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I won btw
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>>94084933
Aromage...
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>>94084926
https://strawpoll.com/3RnYXDp6Dye
I'll be closing the poll tomorrow
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>>94084966
>https://strawpoll.com/3RnYXDp6Dye
I am winning. Good
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>>94084973
Jobber-kun...
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>>94084926
I'm giving serious thought to making an NTR CYOA, any interest in this?
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>>94084959
How is this the only good cultivation cyoa?
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>>94084955
>Adapter
>things it can get from mundane living beings
>plants: nigh infinite lifespan and photosynthesis
>bird: flight
>fish: underwater breathing
>elephant: strength
>cheetah: speed
>fly: reaction time
>animals: augmentation to various senses
How can anything else compete?
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>>94084982
No.
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>>94084982
Depends.
Will it be netorare or netori?
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>>94084984
All the others were made by authors too stupid to do anything but
>lol come up with techniques and items by yourself
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>>94084990
>trying to powerfag the worst one by ignoring its supposed to be stealing skills like those in the skills section
Readlets, never-ever
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>>94084982
Yes. NTRchads rise up.
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>>94085046
>ability
lmao
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>>94085030
Strictly netorare.
>>94085053
What would appeal to you most?
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Did someone say cultivation?
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>>94085054
(You)
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>>94085057
The only good kind of NTR is oblivious tomboy/mom getting manipulated by ugly bastard. As long as you can make that, it'll be good.
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>>94085057
>Strictly netorare.
meh not interested then
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>>94084959
>Enter: Reincarnate
Being one of the the heirs to one of the strongest clans in the Sect is more important than arguably any choice here. A common theme in these stories is how hard it is for commoners to get their footing with all the clans and families running around. It pays to have powerful people on your side. It also grants a lot of money, power, respect, safety, leeway and even freedom, as long as you’re not the heir apparent. Even without everything else I’d be happy with just this. I don’t plan on sticking around so no family drama or politics to drag me down either.

>Adventure: Immortal Retreat Monastery
When you start out in these stories you’re a small fish in a big pond, so somewhere safe for the first part of your life is important as well. This is a safe, neutral sect that can provide the resources necessary to advance quickly. As I’m part of a clan and have great talent, it’s a very sure thing I’ll inherit the Nine Heart Sutra. There’s a chance it’s not suitable for higher levels of cultivation though. I don’t think it’ll damage my foundation but it might be safer to stick to the starting cultivation techniques.
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>>94085136
>Cultivation Methods:
Silver Saint Sword Manual
Dreamworld Sutra
They’re plenty powerful, but are also predicated on the path of Daomaxxing. Understanding the Dao tends to be what’s important later on so getting a head start now with these two is good. You can’t go wrong with Sword Dao, especially with the Stone Sword I’ll be arriving with. I don’t need any peripheral treasures anyway with it so there’s no real trade off to make here. I considered taking Fissure Arts, but I feel like comprehending the Dao is more important than those benefits. I can always find it or something better later, and the Stone Sword provides a lot of its benefits anyway. Dreamworld Sutra can be used to further deepen my understandings of Time Dao, which is good since it’s very hard to master. The spiritual techniques are a nice plus as well. The other techniques are either not as great or have drawbacks I don’t consider worth it. I’m not looking to become forced to be a killer or only eat spiritual dishes.
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>>94085146
>Fate: The Stone Sword
This was a hard choice but it seems that this is the one with the most payoff in the end. Spirit Sage is good, but I can refine my Spirit Root with other methods, and there are probably similar or better techniques I can find out there. Blood Of The Ancients is only great if you want to become a mass murderer, and there are ways to acquire heaven-defying bloodlines that don’t make you a killer. It’s also a bit of a trap option if you want to escape via the Hall Of The Returners, since you’ll have to eventually reach the peak if you don’t want to die. In these stories its usually better to have something slower but more “pure”/stable/powerful. I like Sword or Time Dao better anyway. The others are a little meh. The Stone Sword on the other hand is otherworldly, and grows with me, possibly to heights much further beyond this world. It won’t help as much in the beginning but at higher levels it could be much better than the other options. It’s a bit of a gamble to be sure, but chances are it will pay off. I’d like to think it crashes near me soon after birth.
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>>94085150
>Grand Journey:
Green Blood Estate
The River Of Youth

Most of these are fun but don’t offer much. The Ancient Peace Pavillion looked safe but boring. The undead girl might be a good ally, since she seems sane enough to teach her methods. I’ll probably double-cross the empire and find the scholars first so I can give them to her- though not before first learning how to destroy her, just in case. Sane people usually don’t commit genocide so there’s probably a reason she’s doing this, one I might be able to reason her out of. Or not. Doesn’t really matter, I just want her armies for the River Of Youth. With it I could gain some general QOL improvements, immortality, an ancient bloodline and maybe even further refine my Spirit Root. Maybe even make her not-undead, if she needs convincing and the promise of the corpses of many supreme cultivators isn’t enough. She probably has some ancient techniques she could pass on if I give her the River. The hassle of dealing with actually holding it is annoying though. I’ll probably just dip once I hit Earthly Immortal stage to Returners Hall and try to see where the gate takes me. Don’t want to get stuck here.
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>>94084959
>Incarnate
>this honored one will create for you a new body
We had been overlooking this. Grandaddy is an Exalted Immortal, a higher level than anything else in this world. He can give you a insanely op physique.
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>>94085057
>>94084982
>>>/trash/
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>>94084982
Absolutely you'll get a ton of builds and discussion!
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This is a good time for oc.
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>>94085376
You don't deserve OC.
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>>94085376
not really tomorrow would be better
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>>94085376
I could do without
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>>94085186
>He can give you a insanely op physique.
That's equal to being a clan heir I suppose
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>>94085090
Gooners go to >>>/trash/
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>>94085514
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>>94085136
>Not taking Blood Of Ancients
jobber build
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>>94085519
Sorry you're upset. Maybe try letting people enjoy things?
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>>94084982
>NTR CYOA
I would be interested, that said there are at the least 7 of them already, 2 of them have multiple pages.
are you gonna be cuck or a bull in this one?
>>94085090
netori is worse than netorare if you think about it.
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Reposting a few silly questions in the new thread:

https://imgchest.com/p/n87wggq634x

About Beri's Living Dungeon:
>Select up to three Purposes, they must reasonably cross over.
>If you're going for a specialized dungeon purpose like "Training", you're not also "Classic"
Why not, can't you technically do both if you're big enough?
A starting/buffer zone that is safe and balanced, ment for training, difficulty ramping up as you move onwards and you try not to harm people there, and then an actual classic "you will die, monsters are aggressive, loot" zones later on.
Same with other Purposes that might conflict, like Resort and Classic. A classic dungeon that surprisingly also serves as a place to live, having entire cities in between floors and areas.

Could a classic dungeon also somehow work out with Dark Lord's Throne or is that too much of a stretch?

Also, how will Karma effect nearly impossible or great undertakings? Are huge dungeons that are big to the point where it takes a year or more (of constant fighting, dodging traps and traveling) just to cross it from the entrance to the core considered fair enough?
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Came across this while looking for that demon arena cyoa that other anon was looking for
(Also cause i half remember it nyself and was curious)
This isnt it but i do like the difference in design of some of the older cyoas
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>>94085556
I'm afraid I can't do that
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>>94085693
It's been remade several times, including a version with companions, if you feel like digging through the archive.
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>>94085161
Is the roller canon or fanfic? I don't want to be baited into playing reddit Entropist mod
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>>94084982
gods no go back in the /trash/ were you belong
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I overlooked this when it was new, but it's actually kinda cool.
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>>94086986
>lovecraftshit
no
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>>94086525
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/93578612/#93579638
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>>94086986
>Academic (Serious)
I'm thinking my rolled memories inspired me to seek out the hidden magical society and worm my way into their institution.
[1 high, 2 high/low, 6 quick/low]
>Cartomancy and Journey
I would have picked the ones with bonuses if I could choose. Pain and sorrow on my end!?
>Mental fortifications
>Sybillix lense
>Psychic repulsion
>Protective glyphs
>Illusory shards [1 high, 2 high/low, 5 quick/low]
>Mental injunction [1 high, 2 high/low, 4 quick/low]
>Banishment words [1 high, 2 high/low, 3 quick/low]
>Catoptromancy [1 high, 2 high/low, 2 quick/low]
>Various tricks [1 high, 2 high/low, 1 quick/low]
I'm going to ignore that stuff about glyphs needing to be renewed. Glyphs are supposed to be lasting things that power ancient artifacts.
>Satyre [1 high, 2 high/low, 0 quick/low]
>Gobs [1 high, 1 high/low, 0 quick/low]
>Reanimated Corpse [1 high, 0 high/low, 0 quick/low]
So many of these basically come down to 'attack a dude'
>Busha and Mesha [0 high, 0 high/low, 0 quick/low]
I'll use my genius to get rich. My satyr bodyguard will keep me out of trouble with attackers. Besides, I'll also join
>the magical community
I can provide illusory safehouses and investigate murders with reanimation if the peace is broken.
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>>94086986
no waif no click
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>>94086389
Tried making a build for this despite all the gay stuff, but dropped it. The major problem here is that the higher level options have so many mandatory requirements that your choices are pretty much made for you. It has 11 pages of choices but all that clustering makes them largely irrelevant.
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>>94085693
>Sloth makes you dumber until you reach your peak
Uh, okay..
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Version 2.0

Changelog
>The width of the CYOA was changed from 1200px to 1800px
>Starting points increased from 6 to 8
>9 new options added
>”Your Waifu” slight change of description
>”Your Universe” slight change of description
>”Your House” slight change of description and everyone inside your pocket dimension will now have the same immortality as you
>”Your Wardrobe” name got changed to “Your Look”
>”Your Bank” slight change of description and weapons and armor that originally came from your bank will be slowly repaired when they are inside the bank.
>”Your Companions” slight change of description
>”Your Rival” changed the image, slight description change and now requires an anime instead of “anime or manga”
>”Your Upgrade” has new effects for the new options and a new broader image
>”Your Upgrade (Your Item)” will optionally grant an item to Your Rival
>”Your Upgrade (Your Bank)” will now allow you to summon weapons in a way that will allow you to fire them as projectiles similar to Gilgamesh from Fate and armors can be summoned directly equipped
>”Your Upgrade (Your Drawback)” You can now only take Your Drawback 1 additional time instead of 2 additional times
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Entropistanon here. I'm dropping by real quick to see if there are any more questions. After today I probably won't be back for another month, maybe more.
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>>94087862
Harmonist won.
Gtfo EA.
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>>94087862
Does Father want humans to die because of a general living-is-suffering samsara thing, or only to prevent some specific nightmare scenarios (humans ending up being eternally tortured by demons or AIs and unable to die)?
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>>94087760
KINO
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>>94087904
isn't this literally explained in the lore doc?
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>>94087862
would it be possible for someone to find some kind of source of power hidden in some desolate place that could equal to the greatest force of the universe such as entropy? (kinda like what solac did with the father) (if you don't want to reveal too much a simple yes or no would suffice)

why do the father and perfect prince forces have specific animosity towards each other? wouldn't be more "fitting" if the iron pyramid and father had a more antagonistic relationship since machine gods endlessly torture souls?

do you perhaps have the prompt you used for ebon's image?

also in the last thread another anon asked:
The Hound is obsessed with fertility and creating strong offspring. Does he have any children of his own? If so, who or what are they?
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>>94087760
Tok-chama... I kneel..
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>>94087862
>>94077458
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>>94077491
This is deeply intriguing. I have a couple of other questions, come to think of it.

The Hound is obsessed with fertility and creating strong offspring. Does he have any children of his own? If so, who or what are they had with? You mentioned the Exalted Conquerors aren't at all equivalent to his offspring, so does that mean their strength would be comparable to paladins, or lesser, and without access to momentum?

If an Exalted Conqueror managed to slay the Hound, would they take on the Hound's mantle and ethos, or would they become their own distinct entity? How heavily does the Hound overview the morals of Exalted Conquerors, if at all? I don't care to go too heavy into edgelord territory, but suppose an Exalted Conqueror conquered a city after a siege and killed all of the men, women, and children because they didn't surrender? Are Exalted Conquerors expected to adhere to the Hound's dogma or are discretions largely ignored, as long as they continue to win against the odds?

Is the Hound allergic to chocolate?

>>94078267
That is awesome to hear. As far as I'm concerned the more intricacy, the merrier.

>>94078304
This is gnarly. One of the biggest problems dealing with Entropic forces must be their relative lack of a need for logistics. If a Son can acquire souls, they can continue fighting and fielding more troops. They're effectively working with an enormous discount on cause (infrastructure) begetting effect (soldiers). I'm very eager to see your take on demons and beastmen, among other threats. What you've shown us so far is fascinating. Please, take all of the time you think you need to refine it.
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>>94085059
Finally, I can post my build update
https://rentry.org/bmcu5w88
>added WB
>added Malevolent Territory description
>added Gift table
>cleaned up some autism

Gift table:
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I made this over a month ago but only took Elaine two days ago so I don't have art for her yet

>>94087862
Now that you've seen Harmonist and reddit 3.0 have you seen the fan made Gifts or Remnant Chronicler's fan cyoa? I believe his was the first fan project to be made.

ALSO
Will Cold Doctrine have Ankylosaurs? If so, may I see the unit?
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>>94087904
Like the anon said I think the lore document goes about it a bit. He immediately shut down the possibility of eternal suffering from the source by allowing souls to degrade, and the very short of it, is that he seeks entropy since all of creation is as a net whole suffering. He can't really assign value to certain experiences or even calculate that for some beings a little bit of happiness may be worth immense suffering. Gods and powerful beings may seem at times omniscient or purveyors of infinite knowledge, but in reality all have limitations in certain areas that to us may seem nuanced or obvious. The Mother, Hound, Prince, Father, they're all biased and blind in some way.

>>94087975
No.

The Iron Pyramid is more like a conglomerate of innumerable AIs that also sabotage each other, but ultimately are bound together, so seeing them as a force on the level of the Mother or something is inaccurate. They're the strongest, centralized form of power amongst True AIs, but are not really the source of True AIs or anything. Still, they have a lot of weight in existence, and actively interfere in certain cases to assist in dealing with foes that may threaten them (mainly against the Perfect Prince, as they're weak to those forces). Entropy doesn't have many tools to deal with them, and the Father is not very active in micromanaging his "forces" if at all. Sons work in a decentralized way with absolute freedom, and the cults and locations adhering to the Father see little to no guidance from him most of the time.

Sorry I didn't save the prompts. In retrospect I should have.

The Hound has spawn born from his essence but no children (much like minions, so not exactly his kids). This is one of the reasons he keeps on pushing for evolution from outside forces, as he's incapable of doing it on his own. A Lesser Houndling is an example of a very low level minion.
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>>94087760
post builds
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>>94087862
>>94087975
i also forgot to ask, and i know its a weird question but how common are arranged marriages in the setting?
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>>94088027
If you slay the Hound you become a new primordial force in existence, but not the Hound. You have powers related to him, but the way this new force develops is entirely up to you.

The Hound does not view your morals and does not control you in any way. Maybe some drawbacks could limit you, but that would be your choice. If you do kills kids on the regular, early on you won't get any negative, but eventually the Hound will target you much like how he targets his enemies that do such things. Also killing you would grant more Rewards for other Conquerors, but that would be way further down the line if the Hound singled you out. This could happen to any of his enemies really, so Conquerors are not specially targeted in that sense. If you're strong, endure and then beat him, then you were correct. If he kills you, then you're a loser and asked for it, more or less. Conquerors kinda do whatever they want, but generally do avoid specifically targeting children en masse since they don't gain anything from it and don't want to pickup more enemies to deal with in later stages, specially since each subsequent Conquest is almost always more difficult than the last. This is specially true in worlds with heavy Hound influence where nasty Hound minions could spawn from such events. Again, this is a problem for everyone that seeks to gain power over the multiverse, much how sieging a Mother aligned world will have you in their sights, or killing a Groom will have Goddesses hunting you down with armies of mercenaries and servants. But some children dying due to your conquest won't really affect you as much as, say, a standard warlord would be affected. If said warlord went on to become a multiversal threat, then yes, it is something to consider. The Hound is your enemy, not your friend or your boss.

The Hound is not allergic to chocolate.

I hope you'll enjoy it anon, have a good day.
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>>94087760
>high quality drawbacks don't count as drawbacks, only tumors that don't belong in a cyoa do
how to instantly spot the author's hackery is terminal
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>>94088200
>If you slay the Hound you become a new primordial force in existence
can you slay the father or the mother and become a primordial force too? if you're already a primordial force and you kill another primordial force do you become primordial force^2? if you killed every primordial force would you become God Almighty, the Omnipotent and Omniscient?
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>>94088266
calm down Shining One
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>>94088134
I remember this build I liked it a lot. Also that Falista pick is excellent (I also picked Fuuma for my own build).

I saw Harmonist and the reddit mock one. I didn't know about the fan made Gifts. The fan cyoa I saw it later on, and I don't think I commented on it, but to me it was perhaps the most flattering thing anyone has made in regards to my cyoa. I think it was excellent, tasteful and very well done, very enjoyable even as a solo cyoa. I'm humbled that my work could impact someone enough that they would pour such immense effort into making something that is so deeply thought of, something I consider to be great. I have nothing but good things to say about it.

Cold Doctrine won't have Ankylosaurus. They were considered since I wanted them to have a tanky unit, but settled for triceratops instead. I have several pictures and will likely use this one, but they're meant to be extremely tanky chargers and mounts, though somewhat slow. They have good HP and massive DP (I think the highest DP of Tier III units, though some Construct may match them with modifiers, I'd have to check).
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>>94088150
I haven't really though much on that. I guess it depends? Grooms don't really get much of a choice when a Goddess catches them for example, so consent may depend on force.

>>94088266
The Hound is the only one to do this, since it's his wish for things to evolve, and if he is surpassed, then he's worthless and must be discarded. The Shining One has something along those plans, since he believes forces cannot be truly destroyed, but rather come to reside elsewhere (and why not in him?).
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>>94088329
>no Ankylosaurus
rip
>Triceratops
acceptable

I'm sure Chronicler anon will be very happy to her such kind words
here are the fan gifts
https://rentry.org/ElementalGiantGift
https://rentry.org/InsectFaeGift
https://rentry.org/Entrominions
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>>94088329
Fraud... DETECTED!
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>>94087760
Art Style 1: Your Magic, Your Army
Art Style 2: Your Space, Your Look
Art Style 3: Your Waifu, Your Skill
Art Style 4: Your Power, Your Fighting Style, Your Power System
Art Style 5: Your Universe, Your House
Art Style 6: Your Vehicle
Art Style 7: Your Race, Your Technology
Art Style 8: Your Item
Art Style 9: Your Fetish, Your Harem
Art Style 10: Your Companions
Art Style 11: Your Pokemon, Your Rival
Art Style 12: Your Harem
Art Style 13: Your Harem
Art Style 14: Your Harem
Art Style 15: Your You,
Art Style 16: Your Option
Art Style 17: Your Consumable, Your Bank, Your Nemesis
Art Style 18: Your Isekai
Art Style 19: Your Upgrade

Artistic cohesion index is calculated by dividing the percentage using the most common style by the amount of art styles used, rounded down. The highest possible score is 100. The second highest is 49. Your CYOA used nineteen styles for seventeen pictures, the most common one having three. Its ACI is 0.
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>>94088439
kek
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>>94088378
There are minions as well, I see. Gojo is as popular as always. I like Maelis a lot, going for that unnerving, insect theme is something I agree with a lot when it comes to Fae. Very good.
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>>94088263
If you want an enemy go ahead and pick Your Nemesis
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>>94087760
>upgraded drawback costs 1 point
>it just allows you to take 1 more drawback
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>>94088143
no
a lot of the options are invalid to me
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>>94087862
Well I will sleep now. I may be back next month or so.
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>>94088733
gute nacht
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>Slut Life is only SFW with all the stuff blurred out
what's the point?
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>>94088845
So you can play it at work?
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>>94088474
Not enough for the gay gay to show what happened to the body, lmao
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>>94087760
>recent cyoa flopped so bad that he is now remaking random old shit
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>>94089039
More like
>entropist gets posted
>tok immediately starts scrounging for attention by updating his slop
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>>94089068
>>94089039
he should learn korean and go post somewhere where hes appreciated
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>>94089099
I dont think they have coloring books in hell
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>>94087862
Yeah, just don't come back at all, actually.
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>>94089176
why should he do as you say retard kun?
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>>94089176
Its okay tok. Not everyone can be loved, the sooner you accept he is more loved than you the sooner you can change yourself into a better man
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>>94087862
I doubt you will see this as its late right now in japan but
>The Hound has spawn born from his essence but no children (much like minions, so not exactly his kids). This is one of the reasons he keeps on pushing for evolution from outside forces, as he's incapable of doing it on his own

The Hound being infertile is a Hound thing that would go to whoever gets the title? or is a personal problem he has?
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>>94088200
if you are still here, hat happens when you kill a groom? can goddesses take a new one?
what kind of magic system does the 'dimension' of a goddess have ?(what i mean to ask, is it special in any way?)
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>>94084926
Design Purist: LWtRE must be a red-haired woman.
Design Neutral: ???
Design Anarchist: LWtRE can be any female creature.

Motive Purist: LWtRE must be using you to solve the consequences of her actions.
Motive Neutral: LWtRE must be an untrustworthy benefactor.
Motive Anarchist: LWtRE is any amoral woman.
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>>94089010
>make a shrine for your worst enemy
>throw your teacher's corpse into a trashcan
sasuga jujutsu tech
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>>94089300
Your Makima addiction is showing
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>>94084966
there was a poll?!??
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>>94084966
>>94089345
are the niggers here serious? we already know how the axe is looks, what's the point of choosing her?
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>>94089389
Because I hate you
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>>94089176
>Tok remains to this day still buckbroken by Entropist
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>>94087862
Is the Entropy Magnet drawback meant to effect Gifts and Minions too?
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>>94089467
what is this retarded question? why would gift and minions be affected?
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Shitalics... you did it again!
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>>94089493
Read
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>>94089569
why would accelerated aging effect the ageless?
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>>94089569
why? because i told that the question you asked is clearly retarded?
explain me your thinking process here
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guys i hate to break it to you but i don't think entropistanon will come back to answer your questions, its like 1 am in Tokyo
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>>94084982
Why do /trash/fags come here to put out their porn addiction and don't think about being BTFO'd? BTGanon came here in recent memory and everyone bullied him for being a gooner. What makes you think a CYOA centred around your highly specific brand of degeneracy is needed on a blue board?
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>>94086389
>I'm the only one here to have made a build for Boarmort
Not sure how I should feel about this.
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>>94089467
Minions and gifts are ageless, born from entropy. So aging is not affecting them.
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>>94087760
Many options are just invalid to me. I don't own a figurine or a dakimakura. Do I need to satre to play this cyoa?
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>>94089834
same
I only have, like, two or three options I can pick
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>>94089834
Figurines of waifus and dakimakuras are pretty incelly to me desu. Like, what is your reason to buy it?
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>>94088909
I'm not at work and there's no other options available.
Why include such choices if you're just going to blur/darken the images of the only possible version?
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>>94088134
Maybe ill finish my pastebin too.
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>>94090048
If you you do make sure to post it, I really like reading other anons fluff
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>>94089389
People already knew who the gauntlet was too.
I think they want to know what powers she has to offer.
What are your predictions?
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>>94090106
>predictions?
Nta, about the axe? Powers related to blood and slaughter.
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>>94090093
Cool. I enjoyed reading yours
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>>94090128
thank you
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Entrocuck anon, what a man you are.
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>>94090127
Interesting.
We'll see how accurate your prediction turns out to be :3

>>94084966
In half an hour I'll see who won
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Tok-sama please save this gay thread
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3 votes ahead, axe fans, we are winning this
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>>94089834
Either use Your Option or Your Upgrade on Your Option for easier requirements
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>>94089998
Turboweeb bragging rights to other turboweebs. It's something you can show off and say: "I belong in this weeb community more than the rest of you!" which can be psychologically important to an anon.
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>>94090237
>>94090127
Axe will have the powers to convince everyone she did nothing wrong, when in reality, she is the worst and everything bad that happened was because of her. But since she is a waifu, people forgive her.
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>>94090317
It's almost tradition to have one waifu like that per CYOA.
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>>94090237
>We'll see how accurate your prediction turns out to be
you already confirmed that the spear bow and belt are the most bloodthirsty. why are you trying to act mysterious?
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>>94090317
Just like my IRL gf
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>>94088576
You are right, I updated the CYOA and reverted that change.

Version 2.1

Changelog
>”Your Upgrade (Your Drawback)” You can now only take Your Drawback 2 additional times instead of 1 additional time
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>>94090361
The disposition of an artifact doesn't always reflect their powers.
bloodthirshty =/= blood control or mass slaughter based powers.
It is just an aspect of the personality of the artifact
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>>94090366
>my IRL gf
>Dido
Kill her.
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>>94088378
>I'm sure Chronicler anon will be very happy to her such kind words
I did hear it and am very happy about it.

>>94088329
Wanted to hear your opinion on it, but it felt weird to ask by myself so i let it be.
>I'm humbled that my work could impact someone enough that they would pour such immense effort into making something
The cyoa was good, still is and the discussion was nice enough, that both it dying and you leaving seemingly forever. Felt like enough motivation for me. Thanks to you i delved deeper into photoshop and feel ready to try my hand at making my own cyoa. But first i have to finish writing my entropist build update, yeah.

Excited for exalted conquest and honestly? The q&a last thread got me hyped.
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>>94090473
Hey bro will you do an update for updated builds?
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>>94090427
at what CYOA are you working on at the moment?
the avatar one?
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>>94090483
That would give me the motivation to update my build again. Always something to be dissatisfied about after posting...
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>>94090483
Wasn't in the works honestly. Thought the cyoa ran it´s course already. But i can make your page and post it without posting the entire thing if you would like?
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>>94090577
If you're up for it. Sounds like other anons are interested in an update too.
>>94090509
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>>94090573
>deleted
I was so confused for a moment lmao.
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>>94090599
Yeah my bad. I you you were RC.
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>>94090509
The lewd hardcore be the girl isekai CYOA
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>>94090598
wiill see what i can do whenever you give me something to work with. I mean unless you added more fluff, it would otherwise only list new abilities, perks, drawbacks and such. Unless the change is major in that regard too.
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>>94090639
>be the girl
why cant this retard make a good cyoa for once
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>>94090665
Nice. If that's the case I'm motivated to actually do it
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>>94090673
You are the retard here expecting something good from tok. Besides, he obviously wants to post on trash since he does not want to flop AGAIN.
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>>94084966
This time around we have a clear winner.
Now I just have to decide what version of he to use.
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>>94090639
>be the girl
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>>94090713
That one or this one.
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>>94090665
nta but would you you be willing to add builds to it? It would be nice if I too could be Chronicled™
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>>94090730
This one.
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>>94090673
Be the girl is top tier
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>>94090742
>>>/trash/
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>>94090730
This is cooler.
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>>94090713
the first one, i hate the second option haircut.
also, stop gradually releasing your cyoa, do it like its normally done and release it all at once.
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>>94090733
Been a while now, so not as tired as i once was. If asked like you i can give it a shot.
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>>94090730
Husanon. The whole point is to have someone that is not a child. Do not pick the first one where she looks like a teen.
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>>94090730
Edelgard my beloved
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>>94090784
>child = teen
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>>94090784
she looks the same just with a different haircut
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>>94090349
She's going through the CYOA Samsara with (You)
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>>94084966
Are they locked into the forms of children? Or can they actually look attractive?
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>>94090713
this, not only because its better but as an added bonus tok prefers the second option
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>>94090780
thank you I would really appreciate it. As who can probably guess my build is the one already posted in the thread >>94088134
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>>94090812
You aren't supposed to find Chu attractive you fucking pedo. She's your shishou, your sensei, your mentor on the path to becoming a hero. Only after you have endured a thousand trials with her and saved millions can you even think of dating her, much less seeing her in a sexual light.
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>>94090812
Their forms are defined by their self-image.
It could change over time.
In general I leave that one to your personal taste.

>>94090317
:^)
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>>94088134
Name of the blessing?
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>>94090893
Almost all WB's are two words so in order to stick to the trend "Heaven Breaker" would work.
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>>94090957
Alright, I'll put it in the info rentry. You should edit the name in your build rentry too.
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>>94090730
tok likes this one more, so you must use the other option, just to spite him
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>>94090979
will do
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>>94090990
WTF is this kind of shit logic!
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>>94090713
this, but do not use this shitty image in the cyoa
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>>94091077
The logic of a retard that wants the younger design when we already have an entire cyoa full of them.
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>>94088134
Was this your previous picture or I am confusing builds
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>>94091456
That was someone else's.
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>>94091456
No lol though they are very similar. That build went by "The Strongest" iirc
pic related is the first pic I ever used when I posted my build.
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>>94091389 see >>94090794
also, its not about age its about what looks nice and what doesn't. personally i don't even like lolis that much
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>>94091525
The weakest...
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>>94088378
>Elemental Giant Loli
UOOOOOOHH
What were these made for? Someone doing a dlc or something?
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>>94091608
It's quite the presumptuous title lol, but he was SP so I'm sure it will all work out.

>>94091616
No, just standalone. There were a lot more promised like a crazy masochistic Valkyrie gift and a True AI gift, but those three were the only ones that got made.
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>>94090730
This one
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>>94091456
No, that's for my build. It was SP JJK built with a blessing called "The Strongest", which maximized the efficiency of cutter and domain power, allowed me to pass these powers onto my gifts through the power of love, and basically infinitely scaled in power by fighting the strongest opponents in the multiverse and learn from them.

It's significantly more superior to the slop I wrote for rentry, and I decided to stick to it.
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>>94091654
>True AI gift
Entrocuck anon could NEVER
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Found this. Seems interesting. Way too big to properly post, so https://imgchest.com/p/lqyeoag34dn.

The cut of the image in the earlier post was bad.
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>>94090713
i like this
>>94091771
do people realize that gates sold Microsoft a long time ago?
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It’s the author of pic related, again. I’m figuring out GIMP bit-by-bit, watching tutorials and messing around with the format. I’m very impressed by what I’ve seen so far. The only issue I’ve had is the file selection but I’m fairly certain it’s a user-error. This seems to be an easier tool to use than MS Paint, which is what I need from software, ease of use. The easier the software is, the more intricate my CYOAs can be. More importantly, editing mistakes is vastly simpler than it is in MS Paint. That’s definitely a gamechanger.

I’m going to make another version 2.0 of this CYOA in GIMP over the next couple of days and will consider it finished, unless I have a great idea or anons have a good suggestion.

>>94076614
>>94076621
This is an intricate plan that would have relatively minimal noise. The only potential problem is the destruction of the dossiers early on, as it’s covering a massive amount of area, but turning paper into ash is trivial as it’s perfectly possible to do without Reality Warping. Editing memories is much noisier but you might be able to get away with it, as it’s only a subtle change. The distracting vessels would either buy you a lot of time or very little, by pure luck of the draw. Long-range teleportation is rare and expensive, but a few are capable of it, and some pursuers are fast enough to catch them in a handful of weeks.

Changing yourself to do what you want the hard way, exploiting biology and physics, is not only possible, it’s powerful. Even in the event that a pursuer’s soul is strong enough to ignore distortions in reality, you’re still a posthuman ubermensch or monstrosity, depending on which route you elect to follow for that.
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>>94091875
>>94077102
Kek. You’ve got me there. Of course, altering your mind like this wouldn’t sit well with most anons, and warping reality to give yourself the ultra-specific knowledge of how best to warp your mind to survive this exact situation would be noisy, but this is an excellent approach to survival.

>>94077127
Improving your own intelligence is also a given, but there are diminishing returns at a certain point as creating the hypertech to make the most of it would generate some noise. Your dimension’s laws of physics are relatively simple and there aren’t any native anomalous materials, which is good for consistent science and long-term stability, but bad for making a drill fit to pierce the heavens, or what have you.

>>94077221
I don’t know if I’d call it talent, hahaha. I’ve been playing CYOAs for the better part of eight years now, but besides that, I do write for a living and spend a lot of time daydreaming. I plan to make some more ambitious CYOAs in the future, and already have somewhat extensive notes on what I plan to do for some of them, in terms of choices and so on.

Writing the fluff for them and determining the exact format ahead of time doesn’t sit right with me, though. I think it’s better to do that sort of stuff by ear for a rough-draft, then go back to edit into something smoother later. That’s the problem I’ve had with MS Paint, I figure, every CYOA is by necessity a rough draft that can’t be edited. I also think there have been too few one-pagers lately and I’ve had a lot of ideas for those, so you can expect more of them in the future.
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>>94091891
>>94078384
Telekinesis is extremely powerful, arguably far stronger than Energy Shaping for personal combat purposes, but I agree, the explanation for it has it as relatively weak. It’s much more useful after the experimental phase but it’s already at near-maximum combat potential. There’d be nothing stopping a Telekinetic from walking into a governmental building and reducing it to dust, and blocking the response.

>>94079668
This is true. Telekinesis does confer a tactile sense of what you’re manipulating that stretches to submicroscopic levels, but early on that likely amounts to the fine particulate you get when organic matter is reduced to decisively inorganic matter. Energy Shaping can do some ridiculous things, given that any two pieces of energy can have completely different properties and you can alter them in real-time. Accidentally breaking the earth's crust is possible but most people who'd chose that power are probably smart enough to avoid anything too extreme.

>>94084390
I like responding to anons. If not for readers, there wouldn’t be any authors and I believe most /cyoag/ anons have made something in the past, just judging by the number of authors and the usual poster count. I wouldn’t be surprised if the thread was regularly full of big names insulting each as other as leeches, kek. I’ve always had a sense of parasitism for enjoying CYOAs without ever contributing any myself, and I can almost feel it tangibly evaporating as I continue to work. I should’ve done this years ago. Getting a CYOA to the point of 'good enough' is a lot easier than I thought it would be.
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>>94091902
>Getting a CYOA to the point of 'good enough' is a lot easier than I thought it would be.
Probably because you came up with a very very good premise.
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encylopedifags are the worst
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>>94091919
I haven't even been that active lately.
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>>94091875
With Malefactor how easy would it be to just hide from the government entirely with the Darkness powers?
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>>94091791
>Breakthroughs:
Major: Virtual Panoply, Digital Bulwark, Immune Optimization, Decentralized Web
Major (from World State): Neural Interface, Internet Totality, Advanced Resuscitation
Minor: Linguistic Autonomy, Soul Science, Astral Psychonautics, Forgotten Science
Synergies: Incarnation, Biggest Brother, Golden Glory, Digital Frontier, High Tongues

>Clarktech:
Live Edits, Panacea, Shrink Ray, The Key, A-Type Energy, Wonderland

>World State:
Cyberpunk

>World Events:
Cosmic Outburst

>Favor:
Avarice

>total control over the internet
>the best tech on magic while everyone else is in the dumps
>infinite improvement
>instant improvement to top 10% of possibility
>infinite energy
>world travel
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>>94091791
>reddit cyoa
>science is so cool you guys!
no thanks
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>>94092254
tokmaballs, retard
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>Editing memories is much noisier but you might be able to get away with it, as it’s only a subtle change.
>The distracting vessels would either buy you a lot of time or very little, by pure luck of the draw. Long-range teleportation is rare and expensive, but a few are capable of it, and some pursuers are fast enough to catch them in a handful of weeks.
My plan's flaws, hmm... high chance of updating the build again... though probably after you update the cyoa.

>Changing yourself to do what you want the hard way, exploiting biology and physics, is not only possible, it’s powerful.
Great. I'll probably abandon the human form entirely for a more efficient but likely monstrous looking one.

Questions: How good are the tracking methods of the aliens? Can they track using bloodline? Sympathetic links? Divination from knowing information about me and using objects I owned? etc.
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>>94092122
Why do people ask the dumbest shit?
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>The Magi Case: Fragmented Bloodlines
There is no one singular case for all Magi. And there are no fragmented bloodlines because all the mages are not related to each other to break apart.

Big think.
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>>94092447
Yeah I know lol. I didn't check the window
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>>94091902
>I wouldn’t be surprised if the thread was regularly full of big names insulting each as other as leeches, kek
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>>94091875
>techshittery
No thanks
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>>94092633
also works for >>94091791
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>>94092626
it can't be true because there's no such thing as big names in cyoag

other than that it however absolutely is true, authors are just as big shitposters as non-authors
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>>94092843
Tokhaar Gol is a well-known name even in Korea.
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>>94092938
So is Chris-Chan, what's your point?
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>>94092938
Lmao
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>>94091791
I remember seeing this around when it got finished on reddit. I have never been so disappointed in a CYOA as I have with this one. I hate it because it starts out great. You pick the breakthroughs that you want, you get rewarded with synergies for certain tech combos, and then it throws all of that into the trash. You wanted to see what happens to the world? What consequences your actions will have? Too bad! Your world somehow turns into one of these god-awful cookie cutter franchise slop endings. Then on top of that, you throw on an apocalypse scenario that is entirely unrelated to your previous choices, ruining the point of having picked them at all.
If I wasn't juggling life and my own WIPs, I might have made my own version out of spite with actual relevant endings in it.
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>>94093075
Ruining good premises is basically OutrageousBears' specialty.
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>>94092626
Most anons that become authors eventually lose interest and leave so I do think the thread is mostly leeches and the reason it's dying is because there are fewer and fewer people getting into cyoas. Also mcyoag fags come here often but don't post nor make oc.
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>>94093117
>Most anons that become authors eventually lose interest and leave
Why? It's the perfect way to have attention forever, yet they all leave after one or two OCs.
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>>94092401
>Editing memories is much noisier but you might be able to get away with it, as it’s only a subtle change.
>My plan's flaws
Thinking about it more and rambling a bit...

There's not really a way to avoid the memory edit. Either I do it and undergo some risk or the aliens can just mind read someone in the american government and immediately know who you are, which is way more dangerous. The memory edit is the lesser of two bad consequences. Maybe instead of memory editing, I should just telekinetically cut their brain stem, but then this would let the aliens find out that when I first gained my powers, which... doesn't really have any consequences? Surely, the aliens can't use that information in any useful way.
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>>94090427
Hey, Tok! I'm from Reddit and, I'll admit, I love your cyoas. I'm genuinely curious, have you ever thought of giving an Update or DLC to Dibellacorp or Overpowered Isekai? For the former, you could add stuff like furry/bondage and body-shape upgrades, and for the latter, maybe premade companions and another couple worlds to visit. Heck, maybe an inventory power?
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>>94093146
It turns out, in the end, the solution is simply to kill.
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>>94093154
Hi tok from reddit! You sound an awful like tok from 4chan!
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>>94093089
OutrageousBears tends to bloat their CYOAs, but I don't hate them. They're still fun.
I've never seen any CYOA dumpster its own entire premise this hard before; not from a CYOA that was worth remembering.
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>>94093136
The amount of attention you get compared to the effort needed to create OC is worse that non-authors reaize.
They are used to just beg and get their slop while author have to put actual effort in to get a reward.
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>>94093136
As the anon above said, you understand that it's not worth the effort. We will just rant about physics and Tok instead of engaging with your OC.
And since we don't have a regular flux of good content, it's easy to give up on the general once this line is crossed.
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>>94093191
>>94093228
So basically, skill issue. Get filtered, retardauthors.
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>>94093247
Yes. Only mentally strong authors like Tokhaar Gol have what it takes to survive here with their authorhood intact.
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>>94093217
Inevitable Truck lacks lore, he is only half right.
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>>94090639
Will we be Nazi girls?
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>>94085059
Greetings entropist brothers, here is the first iteration of my multiplayer build. Feel free to add it into your world in jolly cooperation!
https://rentry.org/zczhqc4a
My build in essence attempts to be a classic, Jack-of-all-trades necromancer build with a focus on spells, minions and gifts with complementary buffs and debuffs.
Crossing my fingers I can eventually get a personalized walk blessed. For now I Will try my luck with the roller. Please tell me if you guys would like the rolling results. I will probably add them in the next version regardless. Cheers!
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>>94093324
Wtf is up with the formatting?
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>>94093154
>Hey, Tok! I'm from Reddit and, I'll admit, I love your cyoas.
I hate reddit but I guess I will humor you because you have good taste in CYOAs
>Have you ever thought of giving an Update or DLC to Dibellacorp or Overpowered Isekai?
Dibellacorp no, Overpowered Isekai yes. I have a lot of cool anime pics collected, pic realted- But this would be in the future as I am committed to finishing my latest CYOA which will be a lewd be the girl isekai CYOA which is only for the most hardcore masochist motherfuckers out there. It is going to be so fucking glorious.
>For the former, you could add stuff like furry/bondage and body-shape upgrades, and for the latter, maybe premade companions and another couple worlds to visit. Heck, maybe an inventory power?
I absolutely HATE furryshit! Which is why you don't see that filth in any of my CYOAs EVER! I don't often kink shame but when I do I do it to furfags like you! Furry is disgusting and you should be ashamed of yourself for liking it, have some fucking standards man. The other requests are more reasonable but I don't want to update the CYOA so no. As for Over Powered Isekai I could add some companions for each of the different worlds that would help flesh out the settings and also add more lore to Dragonfall since Dragonfall is connected to a few of those worlds. I don't want to add more worlds but I will keep the companions in mind if I make a update for it.
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>only for the most hardcore masochist motherfuckers out there. It is going to be so fucking glorious.
And this is the retard that later is so confused why his cyoas flop.
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>>94093322
>Will we be Nazi girls?
Not specifically, no. The setting will be a fantasy setting with some varying tech levels. But nothing is stopping you from being a nazi and you're already a girl so be what you want to be anon as long as you're not a fucking furry
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>>94093414
Being a underpowered rape magnet is not everyone's cup of tea but I make the CYOAs I want to make and I want more hardcore CYOAs where I am a helpless little girl in a world full of big scary rape monsters and prevented adventurers ready to abuse the shit out of me, pic realted
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>>94093324
Did you roll? You dipped into every build type so you can benefit from almost every roll.
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>>94093450
cute egg
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>>94093450
You make whatever you want but then don't spend months crying when no one makes builds like in MtG.
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>>94093402
... My brother in Christ, your CYOAs are full of gross loli shit and you're out here railing against furries? Go to therapy.
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>>94093499
Ohhh they will be making tons of builds in /trash/, Korea and Reddit
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>>94093530
Literally. At least he could have the decency to keep his opinion to himself if his weird tastes are open to the public. But he is kink shaming with that kink?
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>>94093450
That description makes the whole cyoa sound a little underwhelming. It's like playing those hentai games where you deliberately lose a few times to see the scenes, but eventually it gets in the way and becomes tedious after a while when you start seeing the same things over and over. It's one of those things where being in that world sounds better in your head than it actually would be spending your whole life there.
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>>94084982
Do what ye want cuz a pirate is free
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>>94093450
Make an interesting world this time.
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>>94093573
You don't need to deliberately lose in my CYOA, you will be so fucking weak you will lose all on your own
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>>94093423
We could be a girl who goes full nazi against furrys. Would that give us more power? We can join the pro human faction as a high ranking officer.
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>>94093610
i finally see why metas are good
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>>94093548
No, just trash. And nobody cares about them.
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>>94093598
Already done! pic realted

>>94093620
There are no furries in the world. But there are animal ear monstergirls, but they are pretty much a slave race already. They once had the most powerful empire but got greedy and summoned the Demon King who fucked them over and now they are refugees and everyone hates them. They are 1 of the many races you will be able to choose from and let me tell you they aren't even the worst fucking race you can pick

>>94093625
No amounts of extra points will be able to save your ass once you set foot in this CYOA
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>>94093324
That's a beautiful picture you got, very adorable. I like how you've considered your dynamic with your brothers, and are striving to be a mediator and organizer between earth born Sons. You don't look down on others eccentricities, very wise.

Now for some unsolicited advice. You should drop Extra Lives and take Invisibility to boost your Shadow Magic. You already have plenty of phylactery's and because you are leaning into a commander role you wont be in as much mortal danger, and when you are you're leaning on Shadow Magic. You should also find a way to put one more point into Spirit Chains, Seal is very good for what you want to do in combat. You may want take another look at your minion section. For instance you don't get anything useful out of Dracoliches but if you like they're aesthetic I understand.

The author is no longer handing out blessing, so if you want a personalized walk blessed you may ask an anon, but that will be considered 'non-canon' by just about everyone especially if you picked multiplayer.
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>>94093662
>No amounts of extra points will be able to save your ass once you set foot in this CYOA
Not him, but you just have to use Metas that give powers, like Mind Overwrite or Laboratium.
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>>94093664
>that will be considered 'non-canon' by just about everyone especially if you picked multiplayer.
Putting this in the end made the trolling too obvious.
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>>94093676
Discipline
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>>94093682
Peak cyoa moment
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>>94093664
Good advice fellow Plutonian.
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>>94093664
lmao, just use the gacha. It is actually good.
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>>94093662
The map reminds me of dragonfall.

Also what is the worst race for us to pick? If we can pick the race that is slaves and everyone hates because they brought satan to the world. I can't think of a way to end up lower on the totem pole. Besides those that are already dead of course.
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>>94093476
I just did! In numerical order, after all the rerolls and switches permitted, I ended with the following options:
>1(Waifu choice pending), 3(minion choices pending, but likely Elder Vampires, Death Lords and Liches), 6(Magic), 6(warfare), 7(perk pending, but likely invisibility), and 10.

Overall pretty solid options for my type of build. I will add these additions in the next iteration of my build which I hope I can make with enhanced visuals, formatting, and lore. Thank you for your interest anon.
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>>94091918
The notion of prototyping powers had been on my mind for some time. The way I figure, even an extremely simple superpower has numerous components involved. Take barebones superstrength for example. At the minimum, that requires amplifying every muscle in the body and then making the body durable enough to handle outputting that much force, and both require hundreds of processes. There's clearly an intelligence behind that artificial structure, and like any structure, it would take some experimentation to find the optimal configuration.

>>94092122
The most difficult part of hiding from the government with conceptual Darkness is deciding how you want to do it. Becoming invisible, shadow-teleporting to a remote area, obscuring information involving yourself, preemptively assassinating everyone within a certain proximity, even hiding in dreams due to Darkness's adjacency to nightmares (later on, when they've had time to practice), and more are all possible.

>>94092401
>My plan's flaws, hmm... high chance of updating the build again... though probably after you update the cyoa.
An update will be coming relatively soon. Expect the finished version in the next 1-3 days. As for your identity concerns, there's an almost infinite amount of means to mitigate it: changing your name and appearance so that preexisting documentation no longer applies, abandoning your region to go somewhere you aren't known, spreading false positives matching your outward appearance, cloning yourself to serve as a distraction, etc. The only limitations are noise and the explicit restrictions.
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>>94093664
I should have said this in my other post but you should maybe hold off on rolling for your WB until you've taken some time to think about your build more
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>>94093743
>Great. I'll probably abandon the human form entirely for a more efficient but likely monstrous looking one.
Abandoning the human form can quickly lead to some extreme physiology, but so can reconstructing it. Overlapping muscle fibers, denser bones, intricate neural spools, and more. You could do both at once, or either, or neither, or some entirely hitherto unknown third route. Reality Warpers tend to lose outside frame of reference after a few millennia left to themselves, which can lead to some bizarre and horrifying (or beautiful, if you're so inclined or the Reality Warper was particularly grounded) outcomes.

>Questions: How good are the tracking methods of the aliens?
It varies from pursuer to pursuer, but taken as a whole, they are incredible. This is worsened by Reality Warping serving as an airhorn for everyone that's listening, and some have a very good sense of hearing.
>Can they track using bloodline?
Yes, although if your blood has changed on a fundamental level it becomes largely useless. I say largely because blood is an outpouring of the soul, and your soul isn't changed by Reality Warping. Unless you do go so far as to change your soul, but that can get dangerous quickly.
>Sympathetic links?
Yes. This would be tricky as it's dependent on how much they know about you, and is less valid the more extreme your changes are. Most wouldn't bother with it but some are desperate or thorough.
>Divination from knowing information about me and using objects I owned?
Yes. This runs into the same problems as sympathetic links but they are
>etc.
When in doubt, it's safer to err on the side of caution. Your soul and the energies attached to it are very, very valuable.
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>>94093682
>>94093700
Fleash Dancer, motherfuckers!

>>94093716
>What is the worst race for us to pick?
I will leave that as a surprise for when the CYOA is out. I don't like to reveal everything about my CYOAs like some other authors do. Opening up and reading a new CYOA should be exciting and feel like a discovery, excessive WIP posting and explanation is kills that feeling and I wish others would stop it. It's like the new movie trailers where they show everything in the movie in 2 minutes.
>If we can pick the race that is slaves and everyone hates because they brought satan to the world. I can't think of a way to end up lower on the totem pole. Besides those that are already dead of course.
I have a very good imagination and let's just say I put it to good use!
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>>94093753
>>94092433
I don't think that's a dumb question, the original CYOA wasn't clear about the Malefactor's actual capabilities, which I figure the update should rectify. It's clearly easy, but just how easy is vague, and I don't like unintentionally vague fluff. Intentionally vague fluff is entirely different and I'm a fan of it myself, but a lot of is overused, I think.

>>94092626
There's no way to be certain that's not the truth. I've held the theory for some time. I bet most retired authors still lurk the thread occasionally, especially after seeing LoneObserver's return.

>>94092633
Technology and language are what's elevated us above animals. I prefer spontaneous magic to more primitive technology, like to bowhunt, am annoyed by air-conditioning, and use an outhouse instead of a flush toilet, but I don't condemn muh futurefags.

>>94093075
I read through the CYOA and I agree. After the first page and a half, it falls off a cliff. I didn't realize it was written by the author who desecrated the witch CYOA, which I think was some real faggotry. If they wanted to go through that much effort, why wouldn't they call it their own CYOA instead of a remake, especially when it stripped most of the soul from the original? Just piggybacking on a classic for reddit clout, which is obscene.
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>>94093765
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>>94093664
Thank you brother, I appreciate the advice, and will definitely employ it during my rebuilding after acquiring option 10 on the roller and will definitely appear in my next iteration. Outside of this, although I will likely employ the walk blessed that I acquired in the roller for multiplayer, I still would love to acquire a custom one from another anon even if non canon just for fun. May the blessings of the father be upon you!
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>>94093324
You still job to me.
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>>94093789
And you still job to me. Nature is beautiful.
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>>94093789
name someone who he doesn't job to. :mission impossible
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>>94093783
To you as well brother. By the way what minion are you going to transform into?
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>>94093798
And you job to me.
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>>94093765
Nobody cares about harmonist out of shitposting, tok. And it's so sad you are using it as a coping mechanism because your Son's build is the butt of everyone's joke so you go to fake cyoa. Again, it's like if I do Fairyfall and make fairies >>> dragons in your setting and say my OC is above yours and kills Cynthia in every universe. Pathetic and sad
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>>94093765
Hmm fair enough you are right it's nice to be surprised in CYOA. Still do you have a guess for how long it will take you to complete it? Did you just start, are you half way done, etc.? Again I'm not rushing take your time to make a good CYOA. I just am curious on how soon it will come.
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>>94093722
Those are pretty good and work well with such a wide build.
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I used to wish to be the strongest. Now that I am... IT IS JUST AS GOOD AS I IMAGINED! KNEEL, JOBBERS!
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>>94093682
>>94093700

Tok losing the battle of his ego having to go to an IA to make himself believe he has a good Blessing was peak sad moment.
>>94093765
Tok going to fake cyoa to get fake blessing and still job even in his fake build is peak comedy
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>>94093929
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>>94093934
The whole saga was kino
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>>94093952
I have long since surpassed such weak magical items. Kneel
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>>94093743
>Reality Warpers tend to lose outside frame of reference after a few millennia left to themselves, which can lead to some bizarre and horrifying
That's gonna happen to me lmao.

>for your identity concerns, there's an almost infinite amount of means to mitigate it
>It varies from pursuer to pursuer, but taken as a whole, they are incredible.
>When in doubt, it's safer to err on the side of caution.
Looks like my "intricate plan" will become significantly more intricate as I'll be writing down everything I can think of to throw off the pursuers... Great! I look forward to the update.
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>>94093823
Out of my current options, most likely either Death Lord or Elder Vampire for added survival or quickness around the battlefield at the beginning. Though in all likelihood I will probably exchange it later for lich once I have unlocked more of my powers and planeswalking in order to accomodate a good variety of useful power systems I can make use of.
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>>94093974
I see, Minion transformation is typically a defining feature of a build and usually a good way to get an extra perk and ability. Also, just in case you were confused by the wording of option 10 you can always edit your build just not for things that conflict with your WB.
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>>94093156
Shiki didn't want to kill in this scene.
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>>94094095
Neither do I, but I do what I must.
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>>94090713
>>94090730
Ok I ended up going with the second option
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>>94094249
Oooo, a necromancy axe. Neat! I will say that Aura of the Other looks like it'd be weird to have with stuff like some of Luva's perks.
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>>94094277
Yeah maybe I could replace it with giving you some toned down vampire weaknesses.
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>>94094249
Dimitri wins btw
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>No furry women
Why is Tok so weak against ItalicGODS?
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>>94094390 (You)
Sorry, I meant to say shitalics
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What should we start the new thread with?
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>>94094896
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>>94094907
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>>94094896
>>94091875 hasn't been in the OP, right?
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>>94094921
I don't think so.
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>>94094931
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>>94094938
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>>94094450
Malding.
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New Thread:

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>>94094966
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>>94086986
>Mentorship
>-Betrayal

>Vendetta
>Indebted

>Catoptromancy
>Mental Injunction
>Occult Sight

>Sentient Mirage
>Reanimated Corpse

>Pidaea, Blind Matriarch

>Lilith, Mother of All Sins

>Rogue Magicians
>-Zealots
>>94086986
>Family
>-Pressure

>Familiar (Mastiff)
>Journey

>Illusory Shards
>Plasmic Mine
>Epidermal Hex
>Spiritual Walls

>Djinn
>Satyre

>Ozelion, The Mask-Maker
>Abuzzhu, The Abomination
>Ezhabel, The Maimed Angel

>Weapon Proficiency (Handgun)

>The Bureau
>-Task Forces
>>94086986
>None
>-Fugitive

>Mistake
>Your Past

>Electric Arcs
>Globular Shock
>Various Tricks

>Vortex
>Sophore

>Yaaladum, Eye of Destiny

>Beam
>Projection
>Corrosive
>Visions

>Instant Summoning (Vortex)
>Emotional Control (Fear)

>The Magical Community
>-Study
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Stranded Harem
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>>94095084
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Night Ride
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>>94095103
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New Elemental
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>>94094102
Based Pale King understander
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Penumbra Manor
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Eldritch Defender
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Magical Girl
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>>94095262
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Emperor's Quest
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Wild West
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>>94095353
quest rewards
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>>94095357
leave the train
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Override, Occupy, Obliterate
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>>94095378
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Isekai Mentor
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>>94093217
tookems, your fans want Dibella Corp 2. hop on it
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>>94093423
Am I the only one that thinks dresses like this are more erotic than skimpy bikinis?
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>>94086986
>Magic Education: Experimental
Lab Rat [+1 Forbidden, +2 High, +4 Unstable]

>Memories: The Lab

>Magic:
>Quick Summonings
Mental Fortifications [Free]
Sybillic Lense [Free]
Psychic Repulsion [Free]
Protective Glyphs [Free]
Ardent Runes
Epidermal Hex
Globular Shock
>Low Summonings
Satyre
Djinn
>High Summonings
Abuzzhu The Abomination
Ezhbel The Maimed Angel
>Forbidden Summonings
Naidashama The Undone Being
>Unstable Summonings
Combustion
Beam
Protector
Visions
>Talents
Knowledgeable

>Faction: Rogue Magicians [Ambitious]
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>>94093292
Heretics for me too, but that's because they are humans enough to be comfy as a selfinsert, while also being cooler and more elitary than regular humans.
"few but strong" factions tend to get liked more than "many but weak" factions in all kinds of media, because then the consoomer can imagine himself as strong.
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>>94093851
>fake cyoa
but all cyoas are fake
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>>94093662
no one wants to get raped in some shitty bdsm fantasy world
that's fucking boring
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>>94093662
Very pretty! The perspective is awkward though, the mountain ranges and the chasm in the center don't follow the top-down perspective of the rest of the map. The scale of details is awkward too, some parts are seemingly zoomed in compared to the rest.
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>>94096128
speak for yourself
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>>94093662
Garbage style over substance map
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>>94059611
>Deformation: Uncanny Visage

>Guests:
The Pack
The Cultist
The Infected

>Pact: Accept

>Kitchen:
Tool: Ice Cold Saw, Bloodied Cleaver
Ingredients: Pumpkin, Flesh Apple, Lost Letter, Lump Of Eyes
Trial Of The Snake: Knight

>Baths:
Bathtub: Ritualistic Bathtub
Fish Familiar: Demon Fish, Fish Of The Dead
Trial Of The Octopus: Drowning Man

>Library:
Personality Type: The General, The Worker
Book: Personal Diary
Trial Of The Owl: Dark Eye

>Fear: Humiliation

>Strengths: Perseverance

>Hope: Acceptance

>Gift: Memories Of His Death



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