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If you are a /beg/inner or /int/ermediate in art, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice.
Please stop replying to crabs, nodraws and howies and instead focus on posted works!

>STICKY:
Completed: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98
New collaborative: https://hackmd.io/UMnZVhNITW-T2wZpHw6d0Q
w/ic/i: https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
Hardcore: https://hackmd.io/7k0XRnIQR6SValR77TDfZw?view

>WHERE to get study materials
annas-archive.org
>>>/ic/artbook
>>>/ic/video

>Want to practice figures?
quickposes.com
sketchdaily.net
characterdesigns.com
lovelifedrawing.com
posemy.art
mangapose.com
line-of-action.com

>PYW and give your feedback
What can be improved?
Are there any resources videos or books you'd recommend to them?
Maybe a redline or a technique, be specific.
Try to reply to someone as you post your own work.

>Cool teachers
Glenn Vilppu
Michael Hampton
Steve Huston
Brent Eviston
Marco Bucci
Andrew Loomis
George Bridgman
Hikaru Hayashi

>Cool books
Keys To Drawing
Drawing With the Right Side of the Brain
How To Draw Comics the Marvel Way
The Art and Science of Drawing
Framed Perspective
Figure Drawing For All It's Worth
The Complete Guide to Drawing From Life

Previous thread: >>7348756
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>>7351790
Thanks OP. You're a real one.
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>>7351790
dios mio... what is that thing in the bottom left
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Dracula. Feel like I'm getting better with faces, but it's nowhere near as expressive as the reference
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>>7351790
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Fucked up the fingers I know. Also my "future scifi outfit" is just too straight TOS+TOS movie, and not enough original design
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Reworked the skull a little but tried to make it look as "evil as possible". I will now work on the beast she is sitting on...
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I'm tired of being a /beg/, but I feel overwhelmed with complex refs, so I'll grind simple shapes until I can reproduce them perfectly.
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>>7351823
for reference, this is what my normal studies look like
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>>7351825
#25 is your best. You should try to shade your drawings more often and not rely on line as often. You can really see the form shadows, cast shadows and ambient occlusion in that goblin and it makes the facial features more believable.
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>>7351823
>>7351825
you could alternatively just break down portraits and other things you actually want to draw. e.g., grind constructing heads, without putting on the details; just work on getting the broader shape of the head right and mark the proportions of the major features (eyes, nose, mouth, eyebrows, hairline, ears) without actually drawing them. at some point or to some extent you can go a step further and after marking the proportions, draw simplified versions of the features. then work on adding more linear detail, then work on two-value rendering (e.g. one value for darks, another for the lights), etc. with any serious fundamental you're not gonna get perfect at it in a few months: even studying multiple hours a day, it's likely going to take you years to get really good, should you wish to get there. be realistic about how much time you're putting into drawing, what goals you have, and how long it will likely take you to reach them.
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Something's wrong. Not sure what. Can anyone point it out?

(The arrow is just telling me to fix the belt tomorrow)
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>>7351796
he's the new homonculus haunting /ic/. Sucks in all postiive energy and honest critiques under the crushing weight of his zero point ngmi energy and shits out drawings with negative skill. Just looking at them will make you worse
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>>7351901
Just another day on /ic/, he fits right in.
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>>7351901
Haunting example of ngmi
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>>7351905
Nah man. i beg to differ. This is pure essence of ngmi. It is rare to see something like this in this day and age. How can something have negative appeal
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>>7351912
But No-one is gonna make it in this board anyways, so what's the difference with the rest of the freaks here?
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>>7351930
That moai guy ascended out of this hell hole. Heck, even Pawell make it out of this shithole. There's hope for the damned.
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Any solid advice/ref for how the booby attach to the pec and how the skin overlays it? I've stared hard at so many various tits but I cannot connect the dots on how it is attached to the rest of the chest
This has been my most challenging form issue by a large margin
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>>7351935
>That moai guy ascended out of this hell hole.
he still posts all the time though
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>>7351988
Where?
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Is there a place where I can go to see all of the ic memes throughout the years? I'm working on something and wanna have references to the inside jokes like the just pet the dog or the dick perspective thread
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>>7351989
he just posted >>7347412
i see him around frequently, he just stopped making threads
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>>7351992
You can start with this thread >>7296663
This was the earlier one I think >>6668011 (you will have to check it in the archives though, 4plebs or whatever)
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>>7351930
>But No-one is gonna make it in this board anyways
Speak for yourself fag
I'm gonna make it
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>>7352006
thx
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>>7351992
warosu
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>>7351898
Clothes have volume. Pulling clothes pulls it on end point in equal lenght.
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Day 30 complete!
One more day!
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study, rates appreciated
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What do you do on those days nothing you draw seems to come out right?
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>>7352066
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84g-uGGkjrc
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>>7352060
The perspective looks really nice. Well done, oynon.
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>>7352066
Keep on drawing, as those days are everyday for me.
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difficult for me to figure out how to make it stop looking off
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MEDSMAP TONGUE MY ANUS
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>>7352066
If you're smart, you'll take a break
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>>7352081
Care to elaborate? Because other than jumping into shading before finishing the rest of the linework, I'd say the head is not only too big for the chest/hands, but also haphazardly placed. The ear is not where the back of the neck meets the skull, so you got a weird ball jointed head.
Where's the other arm, is the torso turned sideways to the viewer?
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>>7352081
this any better?
>>7352105
how do you expect to get good by copying something so ugly
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>>7352112
Yes, downward looks better, but it didn't look that stiff to begin with imo
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>>7352060
cool, what is this a study of? some game?
>>7352113
yes... but it's bizzare, i think me slightly tilting the fingers made it less dynamic
Either that, or it's because dynamicity is literally inbalance. So wrongly defined forms and wrong proportions might make the drawing feel dynamic... just my theory
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>>7352109
full sketch of the body. my bad for not posting the whole thing initially. i had a feeling the head was too big and misplaced. i'll be able to fix that when i'm working again
>>7352112
possibly. i think i'll try and move the eyes closer together or something
>>7352113
it's a lot more stiff than my usual stuff. probably from attempting tk draw in a different style or the way i drafted it. i got ahead of myself and drew the head first since i was excited to use sai again
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>>7352112
Morpho is a good teacher retard, a lot of jap animators copy him. Though I'd advise anon to not worry about the faces, I can't stand them either
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>>7352116
>>7352112
nevermind i can see what else was changed now. i think i like the position of the head better on your fix. i'll see what i can do with it
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>>7352116
the problem with your eyes is that they are not on the same plane, like they are in actual people
refer to pic rel
I tried to nudge them in the right direction
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>>7352126
oh i see it now my bad again. eye planes fuck me up so there's no surprise there
i moved things around but i'll have to look it over it in the morning
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>>7352136
looking good, anon
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>>7352118
a teacher is as good as his results
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>>7352139
>Gestures broadly at all the bridgman and Loomis permabegs on this board.
I mean if we're going to play this game you already lost.
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>>7352140
>lost
you mean won? Bridgman and loomis are shit too
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crabs just screech about everything being shit and the reason they couldn't make it
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>>7351898
couldnt fix it sorry
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how do I better my approach to gesture studies? been using line of action and reading through a Michael Hampton book (albeit slowly), but struggling to find the best place to start, as well as figuring out the underlying structure and getting it right, especially when the body twists or foreshortening comes into it. Also want to start getting heads looking more like heads instead of ovals, or at least get it where the head is at least looking at the right direction more clearly?
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Is it worth delving into atelier style drawing? I can see drawing a few bargue plates would help you feel the form better, but it looks like a really arduous process.

Also, are there any good videos you guys would recommend on this topic?
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>>7351845
>>7351870
thanks for the feedback, I'll focus on simple shapes for now, at least until I can reproduce the simpler ones perfectly
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>https://dad.gallery/users/4981
>his figure is as stiff as a board and flat as a LGTV
Deviant tier, nodoby /beg/ who produce ugly anime garbage SAD :(
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>I don't know shit about anatomy
>come to beg thread and start giving advices
Ahahahahahahhahahahahaha
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>I fucked the hands
It implied that you know how to draw 'em. You don't :) Loomis have a guide for it!
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>>7352105
It's a good copy. Don't let the anime tranny bring you down. He usually starts drama and shitting on people on /DAD/ thread. An evil person imo.
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>>7352180
you know me from dad?
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>>7352183
In other words, he's a gaslighter
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>>7352177
Anon, I'm pretty sure >>7352112 was someone making an edit to the drawing, not the OP of the drawing
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>>7352178
i didn't give any advice you've got the wrong person sorry
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>>7352186
yeah that's not me sorry for the confusion
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>>7352187
Don't glaslight me
>>7352081
>>7352112
Same person
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>>7352178
don't show that... its indecent
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PERMABEG HERE
IS THERE ANY ANIME STYLE ARTIST WHO USES TACO?
I AM REALLY STRUGGLING WITH SIMPLYFING SHIT TO DRAW FROM MEMORY AND DONT KNOW HOW TO CONSTRUCT WITH ANYTHING BUT STIFF BOXES AND THAT IS BARELY.
PLEASE HELP. SEND. THANKS.
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>>7352190
well i'm not sure how to convince you of it so i'll leave it be
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>>7352177
>>7352178
>>7352180
>>7352183
I made these horrible, venomous posts. Please forgive me my queen. I Just want to protect the thread retard!
>>7352184
>>7352187
>>7352192
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>>7352202
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my bad for engaging it kind of startled me. heres another thing i started working on recently. i still need to work on the movement to make it look better. i think my best bet is to keep working on game related things instead
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>>7352177
seething ESL
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>>7352200
Sir help me i am fucking indian
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Will I improve if I draw using my shoulder instead of my hand on 11x17 instead of regular copy paper and use charcoal for my construction lines?



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