CYOA Refugee Thread - A thread for posting any and all CYOAs unpostable in /tg/'s /cyoag/ (and occasionally ones that aren't).>Previous thread:https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/72350225>Alternative link:https://archived.moe/trash/thread/72350225>Other threads:https://boards.4chan.org/search#/cyoag>/cyoag/'s CYOA archives and related resources:https://rentry.co/cyoagIncludes - but is not limited to - a F.A.Q. section and the personal archives of a number of authors.https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3An extensive Allsync archive that has both SFW and NSFW CYOAs.https://infaera.neocities.org/Interactives list.If you're looking for a specific CYOA, it's suggested that you check those first.And remember: Postnumbers aren't for rolling. If the CYOA calls for rolling of any sort (or you just feel like leaving something up to fate), use random.org (or physical dice, or something else that isn't your postnumber) to generate the number, and write it in the post with the rest of your build.In short: Do the rolling before you post, instead of observing the post number you get.Bible quote of the day for 18/01/2025>“If a man is caught in the act of raping a young woman who is not engaged, he must pay fifty pieces of silver to her father. Then he must marry the young woman because he violated her, and he will never be allowed to divorce her.” (Deuteronomy 22:28-29)
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I used to think putting your name on a cyoa made you a faggot but now I see all the cyoas without names on them are much worse
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>>72430096>>72404468how does 4 even grant you that? i dont get it
>>72430067I put names on the CYOAs I'm proud of. The shitpost CYOAs I make and the CYOAs I'm not as proud of, I don't put my name on.
>Arabian NightsOnly one with real magic>ShelterDoesn't involve getting raped/losing fights/etc. (sm/cap) or getting groomed (ftc/i), lets me keep my personality.>MotherlyRespectful would be better if she was another actual person but I'm angle shooting here to imply that she's a genuine higher being of some kind, even if just a sorceress>GentlePermissive is just abuse through neglect.>Rape>Whipping>Bondage>Toys>Kiss and CuddlesThe author's grossout faggotry is on full display hereCan't fit spanking, public use is possibly nice but of ambiguous utility>Domestic ServantPet comes with some really gay riders for some reason>OneSeems like this refers to sex slaves specifically>A Few Hours a DayI'd much rather have regular flexible times in situ than to be cut off from her for extended periods>Nutritious MealNeeds no explanation>Food of the BedI generally prefer to sleep on the floor, bet her bed is one of the horrible things you sink into.>>72430396>BTGanon>'girls' aren't actually capable of yuritracksred button obviously
>>72430067Names on CYOAs makes them easier to find, and if you don't choose a name for yourself, a name will be chosen for you (likely based on your first oc)
I see Tok is still doing his bible quote shit.
>>72428799Fair enough, I was just caught off guard by the different mandragore art and had to go check the allsync to make sure I wasn't going crazy
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>>72435047
... Anyone wanna see some of the CYOA I'm working on?
>>72437581What is my relation to these heroes, and are the aspects for me or them? Because if they're my guardians and the powers are for them, there's gonna be a problem since they all seem focused on fucking other people.
What in your opinion is the best waifu picker featuring normal, everyday girls? i.e. not monstergirls, aliens, gynoids, etc
>>72437581Hmmm....I want to give my input but I don't want spoilers...
>>72437581Your relation to the heroes is that you are a non-ancient ancient, and you need heroes to defend you so that you may survive to become a proper ancient-ancient. It's a 'defence of the ancient' CYOA, you see. Aspects are for you unless otherwise specified, they represent your burgeoning powers of corruption that the ancients of dotadom possess. The heroes keep their in combat powers. You'll get some points to purchase a couple of weak-sauce generic aspects, or alternatively purchase more aspects for heroes you already have at a cheap cost or from heroes you don't have for a steep cost. I am tossing up whether I should make the entries bigger for more fluff. I'm also entertaining the idea of putting in some tags for stuff like 'carry', 'support' etc, though I haven't planned to do anything with them yet beside maybe giving a point bonus for having a 'balanced' team.May or may not do something with items, not sure how to make them sexy besides 'the enchanted sword is actually a dildo now'.
>>72438022Looking for fictional normal women is more pathetic than wanting weird degenerate fetish women. Go outside if you want normal women, there are no good CYOAs featuring them.
>>72437581>>72438453>it's a power picker where the girls are just an afterthought that you only take for their bonusesgrim
>>72438453Absolutely do add fluff.
>>72438453Personally, I find that items are almost always a waste of time in cyoas. I normally just skip them over. A fire sword just doesn't stimulate the imagination in the same way fire powers do. I'd say the only real exception to this is realistic survival-type cyoas, where your life or death really depends on what you carry on your person.
>>72439902The main problem with items is that they can get destroyed, lost or stolen, meaning all the power you depended on your item for, as well as the corresponding points you invested, is lost as well. If stolen they can even be used against you. Having items that give you power is like every opponent turning into a potential power nullifier or power stealer.That said, items CAN be viable by simply having their own point pool, completely independant of the actual power pickings. It also helps when there is a clause that prevents destruction and makes them return to you after being lost/stolen, turning a complete loss into a handicap that can be an in-story challenge in itself.Personally I like how Dance on the Palm of Evolution did it. Seperate point pool with the ability to track them down when lost or stolen (no mention of destruction though). Also, while the items are overall neat to have, considering the powerlevels and your potential growth in the rest of the CYOA, they are mostly just a starting boon to help the early game. Pretty much all their special properties can be implicitly learned as skills somewhere down the road or are even available as starting skills (e.g. Bag/Kimono of Infinite Space and Magic Inventory). Those items will go a long way in securing early survival, but even if you do permanently lose them one way or another you do not lose any direct personal power from "chara creation".
>>72429965>pay fifty pieces of silverhow much is that, accounting for inflation?
>>72439050>you only take for their bonusesBit enough about yourself anon
>>72440856>they can get destroyed, lost or stolenMost cyoas come with countermeasures for that tho?
>>72441145>At spot valuation of $28/ozt in 2021, 30 "pieces of silver" would be worth approximately $91 to $441 in present-day value (USD) depending on which coin was used. divide by 30 and multiply by 50
>>72429965Newer version:https://imgchest.com/p/a846kzrgyxj
>>72439050Ah, see, the girls are only there because you have immortality, and may potentially bestow them super powers. So it's, like, mutual. >>72440856>>72441157>>72439902Come to think of it, there're a bunch of magical plant stuffs, I could maybe do something with a bunch of renewable plants seeds that could be cultivated. But, like, make them magical lewd plants with magical lewd effects. >>72438022BTG's Prison Transfer CYOA got some good mundane ones amongst all the magical ones, in fact its got a spectrum from entirely mundane to government spook to regular human but from another world, to angels and aliens and all that stuff. With personalities, even.
>>72441711>the girls are only there because you have immortality, and may potentially bestow them super powers.>So it's, like, mutual. That's pretty based then.Are you planning on having alignment equivalents or groupings the way e.g. dota and lol have good team evil team variations?What sort of intrinsic bonuses are you planning to have or selections apart from the girls
>>72441711See, the thing about magical plants from the dota verse is that they' be renewable. So you could make crops out of them, sell them, give them to your minions to wield on your behalf, replace them after they are lost, all that good stuff. >>72441748maaaybe, currently writing by the seat of my pants.I got aspects for every girl, some brief ideas for some power sections (probably some minor personal perks like changing your appearance if you don't have any hero aspects that can do that, meta stuff like getting perks from heroes you didn't pick, some hero enhancing perks like enabling your girls to TP to and fro, etc). Then, maybe a drawback section? After that, possibly a combo section? Dunno, we'll see, I'll keep writing this during the week whenever I'm not busy and I'll see about grabbing pics while I'm at it, too; I need to build up a library.Honestly, at this stage, I am deliberately trying NOT to overthink this project with excessive planning; I don't want to end up on 5 redrafts like I did with Zako CYOA.
>>72441424I only recognize 3 of the women there, and 2 are from the incredibleswhat does this say about me? did i mis out on a lot of pop culture?
>>72441239>>72441145>whoever has $700 in their pocket can just rape and marry any girl he wants
>>72441903>miss outno lol
>>72441932>no loli dont think your opinion is informed unless you do in fact recognsie themi need an expers opinon
>>72441949pop culture is garbage. star trek is trash, buffy the vampire slayer is trash, comic books are all beyond trash, game of thrones is fucking trash, harry potter is trash, disney is trash, star wars is trash. anyone who tells you these things are good should shut the fuck up.
>>72441903A lot of those characters are from 90s - 00s fantasy and sci fi, a couple early 10s. You not knowing who they are probably means you are a zoomer.
>>72441424>>72441903i recognise:>hermione>elsa>crusher>raspunzel>diana>7 of 9>azula>morrigan>ciri >lara croft>the 2 ladies from the incredibles>sam carter>padmeso we're looking at >harry potter>frozen>star trek TNG>w/e grimm fairy tale that was>dc cartoons and 2 movies i havent seen>star trek voyager>avatar the last airbender>dragon age origins>the witcher books+the witcher 3 video game>tomb raider>the incredibles>stargate sg-1>star wars prequelsin order>hardly missed out>a 3D disney film that's about as good as 2D disney films in terms of characters and plot>one of the greatest and most highly acclaimed TV shows of all time with with 5 seasons of almost constant bangers>it's alright but you should at least read the short version on wikipedia or something because it is cultural heiritige>an alright cartoon for kids>a spinoff to TNG with a troubled production that immediately discards it's unique premise that nevertheless finds its own footing, with some great characters>a great cartoon for kids but a cartoon for kids nontheless, fair to say you missed out if you didnt watch as a kid>one of the last great RPGs before the RPG drout, ironically enough more "modern" than the modern "rpg revival" games because they look further back>good if subversive fantasy books brought down by the writer's barely disguised fetish consuming entire chapters on occasion, one of if not the greatest video games of all time. the shawshank redemption of video games>fun action games that have a great pc port that routinely sells for like 2 euro>a solid animated film for all ages that doesn't break new grounds but has a mildy unique premise and an enjoyable story>perhaps the second, third or fourth greatest sci-fi show ever on television, certainly in the top 20, where all the star trek talent went to while not working on that>ambicious films with truly bizzare decisions, films that are studied to this day but not for the right reasonsthoughts?
>>72441903You should watch Babylon 5.
>>72441986what's wrong with star trek
>>72442197it's on the backlog
>>72442204Rick Berman mostly.
>>72442259Don't forget Gene Roddenberry
>>72442197I watched Babylon 5 and don't remember any of the girl characters besides the jewess and the ayy
>>72442293What about psychic (redhead) and psychic (implied lesbian)?
>>72442204it's just not good lmao. are you serious? i've watched a lot of enterprise, mostly to laugh at it. i did kinda like data and picard, but it's just so simpleminded and empty, like it was made for children. the other series are even worse. you have to be an actual brainlet to respect it as a show.
>>72441986cartoon chink media is much worse than old westerner slop
>>72442323Oh yeah the psychic fed chick I remember now
>>72442259>>72442282relax>>72442330the intellectual CYOA enjoyer, draws the line at star trek, loves reading Tokaar Gol
>>72442563i have different standards for smut vs. a television show. crazy, i know.>tokbut, honestly, the void maiden universe is better constructed than the star trek one, where they add some ill-thought out species to hammer home their equally retarded moral every episode.
>>72442166>fun action games that have a great pc port that routinely sells for like 2 euroTomb Raider has always been released for the PC alongside various consoles. These days, no idea as I stopped a few versions ago when they butchered the character.
>>72442621>star trek hater hates the general concept of equality
>>72442754>equalityWomen and aliens owe me sex.
>>72442621name 1 "well constructed" scifi universe
>>72442754okay, the real reason i hate it is because the ferengi are clearly meant to be the jewish people and i find it incredibly offensive. you filthy, racist animal poster>>72442828exactly. why IS sci-fi so fucking bad? all of it. it's eerie.
>>72442847in ds9 the ferengi lecture a black guy about how "we" did concentration camps and "they" didn't so they're better and the black man is forced to apologize
>yfw you realise ferengi are americans
>>72442847>why IS sci-fi so fucking bad?because you're an npc with a pleb soulreal people with patrician souls don't hate sci-fi
>>72442828I want to say 40k, but like, before 5th edition and Matt Ward and the Horus Heresy books.
>>72443339Oh, also before necrons talked and were just spooky scary enigma bots.
>>72441157I did mention that clauses to protect the items exist, but I would not say that "most" CYOAs have them.
>>72437581Yes, but I'm also curious what software that is you're using
>>72441918I think I wanna be a Christian after all.I'm not gonna make it, but a Bible verse power picker could be fun. Obviously this one would let you rape and marry whoever you want for $700 in silver, but there's loads of verses that could be fun for it
Are there any good loli CYOAs not by Cruxador? All that comes to mind is the Nabokov one and that yellow one with literally just two sections
>>72444572Godly Husbandry?
cyoas which capture the true appeal of lolis (which is their childish nature) are the fucking best!! but most people into loli just don't get it! so most lolis are totally worthless!
>>72444572Luminary soon.
>>72444845>cyoas which capture the true appeal of lolis (which is their childish nature) are the fucking best!!Post some
>>72445426basically just nabokov and crux's stuff, yeah.i actually kinda liked the 3D poster too, who everyone got in a twist over lul
>>72445520>i actually kinda liked the 3D poster toowe should make him come back
>>72445520>>72445567Stop talking about yourself.
>>72445567i'd like him to. but i would advise him to temper his power a little if he did, just to avoid the sperg wars.
>>72445567>>72445670Kill yourself
>>72446003>>72445590cope seethe dilate
>idiotic statement>WOW SO MANY PEOPLE TRIGGERED!
Besides BTGThing and the Rosanon panty cyoa, which other cyoas are about slow-burn feminization? It doesn't need to necessarily be a BTG cyoa as long you are still feminized in the end
>>72441424I really like this one, although it's a shame that buying companions is basically a waste of points. You really only need one or two to start and capture more.
>>72446723go ask trash
>>72442166we're 1/3rd through the thread and this is the only high effort postsad!
>>72447426Seems the thread has degenerated badly enough anons are starting to mistake it for the /tg/ thread... For shame...>Captcha: GG
>>72447558It was a matter of time.
reddit oc
>>72446723At least one of those isn't about feminization at all though?>>72444845>cyoas which totally shit on the basic concept of lolis are the best loli cyoaslol okay
>>72447933This is good even if it is from retardet purely because it is my fetish
>>72447933That thing is at least over 7 years old.
>>72440856That's fair. But personally, I find that even with item loss countermeasures in place I'm just never interested in items in cyoas. Not sure how it is for other people.
>>72446723Build a Prison Bitch? Some builds for Slut Life?
>>72448614prove it
>>72448614>>724487556 Years old...https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/b1mv09/bondage_witch_cyoa_by_uberis/
>>72448755>>72448839If you go to this thread on desuarchive, click "View Same" on >>72447933, and look at the earliest posting, you should get this:https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/12633026/#12672001>4chan Time: 11/23/17(Thu)16:42
>>72448755>>72448839>>72448990It was also submitted to a contest at the time:https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/7ic0yl/cyoa_contest_concluded_winners_announced/And here's the authors original upload, by the looks of it:https://www.deviantart.com/uberis/art/Bondage-Witch-Cyoa-716049598
Bible quote of the day for 19/01/2025>“At that time the Spirit of the LORD came upon Jephthah, and he went throughout the land of Gilead and Manasseh, including Mizpah in Gilead, and led an army against the Ammonites. And Jephthah made a vow to the LORD. He said, “If you give me victory over the Ammonites, I will give to the LORD the first thing coming out of my house to greet me when I return in triumph. I will sacrifice it as a burnt offering.”>“So Jephthah led his army against the Ammonites, and the LORD gave him victory. He thoroughly defeated the Ammonites from Aroer to an area near Minnith – twenty towns – and as far away as Abel-keramim. Thus Israel subdued the Ammonites. When Jephthah returned home to Mizpah, his daughter – his only child – ran out to meet him, playing on a tambourine and dancing for joy. When he saw her, he tore his clothes in anguish. “My daughter!” he cried out. “My heart is breaking! What a tragedy that you came out to greet me. For I have made a vow to the LORD and cannot take it back.” And she said, “Father, you have made a promise to the LORD. You must do to me what you have promised, for the LORD has given you a great victory over your enemies, the Ammonites. But first let me go up and roam in the hills and weep with my friends for two months, because I will die a virgin.” “You may go,” Jephthah said. And he let her go away for two months. She and her friends went into the hills and wept because she would never have children. When she returned home, her father kept his vow, and she died a virgin. So it has become a custom in Israel for young Israelite women to go away for four days each year to lament the fate of Jephthah’s daughter.” (Judges 11:29-40)
>>72449891Tok, can you explain to me how you went from maximum AGP literally making yourself a braindead bimbo taking miles of cock in every CYOA, to a wannabe-/pol/ larper screaming about how everyone and everything is a tranny communist, but are now losing your shit so hard that someone else is a Christian? It's like you can't settle on where you stand, ideologically.
>>72449891Kek how do christians actually believe this bull
How common are CYOAs that go beyond the character creation? Like where you actually go on an adventure with branching paths that you choose.
>>72450089Human sacrifice was actually quite common in Canaanite religion, and it wasn't really restricted to enemy captives or criminals like in say Germanic Paganism. So it's very easy to believe this did happen, a Canaanite warlord promised to sacrifice his own daughter if he won, he won, so he did. Whether it's a real event or not it was probably used as justification for more human sacrifice events in the culture.
Ladies and Gentlemen, I present you with spontaneous OC
>>72450230There's a fair number, like Divine Trials, JRPG Traitor, and Abyss Diver. They all handle that concept differently.
>>72450296the GOAT
>>72450296I would rather be a cute asian woman than a cat.
>>72450296fucking love that pic too
>>72449891>>the first thing coming out of my house to greet me>knows his daughter lives in his houseyeah idk if god has anything to do with this. this guy just wanted to kill his daughter
>>72450296shitposting is not ocit just encourages people to shitpost morego back to /tg/
>>72444494That's powerpoint
>>72451987I feel better here...
what software do you use to make cyoas with? im using inkscape but its starting to get SUPER laggy and crashy
>>72452344krita
>>72452344>>72451987He's not the one shitposting
>>72451963Tok can you please stop talking to yourself
>>72452558i just wanted tok to like me...>>72452344gimp
>>72452344Microsoft paint
So I have an... idea rattling around in my head. Setting might work for a CYOA. Could be mechanically unique if I were to pull it off. Not truly lewd, but...>~1/10,000 women beyond puberty all around the world develop what at first looks like pseudocyesis>They de-age if they're over ~35 at a rate proportional to their age, grow taller if they're below the top 10% relative to their ancestry, and develop an ageless aesthetic if they didn't already have one. They won't age anymore.>If she's in a relationship with a man that is genuine on BOTH ends, he'll de-age too>If she doesn't have a "bond" she can form one later>"symptoms" occur as normal, "complications" completely absent>85% stop growing at the 9 month mark, 10% stop somewhere in the 6-7 month range>5% slow but don't quite stop even at 9 months; they grow to top 1% relative height and get even bigger (still within realistic limits) until the 3 year mark.>Powers. "Psi", not "Magic". They develop as she does. Bigger belly = moar power generally, but also more physically hampered. Exceptions exist.>All girls have healing abilities, are never combat focused (that includes "magical"), but otherwise they're fairly diverse>Their men develop powers too, without fail with strong offensive applicability, though some non-combat abilities are usually present too.>There's a general relationship between what she can wield and what he can. If she can light a candle with fire psi, he's very likely to also have fire psi, with much stronger maximum output. (Mechanically, say, she's capped at Fire 1, but if she has it he gets half off on ALL Fire)>Their milk is a powerful rejuvenant; while it won't de-age it's the next best thing. There is an in-universe attempt to be tactful about this.>Fertility rates in a city-sized radius around them spike, as complications and defects vanish.>Nobody knows why this is happening or how powers work yet. Several parties would like to know these things.
>>72452391>>72452780>>72452902all raster plebshasn't discovered the power of vectors yetdesu might just see if i can try to pirate illustrator and get it running on linux, or perhaps scribus
>>72452780>gimpWhat the fuck did you just call me?
>>72452344VS Code since I create it as a HTML file then use extension to screenshot it in browser. Easy to get unform style that way and a lot quicker to make.
>>72453135Service topMeat dildo
>>72452430he isthe smug cat is a /tg/ shitposter
>>72449891>>72451963Yeah it kinda sounds like Jephthah got a 2-for-1 here.
>>72453892You can keep it bros.
>>72453029Sounds completely retarded to me, but pseudopregnancy is not my fetish so it may just be that I'm not really "getting" it. Are you really planning on making it a cyoa or just mulling ideas over?
>>72452344Affinity Designer if you have 50 bucks to drop. Perpetual license. No as-a-service bullshit, and a Photoshop-like experience with a professional UI and toolset.
>>72454925I think I'd like to try actually making it a CYOA... at some point. I'm over here trying to balance work and school and I have no OC to my lack of a name (so I'd probably want to try making a 1-2 pager or two first), so I'd wager it's hardly around the corner. But I am invested in the idea, both from a narrative and a mechanical standpoint.I'm not sure you'd need to "get" the pseudopregnancy aspect itself. Mechanically, it'd be a combination power picker / waifu builder, where both draw powers from the same list, but each has different constraints, and one of the influences on the male side (which would actually I guess be entirely optional) is what's present on the female side.I guess I'm also trying to get a thumb on the pulse of what the reception would be. Whether other Anons would be willing to work with it, with the narrative and mechanical scenario it presents (which ought to be, if nothing else, novel). I can't quite know how other people think, only how I think. I don't really understand finding it a turn OFF, but I know that's a thing that happens.Of course, if there are any genuine ideas offered, I'd be glad to consider them.
>>72452344Powerpoint, it's got a bunch of tools and by organising different pages as slides I can easily organise longer CYOAs. Supplemented by paint and krita where necessary. Also, krita really good, I second >>72452391.
>>72453029Kind sounds like a boobapocalypse cyoa from yonks back that I never saved, where women developed superpowers and also boobs and also got bigger. Don't recall that one giving men super powers, though. Also that was post-magiboobapocalypse, this sounds like pre-PKpreggapocalypse.>>72455365As for sugestions, I genuinely suggest PKpreggapocalypse as a title.
>>72450084He settles wherever will give him attention.
>>72452430>>72452430I see you're joining catnigger in his shitposting extravaganza.
Why did BTG replace Tok as thes resident lolcow??
>>72458259Nice projection, Tok.
>>72458259Tok moved to /tg/, where he isn't even in the top three most embarrassing thread personalities
>>72458906He shitposts here all the time, anon.
>>72459180I can't tell
>>72455365Well, I promise I'll give it an honest shot if you bring it to fruition.In terms of suggestions, maybe make it so that there's something physically growing inside them to cause the pseudocyesis? Could be something like an egg, a magic stone, whatever. Just something to justify these women randomly becoming not-pregnant and getting powers.I do like the idea of the couple's powers borrowing from the same source.
People were talking about a dearth of loli cyoas but do they mean cyoas where you are a loli or where you dick down a loli?>>72459180I genuinely don't believe you. No fucking way he could keep from attentionwhoring for half a second. Also, he'd have to never be posting builds, and he definitely still makes builds for cyoastee bee haytch he'd still be less of an embarrassment than tokschizo, rosanon's groupy (rosanon himself is okay), and only a little bit worse than BTG even if he was here
>>72458906Nice diversion BTG, but this whataboutism won't save you from being called out!
>>72459555>maybe make it so that there's something physically growing inside themHmm, I am pondering this. I had a certain narrative flow in mind, with doctors and eventually feds frustrated specifically by finding *nothing*... I'm not averse to the idea of them having "psionic demon cores" inside their bellies, but that raises the question of what happened when the docs *did* find something on the ultrasound. Does removing it harm or even kill them? If so, there's another narrative hook for their men to feel protective... but I feel like "vulnerable person with harvestable magical part" is played out. I like the mystery created by there being nothing directly observable, and the frustration that creates for the people trying to study this new phenomenon (and especially the people of varying shadiness paying them). Does a lack of justification work if it's glaring even in-universe?>something to justify these women randomly becoming not-pregnantI was thinking this actually wasn't all that random. Testing data reveals that:>100% dig the belly, even if some are embarrassed by that fact>90% score 1 or 0 on the Kinsey Scale, 100% are 3 or less>Zero observed cases have more than academic curiosity about non-monogamy>Personality tests return 0% high neuroticism and 0% low agreeableness>0% show low emotional intelligence, and most show high to *extreme* emotional intelligence>0% hate children, and most love them>Every single observed individual who did not have children already was specifically mildly in favor of the idea, but not so much the fact they can't have them now upsets them.And not a single interview with people close to them shows that the phenomenon has significantly changed these traits. There's definitely something of a "type" to them.>>72457082Hah, maybe I'll put that in a WIP build. I am of the mind that even after the powers manifest, the apocalypse hasn't happened yet... but most people feel it's not too far over the horizon.
>>72451963You can tell he was Jewish because he worked out a legal loophole
>>72461000>I'm not averse to the idea of them having "psionic demon cores" inside their bellies, but that raises the question of what happened when the docs *did* find something on the ultrasound. Does removing it harm or even kill them? If so, there's another narrative hook for their men to feel protective... but I feel like "vulnerable person with harvestable magical part" is played out.Reasonable concern. You could go the same route as other supernatural stories, and make it so that normies can't perceive any of the supernatural stuff.And sorry, you misunderstood what I meant about the random pregnancies. I meant justifying the whole phenomenon that women are suddenly growing bellies and getting superpowers.Maybe this is just a personal gripe, feel free to tell me if you think so. But I find it detracts from a cyoa or smut in general when it's too blatantly specific. "Suddenly, for no reason, a woman is rejuvenated, while developing a false pregnancy". Sure, I can accept that. "Suddenly, for no reason, women all across the world got younger, taller, and pseudopregnant, and they got superpowers, and their milk got superpowers, and their boyfriends got superpowers(but only if it's true love)". Now that's just too much to have without a reasonable explanation. I guess what I'm saying is it's fine to write a "the writer's thinly-veiled fetish" cyoa, but you do actually have to thinly veil the fetish.
>>72462785>And sorry, you misunderstood what I meant about the random pregnancies.I realized it just a bit after I sent it, lel. I'd slammed up against the character limit again and wanted to leave a chance to respond to what I did type.>Now that's just too much to have without a reasonable explanation. I guess what I'm saying is it's fine to write a "the writer's thinly-veiled fetish" cyoa, but you do actually have to thinly veil the fetish.Alright. I do want to hold onto the idea of in-universe lack of understanding, along with some sense that *something else is coming*... but that's no good if it turns people away. Welp, now I have to come up with something that's not too contrived. But from a different angle, I also want the player to be up against the unknown because I want to see what Anons might do if they don't have a clearly defined opponent to design their build to "win" against. It's something I think I've seen too much of lately.I guess I could drop the milk thing. I thought it would make a fun angle for an interplay between capitalism attempting to go brr and the people involved trying to maintain some degree of decency, but I think with the non-suggestive healing abilities it could already be superfluous anyway.The height thing isn't a fetish for me, either. It's more about how... these women are becoming icons, avatars of fertility, femininity, life itself even... restoring and enhancing life for those around them with the twist of no longer being able to create more of their own. (That satisfies the "Immortal Sterility Clause".) Suddenly the phrase "larger than life" occurs to me, and I think there's a silly pun in there with the current context. But really, people who are taller are figuratively looked up to. That's one of the back-end things they've "ascended" for.I'm playing with the idea that there is a conscious, higher power behind the initial event, that doesn't want to be found. "Fertility goddess" feels too trite though.
>>72463185damn people really do think its a divine miracle when a female gets creampied and then squeezes a baby out the vagina 9 months later even though it happens more than 10,000 times each day.
>>72463325Good taste is evolutionarily selected against. That's why is restricted to furtive occult writings.
>>72463185It's not like you have to give up the mystery entirely. Take my idea about the magic stone for example. There's still a lot to wonder about that. Where did it come from? Why did it happen simultaneously to so many women? Was it a random force of nature, or was there conscious intent behind it? Was it a one-time thing, or will these stones cause further events or undergo some kind of metamorphosis? All kinds of things you can ask.I also find it pretty uncreative when people just build to win fights. But if someone really wants to powergame, there's not much you can do to stop them. Not to mention, it's a choose YOUR OWN adventure. They should be free to play how they please.But setting all that aside, if you really don't want to change anything about your concept then don't. I definitely understand to desire to have other people enjoy what you make, but your primary target audience should always be yourself.
>>72462785>>72463185(What is up with these post numbers?)>make it so that normies can't perceive any of the supernatural stuff.I kind of am on board with this idea, actually. Not everything, mind you, but the things like the "cores" that would allow the normies to make sense of what's going on.As for explanations... the first thing that comes to mind is having the higher power speak over the agent addressing the character (was also thinking this would be formatted as two separate interviews, one for the guy, one for the gal), but that's already done by both that one monster girl CYOA and (much bigger) OR. Maybe something more subtle? "Whispers" throughout the pages, culminating in a direct encounter (dream?) on the last page?I'm firmly of the idea that, observed or not, it was kicked off by a single even at a very specific point in time all around the world. I'd been musing about a crack opening in reality followed by a light shining through on these girls (all of them at the same time), that only they could see... but I think that was just because I rewatched that one scene with Matt Smith. I could see using that as an intro: "10:57 GMT, December 23rd, 20XX. Ten years, five months, 27 days ago. That's when this all began.">>72463369It's getting late, so I think I'm going to knock off here, but the thing about the stones that *I* see is the additional (good) questions they raise: How long had they been there before activating? If a long time, were they influencing the girl's personality? Is she a product of her own choices, or something else? I think distressed navel-gazing is a fun literary phenomenon.I think this has been fruitful, take care Anon.
>>72461000Having something actually in the womb would prevent them from ever having children too, and infertility is a major turnoff.
>>72463185>no longer being able to create more of their ownWhat, infertility is a selling point for you? Pass then, can't stand infertility.
>>72463631>>72463608Infertility is a nessecity for something to even begin to be considered to have value desunta
>>72463677You are a dead-end lifeform. Extinction cultists should all start with themselves.
>>72463474>(What is up with these post numbers?)We're on the same wavelength, anon. Will you be my preggo battlewife?>I kind of am on board with this idea, actually. Not everything, mind you, but the things like the "cores"Yeah, it would take a bit of the fun out if the general population couldn't see ANYTHING.I'm personally more for the subtle narration for the character creation. There's also the option of making all the choices out of character rather than something your character is deciding for themselves (i.e. "You look down at your body. What do you see there?).I hadn't thought about the stones being present before the event...that's a neat idea.Sleep tight anon. I look forward to whatever you do. And I'm sorry for calling your idea retarded. I was feeling stressed.
>>72463678>extinctionLmao okayEnjoy never being able to appreciate anything of any lasting value because it's a constantly decaying protean cancerous mass that only grows more and more disgusting with every momentYou're a literal cultist of rotting to death.
https://dragonswhore-cyoas.neocities.org/Exorcist/
>>72463771Yeah you're definitely an extinction cultist.
>>72464225You should say something instead of just silently dropping a random interactive out of the blueLike how this is a translation of a korean cyoa for example
>>72464341So no argument, just aimless made up names?
Going to make a cyoa where you're spawned as a loli (or loli (male)) in a world dominated by people who'll try to correct that you have to reverse rape into submission. The idea is that you get points to spend on powers by>making the world more hostile>taking stronger/more enemies that you have to defeat>personal drawbacksWhat I really need advice for is regarding the points system:Should it all just be one slop of points for the whole thing? Or have different categories of points so that appropriate tasks encourage you to take appropriate powers (possibly with an exchange rate)?
>>72437581>dota>in a year of 2025A bit late but I'm looking forward to it nonetheless. I miss when Valve actually cared about Dota and it was hype. Also too much new furry heroes.
>>72465812Not into furry myself, but someone is so it is nice that I get that bit of variety to put into my CYOA. I actually quite like that we got a lot of everything: robot girls, gilf girls, fish girls, dragon girls, fit girls, actual monstrous monstergirls. Come to think of it, I think the only thing we don't have is loli girls.
>>72466003think again
>>72465812>>72466043Also Ilexa
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>>72467650this is more funny than arousing.
>>72466043who that
>>72450296i like that picture
>>72465333It really depends on how extensive you make it.
>>72465333>appropriate tasks encourage you to take appropriate powersi think that would limit build variety.
>>72465333>>72468739 (me)on second thought, if the drawbacks were bad enough that someone couldn't stomach taking some of them in a given category, they'd have to pick between two different archetypes. that could actually foster build variety. so i guess as long as the powers don't mitigate the drawbacks too much, do it that way.
>>72467947Genderswapped Pugna, /d2g/ mascot
>>72467650Broodmother x Loman OTP
Ignoring DOTA anon you guys just repeat the same conversations, and post the same 30 cyoas all day on loop
>>72471326I'm too busy working on a new CYOA which I'm only making to procrastinate on another CYOA, I don't have time to shitpost here
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is there a gay version of r34 economy
>>72464225>>72464412Korean CYOAs are pretty nice. Guessing it's a commission that was requested to not be censored? With the loli and milf shota fucking options, I'm having trouble imagining Dragon's Whore making anything that can't be posted on reddit for free.
>>72468739I would agree if tasks FORCED you to take specific choices but "encourage" implies you are still allowed to pick something else
>>72472333He has his own cyoa-hosting site now so shit from his personal archive getting banned from pl3bbit is still safeStill kind of sucks because he insists in making the site his own "secret club" and doesn't like direct links or offline versions being uploader outside if it, so if any of the stuff he makes becomes lost media it might become lost forever
>>72472055probably not, but i think you should make it.>>72472657yes, you're allowed to, but it wouldn't be very efficient. it encourages you to go down a preset route, therefore it would discourage build variety. you don't really get to disagree with that, it's just a fact.again, that's only if it IS more efficient. it might not be, if there isn't much synergy between powers & drawbacks.
>>72472877>but it wouldn't be very efficient. it encourages you to go down a preset route, therefore it would discourage build variety. you don't really get to disagree with that, it's just a fact.We are talking about a cyoa not released yet, we don't even a picture or anything, there are no "facts" until he at least show us a preview or the finished work because it all depends on how he will handle the cyoa's overall balance and structure
>>72472949holy fucking retardation, are you okay? it's an inference. i've set out my assumptions and the clear and obvious outcomes of that. address that or please shut the fuck up.
Any recommendations for tentacle themed CYOAs? Preferably one about actually being trapped in a tentacle pit, I've seen Tentacle Pet, Tentacle Girl, and Tentacle Realm and those don't quite scratch the correct itch
I do think I'll probably just do points soup. Thanks for the replies.>>72472877>it encourages you to go down a preset route, therefore it would discourage build variety.It encourages you to finish a preset route if you start one, but because different people will value different antagonists/powers differently it helps prevent everyone taking a particular enemy or world condition just because it has a conveniently high price for how unappealing it is.>>72473098Your assumptions are extremely far from what was said though. He doesn't need to address them, you need to address what was actually said.>>72474815There are a couple short and shitty ones but nothing I'd really recommend, unfortunately.
>>72447933>Mclaren>Core>EatingLike being force fed, or like vore, or like she just get's off to having a meal?Is she horny when she is starving because she has that as a core, and then you feed her and she is horny that there is food?I'm a touch confused.
cyoas for this feel?
Bible quote of the day for 20/01/2025>“While the Israelites were in the desert, a man was discovered gathering wood on the Sabbath day. Those who caught him at it brought him to Moses and Aaron and the whole assembly. But they kept him in custody, for there was no clear decision as to what should be done with him. Then the Lord said to Moses, “This man shall be put to death; let the whole community stone him outside the camp.” So the whole community led him outside the camp and stoned him to death as the Lord had commanded Moses.” (Numbers 15:32-36 NAB)
>>72475392seconding for a mental disability cyoa
Not gonna lie I'm loving this bible quote gimmick.
>>72475392Is that a man?The knees look a little off, and if it were a women she would be showing off her tits more.
>>72476569>Knee fetishist
>>72475921The single power dex drawback is too rough to even consider the rest of the tree.
>>72474815/this one has some tentacular options
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>>72430396I guess the blue button?
>>72474815Comfy Tentacle Hideaway Vacation is interesting i guess: https://cthv2022.neocities.org/CYOA/Consentacles has you be a tentacle monsterVoid Maiden is tentacle adjacent (living suit)
>>72472750Does he share them anywhere though? It's has some very explicit loli options so surely he knew it wouldn't work on reddit, and I can't imagine him doing anything for no attention or money.
>>72480342It's on the front page of the subreddit right now. Mods playing favourites is nothing new. If it was crux or whoever it'd have been nuked immediately.
>>72472750>He has his own cyoa-hosting site now so shit from his personal archive getting bannedAll interactives are hosted off-Reddit by necessity.>>72480342Reddit.
>>72480342>>72480434If anyone has an account over there you can report it for "minor abuse or sexualisation" and it could get his whole account banned. That shit gets escalated above the subreddit mods.
>>72480434 >>72480460 >>72480485Well, we'll have to see if any normies complain. Posts of Emerald Runner stuff like Global Lewd get nuked or not purely based on how many people bother to report it.
>>72480485I don't like his works but I'm not going to get them jannied because that's faggot behaviour.
>>72476645Just take dex/con and keep going anyway. Also you're a slime now.
>>72480460>All interactives are hosted off-RedditDidn't said they aren't, read my post againNot like its possible to host a interactive INSIDE reddit to begin with
>>72475921Con/Dex/IntShouldn't all the con/dex combo powers also be pictures of slimes? Also, as if being a slime isn't a huge power in and of itself.
>>72480692Anon seems to think we're moralfags or have some grudge against the guy, rather than just thinking his CYOAs are bland.
>>72480485Not YourPersonal Army Plus, reporting stuff there would require making a reddit account and fuck that shit
>>72463608>>72463631Not a selling point, but a drama point. If the body thinks it's already pregnant, it's not going to bother ovulating (obvious, no?), but nothing is affecting their egg and sperm cells themselves. Reproduction should still be possible with modern medicine and perhaps a surrogate. But now I'm working with these ideas:>Two mutually exclusive powers/perks, "Maternal Core" and "Conception">The former is as previously discussed, providing a massive power boost at the cost of actually occupying the womb>The latter allows the woman to simply will herself to ovulate. Pregnancy is guaranteed smooth, birth is not. HOWEVER, while carrying this true pregnancy and right after birth, all her powers are severely weakened. His experience a minor strain that's aggravated by overuse. Over the next 1-2 months, her tummy refills (you don't really want her stuck with post-pregnancy belly right?), her power levels creeping back up to normal in the process.>Maternal Core should still be able to reproduce via a surrogate.The fact that some have Cores and some don't should add some "saftey" to them being visible, while also providing a dash of explanation along with in-universe mystery.Under the hood, the setup/justification I'm working with is this:>Fertility and love "spirit" (she's weirdly insistent she's not a "goddess" if the chance to ask comes up) is one of many beings at the outset who want to try their hand at shaking things up on Earth>Thanks in part to her power over birth (and thus "beginnings"), she manages first dibs on spreading her influence>She's the only completely benevolent one of the bunch (mommy vibes), but her "toolkit" is limited and not meant for combat>The powers involve "turning the girl's fertility energy outward instead of inward"; the whole "improved conception and birth" around them wasn't even her intentionNot too contrived, right?>>72463687>Will you be my preggo battlewife?Well I wasn't planning on it, but...
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>>72480485Wait, who are we mad at, and why are we so mad that we're trying to get them quick-banned?
>>72484914>WeWe aren't anything, anon is trying to brigade for his own reasons that nobody else gives a shit about.
>>72470282>not real in the gamei must admit i am somewhat disappointed
>>72480485No way fag.
>>72482318Do you know how to use image editing software?
>>72482318cool idealooking forward to it
>>72452344I use Fireworks, it was my favorite when I first took a graphic design class in like 2004, and it's still the one I'm most comfortable with even now it's discontinued. I have yet to find anything I like better. SAI was good for drawing tools, though I hear CSP is the same but better I don't do it enough to make the switch. I use GIMP for large bitmaps that need to be pixel perfect but that's mostly for GIS applications or occasionally modding, and I don't do that much either.When it comes to CYOAs, I think most things work fine and it doesn't really matter. The relevant tools are:Editable text boxes. Everything has this besides SAI (and Paint), the Fireworks ones are actually not especially fully featured but good enoughImage masking. This is the most convenient way to make all images in a section match and be the shape you want.Export settings. So it can look good and be postable.Additional settings I use to rice stuff up:Polygon manipulation. This is the one where Fireworks is good. I'm sure other programs have copied it but it's basically a matter of making different vector shapes and combining them in various ways to get more complex forms. I use it for all sorts of aesthetic elements.Aesthetic properties. I use glow a lot, with the right color choices it's an effective tool. Custom gradients are also sometimes relevant, and every once in a while there's a different aesthetic I'll play with.
>>72459588Personally I believe that the quantity of loli CYOAs is inadequate regardless of which of those types you mean. However, what I want the most is CYOAs where you love and cherish the loli.
>>72487304>Polygon manipulation. This is the one where Fireworks is good. I'm sure other programs have copied itCorel Draw/Adobe Illustrator have been doing that since release, way back in the late 80's. Photoshop inherited some of Illustrator's tools but illustrator was better at it than photoshop.Fireworks wasn't even a twitch in the creators nut sack until the late 2010's.
>>72480434It only has two such options. It's easy to intentionally overlook them
>>72487567I didn't use those in the 80s so can't speak on it but twenty years later they were not as good as Fireworks>Fireworks wasn't even a twitch in the creators nut sack until the late 2010's.You don't know what you're talking about. It was already discontinued by the late 2010s. It started in the 90s.
>>72488099According to a quick google search it wasn't developed until 2017.
>>72488099No idea about corel draw these days but Illustrator is still an industry standard. Why do you think Adobe is in the top 10 pirated sofwares worldwide.
>>72488099>>72488278who cares? some guy makes his stuff in some spreadsheet program. whatever works for you, use.
>>72488262You must be finding something different. I'm talking about the image editing software originally by Macromedia.>>72488278It was among the most pirated when the Creative Suite contained Fireworks too. They discontinued it because they could be be bothered to support it and instead ported features to Illustrator and Photoshop
>>72484470>At-will (80)>Detailed (76)>Static Stats (74)>Level Up (69)>Cap Unlock (64)>Character Editor (54)>Carry Weight (54)>Quick Outfit (54)>Gear Stats (44)>Save Slot (44)>Extra Slots (29)>Control (29)>Skill Tree (21)>Mission (16)>Internet (14)>Invisible (10)>Computer (5)>Bandwidth (1)I'm assuming using Character Editor to lower stats you use every day but aren't essential don't trigger the clause in Level Up that says "the harder and/or newer the event the more experience you get", but if they do work that way then you won't hear me complain.
>>72475921>bro this has to be fake>look it up>it's truewtf
>>72492630The Bible quote? Every Abrahamic religion is like that.
>>72493350mormons aren't like that
>>72493396they just don't believe blacks are people and men should have multiple wivesthey also have some bad ideas
>>72493552yeah they also tax people and give it to the church
>>72472333It's been up on reddit for two days. So far people haven't noticed or haven't ratted them out.
>>72486614Power, Bliss, Spark+, Bloom+++, CloakHeal+++, Pause, Rush++, LeakErase, Nest, FractalSight, TalentMut: Bloom, Pause, Tune, Erase, FractalLett: Power, Heal, Shield, Fractal, TalentKep: Bliss, Leak, Erase, Fractal,Bois: Cloak, Pause, Rush, Shield, EraseRek: Spark, Heal, Rush, Leak, Tune, Gold: Sight, Talent, Spark+, Bloom+++, Heal+++, Rush++Talent kind of scares me a bit, as I am already the most confident person I know of other than object lessons. That makes the ability kind of dangerous for little change over my present life, mostly skill in kinds of sex I don't even have any interest in. Maybe I should spend my gold and rune somewhere else? If I did, I would probably get Seal and another charge of Spark instead. Does Bliss's protection from all pain, sickness, and harm overlap from the protection and freedom of Shield? Am I misunderstanding the distinction between them, or is it just a matter of emphasis?
https://pixelatednsfwcyoas.neocities.org/BisexualKajinmanCYOA/index.htmlanyone have a backup of this
>>72496862http://web.archive.org/web/20221123012356/https://pixelatednsfwcyoas.neocities.org/BisexualKajinmanCYOA/index.html
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Bible quote of the day for 21/01/2025>Samson went down to Timnah where he saw one of the Philistine women. On his return he told his father and mother, “I saw in Timnah a woman, a Philistine. Get her for me as a wife.” His father and mother said to him, “Is there no woman among your kinsfolk or among all your people, that you must go and take a woman from the uncircumcised Philistines?” But Samson answered his father, “Get her for me, for she is the one I want.” Now his father and mother did not know that this had been brought about by the Lord, who was seeking an opportunity against the Philistines; for at that time they ruled over Israel.>So Samson went down to Timnah with his father and mother. When he turned aside to the vineyards of Timnah, a young lion came roaring out toward him. But the spirit of the Lord rushed upon Samson, and he tore the lion apart barehanded, as one tears a young goat. Without telling his father or mother what he had done, he went down and spoke to the woman. He liked her. Later, when he came back to marry her, he turned aside to look at the remains of the lion, and there was a swarm of bees in the lion’s carcass, and honey. So he scooped the honey out into his hands and ate it as he went along. When he came to his father and mother, he gave them some to eat, but he did not tell them that he had scooped the honey from the lion’s carcass.
>>72499627>His father also went down to the woman, and Samson gave a feast there, since it was customary for the young men to do this. Out of their fear of him, they brought thirty men to be his companions. Samson said to them, “Let me propose a riddle to you. If within the seven days of the feast you solve it for me, I will give you thirty linen tunics and thirty sets of garments. But if you cannot answer it for me, you must give me thirty tunics and thirty sets of garments.” “Propose your riddle,” they responded, “and we will listen to it.” So he said to them,“Out of the eater came food, out of the strong came sweetness.”tune in tommorow to find out the answer and how the story ends. feel free to guess in the meantime
>>72499627Is it just one artwork?Even with a limitation of just one, that sounds the most straightforwardly profitable. The only other one that seem maybe good is the aphrodisiac effect, though that's only if you can get other people addicted.
I love cyoa
I hate CYOA
>>72485585I don't, no, unless we count some passing familiarity with Paint.net (which I myself wouldn't count). That was one reason I said I'd like to make at least one smaller CYOA, first, as practice.
i feel neutral about cyoas
I don't know about cyoas
Tell me about the cyoas
>>72446723>Rosanon panty cyoaWhat is this one called?
I'm pregnant with cyoas.
>>72507005I am so sorry for your loss.
>>72506727https://imgchest.com/p/a846gmblz7x
>>72499627And how DOES one tear apart a young goat?
>>72429965The New International Version is the shortbus of translations. No other translation translates it that way, because that isn't what it says. This is about premarital sex, and rape is discussed in an adjacent verse using a completely different word.
>>72510167>and then god (all powerful) proved he was real by turning into a flaming bushomg so true>and then this guy raped someone and paid some silver to make up for ittheres no way thats real it has to be a mistranslation
>>72510518nta, but I feel like you didn't engage his point
it's amazing that you guys keep talking about bible quotes in the cyoa threadi will never understand what causes this brainworm
>>72502792I love you
>>72510167It's the only English translation that was made by a nonprofit solely for the purpose of an accurate translation, as opposed to w private organisation with an agenda. NIV translation team deliberately chose to bring on scholars from multiple denominations as well as secular and Jewish scholars to ensure accuracy and neutrality, where as translations before were commissioned by organisations that seeked to, for example, deminish the role of women in the paulican letters, or insert pro-monarchist sentiment into the new testament. The NIV works with the oldest manuscripts available to us via modern archaeology, as opposed to older translations that work with whatever they had available. tldr competing modern English language translations only exist because some guy hated women enough to make one (or to account for dialects like a British bible with different spelling)Now for your rebuttal, what bible translation do YOU prefer? (This is where I try to hold back laugher as you say KJV)
>>72510167What else would you call non-consentual sex?
wrt Mesugaki ConquestI'm currently working with the following list of essentially blessings/cheatskills that you pick one of as basically the reliable method that you never 'lose'. Any other requests? The idea is that it's mostly evasive/endurance/defensive stuff rather than actually hurting people. You should need to triumph through the power of cunny, this just stops you from getting stabbed to death (heh) before you do.-True Regeneration-Intangibility-Invulnerability-Perfect Teleportation-Temporal Revision-DuplicationAlso, current design docutment to date: https://rentry.org/ozyv77wvAny requests for a different bodytype? I'm planning on adding amputee stuff as options in drawbacks already, but still good to hear specific interests
Reddit OC I found while lurking therehttps://evilwumpus.neocities.org/cyoas/mech_handler_v2/About you being the handler of a mecha pilot and customizing her activities with you and her job
any male human on feral(female) cyoas?because i've found none
>>72512502I don't care
>>72512689Understandable, have a great day
>>72512639The digimon one
>>72512502Solid, even good by reddit standards. Not too much actually interesting but it does give me yet another CYOA idea that I won't, in this case, be adding to my list of WIPs
What's the bump limit anyway?
>>72511583>Jewish scholarsOK, I guess I know why I can disregard the NIV now
