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Archives & Other Resources: https://pastebin.com/wETipqYw
AllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3
Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp (was I supposed to do this?)
In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanary
Threadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2
Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3
Pardon the Mess Edition
Previous Thread: >>94701101
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>>94710155
>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
>New Writefags
>0 (Yako, MaruMaru, Last Rite, Yamata, Reaper, Ferals)
https://rentry.org/ip2maezt
>The Red Finger Introduction (Imamu/Red Eyes Oni, Braindrain/Zombie, Stink Rat/Dark Weasel, Mythopoesis, Kester Greenfield; mention of Conman, Impakt, Floor)
https://rentry.co/ukxsg7hw
>Pages Torn From Long-Forgotten Prologues (Sunlight Man, Spark)
https://rentry.org/TornPages
>To Hone a Blade
>https://rentry.org/4ciut77t
>Legion (Aquarius)
https://rentry.org/pcnzmbmx

>Characters Updated
>Zyra Mein VN: Braindrain/Zombie
>Mochi Uranus VN: Decaying Villain, Dark Weasel
>Suzuki Nene HN: Ghostly Cat Hero - Bakeneneko!
>Takara Tame HN: Android
>Aiko Ami HN: Rosethorn, The Motivational Hero
>Cammy Link VN Karma
>Sally McCathy HN: Last Rite
>Rika Eichi
>Atsushi Orochi HN "Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero - Yamata"
>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN: Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako
>Okane King VN Midas
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force
>Rob Williams HN: Velvet Worm
>Meadow
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy

>New Characters
>Imamu Belmitope HN: Ten-ton Scorpion
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94697660
>Amahagene Takako / Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401
>Michelson Tyler HN: The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701394
>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250
>Deckard Thorpe HN: Kid Question
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94707591

>New Prompt
Dorms Questionnaire >>94691318
+Dorm Room Proposal: >>94697084
+Dorm Room Proposal v2 >>94701730

>New classess compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
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>>94710164
>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Class 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Class 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt (Leaving this out because it might be useful for anyone writing a fight)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Class 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n (Backup)
>Class 1-D Character Summary
https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>New Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E

>Newer Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds. Use whichever one you want)
Version 4.2: https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92012978
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>>94710168
>STUDENTS:

>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909
>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077
>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190591
>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986
>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200
>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88196397
>Minerva Kim HN Spark
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766
>Hailey Chang HN Recoil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826770
>Faith Kang HN Drone
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774
>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778
>Edith Lee HN Arena
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782
>Noah Abrams HN Archangel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041
>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661
>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88414797
>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88217649
>Son Jugo HN Aspara
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88239137
>Genma Go HN Goldorado
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88353862
>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251
>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337
>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624
>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012
>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88193619+ https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91985145
>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995
>Takara Tame HN Android
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336
>Ian Takenaka HN Rush
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991
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>>94710169

>Deckard Thorpe HN: Kid Question
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94707591
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>>94710173
>Students (Cont.)
>Class Unsorted
>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973
>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401

>Class 2-D
>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068

>Class 1-E https://rentry.org/p6dwm

>Class 3-B (U.A.)
>Animata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90990850
>Synthesis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90992108
>Meadow
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94706182
>Top Smile
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90992508
>Ichimaki
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90994440
>Nekiro Nishi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90997317
>Madoka Mikan HN Heartbeat
https://rentry.org/eesb8
>Itō Sukemochi HN Warpden
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90973632
>Li Yinzhen HN Jiangshi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90978093
>Katsumi Hachizaki:
https://rentry.org/HeartMHA
>Cormelia Busujima
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91353847

>Class 1-F
>Suki HN: Sukeban
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713
>Runt HN Dust Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91691942
>Rob Williams HN: Velvet Worm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
>Haiiroshi Kinzoku HN Fullmetal
https://rentry.org/Fullmetal-mha
>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240
>Tatsuya Yamashita HN Bad Touch
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91808184
>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104
>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363
>Kiyoura Shidehara HN Icky Hero: Slimenuts
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91782779
>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690
>Nayuki Kyoko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965
>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433
>Misato Fukushima
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92006447
>Susana Sato HN Silver Stream
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93437588
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>>94710175
Students (Cont.)
>Class 3-D https://rentry.org/vx255
>William Dustice HN King Billy
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192360
>Johanna Hilt HN Gauntlet Hero: Weiss Schwarz
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88195437

>Class 1-C (Shiketsu)
>Okimoto Chisaka
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91130422
>Isabela Nakahata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91351414
>Lilinah ‘Riri’ Inoue
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91347120
>Ysmir Dragonborn
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91349452
>Daniel W. Rain
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91352447

>PRO HEROES
>U.A. Teachers:
>Yunikon, the Brilliant Hero
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494
>Dr. Seto Kawata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051432

>Shiketsu Teachers:
> Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414
> Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564
>Pierre Vachon HN The Gentle Way Hero: Ippon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205924
>Masanori Kitamura HN Hijack
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88219956
>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509
>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero, LocaLoca (NPC)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486
>Omura Tadao HN Deceptive Hero, Conman
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88754723
>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484
>Takahashi Mako, HN Ersatz
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019
>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque, HN Xpresso
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644
>Michelson Tyler HN: The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701394
>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250
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>>94710178

>Unaffiliated Heroes
>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908
>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386
>Kalianne Sato HN "Flame Strike Hero: Honoken"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039
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>>94710181
Pro Heroes (Cont).
>Akagi Sanpatchi HN "Popsy"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034
>Roland Walker HN PsyKing (Sandatsu'd)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616703
>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848
>Junpei Ozu HN: The Standstill Hero, "Floor"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563
>Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King, Saurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780
>Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063
>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593
>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero, Wavelength
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513
>Mash, Renji Kurokawa
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848

>SUPPORTERS:
>Lady Astoria Belmont
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88201576
>Rika Eichi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700154
>Aura Curie (Student)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
>Just "The Doctor"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597
>Endless Horizons Ltd.
https://rentry.org/iptpr
>Emilia Busujima
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89349231
>Holden Deckard
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931
>Brightly
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966
>Satoru Tani (Student)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91149772

>VILLAINS (Villain Name):
>Turncoat Agency:
>Keiichi Tano HN Racer V / VN Getaway
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926925
>Tenshi Chisio HN Caduceus / VN Sawbones
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88927453
>Jack Dunn HN Three-Sixty / VN The Asset
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88931192

>Pax Organization:
>Eugene Kurtz VN Pax and Mercy
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88984432
>Nightmare
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88984422

>Unaffiliated Villains:
>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714
>Karuga Ito (Teacher - Shiketsu)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478
>Recino R. Percutio
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385
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>>94710182
Villains (Cont.)
>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt
>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242
>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735
>Jack Mitchell VN Marshall
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88456239
>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394
>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931
>"Blank"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726
>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987
>"Mammogar"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410
>Tomie
https://rentry.org/ddom6m82
>Suslik
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413
>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais (Jet Black)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242
>Imamu Belmitope VN: Ten-ton Scorpion
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94697660
>Zyra Mein VN: Braindrain/Zombie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698217
>Mochi Uranus VN: Decaying Villain, Dark Weasel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518

>Horrific 5:
>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340
>On Giết Năng VN Tether
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198
>Erika Murakami VN Nox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183
>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575
>Edmund Muller VN Mercury
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191

>Revolutionaries:
>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954
>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130
>Miriam Slowburn Hakase VN Prologing Evil: Big Hat (NPC)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88736960

>Vigilantes:
>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005
>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069
>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353
>Rebecca Weber
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750
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>>94710187
Villains (Cont.)
>Vigilantes (Cont.)
>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707
>Sasha Azanami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404
>Rui
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187
>Kaori Kaoru
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075

>Night Parade:
>Cammy Link VN Karma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967
>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909
>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481
>Okane King VN Midas
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250
> ??? VN Maw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272
> ??? VN Bogey
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889
> Tomi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913
>Luccione
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415

>Wild Hunt
>Sandatsu Owari
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91030425
>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569
>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089
>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462
>Ookami Shizuka
https://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka
>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348

Writefags:
>Early writefags here (21 Pages)
https://rentry.org/gqu3gnaf
>”First Test” Comp
https://pastebin.com/66ByP2sD
>Questionnaire Comp
https://pastebin.com/Ksn0zJ31
Else check the rentry

>After all this time, you and I (Capture Cloth, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/b5yvec6b
>Shiketsu Loser's Club (Orbit, Crazy Train, Rosethorn)
https://rentry.org/a49q7ckm
>Happy New Year (Challenger, Recoil)
https://rentry.org/MHAHappyNewYear
>A Flash of Gold (Luccione, Ryu-kishi, Shoggoth, Bogey, Tattarimoke, Maw, Midas, Tomi, Greenfinger, Recino, Desperaido, Karma, Lilinah, Ysmir, Isabella, Okimoto, Heartbeat, mentions of 3-B / 1-C)
https://rentry.org/tq6imsr8
>Chrysalis (Rebecca Weber, Ryu-Kishi, Maru (Maru)):
https://rentry.org/5qroqtcu
>Internship gossip 2 (The Clique) :
https://rentry.org/beygrs3e
>>
>>94710192
Writefags (Cont.)
>The World She Saw (Mirror Devil):
https://rentry.org/hworbxxn
>Clown Days 1.5 (Ryukishi, Maru(maru), Challenger, Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Sunlight Man, Impakt, Popsy, Rosethorn, Android, mention of others)
https://rentry.org/PopsyTown2
>Rob Writes Home Again:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-w3kU8X4dBNjtfqeLgIxgNIFcDP2ns7Cldy-xaTB2Vk/edit?usp=sharing + https://rentry.org/b4wd2t6v
>Hot Sands, Interrupted (featuring Uplift, mention of Desolator): -
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xiCdAvo-l_t00UxCIkDqdQ4_t4o2ZavxXqhi_7dvj94/edit?usp=sharing + https://rentry.org/ehfqnfe9
>Weightless Heart (Orbit, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/sm566reg
>Gentle Ruthlessness (Yako, Maru(maru), Last Rite, Marrow, Reaper, and various mentions.)
https://rentry.org/y4dpiune
>Eyes In The Dark (Ryu-kishi, Capture Cloth, Desolator, Rosethorn, Orbit):
https://rentry.org/xw5nmeyr
>A New Job (Flying Force, Saurus, Crazy Train, Desolator)
https://rentry.org/oczh8osy
>The Moon Saw (Mirror Devil)
https://rentry.org/4k5zbkzy
>Blood, Sweat, and Tears (Challenger + cameos of: Sunlight Man, Ryu-kishi, Endless Horizons Ltd., Rika Eichi, Recoil, Yako, Last Rite, Mirror Devil, Maru, Karaburan, Orbit, Flying Force, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/MHABloodSweatAndTears
>The Lord is My Refuge(Part 1): (Last Rite, Yako, Android, Satoru Tani, Archangel)
https://rentry.org/dne6r8io
>Dead End Salvation 1 (Yamata)
https://rentry.org/kgy5h84q
>Sins of the Mother (Mirror Devil, Flying Force)
https://rentry.org/wqnszs8k
>Dead End Salvation 2 (Mirror Devil, Overdose, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/haa4sma9
>If Only He Could Walk Away (Desolator, Maddox, Nox, Mercury, Tether, Marrow)
https://rentry.org/fz2uttgz
>Podcast (Desolator, Mercury)
https://rentry.org/2ge87fhi
>The Tournament Part Six: Semi Final Shockwave!
https://rentry.org/ta5oibv3
>The flame has a living heart? (Yamata, Overdose)
https://rentry.org/tnrp3qup
>>
>>94710196
Writefags (final)
>The Lord is My Refuge, Part 2(Class 1-D, mostly involving Last Rite, Ryukishi, Archangel, Rush, Maru, and Orochi)
https://rentry.org/2mgod9c5
>Busy Night (Reaper, cameos of Forget-me-not and Desolator)
https://rentry.org/dcg58z97
>Starry Skies (Yamata, Overdose)
https://rentry.org/v3uut8xy
>Osaka Diaries (Ryu-kishi, Popsy, Maru(maru), Last Rite, Capture Cloth, Yako, mentions of Desolator, Mirror Devil)
https://rentry.org/arnu2agz
>Year One Grades!
https://rentry.org/eet439nt
>0 (Yako, MaruMaru, Last Rite, Yamata, Reaper, Ferals)
https://rentry.org/ip2maezt
>The Red Finger Introduction (Imamu/Red Eyes Oni, Braindrain/Zombie, Stink Rat/Dark Weasel, Mythopoesis, Kester Greenfield; mention of Conman, Impakt, Floor)
https://rentry.co/ukxsg7hw
>Pages Torn From Long-Forgotten Prologues (Sunlight Man, Spark)
https://rentry.org/TornPages
>To Hone a Blade
>https://rentry.org/4ciut77t
>Legion (Aquarius)
https://rentry.org/pcnzmbmx

>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS IN HERE
https://pastebin.com/rsnEph0b

For Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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>CYOA
https://imgchest.com/p/ej7m32dna4d

>RULES
Additions: Gibbous Moon, Founding Families, Broken Ritual, Creeping Night, Odd Lineup, Stray Servant, Mind of Steel and Fake Priest are active but don’t affect point totals.
Location: Oxford, Britain
Year: 1880

Deadline: Unlimited
Cycle End Condition: Spiral Opening
Lesser Grail: Chalice Replica
Greater Grail: Sky
Homefield Rules: Away Only
Assassin Rules: Any Assassin

Master Points: 750
Servant Points: 750

Additional Rules:
Pseudo Servants are banned unless taken with misplaced container, Successors and Dead Apostle Ancestors are required to take mind of steel.

>BUILDS
>Masters
>Mundanes
William Dafoe (Master of Hassan) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94518849
Homura Masafumi (Master of Fenrir) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94538225
>Magi
Yingyue le Fay (Mistress of Maitreya) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94496848
The Delightful Godfrey Children (Masters of Bobblewobble Zibblezobble) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94546757
Liu Chongzhi (Master of Chen Rong) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94539334
Barthomeloi Adelaide (Mistress of Baphomet) https://rentry.org/igr6a7nb
>Magic Users
Griffith le Fay (Master of Raim) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94487156
Alana Irvine Mortimer https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94558655
>Homunculi
Sabrina Sabanto (Mistress of Charon and Cyrano) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94499697
>Psychic
Jacob Davies (Dead Count Shapeshifter, Fool-Errant Player) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94476200
The Herald of the New World (Master of Calliope) https://rentry.org/v4bmth4u
>Priests
Kai Revan (Master of Wayland the Smith, Priest/Psychic) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94464024
Michèle de Saint-Méran (Priest/Psychic MoS) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94469597
Benjamin Jowett (Master of Hannibal, Priest/Magic User) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94546358
Cordelia Magdall (Mistress of Hrungnir) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94559458
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>MASTERS (Cont.)
>Dead Apostles
Abel? (DAA) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94502345
Judas Iscariot (DAA) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94503508
Giulietta di Rosa (Mistress of Commodus) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94504732
Ampy (DAA) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94539908
Genghis Khan https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94634164

>SERVANTS
>Sabers
Wayland the Smith (Servant of Kai Revan) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94588999
Maitreya The Enlightened One (Servant of Ying Yue Aldrich) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94526889
Cyrano de Bergerac (Servant of Sabrina Sabanto) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94505294
>Lancers
Fenrir (Servant of Homura) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94572999
>Archers
Bobblewobble Zibblezobble (Servant of The Delightful Godfrey Children) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94546955
>Riders
Charon (Servant of Sabrina Sabanto) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94517722
Hrungnir and Gullfaxi (Servant of Cordellia) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94588161
Hannibal (Servant of Benjamin Jowett) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94574864
>Casters
Raim, the Demon Thief of Treasures (Servant of Griffith le Fay) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94518867
Calliope (Servant of The Herald) https://rentry.org/v4bmth4u
>Assassins
Hassan of the Spider's Web (Servant of William Dafoe) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94463071
>Berserkers
Commodus (Servant of Giulietta di Rosa) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94463933
>Ruler
Chen Rong (Servant of Liu Chongzhi) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94520861
>Avenger
Baphomet (Servant of Barthomeloi Adelaide) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94489131
Fawkes (WIP) https://rentry.org/FATEFawkes
>Customs
Michael Roa Valdamjong (Dead, Wanderer/Recorder) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94468881

>Relationship Charts
>Raim
https://rentry.co/d65bt9wi
>Hassan
https://rentry.org/hnwi3bi9
>Giulietta di Rosa
https://rentry.org/pmv4uym6
>William Dafoe
https://rentry.co/i28r6nzw
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>>94710204
>Tiermaker
https://tiermaker.com/create/oxford-fate-tierlist-16986623

>WRITEFAGS
>Carriage Ride (Kai Revan, Michèle de Saint-Méran)
https://rentry.org/FatePriestsCarriageRide
>Train to Nowhere (Yingyue)
https://rentry.org/gxh3uvs6
>Spider's Loom (William Dafoe, Hassan of the Spider's Web)
https://rentry.co/c5su2cnc
>Masked Covenant (Hassan of the Spider's Web, William Dafoe)
https://rentry.org/moc5rrt7
>The Spider's Design: Monday (Hassan of the Spider's Web, William Dafoe)
https://rentry.co/s5f6vzui
>The devil prowls around like a roaring lion (Kai Revan, Michèle de Saint-Méran)
https://rentry.org/spq8k4x6
>A Still More Glorious Dawn (Griffith le Fay, Raim)
https://rentry.co/n6ho7zep
>Oxford's First Blood: Prelude to Roa's Demise
https://rentry.org/ph8d8c8c
>Galeott0 (Giulietta, Commodus)
https://rentry.org/hx95c3cc
>Plans Change (The Delightful Godfrey Children, President Bobblewobble Zibblezobble)
https://rentry.co/5x6p5ewt
>A Memory of Sin (Judas, Abel)
https://rentry.org/rc25bt55
>Spider's Design: Tuesday (William Dafoe, Hassan of the Spider's Web)
https://rentry.co/znbfawzx
>The Girl in the Snow
https://rentry.org/znrczux6
>Sabrina Sabantos Successful Servant Summon
https://pastebin.com/64htKnRF
>Twisting Nature's Limbs (Raim, Griffith le Fay)
https://rentry.co/wdgvyivm
>Spinning a Yarn (Yingyue, Maitreya)
https://rentry.org/uhgzz68s
>Maitreya Responding to her Summoning (Maitreya, Yingyue)
https://rentry.org/crngitg2
>Train to Somewhere (William Dafoe, Hassan of the Spider's Web)
https://rentry.co/up2wdgr9
>Morituri te Salutant (Giulietta, Commodus, Herald)
https://rentry.org/rfdh2xa8
>Benjamin summoning Hannibal
https://rentry.co/kaq5pphr
>The Dragon and the Spider (Hassan of the Spider's Web, Chen Rong, Liu Chongzhi, William Dafoe)
https://rentry.org/aounynqf
>The Little Lord's Little Lie (Benjamin Jowett, Barthomeloi Adelaide, Delightful Godfrey Children)
https://rentry.org/kbpmtdue
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>WRITEFAGS (Cont.)
>Autobiographies vs. Epics: Grudge Match (Roa, Herald)
https://rentry.org/ue3cgza3
>The Real Treasure was the Friends we Made Along the Way (William Dafoe, Hassan of the Spider's Web, Sabrina Sabanto, Charon, Cyrano, the Herald's Horde, mention of Homura Masafumi and Fenrir)
https://rentry.co/ngwfuzm9
>Bloody Night: Assassin vs Berserker (Hassan of the Spider's Web, William Dafoe, Commodus, Giulietta di Rosa)
https://rentry.org/2zkd5ryf
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>>94710164
I thought I had a support role cop but I can't find it in the archives so it must have been the dream of a butterfly. Seems like a good chance to retool the character and join the new 1-D!

>Just another story, Japan, Hero Student Freshman, Shiketsu High School class 1-D
>1 unspent XP & 1 unspent QP

K. Kajō
Name: Koroma Kajō | HN: "The Time-Loop Hero" Reset

Quirk:
「Déjà Vu」 — Sends the user up to ten minutes back in time! After reaching the point in time when they looped back, the time-clone disappears. The future is not set in stone; past versions can use future versions to change their fate.

Background:
KK's mother is a real estate agent whose quirk Weal Or Woe gives her a vague sense if an event will be good or bad. Her father is a pediatrician who used his self-targetting memory manipulation quirk Editor to memorize things with precise detail. In the mysterious ways of quirk recombination, their only daughter's quirk manifested as ten minute time loops. This is truly a bizarre world.

KK is not the brightest bulb in the box. She can have moments of shocking insight, and often notices things others don't, but mostly because her head's not focused on what everyone else is. When it comes to the weird and mostly useless things she gets passionate about, she knows plenty. But when it comes to anything mundane or practical or academic, it all slides right off. A high C grade is a cause for celebration in her household. She never would have gotten into Shiketsu if not for the outlandish display she gave at the entrance test.

Maybe she could turn things around if she spent less time on her hobbies, like ranked RTS and shooter games, and more on her studies. But it bores her to tears and she'll do anything to avoid being bored. That's why she's gung-ho about a Hero program, because as far as she's concerned the Hero life is all action all the time! And she trusts her quirk - too much - to get her out of even the worst scrapes.
[...]
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>>94710314

KK wants to spend her time going on adventures and having fun, which she is just barely experienced enough to know is not always the same thing. She is friendly and outgoing, with high energy and a can-do attitude. She turns whatever she can into something more fun and light-hearted, transforming even mind-numbing chores into games.

However, KK also has a poor verbal filter, and says what's on her mind, which often can be too blunt or ill-timed for conventional Japanese sensibilities. In the long tradition of excitable genki airheads everywhere, she won't even realize she's put her foot in her mouth until the dirty looks come her way.

Stats:
>Filthy Stinking Rich
A few years ago when KK learned about investing she began abusing her quirk to make rapid last-minute trades. Regardless of how appropriate it is to the situation, she'll go back in time and warn herself of sudden dips and rises that appear in her phone alerts. It's made her far richer than most teenagers and even than her own parents.
>Skills
Peak Condition (Reflexes), Investigation, Sleight of Hand
>Precognition
Target: Self only, by Touch, 10 minute future, Cooldown
High Precision, Alarm Function
Quirk Definement: Only knows of one possible future - the one she lived through.
>Versatile Quirk
>Replication
Target: Self only, by Touch, Solid quality, 1 copy only, Image speed, Short Duration

Note: 「Déjà Vu」 will automatically activate when Koroma dies or is in unresponsive crisis. In effect, she is unconsciously choosing from moment to moment NOT to time travel and it gets triggered when she mentally relaxes or can no longer avoid doing so. The time-clone body appears right in front of where Koroma was ten minutes ago, so she better figure out fast what caused it.

Also, due to the cooldown, she can't start a new loop while a loop is ongoing. However, she can loop into a loop that already occurred, as long as the start and end times are different.
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>>94710333
I really don't get how that Quirk is supposed to work.
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>>94710352
It's just time travel, which is obviously the easiest thing in the world to understand. The copy remembers ten minutes of the future and can tell the original about it or act on the information directly. Then after ten minutes in the past, the future copy is gone. They blink out when they reach their departure point again.
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>>94710352
Ignore the time travel shit, it's basically just "summons a clone with a ten minute precog vision of the future" that can work automatically.
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>>94710401
Sure, take all the romance out of it.
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>>94710406
Romance is for people who can explain their ideas properly. Best you can get is awkward crushes.
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>>Filthy Stinking Rich
>A few years ago when KK learned about investing she began abusing her quirk to make rapid last-minute trades. Regardless of how appropriate it is to the situation, she'll go back in time and warn herself of sudden dips and rises that appear in her phone alerts. It's made her far richer than most teenagers and even than her own parents.
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>>94710164
>Real Name
Reiji Kawano

>Hero Name
The Cyber Punk Hero, Red Hat

>Timeline
Just Another Story

>Location
Japan

>Career
Hero Student
Freshman
New Class 1-D

>Costume
Normal

>General Modifiers
Gadget: Quirk (Cyberdeck/Custom Hacking Tools)
Genius
Hacking
Public Relations
Shadow of Evil + Wealth (Blackmail/Debt)
Tinkering

>Quirk
Name - Computer
Type - Body Enhancement
Target - Self
Specs - Mind (Intelligence), Mind (Willpower)
Duration - Permanent
Method - Passive
Modifiers - Cosmetic Mutation (Cables), Quirk Compulsion (Technophilia), Quirk Definement (Overheat), Quirk Refinement (Digital), Quirk Refinement (Interface)

Some people are overly online, Reiji Kawano is permanently online. Whether streaming tech podcasts to his growing online audience, writing a rant on social media mid-conversation or moonlighting as a shadowy mercenary hacker for hire, the boy only remembers a handful of times where he wasn't wired into the internet - it was awful.

His Quirk, Computer, has modified his brain into a living biological supercomputer, with a perfect memory, posthuman mental focus and an ability to download, upload and process digital data via cables growing out of his body. This Quirk has come with an unhealthy obsession with technology and a tendency for his brain to literally overheat with overuse. While dramatically spiking his intelligence for 'hard logic,' such as mathematics and structural thinking, it has little-to-no effect on his ability to understand or apply abstract concepts.

Desperate for attention, obsessed with clout and emotionally immature, Reiji has leveraged near-peerless academic grades to muscle his way into the Shiketsu Hero Program, forgoing multiple recommendations for the Support Program out of hotheaded ego.

Unbeknownst to the faculty, Reiji's Hero status may already be compromised before it began, with certain less savoury debtees blackmailing the boy for the occasional quiet favour fitting to his skillset.
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>>94710441
>How dare someone have unfair information to guide their trades - without paying us a bribe!
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>>94710155
Now I can reply to the right damn CYOA this time!

>Name
Michelson Tyler
>Hero Name
The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat
>Timeline
Just Another Story
>Location
Asia
>Career
Pro Hero
>Hero Type
Enforcer
Teacher:
>Modifiers
Martial Arts (Unarmed)
Athletics
Stealth
Unique Style
Tactics
First Aid
Public Relations
>Quirk: Naked Mole Rat (15QP)
Life Mimicry
Species: Heterocephalus Glaber, The Naked Mole Rat
Permanent
Passive
Complete
Enhanced Mobility: Burrowing
Body Enhancement: Health
Quirk Refinement
>Quirk Description
Michelson is a 3.5ft Tall humanoid Naked Mole Rat, with all of the benefits and downsides that entails. For one, having a humanoid circulatory system with his body plan makes oxygen deprivation a joke, with him being able to sneak around in the most cramped and ill-ventilated places with ease. His incisors have been trained to chew through nearly anything, save several-inch thick metal plating and quirk-enhanced materials. He can also burrow just as easily as walking, though the potential infrastructural damage he can cause mostly just leads to him sneaking around more conventionally. The downsides? He’s a 3.5ft tall version of quite possibly the ugliest thing on earth. As well-groomed as he is, he’s still not exactly a handsome fella to say the very least. His eyes are also extremely sensitive to light, to the point where he has to wear almost pitch black contact lenses to not blind himself during the day.
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>>94710457
>Personality
Michelsson or Mick for anyone that he regularly talks to (which wasn’t much before this job) is quite down to earth in his demeanor as much as his stature and abilities. He likes to prove himself not through initial impression, but through his hard-earned knowledge and trained actions. He is initially quite blunt in his mannerisms as he’s mentally conditioned himself to not really care about the emotions of others due to the overwhelming experience of negative reception. Once (or if) the staff/students start actually giving him positive input for once he’ll soften up immediately.
>Chosen Subject: Economics
Obviously there’s the benefit of teaching young heroes how to file taxes and whatnot, but
due to the nature of his work, Michelson has a vast understanding of all the damage that can be caused to infrastructure, finances, and the community with but the simplest of actions. He wishes to impart this wisdom to his students, and due to his lack of need for much oxygen, it's gonna be in VERY long-winded lectures (his record is 7 straight minutes of speaking without taking a single breath). He also wishes to impart how serious damage to infrastructure can be for the opposing side as well, what to target to cause the most damage to a villain’s hideout or plans in a raid or other such situation.
>Writefag
Congratulations and Good Luck
https://rentry.org/h4xfatq5
If there’s any contradictions to established lore (or if you have any criticisms in general), please let me know.
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>>94710449
>An individual found to have violated Japanese insider trading rules is subject to imprisonment for not more than five years and a fine of not more than JPY5 million,
https://www.nishimura.com/sites/default/files/images/53360.pdf
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>>94710463
>or if you have any criticisms in general
Are you perhaps using light mode? Because that blue font is really hard on the eyes in dark mode.
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>>94710480
Rentry has a dark mode? Huh. I guess I'll change it then.
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>>94710441
>>94710467
It's not insider trading if the informant is outside the timestream. Checkmate, atheists.

>>94710449
Lump sum or percentage? Time is money.
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>>94710489
There is always the case for illegal Quirk use, and knowing the world, fucking with the pockets of the elites will net you a harsher punishment than standard Villanyism.
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>>94710418
The flavor matters. The time clone only knows what it experienced through its own senses and what it surmises about its experiences, which isn't implied by summoning a precog copy. I made a joke, but I think anon turned his brain off on what's a straight-forward effect.

>>94710496
Sounds like a plot hook. Nice!
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>>94710516
>One student has committed insider trading with themselves
>Another is getting blackmailed to do hacks for villains

1-D 2.0 starting strong for giving their teachers an anyeurism.
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>>94710516
Considering that she's on a Quirk Registry as a precog, any investment income is likely investigated fast enough that I doubt it's going to be a long arc.
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>>94710530
1-Delinquent living up to its name.
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>>94710544
I call 2-Deviants for the next class nickname.
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>>94710443
If you’re still looking for a fellow newcomer villain to be in debt to, you could be involved with Imamu and the Red Finger. Mochi is a nerdy kid turned quiet kid who drank the cult koolaid so he could be keeping an eye on hackerman at school which would give him an excuse to start showing up again.

It's likely he got involved through Mythopoesis, helping them hack systems and get building blueprints and city planning documents.
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>>94710333
>Also, due to the cooldown, she can't start a new loop while a loop is ongoing. However, she can loop into a loop that already occurred, as long as the start and end times are different.
I'm not sure if I get it, but to be safe, is this an attempt to bypass the 10 minute future time limit? Can she do something like send a clone backwards, that clone tells the other person what the future is, then that past self creates another clone and sends it backwards, and so on? Or is that blocked by that "can't start a new loop while a loop is ongoing"?
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>>94710536
Ah, but she's on the registry as a time looper. It will take someone with a brain to look at her and take a whole extra second to think about the implications, which couldn't be automated. So the arc will be at least a few minutes longer than you think!

>>94710558
No, that would be blocked. She can't go back more than ten minutes, period. What she can do is this:
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>>94708283
Mochi was a dump way back at the start of MHA so he doesn't have anything right now, which is why I reworked him into a villain when I came back.

The real issue with him was his Quirk wasn't very good for interesting fights, so he didn't make a good main build, and I didn't keep up well enough to do the school newspaper angle since I was more involved with other MPs.
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>>94710590
Alright, I feared more like a reverse of what's in your drawing. So like each attempt being 10 minutes, attempt 3 moves to the start, spills tea to the version from attempt 2 that jumps a bit earlier, spills to the version from attempt 1, and so on.
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>>94710463
>even an even
>of of the the cars
>spresentation
>call me know
>on sight
>A address
Anyway, I actually like all the cloak and dagger stuff and the ending was cute. There's a bit of an Incredibles vibe to it all, but the first one that was still good.
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>>94710632
I'll fix the grammar, and thx for the compliments
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>>94710553
Makes sense to me, I don't have many specifics in mind and left it vague enough to become essentially anyone, though there's some implication that whoever they got involved with helped them out with the money they needed to scrounge up their gear and possibly pull some strings to get them into Shiketsu, after that it's all shadowy favours and constant goalpost moving to keep him as an asset.

If it works with Mochi and helps with the Red Finger plot, I don't see why not. It'll probably be great for drama once the students have to deal with them as well.
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>>94710164
>all those writefags
Was everyone trying to finish before the new year?
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>>94710463
Huh. That was actually a really nice, heart-warming scene. I like it. Poor bastard's going for an emotional roller coaster when he realizes exactly why the school is short on staff though... Something about there never being free meals in this world.
I guess on the up side, he's probably not going to be worried about having his quirk stolen.
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>>94710707
Stand users attract each other.
Writefags attract writefags.
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>>94710706
>possibly pull some strings to get them into Shiketsu
Imamu has a lot of foreign interests invested in Japan, and political sway from the philanthropic resources has has to offer for helping the victims and fixing up all the collateral property damage (some of which he helped instigate). So he very well could have pulled some strings to get Reiji into Shiketsu.

It would make him more invested in making sure Reiji doesn't get caught, too, since it could implicate his public persona somewhat. So Reiji would be in a position to beg more favors if he's in a tight spot.
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>>94710805
>So he very well could have pulled some strings to get Reiji into Shiketsu.
I suspect Majestic paying off debts for some black land punani.
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>>94710164
Himeko anon, about how many years ago did she retire? Do you want the injury from a confrontation with Red Eyes Oni to be before retirement, causing it, or ironically being what brings her out of retirement? I'm working on their fight now.
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uhhh... wheres Overlord?
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>>94710953
I have raped, killed, skinned, boiled, hammered, burned and eaten all Overlord anons to ever tread this place.
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>>94710953
Being posted by one anon for now, it isn't in the usual threadslavr rotation.
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>Overlord MP Rerun
Electric Bogaloo Edition

>The CYOA (Rentry Version)
https://rentry.org/OverlordCYOAv4
>The CYOA (Pastebin Version)
https://pastebin.com/aighYkq4
>Gacha Roller:
https://replit.com/@FussyBogusSemiC/Overlord-Gacha-Roller#main.py
>Skill Calculator:
https://replit.com/@FussyBogusSemiC/Overlord-Skill-Calculator#main.py

New Prompt: All players start as new world inhabitants at level 30 with 75 Attribute Points.

>Builds
>Rex Ovis, Ragemaxxer
https://pastebin.com/mmx6sZWy
>>94703800

>Date Priscilla, Totally not Zelda
https://rentry.co/DatePriscilla
>>94703833

>Lady Alicia of Saltkeep, *Teleports behind you*
>>94705683

>Sahaz L’Argent, Cloaca is cloaca
>>94706555

>Lorg "The Bloodletter", Ah sweet man-made horrors beyond human comprehension.
https://rentry.org/LorgTheBloodletter
>>94710116
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>>94710164
Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose
>Timeline: Just another story
>Japan
>Student
>Sophomore
>Student Modifiers
Held back
>Costume
Mundane
>Perks
Genius (Specifically Parabiology, the study of quirks, their mechanics and biological adaptations and phenomena related to them)
Medicine
First Aid
Disability
Sharpshooting x4
>Quirk
>Quirk Template
Projection
-Broad Matter (Drug-like substances)
-Small
-Full body
-Consumption
-Broad
-Esoteric
-Knowledge Limit
-Quirk Refinement x2

Quirk: Drugs
Type: Emitter
Hiro can produce all manner of drugs, both in the form of liquids or gas. He can customize their effects, from mundane ones to stuff of mad science.

The attack left him crippled—missing most of the fingers on one hand, with severe damage to his organs, and needing crutches to move. But none of that stopped him. Hiro performed surgery on himself and implanted a synthetic replica of his own quirk. It’s not perfect, but it works, and it’s proof of how far he’s willing to go to bounce back. Now, Hiro seems more determined than ever. He’s still struggling physically, but mentally, he’s sharper and more focused than before.

There, updated. Hiro, or at least what's left of him, has managed to reach second grade.
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>>94710953
Please forgive me for my tardiness.

>>94710972
For such blashemy against the OverGODS I sentence (you) to eternity on the happy farm

>>94710982
yeah, I am the last line of defense between this MP and oblivion, but I shall be your faithful threadslave for the duration of this rerun
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>>94710884
She retired long enough ago that I'm not sure Red Eyes Oni was born yet (50+ years ago). Odds are she'd fallen into obscurity by the time he was an active villain. My original idea is that she came out to teach because she got a clear answer on how much time she has left to live, and I think we could work that in here though.

Not sure what you're cooking or how far along you are, but assuming you're still planning things out, it could be something like:
>Himeko and Takako were out of the house together
>Red Eyes Oni attacked (Maybe the two stumbled into an ongoing crime, or maybe they were his targets- they are part of a big influential clan that specializes in metallurgy. Lots of potential for motivation there.) He could either recognize Himeko or not- up to you. If your goal is to build him up as much as you can, having him not recognize her could help since it makes Himeko's retaliation unexpected, and therefore more believable that a powerful villain would be repelled by her.
>Himeko confronts him and gets the partial petrification, but also wards him off (a living avalanche of metal swarming a guy tends to have that effect).
>Her injuries combined with her old age mean she's not far from death, so she decides to go be a teacher with her remaining time.
>Takako doesn't know exactly how bad her granny's injuries are, but she's furious and indignant that her grandma was the one doing the protecting, even if logically she understands why.

That way it really sets up the revenge story for Takako. If you like that idea, you'd have some wiggle room for when exactly it happens. Could be a couple weeks ago. Could be a several years ago and it just took this long for Himeko to get that teaching degree / get the clearance to leave retirement. Or anything in between.

Also wouldn't hurt to poke Takako anon and see what they think of this plotline.
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>>94710463
a very nice read anon, i liked it a lot
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>>94711099
Sounds like it would make for a good scenario. Being a few years ago also means she'd have had time to recover, and explain why she would keep Takako from getting involved instead of using it as a teaching moment (she would not have had a provisional loicense at the time). Red Eyes would have some Quirkless/effectively Quirkless goons with him, the sort of people with really lame powers like double jointed arms that he hires as muscle.

That would also be around when Red Eyes Oni would have just started to build up his presence, creating or funding problems that would allow him to come in later as Imamu offering solutions. He'd have been arrogant off the high of conquest, and getting his ass handed to him in a pyrrhic victory on Himeko's part would have been a check towards building his more deliberate and targeted approach now.

If that all sounds like a suitable origin for Takako anon to their Shadow of Evil, I'm all for it.
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>>94711200
Sounds good then. All that leaves is Takako anon's opinion and if they have anything they'd liked added to the scenario for their own uses.

I'll try to give them a (You) for visibility >>94699401
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>>94711099
>>94711200
Takako anon here, that all sounds good to me.
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I'm trying to work on the MHA update, but I'm confused about how the exactly it's supposed to work. I'd be thankful if someone can help clear it up for me.
The tendencies I noticed:
-We use the DLC (but we don't have to?)
-We use the Sophomore type (so 1 less QP? Or do we just call it that, but take the Freshmen budget and the year difference is covered by that +2XP?)
-We take the License, but we don't take Ahead of the Curve (I guess it settled back after earning that licence in the first year) nor the Internship (I guess the last round of Internships is over, so they technically aren't interns at the start of the second year)
-We get +2XP to try to budget all the significant upgrades. The only freebies are some minor overall upgrades and the skills you did have scaling slightly better (or not even that?).
Are the above assumptions correct? Have I forgotten anything?

For Hifumi specifically, some things I'm stuck on in theory and when trying to get the budget to work (it's hard given that my last writefag was a training arc and getting new gadgets...):
-Unique Style is now only 1XP. I wouldn't want to nerf Hifumi's overall Martial Art level, and ending up with 1 XP leftover would suck. Would taking it isntead as another copy of Martial Arts for 2XP work to show an upgraded Unique Style if the numbers ended up like that?
-Gadgets. Weapon upgrades were minor, so they probably can still fall under "Gadget: Weapon". That leaves the wingsuit, scanners and communicators. Would it be alright if I mashed it all under one Gadget:Quirk or Transportation? Each of them is rather minor, and taking multiple would eviscerate my budget.
-The conflict with Tomi would qualify for the Shadow of Evil, right?
-For the Quirk Refinements and Definements, previously Teleport was strongly underpriced, so I just dumped a lot of points in it and then fluffed it however I wanted, now I'm a bit more conflicted, especially looking at >>94708579. Any ideas how I should go about mine?
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>>94710116
Our one and only true caster and by god it's a miracle, he's a healer. I don't think I can remember a single one of those in any run as most people run dps support at best if they go down that route. He's even further of an exception however as he's learned that healing is not as rewarding as the hurting. Unfortunately he's also our squishiest build so far, just barely behind Sahaz, but is capable of keeping it topped off with his magic and unique ability as long as conditions are met.

He's a bit of a wildcard. Currently I don't believe he could beat Rex or Date at the moment due to their investments in martial classes as Casters tend to get the short end of the stick early and start steamrolling when they can get their build fully locked in. A fight between Sahaz and Lorg is a toss up. Equal WIS which makes a ranged fight on equal grounds, as even though Sahaz has ranged proficiencies, Lorg has far superior casting.

Put him in a swamp and I think Lorg could beat Sahaz and Date pretty easily. Both don't have the vitality to outlast the tick (or leech in this case) damage, as I don't think they could do enough damage without getting close to Lorg's range, and he can heal up any glancing strikes even if they can. Maybe if Date uses their silence and maximum throwing range but it'd be difficult. Still couldn't beat Rex however, Barb is just the quintessential early game stomp martial path.

Side note, Lorg definitely has the most clear potential out of any build right now. Rex is strong and will always be strong but in the end he'll always be a melee meatwall, Date is all in on talismans, Sahaz is a mix of martial and caster, so it's hard to say right now. Lorg's got their build already locked in with a CON caster which is incredible for someone who can choose to cast with Vitality as Mana is a bitch to replenish, and can choose basically any specialization to capitalize on their caster ability. Pretty scary, definitely future overlord potential.
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>>94711679
What makes you conflicted about the other teleport ability, anon?
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>>94711706
I feel like I should apologize for the glazing, I got pretty stoked seeing a very nice caster. Half humans getting a lot of use so far, never even thought about using it to nab Sorcerer that easily but I guess that's because I looked down on humans too easily.
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>>94710164
>Broken Words (Karaburan, Rosethorn, Desolator):
https://rentry.org/dfthyakc

Possibly non-canon. This is partially proof of life and mostly just trying to write again now that I'm able. Apologies if I'm rough. I noticed a lot of dropped words when editing, so if I missed any rest assured it was even worse this afternoon.

I realize the Karaburan and Desolator angle has had absolutely no buildup or hint in the past, so I gave it its own writefag. I did this because I have a role in mind for the bigger writefag I'm working on that was intended for Rosethorn. However, it just...does not work with her. Still, I wanted to salvage what I could of the scenes and remembered we had a retired heroine for a principal whose personality fits the role and whose backstory is open enough I could slot in a youthful indiscretion. Hopefully Jupiter doesn't mind, but if he does it's not a project killer to remove their history.

This writefag is a direct continuation of 'If Only He Could Walk Away' for the new comers.
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>>94711679
>-We use the DLC (but we don't have to?)
Sounds right. I think you're free to use whichever you want.
>-We use the Sophomore type
I personally used the Sophomore type because I couldn't find a good way to spend that last QP. Originally I was going to keep the freshman budget. Either way we can probably list it as Sophomore.
>-We take the License, but we don't take Ahead of the Curve
I took License simply because it's free. Internships, etc. I think fall under writefag benefits that don't need to be expressly stated.
>-We get +2XP to try to budget all the significant upgrades.
Really I think it comes down to picking the thing you want to show off the most and devoting those new points to it. Basically I'm saying it's fairly freeform and you're not required to fit everything into the build. It's a showcase to show what you think is the most important changes.

Also yeah, I'd call Tomi a valid Shadow of Evil.
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>>94710164
Happy New Years and first day of 2025, mcyoag! Just got home and found time to finish this to commemorate our first year, and our class of misfits and weirdos. I'm strangely proud of how far we've come. Even in the slow times when all hope seemed lost -- (You) kept us going. So thanks for all the chats, stories and sillyness, anon.

We'll always be Class 1-D. And I'll never forget you guys.

Now, onwards to MHA Season 3! I'll be in the writing / reading cave trying to catch up to all your kino.
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>>94711798
based based based
amazing!
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>>94711798
so much soul in one post… anons I’m not going to make it… I can never compare
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>>94711679
And I'm tempted to get rid of Somatic Component. It gives only 1QP so that's really little for how massive of a nerf I made it. Or maybe at least refluffing it to not cause an auto return on opening the eyes. Theoretically, I laid a groundwork for that with Trigger, even though I planned for it to be for something different. It'd be a big buff, so probably dormant until I'd writefag about it (maybe as an enhancement from Hiro, or part of that proposed conflict with the Legion).
Speaking of, I never actually had the Connection and Location Limit extras because I wasn't sure how precise they're supposed to be, and it was just part of the broad refinement/fluff package.
But dunno, maybe it's just negative sovl whispered in my ear by the devil of powergaming. Anon did call me one.


>>94711730
Stuff like no telefragging, partial teleports of others, pushback from teleport into solids, and conservation of momentum and such seemed more like the default than a Definement worthy. Basically the only thing I didn't have by default from that list was no altering the direction. Long ago, when I linked the update ideas, the ability to change the position of the body at extra cost was the most likely Refinement option.
So, comparing what anon picked as "the default" and what I had in mind seems very far apart, and I don't know what qualifies as Refinement/Definement at this point.

>>94711772
>writefag benefits
That's part of what I'm confused about. Are those a thing or are they supposed to be expressed by that 2xp? I've seen conflicted voices.
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>>94711798
I was just wondering where you were, Inigo anon, kino stuff as always!
Poor Rosethorn managing this crew, and holy hell, is Kaylee tall!
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>>94711798
So. Extremely. Based.
But can we have a version of the photo with names? I'm not sure who's who at times.
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>>94711798
Awesome work anon.
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>>94711798
Woooo! Damn good stuff anon
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>>94711798
With the photo in higher resolution than in the preview, I'd like to amend my Hivemind Guessing answer. I think it's (from the left): Max, Faith, Hailey, Eddie, Minnie. I'm most unsure about Max and Eddie.
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>>94711767
Kino such as this!
>partially proof of life
Glad to have ya back, buddy! And fantastic work as always! The dialogue between Anzu and Rosethorn flowed great, and I'm always down to know more about her backstory. All we had previously was her rivalry with Midas, right?

I had some plans with the red light and the Daiichi and will course correct accordingly. Basically, Three-Sixty and Turncoat Agency tries to use Chris to start a war between the pro heroes and syndicate underworld. I'm trying to rush the internship plot, so hopefully I don't step over the Saraki plot too much.

I was wondering if you'll be using Smokin' Sexy? I got the hero raid on Area 91, and I'm guessing Chris would be pre-occupied, but I have the rest of the interns there too.



>we always have the Inigo option, Absolute worst-case scenario
You mean best-case scenario!

Hyped for Grandma vs. Grandpa! Thanks for cooking anon, and thanks for the inspiration!
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>>94711811
Honestly, I could have made stronger “de-finements” for my swapping ability but teleportation quirk’s limits was so poorly defined in the CYOA (probably because of how many doors an ability to teleport opens) that I just used my de-fine ments to further explain my ability. I’ll probably make more overt nerfs or just axe my definements all together as I don’t really need the QP regardless.
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>>94711859
>All we had previously was her rivalry with Midas, right?
Not with the UA mouse?
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>>94711767
Time to read and enjoy...

>>94711798
Oooh! I think I remember seeing a smaller fragment of this earlier. Seeing the whole class like that's great. Here's to another year of MHA anon.

MHA's been pretty lively as of late. Been enjoying it?

>>94711811
Learning how to not auto-teleport back could be a nice way of showing progress with his quirk. If it helps, I silently removed partial absorption from my build, so you wouldn't be the only person to lose a drawback in your quirk.

Anyway, I don't think expecting everyone to fully express their progress with 2 xp is realistic. It's a nice bonus, but you don't need to beat yourself over the head trying to cram a year of character development into two points worth of benefits. I'm a firm believer that it's a thing.
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>>94711865
Ah yeah that too! But have you ever seen Midas and the UA mouse in the same room together?
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>>94711859
Glad you liked it!
>All we had previously was her rivalry with Midas, right?
I think it was established Midas took her arm. There was that and the UA rat.
>spoiler
You should be fine there, I had planned to leave the war mostly in your hands and feel free to use Saraki if you need to I'll just mess with the timeline.
>Smokin'
Not extensively, I think he can be there.
>best case
Desolator sighs in your direction

>Thanks for cooking anon, and thanks for the inspiration!
I look forward to it!
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>>94711798
"Cool hat"
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>>94711857
>Max, Faith, Hailey, Eddie, Minnie
Correct. Although now I'm not sure about Max and Eddie either cause these girls are always changing their hairstyles. Eddie would probably have short hair in the 2-D photo. I assume they took the first year photo right before the graduation ceremony for the seniors.

>>94711866
See ya in Class-2D anon! I dunno how I feel about losing classmates to 2-E and having the main class seperate. It feels bittersweet, but it is realistic. At least their friends and buddies will still be around for another 2 years. I'm sure Ashleigh's still part of the Wallflowers, and Imai would still jam with Inigo.
>Been enjoying it?
Absolutely, but I'm gonna need a seperate word document to keep tabs of all the new plots / builds. I do have an idea for a 1-D freshman too. I see you've taken up teaching, anon. Might make a custodian instead to help the staff out.
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>>94711811
Speaking of Extras and Refinements, I'm not imagining taking that Connection/Location/Somatic extras and then slapping a Refinement on it to decrease their difficulty (the inherited part from his mother's Quirk where it gives him extra detailed mental images, and it helps with that Connection/Location part (but doesn't entirely skip it, just that it works like it did previously) and is triggered by that Somatic element. A retarded idea or not?
>>94711864
At this point, I'm just super confused about what the baseline is. It's getting late for me, and I've been having too little sleep lately. I thought I'd sort of "cast the net" before going to bed to try to get opinions from anons about what a good scale would be so I can work on it another day.
>>94711866
And added Genius(Swordsmanship). Previously Chihiro and Hifumi in a way had the same amount of Martial Arts skills (8xp), just with Chihiro being pure sword and Hifumi being split between kendo, streetfighting and the unique style. Now he'll fall far behind :( Getting it to match would require some really weird accounting and getting the gadgets under the writefag tax, and even then the Unique style is now an odd number :/
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>>94711979
Eddie with short hair? Not Max? When did she cut it? Have I missed it or is my memory just failing me? I might be projecting the irl faceclaims. Eddie's and Minnie's are the only ones I don't remember with short hair. Max's had it multiple time, and it has been mentioned here before. Recently, Faith's and Hailey's also had short hair for a photoshoot.
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>>94711767
Fuck. Didn't expect that as a plot thread. It's pure cinema and I actively want more though.

>>94711979
See ya in 2-D~ And yeah, I'm sure the class's bonds will persist. For now we'll have to build up new bonds with new classmates (and new kouhais).

Whether it's a new freshman or new staff, I'm interested either way. What kinda ideas are you kicking around?

>>94712019
...Yeah, ngl, I hesitated on adding that Genius bit for that exact reason. I like the dynamic with them both being the class sword nerds. I was just really at a loss on how to spend those points. I didn't expect the issue of unique style though...

Also sweet dreams anon, whether you're turning in now, already turned in, or turning in soon.
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Where does most MHA stuff take place/where is Shiketsu? I've seen Kyoto mentioned
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>>94711679
Bro, last time I looked I couldn't even make original Bobby with the new version's QP nerf, so I'd probably have to do some definement fuckery to make it possible kek. Maybe if I kept the +1 QP from Freshman it would be possible, idk. I think he would have a lot more XP than before, but being so QP heavy makes updating him tricky. I may just end up using the old version and slapping on Tactics or an extra stack or Martial Arts. A decision for tomorrow, probably.

I don't think I'll be paying too much attention to the mechanics of anons' build updates outside of what the picks say about the characters' personalities/themes. The new version just affects builds too differently, not to mention stuff like awakenings and new items.
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>>94711798
This is sick, but I I'm only about 80% confident on who everyone is without their hair colors. Nice job, though.
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>>94711909
>I had planned to leave the war mostly in your hands

Works for me. Most of it is kept in the background / criminal underworld until the explosive finale. Inigo does tell Chris about the Red Light though over the phone. Would he act shocked or scared? At least he already has back-up in the form of Kaylee, who's also in Osaka.

>Not extensively, I think he can be there.
At most he'll be scratched up with a few injuries.
>Desolator sighs in your direction
Sam going through all this trouble to deal with Inigo, just for that 2nd paycheck is amazing.

>>94712034
I may have the two confused. I meant Max. I'm fully projecting the faceclaims here.
>Faith's and Hailey's also had short hair
This is new to me, though I only look up the Koreans when I need something for scene they're in. That said, Inigo's fine with short hair dominating the hairstyles of the girls for the 2nd year. Now if he could only get them to wear glasses.

>>94712101
>What kinda ideas are you kicking around?
Right now I'm just hopin' to finish some of my backlog, then maybe a Dorm Party. Could be fun to haze the freshies too. Or a patrol with a sophomore babysitting two of their kouhai?

It's been established that we only have a handful of seniors now, right? Reminds me of the schools in rural areas in JP with only 1-2 kids left. We have like Nene, Stink Rat, and maybe four others. With all the villains attacks, could we expect a smaller freshman class too? I think the first few months of the school year would be Shiketsu trying to repair its reputation and gain back the trust of the public, and a lot of that responsibility would be on the shoulders of 2-D. Maybe through special outreach missions.
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>>94710164
Ok, since Michelson was put into Shiketsu by the Hero Association/Government. Who else was? I vaguely recall there being another teacher but I don't remember
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>>94712101
Glad you liked it!
>>94712173
>spoiler
Shocked is closer. He's not liking how often the red flags around Saraki keep stacking up.
>At most he'll be scratched up with a few injuries.
Good deal.
>Sam going through all this trouble to deal with Inigo, just for that 2nd paycheck is amazing.
It's hard being a mercenary.
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>>94711767
Can't wait to read this in a month.
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>>94710333
If something kills her time clone before the 10 minutes are up, is that loop considered finished or ongoing?
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>>94712101
She deserves it for literally living in a dojo. She was always the better sword user due to her pure focus on it, and when it comes what's commonly thought of as swordsmanship, her Quirk also translated better into it.
If gadgets were to go under the writefag tax (I'm still not sure if that's the accepted option), and I took Martial Arts instead of Unique Style for what was previously under the latter, then I theoretically could even it out to that 12XP in martial art skills. I don't think Genius would work that well for Hifumi, but I could stack different Martial Arts styles to represent different Quirk variants ("the challenger style" he had previously for one + "the waterfall style" for the other). Theoretically, maybe Peak Condition, but it doesn't have the same vibe. Long term, Tactics would be more useful, but I don't think he earned that yet, and even longer term the Hero Trivia.

Anyway, goodnight.
>>94712149
There were those proposals by Jupiter back when the DLC dropped, that doesn't work? Also, some Quirk options let you pay with XP, he doesn't have any of those?
And yeah, Awakenings (or Awakening singular, since we only had one) and new Gadgets feel the most difficult to import. They are just darn expensive.
>>94712173
>>Faith's and Hailey's also had short hair
>This is new to me
www.instagram.com/jeanzforfree/p/DD9Z3SKyeVG/
https://www.instagram.com/jeanzforfree/p/DD9hBMEyjYl/

>Now if he could only get them to wear glasses.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I8QdQxABg3w
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33mO3jKYALE

>>94712146
See the map in the OP. IRL, it's a parking lot/cemetery next to Kyoto Women's University (pic related), but we aren't super precise with it. In my first writefag, before the map was made, I had a mention that there was a pretty good view on Kiyomizu from one of the school building's rooftops, which would be difficult given it's current placement.
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>>94712349
Now it is explained why Shiketsu is so cursed. It is built on top of a Cemetery!!! I bet they even left the bodies in it!
If you understand this reference, you are old.
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>>94711767
happy to read your stuff again anon it was pretty good
btw did you have anything in mind for what Desolator did to get rid of Zombie after turning him into swiss cheese and stealing his shoes?
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>>94712420
I don't. It only makes me think of the trope of stuff built on top of old Indian burial grounds but nothing specific. That means that I'm not that old yet, right? Strictly logically speaking it doesn't, but let me pretend it does.
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>>94711752
Brown-nosing to the healer before a raid is a long standing MMORPG tradition.
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>>94712307
Ongoing. I honestly don't know what happens if she's killed while locked in cooldown. The body sits around until the moment it's over, and past KK sees two corpses? Increase by the number of failed loops. Gotta be extra alarming to see multiple of your own dead body. At least when she dies an unavoidable death someday the loop is self-severing, since she'll always have a corpse return at the same moment a time clone poofs. A morbid but valid train of thought, cool question.

Wait is this a Sandatsu red flag
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>>94712580
Have you heard the story of Biki?
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>>94712597
The Grappler? Yeah.
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>>94711798
Holy shit. This kicks major ass. There's so many great details and everyone gets some personality. My favorite of the many sight gags is the Hivemind being so extremely similar, but Sen always hits like a brick in a crowd, too. Damn impressive and makes me nostalgic. I'm going to color this for fun since it's all clean outlines like in a coloring book.

And you know I mean it because 4chan made me sit through the 15 minute timer three times and I still sent this message.

>Top row, left to right:
Inigo, Bobby, Hifumi (taller than I thought you were), Kaylee, Sen, Nijimura (why so dour, bud?)(wait, is that Jugo? Aren't you pretending to be dead?), Orochi, Yui
>Middle row, left to right:
Soujyuuro, Chris, Sally, Hoge, Hiro, Takara, Sora
>Bottom row, left to right:
Noah, Ashleigh, Chihiro, Minnie (gray eyes and the most proper one), Hailey (lighter eyes and the most expensive haircut), Edie (the leftover one), Faith (the sweet one), Max (most glare and straight hair), Ian

How'd I do, coach?
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>>94712614
Biki the nice, diligent girl whose Quirk was making copies of herself. She worked for Endless Horizons.
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>>94712655
Didn't she get saved by a benign psychopath that made a stupid deal
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>>94712638
You got the Koreans mixed up >>94711979
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>>94712662
I don't remember. Maybe. Some Bikis at least did die.
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>>94712638
>Hifumi (taller than I thought you were)
True. Inigo was supposed to be taller than him after he had his growth spurt right?
And I knew Chris was supposed to put on some mass, but I didn't expect him to be that big. The lad seems as broad in the shoulders as Jugo if not broader.
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>>94712173
>Good. We should get all the girls to make the food, just so the boys are left wondering what meal was made by who while the girls quietly watch them. I'm sure the guys' stress levels will be perfectly fine.

Anyway, getting some interaction for the freshman sounds good. I believe you're right about the senior class being smaller in number. If we only get so many builds, we could go with the plotline that villain attacks resulted in fewer applicants. Same with special outreach missions. Sounds like a great way to drum up interaction with the adult builds without internships 2.0 or rampant vigilantism.

>>94712182
This maybe? >>94704250

>>94712349
>She was always the purist of the two, but that's what made the dynamic fun. Orthdoxy VS Heterodoxy kinda thing.
Anyway, take your time anon. If all else fails, I guess you can look at it this way. If a newfriend looks at your build to use it for something, what are the things about him that you'd most want them to get right? We can't always expect perfect accuracy in other people's works, so think of the update as a way to show those kinds of newfriends what's the most important aspects of the build.

For example, I personally think gadgets are less important because you can always find excuses why a character didn't have their gadget that day- maybe it's in repairs. So if a newfriend forgets about them it's easy to sweep under the rug as opposed to skill or knowledge.

But that's just me. If you're deciding between gadgets VS, say, the challenger style & waterfall style, would you feel more fulfilled if someone remembered the former while forgetting the latter or vice versa?
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>>94712724
I think I phrased that incorrectly, I'm writing an intro for Michelson and I want to know who else has been put into Shiketsu by the Hero Association and not been hired of their own accord
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>>94712182
There was that NPC dude with an antenna for the head but I don't remember his name, and Ian is a glowie student.
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>>94712751
Coolio, so its not so common of an occurance that Kraburan or the other staff would be used to it/expecting it
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>>94712655
Ryona Hiroshima...
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Build update for Sahaz
And a rentry https://rentry.org/7u8h27bi

Race: Demi-human (Birdman, Songbird)

Resist Sonic 50%, Weak Cold/Electric 25%
Phys Resist 11.5%, Supernatural Resist 4%
ML +25, CL+10, V +31
Stamina: 21, Mana: 30
Ranged Weaponry Proficiency: 42
Spiritual Spellcasting (Cha) Proficiency: 20
Physical Action Commands: 5/12
Caster Spell List: 12/30

Ability Scores:

Str 15, Dex 13, Con 10
Int 10, Wis 7 (x2), Cha 20

Class: Hex Maniac (10), Hunter (5), Zephyr (5)

Hex Maniac:
Have Spiritual Spellcasting (CHA)
Can detect and identify all supernatural buffs and debuffs on a target by taking a supernatural action
Can channel mana into spells that inflict negative status effects to increase the duration, damage, effect, or number of Targets, among other options
Hunter:
Know how to use Ranged Weaponry (notably Bows, Crossbows, and Firearms)
Know how to Sneak attack to deal increased damage to Targets who have not Detected them
Zephyr:
Take no falling damage

Skills:
Physical

Ki Control: 18+12 (30)
Athletics: 10+10 (20)
Flight: 21+24 (45)
Swim: 15+15 (30)
Stealth: 20+5 (25)

Mental

Mana Control: 17+13 (30)
Insight: 18+7 (25)
Perception: 22+3 (25)
Survival: 18+7 (25)
Leadership: 40+10 (50)
Knowledge (Arcana): 14+1 (15)
Performance (Singing): 30+13 (43)
Spellcraft: 5 (Soft Capped)

His singing sounds like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6WlI24rv__g [Embed]

Item 1: Water Heater

Item 2: Instant Messenger (Buffed and Reflavored)
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>>94712800
Changelog?
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>>94712814
Smaller Cloaca in exchange for buffing the instant messenger
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>>94712751
Oh, are you talking about the dude with antennae all over his helmet? Hold on, that's in Sickly Light of a New Dawn. I'll pull it up.

>Guarding with [Majestic] but on the opposite end of the gate was a thin, broad-shouldered man in a dark purple super-suit with black boots and gloves. He had a full helmet on, which looked more like a bubble space helmet of smoked glass from some ancient sci-fi movie than anything functional. It had brass radio antennae affixed to it, of different lengths and terminal shapes.

>"Who's that supposed to be," asked Sally suspiciously.

>Hoge guessed, equally suspicious, "One of the new pros to patrol the grounds?"

>Chris filled them in. "It's Broadband. A psionic for EM waves. Can send and receive radio, microwave, radar, that kind of stuff."

There's a few other mentions of new staff but nothing as specified.
>a third man with lean, corded muscle and the long ears of a hare patted down the youth
>strangers across the sprawling campus,

Unrelated, but I still like the stuff with Karaburan at the start of this one. I should read the new Desolator piece to see how he handled her.
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>>94712866
>Smaller Cloaca
nice and tight
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>>94712872
Yeah, that's him.
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>>94712866
>mfw this is a sentence someone on /cyoar/ unironically typed at one point
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>>94712761
nta, but on the flip side, we did have a couple staff member turncoats working with villains. Inigo smoothed things over, but Karaburan could still be on the look out for those. It's not what Michelson is, but he could be mistaken for one if he's not careful.
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>>94712450
Glad you liked it!
IIRC Desolator severed his spine with one of his bullets so he was immobile at the time.
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>>94712814
Changed the partial class abilities taken following the thing other anon posted last thread, and added some more personality details and martial action/spell list to the rentry.
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>>94712918
The structure in my writefag is that the Hero Association informed them about a new teacher, but that they didn't tell them who he was. Though this is mostly for comedy/tension and can be taken out if it isn't received well when the writefag is done
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>>94712252
... Okay, I'll bite, why in a month?
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>>94712881
Made to be colonized by big human cock
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>>94712963
Sorry but all humans are jobbers made to be conquested actually. It's why we only got half breed humans in this run, they are offspring of the victims.
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>>94711767
Painful ending, but in a great way. She's going to explode when she finds out he's not a hot old man but a hot young man again, while her time kept moving forward. He must have known her before all the injuries, too. Just devastating blow after blow on the Principal.

I enjoyed the peek at the other side of the curtain, too. Christopher might be smart, but he's still just a kid. None of them are as slick as they think.
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>>94712920
yea poor guy, his quirk could very well become a curse. But I meant like, did he just leave him there? It's just cause i gotta plan how sandatsu gets his hands on him
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>>94712974
Made to colonize big human cock
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>>94711087
Strange question, can hybrid humans take race classes? They can "count as either race" so that makes me think they could but I am not sure what the general consensus is.
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>>94713111
Yes.
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>>94713111
I'm leaning no personally. I think that wording is just for stuff like magical effects that select targets based on race.
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>>94713111
I vote no personally. It'd make investing into Heteromorphs pretty bad otherwise if you could get the advanced abilities so easily as a lot of them have mid abilities at first.
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>>94713006
Glad you liked it!
>She's going to explode when she finds out he's not a hot old man but a hot young man again, while her time kept moving forward. He must have known her before all the injuries, too. Just devastating blow after blow on the Principal.
Don't worry, she gets an ego boost...
>None of them are as slick as they think.
Kids have a talent for thinking they got it figured out, it's true.
>>94713026
Left him. Probably got picked up by the cops afterwards, up to you if he got healed or not.
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>>94711767
Its cute how Rosethorn is all proper and business with the students but when its just her and one of her old school related people shes so much more chill and back to her old self.
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>>94713139
>ego boost
Bait used to be believable
WAIT, IS THAT THE LEGENDARY HERO KARABURAN?
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>>94713179
It's the gap moe.
>>94713192
>Bait used to be believable
That is a damn dirty lie.
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>>94713111
>Half-Bloods must choose another Race to derive their Bloodline from. Can be considered either Race.
RAW, yes.
RAI, maybe.
>Advanced Racial Classes
>Can skip if not a Heteromorph
What constitutes as qualifying as a Heteromorph, and why does it say can? An Angel Half-Blood would be a Humanoid, but does counting as an Angel make them a Heteromorph? And what about the "can" part? Does that mean that its just a suggestion, without any mechanical affect?
Either way, I'm leaning on just taking the RAW meaning at face value.
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>>94711772
I kept mine as previous point spread, but you could do either depending what fits better.
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>>94711798
It looks good but I think some color would help since I cant tell most of the girls apart.

Or maybe atleast a chart of which person is which student
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>>94711817
She loves her work, but does get enough personal time to keep her Influencer career going strong.

Seeing all the good thats being done because of her - either in the form of students who became pro heroes, or just fans who are submitting good deeds for senpai to notice them on social media. That's what makes it all worth it.

She also is wealthy enough not to worry unlike a lot of people. She has a penthouse and everything according to the panty theft writefag - even if its not listed in the locations image.
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>>94713318
It's really only spherethirst's builds, though. Color wouldn't help any there. Kaylee's huge, Orochi's monstrous, Yui's thicc as hell, Sally has a distinctive hairstyle, Hoge has glasses, Tame has face circuits, Ashleigh has the weird bangs and cross pupils, Chihiro's the littlest and has chin-length hair, and Rosethorn is the hottie without a hat on. Then there's the five mostly interchangeable stacies but that was always their joke.
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>>94713340
New drawing ddddropped! Looks good, dude. I like the way you render hair. Are you still doing these with the wrong hand?
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>>94713372
nta, but that's an old drawing.
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>>94713372
I think this is from his second batch of drawings, not a new one.
And this is not Sandy anon but Rosethorn anon.
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>>94713385
Ah, new to me then. Sandanon's in here somewhere so he'll still get the compliment.
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>>94713420
I make sure to save every drawfag I get just incase they get lost to time
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>>94711087
I just realized I misunderstood how the leaf thing worked, sword and SAC = 1 item

Name: Lady Alicia of Saltkeep
CL: 0
ML: 60
V: 64
Stamina: 100
Resistances: L (+50), D (-50)
STR: 23x3
DEX: 30x2
CON: 16
INT: 10
WIS: 10
CHA: 10

Race: Half-Nephilim
Classes: Samurai 15, Blade Dancer 10, Noble Blade 5 (SAC)
Noble Blade
All melee Weaponry equipped are considered magic weapons
Can apply limited Attribute Enhancement to body worth 12 points in Total, but cannot activate while wearing Armor heavier than Cloth
Can Perform an Action to double movement speed and attack speed for a brief time, once every 8 hours

Items: Bag of Holding, Fallen Leaf (WCI - SAC/Blade of the Ten Winds)
20/20
Righteous Might
Divine Power
Haste
Returning Weapon
Recharge Innate Magic


Alicia is the youngest daughter of a moderately wealthy noble family who controls a seaside castle and port city at the far reaches of KINGDOM NAME HERE, she refused the life of a normal wealthy woman and instead trained from a young age in the way of the blade, She excelled and eventually recieved her plates where she quickly began climbing the ranks wielding a family heirloom blade.

She employs a very mobile and flashy combat style that seems more like an elaborate dance than anything else as her blade strikes lightning fast and returns to the sheath in the same movement over and over.

Crunchy Bits
Martial Proficiency: 76
Natural Weapons: 60
Ranged Weaponry: 60
PACS: 30
Physical Resistance: 33
Physical Skills
Ki Control: 69
Balance: 72
Climb: 86
Jump: 58
Tumble: 72
Flight: 50
Ride: 50
Swim: 50
Grapple: 49
Thievery: 50
Stealth: 50

Mental Skills
Mana Control: 10
Investigation: 10
Insight: 20
Perception: 10
Medicine: 32
Survival: 32
Deception: 20
Intimidation: 46
Leadership: 10
Persuasion: 20
Crafts (Cooking, Alchemy, Mechanisms, Smithing): 32
Knowledge (Dungeoneering, Monster Lore, Nobility: 10
Profession (Soldier, Cook, Gambler): 10
Performance (Oratory, Acting): 10
Performance (Dance): 100
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>>94713917
I considered taking a 11 slot clothing but only putting Make Whole and Silent Movement (Despite it being cloth) and Subdue Aura, like some really expensive Noble clothing thats not made for combat, but Bag of Holding is even simpler.
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>>94713917
Indescribably soulless.
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>>94713976
Who asked? Were having fun doing our own thing in Overlord.
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>>94713999
I think they are referring to the fact they are the only build who's taken both an SAC and WCI item. Or maybe they really just think all overlord builds are soulless. Either way I can agree Alicia is pretty soulless.
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>>94714010
Its one item.

Leaf gives you a WCI that also gives you a SAC unless you lose it. Its both. That's why I rolled the sword into the SAC rather than having two items.
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>>94710155
>New Year, New Y(o)u(i)
https://rentry.org/3igfdawy
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How do I use the overlord skill calculator
I don't want to go through them all
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>>94714057
You don't.
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>>94714034
Don't really get it. Leaf doesn't give you an SAC, it allows you to build a WCI using SAC rules. The build paid for the SAC using levels too, so it doesn't seem that it came from the sword even though it does seem odd it's missing it's abilities otherwise. So she wouldn't have a class that just vanishes and leaves her as a level 25 when she loses it, it's a part of the sword's inherent abilities.
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>>94714042
As always, Yui is a cute... That aside it was a nice introspection piece. I liked the way Yui agonized over her own image. Thanks for the writefag anon.
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>>94714065
I don't think I'll bother to add another 5 levels, I'll just keep it as level 25 and the SAC is the WCI actually.

If we level up past 30 maybe ill add another class in and properly list it as just an item that gives those effects
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>>94714059
So I don't need to list all the skills?
Should I just put the ones I actually plan to use?
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>>94714034
You couldn't even be bothered to name the country you're a noble from.
Definition of soulless build
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>>94714076
Soulless and lazy, powerful combination. At the very least it's a bit less soulless since it's now just having a WCI, granted that still makes it the most soulless as they are still the only one who has one. Got like +10 Data crystals compared to the next guy.
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>>94713917
NPC build
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>>94714042
Interesting take on that insecurity. Good shit anon.
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>>94714092
>>94714094
Not to mention no mention of the nephilim ancestry that some random ass medium-noble family has.
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>>94714128
True but that was the least of the offenses. Chalk up to the ugliness to a little bit of noble imbreeding, and who could tell the difference?
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>>94714132
>she has Habsburg superpowers
It all makes sense now.
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>>94714092
I don't know where were supposed to be in the world anon, its a multiplayer. I don't want to just decide what the entire kingdom were in is called.
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>>94714244
NTA, and don't care about overchud, but you should just decide it for yourself. Anons simply have deal with your contribution to the mp's lore.
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Im gonna laugh if Overlord dies yet again because the rules weren't properly defined and the power level wasn't properly decided.

All the builds are equal examples of a Hero, its just some anons wanted to be on the weaker side and some anons wanted to be on the stronger side so they took better or worse items. The entire benefit of the two item thing is that you can decide if you wanna be a once in a generation badass or just a skilled adventurer dude.

Ill make my build because I promised I would, but I'm taking the Leaf because its the only way to get a SAC at this level and SAC are the best part of the cyoa.
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>>94714128
One of their parents fucked an angel, what's to get? Half the casters can summon them.
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>>94714281
>l make my build because I promised I would, but I'm taking the Leaf because its the only way to get a SAC at this level
But why bother when it's a New World Inhabitant scenario? Not liking low level starts is one thing but just deciding to nab a item which is above every normally obtainable magic is silly. It works when everyone had one as Players and had Guilds, but we're normal natives dealing with kingdoms where having those is not the norm, especially in just one person's hands.

Also I feel like people are getting too caught up on the term Hero. It's really just a comparison, it means jack shit other than you're strong. It doesn't mean you are a legendary hero, it means you're comparable to heroes in the past, which is to say you are not infinitely behind them that most people are. Not that you were implying it here but I keep seeing Hero getting slung around as a power level thing when it's just "hey you've reached the level 30 bracket"
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>>94714317
Because SAC are the best part of the CYOA, and anons said we can't take them without a leaf.

I still think it makes more sense if you can get one at any level and 90+ gives you a second one.

Also I really don't get why people are so caught up on canon. PCs don't exist so it makes sense that the worldnt isnt arbitrarily devoid of higher tier gear to force players to buy them. We can have our relics and shit without it breaking the world,
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>>94711087
His name is whispered from the lips of the meek and vulnerable in times of need. It is said he slew the troll of Lengden Bridge, that he banished the Imps of Iverdale, and committed a hundred other great feats. They say he strikes like thunder, that he is cloaked in a shroud of the very night sky. These rumors, though unverified, have spread like wildfire. All that is truly known, is his name.
>They call him...
El Adim

>Alignment
Extremely Good
Sense of Justice: 500

>Likes
Proper duels, helping others, pleasant scents
>Dislikes
Injustice, selfish actions, Lizardmen

>Racial Class
Undead 15
Ghost 10
>Job Class
Crusader 5

>Attributes (Values in parenthesis adjusted for items)
STR: 15 (21)
DEX: 15 (30)
CON: 15

INT: 10
WIS: 10
CHA: 10

>Relevant Skills
[Leadership] [45]
[Persuasion] [45]
[Insight] [30]
[Perception] [30]
[Performance] - [Oratory] [30]

>Calculations
V: 40 (50)
ML: 20 (40)
CL: 20
Stamina: Limitless
MP: 25
PAC: 10
PR: 13
SR: 9
>Elemental Resistances
H -50%
C 25%
E 25%
L -100%
D 100%

>Inventory:
Divine(+15) Weapon : Tizona
[Deflection (8)] - When an opponent's attack misses, the potential damage gets inflicted to your opponent
[Divine Power (5)] - +20 ML, +6 STR, and +10 Vitality
[Magic Weapon (2)] - Weapon is considered as a Magic Weapon

Divine(+15) Garment : Cloak of Coragus
[Displacement (4)] - Are 50% harder to hit
[Haste (4)] - Increase Physical Action speed, Dexterity is considered 2x higher.
[Dimension Door (7)] - Can teleport short distances

Full Build Rentry:
https://rentry.org/ElAdim
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>>94714346
>The Truth Behind the Myth
El Adim has not actually done 75% of what the bardic songs and children's fables would have you believe, though he would never admit to this himself. He's been around for some time, long enough that even he can no longer remember, and he has done some real good in the world, and does genuinely believe himself to be a hero. He sort of avoids the subject of being a ghost possessing a cloak and sword, since to him he is that cloak and sword. Some rumors call him an elusive Adamantine-rank adventurer, but he's not associated with any adventuring guild. He simply roams, seeking evildoers to slay and young children to either bring joy to or scare the daylights out of, depending on their reaction to a floating sword.

He tends to leave as soon as a problem is dealt with, but in the course of dealing with a problem is generally showy and very talkative. His fighting style consists mostly of dodges, feints, and retaliatory strikes, as well as sudden repositioning through his cloak's [Dimension Door] (consisting of a dramatic flourish, where his cloak seems to disappear into itself as he shouts "The void of Coragus!" or some-such.)

He's utterly lacking in genuine companionship, because most people can't stand the 24/7 hero act.
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>>94714344
Cause that just defeats the purpose of doing New World Inhabitant if we're tossing out everything about the New World. Might as well just become players doing an early game grind in Yggsdrasil. Even though I agree SAC's are the best part of the CYOA, it's supposed to be endgame specifically because of that.
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>>94714346
>No mending on his items
Time's already taken its toll old man, and I'm going to finish the job. You're nothing without the suit.
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>>94714353
You're jumping the gun. We aren't ruining the new world by taking this stuff anon. Its a SETTING. We exist in the world as characters rather than players, that's all it means.
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>>94714362
Losing his items would be a good character arc (and one I'm considering). Learning to be something without them, finding self worth, rediscovering who he was before his death an indeterminate amount of time ago.
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>>94714366
It's not jumping the gun when you're suggesting changing how the New World works. It'd just be using any generic fantasy setting at that point. I'm not saying everything is supposed to be 100% to canon but it's like getting the One Ring in LotR, it's going to be a pretty big deal and doesn't make sense on why everyone's got one in their back pocket. Just ignore the fact that in my comparison there were several such rings in people's back pocket, they didn't show up.
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>>94714375
I'm exorcising him so he can be with who he deserves... the devils in the pits of hell as punishment for perverting the nature order of life.
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>>94714386
>exorcising him
"I haven't had a workout like this in ages! I can really feel it in my calves!"
Thanks, he needed some physical enrichment.
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>>94714346
SOVL

>>94713917
sovlless

simple as
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>>94711087
Name: Noxia Envy
Race: Half Human/Redeemed Cambion
Alignment: Surprisingly good - The wings make people wary for no reason.
Enjoys: Experimentation, "Experimentation", Tactical Combat
Dislikes: Clusterfuck Combat, Safety and Health Guild, Sweets
Classes: Alchemist, Craftsman, Cambion, Infernal Brewmaster
Resistances: L 50%/D -50%
ML: 35
CL: 45
V: 51
Stamina: 51
Mana: 75
Physdef: 36%
Magdef: 18%


STR: 10
DEX: 8
CON: 30
INT: 15
WIS: 10
CHA: 10

Item: Portable Laboratory (Portable Crafting Station) Leaf (WCI-SAC Item (Pendant of the Brewmaster))

Pendant of the Brewmaster (Req: Any Spellcasting, Craft Alchemy 30+, Alchemist, Demonic Blood) [CL 10/V+3]
Once per day, you may Double the Effectiveness of any Vitality Restoring Consumable.
Can craft improved healing items and status healing items, such as Potions and Wands
Can double the effectiveness of one effect imbued into a Consumable, Weapon, or Crafted Object, once every 8 hours
Spell Enhancer, Divine Power, Arcane Concordance (Extended Spell, Contingent Spell), Mage Armor

Noxia is a renowned alchemist and adventurer. Blending the frontline and backline together into an oddity of a role in parties. Anyone who can afford their services can agree that no other potion seller can make such strong potions. If you're going into battle you need an Envy Original in your pocket. She's a bit on the eccentric side but as long as you don't let her see you using other craftsman's products she is pretty nice.

She chooses to get up close and personal with monsters so that she can perform experiments firsthand but can work as part of a team in whatever way she's needed. Thanks to her skills she doesn't really care about money and is more prone to taking altruistic jobs or coming along to help her friends rather than worry about how big the reward is for a given quest.

Martial Weaponry/Unarmed Strikes: 24
Natural Weapons: 35
Ranged Weaponry: 34
Caster Proficiency: 100
Ki Control: 38
Mana Control: 30
Medicine: 100
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>>94711087
Craft (Alchemy/Cooking/Smithing/Artifice/Calligraphy/Papermaking/Glassblowing): 40
Knowledge (Arcana,Dungeoneering,Nature,Monster Lore): 20
Profession (Herbalist,Brewer,Cook): 10

Human [ML +5/V +1 OR CL +5/V +1] [L 50%/D -50%]
Half-Bloods must choose another Race to derive their Bloodline from. Can be considered either Race.
They have the first listed ability that their other Race possesses (after {...})
Half-Demon
Possess Wings and can Fly as easily as running.
Craftsman (Req. any Spellcasting and a Craft 30+) [ML +5/CL +5/V +10]
Can identify any Spells imbued into a Consumable, Weapon, or Crafted Object
Can channel a minor transmutation effect to repair Crafted Objects
Can double the effectiveness of one effect imbued into a Consumable, Weapon, or Crafted Object, once every 8 hours
Alchemist (Req. any Spellcasting and Craft (Alchemy) 11+) [CL +10/V +8]
Can create Potions imbued with Spells
Can create alchemical byproducts, such as Acids, Adhesives, Catalysts, and Oils
Can channel Mana when using a Potion on yourself to double its effectiveness
Cambion (Req. Half-Blood Human-Demon, Costs 5 Levels) [ML +5/V +4 OR CL +5/V +3]
Choose: Know how to use Ranged Weaponry (notably Firearms) OR Have Arcane Spellcasting (CON or WIS)
Can Perform an Action to inflict nearby Targets with Confusion or Fascination
Medicine Man 5/10 (Req. Shaman or Alchemist, and Medicine 30+) [ML +10/V +16]
Can craft improved healing items and status healing items, such as Potions and Wands
Can create a special healing item that greatly boosts Vitality Renegeration for some time, once every 24 hours
Are aware of attempts to inflict Status Effects and gain additional Resistances to most Status Effects
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I don't hate the idea of overlord but the low shipping potential is a major turn off for me.
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All this discussion about overlord reminds me of this.

Its supposed to be a crayons run but everyones whining.
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>>94714415
Based idea, soulless execution. Why is the Leaf being used to create SAC's, who decided this. You make an item with the SAC format, it doesn't give you an SAC. I don't understand how two people ended up doing it this way, especially since they also paid levels for it anyway.
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>>94714460
?

Its a WCISAC

The item gives the effects of a SAC, not a SAC
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>>94714444
It's not really crayons. There was a run in mind from way back when that was held off because time wasn't right with all the MP's going on. This anon most likely isn't the same anon who originally promised running a low level Overlord MP but has caught people who were waiting for one. So you got people who want to play Overlord in the setting of the New World, and people who want to play it as the CYOA normally. Which I should say isn't bad, but there's just two different mindsets on how to play it right now.
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>>94714460
>>94714481
Fallen Leaf of Yggdrasil
Allows you to create a World-Class Item: an Object containing vast power.
>Create your WCI as a SAC, without being limited by Racial and Evolution Classes for pre-existing abilities.
The only limitation is abilities can only be in effect if the Item is equipped or being used in some capacity.
Pre-existing abilities can't take 'create a custom spell/special ability' abilities.
>It also has a 20 Data Crystal capacity.
SAC-like abilities and Crystals don't have to be thematically cohesive. Don't require Data Crystals to fill.
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>>94714481
I'm getting serious dejavu, because they got a class that says Infernal Brewmaster which isn't a real class. And calcing their levels, they've paid 10 for Alchemist, 10 for Craftsman, and 5 for Cambion, so unless they're actually level 25 they paid for the SAC in levels just like Alicia did. Seriously, two different people, same mistake, I don't get how it happened.
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>>94714481
Oh wait, I apologize, you were actually saying the same point I was trying to make. Yes, it should be a WCISAC, but that build made a SAC instead as seen how it gives CL 10 and V+3. That's why I'm saying I don't get why people are doing this because they are making WCI's in the wrong format as though it works exactly like getting an SAC.
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>>94714510
>Create your WCI as a SAC

I don't understand your confusion.
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>>94714501
You gorfot the 5 levels of medicine man
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>>94714536
It's not an actual class, you are designing it with SAC rules, just without racial limitations and such. You don't actually get a new class out of it. It's just abilities for your item.
>>94714546
Ah shit you're right, didn't see it was at the bottom of all the class descriptions. Either way, point still stands since they are gaining Vitality and such from it which they shouldn't.
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>>94714281
It's actually gonna die again because its shit and only attracts dumpers. My writefag from the last Overlord run didn't get enough (You)s so I shan't write for this one. I wish all the Overlordbros a good day.
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>>94714551
Sac rules includes giving vitality and either cl or ml.
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>>94714553
I'm sorry Vera anon... you just doom every run you touch. Sharing the same burden as Red Riding Hood is a cruel fate...
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>>94714558
That's not me.

But I made both of those characters so I might be cursed as an Anon honestly.
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>>94714554
No one has ever used it like that though? It only gives Vitality and CL/ML because an SAC is a class and all classes give those stats. You are not designing an actual SAC despite the wording, it's just for you to use the format of SAC's to design your WCI.
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>>94714558
I made the Lavasioth guy actually
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>>94714564
>Vera and Red Riding Hood are the same anon
God damn. This makes more sense than I thought. I'm so sorry anon. Even characters who are at worst mid don't deserve to be the unwitting heralds of the end.
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>>94714565
>Create your WCI as a SAC

SACs may have either:
TWO custom abilities
ONE custom ability + TWO pre-existing abilities, except other custom ability choices
Pre-existing abilities can only be from Job Class, Advance Job Class or, for Heteromorphs only, your race's Advance Racial Class abilities.
If a SAC contains an Advance Racial Class ability it has to be a Secret Advanced Race Class, with all the implications.
Cannot pick a different Race's or Evolution pre-existing ability.
Create your own requirements as well!

Furthermore, they can grant either:
>[ML +10/V +13],
>[ML +5/CL +5/V +9],
>OR [CL +10/V +3]

An example of a SAC:
High Speed Duelist (Req. Arcane Duelist and Ride 30+)
>[ML +5/CL +5/V +9]
While Riding: Can cast Arcane Spells or attack with Martial Weaponry with no penalty (Custom Ability)
While Riding: are 50% harder to Knock Out or Stagger (Cavalier Pre-existing ability)
While Riding: can attack while moving to deal increased damage and Knock Out Targets (Cavalier Pre-existing ability)

You're the one who is making a weird assumption that it DOESNT get everything a SAC does when it litearlly just says to make a SAC thats part of your WCI and gets removed if you ever dont have it equipped.
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>>94714564
I wanna say that's surprising, but most anons don't reuse builds so in that sense it's not unexpected.
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>>94714573
I'm not making a weird assumption, it's how it's always been. You can look at any run, people just use it as a framework to choose abilities. This is actually the first time I've ever seen it interpreted like this.
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>>94710463
Already loving Mick wtf

>>94711767
I love dialogue heavy writefags, so this really scratches the itch. I wonder where this plothook will go. Desolator is honestly such a sick villain

>>94711798
Peak... so peak...

>>94714042
I have such a soft spot for characters like Yui... love her....
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>>94714579
Im not going in with preconcieved notions of previous runs, Im just following what it says.

I don't think were gonna reach a understanding here, because I don't want to redo skills all over again and change Medicine Man for something that gives CL instead.

If it makes me soulless oh well, I just wanted to do funny potionmax build.
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>>94714586
The overlap between people who choose WCI's, misunderstands SAC's, and are too lazy to fix it has been making a circle.

I was going to say you could've used Alicia as an example of current run not doing it that way but actually, I just went back and looked and I'm disheartened to see that there's a missing 10 ML from all her combined classes that can only be explained if she did in fact use the WCI the same way as you.
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>>94714604
I don't think its a misunderstanding since SACs literally say they give ML/CL/V

I get where you're coming from, but its not the most likely interpretation.
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>>94714614
There has been exactly two builds in any run I've seen who've built like this, and it's the two in this run. You're telling me the most likely interpretation wasn't what everyone else did where they just took abilities and not the stats, easily checked by looking into past pastebins and rentries?
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>>94714604
Alicia is level 25 aren't they, cause they had it as a full SAC including spent levels originally right?
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>>94712952
I'm just behind on writefags.
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>>94714622
I mean technically yeah. Doesn't really matter sense they took stats from the class anyway and stated they wouldn't change it until they level up to replace it. They are effectively Level 30.
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>>94714619
You're just going in circles at this point. They are clearly going by RAW not 'What other people did' since this has nothing to do with those other runs.

Its pointless to reference them.
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This could have all been avoided if the canon-autist hadn't shot down the idea that everyone could have one SAC and that 90+ Just gives you the second slot.

Especially since were NPCs it makes sense that we can have one unique class like 'Lizardman Chieftan' or 'Bog Witch' or whatever. PCs are the ones who have to try hard to get them, we just are coded to meet the requirements.
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The Overlord anons could not reflect on their choice of cyoa, so they lashed out against each other.
This is a precautionary tale.
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>>94714638
It's making WCI's even more busted than they already are. Not only is it already an item that can only be rivaled by other WCI items, but it's also effectively working as an extra +5 levels since you're getting stats that could only be gained by choosing classes on top of it. And you don't even have to be using it to get that buff, it's just from owning it and having it on your person. Any ability that a WCI has can't be countered by normal means. If someone were to try and dispel Alicia's buffs for example, they couldn't because it's being applied through a World Item.
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>>94714653
I wouldn't have taken a leaf if I could just get a SAC.
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Rolled 4 (1d7)

1. Try and write
2. WIP cyoa
3-6. Rot
7. Anon's choice
I don't feel like doing anything but I trust the dice to give me motivation.
But, the only way to get motivation is by beating the odds.
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>>94714665
Overchud is destined to fail. A list of half baked soulless builds.
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>>94714653
Anon, blaming one guy for other people's actions is silly. People would have taken Leaf items even if they had SACs because everyone wants to be the most powerful, despite what that one another said because the only reason you'd want an SAC right off the bat is to become strong as hell. Also NPC's don't usually have unique classes. Bog Witch and such would just be our advanced races. It's not something that's unlocked to specific scenarios, it's just getting to a high enough level as a race.
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>>94714653
Shut up, retard. Those are the rules of the cyoa, it has nothing to do with "canonfags". You're just a loser who tries to cheese cooperative games.
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>>94714638
It's not RAW. It does not give you levels. It gives you the abilities of a SAC while you have the item. The language is unambiguous.
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man I wish the actual overlord guy came back to run the mp cause this is just a mess without him.
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>>94714042
Yui's a very believable character. I can't say I relate to her problems, but they're easy to understand. I hope we get to see more of her soon.
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>>94713436
The fuck does Incase have to do with anyhting?
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>>94714721
Who the fuck is this. Is this a googledocsanon build from something
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>>94714689
Nobody has taken a 40 yet, I think its genuinely just cause they want more freedom with their build since unless you really game the system you only get maybe one actual class choice at 30.

10 for Race, 15 for Starter Class and 5 levels of a real class is the default
If you go human you can get 15 Starter 10 in one class and 5 in another
Or if you go a class that gives martial/etc you can skip starter and do 10 race 10 class 10 class
No advanced racial stuff though or you miss out entirely on atleast one class.

A couple of classes are flat out entirely out of reach because you cant fill the requirements.
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>>94714714
He would not help. If anything, he'd make things worse.
There is no savior for Overlord.
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>>94714706
>>94714573
Indeed, the wording is unambiguous. You create your WCI as a SAC

and SAC grant ML/V, ML/CL/V, or CL/V
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>>94714727
I don't see what's so bad about that. People are forgetting we're at the start. Classes that you can't get the requirements for just mean you're supposed to get them later. Also not sure which classes they would be, only ones I can think of are advanced Profession classes since they need 75-80 in their respective skills. We're not supposed to be masters right now, we're just good at what we got. A level 30 Rogue/Assassin is still a really good stealth attacker.

Also the only reason why no one's chosen the stat stick yet is because an extra class worth of abilities is infinitely more valuable and its way more time consuming to fill out data crystals. There's not a whole lot of options you'd actually want to put on that stat stick that you wouldn't have put on your accessories like immunities and whatnot.
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>>94714751
>People are forgetting we're at the start
LMAO ask the KTHbros how progression works out
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>>94714751
Progression doesn't work. Especially since none of us will want to redo all our skills with the calculator not working.

30 needs to be our final power level, which is why SAC help tie things together in a satisfying way instead of being disparate parts.
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>>94714761
Or Naruto, but still the point stands. If they didn't want to do low level then they probably should've jumped on when the prompt was level 100 instead.
>>94714766
Just because it's a bitch and a half to manage doesn't mean it doesn't work. Besides, we already got people trying to minmax the hell out of level 30 with getting end game items. It's like the same with that failed Dragon Ball run, even if you put a limiter someone's still going to try and be the absolute strongest.
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>>94714761
Tbf KTH progression would never work because we do not operate on the timescale it requires.
Naruto Chunin run worked out fine for its length and it was able to do progression, albeit with a much easier (and better) cyoa.
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>>94714738
No, levels give you that. The item does not give you levels. This is your last response you're getting from me, because you already know you're wrong and are being annoying on purpose out of spite. That's pathetic behavior when you could be playing a game instead of entertaining yourself with pissing contests.
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>>94714773
>It's like the same with that failed Dragon Ball run, even if you put a limiter someone's still going to try and be the absolute strongest.
Yeah that was me. Don't tell anyone but I cheated and my build was absolutely illegal. In fact, you can't actually get that strong with stacking those but no one ever called me out on my bullshit.
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>>94714795
I don't believe you. Especially because it really didn't matter much since it was technically legal due to nothing stating there was a cap on those, even though the idea of wearing 100+ power suits at once was silly. Plus, it was called out for being absurd.
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>>94714795
That's cause nobody with above 75 iq cared about the CYOA.
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>>94714805
>was technically legal due to nothing stating there was a cap on those
No question about that. But I inflated the amount of money I had by a lot. I could not afford the amount I had.
>>94714806
Trve.
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>>94714818
Honestly I didn't even question the money thing since you could dump your PL and cash in the extra points for zeni. Grabbing dozens or even a hundred morphers was pretty achievable even without cheating.
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>>94714795
Because the CYOA itself is dogshit and uses this retarded power point system that puts a natural limiter onto races for no reason. Why put in the effort if it's going to be bad? It's easier to wait until some anon makes Dragon Ball rentryslop than to use that shit in a meaningful way.
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>>94714835
>Grabbing dozens or even a hundred morphers was pretty achievable even without cheating.
isn't there a tech that lets you fuse your items? you can make a fully legal omnipotent build with just the morphers, it's so retarded
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>>94714858
>It's easier to wait until some anon makes Dragon Ball rentryslop than to use that shit in a meaningful way.
You called? When do I start, boss?
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>>94714863
Now. Make a SOVLFUL Dragon Ball Rentry CYOA for an MP and I'll give you one (1) imaginary chocolate chip cookie.
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>>94714862
Technical Integration baybee. RobotCHADS run Dragon Ball.
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>>94714863
You will die of old age before you'll be able to put out rentryslop that gives as many retarded options that the main CYOA does.
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>>94714565
I always included ML/CL and Vitality in past runs and no one complained.
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>>94714889
I'd be surprised as Overlord builds are almost entirely in pastebins and rentries showing their stat distributions so it'd be easy to spot. It'd have to be the last Overlord run with the near 30 builds for me to have missed that.
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>>94714751
>only ones I can think of are advanced Profession classes since they need 75-80 in their respective skills
You get less skill points, but level 30 doesn't cap your skills at 30. You get 120 points to spend on top of the free ranks, getting 80 in a skill is doable if you focus on it.
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>>94714766
>with the calculator not working.
Copy the code from replit and paste it into some other site that lets you run python code.
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>>94714903
I'm well aware, I just don't know what he means by classes out of reach. Those profession classes are the only ones I can see someone struggling with, or maybe something that requires both martial proficiency and spellcasting. There's not a whole lot which I can think of where it's truly impossible.
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>>94714900
https://rentry.org/overlordMartial
An example of one. I'm not sure if that's the run you missed. I also had characters in some other runs, but the one I could find for an older one was in controlc so that's dead.
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>>94714889
You know what, I'll eat my words. I went back and rechecked it all myself. Out of 29 builds, 6 did in fact grab proficiencies and vitality stats. I don't know how that didn't get noted during the run since people also grabbed theirs as just items.
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>>94714941
You have two options for leafs, SAC +20 levels of data crystals, or just 40 levels of data crystals. Some people did take stat sticks, maybe that's why? Or they just listed the leaf sac together with the other classes?
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>>94714948
Did another recount to double check, and the percentages of those who took it with stats vs those who didn't took me by surprise. 17 people out of 29 had WCI's in the last run, and 6 people who had WCI's used it with stats. The interesting thing is that most of these people used the same formatting in their rentry as eacah other, so I think they just followed the lead on whoever they aped it from. Definitely not a majority trend, but way more than I expected.
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This shit is why I don't take WCIs. None of you people can be normal about them, no matter what your final take is.
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>>94714653
If you had tried to propose a rule change allowing a single SAC at low levels, that'd be one thing. Acting like that's a valid interpretation of the CYOA is just pathetic.
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>>94714973
Also just to make it easy if you want to double check.
Buildlist: >>91713598
>No Stats:
Crimson - WCI, no stat
Samyaza- WCI, no stat
Gizzards- WCI, no stat
Von Casimir- WCI, no stat
Vera- WCI, no stat
Ayane - WCI, no stat
Crunch - WCI, no stat
Mimun - WCI, no stat
Arcana - WCI, no stat
Vod - WCI, no stat
Calia - WCI, no stat
>Stats:
Rek Yo-Shi- WCI, +10 ML
Froggo - WCI, +5 ML, +5 CL
Captain Starfall - WCI, +10 ML
Lilith - WCI, +5 ML, +5 CL
FadeWhizgig - WCI, +5 ML, +5 CL
Chambala - WCI, +10 CL

Took a bit to comb through, not sure if I missed anyone since I mainly scanned for any mention of Leaf or World in builds.
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>>94714988
Hi. I made Fade the Whizzard. At the time my exact thought was "that doesn't sound right and I don't think we did this in the past but these other tryhards seem confident so I'll follow this template, I guess. Maybe I'm the one who's wrong."
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UPDATE ON DRAGON BALL RENTRYSLOP
I spent the last hour and a half just going down through https://dragonball.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Techniques and adding almost every technique and a short description. I just got out of A. It's NOT happening.
Here you go: https://rentry.org/2ideybsg
MP RULES: just pick any technique lmao
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>>94715087
>https://dragonball.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Techniques
>All items (2305)
Gee I wonder why.
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>>94715087
First technique best technique
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>>94715117
Sallyanon...
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>>94712724
>If a newfriend looks at your build to use it for something, what are the things about him that you'd most want them to get right?
You know what, that helps, and not only with skills vs gadgets, but also with the Refinements/Definements. Due to how convoluted Blink was at times, and how bad I tend to be at explaining stuff, there was confusion about how it worked in the past multiple times. Keeping that mindset might make this my chance to help clear it up.
About gadgets vs styles, I am of the same idea that the styles are more important, especially since the gadgets were basically made to support those styles, and I did include the modularity of armour systems in big part as an explanation in case someone forgets about them. So, I think I'll lean into those.
I do think I'll also switch Unique Style into another Martial Art. Not only would that allow to keep it level with Chihiro, but having two "teleporter styles" as more formed systems means I can use them as a plot hook to interact with the new teleporter character (or characters if we get more, it'd be especially fitting for Freshmen), where Hifumi could teach him (them) those styles.
It'd end up with Hifumi having 24 years worth of Martial Arts knowledge (I'm thinking 8 years Kendo, 4 years yankee streetfighting, 8 years Challenger Style, 4 years Waterfall Style), which by RAW is not really allowed as the cyoa states that "You can't have spent a time training martial arts that exceeds your age" but if I try to take an admittedly cheesy explanation that it not being in a single style is enough, and he was just able to practice multiple martial arts in parallel through sheer grit, hard-work and talent, then would anyone really mind? It also adds to the similarity/contrast with Chihiro, where she's an extremely focused genius of one style, while he mixes from multiple ones.
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>>94715087
I know this is a joke, but making a Dragon Ball CYOA with a robust technique creator doesn't sound too hard. MHA is pretty modular and lets you create quirks from a set of templates.
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>>94715317
>then would anyone really mind?
nta but i think as long as your intentions are good and all then it should be fine
i think for some builds instead of 2 xp something around 4-6 xp would've been better for their update, since they have to split them between stuff like costume changes, gadgets and skills, but if anons are managing with 2 then all good
however my build has effectively 300 qp compared to the rest so its not like im one to talk about fair point arrangements
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>>94715317
This just sounds sad tbqh.
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>>94710336
You're doing well so far. Bobby is still pissed at Sandy, so he might look for him again after his last fight if he's not checking on Minnie.

I imagine he'll be running off of pure rage at this point, since he drained himself completely fighting Orochi. Maybe he's wanting to win the finals for Minnie or after receiving a motivational speech from one of his bros. He needs whatever Shonen mental amps he can get for this one.

For the fight itself, he's used to fighting quirkless, but Kaylee is a different beast entirely than those he fought back home. He's gonna really need to piece her up with the boxing kek. He'll regain some juice in between the fight I'm sure, but the day getting later works against him. I'm mostly curious to see what you have planned, since he's coming in severely disadvantaged. I expect you'll make it cool, so I don't really have any specific requirements.
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>>94710155
>>94710164
>Name
Emilia Busujima
>Hero Name:
Aka Kusuri
which means "Red Medicine" in japanese
>Timeline
Just Another Story
>Location
Japan
>Career
Supporter (18 XP, 12 QP) (+2XP from new year’s prompt which makes it 20 XP, 12 QP)
>Costume
Mundane
>Supporter Type
Healer
>Free Modifiers
School Nurse
First Aid, Medicine
>General Modifiers
Martial Arts(Krav Maga), Stealth, Public Relations, Tactics, Genius

>Quirk: Healing
Function: Regeneration
Method: Stockpile
Range: Touch
Speed: Fast
>Quirk Modifiers
Versatile Quirk

Emilia is a happy go lucky woman who likes her job as the school’s nurse. She often likes to sing while doing her job. She is a prodigy and a genius when it comes to anything about medicine. Whatever ailment you suffer from, she can heal it.

Over the years of tending to students’ various illnesses and wounds, she has developed a very nonchalant view of being a doctor. She tries to keep an optimistic attitude but its possibly because of the stress of always treating injured people and the expectations required from a doctor that gets to her. Tending to patients that are nearly dying has made a dent to her spirit. Luckily, she has never lost a patient yet. She tries to make her bedside manner appealing to her patients but there is just so much that she can do to help sometimes.

Likes: Singing, Long walks on the beach, Being a nurse
Dislikes: Losing a patient

>>94711798
This is so cute. I wish I was present when MHA was in its first phase so that I could be included in 1-D but alas circumstances prohibited me.
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>>94715346
Effectively, what I'm tying to do is sort of consolidate stuff. The gadgets I got honestly don't feel big enough to be worth 2 or 4xp. Scanners are there to help somewhat mitigate a drawback from the Quirk which is a sidefffect of an Extra that grants 1QP, so getting them as a Gadget:Quirk for 2xp feels weird. The wingsuit also isn't something that'd help as much as the examples from Gadget:Transport. So, I'm trying to somewhat push it under the Armored costume and the teleporter Martial Arts. I'm still a bit conflicted about it, but on the other hand, I've already paid 2XP for armor + weapon, and if before writefagging it, I had to sacrifice skills and the dynamic with Chihiro for the glider + scanners, I don't think I would have taken them. Also, like Saberanon said, for the newfriends, if I had to pick what the important aspects of the build are, those gadgets aren't it, they are just to help enhance the other stuff, not grant any new abilities. Scanners are there to help to enhance his skills to fight with his eyes closed and when rapidly swapping positions, but the main ability to do so comes from the Challenger Style. The glider is there to make the use of the Waterfall Style for mobility slightly easier. The communicators are so minor they would have probably been there by default, I just fluffed them more. The new wording of Gadget:Weapon, also makes it sound like you'd have a weapon even without if you took Martial Arts, taking it as a Gadget just makes it a higher quality or a fancy high-tech one. Altogether, mentioning those gadgets under the styles and costume seems like the best to go about it to me right now, but I am taking some liberties with the cyoa, so I get if someone would be against it.
>>94715349
Why?
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>>94715416
Welcome back. I think you mentioned before that you're still pretty busy, but hopefully there can be some things you dribble out here and there.
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>>94710164
Managed to shave Computer down to its fundamentals in a way that dodges the superintelligenge writing issue, but it costs a whole lot fewer QP. I don't know if there's precedence or trends for it in our run but would it be possible to use the Support starting budget instead of the Hero Student starting budget for Reiji? I like the idea that he's someone that should REALLY be in Support with an extensive mundane skillset and mediocre Quirk but has narratively strongarmed his way into 1-D because of his ego.

If it matters, his enhanced skillset would still very much not be Hero-friendly and there'd still be a major narrative hook of him not really being equipped for Hero business but trying his hardest to leverage his skills anyway. If it's too out of line though that's not an issue, I just think it'd fit his style/fluff more and be more interesting to write than Computer giving him a generic mega brain.
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>>94715435
He's goading you, bro.
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>>94715517
I think that sounds fun. Go for it. It's not a strict reading of the rules but it's also not a bend so far that we're doing complete Calvinball. Others have done worse in builds, like double-dipping without paying the cost for Second Quirk or Versatile.
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>>94715317
>which by RAW is not really allowed as the cyoa states that "You can't have spent a time training martial arts that exceeds your age"
Are you updating it with the old version or the new version? The new version removed that.
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>>94715531
The new version, but when I went for a quick check I opened the wrong tab... But that's good news, then!
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>>94715512
Thanks. Happy new year to you. Yes, I will be busy but I will not let that hinder me
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>>94713356
its old but yea thanks bro!
i learned that starting with a dark colored base and then painting with lighter colors as i go on (instead of coloring and then doing shades) really makes a difference, specially with the hair
also hand is healed and i wanna get back to drawing soon
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>>94715517
Just the initial budget or also use the Support modifiers? I'm not sure if it's very balanced because XP seems to be more valuable than QP since there are those XP options you can purchase with QP in templates. Have you considered taking some Refinements instead?
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>>94715574
Just the initial budget, I'd also be willing to just reduce the overall budget if that helps, my main concerns are simply that the version of his Quirk I'd be most happy with is relatively simple/cheap and the idea of - for lack of a better term - being a Support in the wrong lane fits what I have in mind for his fluff best rather than any sort of powergaming.

If it's too complicated or generally considered poor form though I also don't mind just dropping the idea and tweaking the Quirk, I'm just not sure what to add to it that I'd want as broad superintelligence neither fits or is remotely easy to write.
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>>94715625
If you post the build, it might be easier to say if it feels powergamy and if so how that might be fixed.
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>>94711087
Not relevant for this run, but what are the chances you could exploit the wording on the Wyrm Lord (Dragonoid) class with the Shapeshifter class, to get a passive +8 all attributes and At-Will breath attacks?
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>>94715730
Maybe? Depends on whether partial transformation would count as shapeshifting or if that requires a full on alternate form/
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>>94715658
No problem, the idea for the alternative is decently simple, using 4.6 and cutting out a lot of the fluff because it's already been posted earlier.

>Career
Hero Student (Support Budget)
Freshman
New Class 1-D

>Costume
Normal

>General Modifiers
Gadget: Quirk
Genius
Hacking
Investigation
Public Relations
Tactics
Tinkering

>Quirk
Name - Computer
Type - Body Enhancement
Target - Self
Specs - Mind
Duration - Permanent
Method - Passive
Modifiers - Cosmetic Mutation (Cables), Quirk Compulsion (Technophilia), Quirk Definement (Overheat), Quirk Refinement (Interface)

Instead of enhancing his intelligence directly, Computer allows its user to download, store, process and upload digital data, including software in the extremis. Reiji's brain heats up in proportion to the amount of information his brain is processing. He must interface with other machines via cables that reach out of his body. His gadget is a custom array of communicators and sensors that allows him to always be connected to the internet and interface with any form of wireless technology, but does not directly enhance or expand the range of his quirk.

>Powerset Idea
Reiji has next to no combat skills or utility outside of hacking into and manipulating digital infrastructure - alternating traffic lights, setting streetlights to overload, raising car barriers and locking doors, etc. he's absolutely out of his depth as a Hero and lacks many means of going toe-to-toe with other Heroes/Villains in a brawl but makes for a great Otacon-style sidekick to enhance other Heroes with constant streams of information and hacker-style support.

Despite the Big Brain set of skills, he's extremely immature, emotionally unstable, arrogant and ego-driven, which directly counters his skillset and makes him liable to ruin his own well-laid plans when provoked, this is an intentional weakness.

Should really be in a Support Program, refuses to because he wants to be a Hero for the clout and his own ego.
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>>94715791
Couldn't fit it on here but also considering +/-1 on Wealth/Shadow of Evil to represent him getting a lot of resources from the Red Finger but also being in debt to them for clandestine favours, not because he wants to be a Villain or has a good relationship with them but because he's out of his league/Blackmail.
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>>94715791
There's going to be somebody who calls you soulless but I'm fine with it personally.
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>>94715791
Sounds alright. It made me think how has he passed the combat portion of the entrance exams, but then I remembered they probably used robots, so he could have simply hacked his way out of it. On the opposite side of powergaming, I think that his Gadget could do a bit more. It's 2 xp and sounds like it's barely above him just connecting to his smartphone.
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>>94715884
In terms of how he got in there's the implication that Red Finger may have rigged things a little in his favour. Not enough to be suspicious but just enough to have their asset in the Hero course - he has no idea about this though and is being played rather than helped, he presumably just thinks he's that good.

As for the Gadget, I'd considered a full suit that helps him with Overheat but I thought it was too early to have a solution to it, maybe he'll be adding that on through the year and we can just take the existing Gadget as reserved XP or maybe I can add some Cyberpunk-style super hacking computer as part of it to basically just make his life of hacking much easier and more convenient?
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>>94715851
>Soulless for deliberately nerfing his already underpowered character
Sorry Alicia anon but you're projecting
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>>94715941
Nah, he's right. No matter what you do, there is always a chance of a some random shitposter calling you soulless.
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>>94715950
Yeah, exactly what I meant.
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>>94710164
After some time away and abusy holiday season I can finally say I've caught up again. Also awesome to see new students and a teacher, and some new and old faces on the villain side too.
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>>94714941
I noticed it and was mildly annoyed, but it's such an irrelevant thing to bitch about.
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Vgh... South Park CYOA.
>catpcha: N0WRS
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>>94715317
Seems like you've got things figured out then. Glad I could help. Good luck with the update anon.
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>>94710164
>Name
Bobby Samson, AKA Sunlight Man
>Timeline
Just Another Story
>Location
Japan (Originally from USA)
>Career
Hero Student
>Student Customization
Sophomore (keeping Freshman QP instead), Hero Family, Exchange Student
>Costume
Bodysuit
>General Modifiers
Martial Arts (Boxing), Public Relations, Peak Condition (Agility), Poverty, Legacy, Genius (Fight IQ)
>Quirk: Absorption
Target: Energy (Light)
Method: Passive
Function: Enhancement (Strength, Durability)
Duration: Long
>Quirk Modifiers
Cosmetic Mutation: Body glows faintly with golden light. Gets brighter the more he strains himself physically.
Quirk Compulsion: A carefree personality that shifts towards him being more showy the more intensely he uses his quirk. Doesn't always appear sufficiently committed to hero work, yet he rashly throws himself in the way of danger to protect others.
Quirk Definement: Bobby can only absorb sunlight, making him functionally quirkless at night. Something like candlelight or artificial UV would do nothing for him. The intensity of his quirk during the day has caused him to actively suppress its use for most of his life, though training at Shiketsu has helped him to more safely control its output.

Over a decade ago, the world was saved by America's #1 hero Sun Man. The paragon of justice stood tall against one of the most ruthless and powerful villain groups in history, sacrificing his own life to save countless others. His surviving family included his wife and super-powered partner LifeLight, who lost her vision in the battle, as well as their unborn son..
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when are we playing gun school
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Today, the child of the legendary Sun Man goes by Bobby. Despite the hero family's sacrifice, the mother and son were completely abandoned by the hero system and left to fend for themselves. As soon as he was old enough to do so, the boy began looking for ways to support his mother—participating in illegal underground fight clubs, engaging in petty crime, etc. After a much more serious arrest, the U.S. government offered to drop his charges if he could get into and complete the program at the world's top Hero School in Japan.

Despite his rough upbringing, Bobby doesn't typically come off as someone with a chip on his shoulder. He has a carefree, laidback personality, and while he didn't initially take his hero studies seriously, not all is as it appears. He has a complicated relationship with his father's legacy and the hefty expectations placed on him as a result, yet he can't help but look up to those who risk their lives to protect the innocent. Even if he doesn't openly praise his father the way most strangers do, his own choice of hero name betrays his feelings. And despite his undisciplined attitude, he studied hard in private to learn Japanese in preparation for his trip oversees. He's not exactly the slacker he wants others to believe he is.

Coming into his second year at Shiketsu, Bobby now has even greater motivation to become as strong as he possibly can. He has a lot more people to care about—people who need his protection. And in the aftermath of recent atrocities, he feels he must put a stop to the monster his old friend has become.

Quirk: Bobby constantly absorbs solar radiation, greatly enhancing his strength and durability and causing his body to glow with golden light while exerting himself. While fighting in broad daylight, Bobby's ability to maintain his quirk is limited only by the physical strain all quirks cause. Once the sun sets, however, he has merely an hour before he's rendered essentially quirkless.
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>>94716612
>MHA student
>Gadget: Weapon
anytime, brother
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>>94716315
Irrelevant to the previous MP sure since there's less impact from doing it that way as we were already level 100, but has much more impact here since we're only grappling with 2-3 classes right now.

I only brought up the roster because of my claims that no one had done it that way, but I got curious because even though I did read every build's rentry just for fun, I might've missed something like that, which I did.
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>>94710382
No despondency over losing? Got it. Positive, Happy, Hard-to-Kill Reptile it is.
>>94710384
Glad you think my writing's good! I'll try to work in some of his other quirks, but as you alluded, one's like Blood Puppet are quite a bit harder!
>>94710980
That does seem like her! Another one for the Happy pile.
>>94711148
>>94712194
Looking forward to your full response! Going from your other reply, I figure that Bobby's proud for getting to the finals, but concerned over his odds of winning.
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>>94716870
>No despondency over losing? Got it. Positive, Happy, Hard-to-Kill Reptile it is.
Bobby put up a good fight, she got a good fight. There is nothing to complain there.
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>>94716870
BobbyAnon gave his answer here >>94715356
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>>94714988
>Vera
Bodyguard[ML+5/V+8 or CL+5/V+8] : (Must be wearing the Loyalty Band) ONE custom ability + TWO pre-existing abilities

They listed Maid and Head Maid as their SACs because they (Me) thought that they were SACs not just profession jobs Bodyguard is the item SAC.
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>>94715087
I pick An Angels Teachings

Im gonna draw penises on everyones faces mid combat.
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>>94715317
I love how even the pros have maybe 8 years of martial arts training, but we have two students and a freshly graduated Pro who have more years of training than they have been alive.
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>>94716551
Honestly? Stick of Truth or Fractured But Whole type class system would be badass.
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>>94716961
That's the struggle of barely having different budgets.
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>>94716961
Meadow with the 24 Years of Capture Cloth training despite being 19, With unique style too.

A perfect pro for Chihiro and Hifumi to talk Combat Autism with
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>>94716935
That makes it 7:10 then, which is about 40%, nearly half of people who took a WCI. Also makes a lot of sense looking back at their pastebin, I always did wonder why Maid was listed but every other class taken wasn't. Didn't think much of it since it was written exactly as the actual class.
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>>94717048
I just wanted the Butler/Maid 'Near master get X' effects, at level 100 its worth the 5 levels.

I guess that means technically she has two SAC slots left if we ever do another run.
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>>94716991
Maybe make it so that martial arts and sharpshooting is training equal to 25% of your age instead of a static number of years. That'd let the students have their fun and the pros can still realistically flex on them without having to match their investment level.
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>>94717058
Think it's just 1 slot since Head Maid is an SAC instead of an actual class.
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>>94710443
How would Reiji respond to being offered alcohol and a nice cigar?
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>>94716870
I answered here if you missed it. >>94715356
You're right that he'd be proud of getting so far, but he'd typically downplay it in front of others, and he is probably still too pissed at Sandy to be thinking in those terms right now anyways. Feeling proud of himself will be more reserved for a private moment of self-reflection once the tournament is over and he's had time to cool down. Confronting his own feelings is not his strong suit. If you want to include something like that though, and you think it'll work well, it's not like I'll mind.

His feelings about Kaylee would he kinda similar. Emotions are running high enough right now that he's either pissed he's not able to fight Sandy or he's channeling that anger to try and win the tournament based on some external influence like I mentioned in my other reply. He knows his odds are shit going into hell on an empty gas tank, but he's not in a state to worry about the details. "Guess I'll just have to figure it out in the ring" is probably his mindset without me knowing what exactly you have planned. Hope that helps.
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>>94711706
Oh build review chad, please continue your good work. I want you to know it's appreciated and very cool.
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>>94717062
>That'd let the students have their fun and the pros can still realistically flex on them without having to match their investment level.
That's dumb and lazy
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>>94716870
So long as Kaylee gets a good fight, she's happy. She's not that complicated. And now that they've both faced Sandy, I've got an idea for a writefag with Orochi...
Her view on Bobby is that, while she's definitely impressed with what he has done, she's sad/annoyed she's not going to get to go up against it. Assuming she knows that he can only pull that one off once a day, then she'd pester him to a fight with it later, but for now she's not holding back. It's the final, the most important fight, and she wants to win. Not to the extent of "I'm just going to go 100 feet up and pelt you at range until you lose" because that's lame, but more "I'm going to hit you as hard as I can".

Good luck, you're almost there!

>>94716961
I've met people like that IRL, who have maybe a few years of experience in a field, but because it's their obsession, they can outperform people who've been in it for several times longer who treat it more as a hobby. Never underestimate a special interest.
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>>94717075
Depends on who is offering and what context. Contrary to his clout-chasing, Reiji is pretty socially savvy and knows how to protect his image in neutral situations. Where he breaks is when not doing the thing would make him look uncool, especially to people he wants the respect of.

Some random student offers him a drink? No way, he doesn't need the trouble. A student he likes plays the don't be a loser card? Absolutely taking that stuff, etc. The idea is less that he's gullible and easily lied to/manipulated all the time and more that he has some very strong blindspots from his insecurities.
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>>94717238
In this case, it's a meeting with his debtor.
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>>94717264
Haven't quite figured our their relationship myself but if you're up for it I'm looking forward to it. The best I can say is if he likes his debtor/is completely in the dark then he'll take it out of respect but probably do little with it, if he's afraid of his debtor he'd be more forward with taking and drinking/smoking it if only out of a carrot and stick situation where he wants to look good and also is afraid of looking bad.

His need to show his best possible self to his audience completely overrides his own thoughts on things like that, if that makes sense. Whether or not he's a drinker or a smoker doesn't matter if he needs someone to think he is or isn't.
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>>94717283
Got it, got it, that helps. Thanks Reijianon.
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>>94717120
My apologies, I woke up late so I've haven't had the chance to look over the builds. But now that I'm here...

>>94714346
Ghost knight, I dig it. What makes it so interesting is that as a Ghost he's only got one real weakness to magic, but its more of Superman's weakness to magic in that it's something they don't have crazy resistance to. Anyone who doesn't have magic just simply can't do squat to him. Also since he's essentially using his gear as his corporal form, I'm going to factor in equipment unlike how I have been doing previously. To be fair however, I'm including everyone else's when comparing to him.

Rex unfortunately can't muscle his way into getting magic damage, which means there is a 0 chance for Adim to lose. Date's got magic to deal damage to them and it seems like they got updated with an accessory with Hunter's Eye so fighting them with ranged is a possibility.

Normally I'd give Date the total win here but with this modified ruleset of using equipment, we have to consider all gear, which includes Adim's impressive defensive set. Not only is he 50% harder to hit, but he's got movement to make it extra difficult to pin him down and punishes missing harshly with the damage reflect. Date's got the stealth archer potential with higher WIS, but Adim can close distance far faster than Rex if given the chance. The only difference that makes me sway the match in Date's favor is the fact that Adim has the most extreme elemental weaknesses so far on top of talismans debuffing resistance too, so using Light or Heat is a surefire win, pun not intended. Still it's not a certain match, I'd put it at best 6/10 matchups in Date's favor since ethereal form gives a lot of opportunities to travel where Date simply can't perceive.
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>>94717350
Versus Sahaz however, I can't see Adim losing very often. He still has crazy elemental weaknesses, but unless Sahaz' water heater functions as a holy water dispenser I can't see him being able to gain the advantage. If he had the last levels into Hex Maniac then it would assuredly be his win, but unfortunately against an opponent who's one giant Caster stat check his low level investment won't cut it.

Against Lorg is an interesting matchup because despite being our best caster right now, his classes are more geared towards dealing with the living. His special ability and equipment couldn't scratch a ghost, however it makes me wonder how effectively healing a ghost would be at defeating it. Not sure exactly how healing spells are counted when it comes to elemental affinities, as if it's positive Lorg can shred Adim's health, but if it lacks an affinity then he doesn't have a lot of options. He's still got his impressive casting skills don't get me wrong, but it's essentially fighting someone several levels ahead of you since only one part of your kit is effective. and its especially hard for Lorg to outlast a swordsman who can go through any obstacle to reach you. If Lorg had more speed then he could whittle Adim down as he can heal while the undead can't, but when factoring in the DEX difference and all the other data crystals, I don't see him being able to win. Feel free to chip in with a second opinion though.

Unfortunately going to put Alicia and Noxia's matchups on hold. Not going to skip Noxia but doesn't make sense to me saying how'd they fair vs Adim when I'm going to do a rundown right after and repeat the same thing. Alicia however is just difficult. I don't want to just shun builds but it's really hard to say anything interesting about the interactions because they'd just win all of the time. All her weapons are counted as magic weapons, so we don't even need to bring the sword into the equation unless we want a 110% chance of winning.
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>>94717410
Hold on, scratch that part about Lorg's equipment not being able to harm Sahaz. I was a fool, how could I have forgotten that a caster's tool of choice would be a casting focus and not a physical weapon. That actually does make it a bit more of a tossup as Lorg would be able to gain more suitable healing to compensate for the lack of leeching. Still wouldn't put the odds on him but it makes it more of where I couldn't see him getting a win to more of a 3/10 depending on if Adim gets past a magical bombardment and doesn't let Lorg slip away.

Also I gotta find a way to better format these, every new person makes these posts longer and longer. Not that I personally mind, big fan of idle chatter, but it's going to become a nearly unreadable word wall soon enough. Oh well, not my problem, that's for future me to worry about.
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>>94717432
I really like the posts, as long as you feel like doing them i'll keep reading them
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>>94717432
Is it a bird, is it a plane? No it's a ghost, my brain just somehow slipped in Sahaz instead of Adim. That's what I get for not spellchecking, just like how I used fair vs fare, curse you past self.

>>94714415
Another half-breed used to great effect. How did I not know Cambion existed, and gave so much value. Arcane spellcasting as early as level 5 really can't be beat. Little bit worrying how many hybrids have been coming out of the woodworks to demonstrate their magical superiority, but hey, if you can't beat them, join them.

Unfortunately though I can't really make anything interesting because giving a quick look over their build and thinking about interesting stuff an alchemist can do since they are our first dedicated craft build, I saw they have Caster proficiency 100. So, I really don't know what to say other that they'd win. I mean it's 10th tier spells, what do you expect. Even against Alicia it'd be an easy win on their part since Noxia only needs to complete the casting to nuke the opponent, so it's just her physical speed vs Noxia's supernatural action speed.

I got no idea how they even got 100 proficiency at level 30 that fast, other than chalking it up to the WCI, but even without it they'd still be capable of doing top tier magic as their proficiency should still be over 70. This hybrid is more like a half saiyan at this point.
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>>94717500
I think its CL that determines your spells, not proficiency. So 5th level spells (45/7-1)
Proficiency just buffs the spells you can cast to have better durations and damage n stuff.

I thought it was a skill so I put a buncha my skill points in it, if its not then it'll be lower.
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>>94717292
No problem and looking forward to the writefag anon. I've got some noncommittal ideas bouncing around but I'm curious to see where this goes first.
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>>94717500
Stop the count, I forgot one crucial detail. Just because Noxia can cast 10th tier spells, doesn't mean she has any. I don't know what her caster list is, but I can at least assume it isn't 190+ and she doesn't have access to any tomes of knowledge laying about, which means it'd only be 9th tier spells she'd be slinging out. Still at a level where I don't think anyone could seriously contend with her, but not the absolute monster I originally thought them to be. Might actually make a fight against Alicia even more lopsided since 9th tiers won't have the insane ceremonial cast times, as even without the output of a 10th tier.

>>94717521
Also double correct, I was too stunned at seeing the proficiency score to think about that. Since it's a stat you wouldn't be able to put skill points in it, and that levels things out a lot more than I originally thought yet again. So strike all former mentions from the record, because I'm too lazy to go back and change it. I'd still probably stick to them winning against everyone currently in the MP as 5th tier spells are no joke, with the exception of Alicia as now it's a fair fight, or as fair as it can be between two monsters with their loaded respective martial and caster builds anyway.
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>>94717500
>they have Caster proficiency 100
That's gotta be an error, right?
>>94717521
Yup, it's an error. It's not a skill, you can't just put points into it. It's part of final calculations: https://pastebin.com/ca44WPHz
>Caster Proficiency(-ies)
>[CL/X] OR [(CL_limit)/X + Attribute(s)/Y - 10], whichever is highest
>Attribute(s): Add up Attributes of the same Spellcasting Tradition (ex. Nature(CON) and Nature(WIS): CON + WIS)
>X - Number of known Spellcasting Traditions
>Y - Number of Attributes used for Spellcasting
>Treat X as 1 if Theurge or Wild Angel and Y = 1
If you want caster skills to put points into there are: Mana Control, Knowledge (Arcana) and Spellcraft.
The conditions for 10th tier spell are:
>Having an Attribute 20+, Caster Proficiency 70+ and Mana Pool 25+ you're capable of casting one 10th tier spell.
>(You'd also require a Caster Spell List size of 190+ to unlock a 10th tier spell or a Tome of Spellcraft)
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>>94717542
Naruhodo I see I see
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>>94717571
It annoys me that the cap for crafting is con+10, level 100 crafters litearlly dont exist.
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>>94717542
>>94717538
Its 65 I think

45 CL, 30 Con -10
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>>94717580
You get [Unlocked: (CON/5)+1] uncapped Crafting skills.
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>>94717580
nta, but that's a softcap. The thing right after that tells you how many crafts are allowed to go beyond 10+con. I.E. if you have 40 con then you can have 9 level 100 crafts. In theory. Technically level 200 if you account for being a Brownie (Fairy evolution).
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>>94717591
>>94717597

OH, Is that how unlock works? I thought it was how many you get total forever.

Naisu.
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>>94717621
Yep. Professions, Performances, and Knowledge are the same way.
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>>94717542
Those 10th tier conditions are achievable in our ruleset if we minmax a bit, and it doesn't even require Leafs. Pure casters are likely to get 35CL. Take one of your chosen items to have the Spell Enhancer Data Crystal, you're now at 45 CL. Get your spellcasting attribute to 35. As your second item, take a Tome of Spellcraft.
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>>94710164
>"Even a villain can become a hero to someone else."

more life lessons from the old villains for sandatsu
also to celebrate midas anon being alive since the villain side felt lonely. Might not be canon, but as always i enjoy coming up with new looks for characters, in this case midas is looking fly as fuck
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>>94711087
Name: Noxia Envy
Race: Half Human/Redeemed Cambion
Alignment: Surprisingly good - The wings make people wary for no reason.
Enjoys: Experimentation, "Experimentation", Tactical Combat
Dislikes: Clusterfuck Combat, Safety and Health Guild, Sweets
Classes: Alchemist, Craftsman, Cambion, Infernal Brewmaster
Resistances: L 50%/D -50%
ML: 35
CL: 45
V: 51
Stamina: 51
Mana: 75
Physdef: 36%
Magdef: 18%

STR: 10
DEX: 8
CON: 30
INT: 15
WIS: 10
CHA: 10

Item: Portable Laboratory (Portable Crafting Station) Leaf (WCI-SAC Item (Pendant of the Brewmaster))

Pendant of the Brewmaster (Req: Any Spellcasting, Craft Alchemy 30+, Alchemist, Demonic Blood) [CL 10/V+3]
Once per day, you may Double the Effectiveness of any Vitality Restoring Consumable.
Can craft improved healing items and status healing items, such as Potions and Wands
Can double the effectiveness of one effect imbued into a Consumable, Weapon, or Crafted Object, once every 8 hours
Spell Enhancer, Divine Power, Arcane Concordance (Extended Spell, Contingent Spell), Mage Armor

Noxia is a renowned alchemist and adventurer. Blending the frontline and backline together into an oddity of a role in parties. Anyone who can afford their services can agree that no other potion seller can make such strong potions. If you're going into battle you need an Envy Original in your pocket. She's a bit on the eccentric side but as long as you don't let her see you using other craftsman's products she is pretty nice.

She chooses to get up close and personal with monsters so that she can perform experiments firsthand but can work as part of a team in whatever way she's needed. Thanks to her skills she doesn't really care about money and is more prone to taking altruistic jobs or coming along to help her friends rather than worry about how big the reward is for a given quest.

Martial Weaponry/Unarmed Strikes: 24
Natural Weapons: 35
Ranged Weaponry: 34
Caster Proficiency: 65
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>>94717664
Ki Control: 28
Mana Control: 20
Medicine: 80
Craft (Alchemy): 80
Craft (Other): 30
Knowledge (All): 20
Profession (All): 10

Human [ML +5/V +1 OR CL +5/V +1] [L 50%/D -50%]
Half-Bloods must choose another Race to derive their Bloodline from. Can be considered either Race.
They have the first listed ability that their other Race possesses (after {...})
Half-Demon
Possess Wings and can Fly as easily as running.
Craftsman (Req. any Spellcasting and a Craft 30+) [ML +5/CL +5/V +10]
Can identify any Spells imbued into a Consumable, Weapon, or Crafted Object
Can channel a minor transmutation effect to repair Crafted Objects
Can double the effectiveness of one effect imbued into a Consumable, Weapon, or Crafted Object, once every 8 hours
Alchemist (Req. any Spellcasting and Craft (Alchemy) 11+) [CL +10/V +8]
Can create Potions imbued with Spells
Can create alchemical byproducts, such as Acids, Adhesives, Catalysts, and Oils
Can channel Mana when using a Potion on yourself to double its effectiveness
Cambion (Req. Half-Blood Human-Demon, Costs 5 Levels) [ML +5/V +4 OR CL +5/V +3]
Choose: Know how to use Ranged Weaponry (notably Firearms) OR Have Arcane Spellcasting (CON or WIS)
Can Perform an Action to inflict nearby Targets with Confusion or Fascination
Medicine Man 5/10 (Req. Shaman or Alchemist, and Medicine 30+) [ML +10/V +16]
Can craft improved healing items and status healing items, such as Potions and Wands
Can create a special healing item that greatly boosts Vitality Renegeration for some time, once every 24 hours
Are aware of attempts to inflict Status Effects and gain additional Resistances to most Status Effects
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>>94717660
That's a really cool look. I'm not his anon, but that's now my headcanon for Midas's casual wear. I'm down to see more alternate costumes of characters. Got any other ideas in mind?
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>>94717669
To be honest I saw Alicias skills scroll by while making my build and thought that was how the unlocks worked

The WCISAC thing wasn't from them, its just the RAW.
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desu, any more than like 8 martial Arts doesn't seem worth it. I'd say that athletics, martial arts x2, and unique style it's more worthwhile to pick a peak condition or two if you can afford it.
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>>94717683
Yes if you're a powergamer
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>>94717683
Fluff-wise I disagree, but if we're talking purely meta then yeah.
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>>94717688
>>94717692
I'd say it makes more sense fluff wise as well. If you have a quirk geared towards CQC and you're already technique nut then it would make sense to train your body to freak levels as well. That's how it pans out in shit like 90% of martial arts anime. Someone trains karate so much and does waterfall and endurance bullshit until they end up being able to shrugs of bullets or some shit along the way.
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>>94710164
To Break a Sword (Imamu/Red Eyes Oni, Mochi Uranus/Stink Rat, Mythopoesis, Amahagene Takako/Singing Blade, Amahagene Himeko/Iron Storm)
https://rentry.co/e9neu4kp

Not a setting I'm very familiar with, either MHA or Japan, so I felt a little rusty writing this. Hope it's enjoyable and sets up some plotlines.
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>>94717660
Sick bro
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>>94717724
>>94710164
>>94717724
Oh, and add Reiji Kawano/Red Hat to the character appearances list. I thought I typed it but didn't.
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>>94717723
I should make a student with 44 years of martial arts training to spite you.

Or maybe... The legendary Support with 64 years of martial arts experience...
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>>94717677
most of my character drawings for mha have been me just coming up with looks for them
except impakt and seiryu cause i made them both in suit and civilian clothes

i have fun coming up with stuff like bobby's bright future tee or karma wearing seiryu merch

or just making drippy looks for characters like shinkan
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>>94717660
Looks amazing! As always, great cinematic vibe, and Midas's style is immaculate. Kinda hyped to see more villain activity as well.

>>94717782
You know, I was always so focused on the head and coal smoothie that I never noticed the watch doodle.
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>>94713585
I was looking for stuff I missed while updating the rentry and saw your comment. I just wanted to assure you you are.
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>>94717764
I don't have a problem with anyone's spread. I just think one is cooler IMO because of my supreme taste in anime.
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>>94717782
Yeah, I've noticed the trend and I enjoy it. You always do good work with creating new looks for characters.
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>>94717724
Good stuff. Granny seems in character, no complaints there. The trick with chaining her constructs to make up for lost vision is also accurate to how she'd respond.

That aside, I think my favorite parts were the talking heavy scenes and all the little detail that went into them. Flowed smoothly and was fun to read.
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>>94717660
Midasanon here, consider it canon cause I love the look, and Midas is the type to change up his "civilian" look from time to time. He looks fresh as hell here. Art of my character is always heartwarming. Thanks for that.

I need to hurry along with catching up on all the Sandatsu stuff.
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>>94717723
Yeah, I thought about giving Bobby two more stacks of martial arts, but giving him higher fight IQ seemed more fun and fitting of some of my earlier fluff. I think it depends on how autistic your build is about their focus. Someone like Chihiro being so invested in swordsmanship makes sense, for example.
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>>94717782
I don't remember this one; have you posted it before? Either way it's kino.
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>>94717980
Happy you thought it flowed nicely, anon.
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>>94718104
Bobby wouldn't be my first guess for fight IQ. Wasn't his compulsion before about him getting overconfident and rash as the fight went on?
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>>94718140
I may be using it more generally. Like picking up new techniques, identifying his opponent's strengths and weaknesses, adapting as the circumstances of the fight change, managing weight/distance, "having someone's number" etc. I was thinking of it as more of an intuitive thing. Maybe combat sense would be a better way to describe it.
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>>94718204
nta, but basically he's combat smart in the sense that Goku is combat smart, not in the way someone like batman is combat smart.
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>>94718214
Yeah, that's the idea.
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>>94718093
Nta but here's the Sandatsummary I've been working on:
>Did a few missions as a pawn for the Hero Public Safety Commission (fought Kampai)
>Got a few quirks and his mind started to break
>Cannibalized Big Hat
>Killed Psyking in an honestly really evil way
>Came into contact with Feral and Drekus
>Used a brief moment of lucidity to plan how to free himself
>Met Mio and she became her handler (her quirk was useful and it was that or death), The rest of the cast thought they were just dating
>Broke out of the Commission with Mio's help
>Tried to kill Hiro. He survived but Sandy managed to steal his quirk (don't worry Hiro is better now)
>Managed to orchestrate his plan, which culminated with him killing his mother
>Got into a standoff with the heroes after returning to the Hero Public Safety Commission building when him and Mio were trying to get rid of all the data they had on them
>In his escape (Fushimi Ward incident) killed Hijack and stole his quirk
>They (Sandy, Mio, Feral, Drekus and a servant NPC) escaped to Europe, fought local big shot villains, Sandy overcame his madness and they founded their own villain group, the Wild Hunt
>The group returned to Japan but Sandy stayed behind some time to go wild
>When he came back to Kyoto he attacked Endless Horizons and Shiketsu to steal useful quirks (Brains Stim, Autocopy and Magnum Opus). Killed Genma. Maimed Majestic.
>Gave Majestic's eye and arm as a present to Midas, and purhcased a warehouse from him to be used as base
>Started taking lessons from Desolator
>Has been expanding his base, doing weird science and acting as doraemon/the devil for random losers that take pills infused with his blood

The Night Parade and the Wild Hunt are on good terms, thanks to Desolator's advice and Karma acting as liaison between both groups
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>>94718320
yea thats about it thanks anon
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>Genius (Combat)
>Genius (Swordsmanship)
>Genius (Fight IQ)
negative sovl
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>>94718338
Right. They should have powergamed harder and gotten peak condition instead. No guts.
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>>94718353
peak condition is for retards, just get quirk hax nigga
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>powergaming this
>soul that
I'd say don't reproduce but there's no threat of that.
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Well Earned Reputation
(Michelson, Karaburan, Mentions of Others)
https://rentry.co/8h4w6ir7

If I got any characterization wrong or have general criticisms please let me know.

I'll admit I am not that good at writing long 1-on-1 professional scenes, and thrive much more with more characters, emotions, and general chaos. Still hope you enjoy.
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>>94718424
>He wouldn't be a fugly rat he would be THE FUGLY RAT.
Bros really making me root for him. Good work anon.
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>>94716880
I'm glad she enjoyed her match, and I'll be sure to take it into account!

>>94716883
>>94715356
>>94717090
I see. Still furious at Sandy (no end of that in sight) and looking to avenge Minnie in some sense in the final. Pissed off, angry, and relatively impotent to do anything about it right now, since there's no chance The Doctor would allow a patient of his to be beaten while in his care.
Could you clarify that bit with Kaylee? Is he also pissed off at her in some way? I hadn't considered that, and may need to rework stuff if that's the case.

>>94717151
OK. Kaylee's out for a good fight, no surprises there, and is annoyed she can't face Bobby's true strength. I can work with that...
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>>94718424
oh man that was nice, good stuff
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>have an entire 2000 character text block accusing Hifumi anon of being in the top 5 sovlless active anons for MHA, and then deliberating who the rest were as I was unsure of the 5th spot
>accidentally hit refresh just as my 15 minute timer is ending
I know some of you will say I deserved this, but this was a massive tragedy.
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>>94718584
meds
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>>94718584
>soulless shitposter anon gets cursed into losing his shitpost

Deserved in its entirety.
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>>94718584
HaterGOD, I believe in you. Show us the ultimate power of spite.
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>>94717660
I tried to zoom into the background and got scared. Anyway, the composition is certainly strong here. And the facial scars are a nice detail. You've come a long way!

>>94718424
>a stereotypical cowboy character behind the door
Does he whistle through his teeth on some words? I liked the story. He certainly does his homework, and you did too. Characterization is strong. Some grammar strangeness, though I think you could probably catch those out with careful reading or speaking it aloud once before publishing. I did have fun while reading, which is the important thing.
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>>94718584
give us the rankings anyway
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>>94718584
>Doesn't copy rant every so often to prevent accidents like this from occurring
Your hate is weak anon... train for another 100 years so that you may rise above your failures.
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>>94718630
Not like it would be that hard to guess
>Hifumi because he already said him
>Kaylee because duh
>Sandy because duh
Then I'm betting the last two were Tame and maybe Inigo for both having shitty quirks and one dragging Eri into canon
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>>94718629
>does he whistle through his teeth on some words?
He does now lol

>grammar strangeness
I'll look into it, I definitely did "spice up" some sentences on purpose
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>>94718646
I think you are one of the very few people who care enough about that last one to remember it, actually.
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>>94718646
Yeah, but I'm holding out hope for the placements to be mildly amusing/controversial
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>>94718646
Nah, Sandy is actually so shitty that he loops back into being kino. He has a lot of effortfagging going for him that makes his character entertaining to watch. His anon is a one-trick pony bitch though.
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>>94718646
nta, but because Hifumi got mentioned I expect he's targeting builds that were willing to have quirk awakenings or things similar to one, so Orochi is likely another part of that list. I can't honestly see why he's getting singled out otherwise.
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>>94718657
nta, but inigo got shit on for the do anything green lantern shit plenty early on, even by juptiter anon
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>>94718646
Tierlist + accompanying reasoning for builds ranked on soulfulness. HaterCHAD please…
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>>94718660
Sandy's literally just a shounen villain, anons just aren't enlightened enough to enjoy shounen kino so they complain about him.
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>>94718646
>The best anons who kept haters malding by keeping MHA alive
What an honor's list it would have been
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>>94718665
nta, but I found him talking about how he compared to chihro pretty whiny. I'd out him there for that if I wanted to shitpost about sovl.
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>>94718665
Also NTA, but Hifumianon is incredibly whiny and a kpopfaggot, and he also wants his build to be the number 1 hero. That alone is enough.
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>>94718660
He's hit the perfect sweet spot, perfectly counteracting his completely shit builds by lifting them out of the proverbial mud, the likes of which can only be compared to the feats of Atlas himself.

Still can't make a good character to save his life but hey it's fun to watch if I look at anything around it but the build itself.
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>>94718693
>N-no! Your character can't have aspirations! That makes me reflect on how much of a loser I am! No!
Hifumi is based. You are cringe.
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>>94718683
Pretty sure he was talking to Chihiro's anon in that reply chain and they brought up their update changes first. Without that I'd agree with you however.
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>im such a newfag to MHA that I can't into the discussion
Its so over.
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>>94718693
>he also wants his build to be the number 1 hero
No issue with this though.
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>>94718709
>a whiny kpopfag is based
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>>94718734
Separate the anon from the build
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>>94718671
Yeah that would be a valid criticism but he didn't use it. He was too busy with some wild stray thought that draws him like a red cape for a bull.
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>>94718709
>>94718733
I didn't say I think it was. But that's a reason why some anons would call him soulless. Character wanting to be strong or being strong = soulless to some people.
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>>94718734
Yes. Even more so when compared to the biggest whiners in this general, the haters, who are all masochistic cuckolds who exist in a perpetual humiliation ritual as MHA dominates.
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>>94718646
>dragging Eri into canon
Kinda agree on this. Desolator turning young again was neat but there were other quirks that could've done that anyway without having canon characters.
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>>94718741
>both have shitty quirks
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For all the the talk of humiliation rituals, there's a disturbing lack of ENF.
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>>94718742
Dumps are the real soulless builds.
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>>94718731
Do you have a build
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>>94718752
There's also a disturbing lack of fate discussion. Anyone cooking?
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>>94718754
Michelson, I'm just kinda chillin
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>>94718731
It's all shitposting. You're better off doing something productive then young this discussion.
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Why do some anons freak out so much over canon characters?
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>>94718759
same bro. I made a build last thread (kid question) and I really have zero idea what is happening
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>>94718745
Hifumi anon's not gonna fuck you bro
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>>94718758
I'm writing a small followup to the William/Hassan v. Giulietta/Commodus fight.
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>>94718759
>>94718765
You're both cool anons. Just wanted to let you know that.
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>>94718758
Me, but I've noticed that Fate basically gets zero discussion. Genuinely kills my motivation. Feels like anons don't care.
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>>94718748
That's just an offhand comment. I could say that about anyone and it would remain as meaningless. Without specificity you can't be a hater. What he specified was something that hadn't mattered in like half a year or more. That's cringe.
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>>94718761
It's extremely uncreative and goes against the point of what we're even doing here. It's a failure of imagination.
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>>94718758
>discussing Fate is a humiliation ritual
Confirmed by a real Fateanon btw
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>>94718784
Unfortunately Fate tends to run outta steam if someone in a pair falls out of activity from what I noticed, and that causes entire teams to just fade out. It's a lot harder to discuss random stuff about it too since it's just fighting each other in the Grail War.
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>>94718784
What do you want to discuss?
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>>94718779
yippee
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>>94718774
Sounds based. The writefag was great so I'm happy to know we're getting a followup.

>>94718784
I know what you mean. Thread has this weird habit of picking a single mp to talk about. Always makes me worried that the other mps I like are gonna fall off. Kinda why I wanted to check in.

>>94718803
Being summoned to be someone else's servant, complete with the threat of being magically ordered to suicide sounds like a pretty humiliating ritual... So that's more what I was going for.
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>>94718784
The hobbyist writers haven't realized yet that writefags, artfags, and everything else don't matter as much as talking about their MP.
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>>94718758
Working on a relationship chart. Probably won't finish it today though, I'm a little busy.
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>>94718811
I really don't know. The only thing to really discuss is fights or possible alliances but my build is really only good for one of those lmao
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>>94718831
Writing, art, and stuff is what feeds discussion, so they're pretty important. Does feel like anons sometimes skip the important part though. (Discussion)
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>>94718838
Always a good place to start. Which build (if you don't mind sharing)?

>>94718841
nta, but discussion is discussion. Could literally just do fightfag analysis like the one Overlord anon.
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People act like all there is to do is fight fight fight in fate even though like half of visual novel is slice of life romance slop. You can write SoL stuff if you want to!!! In fact you should do it even if you don't because it allows us to get a deeper look at who you're character is during their downtime.
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>>94718848
>Writing, art, and stuff is what feeds discussion, so they're pretty important
I never said they weren't important, just that they weren't the most important part. Everything else only matters insofar as they fuel discussion, but the moment everyone stops talking about an MP then it's dead... unless it has MHA's momentum.
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>>94718868
You know, you're right. Makes me want to know how different teams interact out of combat.
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>>94716565
>>94715346
>>94712149
Your opinions so far have been very helpful, so I hope you won't mind me coming to ask for more.
https://rentry.org/b9oaag82
It's still very much a work in progress, and in particular the fluff is strongly unfinished and a lot of this I should rewrite, but I tried to explain my ideas at least a little bit, in a rambly, but hopefully parsable manner.
In particular, I'd appreciate the opinions on the state of Refinements, Definements, the Styles, and whether I'm not pushing it too far with that avoidance of purchasing an extra gadget for the upgrades. Any other comments, like about the overall layout, are also appreciated, of course.
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>>94718868
Why can't you understand that the premise of Fate is bad? It's only of interest to fight fags.
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>>94718873
>unless it has MHA's momentum
MHA's momentum is the only force stronger than that of Water Inertia's.
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>>94718868
I mean yeah in the series that exists, but no one ever actually does it playing the CYOA. When given a bunch of options that only relate to fighting prowess, you get people who only know how to fight as a way to progress the narrative.
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>>94718896
lmao. Haven't heard that joke in a long while.
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>>94718885
Fate is more than Grail Wars, servant anons simply refuse to set us free.
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>>94711087
Uhhhh Overlordchads? Where's OUR discussion?
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>>94718896
Remember when Sen waited for Victor to start monologuing to identify the weak point of Victor's invincible defense? That was neat. Hubris is also a force greater than control over the inertia of water. MHA momentum is hubris.
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The lesson of the last 100 posts is that if you effortpost and interact, then there will always be anons who decide to hate on you and will use any pilpul to do it. They don't have builds, so ignore them. You post what you want to, interact with other active anons, and leave them to their own bile.
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>>94718919
Dead because you dummies won't play the game. Like always, a character got built and then it was over.
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>>94718925
Bile anon was pretty cool though. I wonder if he's still with us, hiding behind a new identity.
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>>94718925
>their own bile
Don't associate my art as a hater with these feckless vermin.
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>>94718758
>>94718784
I'm still working on the thing I have been with Ying and Maitreya. I've thinking about how to work out an encounter where they run into someone during a day trip but haven't settled on who.
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>>94718919
>Medieval(kinda) fantasy with no map, no scenario, and no predetermined starting location
You guys can barely handle setting a MP in a city, why did you think this would work?
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>>94718950
Got any candidates in mind, or is the whole mp still on the table?
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>>94718784
To be honest, I am far more interested in the story of Michelson instead of Hrungnir. Unless Cordeliaanon does something then I'm pretty much checked out
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>>94718919
If you got a topic, I'm willing to yap about it. It can be anything from what future classes would best suit our roster to who'll face the most racism because of their racial class (it's the half breeds). I just need something to go off of.
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>>94718919
Random thought, but I found the idea slightly amusing. After a fight in which El Adim got grievously wounded, his party evacuates him to the only medic in the vicinity. Cue the next scene, where Lorg, who's healing magic operates on blood and body horror, just stares at the cape lying in front of him on the operating table, which obviously lacks both blood and body to horror with. His expression exudes the vibe of "the fuck am I supposed to do with it" so strong it's visible through the mask.
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>>94718813
>>94718779
You hear that anon! We’re cool! Now please give me an A in your economics class before I write a story where I swap a thumb tack to your chair before you sit down.
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>>94718978
>Melianon
>Doing anything
[X] Doubt
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>>94719004
idk what that means but I guess that means I'm gonna stick with MHA
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>>94719004
No way that was Melianon. Doesn't at all read like them.
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>>94719022
My schizo power is weak so I just assume every -lia I see is Melianon, it works more often than it fails.
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>>94719004
hop off my goat, he makes kino drawfags
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>>94718962
Have been leaning towards Liu so far because he's not currently involved in anything IIRC and it could be relatively easy for Ying to present herself as an ally, but anyone who's up for it can pitch themselves.
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>>94719000
>Not even in his office yet
>Already getting bribes to give them an A
Truly 2-Deviants and 2-Enraging
are living up to their names
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>>94719086
>2-Enraging
+2
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>>94718338
Tame has Genius (Combat) IIRC
I don't think anyone else does but I could be wrong
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>>94719102
She also has Rival for some reason even though I have no clue who it could possibly be.
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>>94718742
We don't hate you because you're strong Alicia anon, we hate you because you're soulless. See: everyone slobbering on the overpowered ghost knight's invisible knob.
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>>94719126
The greatest rival of all, lack of xp points.
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>>94719086
But that was a 1-Delinquent build...
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>>94719131
Well thats not fair anon. Adim's nothing but soul.
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>>94719143
The build that swaps stuff is 2D tho.
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>>94719043
I'm not against shilling for myself and my partner, but since you're thinking about Liu let's just run with that thought. Any interactions in mind? I want to say Liu listed Ying as a relative, so they'd probably already know each other. Dragon Emperor and Buddha should be an odd enough pair. Feels like they'd peacefully sip some tea over a heavy discussion..
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>>94719126
I kinda expected one to show up, the circuitboy that just arrived is possible, or sandy or something.

Tbh I thought I got rid of it but Ide have to get rid of something.
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Why haven't any of the other 3B UA students become pro heroes

I propose they all got held back except for those who make an update.
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>>94719143
We'll get our time. Someday.
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>>94719176
no one cares about 3-b except you
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>>94719176
Oh haha, it's because I could not care less about my 3-Bum. Props to that one teacher anon though who included my build in a writefag, he was based as fuck.
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>>94719185
>>94719176
I thought they got kidnapped by Luciano Golddragon or whoever that name was. Maybe they didn't debut because some went villain and the rest died at the bottom of a well.
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>>94719176
Didn't Meadow update their build a couple of days ago?
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>>94719203
NTA, but...
>any of the other
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>>94719203
you are replying to meadow anon
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>>94719190
Top Smile... say it ain't so...
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>>94719176
>>94719203
>Other
nvm
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>>94710164
Satoru Tani

>Career
Supporter
+18XP(+2),+12QP
>Type
Engineer (Robots)
>Modifiers
Student (Gen. Ed)
Tinkering
Sleight of Hand
Hacking
Villain Trivia
Peak Condition (Eyesight)
Genius (Robotics)
Let's just say it's, uhh, very latent.

>Quirk: Eye Contract
Projects the user's consciousness to overwhelm another's mind on making eye contact, leaving behind the user's limp body.

Due to a damaged quirk factor from an earlier incident, it activates on eye contact however little the user wants it to. Despite being officially listed in the registry as Eye Contract, Satoru calls it >no u. Going to or from his own body induces a dizzying feeling like vertigo in the user, not because of any property of the quirk but simply from the disorientation of instantly changing position and height.

>Template: Brainwashing
Method: Eye Contact
Duration: Permanent
Result: Possessed
Control: Detailed
Quantity: Single
Extras: Human Limit
Extras: Visible (Swirly Eyes)

>Quirk Modifiers:
Cosmetic Mutation: Satoru's turquoise eyes are always spinning.
Quirk Compulsion: When speaking to someone, Satoru feels a strong urge to look them in the eye. Even when avoiding it he still needs to look someplace on them when addressing them.
Quirk Definement: Damaged quirk factor.
1QP->1XP

You'd think that coming face-to-face with an S-class villain would change a guy, but apparently not. Over the past year Satoru has barely moved forward, unchanged, except for the fact that he's now consistently tormented by overly-familiar Hero course students, a principal who just wants him to move over to the damn Support course already, and the fact that a cannibal serial killer keeps using his room as a hangout spot.

Somehow his mental health has not improved. He's still a chronically online self-pitying quirkcel trying to keep his head down despite his bad reputation, wasting his days on quirkchan.

Full build, with more fluff and background information: https://rentry.org/f8skekrx
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>>94719217
I love him
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>>94718884
Damn. Really going all in on the update. Profile/backstory/family stuff was always nice to have... Honestly ngl, I don't have much advice to give. Most of it seems perfectly fine to me.

I'm hesitant on the overcoming of his definement. I think in general a definement is something where you need to find a work around, rather than being able to put in more effort to force your way past it. They're effectively extras, so it'd be like someone with the Physical Enhancement drawback that limits how many attributes they can buff being able to buff multiple attributes by making it harder... At the very least I'd workshop other ways to phrase the definement and the logic behind it. Like you find another drawback that he can't overcome, with being unable to stay after teleporting being a byproduct of it.
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>>94719217
If Hiro can artificially restore his own quirk, I'm sure he can make a Human Growth Hormone that can give him those two inches in both places.
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>>94719237
It's important for the Themes that he remains a wet rag smelling of mildew and it's all his fault.
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>>94719217
Welcome home cringekino KING.
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>>94719217
Give him Rival for the new circuit guy because he thinks he'll take Tame

Also I dont think you can convert Qp to XP without being quirkless?
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>>94718774
Same. Some rest and recovery, with Hassan getting some dream glimpses at William's past.

>>94718784
I'm busy writing/waiting for other anons to finish writing.

>>94718827
Yeah, Berserker vs Assassin was kino, one of the most well-balanced and best choreographed fightfags I've read. Can't glaze it enough.
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>>94719224
He knows, Tame/Karaburan/Orochi's noodles.
>>94719237
yeah but then he'd have to talk to Hiro to actually get it.
>>94719260
I'm not really sure if you can take student customization modifiers if you're just a support course student rather than hero course. Which he's definitely not. Unless it's funny.
>Also I dont think you can convert Qp to XP without being quirkless?
You can do it for quirk template options only, which is how I afforded detailed control.
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>>94719213
WarpdenCHAD actually.
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>>94719217
Should take the rival modifier and make it
>rival (society)
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>>94719287
Does Tame love him yet? I kinda figured it was onesided him being tsundere and her just being his friend?
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>>94719233
Thanks.
It seems that I indeed did not word it properly, or maybe the idea itself doesn't work really, so maybe let me try again (still in a rambly falling asleep mode, sorry about that).
Think about it in reverse. The Definement is that the the mental image post teleport is unstable enough that if he opens his eyes, without putting in the extra work to make it permanent, he'll be sent back to where he teleported from, and achieving that is difficult. End of the strict Definement.
Now what's just the issue of his skill and not the Quirk itself is that he just doesn't control his Quirk well enough yet to complete that task without assistance of drugs, so that's the default he operates on.
When he started Shiketsu, he struggled a lot with teleporting others, and teleporting multiple people at the same time was beyond him. Now, as his skill grew, he's able to do that and the whole process is more efficient (but still slower than teleporting alone, and affected by familiarity). One challenge completed, now the new one can be trying to achieve that avoiding of return (somewhere down the line as a writefag idea, not right away, I'm just trying to sort if leave the gate open).
Does that sound somewhat reasonable or should I get back to the drawing board?
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>>94719339
I don't know Tameanon's feelings on the subject but my gut says no, not at all really. They haven't interacted much at all outside of him being that gen ed weirdo she sees sometimes, it's just fun to shitpost about since he's a big robot freak.
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>>94719339
She loves everyone. That's how she was programmed.
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>Over the past year Satoru has barely moved forward, unchanged
not for a lack of good advice
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>>94719382
this is why Sandy has a gf and Satoru doesn't. maybe he's got a point.
>goood captcha
lol
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>>94710155
I may have an idea for something. How does the limit on refinement/definement work? It say you can have 4 of one and 3 of the other but is that purchases or separate bonuses/drawbacks? like can I have 4 bonuses but I can pay to make each one as strong as I want or do I only have 8 points worth total? Can I have two different definements that give +3 points if they are severe enough?
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>>94719439
Never cook again. The re/de-finements are already abusable enough adding arbitrary “extra strong” de-finements for an equally arbitrary QP bonus is a recipe for disaster.
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>>94719351
It could certainly happen, but I don't think she would consider it unless he started making moves. He's so awkward that its hard to even call him her friend even if shes putting the effort for that in.

I do think they probably talk more than that though, shitposting online on quirkcord and stuff where he's most comfortable.

She can match his bants, which is probably pretty hard to find at the school.
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>>94719464
The description itself says that you can stack them, I did not make it up by myself.
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>>94719439
You can have 4 distinct buffs of whatever you pay for minimum of 2, and 3 distinct debuffs for 1 maximum each. The number is set in stone but not the value. IF you pay like 4 points 4 times you can really buff up your quirk if you want something thats basically wholly custom.

I don't think you should really go for more than 3 total points of debuff though, you coudl take more for fluff tho
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>>94719347
>Now what's just the issue of his skill and not the Quirk itself
This is more what I'm talking about, actually. I guess what I'm trying to say is that "[X] is harder to do" isn't typically how extras tend to work (which definements essentially are- quirk definements are simply custom extras). They tend to be a harder restriction that simply say "You can't do [X]. Period." A quirk definement should be an issue with the quirk itself, not an issue with the user's skills.

At most, I think you could get away with including the definement now while he's unable to overcome it, but removing it with an update once he reaches that point.

I'd also be less resistant to it if he could only partially overcome the drawback- like if for example he could learn to split his teleportation between both eyes. Like he could teleport with is left eye closed and if he then teleports around by closing and opening his right eye, he'll return to where his left eye teleported him. He'd only return to his true original location after opening his left eye in that situation. It'd let him do a lot of things he couldn't do otherwise while still maintaining the rule-like nature of a quirk definement.
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>>94718731
It's fine, the only story line any cares about is Sandy.
TL; DR his quirk is that he absorbs the quirks of anyone who dies in his presence and the more quirks he has the more addicted to gathering quirks he gets.
He attacked the school a while ago and killed a student, now he's trying to become an underworld boss.
That's about it.
Sandy is the one with the blue stripe in his hair.
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>>94718884
liking the update so far, though i kinda agree with that other anon about overcoming the definement. While i like the definement itself i feel like the "staying even after opening his eyes" stuff could be changed a bit. it's based on mental images he builds, and you mentioned it not surviving the stimulus form opening his eyes. I think we can focus on this last part. What if when he opens his eyes, if there's a noticeable enough disruptive element that clashes with his mental image he is still sent back?
for example, lets say hifumi has to teleport into a room to get to greenfinger.

>case 1: He makes his mental image of the room with him it, uses his quirk, teleports in, opens his eyes and manages to remain there.
>case 2: he makes his mental image, uses his quirk, teleports in, opens his eyes but turns out greenfinger spawned a big ass tree in the room, enough to make the mental image and the real one incompatible, and hifumi doesnt manage to stay and is sent back to his initial position

i think this way you get to keep a definement like "if his mental image clashes with the one he perceives then he's sent back" and it still has the growth regarding him becoming able to remain where he blinks to
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>>94719524
nta, but I like this. This is a great solution in my opinion.
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>>94719524
also nta, but the issue with that is that he needs an accurate image in order to teleport in the first place, doesn't he? Any time he succeeds in teleporting he'd have already met that condition to stay behind.
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>>94719541
thanks
i imagine this angle would also help shape him into a proper top hero, since he'd have to train his judgement of both the battlefield (deciding which areas are safer from interference) as well as the flow of battle (because said areas are bound to change). and it could even make him better at rescue, since he'd grow used to noticing safe or stable spots among chaotic environments
plus it'd also fit the *teleports behind you* meme
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>>94719493
I did the math some days ago and I was missing like 2 points or something, I don't remember the number but it was not much. I wanted to make a certain kind of build but I was missing points. The kind of build it is would fit with a hevily restricted absorption quirk but I know how hated it is so I tried making it without, it actually costs more with absorption if I did the math right. It was late so I went to sleep and pretty much forgot all my progress, I will try to make it fit for a while longer then switch to my backup plan.
By the way, what does a 3 point drawback look like? I have seen some +2 one in the extras but I don't think there is any +3. I don't think the drawbacks I had in mind for my character were worth more than 3 total anyway.
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>>94710155
>Razor's Edge (Takako, Karaburan)
>https://rentry.org/ebhgs8bf
Felt slightly inspired and wanted to do a quick follow up (?) to To Break a Sword. If it isn't clear, the idea is that Reiji had Mochi go out of his way to provoke and cause an incident.
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>>94719604
Arrogant little shit. I love it!
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>>94717724
it was indeed enjoyable anon very nice work, imamu seems like a great villain
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>>94718758
I'm still debating over what to write about next - I don't really want to do another fightfag since I just finished Assassin v Berserker. And in-character Hassan got fucked up from that, so it would make sense she doesn't want to run into another fight or risk an assassination turning south again.

Might follow >>94718868 lead and do a nonhostile encounter, since I like having other builds other than just William/Hassan interacting. Anyone interested or have ideas?
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>>94719508
I get your point, but I think we looked at different extras. There is a lot of them that require concentration or cause fatigue. In this case, I think the closest one would have been the concentration from the Healing Quirk, where if you fail to hold the concentration the effect will be cut short. Here the full teleport (as in staying there) would have been cut short and he'd be forced to return.
The one eyed idea has been discussed some time ago, but I feel like it clashes a bit with one of my motivation for him to close his eyes in the first place (it interferes to strongly with the creation of the mental image), but I'll think some more about it.

>>94719524
I like this one quite a lot for the reasons you mentioned now and in >>94719568. The need to track the battlefield is cool, and has those counters of being able to surprise him.
The only issue I see is what the other anon mentioned here >>94719567.
What if I sort of combine the two? The mental image both has to go through the "internalisation" process and match the surroundings he'll come to when he opens his eyes. That former process is what creates the need for some time to pass before he can open his eyes, thus adding to the chance the environment will change. The difficulty of it is also what led to him not being able to do it before (sober).
And I should probably find a better term than "internalising" but my brain is ceasing to work. I'm butchering my sleep schedule and should definitely put my phone down.
But still, thanks a lot for help! If you've got any more advice, I'm eager to read it, but I should get some sleep first.
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>>94719287
>student customization modifiers
If you're a Support Type, Student Subtype I don't see why you wouldn't be able to.
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>>94719604
Arrogant little shit indeed... I also love it. Characters with unapologetic character flaws are always great. I feel a little bit of her frustration too. IRL schools love to include actually meaningless classes all the time, so having her bite back is a little cathartic. Excellent work.
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>>94719688
You know, fair point. I suppose there are extras like that too. Also looking forward to where you go with the other anon's idea (ngl, I'm not entirely sure what you mean yet). Sleep well anon. Let's continue this next time.
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>>94719689
For Supports, the Student Option isn't so much a type (as let's say Cop), as a modifier, so it's not exclusive with other options really. Especially egregious would be doing that and then grabbing the Student type like Senior for extra xp. Also, for the Support student option, the description points to students outside of the Hero Course for whom the Student Customisation Modifiers are.
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>>94719689
nta, but he could also just list the rival drawback as a joke and not gain points from it. Should all be good as long as he doesn't benefit from it, right?
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>>94719594
A 3 point drawback would be worse than taking Disability but not as bad as taking Disability with Poverty. There's no concrete guidelines.
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>>94719719
I agree with this anon. Taking support just to maximize XP and also being able to take student modifiers just because you picked up [STUDENT] for free is just asinine levels of power gaming.
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>>94719669
Hmm... Well I want to say that Addy-anon was thinking about taking on the role of the person that broke into Hassan and William's base. That could chain into some SoL. If we're shilling for builds I we like, I always like the Griffith/Raim pair, and Griffith is such a ball of sunshine that William would likely opt for an alliance.

I'd offer up my own group, but they appeared in a Hassan/William writefag not that long ago.
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>>94719725
True. You can hardly call it cheating if there's no mechanical difference. It's effectively the same as background fluff. "I have an antagonistic relationship with So Andso and it's not going to get better."
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>>94719771
That's what I figure. Satoru isn't exactly starved for points to begin with, so it should be fine.
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>>94719771
Sorry, beefing with people is for students, heroes and villains only. It's part of their class benefits. Support peasants should know their place is in the friendship lands.
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>>94710164
Prompt for All Shiketsu Student Builds:
(this is gonna be my next writefag if you couldn't tell)
>Ladies, Gentlemen, (and Cube if 2-E) I'm your new Economics Teacher Michelson Tyler, you may call me Mr.Tyler
>Since I do not know any of you, and none of you know me, after we get done with roll call we're gonna take the first class period for you to ask me any school appropriate questions you would like.
>Doesn't matter how stupid you think they are, stupid questions and endless pestering are how ya make friends. Now ask away!
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>>94709034
Hey, Smokin' Sexy anon, I've been meaning to ask what you plan on having him teach. Is he a homeroom teacher for any particular class? Any particular subject?
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>>94719795
Deckard Thorpe (ever the jackass) raises his hand and asks, wearing the stupidest smile on his face, "Hey Mr. Tyler--weird question--but do you find yourself more attracted to female mole rats or human women?"
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>>94719795
Sensei, are you related to UA's principal?
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>>94719795
Kaylee would ask at least three questions:
>How much money does Shiketsu spend on food, or just in general?
>How much do Pro Heroes make?
>What even is money, or Economics overall?
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>>94719795
Nene would probably be trying her best to restrain herself so that she doesn't immediately slap Tyler like a cat hitting a mouse.
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>>94719795
Why are you wearing a hat from the student uniform? None of the other teachers wear them. It looks good, tho.
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>>94719872
He'll get along with Inigo, won't he?
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>>94719908
It's only a matter of time.
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>>94719795
Is investing based on knowledge obtained through a time travel quirk considered insider trading?
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>>94719795
I'm not going to lie, my character is kinda quiet. Don't think she'd ask much... That aside, from the class in general I can see him getting questions like:

Why do you teach economics?
What's the key to saving up money?
What have you done as a Pro Hero?
etc.

>>94719926
Lmao.
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>>94719795
>>Ladies, Gentlemen, (and Cube if 2-E)
Mr. Tyler, why did you assume Cube-chan is not a lady?
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>>94719795
Would you describe the hero industry's demand as elastic or inelastic? Why?
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Guess I should go threadslave.
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>>94719795
How available are you for student help after school hours?
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>>94719992
When will we switch to posting MHA with the DLC?
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>>94719795
>"I heard Mr. Majestic calling you a no-name loser in the teacher's room. Is that true? Why would the school hire a loser?"
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>>94719795
>Are you more of a silt guy or loam guy? Don't tell me you're into clay, that stuff is way too chewy haha.
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>>94718551
Nah, I didn't mean he's pissed at Kaylee. I meant he's pissed at Sandy and at not being able to fight him. And similar to him being too preoccupied with being pissed off to ponder if he's proud of himself, his mind is also too preoccupied to worry about his crappy odds against Kaylee. If he's had some help channeling that anger back towards the goal of winning the tournament, then he figures he'll just have to make it happen, empty gas tank be damned. Logic is taking a back seat right now.
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>>94719926
Shut UP, Kawano!

>>94719795
Mr. Tyler, how are you supposed to get ground in stains out of clothing without weakening the fabric?
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>>94710164
I can get the powerset I want with two completely different quirks than what I wanted to use. I had a whole plot already planned and this completely ruins it. The alternative is writing a whole novel to eplain how my character got here, I may just do that at this point.
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I'm loving the engagement with my prompt, but I would like the name of the build, unless you wish for the question to be a random student, please include the name. I can assume some, like Dust Devil but I need names poeple!
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>>94720013
>>94720013
>>94720013
Hogs, next thread's this way!

>>94720016
Seeing as it's seeing major use, I'm open to the switch if it's a popular opinion.
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>>94718884
I'm not able to read this right now, but I trust you're building in a good faith attempt to make things more interesting, which is what I personally care about the most. I can give my thoughts tomorrow on the execution of your ideas, but it's probably fine.
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>>94719795
Hi, Rob Williams, will economics be mandatory or an elective?
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>>94720108
Runt?
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>>94719795
Why does everyone snicker when I talk about enterprise resource planning?
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>>94720249
KK (>>94710314) was >>94720188
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>*snrk* Tame's into ERP
>heheheh
>rutabega rutabega rutabega
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>>94720249
Oh right, this is for a writefag, I can read I swear. The nerd question was Christopher.
>>94719975
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>>94720211
what even is your idea
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I still don't know what the [+] modifiers do for Magic Circuits? The option seems unneeded.
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>>94721166
makes em magicier but only sometimes
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>>94719710
>(ngl, I'm not entirely sure what you mean yet)
I still don't have it worded properly, but the idea is basically "two drawbacks for the price of one" so that together they are hopefully enough of detriment. There are two conditions that must be met for him to not return when he opens his eyes:
1. [What the anon proposed >>94719524]: when he opens his eyes after teleporting, there must be no significant differences in his surroundings from his mental image.
2. [Based on my initial idea]: if he wants to stay after teleporting, then keeping the mental image until he opens his eyes is not enough, after the teleport, while he still has his eyes closed he needs to through a process of reinforcing/ internalising/restabilising/solidifying (I don't have a good term for that yet) that mental image, which is difficult, and takes time and concentration.

Part 1 is not overcomeable, gives people a chance to counter it, and limits what he can do with it because not only does he need an area safe from interference, he himself needs to be basically stationary before the teleport (because of conservation of the momentum), and between the teleport and opening his eyes, or his own position would have been a noticeable difference. But there is the issue of >>94719567. If he could instantly open his eyes, then it'd be difficult for the environment to change in that time, and he could instantly fulfil that condition.
Part 2 is to resolve that, and to explain why he wasn't able to do it without drugs yet. It adds a skill check to it, which he wasn't able to pass yet, and even when he becomes able to do it, it will be a drain on him, and most importantly it forces a period of time between his teleport and opening his eyes, during which the surroundings might change and force him to return due to Part 1.
Does this feel like the right direction?
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I think you're probably overjustifying this. There is no set of behaviors or sequence of actions you can take that will make it so you have no critics. Please yourself and do whatever you want to do.
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>>94722630
it does feel better. Focusing on how his quirk revolves around mental images could be good, because you wrote that the mental image can be formed by seeing a place, knowing about it, etc but also from descriptions and interviews if they're detailed enough
so what if, when he teleports and opens his eyes, there's a very brief window where in his perception the mental image overlaps with the one he's seeing. the location doesn't have to absolutely match, since his first refinement was about "filling the gaps". but still, there's only so much this refinement can do, and big enough disruptions still make the mental image+perceived image overlay fail, and that's when he's sent back
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>>94722869
That'd work as the explanation of the changes needing to be "significant". After all, you'd likely never get 100% match because no way in hell you'd know the position of every hair and stuff like that. I'm not sure how detailed I want to go into what significant means, and that might be a somewhat trainable part. Something like a tree sprouting will always cause it to fail, but if someone moves 1cm is that supposed to be enough for it to fail? I feel like stuff like that might be best left vague and maybe just dumped onto the part of how well reinforced the image was.
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>>94722962
yea leaving it vague is the right call, just using common sense and not overthinking it
>>94722763
talking about quirks is fun though



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