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>>94103534
KINO IS IN THE HOUSE!
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>>94103544
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Post your ultimate god angels.
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Ultimate geriatric cyoa update soon!
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>>94103549
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>>94103534
Lets goooo starting the new thread off strong with the new OC
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>>94103563
https://imgchest.com/p/qe4gx8lqryj has higher res.
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>>94103315
>>94103534
Aromage, remember to change the angel to scale based on how strong you make it, like you said you would do. Just a reminder in case you forgot.
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>>94103575
Will do, thanks!
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>>94103584
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>>94103534
I don't get this cyoa. The whole thing is basically
>You are a jobber. Now pay other people to do things for you
Really feels like you do not even need to a planeswalker to do this. You could just be mega rich and pay the people with the power to go around and then you just get allies and minions the same way you do in this cyoa. This is just a "billionare" simulator cyoa.
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>>94103534
>Cloak of Death absolutely cucking Heart of Nature in the shape shifting aspect
Aro...why...
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>>94103630
That's the cyoa. You do get it.
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>>94103630
Honestly, you could build a very good jobber build if you optimize for it. Dump all the potential into safe havens and ally buff talents. Take all the disadvantages (since we will exclusively live in our havens anyways), and have your pick of the bunch with allies and minions.
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>>94103630
Don't forget the pet npc who did nothing wrong, is super strong with all the powers because she is super special and super beautiful because she is super special and everyone loves her and did I mention she is super special? she also beats goku.
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>>94103720
She wouldn't be there if not for loliniggers.
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>>94103630
The problem is that Aro has been trying to get into the whole underdog narrative lately in her cyoas, but she doesn't know how to write an underdog narrative, so it ends up with the player just being a jobber.
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>>94103720
I don't care about the kid whose only strength is being omnipotent in their personal demiplane.
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>>94103731
I cannot believe that with the 100s of hours of anime you’ve watched, you still don’t believe in the power of friendship
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>>94103742
Except that is not what this is. You are paying people. More like the power of money (resources).
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>>94103534
>>94103632
Also adding that the new Heritages have the problem of not having a corresponding freebie option from an origin. This could be fixed by giving each origin a choice of three heritages to choose from, which would also give greater diversity with builds.
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>>94103742
AIEEEEE, FRIENDSHIP-SAMA SAVE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>94103769
Didn't aro say that she might add a dreamweaver heritage? What happened to that?
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>>94103750
There is a literal power of friendship talent and you only get the legion rewards for befriending (or seducing) their leader. Also, legends don’t need to be paid lore-wise.
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>>94103774
For at least half of them, the price is my dick and good looks.
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>>94103774
For two of them, the price is your cock. Really, it’s the same for all of them if your will is strong enough
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>>94103793
>the price is my dick and good looks
What did anon mean by this?
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>>94103777
No idea. I would just like it if Cloak of Death was a Pathfinder option so I could do the build I was considering
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>>94103797
The price is steeper for some than others
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>>94103797
I didn't take him.
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>>94103806
Of course not. He took you.
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>>94103812
Lets just say, shapeshifting is a must for my build :|
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>>94103534
>The Epox of this multiverse will start in 3 trillion years and finish in 100 trillion years.
The end is nigh! I will shepherd as many as I can to survive the Epox. To that end, I will spread the message everywhere and create an Ark.

The Ark's main ingredient will be the most valuable material in the multiverse, universes, because only that can certainly withstand the horrors of the Void. I don't expect much resistance for this after seeing the evidence of the Epox because, after all, better they be used for the Ark rather than be destroyed anyway when the time comes.

Unfortunately, some universes might be too stupid to join me and too valuable to leave alone, so I will have to conquer them, generally by using viruses, curses, memetics, dream influence, mind control, etc. - covert mental methods with minimal collateral damage.

>Heritage:
Stargazer

>Echoes:
Mind of Machines, Thread of Thought

>First Steps:
People of Every Shape, Worlds of Every Color

>Safe Havens
Forest of Reflections: Connected to the most worlds among the options. Mental influences take time to work, so this is perfect.
The Cocoon: Getting the friendship of the Weavers will be crucial for the creation of the Ark.

>Talents:
Shroud of Night, Eyes of Reality, Strength of Bonds, Break of Mortality, Temporal Warping, Space Folding

>Legends:
Chrona, Legion, Baphomet, Kimiko-Yomi, Lora, Kleidi

>Extra Powers:
Nanomachines, Genetic History, Infernal Blood, Noosphere Warping, The Dreaming, Soul Weaver
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>>94103825
>Legions:
Nightstalkers, Warforged

>Legion Gifts:
The Black Cube, White-Gold Heart, The Legacy

>Minions:
Psyborgs, Synthetics, Tulpas

>Ally Purposes:
Nightstalkers: Diplomacy and Trade, Expeditions and Procurement
Warforged: Expeditions and Procurement, Research and Development
Psyborgs: Research and Development, Production and Export
Synthetics: Construction and Maintenance, Production and Export
Tulpas: Diplomacy and Trade, Expeditions and Procurement

>Quests and Events:
The Voyagers, Echoes of the Ancients, Legacy of Janus

>Pursuers:
The God-Hunter, The Blue-Moon Witch, The Steel Seraphim, The Sins, The Red Drums, The Endless Chorus, The Warden, Ivory

Kind of weird how most of them are mentally deficient, but I guess that's good for me since they might foolishly use my Ways to follow me into the Cocoon and get killed by the Weaver, and if they can actually fight back, the Watcher will kill them for attacking a Weaver.
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>>94103584
>Be the watcher
>Being beyond comprehension
>See a human sized creature doing human shit
>See it open a Way
>Wats that spider doing?!? >:(
Bros, is the Watcher retarded?
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>>94103549
>son killed by a twink vampire
Sonbros... We LOST
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>>94103630
>>94103669
>>94103720
>>94103868
Jobber cyoa where Aro's self insert Lords over you
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>>94103863
Yes.
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>>94103893
Wdym, I literally won.
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>>94103863
By taking it as a Pursuer, not only do you screw yourself over, you also screw over the multiverse by making its Watcher retarded.
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>>94103893
Daughters won. Tok and Aro have more builds combined than Entropiss.
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>>94103893
Not me, I beat her.
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>>94103935
>pursuer curse of retardation
i like it
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Italics won.
Entropiss, Toktroon, Arobitch lost.
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>>94100082
>Master Nature to avoid taking a Familiar
This is a thing?

>>94103139
>eternally loyal harem!
anon... don't fuck your brothers and sisters
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>>94104368
This is like Laboratorium but good.
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>>94104505
>This is like Laboratorium but good.
Oh?
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>>94104634
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>>94104505
>but good
what's the problem with laboratorium
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>>94104641
>random addition of a bunch of hoohas from various works of fiction
The Imprisoned Souls section is ironically soulless. Easily the worst part of this cyoa.
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>>94104665
None of them are already existing fictional characters though
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>>94104741
NTA but I recognize Yuna Hoshi and Mad Bird Jubjub. Jubjub's from Black Souls (and Alice in Wonderland) and Yuna's from Lost Property Control Organization.
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>>94104665
>>94104741
>>94104792
Anything is soulful after OP.
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>>94104792
Yeah the image
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>>94104853
>Yeah the image
...And her name. And an exact description of the setting she comes from. And the powers she had in that setting. Nah, there's a big difference between what the author of Laboratorium did and something like pic rel. One just uses the same image, the other is a copy-paste from a different setting.
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>>94104879
ah
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>>94104634
How the fuck are you winning if someone with a laboratorium enter your world?
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>>94104634
This has an updated version.
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>>94105208
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>>94105150
"Magic".
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>>94105150
Tok diff
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Family of 22...11 Males and 11 Females...Perfection. Also 21 bedrooms and almost as many bathrooms is a bit much me thinks.
>Self
Gender: Boy
Body: Regular
Alterations: None
>Home
Location: Suburban
Size: Big House
Special Rooms: Huge Kitchen
Own Room: Simple
>Parents
Relationship Status: Married
Mother: Strict, Supportive, Ambitious
Father: Strict, Supportive, Hardworking
>Bonus
Blood Related
>Younger Siblings
Male: Ben (4), Dylan (5), Jake (6), Jacob (9)
Female: Kitty (3), Amy (4), Anya (5), Nadia (6), Rin (7), Eleanor (7), Hina (9), Katarin (10)
>Older Siblings
Male: Nathan (14), Arthur (15), Gilgamesh (16), Kenneth (18), Tony (21)
Female: Kiera (13), Alison (14)
>Helpers
None
>Frens
None
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>>94105342
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>>94105346
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>>94105342
20 children, in this economy?
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>>94105352
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>>94105361
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>>94105366
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>>94105368
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>>94105360
Many bodies to sell.
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>>94105360
We have our own reality show and we get lots of donations from white christians and such.
>>94105401
No sir, we are an upstanding family, no incest and molestation is allowed in our household.
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>>94105412
>22 people
>reality show whores
>Anon in the family
It's over.
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>>94105421
>Anon in the family
>It's over.
What are you implying? Are you saying that I'm a bad person? How dare you.
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>>94105342
>Self
Gender:
Boy
Body: Cute (can get muscular later on)
Alterations: Easy gains, Early bird, Impressive, public speaker, allure, safeguard
>Home
Locations: suburban
Size:Big house
Special rooms:
Room: Simple and messy
>Parents
Single
Mother: Ara ara, housewife
>Bonus
Adopted
Open minded
>Younger siblings
Anya, Rin, Erica, Mellanie, hina, Katarin
The ones that were easier to woo and Anya because she is cute and not everything has to be sex
>Older siblings
Nanna, Sara, Calypto, Daisy, Nicole
>Friends
Erika, Hana, Teri
Lacee, Kura

Harem route, principally between older sisters but also some of the younger ones and with some girls outside of the family for the public eye
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>>94103731
You don't know what a jobber is.
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>>94104368
>Master Nature to avoid taking a Familiar
>This is a thing?
The reason you need a Familiar is because you're not alive. Master Nature fixes that.
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>>94103825
Nice build, the idea of turning universes into Arks and separating them from the multiverse is intriguing, i'm not sure how well it will go especially if the Prime Angels feel like you're fucking up their order, but it's still fascinating.
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>>94103777
I specified that Lola is likely the only Dreamweaver outside of the Dreamlands, since so few of them died during the War and by Ivory, so their Flames didn't pass down into the multiverse.
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>>94105941
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>>94104505
IIRC they're made by the same author.
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>>94104368
>Uses modern "art"
What a disgusting CYOA to look at
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>>94104879
>picrel
God, I love him so much bros. .
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Since I'm here. Would you enjoy having named antagonists/side-villains for Lamentation R~, they get their own dedicated page going over their profile, ambitions, plans that you can challenge. I'm pretty much at the end of writing the choices for Homelands and including Campaigns for them that starts out the main reason why you began your adventure in the first place before ending up challenging a catastrophe at the end.

Or do you prefer having faceless enemies that you can always beat up at the end of the day? Any other additions and suggestions is fine too.
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>>94105955
Fits with the theme and atmosphere of the cyoa. I honestly think Laboratorium is a worse cyoa for it's use of animeshit art. It simply doesn't fit, anime and cosmic horror never meshed well.
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>>94105150
>becomes unkillable
>copies all their powers
>nullifies all their powers
>transforms everywhere into a crystalline territory that metaphysically and conceptually supports my eternal supremacy
Why, my superior knowledge of esoteric alien races to become, of course
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>>94106134
You think you are ORT but you ain't it
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>>94106101
only if it's not too much information, having a villain's true identity and the fine details of their plan really kills it for me in cyoas. Like they were forced to monologue or something.
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>>94106101
Both. There is no reason for there to not be both.
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>>94106101
I'd say both, like someone earlier said.
IIRC Lamentations is character-heavy, so you need in-depth villains, but threats like bandits groups or rogue adventurers might be cool.
Please give me back my Nightmares.
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>>94106134
>Dies to a subpar mage whose only power is to summon Servants
Lmao.
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>>94106184
>Whose only power is to summon entities leaps and bounds stronger than itself
Yeah that's a very lousy power alright.
Also ORT died to ORT.
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>>94106150
Inside of me there are two ORTs, and both of them would win.

>>94106184
>killed the subpar mage (and strongest harem protagonist in the history of the franchise) TWICE over the course of the conflict, with him needing to be revived by Tezcatlipoca
>was only stopped by deciding to fight itself, and had the mage dead to rights before that change of heart
TOTAL ORT DOMINANCE
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>>94106155
Post examples from other CYOAs right now.
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>>94106255
shitalics' everything
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>>94103534
mmm, delicious sloppa~
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>>94106308
You are eating good!
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>>94103534
> Heritage
Stargazer
> Echoes
Scale of Serpents
Mind of Machines
> First Steps
People Of Every Shape
Wonders Beyond Imagination
> Safe Havens
The Dream Sphere
>Talents
All
> Legends
Tav
Star-Jin Loong
Chrona Novos
Legion
Kimiko-Yomi
Dolores 'Lola' Carlita
Kleidi
> Extra Powers
Samsara
Draconic Reflexes
Nanomachines
Genetic History
Noosphere Warping
The Dreaming
Soul Weaver
> Legion
Warforged (Research, Expedition)
> Gifts
White-Gold Heart
The Legacy
> Minions
Psyborgs (Diplomacy, Construction)
Danotian Champions (Defense, Expedition )
Void-Wyrms (Research, Expeditions)
Synthetics (Construction, Production)
Great Hybrids (Production, Diplomacy)
Tulpas (Defence, Expeditions)
> Siphon
Mind
> Quests and Events
The Voyagers
Echoes of the Ancients
Legacy of Janus
> Pursuers
The God Hunter
The Blue Moon Witch
The Steel Seraphim
The Sins
The Red Drums
The Endless Chorus
> Great Pursuers
Ivory

I just want to stay in the Dream Sphere as much as possible and research tech and the like in peace, while my allies do stuff in the normal world. Long term I want to reach if not surpass Ivory in power, potentially by becoming an Ultimate God or something.
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>>94103549
Anons think they're cool until thoughtniggas summon their stands.
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>>94106343
The red drums and the endless chorus seemed too strong for normal pursuers desu, why did you take them?
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>>94106349
Everything related to thoughts and psionic is overpowered.
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>>94106255
the first cyoa in this thread
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>>94106389
>jobs to every other echo
lmao
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>>94106382
Points honestly, though thinking about it I suppose I don't really need Legion anymore.
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>>94106440
>Hot seggs with shapeshitfer
You need her
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coomer should leave
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coomer should stay
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>>94106451
Fair enough. I do have psychics to deal with the Drums and I can make AI's to deal with the Chorus so I should hopefully be able to manage.
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>>94106506
I might change my build around a little, I didn't take those two because colossal tech gremlins seemed extremely fucking annoying and red drums seemed extremely bad, even compared to some of the other enemies.
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>>94106343
>Dream Sphere
>no Thread of Thought
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>>94106547
Yeah, it's certainly risky,
>>94106570
Does the thread actually help with dream stuff?
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>>94106586
yep
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>>94106603
Huh. Okay then. I guess I'm following the crowd after all then.
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>>94103534
Updating >>94106343
> Heritage
Stargazer
> Echoes
Mind of Machines
Thread of Thought
> First Steps
People Of Every Shape
Wonders Beyond Imagination
> Safe Havens
The Dream Sphere
>Talents
All
> Legends
Tav
Star-Jin Loong
Chrona Novos
Legion
Kimiko-Yomi
Dolores 'Lola' Carlita
Kleidi
> Extra Powers
Samsara
Draconic Reflexes
Nanomachines
Genetic History
Noosphere Warping
The Dreaming
Soul Weaver
> Legion
Warforged (Research, Expedition)
> Gifts
White-Gold Heart
The Legacy
> Minions
Psyborgs (Diplomacy, Construction)
Danotian Champions (Defense, Expedition )
Void-Wyrms (Research, Expeditions)
Synthetics (Construction, Production)
Great Hybrids (Production, Diplomacy)
Tulpas (Defence, Expeditions)
> Siphon
Mind
> Quests and Events
The Voyagers
Echoes of the Ancients
Legacy of Janus
> Pursuers
The God Hunter
The Blue Moon Witch
The Steel Seraphim
The Sins
The Red Drums
The Endless Chorus
> Great Pursuers
Ivory

Same plan but even more dream power.
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>>94106248
>Change of heart
heh
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>>94106308
Now with Entropist seasoning so anons might actually like it
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>>94106101
You need to make all the female companions FOR US. They need to be focused on us as romance options
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>>94095830
>>94096084
>>94096899
Which one of you did this
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>>94106781
I guess we will never know
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>>94106781
I think tok made it ages ago?
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>>94106781
what is that? a place to review maps?
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>>94106781
This is hilarious, thank you.
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>>94106895
You're welcome, friend
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>>94106382
Red Drums are a hazard to everyone, so you can probably just point Prime Angels to them.

Endless Chorus isn’t a threat as long as they’re not around negative emotions. Everyone takes mental powers, so it’s free points, really.
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>>94106638
>siphon mind
lmao
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>>94107050
Anon is subconsciously suicidal and expresses that through his builds, please understand.
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>>94107050
What's wrong with it?
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>>94106161
>>94106182
>>94106155
If I'm understanding you right.

You would prefer a mix of the two. A generic enemy list for example where you have an enemy faction that is common to appear, how they are organized, and what dangers/goals they pose in whatever area they are at.

Then a villain list detailing specific individuals and theirngoals and ambitions and how you fight them in a final confrontation scenario.

If so, what do you think is the best way to connect you to these varied characters and enemies?
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>>94107255
>If so, what do you think is the best way to connect you to these varied characters and enemies?
Connect them to the players through their impact. Someone focusing on the comfy DLC might resonate with the low-level bandits since it impact their homes. People dislike the bird isolationists, so you have already the basis for a corrupt organization leader, and so on.
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>>94103632
>>94103769
I actually agree with this
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>>94103534
I have yet to see a reason why I should take any of the offensive or personal echoes like destruction and death when no matter what im weaker than all the enemies and most allies. Hell, even the undead you get with necromancy don't seem that good, I guess turning stuff like lumis into shitty vampires could be cool though but at that point im just making the lumis weaker.
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>>94105941
I don't own most of the things on this list
Literally unplayable
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>>94107568
>why I should take any of the offensive or personal echoes like destruction and death
Yet another CYOA where going the technological route is best. A big ass 20 mile long space habitat is just "low-tech" in this verse, imagine what you could cook up with Mind of Machines and Thread of Thought.
Glad authors are seeing the light, techGODS and gunGODS are the true rulers of /cyoag/.
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>>94107568
And that's why you're a jobber and not an underdog leader. You refuse to be weak and succeed, instead insisting that you can be stronger yet you will always fail.
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>>94107703
Damn Aro...
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>>94107568
The echoes other than mind of machines and thread of thought only exist to let you know what other keymasters have. The player has no incentive to pick any echoes other than those two. The only situation where you wouldn’t take them is if you want to go pathfinder and are forced to take one of its lesser echoes (stargazer and pathfinder and the only two heritages worth a damn btw).
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>>94107817
>Famous last words before being split open by a Wanderer who took Shard of Divinity and Feather of Heaven going 500 times faster than light
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>>94107825
>he thinks his travel speed is his combat speed
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>>94107825
>Shard of Divinity and Feather of Heaven going 500 times faster than light
elaborate. what about this combo gives you that ability
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>>94107845
Samsara specifies that the speed boost from it also applies to flight speed.
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>>94107825
>wandertard too stupid to realize that was an illusion and dives straight into a Way to a supermassive
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>go 500 times faster than light
>everything is an indecipherable blur until you stop
Wouldn't you need thinking speeds hundreds of times faster than light to even mentally keep up with those speeds?
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>>94103534
>Aieee! You have to be le goood!
Moralfags really are the worst, but is it really surprising coming from a redicord author?
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>>94107897
>The villain is a moralfag and is portrayed as unequivocally insane
>Anon still thinks that the cyoa is advocating for moral purity
Are you retarded?
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bros... they're making fun of us...
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>>94107895
I would think what you need is Eyes of Reality
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>>94107343
>Connect them to the players through their impact.
That's a lot of enemy options. One big change to R~ compared to the previous versions is each (major) Homeland has a Campaign (Starting Quest) being from Concord for example pits you against Hunter Guilds with the largest using good publicity to hide being a crime syndicate. Caelum has you fight against Mechanists that want to loot technology.

Finding a way to present them all in a consistent and different manner might be tough. But I'm getting what you are talking about. An enemy faction page might be a big help compared to my previous idea.

Old Idea: Biggest Hunter Guild is X, Mechanist are X.

Now it's going have to be something like: Biggest Hunter Guild X - Lore and why they are an enemy.
Mob Enemy I (Normal) Recruit who does X and poses a danger by doing X tactics.
(Elite) Mob Spec Ops - X lore/description, danger by X.
(Midboss) Mecha mobile armor - X descrip.
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>>94107909
The cyoa is filled with
>I hope you will be lee good
>le power of friendship!
>You must be good
Are you retarded?
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>>94107923
>You have to be good to have friends
>Anon is saying that he has no friends.
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>>94107568
This is correct. Aro is fucking retarded and in her attempt to make the stupid underdog shit, she ruined the cyoa.
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>>94107910
which part of that is inaccurate?
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>>94107895
You don't need to think to be in motion
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>>94107954
He doesn't need to think to type in thread either.
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>>94107951
The part where people argue over how powerful someone' build is. That rarely happens because people rarely comment on other anons' builds at all.
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>>94107954
>You don't need to think to be in motion- AAACCKK *falls into black hole* >>94107862
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>>94107944
>>94107568
>>94107703
>>94107817
She really should have just remade nexus with proper power levels. I mean, this is literally just jobber nexus where anything that does not help be a better leader may as well not exist. Personal power and items are so useless. This is specially obvious in sections like gifts where at best they are for your allies.
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>>94107976
>Incorrect usage of the word 'jobber' #4215
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>>94107937
Nice strawman and change of argument
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>>94107825
You would also die from the collision. You'll reincarnate eventually but a shitty way to win a fight
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>>94104654
He's a shitposter
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>>94107994
>Seething at the truth #4215
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>>94107825
>>94108056
Now that I think about it though a FTL kamakazie into Ivory is basically a guaranteed way to one shot her, and Samsara gives you the respawn
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>>94108081
Give your incorrect definition of jobber then, so we can all laugh at you.
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>>94108094
Bold of you to think she's not faster than 500x FTL.
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>>94106781
>>94107910
>gil WIP posts everywhere but here
Why does he hate us?
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>>94108110
She has all the heritages but the not the upgraded versions. It's guaranteed that she dosent
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>>94108123
did you really ask the most obvious shit?
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>>94107910
oh no, they are saying truthfull things. Anyway.

The good thing is we are self aware, they probably are not. I don't even know what they are about but tabletop games are all in the same boat in the end
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alright retards time to start arguing over dumb shit. reddit KINO is on the menu
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I want to make a power fantasy CYOA where you gain powers based on your percieved weaknesses. A dumb person becomes smart, a weak person becomes strong, etc. What are some things you wish you could change about yourself?
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>>94108192
>humanity fears darkness... darkness gave you powers
>choose 3 of them!
>okay thats it bye XD
Can redditors please just make a good cyoa for once?
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>>94108192
We already have redit here tho >>94103534
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>>94108221
The powers aren't even interesting.
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>>94108192
Ritual, Taboo (acts that harm me), Cycle, Devour

GG, next.
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>>94108201
Neat idea, if a bit glowie-datacollectiony.

Fat -> become extremely thin, so you pass through crevices and keyholes
Old -> become an ageless lich
Urinary incontinence -> become the urine bender, the Whizzard of the Piss Forest, The King In Yellow
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>>94107910
>they think cyoag actually discusses builds instead of just shitposting
lolmao
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>>94107910
We never have arguments about whos build is better because everybody already knows my builds are the best.
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>>94108321
TechCHAD...
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>>94107585
Use "Your Option" then
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>>94105761
>i'm not sure how well it will go especially if the Prime Angels feel like you're fucking up their order
I'll try to minimize the collateral damage of the endeavor, but even if the Prime Angels insist on opposing the use of universes, they will have to battle the majority of the multiverse, so it's impossible for them to win unless they get the First Guardian on their side.
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>>94107910
CYOAG makes more /tg/ content than them so they seethe
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>>94108418
>t. dead to prime angels
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>>94103534
Boy that's a lot of text
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>>94108458
>t. pill picker
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>Italics is STILL making content for the kemono CYOA
But why? What about Magi Case?
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>>94108484
Patience.
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>I just need to wait
>I just need to wait
>I just need to wait
>I just need to wait
>I just need to wait
>I just need to wait
The average cumeater.
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>>94108192
It certainly reads like a WIP. I like what's there, but the writing is a bit awkward, and it's too short.

>ritual

>void form (void)
>cycle (order)
>expel (order)

I use Cycle to increase my natural lifespan by very many times - I immediately make a savepoint, then live until I get very old, then suicide, then wait 6 months to start the next savepoint. I imagine everyone picks Cycle, it's the only lifespan-increasing option?
I have Void Form on at almost all times (when not interacting with villagers or casting Expel).
I can make deals with villagers to use Expel where they request it - there's apparently no limit to how often I can cast it so I can clear vast swathes of land with it.
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>>94108755
>it's the only lifespan-increasing option?
I am pretty sure you are supposed to be ageless by default, would not be much of a dark monster if you were not, it's part of the basics.
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>>94108755
>it's the only lifespan-increasing option?
Devour
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>>94108835
Lifespan is a phisical attribute? Is it a skill? I don't think it's either.
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>>94108851
If lifespan isn't physical, what the fuck is it?
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>>94108856
Conceptual.
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>>94108238
I increasingly think simple powers are usually best, that is, powers that can be sufficiently summarized in very few words. Lusus Naturae had mostly really basic powers too, but it was a great cyoa and became rightly popular. I'd rather the other parts of a cyoa be complex instead, like factions, locations, characters.

>>94108815
Maybe? My read is that it shouldn't be presumed.

>>94108851
"Physical attributes" makes me think of the classic D&D attributes which don't directly include lifespan, I assumed that's what it meant. I agree it might also be interpreted to include lifespan, sure.
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>>94108666
Satan. You didn't answer the question. Why is he making an updated version to the CYOA with anthromorphs? There is no way it is popular than Magi Case. CYOAG isn't furry.
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>>94108914
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>CYOAG isn't furry.
Stop lying or I'll call you Tok.
>There is no way it is popular than Magi Case.
Was Magi Case even that popular?
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>>94108942
>Was Magi Case even that popular?
No, it was all samefags and forced hype.
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>>94108942
>Was Magi Case even that popular?
Were you not here at the time? It held the general for a month or two.
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>>94108952
>a month or two.
Less than a month, barely 3 weeks. It was also all fake.
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>>94108942
Magi Case as it got close to release date started consuming threads with some posting it would not happen, half of which was Tok.

Then when it released Tok got BTFO and the thread was consumed to the point shitposters and even catposter was silenced. The CYOA then held the general for an entire month before eventually returning to normal because it didn't have multiplayer or author giving crazy powers to everyone. So people made their builds and discussed lore, Evoco being a tranny, etc
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>>94108895
Lusus was so fun. I wish we could go back to those times.
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>>94108952
It was a bit less than a month, and the conversation was mostly Fordfags, Evocofags and Agerlitchfags.
Perhaps it was only three anons posting obssessively.
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>>94108988
>>94108978
All shitposting, no discussion was had. It was just 3 guys.
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>>94108988
>>94108963
>less
It was one month.
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>>94109009
One of them was tok.
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>It wasn't real discussion
>It was only 3 posters
>It was less than a month.
>It was never going to come out
>It was not popular
Why are some anons coping?
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>>94109009
>ony three guys disscussng aromage
>3 Italics fans
>it's always the same dudes
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>>94109026
only one of those is false
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>>94109030
M'yes, three King-Posters ruling over the thread, fending the horde of shitposter with their sword made of pure autism and dedication.
It's a funny mental picture.
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>>94107703
>>94107817
>>94108329
Machine-Killer Son delet this
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What happened with magi case can't be 3 guys for 3 weeks, thats cope. It had its time but died abruptly after that. It was fine and lasted for more time than I thought.
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>>94109088
It was exactly three guys. Me, Limit Breaker and Tok.
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>>94109086
Machine killer son. Once I am the Hound#2 AKA Big Puppy I will concentrate a big part of my forces in fighting True AIs
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>>94109088
>died abruptly after that
Because it was just shitposting, that just proves it even more.
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>>94109098
Ignoring the joke, who is Limit Breaker? is someone or a joke i ignore without intention this time?
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>>94108942
If CYOAG is furry, then why wrre these three never really picked for builds? If CYOAG is furry why isn't Italics furry CYOA popular or even generate basic discussions about lore?
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>>94109108
An OR build I think? I forget what the build was or did.
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>>94104368
>Neurological Tissues
>Flash Shift
>Shift Other
>Dislocation
>Zeitgiest
Don't mind me. Just shifting back in time and space to shift you into being a dummy dumb sum'bitch before you can get your own CYOA powers.
Or giving you a helping hand if you're not a nefarious bastard.
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>>94109099
I regret summoning you now, because I'm the Son that's going to eat the Hound
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>>94109101
If it was shitposting it would be eternal and we would today a post about how a guy wants to lick the toes of some acutor.

The discussion diep abruptly because they talked about all the semi interesting themes they could find inside the cyoa and then Italics said he would do Redux.
It was not 3 persons, again, thinking 3 people can hold the thread hostage for 3 weeks is cope. I am tempted to call you tok because i dont understand why would you say something blatantly false
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>>94109108
Found it.
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/85445083/#85445295
Limit Breaker himself was a fairly simple build, the joke came from this post.
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>>94109134
Well. You can rush your try with the first Hound and probably die like a dog, letting more machines alive in the world. Or wait after me, the Big Puppy, and try to kill me, in said case you will die but I will give you a ceremonial grave in your honor surrounded by corpses of machines and 100TB of porn
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>>94109101
>>94109088
It died off because Italics promised an enhanced version of the CYOA and more content.

Remmeber, Magi Case launched with a simple character creation section and only 12 QUESTS. Then he hid more quests in profiles but people only read the profiles for their clans and SKIPGOD all the others.

It had a bunch of lore and cool magic but it was lacking more content for quests and making our character's history.
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>>94109142
>https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/85445083/#85445295
Aaah, ok, now i understand the joke, ty pal
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>>94109110
Well as far as being a beastman in jrpg traitor, the race doesn't really have much going for it. The options for demons are better, and even if you are a furry, you could possible get exactly what you want and better options by going demon because demons aren't restricted in appearance at all.
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>>94109142
>https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/85445083/#85445295
Nobody would put that much efforts for a place like this.
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>>94109175
People put enough effort in this place to write novel-length cyoas like JRPG Traitor to begin with.
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>>94109110
>why wrre these three never really picked for builds?
lack of benefits
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>>94109110
Adelina sweeps.
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>>94109170
JRPG Traitor Anon was a hack for doing beastmen so dirty. Still doesn't explains Italics furry.
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>>94109134
>>94109150
I wonder how many Sons are trying to become the next Hound on top of all the little houndlets
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>>94109110
>boring mercenary #1
>jungle savage
>boring mercenary #2

They're all fairly boring, and jungle savage waifus tend to be unpopular.
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>>94109088

Magi Case had an Anon write a literal novella on it.
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>>94109244
In lore, probably a few crazy ones. Karac maybe has it in the back of his mind as a possibility if the chance arises but still would be loyal to the Father (which means the Father's side would eventually win) and for sure knows the Hound is beyond him.

Outside of lore, I think 2 Sons mentioned here they wanted to do that.

Is a suicidal, even Fulcrum was in a suicide mission with his build and support
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>>94109251
Anons have no taste
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>>94109274
>Is a suicidal
hey, if Karac can fight an eternal war against the hound, why cant I?
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>>94109297
god I desperately want to be a solitary wiseman hermit deep in the woods and have cute tribal women come to me occasionally in search of magical tutelage or sage advice
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>>94108895
Husanon here
This is interesting are the powers form Luminary complicated or simple?
I do try to keep them on the simple side
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Why are we talking about entropiss?
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>>94109312
You can, one thing is wanting to fuck him up as in going to decentralized armies of him and going to kill those forces. Another thing is going to one of the 4 strongest beings and kill him
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>>94109314
Simple powers
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>>94108054
Holy fuck please go back, i'm begging you.
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>>94109319
What do you want to talk about?
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>>94109338
He wants to talk about Dragonfail
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>>94109338
Talk about Ivory and why she is right.
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>>94109343
Tok and his jealousy? I guessed it right
>>94109345
Submissive Tok weak to sadist women? I should have guessed it too
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>>94109297
>>94109251
>>94109313
Jungle waifu cyoa?
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>>94109353
Tok falseflagging to make entropist look worse? Should have known.
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>>94109251
You described all the human companions faggot.
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>>94109355
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put yoyrtrip back on tok
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>>94109384
shut up, tok.
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>>94109274
>it's suicidal
Sons actually have the luxury of being able to die and try again though
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>>94109338
Why did Italics actively make all the women thick? And why did he make HMoFA canon?
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>>94109409
True. But also carry the risk to anger someone too above them who if actually tries could corner them.

Like, imagine the Hound or his best general are mad at you and decided to kill you. You are going to become the prey until he loses interest or you die finally. But yes, you can probably anger him like Karac and if you are strong live a life of battle and thats it. Going beyond that is fucking around and findind out
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>>94109363
That's not remotely true.
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>>94109331
That's good.
With how complicated the system is I wanted the powers to be easy to understand and easy to mix and match.
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>>94109426
Posting the rest of the races. Which race is your favorite anons?

For me it's Monkey King.
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>>94109636
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I wonder what the enemy factions are going to be for Exalted Conquest. He already confirmed a human kingdom and demonic invasion, and alluded to beastmen in some prior posts. He did mention there wouldn't be True AI or Fae involved, however. It's going to be interesting to see. I hope there's some proper weird shit.
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>>94109636
I don't like this level of furries but Dhampir
>>94109645
We simply can't know
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>>94109660
>I don't like this level of furries but Dhampir
What do you mean by this level of furries?

>Dhampir
But why? You a vampire?
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>>94109636
Ceryneian
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>>94103534
>Heritage
Stargazer
Man, I want a starship. Something sleek with great open spaces on the inside, furnished with art deco sensibilities and wooden cottage materials.
>Echoes (1)
Shard of Divinity (0)
Mind of Machines (Heritage)
I don't see the point in becoming a raging engine of destruction. Personal combat is for people that can't afford a spaceship.
>First Steps (2)
Beauty of the Cosmos (1)
Wonders Beyond Imagination (0)
I want to see the true nature of reality
>>94103544
>Static Safe Havens
The Cocooon (Free)
I can be respectful. I'd love to be friends with spider gods.
>Mobile Safe Havens (12,12)
The cyclinder (11,12)
Yes, self-sufficiency, here we go. All conflict comes down to denying your enemies of the resources they need.
>Talents
Gateway Builder (free)
Shroud of Night (11,12)
Eyes of Reality (10,12)
Temporal Warping (9,12)
Space Folding (8,12)
>Legends
Urania (8,10)
Ambriel (8,8)
I need good guys to live in harmony with the spiders.
>Extra Powers
Samsara (6,8)
Genetic History (4,8)
The Dreaming (2,8)
Soul Weaver (0,8)
I'll take the durability, but overall, I'm going for utility. Many of these combat powers are no more powerful than military tech that exists today.
>>94103563
>Legions
Hyperboreans (0,6) -> defense
Felt Like I had to pick at least one
>Minions
Steel Worms (0,5) -> construction
Cute! And maybe we can make more.
Psyborgs (free) -> research
The perfect minions to man my cylinder
Plasmoids (free) defense
I don't get it but I think they can help maintain an artificial star if I ever create one, which is cool.
Raja (free) procurement and export
These will be the citizens of my new civilization. We will have to help them adjust to civilian life.
>>94103584
>Quests
Voyagers
Legacy of Janus
I'll uncover the secrets of the multiverse to defeat Ivory.
>Pursuers
The God-Hunter
Seems easy to kill. I don't feel any obligation to fight fair with those out for blood.
The endless chorus
They're playful. I can work with that.
>Great Pursuers
Ivory
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>>94109771
The WEAKEST
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>>94109436
It's definitely a long term goal. How old was Karlac again? He's been failing for a while and still isn't anywhere close.
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>>94109771
I fucking love your build, anon. Extremely comfy divine cyborg who just wants to make friends and roam around in starships. a+, very cute.
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>>94109788
See
>>94103632
>>94103769
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>>94109788
I thought heritage minions were not free. This is so confusing.
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>>94109771
Also don't forget to upvote it on Reddit.
:3
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>>94109793
Cloak of Death allows you to turn into vague shadow puppet forms. Theres so much more to shapeshifting than getting big and strong, you can just take Horn of Hell for that too lmao. Shapeshifting from Nature also lets you blend in, gives you better senses, gives you much smaller forms, and does much better underwater.

>>94109808
Ahh true, i didn't notice that he marked Psyborgs as free lmao. DESU it doesn't really bother me if people miss little things like that.

>>94109836
Based
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>>94109766
Elaborate your choice now
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>>94103534
This CYOA is somewhat strange. It repeatedly tells you that you're a threat to the multiverse but every one of the powers you can get is a fraction as effective as your companions', so if you're smart, you're relegated to an interdimensional bus to get them around. You're essentially left watching your mercenary friends fight your foes while you aren't able to meaningfully contribute outside of logistics. It's strange, is all.
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>>94109840
>but you can turn into a mouse lmao
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>>94109909
Did you actually expected a different type of reply from aromage? lmao indeed.
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>>94109909
Why would you turn into a mouse when you can turn into a tardigrade and survive almost anything?
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>>94109857
Its based entirely on the picture provided where she has a plump body with big tits that I want to have sex with the most
Based on the skills if I remember correctly I would've picked a catgirl
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>>94109065
>True Companion
>Just a Dream
>Deck of Shuffled Time
Find soulmate. Get in the general vicinity. Follow spirit animal to her. Fall in love.
When I need to do funky shit, I mess with time.
I'm gonna get banned from Vegas, but probably have enough money to be set for life before that.

Theoretically, I could trad the True Companion for The Pinnacle of Endless, but I don't know how vague Just a Dream is. True Companion will at least make sure I can find my soulmate if I get fairly close.
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>>94109917
It's my fault for actually engaging with an aroslop cyoa, you are correct
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>>94110001
You deserve every ounce of pain, Aroseether.
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>>94110007
>accusing people that actually try to engage with you content of being your fictional boogeyman
You've completely most the plot
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>>94110022
Its over. You are wrong now.
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>>94110022
>most the plot
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>>94109256
link?
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>>94110060
Thank you for your shitposter input.
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>>94103584
Is the watcher still retarded if you don't pick them as a pursuer or does it only get lobotomized if you pick it?
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>>94110091
You only become retarded when you pick it.
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>>94110097
I'm the watcher?
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>>94110107
Yes, the watcher is your future self and that's why it's so dumb.
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>>94109963
>plump with big tits
But doggo is bigger and thiccer.

>Catgirl
What did the cat girl even do for skills?
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>>94109636
Puca is for me.
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>>94110157
ty anon, i didnt want to explain myself something like this
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>>94110157
I cap at 4 sometimes, usually 3 though.
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Who would win? He Who Pursues or the Nexus Planeswalker?
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>>94110207
I cap at 1. I would put a 1.5 level where there is furr in hands and feet but thats all the furr. I would cap at that at max
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>>94110229
He Who Pursues would pursue, so he wins
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>>94110177
Based. Tradbunny wives who are JRPG support class.
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>>94110157
Aren't all of them at a 2 though? They all wear clothes and have hair. They have a human form not an upright animal form.
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Honestly, you can just take the original nexus cyoa and just add this new on on top. As in, just add everything except the powers. Because why not? Is not like there is anything in this new cyoa that is specially linked to the cyoa. Just random people in the multiverse you can find by having the power to traverse it.
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>>94108123
He likes it when you seethe anon
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>>94109636
From the pictures, the frogs or the wendigos. The other ones almost all look mishappen due to being too sexualized. Kemonos are hot, but not the humongous proportioned shortstacks, I like the thinner more natural looking ones better, plus frog and goat women are hot.
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So when is aro going to start working on ultimate god? Has she said yet?
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Already started, these are the new borders for some of the images.
Sadly, Highlander is busy with parenthood and can't help that much with rewriting the aspects.
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>>94110157
My love knows no bounds.
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>>94110524
Cool. I hope we get even more lore about the setting. Maybe a section with the most important current families. Does not necessarily have to be about the big guys though. I enjoyed learning about the small guys from the legion section in gateway.
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>>94110527
>My love knows no bounds
Jesus...
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>>94110524
Make unity's blood power better. "Red Miles" does not sound nearly as impressive as you think it does.
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>>94110554
That's a good idea, i'll add that into my plan list. I also found this picture that fits the omniverse pretty well.
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>>94110563
True, in homestuck the Red Miles can tear apart galaxies and kill universes lmao.
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>>94110432
>shortstacks
They look tall to me, unless you mean the heighr things. I don't consider those canon.
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>>94110568
pick another image
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>>94110599
Most of the races do not look tall, most of them look short with oversized busts and asses, which I don't find attractive. Short, good. Oversized titties and asses? Not good.
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>>94110568
I personally like it.
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>>94110568
Use something more tree-like. This looks way too artificial and umbrella-like.
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>>94110568
Can you make the Ski come back and then lose to goku at the end? I think it would really elevate the cyoa to PEAK levels.
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>>94110649
Sorry anon, Goku is a jobber and i don't put those in my cyoas.
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>>94108163
No I know he hates us, but fucking why?
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>>94107568
Yea I want to make a build for this but i'm running into this exact problem, wanting to use horn + cloak. Pretty much all of the companions would have to be 'corrupted' in order to side with me, like turning them into undead, but that seems like it would both make them weaker and I have no real way to justify how I would even do so whrn theyre all so much stronger than me. Even the pursuers, I have no way to deal with them myself and I can't formulate a compelling reason to myself how I would corrupt the legions and legends.
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>>94110656
Professional sandbagger...
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>>94110568
Stop alternating between Ski and Skai.
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>>94110662
That is because aro fucked up and included a lot of personal power even though you are not meant to fight anyone that matters one on one. It is a minion cyoa, really. Where you are king and order your minions to do stuff.
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>>94110662
>Pretty much all of the companions would have to be 'corrupted' in order to side with me
That's a you problem.
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>>94107568
Thats just an issue with aro being an idiot who cant focus. The cyoa tries to do like 5 things and none of them well.
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>>94110679
Wrong.
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>>94110678
Well... yea. The cyoa is composed almost exclusively of happy-go-lucky do-gooders aside from like 2 of the allies.
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>>94110662
Are you saying that you want to do an “evil” build or that you can’t think of a way to use those powers in a non-evil way?
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>>94110703
Evil.
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>>94110698
Have you considered... not being evil for no reason?
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>>94110713
That's gay.
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>>94110698
Lets see:
Tav - Heroic but fully willing to tear people apart
Star-Jin - Likes fighting but only if it's a decent challenge, doesnt care about morals otherwise
Chrona - Was a black ops psychic agent, has likely committed war crimes.
Urania - Goody two shoes
Aevar - Can and will kill anyone he needs to
Legion - Can and will kill anyone she wants to
Ambriel - Goody two shoes
Baphomet - Actual sociopath
Kimiko - No morals whatsoever and enjoys killing
Amar-Sin - Vampire with no morals who enjoys killing
Lola - Goody two shoes because she's a kid
Kleidi - Literally just Jiminy Cricket with tits and a sword
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>>94110524
Um... aro, who is that behind them?!!
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>>94110746
holy shit
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>>94110710
I think being cartoon evil is hard since that’s retarded. Much easier is being selfish. Plenty of the Legions are fairly amoral (mutant dragons??) and two legends are easy picks. You can explicitly side with the deepest hells too.
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>>94109426
>>94110599
>>94110432
>>94110622
The images used in the bestiary are not 1:1 for Comrades. I just had a small pool of art to pull from Japanese-side of Twitter to use for the races. My apologies, I know you are mostly talking about the Cu, Ceryneians, and Kudans.
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>>94110765
I mean, its personal preference really.
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vittorian dream....
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>>94110746
KEK
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>>94110061
it was italics himself
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>>94110763
I don't know, it just doesn't feel right taking them to turn them into undead. It feels like the other dude who did tech + mind to make his empire is the only way to do something psuedo evil, improving things for your dudes while being expansive. I want to make ambriel fall, turn the legions undead. Make undead monsters and start cleansing/inducting verses.
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>>94110622
Finally, another Whitoid Aryan Ubermenschen on /cyoag/
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>>94110843
I don’t understand the issue… You want to be evil but you don’t want to do evil things to the people around you? You don’t have to turn your allies into undead… you can just turn your enemies I guess or only do the minions who don’t care about that.
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>>94110894
He likes the idea of being evil, not the actual process and it's consequences on the people around him
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>>94110919
>>94110894
I literally just said I wanted to kill my allies and turn them undead, wtf are you two on.
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>>94110932
>it just doesn't feel right taking them to turn them into undead
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>>94110843
You can do all of that, why do you need Aro to hold your hand through it?
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>>94110941
Yea because theyre all 10x stronger than me and I cant justify being able to do so.
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>>94110662
>>94110843
Why do you insist on being retarded? There are no benefits to what you want to do. Are you the "haha evil so fun" type of villain?
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>>94110970
>immortal unquestioningly loyal empire
>no benefits
You wouldn't get it.
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Why are there people crying about being weak every time gateway is posted when that's literally the premise? Play something else if you don't like it.
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>>94110775
Yeah, but still. I still wish I could have found better images to represent my ideas.

>>94110830
If I ever wrote anything like a novel for the Magi Case, it would probably be an anthology.
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>>94111044
Wrong, retard. The premise is being personally weak. Not weak.
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>>94111044
Ok I will.
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UMMM ackshually you're SUPPOSED to be a jobber
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>>94111119
Funny how that is what they tell you yet in a different reply they will fight saying you are not a jobber. Whatever is more convenient at the moment.
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>>94111127
I am the strongest, even >>94110662 says so.
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>>94110969
I was going to try to put a build together, but honestly your goals are just too retarded. Just try to build a normal evil empire and the build will be easy. If you need a corruption kink as a part of your build, just Sartre it I guess.
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>>94111154
Shut up aromage.
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>>94111154
Its coming, bitch
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>>94111168
I don’t understand. Does Aro live in Florida or something? And she’s unfamiliar with Cat 3 hurricanes making landfall lol
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>>94111185
Sadly, aro will drown tomorrow. Her body will not be found until 4 months later. Still clutching on her dead grip a usb with the final version of ultimate god.
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Horn of Hell is shit, completely useless against Ivory. In fact, radiation will even buff her.
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>>94111114
That's the same thing
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>>94111203
>Thinking anything can beat the pet npc
lmao
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>>94111168
>I want to corrupt my companions
>No your fetish bad
>You are going to doe soon
Bro I laughed so hard I almost choked.
Based response.
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>>94111127
>Incorrect usage of the word 'jobber' #4216
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>>94111238
You are correct. These people defending aro saying you are not a jobber, have no idea what that word means. Because you are a jobber.
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>>94111238
NTA
You are correct jobbers are characters that are hyped up to make sure they characters look cool when they are defeated.
In Gateway you are not even hyped you are just a bitch background character.
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>>94111255
>>94111277
A jobber is someone portrayed as strong yet always loses. An underdog is someone portrayed as weak yet wins in the end. You are still describing an underdog, not a jobber, as the player in Gateway is never portrayed as strong.
If 'someone who loses at first but wins in the end' is a jobber, then every character in media who follows the heroes journey is a jobber.
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>>94111215
Jobber of the worst kind.
Some echoes are perfectly obtainable in play, try to go for synergies, steal knowledge from Xheel, attack her in a moment of vulnerability.
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>>94111114
The premise is that you are the leader of a faction. And you can forgo all personal power to have a super powerful faction, but then you are just playing an empire sim. Or you can forgo some faction power to be able to explore without getting ganked.
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>>94111284
A jobber is a term from wrestling, refering to a wrestler whos "job" is to make someone elses win look good.

In narrative spaces this is usually done with someone like vegeta, someone who is established as and on paper is very strong but who always loses to set up how strong the new enemy is. A jobber however can also be weak, as long as their loss still makes the winner look strong.
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>>94111383
NTA.
This is the correct definition.
And gateway fits it to a t.
YThe last page literally is the DMPC literally explaining how powerful she is and how she stiles on you but takes pity and offers you a position as her pet.
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>>94111310
>forgo all personal power to have a super powerful faction
You know what the word forgo means, right? It means you are giving something but here there is nothing to give. You are personally weak from the start. It says so at the start of the cyoa.
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>>94111445
If anything, Ivory is the jobber. She can't catch you. You fell for her trap (due to narrative contrivance) early in the journey without any Allies and you ESCAPED UNSCATHED.
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>>94111500
Except not. It literally says some pages down how she is watching you and testing you. She is just letting you do what you want. You did not escaped. She let you.
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>>94111500
She literally let's you go.
And catches you with you being powerless to stop her no matter what.
At the end.
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>>94111505
Her on page 6 is a continuation of the end of page 1?
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are anons actually retarded?
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>>94111575
Yes, you and me included
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>>94111494
The emperor of mankind was the biggest jobber of all time, he couldn’t even solo the gods of chaos and had to build up humanity to give them a fighting chance.
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Anons are deeply overwhelmed by despair and powerlessness.
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>Being that killed all the planeswalkers who are much stronger than you are
>Tracked and killed the remaining ones too
>Can, with a flick of her fingers, teleport an entire race to another planet
>Knows every single haven a planeswalker can run to
I escaped! I ESCAPED! She did not let me gooooo!
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>>94111582
No, I am spared from this equation. You can be too, if you take my hand.
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>>94111593
Indeed, they can not admit that ivory is just playing with them the whole cyoa.
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>>94111590
Yes and he lost like the jobber he is. Could not stop his bald fucking son from putting him on life support.
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>>94111593
Yeah anons can't cope with a DMPC that will defeat them no matter what defeating them no matter what.
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>>94111647
Is every antagonist a DMPC now?
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>>94111602
I don't care if she let me go or not, me being alive was the worst decision she could make.
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Honestly if I learned something from gateway is that making a final page that assumes how the conflict with the main antagonist ends is a terrible idea.
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>>94111666
Now this is a sensible reply. Not any of that cope shit. Go get her, bro.
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>>94111668
What was assumed? It asks you how you want to proceed with the conflict and then leaves it open.
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>>94111663
No only ones that are clearly self inserts made to dunk on you.
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>>94111663
No. Just the one that tells you in the cyoa how your interaction with them went. It takes the choose part of the adventure.
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>>94111671
It assumes you got caught and have little power to actually kill her you are at her mercy.
And even if the player says "Uhhh I somehow rebel and defeat her?"
It is way less meaningful because you already closed off many other fun stories he could have created like managing to actually never get caught and slowly build a rebellion.
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>>94111695
You clearly said 'final page' and 'how it ends', but are now referring to the events of the first page?
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>>94111154
Here’s my less retarded, low-effort evil empire build.

Pathfinder (Horn/Cloak)
Havens: Twilight, Dream Sphere, Leviathan
Talents: Gateway, Shroud, Eyes, Break
Powers: Samsara, Infernal, Noosphere, Darkest,Soul

Allies: Legion, Chrona, Baphomet, Sin, Yomi, Lola, Kleidi
Legions: Carchrodons, Dragons
Minions: Steel Worms, Devourers, all the free shit

Siphons: Love, Body,Mind
Pursuers: All
Great Pursuer: Watcher

I’ll be the boy emperor using legion, sin, and baphomet to create the most hideous monsters in the multiverse. The carcharodons are down for genetic alteration already and I can probably convince the dragons too. Both are down to expand, which is exactly what I’d want.
Yomi will help me to keep order in my empire. Lola seems easily manipulated and I can keep her cloistered in the dream sphere. If she ever starts getting wise to things, I’ll pull her out and have Sin/Baphomet take her down and see if we can make a revenant from her. Chrona is basically just there because Tech is OP and she seems amoral enough for this build.

The Watcher is an annoyance but I’ll pop out long enough to make ways/gateways, direct troops, and make an appearance, then right back to the haven to cook up more minions. If Ivory became a problem, I’ll team up with the deepest hells to send some Great Demons after her.
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>>94111677
Smh can't believe Elspeth was a shitty self-insert this whole time...
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Retards I bet huspedo will do even worse.
You are a low power cuck in a space war.
How is that even supposed to work?
You will get blasted by some cosmic tier npc.
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Retards
RETARDS
uugghhUGHHHH
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>>94111707
How depraved will you get, anon? What will be your ultimate goal? Will you enforce order? Build a personal harem? Just do whatever you want?
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Arosissies mindbroken by being powerless. Pet npc was just too strong for them.
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Aroseethers mindbroken when not given absolute power immediately for once. Aro was too strong for them.
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>>94111666
Based satan.
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>>94111750
>low-effort build
Alright, I guess I will put some amount of effort in.

As the boy emperor, I would first establish the loyalty of my legends. I would allow a great deal of depravity among my allies so long as they kept some degree of discretion. To the most loyal, I would empower them with Break of Reality to keep the others in check. For my less depraved allies, I would give them distractions and keep them from seeing the horrors of my empire. A key player is Yomi, since I would want her and the tulpas to ensure that we can brainwash the masses. Baphomet and legion would help provide the shock troops. Kleidi and Sin would ensure that all would serve even in death. I’m sure Baphomet would have no problem with my looking like a child, and I’m
sure we could summon succubi if we got bored.

For my minions/legions, I would establish a clear hiearchy where they can exploit whatever resources (with my help), but I receive the cut. They can enslave/genocide noncitizens as much as they like, but all who bend the knee are equals beneath the emperor.

The end goal is to recover the lost magic and technology of the planeswalkers and continue to call upon darker and more ancient beings. Eventually, I would bring Ivory and indeed much of the multiverse to heel. Once I obtain power and immortality, the fate of the multiverse would be a boot stamping on a human face forever, so to speak.
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>>94108201
A stronger will
A mightier will
One to overcome everything
Mine is barely an ember
I want mine to burn it all
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>>94108201
I wish I had better eyesight, healthier lungs, and a steadier heart. Internal organs in general need help.
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>>94112060
Sickly -> healthy, basically.

I wish you well, anon.
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>>94103573
Wait, do you get greater minions for free as long as you have one or the other requirement, or do you need both the power and the companion?
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>>94112233
You get it for free so long as you have both requirements.
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>>94112240
Oh... I really do need to change my build then.
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Dying of old age~
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NEW THREAD:
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>>94112385
Good sir, you fucked up.
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>>94112399
What did he fuck up on?
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>>94112526
NTA, but your reading comprehension is ass. Full on eyelet.
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>>94112527
So you're avoiding the question to shitpost? Ok.
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>>94112526
The thread. He might as well be a createfag in disguise.
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>>94112565
What the fuck is a createfag
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Are we using that thread or not?
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>>94112399
Sorry.

>>94112526
Subject.
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>>94112585
>What the fuck is a createfag
Several years ago, someone dubbed "CreateFag" started making /CYOAG/ threads with the header "Create Your Own Adventure" (rather than Choose Your Own Adventure). StonedCelt - who made most of the new threads at that time - objected, and the two started racing to make new threads with their preferred heading. For several months, we were getting new threads on Page Three, sometimes even Page Two of the /tg index.

(Since then, StonedCelt somehow got himself permabanned from 4chan, while CreateFag was tentatively identified as Sandni**er.)
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An Abandoned Den (Size of dogs on the larger size)
Humanoid (Grey skins and bright hair with non-human eyes)
Hunting Party
Strength 1
Vitality 1
Speed 4
Intelligence
Community
Compatibility
Beauty
Alt Diet
Thaumaturgy

I have a fetish. We are the wild magics that lurk in the woods.
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>>94111602
Why did she kill my solar system then? Isn't she a moralfag? Is she retarded or just a hypocrite?
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Got infinieat... Started with whites only
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>>94114242
>Got infinieat..
What is "infinieat"?



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