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Story Recap. There was one story posted last thread:Anon Survives? >>86140248 (Cross-thread)Tags: AZKi, SFW, Yandere, Short, Fall2024
Fuwamoco must have been the first responders for us to be legally dead that long
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Why didn't you protect the thread you baka-ass motherfuckers? You let the terrorists (Al-Qatalog) win!
>>86281630It was 6am my time when it died, gomen
>>86281630Sorry Fubuki-sama, but the GWOSP(Global War On Shit Posting) hasn't been going well. If only we had another, oh I don't know, twenty billion in Government funding...
life or death
>>86280443A trio of bounty hunters have come to take you in alive and with empty balls(they don't realize the wanted poster was vandalized)
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Shut up you dumb owl and make me a sandwich
>>86285206You can eat these bunshehehehe
>>86285286butt stuff with Mumei, who has no idea why you like her butt so much
Part of me is wondering how Roboco would factor into the coffee plantation AU. Would she be seen as even lesser than the kemonos because of her artificial nature?
>>86288976>Sent back in time to assassinate (You), and kick start the Kemo revolution>Software errors make her pon amd forget her mission>Stuck in a traveling circus with Cecilia as 'Living Dolls'
>>86288976I think that you guys are gonna have to accept that not all nonhumans work in that setting
The real tragedy of that Coffee Plantation AU fic isn't the kemono slavery, it's that the product they grow probably isn't that great since it's set in the Southern US which is not an optimal location for a coffee plantation.
>>86291598The fic starts with anon going "im damn proud of being papu new guinean"
>>86294246Coffee Plantation AU: Rhodesia!Pekora is the kemono Mugabe
>>86290145Sounds like quitter talk.Especially if you aren't completely dead set on "It's the 1800s but with animal women" and can accept a bit more fantasy into the setting.
>'Chikens over rats'H M M M M
>>86296785What's that supposed to mean?
The 3D has convinced me that Hajime is the sexiest ReGLOSS.Her slim waist makes her hips stand out that much more. Her idol outfit consists of little more than a very tight leotard covered by only the barest pretenses of clothing:- a very short, very low-hanging skirt- the crotch in this skirt pretends to be shorts, but they are not. That pretense of modesty is sexy!- a piece of cloth that does not cover her chest, holding together her sleevesSaid leotard has cutouts in the sides, letting us know that she doesn't wear a bra.Going further down, she's wearing one medium-length sock that shows off a lot of her bare leg, and one long sock over the knee held up by a thigh strap, there's something here for every taste. There is a convenient cut in her skirt to show off this strap.
>>86297057It's definitely between her and Raden, especially in their idol outfits. Ririka somehow being the most modest in them is funny
>>86296959Meant to quote >>86245016Damn, bratbro just can't stop cucking his oshi...
>>86296785Uhh...>Romance vs Lust>On one side you have Bae's pure love.>Cute dates, and fluff>On the other Kara's casual lust>Teasing, correction, and casual sex.>Their secret> They both want what the other has.>Bae wants to FUCK.>Kiara wants to have some romance for once.
>>86291598You could set it in the alternate universe where the South managed to colonize Central America. Problem solved.
>>86291598>"The South" was actually Southern Brazil
>>86288976Why would slavery exist if you can make automata?
I will finish this story. I will finish it so that I can stop daydreaming about it.I don't owe it to myself, I owe it to my oshi.
>>86297496Raden's OG hits a nice mix of cute and sultry to me
>>86298999>bom dia Ririka, come to brazilaltough you could theorethically write a story where the portuguese royalty comes to hide in your sugar plantation which was somehow worse than most plantations in the north
>>86300772I'm not up to date on CC's lore, but isn't she lost technology?
STUPID WIPGET WRITTEN!GET WRITTEN!GET WRITTEN!
>>86280443Subaru has a problem: You no longer see her as your bro ever since you two started dating
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>>86312647i kid you not, i opened my fucking docs and then my cousin's piece of a shit dog decided to crawl under the fence and then fuck off so i spent one hour combing the perimeter until i found the piss stained waste of skin in the park.>why dont you just dont do itbecause im technically petsitting it due to living next to the dog and as much as i dislike dogs i dont want my cousin's kid to grow up with the memory of his pet being roadkill while he was awayAnyway im never writing a dog as likeable. fuck them
>>86313031>Anyway im never writing a dog as likeable. fuck themMr Koro....
>>86313031>Anyway im never writing a dog as likeable. fuck them
>>86315294>>86316625Kemonos are not animals! they have rights!
>>86316783They have the right to shut up and bear my half breed kids
How do you overcome nerves ?
>>86321637Of what?
>>86319815>The Grim Reaper wears Kemonoface
>>86321827When writing fanfiction. I wanna start writing one but I'm worried
>>86321637You just do it, man. Even if it turns out like shit, you got all the time in the world to make it better.
>>86321637>>86322152well aside from "kill the part that cringes" think of this as an expression of yourself. Think of that one time you wanted to say "shut up old bag of shit" to an annoying old lady, but you stopped yourself.Now how could would it be if you didnt? Fanfiction is letting you go "man what if THAT happened" and going through with that thought
>>86322152What is there to worry about?It's just fun stories about colorful anime women mate, don't think too hard about it
reminder this hot otaku gal asked management to tie her up, put a blindfold and then feed her meat on her 3d debut because its her fetish and she knew the fanart would be great.RirikaRabu
I like raceplay and raceswap shenanigans
>>86288976I mean there's like two real options here (without the don't include them one since that's quitter talk for an au). 1) Actual Property with no real rights but treated better than the slaves. Either a Dutch wife/sex doll if you're leaning on the lewd side or a slave hunter if you're leaning on something more dramatic. Side character tier since it let's her 'race' be a thing to contrast the kemono slaves. 2) Robot daughter of the such and such family. Something something Victorian superscience, spark of genius, or weird magic from the west. Take your pick for the origin. Main character / Heroine tier since it gives an 'In' for her to be part of a planter/rich family while still letting you play with ye olde robot amongst humanity tropes.
>>86316783>not writing and a dog hateryou just keep moving up on the list
>>86301933ganbate anon. both of us will make ot through
>>86305824CC is (Ancient Automaton and all), no clue about Roboco though
>>86331137She's from the future-past.
>>86316783>Kemonos are not animals! they have rights!
>>86339085>>86280443Pekora cockblocking you from Marine, not out of any sense of jealousy or anything just seeing saccharine displays of romance between a hag and a younger man gross her out
>>86305824I don't know but that's not the point. In a setting where the enslavement of other biological beings is the key focus, why would you introduce a "race" that is: A. Made by human hands B. Designed to obey humans and C. Do not require sleep or food?
>>86339759It could be a plot point that a) they don't know how to build more automatons or b) the powers that be are suppressing how to build them to uphold the system
>>86339759Is slavery really the point of the setting?I thought it was more of a raceplay thing with the kemono/human divide being the main race thing. Though that may be my own bias since I like the "kemono are a hentai race with a fucked up gender ratio/ are female only species" angle that I don't think is the main position for the overall setting idea.
>humans start mass producing robots and they're pretty affordable>still use kemono slave labor purely out of love for the oppression of kemonos
>>86339889>Ancient lost technology in the low-hanging fruit slavery ficor>Illuminati suppressing more efficient and controllable means of labor because racismLook man I'm gonna be real, I think you guys are losing the thread on this. Robots just add a wrench into this whole idea that really doesn't need to be there. Just write Fubuki rape and be done with it.>>86340487Well the original idea was literally a coffee plantation so yes. Slavery/racism if you want to be technical but it's a distinction without a difference.
>>86340774It's simple ethics anon.Genocide would be unethical, and letting the kemono menace roam free would be worse.Thus the only ethical solution is to keep them as a perpetually enslaved underclass.
>>86340487>"kemono are a hentai race with a fucked up gender ratio/ are female only speciesThat gives me sci-fi vibes>mad scientist finds a way to create kemonos>paranoid about humans exploiting his little furballs>takes the dozen or so kemonos he has created with him and sets up a secret kemono factory on a remote planet>educates the kemonos thoroughly so that they can thrive even after him>gives them the scientific knowledge so that they can continue printing kemonos>warns them about the evil of humans and males (other than him)>the story begins when anon makes a crash landing near the well-hidden kemono colony>anon gets arrested by the kemono police patrolling the surface and is taken... to a utopian hi-tech underground kemono metropolis more civilized than any human society
>>86339309>The age difference is only like 2 years and some change
>>86342440That's just making me imagine a smut fic about teaching a pure civilization the wonders of sex (with me).With all the kemonos being paper tigers who know of the teachings against human men but instantly fall into estrus the moment they feel the touch of a man.
>>86343193>rumors spread anon and this "sex" thing he can perform with his "penis">anon and his dick turn the most civilized society in the universe into a mad max hellscape in just two weeks>president fubuki's live reaction
>>86342440>>86343193 (me) Oh god this is getting stuck in my head because this is just making me imagine the story arc being fucking progressively higher rank kemono girls until you fuck the kemono queen who reveals that the scientist was still alive. At which point you have a sex battle against Immortal Hag Koyori (forma de Human Scientist) which ends with you fucking her into a sex slave. Then I don't know you have her make a virus to infect the female population into kemonos, and cause the end of normal human civilization as you lead the kemono horde into the stars.
>>86321637Just don't think of the things that's giving you the nerves in the first place.
>>86343598I'm going to touch president fubuki and make her ovulate!
>>86347026>>86280443Fic with an evil (and sexy) Koyori that experiments on (You).
>>86348376That happened in HoloJourneys
>>86343598>"C-Citizens of Holotopia-">Mio's voice echoes in the background, "OH FUCK! OH SHIT! DO IT! GIVE ME A BABY! GIVE ME A LITTER OF PUPPIES!">"T-The situation regarding the intruder-" She sobs, cut off by now Okayu screaming>"Nyah! So goood~! Human cocks are so good! Kemono are mare to get bred by humans!">Fubuki falls into her arms and cries. Kemonoland has fallen.
>>86349696>Kemonoland has fallen.>Billions must breed>All around the colony, more and more kemono women awaken to a primal need.>Desperate kemono work day and night to reverse engineer Anon's ship>An armada was being built>An armada to enslave breeding stock and ensure the future prosperity of Kemonoland.
>>86280443Arriving in kemonoland with your wife, who can't stop getting knotted by random kemono men, while you can't resist the way kemono pussies close around your cockIn the end, you divorce and she's left for breeding stock, and you take your own breeding stock back home.
duck manko
>>86350768The kemono monster truly is the ultimate weapon against humanity.
>>86350768Which chuuba is your wife
>>86352036Iroha
>>86352036>Rescued from a kemono breeding pit after breeding seasonSo that's how Iroha joined holoX...
>>86352036>>86352132Make it harsher by having Iroha resist the advances of burly kemono men but finds the shed hairs of kemono whores that visit her husband.After she forfeits love and gets a bigger hole on her pussy from the all the knots she's had inside, she begs for her husband, and the woman who takes her out of the pit, Koyori, is the original homewrecker.
KEEP OUR EARS SIMIAN!KEEP OUR BLOOD PURE AND CLEAN!KEMONO ARE NOT WELCOME HERE!
>>86352868>HoloX is actually an organization formed from those Anon didn't pick to take home after breeding>Despite being the first to introduce him to the wonders of Kemono manko Koyori wasn't taken home because she didn't get knocked up by the time Anon's visa ran out.
>>86352132Iroha actually starts cheating on you willingly after getting raped by a kemono cock that's much bigger than yours. Koyori actually takes pity on you and starts sleeping with you while trying to hide the fact that Iroha is cheating behind your back almost every night
the cucks and the Kemonofags are cross contaminating into aomething out of hand
>>86354192>Iroha cums yet again as she hears and feels the wolf cum swirling inside her, as her forceful new lover grinds her in circular motions and finally begins to pull back, but her won't come out>It hurts, it hurts soo good that that massive thing is struggling to come out of her tiny human pussy, but with some force and a wet pop, Iroha moans as she hears the cum drip onto the blanket>Her brain just got fried by pleasure, and rewired by the primal experience of fucking kemono>The next night, she willingly slips into the chamber of the wolf-man, who leaves her a few marks and bites after a generous creampie, as well as a letting Iroha ride and enjoy his knot>Meanwhile, back home, Anon is tending to a Coyote in heat, whose husband won't pay attention to her ever since a tourist strolled into town.>Koyori didn't want to cheat on their partners...>But something about human dicks, and how smoothly they push in and out of her, and how well it scratches her insides, how much she enjoys it when Anon pulls her tail and calls her a fucking animal...>She can't help it.
>>86353093I love how this thread has just decided that yep, Liz is the anti-kemono racist of EN.
*pshoo*DEADMOOM*oohsp*
>>86355480I'm pretty sure though that it's just one guy, but nobody cares to challenge that narrative because no one else watches her.
>>86352036What if Miko
>>86356846Oh hell yeah.I love Miko slut shenanigans.
>>86357582>>86356846>Miko finds herself in the lunar breeding pits fucked by an army of pent up rabbit boys while Anon has an orgy in pekoland castle with all the rabbit ladies.
>>86356705I watch her from time to Time but its such an outlandish take compared to the original than it really doesnt bother me
>>86280395Impostor Syndromehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS40HcwEalEqRhFRfkn6ruPuwA8aJiNT7r5-dAOkYL3VuksaCA4TtErzcO7EewUcgRWxzMsrQUGp_46/pubTags: Panic, Dark Comedy, More Panic, Anon, ShioriA nobody non-writer lives in constant fear of being exposed as a fraud.
>>86358676>Pekora's brother avenging his sister by making Miko's legs tremble until her IQ drops into the negatives>Anon forgiving Miko for cheating on him with Pekora once he realizes how irresistible it is to rape rabbit pussy.
>>86280443Anglerfish Shiori forcing you to be dependent on her while she milks your for sperm
>>86362720I can imagine Shiori handcuffing you to her during sex and yapping about how male angler fish fuse to the females and become basically a living sperm sac, the only thign stopping you from going flacid being that she's riding you and making you suck on her nipple for 'nutrients'
>>86363059To be honest if a girl was doing this weird shit on me the only thing preventing my boner from dying would be the fact that I'd be in love with her.
>I hope you didn't wait too long for me... >Come on, let's go back up.
>>86364462>Ywn be a cagey orphan street urchin that triggers Mio's maternal instincts
>>86365812Just a little bit of lighthearted mischief to tease the foxy oneesan next door. Boys will be boys.
>Re-read my old ficsI.... I didn't write this, did I?
>>86366999It's a sign of your growth. Imagine if you hadn't improved, you'd think that you were always good when you never were.
Dead...
>>86367744One day I want to become a respected artists solely so I can say>Yeah I began by writing fanfiction. Oh no, no, haha, not Harry Potter or Doctor Who, vtuber fanfiction on 4chan.
Thread? Dead.Authors? Dead.WIPs? Dead.Death? Dead.
>>86373281What is your major malfunction?
>>86373606the tism.
>>86373648Stop it. It's obnoxious.
>>86370196What does it mean when her back tattoo glows?
>>86340487>Is slavery really the point of the setting? I thought it was more of a raceplay thing For me, it's forced pregnancy.
I'm a progressive, I'll take slaves of any race.
>>86373829It lets her know if Xhosa-speaking gay Eskimos are nearby
>>86375164I'll take slaves of any age too...
>>86375510One day I'll get too hopped up on meds and lose enough inhibition to write a proper cunny fic. But now, sober and capable of embarrassment? I don't need that published on my google drive, man.
>>86373829You're about to be raped
>>86375864There's also Rentry for more anonimity. Then again, it's just fanfiction man, it's not like you're posting actual pizza. ... right, anon?
>>86376667>federal agent trying to entrap anons on /wg/All the girls in my collection of crowview and deadflow pregnancy doujins are a, drawings, and b, over 18. It just so happens some of them have flat chests and talk about how they're too young to be getting pregnant, is all.
>>86360796This got some good laughs out of me, the Kafkaesque line really slayed me, good work. I like how supportive and sweet Shiori is in this, even with the ending in mind, it still fits her. Shoutouts to describing the emotes, probably my favorite running bit about her. At the risk of sounding like one of those critics in the story, I think this is a very smart fic, especially for something derived from a greentext chain. Props. I'm stealing the term "Nymousian" btw.I will say that the formating for this is a bit off. Not sure if it's some goof as a result of publishing but its a bit smooshed together. Theres some bits where an italic word is right up against a non italic word.>"That was beautiful,"she said.For example.
>>86360181I think there is some logic to it, less about her actual personality and more about the kayfabe that she acts like an old hag because she's a (presumably) chaste knight.
>>86377494>But what about this one, Mr Anonymous? This one, where the girl is dressed in a pre-schooler outfit? Am I just supposed to believe she has dwarfism and an age play fetish? And this part where she looks at the camera saying "I am legally, physically and mentally 9 years of age, in fact, here is my ID, which as you can see, is completely legit. I, a minor will commit illegal activities with the man recording this tape, such as but not limited to: Drug use, abuse, sexual intercourse, and indicent exposure"? Am I just supposed to believe this is part of the roleplay?>The girl in question:
>>86377574Thanks, Anon. Go for it - Nymousian, Kakaesque, Shiorish, all the hip new writing slang is up for grabs.>There's some bits where an italic word is right up against a non-italic word.Yeah that's the thing. I wrote it on MS Word before copy pasting it into a Google Doc. I thought it was already good after I ran a quick spellcheck but no - turns out a lot of was still pretty fucked. I'll fix those.Thanks for reading, man. Glad you appreciated the story's uh smartitude
>>86280362Let's go
>>86378886Is the officer questioning me a woman? I rape her in self-defense.
>>86375864Do it, lose your inhibitions. October is almost upon us, the spooky season is here. Halloween is the time when dolled up children walk around at night unsupervised, knocking on strangers' doors to ask for free candy. There's no cunnier time of the year. And since we have a fall/halloween themed contest going on, that's extra incentive for you to go for it.
Has any newfound inspirations flown your way, anons?I've been stuck in the >I just need to read more...cycle for a while, trying to find something to light the spark. Recently, I came across the novel The elementary particles, and one particular bit about one of the characters stuck with me>His class is supposed to make crowns from leafs for the girls, but he can't get it right and his falls apart at every turn. >He wants the girls to like him, he wants the class to accept him, but how can he show that he's in need of love without the leaf crowns?>he cries, and the teacher doesn't do anything.It tickled my bittersweet bone. I'm also writing down character sheets for the ones in this fic because I want them to be structured better than I've done it before.
>>86381001I ain't pic related
>>86360796let me disclose this isnt my type of comedy AT ALL. I really dislike the beating of a joke (even when its deliberate) and the type of dry comedy that makes something escalate into infinity is definitely something i always end up walking away.So congrats on making a good one of these! i had some chuckles which is a lot because i really dont like this style of comedy, and i enjoyed the shiorium. Aside from what the other anon said about formatting i think Anon constantly "hitting back" the statements makes some of them less fun.
>>86360796Absolutely incredible. I was laughing the whole way through. Anon being a complete writing savant but otherwise a dumbass is a joke that's somehow not run into the ground. and Shiori being so sweet and wholesome contrasts very well and makes it believable that he would go to such lengths for her, despite the mental strain. Though I was expecting the resolution to include Shiori revealing her plan to him, because it's already come to fruition and there's no need to keep him on the ropes.Also, when I wrote the ending snippet and story title, I wasn't expecting them to actually get used or for the story to get written at all, so kudos for that.
>>86381476I was watching the ADVENT EDF streams and i got a really funny dialogue idea to advance my wip thanks to FWMC.Its hard for me to watch them because i find their 1on1 permanent dynamic a bit too much but damn are they fun in collabs specially in advent where they let out all their weirdness shine and pinball with the other members.>Shiori: Damn its like...alien goo? >Fuwawa: yeeeh>Mococo: If humanity is gone...what are we fighting for?>Bijou: REVENGE!>Everyone: YAAAH>Fuwawa: and then well repopulate earth!>Bijou and Shiori: YEAH!>Nerissa: GOOD THING IM EXTRA FERTILE!>Mococo: HAEH?!
>>86382373>>86383027Thanks for reading, Anons. I was afraid that the joke had already been stretched too much, to the point that I had second thoughts about including the podcast bit. Good thing you guys still found everything funny then. In fact, the whole "Anon being a tsukkomi" thing was me trying to mitigate the feeling of the joke being beaten to death. Ironically, the way Anon reacts to what's happening ended up being the dead horse lmao>spoilerIt was too good of an idea to pass up, really. So, thanks for the inspiration. As for why Shiori doesn't tell him, I was trying to make it look like Anon, who has everything a writer would dream of, is ultimately stuck in his own personal hell of fear and misery because he thought he could grift his way into getting a girlfriend. And I found the idea rather funny.
>>86384084Nerissa's fertile weak eggs...getting fertilized extremely easily...
>>86387316Nerissa's disgusting bird cloaca...
>>86389322until you write a fic that's on your head buddy
>Curses you to never finish your WIPsMuahahaha....
>>86378886>Your honor, as we all know, everyone is born 18 years old.>That 9 year old... is actually 27!
>>86392077
Did the board die or what?
>>86392077I may not be able to finish my WIP, but I'll finish inside you, Miomagician!
>>86395590Nah, but your mother died in bed last night. What, you didn't check on her? Go on, try ringing her right now.
>>86395777Well first your mom has to stop sucking
>>86395675Sorry, but Mio is a finishedstoryQueen, you can only finish inside her if you've finished your WIPs
>>86396405>cancel all my remaining WIPs, rendering them "finished.">brandish a wide grin as I take my turn to revive Mio's ovaries
Consider. Flatrissa.
>>86409670As long as she's evil but still fértiles, ill allow it
>>86409670'tall flat girlfail' is my personal coomerbait so I'm almost glad she isn't so I don't become one of those fans who only care until I jack off and never actually pay attention to her otherwise
>>86409670Give her a fat butt as a compromise and I'll allow it
>>86410828Does she not have a big fat white girl ass by default
>>86280443Getting raped by officer Botan
Anons, what is the toughest genre you think you'd have a hard time writing? For me, it's time travel sci-fi. I look at stuff like Steins;Gate and I think to myself, "Holy fuck how did they manage to make this shit so intertwined?" It's part of the reason why I haven't bothered writing a time travel fic yet. It feels like there's so much work involved with mapping out all the causes and effects while still making sure you still have a good plot and decent characters.
>>86414328A good spy thriller I think would be a massive undertaking for me just because I'd worry too much that people were getting bored and I'd turn it into John Wick only for people to still be bored because that's not what they're there for. Also balancing a protagonist who can demonstrate spy-worthy attributes while still struggling with something beyond not being gigabrained enough to figure out the plot or defeat goons would probably be a bit much for me. To that extent, writing a schizo is so much easier and more instantly enjoyable
>>86405583Stop looking at me like that. I'll get back to writing you soon okay? I just wanna put something out for the contest.
>>86414328I'm more of an amateur but I also imagine it'd be difficult to not use time travel as a magic undo button for any plot point you don't feel fully committed to
Kemono girls are hot but Shion's petite body has me lusting for her more than any kemono
>>86415906>A good spy thrillerBut Anon I'm writing something like that.What I can recommend you do is to just come up with the plot and characters first. You can leave all the "realistic" shit like knowledge about CQC, history, how a soldier/spy actually operates and other stuff for later. The sole purpose of those things in the story is to just make it feel real/"cool"/grounded. Accoutrements, pretty much. At the end of the day, it's still all about the characters and plot; figure out the foundation and lay down all the realistic spy stuff and shit bit by bit (while making plot and character updates as you go along). At least the thriller will be doable though it'll still be a real pain in the ass.>spoilerschizos are great, but fuck me if I have to write a Hannibal Lecter/"functional schizo"-type of character>>86417176>it'd be difficult to not use time travel as a magic undo buttonThat's part of the reason why it's so hard to write a time travel story that doesn't suck. You have to stop yourself from doing it or else you instantly render the entire plot meaningless ("Why should I give a shit about this story and the characters if they can just fix shit with little to no consequences?")
>>86417428Based
>>86414087>Be shop owner>Get robbed and raped by a gang for the 20 bucks in your register>No money so after patching you up the doctors rape you as "payment">Go to the police station to file a report against the hospital staff, the officers rape you for "wasting their time">Finally get back to your shop, only to find the rent's due and crazy blue haired lady is demanding it all in cash, right NOW>Can't pay her.....you can guess what happens next>Can't have SHIT in Holosantos
Here's a story idea: Mr. Koro's Koros.
>>86420777Imagine being a DEA Agent sent to investigate suspected drug manufacturing in Holo Santos and finding out half the police force moonlight as strippers and the other half are more focused on chasing a dine and dash case
>>86360796I liked it, your comedy doesn't hit as hard as it should since your actual prose pacing could use a bit of editing to cut stuff for impact but it got some laughs from me.
>>86414328I don't think I can make a holoslavia type alt-history story.You need a very specific subtype of autism interests to line up just right in order to make that kind of story, and I don't think I have the exact autistic interest lineup to write something like holoslavia.
>>86428284I think with Holoslavia, I think you CAN make a story like that if you look at Holoslavia the setting and Holoslavia the story as two separate things. Cause Holoslavia the setting is just that - a setting. And like in sci-fi, fantasy, and other "constructed" settings, you can probably work out something similar. It might even be easier since Holoslavia is basically Not!Yugoslavia, so that's already half of the work done (and, strangely, makes the story not only a Holo fanfic, but a Yugoslavia fanfic).As for Holoslavia the story, take out the chuuba names and gags and you're left with a bog-standard thriller with light intrigue (Kiara sends Anon and co to kill Pekkers. Yeah, so?). A story like that has to be good on its own, with the background stuff serving to enhance the story, not just be the main draw of it. If you think you can make a decent thriller plot, then you're more than capable of writing a Holoslavia-like story, Anon.
>>86422645I never knew Korone could be so.... erotic.
>>86431201She's one of those "unexpected" ero girls. Totally un-sexy one moment, then a total semen demon the next.
>>86425905Thanks for reading, Anon. Glad you liked it, still. Yeah, I think it does meander a bit (like in the podcast scene) but that's just me. What parts stuck out to you like that, if I could ask?
>>86434638I don't really think it's a specific moment thing, it was more from the overall pacing. Which basically led to a lot of comedic 'jabs' (short comedic lines and such meant to build a comedic atmosphere and or get a quick laugh) and meandering 'big hits' (Punchlines and gag pay offs) that don't land too hard.
>>86435850Oh yeah the whole thing with Anon being the "straight man" and how he always has a reaction to things. Yeah, I overdid that bit. Ironically I added more of those because I thought it'd balance out the absurdity lmao. I'll keep that in mind for the next fic
>>86433191In Mr Koro's case its because she dresses like a granny and doesnt flaunt her bits. Its why all the fanart that activates neurons is swimsuits since it lets her puppies breath.Also speaking of sex incarnate
How's your wip doing? Give us a sneak peek by doing that thing where you show the word count and hide some spicy text behind it.Bonus question: What fics have you been reading recently anon?
>>86437180Despite the universe's best efforts to murder the both of us, it's coming along.Bonus: A White December
>>86436817>>86280443We need a fic where Anon guides Mr. Koro towards the realm of sexiness >just streaming video games isn't doing it anymore for Korosan's numbers>As her concerned friend, Anon is afraid she might resort to being more risque during streams>So he preempts it by suggesting that Korone do it - in the hopes that she gets so embarrassed that she shuts down the idea entirely.>Cue Anon's horror as he discovers that Korone actually LIKES it
Mio's meaty and motherly mammaries in my mouth
>>86280395Longshoremanhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQnYQg6XInAElqtXNYfCU5eTvhflsWYc4h-UyUyNImlhZvZMgSl_I1dhLtJuKpScJmaC4pDruaJfXf0/pubTags: Marine, NSFWBased off of a friend's request
>>86437438Taking a wild guess here...The holofantasy/ cover high crossover?
>>86440983Yes
>>86440050This feels weirdly like a goodbye for a graduating chuuba fic.Suprised this isn't an entry for the NSFW part of the contest. Why the fuck did I suspect this was going to be wedgie bait and switch?
>>86441421The original idea I was given was "Marine has genuine love, but is still ashamed of her age," which to me sounded bittersweet, so that's kinda where I took itI didn't even realize there was a contest whoops
>>86438752>Korone overhears you saying she's not sexy at all and that she's like a granny>She starts seducing you on the company party and you fall for her advanced mature charms>then she bullies and edges you in bed until you are screaming she's the sexiest woman in the world>Still bullies orgasms out of you for good measure>end up a bit pussy whipped but very aware of Korosan's charms
>>86280443After jumping to an alternate timeline, Ame must bring myth together to ensure HoloEN gets its start in this timeline as well.Mori is a radio DJ.Kiara is an aspiring model.Ina is a mangaka.Gura is a shark mascot for a sushi restaurant.
>>86443796dunno why but 2 and 3 give me a weird idea where you get trapped into a weird time fissure while at the sea and Kobo goes from being a kid to being a twenty year old something (2) and 3 is when she gets older
>>86280443Accidentally falling dick-first into Mio's pussy.
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>>86444216>Go surfing or whatever one morning, waving bye to your neighbour as she takes her daughter Kobo to school>Get caught in a riptide at the beach and nearly fucking drown, decide that maybe today isn't the day so you go back home>Greet Kobo's mom as you happen to get home at the same time>She whirls around, looking like she's seen a ghost before freaking the fuck out as you realize that that's not her mom
>>86444216>Anon takes Kobo to the beach that makes you old
>>86425472"....one of the officers is in love with a gang member, another one is driving around, stabbing people with a sword, half of them also work at the strip club, a few of them have a gambling problem, and almost all of them have gone to the hospital, multiple times, because they don't wear seatbelts! Chief, l'll be honest- it's a miracle this city is still intact...."
>>86448170>"Well... at least it isnt Chicago"
>>86445802Shooting Star Press from the top turnbuckle and you land dick first into Pekora's tight rabbit hole. You cum inside her during the split-second you're in.
>>86447795I had a brainfart and i was gonna write "what if you were kobos's friend as a kid but when the fissure spits you she's an adult like you" but then i realized its called growing up.Oh and Kobo could molest you if you are a kid
>>86447795Did they both get sent to the beach that makes you old?
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>>86442839She'll work your dick in many ways, until it's really sore and you're begging her to stop
>>86453602>Korone using her fitness to ride you until the edge then squat over you as you beg for release>Bullies your Dick until she thinks its enough and sits on your Dick,starting the most degenerate ride of the Century>Fear for your balls+getting dommed+Hips for days+expert hag sex skills+edging+ need to preserve your legacy= the miracle nut is fired>So strong it retires the diying Star. It effortlessly impregnates korone 's old dusty egg. The last of its kind >She goes "ah" as you are shaking like a leaf after getting your methaphorical Essence drained>Korone remembers why she turned a new leaf after her bully years
>>86454849That's just the first part, she won't stop just because you're empty and soft.
>>86280443Your oshi holds you and tells you your WIPs are good enough.
>>86455077>Korone grinding you >"Neeh what kind of loser gets an unsexy granny pregnant huh? Were you so desperate? So anything goes huh? You just wanted to pass on those shitty genes ">Picks up the pace>"Now i have your loser genes inside of me~ You are making a baby with this sorry hag~">SPLURT>Eeeeh~ again?~ Theres nothing left for you to contaminante>*Korosan would later realize she can ovulate and make you put two More in there*Getting pussy whipped by Korosan because you trigger her bully instincts with your dumb comments
>>86456473This, but she's terribly protective of you because only she can bully you.
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>>86458800
Foxes are the Jews of kemono. They say "cunning like a fox" for a reason.
>>86461621I've heard many a folk tale of foxfolk preying on little unsuspecting human boys, draggin 'em to the forest, committing unspeakable acts! The thought of such a thing is so horrid to me, so I can be trusted to hang around the playground.
What is /wg/'s most iconic/popular/influential oneshot? It seems that most of the time when someone brings up a classic fic, it's a series. That makes a lot of sense, since their longer wordcount and extended running time means they get more chances to make their impression on the thread. But are there any oneshots that are on the same league as the well known franchises?>inb4 Shrunken Troubles
>>86462213Now THAT's a riveting question!I'd unironically say ST because of the memes it, but by that logical Paradise lost would also be the most influential oneshot.Aside from MY fics, I'd give the title to Petting your Fox or Exposure Theraphy, even thought Petting your fox didn't remain a OS.
>>86463084Meant for>>86462462
>>86462462I'd still say Omelas, it's technically a series but in all honesty parts 2 and 3 offer nothing and nobody talks about them
>>86459487Fubuki brapping a storm in the fan after a day of lazing around only to turn around and notice you were just entering the room
>>86462462Shrunken Troubles wasn't a one shot
>>86462462My one shots
>>86462462I think influential is going to depend on the individual author. I don't really think there's a single one-shot that the majority of /wg/ can point to and say "This." For me it's Kintsugi but for some else it might be who knows. Most popular I'd say is Girl of Emptiness. That one shows up in lists a lot.
>>86462213Do they also eat their liver when they get fed up with them?
>>86463283Probably because parts 2 and 3 involve magic.
>>86462462If you asked me to name one of the early oneshot abuse fics posted before I read /wg/ I would say Remembering how to love herThe collar/petplay trend was born out of Extrapedastrial
>>86280443Mio going absolutely apeshit on your dick, stupid style.
>sees youd word out
>>86472792Are you ok?
welp i just finished reading the series where fubuki grooms (you) and sheesh did that left me feeling depressed.
>>86472929>Fuwawa! i think he's having a stroker!>A dracula, Mocochan?!>Noeh! A Stroker! the one where brain goes bad!>Mocochan i think what ruffians do is a stroker...>Lets just call the ambulance!>BAU BAU!>BAU BAU!
>>86473732>>A dracula, Mocochan?!Here's your (You) you fucking faggot. I nearly spat out my tea.
>>86474505Shut up and write Cecilia, you german twat
>>86280443A fic in which the school's most notorious slut, Ayame, is out to get your virginity to finally cross your name off her list and fuck every single guy in the school.However, you deny her, leading to a bunch of shenanigans for around 6 or so chapters in which you learn that the town bycicle is actually a wholesome and funny woman, and that you were your cures for loneliness.
>>86477384I could never get into that fic. Like from a technical/prose standpoint it's great, I read it all in one sitting, don't get me wrong. But I'm a jaded fuck with 0 hope in women, and I just couldn't shake off the fact that a girl as ran-through as Ayame in that fic probably has explosive BPD, multiple plan B orbiters, and likely a couple of latent STDs. >it's fiction retardYeah... I couldn't suspend my disbelief.
>>86477384Hehe that was a funny ass fic. I should re read that.
>>86478260>But I'm a jaded fuck with 0 hope in womenwhat are you even doing in a fanfiction thread about vtubers
>>86478669I've been reading fanfic of some kind or another since like 2003, your nerd hobbies don't magically disappear when you grow older.
>>86478881yeah and 99% of the vtubers discussed in this thread are women.your doomer larp is as bad as your reading comprehension
>>86477384My only gripe is there's barely any femdom in it
>>86479152>he thinks you have to like women in order to love them
>>86478260I'm a terminal misogynist who will probably die terrified of intimacy, but that doesn't stop me from enjoying fluff and writing women that I would fall in love with. Isn't that what idols are for? They give us something to believe in.
>>86478260>that a girl as ran-through as Ayame in that fic probably has explosive BPD, multiple plan B orbiters, and likely a couple of latent STDs.>Our Cures but with a queen bitch instead of a lone bicycle.I'd read it.Would probably need a completely different chuuba.Maybe Kiara if you squint a lot and implement rrats? Bae? Choco?
>>86480582>BaeWatch streams. Also, your answer is Rushia.
>>86480582that wouldnt work unless it was one of those misery porn stories where you go "LOOK! THEY ARE SO FUCKED UP!" or you wrote it from the aspect of a slut getting love...which is what our cures is about and at that point its just the same with a different coat.
>>86481249I know Bae isn't a queen bitch, it's just that I'm running off of the same rrat logic that birthed rrat!Ayame >RushiaAnon... She was never a queen bee that had lesser women flocking around her...And I've now realized >plan B orbiters This wasn't what I thought it meant. >>86481444Hey, there's been thousands of high-school romance stories published in the world. What's the harm in another slut romance?
>>86482817Rushia definitely fits the ‘dozens of orbiters as a backup plan’ bill, seeing as she was cucking her husband with a guy who she was also cucking.
>>86484878Addendum - however she does not fit in with the idea of ‘a cute slut who you find out is a horrid head case’, since presumably even in reality she sold herself as a nice girl much like she did online. Which is like, a million times worse. Like you get with a whore you know what you’re getting into, but if she fakes being normal it’s another ball game.
>>86484878Yeah I thought plan B orbiters meant like beta women hanging around her for a crumb of the male attention the queen gets and not plan B if plan A falls through.Which is why I proposed Kiara as the first choice.
>>86480582Iroha because it would be hot to find out that the model student is actually a huge slut behind closed doors
>>86473098Welcome to the club!
>>86473098Why? It has a good ending, Anon elopes with Fubuki as soon as he’s of age and he probably still has time to put at least one kid in her. All’s well that ends well.
>>86489568I have this same line of thought but with Sora.The fucking Streetwear outfit dude, it's secret-slut incarnate
>>86490240The real tragedy is that they're not actually blood related.
>>86490240Nta but Kenji deserved better.>put one kid in herDid we read the same fic? Because Fubuki was infertile.
>>86490240ALS didnt deserve a good ending
>>86491290Fubuki's eggs are simply built different.
>>86498971Laplap Darkness
>>86498971call me noel because im jumping this shota
Call me crazy, but what if... just what if... someone writes a fic where a loli character (who has long been insecure about her loli-ness) suddenly gets fuller in all the right ways for one day
>>86491290>Did we read the same fic? Because Fubuki was infertile.I did read most of it with one hand on my dick so shitty details like that got edited out in my mind.
>>86501582this but flatties
>>86498971Need Lap smut..
>>86498971Sex with Femboy Laplus! The locks are all on his cock.
>>86501582Just write the loli fic you coward.
>>86503771seconding this and laying some bait so people get horny
All this sudden loli/flat discussion has got me thinking. What IS the best fic in the archive when it comes to that stuff?
>>86501582>>86503720>>86280443Cumflation fic but instead of going to their stomachs it makes lolis/flatties taller and bustier.Like bust one load into suisei and suddenly her boobs look like they were from that one concert ad.
>>86507810Lolicons need to step their game because toddlercons eat their inexistente lunch.Toddlercon has two fics (miko is awwright and that mococo one) to their name but i cant remember a single Loli fic aside from the Kobo one that isnt that great either
>>86508618So I guess I'll have to read flatty fics then..
Weather the storm
It was a nice dream, one I'm not sure I'm ready to wake up from
>>86514936We all have to wake up someday, Anon. But it doesn't mean the dream wasn't worthwhile. Far from it.
>>86504783/wg/'s lolicon citizens have been waiting for years to get something to uoh at, just imagine the riots if at the climax of the story the police rush in and ruin everything.
>>86507810There’s basically 0 cunny fics, you’d think Gura at least would have gotten some but chumpedophiles manage to disappoint even with this.I… think there was maybe a Luto fic way back in the day when she was a thing? I think maybe Fallenshadow got one green text? There’s just basically nothing. Truth be told there’s very few real cunnytubers (Laplus isn’t cunny btw) and fewer still this general would recognize.
>>86518565>Truth be told there’s very few real cunnytubers (Laplus isn’t cunny btw)You can turn anyone into cunny if you wish so
>>86518926Going from too old to breed to too young is the monkey's paw desperate hags deserve
>>86504992I'm surprised there hasn't been an incest fic with Laplus yet considering how much of a brocon she actually is
>>86519341Imagining her as an older sister is a step too far for many people.Also story wise imagining Lappy as your older sister kind of naturally ask some questions like 1) would you be some demon lord too, 2) Is she a failure onee-san due to the shackles etc?
>>86518926That is indeed one way to fix the dearth of 1X year old pussy, but at that point you’re going even more OOC than this place already gets if you make the chuuba a little girl from the start.
>>86519341That's exactly why I personally have lukewarm feelings about Lapucest. When you're dealing with taboo stuff like incest it should feel dangerous, you're being seduced by lust for the forbidden fruit. You should feel massive inner turmoil and the sister should either be in the same boat or be the succubus. Laplus feels too goofy to be taken seriously a succubus.
>>86520494>Laplus feels too goofy to be taken seriously a succubus>Laplus getting kicked out of her little brother's room (again) after she tried to seduce him away from his girlfriend (again).>HoloX knows she's serious about this whenever they have meetings because she doesn't dress it up in chuuni language, the slides straight up just say "I NEED TO FUCK MY BROTHER AND CHASE OFF THAT SKANK"
>>86520300I can't imagine anyone objecting to a fic exploring a chuuba's childhood because it'd be going too OOC. That just sounds silly to me.
>>86520494No but Laplus is borderline stalking her brother at times. That in itself can make an interesting story.>You go to a summer festival with your girlfriend>You swore you can spot a pair of distinct yet familiar horns sometimes among the crowd>Try to ignore it and brush it off because why would you think your older sister would be there>You feel a pair of eyes on you all the time while hanging out with your girlfriend>Laplus watches everything while silently seething.Bonus points for drama if your girlfriend is someone like Iroha or something
>>86520494The way she talks about it, aside from the marriage research when she was young, is that they're close but she plays up being more attached to weird people out for a laugh. The obvious route there is Laplus doing a whole "what if..I put..my minecraft bed..next to my brothers..Haha just kidding...unless..?" thing but not being able to get it out of her head.
Bump
Good riddance to rancid garbage, can't wait for the other 17 to go.
>>86520494i'm feeling the role reversal of a demon little sister being much stronger and feeling the need to protect her brother from scandelous women
>>86524313>demon little sisterBut Anon...Laplus is the onee-san.
>>86524186Don't taint my wife with posts like this
>>86524393Lappland + Towa's clothes + toned tummy is a great combo
How's your contest wip coming along anon?
>>86526267It's not!
>>86526267It's already pretty big but I'm having trouble with how to exactly end it.
>>86524313>>86524393A big sister that's really small is even better.
>>86526888>La+ is the big sister, but she always wanted to be treated as a little sister.>Now her brother has outpaced her in leaps and bounds when it comes to height. >People are even mistaking her for his "imouto">Deep down, Lap-chan likes it
>>86526267It's certainly coming along. I can see the finish line...
>>86526267How short is too short that it won't be accepted? I'm afraid I won't hit 1k words.......
>>865289461k words is the absolute minimum.5k words if you want to have more than a snowball's chance in hell of winning.
>>86529049eh? wouldn't that put me in the long works contest rather than the short works?
>>86529374No.
>>86529493explain
>>86529550I'm just making shit up and you're gullible enough to be confused by it.
>>86529613i curse you
>>86518565lolicons are an insufferably loud minority. They always have been ever since the inception of /a/.That's why they were always tolerated, because when push comes to shove a lot of them take off their mask and run away in order to not be branded a pedo. Its why you can have 10 guys being "lolicons", then 5 of those will run away, 4 cant be bothered to do shit and the last one is the one that might draw something (because writing sometimes gives them guilt since they are forced to recognize its a little girl)
>>86528946The rules say ~1k words, so you can work with somewhat below that too if your story is complete. But it might be lesser in the eyes of some, since the highest prestige works in /wg/ are not short stories but series, and smut long enough to comfortably jerk off to while reading.
>>86528946As much as this general has a word count bias, in the short works category what matters is impact.You're going to have a better chance with 1000 words of pure gas than 3000 words of ass.
>>86529788>the last lolicon shall write the first /wg/ loli ficLike pottery.
>>86529788Lolicons on /a/ are obnoxious because they, like many fringe groups, sank into the purity spiral and started REEEing at you for fapping to characters like Megumin because that makes you an ironic/fake lolicon, even if you never claimed to be a lolicon in the first place.
>>86425472Although what about Mister Pineapple?It's not as bad as MISTER JELLO but man
>>86530806Baked. Migrate when ready.
>>86492917>Can only get pregnant from her true loveGod, what a slut...
