with that. The dog isn't so important, and he can join whether the dog actually appears or not. It's probably best to keep the party for the encounter rather low, and have most of the others meet up at a later date in either Shower City, or Gras Paada.>She'd probably just be turning her powers off to avoid needing to make any excusesWell, obviously she shouldn't be going all out in a track race. It could be like that one scene in the Incredibles where Dash wins 2nd place by going at his own version of a light jog. Then again, she's not exactly the type to lie, is she? Even if it means another way to catch her parent's attention.It's probably best to leave the brainstorming for later in the day so that you can enjoy Father's Day. I think this should be enough for it, though. See you next time, or next thread.
>>93077667She can just touch you bro.
>>93077674>He needs to look at his opponent to beat themSounds like a skill issue to me. What the hell kind of genjutsu would Ichika even put people under? I doubt she'd literally crucify them Itachi style.
>>93077659>mindwipe him...She can do that?
>>93077681Ungodly dome.
>>93077686Give someone with enough Genjutsu a few months in a dark basement and they can start doing MKUltra shit. The Watcher is a schizo though, don't listen to her.
>>93077693why not just ask the chick with eyes made for brainwashing to do it
>>93077701Because it's her job to save Kitsumoto. You wouldn't hand your friend to the glowies because of wrongthink, would you? You'd lock them up in a basement until they understand instead.
>>93077687So THAT'S How Jin is going to lose.
>>93077273Someone using their head.
>>93077710Snow Clad GOD i kneel
>>93077732Okay, Kitsumoto.
>>93077710>Purification mindbreak
>>93077732>>93077740These two posters are the same people.
>>93077740>>93077751Everyone's swingin' and everyone's missin'
>>93077571Thanks, I will try that. I checked rentry and it has some cool formatting things, so I can try to make it less boring than a wall of text, no promises tho, I am not a writer, just get carried away when I do this kind of thing, so I write a lot but it's probably low quality.
>>93077777>quintsI kneel
>>93077777Kitsumoto is a swinger? Sen really does need to fix him up.
>>93077790Pretty sure being a 'swinger' requires a wife/girlfriend, anon.
>>93077779Don't worry too much. Most of us aren't good at the things we post either. As long as you're having fun not at the expense of others.
>>93077798She also needs to remind him that they're married.
>>93077798Anon is a known desperate reacher.
>>93077798It also requires being a cuck.
>>93077808But not as much as Kitsumoto trying to justify a win.
>>93077807>You are NOT an edgy criminal assassin. You are my happy, non-traumatized husband.The Snowclad Watcher is truly evil.
>>93077804This one will only feature my character so there should be no risk of that. I don't plan to downplay others or be antagonistic so it should be fine.
>>93077819>The World Will Know HappinessWait this is just Infinite Tsukuyomi except with mindbreak.
>>93077922Moon Eye plan was basically to send everyone to their own personal heaven.I'm pretty sure 99% of guys would have just become immortal emperors with massive harems while 99% of women would become Belle from Twilight.
>>93076221Assuming you mean ranking power, here's my analysis of power for the updated builds this thread:Jin: (Tough, Unarmed Combat 2>3, Body Flicker 1>2, Improvisation Art 1, Stealth 1, Cloth Style 2)Nothing groundbreaking in terms of power increase, just good solid upgrades. Tough ought to synchronize well with SHB, his combat strength grows with his unarmed skill, and getting cloth 2 gives him new versatility. Ichika: (Unique Power: Evolved Ketusryugan, Weapon Art: Kusarigama 2, AWS: Crashing Waves, Illusory Arts > 2)A considerable boost over what she was. Evolving her KG in addition to her illusory arts makes her extremely potent in genjutsu, which she should be able to take advantage of via her new weapon skill. However, she doesn't have the physicality of other builds to really lean into what those weapons can do.Rinka: (Deep Reserves, Book Smarts, Advanced Taijutsu 2>3, Super Mystic Bell Charm)Her stats haven't changed much, getting better in taijutsu, but the deep reserves should aid Angel Mode, as well as the book smarts for the whole "not having your soul ripped out" downside. Big thing is the charm, which renders her basically immune to anything but potent Nature Energy, i.e. Sage Mode, as well as resistant to genjutsu, which is a huge boost considering no-one has sage mode iirc.Fugiwara: (Skilled, Fire, Utility Jutsu 2, Advanced Weapon Style 1: Howling Mountain Style, Weapon Art 2 > 3: Kenjutsu Unarmed Combat 1 > 2, Advanced Taijutsu 2 > 1)A new Nature opens up entire new vistas, Fire should sync well with Wind, his falling in taijutsu should be made up for with his new weapon skill. Can't make more comments until he adds all his points.Shiteru: Irrelevant.Sen: (Charming, Animal Companionship 3, Genjutsu Reversal 3, Hell Viewing 3, Concealment Arts 3, Illusory Arts 3, -Improvisation Arts 3, -Utility Jutsu 3, -Recording Eye)A very different built now. Hard to compare directly to previous build. Losing a KG is a big deal though.
>>93078372Where would you place other recently updated builds like Shinro or Kitsumoto?
Rinka deserves to job solely for being a soulless item user
>>93076350If you read it like that you're retarded.I mean, use your brain for a second. Why would jutsu upgrades from perks give you the last two tiers but jutsu purchases wouldn't? Please, realize that "gained from Perks" is applying to everything.
>>93078478>weapon using is le fine>other items?! LE BAD!
>>93076453>and she doesn't have them on her imageYou imagefags are the worst.
>>93078496Enchanted weapons are soulless too. Her build as a whole is extremely soulless metajank that abuses the useless no-consequence drawbacks like Rage, Genderbender and Sentimental Item. She shouldn`t even be able to use Rage and Angel Mode at the same time, it literally says you have to be pure of heart.
>>93078491No he's fucking not, that's what it says. If you removed the word respectively it'd communicate what you wanted it to.
>>93077275What if my genin makes a big wave of chakra and counters?
>>93078510I don't think Rinkaanon is a Rage-as-a-Perkposter and they've done a pretty good job showing their flaws, which have also come up in writefags. They seem chill enough to me.
>>93078513>Why would jutsu upgrades from perks give you the last two tiers but jutsu purchases wouldn't?99% of retards can't figure out this one trick!
>>93078530>sentimental item and gender bender (basically not even real drawbacks, never have and never will come up in a fight)>has rage but also somehow angel mode, an technique that requires absolute control and a pure heart>moveset is basically 'I`m immune to everything, fuck you'SOULLESSBUILD
>>93078513respectively = first two tiers from purchases and last two tiers from upgrades albeit
>>93078540Why would you type respectively if you meant that it's my choice rather than dependent on the perk benefit? It's fine to fuck up on a word choice. It's retarded to double down when you do.
>>93078550... wait that IS what it means? I thought anons were arguing that it's up to the builder's choice.
>>93078559>if you meant that it's my choice rather than dependent on the perk benefitWhat the fuck are you talking about?
>>93078570Apparently I'm in a caffeine deprived ramble. Disregard me.
>>93078547It's ok, my build will oneshot Rinka just for you, anon.
>>93078547>Never come up in a fightI don't really think that's a problem. It only is if people take drawbacks that either don't come up or are used as secret perks.>Rage/AngelTo be fair Rinka has a whole different kind of baggage with her Angel Mode which is narratively interesting to me. I realize what the cyoa says but at the same time I'm not particularly bothered, especially if at somepoint she fails to use it because of her Rage, that'd be some cool characterization.>MovesetShe has decent defences but I wouldn't know about immunities. She also paid a hell of a lot of points for the Divine Arts tree which isn't great at much else so I don't mind.I get what you're saying but the things Rinka takes seem more soul than souless to me and their anon is actually trying to do something with it.
>>93078510>Enchanted weapons are soulless??????
>>93078510>>93078547>muh useless drawbacksShouldn't have picked a shit CYOAI'm taking the free 20 points whether you like it or not.
>>93078547The immunity moveset is less anon's fault and more the fault of Nart's shit power system.
>>93078607Only when they have no sovl. There are sovlful enchanted items, it's just that anons are bad at choosing them.
>>93078628Rank the enchanted items we have.
>>93078599>I don't really think that's a problemYou can hardly call it a drawback, then.>to be fair Rinka has a whole different kind of baggage with her Angel Mode which is narratively interesting to me. I wouldn`t call ignoring the main drawback of an extremely storng power 'interesting'>She has decent defences but I wouldn't know about immunities.You're kidding me right? She has an immunity to everything. Immunity to taijutsu, immunity to ninjutsu, immunity to genjutsu, immunity to poison, she might as well have made an teleporting dustless dust assassin.Rinka is a shit build to fight, and in a shonen MP, that makes her garbage. No amount of fetishes can change that.
>>93078628What is the most sovlful enchanted item and why is it a flute that gives you the ability to play the guitar?
>Rinka's immune to everythingHuh? Just don't use ninjutsu when she's using dark and punch her in the face.
>>93078622>purposefully pick skills that give you immunity to eveyrthing>somehow not your fault
>>93078645I can't blame anon. I didn't do it, but I understand it. The options are too cheap.
>>93078642Dark also works on taijutsu, lmao. Not to mention thanks to the item, she now has an constant barrier around her that is basically impossible to break. On top of already being an taijutsufag.
>>93078372>Can't make more comments until he adds all his points.Unless I missed something else, anon's audit was wrong, I shouldn't have any points left.
>>93078632>shit tierShimabukuro'sRinka'sThat Kokoro guy I personally bullied out of the MP>not as shit tierEminem's (Gyu) doesn't seem that bad. It just makes him a molten gold man. Maybe a bit wanked... I'm gonna say it's still shit.Does anyone else have one?>>93078640The most sovlful one is a Fury bomb strapped to your chest.
So, who said they were active but haven't updated yet?
>>93078637>You can hardly call it a drawback, thenThere is significantly more to the story than just fights that can force people to make poor decisions for themselves. So long as the drawback is a drawback overall, it not being directly relevant in combat is fine by me.>Ignoring main drawbackAnd introducing another with the whole body dysmorphia angle. Remove the fetish from it and it's pretty close to being involuntarily transhuman'd to have some kind of power and struggling with it, which could be interesting depending on where it goes.>Immunity to everythingMaybe I'm not reading this right, but the only things she really seems immune to are poisons and curses. I'm not seeing the taijutsu or genjutsu immunities. Dark might be readable as immunity to genjutsu but with all points being equal it might be overhyping to suggest it's all that, especially for a Chunin.That being said, I think we might just be free to disagree. Rinkaanon is active and generally positive enough that I'm more than willing to overlook some inconsistencies with the cyoa providing the build stays interesting to me.
>>93077676>It's mostly a suggestion to add more tension so that they don't start using their best move from the get-go.I understood and support the line of thought. I like the idea of everyone not going full steam from the very start. My thing was just that this specific example was too extreme in terms of results. If you prevent her from using All-Embracing Heart it cuts her off from hemomancy and large sword mastery, then her only remaining combat ability is just the base stat boost from being a rose knight- maybe feints from Guile if you want to be generous about what counts as a lie.A better example for me would be struggling to concentrate on maintaining the blood drain aura, causing her usage of the ability to be inconsistent. Perhaps she needs to individually target every person she intends to effect and maintain some level of focus on those people. That'd reduce her combat effectiveness without completely screwing her over.>Sounds good to me.Same. I'm pretty content with what we've got. Only things left would be to discuss how the characters interact with each other after trouncing the bandits and why they decide to travel together.>It's probably best to keep the party for the encounter rather low, and have most of the others meet up at a later date in either Shower City, or Gras Paada.Gotcha.>Then again, she's not exactly the type to lie, is she?She isn't entirely incapable of lying, but in the grand scheme of things needing to lie would take more effort than just not relying on her powers. For example, even if she sticks to being middle of the pack, if she doesn't even break a sweat it'd still be weird. Rather than trying to be paranoid and cover every base to avoid people noticing she's abnormal, I think that in practice it'd just be easier to stick with being normal... Of course, that could just be a first hand lesson she learns.>See you next time, or next thread.Roger. Till next time then.
>>93078654>Dark also works on taijutsu, lmaoIt's not an instant suck black hole, it's a vacuum. Resist it.>constant barrierIt only activates when her life is in danger, and it can't last forever. Just subdue her.
>>93078686Err, immunity to ninjutsu*, messed that up there.
>>93078686>So long as the drawback is a drawback overall,I must have missed the part where that happens outside of the transformation fetish.>And introducing another with the whole body dysmorphia angle. Oh no, she feels kinda bad! That's totally the same as literally fucking exploding.>Maybe I'm not reading this right, but the only things she really seems immune to are poisons and cursesHer item barrier is said to be hard as shit to break with force and is basically a freebie that doesn't require her to constantly be using a jutsu, Dark can absorve physical items (so basically bye bye anyone who uses weapons) and that's on top of having more taijutsu and a gigantic boost from angel mode. That's ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu all hard cucked.
>>93071563Putting it out here as a final call. I'm finishing up the responses to all arrivals so if anyone else wants in to the tournament, this is the last thread I'm accepting any newcomers. After this I'm going forward with the Hastilude and starting to resolve the individual contests. Just rolled and the first event is the Joust.
>>93078547>>93078637>>93078731>powerful = soulessKill yourself.
>>93078731Look dude, we get that you have a crush and want to wank Rinka, but can you stop being retarded for a bit?
>>93078757You're right. "I am immune to everything and my Drawback is that I get more powerful when I'm angry", however, is.
>>93078372>she doesn't have the physicality of other builds to really lean into whatI don't get this. Weaponfagging involves training your body too. I don't see why she'd also need to but advanced taijutsu and muscle enactment to whatever.
>>93078731Stop wanking your build, Rinkanon.>Her item barrier is said to be hard as shit to break with force Only activates when her life is in danger. Take it from her beforehand.>Dark can absorve physical items Key word "can". It's a no limits fallacy to say a vortex that sucking in everything in front of it would achieve the goal. Just hold on to your weapons.>and that's on top of having more taijutsu and a gigantic boost from angel mode.Meh, only upgraded advanced taijutsu, unarmed combat, and a little bit of mucle enhancement. If she uses Angel Mode just be defensive and piss her off. She'll instant-lose because of rage.Angel Mode is a death sentence for her if anyone knows about her anger issues, and maybe if they just last long enough for it to kick in.
>>93078675Going quickly by the list (as such as I might have missed some), the people who list items are (including who you listed):>Shimabukuro>>92034456>ItemEnchanted Tool (0) [Great Crown of the Insect Sage]>Tool JutsuEnlightened Sage Mode, Man-Beast Transformation>Kazen Uzumaki>>92129825 >Ninja ToolsEnchanted Tool: Shinigami Beads>Ezaki Tuto>>92143158 >Ninja ToolWagasa Umbrella>Tsugumi>>92078303>ItemsHidden Text (Her Diary)>Kamiizumi Tadafusa>>92443623 >ItemEnchanted Tool (Primary: Shadow Blade, Secondary: Shadow Gathering)>Rio Konoki>>92286130 >GearInfo CardsFlash BombsCustom Kunai(Multitool)UmbrellaSmoke TagRation PillsHidden Text(Last Will and Testament which includes the locations of where she hid the written secrets she learned during her careers)>Rinka Akagi>>93074011>(Item: Super Mystic Bell Charm (0))>Taihō Shiryō>>92065120 >ITEMSEnchanted Tool (Umbrella)>TOOL JUTSUSMirror Reflection TechniqueWeight Control>Eiji>>92132327>ItemEnchanted Tool: The puppet Hitobashira>Tool JutsuSoul Detachment Technique, Advanced Weapon Style: Bloody Mist Style>Engetsu Bōfū>>92101140 >OtherEnchanted Tool: Blaze, Oil>Gyū>>92157552 >ItemEnchanted Tool: Metalification, Fire Spear>Koroko Kokoroko>>92235539 >Items (-55)Enchanted Tool: Cloud-Slicing Blade (-7)- Scathe Style- {Elemental} Dragon>Aika Yuki>>92251220 Items-Ration Pills
>>93078678Me (Ghidorah). Still finishing up my training arc writefag. Would anons prefer if I just post the update now and post the writefag whenever I'm finished?
>>93078810Go for it. I'm interested to see what he's picked up from spooky mentor man.
>>93078778>Only activates when her life is in danger. Take it from her beforehand.What the hell constitutes as "life in danger"? Not to mention its a "more powerful" version of the mystic bell charm. > It's a no limits fallacy to say a vortex that sucking in everything in front of it would achieve the goal. No, it can just create a powerful vortex that allows her to basically say "No u" to all attacks trying to hit her.>She'll instant-lose because of rage.Doesn't seem to have affected her whatsoever until now, lol. Not to mention it would literally kill her, so...yeah, I doubt it's going to happen.
>>93078807Wow, that's more than I thought.Alright.>shitShimabukuroRinka (Super Bell Charm when Enchanted Tool and Bell Charm cost the same? SHIT)TaihoKoroko>sovlBofuEzakiEijiTadafusaGyuKazen
>>93078831>"life in danger"Whatever makes it balanced for writefags.>Not to mention its a "more powerful" version of the mystic bell charm.Shouldn't be. They both cost the same.>No, it can just create a powerful vortex that allows her to basically say "No u" to all attacks trying to hit her.>avoid the pull>stab her in the face while she's using a shitty ninjutsu defense against taijutsu>Doesn't seem to have affected her whatsoever until now, lol. Not to mention it would literally kill her, so...yeah, I doubt it's going to happen.Well my build can't LOSE against her because they would kill themselves for being dishonorable. Seems like we're at an impass. She'll just have to hope she survives picking the options she took!
>Get matched up with Rinka>Refuse to fight her saying you don't beat women>(S)he explodes in anger
>>93078865>Whatever makes it balanced for writefags.So not at all.>Shouldn't be. They both cost the same.Well, that's what the build says.
>>93078891>Well, that's what the build says.I already told you I'm disregarding the wank.
>>93078810I wanna see his update.
>>93078865>Shouldn't be. They both cost the same.No, her mystic bell charm has like 15 points of investment since alll the points from the rank up were spent on it.
>>93078910Oh, I thought she took an Enchanted Tool? It's custom?
Damn, Kitsu-chan is desperate.
>>93078910Looking at the build, 10 points. Notice that there is a count of leftover points that goes to 0 to that and was at 10 before.
>>93078924..tf would Kitsumoto have anything to do with Rinka? Schizo-anon, you have to at least put in some effort...
>>93078936>tf would Kitsumoto have anything to do with Rinka?Love at first sight. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
>>93078936>obviously trying to drum up hate for another build to take heat off of yoursGee, I wonder.
>>93078947So now with the forest of death, prelims and rank ups (mostly) behind us and all, how are our prospective ships looking?
>>93078955Meds.
>>93078959Barren.My build is still shipless.
>>93078959Masu x Ichika stock is up.
>>93078831Dark is a pretty jobber ability that won't do much unless the user is a level of ninjutsu god that Rinka simply isn't. Stuff like the bell always exists so this gen's resident genjutsu merchant can be hyped up as a prodigy by Natsuo or whatever during play-by-play.
>>93078959Well, let's see..>Himari x GhidorahApparently a thing? Had a few writefags.>Yuma x Shinro In his preliminary, Yuma's genjutsu revealed that Shinro likes her. >Jin x IchikaInevitableIs there anything I'm forgetting?
>>93078981Name your build.
>>93078985Some ideas:>Rinka x AkaitoThey seemed very tsun for each other in Miura's writefag.>Kuro x KitsuThey are both wankers.>Boobkage x ShiteruThe battle of molesters.
>>93078994>Boobkage x Shiteru>slut x slutHow fitting.
>>93078994>They are both wankers.Utterly obsessed.
>>93078985>Me x Your BuildI'm a fat and ugly bastard.
>>93078981I will try in good faith to come up with a ship for your build if you say what it is.
My post wasn't posted for some reason...>>93078989>>93079023I was joking.Kichōna isn't a good fit for any ship in all honesty and Osamu isn't either. At least he can attempt to win the Tsugumi bowl if she decides that minors aren't that attractive anymore.
>>93079066>Kichōna isn't a good fit for any ship in all honestyNah, she needs a nice tard wrangler.>if she decides that minors aren't that attractiveMy queen would never.
>>93079066>Kichōna isn't a good fit for any shipThe psychotic living Weapon acting like a blushing schoolgirl with some guy she could literally tear in half with her bare hands sounds pretty wholesome to me.
>>93079107This thread is exclusively for appreciators of women that could tear them in half, mindrape them, incinerate them, throw them into the sun etc. but acting like normal girls.
>>93079066>KichōnaShe's shippable enough, just needs the right boy. I can brainstorm when I get back from a father's day thing.
>>93071606NameGhidorah>OriginKirigakure>RankC>PerksTalented (Ninjutsu), Gifted, Prodigious>DrawbacksTragic Backstory, Emotional Weakness>Chakra NatureEarth>BasicsAnimal Companionship (Crocodile), Weapon Art (Kunai)+, Chakra Flow+, Puppet Art+, Ninja Tools, Body Flicker+>Advanced JutsuPoison Style+, Ink Style, Advanced Weapon Style (Falling Leaf Style), Shadow Shuriken>Hidden TechniquesChakra Thread, Blades of Blood++, Elemental Golem+, Kidaichu Symbiosis+>Secret SpecialsHomunculi Clay, Black Salamander SurgeryGhidorah won his preliminary bout but at a cost - his trusty animal companion Tock was severely injured trying to protect him, and largely because of Ghidorah's hesitation in combat. His unwillingness to truly commit to combat has hurt him in the past, and did again when Tock was hurt so severely that he was sent to Konoha's Inuzuka clan for healing. Ghidorah stewed in his own depressive state without his longtime companion when he was approached by a shadowy figure from his past. A month later he has emerged from his training with some new skills - but perhaps the most striking change is in his mentality. Now emboldened to protect what is dear to him, and being taken down a darker path by his shadowy reptilian mentor, Ghidorah's entry into the final stage of the Chunin exams may mark a turning point in his personal development.
>ywn get that tag team pure pleasure mindrape from Yuma and Ichika as you receive dome that sends you straight to the pure worldwhy live
>>93078733>Gristletooth's Tournament Rounduphttps://rentry.org/5cgvq92eI did a bit of fleshing out with his contestants in case anyone wanted to write with them in mind. The demon himself will be around to observe the goings on and try and talk with some other big players, but he'll be incognito for his own safety and convenience.
>>93079137I'm still working on my training writefag, which will include Ishirō Honda knocking out Ghidorah then using his Summoning Jutsu to place Ghidorah in the belly of a lizard. Forced to overcome the difficult situation, Ghidorah figures out a new jutsu - creating golems out of the poison in his bloodstream and the kidaichu living in his body to make a hole in the stomach and fight his way out of the lizard's stomach. When he emerges from the stomach and sees the now-dead lizard, he's surprisingly undisturbed - Honda's voice in his head when he was in the stomach kept stressing that if he died in there, so would the kidaichu that inhabited his body and his crocodile would be dissected by Konoha for their own purposes. So Ghidorah's uneasy feelings when killing the lizard were lessened, the first step in Honda's plan to turn the young shinobi into something more sinister...
>>93079107Sounds like a plot from Violet Evergarden.
>>93079137Let's see here.+Talented (Ninjutsu)+Body Flicker x2+AWS+Shadow Shuriken+Elemental Golem x2+Kidauchu Symbiosis-Illusory ArtsNice all-around upgrade. He's got even more golems now, some decent taijutsu foundations but no longer has any genjutsu.
>>93079137Changelog?
>>93079137>sent to Konoha's Inuzuka clan for healingDamn, the Inuzuka are so pathetic they do free factors for random foreigners just to get their name out there.
>>93079137>Junki almost killed>Ghidorah becoming an edgelord >Sen going schizoThat team ain't right. The fuck is Tsugumi doin'?
>>93079203Warming them for their husbands/wives.
>>93079169This anon >>93079168 pretty much got it all, except for that I also dropped Utility Jutsu to pick up Ninja Tools>>93079172I could switch it to being sent back to Kirigakure or Shimogakure (Tsugumi's village) for healing if that makes more sense in-world, the main point was that Ghidorah would be completely separated from Tock for the 30 day training period which makes him more susceptible to Honda's corrupting influence, especially because he keeps thinking about how he nearly got his closest friend killed due to his hesitation in combat (and Honda keeps whispering in his ear that it was his fault)
>>93079203My idea of Ghidorah/Pain and Sen/Konan starting the notAkatsuki after Junki/Yahiko's death is coming to fruition
>>93079261Junki will still be around, I think, it's mostly Ghidorah and Sen that got kidnapped by shady characters. He could look after Tock. Tsugumi could probably also take care of them, aye.
>>93079283>Kitsumoto kills Junki>Kitsumoto is working for Inaba>Inaba is DanzoHol' up.
>>93079286Well I also want Tock to be severely injured and needs the time to heal, which plays into the guilt of Ghidorah. So he wouldn't just be looked after by Junki or Tsugumi, he'd need to be healed by specialized healers so which is why I thought of Inuzuka clan. But I could just make some generic healer from Kirigakure or Shimogakure who heals him and sends him back after the 30 days are up.
>>93079146I appreciate sending a literal bear person to a wrestling event. Win or lose.
>>93079308The Inuzuka clan works, I think. Tsugumi definitely has the draw to get a favour like that.
>>93079291I can't wait for D to beatbox menacingly behind Inaba limping away in fear
>>93079291>Inaba is Danzo>jobber obsessed with other peoples eyes to make himself strongerchecks outhe just needs to be walked down by ichika
>>93071871So this is just a dump then?
>>93079291Who is Kitsumoto supposed to be here? Obito?
>>93079365lmaohe's deidara
>>93079374deidara is based af tho
>>93079374Literally why? I don't think he's ever given a damn about art.
>>93079365Closest thing would be Hanzo.
>>93079355Looks like one to me but if you really want to play it you can start somethingI'll participate
>>93079381>>93079385seems like the type a guy to say some "I trained my eyes to resist the sharingan" type shit before falling into genjutsu or whatever trick he's been seething about
>>93078959Shiteru x Ichikachildhood friend always wins in the end
>>93079386He doesn't really fit as a Hanzo though...Hanzo was an old star of the previous generation who turned into an old washout loser. Dude literally entitled the "Sannin" and took over a country.
>>93079418>old washout loser.He's a little young but he'll grow into it.
>>93079291like pottery...
>>93079433That would require him to become an legendary kage-tier shinobi first, schizoanon
>>93079447I never said he'd be Hanzo, I said he could be a washout loser.
>>93079386Not "power wise" you goober, plot wise. He's like Obito if he was a jobber.
>>93079467If Kitsumoto killed Not!Yahiko then the closest thing is Hanzo, was what I meant. The comparisons don't super add up once you start branching out though.
>>93079475Ah, I see. Makes sense.
>>93079355I am making the intro, I was buisy but once I start writing I am real fast because I let myself get carried away. I am not sure what being a dump means tho.
Look at the state of this thread. The Narts are pure cancer.
>>93079918I prefer that over a dead thread, it makes me feel not alone
why do btnfags get so salty?
>>93079918>making build updates>discussing buildssounds pretty good to me, outside of the schizos trying to start shit with the builds they don't like.
>>93079950From where I'm sitting? I'm not as Doomer as that first anon because I can see some legit stuff. But I can also see a lot of circular conversations that sound like high-schoolers gossiping. I don't really care about Yellow MHA, but there is a difference between cooking and endlessly back and forth about hypothetical cooking.
>>93080034>endlessly back and forth about hypothetical cookingYou mean the Stillborn City?
>>93079355I'm waiting on the anon to drop his relationship chart, I have faith that saberanon will keep posting it for the next 4 threads even if there isn't a lot of activity
>>93080155I'm not always the one threadslaving althoughbeit. You're not wrong in that I will keep posting it when I threadslave in order to give it it's fair chance... 5 mps is kinda crazy though. Is that a new record for us?
>>93080259The only really alive mp is naruto.
>>93080259You can drop UP, the accident wasn't your fault
>>93080259It might be time to let UP go. Mikaanon stopped posting music, no one's answering prompts or asking them and there's just generally no activity there.
>>93080058No. Take a step back and look at the Naruto discussion. There's a bunch of low effort posting and arguing about the MP that fills up posts relatively quickly, divided up with people actually putting down builds and concrete stuff. This is fine so long as the fluff gets broken up by other things. But you need effort or you're going to be left with a small number of anons endlessly gossiping about a thing, but not actually acting on the gossip.
>>93072460Just noticed this while looking for things to threadslave... As far as I can remember, she got caught after the prison break and hasn't been seen since, so I *think* she is indeed in prison. If we're wrong, we can always just say she got caught again off screen.>>93080272It did get a lot of activity yesterday at least. I'm still in the "MHA isn't dead yet" conspiracy group however, so my tinfoil hat won't let me be deceived by you! Well that and Gras Paada just started, so it's a bit early to start shitting on it.>>93080279>>93080289ngl, I was just giving it the stink eye while updating the threadslave notes... But since I didn't join the mp and I kinda just scroll past any of its discussions, I'm never sure if it's dead or if my brain is just filtering its activity. If no one is cooking anymore then there's probably no helping it though.
>>93072460>fluegel is in prison right?She's probably out by now since I think there's been multiple prison breaks.
>>93072460Can be.
>>93080396>Well that and Gras Paada just started, so it's a bit early to start shitting on it.Don't underestimate stillbornfag. It's never too early to call something stillborn, if it serves his agenda.
Should I post my updated jutsu list now or wait for the new thread?
>>93080437I get that some anons are like that, but it doesn't me I agree with it, you know?
>>93080464Depends on your schedule. It's still 40 minutes or so until the new thread gets started and it'll be another 30 minutes before anon's done. If you can wait, wait, if you can't post.
>>93080325Better than those two fags replacing themselves iver great the builds they've talked about at least a month are and then asking these whether they should talk to anyone else.
>>93080475Sounds good to me.
>>93080289None if the prompts have been good and I've been waiting fir that other anon to deliver before I commit to writing.
>>93080259Drop MHA, it's a shit anime.
>>93080528And Naruto isn't?
>>93080533No it's an old school classic.Shippuden is shit and I don't really like this CYOA though so I wouldn't mind. But it's only two posts long and has the most activity so we can't really drop it.
>>93080545I wish I could just delude myself into thinking the second part wasn't the same fucking story.
>>93080545Wait a second>old schoolFUCK YOU
>>93078372You missed Kuro I think
>>93080554Ending was Kino though.
>>93080588I disagree. Sure the Sasuke Naruto rematch was well done, but I had to live through moon bunny mom to get there. It was not worth it.
>>93080601Fair enough
>>93080566I feel you, bro.
>>93071871Do I post my intro now or do I wait untill the next thread is made?
>>93080796>>93080475
Time to go post 5 CYOAs...
>>93080850You only have to post the first 6 pages of UP if you're gonna post that.
>>93080850GL. I'm not gonna help you cause I'm already in bed.
>>93080850I can help in half an hour if you're still posting.
>>93080858...I think I'll just do that.>>93080865No worries. Complaints aside, most of them are pretty short.>>93080869Knowing my internet, I probably will be. We'll see.
Do you guys prefer rentry in dark mode or in light mode? I am trying to use colors to differentiate character dialogues but they change drastically between modes, I hope they are noticeable enough in both modes but for the future I may have to use hex instead of basic colors.
>>93080925Dark.
>>93080925I always use darkmode.
>>93080925just stop using this color code shitno one will complain if you just write "x said this" or "y screamed that"
>>93080925Who the fuck uses light mode on anything?
>>93080925Dark but colors are le cringe>>93080956I would even acceptA: Blah blah blah.B: Blah blah blah.
>>93080966I have one friend that does. Coincidentally, his nickname is "Blind".
>>93080925and if you want to distinguish the same character with two different modes, JUST USE BOLD OR ITALICS YOU FUCKI HATE EVERY NARDO NIGGER AND THEIR RETARDED SENSE OF COLORSFUCK YOUR YELLOWS AND LIGHT BLUES AND GRAYSTHIS SHIT IS NOT GOOD ON LIGHT OR DARK MODE
>>93080956>>93080980>>93080998I like colors
>>93081011Yeah I bet you do like something that ugly you gay fucking frog.
>>93080956>>93080980>>93080998I am not writing for whatever "nardo" is, and colors seemed easier to recognize than bold or italics, you also run out of them faster if you have more characters speaking. I can change it but it will make it harder to understand.
>>93081043Why'd you reply to people that your post doesn't make sense for?
Colors are a crutch.
>>93081060Writing is a crutch. A true storyteller would send his stories straight into our heads.
>>93081067Maybe, but I am not a professional writer so there is nothing wrong with that.>>93081060I asked about colors and they answered? They proposed alternatives and I explained that they also have pros and cons? In what way does my reply does not make sense?
>>93081091Why are you like this?
>>93081097>They proposed alternatives and I explained that they also have pros and consNo you didn't.
So it's all just bait?
>>93081110It's the weekend bro. Always has been.
>>93080879I'm here if you want me to jump in.
>>93081106Ok I am going to stop replying now, it's clear you don't actually have genuine feedback.>>93081110>>93081114I guess it was.
>>93081122Sounds good. I'll leave the rest of MHA and hogging to you then.
>>93081100I'm bored.
>>93081142Welcome to the internet. I recommend touching grass.
>has no response due to poor reading comprehension>calls it baitMany such cases.
>>93081155I don't like grass. It's coarse and rough and irritating and it gets everywhere.
>>93081097>Maybe, but I am not a professional writer so there is nothing wrong with that.At best it's a crutch, which can serve you temporarily but you need to outpace that. Conversational flow and distinctive voices are shit I expect out of journeymen writers brother.
If your writing is shit, just don't bother. You need some natural talent before you're allowed to make a writefag.
>>93081230Why are you telling me something I already know?
>>93081204>distinctive voicesHow the fuck do I do that in writing? Genuine question, if I want to keep doing it I do want to improve but you cannot expect me to be at journeyman level when I just joined. I just put what I have in my head on the file, which already limits my vision. I can try more complex stuff as I go on but in the meantime all I want is that my writing is comprehensible.
>>93081230>You need some natural talent before you're allowed to make a writefag.I see, so that is why this place is dead.
>>93081239nta. For me, it's mainly about putting a lot of thought into the characters themselves. What they think, what they like and hate, etc. Each character has their own motives and objects in any given scene, and they shouldn't all line up. They should be stressing different topics differently and trying to push the conversation to what they personally think is the most important, as opposed to working together to push the conversation towards your plot points like some creepy psychic hivemind.Also sometimes I think about people I know really well like family or friends or just fictional characters I watch a metric ton of and pair them with a character. So when I go to write for a certain character I think "how would X say this thing?" Like if you write for a character that's really gruff and aggressive, and you're an X-man fan, just channel Wolverine or something. I think this method is still a crutch, but I think it's a higher level crutch that can carry a writer higher on their journey.
>>93081230name a single writefag without shit writing
>>93080895>>93080895>>93080895Hogs?! I need your slop stat!
I always use light mode for everything
>>93081295Mine.
>>93081295You wouldn't know even if I named them you illiterate none you giving fuck.
I just like colors. They're fun to look at.>>93081294You sound pretty shit. I jsut make shit and make anon's builds say what I want them to say.>>93081295There are none.
>>93081295His >>93081318
>>93081295>Taming of the Fox (Hòu Duōtóu, Kanko)
>>93081295When Something Smells, It's the 'Nuts (Mommy Version)
>>93081295Mezuin's Day Out
>>93081294This does make sense, but still does not really answer my question, it also does not help with making something with just my character in it. Thanks anyway, I appreciate the advice.
>>93081324Nothing wrong with that. We're not a high-class literature thread. If you're happy with what you put out then more power to you.
>>93081379>but still does not really answer my question>it also does not help>ThanksWhat posses people to act so pathetic?
>>93081239NTA: I don't know how to teach you to do it, I don't understand what the fuck I'm writing 90% of the time. I can tell you it clicked for me while I was reading Greek plays of all things. The motherfuckers did their damndest to express emotions AND actions through dialogue and it worked.For now, use the colors as training wheels instead of as a crutch. You can take them off when you're doing a two-man game, maybe try that for a while.
>>93081337>>93081358Post em>>93081349I already know this one
>>93081381Nta but people have been making sure to make me think it is with all the complaints.
>>93081239People have different lexicons and different spreads of tones they use commonly in conversations. This is what people mean by "voice." You can tell when someone is talking when they have a distinct way of doing it, like an unusual pattern, or only using very common words or quite erudite vocabulary, if they're formal or informal, terse or loquacious, optimistic or pessimistic. These are general rules. People will break them if they need to. This should be a significant character moment, and probably should be dialogue tagged, unless it's implied by line order already or something like that.
>>93081393And they're idiots that you can safely ignore. If you like your slop, then it's good slop. Simple as.
>>93081393There's nothing wrong with people having higher standards than they themselves can reach. It's the first requirement for getting better at anything.
>>93081393And they're right.
>>93081391404it was a controlc link
>>93081387Have you ever heard of being polite? You should try it.>>93081388I see, it kinda makes sense. I will keep trying.>>93081394Thanks, it's useful advice. I am learning a lot about what people consider good writing here, I will try to slowly get better. I will write much faster than I get better tho.
>>93081437Then it doesn't exist and never existed.
>>93081446Best advice to getting better is steal from whomever you like reading. Whether here or a professional author.
>>93081446You're not writefagging for an MP I like and you are annoying so anon has every reason to be rude to you.
This all assumes that a build does have an established way of speaking. I do try to add obvious quirks when writing text for my own builds and you can look at other anons work to try to match them or go off of a build's description, but there's plenty of builds that don't give much in the way way to good idea of how the character acts in social situations and end up not writing much if anything. Most of these are dumps, but I've had plenty of times where I wanted to use the build of an otherwise active anon and struggled to come up with a voice because they fit that category.
>>93081474>This all assumes that a build does have an established way of speaking.This is fair.
>>93081474That's why all my builds talk in third person or with a funny accent.
>>93081458I mean, inspiration happens regardless of your will sometimes.>>93081474That is the problem I had with that advice, some characters just don't have a distinctive way of speaking. Still it's useful to think about.Anyway the intro is ready, I will post it in the the new thread.
>>93081523Those characters don't have a personality so you can feel free to kill them off.
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