What's up everyone, let's get down to it. TodayChapter 74: Classmate and RivalryLast Thread (Chapters 71-73): >>275228936
Posting a little earlier because I don't feel so good and I wanna go to bed
Kek
>>275324707Hope you feel better. I'll shout you out in the Jojo storytime.
Yagami moment
>>275325392Aww thanks anon, you're too kind
And done. Another laid back chapter, though I liked it, I think Ohba can write SoL better than drama. What do you think?See you tomorrow, hope you enjoyed
>>275324738I love that the little logo for +Natural is the Russian egg homunculus.
I can only guess Tanto is gonna be a U19 without the hiatus cope saving their ass.
>>275324983>Don't worry, Kaya. I'm sure you're stronger than him.What's the powerscaling for Bakuman?
>>275324738>i wish i was at home drawing manga>my feet hurt
>>275324862yujiro turned into matsuda for one panel
>>275325458
>>275325888That protagonist design is U19 bait for sure
>>275326014Kaya > power gap > Fukuda > Aoki > the rest > Mashiro
>>275325311What are the two series always placed on top of Crow supposed to be? OP and Naruto?
>>275325514Eiji Nizuma has created a ripple effect within Team FukudaThe infection is spreading
>>275324947Always liked this guy
>>275324983Only 2 assistants? Is it because gag manga get less pages?
>>275327849No anon, he has pioneered ahead, so the rest too will now "scale the wall".
>>275327727Yeah. Naruto was basically always in the top 3 at the time.
>>275325458Frankly it's almost a miracle that this shut in is so well groomed and his room is tidy.
>>275324825>KeyedIt's never gonna catch on Takagi, stop it.
>>275325145Puppet Master Yoshida
>>275324779at least Hiramaru didn't puke this year
>>275324983annoying retard, other assistants were better
>>275325458good editor egging him on
>>275332108I really do like their relationship shame it didn't make it into the anime
>>275325426Kek, he really is a salty gamer. I also like that their relationship is similar to a child and parent, it is really endearing.
>>275325236wait NIzuma is the older one? I thought he was the youngest of the bunch
>>275325042how did they get away with such a blatant knockoff?
>>275332508nah he's always been a year older than everyone
>>275332652must be how he acts, I assumed he was still in high school or something
>>275325514the way the chapter ends are always weird, I keep thinking a page is missing
>>275332264anime dropped the ball on a ton of things, ratings must not have been good
>>275333020for the things they cut like this, I guess it's just because they wanted the 3 seasons to all be a uniform 25 episodes each and Shizuka just doesn't fit
>>275333105Shizuka's just completely disconnected from the rest of the cast, like off the top of my head the only time where he's ever even remotely relevant to anyone else is when True Human gets serialized over KTM.
>>275329846That's super locked of you bruvletMillhouse IS a meme too
>>275324707are these fancy dinner parties real? I can't see any anti social mangaka artists enjoying them
>>275334783Yes.
>>275324910Like why? Aren't they all from the same magazine.>>275325353It really looks bland like a filler manga or axebait
>>275332990Yeah, I’ve been thinking the same thing since the beginning. Some chapters aren’t so bad, but a lot of them are like this one.
>>275335304They're published in the same mag but that doesn't change chain of command. Why assign an editor to someone if any editor is considered okay to just support any artist? Focus on what's on your plate and trust others around you to get done with what's on theirs. It's kinda egotistical to go behind another editor's back to support another artist as if you have a better idea of what they need.
>>275334783ToC comments after New Years are always about them.
>>275326014Kaya > editor-in-chief > Hattori > Nizuma > big gap > everyone else struggling>>275325426>>275325458Yamahisa continues to be a solid editor contrary to his initial carefree and somewhat sleazy front.
>>275324947>>275324983Shonen ass protag looking motherfucker. I remember liking him though.>>275325094>>275325145Yoshida/Hiramaru continues to be a comedy gold mine.>>275325426>>275325458I hope Obata had lots of fun drawing these faces. shizuka's story just kinda fizzled out. I wonder if they had something else planned for him and just changed their mind.
>>275325514>father of the rising stars in jumpI've missed the last thread, but Nizuma's line here was supposed to bem a reference to Star of the Giants. Lost in translationapparently.
>>275337721>Shonen ass protag looking motherfucker. I remember liking him though.I don't remember him at all
>>275324983poor Takahama, looks miserable back to being a assistant
>>275324707Araigods we appear again
>>275325042So Iwase is supposed to be all about high literature and she ended up making a pokemon knock-off? this almost feels like she's making some elaborate point about how lowbrow manga is as a medium.
>>275339817I still think she should have made a detective series, would have really made them seethe
>>275325094What's with those posters?
>>275340190Everyone has posters of Aoki these days, anon.
a slow bakuman thread today I see
>>275340190A reminder to do it for her.
I think we can all agree that Hiramura deserves to marry Aoki.
>>275340190if she saw them she would be creeped the fuck out
>>275343287These chapters haven't been filled with shit tier drama
>>275343817Hiramaru deserves all the bitches and a yacht
>>275340190Lol I just now noticed them. It’s pretty funny that they’re just there in the background without anyone commenting on them.
Tanto is the most like his Uncle's manga and is complete shit, is there a connection?
>>275334398>Millhouse IS a meme tooNow i know it's you Takagi. You can't just replace gags with old ass internet references (that are not even memes).
Aoki deserves better
>>275346818>t. Nakai self-inserter
>>275340190just, uhhhhhh, anatomy reference. pay no mind.
>>275346849nakai and himura are both creepy fucks, only one gets away with it because he's funny and not fat
>>275327727It's likely those two.If you think about it, Naruto was about a year or so into airing shippuden when this chapter was being published. One piece has always been near the top, while of the 'big three' bleach was already dropping off since it got axed around two years after Bakuman finished.>>275340190considering his editor, probably bribes he's given him.
>>275335304>Like why? Aren't they all from the same magazine.From what I can gather from reading Bakuman, is that Shonen Jump itself works on a competition basis. Not just for the authors, but editors as well. If you're all working together, you get lazy, but if you feel like you can get fired for not being as good as your coworkers, you will be motivated
>>275348825Yeah, it's one of the most realistic aspects of this manga.
>>275338197He always looks miserable.
>>275348825More like because he doesn't inflict it on anyone. Nakai crosses the fucking line while Hiramaru is just parasocial cringe. He shouldn't be doing it, but Nakai was way more fucking objectionable.
>>275350510he was happy in the beginning when he had his own series
>>275350974In the beginning he was a miserable assistant who looked down on his fellow assistants. Cheered up when his oneshot did well and went back to being miserable when Miura told him to up the gags for serialization.
bakubump
>>275325042At this point Ohba is just sucking his own cock.
Bump
>>275345503Ga-AAACK manga
>>275325145The best duo
Reminder that Miura made it as EiC IRL when Jump was full of unfunny gag manga every new serialization
>>275355419Compared to cringe battle manga every new serialisation?
>>275325514They're "scaling the wall"
>>275352626Why? Death note only did what Miura described but it didn't set itself up as a very shounen-esque series.
Hey hey hey, feeling great today so let's go. TodayChapter 75: New House and New Series
>>275358462wow, he actually says something decent for once
>>275358620so much for Takagis "but statics I trust" and their general acceptance of "as long as we have a manga that won't get cancelled"
Get fucked Takagi
Honestly this bitch is so stupidly spiteful her tism is starting to grow on me
>>275358731rockpaperscissors to decide disagreements will seem like a fair method at first, but I guarantee that will lead to problems later on when you lose a match at a disagreement you really dislike or when you lose several times in a row
>>275358436>Three bedrooms for two people.Dads expecting to get to be a grandpa soon and acted in advance, Takagi, get going.
>>275358436for 3 bedrooms that's insane, her dad really did help them out
>>275359167Tantobabies, its over.
Wrapped up, don't let Ashirogi know Eiji doesn't read their manga anymore. Hope you enjoyedSee you tomorrow
>>275359130Ohba must be really old when all the character in the story only mention old catchphrases instead of newer memes
>>275359167uh tantobros?
>>275359299You mean Tantoddlers.
>>275358956>>275358983What a weird page transition, it feels like a page is missing in which Hattori says something to Iwase, but I checked and no, it's just like this, abruptly cut
>>275359167DROPPED
>>275358620>"kids" huh...? That's a bit pointedWell what the fuck were you expecting dude, it's a manga for kids
>>275358436HAPPYoshi
>>275360709What does a humble anon like me have to do for Miyoshi to be happy?
>>275358731I'd bridal carry Miyoshi to that bed every single night
>>275358763
>>275358896Shocking to think SOME kid who will grow up to be a next generation mangaka was inspired by Tanto
>>275358802SMUGwase
>>275358676just another example of Ohba's genius writing where the characters set a goal and change their minds a couple of chapter later.
>>275358668Fucking Aida
>>275358704>International sales of trapMeanwhile at Barnes and Noble....>>275358851>HattoriAh man, see Hattori, this is where your good-natured meddling gets you!
>>275358956Oh no. Hattori getting groomed.
>wants to start a boom with young kids and make them regular Jump readers>even back then, the birth rate of Japan was decreasing fastTantobros, are we running against time?
>>275358956correct me if i'm wrong but in the anime didn't he respond with something like "i'm sure the boys your age would find you attractive" or something? i'm pretty sure they didn't cut off like this at least
>>275361957this is not the only time she confronts Hattori like this, I'm pretty sure he said that other stuff when Ashirogi is eavesdropping when tailing him
>>275358851Iwase is like an ojou caricature that doesn't hit the laugh, she's great.
>>275358896>baby>9 years old
>>275358436lucky fucks
>>275358535>BB kenichi wasn't a gag mangadude needs to stop being in denial
>>275358731dad wants grandkids asap
>>275364318he really does need serious help admitting it
>>275358802the only way to resolve this is dispute is to have a threesome
>>275358896that's actually really wholesome, they shouldn't be so stuckup about doing a manga for kids
>>275363365Nomenclature, autism-chan. As you age people half your age and below just seem like children.
>>275359070On a re-read Miura's approach here sticks out more. He's focused on getting a stable series that has a lock on a target niche audience. While there are some differences, it makes me think this overlaps with Ashirogi Muto's preference for targeting a non-mainstream niche. Being an analytical kind of guy Shujin wasn't against gag manga eventually but as we're seeing even he has his limits and strengths that a pure data approach can't make up for. And the duo are realizing they won't be satisfied with the kind of low key success Miura is pushing for.>>275359167Ashirogi Muto bros it's over for us...
>>275358535>it started to go bad when we added humor to itYou mean, it started to go bad when you were upset because you couldn't fucking communicate with your editor and weren't passionate about what you were making. Kenichi was clearly always meant to be a humorous story with the "297M yen remaining" bit as well.
>>275359130he's being a retard, you can't force a hit it has to happen naturally.
>>275359167I don't think they should have gave up on Tanto, kids like it. They should have had 2 mangas going on at the same time. Tanto's art style is easy enough to do as well
>>275358956>19>still a kidsmash it you pussy
>>275364577The issue is they still refuse to settle on a goal. They claim to only want an anime. There's 2 paths there: make a wild breakout hit or make a stable long term manga. The 2nd one's easier and it's what they've been drifting towards, but they keep complaining about artistic expression while their goal is entirely commercial. I think it's reasonable given they're young and dumb and provides a nice clash between romanticism and realism in the industry, but I wish Mashiro would question his silly promise more and Miura would discuss the core issue in planning a series instead of letting them run in circles.
>>275359409yea it's a problem with this manga
>>275364475when talking about it they said it would be funny him trying out different jobs and failing at some right? Who would want to read a serious manga about entrepreneurship?
>>275364620Miura isn't wrong at all even though they try to make him out to be. A stable gag manga for kids is perfectly fine
>>275364904But we don't want to be [beloved classic children's series]!We want to be [smash megahit superstar]!Treating Jump as a competition might've been one of the top 5 mistakes of this series. The rivalry is fun and all but chasing the top before anything else really does make it seem like they just care about placement and not about telling a story they care about. It's pretty cynical and to an extent is true to some authors, but the authors with actual visions are usually treated as having more personality defects than the ones we just followed through the Dramabowl.
>>275364683It also wouldn't surprise me if Takahama hit a wall with coming up with scenarios after a while even though he said he could just do internet research. It reminds me that once he starts the Ace Attorney knockoff manga we often see him spending a lot of time observing in person at courtrooms and his workplace is absolutely covered in books.And of course there was Nakai there from the start of BB Kenichi messing with the work environment.
>>275358436Takagi is a winner at life>>275358676>>275361165Did you miss the whole Iwase subplot?>>275359130It feels like all their ideas originate from Mashiro. He could write, draw and edit the manga by himself.>>275359167It's over. I don't remember it going so quickly.
>>275364880more or less. didn't seem like a series to take itself that seriously at all
>>275358436meanwhile my 10 year life saving earned me a 20 year mortgage from the bank to get a 2 bedroom apartment unit
>>275360709This girls deserves all the happiness in the world. She and Hattori are the only likeable characters in this story
>>275365341this is like the only time we see him happy
>>275365341>>275364475I can see maybe if he went wrong with making the gags too retarded. Like he tries to start a delivery service, and the gags naturally come from hijinks making them late on deliveries or such. But then Mirua suggests something retarded like what if they train dogs to do the deliveries for them instead and the business fails because the dogs ended up eating the deliveries.
>>275365248>It's over. I don't remember it going so quickly.really? felt like the Tanto arc dragged on forever. How many chapters did they even do so far?
>>275365875>How many chapters did they even do so far?If +Natural has published chapter 7 that means Tanto chapter 6 just ran alongside it and Niizuma is working on chapter 10 of +Natural. The man really did give it the 3 episode test.
>>275365958barely 10 chapters and they're throwing a fit over it? At least get to 30 chapters
>>275364791I think other than wanting to beat Eiji and Iwase, the reason they also gave up on Tanto was because Takagi couldn't write any more gags and was on the point of collapse, it would've got cancelled anyway
>>275366599Writing was on the wall after the 1st chapter.
>>275366707The first chapter was literally THIS CHAPTER bro
>>275358462finally, his head is out of his ass
>>275358731erotic is not the first word that comes to mind
>>275359130Repetitive gags at least do keep the series formula locked in for young viewers. A lot of zoomers probably know the story beats of a typical Phineas and Ferb episode by now
>>275358436>parents in real estatecapitalist pigs
>>275368385It also provides the framework for multiple gags, since subverting it becomes a potential as well. Kids tend to like a lot of commenting-on-the-obvious jokes (much much moreso in Japan, I've found) so baking in gag formats into characters is actually very solid advice.
>>275358535I feel like it'd be hard to transition away from gag with the MC's lame ass design
>>275358436Sorry, is 333 square feet seriously 30 square meters?
>>275364683The 297M yen remaining bit sounds to me like a serious setting.He can do good or bad, and it keeps track of how much money he has currently. Probably down the line he'd make a huge blunder and you'd have a 1m yen remaining or something where he'd build back up from.
>>275360699The issue is that Azuki didn't even say that she enjoyed it. It's that "kids" will.
>>275372449Three bedrooms btw
>>275373742To be fair, before I reread the page after posting, I thought that was the size of the entire apartment.So I wasn't sure if people were actually calling that huge, but yeah it makes sense with just the living room being that big.
>>275358535>BB Kenichi wasn't a gag mangaI'm still struggling to understand what exactly it was, if not a gag manga.Was Takahama actually trying to publish a serious story about a young entrepreneur in WSJ?
>>275361165To be fair, that's not an inaccurate depiction of teenagers.
>>275364837That's the main thing that's frustrated me about them for a while.They have two goals, and those goals are somewhat conflicting, but not only do they utterly fail to see that, but none of the adults around them whose job it is to make manga sell see it either.If they were either purely passionate or purely pragmatic about the pursuit of manga, it wouldn't bug me so much.
>>275368385With Phineas and Ferb, it being repetitive was part of the joke. But does that kind of self-aware meta humor appeal to Japs the way it does to westoids?
>>275370412They could probably give him a makeover if needed. Hell the inventor angle makes a kamen rider tech based transformation more reasonable. Though the stupid heart hair being one of the defining features seems like a big constraint.
>>275364791Tanto's art might have been easy, but they make a point of how hard writing it was for Takagi, for whom comedy doesn't come naturally.
>>275359130>You should give the characters catchphrases. Like, for example, the grandpa could say "wubba lubba dub dub".
>>275374695To be fair, they've never been very clear with Miura what their actual goals are. They just whine about rankings and self-deprecate in a lot of their conversations, then walk away blaming Miura for most of their problems.
>>275374933>haha, and what if the grandson was always saying "Aw geez"
>>275359214Thank you for posting.
>>275364583no shit. its a little extreme though
>>275374887Kinnikuman managed to become an iconic shonen protag with a pig face, it could work with the right sensitivity.
>>275358535Honestly BB Kenichi was basically the same kind of humor they go with for PCP.It's kind of interesting when you think of it like that, Takahama is basically a non-edgy Ashirogi in terms of the kind of manga he writes. Both his series are non-mainstream and neither are battle-manga in the traditional sense of having actual fights. He was convinced Kenichi wasn't a comedy and his Ace Attorny parody later would be the same kind of humor.I just think Kenichi was a very middling concept of a story and it was inevitable axebait and that's the reason it flopped not that "Shitty Miura ruined it by making it too gag-focused!" like they all push. At this point of the plot they really want to blame Miura for everything, even though he didn't exactly do anything wrong. Honestly the only thing you can actually fault Miura for is insist on them doing a comedy as a new story when they don't want to and it's not like they actually fail at it they just are stubborn and want a big hit.>>275374882if you really dumb it down Kochikame was basically Japanese ed, edd and eddy. With a cop scamming the money to try to get rich instead of buy jawbreakers
>>275364819Do not put your dick into menhera 'tism pussy.It's not worth it.
>>275364620>rather than aiming for a series 10/10 might vote for>aim for a series that 2/10 absolutely will vote forWasn't that even a quote straight out of godsavior Hattori's mouth? Aim for niche's?Miura's absolutely not wrong in his approach. Ashirogi is just utterly shit at communicating what they want, because they don't fucking know what they want.
>>275377795It's not a bad advice, but still not something Mashiro and Takagi want, as they want to compete with Eiji for the #1 spot and at the end of the day, no matter the cult status, will not get #1 during its runtime.Deathnote wasn't a hit because it hit that 2/10, but because it showed mainstream teenagers that there are stories they might like that are not simple battle manga. It's like marketing in advertising "Customers don't know what they want"
>>275377826I'd also point out that they panicked when Trap was struggling but sticking to their guns eventually showed audiences there was a good detective manga in Jump. The niche targeting approach was crucial at the start to get them started and build experience around their strengths and Hattori made it clear they couldn't compete with Nizuma with a mainstream battle shonen at their level.>>275377723I like how Takahama ends up being a strong successor to Ashirogi Muto. Makes sense with how long he's worked with them.
>>275374882Depends on the series. Jump has at least one meta humor manga in the mag at all times. For the last few years, that one was Roboco. Previous gens had Isobee or Gintama
>>275374524Just a more shounen Trillion Game
>>275375221>And what if we incorporated an overarching plot, but were openly butthurt about the fact that our fans are invested in the plot haha.