A thread for the creation and discussion of fan fiction and other fanworks - anything that involves a story and/or reading. What've you been reading? What've you been writing? What would you like to see more of?>Thread question:What's one concept excluding the megas from ZA you've seen so far that you want in fics?>Previous thread:>>58352472
>Pofag having Grimsley take pot shots at LeonYou love to see it.
>>58404214Some humans having really a long lifespan because Az's immortality seems to be just that, no regeneration or any other flashy thing. Fuck, Ash's "immortality" seems better since even if the body gets destroyed he will come back
>>58404214I'll be honest, I avoid fics with newgen elements and I dislike seeing them pop up in fics focused around older gens.My hard cutoff point is around Gen 7. What's yours, anons?
>>58404622After this? I will ignore the canon story because it's so bad, but anyways I hate Paldea and Leon wank so there is my stopping point.I hate Red and Cynthia wank to after the gacha now that I think about it
>>58404622My motto is "If it's not Japan, it goes into the trash".If I pushed it to the absolute limit I'd say Alola is my cut-off point. Just barely so. Feel more inclined to stop with Gen 6. The Switch and its consequences have been a disaster for the Pokemon franchise. >>58404683>Masters>Wanking CynthiaI fucking wish.You're right about Redwank on Masters being cringe beyond words.
Any tips for posting on Royal Road? I've heard the readers there can be a bit snobby but that's it.
>>58404980Mmm>OC centric >Some cultivation shit power system >Harem >If you get the triggered fags because the MC is a transmigrator forget that, they will never shut up about you being a pedo even if they're real life pedos >While the MC starts weak he has to have the strongest cheat with Infinite potential That's all I got, spacebattles is easier and we already have a list of that one
>>58404980They're like SB but somehow trashier.
>>584046226. I still like megas conceptually.
>>58404980Slopify your story. If you think there is enough power fantasy and wish fulfillment in your story, there clearly isn't.Discovering a new story there is actually impossible. You have to get the algorithm there to do the promoting for you otherwise you're just going to get buried. It's enough for SB to just post a chapter weekly since you and other users can keep it bumped on or near the front pages for a good amount of time just through discussion and tyftc. On RR you have people updating their fic multiple times a day just to keep it on the first couple pages of the recent upload section otherwise it disappears in an hour.
>>58404980>litrpg, stat screens and boxes = character development>daily upload, end each in a cliff-hanger without fail no matter how annoying it looksOnly RR story I actually finished was Everybody Loves Large Chests and it got a following for that so my scope is small.
>>58405024How is that even possible? How do you get lower than a site that primarily produces self insert isekai slop?
>>58405705Not sure if that's a rhetorical question, but it's because of the algorithm metagaming that's baked into the site. "Rising stars" is the biggest example.Whenever a site's content turns to complete shit, it's usually because of algorithmic cancer that's softly enforcing it. Youtube, tiktok, etc. All engineered to maximize engagement and keep the clicks rolling in, punishing creators who don't play ball.
>>58404683Is SV's story that bad or is it just your distaste for the region?
>Leon was defeated within 5 years of XY ending>AZ was not as immortal as we thought>AZ banged human women and had human descendants>Wild pokemon can Mega and are much stronger in Mega form without a human>The League will forgive anything, even attempted omnicide>Some new mega forms>Kalos is a shithole has anti-homeless benches and tries to pass off ghettoes and poorly maintained infrastructure as "wild zones"Anything else in ZA relevant to writers?
>>58406559>Wild pokemon can Mega I always thought this was the case but quickly scrolling through the wiki shows this was never a thing.. for non legendaries. So my headcanon was that it just requires a lot of energy and puts the pokemon under a serious amount of stress if they can't meet the requirements to maintain it. If they keep forcibly prolonging, then the fucked up shit in the Pokedex happens. >and are much stronger in Mega form without a humanthe trainer is there to share the burden and take on some of the excess energy.>poorly maintained infrastructure as "wild zones"I romanticize favelas and the Kowloon Walled City.
>>58406559>Kalos turns into Brazil
>>58406559Also, if your grandma gets late to home she can get assaulted by random trainers after sunset because of Z-A Royale
>>58406559>Wild Pokémon can Mega and are much stronger in Mega form without a human.This completely shits on the idea of Pokémon and People making eachother better, are the writers retarded? I was cool with Legendaries doing it because well they are the big shot characters lorewise but its cringe if every Pokémon is like that.Also unrelated but the writing decision to completely scrap the old XY cast for the most part seems unhinged. Clemont is not even in the game when his creation is an large part of it.. AZ dies for zero reason off screen with no plot contribution.. Diantha has less mentions than Leon ingame.. the main villain is the Eiffel Tower and Zygarde has to fight it DBZ style (this part is cringekino)
>>58406764>Kowloon Walled CityWould be a based pokemon setting.
>>58407184>This completely shits on the idea of Pokémon and People making eachother better, are the writers retarded?To be desu, they already did that a long time ago when they hammered in the lore that Pokeballs actually weaken the upper bounds of a pokemon's strength. I think it was Gen 4 that first dropped this truth bomb.That's why if your MC uses a pokeball, he's not a true munchkin.
>>58407198Interesting. I was already going to have my mc ignore Pokéballs like a tryhard moralfaggen. What are they putting in Pokéballs to sabotage your mons?
I love these two niggas, any fics that feature the two?
>>58407229I like to imagine it's less the pokeballs and more a combinations of two things: the fact that something as "weak" as a pokeball is being used to "restrain" them, and the fact that they're being "restrained" in the first place.Using the red chains circumvents the first aspect for the most part, but the second aspect isn't one that can be circumvented since anything that's being restrained is inherently a lesser expression of its true self. The natural themes of the pokemon world are ones of partnership, not exploitation, so going against this in any way is an act of self sabotage.
>>58406559>wild Pokémon can mega and are much stronger in Mega form without a humanOhnonono humankeks?? I thought the human bond empowered Pokémon? I thought wild Pokémon willingly joined trainers to get stronger? Surely that wasn't propaganda from slaver apes to justify their position at the top of the food chain...
>>58407322It's actually propaganda from Arceus to perpetuate the survival of her favorite boytoys. So, still slaver coded but via a different slaver.
>>58407262Well it could also be intepreted in the sense that using a Pokémon *only* for battling stunts their development, it can't be beneficial for a living creature to only be allowed to interact with the world through battles and the suspended space when its not necessary is inferior to actually living.
>>58406559>>58407184>>58407198>>58407262So like, does anyone still have faith in GF more after all this bullshit? Because I don't, I just won't care anymore, there are no consequences if you almost killed everyone
>>58407672As someone with a murder fetish I approve, it makes my serial killer fantasies fit the canon easier.
>>58407684Are you a woman?
>>58407184>the main villain is the Eiffel Tower and Zygarde has to fight it DBZ styleWhat
>>58407760The tower is alive after the ultimate weapon was fired, that means any house can be alive too if they were close enough I guess
>Cynthia can live hundreds or thousands of years now if she's pure blooded Fucking hell, and to think I used to mock that idea because immortality was supposed to be a punishmentI'm seething bros, any rec to calm my anger?
To become THE STRONGEST you have to master ARCHITECTURE, design the strongest building, and power it up with Pokémon energy to create the ultimate strongest being to surpass Arceus
>>58407693No. I'm a man with a vore fetish.mfw I will never feel a woman beg for her life beneath my skin as acid slowly eats her flesh
>>58407810Super robot > Spaceship > buildingTransforming super robot with space ship and building mode that is piloted by pokemon? Too peak to exist.
>>58407672The Pokemon world follows the rules of a Saturday morning cartoon, please understand
>>58408034I mean, the fucking anime and manga did more justice than the games, how can you fuck up that hard when you're supposed to be the superior product
Oh man. I've hit 'refresh my dashboard to see if there are any new comments' level of boredom. I should write.
>>58408228Has anyone ever wrote kill yourself? Naruto fanfics are full of that nowadays
>>58408228I usually only get that way the day of a new chapter’s release and my OG “every chapter commenters” haven’t chimed in yet.
>>58408321No, if they did I know I've hit the big time. Sounds hilarious.
>>58408228I know that feeling, but I'm running my shop all day today so I can't write to scratch the itch.>Tfw checking email every twenty minutes to see if that new commenter who's had some really cool observations has gotten to the next chapter yet
>>58408404Who is the new commenter? Like what does he do?
>>58408467NTA but any regular commenter who's not just asking complete braindead-tier questions is such a cool thing to have.
>>58404214>What's one concept excluding the megas from ZA you've seen so far that you want in fics?I'm new here and haven't seen much from AZ, but a hotel owned by a John-Wick style secret society that watches over the city and handles threats seems pretty cool.
>>58408624>secret society that watches over the cityThat's just a game japanese kids like to play, like making secret bases
>>58408731I used to do both as a kid, too.That said, it's also just the opposite of the evil team idea in the games. I just like the idea of a secret 'good' team working out of a hotel in the middle of a city.
So yeah, I almost wiped out every human and destroyed the world... But I apologized! So that means I'm clear right?As retarded as Naruto
>>58408976I'm sure if Hitler apologized, we'd have been good too.
Literally make a building the villain so you don't have to commit to making a character the bad guyThey must think they're really clever.
>>58408976why are you so surprised about this when Colress in Alola was a thing?
>>58408976Full Pardon.>>58409000Crackfics should write a mastermind manipulator villain only to have them unmask themselves as the Eiffel Tower.
>>58409188>The canon source material is putting out crackfic tier twistsIncredible.
>>58409188>reveal surprise plot twist that slams my fic into crazy crack fic territory >get outdone by the main game seriesHow is a man supposed to fucking survive in this economy?
>>58409386It's simple, we clone the BUILDING.
So evil people and Pokémon don't exist? They...they won't pull the same shit with Ghetsis, right?
>>58409594Just ignore Malamar and Dusknoir
>>58408467The anon who does Crazed Creation, he does a lot of verbal(forma de texto) theorizing and brings up stuff other commenters don't always mention. It's just really fun seeing the different things people hone in on and what they think it's hinting toward.
>>58409684>still clearly going along with their trainer's orders regardlessThrowing their dude under the bus is pretty evil too...
>>58409759Do they do schizo theories in your comment section lol?
>>58409772Nah nothing schizo, he's actually brought up some stuff nobody else has yet, which isn't to say nobody else has considered it but I've enjoyed seeing his theories on how everything is shaping up.
Fuck GF
>>58409961Reminder that in japanese there are two ways to writing immortality, 不老 (furō) which means "ageless" and 不死 (fushi) which means "unable to die"
>>58409807>>58409772>>58409759>>58408467>>58408404Really now, talking behind my back are we?
>>58410089Oh shit.
>Yuyama was a tyrant with the anime, fucking over what others wanted>gets forced out of creative, and most likely, he doesn't have power over the Pokémon license anymore>Masuda was a tyrant with the games, fucking over what others wanted>gets sent into a position where he barely influences what GF does>Ohmori was also becoming a tyrant with the games, but we don't know if he actively fucked people over>gets forced out of his director position before the cycle repeats again>and each one of these instances relates to other people wanting to be considerate of others' opinions, fans includedI know that all of this barely relates to the thread, but I have to wonder if the current administration at TPC and Game Freak even knows what fans want. In between this and what Sugimori said about the anime and the scrapped movie, it feels like they're trying to stay on good terms with everyone while not delivering a satisfying product (or story for that matter) at the same time.I don't know. Like, Pokémon narrative has always been a mess, but these declarations would explain a lot when it comes to the current stories, especially the whole "isn't the bond between humans and Pokémon better?" shit. The games and anime have been a failure at balancing that shit with the human stories because one ends up weighing more than the other (see Arven, Team Star, Kieran, and hell, most of Horizons for examples), and it’s no wonder why, they’re trying to appeal to people who want Pokémon drama and people who want human drama at the same time without compromising, but they unconsciously compromise anyway.
>>58410280>In between this and what Sugimori said about the anime and the scrapped movieQrd? Maybe it can help me to get some story potential
>>58409759Yeah, he comments on my stuff too and the way he comments makes me feel like a level 1 commenter. I struggle to notice smaller details and themes sometimes in other people's work but they just blow in and have really interesting things to say. Like I'll have a subtle thing happen and they will notice it. It gives me a lot more confidence to trust my audience with stuff that I'm worried might go over the heads of some readers.Kind of an edge lord though but that's probably not surprising kek
>>58410089RUN AWAY!I got nothing but praise for you tho anon, I really appreciate your input. Also don't worry about upsetting me with pointing out your issues with Ch. 5, constructive criticism is fantastic and very wanted.
>>58409594I honestly want redeemed Ghestis now. I want to see this train wreck keeo going, not slow down. What else is there to lose?
>>58410366Long story short:>Sugimori mentioned that when it comes to the anime, the staff should be more considerate about fan feedback>talked a lot about fan backlash>compared Yuyama to George Lucas>he was fearful of people's reception towards Ash's story ending>and as a tidbit, he mentioned that adding romance to Pokémon in general is tricky because of how fans reacted to Serena returning in Journeys>and as far as the scrapped movie (Project Bauer) is concerned>there was this pitch for "lapsed Pokémon fans" in order to get them back in the franchise>had stuff like someone's suicide and internet harassment>there were also these two male characters who had some kind of bromance>Sugimori and Iwao hated it>they basically complained about the fact that the movie barely involved Pokémon at all>Sugimori then said, "I don't care about bromance, isn't the bond between Pokémon and humans better?">the rest of the discussion is ramblings about Game Freak staff not communicating directly with the writers of these movies, shenanigans about appealing to female consumers, and whatnotLike I said, trying to appeal to everyone at the same time.
>>58410432>>58410418Well you are threadbros, more specifically, writebros and I WILL effort post because I know the struggle of writing. I will thus not waste anyone's time here with nothingcomments.When I'm done with In Mine Own, I'll read PokeNormal and then probably go to Prince of Po Town.I've actually been avoiding going into this thread for the most part, just to avoid spoilers.Also am I really that edgy?
>>58410566Pofag here. After I finish with PokeNormal and Crystal Light you're next on the docket. I just feel bad that it takes me a while to read threadbros' work because I'm writing a lot as well. Took me like a month to give In Mine Own the proper read it deserved. I usually don't read PMD stuff but threadbro >>>
>>58410609Indeed, it's a chance to broaden my horizons with the fan works I read anyway >>58410566I want to check out everyone here's work, I'm just horrible at getting myself to sit down and read. I'm currently caught up on Crystal Light, then I'm reading through PoPT, and after that I want to give CC a try.As for you being edgy I wouldn't really know. I see it get mentioned your fic deals with some intense stuff but I'll have to see for myself.
If I were to write something, where should I put it? I assume Ao3 is where everyone puts their stuff? And, it it considered cringy to share what you've written here?
>>58410566>Also am I really that edgy?Nigga, you have the most awful descriptions of the MC getting his body and face cut open., not even mentioning the overall bloodshed of the setting. Scalping? really nigger? Blood Meridian wannabe.
>>58410653AO3 is currently the most used, butv you can post whatever. Spacebattles and FFN are okay too.>And, it it considered cringy to share what you've written here?It would be gay yes, but you still do it. Just don't be faggot.
>>58410653The honor system is genuinely to keel self shilling to once per thread unless you've posted a new chapter to share.
>>58410418>I struggle to notice smaller details and themes sometimes in other people's workHi Wol!
>>58410711I'll make sure to share the story I'm currently writing about the black pimp trainer fucking his (male) florges in his bedcar while flying under a rainbow. Thanks!
>>58410749Lovely!
>>58410609I'm touched anon, truly. But please do never feel forced to read stories you don't want to read.>>58410682Relax, scalping has only been mentioned so far.
>>58410524>isn't the bond between Pokémon and humans better?">Now megas are stronger without human bonds The fuck where they thinking?
>>58410791I gotta be a better reader for fanfics, and hey, maybe I just haven’t read the right PMD fics.>>58410653And yeah, Ao3 is a good spot to post it. Also feel free to link it in here, just be humble about it. I think some of the hostility some writers have perceived here is if they’re just being a smug shithead about their work.
>>58407805Did they specify it was the celestican bloodline that granted their long lifespans?
>>58410980If it matters aught, I have only read like a handful of PMDfics and the only one of note to remember was Heroes of the Past, so my fic probably won't follow similar PMD beats storywise.Can I ask you what usual elements made you drop PMDfics? I assume currently it's because they tend to be... lame and repetitive.I must also commend your writing speed and consistency, while I haven't read your fic yet, I have seen the many continuous updates. I envy your ability anon.
>>58408976To be fair to Naruto, some of those villains were still in a position where they could avoid capture and go back to their ways if it came down to it, so not forgiving them would just be causing more problems.
>>58410653Cringe is weakness leaving the body. Abandon your fear, nobody here is worth giving power over you.
>>58410653>it considered cringy to share what you've written here?After ZA's plot? That'd be hard anon
>>58408976How many people died? None? Cool, no one cares.
>>58410566>Also am I really that edgy?As the guy who said it I gotta take responsibility. You have fairy pokemon this close to committing type based hate crimes, multiple characters have called the mc Gibber with a hard R, and it feels like I'm reading pokemon Beserk version and I've never read Berserk. The absurd surrealism of the main character's situation keeps it from feeling too heavy handed though. I wouldn't ask you to change anything because I feel your vision will be better without fear of trying to tone anything down. You've got a baby eldritch abomination for a main character being raised by career killers. This is genuine edge, not poser highschool shit of a kid trying to seem mature. It's just unapologetically brutal. Also you commented I should filter morons who don't get my writing, and I agree, but that's a pretty edgy thing to say.
>>58410749Does he knock the Florges up? I'm a fiend for breeding.
>>58411390Wtf, now that you say it out loud I suppose I may be a little bit edgy.
>>58410280Read again, nigga. Masuda is the unsung hero of the franchise.He was the only one trying to keep the ship straight and preventing too many cooks spoiling the broth. Nothing of what he did was wrong. It's fucking normal to have someone with vision at the top steering things, specially the clusterfuck GF apparently has been since day 1.Where he fucked up is that he took things too personally and got obsessed with "fixing" the games based on the criticisms the games got. It's why, for example, after BW we got K-KANTOOOOOOO 24/7.That's what they were referring regarding how he started to focus on PR.Ohmori is the absolute biggest cancer because on top of having no real spine, doing nothing to fix all the organizational issues, all the fucking faggot could do was shoehorn muh family trauma into the games every fucking game he directed forgetting this shit is meant to be about POKEMON. Why did the motherfucker thought doing muh family trauma FOUR times back to back was a better thing than going to a fucking psychologist is beyond me.Masuda may be a faggot but you can at least tell the nigger knew that POKEMON was meant to be about POKEMON.
>>58411091>Can I ask you what usual elements made you drop PMDfics, I assume currently it's because they tend to be lame and repetitive.Something like that. I'm down to have my mind changed on it though.>I must also commend your writing speed and consistencyIt's a combination of a bunch of things. First, I didn't allow myself to start writing it until after I finished a different longfic, so I was really chomping at the bit to get it started and have been able to carry a good chunk of that enthusiasm on as the months have gone by. I'm almost ready to post chapter 29 desu, and I posted the first six back in June. My prose is definitely not to the most vivid and descriptive, but I do so much in other parts of the story I think it all works well enough. Around the time I finished the previous longfic I lost my full time job and have been working part-time since, which has given me a lot more time and flexibility. Sure I'm a lot poorer than I was before, but I'm unironically way happier (job was really draining). I'm not sure how long this situation will last or how tenable it is long term, but I'm taking advantage of it while I got it. But probably first and foremost is inspiration has just been hitting me like a truck. I've had nights where I'm out drinking with friends and something will hit me and I've gotta go to the bathroom to type shit out in my phone's Notes app for a few minutes. The anon who was saying you catch on to the real subtle stuff made me think you're gonna get a kick out of PoPT. There's a lot of little stuff that most people aren't picking up (or at least aren't saying they are). But no rush, it'll always be there.
The number of you niggas in here that haven't played ZA and are losing your shit about plot points you've been told about second hand is hilarious.No, pokemon cannot just Mega by themselves now, it's literally a phenomenon that can only happen during the events of the game.No, Prism Tower was not just a regular tower that came alive, AZ built the thing 1000 years ago to do something with all the energy his Floette had, it just goes buck-wild after the Ultimate Weapon was fired 5 years ago.
>>58411873>it's literally a phenomenon that can only happen during the events of the gameYeah cuz when you catch them you nerf them lol. Alphas in PLA have wild might, catch them and they lose it. Necrozma etc in USUM have some ultra boost bullshit going on, which they lose when you catch them. Wild gmaxes get armor values that captured gmaxes don't get. I didn't play SV or even watch a playthrough but I bet the titans and the wild tera shits are the same.Mewtwo was right. Humankeks are a training weight that should be discarded.
>>58411996>Yeah cuz when you catch them you nerf them lolNo dawg, I mean it's literally only happening because of the events of the story.As in, it's not naturally occurring.It's why they eventually stop popping up once story happens.
>>58411996Nah, it's the pokeballs that neutered them
>>58411053Of course not, they're lazy and incompetent
Weapons know make sense, huh?
>>58412126Cyrus wanted to control the Breath/Pluse of Shinoh through Palkia and Dialuga respectively; once they get captured, the connection is severed. Same with Arceus and Giratina.Plus Pokémon refused to unleash their true power so that it won't outright kill their opponents; its why all moves are nerfed to the point that it only knock them out.
>>58411873Reality is disappointing. I already had megas as naturally unnatural so it's no biggie for me lol.
>When everything fell apart, I got taken into custody along with the others. But I took a plea deal. So I got made acting director of this lab. Easy to keep tabs on me if I’m always stuck here, right? My role in Team Flare also had me looking into Pokémon energy and all, so I don’t hate the work.
>>58411873That tower bit made me think of the monument mythos.
>>58413512Red lives under Bill's Lighthouse confirmed.
>>58413298Hey anon, do you know what part of the text dump that's from?
>>58413687Sadly no, I'm just getting angry over something I won't play and will ignore
>>58410524>he was fearful of people's reception towards Ash's story endingI never understood this, like did Pele's career end after his first World Cup? Nah.
>>58414253But Ash's story literally did end, at least until if/when they bring him back.
>>58414253>>58414335They're more or less worried about Pikachu and Meowth, though with Rica heading toward retirement they pretty much doesn't have any choice.
>>58414253Problem with Ash is they didnt reallt give him a straightforward goal. "Pokémon Master" became more of a lifestyle and when he became a champion there was nothing else to really do.
>>58414406this is something that they addressed at the end of all this; his real goal is to freely go around the world and meet and befriend as many Pokémon as he can.
>>58414427Wasn't that Goh's thing?
>>58414406The literal next gen was an academy setting, he could've taken on a mentorship role like he did in Hoenn, help students find what kind of "Pokemon Master" they want to be. That's pretty much what the treasure hunt is about.
>>58414395They literally said in the leaks that they don't give a shit about Rica or her drama and are willing to change her voice if needed tho>>58414406>there was nothing else to really doEh, I would do a hobo mystery adventure where he goes around helping Pokémon clean their name after being blamed of crimes or something
>>58414253Ash, for better or worse, was an institution in Pokemon. He's been there for 25 years. And you've seen how bad Ash self-inserters can be. You've seen how even after two years there's people begging for Ash to come back.I'm glad he's gone. Should have happened over a decade already but when he's been there for so long it feels "weird" that he's not there anymore because of how "permanent" he felt.>>58414464That would mean actually acknowledging Ash is not a retard 10 years old and that's a no-no.Even after he became the fucking world champion they did their utmost to bring as little attention possible to it whatsoever.It was just mentioned ONCE in one of those epilogue episodes, and like 10 seconds before the episode ended. Half of the time M8 kept presenting him as a literally who shitter instead of acknowledging him as the Alola Champion proper. Yes, meme league and all, but he's nominally the Champion anyway.Even when they finally let Ash "win" they never let him "progress" or "be acknowledged" if you get what I am trying to say.Could they have done that? Yes, obviously. But people were fucking sick of Ash already. They'd stretched him to the limit and well past that. Enough is enough. And even those stubborn Japanese boomers finally realized even if 10 years too late.
>>58414506>They literally said in the leaks that they don't give a shit about Rica or her drama and are willing to change her voice if needed thoConsidering Japanese autism around VAs, intentionally fucking over Rica publicly sounds like a genuine recipe for disaster and TPCI once again demonstrating it's carried entirely by its IP despite being mismanaged at every conceivable level.
>>58414335The problem is that the fan wanted him to be the world champ already, when TPCI wanted him to be the audience surrogate for future fans. They simply don't know what to do with him, Pikachu and Team Rocket afterwards. >>58414335I could see him as an adult trying to teach other young trainers to bond with their monsters; the whole point of being a master is to past down knowledge to the next generation.
>>58414517>Could they have done that? Yes, obviously. But people were fucking sick of Ash already. They'd stretched him to the limit and well past that. Enough is enough. And even those stubborn Japanese boomers finally realized even if 10 years too late.20 years too late to be exact, and here we are with Horizons.
>>58414564>DP ended 14 years ago>OG ended 24 years ago>XY ended 9 years agoUgh...
>>58414517>You've seen how even after two years there's people begging for Ash to come back.I've honestly seen more people begging for the opposite here and in Reddit, very few people talk about Ash nowadays it just seems too much because even less talk about the new cast.Ashfics are dead too
>>58414533>intentionally fucking over Rica publicly sounds like a genuine recipe for disaster and TPCI once again demonstrating it's carried entirely by its IP despite being mismanaged at every conceivable level.Ain't that common by now, they don't give a shit about Pokémon at all, fuck, it almost seems like they hate it and the fanbase which is kinda common now that I think about it looking at other franchises like Marvel, Disney, Harry Potter and so on
>>58414617>I've honestly seen more people begging for the opposite here and in RedditI suppose it varies.>very few people talk about Ash nowadaysWell, his story is finally over. And it was the biggest wet fart possible. What else is there to say? Before you could at least still have copium in that things could end well, now there's not even that left.>Ashfics are dead tooTo be fair, Ashfics died long before Ash fucked off.People seriously underestimate how heavy the impact the Kalos League loss and the SM poster drop showing the artstyle change had on the zeitgeist.People simply had enough.
>>58414669Even game fics dried off, SM/USUM did a lot of damage and that's one of the reasons why most stories tend to take place in gen 1-6 regions and Johto is basically invisible too
>>58414697All thanks to Ohmori and his mommy/daddy issues he kept shoehorning on every single fucking game.Games stop being (you)r adventure. It's annoying when the framework has all that shit hovering over it limiting what you can do with it. At some point it simply becomes far more trouble than it is worth.
>>58414697Removing villain teams and serious & publicly accessible Leagues was a mistake.>>58414733The shitty thing is that Gamefreak managed to do both with Unova, so there's really no excuse for Ohmori's sissy bitchiness ruining things.
>>58414697Correct me if I'm wrong but gamefics were always stuck in the gen 1-3. I do not recall a single notable XY fic from back then. If it involved Kalos, it was always amourshipping. They struck gold with Serena and somehow poisoned the well anyways.
>>58414768Now that you mention it, that's very true.Crazy, Masuda actually did muh family trauma stuff with N way better than Ohmori ever did.
>>58414769Unova had some, not the B2W2 version tho because while Rosa was hot there was nothing to do, and Kalos outside of amour did have but mostly about cucking (lol) Ash.The base SM did have a boon thanks to Lillie's sob story but that ended up being the biggest mistake because they retconned that in USUM because people cried about her fucking off to Kanto
>>58414517>And you've seen how bad Ash self-inserters can be.Oh yeah, I totally forgot when Ashfags went their way to harass people and commit arson- oh wait, that never happened.You've been seething about Ash and Ashfags with the same shit for years now. Give it up.
>>58414697AO3 is full of SwSh game fics.But, well, they're all fujo shit about Leon and Raihan.
>>58414851And not enough about Leon grooming Gloria, feasted on Volo and Akari though. SV didn't have much age gap potential but maybe ZA can get some with AZ and Harmony.
>>58414841someone struck a nerve
>>58414841Kinda funny how the ones saying they never cared about Ash are still seething and screaming how every person hated him and that he has no real fans, not the place for that shit tho so if anyone starts something go to the anime thread>>58414851Only Sonia and Nessa are attractive, Marnie is a literal zero because a certain fucker didn't want anyone to outshine Lillie
>>58414897I don't particularly care for people's perception about Ash. It's just funny how some anons literally become recognisable by saying certain things, and more so if they're at it for years. Not that I gain anything entertaining that shit tho, not after what happened to poor Joyanon. I miss him so much.Anyways, Game Freak's gonna be up for a rough time if they think they can appeal to everyone with their new policies. Good luck trying to write good stories for the games with that kind of mentality.
>>58414697There were a few SM fics. Game has some solid ideas, it's just a shame the execution was so lacking. I liked Eldritch even if I thought it was a bit too long.
>>58414938>Game Freak's gonna be up for a rough time if they think they can appeal to everyone with their new policiesI'm pretty damn sure they know Pokémon fans have no standards, it doesn't matter how shit the gameplay, story, lore, whatever you want is people will defend them like crazy and buy it in droves
>>58414952Most of the SM fics I found where romance with Guzma or Lillie as the MC which as I said died after USUM because they retconned her development
>>58414669>To be fair, Ashfics died long before Ash fucked off.And because almost all of them were dumb, edgy nonsense. At that point the only big fic I can recall that actually respected Ash's character or Pokemon's tone in general was Ashes of the Past and you either read that fic and were satisfied or wrote off Ashfic altogether.
>>58414938Good stories don't sell games the same way they don't get you readers. Any one of us could probably pump out a fic that would get a thousand or more followers if we were to tick the right boxes, the only price is our soul.
>>58414697I do see a lot of Legends Arceus fics about Ingo in AO3 though
>>58415090That's just because of women and gays.I do not know why they latched on to him so much.
>>58415266He's handsome and angsty.
Capeshit anon, did you get inspired with the leaks? What about you Kuuzey(?) anon?
>>58415872I swear if any one you get any 'inspiration' out of this rubbish I shall make my eldritch terror visit you myself.
>>58415924I mean Pokémon has a history of fumbling ideas and concepts that do have potential and sound interesting on paper. What is fanfiction for if not to try and do it better? If someone makes something fun out of the carcass gamefreak leaves behind, I'd be glad.
>>58416304Yeah u right. I just despise Gamefreak's stupidity, like how!
A large percentage of the top Pokemon fics on ao3 that were updated in the last few months still feature Ash as the main character. The other 40-60% are SI journey fics of course.
>>58416595Do they REALLY feature Ash? Or is it a SI in disguise?It feels like the only people who get Ash's character right are the people who use him as a side character.
>>58416604I dunno, do you consider BETRAYED Ash to be an SI or just Ash in name only?
>>58416604either that or it's MC bashing and making fun of Ash
>>58416626Betrayed Ashes are as much Ash as this thing is as far as I'm aware. It's such a wild shift.>Ash gets trapped in a pit and abandoned>suddenly decides to become a serial rapist murderer who holds comfort knives and says the F word in public because he's cool
>>58417085He is fated by prophecy to turn the earth to Ash
>>58417225mistranslation from 4kids.
>>58417475>Literally set up in everything like a prophecy>Oh but they didn't called him by name in the original4kids did a lot of tomfuckery but them spelling it out was saving anyone the trouble to explain to retards like you.
>>58417225This is actually talking about him having a vast harem and millions of descendents but as he defied destiny for pikapussy his life became a grand tribulation and his significance severed. Such is the cruelty of heaven.
I would defy the heavens too if they did the same shit to me, hilarous how some Ash is stuck alone in a bad end
Well?
>>58417897Get a grimer or muk.
>>58417897Scatfags really about to take a victory lap? Honestly, they've been winning for a while considering how shitty this franchise has become.
>>58417939Good luck with Muk and it's poison gasMake one wrong move and it'll suck your ass
>>58411873Wow, that's even dumber than the second hand info made it seem.
>>58417981>>58417939From Alola,
>>58417897like Digimon, potty training
>>58417728Just remembered this video. Gotta figure out some way to fit it into my fic.
>>58417728To this day I still wonder what the hell were they planning with this shit.
What does 'pressing B' mean in-canon for a Pokemon? Refusing to mature and wanting to stay the same? Getting jolted or surprised out of the evolution animation?
>>58418258I think they used that mechanic in PokéSpe, can't tell you how because I never liked the manga tho
>>58418258it's like holding a fart
>>58418258You press the B button on your pokedex.
>>58418332>try to hold it in>fail>it wasn't a fartThere should be evolutions that come from preventing a pokemon from evolving.
>>58418342there should be failed evolution like Numemon
Your body, my choice.
>>58417728That was such a bizarre video
>>58417728I have no context to what's going on so did Ash get locked out of time? Actually don't explain it.
>>58418396My Kirlia really thinks he's going to turn into a Gallade.. lmao. I don't even have license for a Dawn Stone.>>58418258Pokémon can refuse to evolve for as long as they like or have it interfered with by sabotage.
Second Prince of Po Town update for the week. There's a link to a sex scene at the end that I'll keep up for a couple days on Ao3. That scene will live permanently on QQ though.https://archiveofourown.org/works/66210784/chapters/188903821
>>58418517Damn, I was about to explain it. Eh, going to anyways. Celebi is fucking around while Ash is in a tournament of some kind. Dumbass onion gets caught in the middle of an attack and distorts time, sending Ash into a post apocalypse future where the city is overgrown and there are weird crystal pokemon statues everywhere. Celebi didn't realize Ash got caught in the warp and bails, so Ash chases him to some bizarre shrine deep in a cave where Dialga shows up and... That's it. It was some crossover animation for some artist or singer or something. It just ends on a cliff hanger with no explination. Honestly pretty cool aside from the blue balling of closure.
>>58418823Do Ian and Hyde finally fuck?
>>58419120Yes indeed!
>>58419120Don’t tempt me.
>>58418517He was sent to the future thanks to Celebi fucking around, a cool concept nonetheless because it seems at some point the world endedhttps://youtu.be/n1YE9OlstpM?si=zMMK2xyBV2p99HNj
>>58417475And it was an improvement over the original, for once.
>>58410524This is what I don't get. Don't they understand what balance is? You can have a plot that doesn't involve overly cheesy and uncomfortable shit like teen suicide while also having a more complex characters than just "muh, Pikachu is my best friend, wife, brother." Even as a kid, I found it weird how Ash only seemed to be passionate about Pokemon. The Pokemon world, both in the anime and the games, is full of "my dog is my best friend who will never betray me" types of people. And it's not about trying to win over a certain portion of the fanbase anymore, even if you're in it for the battles and the cool mons, you also want to see storylines that have weight, nice action arcs and a bit of edgyness, as well as a romance thrown in here and there (things like the XY episode where Ash gets a fever represents that other extreme where you can alienate the kid audience/the people who are in it for the Pokemon). This just shows TPC's incompetence, maybe the games have improved in that aspect, where the characters feel like people, but Horizons is another example that they still don't have good writers who know how to balance Pokemon themes and human themes.
>>58420188Lmao no, they seem to hate Pokémon as a whole
>>58417897how much do janitors get paid in the Pokemon world?
>>58404214>TQKey Stone radiation.Do you guys think that wearing a Key Stone on exposed skin or even just your innermost layer of clothes would be hot? Like, literally hot. Those things contain a lot of power. I can't imagine that the radiation that a Key Stone emits while reacting would be completely harmless. The overwhelming majority of characters at least wear it on their outer layer (if not on an accessory) which suggests (to me) that it at least heats up enough in order to warrant that. At least it feels like holding a hot coffee, but I wonder if Mega Radiation could pose greater health risks.
>>58420778Bro, we already have people saying a single Pidgey can kill hundreds with gust, mega radiation would be even worse.Besides you would get two answers like with kryptonite, super powers like in the Smallville series or super cancer like with Luthor in the comics
>>58418396If I have to read the "you don't have to evolve if you don't want to even though you will want to because every pokemon does but I'm saying this to show the readers what a good protagonist I am" conversation one more time I'll explode.
>>58420778Keystone stores human lifeforce to emits to the target megastone to activate mega evolution. Simple as that.
>>58421221>Keystone stores human lifeforceSo aura?
>>58421267>absorbs your auranothing personal
>>58417897>>58420663They're referring to the items pokemon drop when they're KO'd, obviously. Wild pokemon don't have a use for a lot of them so they end up piling up in a city.
What alternative sites would people in the Pokémon world go to if their Pokémon youtube crashed for no fucking reason?
>>58422347Pokemon Redtube.
Anyone else watching Digimon Beatbreak? Give the first 2 eps a try.>Dystopia cyberpunk (literal babies are implanted with chips from birth)>Digimon drain "e-pulse" (kinda like lifeforce) to fight harder>Protagonist group are basically bounty hunters
>>58422769>cyberpunk (literal babies are implanted with chips from birth)Huh, sounds interesting and something I've been trying to implement given the level of technology in Pokémon or ex-level anyways since it feels they're becoming more mundane for some reason
>>58422769I still need to finish ghost game first.
>>58422347There wouldn't be any specific site, just a collection of Porygon in the deepweb who can only be reached by other Porygon in the know. They host everything there is to be hosted, only filtering insensitive content if they know the user would be too young to watch.It's actually a major reason why Galar and other regions have pushed for the league affiliated regions to switch to Rotomphones. Rose doesn't like the evidence of Leon's pokemon being doped up with illegal boosters, Aether doesn't like the evidence of their pokemon abuse, etc, all of which the Porygon unhesitatingly share with anyone who asks.
>just saw a clip of Ash's original voice actor saying 'Release the Epstein Files'That's why they replaced him, he was about to blow the whole thing wide open with his Masters 8 clout.
>>58422842Release the Undella Town files. All Unovan female gym leaders and elite 4 members get up to some sick shit in that villa.
>>58422890
>>58422811Ghost Game is all episodic so it's easy to fall off. Beatbreak in the other hand seems like it'll be way very serialized, there's a lot of themes implied and tension for the characters.
So, what's our gameplan for tomorrow when the catalog suddenly gets flooded with people who bought PLZA?
>>58423096/tog/ went for a bit to the 2^3chan to weather the storm, and there is already a fanfic thread there, we could go there for a bit too.
>>58423096We do what we always do, WRITE
>>58422797Make a Unova where Black City expanded to the whole region.
>>58423096We either shitpost and argue about stuff like aura, cultivation, and human-pokemon relationships to keep the thread bumped or we scatter to the wind until things calm down.
>>58423096Look for a jobPlay Blue Archive Maybe think about a Pokémon crossoverThink about killing myself with no intention of actually doing itThink about some aura cultivation system Tell someone to kill themselves in /v/You know, the usual.
>>58423096Well I mean, I'll be playing the game.I'll come in to bump though, if we need it.
>>58423154>stuff like aura, cultivationWe have long lived fuckers so we might as well go full xianxia, I thought immortality was a punishment but it seems it really wasn't because there are no consequences if you try to kill everyone
>>58423096Eh, I'll just take a break. I spend way too much time refreshing this thread anyways.
>>58423611>I spend way too much time refreshing this threadIs this 2010? Bro just use 4chan X and the threads become a chatroom
>>58423632My phone company had to pay me to ugrade my phone because they were discontinuing sercive for the model I was using because it was too old. I am too lazy to download mods for a website.
>>58423096Leaks get more activity than game releases and even now the board is still fucking dead. Nobody wants to go here anymore except for generals like this because /vp/ is a lawless wasteland ruled by coomers and the sharty. You won't have to worry about it.
>>58423774>can solve problem in 3 minutes>choses to waste hours every day because "eh too hard"It's literally the first result in google.
>>584237743 clicks is all you needhttps://www.4chan-x.net/
>>58423096I'm going to just play ZA
>>58420663Sanitation is a very lucrative and secure job.
>>58417943the game has several dialogues that mention shit and piss for some reason
>>58424375The Pokémon authorities just openly operation paperclips criminals into their ranks and no one gives a fuck.
>>58425433I wonder if this is an original JP line or if it's some TPCI degenerate doing some high-quality "localization".
>>58407244Does bananas naturally grow in the desert?
>>58407970There's been something i've been curious about for a long time, Why vore? how does eating someone alive entice someone to masturbate?
>>58426064NTA but I've been told it's power/submission fantasy taken to its extreme. There's also the kink angle about someone becoming a part of you and vice versa. The ones into the digestion part each have their own headcanon on how the digestion process works, like whether it's permanent or painful.It's parallel with bdsm and corruption.
>>58425496The japs love their toilet humor.
Apparently, Ingo returned to his time after LA
>>58426064Different guy, but that furry nigger posted Amy eating Shadow on YouTube and I haven't been the same ever since. This goes without saying but it is a fetish and it's unnatural by definition; a lot of vorefags I know say they saw something weird as a kid in movies or shows and got attracted to it. As for appeal, I'd say the other guy has it right with it about exerting power (over women). Tormenting cute girls in my wild sexual escapees is fun but I prefer dating and cuddling with cute monstrous/bug/robot women nowadays because it makes me happy.
>>58426064That anon here. I've been in the vore 'community' for two decades now and one of the first lessons in vore is that you will never have an answer to the question of why. Human minds are too complex for us to accurately figure out why a person likes or dislikes something, and any who says otherwise is just doing biased psuedo science theory crafting.As for what's arousing about it, the answer is more concrete but also annoying in a practical sense. Vore is actually 1000 different fetishes in a trench coat. Anything that can be described as 'one thing inside another thing' can accurately be described as vore. This makes vore a heavily splintered fetish with all kinds of subcategories that can be wildly incompatible, and has lead to plenty of petty drama where people get annoyingly personal about their hate of people liking something different.For example, I'd say the biggest split is between fatal and non-fatal. Some fatal vore fans almost need someone to die to get hard, while many non-fatal fans are sickened by the thought of somebody dying. One side could be called more dominance focused, and the other more hyper intimate. But there is too much overlap to make a broad statement like that, because willing and unwilling is also a big split. There is a lot of willing fatal and unwilling non-fatal. Then you got massive differences between giant and same-size content, etc...Pretty much, vore is the autism of fetishes because it's a spectrum. God says 'this is how you are a freak' and you have to deal with it. As a massive bleeding heart the fact that I am aroused by people painfully dying depressed me sometimes when I was younger. But it's not real, nobody is being hurt so I've embraced it. There are plenty of less fucked types of vore I like too. Has the surprise benefit of exciting girls I've dated in the past when they learn I have a 'serial killer fetish'. These days I have my wife pick imaginary victims for me. I'll ramble more if you want.
Could ZA's plot about having to restructure the entire city to accommodate the influx of dangerous wild beasts that suddenly started flooding the place possibly be related to any current issues modern day paris is facing?
>>58426516This meme is boring because it's been talked about to death.
>>58426528>meme
>>58426549>only cares about being called a memeYeah, that's how you know it's a meme.
>>58426516...I think Jacinthe is cute as fuck.
>>58426689Based
>Guns powered by aura able to shoot type energy bullets
>>58427522it literally says laser right there on the card you nitwit
>>58427640I know, but was the only thing I found to keep it Pokémon related and not die.Or should we just let it go and wait a few days?
>>58427640A laser is just a continuous bullet of light.
>>58427777Awesome quads but light isn't a type yet
>>58427668I could ramble about random writing ideas. Normally nobody responds, but I'm good with shouting into the void to keep the thread alive.Been recently thinking about what a Legends Kanto would look like.
>>58428214>KantoKenshin? Cyllene was stated to be a skilled swordswoman before coming to Hisui
>>58428214Legends Unova where it's the Oregon trail but it's people going north from where Castelia City is to where Opelucid City is. Which means they have to cross the harsh Desert Resort and the confusing Entree forest. You will be getting no twin heroes lore and no desert ruins lore.
>>58428214Legends Paldea where you're el Cid
>>58428296What the fuck did ancient Unovans think of Entralink?
>>58428244I was more thinking warring states shenanigans with the different cities. I just wanna see political drama between Gym Leader ancestors. I feel like Erika and Koga's bloodlines would both hold a similar position that they do now.
>>58428466Confusing and probably cursed fey ground. Proof that not everything supernatural can be attributed to Pokemon. Could it be the fault of Celebi or Hoopa? Maybe, but it can fun to just think it's unexplainable, like the various ghost girls. Sometimes shit is just fucked.
Japan has this obsession with bloodlines. Like everyone has some ancestor that was super important or unique. Saw some of the leaks and screenshots of the museum where I think were Maxie and Archies ancestors were important leaders. It's easy way to score some fanservice points but it's lazy world building and only serves to make the world feel even smaller than it is.Which makes it kind of funny that the opposite is untrue, Adaman's legacy is just girl who is a skilled photographer and Irida might've died a virgin or childless, probably from some flu or maybe during childbirth. They should do that more often if we ever go back to the past.
>>58429550>Saw some of the leaks and screenshots of the museum where I think were Maxie and Archies ancestors were important leaders.Alder too, we have some anon here thinking that Alder is the ancient hero that traveled to the past.Seems like Ingo got back to his time or something tho so maybe Emmet really did hunt down a Celebi like the idea we thought threads ago
>>58429620>Seems like Ingo got back to his timeBit torn on this, I love my happy endings but I also love my tragic stories.
>>58429620>Alder too, we have some anon here thinking that Alder is the ancient hero that traveled to the pastFuck, that might be me. But it's a pretty common theory seeing the portrait of the original hero looks so much like Alder. Also lines up with some of the random Unovan stuff in LA.
>>58429666I like my bittersweet endings too but I love fraternal love
>>58429550Maxie and Archie's ancestors being leaders isn't that farfetched, as leaders tend to try and keep their authority throughout their bloodline. Maxie and Archie are leaders in their own right, and have enough unexplained clout and resources to possibly be explained as being somewhat old money.And everybody is obsessed with bloodlines, not just Japan. After all there are many stories about heroes of royal bloodlines.
>>58428214The only Kanto prequel worth doing is one about Oak's time as a trainer.
>>58430300What was the reaction to Oak in the Celebi movie?
>>58430300Any story is worth doing if it's good. No idea can't be done well. But I gotta admit, I would just use the setting as a backdrop for lewdness and politics.
>>58427668talk about type energy laser rifle infantrymenI don't think physical projectiles would work as well in pokemon compared to lasers, anyways >>58427777No, a bullet is a projectile.A laser is a beam.
>>58431324Beams are projectiles. The light is projected from the source. That's why a projector is called that. It projects.
>>58431394then why is hyper beam special while bullet seed is physical
>>58431559Bullets seed are physical bullets.HyrdokinesisPyrokinesisFlorakenisisElectrokinesisGeokenisisEtc are special.
>>58431559>trying to rationalize abstract damage typesBubble is special despite being physical bubbles.Grass Knot is special despite being a vine in the ground.Fusion Bolt is physical despite being a thunderbolt.It's all very video gamey.
>>58431654bubble and grass knot are beams while fusion bolt is a projectile
>>58431672>Fusion Bolt>Literally Zekrom slaming into their opponents while being covered in electricity.>Volt Tackle with no drawbacks
>>58431559What makes you think projectiles need to be physical?
Realismfags won, humans can't even jump
>>58432353Pokehumans exchanged the ability to jump in order to evolve dimension warping abilities triggered by centrifugal motion. It's why they're so hard to hit when they dodge roll, and why humans so readily give out the very vague 'DODGE IT' command, since it is second nature to them.
>>58432397>DODGE IT'Still can't believe they made Ash's most iconic move but at the same time the most mocked because "Pokémon can dodge on their own and they don't need to be told to do it" canon.Hilarous
>>58427668you can do a compromise and ride this thread to bump limit and then do a break for few days
I'm kind of mad I went so reserved with my Emma's outfits; if I'd known just letting her walk around with a skintight asshugging super-suit as her only form of bottom was Gamefreak-approved things might have been different. Forever keeping the big floofy hair though.
>>58433036So what is her level compared to aurafags or psychicfags in your story now?
>>58433068I don't know what the average level of an aurafag or psychic gets in most other fics, but I'd say she's formidable enough with the enhanced strength and speed from her suit to comfortably defeat mid-level Pokemon should the need arise - though its real strength is in the other tools it can provide like the hologram projectors she's modded in over the years. But she's more proficient as a trainer than a fighter, and is somewhere within Elite Four level.She's also limited by the vulnerability of the suit. An attack from Chien-Pao was enough to mostly shred it and leave it at minimal effectiveness until she had time to make repairs.Of all the humans who have appeared so far she's probably third most effective in hand to hand combat, behind Vi and Celot.
>>58433223>average levelFlying type aura Nemona can fly iirc
>>58433231And that fic is retarded. Pokémon training fics should focus on plot and the Pokémon themselves, not on becoming a Jedi.
>>58433388Jedi were just monks trying to keep the balance while using using lethal force as a last resource iirc, last I checked they're just unga bunga retards now with healing or any other skill that isn't precognition and telekinesis being forgotten
>>58433160The rotom being literally everywhere meme isn't even a meme is it
>>58433428>Rotom in now the equivalent of a system taking all the agency from the MCHilarous, at least tell me the rewards are good enough
>>58433428You'll never catch me with a rotomphone, I wrap my devices in cleanse tags. I spend half of my trainer stipend on cleanse tags and wash myself in salt organically sourced from Nacli.
soul
>>58434283Cool, faggots will still seethe if you have humans fighting alongside their Pokémon in your stories tho, which has been proved to be true in Generations
>>58434314Honestly, you'd think it'd be more popular especially with how many writers wanna make humans superpowered for whatever reason.
>>58434283Isn't Golurk getting a Mega in the DLC?I keep thinking it'll turn into some fuck off huge cannon or artillery piece. Please don't make it lame gamefreak.
>>58434370That's what annoys me the most. All these aurafags and superpower system fuckers yet only a handful of them actually fight, and the few that do only do so against criminals or inconsequential wild pokemon. Let's see those fuckers jump into the gym arena for once.
>>58426331
I’m getting these vivid, borderline insane-tier visions of a specific scene plaguing me when I try to write recently. The scene in question is at least a year away from being written (if everything goes well, which it won’t). Any tips for putting that shit aside before I turn into an autistic schizo?
>>58434736Embrace being an autistic schizo.As for tips... yeah I got nothing. I suggest perhaps understanding fully what leads to the scene in question. After all, the road to the destination aught to make that stop worth it.Consider all the buildup one could make for, say, a battle. Perhaps a losing streak or various explanations for who the antagonist is why the protagonist cannot lose.For something regarding more psychological, which could easily intertwine with the fight, the Mc could think and think on the part of themselves they wish to avoid (cowardice, ineptitude, rage).Make the lead up worth reading on its own.
>>58434736Make a rough outline of it using AI
>>58434736Maybe write out an outline for the scene, and a list of ideas for earlier parts of the story that will fuel the scene? That way you can ride out the 'this is gonna be cool' motivation for stuff other than that scene, and the eventual scene will be stronger because you are giving it good set up.
>>58434736Write it now while the inspiration is fresh. When you actually get to the scene you should have more ideas on how to execute it better or keep details you'd have otherwise forgotten.
>>58434594Okay but how?
>>58434444It's probably going to involve it taking off the seal on its chest and rocket punches.
>>58434455But that, kinda, makes sense since trainers follow the league's rules
>>58434455We'll get that next Legends, maybe.
>>58436025He asked Celebi
>>58434314I just remembered Traveler actually has done this once or twice.
>>58434314One of my MCs' driving conflicts is that she tries to fight for her Pokemon, and though she's very much capable of it she's not getting the most out of her partners because she sees them as something to protect more than a comrade.
>>58436807next Legends after past Galar will be a far-off future Hoenn where space travel is a common thing
>>58437245That would imply putting more effort than the bottom of the barrel they put already tho, so not happening
>>58437245If that is the case, then it would probably take place on a space station. Like a Citadel or Side 7.
Western mythology Arceus or Eastern Mythology Arceus?
>>58437354So Blueberry Academy but in space
Old Testament God Arceus or New Testament God Arceus?
>>58437832There's no NT Arceus, that's why its so obscure.
>>58437381>>58437832Which one does>Author who built the world as a foundation for people and Pokemon to tell their own stories together, and let him see who they chose to beFall under?
>>58436951That's still alive? Amazing >>58437038Lol, what a savage according to Kalos's modern sensibilities
>>58436732>using your superpowers to directly aid your pokemon in a singles battle is legal
>>58438622Sabrina is a cheater, yes
>>58406559>Kalos is a shithole has anti-homeless benchesIt is the snob region, no?
>>58406559Rotom Phones give you an air jump and save you from falling
>>58438896>Rotom Phone saves its user if neededSuppose you passed out in a car and got in a situation where you'd either run over several people or veer into a wall and potentially fatally injure yourself. Would the Rotom choose to protect its user, or would it sacrifice the user for the others?
>>58420902an alpha Magikarp that knows Hydro Pump can kill you in an instant
>>58438934protect the user of course, but keep in mind to charge your devices
>>58438934Fucking Rotoms will unpossess the car the moment they're about to crash so they can't be held liable for running over people. They will eat their souls afterwards.
>Rotom while annoying as fuck can protect you So, why were PorygonPhones superior again?
>>58439124Porygon took the fall to save Pikachu from getting cancelled. Show some fucking respect.
>>58439124Protect you from what, not using common sense? Don't be a retard and jump off buildings.
>>58439047>>58438934CybeRotom trucks are actually a world building part of one of my stories.They would actively choose to crash in a way that would kill as many people as possible.
>>58439159In a different timeline GF would've opted for Porygondexes instead of Rotomdexes. It makes more "sense" for genwun after all.
>>58438268>Lol, what a savage according to Kalos's modern sensibilitiesSomething to add to my Kalos SI fic... The SI willing to attack trainers or pokemon in the middle of a battle if the situation calls for it.
>>58439494Doesn't that actually happen in In Mine Own lol?
>>58439494Didn't Spoon do that during the Chikorita arc? He just picked up his wooden sword and started swinging it mid fight.
>>58439560You'd have to specificy which incident, trainers are getting the shit kicked out of them in there.
>>58439670Sorry I did mean multiple times, like with the goons and the rock throwin' etc.
Embrace violence bros
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>>58439805I wish Wilkstrom didn't look like a faggot and live in the faggot region, he would've been perfect fic material otherwise.
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