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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy.
You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below:
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>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>87707490
(Where we discussed big-boobed Towa, Raora, breeding Fuwawa, true love with Chad, and Banjo techniques.)

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Post em if you got em
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Story Recap. There were two stories posted last thread.

A Chance Encounter By The Moonlight >>87767550
Tags: Fall2024, Short/SFW, Amelia Watson, Bloodborne AU, no dialogue, Ambiguous Ending

Mines Weeper>>87864798
Tags: GirlDM, wedgie
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CONTEST STORY ANCHOR

We’re currently hosting the /wg/ Fall/Halloween 2024 Contest, a sp00ky contest for a sp00ky season! Have a story to submit to the contest? Reply to this post. Details of the contest can be found at: rentry.org/wgoctober
Please tag your entries with "Fall2024" and the appropriate category (Short/SFW, Long/NSFW, etc). All entries must be submitted by the 27th of October.
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I had a weird dream last night where I told the thread I was remixing one of my popular stories and was going to publish it with a new plot. Everyone then jumped on me and started calling me an attention whore and retard and the reply quotes were like 50 replies long. Like everyone in this thread was just livid with me at the idea
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>>87945562
Holy shit, are finally getting Gura's Cumflation Adventures remix?
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>>87945562
It IS a retarded idea, announcing you're going to do something instead of just doing it. You're a retarded attention whore at heart.
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>>87946118
:(
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>>87945562
Yeah, I thought the holocalypse reboot was controversial too.
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>>87947544
Consume the Chloe shroom
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>>87945562
Go ahead, call me a faggot, can't unjork your peenits
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>>87947544
If you have Chloe as your girlfriend, and she gets possessed by the mushrooms growing on her, then have sex with the mushroom zombie.. Is that technically cheating?
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>>87948927
your striking questions that are making me wonder if SD's plot twist is that she wasn't cucking Anon the whole time, but making him hallucinate the whole thing and the "porn" is just him experiencing the sex in mild moments of lucidity
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How much of writing skills and sensibility when writing smut crosses over with writing serious stories?
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>>87949539
>Chloe was actually Anon's first girlfriend the entire time.
>She was merely using the skills she gained in her life as an assassin in order to trap (in)famous porn actor (and her old boyfriend) Anon in cycles of guilt while teasing him with the recordings.
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>>87949820
>This weird dream again, deja vu!
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>>87949673
Could you rephrase that?
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>>87949820
>Chloe was the scumbag protagonist the whole time
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>>87950383
If i could write sex well, could i write non sex stuff well too?
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>>87950992
Why not? There's plenty of good stories in the archive that combine both
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>>87949539
>NTR fic
>look inside
>no NTR
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Gentlemen, my eyes have recently been opened to the appeal of free-use maids who cannot stop you, their master, from creampieing them while they're doing their house chores until you get them pregnant. Whereupon you will continue to creampie them some more until they sire your bastards and repeat the entire process.
Therefore, I humbly request fics of Aqua being put in such a situation. Or, if such a fic already exists, then I humbly request its title.
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>>87951120
Netorase is an entirely valid form of NTR.
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>>87950992
Depends on the reasons you write them well.
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>>87951380
But in the proposed plot twist it would not be real.
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>>87951206
Can you enslave non kemonos? Is Aqua human?
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>>87951730
There was no mention of slaves, kemonos, or any sort of racial differences. It's just wanting the gamer maid chuuba in the role of being a dump for the house master.
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>>87951730
>Can you enslave non kemonos?
Why not? Kemonos give birth to 4 to 8 babies per pregnancy. It's this slovenly trait of theirs that makes them so good to enslave. But with humans, it's more of a power trip kink than anything else. To reduce your fellow human to the state of a glorified onahole, a baby factory, is a high only patricians can chase.
Let's just say the Anon here is a Draka from the S.M. Stirling novels or whatever. They enslave anyone who isn't a Draka, human or not
>Is Aqua human?
Yes. I wouldn't mind if she's not, though.
>>87951981
Also yes.
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>>87951730
Anon, she's a human.
It's not slavery, it's indentured servitude.
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>>87951730
Aqua can be a cat kemono
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>>87951206
I got a plot for you already
>Aqua and some other Holos go on vacation, but they made the mistake of bringing along Ame
>time travel shenanigans happen. They all get transported to some vague timeline or alternate timeline (maybe Europel where indentured servitude is the norm; the rule of Droit du Seigneur is in full force
>Duke Anonson is about to get the first taste of his realm's virgins (who are all his maids) but Aqua lands smack dab in his bedroom
>he takes a liking to Aqua's "oriental" features and goes about with training her into becoming a maid (i.e. fucking her brains out at every god-given opportunity)
>she tries her best to resist but it's Aqua so it doesn't really take long for her to get knocked up
>turns out his noble friends also got their own free-use maids (every other Holo who came along for the vacation party)
>orgy ensues
Tweak it if you want
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>>87952341
Or how about you clowns stop trying to insert your shit into someone else's prompt? It's really straight forward.
>Aqua the bumbling onion is in a house where she cannot stop the master's sexual advances, and has to endure trying to perform her cleaning duties while being railed, groped, and filled with jizz.
>Other maids before her have become pregnant, gave birth, and now continue their duties while their children are raised to also serve the house
That's the deal. Simple and clean. No fucking shoehorned slavery for nothing but edge points, no changing the main requested chuuba to some kemono chuuba that wouldn't be there for any reason besides the fact she has animal ears and to fulfill more shoehorned racism, Aqua is a fucking human, end of story.
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/wg/ yearns for the coffee plantation.
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/wg/ and beating a dead horse name a more iconic duo
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>>87952977
Then Aqua goes through all the hoops to avoid having a baby and meet a similar fate as the other maids (squeezing the "yucky stuff" out of herself, doing all sorts of dubious contraceptives, trying feebly to resist in vain). But with the master being so tireless, so persistent in his fucking, she knows it's only a matter of time before she ends up wtih a kid (too pregnant to escape the manor). So she needs to get the hell out of dodge before he manages to knock her up for good...
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>>87953412
We haven't bested the dead horse enough!
What about another twist to the slavery/racism thing.
Kemonos breaking their chains and reversing the order! A harem of horny hags seizing the means of reproduction and enslaving their masters for the greater good!
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>>87951415
?
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a same fagging retard yearns force his shit prompt on everyone for the umpteenth time
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Need to see strong women get dicked down by frail men.
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>>87954084
It's not me
t. >>85820136
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>>87952977
You'll have to live with people being inspired by prompts and posting about it. Noone is taking away the ability to discuss or use the original prompt, and fruitless meta complaints are worse than any fotm topic.
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>>87954447
Strong, tall, openly domineering chuuba with her shy and reserved bf that becomes a completely needy sub behind closed doors.
Lots of jokes from your friends about how she 'has you by a leash, or 'wears the pants in the relationship', but they have no clue what it's actually like when you're alone.
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>>87953763
>seizing the means of reproduction
You're a witty cunt I'll give you that
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>>87955850
If that's what I think it is I removed it because I misread what >>87951730 had said.
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>>87953763
Is it really a dead horse if there was only 1 (one) fic actually written with the idea?
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>>87957155
Yes. If it happened more organically no one would bat an eye at it, but when they try to railroad unassociated prompt, it gets annoying.
>>87956438
If they were actually inspired they would write about it, instead of trying to force the element onto other things. That's just stifling creativity when you just throw your hands up and allow whatever flavor the month seep into anything and everything. That's bitch mode, be less of a bitch.
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>>87957811
The stray cat has finally found a home, good. Now I don't have to hear it mewling out in the street at all hours of the night.
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>>87957155
Considering we have people self admiting to spamming the thread with their smut ideas? Yes.
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>>87953412
Shrunken Troubles and Paradise Lost
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>>87958032
its your neighbours cat and it thinks you are also her owner.
no other option except marrying this weirdo, im afraid
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>>87956438
Oh come off it. This argument about discussion keeps coming up for a reason. People here need to more creative and willing to engage with the original prompt rather than try and bend it so that they have the same story told to them. There are tons of kemono chuubas and noble + maid is a classic trope. There is 0 reason to bend Aqua to fit something else entirely.
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>>87945020
Sufficiently-sized hat
>87945045
>>87945107
>87945141
Unattractively small hat
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>>87958858
Making fun of Shion's tiny hat! Laughing at her accidental mana discharge! Taunting her for how little magic it produces!
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>>87954447
>>87956512
How about two strong women? That would make it even more impressive.
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>>87945071

>Be Mogojyan's bf
>You like her
>It almost feels like you've known her for longer than you met her...
>One night, you recall a night of drinking with a normie...
>She was your ex.
>And...
>She had almost the exact same sort of mannerisms as Mococo...
>You wake up and see that Mococo has been having headaches.
>She remembered dating you long before even meeting you.
>Those weren't dreams...
>They were real!
>You try to talk to her about it.
>But she snaps at you.

"LEAVE ME ALONE!"

>You instead walked over and called her by the name of the girl in your dreams..."

"AKIRA!!!""

>Mococo grasps her head in pain as she begins to scream.
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>>87959274
This, but it's just Noel and Mori who can't stop catering to the requests of a young, adorable, prime shota.
>You want me to get on all fours? Sure thing my dude! But is the bag over my head like, really really necessary?
>Getting pulled by a collar is no problem! I'm the strongest after all!
>In reality, you're just trying to buy yourself enough time to run.
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>>87960069
It might be neat to think about the idea that some organization, or someone keeps erasing your memories of one another for some convoluted reason.
>You and mococo have worked to uncover some conspiracy that took something from the both of you in the past
>Separately you don't have all the pieces, but together you pose a problem
>Killing either of you is out of the question, so the solution is to keep you away or strangers to one another
>Regardless of the methods, you two keep finding your way back into each others lives and hit it off every time
>Erasing memories and losing time will fuck both of your heads
Are you both bad enough dudes to uncover the plot and pursue your own happily ever after? Can there be a future together for you both after such an ordeal?
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Are indie vtuber fanfics okay to post here?
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>>87962214
yea
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>>87962214
Yup, go ahead.
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>>87962354
thanks

I am close to finishing part 3 of my Lyrica fanfic. In the meantime, please read parts 1 and 2:

part 1: https://archiveofourown.org/collections/LyrCus/works/59586490
part 2: https://archiveofourown.org/collections/LyrCus/works/59646172
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>>87961549
This, except you're a short adult who knows what he wants and tames these 6ft or taller (they need the buff) women.
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>>87962570
if you want these archived remember to tag the anchor, add a title and some tags
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>>87962744
what's anchor
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>>87962800
at the top of the thread there's an story anchor. basically tag your post there if you want your fics to go into the archive
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>>87962895
Oh. Ok. It's my first time in this thread thanks
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>>87962895
Oh also, how to promt?
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>>87953805
NTA but I think he means this.
There are many aspects to a story. There's prose, storytelling, dialogue, plot, scenes, etc.

Someone might have very good, quippy and witty dialogue, but an average prose.
Someone might have a beautifully descriptive prose, but their dialogues lack.

In the same vein, writing smut and a story are different. Maybe you can write very vivid smut that makes you horny just from reading it, but not so much the actions that lead to the smut.
And maybe you can write a killer story, but your smut is dry.

Really I'd recommend to just read some stories from the archive with a critical approach; Did you enjoy it or not? What was good about it? What was bad about it?

>>87963291
Same as stories, but you reply to the prompt anchor.

Keep in mind that prompts are not requests, it's more like dropping an idea and hoping someone picks it up.
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>>87945071
Nenechi tries to do her multiplication tables (Of course, she cannot do this. She is Nenechi)
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>>87962570
Are you looking for any feedback on these?
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>>87965245
yeah
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Up, down, up, down...
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>>87962570
>>87965417
Alright, so your overall prose is rather literal and comes off as stiff in areas. Your descriptions of actions lacks movement. Think of it like this, you know how in cartoons where they cycle through the daily routine of a person? It starts with a shot of them slouching out of bed, then them in front of the mirror brushing their teeth, a shot at the breakfast table, etc. All without much flourish, but in the case of the cartoon, that's intended to showcase the nonentity of it. That doesn't work incredibly well with written prose, so I would think about how you can add a little more color to the actions and thoughts your characters are having.

Since this is a shipfic you had the desire to make, I won't really touch on the worldbuilding and such, since it's not super necessary for what your goals might be. I will say that the idea of individuals who have longer lifespans than the rest of the world and their own journey to find their place in it is always one that intrigued me. There's a lot of neat things you do with it.

I can't really speak to the character depictions since I'm not familiar, but to someone in the dark the kinks kinda some outta nowhere. Maybe a little more buildup would help it feel more natural.

I liked the background stories, and it might be neat if you incorporate their unique abilities more into your story.
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>>87968066
Thanks. will add that to the list of of tips that I have received so far.
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>>87962703
I love tall women, all holos should be buffed to 6ft+
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>>87971433
A few can easily pass for it in your fic
>Botan
>Nerissa
>Liz
>Coco
>Lui
Long as someone like Luna isn't almost as tall as any of them in the same breath, no one is really gonna think too hard on how a particular chuuba isn't the established womanlet size by JP standards.
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>>87962800
Check out the top part of the archive with all the info, it's worth it. You can learn a lot here inbetween everything else!
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>>87956512
What holos could you see in that role? It's a great idea but I feel like most of them have a cool-façade too thin for friends getting it so wrong. Maybe the impression could be more surface level and less in focus?
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>>87971433
Even Gura and Luna and Bilbo?
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>>87972740
I mean the perspective that your friends have of her, rather than what her fellow chuubas think. Basically a scenario where you go out with some guys to do guy stuff, and they only get little glimpses of your dynamic between you and your gf, one sided and of a limited perspective. Maybe she even plays it up to tease you when you complain about it to her.

As far as who, I feel like Ririka or Calli have a 'cool' façade that you'd think was real from a short outside perspective. Especially so if you and your group of friends were more of the nerdy type.
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>>87973146
Yeah, I can see Mori teasing you in public while knowing that it will have pleasantly unpleasant consequences at home. I guess I'm just not very interested in the dramatic irony of the friends' perception because the part at home has a lot of fun possibilities.
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>>87972825
Imagine dommy mommy Luna...
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>>87973784
>"Dude, get home, NOW!"
>You sigh, wave your friends goodbye
>Poor anon, his girl has him like a dog!
>Mori ordered a pizza, and froze up when it was time to talk over the phone. Needs you to do it and also to get it from the delivery man and to comfort her as apologizes for dragging you into this.
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>>87975663
The actual testicle crusher.
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question for a fic I'm writing: how far do you guys think Kiara would get in DS1 in ~90 minutes?
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>>87976131
She'd already be done.
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>>87975663
7 foot tall Luna or Miko would not be survivable
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>>87975766
>>87976731
What does Queen Luna have against my balls and/or life?
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>>87975707
I was thinking about her getting punished, but that's too cute.
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>>87976760
You insulted her policies regarding lifting the import tax on all candies. You called them "shortsighted, even shorter than the stature of that battalion she calls her knights." You've earned yourself some correction for that one.
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>>87976131
she could get the zweihander and try it because its german
then breeze through to the gargoyles, or trap herself in the skelly cave
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>>87977562
Luna would have a fantasy torture dungeon....
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>>87971433
she's not particularly tiny, but the thought of a Shiori towering over me really redefines how I'd look at her
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>>87979146
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>>87978608
I also like the idea of her throwing you into a wrestling ring and surprising you with her mastery of martial arts. Like she will bend your ankle over your head like you were a balloon animal, and go full waku waku on your ass.
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>>87979233
My virginity still shivers, until I remember it's Shiori.
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>>87945071
For a brief moment of your childhood, you had a best friend whom you'd always remember, Suichan, the neighbor's daughter, being your first and only friend until you turn 12. In a sick twist of fate, Suichan passes away in an accident.
4 years later, your mother divorces your dad, and now you have to welcome your new little sister, Mikochi.

Mikochi thinks you're the worst and wants you to die, but for some reason, she can't help but peep at you when you shower or when you undress. One day, she was a vision of a blue haired girl watching over her, and as she panics, she's possesed by Suichan's ghost!

She can't let such a great man go to waste, and so asks to borrow Mikochi's body so she can be all clingy with her (now) onii-chan. Mikochi's spirit constantly vomits and undoes all the progress Suichan makes towards experiencing your love.
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>>87980878
So wait, how does Miko come into the picture? Is she the lovechild between one of your parents and the supposed affair? How old is she? How has the 12 year old ghost of Suisei awakened to puberty and her libido? I think being clingy and lovey dovey is one thing, and it's comical to make Miko lose her lunch over it.
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>>87945071
A fic from the archive with an added Fubuki sex scene.
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>>87981936
Which fic would benefit from a Fubuki sex scene?
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>>87982055
All of them. I really wish Fucking Fubuki in the Ass had a Fubuki sex scene...
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>>87981513
Miko is just some girl, who after accidentally speaking perfect latin, summoned a ghost long trapped in limbo.
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>>87982055
I think Fox Family Christmas should have had another Fubuki and Miyuki having sex together scene
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Any good painal fics?
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>>87982164
Get fact checked nerd, there is Fubuki sex in that fic.
>>87982691
You're not looking to add anything new at all! You're just being selfish for more fubuki sex.
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>>87982055
Meat Is Murder
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>>87982164
Sorry, I'll add one next time
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>>87982055
Which fic would be made worse by a Fubuki sex scene?
Might be I Thought You Wanted To Dance
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>>87986468
Uhhh... geez, that's a difficult question. Maybe Our Cures...?
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>>87986468
The elven border unless it was a fic about kemono's drinking cum that's it
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>>87945071
kronii and you make a bucket list before ending it all since you two are irony poisoned doomers that have no faith int he world.
which ends with you two enjoying life and falling in loveif you feel spicy it can end in a double suicide
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>>87982964
We don't really have those...
Closest in concept is something like "Helping Friend" and even that is kind of distant form the concept.
>>87987991
No, I have a better ending. You both fall in love and promise to turn your lives around... After one last maccas run. Then you get selened by a truck and Kronii has to live with that promise even with you dead.
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>>87989164
>maccas
Aussie spotted
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>>87982055
>Fubuki's Cousin
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Tell me, Anons. What do you expect a Yandere AZKi to even be like?
And while we're at it, what are the hottest things about her?
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>>87987142
I mean if I remember right one of the proposed Our Cures sequels was about the relationship between Ayame and Anon getting shaken up by Anon cheating with a gal after suspecting Ayame of doing the same while both of them were in college.
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>>87979146
Giving Shiori the body of an Amazon is like giving a chimp a gun
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>>87993272
I don't know. If she put a gun to my head and told me to think it up, I imagine she would be sorta like a seemingly harmless fan of (You) at first. Be it for something not extra out of the ordinary for you, or something that everyone knows you for. She is just plain enamored by everything you are. She would try to play it cool at first if you ever interact, but on the inside she might be exploding and making all sorts of plans in her head based off an innocent interaction. She could use her supernatural sense of direction and deduction to pinpoint your location at almost any given point in the day, making it simple to meet you there "coincidentally". All in all it might just be a series of small interactions but they eventually start weird you out in the sense that she is somehow everywhere you go. She wouldn't want to lock you in her basement or something, just encourage you in the most unsettling and overbearing way.
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>>87986468
>I Thought You Wanted To Dance
If Fubuki let him hit then went 'actually I'm not looking for a relationship right now' and the rest of the fic played out the same Anon might have fucking killed someone.
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>>87993272
My ideal Yandere Azki is a cyberpunk hologram data woman that acts like my navigator but also obsessively filters every mail i get, hacks women near me to send pictures of my dick and violently masturbates while putting the speaker on max volume when im on a bar so no woman ever gets close.
And then she lovebombs me and is genuinely helpful and chill, its just fucking crazy when it comes to another woman being around
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>>87993272
I'm with that other Anon. Azki would be the type to be completely head over heals. Completely supportive and believing you to have no flaws. In that sense she's a traditional yandere in that she's possessive and guards you. It's not your fault that these sluts keep flocking around you, flies are attracted to honey after all. Azki will just have to take care of them, don't worry.
>hottest thing about her.
Her ability to slide from seiso to minx flawlessly.
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>>87997451
So kinda like pic related?
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>>87997451
>>87997803
I want Azki to be the lady in my head who calls me studmuffin.
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>>87997803
Yes but make it actually work like im saying.
Hell make it so anon kinda seems aloof but then he goes
>"What are you doing to my wife?"
And your visor starts bombarding You with Azki heart eyes.png and Azkicondombreaking.mp4
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>>87993272
Personal bias.
Diva in a committed relationship that awakens to obsession/lewdness (ala the cg set by berull) and breaks her old relationship to be with (You).
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>>87998165
>Get captured by space pirates who take your run-down little hauler
>They're arguing about what to do with your ship when one suggests just scrapping it
>"Hey! My wife is on that ship!"
>The pirates are confused because they scanned it and saw no other life forms, nor is it big enough for someone to hide in
>Even moreso when the ships lights all flash pink for a second
>"...and now she on yours."
>Cue AZKi cutting the life support to the bridge and taking control
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Ill be honest murderyandere doesnt work for me.
Like i love it when they are mentally ill but the whole "she becomes a superkiller" is kind of a dealbreaker in a story that doesnt fully embrace that logic.
Its much more interesting to me when Yandere is skirting that line where you go "She's not hurting anyone..maybe sticking my dick on crazy isnt a bad idea" or "She's kind of freaking me out but She's not doing anything illegal... She's just weird...wait why am i hard?"
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>>87999046
In fairness the murder/stab type yandere does have a bias here since it does need something to distinguish it from the 'menhera' archetype (for this fandom specifically) .
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dozo

I'm putting a wet cat in my next fic
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>>87999046
I think it's more interesting to show her push the bounds of her control and manipulation in a more realistic manner.
A long, slow escalation where your moral boundaries are at odds with the pure, obsessive, somehow erotic display of affection she demonstrates that push the boundaries of what she can get away with. Culminating in a final act showing you were never in control of it, and she was molding your feelings for her in the palm of her hand the entire time.
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>>87994394
i think the bigger consequence is not being taken remotely seriously or having your boundaries respected ever again (same as she always is but now you can't fend her off)
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>>88005029
Uwa... Giant Shiori's sweaty goth titties suffocating me while she brainwashes me with her yapping.
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>>88005417
>"Hey, didya know that King Victor Emmanuel III of Italy was only five feet tall? And that his wife was 6 feet tall?"
>Shiori I can't fucking breathe
>"am I your tall queen? Can I be your tall queen if you're my short king?"
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>>88007388
Shiihs my belooled
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>>88005774
I'm not short, she's just 2 metres tall...
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>>87979233
I'm a DFCfag but I've always thought that there's something absolutely magical about Shiori's tits. Her outfit compliments them nicely too. She and Sakamata are my favorites in Hololive's heavyweight division.
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>>87971433
I love to IMAGINE, all holos should be under 150cm
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>>88009693
Chloe's height would be pretty perfect for the taller holos
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Up
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>>88009231
Its the tasteful sag and her pale skin
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Why is the process of writing
SO
DAMN
SLOW?!
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>>88012074
Good things take time.
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>>87986468
Probably Fucking Fubuki in the ass. Unlike what that other Anon said, I believe the delicate and intricate storytelling would've been tainted by a sex scene wedged in between. The premise was pristine, the goals of the characters as well, -but- the ultimate goal of the story was not sex. A sex scene of any kind, like one where you fuck Fubuki in the ass, would'de undoubtedly been detrimental.
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>>88012074
Yeah, you're right chief
I swear to God, if I finish this piece...
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>>88015354
meant for >>88012919
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>>88003450
Dozo!
Personally I'm considering the banana
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Uppy up!
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Dozo
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>>88019719
Would Marine get jealous if you doted on a mini Kuma-Marine while she was nearby
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>>88020033
Yes, 100%. She would be particularly petulant since they have the same face.
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Rise
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>>87994394
Giving biboo the body of an amazon is giving a 5 year old a flamethrower. Throw a little chaos into the mix....
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>>88022603
What would she do with that kind of body?
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>>88022767
If the GTA streams are any indication, a lot of going around beating the shit out of people in hopes of starting a fight, for one...
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>>88022767
She's going to collect the biboo tax, personally.
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>>87945071
Koyori has finally done it! She's created an aphrodisiac that causes a person to experience impossible attraction and pleasure with their soulmate!
She tries it on herself, going on a feral frenzy on her husband. Then, he wishes to try it as well, but he's normal.
Strange... It should work! In fact, the effect is supposed to last for 24 hours or more. The next day, she and her husband cross paths with Lui, and Anon seems to have trouble keeping it together. When Lui smiles, he grunts like he's about to do her right there and then.
The realization sets in, and wanting to test her theory, she sneaks some of her aphrosidiac into Lui's drink or food.

Sure enough, the experiment works. Soulmates become irresistible to each other, and she watches as it unravels.
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>>88023686
That doesn't make sense. How is Anon her soulmate but he's not hers? It's a two way street. There's either the concept of having multiple soulmates, thus the mixture would still make him want to rail Koyori, or you're just trying to make a cocktail of misery.
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>>88024699
>he's not hers
*She's not his
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>>88024699
I guess that depends on your definition of soulmate. Mine is attached solely to 'True Love'. You can perfectly find your true love only to find it's unrequited, because while in this context Anon is perfect for Koyori, she isn't perfect for him.
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>>88024944
That still seems like it's stretching the concept of True Love to be something tragic. I think Koyori's experiment would make more sense if it worked off compatibility instead. She can calculate the effects and chemical synergy between two people, and her aphrodisiac would have it work between two people who carry the highest chemical compatibility within a close proximity.
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>>88026004
NTA but True Love doesn't need to be stretched to be tragic. Romeo and Juliet comes to mind
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>>88026004
Sorry Koyori, your husband settled for you because Lui hadn't come around before
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>>88024944
>>88026004
I think the issue here is the term soulmate, which is tied to stuff like "the red string of fate" as a concept.
Now if you were to talk love then yeah, that's a different concept because there you can talk about compatibility and "true love" without blurring the lines and you can remit to the more traditional idea of "love is something that needs to be nurtured and cared for".
I like Soulmate stuff but that's kind of draconian in the sense of "this is the best, the rest is a downgrade" and is less romantic about the idea of growing it together with a person after the old flame has died down or finding another love that makes you realize the corruption in the one you have etc.

In this case, chemical attraction could work for the fic, or a direction where physical attraction to Lui IS higher but in the end he goes "i just love Koyori more".
Sidenote: I think a fic where you are forced to nurture the flame of love with someone you used to hate could be really cool im so tired of "actually we were in love all along!"
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>>87945071
You lost a bet with your bro Gigi and now you have to huff her sweaty spats while she's still wearing them(that's what you would have asked for if you won)
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>>88030016
forgot pic
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>>88030016
What does Gigi smell like?
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>>88029388
I think your idea could make a more compelling story out of it. There could be a good lesson for Koyori in there about how two people do not need to be 100% compatible to make something work between them. History, compromise, and stability can trump a simple carnal attraction every time. I also think the cuckheads who just wanted to see Koyori be sad can go fuck themselves.
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>>88031942
Hey, fuck you. I want my melancholic lost love fic
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>>88031942
we CAN have two cakes yknow? i wouldnt mind reading a misery fiest as long as it was well made and didnt rely sorely on doomposting
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>>88032040
No fuck you cuckerman. That fic was gonna make Koyori watch as her man ravages Lui, and not even by his own complete free will.
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>>88029388
The prompt is trying to science-fy something inherently irrational. Soulmate as a term is a love that crosses into the realm of the metaphysical, hence the use of the word "soul", It is the same idea - a love that is immutable and eternal, perhaps even cyclical. There's a reason Match-Made skirted around that with the bureaucracy and algorithm and even then it was flawed Something like how Koyori's drug makes those "genetically compatible" attracted to each other or someone attracted to their "best genetic mate" that might go down easier if you ignore the eugenics implications. Like in the manga Sore wa Totsuzen, Unmei no Aite ga.
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>>88032435
You can't have either fic because nobody here actually releases fics, we're all just stuck in WIP hell.
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>>88032982
that's not true! some of us dont release fics because our cats fuck off for days and then come back unscather and we are also stuck in actual hell, like real hell, like the hell from the Bible with THE DEVIL (TM)
im not making it to the contest but i got my mojo back so this is getting released SOMEDAY
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we need a sequel to coco's eggs where she lays more eggs
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>>88032532
Koyori is a woman of science! Watching another man grind her husband's pelvis to dust means nothing in the pursuit of knowledge!
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>>88032982
What's hell about it? I'm having fun.
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>>88034182
this reminds me of koyori getting jealous at robokoyo.
that sparked some fun discussion
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>>88033783
Agreed, but this time they should be laid into her via the ovipositor of a giant spider.
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>>88035869
woooow you are SO funny! good job!
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>>88035869
I'd settle for a cockroach. Spiders give me the creeps.
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>>88030096
Purely natural girlsmell. Maybe a hunt of a floral deodorant if you catch her early enough in the day but by lunch it's overwhelmed by the fragremce.
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>>88031594
Like a gremlin running in the summer heat all day
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>>88036212
Cockroaches... just don't carry the same menace factor as a giant spider. We'll have to agree to disagree.
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>>88033783
I want a sequel where Coco teaches your children how to hunt by having them chase you down like a pack of little flying raptors, and they have to avoid you tickling them
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>>88036569
That's a flash game not a fanfic
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>>88036467
I mean, getting hunted by a something like a bug is inherently terrifying. I guess I'm biased towards spiders because of my personal phobias. I've seen those Flare bug animations and they were pretty good, solidified my love of cockroaches, instead of those that just make something that 'looks' like a bug.
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>>88030016
Can I eat my bro's sweaty, hairy pussy afterwards?
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>>88040103
Dude....
That would be SO gay!
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>>88041351
I would feel like a giant faggot plapping my bro Gigi's shapely behind, too.
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>>88039236
>Flare bug animations
Wuh-huh? You've piqued my interest there. Have you got any links?
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>>88023686
Koyori is a woman of science.
Clearly she needs a bigger sample size and needs to know what happens if she drugs up all of HoloX with it for comparison.
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>>88042531
In a cruel twist of fate, Lui's perfect partner would be Koyori. Also Chloe X Iroha.
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>>88044025
She can suck me
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>>88033495
Oh hey, good to know your cat's okay brattanon.
Whatcha cooking?
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>>88049147
thanks. cat is a bit of a diva
all im gonna spoil is that someone recently mentioned a thing i already wrote as dialogue and i went "MOTHERFUCKER! I CAME UP WITH THAT! NOW EVERYONE IS GONNA THINK I STOLE IT".
Of course its autumn themed, even if im not making it to the contest
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>>88049373
Is it really stealing is it's all anonymous?
After all, I am the one who wrote all the fics in the archive, even YOURS.
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>>88049847
>is it stealing
yes! because its all on my mind, i just havent thought about it
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>>88049847
You wrote Paradise Lost?
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>>88051489
Yeah, word by word.
I also wrote your favorite fic, the one you hate the most, and I unwrite your WIPs at night.
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>>88051732
It's an honor, Mr. Milton
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>>88049373
>someone recently mentioned a thing i already wrote as dialogue and i went "MOTHERFUCKER! I CAME UP WITH THAT! NOW EVERYONE IS GONNA THINK I STOLE IT".
The only thing I can think of is those brainrot bumps so the question is...
Is this going to be a brainrot fic?
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>>88056932
wouldnt you like to know brainrotboy?
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>>88057419
Hey, could you please include the word "poggers" and "skibidi" in your fic somewhere? For me, please? Thank you :)
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>>87945071
Ayame finally takes you back to her home village to meet her parents, and it's the worst fucking experience of your life.
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>>88057419
Finally the ultimate battle.
Koseki Bijou and Hakos Baelz going Gyatt 4 Gyatt, going Rizz 4 Rizz.
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>>88062686
... worst because you've been drained of so much cum that you can barely move your head, much less crawl somewhere Ayame and the other oni women wouldn't be able to fuck you into oblivion
>"N-No, please... stop sucking my dick already!"
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>>87945071
>A man sits next to you in a bar. Low jazz music's in the air. Barely anyone else is sitting at the bar. The bartender's just wiping a few glasses.
>"Why the long face, friend? Don't tell me you fell in love with a chuuba too."
>You stare at him for a while, dumfounded. How did he know?
>"Because you look like you lost a bet," he says, before handing you a glass of whiskey on the rocks. "A pretty bad one from the looks of it."
>"You said it, man..." you answer.
>"That's how it is in this game," he says, before taking up his own glass of whiskey. "Cat and mouse. You watch, she performs. She catches your heart, you lose."
>"That's a pretty sad way of putting it," you reply.
>"It is. This ain't anime, kid."
>There's something about this man's self-assuredness that ticks you off. "What are you getting off on, anyway? Mind your own business, will ya?"
>"Relax. We're on the same boat, you and I. That's why I came here. I got something that'll do the trick."
>"...What?"
>You're thinking that this man's just bullshitting you, but there's something about him that you can't help but wonder: "What's he getting at?" and "How does that help you get the chuuba you love?"
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>>88064775
>>88062686
>Can I have my arm back?
>Hmm... No
>Aww...
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>>88067324
Now this is a particularly tall Shiori
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Can't think of a prompt for Laplus but this picture is sexy
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>>88070259
>>87945071
>Laplus enters a goth/emo phase after hanging out too much with Fauna and Mumei
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>>88070259
HoloX finally manages to remove her shackles but for the time being all that is unshackled is her desire to breed.
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I find myself wavering between Pekora and Pekomama occasionally
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>>88076330
Why not both? Oyakodon is great.
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>>88067355
What even is this prompt implying?
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>>88077830
The prompt's vague. But from what I understand,
>Anon's down on his luck. He's in love with a chuuba but knows he will never get it on with her because this aint anime kid
>But this wise guy comes along, offering him what looks like the chance of a lifetime
At least that's what I guess is happening. I think it was left vague and mysterious on purpose. I'll just pick a chuuba at random and continue.
>The man leans in closer, his grizzled voice barely a whisper above the smooth jazz filling the bar. “You ever hear of Amelia Watson?”
>You stiffen. Of course, you know her. *Everyone* knows her.
>“Hololive’s time-traveling detective,” you mutter, nursing the whiskey he passed you. “Why?”
>He gives a knowing smirk, as if he’s been waiting for you to say that. “I figured. She’s the kind that catches you off guard, isn't she? Keeps you guessing. You think you know her after all those streams. But you don’t. Not really.”
>Something about the way he says that hits too close to home. “What's your point, old man?”
>He shrugs and motions for the bartender to refill his glass. “My point is... you start digging, you start watching, and next thing you know, you're in too deep. You’ve pieced together this whole idea of her. You think you see beyond the character, but it’s all smoke and mirrors. You don’t fall in love with the person. You fall in love with the *mystery.*”
>The words linger in the air, twisting your thoughts. Amelia was different. At least, that’s what you told yourself. You weren’t just another faceless viewer. She always gave off a vibe like you *could* get her, like she wasn’t just some distant celebrity. Every inside joke, every cheeky smile - those moments felt personal, like they were for you.
>But now, sitting here, listening to this man, you can’t help but wonder. Did you really know her at all?
>“And that’s the trick,” the man continues, pulling a small, worn notebook from his coat pocket and sliding it over to you. “You think you're solving the case, but the case solves you. Here, kid. Take this. It might give you some perspective.”
>You look down at the notebook, hesitant. “What’s in it?”
>“Call it... evidence,” he says cryptically, finishing his drink in one smooth motion. “Use it however you like. But be careful. You might not like what you find.”
>The bartender returns, eyeing the notebook. “You sure about this?”
>The man stands up, leaving a crumpled bill on the counter. “He’s got to see for himself.”
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>>88078564
Huh... And here I thought it was implying trap cosplay.
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>>88078695
Uh.
You know what,
>"Do the trick? What are you talking about?"
>"Cosplay, my friend." He grins, pulling out his phone. On the screen is a picture of himself, wearing a pristine Suisei outfit - complete with wig, makeup, and... is that a skirt?
>You blink. "Wait... that’s you???"
>"Bet you didn't think I'd pull it off, huh?" He chuckles, showing another picture - this time of him posing confidently in full Suisei gear. It's the one she wore during her Shout in Crisis concert. There's a comment from her stream pinned at the bottom: "Suisei: Wow, that’s pretty cool! I'd rate this cosplay a solid 9/10!"
>You nearly choke on your drink. "No fucking way."
>"Yup. And she noticed." He leans in closer, eyes gleaming with the satisfaction of a man who’s cracked the code. "You gotta go all in, my friend. If you want her to notice you, don’t just be another viewer in the chat. Be memorable."
>You stare at him for a long moment, processing the absurdity of it all. "So... you’re telling me I need to... cosplay as her?"
>"Not exactly. You need to stand out. But hey, it worked for me. She even responded to my supa during her last stream. Called me 'the guy who nailed the look.' Do you know how rare that is?"
>You’re not sure if this guy is a mad genius or completely delusional. "I don’t know, man. Dressing up as Suisei... it’s kinda out there."
>"It’s not about the cosplay. It’s about showing her you get it. The effort, the passion. She respects people who can play the game at her level. And if that means putting on a dress and makeup for a day... why not?"
>You take a long sip of your whiskey, the wheels in your head turning. "You’re serious, huh?"
>"Dead serious. And hey, I won’t lie. It’s not for everyone. But if you want to escape being just another anonymous viewer, this is your shot."
>You look down at your drink, the ice clinking softly against the glass. It's insane... but also, kinda genius. Besides, you’ve done crazier things before.
>"Fine," you finally say, a small smile tugging at your lips. "But if I’m doing this, you’re helping me pick out the outfit."
>The man grins, clapping you on the shoulder. "That’s the spirit! First round’s on me, then. To trap cosplay and winning the game!"
I hate this prompt already
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>>88073894
>Laplus ends up being too busy to conquer the World because of her many halfbreed children
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>>87945071
Miko gets drunk and agrees to sleep with you
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>>88080648
This but she DOESN'T agree to sleep with you, even drunk, so you punch her out and fuck her body, knowing that the next morning she'll just assume she blacked out.
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>>88080834
This, but she gets blacked
Eh? Eh? No? Okay.
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>>88080648
This but its just nonsexual and she wants something to cuddle into when she sleeps.
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>>88082480
Also to make my scenario MORE boring, Miko is a cuddle bug and you have massive difficulty trying to pry her off your body the next morning.
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>>88080648
This but it's Lamy and instead of getting drunk she's sober for the first time while you've known each other
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>>88080648
This, but instead of agreeing, she brought it up and is very insistent that she will sleep with you.
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>>88082886 (me)
Actually, now that I think about it, Miko grappling with an alcohol addiction is the funnier premise here. The guilt over what she did to Pekora has quietly kept compounding in her heart until she couldn't take it anymore, but she didn't have the courage to face Pekora or atone for her crimes so she resorted to drinking. Then she meets you and in the moment of desperation thinks that if you somehow could fuck the lesbian out of her she wouldn't be able to harm innocent girls anymore.
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>AHAHAHAHAH LMAO SHE RAPED PEKORA LOL LOL THIS HAS TO BE IN THE STORY! SHE RAPED PEKORA GUYS! MIKO RAPED PEKORA!
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>>87945071
Is the guy who did the ina joi still here?
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>>88084471
That shit is evergreen. Your tastes are still at an immature stage if you can't respect the classics.
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>>88085033
its been a year and your entire joke is one catalog shitpost.
you could have used that time to actually watch at least one miko clip instead
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It might do your brains a lot of good if you let them come up with a story/role for Miko that doesn't involve
>dicking the lesbian out of her
>abusing her retardation
>raping her
>her raping someone else
>several other basic bitch intro to /d/ fetishes go here
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Revolutionary idea: Pekora and Miko as a loving couple that only has sex when it's rabbit mating season
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>>88082480
>>88082725
>Over at Miko's house having a couple drinks
>Nothing weird, just two friends relaxing after a long day at work
>Miko randomly announce that it's "Mikochi's bed time" and pulls you by the arm to her bedroom
>Drags you into bed to use you as a body pillow while she falls asleep in two seconds leaving you trapped
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>>88085876
This but its (You) and Pekora
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>>88085132
For what it's worth, my ideas regularly get to the "Where we discussed" section of the OP so at least bakers appreciate my contributions to the thread. Maybe that post was a stinker, whatever, that's the way the ball bounces sometimes. I personally find it amusing.
There's plenty of times when I'm exasperated at the direction the discussion here is going but in those occasions I just go "well, I guess I'll sit this one out" or just post something I'm into to redirect the thread into a more interesting direction. I don't really get the point of constant whining about how the thread reacts to other people's prompts. >>87952977
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>>88085221
>several other basic bitch intro to /d/ fetishes go here
Uhh...
Miko gets one of those censorship chips installed in her brain due to an incident.
Unfortunately due to her body being so lewd she starts seeing herself as a censored mass of pixels.
Now she needs to work with you (as a man she can actually see you) in a wacky adventure to get the censorship chip out of her brain.
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>>88085221
I liked that Spirit Hunter romance idea that was pitched a couple of thread ago.
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>>88085221
Miko's tongue is swollen and no one can understand her, except you, the guy she hates the most. Everything about Miko irks you, so much so that you know everything about her.
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>>88086538
It's not really surprising that you don't understand the criticism when you equate casting generic horny bait and having it mentioned in the OP to the topic's quality. I'll try to spell it out for you. When someone takes someone's prompt and tries to straight twist it to fill a meme, unrelated fetish, or replace the chuuba when it is not necessary, that's not cool. The same stuff being regurgitated over and over into every crevice is not only stifling to creativity, it's just plain disheartening that those people cant be asked to think of anything else. It's just like feedback, if you don't say anything, people won't fucking magically know that their ideas are tiresome.

>>88086580
THIS is using your head a little more. It offers something outside the box. Miko having to navigate the world of mosaic censoring, bumping into walls, not being able to see what kinda food she's eating, etc.
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>>88085221
The last time I tried to write Miko it didn't go so well. I've learned my lesson
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>>88087795
What went wrong?
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>>88086505
That's not revolutionary, that's a classic minus the Pekomama matchmaking.
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>>87945071
Fuwawa shooting Mococo because she's bored
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>>88087795
Miss Sakura-chama...
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>>88087795
That's okay man. A certain oni was your Cure to shitty old writings
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>>87945071
Your oshi gets raped.
It's not hot, nor a mindbreak thingy, it's literally a case of violent assault and she's left traumatized
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>>88088350
I threw her in without thinking it through and later realized I didn't really know what to do with her. She could have been cut from the story entirely and almost nothing would have changed
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>>88090420
Wrong guy. It was Cover High
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>>88091546
What could possibly motivate me to use a single second of my life to write a fic that treats my beloved wife like that?
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Re-read three cream, three sugar.
Goddamn this is so fucking cute. I can't get enough of it.
Mio is adorable, the sex is intimate, the coffee capstone.

AHHHHHHH I WANNA HAVE A BABY WITH MIO SO BADLY
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>>88092791
Women are the hottest and cutest when they're helpless
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>>88094767
Loveless behavior.
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>>88092205
>spoiler
Ohhhh. Yeah... I get the general idea you had but I see what you mean.
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>>88095166
No need to make it personal dude
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....Dozo
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Why did you continue teasing her when she asked you to stop? You should know that Setsubun traditions are offensive to her culture.
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>>88097204
>proceeds to pleasure himself with this bear
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>>88091546
>It's not hot, nor a mindbreak thingy, it's literally a case of violent assault and she's left traumatized
Is hurt/comfort also off the table or..?
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>>88097682
While she whimpers, her womanhood bleeding, het abuser comes back. She doesn't react, she's accepted her fate.
A plate of food is placed next to her.
>Does it hurt? He asks
She wants to scream, but she doesn't. Her abuser scratches her scalp and comforts her, asking if she'll be good. She takes a moment to answer, he pushes her down, ass up, she squirms, struggles, all futile.
>Will you be good? He asks again
She cries and nods.
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>>88097457
That's rape...
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>>88098825
That's a bit uncharitable way to describe the unconsented sexual act which I committed. I hope you don't resort to cheap shots like that in the future.
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>>88099422
It's a bit uncharitable to rape someone. I hope you don't resort to cheap copes like this in the future.
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>>88092791
When you're just consensually acting out rape-play to satisfy your wife's fetish
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>>88100292
>Spoiler
Yeah sure, buddy. Just merely pretending good sir.
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>>88099742
Yeah...
Sorry.
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>>88067324
I need this Shiori to sit on my face. She should do it cause it'll really help me write better. Do it for the spirit of literature.
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>>88102055
She'd probably enjoy being the only one in a position to talk.
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>>88097309
That's still not a good reason to shove the beans up my ass.
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>>88100292
I wouldn't mind pretending to be raped by that wife of mine
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>>88103140
Imagine the hours of yapping you're hopeless to interrups as she uses you like a chair, getting so immersed in a game she forgets you're still there.
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>>88082041
No, I think you're on to something. Continue.
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>>88086989
>When someone takes someone's prompt and tries to straight twist it to fill a meme, unrelated fetish, or replace the chuuba when it is not necessary, that's not cool.

NTA but you're such a fucking bitch. Maybe you should go to global; that thread's the hugbox you're accustomed to. Alternatively, please consider the rope.
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>>88105516
Sorry little bro. Maybe you should post your low effort cuck prompt again I'm sure someone will write it if you bug the thread enough!
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>>88105807
Will do.
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>>88105516
>global
>a hugbox
the only people who call that thread a hugbox are shitposters who get laughed off so way to selfreport nigger
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*sluuuurp*
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>>88103379
To be fair though, you did construct that massive bean cannon just to shoot beans at her. She almost drowned in those beans... surely that was an overkill.
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>>88106131
Gyaru Kronii and Sana using their childhood friend to lose their virginities, while also acting sexually experienced to cover up their nervousness
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>>88085221
Hey I wrote my Miko fluff, I'm free from this sin.
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>>88085221
Ever since I saw the video of someone sending gore to her and she broke down crying, I've been unable to get thoughts of abusing her out of my head
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>>88109726
>that image
Geez, are you trying to bait me into getting that Anon angry at me again?
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>>88109726
the what
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>>88109726
13 year old boys and their gore fetichization is so interesting to me.
Like, as soon as your balls drop you stop giving a shit about gore but these kids just love their edgy shit
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>>88106113
Awww, you mad your favourite thread got insulted? It takes ten seconds of scrolling to figure out global is discord circlejerk-tier garbage, so try again.
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If I had the power of telekinesis, I'd use it to rape Miko from afar. Just saying.
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>>88111384
>telekinesis
how the hell would that work? you make a dildo levitate then try to push it in?
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>>88111491
Nope, I'd start following her and use psychokinetic force to play with her pussy, rub her butt, and flip her skirt whenever she's in public. I'd mind-finger her all day long and watch enraptured as she slowly breaks down due to hysterical fear and inescapable pleasure being forced on her by seemingly nothing.
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>>88111675
Are you going to write a story about it?
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(Mostly) lurker here, I’m not sure how best to put it in words, and I don’t know if anyone else feels this way, but I get this feeling that there’s one or two anons here that are
really aggressive and demeaning. I think they mean well, and everyone is entitled to express their opinions, but it just kinda discourages me from wanting to post here or share anything. I know this is 4chan and I shouldn’t expect anything nice, but well, I guess I’m also entitled to my opinion. I feel like this general has slowly turned into a bit of an isolated island over the years with fewer and fewer fresh ideas and I think it’s in part to the way we talk to each other driving potential newbies away.
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>>88111771
It's tickling me on the inside, so I might put it on the backlog but that kind of thing is a slow burn; you've got to explain within the narrative the "rules" of the powers, so to speak, AND you've got to write a substantial amount to give credence to the break down otherwise it's contrived and uninteresting.

I've got something else cooking at the moment which I'm 1k words into so mindrape won't be anytime soon anywho.
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>>88111818
Get over yourself. You're not saying anything new nor are you entitled to feel welcome here or anywhere else. Learn to fit in with thread culture - ie lurk moar - or fuck off.
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>>88111818
Faggot
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>>88111818
I don't think the ideas are lacking, considering that it's harder to pick fruit once the lowest-hanging ones are dealt with. What's lacking is discussions manifesting into fics, because the kind of writer that's both invested in the thread and not already overloaded with WIPs has seemingly become more rare. The last time it happened was with the kemono slavery discussion that produced the slave Bae fic, but it was a pretty isolated case this summer and autumn.
And try to not mind >>88112048 and >>88112134, it's just one guy trying to sour the mood as usual.
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>>88112202
Don't you know? Everyone here is one guy, ESPECIALLY the ones you call you out.

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to finish Cover High and get started on the next chapter of HoloJourneys.
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>>88112202
I do think there could be more productive discussions. I like the idea of a contest, nothing like competing for ephemeral glory to kickstart motivation. I read the current entries and I’m excited to read more when they come in the next few days (I hope)
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>>88112452
>nothing like competing for ephemeral glory to kickstart motivation.
If you spam them they become mundane.
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>>88111818
There's a clear difference between expressing opinions and encouraging/engaging in constructive thought, and there's just dribble that gets reposted regardless of the topic. It's the stuff that just reads like horni beggers using whatever outlet they can find that isn't contributing anything substantial. If you're horny for a chuuba, that's fine, but also have the awareness to know that whatever niche fetish you're trying to insert into an idea will not be entirely welcome unless you can present a compelling case for it. Or even better, write it yourself.

If anything I think NOT calling people out on the low effort and dwindling creativity is how you end up with a low harvest of ideas. There needs to be more bullying, and more feedback.
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>>88112270
You're not subtle enough to make that comeback work. Posts within minutes of one another with the same sentiment, one sarcastic and one plain insulting? Come up with something else.
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>>88112520
The best way to stifle someone is to ignore them. Some people get off to attention, including negative. Hell knows there is a ton of fetish crap posted here all the time, best to just ignore it and post what interests you
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>>88112452
Sadly this contest has been marred by a weak theme, uninspired rules and the anon running it not taking it seriously (coinflips...).
We missed out on the big summer contest because noone organized it, and now there's not much to do until Christmas. Hopefully more specific contests or year-round awards will get a chance in the future.
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>>88112520
>There needs to be more bullying
Fucking AMEN.

>>88112632
Kill yourself, retard. Your parents are ashamed of you.
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>>88112632
Appreciate you calling them out. it's not worth engaging. Best ignore
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>>87945071
Raking Miko, who took her name way too seriously and turned into a Sakura tree.
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>>88112673
If posted in its own isolation and sent to the prompt anchor, fine. That's not really the problem, where it becomes insufferable is when they attempt to tack it on to another prompt and don't even attempt to tweak it or make it flourish enough to make it interesting to even consider.
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>>88112834
I think a yearly contest would make a lot of sense. It sets some continuity rather than have the contests randomly pop up once in a while.
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>>88113081
Do you mean the "This except..." posts? I usually took those to be at least half-joking.
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>>88113081
Sounds like you just need to be less of a bitch. Nobody cares about your self-righteous opinions on what does and doesn't constitute a good prompt addition.

God, you retards are so annoying. You've come into this general and think you can change whatever you like to fit your tastes. You can't, and need to die.
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>>88105516
Nah he's right you're not really doing anyone any favors. I don't much take kindly to my interests being associated with this sort of behavior when I barely ever post here, makes it harder to bring up in earnest. Look, it's already happening unprompted >>88105807
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>>88113181
>God, you retards are so annoying. You've come into this general and think you can change whatever you like to fit your tastes. You can't, and need to die.
Someone doing exactly that is what started this discussion to begin with. You retard.
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>>88112834
You are more than welcome to run your own contest if you don't like mine. I would have liked to do more but I don't have lots of time as my job is very busy right now. But I figured something is better than nothing, so I decided to step up.
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Il uhh, bake. You guys seem busy.
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>>88114105
NTA but please don't take his comments at heart. Your work is very much appreacited.
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>>88114105
I agree with above anon. I really appreciate any contest.
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>>88114105
It's appreciated, given that noone else including me stepped up, despite the criticism. The quantity of contests should remain limited, but I shall run one or something similar myself in the future.
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>>88114301
Can I get uhhhhhhhhhhhhh
a Miosha thread? With extra eggs?
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>>88114382
Meant for>>88114290
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>>88078564
If i hade a penny for every time people warned against digging deep into Amelia Watson, ill have three ish four ish pennies.

Ya'll talk like at the end of the investigation, she turns out to be the antichrist or nyarlapothep. Kinda like a lovecraftian horror "DONT LOOK PAST THE VEIL"-type thing. Im not the sharpest or brightest, so what the fuck is going on?
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>>88114562
Baked Migrate when ready

>>88114382
I'll set some festive Miosha images aside for next time.



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