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Languid Cicada is one of the best authors. His only shortcoming is that he doesn't spell-check.
>I F#!&ING LOVE SCIENCE!
>>94268574Update to OC from last thread.Please update your builds accordingly.
>>94268696Physics fag thinks he's a real scientist instead of a pseud like pic related despite none of the abstractions he believes in holding in weight in reality
>>94268678Do the "final" options require 3rd year apprenticeship to be unlocked?
>>94268696this is the physics guy samefagging btw
Kleidi... my beloved
>>94268720Needs a little girl option
>>94268742LMAO why the FUCK would you trust me?
Drace... my beloved.
>>94268720!
>>94268678>uwuOwO
>>94268893
>>94268904
>>94268678Portkey Travel, Permanent Astral Form, Astral Kinesis, Mental Clarity, Stasis Field, Flash Forward, Cardiant Speed, Chronosight, Beyond Time Itself, Eye of God, Absolute Freeze>true immortal>time lord
>>94268825>GOOD ENDINGWell done! You solved the CYOA!
https://pastebin.com/xdPzBNhwI finally decided to give up the ghost and swap my Walk Blessed for the one I got from the roller. Technically the name Lingering Magic no longer fits but it'd be weird to change it at this point.
>Only a woman would think Magi Case is feminist.Italics-sama not like this..
>>94269042breedable femboy
>>94268639>You can't dodge bullets>Haha bullets beat magic!Bro fucking Donal duck did it.Gunfags are liars.And magic can do a shit ton of things more than a gun.
>>94269086...
>>94269086based
>>94269071CYOAs where women are brutally oppressed?Bonus points if Reddit banned or cried about it.
Did Italics ever say why Devil clan is the English word "Devil", and not some Greek or whatever looking thing?
>>94269071The strongest male character in the cyoa is Chronos, and he is what? Sixth?No, Helios doesn't count. He's a non-character at this point and barely exists.
>>94269097Drace with all her super magic or Ester with a gun and the promise of one of your pubic hairs?
>>94268649
>>94269132Even fucking anti-mages are ruled by a woman.
passenger v3 never
>>94269132>No, Helios doesn't count.What the fuck kind of cope is this? He counts, so does FordGOD.>Other menDrac literally kisses your penis and loves you and submots like a trad wife if you marry her. Ostane stops being gay if you are a male mage and marry her. Even the entire witch faction malds at you if you get Yaga to submit and marry youm
>>94269042You are going survive by being the royal femboy in court
>>94269042>>94269086>>94269100>>94269115I think we already had this conversation/reaction toward the same femboy didnt we?
>>94269184>What the fuck kind of cope is this?He non-personed himself in a fight agains a woman and even failed to actually achieve anything. It's so over for him.>so does FordGODHe's a jobber who isn't even within top-10.I only care about powerlevels, it's a strong women cyoa, don't delude yourself.
>>94269214Did we talk about the painted nails yet?
>>94269132>No, Helios doesn't countThe Ghost of the Strongest.
>>94269184>Helios gets BTFO by a book and is forever seething about Are you sure about his superiority?>Being a loving wife I don't see an argument here
>>94269216>>94269242>I only care about powerlevels, it's a strong women cyoa, don't delude yourself.Drac loses to the cock and motherhood to (You).
reminder that to become the strongest mage in magi case you get that double magic trait, leave your job in police and train like an autist 24/7 until you one shot everyone
>>94269257based as shit lol
>>94269178>cyoas you will never play
>>94269216>>94269242>Are you sure about his superiority>He non-personed himself in a fight agains a womanHe didn't lose and secured Devil Clan independence after winning the war.>Ford not Top 10He is.
>>94269184I think u understand now. You seem to think just because a woman becomes a loving wife then the narrative is no longer feminist? Feminism is about women being able to stand on equal ground with men and being able choose their life. These women are choosing to be loving wives and that does not take away their power. If you really wanted to be misogynistic, the player character would need to force these girls into their position and made to kneel which, you can do in your own stories but as the characters are written they're just powerful hopeless romantics.
I have made this garbage in 5 minutes. Behold! A cyoa worthy of cyoag!!OC OC OC OC!OC OC OC OC!OC OC OC OC!
>>94269257Exactly what i was thinking too.
>>94269231No, he looks gentle subissive femboy type but maybe je likes to scratch backs?
>>94269286I am none of those since I don't play as anime people.
>>94269264Just seduce Drac and Octanes.
Rolled 3 (1d10)I don't recognize 2,3,4 and 5
>>94269042Shameful
Rolled 10 (1d10)>>94269286Vibe check
>>94269300Having a harem of the strongest waifus doesn't you, personally, are the strongest. At best you're the Handler.
>>94269276>He didn't lose
>>94269305>token girlAt least I have a token. I sell it and become rich.
Rolled 7 (1d10)>>94269286Thank you for your efforts.
>>94269280>You seem to think just because a woman becomes a loving wife then the narrative is no longer feminist?Yes.>Feminism is about women being able to stand on equal ground with men and being able choose their life. These women are choosing to be loving wives aThere is a literal lore page outright confirming male mages are making harems with multiple women to increase birth rates.That is not feminism.
Rolled 3 (1d10)>>94269286uguu~ i love anime
>>94269309It doesn't matter how strong you are because you can never get anywhere close to those two's power, so all that matters is controlling them.
>>94269306It should be fine, it's not like I'd be given the option if the Father wasn't okay with me using it.
>>94269286Yes.
>>94269325But then it's yet another waifu collection game. How is it interesting?
>>94269321>the token girl
>>94269325Why are you making shit uo? Ostane even offers to be your mentor and make you the strongest Alchemist.She also breaks the 4th wall.
>>94269257It's not a loss if she's willing. It's like you guys seem to think consent makes them weak. >>94269320>Yeslmao>This is not feminism Like I said in the last thread>You wrote a tragic tale of women rising to power despite misogyny.The world was established to be against these girls and despite the odds, they come out on top and now it's time for them to get their happy ending with their husbando, the male player if you choose.
Rolled 1 (1d10)>>94269286Nah, I'd win.
>>94269161I used to live this life....
>>94269340If anything, collecting waifus for power is novel. Usually, you get power to collect waifus.>>94269351>make you the strongest AlchemistYou would still be infinitely weaker than her. Of course, learning alchemy is a way to seduce her, so it's not like that's pointless.
>>94269286rollan
>>94269375I'm an older brother in real life so this isn't going to take much adjustment
Rolled 5 (1d10)>>94269286
>>94269276Helios is on the brink of not existing, the man is hanging on by a thread. I thought we all had a good laugh at him for this.
>>94269355>despite the odds, tYou might be retarded. Majority of Magi women are not fucking Drac or Ostane tier. In fact the CYOA has more Archmage tier men than women.
>>94269374>You would still be infinitely weaker than her.Because Ostane is cheating by using a relic that makes her the source of all creation incarnate.>>94269410>the man is hanging on by a thread.Headcanon. He'll delete you without any problems if you tried making a move.
>>94269306It's amazing how so many still have Stockholm syndrome over these subpar WBs long after the discussion of the cyoa has died down. I don't think I've ever seen anything like it
>>94269363what happened?
>>94269286>no karate master
>start working on a CYOA>scope creep myself into writing mechanics and contects for a whole ass game
>>94269449
>>94269430That's because they are not the main characters of this CYOA. The fact that women below them are put in these positions and they still climb out on top is what adds to the feminist narrative. I don't know why this upsets you. You still get to be the special snowflake in this world you just have to do your dance for her to notice you.
>>94269458as long as it isn't iceyblades tier legitimately difficult to play autism
>>942694471 guy with a 1 word comment. I think your comment is an overreaction over nothing, and your comment isnt much either, but its like x30 the original one
>>94269484It was more talked the femboy design and his nails than the wb xd
>>94269466Bro you have no idea what feminist means or is. Drac was controlled and used by her father just like Ostane. Lionheart literally kneeled to the original male Lionheart. Aozdou takes her name from ankther man that she followed. Atman served another man as a subordinate. Meirin served her father as a subordinate. Galileo served a male master.The only one feminist among the founders is Yaga and even then she submits to her son Koschai. Evoco is also male.
>>94269484Cry about it
>>94269449She moved to New York to get a masters in dance.
>Magi Case is feministOh nonono
>>94269530That blonde girl with double or more the chest size is that girl girl from Btooom with big boovs that almost got raped like 4-5 times
>>94269458Tell me about it
>>94269444>headcanon It's litterally in his profile if he stops concentrating he will stop existing. He is a hollow shell of his former self and if you consider that a win well...congrats?>>94269505I think you don't understand what a feminist story is. Once again, I must repeat myself. >Women and children are considered disposable and that's why they were used as sacrifices>End up being the most powerful mages as a result and rule this world>Explores the cruelties of man through each of them and the abuse they had to endureYou wrote a tragic tale of women rising to power despite misogyny. >>94269530Even more so if you choose to be a female player since you have the options to rise above everyone at an even bigger disadvantage proving your worth.
>>94269447Honestly I did as well, that's why I didn't do this when the gacha first came out.
>>94269522should've got her pregnant and tied her down dummy
>>94269547The profile states he's still active and guiding his Clan. Hating Drac is just adding on to the reason why he shouldn't disappear from the world. He thinks, so he exists.
>>94269573
>>94269573Mr Xi....I'm sorry........I failed you.
>>94269578
>>94269587
>>94269576And thus, hanging on by a thread. His is a fragile existence of literal nothing all because he was petty and emotional.
>>94269591
>>94269547Tragic stories don't make Magi Case feminist retardbro. Magi Case is anti-feminist because women are inferior and having exceptions which aren't even exceptions as you acknowledged doesn't change that fact.
>>94269604>Hanging on by a threadExcept not. He's busy doing things, if he doesn't have things to do he might not exist. But that js a might because he still existed even after not losing to Drac.
ENTER. A real mage.
>>94268861>>94268926What even is this CYOA you are talking about?
>>94269612You would be right if it wasn't a constant pattern with multiple main characters and part of the inciting incident of the lore. If anything, it highlights how wrong and corrupt the men have been. Then there's characters that had succeeded in escaping their fate not by power but by trickery from Karrylicht's parents bringing her up as a man. Not unlike Oscar in Rose of Versailles. I still don't understand why an interesting observation is bothering you, I think it's an unexpected twist from a place like this. >>94269624If you consider that kind of life a win then like I said. Congrats.
>>94269772Something Italics is working on, read up further for the name.
>>94269557You would have been shitposted about if you had.
>>94269868Nobody shitposted. I remember a few builds used the roller and thats it. There wasnt a discussion over it
>>94269670Good loli, i will use my harem magical item to use her as a breeding stock machine
>>94269946T. MelphiasEnjoy your suffering.
>>94269772A shitpost by a well known shitposter
>>94269573this cyoa is actually self-insertyou play as an old grandpa getting revenge on the darkness for killing his family
>>94269946(Cannot be Married)Unless you're ignoring that
>>94269097me on the left
>>94269097me on the alice
>>94270029Thats why the magical harem item lets me do it. Didnt it let you marry unmarriable characters?
>>94270157>can cuck ford>still can't yuri
>>94270157Double checked and yea. Right on, enjoy your harem. I ignored most of the items.
>>94270355why not? Will cuck Ford and be in a harem with Drac and Ostane. They 3 will yuri snd i will participate
which CYOA has good companions? Also, how many is too many?
I wish I still liked magi case but italics has really burnt me out on it and I have a hard time enjoying it anymore.
>>94270483Nexus Gateway, and it depends on the setting. More than two pages is usually too much.
>>94270483You can have as many as you want if they are written well and useful. But good luck on writing them well.
>>94270497>look it up>kindergarten writing>can barely even see the font from all the noise>am i cute uwu????>plain descriptions of characters telling you who they are instead of showing youwhy is this author praised here again? seems very pedestrian, actually forget I asked, I should have known the same names as always would be regurgitated ad infinitum around here
>>94270483
>>94270355Italics "genocide the gays" Anon
>>94270619Ah, then Entropist might be more your speed. It's the same in all of those aspects but at least it's better coomer bait
>>94270643
>>94270661
>>94269946>>94270355You can't cuck Ford because Telos isn't his real wofe. His real wife lives in his basement.
>>94270687His real wife is using the cunny body as proxy though? Just like ford and his... 5? Bodies?
>>94270703His real wife is a bunch of organs in a jar in the basement.
>>94270714And you missed my point entirely i guess
>>94270720What point? His wife is a separate person, there is no proxy.
>>94270767You are retarded
What makes a good CYOA Companion? What is the proper balance between backstory, powers, skills, and interactions with you and others?
Science is gay. Physics fag is gay. Matter isn't everything.
>>94270854>Motivation for what they do and why they do it>A fear that is stopping them or holding them back>A good reason why THEY would want to be with you besides wanting to fuck you>A good reason why YOU would want them to be with you besides wanting to fuck them
>>94270854Check Dragonfall
>>94270947For what not to do.
Mom, they didnt like aro's companions and I posted bait as a countermesure but they ignored me what do i do know?
>>94270993I didn't like most of the companions but my wife lumi and the dragon princesses were good. Chrona can probably change her form to be younger as well so she can probably be ok.
>>94270619>Kindergarten writing? What do you need in writing? a PhD in literature at least? Its a cyoa not a thesis.>Can barely even see the fon from all the noise? What noise? tell the voices in your head to stop talking>Am i cute uwu???I only saw that with kleidi. I didnt like it because she is also like really old to have hyperactive child personality but its not atrocious.>Description of characters telling you who they are instead of showing youHow can they show you? do you want a gift of tgen doing things or something? In a description of this type its either a 3rd person or 1st person>>94270657I liked Aro's companions but Entropist's are more my taste. That you had the necessity to bring it up unprovocked is pretty telling of yourself
>>94271050Fix the names of the Blood, Void, Rage, Hope, and Breath aspects. While you're at it, change Lord English and Skaia's names back. Fully commit to either changing or keeping the proper nouns of the characters you're stealing.
>>94271102That's clearly not Aro, also that's a dumb idea.
>>94270993Probably seethe and post more bait
>>94270619For as terrible aro's current writing his... it used to be worse.
>>94271050>How can they show you?>Doesn't even know standard writing practices of "show don't tell"Allow me to demonstrate my pedestrian friend.>Something pokes through the shadows, merging into a towering figure standing over you. Looking up you're locked into green beady eyes carrying a sickening craze. "Name's Karl, hah, what're you doing in my lair?" Scratching his raw hard tool as a snicker escapes him. "Oh this? Just me wrench. I call'em Bob! Hah. Real good to bash people in the head with."Compared to>This is Karl. He's very tall, muscular, but also a bit crazy. He likes to carry a wrench around called "Bob". He also keeps to himself in his lair, where he tends to hide in the shadows.Understand, anon? Very elemental stuff.
>>94271219>Using logic with a defenderWhat a waste of time.
>>94271263Stop seething.
>>94271109Ah yes. Anyways, lets see Paul Allen's CYOA
>>94271269What a way to prove that guy was right so fast, lol
>>94271102Pic related
>>94271354Thank you for proving me right too.
>>94271373>N.. no ulol
>>94271378>P-pls
man it really doesn't take much to make some bigshot author "mad" around here
>>94271112Damn, he really took your advice to heart.
>>94271219> Scratching his raw hard tool My guy…
>>94271414>bigshot author>literally some rando posting free content on tgPlease experience nature anon
>>94271219>Novelist complex>Thinks 2nd person works as a presentation but 3rd doesntI understand you dont understand. What you did is a choice, totally. But, to be honest. Easily cringeworthy. Even tovour standards. You used a neutral guy type that is a mockery of himself and even that gave cringe when it was supposed to be a joke character and I saw it like that. Imagine doing Chrona with that style, ew.Also, there is some things you cant explain with that. Like backstories, inner thoughts etc... that depend on a third party or everything seems forced as a guy you just met is treating you like your best friend. Also, you have to take into account contexts like if the choices are something you are going to recieve in a future, something retroactive like you already met them and you are just remembering etc...Is not X style > Y style. Some styles work better in some context and the others in other contexts. Which is why "she writes in 3rd person, ew" is a dumb complain. Also, she kind of used that with Kleidi and you already saw it how it is.
>>94271414Is everyone aro now?
>>94271445HOLY seethe man, like, just grow and become a better writer in the future. We were all blanket tellers once in third grade or something. We dont all learn to write well at the same pace. Its alright. You learned something today, just soak it up and try it yourself next time.
>>94271452why would someone get this butthurt tho? its like getting butthurt over critiquing the writing style of JK Rowling or some shit, even the most jaded of HP fans will admit it was mid tier and dropping in writing style the longer the series went on
>>94271452Catposter, Dark sovereign, MatterAnon, resentfulbaiterAnon are the ones that usually post. With the ocasional author, the gil poster, the kleidi or gift belover and haters of every author expecting the time to shit unprovocked.Oh, and that indian guy that is summoned just to say "kys" and go into the mist, pretty funny desu
>>94271498Maybe they felt writing was their strong point? Too much time in the hugbox may do that to you.
>>94271503>Dark sovereignI have been lurking a lot, these threads are boring as hell lately and I barely post.
>>94271503>resentfulbaiterAnon The auctors guy, huhright?
>>94271481>Answer to someone posting their views and trying to nake a conversation with "seethe"Thats... thats pretty pathetic. Its okay. Was it me telling you your sorry ass bob was cringe? was the option of someone not having your views? Anyway, to not break your mind I will not keep hammering it with something so basic. Good day my man
>>94271503I mean. When someone can just say a single word and that causes you to reply. I think it should be a sign that you need to stop coming here for a while. Let us not act like the super fans are any better than the super haters.
>>94271445>As you approach the ship, a swarm of nanomachines fly out and coalesce into the form of a beautiful woman. You instantly notice her giant bazongas jiggling with a manic intensity. “Name’s Chrona, hah, what’re you doing on my ship?”Stroking her sopping wet pussy as a snigger escapes her.“Oh this? Just my tabby, Jinxie. Sorry for the mess, but she just got a bath”This is copyrighted so do not steal it please.
>>94271498It honestly doesn't seem that butthurt, just childish, i guess?
>>94271532>just childishLike the writing>>94271525>CringeThis is why you have a problem.
>>94271518Yep. I feel the same but as when I was active you basically always were there i expected some of these guys to be you. >>94271522A bunch of them. Basically everyone that uses every opportunitu to bring up an old discussion with some bait like "x is shit" and thats it. The auctors guy is one, he is very autistic. The aro seethe is another. Basically everyone that hates some author here and wants to create discussion just to shit, which is pretty resenful for someone you dont know. Its not one guy but a hivemind of resenful people
>>94271529Its true that super defenders are not good for themselces either. But its better in my opinion. ItsNeutral > defenders > hatersBecause haters are full of hate. The other at least have good intentions or just want to "defend" something they like, is bad for them but theycare not bad themselves. The haters are doing bad to everyone, themselves included
>>94271503>just to say "kys" and go into the mistBased
>>94271577So you think its bad when someone explains "show dont tell" and shares an example of it? This is "hatred" to you?
>>94271577Are they really? I sometimes see them posting bait just to bait the haters too. They are not any better and just shit up the thread. Also, most are haters themselves of another author. You see it here every thread. Praising one author while insulting another.
>>9427153010/10 for the bazongaas and wet pussy. But at that point make it a book in smashwords so you gain money eith erotica and the mc can canonically fuck
>>94271555You are shitposter too, though.
>>94271582No. I was not talking about that guy. Althought his first comment was kind of just >I dont like this :(The one where he explained what he actually wanted made sense as an opinion. I just wish more people here wasnt as absolutist as to equal rheir opinion to truth. I would 100% support him if he wasnt treating his opinion as a new rule. But anyway, i wasn't talking about him, but brainless hate
>>94271583Yeah, probably they are too part.of tje other side at some point. I think I am just one of the few that doesnt hate any author and just ignore what they dont like.
Hey guys, i'm thinking up ways to make the Family members better. How does this look for the first intro paragraph for Lily?
>>94271580I think that anon is a demon. You say his name and you summon him , but as we dont know what to do with demons he can just express his true feelings shortly before being unsummoned
>>94271641What are your concerns?
>>94271651It's small community here. If you keep repeating the same shitposts for long enough you're eventually gonna get a reply
>>94271641How are people chose to become ultima?
>>94271680>chose*chosen
>>94271680Skai and the Aspects choose them.>>94271652Uh, that it's bad?
>>94271692Do they look for any specific qualities, e.g. do empathetic people have higher chances of being picked by heart?
>>94271707Yes, intelligent and scientific people are more likely to be space, inquisitive and technological people are more likely to be time, optimistic and caring people are more likely to be life, etc.
>>94271641I always hated how that neck looks. It just feels wrong.
>>94271716Can ultima control the aspects to influence creation of new ultima? Like make a certain favorite descendant more likely to become ultima? Or can they only make them as smart/strong/whatever other trait as possible to increase their chances?
>>94271752Nyo
>>94271641>>94271692Could you put some space in between the paragraphs? The sample has them so close, they look like like one giant block of text.
>Kleidi will become a cow hag.It's so over bros.
>>94271780
>>94271641For a moment I thought you were Tok using a Bimbo as a joke.Then I realized it was actually you Aro...
>>94271797Bimbo?>>94271780Sure, i'll work on it.>>94271752An older Ultima can mold new young ones, but it takes even more time than making multiverses.
>>94271716So what aspect would your typical anon qualify for?
>>94271806Darkness. All anons are is absence and holes.
>>94271803You know the kind of women Tok likes.women with unnatural big lips and boobs the size of their heads doing the dumb duck face.
>>94271815I think she looks pretty, sure she has plump lips but i wouldn't call her a bimbo.
>>94271785She is perfect and with age becomes perfect++. I dont care how many world have to be conquered to marry that
>>94271821She looks like the most basic bimbo bitch ever. I mean a real bimbo, not like the ones tok post which are porn bimbos.
>>94271812>mfw
>>94271835I'm sorry she's prettier than you, anon
>>94271840I think you tried a comeback? But it makes so little sense, I am just confused.>>94271812So all anons are old ones.
>>94271641did you listen in to the conversation above and try your hand at it here?
>>94271884How dare you slander dark ultima?! I will grind your soul in a black hole for eternity.
>>94271641I want to know what she thinks about spaaaaace and the kind of hijinks she’s gotten into with her aspect. Or that’s what I would say, but she has the space aspect, and yet she doesn’t start the conversation by teleporting behind me and saying “Nothing personnel kid”, so she could never be in my family.
>>94271884>envious girl tier catty complaints>responds with a upper inflection and questionmark It's more embarrassing if you're actually a male desu
>>94271716>>94271812I'd obviously be life because I despise girls who get abortions
>>94271641I don't think the 'elder of space' who was a workaholic at CERN should look like an instagram influencer
>>94271821I would not mind someone like her the problem is that she has, in my opinion, a "plastic" look that's what makes her seem like a Bimbo to me.
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>>94271940Ultima have perfect shapeshifting, this is just what she looked like in her 20s.>>94271921That will be in the second paragraph.>>94271910I reviewed it while watching twitch, but i was already on the family members page trying to figure out how to make it better.
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>>94268823Drace enthusiasts keep winning
>>94271918Is that a picture of a black hole or of you bending over then?
>>94271884Only the oldfags are old ones.
>>94271219This is atrocious writing. I'll take a kindergartner's exposition over this vomit inducing marvel slop.
>>94271973black hole
>Not going Life/creation to make your own personal garden of eden full of monstergirls Why even play ultimate god then.
>>94272019You don't need Life to create life.
>>94272026Tier 1 is shitty.
>>94272019I play to be divine murderhobo that looks like a little girl but can crack a planet in half with a stomp and casually pluck the sun out of the sky.
No, I'm not dead. Sorry to disappoint some of you. If you were in the hurricanes' paths, I hope everything is at least mostly alright with you.I've been going through some more pain in my personal life. Not worth explaining.Anyway I'm feeling like I have just enough motivation to get back to work on WIPs now. I simply can't give ETAs, sorry.Thanks to anyone that cares. Have a good day.~ CyrusP.S. What the hezmada is up with this 900-second timer, 4chan. ffs.Well, here's hoping I remember to come back to this page when the timer finishes.
>>94272235>i'm gayYou could have just shortened your post to this.
>>94272281Why would i suck dick as a little girl?
>>94272286>Gay AND retardedTranny moment.
>>94272019bro? your???
>>94272317I don't understand this esoteric image.
>>94270619Read Luminary then.It at least attempts to do some show don't tell.
>>94272328He's saying you can use technology to clone and then alter your clone's genetics to create a menagerie of vaguely incestuous family members.
>>94272352That just sounds shit.
>>94271973Is the only "real" picture of a black hole anon...
>>94272237Oh hey you are still around. Glad to hear it, it has been a while doesn't it?By the way the 900 second timer thankfully SHOULD be only one time only.
>>94272368>>94272343>>94272317>>94272237>>94272019So basically, you are all jobbers.
>>94272397thank you, friend
>>94272437Specially you >>94272286
>>94272474>Subrace: Celestial Elf>Encounter: Salvation>Age Group: Adult>Particular Characteristics:CleverCharismaticObsessive>Brand Of Ownership: Intricate Choker>Magical Enchantments:Excited RuneStamina RuneStrength RuneSorcerer Rune>Clothing Articles: Casual ClothingFormal Dress>Living Accommodations: Master Bedroom>Slave Treatment: Respectful>Slave Severity: Appeasing>Punishments: Reprimand>Training & Education:LiteratureSorceryCombat>Employment: Sorcery>Gifts & Trinkets:Warm CloakFree TimeOutingsCandy>Magic & Sorcery [3 Conditions Met]:TelepathyTelekinesisCleanseHealTreatmentVisual CloakMystic Arrow
>>94271503>>94271651Unironically mindbroken
>>94270483Why the fuck does this get asked every other threadAnd why are the answers always so bad? Gateway nexus seriously? At least evoker's oath does something original
>>94272616It gets bad answers because it gets asked so often, especially when all the answers are either magi case, entropist, or dragonfall.
>>94272658>magi caseItalics companions will never ever be good.
>>94272704Coping.
>>94272816Writing 1000 words a companion doesn't make them interesting
>>94272835Nobody said any of that and you are malding.
>>94272840I said that right now and you are seething
>>94272599Yes. It is so obvious is someone that got angry at those posts. Like, just ignore them, retard.
>>94272704Sure, whatever you say Tok.
>>94272237>>94272397>>>/g/102965271
>>94272882No. It is a matter of principle.
>>94272704Better than dragonshit
>>94272658Dragonfall has companions?
>>94273170This guy says so. I never played it.>>94270947
>>94269132>The strongest male character in the cyoa is ChronosThe strongest male character in the Magi Case is Helios.>No, Helios doesn't count.Then it's the Player Character if you play as a male and decide to put in years of effort and training.> He's a non-character at this point and barely exists.There are also other strong male characters like Mircea and Greve. Redux has multiple new characters to expand on Clan lore and options for you including new strong characters that were previously background characters like pic related, the Archmage of the Galileo Clan.
Cyoas like this? Why aren’t there more cyoas that do this? >Does not give a free body/gender change.>Provides choices which a self-insert build would likely be unable to choose.>Too much lore/setting information. BOOOOORING. I don't give a shit.>Has "universes based on fictional universes", not actual fictional universes, which eliminates half the fun of planeswalking.>Has people that you literally cannot fight or defeat. Big problem here.>The companions aren't YOUR companions. They are people you can team up with and they are not subservient to you. This is shitty design.>Points are too limited. Requirement points should be scrapped entirely, and bonus points should be multiplied by 2 or 3. I don't care about build diversity if I don't want to make a build because I would suck. Weak magic that you have to LEARN costs one tenth your points? Fuck all that, I should get all that for fucking free.>No cool powers like perfect mind control, seeing the future, or turning people into your slaves.>No lewd powers. How do you expect me to be interested if I can't even get my dick wet?>Everything good is too expensive. A comfy pocket dimension should be FREE. Infinite deaths should be FREE. Youth should be FREE. And I want a waifu. No, in a planeswalker cyoa, I want a HAREM of waifus.>The power levels are too low. I want to be killing gods and destroying entire universes, only saving those I want to fuck.>And fuck limits and requirements. I want my power to be FREE. Fuck anyone who tries to make me pay for power.>And double fuck """mentors""". I shouldn't have shit to learn about fuck, I should only be concerned with spending my days fucking and fucking around,>No anime art or anime tropes.
>>94272506nice work, Obsessive pretty much solves the biggest issue
>>94273278>Reduxlmao
>>94272882>>94273041thank you for suggestion, though as long as I just have to wait 15min per day to post without email, I'm not too bothered
>>94273328>Why aren’t there more cyoas that do this?Because the shitposters ran AHS off.
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>>94273328You're asking for >>94271938.
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>>94273369Too much lore
>>94273328Something by TroyX or similar /trash/
>>94273381
>>94273328Go to Jumpchain faggot.
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>>94273428Secrets
>>94273433Lore page 1
>>94273437Lore page 2
>>94273386>Something by TroyX or similar /trash/Actually he does have one - Planeslord Initiation. Get to be a planeswalker who gains powers based on whom (you) have sex with.
>>94273370classic
No matter how reputable your are or how many times you release OC, it's meaningless if you can bear soul.However, from now on, all authors will release 120% of their CYOA potential.
>>94273581I'll take that as a blessing, thanks anon
>>94273581>can bear soul???
>>94273369>Every world isn't real until you visit>Hey bro here's a path where you solve really hard problems in worlds that didn't need to be realMotivation Level: 0%
>>94273649Combine that with the least interesting magic ruleset possible, that you will be forced to learn and use because he rugpulled tech-chads in spite of his redditor brainrot. I just read learnt who Err is while typing this comment and now I hate this CYOA even more. What an absolutely insufferable work.
>>94273369Why don't planeswalkers go to insanely high powered worlds like a xianxia one and become an existence that isn't suppressed by universal laws? Granted, those verses are the only ones where you might have your soul annihilated because they're so powerful, but risk reward.
>>94269161i am literally 100% bugman southeast asian with 0% white gene, can i play this CYOA ?otherwise, can i roleplay as a Finngolian while playing this CYOA ? Finns seem white enough while still Asiatic
>>94273889You can play any CYOA you want to, Tok
>>94273723Because the academy implants every planeswalker it catches with a soul-bomb that will kill them the minute they choose to rebel.
Just out of curiosity for Magi Case Lore. Reason is constantly trying to twist Creation to its rules using logic and group think. What would the equivalent be for Creation twisting Reason?
>>94273370It's been a while since I made a build for this... May as well make one for 2024.This build is for myself and at least two of my closest friends.Portal: Key. The exit/interior entrance is located on a tiny stone building by the dock on the Beach and is guarded by androids.Time Setting: Time ContinuesDimensional Edge: Invisible WallEnvironment...The landmass is a perfect circle when viewed from above.Hills (Biggest hill at the center of the map is where my house is)Forest (Surrounding and included in the Hills)Farmland (Between my house and the Forest treeline)Beach (Most outer portion of the map; makes up 10% of the map)Environmental Extras...x3 Additional Environmentsx2 More Space (1000 acres total)Village(EEE: Ranch, Wild Fauna [incl. Seafood], Set Time, Set Weather)Rooms...Bedroom (+sleepy bed, +size upgrade, +two extra bedrooms)Bathroom (+size upgrade, +fresh, +magic toiletries)Kitchen (+size upgrade, +a.i. chef, +nutrients)Study (+faster learning, +iq and creativity, +absolut focus)Gym (+a.i. coach, +hema/fencing/martial arts, +faster gainz)Library (+tablet and omnibook, +magic tv, +translator and decoder)Game Room (+super console computer, +digital library, +vr bodyset aka holodeck)Extra Environmental Extras (EEEx4)--- Village ---Inhabitants: Mostly Androids for basic/daily tasks or defense/policing, and the other inhabitants are Human or Mythical waifus.Technology: Futuristic (localized to fit a rural aesthetic and namely for reverse-engineering)Magic: High Magic (highly controlled and limited to a select few inhabitants)Specialties...Music, Fashion, Education, Nature (+hot springs), Military, MachineryBecause most of the inhabitants are robots, all these options are primarily for utilitarian purposes to serve myself or my friends and the waifus.(Examples: Machinery provides learning opportunities for building stuff, Fashion has a similar effect as the Dressing Room)
>>94273649You can create an infinite amount of hellscapes to fulfill the arbitrary requirement you need to fulfill to get into the College but slipping a love potion to a genocidal countess' drink is gonna get you murder raped by the planeswalking police.
>>94273967i am not Tok though, but thankshttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-QP7yPxoDsI
>>94269161>whiteBut I'm black.
>>94274419Are you Italics or Hyenanon?
I wonder what tenebrous OC will drop during hallow's eve.
>>94273278Strongest character is me and i'm male.
>>94273328>I want to INSTANTLY win when I play CYOA!
>>94274614Living God is the only cyoa worth playing
>>94274655>I want to be a GOD, and I want to be it NOW!
>I want to be a DOG, and I want to be it NOW!
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>>94274741I don't remember the roll section, must be a new version.
Rolled 53, 31, 2, 32, 19, 31, 1, 9, 56, 33 = 267 (10d60)>>94274745(checked desuarchive) Apparently not, it's been there since 2016.rollin
>>94274741What's the point of going The Prodigy route? Is being an Improved Familiar really THAT good that it's worth giving up a perk, taking 2 jobs and having the weight of the world upon you?
>>94269161Did Entropissanon make this? Doesn't he know spaniards aren't white? Smh
>>94274709>he wants to play as something weaker
>>94273723>Why don't planeswalkers go to insanely high powered worlds like a xianxia one and become an existence that isn't suppressed by universal laws?Short answer? Only a handful of things are true across all possible realities: mathematics, Planar Runes, Planar Magic, and Outer God Thaumaturgy. There is no (known) Planar equivalent to Cultivation, so it only works in some universes. And what empowers (you) in one such universe might actually weaken (you) in another universe with cultivation, if the local rules are different enough. There is no known form of Cultivation (or cybernetic implants, or biopunk mutations, or . . .) that wirks consistently across the omniverse.(Look at the Connections. One guy is literally a god in his home universe, but outside it, he's back to being mortal.) Long answer? (You) can go and become a cultivator, if (you) want. If (you) have Self-Improvement (tier 2), the body/soul upgrades will even manifest in other Cultivation universes. (You) can even take spell-like effects with (you), if (you) connected on a primal level with that Cultivation universe. However, if Cultivation doesn't work in a particular universe, it doesn't work, and being a planeswalker doesn't change that. In those universes, (you) will get knocked down to mortal levels, at least until (you) return to a Cultivation-friendly universe.(Same thing happens with cybernetic implants. Doesn't matter how advanced they are, if the local universe's physical laws don't support them, they're just useless junk, and you will spawn in with a purely flesh-and-blood body)Same thing is true if (you) go to a Marvel superhero world and get superpowers. Or find the Dragonball universe and train with the Z Fighters. Or visit Middle Earth and steal the One Ring. (You) would be a badass in that universe, and some of the skills would probably transfer over, but the bulk of the powers would only work in a limited number of universes.
>>94275037I was saying to become unaffected by universal laws. There's plenty of xianxia where you control laws in universal+ range and/or are an universe(s) unto yourself.
>>94273649>>Every world isn't real until you visitThey're all real. The ones (you) can visit in Planeswalker Rising are just the mirrors and knock-offs of the major ones, forced to imperfectly mimic what happened in the major one until an outside force (like a planeswalker) interacts with them.Example: A starting character in Planeswalker Rising can't visit "the" Middle Earth, the one that inspired the Lord of the Rings novels. But (you) could visit the ones where Samwise ended up as the Ringbearer, or where Aragorn (not Boromir) was corrupted, or where Gandalf called in some favors with the eagles, and the Fellowship launched an aerial assault on Mordor . . .The worlds (you) don't visit still exist, still move forward, still suffer . . .But a visit by a planeswalker (or similar entity) gives them agency. Free will. The chance to forge their own destiny, and not just mindlessly mirror the major universe that spawned them.
>>94273369Not enough lore
>>94275074The omniverse is bigger, more "real", than any one particular universe. High enough cultivation could get (you) out a parricular universe (and thus become a planeswalker) , maybe even become (your) own universe . . .However you'd lose the bulk of those powers the moment (you) entered a universe where cultivation doesn't work. The only powers that are known to work everywhere, in every universe, are planar runes, planar magic, and Outer God thaumaturgy.If there's a planar version of Cultivation, it's currently unknown to the Scholars of Planeswalker Rising. (You) would have to go discover it (yourself) . . . which could be an intersting approach to being a Prodigal.
>>94275138>Outer GodThat's basically what a universal law independent cultivator (or anything else that reaches the same level) is?
>>94275074That's like asking: why don't you make a CYOA where you can pick an omnipotence that is so strong that even works outside of the CYOA in real life?Because no matter how mega super powerful you describe the power to be, from any outside perspective it's still just some words in a piece of fiction.
>>94275159Okay, by that definition, it can't be done in Planeswalker Rising. An Outer God is a god EVERYWHERE, and the only mortal known to have achieved that level is Err (who killed an Outer God with an experiemental planar rune-based death trap and inherited its divine portfolio).(You) can become a regional god, with authority over a bunch of universes, but there is currently no known way to evolve into an Outer God (excluding Err's method).
>>94269280Feminism is very much about destroying/preventing healthy families. You're underage.
>>94274368I’m pretty sure that your mentor still has to give you a pass. If you seem like too much of an ass, enjoy your existence in some godforsaken plane
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>>94275229That was just Second Wave Feminism, which emphasized women's rights in the business/career aspects of life, even if their proposed solutions imperiled the chance for a love life or family.
>>94275280Wrong.
>>94275278Upgraded Red pill obviously.
>>94275214Ok, back to getting 10000 iq to learn planar magic. And hunting outer gods because you can apparently steal their power.
>>94275274Alyiele (the psychic/Machiavellian mentor) might even give you extra credit for such a clever/sneaky solution.
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>>942752782 regular pills for me and my imaginary wife, if you please.
>>94275291If (you) pass, and get to attend the Citadel's school, (you) get ALL the listed powers in the cyoa, plus more, as a free brain download (like in the Matrix). So don't get too obsessed with learning everything before hand.
Alright, pretend >>94275316 was in >>94275278 and looked really cool even on my first try.
>anons talking about feminism>in my cyoag>dont even know who I should bait>the 200 iq chud simply replying "wrong">or the retard that thinks feminism is about "equality"i think i will just post one of my favorite anime until new bread comes
>>94275278Oh Em Gee that's so cool!
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>>94270483of the top of my head, the cyoas that do interesting stuff with companions are evoker's oath, in the wake of dawn, like a rising dragon and death is but a moment
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>>94275278Uhhh I'll take the red pill and the UPGRADED red pill.
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>>94270483My Computer has good companions, >>94261108
>>94274114>What would the equivalent be for Creation twisting Reason?Going schizo and having a breakdown. If you cannot comprehend something, your ability to Reason breaks down and you go insane.Lovecraftian creatures are prime examples of triggering this phenomenon. Yes, Lovecraft is canon to Magi Case. All of it is contained in the Galileo Clan domain.
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>>94275229>>94275280>>94275284both retarded holy shit
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>>94275494Ask nicely and ill post the DLC in the next thread
>>94275497Fuck off
>>94275502HOLY seethe, is talking about feminism outside of /pol/ really THIS important to you?
>>94275520don't try to reason with /pol/monkeys
I like feminism cause it makes me feel so girly wirly UWU hahaha I love equality and everyone should be equal and happy and all the worlds problems will go away with feminism and address womens problems! My first law will be to ban periods and (but not migraines cause then I can skip work whenever I want to!) also men should be castrated and killed if they disobey women! Love and kisses!
>>94275497Now!
>>94275546retarded again
>>94275557As you command Lord Palpatine
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>>94275587Your hate has made you stronger!
>>94275596>>94275628Thank you my lord
TOTAL AUTHORCATTLE DEATH!
>>94270483Define what is a good companion first, you nincompoop, you rapscallion.
>>94275766How pathetic are you? Give up.
There was a be the monster cyoa posted close to a halloween in 2023 or 2022 or 2021.Serious horror tone, very dark background, not in allsync's be the monster folder.It didn''t get much attention, and I didn't finish a build either. I was halfway through making an imagebuild but dropped it. Now I'll never find the cyoa again.
Are photons real or not.
>>94275807okay
>>94275851No. Light isn't real.
>>94275867I won't take Light magic then. What element is the most real?
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>>94275974>>94275982We don't need more evidence of you being a faggot tranny, tok.
>>94276006Nothing is more tranny than wanting to be a tiny little dragon am I rite?
>>94273610Berserker cyoa when
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>>94276087Correct.
>>94276006If he wins against Sons with his CANON Harmonist build, then he's more manly than True Sons, thus he's not a tranny.
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>>94276566Thats a big if when he is worse in anything. He could use 1M whatever they use in PE and even with his 2x he would lose to a new death lord using like 2 souls of power. He is the jobber of jobber
>>94275811Do you remember anything else about it? I probably have a copy, but I need help narrowing it down.
>>94279381Not much unfortunately.As I said, it was almost certainly first posted during an october, or very early november.Probably not by a named author, certainly not by one of the big names.My image-build-to-be was either a giant rat or a rat-man or a serial killer with rat powers, so one of the options might've had to do with rats.Rural setting, I think? I don't know if modern or fantasy.
>>94270483I liked the Facility companions and after reading it I daydreamed about them for a while
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