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A thread for the creation and discussion of fan fiction and other fanworks - anything that involves a story and/or reading. What've you been reading? What've you been writing? What would you like to see more of?

>Thread question:
Post ideas for power-ups/gimmicks that haven't been used or seen in Pokemon.

>Previous thread:
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>>59008066
Main games or in general?
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>>59008066
>Post ideas for power-ups/gimmicks that haven't been used or seen in Pokemon.
Ehhhh, Fate's mana transfer?
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>>59008086
In general.
>pic
Can a pokemon use a burst heart?
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>>59008104
Turn Burst Heart to bond stone and make it a proper fusion.
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>>59008066
Pokemon have innate moves they can call upon as moves likes tera types that can be activated separately from the normal move pool. You can use them a certain number of times each battle depending on the user rather than the pokemon, so you can do it say 3 or 6 times in a single match before your burned out of poke-energy. Each pokemon would have them, so you get an extra special move slot for all of your pokemon and can use them flexibly.
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Finished my third chapter, I think this is a good place to leave it for now. maybe I'll edit and upload to ao3 later.
https://rentry.org/Mahogany16
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>>59008109
Nah, let's up the ante: Two Burst Heart slots added onto a Driver for a primary form and the other for extra forms and power ups.
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>>59007964
Perhaps her link to the Dream World can remedy that easily.
>Post ideas for power-ups/gimmicks that haven't been used or seen in Pokemon.
Hard to think of one - everything from a super form (Megas) to Mon-Mon Fusions and Man-Mon Fusions have been thought of! To a lesser degree this covers Pokemon wearing armaments and Pokemon sharing abilities with teammates and/or changing abilities mid-battle.

That last one could totally be a thing though. Like maybe it's linked to emotion or each trainer has the ability to induce a specific ability to their Pokemon but they can only do it once per battle. This can change, like maybe a lazybones character passes Truant or Slow Start but after character development it changes to Adaptability or Moxie.

Strat wise you can just slap Supreme Overlord on whoever's last. Maybe that someone has Last Respects.

While we're on that- wait no they did multiple abilities with Calyrex.
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>>59008097
Does Softboiled as a Field Move count?
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>>59008109
>>59008164
this is turning into modern kamen rider

that is a compliment by the way
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Okay, curious about fellow lurkers in this thread. Have any thread fics inspired you in any way? Good or bad, mind you. I’ll go first:

IMO’s evil team admins having fitting Legendaries was pretty inspirational for me, all things considered. Basically creating characters based around their Pokemon selections instead of the opposite way.
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I forgot that Scizor can't fly.
I'm just going to say that he trained very hard to be able to do it anyway because its cool.
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>>59008066
>tq
Zoroark using illusion to disappear, becoming invisibile and the best ninja
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>>59008664
Aside from ancient velociraptor relatives, are there any real life species that lose flight when they grow up?
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>>59008066
undergo a heavenly tribulation mid-battle and point it at your opponent so they're struck instead of you
deceiving the heavens never has any downsides and works 10/10 times 50% of the time
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>>59008706
No, I don't believe there are any animals that fit that criteria. Although, baby spiders are known to parachute and glide over long distances. Ant and termite queens can fly but they are already an adult and they only shed their wings off after breeding.
If you expand your definition of "flight" and count non animals, seeds and spores may count.
If you go into the water, larval species of mollusks can swim while the adult stages are locked to wherever they grow.
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>>59008706
>queen ants have wings for their mating flight. Once mated, they shed their wings to become wingless, ground-dwelling queens.
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Play my game, Anon.

>>>/qst/6378520

Featuring a Tinkatuff without a hammer and three degenerates and a half-dead one fighting for their lives against a 9 foot tall inhuman monster woman.
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>>59009043
Oh a /qst/ with pokemon in it that isn't one of the long running ones no one cares about anymore, cool-
>#3
Oh, I'd have to read 2 previous threads? Yikes, as they say.
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>>59008066
What if you have the spirit of another pokemon supporting them during battle? Like a ghost or a guardian that has some unique power depending on what the spirit pokemon is-

God damnit, I just reinvented Jojo Stands but for pokemon.
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>>59009418
that was what Z-Power was going to be initially
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>>59008512
Hmm... No not really. So far the ones I've read have different enough plots and styles from the things I'm going for currently that I haven't really picked up anything yet.
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>>59009043
Give me a better description than that.
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>>59009423
They could recycle this for WuWa and it would fit.
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>>59009423
Oh yeah I forgot. But the idea I had was more like you have a 7th pokemon that you choose that provides an effect to a pokemon based on the species.

I guess if we were to simplify it into easy gameplay mechanics I would have it work like you choose a 7th pokemon to be the 'stand' from the ones you have caught. There is a held item that you give a pokemon whom you want to be able to call this stand. It can be activated once a battle to grant that pokemon the stand's Ability until they are KO'd. Item slot in exhange for a second ability seems like a fair trade.

If I wanted to make it cooler though I'd instead have it so that pokemon have a friendship stat with each other that you raise through amie/camping/picnic activities. During battle your whole team is buffed in various ways depending on how high their friendship is with the 7th pokemon. Honestly would really be cool as a hack or completely new game built around the idea.
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>>59008066
Dunno if it's never been done before, but I had an idea for a trainer who lets their ghost type pokemon possess their body and the bodies of other pokemon to be used in battle.
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>>59008512
Only in the sense of how different of quality they are. I really need to step up my game.
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To the Gotta Catch 'Em Saul anon, are you going to post future updates here also? And will you crosspost onto other sites like AO3 or QQ?
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>>59008512
I've only read Pokenormal, as well as Spice and Fox. Of the two I'd have to say Spice and Fox, I like it's gritter world, slower team building, and the focus on the relationship between the MC and his starter pokemon.
I'd like to write something like that, but I've struggled in my drafts, going back and forth on different ideas.
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>>59009797
If your struggling with getting started and are new to writing I suggest starting with writing a simpler version of whatever idea you currently have. Like a prototype. Your first couple of stories are going to be flawed by the nature of inexperience, so writing something you aren't invested in being 'good' can help get you going.
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>>59009853
Yeah, that's what I've been doing with my different Mahogany drafts, experimenting with different starts, characterization, pacing... etc. Although I haven't written a pokefic before, so maybe completing and posting something small and self contained would help me more than repeatedly taking a crack at a story that's been giving me trouble.
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>>59009754
He actually first posted to Ao3, https://archiveofourown.org/works/41415009
But it's an earlier scriptfic draft of the same story.
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>>59009875
Ah I see. Yeah, the updated one on ff is definitely an improvement. Hope bro continues.
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Why are humans so pathetic?
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>>59010216
humans never died in PMD, they just left to Hyperborea
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>>58993115
A lot more answers than I thought coming from this general. I thought there would be less writebros and more ideaguys, what fics are these?
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>>59010231
I suppose there are a lot who write but haven't posted yet.
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>>59010216
>literally needed a human to save the world
>said human is able to take on Rayquaza as an unevolved basic stage pokemon

Humans are so chad that when they are turned into pokemon they are outclass even gods as a baby.
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>>59009863
I suggest taking requests or writing prompts to help get throwaway ideas to play with.
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>>59010243
This, by nature of 4chan the amount of write bros who actually abandon anonymity is the minority.
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>>59010231
One of them is PoPT but it's intentionally hard to discern.
>>59010243
You can tell some of the threadanons who haven't written their thing (YET, I've been there bros) did post their ideas. The guns and preggo ones stand out most (still waiting on the vorefag). IMO, PokeNormal, and Spice are pretty easy to discern. I think CCanon is in hibernation but if they were in the replies I think it'd be the ">work of the gods ends here"
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>>59010303
I though >>58994336
>>The work of the gods ends here
>Frauds will get, even more, fraudchecked
Was the Regifag.
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>>59010316
>Regifag
That makes sense.

Also shoutout to the writefag in the drawthread who tried to refer me here for multiverse crossovers.
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>>59010290
That's probably a good idea. I since a couple lewd a ideas where pitched awhile back, if anybody else has some suggestions for a shortfic I'm glad to hear them out.
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>>59010290
>>59010657
Smut with plot or good dialogue/character interactions is a good way to whet writing teeth. Has scene setting, establishing character, climax, and wrap-up all in one scene. Very technical writing appropriate and might get your muse more awake.
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>>59010657
Skating on ice and shenanigans with Clair. Maybe some dressup? How about a Sneasel acting like s grinch?
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>>59010799
I will second the advice. Also I will mention that you lose your sense of shame (I mean this in a good way). Many would-be writers begin writing the story they've been dreaming of telling and then get very disappointed because the first chapter's rough draft isn't as magnificent as they believed it would be, and then lose confidence and delete/never post it. After writing smut, writing anything SFW will be like nothing to you.
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Why the fuck is Sneasel so cute!?
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>>59010990
I really like the skating idea, it's way more wholesome than anything else I had in mind, cute too. Same thing for the grinch one, although I think a Sneasler would be more fitting.

>>59011217
Because the entire evolutionary line is perfect. Just look at her!
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>>59008066
Pokopia spoilers
Kyogre acts and talks like an old man
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>>59011303
Maybe Sneasel getting outgrinched by the Sneasler?
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>>59010303
>I think CCanon is in hibernation
Something like that.
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>>59011449
Well Sneasler definitely beats out Sneasel and Weavile in one department, feminine charm.
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>>59011653
>feminine charm
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I will never understand why people are so much more interested in the trainers than Pokemon themselves. Every time I read a Pokemon fic, the Pokemon are basically just a toolkit for the trainers. :/
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>>59011992
THIS
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>>59010657
Bullying Garchomps.
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>>59011992
Trying very hard to keep Crest a character in IMO, even if he can't speak like a human, for that reason. For all the big plot stuff going on I still think the bond between the trainers and their Pokemon needs to be explored for them to matter.
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>>59011328
So what's the reason h*mans are gone from the world in Pokopia? Do they ever say?
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>>59012426
Went for a milk bread at the 7-11 and never came back
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>>59012426
devolution after team plasma took everyones pokemon
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>>59011992
Its the precedent set by the games. In most games the pokemon are just toolkits for the characters. The average fanfic writer is just writing their own interpretative reflections of things they like. Thus they reflect this aspect of pokemon into their writings.
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>>59012490
Even through other media such and manga and anime the great majority of Pokemon are just glorified battlebots or weapons.
Fact of the matter is it is near impossible to juggle so many "characters".
A basic three person traveling group set-up. Let's pretend you wanna truly develop and give each Pokemon their own personality and character arc. A full party. That's 18 characters to juggle. Now imagine all other side-characters and their Pokemon. It's a borderline impossible task.
Let's keep the anime to just the OG since that's what most people have have watched and a commonality point even here. If you were forced at gunpoint to describe the personalities of Brock and Misty Pokemon would you be able to do so? Outside of Psyduck and Togepi you would not. And Togepi's "personality" is just "baby".
Even for Ash's Pokemon you wouldn't be able to describe the personality of over half of them. Like, what's Pidgeot's personality?
The Pokemon themselves are ultimately an aesthetic with which to dress-up the human characters with.
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>>59012604
Just go write Naruto fanfic. Nothing is stopping you.
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>>59012677
???
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I just finished Game of Champions, and man, the author really did read Dune when he was 14.
I did not expect Red to be the kwisatz haderach. Did his mom really fuck her Mister Mime? Also Blue isn't dodging those bisexual allegations by having an arrogant femboy Ninetails which he plans to fuck over a trapped and abused rich girl with. Not to mention how he was eyeing Ninetails' human form, also they have a vow binding them together until death.
It's still very weird Red and Blue seemingly speak english in universe and aren't ethnically japanese, despite the setting being a HunterxHunter type world mashed with a post apocalypse. Not to mention the broken english he was Japanse and the Ainu speak, very off choice.
Also it's a bit funny me and the author both thought that Giovanni would be involved with the Battle Tower.
I think I enjoyed Pokenormal and Spice and Fox more, but I liked it about as much as Hyphen.
>>59012604
Bayleaf's personality is that she wants to fuck Ash. Even if it's one note or they're flat characters, some of Ash's pokemon do get personalities. But honestly when writing a fic, it depends on what you want the story to be about, but I think that more so helps you determine which Pokemon will be more important and have more defined personalities.
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>>59012775
I deeply enjoyed GoC post-apocalyptic setting.
The low/high tech world was delightful. Really wish more fics did things like that. I remember thinking "Neo Dark Ages" was the coolest name ever back then and I still think it is so now.

>Did his mom really fuck her Mister Mime?
As far I understood, every womb was paired with a Psychic-type Pokemon who kept pumping the mothers with Psychic-energy to see how it would affect the development of the child.

That thing you mentioned about languages and ethnicities didn't really click on me until now that you mentioned it but considering it's a post-apocalypse you can easily see it was cultures, races, and what-not, becoming warped, corrupted and changed after hundreds of years of civilization crumbling and then rebuilding. Imagine you were a Unovan dude on vacation in Kanto when shit went down. There's no way in hell you'll be able to ever go back home.
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>>59010216
Spoiler but the humans are just in space.
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>>59012900
For what fucking purpose
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>>59012900
Holy shit, now I can do a scifi crossover and Rotom got away with it.

But matter to energy was canon?
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>>59012900
Couldn't they just take the storage system with themselves into their colonies?
Leaving it on the climate disaster ravaged earth where it could get easily destroyed seems kind of a very very dumb choice.
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>>59012900
Did multiverse conqueror Giovanni fuck this world up?
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>>59012970
Weather went crazy and fucked up the planet.
No one has gotten to where the why happened yet.
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>>59012849
Yeah, I ended up reading eh notes as well. Anyways, I do think the setting is very novel! I love interesting twisting of canons like that, new and interesting takes. I also really liked the ideas about expanding Team Rocket's evolution experiments, including the Espeon Ort who has the power of the other Eevelutions, and the Godzilla!Snorlax. Red doinh psyche mindmeld BoC level stuff with him also isn't helping his case of bisexual allegations. I didn't think of having Team Rocket experiment on human psychics, and I probably won't do something like that as I'm more interested in Pokemon breeding.
Also Dexter is a really cheesy name for a Porygon who lives in a Pokedex, same thing with Giovanni being Bane, Karen being Batman, and it's funny the Sevi Islands are a Puerto Rico expy. Changing Silver's name to Denarius and having Pryce owning an orhpance in a "grooms children to be supervillains way is funny," espically since I imagine him as a kindly uncle who help upkeeps a icerink and isn't really involved in politics. But it' eerily prescent, samething with Lysandre since we would later learn Corbeau cucked Silver out of having Giovanni as a dad, *AND* had Lysandre as a co-parent to Giovanni.
I don't know how to feel about Giovanni Giratina maxxing and pulling a Lusamine Nihiliego.
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Give me your thoughts. 50% done.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14551065/1/Where-the-Waves-Break-Forever

Also holy FUCK are there a lot of bots
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>>59012900
So did Kyogre & Groudon do this or is this the Ultra Ruins World where we will eventually befriend Guzzlord?
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>>59012920
Only for the pokemon storage system. Pokemon still shrink.

Yes, capturing via Pokeball and storing Pokemon in the PC use completely different mechanisms.
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>>59013333
Team Rocket built a weather machine and some grunt fucked up the planet on accident, the weather trio were vaguely annoyed and went to sleep instead of dealing with the problem.
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>>59012426
It pretty much goes like
>Humans fuck up the atmosphere doing some crazy shit
>humans can't live under the new conditions and are too stupid to undo the damage
>legendaries decide not to do anything because only humans are dying
>humans flee into space
>all of pokemonkind laugh
>some start larping as stupid humans as a joke
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>>59010231
>Nobody used condoms
Was Triple Thread and Frayed Ends. Anchor Stitch will end up with at least one egg happening as well, but not an interspecies one.
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>>59013198
Looks fine, but when in a conversation I'd suggest only breaking a paragraph into multiple lines when a new person is speaking, or if a person is internally monologue, when the subject changes.
>"I found his Machamp clinging to the top of a tree." She hesitated. "It was afraid."
Although I think it's fine to do it if you really want to emphasizes a word, although if you're emphasizing a word in the middle of a sentence use html ittalics
><i>Like This</i>
I know, I've only posted 1 fic to FF, but it's not pokemon, and out of the 10 follows and favorites it's gotten I have 4 bot reviews to show for it.
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You know, brothers and sisters, previously I've had some ideas of stories or a story of a naked feral girl finding herself in a world where humans have fucked off through some means and all that remains are Pokemon.

Usually, the setup would be the Pokemon being... well... Pokemon - no different from wild animals in natural habitats. But the recent release of Pokopia and everyone here buzzing about it made me think - what if I did the concept but with a setting akin to Pokopia and/or Mystery Dungeon? Would the civilized Pokemon trying to mimic humans and the feral human who lives like Pokemon of times long gone work in a shared story?
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>>59008066
>Post ideas for power-ups/gimmicks that haven't been used or seen in Pokemon.
"Latent Potential" evos (not sure what it would be called) where you give a mon on your team a potential unlocking item (idk, some crystal or whatever I don't care) and allows an NFE mon to temporarily gain the stats/typing/ability/a combo of the previous of its evolution OR a different mon it's imprinted upon, with more restrictions for other mons, including stuff like legendaries with high BST. There would be some sort of compatibility requirement, like sharing either a typing or an ability with what you wanted to potentiate with. It would also, of course, require your mon to be NFE, which would be a cool requirement imo because bringing NFEs to competitive is always cool.
Imagine bringing a Scyther and having it "potentiate" into a Lugia or Yveltal or something, ability or typing or stats or all three. Or a Duraludon mimicking Dialga, or whatever. I don't even know what would best serve the mechanic but it feels cool, man.
Bonus: it would be SO EASY to implement because you'd just have to have a mostly transparent model of the impressioned mon overlayed onto your potentiated mon and they'd be doing animations in tandem.
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>>59013576
Perhaps a mentor system to go with this?
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>>59013576
Huh, I had the same exact idea. Although I was debating between using it or Mega-evolution. Either way there would be a fakemon/evo/form involved.
Although it was facilitated first by Unown, so my ideas was more like the power being a corruption, something that the pokemon species originally could never have because they're incompatibility with it was so high.
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What do you feel about making Megas up in fics?
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>>59013686
I like them as long as the pokemon doesn't officially have one or if the one it does have is straight ass like Feraligatr's.
No reason to wait 50 years for Gamefreak to finally get around to adding one for each line. Especially since there's no lore reason for them to be so exclusive.
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>>59013576
>potentiate
>impression/impress upon
The language is already there. Pikachu would also get so many options from how many electric legendaries there are like zekrom and the violet legendary.
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>>59013686
I wanted to do this for my fic, but I don’t have any sense of visual design so I couldn’t come up with it.
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>>59013720
>look up "[pokemon name] mega evolution"
>pick what looks cool to you
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Damn, the Pokopia lore is quite something and the anon that said how all the Pokémon in PMD had human souls was onto something.

It's fucking NieR, guys
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>>59013747
I wanted to do it for mid-evos, is the issue.
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>>59012900
We WALL-E now
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>>59013720
You'll never be able to contend with the preciseness of an image but you shouldn't have to.
The advantages of the written word is that you expect the reader to imagine and visualize as they read and have them fill in the blanks. You can be as vague as you want. Just say what you want to say.
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>>59012957
Pokémon cannot live outside the planet
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>>59013686
It's cool, Megas are the most appealing gimmick to me story wise. Why not invent a new one?
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>>59013757
I wouldn't like if a fic did that. Mega evolutions is more of a limit breaker in concept, and something that's NFE hasn't reached its limit yet.
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>>59013686
I was going to be Z-A unironically provided the Megas I was working on so fuck it.
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>>59013757
I had a similar idea as part of my Unown/Distortion world bullshit inverted megas, still not set on a name but if used on a non-fully-evolved pokemon, and not just a form change like Klevor or Scizor, they would force through anyways.
So if you used it on a Charmander, you'd get a Distortion Charizard. The cost would be exponentially more stress on the pokemon the bigger the gap is between current and final stage.
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>>59013698
They added lore reason for them to NOT be so exclusive. The fact that they can create artificial stones means that even Regional Variants can potentially get Megas now, assuming the phenomenon is localized within Hoenn & Kalos.
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>>59013056
I remember thinking the author had completely lost the plot with the Snorlax stuff. Turning them into natural disaster-tier catastrophes was crazy enough, but then you have the nuclear-waste one being that x10000, and Red catches it. How is anyone or anything supposed to measure up to that monster? And I couldn't help thinking how the fuck is Red gonna even sate it when even normal ones were utterly insatiable.

Sometimes I'm half-glad GoC was never finished because a lot of the ideas on the summaries are absolutely bonkers to the point they're ruins the entire-fic-tier. But who knows how could have turned out in the end of it all. Execution is what matters after all and a real story is different from summaries of ideas like that.

>I don't know how to feel about Giovanni Giratina maxxing and pulling a Lusamine Nihiliego.
I remember thinking it was the coolest edgiest thing ever but if I went and read it now properly I would fucking hate it as consequence of the years and years of Giovanniwank shoved down our throats. Looking back on it again, it's really over the top, and does make you wonder how's anyone even measure to Giovanni when he can pull that bullshit. Ruling in the shadows through economic and political force? That's one thing but that's another whole shitfest. It's one of those things that makes you realize the author was a dumb teenager who loved the edge which makes it all the more impressive GoC was such kino.

I really have no idea how GoC didn't end up becoming a inspiration lynchpin for the pokefanfics community. Too kino for others to emulate? Maybe the community was too small back then? Who knows.
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>>59013815
that's silly, why can't there be sidegrades of powers? This autistic rule was already broken with floette anyway.
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>>59013787
We have dozens of ayy Pokemon.
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>>59013837
>bullshit inverted megas, still not set on a name
Nega. Nega Evolution.
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>>59013859
Because I don't like it in association with mega evolution and anything I don't like is bad by default.
Besides, Floette technically isn't the one mega evolving and I'll latch onto that fact to continue my genocide crusade against NFE mega evos.

Although, something that twists it like >>59013837 sounds alright to me.
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>>59013875
Don't they mention in-game that it's possible because that specific Floette can't evolve further?
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>>59013894
They might've. It was a unique variant and being brought back from the dead could've changed things too.
>tfw feeding pokemon everstones to find out what each NFE mega evolution looks like
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>>59012900
>matter-energy conversion into digital spaces is still a thing
Thank fuck
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>>59013855
Yeah, the fact that Godzilla!Snorlax doesn't have an essential role, kind of shows how pointless the affair is as well. It feels like a climax, or the start of a full on war between Team Rocket and the Indigo League, but instead it kind of just happens. Honestly Ort is just better, his existence, while convenient, feels like it makes more sense in universe while feeling a reasonable number 2 for Red. After he's captured Kronos the Godzilla'Lax only really works with Erika to make a distraction and I think a Ort could do that anyways since he can plan and organize Red's team in his absence. If the Godzilla'lax does have to happen, I think it would be better to kill it.
That and Shadow Giovanni feel a step too far. Like I can understand giving Giovanni a weirdo Genagr, or Ort the Espeon. Those make sense more or less within the logic of the story, with Team Rocket's experiments on pokemon and people. But Giovanni just goes
>I was born in the dark
Trauma dumps on Karen, and becomes a "man-god-thing" when he's in the Distortion World. Honestly I think the whole Distortion World is kind of a clumsy plot device adjacent to the biological experiments of Team Rocket. Sabrina also feels weirdly irrelevant for how essential she ends up being here, even with Red lying to protect her, I imagine a story where she's basically Mewtwo's Daughter and where he is part of the endgame, would involve her more? Green also feels weirdly irrelevant, she sort of just disappears from the plot and in retrospect, aside from having sex with Red, I think most of what she does could be moved around or be done with other characters.
Like maybe Bill is the one looking into Team Rocket alongside Oak, but he tips Red off about the S.S. Anne since he already gives him tickets.
Also, almost every instance of Fuchsia is misspelled Fuschia, although I've done something similar before and haven't had anyone point it out.
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>Unfortunately, this world was no longer confined to a written setting.
>In the reality that had crossed over from beyond the monitor, there were gaps, and those gaps were filled with rules unique to this place.

I'm reading a novel this appeared, and I think this is true in most SI stuff because the moment the world stops following a script things as you knew them will change
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>>59013875
Lol fair enough
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>>59013198
>Rangerfic
Shit, I'll try and read this when I can, you don't often see things like that.
Any specific things you want us to pay attention to?
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>>59013333
humans ate too much
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>>59012900
My decision to put my story on a space colony feels vindicated all of a sudden lol
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After reading IMO, I can definitely say that Kuzey is just MADE for femdom.
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Watching Pokopia gameplay and seeing how Ditto uses Stockpile to swallow and store items inside its body made me think of my MC having a Pokémon that uses Stockpile similarly. This Pokémon could store the opponent's energy-based move, either to Swallow it and boost its stats or to Spit Up and send it back. Think of Kirby
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>>59014454
Items are quite different from moves. Feels a bit of a cheat skill to let Stockpile function as a universal Sap Sipper. Tread carefully, unless crack is what you're after.
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>>59013686
>Humans and pokemon used to be one and the same
So logically there should be mega humans right?
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>>59014037
Yeah, in hindsight, the Distortion World stuff does indeed feel out of place. The fic is very Kanto-heavy and rarely shows and mentions things from other Regions, so it being such a relevant plot-point and device for the villain is very odd. Furthermore, it clashes with all the Psychic-type experiment stuff TR is doing and focus for the themes of the fic. Pick one powerset, man.
I dislike the Mewtwo = TR connection theories, for the OG games at least, but here, it would have been a very fitting thing.
A good option, maybe, would have been TR accidentally discovering Shadow Pokemon with all the Psychic-type experiments? I don't know.

>Sabrina also feels weirdly irrelevant for how essential she ends up being here
Perhaps she'd have been more relevant in later stages of the story had the fic continued to be written.
It's crazy how despite being Kanto's prominent Psychic and the first human with Psychic-powers in the franchise nothing has ever been done with Sabrina in regards any possible connection with Mewtwo or even Mew. Not in fanfics and much less officially. It feels like such an easy slam dunk. Gotta always Giovanniwank, I guess.

Talking this little bit about it with you makes me wanna try to re-read it at long last after so many years but I'm scared of doing so since there's a chance it won't live up to my memories and nostalgia. But if you just read it in this day and age and you still pretty much liked it then that means it must still hold up.
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>>59013861
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>>59014608
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>>59014461
good, this world needs more crackfics
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>>59014642
I liked ultimate ben
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>>59010657
Snowball fight. Make Rhys lose.
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>>59013777
Don't forget Nier, and Pokemon rebuilding civilization to then search for humans in space is another is another easy segway into a Mass effect crossover. Just for that guy who said threads back that he thought a Mass Effect crossover would be hard.
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>>59012426
Humans cause the planet's Climate to Collapse leading them to capture all of the world's monsters and put them into storage as they left to hibernate in space.
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>>59013787
Tell that to Elgyems and Clefairies.
It's not like the with Linda3 and the fact that humans can only procreate and cast magic on Neo Kenya.
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So Human in Pokopia fic that ends with you and your Ditto wife rebuilding humanity?
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>>59014359
That boy never stood a chance.
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>>59015149
I imagined that all of the humans are on the moon in cryostasis, waiting for the planet to recover to its habitable form. I would also image that the storage system did the same, and released all of the Pokéballs automatically before the start of the game.
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>>59014610
It's okay, it's not like you have to read it, but for Sabrina. I blame the manga, not only did that give her the Team Rocket angle, but it gave Mewtwo the Blane's child angle. So when people think about giving Mewtwo a connection to a human, 90% of the time it's going to be Blaine.
>>59015149
I think I read a Cult of the Lamb fic like that once, but it was rebuilding the retarded furries as a christan nation.
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>>59015181
>humans come back to the planet
>Pokémon evolved significantly and became a developed civilization
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>>59015235
I would simply resist the effects of the Human Ball, flare my Aura and go on a massive genocidal spree to free enslaved humans and restore human supremacy to the planet btw
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>>59015235
>humans go in human balls
Uuuh, do i get free healthcare?
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>>59015235
>humans go in human balls
That's called cock vore
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>>59015242
Mark Wahlberg pls go
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>>59015302
Only near instant magical super health care. Another bit of precious human culture lost forever to the pokemon menace.
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>>59015235
>Children of time but instead of giant spiders bug type Pokémon are in charge since they can adapt
Sounds kino
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>>59013781
It’s more that I can’t come up with general ideas for what a Mega would look like. Even if I don’t have to describe it like it would be drawn, I still can’t think of ways to change the Pokémon’s base design.
>>59013815
The idea would be that it was a corrupted form of ME, like the Rogues from ZA or what >>59013837 is talking about, so it breaking the rules probably wouldn’t feel so bad. Plus it’d be for Mystery Dungeon, so NFEs being preposterously strong is more the norm.
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Ninjabros, we didn't make it...
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>>59016227
Simple rule of thumb for megas is taking one part of a pokemon and making it extreme. Beedril gets more stingers, venusaur gets more flowers, mawile gets two fake mouths. So take your favorite part of a pokemon and make it crazy.

Random idea off the top of my head. Marowak has a skull like head. Make their head shape even more skull like, and make it spread down its body like its wearing a full skeleton.
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>>59016301
“Nah, just have it hold a comically oversized bone.” -GameFreak probably
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>>59016338
That's for Gigantamax.
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>>59016338
true
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>>59012604
Foxfucker could do it, kinda
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>>59016344
>pokemon focused on its absurdly massive weapon
>given huge defense stats
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>>59016301
>Marowak
How did you guess one of them?
This is a good approach, thank you.
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>>59016301
>totodile becomes toiletdile
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>>59016635
The concept of it's entire body taking thr shape of massive jaws because it is the bite pokemon is good, if only the execution wasn't... that.
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>>59016646
That is something that would come across better in text than an image.
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>>59016646
>>59016703
The artist was too enamored with trying to make it look like Big Totodile when the jaws are closed, and didn't bother with the aesthetic of the open form (i.e. how you see it 95% of the time)

If it were within my power to change I'd try and make it more like the fins of Godzilla in Minus One where they shift positions and lock as it powers its atomic breath, and have the fins shift themselves to form the top half of the skull and otherwise take a different patter along the back.
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Crossovers will never die!!!!


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14551572/1/
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>>59016928
Not mine btw I just liked the prose
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I'm currently writing a scene where the main characters are trying to figure out how to use Z-Moves and they just start shouting G Gundam quotes after a while. But it works for them.
I'm trying to tweak the line, I just need to come up with something in place of "love, anger and all of my sorrow" that fits pokemon a bit better.
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>>59017128
But that fits Pokémon tho?
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>>59017128
>I denounce the evils of my TRUTH, my LOVE, and all of my SORROW!

>BLASTING FINGER!!!
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>>59017149
You think so? I just wonder if there could be something more apt. I might leave the quote as is just so I can move on from the scene in my mind.
In any case, it's not meant to be a serious scene.

>>59017154
Point taken.
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>>59017158
Bruh my Charcadet did a Breast Fire in my most recent chapter, sometimes you've just got to go with what feels right
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>>59017289
Is it a woman, and if so did she fire the attack from her breasts or her breastplate?
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It was a boy I'm afraid, it was the picrel type of breast fire. And he fired it from the leaflike Crest on his chest.
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>>59016243
So is this still KAAANTOOO? Or did Ninjas come from Johto because traditional?
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>write original story
>get a bit stumped as to how to get to point C to point D
>write pokeyman fic
>immediately goes with the flow and knows where to go next

such is my life
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>>59017997
There's a difference between following a road and making your own path
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>>59017867
You mean the tip?
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>>59017997
It's because you're familiar with the trappings of Pokemon as a story and have an unconscious familiarity and inclination for how it'd progress
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>>59018775
How does trapped and betrayed Ash factor into this
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>Tfw I have to break up the story’s couple a dozen chapters before I planned
Kinda feels like home girl is pontless
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is this the thread for fangames? What engine do people use nowadays? Me and a friend want to a small scale region with a few gyms and dungeons.
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>>59018958
no it is not, we are writers and artists but not programmers who know how Pokessentials and RPGMaker work, feel free to discuss your intended story for it though.
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Has anyone here read my fanfic?
https://archiveofourown.org/works/48849916/chapters/123230767
If so; what do you think of it?

If not; why not?

(wtf. since when are there so many captchas??? "Captcha expired" because I was adding this!!! WTF!!!)
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Pokémon genes are also a thing in Pokopia
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>>59019313
>soft confirmation their science isn't advanced enough to restore sight in humans
Can't cure blindness, can't cure asthma, can't cure sick dogs. Ditto cell treatmentfags, how you holding up?
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>>59019387
but they can clone dinosaurs, bet you can't do that
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>>59019160
I read up to about chapter 45 maybe 6 months or so ago. It's very much wish fulfilment sloppa that had me rolling my eyes through most of it, but I didn't hate it. I was mostly invested in the pokemon and really didn't give a shit about the human characters. Don't really remember why I dropped it, I think I just got out of the habit of reading at that time and now I've forgotten basically everything that happened.
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>>59019160
What the other guy said, that said I do use control + f to search for scenes like Salazzle making out with the mc and stuff like that.
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Don't really come around to this thread, but have any of you seen/made some good in-universe writing? Like a research paper that was written from a character
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>>59019455
>>59019614
Perverts who can't appreciate art. >crying

You'll love chapter 97. Wrote a Salazzle scene that made even the former bronie in me blush.
I'll most likely end up editing and uploading that scene specifically as a standalone mini-story, so you won't even have to ctrl+F it.
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>>59014608
That's what AZ is.
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>eeeh, Anon-kun?
>you said you were a writer so I got excited, but all you've shown me is half-baked dialogue and awkward prose
>are you even capable of writing anything that isn't fanfic?
How would you respond?
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>>59019753
I say yes, and ask if she would be interested in teaching me the ropes. It would at least help to learn a different perspective if anything.
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>>59019753
SHUT UP BITCH SHUT UP SHUT THE FUCK UP SHUT UP SHUT UP and then strangle her.
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>>59019753
At least I’m not wearing the world’s dumbest accessory around my neck all the time
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>>59019870
If she tugs it it's actually a rape whistle. Very handy around her fans.
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>>59019753
Yes, a job application though to be honest I'm probably doing something bad or I'm just too old for even basic retail shit.

...fuck.
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>>59019870
that's to hide her cleavage
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>>59020076
Another necessary precaution when dealing with her fans.
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>>59019649
Possibly. Why do you ask?
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>>59019753
I'd tell her I'm disappointed in her for having such a discouraging attitude towards casual writers.
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>>59019753
meta fic about MC writing a novel with the help of Shauntal
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>first comment I get in a while
>bot scammer
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>>59019160
The word count is scary.
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>>59020161
Thanks for the compliment.

It's a journey-fic that is about 70% complete. I'll probably end up finishing it this year or early next year, and then I'll be bored. Maybe I'll try "going outside" or something.
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>>59020174
Sell me on it, why sould I read it fren?
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>>59020135
I know that feel all too well...
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>>59020188
Because it's really good wish fulfilment sloppa.
The story isn't afraid of a little bit of pokepussy here and there.
It starts good and only gets better, with later parts dipping deeper into literary fiction.
Unlike most journey-fics this one actually has a plot.
It plays in the best pokemon region.
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>>59014965
Thanks, this is the suggestion I ended up going with, and don't worry. Weavile will win the snowball fight, even without moves it's not a contest with her involved.
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>>59020228
>>59020188
I'm bad at marketing. I don't know what's important to you, and condensing 600k words into a marketable pitch is difficult.

If you've read and liked any journey-fics before, then this one will be great too.
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https://archiveofourown.org/works/63818623/chapters/163647754

I overhauled this entire damn fic which is why the date is last year. It was originally this raunchy fic about partially naked girls who could turn into Pokemon and tried to fuck the MC because males are rare where they are from - except the three who join our main cast because reasons.

And it still is! But the rehauled story hasn't touched that part yet. We're still in civilization, but we're getting the fuck away from it soon. It really did feel good thinking up the lore for this rehaul.
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>Thank you for the chapter.
Idk why, this always makes me happy to read.
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>>59020351
Yeah, even if they don't have much to add. It feels great to be appreciated.
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New nutrition
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>>59019160
someone save me the trouble of going through it all. What kind of smut and what chapters.
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>>59020572
>for the love of Arceus
I don’t know why but I hate when this comes up.
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>>59020874
It could be worse, they could say OMA.
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>>59020874
because it comes off as preachy
>these are the rules of the universe and anyone who disagrees even a little bit is wrong because I am so enlightened with my meta knowledge and better than these primitives
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>>59020874
also, isn't Arceus an obscure subject only researchers know?
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>>59020945
It should be, unless Volo spread knowledge of it around. Which I doubt because knowledge of Giratina was also lost.
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>>59020874
Yeah, every time that shit comes up, I just sigh. It's no deal breaker but dammit writer, why are you like this?
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>>59020874
Blaspheming and religious vulgarity is weird since the Pokemon world doesn't really have any notable religion.
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>Pokemon trainer ranks and therefore licenses are canon in Pokopia
shit
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>>59021038
>The higher the trainer rank the higher his clearance
Well damn, that means Arceus is truly nothing but a secret to most
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>>59021031
Badges and trainer cards have existed since the series’ inception tho
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>>59020874
What else would you substitute for it? I feel like way more people would be assblasted if you used God or Jesus or Muhammad.
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>>59021101
you can use god without referring to the christian one
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>>59021101
You can just say “gods” or something. Actually, I’m surprised there isn’t more Fug deifying in Hoenn-based stories.
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>>59021101
Straight up planning on name dropping Jesus in my fic.
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Damn bros, ESCALATION sounds like a meme compared to what happened in this timeline
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So why aren't Ditto chimeras more commonly seen in fics? Feels like a no brainer to have a Ditto copy the best parts of a pokemon and splice together a monstrosity.
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>>59021101
>>59021105
On this topic:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/52138093/chapters/131870971
This fic establishes one of the characters as an ex-nun from an original region. I'm 80% it was just so the author could make all the usual blasphemes, but I appreciated that they considered that at all. Definitely a preferable option to just using a weird sounding substitute.
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>>59021101
>Can't use the word "bye" because that implies the original phrase "God be with you" existed.
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What reason do you use to explain why a Pokémon would obey your OC?
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>>59021303
he gets neutered if not
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>>59021303
She’s in love with him
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>>59021303
He knew what to feed it
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>>59021303
She was raised from birth as a purebred to be property, after some initial resistance to make sure her human isn't weak she's fine with him.
The first pokemon he captures is actually an entirely feral human and domestic pokemon preying convergant fakemon.

>>59021330
Spicefag.
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>>59021303
She chose him.
Just like how it is in canon.
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>>59014359
I just finished chapter 1 of IMO after promising to read it and I have to say, I agree.
Manhandled by his aunt, tiny, scared, bossed around by a girl who calls him a loser.But without any smut, yet.
I can see how this isn't that popular on QQ, with him losing his first battle and being degraded despite winning his second.
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>>59021303
Same reason a human would. He is a good leader.
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>>59021167
also, Team Rocket got a new leader, don't know if Archer or even Silver, and saved humanity by sending them to space
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>got reall into Silent Hill again
>immediately want to write a SH inspired pokemon fic
The question is can I fit SH into my current fic...
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>>59021303
The Pokemon could be indebted to the trainer or realize there's more potential than going it alone in the wild.
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>>59021491
Probably Archer and it seems they didn't bother with Giovanni because the world was getting fucked since that moment or something
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>>59021491
Yeah that was me.
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>>59021303
>He grew up with only his trainer and they're practically brothers
>She loves being spoiled by him
>It's proud that she's so enamored by his design and wants to become even more magnificent for her
>She buys him hats
>He's worried she might be on the precipice of a disaster and he needs to steer her in the right direction
>She reminds her of her first love
Take your pick.
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Why do Slowking/Alakazam/other smartmons not tactically advise their trainers?
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>>59021615
Why would they need to? Advisors are for war and state, not sports and arena fights.
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>>59020945
At least until post-DP. Prior to that the only NPC who knew about Arceus was that mysterious Hiker.
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>>59021491
>forgetting Corbeau
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>>59021655
who
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>>59021655
I didn't forget him, I just refuse to acknowledge him
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>>59021655
>He cares about Ohmori's dindu noffing villain that was actually a good guy
Lmao
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>>59021655
Everytime I remember Corbeau, I remember the fact that he was a orphan co-parented by Giovanni and Lysandre.
And every time I remember that I laught at Silver.
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>>59021665
>>59021671
I don't like him either but unfortunately he's the only villain associated with team rocket who's lined up for the role. Gio's admins are too evil to care about saving the rest of humanity and the wording makes it sound like they didn't know the new boss before, and Silver has a deep hatred for Team Rocket and sycophants in general so there's no shot he took over and treats the grunts well.
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>>59021491
Clearly it was ya boy, Guzma beating up Rainbow Rocket Giovanni, stealing all his shit and starting his own Team Rocket.
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>>59021491
>>59021690
it could be just Oak
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>>59021705
Now I'm worried the space escape plan was really Oak genociding humanity to put an end to the chaos once and for all.
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Fuck, Mass Effect anon where are you?
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>>59021745
I don't there's any one Mass Effect Anon, the idea was just a suggestion due to how 'hard' it'd be, only for everyone else to chip in about how easy it'd be. However I did bring up the idea again up thread.
Too bad I'm working on other stuff right now, or else I might be tempted to writ e a short first contact war fic.
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>>59021700
Fuck, now I need to make a whole new ending of my story.
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>>59021745
I like the ancient precursor trope in sci fi but pokopia's humans being so flawed and technologically primitive off the bat kinda ruins the usual perception of godliness you get from other alien races like the Forerunners and Old Ones.
Instead they sorta come of more like Guardian of Ga'Hoole's The Others.
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>>59021690
I don't think he'd have any interest in reviving or taking over team rocket because he's open about not wanting to take over the rust syndicate and only doing it because he was forced to.
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>>59021789
For all we know maybe it was the original no mega evolution timeline so they didn't advance fast enough, but then again Colress is from that era and he has a multiverse travel button in USUM
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What pokemon do you think coule handle caffeine and chocolate? Since humans share the enzyme that allows us to digest theobromine quickly with Mice, I imagine some mice pokemon maybe be able to eat it.
I think most Poison-types would have complex enough digestive systems to handle it as well. Anyone else have some thoughts?
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>>59021965
Dragon-types, probably? And electric-types in general.
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>>59021965
Probably a lot of grass types since caffeine and theobromine are a poison that affects the nervous system.
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>Finally get another review
>Art bot
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>>59022099
Link?
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>>59022065
>Probably a lot of grass types
I see...
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>>59022120
https://m.fanfiction.net/r/14397816/
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>>59022139
Yeah, it's so annoying. At least Ao3 comment moderation option allows you to vet comments before they go live.
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>>59022125
You could water your plants with Monster but the sodium content would kill them.
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I just want to thank you guys again for the one-shot suggestion, and in particular to the snowball fight one which I chose. Not only is it helping me work through Mahogany, but the momentum has carried into my other writing.
I've made so much progress today, I'm so happy.
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>>59021101
I just use regional legendaries.
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>>59021101
There is only one god, the Original One: Mew.
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>>59022724
You mean the jobber?
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>>59022732
God isn't meant to fight, why do you think she created humans to be stronger and better at fighting than her? So we could fight for her.
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>>59022732
that was merely a hand of mew. The Original Mew is almighty and created everything, even Arceus.
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>>59021303
There's not. He has zero training experience.
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>>59022749
Neither did Ash at the start and Pikachu decided to be with him until death
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>>59021344
Actually I’ve never posted my work before, Mahoganybro
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>>59021965
You can feed any Pokémon mocha Poke Puffs in XY without them shitting their insides out
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>>59023053
X&Y isn't canon.
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>>59021965
The boring buzzkill answer is that from BW to SwSh you could obtain sweet hearts, an item which restored HP regardless of species and os made of chocolate according to the item description (although it is stated to be extremely sweet so it's possible the sugar content is so high that there's not enough caffeine/theobromine to be harmful) so all pokemon up to Calyrex can digest chocolate. There's coffee and multiple dishes containing chocolate in Paldean restaurants, but I don't remember if your whole team eats those items or just the player.
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>>59021965
Pokemon can consume about anything, in fact, my MC has a Pokemon that's alcoholic
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I just wrote this really cool fight scene and I hope I'll still think it's cool when I read it again tomorrow.
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>>59023279
Me but sex.
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>>59022671
:)
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>>59022671
Great to see you're enjoying yourself anon, having fun writing is a blessing in itself. Excited to see what you make
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>>59023279
Nothing is ever good enough on a reread.
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>>59019753
>>59020076
God she's so hot. Glasses + bob cuts are a perfect combo, she's objectively a 10 when she isn't wearing that stupid collar thing.
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>>59022671
The satisfaction you feel from having written is so fucking great MahoganyBro. The best part is it renews with each chapter you add. It’s legitimately intoxicating once you’re in the cycle, which is very helpful for productivity if you have the time.

I’ll get around to giving yours a read when I can. Reading other anons’ work is hard when you’re writing retarded amounts like I am right now >_>
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>>59021491
>To protect the world from devastation!
>To extend our reach to the stars above!
>mfw
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Why was the site down?
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>>59023882
(((maintenance)))
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>Got completely fucked over with work
>Even when I have the time to write I'm too stressed to do it
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>>59023883
Probably more invasive AI shit. It's so fucking tiresome. What's the point of writing if a machine can do it better than you in an instant? What's the point in posting on an anymous imageboard if any post you read could be written by a bot? Not to mention AI can now apparently deanonymize users with near 100% accuracy. It's fucking OVER isn't it
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Shut the fuck up doomposting idiot. You pull this every month trying to whine that AI's better at writing like it doesn't shit out nothing but unprocessed shit. Bet you're gonna mention my dark eyes aren't just mad - they're a storm of emotions or something next.
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Can (you) deanonymize users with near 100% accuracy?
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>>59023941
No I can only deatomize them with the ray gun in my basement.
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>>59023935
I'm posting against AI you retarded schizo, I fucking despise it and wish we had never created it in the first place but you're coping if you think the large image models aren't capable of convincingly imitating a human being.
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>>59023973
LLM models* fuck
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>>59023973
Posting "against" it by going "Ohhhhh my widdle tummy hurts guys... AI's so much better than me... better than you... you should give up..."

Blow your fucking brains out and go eat your lunch outside in the grass, in that order. Discouraging others from creating means you're a doomposter, which means you're fucking worthless, and if you don't mean to be then stop fucking doing it and just write the story you want to see made. I've tried making AI do it for me out of curiosity, and it'll never match the images that are in your head. You'll always see the tropes, repeated phrases, and missteps it has to fall back on it because it isn't creating ideas, original or otherwise, it's just spitting back patterns.
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>>59023941
It's easy, they they complain about having their fic called NTR or they post about pokehilia, call them spice fag.
If they use too many spoilers and talk about Alola or Isekai, call them Pofag.
If they post about lesbians, call them IMOfag.
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>>59023995
ah, but what about pokephilic alolan lesbian ntr
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>>59023882
/Pol/, always blame /Pol/
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That Rocket grunt won btw
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>>59022671
Good to hear that it’s going well. You taking inspiration from my own material made my day, also. I try to not read other fics while writing, to avoid being too derivative, but I look forward to reading the Mahogany stuff down the line.
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>>59023904
>get into the first car accident I've been in a decade earlier this week
>no injuries, but has left me incredibly stressed
>get into a second accident today

mfw i must scream but have no face
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>>59023995
I need to up my schizo game.
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Fics need more pokemon that are disabled and fucked up
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>>59024378
Pikachu with aids...
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>>59021344
Okay, what's your fiction? That weird LARP mentality is amusing me immensely.
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>>59023995
What about the others?
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>>59024482
I posted drafts of the first three chapters here >>59008124 although Sneasel's perspective is quite limited compared to the mc.
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Wobbuffet is underrated
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>>59024929
Youd have to be really evil to use a Wobuffet, maybe even like, The Most Evil Trainer
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>>59024929
I just wrote a scene last night where a Wobbuffet saved a city from a dynamaxed Dragonite's hyper beam.
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>>59024985
>Gay pedo groomer
Damn, that guy is pure evil and spacebattles is totally okay with that
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>>59025041
Based.
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>>59024378
I've got a character with a Maractus that has the pokemon equivalent of Alzheimer's. He's trying to break into Area Zero to get Herba Mystica to cure her.
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Honestly, Pokopia is kinda boring lore-wise?
It doesn't really add or give us anything very cool or new. If anything, it detracts, by making humanity job to weather, and the Pokemon themselves job to it too.
And it would be one thing if humanity had gone and created Gundam-tier colonies after its escape or terraformed another planet, but nope, they're living on tin cans in space still it seems. And it's been centuries since they escaped earth?
It makes everyone feel like a weak useless jobber. Humanity and Pokekind.
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Billions will die
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>>59025256
>and the Pokemon themselves job to it too.
the legendaries are still roaming the world completely fine
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>>59025256
>job
>jobber
>jobbing
stop using that fucking word already
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>>59025256
These are power scaler complaints.
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>>59025256
It is weird, like the fuckers have multiversal travel outside of Solgaleo with Hoopa and Colress, timetravel with Celebi, fuck even Devon had a hand in multiversal fuckery in ORAS.

It's an interesting idea but lame because everyone is a failure but hey, at least they opened the door for their own Spectrobes
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>>59025261
That's the issue though.
Not even the ones tasked by guarding the planet could do anything about it. Seemingly. Not fug, not Zygarde, not anyone.
And I mean, even if you're a Legendary and could survive it all I don't think having to endure through an ecological disaster like that would be a fun experience.
>>59025268
Maybe it could be seen that way, it was not my intention though, but it still paints a depressing picture for the general capabilities of humanity and pokemonkind, conflicts with their previously shown capabilities, and last but not least, diminishes the bond of Pokemon and humans that lets them break through the limits and accomplish all and more.
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>>59025261
But they couldn't do anything
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>>59025273
I could have bought it had it been a sudden fuck-up that caught everyone with their pants down but apparently they had a shitton of preptime and still couldn't do anything about the main issue then or now.
And apparently they put literally every single fucking Pokemon in the world into the PC system. That's insane when you think about it. They could do that but could not do anything else about all the other things?
It's a fun idea, but as you just said, the execution falls apart.
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>>59025276
Blame Omori
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>>59025276
>Not even the ones tasked by guarding the planet could do anything about it
In Kyogre's case, he just went to sleep because he didn't even care about it
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>>59025297
Always have and always will.
I hope that on their deathbeds his parents tell him he's a failure so he can never get over his mommy/daddy issues and never have closure.
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>>59025302
Why didn’t he go natural energy hangry mode like he does in RS/ORAS?
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>>59025311
because he was sleeping, duh
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>>59025256
Arceus wanted it that way
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>>59025288
didn't they?
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I would just blame some alien to be honest but now Orre being in a vague timeline makes sensei, like anon said it is literally impossible to take all humans to space
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>>59025332
>t is literally impossible to take all humans to space
what if you tried really hard?
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>>59025332
>it is literally impossible to take all humans to space
Sounds like Earthnoid talk to me
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IMOanon, was the character who people hadn't picked up on being gay Mia? I can see why people wouldn't have wanted her to be gay, the possibility of Kizey being dom-ed on by two kuudere twins is pretty hot.
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>>59025394
Then you might as well go for a space or moon colony, anything close to the planet you want to come back
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>>59024929
Why do so many things treat Mirror Coat as a perfect reflect that nullifies damage? Mirror Coat only works after you take the damage, like Counter.
Kinda devalues things like Lightning Rod.
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>>59025522
>Why do people treat THING like how it is in all forms of media except for the one. Don't they know I have autism?!
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>>59025577
>like how it is in all forms of media except for the one
Source?
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page 10, new thread
>>59025616
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>>59025463
Yeah, it's Mia. I appreciate the appeal, but she's got her own escapades planned out.
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>>59025070
Is this guy actually a groomer or are people schizoposting because he has a husband and kid?



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