4chan's collective RWBY AU! You're welcome to share your own OCs, lore, and AI generated images with us!Rules:>1. Worship Scarlet>2. Read the Pastebin: https://pastebin.com/8MjgAFYQ>3. Beware trolls, falseflaggers, and edgelords>4. No bitching about other ships>5. Regular RWBY discussion goes to RWBY/RT General>6. Have fun!General Greentexts: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/923xfr3g94zeq/SV_GreensGreentextAnon’s Greentexts: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/na0b5f695k3og/GreensTiermakers: https://tiermaker.com/user/16270573Scarletverse Fics:>RWBY: Seeds of Hope, Sins of the Pasthttps://archiveofourown.org/works/49690543https://fanfiction.net/s/14272205>Fuchsia Petals on Phantom Wingshttps://archiveofourown.org/works/54970447https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14324341/1/Fuchsia-Petals-on-Phantom-WingsRWBY General Thread: >>70952690Previous Thread: >>70918566Archived Threads: https://desuarchive.org/_/search/boards/trash.desu.meta/text/Scarletverse%20General/type/op/
>>70961614What kind of dispute did Sabine and Mercy get into for them to fight each other in their casual clothes?
We were just saying this in the last thread but does look like there will be an announcement about RWBY continuing eventually probably in the new year >>70961674
New bread found. I love Ruby even if she's a gremlin creature
>>70961752>RWBY gets a reboot or continuation>RWBYg returns to /co/>Influx of new anons in general>Return to /trash/ after season ends>New anons see SV thread>Another thread renaissancePerhaps the show being revived isn't so bad after all
>>70961894Actually this has me thinking, if RWBY does continue and we're back on /co/ would we be in the OP during that time
>>70961894While it'd be good to have an influx of new people (here specifically) I really don't want the show to carry on in any capacity. I'd rather Viz use the IP just for merch and anthology comics/manga, and I'd willingly sell my soul and end my life if it meant the show stayed dead and buried
>>70961986Damn son thats a level of hatred innit?
>>70961986Well the latest tweet does seem to imply the show will continue, but I wouldn't be surprised if the next volume is the last
>>70961752honestly I just hope we get an ending before they reboot it
>>70962051I wouldn't call it hatred. It's fatigue. Continue the show and it's still a mess that needs to be fixed, reboot it and you're starting from square one. That's not to mention the vocal fans who are psychos no matter what alignment they hold to RT, the characters, or personal politics. Reviving the show will also disrupt fan works in a variety of ways. Most of all, RWBY has just disappointed time after time. I'd much rather do something fun and creative here and in my own ways elsewhere than have to deal with the madness that is being disappointed by the show and tolerating a crazed fandom>>70962161I don't see how anything in that tweet implies it's going to continue. IIRC there was a new image with the announcement of the Viz acquisition; nothing's happened. There were tweets leading up to some anime convention where Viz were attending and making announcements; nothing happened. Having the four main VAs who all live in the same city get together for a photo doesn't convince me that something is about to happen.I'm not trying to be negative, and I don't want to talk about this more because it's almost midnight and I really don't want to piss myself off this late at night.
>>70962269I'd think they'd at least give the original series some closure even if a reboot is in the works, I mean the original only had 2 or 3 volumes left anyway, it was fairly close to the endMy guess is Viz will do one last volume to wrap things up then move on with what they really want to do with the IP
>>70962305>I don't see how anything in that tweet implies it's going to continue.No big announcement YET does imply eventually there will be one, even if it doesn't fully continue Viz is going to have to say something about the show's fate eventuallyMy guess is they get one more volume
>>70961986>Anon turns himself into the egg of the perfect world just to ensure the death of a Texan web animation
Stayed up too late. (again) Less than 6 hours of sleep here I come. gn bros
>>70946538>Memory problems (he still hasn't uploaded it)>Eye problems90% chance that he is about to die from some Congolese jungle fever that was last reported in 1896.
RWBY will get a reboot where SV is canon
>>70963030Gnight anon
>>70963134>(he still hasn't uploaded it)fuck you, 1am upload.>You guys gotta call me out on taking too long more spite is my strongest motivator
>>70963138Based. >>70963959Noted
>>70963959>You guys gotta call me out on taking too long more spite is my strongest motivator.Duly noted. Not that I’ll likely use that given piece of information intentionally, given my personal code of ethics regarding critique and editing, but noted nonetheless.On that note, any ideas for the chapter’s closing sequence, assuming there is one? If not, may I suggest maybe Roman or another non-participating faction like the Teachers, RWBY, K, or the Shadows watching the Vytal Festival? You could probably use it to briefly comment on the other teams that won and set up the 2v2’s a bit.
>dealing with women when they're held accountable for their actionshttps://youtu.be/u-A6_xsj_aU?si=yjPw9DK9yZdOQkYn
>Whitley rawdogging his robowaifu
Good night lads. I love Scarlet and hope we get another renaissance soon.
>a couple stabs at genning Myriam's druggie whore mom>>70963959And they say that public shaming doesn't actually work.>>70965605He posted this list of characters that he was planning to appear in this chapter like twenty eons ago.>Lumi, Scarlet, JWEL, SABL, BGEL, KRMA, Alaska, Arkansas, Ruby Blake, Sun, Lavender, Romeo, Henna
>>70966918
>>70966940Now as a certified bad dog.
>>70966945Probably could make her look worse and more druggie-ish, but that would mean more wrestling with Bing's AI censor.
>>70961614Mercy's brown boobies
>>70965605>maybe RomanAnon…
>>70967599Look, I can remember many things and weird tidbits with perfect accuracy, but names are the one thing my mind just adamantly refuses to remember, be they real people or from the world of fiction. Hell, half the reason why I want to go into the teaching profession is to work on this in a practical environment, and the other half is the frankly comedic amount of government benefits I get.To pivot a bit, learning to become a teacher myself has been an interesting reflective experience, both as a student in the past, and as someone involved in this project, given its school-centric nature and increased focus on the teacher-aged cast. For starters, you don’t realise how many support staff and teacher aides there are unless you properly get a look behind the curtain, the last school I observed was a P-12 with little over 500 people, and yet there was about 60, only 25-30 of which I’d say were “actual teachers”. It makes me wonder how many people are running around Beacon, Shade, Haven and especially Atlas, how many faces we just never see because they’re not relevant. Meetings are another big one, because they happen fortnightly at the absolute most, even in the most lax public schools known to man, which, again, just makes me wonder about Beacon’s inner workings.
>>70967599Technically, he could appear as an old pile of Grimm shit. Though I doubt that a pile of demon dung would or could offer particularly in-depth commentary on the fights.
>>70967599Neo’s schizophrenia is rubbing off on people
>>70968339I think that the majority of people here would prefer Neo to be sane enough to be able to tell the difference between Romeo and Romeo.
I crave goossy
>watching Dandadan>Episodes 1-6 are wacky and enjoyable, kinda sad about the lore for Turbo Granny>Episode 7 releases>get hit with Soul Crusher 9000 Fuck, man. That was fucking rough, and it made me imagine a similar scenario with Neo, like a "what if" that further caused Neo to go crazy. What if Roman had a will for his gang to wring Romeo from Neo's hands to be the next head honcho?
>>70968827>>watching DandadanMan I haven't watched an in season anime since spyxfamily and I only saw like 4 episodes of that, is dandadan good? I've heard about it but never seen any clips
>>70969219It's a breath of fresh air to me, at the very least. I'd say give the first episode a shot to see if it suits your preferred genre. The two main characters get to discover that their interests (ghosts and aliens) turn out to be real while also having to deal with one of them being cursed (Turbo Granny gobbled his weenie and now he has no weenie)
>>70968742She’s so hairy
>>70968742Goth Goose's haircut is sexo
>>70969665It’s a lesbian haircut
>>70969884Gay or agressivly bisexual
>>70968742
>>70965605>On that note, any ideas for the chapter’s closing sequence, assuming there is one?at the very least there will be one more scene, I may end up splitting the chapter in half just because of how long the fight took but I could probably squeeze that in.
>>70968742Anal Queen Goose
>>70970330Who will be in the next scene
>>70970576Arkansas and Alaska
What is SABL's role outside of appearing in Vytal Festivals?
>>70970684I have some ideas about them playing a pretty big role in handling the Vacuo cult and rescuing/putting down the masked members of BRST in years 3/4 but I haven't really fleshed it out much
>>70970739>putting down the masked members of BRSTPotentially based. Having part of BRST survive their encounter with Henna even in a masked state was a major downgrade from the previous TPK IMO.
Sleepy
>>70970954Tbh I'd much rather use Taimur as a freaky infiltrator. There's virtually no other person who could pull it off as well as she could
How are the commissions going? Both by that Laosimp and anon's Lumi comission?
Good afternoon SVbros
>>70971324I just wrapped things up with Laosimp. They wanted a full, detailed character sheet of Lao so get ready for that sometime soon.
>>70971587Damn. Nice
>>70969978Which girls have the puffiest pussies
>>70971587That's all she wanted? I'd have thought she wanted an illustration of one of Lao's kino moments like the beatdown.
Bnuuy!>>70961647>Mercy thinks Sabine is a weirdo. >Sabine thinks Mercy is a bitch. >Chaos ensues
>>70971587how much do you charge? I may be interested in commissioning a few scenes like >>70972008 was thinking
>>70971415Afternoon anon>>70971587Neat
https://www.usatoday.com/story/money/food/2024/11/20/mcrib-mcdonalds-returns-2024/76425594007/the promised time
>>70972302guess I might try one this time
>>70971587I want to peg Lao
>>70973072Liz...
>>70973236Liz ruining Lao's asshole so badly that he has to get a colostomy bag
>>70973610Shut the fuck up
>when the voices won't stop and your violent thoughts are becoming actively detrimentalWhich SV characters suffer from schizophrenic delusions?
>>70973986Anon you might want to see a professional about that
>>70973986Lavender
>>70974140I want to cover up her track marks with hickies
>>70974234I want to cuddle with her and kiss her forehead
>>70974132In this economy? But to be serious I've seen doctors and shrinks in the past and it's helped but things just seem really bad lately. The last thing I want is to go on meds>>70974140Based schizo scorp. As wrong as this might sound I envy her because at least she gets to act on her delusions. All my shit's just short-circuiting my brain
>>70974140Talking about Lav, who in SJJLBGEL will hate her longest thanks to her past actions?
>>70974655Probably Lumi
>>70974655Lumi after she became her sister-in-law.
>>70974655I would assume Scarlet considering she tried to kill her various times and was part of a cult that wanted her and her parents dead
>>70974655from shortest to longestGoose<Jin<Lao<Jet<Liz<Belka<Scarlet=Lumi
>Belka explaining post-FOB2 how Lavender absolutely is a cultist quadruple-deep cover sleeper agent that is going to kill them all any second now>Scarlet and Lumi are fully aboard of this
>>70974655the girl she tried to murder twice is a safe bet
>>70975045I actually had this idea, I wonder if anybody will be suspicious of Lav that she hasn't really left the cult and is just playing them to get more intel
>>70975185Realistically speaking? I would assume that outside of Juliet, Rosaria, and possibly Luna, most of them would think that Lav is a cultist double agent for a long time. One could pretty easily use this to make Juliet's backstab more painful for Lav, but that would mean Lav actually being friends with Juliet rather than almost immediately being suspicious of her and not buying into her bullshit. And, for some reason, a lot of people seemed to be against Lav actually failing for Juliet's friendship trickery when it was talked about last year.
>>70975460I think Lav should fall for Juliet, considering a large part of Lav's personality in the beginning is she is desperate for any kind of affection after how horrible Neo treated herActually it would be interesting if Juliet played into the others fears if they confided in her about Lav being a double agent, keeps her hiding in plain sight
One thing that never made sense to me was how Lav had no idea who Rosaria and Juliet were. Yeah she wasn't part of the inner circle so maybe she never saw them physically, but she was involved with the cult for over 3 years and with Henna a lot and you're telling me she never heard about them once? Doesn't make sense desu
>>70975460>possibly LunaI would say Luna would be suspicious for a while even if they become friends considering Lav continued to work with Moon by association even after saving her
So realistically how long should people be skeptical of Lavender? While I like the idea of people not trusting her at first instead of just accepting her despite trying to kill their friends realistically she'd probably bail on Beacon if even after proving herself she was treated like a ticking time bomb. Basically her whole thing is that she craves acceptance and affection and it really doesn't make sense for her to stay at Beacon where she can obviously she isn't wanted as opposed to staying with Romeo who loves her unconditionally and would allow her to search for the cult in her own way without nearly as many restrictions.
>>70975607Most secret societies operate on a strict need-to-know basis, and Lav really isn't all that high in the cult's inner structure. Hell, she doesn't even seem to know who Vale's real cult boss is, so the likelihood that she knows that Salem has people inside of Beacon as students should be pretty low.
>>70976123I assume that whatever deal she has with Beacon includes something along the lines of>If you try to run away, we will kill you and your brother
>>70976123This >>70976230 Lav probably is only at Beacon because they would make sure her life was worse other wise, realistically at least the first year she was at Beacon people would be skeptical and people like Scarlet and Lumi who were actually hurt by her probably don't fully trust her until after the attack on Vale
>>70976123My current plan is that people start warming up to Lav after Moon is dealt with, which in the eyes of Beacon crew and Ozlumonati is a huge blow to the cult that she has a direct hand in causing. Obviously they don't just forgive and forget but I think helping take down both the perceived and real leader would earn her some points in proving her sincerity. desu I'm not sure when exactly Scarlet I'm gonna have Scarlet and her bury the hatchet fully, no earlier at late year 2 at the earliest but it's probably just gonna be when I feel it's the right time.>>70976127this, not to mention some people seem to think Lavender is more involved with the cult than I feel I've implied she is but that could be on me.
>>70976613>people seem to think Lavender is more involved with the cult than I feel I've implied she is but that could be on me.I don't think it helps that Lav is so far up Henna's ass and Henna is pretty up there in the cult
>>70976693Lav and Henna yuri sex!
>>70976698Unironically Lav would've 1000% ate Henna out if it meant gaining her approval
>>70976693>I don't think it helps that Lav is so far up Henna's ass and Henna is pretty up there in the cultI get that but at the same time I feel like I've been very unambiguous with what her personal standing and dynamic is. Either people will like how I handle it or they won't.
Really, I wonder if Juilet and Rosaria would try to cast doubt on Lav's loyalty before the FoB2. Like maybe they try to make her a scapegoat/red herring. I like the idea that they do that in a way that isn't obvious, but Lav starts to put the pieces together and mistrust them.
>>70976866I see it from your writing that Lav believes because of Henna but doesn't always agree with things as shown by how she didn't kill Luna and dislikes Azrael, however it also seems like she feels more love/attachment towards Henna than Romeo as seen by the last chapter where Romeo notices a difference in treatment which also gives her points in cult dedication
>>70976870I think they would, there are reasons for people to not trust Lav
>You know what, Scarlet? You're a fuckin' joke.>You're a disgrace to everything you stood for.>No wonder the rest of your team didn't take you, or the neo white fang!>And they'll take fuckin' anyone, ANYONE with a remotely animal trait into their ranks.>I mean, you are a ridiculous, immature, half-blind moron with delusions beyond imagination.>I have never met a sadder, more attention-starved chuuni prick in my entire life, and that says a lot because I've been walking this earth since Henna betrayed me for more than 20 fuckin' years.>And I'll tell ya, that moth chick was right about one thing: you will never save the world.>You couldn't even save a relationship with your racially ambiguous gun-nut boyfriend>Motherfucker, I wish I could say you'll die alone, but it's one of the gods' best jokes that you can't die because you're so fucking special!>Except that joke is on all of US!
Virgin eighth-grader syndrome vs. Chad actually being insane
>>70977069Who is the Wolverine to Scarlet's Deadpool?
>>70976925>however it also seems like she feels more love/attachment towards Henna than Romeo as seen by the last chapter where Romeo notices a difference in treatment which also gives her points in cult dedicationI won't say that's wrong but I do feel like it's ignoring some context.Firstly their reuinions are both under very different circumstances, when Lavender met back up with Romeo she was in a more vulnerable place, just off the back of getting her ass kicked by Ruby and had built up Neo and by extension her brother as people who hated her, meanwhile she has spent the last 3-ish years with Henna who she knows loves her. Secondly the scene is Romeo's pov, its emphasized because he's personally bitter and worried about it because that's the little sister who he had to physically fight in order to get her to accept he wanted to help her running into the arms of someone he sees as a manipulator.Also because I realize that rambling sort of feels like I'm beating around the bush I will confirm that Lavender does currently love Henna more but not by any substatial degree. It'll be clearer as Vacuo goes on and her thought process is explored more but she has accepted at this point that she was wrong about her brother and wants to reforge their connection. The way I'm tackling it is that in her eyes it's not a matter of who she loves more, she wants them both in her life because at this point she hasn't been hit with the reality that she can't have them both.
>>70977515K
>>70977536>because at this point she hasn't been hit with the reality that she can't have them both.NTA, but didn't Moon give her this exact speech?
>>70977714>but didn't Moon give her this exact speech?Right I worded that pretty badly, what I meant is that she hasn't really ACCEPTED that yet. She's still in denial.
>>70973986You should see a psychiatrist, I hope you're okay.Sabine, although it's less schizophrenia and more poor memory and a childhood that took place exclusively within VR. She does occasionally get flashes and visions from her false past
>Play Hades 2>Finally get to Prometheus boss fight>Get jumpscared by Clive RosfieldHoly shit I didn't expect Ben Starr.
>>70977515Definitely K/KaetoThis also means that those two will fight 100 Scarlet variants
>>70978186Argentio having Ben Starr's voice is something I agree with. There's just something about Brit voice acting man. From Xenoblade to FFXIV and BG3
>>70977536I'm kinda confused why Lav thinks Romeo hates her, he was always nice while Neo treated her like shitI get she has jealousy towards him because of Neo's favoritism but I don't see why she'd think he hates her
>>70977786I probably should, I'm just so busy and I really don't want to go through the financial trouble so close to Thanksgiving and Christmas. I appreciate your concern, though.Sabine's memory issues are interesting. I'd like to write something about/for it, but I've got a million other things on my plate
>>70977069>>70977601>>70978397So what the fuck did K-verine do or have done to him that was even worse than the main universe's K?
>>70978665>I'm kinda confused why Lav thinks Romeo hates her, he was always nice while Neo treated her like shitThere's really no good reason, I always saw it as her projecting her own bitterness onto him as a way to convince herself that she didn't make a huge mistake
I hate that I contracted brainrot upon waking up on the internet... >rat granny finding out about uncut mfs who are unhygenic (dick cheese):
>>70979161Which boys have dick cheese
>>70979195This is a dangerous question
>>70979256Why
>>70971587:l
>>70979256It's not even a dangerous question, it's a dumb and unnecessary question that not a lot of people will entertain unless they have a fetish for it.
I love all of the boys whether they have dick cheese or not
Which couple gets into dumb arguments like this?https://youtube.com/clip/Ugkxf-CIXk8XnZS9ZitzbFazj5DcwTDTZdVD?si=gQ7eHW3-LblD03CG
>>70979820Jet and Scarlet
>>70979820I'd much rather be too cold than too hot. There's no other objectively correct argument to be made on the subject, bar none.
>>70980047I'm gonna have to disagree with you, Rusty.Being cold sucks and yes you can just wrap up or turn your heating up, but it's the seasonal vibes that make it suck. In winter everything's cold, dark, and wet, you're forced to dress up in layers of clothing and the lack of sunlight is depressing. Snow is nice, but it loses it's novelty when you have to wade through inches of it that bury ice underneath. Thanksgiving and Christmas are the only beacons of joy in such an otherwise God-forsaken time of year.Summer on the other hand is peak. Bright days that last a long time, blue skies, and comfortable clothing that also translates into everyone trying to look their best. If you're too warm you wear something lighter or turn on your AC. Out on the town? Grab a cold coffee, soda, or beer. Having to deal with sweat is nowhere near as bad as shivering non-stop because you decided to exit a building.Winter sucks outside of the holidays and I'll die on this hill. Summer rules.
>>70980047Being too cold means my fingers dont work and i might lose my toes.
I fucking hate summer, wear something light? Boy I can go to bed butt ass naked with my AC on full blast and still wake up in a sweat, not to mention the bugs yeah let me go enjoy the outdoors where I'll get stung and fed on by all these little parasites, and the fucking sun, have any of you spent 8 hours in that shit only to have to walk home for another hour? That shit doesn't feel good.
>>70980712I'd rather be sunburned, bitten by bugs, drenched in sweat and aching all over than tolerate 5 minutes of anything below 75 degrees. Fuck the cold.
>>70980355>>70980485This >>70980712 is the only take I support. Fuck bugs
>>70980896nah fuck summer, I want another ice age
>>70968339>She loved Roman so much, but was enough of a WHORE to leave their son on his birthday and get knocked up ONLY SIX MONTHS after he DIED!
>>70981066Damn it I forgot the image, this sinus infection is really getting to me (I’ve been in bed all day). Hope you guys are feeling better than me!>>70980355>>70980712>>70980896>>70980909>>70980942Fall is the superior season!
>>70979161>Americans think it's hard to wash your cockCope harder, your dick was mutilated because 100 years ago an insane puritan hoped it would stop you jerking off
>>70978720That's understandable, life is time consuming. But please do see one when you can. I'd be curious to see what you come up with, I tried to make Sabine interesting enough to work with. Just make sure to take it easy okay
>>70981107Fall is the best, but particularly pre daylight savings time. Post daylight savings, seasonal depression hits like a truck
>>70981107Kek but true about fall
I hate summer and winter, but I still prefer to be too cold>Australian winter is the sun rising at 7am and setting at 5pm>it fuckin rains for like two weeks straight then randomly whenever it feels like>people start acting like they're dying of the temperature goes below 18CVS summer where you go outside for longer than 15 minutes and you get sunburned>Weeks straight of over 40C weather>CONSTANTLY bombarded with PSAs that you're evil if you use your air conditioner or shower for longer than 5 minutes>no matter how long you run your AC only one room cools down becaise the rest of the house is in direct sunlight and there solar panels on your roof that act like a giant heat sink>FUCKING FLIESI gotta be the only person who gets seasonal depression in summer as well. I JUST WANT IT TO BE SPRING AND AUTUMN ALL YEAR IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK?
>>70981427>>70981428Glad you guys agree with me. Also yeah I love fall but I do hate daylight savings, I hate that for the next 3 months the sun goes down at 4:30, it’s so depressing
>>70981550Sucks to suck Perthie, should’ve come into existence here in Queensland mate, averages 35-37 during summer, no-one gives a fuck about having a bajillion fans going, houses are actually capable of being cool (The Queenslander architectural style exists for a reason, who knew?), and I literally live right next to both a swamp and a horse paddock, and flies are a non-existent issue (now ants, that’s a different story).
>>70982060I'll be dead and gone before I acknowledge eastern state superiority
Oh cool a FF comment that's actually critiquing something. Thoughts?
Which characters have circumcision trauma?
>>70982859None because there’s no jewish boys
>>70982507Dialogue is kind of a paragraph of its own. However you imagine a character speaking in a given scene, they are human and need to take breathers between lines, so you'll need to reflect the pacing that you visualize. Otherwise, you get walls of dialogue that just don't flow right. >t. Someone who can't write for shit and might not be reading the comment correctly :P
>>70982507He's right. Just looking at the latest chapter I can tell you the first paragraph alone is too big. You need to break things up. Not only does it help readers with being able to get through your work but it'll actually help your workflow. I don't know what font and size you use in google docs, but I use Arial and size 10 and make sure that each paragraph doesn't go longer than 5 lines in the doc. It ends up looking good on AO3 both on desktop and mobile, but I'd advise trying to keep it shorter still.Another point is that you should separate dialogue into its own line or paragraph, that way it doesn't get buried in the middle of a wall of text. For example,>Person X did thing, and it caught Person Y's attention>"What are you doing?" Asked Person YAdditionally, you can use a comma to space out your dialogue and add actions in said dialogue without breaking it down into lots of tiny sentences. For example,>"Hmm?" Person X looked at Person Y. "Oh, nothing much," They chuckled. "Just being nosy."The main rule to follow here is that dialogue from a new speaker always starts on a new line, as shown above. Don't do,>"Hello." Said Person X. "Hi." Replied person Y. "How are you?" Asked Person X.It ends up being cluttered and runs into the issue of you needing to explicitly specify that another person is talking after the dialogue has been read, where as if it's on a separate line the reader will know someone else is talking, assume it's the other party in the conversation, and then you can add inflection, tone, actions, and other information in the sentence immediately following the dialogue.tl;dr>break up your paragraphs>new line for a new line of dialogue/speaker>use commas appropriatelyGomen nasorry if any of this comes across as aggressive. I'm just trying to be critical and help you better your writing. I really should keep reading the fic and get caught up so I can comment.
>>70982946I think I get it, I'll adjust the current chapter being worked on before it goes up and see if the paragraphs look more approachable. After that I can go back and adjust the older chapters to be more in line too but that'll probably take a couple of days to do
I hope the Henna and stygian themes are good...
SEW bump
>>70984190Literal hood niggas
>>70984190My silver-eyed wife can't possibly be this cute
>>70983369Yeah, I don't really like to fuck around with paragraph formatting too much while editing chapters because it's a fucking nightmare to correct if I make a mistake. Sorry boss.
Need Schnussy
>>70983369If you do decide to go back and edit the previous chapters make sure you commit to it. I've about 270K words on my backlog that I need to edit just to keep things a little more streamlined and tidy, and let me tell you it's a pain in my ass. I really need to get my literary house in order before I make new things. Also another piece of advice; single, short sentences can give something an extra bit of oomph when you want it to be important or stand out. Best of luck if you do go back and edit those chapters
>>70984901Is the Schnussy ice cold or built like a furnace?
>>70985041>11 buns in the ovenFurnace, without question
Aside from Lao, Breve and one other guy I'm sure I'm forgetting, what other characters have in-depth semblances/explanations?
>>70986470As in they have a detailed explanation?
>>70986688Yeah sorry I should have specified
Lumi is coming along great. I've been listening to the audiobookfor "the road" by Cormack McCarthy while i work on her because it's mandatory reading for one of my classes. with that being said which character would survive the best with a child in a post-apocalypse?
>>70981697>I hate that for the next 3 months the sun goes down at 4:30, it’s so depressingIt could always be worse
>>70986723Ah. Jet, Luna, Lavender, Liang, Mercy, Asher, Onyx, Touko, and Topaz come to mind.
>>70987202>which character would survive the best with a child in a post-apocalypse?Vacuo's already in a Mad Max anarchy situation, so various Vacuans would be able to do alright. I remember Carmine raised Siyah out in the desert. Arkansas raised Alaska decently well, at least until she went off to Beacon and the city brought out the worst in her. Onyx would probably be good too on account of her personality, skills and tracking semblance— would have to ease off the alcohol though.
Are all the SchnArc girls caked up?
>>70987542>SiyahSiyah spent I'd say up until he was about 9-11 years of age in an orphanage, being worked as a manual labourer, a pickpocket, and a beggar, like is pretty common in nations with high populations and extremely low standards of living like India, but after that point, yeah, nomad with Carmine.>AlaskaAlaska's Vacuoan, but she's pretty much right on the borders of what's considered Vacuo and the Kingdom of Vale, being from that Wild West-y region. Obviously that doesn't diminish the fact that her and her pops eeked out a living, but in terms of basic environment, I'd say she had it best overall out of our Vacuoan born and raised cast save for Sarasvati and maybe Beryl, depending on how you want to view her childhood.>OnyxTo be frank, I haven't kept up with Onyx and Asher's lore beyond the bare minimums, can't really comment.
>>70987637It's a possibility. Lumi is, Liz is, and Goose is. Seems Willow's ass genes are dominant.
>>70987664>VacuoanI'm begging you people to stop doing this. The official demonym is "Vacuan." Even if you don't care about what's official or not, it's much easier to say Vacuan than it is Vacuoan. Go ahead and do it right now and you'll see what I mean. You people do the same thing with Mistral. The demonym is "Mistrali" not "Mistralian." You're just adding a pointless syllable and removing any uniqueness from the noun. Atlesian is fine, Valean is fine but Valish might be a good alternative. Menagerian is a mouthful but I genuinely don't know what else you'd call them. My point is please stop saying Vacuoan, it's just dumb
>>70987828Extra syllables make them sound better.t. a Vacuoan and Mistralian enjoyer
>>70987856>Extra syllables make them sound better.No it doesn't. Saying Vacuoan out loud makes it sound like you're tripping over the word mid-speech. Mistralian removes any character from the demonym by giving it a generic and overused "ian" suffix. Please tell me you're just baiting to fuck with me because I'm too sleep deprived to want this argument
>>70987905Go to bed anon, don't rile yourself up and lose sleep for a pointless argument
>>70987828I agree with this niggaAs for people from Menagerie, I propose Menageran>I wouldn't exactly call them people
>>70987828Vacuoan, Mistralian, Atlesian, Valean, Farmtool
>>70988007>FarmtoolI prefer concubine
>tfw no farmtool slave
>mfw realizing I'm on the precipice of losing it over a demonym>a noun of all fucking things
>>70988093Go to BED
>>70988093https://youtube.com/watch?v=1YLNTuzWCu4 you know that you want to do it
>>70987828>ValishI like this so much I'm just going to use it an adjective in an anthropological context but still keep Valean for the citizens within the capital region and nation overall. Really fun to think of distinct regions and populations within the kingdom(s). >The Valish Peoples of SanusValeans, Patchlanders/Patchies, Marchfolk, (People like Arkansas and Alaska along the Vacuan/Vale frontier border), Westerlies (self-explanatory westward and Welsh-like people since Aeth and Blaed are from an 'isolated' region of Vale), etc.
>>70988500That's pretty cool
>>70988500>PatchlandersHuh. That works surprisingly well.
>>70987202Oth that’s easy, Durga.She already did that shit (or as close as an approximation you can get) for 8 years with Sarasvati, wandering Vacuo’s many arid environments from the deserts to the savannas, mesas, and everything between.
>>70987828Atloid, Mistraloid, Vacuoid, Valoid, and Faunoid.
Good night bros
>>70989190Goodnight, homie.
Cow pussy
>>70989645Schnussy
>>70989645This one looks new. Nice.
Who are the hottest girls from each kingdom?
>>70989888That's a matter of personal preferences but for me:>ValeScarlet>AtlasIndigo>MistralMalva>VacuoOnyx
>>70989990(me)Forgot Menagerie, though it's not really a kingdom. I'd say Luna.>Is Luna from Menagerie?
>>70990007>>Is Luna from Menagerie?Born in Vale, moved to Menagerie after Moon got groomed IIRC,
Went back and checked the maps we made and procrastinated enough to come up with loosely inspired cultures that make up the demographics of the kingdoms.>>70989888General contests like this are kind of tough but off the top of my head?>ValeBattle of the Protagonists. Prof. Ruby or Scarlet, no one else comes close>AtlasThe average Atlesian would probably say one of the Schnarc daughters due to how famous they are. I say it's either going to MILFter, Cassia, Indigo, or Liz if you're a coomer.>Mistral>>70989990 is kind of based for Malva pick but I'd tie her with Elena. Leona and Lapis are runner ups.>VacuoFuck Onyxfags. Fuck Hennafags. I vote Beryl out of spite because brown-skinned faunus are the lowest hanging fruits in these things.>MenagerieBlake because who else is there besides Liang.
>>70990496>because who else is there besides Liang.Hulijing If you are into ear FLOOOF
>>70990496>Khalijit has wares if you have coin
>>70990496>brown-skinned faunus are the lowest hanging fruits in these things.Pretty sure that we have at least one for each kingdom Atlas>Aclima (technically also a brown-skinned human)Mistral >Leona Vale >Miziren and AlaniVacuo>Onyx, Yara, HennaMenagerie >Hulijing
>>70990496Yeah this blows my shitty map out of the water, all its missing is scratching out Firedart’s name in the lower left.
>>70989888>valeScarlet>mistralLeona>atlasLiz>vacuoOnyx
bump
>>70991345I always laugh seeing “affection not included” with Neo and Tyrian.
>>70990496What is with you always trying to start an argument with an inflammatory statement, especially with Faunus women? Chill the fuck out
>>70990496>Blake because who is there besides LiangLiteral MILF Yang.
>>70992537>FROM each kingdomI can't read. Immigrants don't count.
>>70992456I dunno, that anon seems to have a hateboner towards faunus girls, pretty gay desu
>>70989888>ValeScarlet>AtlasMercedes>MistralCotton>VacuoBeryl
I awaken. Far too early for my liking, might I add.
>>70992829It happens. Good morning.
>>70993005Heya
>it's snowing :)
>>70993154Wow really? No snow yet where I live but today is the first time it’s rained in almost two months.
>>70993154Same. It's melted now but it did snow today.I don't like it
>stomps to create little field of white flowers around herThoughts?
>>70993154Nice! It's probably going to snow here pretty soon>>70993711Cute, it's now my head cannon that she lightly stomps her foot when she's frustrated. Do you think the flowers that grow are different depending on mood?
>>70993979Probably the volume of flowers would change depending on whether it's noon on a sunny day or a hot day, as well as location, geography and climate.
>>70993711>Adorable, Your Majesty.>Now, about increasing the defense budget...
>>70994240Fair enough. Olwen remains adorable.
>>70995003What if she found a way to do that with her switchaxe?
>>70990544I know she's an Albain daughter but I guess I forget she's Menagerie born.>>70990757Nah Brisfag, you're map was helpful.>>70992456>>70992620I'm being exaggerative and facetious, I don't actually dislike Faunus women that much. There are literally five of them in my post.>>70992537>>70992582Understandable mistake anon.
>>70987542Fair enough, vacuans seem like they'd survive the best. I could see onyx, although she'd either be an amazing mother figure or a subpar one>>70988644Fair enough >>70995125That would be neat
>>70995256Built for monkey cock
>>70995623She really squeezed that monkey.
You have to replace one member of both SJJL and BGEL with another ship kid that shares one parent with the original. Who are your choices to replace, and who do you replace them with? >Lumi with a Lancaster daughter and Belka with a Jailbird son
