Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoagAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_CompIn Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3Relay Slavery EditionPrevious Thread: >>97177838
>>97190348>SCENARIO>Proposed ComplicationsInsidious Cult + Ghost Domain (you can opt out)Stars of Destiny>Proposed character themeMembers, branches and servants of the Xun clan.>Proposed Starting LocationThe domain of the Xun clan. Near the northern border, not far from the Ghost Domain. At least one of its towns was recently raided by the cultists.>BUILDS>>Xun Clan - Main Family>Xun Fengqi, the Fearless Flame (Son of the Patriarch)https://rentry.co/u95vz3hn>Xun Yi, Local Barbarian civilized via marriage (Wife of Fengqi)https://rentry.org/rfpyyt4w>Xun Linghao, Corrupted Phoenix (Son of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/z9kr2kqs>Xun Ming, A poet who cries (Child of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/xunming>Xun Chizi, The Mysterious Pearl (Child of Fengqi and Yi)https://rentry.org/xun_chizi>Xun Moyu, the Young Master (Daughter of the Patriarch?)https://rentry.org/XunMoyu>>Main Xun Family's servants>Yu, Voidchink (Servant of Chizi)https://rentry.org/q44izvuk>Tsolmon, "Tso" (Servant of Linghao)https://rentry.org/tyukc7d5>Shen Qiu, Black Beast of the North (Servant of Moyu)https://rentry.org/wdgphyxi>>Xun Clan - Wen Branch>Xun Wen, the Lady of Fractalshttps://rentry.org/h8iq9mzp>Heinrich Gotthelf Humboldt, the Desuarchived One (Husband of Wen)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97122266>>Xun Wen Branch - adopted staff>Xun Ri, Guardian of Wen (Sister of Jian)https://rentry.co/3v45cffv>Xun Jian, Dragon of the Northern River (Brother of Ri)https://rentry.co/dragonofthenorth>>Xun Wen Branch - non-adopted staff>Fei Cangqiong (Servant of Heinrich)https://rentry.co/mpwindyboy>>Bai Clan - Xun's vassals>Bai Shahua, Shihuahua: Chihuahua of deathhttps://rentry.org/MP_Undertaker>>Liang Clan - Guardians of the Throne>Liang Ba, Imperial Commander of the Northern Borderhttps://rentry.co/LiangYuTG>>Other Nobles>Yuki Ashai, doing ithttps://rentry.co/uu7w2tio>>Other Commoners>Wuyu,Wuxia manhttps://rentry.org/MPWuyu
>>97190351>WRITEFAGS>Enter the Dragon (Xun Jian, Fei Cangqiong)https://rentry.co/enterthedragon_MP>A Pill, A Phoenix, And A Problem (Tsolmon, Xun Linghao)https://rentry.org/fgqwbz82>Shaking things uphttps://rentry.co/pf5wzyzz>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS>Heinrich's Journalhttps://rentry.org/qnx489ve>Xun Moyu's Relationship Chart!!!https://rentry.org/rowmnq3x>Ladies first! (Fei Cangqiong's chart)https://rentry.co/mpwindychart>Tier Listhttps://tiermaker.com/create/martial-path-xun-clan-run-tier-list-17629646
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>>97190353
>JITE Archivehttps://rentry.org/jiterentry1>BUILDS>>Student Council>Shu Jinkō, "My nigga Clark Kent"https://rentry.org/3cexovsdhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/47/1758477005700.png>Madoka Onguuchi, "Distressed Damsel"https://rentry.org/9aedhewchttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/42/1758421653099.png>Meliaya "Yaya" Mihama, "Higan Academy dwarf?"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96462921https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/44/1758441779275.png>Ran Nejima, "Bipolar Tank"https://rentry.org/JITErnhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/64/1758641526880.png>Yae Zennami, "Hugo Boss™ approved Idolon design"https://rentry.org/hv6u3hy4https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/46/1758461607388.png>Kaoru Nagamine, "Tsun for the Student Council"https://rentry.co/zxon8uvhhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1761/00/1761006744282.png>>Fujiwara Senki>Momofuku Chikata, "Tsundere oni tardwife"https://rentry.org/momofuuki_2https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/47/1758478700784.png>Belladonna Sola, "lol as if I'd ever date a cute hacker NERD"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97005155https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758563236277.png>Fumiko Furukawahttps://rentry.org/e7d4wx79https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/58/1758583422481.png>Parfaite Sukemori / La Première femme de Chambre, "Maid in heaven"https://rentry.org/qu7nqq8s>Sayaka Koujin, "Oh no not another triangle choke"https://rentry.org/e225aqhdhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/58/1758582662075.png>Jinguuji Kanaehttps://rentry.org/jiteshugenja>>(Former) Census Club>Alyona Rodionvova, "Mail-order bride from hell"https://rentry.co/yub2yds6https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/68/1758688900210.png>Renka Cho, "Chuuni Tardwife"https://rentry.org/za8grm2c>Archibald Florence, "16-year-old?"https://rentry.org/mmwqzzpm
>>97190358>>Kurobane Group>Reiji Kurobane, "Will fire my dad if I put anything bad here"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96777753>Itsuki, "Ultimate fujo slayer"https://rentry.org/6fs8w6ashttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/57/1758576139400.png>Sophia Alexandria Newtonia IV Chie Igarashi, "Future ruler of Akiba"https://rentry.co/8xxtuscc>>Misc.>Ai Suishi, "Distressing Damsel"https://rentry.org/sgunn9vehttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/45/1758453903714.png>Takumi Wright, "Your uncle after a few beers"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96442943>Liú Měi, "Shì de, buns and thighs!"https://rentry.org/fgr4iihuhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/57/1758578417440.png>Tetsuya Abe, "Just your average futafag"https://rentry.org/5gvkba7d>Takaishi Kuroda, "How it feels to chew sweet potatoes you grew yourself"https://rentry.org/takajite> Kazu Morino, "Those dick pills made it way too big to use. Worth it tho"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96445363>Cato, "Literally every kid in a movie theatre"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96469569>Sumi Ayaka, "brb gonna hang myself for singing flat in the school musical"https://rentry.org/bohemianidol>Tomaki Warumachihttps://rentry.org/ShaltZoiJITEhttps://rentry.org/WarlordKakitohttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/49/1758494337764.png>Matsunaga Keihttps://rentry.org/JITE_Swordsman>Chê Ngiêmhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96582901https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/92/1758920350712.png>Sarah Rheehttps://rentry.org/2wp9qpachttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/98/1758984555340.png>Teruma Arakawa:https://rentry.org/fa5459sq>Liren Shimizuhttps://rentry.co/6e8wkos2>Shōbu Shinkenhttps://rentry.org/LastSamurai
>>97190361>>ID Gang.>Fukuzawa Kohaku>Uesugi Aida>Okabe Takeohttps://rentry.org/6asdeucohttps://rentry.org/tbpmkp54>>Humanity Lost>Satoru Rin, "Nah, I'd fix her"https://rentry.org/JITE-facelessgirlhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/43/1758433358207.png>Kenji Kurosawahttps://rentry.org/skab2shhhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758563707678.png>Arakawa Itsurōhttps://rentry.org/arakawajitehttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758568393768.png>Tachibana Kentarō, "Act 2 Monster"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96688090>>Other>Kirigawa Marisa "Cute and Silly NPC"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96811207>Natsu Chiakihttps://rentry.org/zq9xaz9h>Darknesshttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97012380>>RECENT WRITEFAGS>Perestroika: Act 1(Alyona, Archie, Renka, Madoka, Rin)https://rentry.co/4snntsu9>Big Changes (Archibald Florence)https://rentry.co/2oetuay3>The Riddle, Part 2 (Kaoru, Shu, Yae, Meliaya, Ran, Madoka, Momofuku, Takaishi, Ai, cameo from Fumiko)https://rentry.co/g53zv646>Needs Some Flair (Tomaki Warumaki, Fukuzawa Kohaku)https://rentry.org/NeedsSomeFlair>HLA Investigations: Team Ken (Kentaro, Kenji, Momo, Belladonna, Fumiko, Parfaite)https://rentry.org/2gvsokq7>Last Train Home (Shobu, Madoka)https://rentry.org/h68ckvef>Season Finale: Violence Breeds Violence, Trailer (Shu Jinko)https://rentry.org/aakd566w>Devil's Hands Season Finale: Violence Breeds Violence (ID Gang, Student Council, Fujiwara Senki, Rin, Itsuro, Alyona, Archie, Renka, Ai, Kiro no Kawa)https://rentry.org/rum694cz>Detainment (Kohaku and Aida’s Relationship Charts)https://rentry.org/yv4bea98>Child's Play (Chain, Part 1) (Shu, Yae, Ran, Meliaya, Kaoru, mentions of Madoka and Kohaku)https://rentry.co/dsr832bc>Fright Night (Student Council, Momofuku Chikata, Ai Suishi, Sayaka Koujin, Takaishi Kuroda, Arakawa Itsurō)https://rentry.org/4wecy6b5
>>97190362>>Writefags (Cont.)>Perestroika: Act 2(Renka, Archie, Yae, Student Council, Momo)https://rentry.co/ncupai9e>Comeuppance (HLA, Ai Suishi)https://rentry.org/w6c9bsup>CHILD'S PLAY PART 2 (Warlord Kakito and the Darkness, Tetsuya Abe, Kaoru Nagamine, Meliaya Yaya)https://rentry.org/3w7exibw>I want to be a hero (Itsuki, Sophia, Reiji)https://rentry.org/cwn25dvy>I want to be a Hero (Epilogue)https://rentry.org/gq4q4m2c>A Game of Cat and Bird (Okabe/Kokancho, Yae, Ran, Kaoru)https://rentry.org/ch2bcisf>Child’s Play Part 2.2 (Student Council, Darkness, Tetsuya)https://rentry.org/fzk6n8sv>Damsel of Distress (Itsuro, Rin, Ai, Tomaki, cameos of Shu, Ran and Takaishi)https://rentry.org/5qy4m9w8>Perestroika: Act 3(Alyona, Renka, Archie Student Council, Momo, Mention of Fumiko, Rinhttps://rentry.co/3ss8rfkx>Perestroika: Epilogue(Alyona, Renka, Momofuku)https://rentry.co/qrzpruts>Blue Eyed Souls, Prologue (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko)https://rentry.org/fp5pupik>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 1 (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Tomaki)https://rentry.org/upuh5rpz>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 2 (Momofuku, Alyona, Parfaite, Madoka, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Tomaki)https://rentry.org/5mudp89y>Blue Eyed Souls, Act 3 (Momofuku, Alyona, Madoka, Parfaite, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Sayaka, Itsuki, Mei)https://rentry.org/dga7tnnh>Blue Eyed Souls, Epilogue (Momofuku, Alyona, Madoka, Parfaite, Renka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Sayaka, Kanae)https://rentry.org/e7gb5c24>Eye of the Typhoon (Itsuki)https://rentry.org/xingxc46>Nagamine Case Files: Blood On The Dance Floor (Kaoru, Marisa, Yae, Kenji)https://rentry.co/gfszahec>Cross Examination (Kiro no Kawa, Kohaku, Madoka, Marisa, Shu, Yae, Meliaya, Archie, Renka, Che Ngiem, Kenji, Kaoru, Saito Mimi, mention of the HLA and Ai Suishi)https://rentry.org/v862x2z4>Detainment Updatehttps://rentry.org/yv4bea98
>>97190364>>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS>Satoru Rinhttps://rentry.org/JITEloserchart>Kenjihttps://rentry.org/hymz4apv>Kaoru Nagaminehttps://rentry.co/kcwb63id>Kohakuhttps://rentry.org/yv4bea98>>OTHER CONTENT>Map of Kageokahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96482982>JITE pointing meme(Alyona, Meliaya Mihama)https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1757/49/1757490481679.png>JITE Q&Ahttps://rentry.org/ui7zzsvq>height charthttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1757/64/1757642902812.png>Card templatehttps://files.catbox.moe/t1g8ih.xcf>JITE Charthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96703033>Tier Makerhttps://tiermaker.com/create/jite-tier-18744126>Unofficial Assault Reworkhttps://rentry.org/o6d76h9f>Idolon Ability Datahttps://rentry.org/JITEcelReference
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>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:>New Writefag:>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miaz>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampFormer 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompthttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnairehttps://rentry.org/xudhyrnr>Former 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINEhttps://rentry.org/itmttw7n>Classes Compilationshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Eold former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g>Relationship chartshttps://rentry.org/MHA_Charts>Dorms PromptDorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730>Tiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
>>97190371>SHIKETSU STUDENTS>Hero Course>1-D>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Resethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Troublehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085>Yagami Kirako HN Southpawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Calloushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetraphttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protectorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scourhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Herohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miraclehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyrhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-kahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwahttps://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshirehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooterhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244>Tsuyoi Agnellihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089>1-E>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girlhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
>>97190379>2-Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2D>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamatahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769>Hailey Chang HN Recoilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903>Faith Kang HN Dronehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774>Minerva Kim HN Sparkhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094>Edith Lee HN Arenahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782>Sally McCathy HN Last Ritehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yakohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305>Maxine Nguyen HN Radiushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624>Runt HN Dust Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Forcehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986>Junichi Takagi VN Marrowhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765>Ian Takenaka HN Rushhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991>Takara Tame HN Androidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Questionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085>Rob Williams HN Velvet Wormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
>>97190387>2-Ehttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E>Noah Abrams HN Archangelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Dayhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudevahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackouthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boosthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973>Nayuki Kyokohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Arakenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Trainhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200>Victor Sigurd HN Hydrahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbithttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Millionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363>Suki Yamada HN Sukebanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cubehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433>Other NPCshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E>3-D>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakenenekohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401>Masayoshi Keito HN Crickethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcanahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdownhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knuthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659>General Course>2-A>Satoru Tanihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217>Support Course>3-B>Aura Curiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
>>97190394>SHIKETSU STAFF>Pro Hero teachers>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485>Support Staff>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
>>97190402>PRO HEROES>TOP #1Endeavour>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384>TOP #4Wash>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkorohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847>TOP #9Rosethorn>TOP #10Yamamoto>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honokenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039>Ernst Hennig HN Impakthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563>Tosuke Jinai HN Compoundhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelengthhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513>Renji Kurokawa HN Mashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatchhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccinehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skywardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835>SUPPORTERS>Rika Eichihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr>Holden Deckardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931>Brightlyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clearhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
>>97190410>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS>Horrific 5>Samuel Wilson VN Desolatorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340>On Giết Năng VN Tetherhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198>Erika Murakami VN Noxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddoxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575>Edmund Muller VN Mercuryhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191>Night Parade>Cammy Link VN Karmahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokkehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfingerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481>Okane King VN Midashttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250> ??? VN Mawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272> ??? VN Bogeyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889> Tomihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913>Luccionehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415>Recino R. Percutiohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owarihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Nothttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feralhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka>Ivan Trup VN The Prophethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348>VIGILANTES>Helene Lysingen VN Noctilucahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquariushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069>Toru Imaishi VN Kampaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353>Rebecca Weberhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Brighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707>Sasha Azanamihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404>Ruihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187>Kaori Kaoruhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivorehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndromehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
>>97190422>CULTISTS>The Red Finger>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weaselhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573>REVOLUTIONARIES>Legion>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Stormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS>Bruno Garcia VN Maulerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714>Karuga Itohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242>Ginji Gō VN Desperaidohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931>Blankhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggothhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987>Mammogarhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82>Suslikhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413>Paul Crémieux VN De Jaishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodokuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless Godhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436>Mr. Therapisthttps://rentry.org/638neg63>Rescue Rayhttps://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Daggerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719>Doctor Ivon Kintoborhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140>Saki Fuma VN Replicanthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
>>97190431>WRITEFAGS>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/gqgst77f>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)https://rentry.org/chdorkto>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique): https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):https://rentry.org/7evesekv>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)https://rentry.org/qqhxk757>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)https://rentry.org/rusiv6te>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze>Visa Enquiryhttps://rentry.org/yvwhhh98>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)https://rentry.org/hvct5iab>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)https://rentry.org/iifohf9f>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
>>97190441>WRITEFAGS (Final)>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):https://rentry.org/a8um8793>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)https://rentry.org/o4mageo6>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miazFor more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
>>97190448
Rules/infohttps://rentry.org/uam5mkhv>CYOA(NSFW Warning)https://imgchest.com/p/dl7pd8o67ox>Egawa Taro/Rip Vandernailhttps://rentry.org/mthziyxkhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97060437>Arthur Wodehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97061682>Necrolord Sephidrachhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062008>Kimiko Yuki/Yaofanhttps://rentry.co/hsinf97uhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062514>Fathoms(Fifi)https://rentry.co/rdkoz3rhhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063149>Liam Cooke/Lovxl(Not a Support 3)https://rentry.org/r3git2rchttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063756>Ueto Mio/strawberrycake0923https://rentry.org/5iiayh42https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97089806>Nagisa Ito/Good Things Comehttps://rentry.co/btk9ko6whttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97098741>Writefags>Mountain Wendigo Chain, Part 1! (Taro, Yulit, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Arthur, Yaofan)https://rentry.org/7abfinx5>Setup (Liam, Yaofan, References to others)https://rentry.co/2u2ucyys>Yaofan Intro? (Yaofan/Kimiko,Moth Thot)https://rentry.co/wnwek6x9 >Hunting Lessons (Taro, Peredolia, Yaofan)https://rentry.org/yv2vaygr>Wendigo Chain Part 2 (Liam, Sephidrac, Taro, Yaofan.)https://rentry.co/f4d6fwu8>The Magic Of Learning (Liam, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Mio, Arthur cameo)https://rentry.org/wmxx9tik>Relationships Charts>Tarohttps://rentry.org/v4ygpeib>Liamhttps://rentry.co/ruszvrz4
>>97190348I think enough people don't want Yuki that I may as well drop her out. I thought we would have some travelers but it mostly just seems to make people mad for not fitting in the clan family stuff and whatnot.And some people reeeeeeeeally dont like reposts under any circumstances even if they have a different background.
>>97190673https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rj1UFvXuOqA
>>97190673Seems reasonable, although I will say its already getting difficult to remember which family member is which because theyre all fucking Xuns. You see a list of 10 or 15 of them and its just like what? So I don't hate seeing different names.
One of these days, I'm going to make a fake repost build and wait to see how long it takes for someone to call me out on it
>>97190673Personally, I think it's just that the haters are really loud. If you started effortfagging, I don't think most people would mind. I honestly don't remember enough about her beyond the image to be irritated about the repost.If you aren't sure about dropping her, and would be interested in trying to brainstorm some interactions, I'd be open to it.
>>97190698I do it all the time.
>>97190673I wasn't in the last Martial Path run so I don't mind her at all. Don't let the brainworms get to you anon, I wanna see her have a will they/won't they with Fei
>>97190701>>97190740nta, but I honestly doubt any of the haters were even here for it. Build's from 2022.
>the hatersoh my god bruhall this melting down and attention whoring because of a single courtesan joke? really?
>>97190783>single
>>97190783Oldfags are too sensitive... now in our day and age, anons have thicker skin.
>>97190802>now in our day and age, anons have thicker skin.Lol. Lmao even.
Being a hater is so fun, brosAll you have to do is do some drive-by shitposting on the right random build, and you can have the anon attention whoring and providing free entertainment for the next 3 threads. 0 effort or emotional investment needed, just a target and will to shitpost. There are no consequences either, since anons suck at identifying people nowadays. You guys should try it.
>>97190673I think half of it was shitposting and half of it was genuine concern for the fact she just doesn't fit in. Her having a higher rank and having no ties to the whole point of the setting played a big role.
>>97190246>was amazing but could've been built up more, same with the students learning how to cast holy bolt for the first time. It felt like the process / mistakes needed to be shown more to have the final success have more impact.Honestly I am always torn between wanting to describe things more and not wanting to bloat the piece too much. I am not sure how much exposition people are willing to tollerate and Liam already talks a lot in general. I will keep it in mind, it also felt a bit rushed as I was writing it.>I'm probably not going to be the one to work on the next part though, sorry.No problem. I had the strange idea to plan it in thread and then someone just "assembles" the plan into a writeup, but I'm not sure how well that would work.
What is happening to the captchas?
>>97190838Under every shitpost is a grain of truth. That's why its easier to just drop it. Doesn't cost me anything and it makes it better for the other anons.
>>97190881Anon, the truth in this case amount to anons may not even be involved in the mp thinking you face claim looks slutty. Doesn't really seem work
>>971908231 down, 17 to go. Do not disappoint me, my MHAfioso...
Is it weird that I went from thinking how my build would interact with theirs to put off by Yukianon based on how they've reacted?
>>97190905nope, it's the greenfinger effectragequitting mcyoag of all things is not a good look
>>97190924Could this be... the second cumming of Greenfinger anon?
>>97190850>I had the strange idea to plan it in thread and then someone just "assembles" the plan into a writeup, but I'm not sure how well that would work.If anons want to storyboard for me, go ahead.
Making a multiplayer cyoa this week.
>>97190966what about
OOOOOOOOOOO I'M WRITEFAGGING OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>97190740Neither of them would be annoyed enough by the other for the ship to stay fun.
>>97190990he just like me frfr
>>97190990So does Ken send that every day or was he just pissed off that day?
>>97191008I think he sent it after their fight since he couldn't kill Shu himseOH LORD WHY IS MY CAPTCHA A FUCKING BAR
>>97190973Here is the top text.
>>97191048>RollNah, how about I choose whatever I like and say I rolled off-site instead?
>>97191048>CYOA>look inside>RYOA
>>97191060It's a bit of both. Not every selection will be a roll. Definitely not character creation.
>>97191053>>97191064Actually to clarify, all choices are your own. You can pick the turn you take in a dungeon, but roll your stats to see if you succeed the encounter you select.Rolling is really only used for combat, and the outcome of events / checks.
>>97191077How does movement work in-setting with that whole Range thing? Is it turn-based and full-dive at the same time, or real-time but somehow working on a grid system?
>>97191117It's an abstraction you create in your mind because you can't plug a piece of paper into your brain.
>>97190932Who is greenfinger and what he done did?
I just wrote Madoka giving Kaoru a makeover. This is gonna be peak, we didn't even get to the romance part yet
>>97191152He complained that other characters were almost as tall as his own, that it wasn't fair he couldn't tower over them, and proceeded to call everyone else assholes and then ragequit.
>>97190823its what i did with one of the martial buildshis anon ran off and i even got to fuck with some other anons on top of it when they tried to cover for him sad
>>97191117do zoomers not know what roleplay is jesus fucking christ
>>97191131>>97191175nigger I am asking because the context is a mmorpgif it was a generic fantasy cyoa with stats and range to represent combat to play in the thread, I wouldn't have balked at itall I was asking is if Range is a mechanic of the mmo itself
>>97191186Range increments are a mechanic of both the gameplay for the CYOA as you play it and the diegetic game you are pretending to play.In the CYOA range increments determine your distance from each enemy (and player) along a 2D strip. You move toward the enemies along the number line by decreasing your distance to them.While "The Game™", would presumably have real time firefights among a thousand players in 3D space across kilometers of open field, but range would still be need to be counted to determine accuracy.Both can be true at the same time. I incorrectly assumed that this would have been understood through context.
>>97191048Nigga this is a ttrpg
>>97191267FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK YOU MADE ME LOSE THE FUCKING GAME YOU FUCKING FUCK
this new captcha is gonna make me kill myself"Verificaton not required." CLEARLY NOT TRUE SINCE YOU WON'T LET ME POST YOU RETARDED WEBSITE
>>97191304¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Who else up writing they fags?
>>97191316It's not for here. And it's not really a cyoa either.
>>97191354Me, if staring at notepad and getting out 2 words per 10 minutes counts.
>>97190673The build was boring from conception and the way you interacted with the thread was annoying. The people who hate you the most are the performatively nice anons encouraging you to blame things outside of your control.
>>97191314Sure must suck having to do captchas.I would post with my pass but I don't remember the option for it since I don't do it ever.
>>97190698A fake repost build? Like a bulld you claim was from another run but is new?
>>97191929No, like you repost a build to sully their name.
>>97191048>Rolling>Achecel
>>97191314Yeah I prefer the old one, it was way faster. Not sure how a robot is gonna be any worse at this one.
>rollslop and autistic stats-keepingOVERCHUDS, ASSEMBLE
>>97191980remtryslop.....
>>97191960The worst part is that the best captcha is literally the 'Click here' one from google. THey make you peasants suffer for no reason.
>>97192015Pretend I remembered this earlier.
Fuck, I just found a CYOA that I'd love to do someday but it doesn't seem especially geared to MPs. How many CYOAs have been made into MPs without the CYOA itself mentioning multiplayer options?
>>97192070Lots, but usually they have a harder time taking hold. Better to wait until all the current mps dry up and we're really ready to try anything.
>>97192083Yeah of course, I'm not the kind to just want MPs dead, especially not these ones. It's also probably gonna be double hard to do because it's kaiju-themed.
>>97190351I have the desire to writefag but the characters I want to include have so little info on them I find it hard.Why is life like this.
>>97192210Ask their Anons for the info you need.
>>97192210Well you have two choices anon, 1. Take whatever info you have and try to stretch it into a full story or 2. Use characters that have more info on them. >>97192223Or this
>>97192070Which one?
>>97192210Who are they? And why isn't it me?
>>97192210Just start making shit up and add some easier characters to distract people and overwhelm the thread with (You)s
>>97192210pick better builds next time mmkay
Talk about something cool
So what's the deal with ice cubes, am I right?
>>97192255If you are Xun Ri, Wuyu, Xun Wen, or Heinrich it is you.If not, they its because I can't think of why they would be meeting in the scene I am writing.>>97192223Its mostly personality and demeanor stuff. How they talk, what they care about, that sort of stuff.>>97192325Who do you think are some easier characters>>97192365Will do.
How much do you read the writings of other anons in the MPs you made a build for?What's your general policy with respect to what writings you read and what writings you don't?
>>97192429Ask their anons silly.
>>97192430I read anything that includes me. I read everything I see that includes characters I like. I read other stuff if it engages me and is good to read, but ill drop it if it doesnt.
>>97192430I’ll read it if I consider relevant enough for the main story. Honestly I’ll probably read it, whatever it is, as long as I don’t consider it too self-contained, especially if it involves characters I want to write in the future. Like, let’s say a JITE writefag comes out that turns out to be a one-off involving only one character. I think the right thing to do is still reading it, but I’m gonna be less likely to want to read it compared to a group ensemble story that’s meant to set up future stuff, even if my build isn’t in it, because I might need to take that into account for my future writing. For example, I read the entirety of Blue Eyed Souls because that’s motivating my current writing for Madoka. But if it had been, say, a Momofuku-only story that doesn’t even involve any other builds (extreme case, I know), I’d feel less inclined to read it, even if I’d feel an obligation to do so anyway.
>>97192430If I am part of the MP I read everything about it that isn't an obvious shitpost. I don't always answer but I do read everything, even if sometimes it's not immediate.
>>97192429>HeinrichI'm here.Anything in specific or more general stuff in the way he speaks and acts?
>>97192430I try to read everything, I'm not fast enough when MPs are going really fast due to irl stuff. I try to grab anons who write things directly to discuss what I'm going to do, if unable to I tend to stay away from changing their plots and treat most things as canon.Haven't been active for a while but have been lurking though, so I can't speak for this year very much.
I was wondering why I had trouble posting earlier. Good to know it's the site's captcha more than anything.>>97190850>I am not sure how much exposition people are willing to tollerateWell, it depends on how it's presented. People generally don't want to be told something, they want to figure it out themselves. I did want to hold back my criticism since it could be a stylistic thing, but your writing does lean on the tell rather than show so it's understandable why you'd want to lean on less words rather than more.>I had the strange idea to plan it in threadI guess it could work. The problem that prevented progress seemed to be that since the wendigo came from another game, what would be the consequences of defeating it. The discovery of it being from another game feels like a big revelation that happened too early on, and that it should've been its own scene rather than being delegated to something off screen for the advisors to disseminate. Not to discourage Taro anon, of course. It's actually a pretty good idea. I just think it should've been introduced after the party had settled down and gotten comfortable with the situation so that it would shake up the status quo they had established. Since we are on the topic, let's try it.>>97190484How do you think your build would contribute to the wendigo trap? What things could go wrong, and how would your build try to resolve things if it did go south? This can be answered in character, like the campfire talk, or OOC.
>>97192430I try to at least flip through them for a courtesy view, if nothing else. I know no one likes to have unread work.
>>97192430I only read writefags with my build and just click on the other ones and say kino without actually reading if it doesn't
>>97192519Does that mean another writefag could potentially have Freddy Fazbear as an antagonist?
>>97192529Too powerful, would solo the village.
>>97192529FNAF MP chads our big break is nigh
>>97192429>Xun WenI haven't really nailed down a voice for her. Her cultivation method makes her very zen and calm at all times, so she's less of a chilly ice queen and more like a relaxed painter lady, if that helps.She is equally casual when giving commands like adding arms to seamstresses. It's just an improvement for their own good, after all.
>>97192430I read anything for my main MPs.
>>97192429The best case scenario is using writefags to get a feel for how builds act, but since it's so early in the mp, that isn't really an option. Moyu-anon's relationship chart is helping me out when it comes to personality since it has those little flashbacks before each entry, but Wuyu isn't in that so I don't think it'll help you write him specifically. You can also check out Heinrich's relationship chart to see his personality extensively (or ask his anon since they're in the thread).
>>97192519>How do you think your build would contribute to the wendigo trap? Taro will place some stone slabs around the trap with smart missile runes on them, at Liam's suggestion, allowing him to toss them back at the wendigo if it throws them. Apart from that he throws barrages of arrows with the ranged attackers.>What things could go wrong, and how would your build try to resolve things if it did go south?Wendigo enters a second phase letting it teleport behind trees like Slenderman so it can escape the trap and sneak up on players.Crew takes some losses to faceless background players as they flee across the river. Wendigo doesn't level up from the kills because it's not from an RPG.Players keep shooting it and it crosses the river, allowing Fifi to go all out with fish summons to stall it there.
>>97192429>WuyuOh shit, that's me.>Its mostly personality and demeanor stuff. How they talk, what they care about, that sort of stuff.There is a bit of info in the build https://rentry.org/MPWuyu#personalityFor practical purposes, you can imagine three modes he operates in: With Commoners, With Cultivators, In Combat.With Commoners, he's loud and cheerful. Even with his stature and fame, he's obviously one of them. No matter where it is, it feels a bit like he's a prodigal son coming home. There is a sense of familiarity, and even if his achievements make him stand out, there is no wall between him and the people. He clearly cares about the people, and they appreciate it what he does for them. This is where he feels at home.With Cultivators, the demeanour is completely flipped. He feels like he doesn't belong, and he's likely right. He subconsciously tries to hide the traits that might make him stand out. He tries to speak more quietly to mask his lack of education and peasant accent. He'll slouch to hide his stature. His fame doesn't reach here, so that helps. In general, he'll try to not attract attention to himself. That is, until he interacts with the cultivators because he has too, and considering his search for allies right now, this is the case. He has to overcome the shyness, and try, which he will do, but the traces of it will linger. Outside of the elders that taught him, he doesn't really know any cultivators. With Elders, he's naturally reverential, but if he came to know someone closer to his level, he might eventually break out of that shell.In combat, serious one, even against cultivators, he's an image of quiet intensity. Combined with the large stature and powerful build, it gives him an intimidating aura. He'll do what he can and has to win, because he doesn't fight just for himself but also for others.
>>97192623In general, he cares about the wellbeing of the people, and that's his main goal. He fights against the injustice and corruption. He's not against the social hierarchy entirely, though. As long as it's not abused, he believes that's the right way for the world to function.On a more personal level, he's also of the people, so his own wellbeing is still important. He enjoys simple life pleasures, good food (as in plentiful and filling rather than fancy and expensive), a warm place to sleep, and a nice view. He likes music, but the tunes he enjoys are simple, are generally simple and rhythmical, although a musical prodigy that can bypass the knowledge requirements and reach straight to the emotional level could broaden his horizons. He doesn't understand poetry, erudite references, and too convoluted concepts, so those would have to be explained to him.Is that enough, or do you have any more specific questions?
>>97192512Would he be in a small council, to discuss the cultists raids. What would he offer in terms of discussion if anything. He is giga brained, does he apply that outside of making things? >>97192554What is her approach to the cultists/ghost domains growing threat and her role as warden of the north. How does she view the arrival of an imperial overseer, does she see it as a slap in the face, a relief someone else now can worry about it, does she worry its some sort of imperial ploy to undercut her power. Who would she invite to a meeting between Liang Ba and herself? >>97192623I want to have him brought in for questioning. From reading your background it sounds like it could be interpreted as a deserter from the outpost her was stationed at. would it be possible for soldiers to convince him peacefully or would he need to be subdued or coerced? Could he be convinced by an official its his civic duty?
>>97192594>Wendigo enters a second phase letting it teleport behind treesIf it does escape by teleporting, do you think it would be a good ending to the part, or does the fight continue on until it's actually defeated? I could imagine some players thinking it despawned after falling into the trap only for it to attack again and catch someone off guard a few days later.
>>97192646>WuyuI'm writing a short intro for him, and I was planning on having him set out to find the Bai after the outpost attack, because they're the clan he might trust the most right now, but I can change that.Technically, he's a soldier of the Xun, but with how large the clan is, and his immediate superior having been executed, he feels like approaching them directly might be more difficult.Being accused of deserting, when the only alternative was staying there, dying and letting the cultists take the treasure, would likely cause him to laugh out the messenger. He, however, doesn't plan to re-join the army, as the feels the decision to volunteer in the first place was born from his complacency, but he believes he has done his duty and isn't bound to allow himself to be ordered around. He has "re-entered the jianghu" if I'm not mixing up the terms.He is, however, not averse to cooperating otherwise, but not under a strict military hierarchy. If it's about going there to explain what happened and working together to stop the Cult, then he'd agree to that peacefully. He would even return the artifact to the Xun if he believes that they can use it for the greater good better than he can.Unless, of course, the story would work better otherwise. Then his suspicion about the officials could interfere. Maybe he has met them in the past and know they're corrupt? Or maybe he has reasons to believe that the Cultists might have infiltrated the ranks of the Xun (maybe the attack on the outpost was partially an inside job)?If it's Jin officials, then that might be reason enough because he doesn't feel much loyalty to the Emperor, since most of his life he only viewed Xun as the masters of the land he lives in and transitive feudal relationships are beyond him. Like he knows that the Emperor is somewhere south and Xun might answer to him, but he feels far away and more like just a vague concept.
>>97192678I think people want to finish the chain so we can move on to other things.
>>97190351My brain is filled by Taiwanese puppets whenever I see wuxiaposts, will take a read later, need to sleep soon. Do we need some PCs for the bad guys/cultists?
>>97192519>but your writing does lean on the tell rather than showWhen I try to imply things it fails miserably so that's why I try to be descriptive. It's also a part of trying to balance more characters than usual, that distracted me as well. I don't know if you can call it a style, but I try to be consistent.>The discovery of it being from another game feels like a big revelation that happened too early on, and that it should've been its own scene rather than being delegated to something off screen for the advisors to disseminate.I don't think that ever happened. Taro anon said it out of character in the thread, Peredolia just said it's not from the original game, and Abbadon checks for weaknesses not origin. Liam has an idea of what it is because he's a nerd but he doesn't spread that information yet because he has no proof, and that would just cause panic. I was assuming only Liam suspects it's an intruder or maybe the PCs with more brainy advisors or extensive game knowledge.>How do you think your build would contribute to the wendigo trap? To the trap specifically, just swords to use instead of spikes. He could also act as the activation mechanism for the traps if necessary, since he can dispel his weapons whenever he wants people can build traps around the swords so the ground collapses when they are gone. Of course he can just give out weapons to the frontline fighters.>What things could go wrong, and how would your build try to resolve things if it did go south?The wendigo could jump out of the pit, or simply not take as much damage as expected and start rampaging. Liam would fight it head on with Abbadon to support to distract it and allow the others to attack in a more safe way. It would be like a challenge run for him, and with Bless and Healing Bolt he has decent survivability as long as he does his job as a veteran and doesn't get hit.There are also enough damage dealers to help him in melee.
>>97192807>Do we need some PCs for the bad guysNo because it would mean they couldn't actually be defeated for good and not using them would just isolate a build
>>97192749>He has "re-entered the jianghu" if I'm not mixing up the terms.It'd be an apt description if he had gone hermit mode or something. I don't think the builds, and by extension the Xun clan, is considered to not be a part of jianghu. Therefore smaller parts of the clan like any soldiers they send out would probably also be considered part of jianghu. Can't re-enter something you never left.If this was a more wuxia style setting where the military and government is separate from the clans, sects, and wandering murder hobos, then that phrase would apply to him.
>>97192749>because he doesn't feel much loyalty to the EmperorCommander Liang cut off his balls
>>97192825I appreciate this happening in most cases but I'm usually of the opinion that if I make a villain they're here to make for some cool evil fodder and can die when it makes sense rather than trying to 'win' a scenario - villains exist to lose. Fair take though, I don't blame you for being wary.
>>97192646>Would he be in a small council, to discuss the cultists raids. Depends on if he's wanted there by the patriarch. I imagine Xun Wen's branch know his talents better so he'd be likely included there but the main clan elders may not involve him. I imagine he would though for sake of discussion.>What would he offer in terms of discussion if anything.Probably just list field data if asked or if he notes something odd he'd ask permission to acknowledge it, same thing with proposing a theory or assumption on cultist movements/behavior/likely targets. He knows that he is still an outsider and should pay proper respect, not speaking freely or talking over someone, and definitely not arguing with an elder.>He is giga brained, does he apply that outside of making things?Yeah, he's a bit of a schemer. I forgot to mention but Havelberg is like an Athenian sort of deal government-wise and he was relatively active. He knows a good deal about politicking and dealmaking.
>>97192646I'm also here, (RI) if you had questions.
>>97192845>and can die when it makes sensethis is the key issue I'd sayhow many villains have actually died when it made sensehard mode: no acknowledging MHA unless it was within the first 4 months of the MP
>>97192827Under some interpretations of the term, I believe jianghu has a sort of outside the law aspects to it and then Xun wouldn't qualify, but maybe a better term would be "re-entered it fully". He was sort of semi-retired. He stopped the youxia life, but he did not abandon the martial life completely. He was stationed in a remote outpost that didn't get effectively any action until the raid, so he was essentially a glorified security guard/policeman. Almost a hermit mode. He's seen more goats and sheeps than people, while stationed there.>>97192841Look at this lad, he believes the emperor exist? The all powerful man that controls the whole world? What's next? You'll claim some old guy travels around the world in a single night giving children presents?
>>97192678>or does the fight continue on until it's actually defeated?As the other anon said I think we just want to get rid of it, it's kinda roadblocking us from other stuff.Rather than escape, if it's from a horror game it would more likely become even more aggressive.Since it was described as moving in a sharp disconnected way I had the idea that some people could recognize that it's not fast, it's just lagging. Then the veterans can fight accordingly maybe?
>>97192873>how many villains have actually died when it made senseBack in Mercurial Grail War...
>>97192888>What's next? You'll claim some old guy travels around the world in a single night giving children presents?San Ta, venerable elder of the San clan, is real. Nobody can stop him when he breaks into houses and forts alike from the roof, we are lucky he only comes out of closed cultivation once a year. He brings kids pills.
>>97192819>When I try to imply things it fails miserablyIt doesn't mean to always use show rather than tell. Sometimes the only option is to tell the audience what happens. Liam is a very heavy tell-type of character because of how he's associated with glitches and exploits. By their nature, exploits shouldn't make intuitive sense, so they have to be told rather than shown. This gets into a different issue where the satisfaction of an exploit or a glitch being used to solve an issue is correlated to how well the audience understands said exploit or glitch, but let's leave it at that.If I had to make a general rule of thumb, you'd want to lean on show when the scene is more emotionally charged. People don't just say or think that "I'm sad", it's usually less direct which is why showing works better, or at least that's what I prefer.>I don't think that ever happenedI must've misinterpreted the Abbadon scanning scene then.
>>97192888>Under some interpretations of the term, I believe jianghu has a sort of outside the law aspects to itIt can be argued that way in a vacuum, but I think context matters. Normally jianghu is outside of the law in multiple senses. The government, army, and nobility aren't usually martial artists nor do they practice techniques. The whole institution exists outside of jianghu. That's why when you tie yourself down with them, you're leaving jianghu. This is a setting where jianghu has been integrated into those institutions, so you can't really say that jianghu is outside the law anymore.That aside, the bit about him being shoved off to the side where there's no action can work. Retiring from jianghu doesn't always mean a clean cut, so if he was completely out of contact with the rest of the martial arts world, you could say he was retired from jianghu even if he was technically still a part of it from an orgazational standpoint.
>>97192825Just make a villain explicitly to be killed.>>97192890>Since it was described as moving in a sharp disconnected way I had the idea that some people could recognize that it's not fast, it's just laggingThe way it moves is actually stylistically choppy, like the Spiderverse movies' animation. It's the way the horror game was made, but to give its movements an uncanny quality.
>>97192873In the same vein how many heroes died when it made sense. That's not to say people who play villains just to win are free of blame, a good player makes a villain that heightens the experience for the other players and disappears when they're no longer entertaining. The problem is it takes a mixture of actually effortfagging and having an interesting concept otherwise you've just made a dead build.
>>97192985>not making a villain so you can headcanon them winning and gaping everyone when the MP ends without closure like 99% of the time
>>97192981>Just make a villain explicitly to be killedAnons are just too nice to kill off characters and would ask multiple times if it was okay even if you make it clear as part of the build. And then there's the off chance of having multiple deaths due to slow cooking, but that's a very minor problem that's fixed through communication. Then there are those who wouldn't interact with them because they're going to die anyway which would suck for the guy.
>>97192961>Liam is a very heavy tell-type of character because of how he's associated with glitches and exploits. By their nature, exploits shouldn't make intuitive sense,That's why in my other writeup I made the exploit corner that explains how it works. I'm not sure if it makes it better or not.> you'd want to lean on show when the scene is more emotionally charged. People don't just say or think that "I'm sad", it's usually less direct which is why showing works better, or at least that's what I prefer.I will try to keep it in mind. I think I already did that, but it's worth considering. There were a couple of situations where I think I did it with Liam, but nothing overly emotional happened yet so maybe it doesn't apply.I also did it with Lixdite in MHA but in that case it's a lot easier since I can just show his quirk going out of control. He has the opposite problem, being almost unable to speak.I guess I tend to tie powers to emotions because of this too, makes showing thing easier.>I must've misinterpreted the Abbadon scanning scene then.It was supposed to be a "how do I kill this" scan, not a "tell me his life story" scan, if it makes any sense. I figured the wendigo would take some bonus damage from Holy, being at least partially evil spirit, but not the full 3x demons and undead get. Also woves and furred creatures in general are probably weak to fire, partially for meme reasons, so I will leave that one up to others.
>>97193035What I mean is, those who already have main builds can just make builds for antagonists to be killed. Not lock yourself in to running one.
>>97193035Hell, I like making builds more than running them. Maybe I'll whip up an NPC baddie or two.Also a thousand bubonic-infested fleas into the underwear of the faggot who invented these new captchas holy shit
>>97193123will the baddies also be baddies?
>>97193123ngl, history has shown that most anons will choose to use their own non-build baddies over throwaway builds. Hell I feel like writing a non-build villain into a writefag will make that NPC more likely to see use from other anons than if you made that NPC a build and also wrote them into a writefag.
>>97193138I do now know how to write women, and the ones I fetishize you would not accept.
>>97193123Skill issue.
>>97193145>I do now know how to write women,It's already been stablished you wouldn't be running them.>the ones I fetishize you would not accept.Try me.
>>97193037>I'm not sure if it makes it better or notIt's a good way to clarify the exploit after the fact, but I also think it should be set up in some way earlier. Take the Blessing Layering exploit for example. When blessing is used in the wolf fight, it's described with "a holy aura surrounds him". Further attention could've been brought to its visual effect, or the holy aura could brought up whenever bless was used so that it sticks in the audience's mind long enough to be called back to when it finally gets used to escape. It gets set up before hand, and also satisfies the audience's curiosity as to why so much attention was given to bless, even if only subconsciously.>There were a couple of situations where I think I did it with Liam, but nothing overly emotional happened yet so maybe it doesn't applyPeople will just miss things sometimes regardless of the skill of the author. It's why I worry about being too harsh of a critic since there's the possibility that I just missed the signs earlier. I guess you could ask how effective X or Y scene was if you wanted to see how well your experiment went.Yeah it was a lot easier with Lixidite. I do miss that class a bit.
this nigga really still flexing the fact he paid for 4channel KEKAROOOOOOOOO
>>97193146>he bought the pass
>>97193141Opposite for me, I prefer to have a build to reference rather than need to chased own x's y writefag about who the villain is.
>>97193158>>97193163I support the site I've been on for more than 20 years yeah.This is the only time its actually relevent.
>>97193158What's wrong with paying for the 4chan battle pass? It gives some good materials and cosmetics, and it delays EoS. Or are you telling me you don't like playing /mcyoag/ the gacha?
>>97193175>giving 1+1+1+1 chunnel your credit card info after the great hackeningbrave man
>giving money to a website that can't even bring pdfs backwhat an investment BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I'm sure they're very thankful for your 20 bucks between the ad money
>>97193183It's fun but I have to keep making new accounts for the free stuff to keep up with the powercreep.
>>97193185>>97193199It lasts for a year each time Basically 2 bucks a month.>>97193183I mostly do it for the delaying EOS part, Hiroshimoot wants to amke a profit or he'll sell it to the next worse guy.I gotta admit the cute skins are pretty great too. Yotsuba Fumos are great. Shame I missed out on the Mootikins Catgirl skin because he fled to mootxico.
>>97193204You have to be careful. Most players here don't like it when you're using the invite code exploit to gain more (You) points. Especially when the dump accounts clutter the PvP arena and bloats the rankings leaderboard that gets refreshed after every maintenance period.
>>97193301defend your placements
>>97193301Accurate for my build
>>97193301I'm gonna need some defensive arguments for everyone besides obvious ones like Moyu.Curious on a lot of these positions.
>>97193301every build but mine should be at envy because they're jealous of my swagger
>>97193155>or the holy aura could brought up whenever bless was usedI'm pretty sure I at least said it caused a glow each time, but if I forgot that's on me, sometimes I do forget that stuff.>I guess you could ask how effective X or Y scene was if you wanted to see how well your experiment went.I think it's not too hard to see Liam is hit harder than he lets on from the death of the villagers, but I will ask just in case. I will try to not forget important things in the future.>I do miss that class a bit.I can't speak for anybody else but I haven't given up on it, I have about half a writeup ready. MHA is a different kind of chill from Fantasy Village, it feels safe? I think others already said it.
>>97193301I don't need any arguments. I will just accept this for all the builds I didn't read.
>>97193301actually Yú doesn't restrict himself to only one sin, good hearted as he may be inside it's all surrounded by a layer of scum
>>97193343What if they're all obvious?
>>97193301I don't know what this is supposed to be about. Is it the sin they embody? The sin they look like? The sin they should be based on elements?I don't see the logic behind most placements honestly.
>>97192861>>97192862Wait Is Xun Wen not the matriarch? I thought the Wen branch superseded the main branch as she is the warden of the north?>>97192862Same same for all the others. Would they be present, what would they offer, demeanor, and how they react to an imperial presence. Do they see it as a slight, are they worried, excited, hopeful etc.
>>97193385anon I need MP art real bad
>>97193420>Wait Is Xun Wen not the matriarch?Not this shit again. We already went over this 3 separate times already, she is not.
>>97193412My guess is it was just the closest match and most didn't fit any of them
>>97193301Honestly I'd rather see something like arcanas for the different builds.
>>97193420>I thought the Wen branch superseded the main branch as she is the warden of the north?The Xun clan as a whole is the warden of the north, not Wen. She is still just a branch, she only has the branch origin.
>>97193420>Wait Is Xun Wen not the matriarch? I thought the Wen branch superseded the main branch as she is the warden of the north?Xun Wen may not even be the matriarch of her branch, let alone in matters regarding the north.
>>97193420Xun Wen is just a cousin to the main branch.
>>97193428>>97193412nta but it's pretty obvious to me for most of them.>PrideMoyu is obvious, Wen believes in the superiority of the upper class>EnvyShahua wishes she were alive, Ri is one of the reaches but maybe she'd be jealous of her brother being the darling special boy?>LustFei is obvious, Yi basically offered up her body in surrender>GluttonyMing is a reach, Fengqi looks like a bigger guy, Heinrich probably drinks like a German>WrathAll pretty violent/warrior-like.>SlothYu is lazy, the other two are reaches.
>>97193428I really can't see it. What is lustful about Yi? The whole gluttony row seems just placed there at random. Wuyu is one of the harderst workers we have, so is Chizi.I can say that Linghao isn't particularly wrathful, if I had to put him on the chart I would be torn more between greed and pride. He's pretty rational even when angry.
>>97193477NTA but you just know Yi loves to fuck
>>97193422yea I'm thinking about making something for martial path and jite too when I have time this week
>>97193474>Moyu is obvious, Wen believes in the superiority of the upper classThis works, pretty clear.>Shahua wishes she were alive, Ri is one of the reaches but maybe she'd be jealous of her brother being the darling special boy?Ri makes no sense, she never showed any of that. In fact she kinda pities her brother because he's treated like a test subject and less like a person.>Fei is obvious, Yi basically offered up her body in surrenderYi didn't do it because of lust, there is nothing lustful about it. It wasn't offered, she had no other choice apart from death. She became a loving, if distant, mom but isn't obsessed with making more kids either.>Ming is a reach, Fengqi looks like a bigger guy, Heinrich probably drinks like a GermanI don't see any of them. Maybe Heinrich, but Fenqi doesn't feel like it.>All pretty violent/warrior-like.I don't think Linghao has been depicted as particularly violent. The other 2 I can see.>Yu is lazy, the other two are reaches.Feels like a bit more than a reach with them but fair I guess.
Feels like 90% of the builds would be pride lmao.
>>97193487I don't get that vibe from the character. The faceclaim is horny but the character as described is not.
>>97193529She did have three kids.
>>97193474>>97193516You skipped greed.Tsolmon kinda fits, but barely. Jian doesn't fit at all.
>>97193538two of them are twins though, unless there's some weird xianxia bullshit where you can plan how many children you'll have while dual cultivating or something
>>97193538Only 2 conceptions, because 2 are twins. And she doesn't need to like sex for that, she just wants to be a mom. That alone doesn't prove it.
>>97193301My turn to guess>PrideBoth were stated to be prideful IIRC>EnvyShahua had envy due to her weak body and now because of her undead one. Ri is envious of her friend Wen or her brother for some reason? Idk about that one.>LustFei is obvious, Yi loves making babies>GreedTsolmon was a thief I think idk. Jian is a dragon and dragons like gold?>GluttonyMy best guess is they treated it like excess. Ming is excessive with her emotions and I guess Heinrich's Frankenstein shenanigans could be excessive? Pride or Greed probably fit him better for that angle but idk. I think Fengqi is there for being a pill popper.>WrathAnon probably didn't read these builds and put them there for having edgelord art.>SlothVoid nigga makes sense, Chizi might be there for her root making her emotionally passive in a way. I can kinda see it from the description. Wuyu idk. He took a break from cultivation in his backstory right? Maybe that's it.
okay but you gotta admit that Yi and Fengqi and Heinrich and Wen probably fuck like animalsdual cultivation is important, and imagine the kinky shit they could get up to!
>>97193574>Jian is a dragon and dragons like gold?If that's it it's wrong on so many levels. Chinese dragons don't even like gold.>Anon probably didn't read these builds and put them there for having edgelord art.I'm starting to suspect he didn't read any of the builds.
>>97193574Tsolmon did steal the loot he found in the technical sense, as it wasn't rightfully his, but the ruins he found the salvaged goods in were very much abandoned, and the other cultivator long dead if that helps catalog him at all.
>>97193578>Yi and FengqiThey are very in love so maybe?>Heinrich and WenHeinrich isn't even sure she loves him back and is very focused on being sure of that before he tries anything.
>>97193590NTA, but Chinese dragons are often associated with gold even if its less so for hoarding it like western dragons do. And it's not as common, but there are Chinese dragons that do hoard it.
>>97193596Tsolmon steals? No dignity.
>>97193424>>97193442>>97193452my mistake, I didn't know this was covered. So who is the patriarch of the clan then? I see Xun Fengqi is a son of the patriarch and some sort of military leader.In that case Fengqi anon:What is his approach to the cultists/ghost domains growing threat and the clans role as warden of the north. How does he view the arrival of an imperial overseer, does he see it as an insult, a relief, or an imperial ploy to undercut the clans power. Who would he invite to a meeting between Liang Ba to discuss the threat and their response to it?
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>>97193474>Shahua wishes she were alive...She's not dead though?
>>97193620Accurate
>>97193620Heinrich is my GOAT
>>97193615The current patriarch is an NPC. He and the venerable elders would likely be high realms so we can't accurately build them.
>>97193620I am so tempted to say my character is wrong and to add a funny alternative but I don't want to engage in the fetish posting too much.
>>97193620Should have divided the women into "arms, back, penis" preferences instead
>>97193610also nta, but ngl... Chinese dragons are more lust than greed. It's a common sticking point that all the random dragon-like creatures exist because those horny bastards will literally go after ANYTHING. Humans? Toads? Wasps? Literally nothing escapes them.
>>97193645Also pride is a big one.
>>97193615>>97193633The current patriarc is an NPC but I'm pretty sure he's not in the north. Or at least he wouldn't be on the frontlines, they sent Fengqi to deal with the problem so he would be logically the one to hold the meeting and decide who attends. Unless he plans to delegate that to someone else because he doesn't feel like dealing with it, he seems much more like an action leader than a planning leader.
>>97193645Yeah, I wasn't saying it was the best way to do it, just that it wasn't completely ridiculous if that was the reasoning.
>>97193641That's not as funny. Doing too much.
>>97193655That's for all dragons. Dragons are inherently sinful, the western ones at least. They are greedy, they are prideful, they are lazy and sleep for centuries, they are gluttonous, they are envious of anyone richer than them, they are wrathful. They are only missing lust, but stories are full of draconic hybrids so maybe not.Eastern dragons are wiser and divine, bust still are wrathful, prideful, and lustful, they are also greedy but for different things.
>>97193660The patriarch should be in the north. Could be that the ghost domain is past or near the ancient domain so it's a political no-no for an elder getting closely involved? Could be Fengqi has an adviser (maybe a eunuch or some other servant, possibly directly under the patriarch) as the main organizer for meetings.
>>97193613He's of nomad blood, so I don't think the Chinese would ever have accorded him any dignity anyway.
>>97193615Patriarch is an undefined NPC right now. He's almost certainly the strongest person in the Xun Clan. We don't know much else about him, as the only rentries that mention the Patriarch directly are Moyu's sheet and relationship chart (the former calls Moyu his daughter even though I think Moyu-anon retconned that. The latter says that the Patriarch is so well known that even a demonic beast should know him and that Moyu 'dares not question him'.)His lack of appearance could be pretty easily excused by just saying he's in closed door cultivation, or maybe he's visiting the Jin Empire for some reason.
>>97193301Sloth could fit Chizi for being a twin who is considered younger than their counterpart because they stayed behind as an Embryo. However, I would consider their overall nature more fitting of Greed and Envy, as they desperately yearn for things they do not or cannot have (humanity, a mother's affection, etc), and refuse Duality because it would mean letting go of something.>>97193620Inaccurate.
>>97193633>>97193660>>97193684>>97193687We have sort of written ourselves into a corner if there is an growing threat, there are elders around, but we can't really write them. Because it makes little sense for them not to be in charge and active in this sort of scenario. To mitigate, we can move the ghost domain into the ancient domain which would prevent elders from entering and would require them to put juniors in charge to handle things.Does the Patriarch have any lore yet? A name? If the choice is between him being in closed door cultivation or visiting the central area I would vote closed door. It doesn't make much sense for them to send Liang Ba if they are calling away the patriarch does it?
>>97193702NTA but I was thinking pride or wrath honestly for both Chizi and Ming. Literally compelled by their very natures to pettily compete.>inaccurateSo Chizi definitely likes things "cheesy" I'm guessing...
>>97193711>A name?Xun Wenyu.
>>97193702>Inaccuratedeath of the author
>>97193721lmao
>>97193711>To mitigate, we can move the ghost domain into the ancient domainThis feels like the best option.But it could also be that the threat is not actually that serious so they deemed it doesn't need elder attention.
>>97193711>>97193733The insidious cult could also have deeper relations than previously thought. The main leaders and benefactors of the cult could be engaging the other powerful elders in politics and are relying on the main cult body as a sort of proxy war.
>>97193741Could be they have spies and maybe even elders on the inside that are downplaying how big the problem is so the other elders don't intervene.
>>97193733>>97193741Do we want to go with a "there is no war in ba sing se" sort of approach.>the cult has infiltrated the various clans and sects>they have various levels of control>through there overt control and subversive control of advisers and the like the Clans elders / leaders have been convinced there is no Ghost Cult>the ghost domains leaders are hidden in the ancient domain, where they know as long as they keep a low profile no rival elders will come for them>meanwhile>Younger generations have started to notice irregularities >their appeals for assistance have fallen on deaf ears>many follow the elders in thinking it is all rumors and excuses
>>97193716>Literally compelled by their very natures to pettily compete.Yeah, but only when those natures are brought close together. Chizi is not naturally wrathful or outwardly prideful, their Rival has to bring it out of them>cheesyAlso no.>>97193726I haven't gotten my chart out and you're already killing me off? Let me be an author for a bit more...
>>97193301Yeah, I can see why Lust seems obvious for Fei, and that probably is the best fit. But don't discount his gluttony and greed either. And while he definitely isn't lazy when it comes to things he's interested in, that can change on a dime, and he'll become really lazy about the things he doesn't want to do. So you could make an argument for Sloth too. He's probably just too decisive and certain about his actions, even if it's always moment to moment, for Sloth to win out. He rarely has a plan, but he's always moving forward.>>97193620Idk if Fei could choose. He loves every part of a woman. And if he did choose, it might be something like hips or thighs. It'd probably depend on the day. So maybe some days this would be accurate.
>>97193778Sounds interesting. We could have a couple elders that have suspects so they send investigations seriously but can't intervene directly. That would explain how Liang Ba and the Xun expedition force are here now.
>>97193711You don't necessarily have to merge the two domains entirely, you could just have the evil cultists move their home base into what they perceive to be a more secure location.
>>97193687>He's almost certainly the strongest person in the Xun Clan.It's possible since sometimes clans do it that way, but it's more likely that he isn't. Usually how these things work is that the strongest person gets to retire to focus purely on cultivation, becoming a clan ancestor. Patriarch is probably a gold core or profound level cultivator while any clan ancestors are blood condensing and emperor.
>>97193711>To mitigate, we can move the ghost domain into the ancient domainIt's not like elders are physically incapable of going in. It's just a gentleman's agreement. If the cult is camping in there, the northern clans would just agree to genocide them before going back to the status quo.
>>97193800I like this idea. I might have to revisit some stuff to make it fit.So then the questions become.>who of us is a part of the coalition who are investigating >who of us doesn't believe the rumors>who or why did Liang Ba get sent out to the North, did someone call for aid? or is something else at play.>What other clans / sects / factions are in the north. Should we set some up as puppets for the cult.
>>97193821>It's not like elders are physically incapable of going in. It's just a gentleman's agreement. If the cult is camping in there, the northern clans would just agree to genocide them Not if a good portion of them dont believe the threat is real and just think this is a ploy by those who want to exploit the area. Besides that its possible the agreement includes forces outside the North, like the East/West/Central forces as well. Alternatively, we could say that there are formations surrounding it that prevent access to high level cultivators. or formations that suppress your cultivation while inside, so no elder would risk losing their power and making themselves a target for anything less than the holy grail of treasure troves.
>>97193821Sentiment like that is unironically what political opponents used historically and even today.>THE XUN CLAN IS FAKING CULT ATTACKS SO THE ELDERS CAN GET INTO THE ANCIENT DOMAIN!In this case it's true but I'm unsure if the Jin Empire will accept it.
>>97193842I mean put yourself in the position of a bottlenecked elder. You've cultivated diligently for hundreds of years. Now you are stuck. But right next door is a juicy juicy cultivation paradise, but there is a sign saying "no entry". Then the idea hits you, what if I sacrifice some of those mortal villages. Those guys die every god damn minute anyway, what will they notice if they life for 40 years or 80. Trivial difference. But if I can burn down some villages and get access to that juicy juicy paradise, I can get strong enough to look after their descendants for ten generations.What parent WOULDNT want to sacrifice themselves for ten generations of children and grand children. You are helping them really. Its for the good of the North.
>go into martial path expecting zany clan xianxia hijinks>look inside>get the war on terror
>>97193823>who of us is a part of the coalition who are investigatingI think the expedition force makes sense there. I can't speak for the individual anons but I can propose Linghao as a believer at least. He may have been forced to be there but he would be really interested in the rumours.Honestly all the older PCs feel like they should be part of this. Maybe the kids don't care?>What other clans / sects / factions are in the north. Should we set some up as puppets for the cult.We probably should. I don't know if the cyoa mentions it or if it even makes sense for it to be there but there is the Yao clan. I think it's the only named clan not tied to a PC. We don't know if it's in the north tho, I was leaning for no when I made my character but if people want it to be closer I am fine with that.
>>97193865We probably will still have zany hijinks most of the time, we are just setting up the overarching plot now. I at least plan to have hijinks in my mar on terror anyway.
>>97193838>>97193842Guess it depends on the cult in question. If they're all junior level jobbers, you could maybe justify it. Even if the greater clans all know the cult is hiding, they'd probably say it's not important enough to break the rules.If the cult's strong enough to wipe out clans, then it just doesn't make sense. No one would send in juniors to deal with that, and any force that strong would just remove the any formations limiting their strength. Plus it's not like it'd be open season for decades like anon's meme-ing for. You'd just put together an expedition, invite all the clans, and then after the fight ends you'd close the domain to elders again. Anyone caught breaking off from the fight to loot gets their clan banned from the domain for the next millenia.
>>97193898Well they have to be of appropiate level for our builds to fight because otherwise there's no plot to be had.
>>97193898I think this assumes a level of cooperation and trust I have not seen in wuxia stories. Assuming that the threat includes some heavy hitters, why would any sect or clan risk their own heavy hitters when they can let someone else risk theirs. Best case is both the Ghost Clan and the other clans elders die and you are left as the big fish. Same goes with them being able to wipe out clans. While some might take it as a motivator to unite, others would more likely say "if they died they were weak and didnt deserve the territory, my clan is strong and will protect those who lived there".But more meta speaking, if all the characters are low level, we need a reason for why the story follows them and not the elders. The threat I think needs to be strong enough for a challenge to them, and risk to the world or else why are they bothering? They could just let the elders handle it.
>>97193898>>97193929This is why xianxia power scaling doesn't work, and why we decided on Dynasty Warriors power level.Elders aren't gods, they're only slightly higher up, and average Joes can still damage you if you're careless.
>>97193936It doesn't necessarily need to be a threat to the world but certain threat to the Northern Territory is justified enough. Even something like preventing it from being overrun by Skyrim-style Forsworn is enough to be important.
>>97193944>and average Joes can still damage you if you're careless.depends on the Warriors game in question desuin some games the fodder is actually worrisome but in most I've played (and I play on the hardest difficulty) you can stand there and they'll practically kill themselves
>>97193929>>97193936Yeah but they don't all need to be that level. If they're strong, it'd be like fighting an enemy clan with their own juniors. If they're weak, then it's more like rounding up bandits. Both are workable, it just depends on what we want out of the plot.And while clans are often pretty happy to play stupid games like that, you also have to consider that the cult in this situation is hunkering down in the place they normally send all of their super talented juniors to go hang out. Leaving a high level murder cult to take it over means taking benefits away from everyone (and losing face in the process), which is the one thing that'll actually make people band together in these stories.
>>97193953>in some games the fodder is actually worrisomeIt's like those.
>>97193944I don't think that was ever said to be the case. Our builds are dynasty warriors level. That's all that was proposed. We never once agreed to nerf elders into the dirt, we just clarified what our levels look like.
>>97193944Who is "we" and when did "we" decide that?
>>97193944>and why we decided on Dynasty Warriors power level.Wait, that goes for everyone? I was assuming it was the starting power of our characters and they could grow beyond that. I need to resize my progression plan if this is true.
The classic "we" is actually just anon and the voices and his head. You love to see it.
Isn't Dynasty Warriors esque our starting level and Earthen Heroes and the most powerful Emperors can bust mountains
>>97193964>in some games the fodder is actually worrisome>It's like those....If you're in the Qi Refining realm...
>>97193990In this case no, there really was a discussion about this. It seems anon just ran with it instead when the rest meant something else.
>>97194009The post that brought it up first said that emperors can crush mountains in the same line of text. >>97174925If anon misunderstood, then he must have missed the actual discussion and just started making assumptions.
>>97194021>If anon misunderstood, then he must have missed the actual discussion and just started making assumptions.I think that's what happened, because the Dynasty Warriors thing was brought up again later, but without the context. I was part of both conversations, the second one just mentioned the game.
>>97193974>>97193980>>97193982>>97194005Discussion of power level few threads ago, voiced preference towards wuxia, multiple anons liked Dynasty Warriors power level.
>>97194021Anon, there are no Earthly Heroes active in the setting. It is a mythical rank.
>>97194042And a few threads before that, multiple anons called you retarded for saying it's wuxia.
>>97194042Like 2 people wanted wuxia, the rest assumed xianxia. Dynasty Warriors in not wuxia at all. It's closer to wuxia than xianxia, but that's just because xianxia is infinite scaling. We have magic and shit, wuxia doesn't. We also have bloodlines and mutations.
>>97193944This humble junior has a question. If we are Dynasty Warrior Tier, is there any point to techniques, or items above Earth Tier?
>>97193301Gluttony does somewhat work for Ming in the sense of excess to one's detriment over just eating a lot. Their nature causes them to be extreme in their feelings and the actions sprung from said feelings, which could be construed as kind of overindulgence.
>>97194060>>97194070Okay, well, I wanted wuxia with magic. So if it's not that I don't really care to participate, but have fun arguing about how to make a plot out of your unplayable power scale instead of playing the mp.
I sort of regret asking now. I just wanted to writefag coherently.
>>97194083Why is every low powerfag like this?
>>97190351Chosens of heavens-chan, how strong do you see your build as being? How strong are your elders?This is really too foundational to the mp to leave up to an argument. We should just voice our opinions.
>>97194093Look up above at the hours of argument over how the plot doesn't make sense because elders could solve it and you have your answer.
>>97194093why does every high powerfag fail to control their greed?
>>97194083You come off as extremely bitter and seem to being trying to distract from your actual issue. Wuxia with magic and Xianxia without infinite scaling (which anon did say) are the dame thing. Your issue is that you wanted builds to br afraid of peasants
>>97194094I didn't realize there was a preset power level, so what I was envisioning is way more than what is suitable. I don't think this is an issue though, I am happy to reconfigure him to Dynasty Warrior tier. If anything, he might be cooler that way.
>>97194101If you call that an argument I truly feel sorry for how fragile you are.
>>97194107>Wuxia with magic and Xianxia without infinite scaling (which anon did say) are the dame thing. They're not.>Your issue is that you wanted builds to br afraid of peasantsI didn't.
>>97194111My senses tell me this all Yukianon throwing a tantrum.
>>97194115It's actually the lowpower cabal.
>>97194115Your schizo is weak. I'm Wenanon. Just a few threads ago I said I lost interest because the power scale was getting too high and was told that we were Dynasty Warriors level, so I started paying attention again only to see that's not the case by next thread.
>>97194101That doesn't seem like much of an argument. Almost all anons agree and are offering different ways to have it fit the story.
>>97194101>plot doesn't make sense because elders could solve itit was one stupid anon who couldn't understand that the elders being strong doesn't automatically solve the plot because they have their own issues and politicking
>>97194115It's probably just the same vultures who love it when any mp dies. Two back to back retarded arguments trying to alter the setting has to be an attempt to kill off the mp.
>>97194129We (as in the builds) are Dynasty Warriors level. The people around Emperor are not and we can reach above Dynasty Warriors level in setting within many years of hard work.
>>97194129>that we were Dynasty Warriors level,This is true though.Also I would NOT be eager to admit I was throwing a thread tantrum.
>>97194146>he fell for the false flagkek
>>97194144I think its more coherent if its one or the other. If the world is set low level, cool. If its set high level, fine. But by mixing we end up with >>97194132where it doesn't make sense for us to be doing anything, the elders can flick a wrist and be done with it.
>>97194146See >>97190823. Notice how just last thread someone was dragging Wen through the mud by trying to push her as the main clan?
>>97194150Please stop trying to sabotage the mp by flattening the whole setting to a single power level.
>>97194150>where it doesn't make sense for us to be doing anything, the elders can flick a wrist and be done with it.What is so hard about this to understand that they can't?They are not united at all. They are old Chinese men and women with literal 100 year grudges. They would rather see the Northern Territory go up in smoke than let a rival into the Ancient Domain, and someone doing that is cause for war.
>>97194144Yeah, I don't really have an interest in that.>>97194146There's no tantrum, unless you consider a snide comment to be a tantrum. I told the confused anon that the power level I was told about made perfect sense, then was told that wasn't the power level.>>97194151That was a writefag who mistook her for matriarch.
>>97194162>>97194169Sure that makes sense for the ancient domain, but then what threat is the ghost domain really? If our characters were absent entirely what difference would it make from the plot? The ghost domain grows stronger and stronger until it gets the notice of them and they stomp it. What story are we meant to be telling?
>>97194162That's the only way to save the mp albeit.
>>97194162That's the only way to make room for MY mp albeit.
>>97194150People in real life could resolve problems with a snap of their fingers, but they don't.>B-but that's political and financial power! These elder sissies can punch real good!Doesn't matter. Real chinkland as enough empty properties to house their population 10x over and amerifats produce enough food waste to feed the world.
>>97194182>The ghost domain grows stronger and stronger until it gets the notice of them and they stomp it.If it gets strong enough that they notice it, then it's already too late for them to do anything about it.
>>97194182>If our characters were absent entirely what difference would it make from the plot?1. The Northern Territory and everything the builds care about get destroyed.2. The Ghost Domain is weak but could further swell in power if left unchecked, becoming to much of a threat to be stopped reasonably by the Emperors.
>>97194173>>Yeah, I don't really have an interest in that.>Mm, this setting has nukes completely unavailable to the protagonists and nothing will ever be solved with a nuke? Well I prefer street tier settings, sorry. Their existence makes things too high power.
>>97194211>>97194216>>97194202I guess I will trust in you anons. But I'm not sure I will believe it works until I see a writefag.
>anon is unironically arguing that it's okay for the world to end because bezos already has a bunker and shock collars ready to wait out the nuclear winter
>>97194223Nukes ruined the scale of real life war irrevocably albeit.
>>97194223I was interested in Dynasty Warriors. I am not interested in going very far beyond that. Sorry if that's hard to understand.
>>97194162Please stop trying to dismiss other anons whose perspectives and opinions differ from your own just because you can't handle being told you can't have everything you want.
>>97194241I don't think anyone is interested in a 50 year timeskip, anon.
>>97194241Sorry if it's hard for you to understand that powerCHADS always have and always will run this thread
>>97194241+1 Dynasty Warriors
>>97194235Correct. See: why all post world war 2 strategy games of any kind are complete and utter garbageSee also: why missiles make all modern military games incredibly boring
>>97194264Funny, every lasting MP has been street.
>>97194262The hell does that even mean
>>97194075>yesterday anon compiles list of all the hidden technique users>today they are invalidatedinteresting, very interesting
>>97194075>>97194289Niggas really think being limited to S tier instead of SSS Blanco tier is a deal breaker.
>>97194278Our builds would only ever reach high power after a 50 year timeskip, and that's just the ones with a hidden level cultivation.For all intents and purposes the MP is Dynasty Warriors level.
>>97194075>>97194289Name one Hidden Technique that doesn't work at that level.
>>97194294I asked out of genuine interest. Heaven+ seems to be out of the scope of the story. Am I misunderstanding?
>>97194274I will be as powerful as I want, I will do as I please, and you may continue coping and seething over in the corner with the rest of the weaklings.
>>97194310Sure, I'll continue coping with only my mountains of writefags to my name.
>>97194308Anon, for reference, an Emperor using a common technique would blow your hidden out of the sky.Not all Hidden techniques blow up mountains, only ones used by Emperors.
>>97194308Nta but yes. That's not how tech ranks work, they still get scaled to your power.
>>97194273Most war has and always will be a game of chicken. Good strategy is the exception, not the rule. The main difference now is how that things can be dragged out longer and have worse consequences for the normal citizens who just want to afford a loaf of bread. Modern weaponry isn't even the biggest factor IMO. It's the concept of nationhood as it currently exists. If you and your neighboring city state are at each other's throats for a bit, it doesn't matter much. Land is won or lost all the time but people flip sides as it suits and only the sovereign really gets fucked. Now everything's to big and rigid, and everyone has IOUs.
>>97194306Its not that I think they wouldn't work, its just that they wouldnt reach the level at which they are doing the awesome things they are meant to do.For example: True Body Divine Manual has the cultivator being able to match devil gods, but that clearly isnt going to come up. Likewise All Encompassing Divine Star Soul doesn't come online until it is golden core tier, which we wont be reaching. Starfall fist - punching through mountains. Etc. This is probably only magnified for custom hidden techniques made by the players.
>>97194308Level 10 Black Mage casting Flare they learned early will not have the same effect as a Level 70 Black Mage casting Flare. Both will do more damage than other spells at their level. Is all now clear, junior?
>>97194324>>97194326Sorry I guess I just dont know the genre that well. I thought the reason they were costed so high, was because they scaled up exponentially with your level. Almost like 'late game' abilities. But if the story is set in low levels then to me it seems like a waste. >>97194335Sort of, I just dont know how that plays into paying so many points for them.
>>97194345Omfg I'm losing my patience with you. I'm losing my patience with so many anons. They are so, so daft.
>>97194319Mountains of garbage are still garbage anon, and they won't change the fact that high power is more fun.
Everyone with hidden abilities should have a story about how they acquired them or who taught them these heaven defying skills.
>>97194345>I just dont know how that plays into paying so many points for themThey're stronger, more effective, or not as limited in what they can do. See: Heinrich's Resident Evil biotech tinkering, which manages to be powerful and esoteric without breaching power level constraints.
>>97194345>I just dont know>I just dont know Clearly this cyoa is not for you, you don't know much of anything
>>97194349You are wrong.
>>97194345Are you drunk or something? I don't understand how such a clear explanation eludes you. What are you having trouble with, exactly?
>>97194348That's the cognitive dissonance hitting you. You've commited to an idea and when anons are inquiring as to the validity, you want so desperately to confirm your preestablished point of view but also see why it doesn't make sense. Your brain is literally frying itself trying to resolve the issue and so you get cranky and deflect onto others. Sad really.
>>97194351That only really applies of you aren't from a clan tbqh. A clan kid can just be taught by their venerable ancestor or raid the clan's archives with impunity. Some rice farmer has to actually jump through hopes to learn literally any tech really.
>>97194369You sounds like Donald Trump.
>>97194369Nah, the anon that anon is replying just seems like a mouth breather.
>>97194362It doesn't matter, ill just come back when a new MP drops.
>>97194345Think about them like pokemon moves, that should help. Common techniques are your 20 power cheap attacks, Yellow techs are the 40-50 power Sratch and Quick Attack, Earth techs are the 70-80 power Slash and Shadow Punch, Heaven techs are the big hitters, 90-100 power moves like Earthquake and Heatwave. Hidden Ranks are the outliers like Hype Beam and Gigaton Hammer with 120 power and up.
>>97194357This CYOA seems to not be for a lot of anons, especially ones that see shit like Grand Astral Palm or Wind God Kick and think this is a great CYOA for wuxia.
>>97194378A new MP won't save you from being retarded, sis. Anons will naturally pick up on that and avoid your build.
>>97194360Devastating logic there anon. Such an amazing, substantive counterargument
>>97194379Which would make sense if we were playing uncapped strength. But Dynasty Warriors is like saying no TMs, HMs, or Pokemon above level 10.
>>97194369Anon but he's literally retarded.
>>97194378No you won't. We don't start things here only end them
>>97194396It makes sense in any fucking way you dumb piece of shit, the level 1 Squirtle using Hydro Pump and Level 100 Blastoise using Hydro Pump are not the same.
>>97194396It's more like setting a Level 50 level cap.>>97194394Thanks.>>97194387The initial builds were made expecting the lower power scale, which was discussed beforehand.
>>97194396>But Dynasty Warriors is like saying no TMs, HMs, or Pokemon above level 10.No? It's like competitive level 50 but with less restrictions. Moves still scale the same, the level difference is probably 10 levels up or down at most. Hyper Beam doesn't turn into Scratch just because a level 10 pokemon used it.
>>97194424>the level difference is probably 10 levels up or down at mostThis is my preference, yeah.
>>97193823I doubt Fei would know anything about this stuff outside of rumors he's heard on his travels, since he's just recently come to the North. But he would be willing to do jobs for the Xun clan. Maybe Heinrich would give him lower level reconnaissance type jobs until he proves he can be trusted with more. It'd be a lot more exciting than cleaning stables, and Fei would see it as an opportunity to build trust with the family until he can hopefully marry in (to whom, no one knows). Or if some important Xun builds don't come back from a mission, he could be used as a desperate play by Heinrich to recover them. Fei is super fast, so he'd be good at rescuing our beloved unprepared heroes from certain death just in the nick of time so they can flee to safety. Or tapping in after a build's awesome tearjerking final stand so it wasn't all for nothing. If you need someone to get somewhere yesterday, he's your man.Not meant for anything specific right now, but I thought it might be helpful to think about for the future.
>>97194416>The initial builds were made expecting the lower power scale,That tracks for Heinrich. It does not for Xun Wen, who literally has a Heaven-rank technique that can mass produce anti-army talismans.
>>97194396This. There's no point to this if our characters can't become earthly gods, as is seen and experienced in actual canon. Anyone arguing that we should only experience page 1 of a 2000 chapter novel is retarded
>>97194410If you think Dynasty Warriors are punching through mountains or tearing apart devil gods I can't help you.>>97194416Its not though. These things are logarithmic. Each cultivation tier is a world of difference. At the low levels you are cutting through bodies as if they are nothing. At high levels you are cutting through space itself or severing concepts.In the Pokemon example, Squirtle doesn't even learn hydro pump until after he would be kicked out of the setting which is the entire point.
>>97194434>It does not for Xun WenIronic. Someone already pointed out that despite wanting to write wuxia that anon clearly made a xianxia build.
>>97194434>who literally has a Heaven-rank technique that can mass produce anti-army talismansAs her anon, I can tell you this means she can make the equivalent of exploding ballista bolts and walls that keep evil spirits out.
>>97194436By the time our characters become earthen heroes it'll be like a 100 years.
>>97194440>Its not though. These things are logarithmicNot at the scale we intended to use. This is the scale you are attempting to use.
>>97194443Based
>>97194416>initial builds were done this way>its another "arrogant anon thinks he speaks for everyone" filler episode
>>97194454I'm not attempting anything. I'm explaining the confusion and issue because anons are too focused with calling posters retarded and not paying attention to the underlying problem.
The anons that started this wanted lower power, but not as low as wuxia. That message got lost somewhere along the way and the MP attracted anons that wanted full on xianxia. Now we have this mess.
>>97194440>If you think Dynasty Warriors are punching through mountains or tearing apart devil gods I can't help you.Is your reading comprehension in the dirt?>In the Pokemon example, Squirtle doesn't even learn hydro pump until after he would be kicked out of the setting which is the entire point.SQUIRTLE LEARNS HYDRO PUMP AT LEVEL 33 AND SQUIRTLES CAN BE FUCKING BORN WITH WATER SPOUT WHICH IS EVEN STRONGERTHE LEVEL 1 SQUIRTLE WITH WATER SPOUT IS NOT EVEN SCRATCHING THE LEVEL 25 CHARMELEON WHO ONLY KNOWS SCRATCH, WHO THEN ONE SHOTS IT
>>97194469>WATER SPOUT WHICH IS EVEN STRONGERNta, arguable. That one is variable.
>>97194461I was the second build and the first build also gave me this vibe, so yeah, I think I can at least speak to that far back. I lost interest once people started swinging towards normal xianxia.>>97194463You're referring to a scale that was not being used as if it proves anything.
>>97194463the underlying problem IS that anons are retarded, anon. they won't read, didnt pay attention, and can't handle the possibility that their assumptions were wrong from the beginning
>>97194443And that equivalent explosive ballista bolt can be put on any arrow and mass produced to be outfitted to an army. That isn't "just" Dynasty Warriors.
>>97194476Fine. A lucky Squirtle with a Quick Claw to ensure he uses a 150 BP Water Spout.
>>97194479It can’t, they mathematically don't fit on normal arrows. Source: my calculations.
>>97194469>SQUIRTLE LEARNS HYDRO PUMP AT LEVEL 33Anon set the cut of at 10 tho, ironic that you critique their reading comprehension but missed that.
>>97194469What even is this crashout anon lmao We playing mystery dungeon now or something
>>97194469LolLmao even
>>97194489I ignored that because it was arbitrary and Squirtle can have Water Spout at level 1.>>97194495ANON CAN'T UNDERSTAND THINGS WHEN THINGS ARE PUT IN TERMS THAT 6 YEAR OLDS UNDERSTAND AND IT MAKES ME ANGRY
>>97194489Anon said level 10, we said level 40-60
>>97194477Just because you interpreted something as a particular vibe doesn't mean any of it was correct, you narcissist
>>97194433I seem to have come back at a volatile time lmao
>>97194513Sounds like what I'm trying to tell you, who came in later and made the wrong assumptions.
Onto a topic I actually care about, if the screeching autists could take a timeout for a minute.Can you just be a pure body cultivator? Do I need to worry about this Qi shit if I just want to whack things? Like a heaven grade, or dare I say Hidden Grade Body refinement would be fine by itself right?
>>97194433Man, I just saw your half chart, didn't have time to read it yet. Should I wait for the full version?
>>97194534You'll also want a cultivation technique since otherwise you'll hit like a wet noodle, but yeah you could go pure body refinement if you want to unga bunga.
>>97194534You can be John Fist if you want. Regardless of the results of the screeching match we aren't going to get to conceptual bullshit level.
>>97194534I think you're still using qi for that, but I do think you can go all in on the body refining without using the more spell casty stuff and still be strong. It's just easy for that to be kinda boring. But I don't know anything at all about this setting so my post should probably be ignored.
>>97194513Niggas couldn't even be bothered to notice Wen was a branch manager and not the CEO, then tell others to read lmao
>>97194544Why would you hit like a wet noodle?>>97194545Uh, exqueeze me if I take Natural Talent: Punch a bitch you will respect it. >>97194551Yeah thats what I figured, like instead of Qi its blood energy or life force or something that is just internal right. You are still a cultivator you just do body stuff instead of magic spells and fancy crap
>>97194564Qi is life force, all spells are blood magic.
>>97194531You really only have the one tactic huh? Just gonna keep on saying no u like it means something?
Anons were not ready, the stars were not right. But perhaps, on the horizon, the Heroes of the Wastes can save us?
>>97194564>Why would you hit like a wet noodle?Nta, without the cultivation technique you are stuck as a mortal. Let alone the screeching match, you are stuck as a level 1 no matter if the rest of the setting is level 10 or 100.>Uh, exqueeze me if I take Natural Talent: Punch a bitch you will respect it.You mean Natural Insight? You still can't use that to punch across dimensions, or use the essence of fist to punch time, we don't get to that level, and insight doesn't do that by itself.
>>97194574It's all I need against the likes of you, junior.
>>97194537You can if you want; I obviously wouldn't complain. It's not too long since it's only the ladies so far. It's mostly just a silly thing since Fei isn't even the type of guy to use a journal or make data charts for them. Bro barely tries to organize his own thoughts.I still want to try and finish the guys this week, but if I don't then it will probably be a bit after new years since holidays are busy for me. I forgot how long relationship charts take, even when you're not going super in-depth and mostly making shit up.
>>97194575Only if we also use the Dragon Ball rentryslop along with it for High Power of the Waste.
>>97194580>>97194569If Qi is life force. Then cant I just have a body cultivation thing? Because my life force would be stronger and more vast as my body improves? Essentially instead of magic a nerd daitan I am just making my flesh and bones hold all that energy. Or using the cyoas example, would the true divine body manual also need an equally strong cultivation art for it to work? Seems dumb if true
>>97194575I think tomorrow everyone will go back to just discussing and writing stuff as if this argument never happened, and the power level might differ between writefags based on what each writer thinks is cool but no one will care at all about the inconsistency, if there even is any.
>>97194597>Then cant I just have a body cultivation thing?I would say yes. It's a thing in xianxia settings. It would need to be HIdden rank tho, because in the cyoa setting specifically it would be unheard of, and also pretty strong to do what you want it to do.
>>97194599This but I'll go back to discussing and writing good MPs like JITE and Fantasy Village.
>>97194624Bro you're not even in them, the actual players of those are already asleep.
>>97194583Oh no, he is once again being arrogant amd self centered. Oh no.
>>97194597You can make a retard cultivator by grabbing a hidden cultivation that passively cultivates like he's a spirit beast or other legendary animal, he either figured it out or he's just like that. Take a divine beast foundation and then another hidden or heaven body refining that will increase your body past pure realm or make punch-chop-kick moves.
>>97194599No they won't, the powerlevel shit has become too good of a meme, and all future discussions will now be poisoned by the context of these arguments. This is how a cyoa actually dies from sheer spite. New games will then be started, and anons from both sides will try to sabotage it based on the games perceived power level so that they can then try to pretend that their preferred power level is actually the TRVE thread consensus
>>97194597>bro thinks he doesn't need a heart to pump blood, or lungs to pump oxygen
>>97194654ok but everyone already agreed that the builds themselves, currently at the realms they are, are at a Dynasty Warrrios level of power
>>97190351Would a niece of the patriarch be apart of the main family or would they be relegated to a branch family? Someone please enlighten this ignorant junior...
>>97194670Depends on if her father wanted to make a branch or not. Not all younger sons make branches, some do.
>>97194662Just dont want to be a cave- bound pill popping meditation man. Also dont see the point in taking two techniques when I only want one. .
>>97194586Just finished it, it's really funny, and also manages to introduce his personality really well. I thought the Mom score was what he tought they would be like as a mom until I got to Moyu and I understood that it was his mom's approval rate.I'm a bit confused on the guy stats, but those are probably for later. Really cool overall.
>>97194640Nta, still awake, but not for long. I really should be asleep.
>>97194677>cave- bound pill popping meditation man. Most cultivators really aren't tbf.>Also dont see the point in taking two techniques when I only want one.You literally NEED a cultivation technique, and you'd be best off taking hidden for a guy like your character.
Heinrich anon here. Curious on Wen anon's status. Should I expect her to become an NPC? Or will Wen anon still be around for answering prompts and writefag-related questions despite not liking the setting?
>>97194670Depends. Making a branch is voluntary, or a punishment. You can have all the brothers/sisters you want in the main family as long as nobody moves out of Patriarch's basement and becomes independent.
>>97194688Nta, I think he doesn't want to take the body refining one. He wants a cultivation that does both the cultivating and the refining.
>>97194664The relentless arguing about power levels strongly indicates that in fact there is no agreement whatsoever
>>97194703In that case he could have a retard cultivation that increases strength but it would be no where near as good as body refining.
>>97194664you really dont know when to stop do you mudcore anon-sama whomst is this everyone you claim to have rights to speak for
>>97194693stance on the powerscale war? as we all know the effortfags decide
>>97194708Nta but in most stories I've read body cultivation is usually a whole separate branch which people can follow to reach immortality, that's just as valid as qi or soul cultivation. The reason MCs are usually so OP is because they have good progress in more than 1 path. But most characters only follow one of the 3
>>97194678Thanks, anon. Glad you liked it. I still haven't actually nailed down his character voice completely, but I'm getting there. He feels a little too dramatic in this to me if I'm being honest, but that might just be because I edited some of the entries where he was confused and/or bemoaning a dead end more then I did some of the others. Perhaps it reads lighter and more carefree to fresh eyes.And yeah, the guys' scores will surely change some, and possibly the categories a bit too.
>>97194717i'm a highpower chad, sillyour builds are currently high power dynasty warrior characters that cut through fodder and aren't scared of peasants and I don't think anyone disagrees, elders are nukes
>>97194726KTH does that but Martial Path makes no distinction within the cyoa and likely the setting, all cultivation is qi/body/soul cultivation at the same time.
I don't want to reignite the argument but what do the players do with the power aren't they just going to fight demons and not each other anyway? Isn't it one of the tropes of the setting that there's always someone a tier above who could easily solve the issues someone faces but they're too busy, or they're too above it to even notice? That makes it seem like there could be multiple power levels within the same mp.
>>97194717There's not a whole lot of inbetween between Dynasty Warriors characters and mountain busting, and only Emperors/Earthen Heroes should be capable of that based on the cyoa
>>97194718I'm a big baby who wants peace and for everyone to be happy. Maybe we'll have that someday...Personally my take and assumption was that the Elders were particularly strong and our builds were idk, like Gojo and Sukuna from JJK? They could devastate a city or town given like 40 minutes and a Hollow Purple Hidden would blow up a building and light up the area. For a Dynasty Warriors comparison I was thinking maybe Pirate Warriors in particular. That's not particularly mountain busting but still widescale and powerful.I also don't think just effortfags should decide, a civil outcome is probably feasible.
>>97194735I also don't feel like arguing, but I did assume anons would be making characters with pretty varied power levels. Like when I saw Wen as a character, she seemed like she wasn't made with much direct combat in mind. I guess she could be considered high power in terms of making armies of normal dudes OP vs other armies of other normal dudes in a war scenario, but I wasn't picturing her in a 1v1 death battle. She seemed like she filled more of a support/strategist role. I viewed a guy like Heinrich similarly. I don't really get why both sides of the argument need the setting to be one or the other. I feel like there's room for every tier of power in the same MP. Also, we get mostly SOL in every MP anyways, so I don't know that there will be enough battle writefags for it to be worth arguing about.
>>97194761>a civil outcome is probably feasible.You are very optimistic anon. I don't think so, but I genuinely hope you are right. Anyway I was thinking about the same level of power. Nta, by the way.
>>97194761I haven't seen JJK, but I was assuming like Nardo Pain Arc tier or something. Maybe a little under with that being an early goal. Idk, it didn't really matter much to me. I just tried to make someone who's fun to write fights for, since I'm garbage at writing fights and that makes it easier.
>>97194811I feel like Pain is a little higher scale than anything in JJK if I'm being honest but yeah you're about spot on.
desu pakkun solos the jjk cast
>>97193870Going by the companions pagw, Yap are eastern. North got Hong, Li and Xia. Someone of thos eneling to the "Snow Flower Palace"
>>97194836HOLY SHIT! ANON'S HAVING A STROKE!
>>97194848No, you're wrong. We're simply to low level to understand his tongue.
>>97194848Phoneposting after just waking up...Going by the companions page, Yao are eastern. North got Hong, Li and Xia. Some of those belong to the "Snow Flower Palace".
>>97194182Just an idea, but we havent specified the goals of the Cult yet, have we?If we go with the option of Ancient Domain having some sort of formation that curbs the power of elders, maybe the Cultists not only hide there, but want to perform somw sort of ritual that would expand the same effect to the entirety of the Northern Territory? Elders dont know about it, so they'd downplay the Cult like usual, but if they're not stopped they're fucked too. This would give the Cult a sort of Pure Land vibe and an anti-cultivation sentiment.Alternatively maybe they've got/work for some heavy hitters themselves, but those are sealed inside the Ghost Domain and they want to extend the Ghost Domain to let them roam free? This one is a much straightforward demonic cult vibe.In general I just like the idea of the Cult gathering some key resources for their ritual. It gives PCs some clearer options to oppose the Cult, by trying to prevent them from obtaining them, while also keeping the the threat of the danger escalating sharply if they fail.
>>97194731Oh I'm just saying that it's not irregular for the genre. Like you say Martial Path doesn't distinguish so you could easily be a "body" cultivator and it would just be a different method and application of a more standard approach
I come back after hours of sleeping and I see only power level discussion and two tier lists. Weak anons, WEAKWRITE MOREI’m gonna keep writing
>>97195020I like that idea. It even works as a sort of end game in that the Cult could succeed and have the formation expand over the north and weaken everyone and then they can still fight and try to undo it. It would be an interesting world when all the current elders suddenly get dropped down to the juniors level suddenly.
>>97192646>Would she be thereYeah, security is part of her wheelhouse even if she's not the day to day security type.>OfferDepends how much she knows, but eventually she could help develop countermeasures to their techniques and any weirdness the place has. Especially with Wens help.>ReactAmbivalent to an extreme. She was a traveler most of her early life and only knows of them as vague entities. If they prove useful she'll be glad but if they are corrupt layabouts she'll be unhappy.
>>97193442>Only has branch originNot this again.
>>97193527Were cultivators, Pride isnt a sin its a virtue for us. But some people step over into Young Master Territory and it becomes a sin.
>>97194094Ri is either batman or batman with prep time depending on her ... prep time and what she has tattooed herself with.Except if Batman could punch a hole in a tank and facetank a gu-Well he does facetank guns all the time so I guess just batman with good punching.She really doesn't have any fancy techniques yet, and her skill with a blade is only 'Mortal Prodigy' She's just absurdly tanky and strong for her realm. Lord forgive me: Shes kind of like a Worm Rocky build without the buildup.
>>97194115I said I was dropping it anon. What do you take me for? You?
>>97195571So the tattoos go away after some time and need reapplied?
>>97194351I tripped on a rock and shattered my dantian into some auspicious number of pieces and when I rebuilt it I had a bunch of cool hidden powers
>>97195577Its more they are strongest when they are hyper specific. A generic 'Defend the wearer' one is fine against lower real mpeople but its only going to block one serious attack from the same realm. Yeah she can have multiple but something that specifically blocks blunt kinetic force can absorb it a lot more effeciently.Something something weaker if she just becomes a solid wall of ink instead of having visible art also.Im trying to balance a wizard with infinite casts of contingency somehow.
>>97190351While we're on the topic of power levels, what the cult is doing and plot vibes - definitely considering making a villain to get the ball rolling. Reading through the builds and writefags now and wanted to do a vibecheck, would people prefer and edgier, more serious villain, something approaching Power Rangers tier maximum ham bad guy or something in between?
>>97195656I'm going for a fair bit of gore in my depiction of the Cult.
>>97195680Any concept I can go for can easily handle the Cult itself actually being fucked up, just wondering more the kind of conflicts they'd like PCs to get into with a face for the villains, something more broody and dark or something more like Aku/Skeletor. I firmly believe that villain characters in these are only as good as their interactions with the main cast so want to nail down some vibes for writing first.
>>97195574Someone who's easily baited.
>>97195684Darth Vader. Broody and dark but also trying to recruit/tempt the PCs to his side.
>>97195876and also related to them let's goo incestkino wins again
>>97195884Stop it
>>97195876I always preferred Palpatine for being a whacky schizo but to give Lucas and his writing team credit, Palpatine probably works as that because they humanized Vader first so it's a reveal that his boss is goofy tier evil, so that also checks out yeah.
>>97195684Neither. They should be like Senator Armstrong.
>>97195957Senator Armstrong is hard on the Aku/Skeletor side of the spectrum though.
Uma MP would go hard.
>>97195961kill yourself
>>97195960He's entertaining, yes.but Senator Armstrong's passion makes you want to believe what he's saying. Aku/Skeletor don't have the same effect.
>>97195961UNKNOWN UNLUCK MP LETSGOOOOOO
>>97195965You lost the culture war.
>>97195968>>97195876Seems like we're locked in to wanting a villain who has enough of a point to be convincing but is too schizo to be anything but a compelling bad guy. Sure, can work with that.Evil Juggernaut type who can fight the PCs in open brawls or sorcerer/manipulator/cult leader type? I'm drawn towards the latter but it'd mean that they'd narratively be much harder to draw into a punchout and I know some of us are fightfags. I'm planning on effortfagging and don't want to take over the entire Ghost Zone so I'll probably only do one and let other anons make others if they want.
>>97195020Anon, we're not supposed to want to side with the Cult...
>>97194693>>97194761I have nothing against anyone effortfagging for it, but my eyes glaze over when I read canonfag powerwank discussions about how the elders are nukes.
>>97195985>Evil Juggernaut type who can fight the PCs in open brawls or sorcerer/manipulator/cult leader type?Honestly, no reason a big bad can't be both. The kind of guy who gets kicks manipulating things in the shadows but can and will get up close as it suits him. Whether that's because things got personal, he's trying to sway a PC, or he's been forces to get his hands dirty for some reason.
>>97196040Not planning on a Big Bad, just one of the middle-tier villains, much like the Elders I think whoever's behind it all should be more of a group exercise rather than someone I just jump into the shoes of. It also leaves a window open for plenty of 'my master is more powerful than you can conceive,' posting.
>>97196040Nta, but if he's making it with the cyoa then making one that's both doesn't have enough points to make it good at both. He would be kinda good at both as opposed to really good at one or the other.
>>97196037>canonfagThere is no canon, but there are genre conventions.
>>97196053Canonfags and genrefags are cut from the same cloth.
>>97196059Settingfags, are the worst.
>>97196059>>97196067If you don't plan on following the setting then why play it at all?
>waahhh waahhhh why can't I ignore any flavor the cyoa has and push my shit taste onto everyone else?!
>>97196053>There is no canonFunny how they keep referring to the canon of the cyoa, then.
>>97196071I forgive for believing I was serious about settingfags. I forgot where we are.
>>97196037I like Wen, I wanna write some stuff eventually about how Jian sees her. Since Ri has basically sworn her life to her, Jian kinda sees her as a boss by proxy of sorts and isn’t sure how to bridge the gap in more casual ways, even if he’s practically known her all his life. Heinrich is, paradoxically, someone Jian can be a little more casual with because he knows what to expect from Heinrich, in good and bad ways. I wanna see Jian warming up to Wen eventually, would be a shame if she just became an NPC now
>>97195921Spoken like someone who just awakened a new fetish
>>97196053Powerfag hush
>>97196131It's not my fault you don't know the setting.
>>97196139Its not my fault you act like a know it all either
>>97196059>>97196067The key to understanding settingfags is that the truth behind their arguments is the desire to exert power and control. By adhering to a rigid worldview, they think themselves able to dictate terms to the group as a whole and enforce their will on you.
>>97196075>>97196053>>97196139As you can see:https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/97112413/#97115116https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/97112413/#97115133https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/97112413/#97115251https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/97112413/#97115382https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/97112413/#97115529https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/97112413/#97115476Pre-MP discussion either didn't care for genre conventions, favored something between the two, or both. It was xianxiafags and powerfags who came in later with elder nuke talk and bowled over the established setting and power level of the fledgling MP, without reading the room or in fact reading at all.
>>97196183>>97196071
>>97196194>>97196185
>>97196183Anon, the setting exists for a reason. If you don't like the setting don't play it. But you can't show up to the pokemon MP pretending everyone suddenly starts acting as if it was Fire Emblem.
>>97196211Don’t mention Fire Emblem… You’ll give the incestfag more ammunition…
>>97196185>first post prefers wuxia but is fine with xianxia>second post mixed>third post low level xianxia>fourth post mixed>fifth post prefers xianxia>sixth post mixedI dunno man, seems like anons leaned towards xianxia.
>>97196211The pre-established setting did not care for the genre conventions you are trying to force on it.
>>97196225>majority mixed or low xianxia>"looks like they want high xianxia, bro"
I HAVE NEVER READ THESE BOOKSWHAT THE FUCK IS THE DIFFERENCE
>>97196224Literally every mp could have incestkino.
>>97196237trvth nvke
>>97196230>>majority mixed or low xianxia>"looks like they want wuxia, bro"
>>97196232You can fly on swords in one.
>>97196243I thought wuxia was like, Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon? Or the live-action Mulan, which was ass BTW. But this MP never seemed like that to begin with, I’m only recently aware of what cultivation actually is but how in the world can that be low power? Dynasty Warriors makes sense to me as a minimum, whoever first mentioned it has my backing
>>97196232The power level of people who will probably not show up since none of the builds are going up a realm without some big timeskips
I feel like I need to apologize. I don't know for, but I want you all to know I'm sorry.
>>97196277Why'd you do it, anon!? Why!?
>>97196274THEN WHAT THE FUCK ARE WE ARGUING ABOUTLET’S JUST HAVE COOL WRITEFAGS
>>97196299Anons love arguing more than anything; they don't need a reason to do so, only an excuse.
>>97196241Wuxia with low xianxia magic albeit
>>97196272I like Jackie Chan Adventures power level, personally.
>>97196277Sympathy farming will get you nowhere
when is the high power masterrace messing with time to return years ago and kill low power chuds in the cradle?
>>97196304The more an anon digs in his heels, the more fiercely other anons will oppose them. To dam a river and control it is to see it burst its banks in response. This is an ancient principle of 4chan passed down from our most venerable founding anons of ages past. To ignore this is but inauspicious pride
>>97196272I think low Xiancia is more like OG Dragonball.
>>97196299because some people cant handle disagreement
>>97196325That's just normal martial arts with fancy special effects, that's boring. I have no idea how anyone could read the cyoa and think that the power lever is anywhere near that.
>>97196329I don't know about sympathy, but making that post definitely made me feel better.
>>97196349No it's not. They would still have magic shit, OG dragonballs didn't have ki blasts and stuff. Dragonballs is also sci fi and always was so it's a bad comparison.
>>97196349OG dragonball still had baseline or slightly trained humans and nonmagitech machinery being plot relevant, that would be like basement dweller damaged cultivation xianxia cautionary tales "dont let this be you" type warnings telling kids not to mix cultivation methods
>>97196374>OG dragonballs didn’t have ki blastsWhat the fuck are the Kamehameha, the Dodonpa or the Kikoho then? Just because standard ki ball spam wasn’t a thing back then, that doesn’t mean no one used ki blasts.
>>97196363>its another powerfag is bored by everything episode again
When are lowpowerfags going to nut up and have a completely mundane mp
>>97196374Kamehameha is like the literal actual original ki blast man, holy shit Im not even a dragonball guy and I know that from cultural osmosis. Maybe there was some shit like it in an obscure anime further back but as far as 99.9 percent of humanity is concerned its all goku all the time
>>97196396Never, highpowerGODS will always be there to shitpost their attempts into the ground because lowpowerCRINGErs by definition cannot defend themselves. We did it before we will do it again, RIP shitcher.
>>97196396They know that shit would be a stillborn so they have to take high power kino and try to corrupt it instead
>anons are unaware they could kamehameha if they stuck with the mcdojo karate classes their parents put them in
>>97196333we already are but there is an infinite supply of people who will never amount to anything, it is the default state of humanityweeds in the garden anon, weeds in the garden
>>97196385>>97196398The Kamehameha was introduced pretty late. Also xianxia magic is more like Buu and Babidi shit, or the shit demons do, that wasn't until the end of Z.
>>97196436MP about separating the good seed from the chaff?
>>97196454Biblical mp when?
>>97196436how about instead of killing them in the cradle, we bed their mothers and raise them as god slaying high power connoisseurs
>>97196453>pretty lateOh yeah, late as in chapter 14 of the manga and episode 8 of the anime? Don’t fuck with Dragon Ball fans, we never watched the show.
>>97196464We need more child rearing in mps.
>>97196498Pregnancy fetish into wholesome chungus parenting adventure when?
>>97196539When you write it
>>97195985Sorcerer manipulator type. Also make it a cute girl who uses her feminine wiles to seduce the male PCs. Exploit the shortage of female supply.
Rolled 1, 6, 6, 2, 6, 2, 5 = 28 (7d7)1. Yi2. Ming3. Chizi4. Moyu5. Wen6. Ri7. Shahuaeach time they're rolled means 1 child, let's see who has offspring by the end, who expands the family, and who becomes a seamstress
>>97196122Fix your porn addiction, weirdo
>>97196225All those posts? Me.
>>97196577>Yi showing she still got it>Heinrich finally succeeding with Wen>Ming with exactly 2>77 dubsri is also there i guess
>>97196299So we know what arguments to use in the discussions of "my dad can beat up your dad".
>>97196575Jokes aside I was legitimately considering the classic asian tale of the evil beautiful ghost woman that kills men stupid enough to think with their dicks but I dunno if this general is ready for that.
>>97196585Get off of 4chan, prude
>>97196613I did imagine the Cult big boss to be a goddess stuck at the point between life and death.
>>97196633[/spoiler]Well a goddess does need handmaidens. Especially in daoism where women are often considered more receptive conduits of divine messages.
>>97196641Damn I suck, lesson learned to not nap between posts, it makes you sloppy anons. Just send me to Naraka already.But yeah, will be reading all characters today and figuring out what fits for the cast.
>>97196613Ah, Fei's future wife.
>>97196577Canon
I can't take female antagonists seriously
>>97196363>I have no idea how anyone could read the cyoa and think that the power lever is anywhere near thatI just said I like it, anon.
Real Bugworld has never been tried.
>>97196577the 6s are all Jian's btw
>>97196678They have to be done right and usually have to be a different kind of threat than the powerful villain who punches your heart out, which is why most successful female antagonists are usually cunning, seductive, underhanded or more mystical than people the heroes fight depending on what you're going for.Either that or they're Scylla or Medusa but at that point people stop thinking 'woman,' and start thinking 'monster.'
>>97196743I start thinking 'wife.'
>>97196751Fei-sama...
>>97196738and the 2s are both Chizi's, we know
>>97196751Legitimately curious, how do you feel about the reverse trope where a heroic, pure-hearted woman seduces an evil man to being a good person or the evil seductress successfully turns the paladin evil rather than the My Dick Can Fix Her?
>>97196774The first is a woman's fantasy and the second is a cautionary tale.
>>97196577So the childless are: Chizi, Moyu, Shahua.Makes sense.
>>97196892Truly a Shahua W.
>>97196892my build will fix that
>>97196731I assure you China is very real, anon.
>>97196949Prove it
>>97196992Citation: 95 percent of my masters courses were Chinese studentsCitation: everything we own is made in ChinaCitation: Chinese people are annexing africa at this very moment The hungry horde cometh.
>>97196992Oh and also they wouldn't be so upset about a specific day in tiananmen square if it wasn't real.
>>97197014What do you mean, nothing happened in tianamen square
>>97197043Of course not. But it proves that the aforementioned square, and therefore the nation in which it resides, does indeed exist. And is a very peaceful place for every Chinese citizen to visit.
Has anyone else ended up unable to post for a while because this captcha change broke the 'ver ifi cat ion not required' thing?I've been stuck in the 'ver ific ati on not required' chair for hours, waiting to be allowed to post again
>>97197223if you were using 4chanx it was probably troubles with the quick reply function, they dropped a patch today and it seems like it's fine now though
>>97197223>>97197238Also, an incognito window to remove cookies fixes it.
>>97196037ok but is wen an npc or not, spit it out
>>97197223https://github.com/ccd0/4chan-x/issues/3528Here's a link to a quick fix if you're usin 4chanx as a script. Seems like it works well enough.
Or...
>>97197436oink oink hoggy
mfers are actually trying to flex wasting money on a pass
>he's still goingpfffttohnononononohahahahahaha
>>97197443Two dollars a month to never have to do a captcha and being able to shitpost twice as fast? Yeah.
>>97197462you're genuine human cattle
>>97197462you coulda bought 2 dollars worth of gacha game currencyjust sayin'
>>97197488The fuck would you be able to do with that? Its like 15$ minimum for anything
As the other passfag, my home IP got hit with a range block at some point and I had to spend years phoneposting, so the benefit for me was bigger. Without that, I'm not sure if I'd buy it.
>>971975042 dollars is worth 4 Pokemon Pocket packs!
>>97197436
Are people unironically paying to not do the fucking captcha? Its the most intuitive and easy captcha I've seen since I've been here.
>>97196774Both are based based.
>>97197769>based basedthreadskaven?
>>97196774The first is just retarded. The woman will go evil or just be killed. The second means the paladin is pathetic and his faith was weak.
damn we're not even doing much latelyanyone else up writing they fags? or making anything really
>>97198012Making a cyoa....still.I'm also currently making/planning a pretty long writefag starring one Michelson Tyler. Luckily it should a fair bit longer until its done so hopefully it'll be more accepted by the thread then.
>>97198052Michelson Tyler? Who?
>>97198052MHAbro... You gotta let go... Good luck on your cyoa though, is it the MMO one from a thread or two ago, of the Chainsaw Man one from like a dozen threads ago?
>>97197782Skaven cyoa when?
>>97198052HAHAHAHAHAoh wait, you're seriouslet me laugh even harderHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
>>97198052I wasn't expecting that, happy to see it. I think reception will depend a lot on how alive the rest of the MPs are when it drops.
>>97198052>Michelson TylerLMFAO
the shitposters refuse even proof
>>97198052Welcome back, Marakanon
>>97198215???Yeah? They're not doing it be convinced.
>>97198215these are mhafags mad that it's not their favorite thread personality fucking the corpse while they watch from the cuckchair doebeit
>>97198215Honestly the shitposters won this thread. It's just one big mess where nothing of value happened. I'm going to pretend this thread didn't happen.
>>97198215everyone normal in the thread has moved on
>>97198242You have such a way with words.
I may unironically be trying to sketch a JITE anime opening song, but FL Studio is lagging a lot for some reason. Any ideas on what it would sound like before I go ahead with my 2000s/2010s J-rock kinda thing?
>>97198243cry more low power fag
>>97198243cry more high power fag
>>97198255not true, others are waiting too
I guess this counts as unofficial secret hours then? inb4 the thread gets an uptick in activity
>>97198255I'm just waiting for some writings to set the direction and tone. I don't want to writefag something for it not to make sense or fit at all.
>>97198356I’m always here. Dunno what to tell you anon
>>97198052*sigh*Welp, a promise is a promise.>>97190371Mick Gets Dick (Slimenuts, Michelson Tyler, mentions of Sandatsu)https://rentry.org/7orv37wpOpen wide MHAbabies, daddy Slimenuts has something to share with you!
>>97198419This better be about hiring a private investigator or so help me
>>97198012Still working on my intro piece for Moyu, need to read over the thread for any discussion related to the cult since I plan for Moyu and Jian to get nearly kidnapped by a higher up member before Shen (maybe Wuyu first, might need to see how their intro post goes) comes to the rescue.
>>97198376Not what people are talking about.>>97198419You know nobody will read that right?>>97198425It's the shitposter attempting to kill MHA, again.
>>97198419HawtThis one's an even finer masterpiece
>>97198429I'll read it and I'll jerk off to it.
>>97198429>attempting to kill MHA,you can't kill what's already dead
>>97198438like you did when you wrote it I'm sure
>>97198419As someone who's also never clicked a writefag featuring Michelson(except this one), I'd say you portrayed his personality pretty well. >>97198429At least 2 people and 0 bots read it
>>97198419best writefag MHA's gotten in the last 3 months btw
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>>97198419Why does Sandy get offscreened in every writefag Slimenuts anon?This is an outrage, I deserve to see him raped and slimed!
>>97198426Some cult stuff came up, particularly talking about if the cult should be based in the juniors only mystery zone, but it all got bogged down by the powerfag shitstorm before any genuine discussion could happen. Even if you tried to get a proper discussion going, it'd probably happen again. I'd rather you follow your heart and cook up some kino. I like what you write and I'm happy to go along with you and whatever content you put out.
>>97198463Best reply
>>97198482that's a post actually
>>97198463>filterBITCH
>>97198419You should have just made this a postIt would fit in 2
>>97198502COWARDnuts is afraid of the jannies
>97198419Stop samefagging. No (You)s for you.
alright, new thread pleaselet's leave this one behind
>>97198526I'm glad someone said it, I can't stand Slimenutsanon and how unfunny he is. Genuinely the worst poster in these threads. No one even reads his gay jerkslop except for his discord buttbuddies.
>>97198539>implying he has buttbuddies
>they think there's a Slimenutscord
>>97198534Yeah, I'm on it.
>>97198554>>97198555LOOK.They're literally on damage control right fucking now.Fucking faggots. Jerk off somewhere else. /cyoag/ trash.
>>97198555You do know that you don't need a server to talk with people on discord right?
uh oh, slimemeltie
>>97194094>WuyuWell, I'm not an expert at the powerlevels and I haven't played Dynasty Warriors. If we want to keep it in vidya references, then I thought about it a bit like the Romance mode of the Total War Three Kingdoms. So clearly above generic soldiers, able to slay whole units of them, but not shooting lasers and stuff like that. Although that last part is specifically for Wuyu, I won't mind others doing clearly supernatural stuff, in fact, I expect it.I think what I had in mind might be more clearly expressed in relationship to the rest of the cast/cultivators. In feats of strength and durability, as well as a straightforward combat, I'd expect him to be pretty high up, but probably not top tier among our cast as that goes to people with Hidden techniques and such. However, I don't expect the standard cultivator on cultivator combat to be straightforward, and that's where his weakness as one arises. His combat style is in a way very mortal-like, just that it's cranked up when it comes to strength, durability, speed, precision etc. But what good is that, when the enemy can use illusions, throw elemental barrages at you, assault your qi directly, summon indestructible shields, sic hordes of mobs, fly, turn invisible, set up formations that weaken you, lay talisman traps to immobilize you, pay off assassins to poison you and more? A cultivator that takes it seriously, will generally murder Wuyu in a way, which he has little answer to, but also can't just ignore him in open combat because that's one of the few areas where he might be able to compete.
>>97198526If you do have to comment, please do reply to him, so the hide replies option works and I don't have to see any more mentions of him. Thank you.
>>97198565I'm literally saying that this guy isn't the type to have friends you bitch.
>>97198579Nta, what I'm seeing here is that Wuyu needs to be protected from the big bads. We can't let the flags kill our pet.
>>97198622As bad as it sounds, the pet comparison might not be that far off. Imagine you have some big dog. It'll have a good chance to fuck up most humans unarmed 1 on 1. But then the human can just go grab a weapon or poison him and suddenly the odds swap. That's kind of how a Wuyu against a cultivator fight might go.
>>97198659>Wuyu (guard dog)>Ri (guard dog)>Jian (lap dog)>Shen (attack dog)>Fei (messenger pigeon)>Yu (barn cat)How many pets does the Xun Clan need?
>>971986795 for each clan member
>>97198679Tsolmon was recently recruited, but I'm not sure what pet he would be. What kind of animal does research?
>>97198679Moyu's going crazy
>>97198703Rats? Guinea pigs? Crows?
>>97198419>>97198052>put my ideas down>leave for a bit to do irl stuff >supremely unfunny shitposter (forma de Slimenuts) immediately makes something while I'm goneGentlemen, they're scared.
>>97198724>Gentlemen, they're scared.Yes they are. They always were, it's the only reason why they shitpost so hard every time someone so much as mentions MHA.
>>97198724Please do hurry and release it so I'll have more ammo after nothing comes from it, just like the others
>>97198567>>97198567>>97198567HOGS, quick, roll this way! Otherwise Moyu's gonna banish you to the shadow realm!
>>97198703He's one of those rats you train to complete mazes, a passing curiosity and proof of a lower lifeform's intelligence.
>>97198724That Slimenuts kino CRUSHES anything you've ever made or ever will make in the sovl contest btw
>>97198579>Liang BaMore or less the same. I overshot the power level though so am trying to rebuild in a more grounded manner because I was aiming for full "defying the heavens" which doesn't fit. >>97194151That was me and I wasn't trying to do that. I misunderstood the characters / clans hierarchy and set up. Once I have fixed Liang Ba, I am going to redo that. It doesn't make sense for him to be reaching out to a branch it should have been addressed to the Patriarch or Fengqi.
>>97198724Don't post it, learn timing this time. Most of your stuff fails because of rushed timing, in this case the writefag will be the same.
>>97198775I think we should add the fantasy village too the threadslave notes. It's been going strong for a while. I'll try to remember about the next time It's my turn to make a thread.
>>97198723>>97198779Rat it is I guess.
>>97198724Stop being a newfag and learn not to reply and what to post. You're lucky it was already past bump limit.
>>97198838mha will come back, it's inevitable, it's only a matter of when
>>97198810>I overshot the power level thoughI don't think you did. Don't listen to the shitposters.
>>97198842slimecord won't allow this
>>97198827I kinda agree...? I mostly just feel weird about the choice of CYOA. Like I'm not trying to meme about the mp itself being porn, but the images are and I have misgivings about posting the link to it on a blue board. So I've been avoiding it. If there was a censored image gallery I would have added it a while ago.At the very least, I certainly won't stop you if you want it in the notes and plan to threadslave for it.
>>97198866good thing it doesn't exist and it's just one very sad anon
We should make our own 'cord. We'll call it the MHAcord and post all about MHA there! Who's with me?
>>97198873Nta, you can just drop the link from the notes then? It's in the rentry anyway. Does the degree of separation help?
>>97198873I get not following the cyoa but there are sfw pages when it does become OP. It's been posted about before and it doesn't have to be the whole thing since it's really only 5 pages long at best.
>>97198892I wouldn't mind. But it will not happen beyond shitposting, even if it could solve a lot of problems. It would also bring different problems.I know this is a shitpost but it is an idea, even if a lot of anons hate it.
>>97198907All an MHAcord would do is absolutely nothing, they're necrophiles who thrive off attention and would "post" here anyway. MHA will come back any time now!
>>97198895A bit. Other mps have had some NSFW stuff hidden in their rentries, so it a bit more normal in that sense. That's a good idea. Only real thing of note is if the anon posting it would rather keep the link or would rather hand it off to me and the other threadslaves.>>97198899ngl, I usually just pass over one page for OP rather than give them an extra page, so this would probably be the same situation? I'm a sucker for anon made maps though, so if you get one of those...
>>97198935>Only real thing of note is if the anon posting it would rather keep the link or would rather hand it off to me and the other threadslaves.I'm that anon. Do you mean giving the edit code for the rentry so you update it? I was going to keep doing that anyway. Otherwise I don't mind taking the imagechest link off the post, I will take it out of my notes too.>I'm a sucker for anon made maps though, so if you get one of those...I made this. I also have a very zoomed in village one, I guess it's time to make a bigger one now that we have more characters, I will work on that later.
>>97198975>I'm that anon. Do you mean giving the edit code for the rentry so you update it?No, actually. As a rule the anons who maintain the dedicated rentries and the threadslaves are separate anons. I don't maintain the MHA, or JITE rentries, nor do I plan on handling the Martial Path or Fantasy Village ones. I wouldn't be surprised if one of the threadslaves likes to do those things, but that's their individual choice rather than a threadslave thing.>I made this. I also have a very zoomed in village one, I guess it's time to make a bigger one now that we have more characters, I will work on that later.Alright, I have been shown a map and am on board with adding Fantasy Village to the OP rotation.
>>97199015>As a rule the anons who maintain the dedicated rentries and the threadslaves are separate anons.Noted, I will keep going as I have then.
>>97199034Please do.
>>97198775Which build lasts longest in Moyu's shadow before they get buckbroken like the octopus?
>>97199103The ones with true will simply won't break, and answering who's the best among the rest would require knowing who does and doesn't have true will first.
>>97199103my build lasts the shortest because they ask to kiss her feet in apology after 0.01 seconds in the void
>>97199103I feel like if Moyu got stuck in her own shadow, she'd break the fastest out of the whole cast.
>>97198858mm. Ill have to keep reading then. I think overall I should try and aim a bit lower anyway, I mean the characters aren't going to be fighting through the heavens and slaying buddhas. After reading through all the characters Wuyu's approach I think appeals to me the most.
>>97199131Jian anon...Yu anon...Me in real life...
>>97199150>Jian anon…I’m right behind you, anon.
>>97199160should I be worried or are you just waiting for your turn for Moyu's feet? Be warned, I'm going to be here a while
>>97199166After you. Be careful anon, I’ve heard Moyu will force you to kowtow 17 trillion times and kill your entire progeny 38 generations into the future if you kiss her feet wrong!Crank one out before posting, anon.Okay jokes aside you unironically reminded me of a local Christmas tradition where I live that involves kissing a figure of baby Jesus’ feet. A similar thing happens in Easter too, just with adult Jesus. Fun fact I guess?
>>97199103
>>97199191>Crank one outIt's fine, my fetish isn't really feet. Now, when I start posting about my ACTUAL fetishes, THEN you should be worried.
>>97198419If there's a hell, then it's waiting for the both of us nowAnd if I am the weight that drags both of us downI'll hold tight til the light goes outOPERATION: BAD MAN (Jellyfish, Diva, Old Man Shaw, Slimenuts)https://rentry.org/a6chpb4r
>>97199197What happens if Shahua just turns part of her brain off with her zombie and physician powers? Like if she doesn't gain new memories and every day in the pit is her first day in the pit.
>>97199227Vgh... kvno....
>>97199197The funny part is Jian would probably give in only because he knows Moyu enough to know that she’s just THAT stubborn, so he plays along to make her happy. Moyu thinks Jian can’t see Mt. Tai. Jian actually DOES think she’s kinda pretty, but he wouldn’t tell her that to her face just to have that little win over her. And he doesn’t think he’s in a position to think about that too much anyway
>>97199236Not possible, likely. She wouldn't be able to tell what she was actually doing: it's literally just a void, and as far as she's aware, she's not even really floating in it.>>97199252Jian, buddy, I think being stuck in the shadow realm means you have things to worry about other than giving in to Moyu...
>>97199227can you genuinely shut the fuck up man
>>97199260I don’t know, I never watched Yu-Gi-Oh. Isn’t the shadow realm just a 4Kids term to avoid showing death in the show? Like “oooh if you get hit by the neon light buzzsaws you get sent to the shadow realm!” while in the original show they’re just regular old buzzsaws that fucking KILL you? Unless the shadow realm is also an idea in xianxia, in which case I am twice as unaware as the former case.
>>97199261rudeanons are playing multiplayer, don't yuck their yum! what are you, a rulesfag?
>>97199272I was just joking that I don't think Jian has much of a choice of giving in or not if he was in the shadow dimension.I do wonder what happens if someone Moyu can't break goes in, though. Does she run out of qi and her shadow spits them out?
>>97199274you dumb bitch I’m not even playing MHA, I just don’t like obvious shitposts
>>97199285Oh. Oh fuck. You meant her cultivation technique? I’m so fucking retarded. I thought you meant the shadow realm from Yu-Gi-Oh. I am so fucking retarded right now. Yeah Moyu’s technique is something Jian is genuinely afraid of. He likes his alone time, but not THAT much as to want to be in there forever.
>>97199286>trannycube
>>97199318Mephiles and his tilted towers and Eggman being back in the fucking building are funny albeit
>>97199236>>97199260I'm on the fence for if Shahua's illness spread to her brain, or if that's her one healthy organ. Assuming it does spread to her brain, then she could sort of turn her brain off at will. She'd basically just put that part of her body on low power mode then she'd be good to go. It's how she coughs up blood on demand- she simply lets her already existing illness take hold for a moment before fixing it again.Could be some long term consequences if she leaves something off long time though, so even if this gimmick does apply to her brain, she'd have to periodically stop doing it and at that point she's only delaying the inevitable. Though I guess if the situation is serious enough it's not impossible she'd be willing to let part of her brain rot and die for real? Really comes down to the context and if Moyu's just being smug or genuinely evil.If her illness doesn't spread to her brain then she's just plain screwed. At most she could just turn her cultivation technique and just... die and let Moyu deal with an actual zombie instead of a zombie-like cultivator... Which again comes down to how evil Moyu is being in this situation.
>>97199286Shidehara made the mistake of bullying our liddle brudder, Marakanon. We did what had to be done.
secret hours...
>>97199494Barely a secret at this point
>>97199547Barely anything to talk about as well. Unless someone has an idea.
SECRET ANONS, LEND ME YOUR POWER! I AM GOING TO WRITE!KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH...!!!
>>97199625I believe in you? Do your best. Or maybe just average, whatever you feel comfortable with.
>>97199606That's also a point. What should get talked about? You're more likely to get good responses from /cyoag/'s author discord for OC, your options for ships are underage, incest, or outright ignored for potentially being lewd, and we lost our petting zoo forever ago.
>>97199663>and we lost our petting zoo forever ago.That was honestly pretty fun. Shame the mods said no.
>>97199663>outright ignored for potentially being lewd,In Martial Path? Or Village? I don't think Martial Path has that problem, and I think Vilage would accept ships if they were genuine and not an attempt to kill the MP via porn. JITE already has ships too.
>>97199736Martial Path just doesn't have the cast to support shipping talk. Not in terms of numbers or shippable cast members. JITE's better, but it also feels like there aren't that many builds meant for shipping. Village I'm not in and can't comment on. Also nta.
>>97199788I guess for village it's got some dynamics but it's not going to happen for a while due to the survival situation. Surprisingly it's also one of the few mp that has a greater male population with a ratio of 5:3, nearly doubling the girls.
>>97198907I like MHA, but I will never join your gay discord group.
>>97199866I just don't get the hate. The last server proved that it can work.
>>97199885NTA but its isolated and there's no archives once it does kick the bucket just like the original server. I also don't like having a sikret klub that's going to fragment the small population we already have. But I can see how it'd be one of the only ways to continue with MHA.
>>97199663>incestEnemies to lovers is based though and for all we know past incarnations of them have already been lovers in a century spanning tragedy.
>>97199114How many commoners do we have? They get a buff to resilience too.
>>97199197Yeah, Fei's qi is weird, so he's quite hard to hit even with more esoteric stuff like this. But if this type of ability does manage to land, then he's probably more vulnerable than a lot of other characters. It kinda depends on what her shadow thing does exactly. If she's stabbing him a million times per second in an infinite Tsukuyomi, then he lasts longer than you probably expect. If she can tap into a person's vices/desires, then he's pretty fucked. He's terrible when it comes to things like that.I'm more interested in the reasoning for the other characters' placements though. Like why is Heinrich so low kek?
>>97200081>It kinda depends on what her shadow thing does exactly.Absolute sensory deprivation. You can't even hear yourself speak or feel your own body moving. You are essentially a brain in a jar with no access to any of your five senses.
Reworked Liang Ba>https://rentry.co/LiangBaAny thoughts welcome. Still thinking about dropping the two heavens down to earth but not sure if it works relative to the other characters.
>>97200086Ah, then yeah it'd be super effective on him if she managed to land it. He's good at shrugging things off, but he thrives off of new experiences. Something terrible is so much better than nothing at all. It's not even a comparison. His only recourse would be to reject the entire concept of a void and attempt to pierce through it, just as he attempted to do to the heavens. If he failed, then he'd inevitably just go insane.
>>97200180Sadly it's less of a status effect he can shake off through conceptual nonsense and more of a physical dimension to be trapped in that has infinite space. Good news is that it's more of a storage tech than an attack, so it's unlikely it'll happen to him unless something unexpected happens.
>>97200213>your build can't break through an interdimensional spacenot my hero
>>97200252Gotta give it time. Wait for your hero to get to golden core first. Then he can punch the space-time continuum. "B-but, mps don't have progression!" Then it'll happen off-screen after the mp ends if it must, but it will happen with or without the mp.
>>97200213Yeah, I was using the term "land" loosely. I just meant that he's hard to trap, sometimes even if the conditions necessary to do seem to have been met. Whether it be through physical or conceptual means, stripping him of his freedom is a difficult task. You have to hit him first, and if you think you've hit him, you probably haven't. I also wasn't using "shrug off" in reference to that, but more to setbacks, pain, etc. If there's any sort of path forward, then he's already taking it. That's why being in an endless void would be especially awful for him. >Good news is that it's more of a storage tech than an attack, so it's unlikely it'll happen to him unless something unexpected happens.Yeah, I think I remember that from her bio. I've also been assuming he's notably stronger than Jian and Moyu at the start of the MP, so he can potentially be a mentor figure to Jian and just generally lil' bro the teenagers. So I was just considering this as a hypothetical future scenario where relative power levels have already shifted between all the cast members.
>>97200252I couldnt imagine losing to what amounts as a backpack attack
>>97200114Do it.Earthchads > Hiddensissies
>>97199197Wuyu should be higher given the commoner origin and his natural insight.
>>97200114I think you should swap one of your cultivation techniques into body refining. Having multiple cultivation techniques is specifically said to be a bad idea in the cyoa. Sacred Treasure Body especially sounds like Body Refining already.I think the only character who has techniques capped at Earth is Wuyu. Body Refining is also a bit specific because THE True Body Refining is hidden tier. Earth is probably the minimum where you can make Body Refining, which doesn't drop off at Pure Realm. Sacred Treasure Body would definitely have to get nerfed then, it already sounds strong even compared to the hidden True Body Refining.
>>97200286Shadow Realm sounds like a good place for closed door cultivation.
>>97200882Good catch that was a typo, ive fixed it now. And yeah I might have got carried away with the description of it, but figured it didn't matter since its not achievable. Its more like the in universe description. I also wasn't sure really what the difference was between hidden and heaven except that Hidden is harder than heaven to learn and master but also more powerful when they are attained. Your reasoning for Earth grade was sort of what I was thinking, it being the lower level for body refinement. I am mostly going off the fact that all the lists elders seem to main-line earth grade so to me means its actually a top tier, outside of MC styled unique inheritances. So I figured there must be some body refinement techniques as the description says they are held in high regard if they are able to actually do better than what you get with the Pure Realm.
>>97200882>>97200962If you think it currently sounds too strong compared to True Divine Body I am open to rewording it, do you have a suggestion?
I feel kinda bad now because Jian’s cultivation technique is only Earth level, although I did that on purpose to show that he came up with it himself, with his innovation. Maybe in 10 years or so he’ll be able to upgrade it and create Heaven techniques
>>97201064It's cool bro. Don't stress over power scaling stuff when the builds who will end up doing cool stuff will just be the ones people care to write about.
>>97201064I think "only" Earth level is a bad way to look at things. Only 2 of the Elders have Heaven-Ranked cultivation techniques. The listed Elders are all major players and they seem to be getting on fine with Earth Grade, holding Heaven rank abilities as trump cards.Going off the peer section, it looks like Yellow-Earth is where most the significant players sit at. I imagine Yellow-Common to be the nameless hordes.
>>97200986I think I'd cut tiers 5 and 6.Tiers 1-4 are overall a generic buff to all physical things, which is like True Body Cultivation, but I think it can be just assumed the buff is smaller. Still, it puts it above Earth tier, where I think a technique would focus on just one aspect, like Endless Vitality for premades or Wuyu's techniques if looking at PCs.Tier 5 would be a big buff by itself, I think is worthy of another technique.Tier 6 makes it sound like it's even above the level of True Body with all the limitless talk.
>>97201185nta but imo cutting the 6th step makes it fitting for heaven. when you throw in that noone has even reached that level its nothing more than rumor or lore.>>97200986Cut 6 or change it to be more explicit "legends say a mythical sixth level exists beyond the fifth that would let you blah blah blah but the condition to enter that realm has never been found."