Chapter 6: Getting Along?
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I'm starting to have a bad feeling about this cute story...
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>>271341831>Plus, that's not gonna happen for a while...Why do I feel some foreshadowing into this statement?
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>>271341785haha y-yea..
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>>271341926you know a black flag when you see one
>>271341908she's growing too fast
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>>271342080>not even calling her daughter to apologize properly and hear each others voiceNo wonder Ayano instantly fell for the first adult to show her affection.
>>271341979I wanna commit unprovoked headpat on a JC so bad bros
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>>271342080>>271342106oof, the empty eye panel
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>>271342185>>271342217I don't get it
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>>271342080Toradora moment
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>>271342301I swear their size difference grows every chapter
>>271342301Finished, MD link: https://mangadex.org/chapter/62c89f27-1548-4dd9-95fd-8c5dbe05baebhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gedXJ4LXVHk
>>271342332thanks
>>271342332Doing god's work, thank you friend. It's a delight to share the project with you.
>>271342332SLUUUUUUUUUT
>>271341298>Fumifumi one starFumibros...
>>271342332Thanks Anon!
>>271342332Damn little girl, seducing ojii-san taking her home
With the pages posted and the discussion starting I guess it's time for this.>in before the inevitable, picrel
>>271341298I love that you actually typeset the cards accommodating the sparkles ha>>271341465...dude you're a pro, aren't you?
>>271341465I love that Isshiki used that cutesy letterhead to write back to her after all.
god i wish 13 year old girls were real
>>271341569I want to grope 22i's big titties
>>271342106>Her smile and optimism: gone.
>>271341605>hardly been at her desk lately*has hardly been at her desk lately
>>271342301That's a lovely panel with him bending down to meet her gaze. Can't wait for cooking shenanigans next chapter.
>>271342318He's kneeling you dummy
>>271342332Hey TSAnon, do you have a non-retarded idea for how to visually distinguish when people call Ayano by her personal kanji name vs her stage kana name?It's kinda thematically important and characters do it all the time so I'm not sure if just slapping a TL note when it gets particularly important is quite enough.
This is so good aaaaa
Was just admiring the typesetting myself and I just noticed he wrote Ayano that his hobby is watching TV. I guess that hits different if you're an actor hearing that because if someone told me that I'd just be like oh cool man, you don't do anything, got it.
>>271342837There's no real way... I think some Japanese people use all caps vs not in business communication? I'm fine with the TL notes.
>>271342848no I think it's just a symptom of nips believing that "live to work" bullshit
>>271342332Thanks
>>271342837I was thinking about this myself when I was TLing and I had a laugh when it came to mind but we could always take a page from their book and have furigana with her name in kanji when it's used that way.
>>271342747It's fine as is, the "She's" from the prior bubble carries over the and
>>271342436Likewise, we wouldn't be here without you too.>>271342542I'm flattered but by no means a pro, >>271342080would look better if I was. Somehow all those skewed letters were less trouble than her mother's text message.>>271342837That's a tough one...maybe italics or all caps? I'll have to mull it over.
>>271341785How do you translate it correctly here,>>271342301But fuck it up in the flashback here?
Sick. Thanks for translating and stuff.
>>271342318Female mangaka be like that
>>271343039JC warping spacetime around her... erotic...
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E...erotic...!!!!!!!!
Good. Perfect time so that I can now cry myself to sleep
If you are against teen relationships with (GOOD) men, then you are a fag. I however get disgusted by it generally because purity is ruined by shit people. Used goods exist because of fickleness of 3d girls but also lack of commitment by men.
What is bro babling about
>>271343165but let's not muddle a good thing with 3d
I want to be a good fatherhusband to a JC daughterwife!
Does anyone have a TL for ch 8 yet? I can knock it out tonight if not. The prev thread Anon had ch 7 prepared beforehand, just want to make sure we're not doubling efforts while still keeping a good pipeline for the editors and TS Anon.
>>271343165Teens "should" marry (GOOD) men in the same way that countries "should" be ruled by (GOOD) absolute monarchs.Shit people is why we can't have nice things.
>>271343249Ch7 here, don't hold back on my account. I wasn't sure who was feeling the next ones so I figured I'd do 9 or 10 (beforehand again) depending on how people organized themselves.
>>271342458That's the common sleep mask Fumi. SSR Fumi is the one from >>271186558
>>271342974Haha...I'll be able to see properly once my new glasses arrive.
>>271343277Cute girls "should" marry ME (I'm GOOD)
>>271343307>Fumi Alter
>>271343288Sounds good, I'll work on it tonight then. Editor-kun hope you're around.
>>271342106She's gonna fuck that oji-san one day and it's gonna be her mother's fault.
>>271343466Mom approves
>>271343466Mom be like "God I wish that was me"
>>271343364Ch 8 is real good, have fun with that. I didn't want to hog it since it even has the meme panel. Looks like 9 is the last one in the volume but the extras are long enough to count as a chapter in their own right, or alternately divvy it up etc.
The author also draws porn, right?
>>271343542In much the same style, yes.
>>271342937now that I think about it, you're right, but it still looks a little awkward
I want to get headpats from Fumifumi.
>>271343542https://exhentai.org/g/2646210/e69b5ad2db/
>>271341218What is her expression meant to convey?
>>271343889Pure unadulterated affection.
>>271343889>I'm ovulating right now
>>271343889Maiden in love
>>271343889"I wonder if he'd like it if I called him daddy..."
>>271341218Hello.I would like to stress to any mods listening that this is NOT a general. There is no concept of past or future threads. There is no link to the previous one (IF it exists, these are allegations only!) nor is there any guarantee that the future thread will be created. There is only the here and now!Glad we got that cleared up.
>>271342332What's this little girl up to...
>>271343542:|..............................obviously
>>271342332she's grooming you fumi!!!
>>271344163(But please don't create new threads unless you have a new typeset chapter or a new translated script to share.)
>>271344163there was a long break between the last thread and this one, so the mods aren't gonna do anythingnot that they really give a fuck anymore about that kind of thing
>>271342837Uhh make her stage name bold maybe?
>>271344235this thread has more of a purpose, it has a dump from the start and will probably start translating next chapter soon
>>271342370>burunya~
>>271343676the guy reminds me too much of hiroyuki
>>271341218>You'll never have a cute girl look at the back of your head with this much love and affectionWhy live
>>271344486It happens to you all the time, you just don't notice.
> Middle schooler girl on a sexual relationship with an adult male mangaka.> Her best friend finds out and just plays nice.> The boy that best friend likes has a crush on main girl.> Cultural festival arrives. Main couple has sex on school.> Friend brings boy she likes to watch his crush being fucked to get a chance.> He becomes angsty and traumatized and tells on her shit.Someone remembers the name of the manga?
>>271344707Doesn't ring a bell but that sounds hilarious.
>>271344707>>271344833Koi no Kotobe
>>271344707Koi no Kotoba
>>271344563Wow it's just like PT
Oh, this was apparently on my plan to read list. Well, guess I know what happens now but it's short enough I'll read it anyway.
>>271344915>>271345012Yep, that was it.
Gochisousamadeshita. Thank you, anons.
>>271342837How about just include the kanji somewhere near the text when it's in kanji form
>>271341501when you're talking about writing materials, it's stationery, not stationary
>>271341644>私>一色さんがいないとダメかもwhat's wrong with that? she's just a wholesome koisuru otome
>>271345919That's what I was thinking with using the kanji as furigana. I said it because I thought it was funny but honestly I like it more the more I think about it.
>>271343676Is anyone willing to TL that one?
Sure, figured I'd ~masturbate~ to it sooner or later anyway, if you catch my drift.
>>271342837call her Abby when they use furigana, and Abigail when they use kanjiez
>>271346095if it's sole male sole female defloration, i may consider itotherwise, no
>>271342332This brat....!!
>>271346365Well meme'd my friend
>>271346372It's priest x JC so I assume both are virgins
>>271346595Not by the end.
i never imagine a picture could hurt me
>>271341979duplicated "the"
This is fucking sick and wrong. 13 year old girls belong to 13 year old boys!
>>27134695213 year old boys belong to christian priests!
>>27134695213 year old boys belong to 22i-chan
>>271346952it's not my fault JCs are into ojisans like me
>>271342332That :3 .... that freaking :3 !!!
>>271346952>13 year old girls belong to 13 year old boys!13 year old girls wouldn't touch 13 year old boys with a ten foot pole.They're on a completely different maturity level.
>>271342927I legit kind of like this. Forces familiarity with Kanji and characters for those of us interested in such things. Kind of a pain in the ass for the Type-setters tho.
>>271344235>not that they really give a fuck anymore about that kind of thingthey'll delete any thread that has resemblance of a general
i think she wants to eat something besides the omurice
These stories always feel supremely sad, because what happens when she discovers boys her age? And that's totally going to happen, possibly in a year or two.
>>271347277You mean a bunch of unemployed bums who still live with their parents and have small hands?
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>>27134695213 boys are goobers dude>t. was a 13 year old boy 20 years ago
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>>271347652He's right, they'll delete threads that resemble generals and won't delete threads that are generals
>>271347814Yeah, basically you can have generals as long as they don't look like generals.It's kind of weird, but it is what it is.
>>271347814kek, you're right, I didn't realize that was what he meant
>>271347881My niece was taller than her mother at 13. She had a really early growth spurt. But then again so did I and my brothers, it's probably something genetic.I still find it weird that Japanese has their growth spurt usually late in their teens or something.
>>271342014Not so :3 anymore, are we?
>>271347991>Not so :3 anymore, are we?>all hope, dreams, and :3, gone
>>271347814This entire damn board is known for necro bumping up the ass and back, of course mods are going to be hyper retarded in which threads to delete and which not.
>>271347814Just don't put "edition" on the subject
>>271347962>I still find it weird that Japanese has their growth spurt usually late in their teens or something.isn't that just a bullshit cope to "explain" why nip fiction doesn't reflect reality
is this THE MOM ?
>>271348408No
>>271348408Hot. JC needs to get mogged by this beauty and know her place.
>>271343039Kek
>>271348408Sadly not.
>>271343165I do think age gap relationships are way more common than one would think. The only reason why you only see the abuse is that these couples would obviously hide it from everybody. It's survivorship bias. I think there's nothing wrong with it if it ends up in a stable marriage with a big family at the end. I bet you a lot of people's grandparents met with an age gap as well.
>>271348063The thing is that they allow it as long as your thread does't look like a general.Probably half of this board or something are generals, but they're allowed to stay up as long as they don't look like generals.Of course deleting them would be pointless because then people would just make another thread, but still the whole thing is kind of weird.I don't exactly remember when it got to be like this, but I think it's about three four years ago maybe? At least that's when I noticed it.
>>271342106>Her :3 and optimism: GONE
Alright friends I'm going to dump chapter 8 and the tl script at once. Hopefully this makes it easier on any other tl anons who are around and want to point out mistakes. Here goes nothing.---(all over the page) Ding dong!Huh? What’s that about girls?Ugh, sorry, let me get that.I have a really bad feeling about this…?
>>271348727emotionless JC sex soon
>>271348797Stop it already(sfx) Door openingFumi~~ <3I knew you were home! <3
>>271348827Ah, sorry, I’m busy today…(text outside) Huh--?Whoa!?!?Is it a woman!? Did you bring in a woman!?(text outside) Let me see your foyer! (lit: show me the shoes, since visitors leave their shoes in the genkan when entering)Ugh, so annoying.
>>271348827>Another :3
>>271348850Eh? A child!?(sfx) Staaaare(big text) It’s Haga Ayano!!!!It’s the real deal! She’s too cute!?(text ouside fumi’s bubble) You’re scaring Ayano!!Don’t just enter on your own, nee-chan!! (leaving this weeby so we can see how he changes how he addresses her)
>>271348877Act. 8 Affirmation
>>271341644She knows Isshiki is a rare breed in her line of work, and that she will fall prey to the full blunt of the pedo showbiz industry if he's not there for her.
>>271348850NTR
>>271342972>less trouble than her mother's text messageText on flat planes such as a phone or a sign are super simple with how I used to do them. Assuming you're using photoshop, make a rectangle the approximate size of what you're putting the text into without perspective (picrel). Convert that shape to a smart object, and then transform the smart object however you need to correctly fit the perspective of the thing (in this case the speech bubble). Once you've matched it, enter into the smart object, place your type normally and delete the layer with the shape you used as reference. Pretty much, this method lets you use a shape to match perspective, and then copy that perspective onto your type.>stage vs personal nameI think the most simple way to deal with this is regular face for her personal name, italics for her stage name, as that tends to be the most understood solution for these sorts of problems. I think you could argue that putting her stage name in quotes would work better, but I'd worry that'd read too much as someone saying her name condescendingly, and also becomes a problem if you have to put her name into quotes for some reason later on. Utilizing furigana would be my ideal way of doing it (conceptually), but I think that'd be too problematic with changes you might need to make to leading. Or you could just throw an asterisk after her stage name and put a TSN outside of the panel for either of the ways. Regardless, whatever you choose, I'd throw an explanation page at the end for the MD upload saying what the problem is and how you're fixing it so people will know
>>271348899Hey, you have a girl’s name!Fuuumi-chan <3Shouldn’t you be there playing house instead of soccer~?Names don’t matter for playing sports.Geh.It’s Shiori.You little pieces of- (sfx over the censored text: beep, continues on her other bubble)She’s swearing!!We can’t get back at her like that!!This sucks, let’s run!!Oh? They’re leaving already? …ugh! Fumi’s such a good name too!Th-thank you, onee-chan…
>>271348915It's my humble opinion that making her name italics everywhere would make it annoying to read. Maybe add a tl note in the end of the chapter explaining and have the reader assume she's being referred with Hiragana by anyone that's not fumi. But it's relatively inconsequential.>>271348920Don’t worry about it!Because you know, only onee-chan can tease Fumi! <3Her love for her brother is twisted.Fumi,I saw you walking home with a girl the other day, is she your girlfriend??Eh?You should dump her, that girl is—Huh!?
>>271341785Why is the closed-eyed character always the moralfag? Fuck off.
>>271348985Wh-why?(text outside) Did we get found out!?…Because she’s not the type I get along with!!She might be my sister-in-law in the future, right?Sister-in-law…What? You’re not serious about her?(text outside) More reason to dump her!!…I found out later,that the girl changes boyfriends as often as she changes her clothes.(small text around him) Sob sob sob sob Nee-chan probably figured it out and was trying to help me.
>Fumi>ShioriI wonder if their parents were novelists or something like thath
>>271349013Nee-chan, uh… thank you… for that…(text outside) For warning about my (ex) girlfriendTsk.Tsk?(big text behind her) Bad moodFumi~Go buy me a Yakisoba bread~~~She’s incredibly moody.A temperamental princess(text outside) Ah, okay.Fumi!?
>>271342080;(
>>271349035But no matter what happened she always ended up saving me, so I couldn’t go against her.(Never)(honestly kinda hot)
>>271343249Link to ch 7?
>>271349064That’s why…I didn’t think she’d get along with Ayano.Erm…This person’s my older sister, Shiori.How did it come to this!?And she’s the idol/talent I’m currently in charge of…She’s Haga Ayano right!! Why didn’t you tell me!?Uh… well.I only knew you worked for the same agency as her!!Let’s get along, ok? <3 I’m his older sister, Yamada Shiori! <3(small text outside) So cute--<3It’s nice to meet you, I’m Haga Ayano!I’m happy to be able to meet Isshiki-san’s family.(bubble over her) Whew…So that’s “Shiori”
>>271349094You’re a sweetie just like on TV! <3(text outside) Kya <3 kya <3Oi, Fumi! I brought some vegetables, so at least get me a cup of tea~ (text next to arrow) Can’t say anything back.(text next to fumi) Sorry, Ayano…Why did you bring her here on a weekend?Some stuff happened, so we’re having lunch together.Hmm…?So you’re spending all your time with a cutie like her? Good for you~<3Yes, I’ve been taking care of herSince this April.
>>271349126Heh….…Now that I think of it, the person on that picture going around social mediadid feel like Fumi.(text almost outside) For real?*Exaggerated memory.(text over fake memories fumi) Ahaha(text over fake memories Ayano) Ufufu<3!?That’s Fumi’s writing! (she can tell his handwriting even in ketchup)No way… did you…Did this man do anything weird to you!?Eh!?Wait …what!?
>>271349157Ah, no,Isshiki-san is always nice to me.Even today, he went along with my selfishness,As my manager (emphasis on manager; italics, bold w/e) Do you come here often, onee-san?I once crashed here with my kid after getting in a huge fight with my husband (text outside) I come here once in a while to share foodHeh...! How old is your son?
>>271349182(shiori’s handwritten text) Five!(fumi’s non-handwritten text) Huh… looks like…(ayano’s handwritten text) You have a son that old? You don’t look like it at all…(shiori’s text again) Well aren’t you a peach, Ayano-chan *musical note*I might’ve made her worry just now?(text w/ arrow pointing at shirt fabric) Got stretched.Nee-chan, please leave once you’re done drinking thatI’ll take Ayano home once she’s done eating too.Eh,Already…?You know your schedule is packed tomorrow.(outside bubble) Fumi(by Ayano) Sad…
>>271349212(text by water bottle) The type that drinks water after eating(big sfx) Slap!Ouch!!Ah(small sfx) stumble
what is this pedo trash ?
>>271349239That, was close…(big sfx) Bang! <3Are you okay, Ayano!?I’m sorry, I didn’t hit you, did I?
>>271349264I’m…fine…That was just like my shoujo manga~!!(text outside her) Swoon…Really?Yes…Ah, that surprised me…Don’t do stuff like that, nee-chan!!Eh...?Soz <3
>>271349290So thaaat’s how it is~~<3(sfx next to arrow) Thumbs up!If so, I’d love to have her as my sister-in-law <3Ah, but there’s the age gap…Meh, it should be fine in around 10 years! (rough math)(big text) Fantasizing by herself(text next to fumi) That was scary…As long as they keep it wholesome and parent approved until then…Though it looks like Fumi doesn’t realize. Not that I care, but he’s always such a doofus……but he’s weak to pushy women, so it’ll be fine.(text outside) His previous girlfriends were all pushy after all.Ayano said today was strictly business… But she got him to write “Ayano<3” on her omurice? Go you girl~(square formatted like a japanese seal) Pushy woman confirmed.
>>271347881I didn't even notice with Ayano's face, then I saw his
>>271349308…that said.(text over her) Giggle(text to her right) This is kinda frustrating…What’s up with you, you’re glaring at me…(small text next to fumi) It’s scary so stop it.
>>271349308>gets mad at the idea of her otouto taking advantage of ayano>misunderstanding is cleared>notices this>gets on board immediatelyTruly a mood swing princess.
>>271349338Isn’t he taking forever in the bathroom?Too funny (lol)So, what do you think of Fumi?He’s a serious and considerate person…And he’s always helping me out.Even today, he made sure I wasn’t lonely, even though it’s a day off for him…
>>271349363So you approve of him…Actually, he was anxious almost to the point of tears when he got this job.So I was a little worried for him.(text over him) Being her chauffeur(bubble) I don’t really care, but hang in there.So, if you tell him what you just told me directly,He’ll be overjoyed!…I’d hope so. Anyway, he acts all serious, but he’ll charges ahead without thinking once in a whileSo keep an eye on him for me<3Yes!
>>271349290>heart pupilsit's so over for fumi
>>271341406>it's the perfect age
>>271349386You can talk to me if anything happensLet’s exchange phone numbersYes, please… <3(sfx) step step (sfx to his left) flushWelp sorry to have bothered you two, I’ll be on my way~(text next to thumbs up) See ya later, Ayano-chaaan(sfx over her) Step step step stepYeah, you really bothered us…(text outside) See you…
>>271349408This should have been age gap yuri.
>>271349263>what is this pedo trash ?why is there so many tourists here now? ffs
>>271349408(sfx) Door slam(sfx around him) Woozy, woozySorry for making you meet that intense sister of mine…She resembles Isshiki-kun.HOW!?How she’s nice.Really? She been manipulating me since I was a kid…I’m sure that not it…--->>271349386>Anyway, he acts all serious, but he’ll charges ahead without thinking once in a whileHe charges ahead without thinking once in a while. So annoying when you reread something 5 times and only notice a mistake after posting.
>>271349446and you should have been aborted in the womb, but we can't get everything we want, now can we?
>>271349476I’m really happy…I got to meet such a nice person.Ah… but I’m a little jealous at seeing How casually you two talk to each other. (casual vs polite language lol japanese, if anyone has a better idea of how to phrase this let me know)--->>271349263There's like 10 shounenspic threads in the catalog, go back.
Marry me already
>>271349362>oh no my brother is grooming this young girl!>wait, my brother is getting groomed by this young girl~
>>271349504Wait, no, her natural way of talking is pretty foul-mouthed…Please don’t copy her...And, well, she’s family.(sfx) Yawn……Augh… I wonder if it’s because of her, but I’m exhausted.Family…Shiori-san’s eyes look a little like Isshiki-san’s…I actually met his family!
rape imminent
>>271349535>wait, my brother is getting groomed by this young girl~:3
>>271349538(sfx) nod nod(sfx next to ayano) Antsy…(sfx next to Isshiki) Snore…When I remember this is where Isshiki-san lives… I can’t get enough of it…
>>271349504Why she decide to grab the collar of his shirt ?She is weird, WEIRD !!
>>271349571Alright!(sfx) creak(sfx next to him) snore(sfx next to her) Sniff sniff
>>271349584dumb frog
>>271349584>not letting a jc grab your collar
>>271349584To fix where Shiori had stretched his shirt lol--->>271349591(sfx) Caw, caw (crows)… Hm?
>>271349504>casuallyNaturally? Comfortably?
>>271349615(sfx) grabA-Ayano!! Wake up…I’m sorry! I’m so sorry!!(sfx) door close(small text) Whew…I’m glad I managed to take her home with no issues…
>>271349571>bed>desk>tissues>shower>all in sequenceI think this page makes it extremely obvious that she wants him to rail her senseless.
>>271349591>>271349615So thirsty.
I would like to have what they have
>>271349639Oh man… that was scary…It was almost social suicide.What’s with this piece of paper?Eh?(letter)To Isshiki-san <3Thank you so much for all you did for me today!Did you notice the kiss on your cheek while you were asleep? (lol)Thank you—!From AyanoEhhh!?---Done with ch 8. Have at it editors.
>>271349650Shit that's a window not a shower. I think it still works though.
>>271349669>Did you notice the kiss on your cheek while you were asleep? (lol)i love this little gremlim, he is driving the poor dude mad.
>>271349650>showerThat's just the window curtains
>>271349669He needs to burn that letter.
>>271349571Erotic...>>271349591E-erotic...!!>>271349615EROTIC!!!!
>>271349669>Did you notice the kiss on your cheek while you were asleep?This is rape
>>271349698I hope the manga shows him slowly descending into loliconism because of her.
>>271348408Is the women who fucked with him (or the woman he fucked?).From what I could guess up to where I looked, she seems like the only woman Fumi ever liked (or felt anything at all), what makes me question if he is even able to feel anything for Ayano beyond simple sympathy for her lonilless.
>>271348711I originally come from the cesspool that is /v/, so I'm used to an absolutely terrible environment, but not enough that I cared to stay (haven't been there in months)./a/ was a REAAAAAAAALLY nice change of pace, since a lot of the real annoying shit is either banned (mods actually goddamn delete it), or the general board culture is simply a LOT better.My main problem with /a/ is the insane shounen spam (it's an older problem, I know), plus all of the goddamn necro bumping/generals. If these two factors could be fixed, /a/ would single handedly be one of the better boards by far.
>>271341785>suddenly
>>271349827Remember to spoiler spoilers
>>271349827>That sizeIf yhis is the type of woman the MC likes, Ayano is done for.
>>271349362Truly /ourgal/
>>271349459>>271349504ok, retard
>>271348920>Th-thank you, onee-chan…Let's fucking go!
STOP LUSTING OVER SEXY LGs YOU FREAKS
>>271349881She will simply have to corrupt him.
>>271348850>jc reverse ntri hope this doesn't go to dogshit so i don't have to drop it
>>271349865Yeah, I remember, but I only wrote "rumors".>>271349881>If this is the type of woman the MC likes, Ayano is done for.It's like she was intentionally designed to contrast Ayano (but not only in body).This is a(n immature) child and that is a (fertile) woman.
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>>271349408YURIURI
>>271348899Onee-chan is kinda hot too. Goddamn it Jaga.
>>271349972>sexy LGs
>>271349290>heart pupilschrist he's actually gonna get raped by a 13 year old
>>271349972I will lust over any LGs I want, being banned from 12 Best Buy's won't deter me
>>271349591>>271349615man... someday i'm going to live this again
>>271350053His cheek was not the only thing she kissed
>>271350053Old men were made for JCs, it's not rape if she called dibs.
>>271350142yeah, she probably kissed his hands too!
>>271349591>he's asleep>fucking finally>SNIFFFFFFFwho is grooming who here
is she wearing a skirt or one of those short pants that look like skirts ? i need to know.
>>271349591smug sniffer...
>>271349290>That was just like my shoujo manga~!!It's just like one of my Japanese animes!
>>271341632>you have connections with production companiesi suspect this is a huge foreshadow
>>271348901so she's grooming him, then
>>271346952That's like feeding prime ribeye to a dog, sure he'd like it but it's a waste because he'd be just as happy with chuck. 13yo boys should be getting /ss/ed by cakes. They can graduate to JCs when they grow up and prove themselves worthy.
>>271349591help police
>"haha she's just a lonely kid that needs someone to hang out with her and listen to her">inadvertently fulfills all her shoujo manga fantasies and proves himself as her ideal man>gets his sister shipping him and the 13 year old>who is also a national celebritywhat the fuck is he doing
>>271350006Kinda resembles the "child gf" meme
>>271350397Every thread someone mentions this and still we haven't gotten any drawfags to make a meme like that. What are we even doing here /a/
>>271342332okay so the gimmick is that she always thinks ishiki is about to fuck her because showbiz except he doesn't because he's actually normal
>>271350429The "gimmick" is that she's cute.
>>271349669>this man will be drugged, kidnapped and raped by a 13 year old within a month and his sister will be an accomplicefucking grim
>>271350369living the dream
>>271349669he better get used to being a JC's fucktoy
>>271350321
>>271349827 what's with the shitty face? i'll allow you to get back together with me. why are you giving me such a nasty look?
>>271350272Yeah they've been telegraphing how the dude's trauma has to do with his previous job as a tv producer for a few chapters now. Albeit his sister being unbeatable probably didn't help.
>>271349591BAD TOUCH!!BAD TOUCH!!!
His sister posts on /a/
>>271350543Can an old 27 year old fossil keep up with the vigor of a prime age girl?
>>271350741He's not getting a choice in the matter
>>271349126You forgot to translate the last speech bubble. It's something like>She's our star talent, you know.
>>271349591yosh >:3
>>271348689My dad's parents had a 10 year gap. Though, once you're in your 30s or 40s it doesn't really matter as much. Met someone who works with abuse survivors. Surprisingly she said she has met plenty of cool guys in their early mid 20s dating 16 year olds. Sounds hawt desu. It's legal in a lot of U.S states, even though that's easy to forget.
>>271351220Post pics of your mom when she was young.
>>271351276I said my dad's parents RETARD. My parents are the same age.
>>271351220>10 year gap>once you're in your 30s or 40s it doesn't really matter as muchThis is true, I'm in my 40s and there's no way I'd settle for someone who's only ten years younger anymore.
>>271351504kek
>>271349290>>271349308Nee-chan approves!
>>271349408>Jagagoniawhat a place!
>>271349669Cheeky brat, needs correction!
>>271348863even in your age-gap romance storyF.O.E.!
>>271349591>>271349615
>>271349386>…I’d hope so.I'm beat and have to get to bed so I'll come back and give this chapter another look tomorrow, but this one jumps out at me so I want to address it real quick. Some people may read that as being a little flippant, especially with the ... in front. Sorta like:>he would like that>I'd HOPE he would like thatI get what you're going for and it's probably fine, there's just a little room for misinterpretation. Maybe something a little more directly affirmative like "I bet he would!" since she's agreeing?Also I'll knock out chapter nine and post it the same way but it'll probably be a couple days or the weekend, work might be pretty draining this week.
>>271349264>>271349290
>>271342332>Let her hair downErotic mode activated
>>271341218need JC wife...
FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
>>271342332Sex
If this manga ever gets an anime adaptation, I want Oscar's seiyuu to voice Isshiki.
>>271349669Thanks
>>271350236Skirt
>>271342014god she must be very wet
>>271349504>How casually you two talk to each other. (casual vs polite language lol japanese, if anyone has a better idea of how to phrase this let me know)It's not as strictly literal but "how easily you two got along" I think would be a bit better. On the next page I'd also change "Wait, no, her natural way of talking is pretty foul-mouthed... Please don’t copy her..." to "she has a pretty foul mouth, though, so please don't copy her.". I don't think you lose anything by cutting back on the nipponese formality autism.
>>271354720>please rob this text of contextDIAF
>>271350302Oji-sans needs to be aware about the dangers of little girls
>>271343542She most likely drew a lot of porn on one of her 3 deleted Twitter accounts, the one that was locked, it's all gone forever now.
>>271354781>contextYou can either keep it literal and have it be clunky because there's no good way to effectively cover the massive gray area between "bro" and "young master" in English without T/Ns or you can let yourself be informed by the context and go with something that's as close as you can get to both the import and literal meaning of the sentence.What would YOU do with that line, anon? I'm all ears.
>>271351220>My dad's parents had a 10 year gapBecause it was normal in their generation. I'm pretty sure my mom's parents had an even larger gap but I don't remember the exact numbers. We're talking first half of the 20th century here, that's the time when feminism was weak enough that they thought it would be okay for every working woman in the world to be a telephone operator.
>>271349094>I didn’t think she’d get along with Ayano.The literal meaning is "I didn't want to make her and Ayano collide". I'm sure there are better ways to phrase it but I don't think that's it. It's not really about them not getting along but more like what complicated chemical reaction could result from their interaction. You can see him being worried even though his sister is happy.
>>271349264ガチ恋距離
>>271354994The first page's trans isn't clunky, you just think it reads that way because you're main interest is eradicating the concept of formal/informal speech for westaboo consumption that somewhat comes across clunky in the second page. I'd just have it read "her informal speech is pretty crass" or some similar. Yours changes Shiroi's characterization entirely outside of settings where informal speech isn't being used and unnecessarily obscures about what Ayano is jealous.
>>271349446You've got Itou Hachin for that.
>>271345969>>271346901Thanks for spotting those.>>271348915Thanks for the advice, and I'll see if furigana works while doing chapter 7 because I like the idea too, but if it doesn't just go for asterisks and TL notes. Pic related as an example looks alright to me, but might not suit everyone.
>>271341377>tl noteI hate nihongo
>>271342332SEX??
>>271349264>>271349290What is wrong with her?
>>271341377I don't get the point of this tl note.
>>271357120Seeing someone say >"Exchanging letters"? You mean that thing where you write letters to each other?"In English sounds ultra retarded, the TL note serves to reassure you that neither the character in-universe nor the translator is ultra retarded.
>>271354021the man who was cucked in life and in death and through time and space
>>271350236>>271354558That short skirt, man.I there isn't at least one (1) pantyshot by the end of this, I will personally riot.
>>271357524Ayano is too pure to wear panties.
>>271342014Maybe "I love him so much" would work better here
>>271357393Turns out the reader was retarded.
>>271342528This
>>271357393It still sounds kinda retarded but whatever, this is manga, not like we're translating Dostoyevsky
>>271349591>>271349615Ahhhhhh
>>271349591>>271349615I never thought I would gosling over a 13 year old JC in an age gap manga.
>>271354720Yeah usually I'd be okay with glossing over how it's specifically about how they talk and do something silly like "you get along well." But with all the swearing in the flashback pages I feel like that'll become relevant later. Who knows, I might be overthinking it.
>>271357962>It still sounds kinda retarded but whatever, this is manga, not like we're translating Dostoyevskyyou'd be surprised what a lot of people think we're working onsome people just don't understand that manga is the junk food of comics
Ayano sure is a cutie...
>>271343511Speaking of extras, starting with volume 2 they should be interspersed with the chapters.That's also how they were released chronologically on the app.The only reason why they're all dumped at the end of the digital tankoubon instead of in the proper order is to preserve page numbers between digital and physical, physical tankoubons don't get the extras at all, they're meant to draw people into the app.Guess I'll dump chapter 5.5-8.5 now to catch up with what has been TL'd and then the productive folks can figure out what to do with their TL/TS schedules
5.5.1
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>>271358099Same name, Jaga.Their porn
>>271358901a shit sent too soonTheir porn account was @jaga__rico_ocms, you can search for it on twitter and see all the replies praising the sexiness of her porn but the images themselves are deleted ;_;
>>271359088Why did I first say "their" even thought I knew I could say "her" in the second half of the sentence? The tranny language poisoning is getting to me...
>>271358839what the hell did she put in the food ?
>>271358874>>271358829skirt angles!
>>271358829>Ayano's thighsWas that shot really necessary?
>>271359425Yes!
>>271358829Uohh Jc skirt!!!
>>271358839The yandere route gets closer each chapter
>>271348899I would lose my fucking mind if this was my older sister.
Ayano has a voice! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3mn0LyJVf1kThis was an official ad for the manga that ran on youtube. It may seem suspicious but youtube ads are always unlisted and have coded titles like that, and I found some tweets where people said they saw a voiced ad for this manga on youtube.For some reason this ad was taken down when it had only 45k views and I don't think there's any information about who the voice actress is available.For comparison, this unvoiced ad got almost a million views https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7BOTFX8An4
>>271361586What's with the tension in this ad...
>>271349308The sister is absurd, I like her already.
>>271361586I feel something with the first ad...
>>271349669this brat...!!
>>271361586>that "honto kawaii :3"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjj
>>271361586She sounds pretty similar to the real ayano
>>271362419The what now?
>>271361586The voices were better in the manga.
>>271349669Cute brat!
>>271354021>Going so far as to sacrifice his own existence to save his loli.What a man!
>>271348915You coud use some alternative quotes like「Ayano」. I agree that standard quotes would be weird.
>>271361586Interesting, I wonder who voiced her.
>>271361586Oh gosh. Great find anon.
>>271361586Honestly I feel like unvoiced videos like this are worthless, it's almost like they just make them to try to appease to the artists that they're promoting their work, when they more or less do jack shit and don't get any views.They're probably almost completely free to make though.
>>271363922Who are you to say which ads are effective and which are not?You're not even part of the target demographic.Not to mention that you probably use an ad blocker.
>>271364152I check them out for the stuff I scanlate, and they barely have any views, comments, or interest compared to voiced ones.
>>271352783the curves of a jc are just the best
>>271364331Well obviously, but you can't make a voiced ad for everything. It's more expensive and it complicates contracts.See how this voiced ad stopped being shown soon after being released, and there's no sign of a full PV or information about the VA anywhere.Also, I gave you the benefit of the doubt and assumed you meant "clicks" when you said "views" in your previous post, but now it seems you totally moved the goalposts.Of course most people won't go out of their way to search for and watch unvoiced PVs on youtube. But that doesn't mean they are not effective as forced ads.Like I said, that one unvoiced ad for Koibumi I found has a million views and it has "car02" in the title, there are probably many other variationt ads. They must have contributed to the visibility of the manga in Japan.If you're suggesting they should just not bother doing any marketing, you must be retarded.
>>271361586The voiced ad is unironically cinema. Kinographie of the highest degree.
>>271361586Is that engine sound right at the start a real subaru?
>>271355171Could use something like “I didn’t want to have her in the same room as Ayano”. Close enough and sounds like something people would actually say
>>271364599JCs are literally peak female form
>>271358829I swear to God
>>271361586I would cast Karin Takahashi as her
>>271358750Am I just seeing things or is the shading here intentionally erotic?
>>27135889127 year old erotic!old man smell and shampoo erotic!
>>271368112>27Do little girls like old balding men? Asking for a friend.
>>271368257Yesold men are irresistible to young girls. it's a fact of life
Ishiki needs to convince his coworkers he is no pedo, what is the best way to do it ?
>>271368463grope 22i's big tits
>>271368463he just has to shout ORE WA LOLICON JANAI every time they suspect him
>>271368463Trying to fuck his male coworker. They would totally be convinced that she is not his type.
>>271368463[Evil Route] Become the most boring standard no-nonsense manager ever who keeps his distance.
>>271368737Delete this right now, I can't stand the idea of Ayano being further neglected.
could you please recommend me more age-gap romance mangas? good endings, please. these are on my list>kodomo no jikan>Kono Kyoushi, Zettai Wazato>I'm in Trouble With My Best Friend's Daughter>Umisaki Lilac>Koi no Kotoba>Kore wa Koi no Hanashi>Taisho Maiden Fairytale>A Day With Rinko-chan>Yuujin ni 500 Yen Kashitara Shakkin no Kata ni Imouto wo Yokoshitekita no Dakeredo, Ore wa Ittai Dou Sureba Iin Darou>Itoko no Ko>Uchi no Ko no Tame naraba, Ore wa Moshikashitara Maou mo Taoseru kamo Shirenai
>>271369020Miman Renai.
>>271369020>>271356788
>>271348827>:3SISTER TOO?!?
>>271369020Koi wa Ameagari no You niI didn't like the ending but its not objectively bad
>>271369020Smoke & honey
>>271369020Inu x Boku SS
>>271358891why kid allow to do this???
>>271370138Ah, Ririchiyo. The sex elemental.
>>271368621
>>271370884>t.
>>271367865ToT
>>271370104>Smoke & honeyDid it had a good ending? I think I left it on the america arc because of no translations.
>>271368571>>271368672>>271368737These would just push the yandere route up earlier
>>271342301>>271350011when you think about it, isn't omurice just the sibling version of an oyakodon?
>>271349308>Ah, but there’s the age gap…>Meh, it should be fine in around 10 years! (rough math)Based onee-san
>>271348994I dont like him at all
>>271372453That makes sense if you don’t think about it.
>>271372453Since when are rice and eggs siblings?
>>271349182>she's married and has a kidI am absolutely shocked that the mangaka did this. What an anti-trope. Cool.
>>271374996>What an anti-trope.???
>>271374381the eggs (pl.) are siblings. the rice is what they ingredients are enveloping just like in the original dish (ayano)
>>271375027??? Right back at you. The beautiful older sister isn't single. That's the complete opposite of what you would expect from a manga.
>>271368463I'm thinking some type of song. Something about not diddling kids.
>>271375645>a mangaI'd expect it to be a little sister saving herself for onii-chan
>>271346095You're not missing much, unless you're familiar with forbidden siren. The dialogue is 80% saying each others names and the rest is the usual "uwu he treats me like a grown up" type stuff. Just use your imagination, the art style is the highlight if you're into that.
>>271376113True, trueI think I've not read enough josei. Is this even supposed to be josei?
>>271348908Cant spoil a romcom with a pinch of ntr
>>271376433That's a tough one. My favorite definition of seinen versus josei is that in seinen it's usually set around high school and the heroine is younger, while in josei it's college or later and the heroine is around the same age or older
>>271354558What was the intent of this shot?
>>271376433It's anti-shounen.Younger girl - older man romances appeal to three of the four major demographic categories.
>>271376917ayano's smooth perky peach ass and tight little butthole ToT
>>271370629Because it's hot
>>271376917x-ray skirts, should be worn by law under the age of 16 by 2D girls.
>>271374996Oh you weren't being sarcastic with the "cool". Gotcha, yeah I agree then!
>>271374996I'm not shocked because I read more good manga than you.
>>271346772It would be an achievement to have a porn manga in which both are still virgins by the end.
>>271379362I mean, as I understand it butt stuff is a loophole if they're Catholic.
>>271376917Isshiki's clothes are kinda lame
>>271379758Please be kind brother, he's a working adult in Japan. If he goes clothes shopping it's for stuff he can wear to the office since that's like 90% of his waking hours.
>>271349013>>271349013>that the girl changes boyfriends as often as she changes her clothes.*that the girl I was with>>271349094I agree with >>271365811 and >>271365811>>271349126>Why did you bring her here on a weekend?Why is she here on a weekend? / not implying he brought her home. probably doesn't matter>Yes, I’ve been taking care of her>Since this April.Yes, since April. She's our company's star. / even though that's not what she was asking for, that's what he says>>271349308>Go you girl~Attagirl! / slightly more natural>>271349338>It’s scary so stop it.You're freaking me out.
>>271349386>So you approve of him…So you accept of him (as your manager) / minor>>271349476>She resembles Isshiki-kun.Isshiki-san / she doesn't use kun w/ him>Really? She been manipulating me since I was a kid…More like, "she's always been bossy" not as accusatory as manipulating.>>271349504>>271349538Not even going to touch the keigo shit. Either commit to being weeb or don't.
based
>>271372155isn't it still ongoing?
>>271380259>Not even going to touch the keigo shit. Either commit to being weeb or don't.I'm reminded of a joke Yotsuba to! scan I read decades ago where everything was in stilted Victorian English. It was a pretty good bit and if it wouldn't be so fucking tedious it'd be a fun way to treat keigo.
>>271380999Ah, i see youre reading through that guys whole list as well
>>271349669>Did you notice the kiss on your cheek while you were asleep?This little brat is begging for correction...
>>271349459>>271349899>>271349459what did you expect? half of /a/ is filled with shounenshit, and people arguing about pointless shit pairings or arguing over whos series will get axed etc.this board is not literally populated the people who made fun of people for liking anime and those who consider dbz, bleach , naruto and the like "not anime" who only picked it up because it became trendy. being the main audience of this board for the last few years now.
>>271358882I want an oneesan to cradle my head and stare in my mouth
>>271381885anon, i'm crying
>>271358865Man I love jeans
Sister is a dentist or dental hygienist?
>>271369020>A Day With Rinko-chan
>>271369020Musume no tomodachi
I've read and can vouch for some of those on the list, and if anyone's interested I could chime in with some age gap yuri since yuri's the main thing I read (I like hot schoolgirls, so sue me).
>>271382588The best age gap yuri is Yuzumori-san by far. By faaar.
>yurihow about no.
>>271382626I've been holding on to that one for a rainy day but it's on my list. I usually go for the shit that's a total disaster, like these age gap things always have an irresponsibly supportive friend and this one was a fucking degenerate.
>>271349308>;Dthis is a pretty funny page
>>271369020Good list, anyone know some age gap where the girl is older?
>>271383062I don't understand, older than what?
>>271383133He wants Mommy rapist manga
>>271342243why author like to focus on ayano body so much?
>>271383062>Good listeeeeh is just okay, too many meh ones
>>271383637author is porn artist la
>>271361586wonderful. can someone translate what she's saying please? also>that stroke on his thighUOOHHHHH!
She's not saying anything you haven't already seen. Just the bit from the very beginning wondering whether he's just around her because it's his job, then the bit about how it'd be cool if she had a dad or brother like him, then.. I already forgot, but some other nothing from early on.
Oh, showing her appreciation for going to such lengths over the keychain, so year, first chapter or two.
>>271369020dunno if this counts since the femc is sent back 6 years into her younger self but its good enough for me
>>271383637body language is very important in communication!it might be the reason you've decided to read a manga rather than read a book!
>>271369020Shiota-sensei to Amai-chan
>>271368463Stop spending every waking minute of his free time with a child.
>>271384520>Perhaps if I fondle her in front of them without getting a boner
>>271342279kuso jiji... kuso baba?
>>271384257>Shiota-sensei to Amai-chanSecond this one.
>>271384257>>271384847are the new translations good?
>>271385301they're decent, the typesetting is bad though
>>271349831baiting on /a/ has been becoming more /v/-like year by year so enjoy it while it lasts
>>271385348>they're decent, the typesetting is bad thoughI dont understand why great stuff always gets ignored or gets bad quality translations
>>271385410Hey, I'm trying my best here.
>>271385301>>271385348Forget translations, I just wish there were RAWs for volumes 3 and 4 somewhere to download. Newer chapters I'm saving from Matogrosso: https://matogrosso.jp/serial/shioamechan_57-3/
>>271342080>>271342106This shit rustles my jimmies every time and I’m getting tired of over working (single) parents cliche.But I guess this is what Japanese work culture is really like?
>>271385301No. Nothing like the feeling of seeing a manga rescued from being abandoned, opening it, and seeing it's a SEA monkey translation.
>>271385441>Hey, I'm trying my best here.fine, but you need to get better at it
>>271386305God, don't I know it.
>>271385777>I just wish there were RAWs for volumes 3 and 4 somewhere to download.use thesehttps://ebookjapan.yahoo.co.jp/books/326264/https://www.amazon.co.jp/https://bookwalker.jp/series/52496/
>>271342332>the face of victory
If I'm a Japanese businessman, I'll do a collab with fabric softener maker. Put Ayano sniffing something on the packaging and you're set.
>>271387057Target audience doesn't buy stuff like that.
>>271387121You underestimate otaku's buying impulse. They're a cattle who will buy anything if you managed to hook them to your franchise.
>>271370629why esl no learn english before posting?
>>271369020>Itoko no Konot age gap
All I want from Japan:>ojisan x JC age gap romance>no timeskip>physical intimacy (not just one of those "single kiss in the final chapter" copouts)>no love triangles, melodrama, side characters getting more screen time than the main couple, or characters acting bizarrely childish and retarded despite being adults/mature JCs>subtle fan service without being blatant ecchi>no bullshit "they separate at the end but it was ~meaningful~ and ~bittersweet~" endingIs that too much to ask?
Of course mangadex goes down while I'm reading
>>271387753>>no love triangles, melodrama, or characters acting bizarrely childish and retarded despite being adults/mature JCsHOLY LOL LMAO, next level delusion
>>271387753Yeah I want this but in my actual life, am I out of luck?
>>271370015dogshit
>>271357524I thought there was one where you had to really enhance it to see. She was wearing stripes.
>>271358725>physical tankoubons don't get the extras at allMother fuckers. No wonder I didn't see them when I read vol1's tank rips.
>>271358829Do the nips think they get diarrhoea from exposing their skin or something?
>>271346952Agreed. Fumi is for Ayano's mother!
>>271388123>No wonder I didn't see them when I read vol1's tank rips.what??? just use the digital volumes
The :3 will return!
>>271369020>Uchi no Ko no Tame narabatranslations never
>>271348850>jagagoniaLmao
>>271383945>>271383976What?
>>271387753>no love triangles, melodrama, side characters getting more screen time than the main couple, or characters acting bizarrely childish and retarded despite being adults/mature JCsSo you want a straightforward short story that fits in one book?Manga is not the right medium for you.
>>271388999Licensed (in English)
>>271369020Does Medalist count?
>>271389746That's hotblooded sports manga and not romance.
>>271389746That's what this manga would be if Ayano wasn't horny
>>271388167Actually yes>冷えによる下痢のメカニズム>血流が悪くなると胃腸機能が低下し、消化活動や吸収活動が困難になります。 すると、腸で食べ物に含まれる水分が吸収しきれなくなって下痢を起こすのです。 特に、女性は筋肉量が少なく熱の生成量が男性に比べ少ないことから、体が冷えやすい傾向にあります。 常日頃から体を温めることを意識しましょう。
My cute JC wife
>>271349182>she's marriedwe're good>she has a sonOh nyo
>>271349290Clip it and ship it
